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3842024年中考英语作文题目预测:幸福篇
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(一)名人名言
1.愚蠢的人,从远处寻找幸福;聪慧的人,从脚下根植幸福。——詹姆斯?奥本海姆
2.拥有未来幸福的最好办法,就是尽可能地享受今天的幸福。——查尔斯?W?埃利奥特
3.幸福是一种习惯,培养它。——埃尔伯特?哈伯德
4.幸福不在于你拥有什么或者你是什么人,而在于你正在做什么。
——莉莲?艾克勒?沃森【美】
5.每个人都是自己幸福的缔造者。——艾普斯?克劳迪厄斯【美】
6.幸福不在于拥有金钱,而在于成功的喜悦和创造的激情。——富兰克林?D?罗斯福【美】
7.一只脚跟踩扁了紫罗兰,而它却把香味留在那脚跟上,这就是宽容。
——安德鲁 马修斯
8.所谓幸福,是在于认清一个人的限度而安于这个限度。——罗曼?罗兰
9.一个知足的人生活才能美满。——狄更斯
(二)妙语集锦
23.就算是天气转凉了,我要送我的朋友们一件外套:口袋叫温暖;领子叫关怀;袖子叫体贴;扣子叫思念;让这件外套紧紧伴着朋友渡过每一分每一秒,一定要幸福喔!——手机短信
24.这是心的呼唤,这是爱的奉献;这是人间的春风,这是生命的源泉;再没有心的沙漠,再没有爱的荒原;死神也望而却步,幸福之花处处开遍;啊---只要人人都献出一点爱,世界将变成美好的人间……——韦唯《爱的奉献》 25.成长的路上,总有许多相识不相识的人带给你情感的滋润、难忘的教益,不管什么时候想起,总有一份感动、一缕甜蜜溢满心田……
26.有一位社会调查员,在调查幸福是什么时,有人回答说:“能关爱他人。”能关爱一个人,是一种幸福,这种幸福不仅仅是帮助别人,了解别人,更是一种拓宽心胸之后的畅快。送人玫瑰,手留余香。
27.一个整天想着去算计别人的人,即使他成功了,可他能感到极致的快乐与幸福吗?不会,因为狭窄的心胸把他的灵魂捆得太紧。学会关爱一个人,是放开心胸的开始,是幸福的开始。日子久了,容纳的东西多了,幸福便洋溢在身边。
28.关爱他人,你能提高自己的修养;关爱他人,你能感到幸福天天存在。关爱他人,你能发现生活的乐趣与美;关爱他人——你的心会更宽广,眼更明亮!
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给幸福画一条底线
作家史铁生曾写道:“生病的经验是一步步懂得满足。发烧了,才知道不发烧的日子多么清爽。咳嗽了,才体会不咳嗽的嗓子多么安详。刚坐上轮椅时,我老想,不能直立行走岂不把人的特点搞丢了?便觉天昏地暗,等又生出褥疮,一连数日只能歪七扭八地躺着,才看见端坐的日子其实多么晴朗。后来又患尿毒症,经常昏昏然不能思想,就更加怀恋起往日时光。终于醒悟:其实每时每刻我们都是幸运的,任何灾难前面都可能再加上一个‘更’字。”
从心底说出这话的人,一定吃尽了“疾病”或“便宜”的苦头,所以才把自己的“幸福底线”定得如此之低。但当他们意识到什么是真正幸福的时候,生命留给他们享受幸福的时间已经少得不能再少。许多人一生在茫茫红尘中奔走,陷在名与利的泥潭里不能自拔,蓦然回首,才发现真正的幸福恰恰就在出发的原点,而当初他们却坚信它在更远的地方。
所以,从今天起,我们应该给自己的幸福画一条最浅的底线,去学会从最平常的日子、最琐碎的事情里品尝幸福的滋味。
[点拨]不错,每时每刻我们都是幸运的,应该把“幸福的底线”定的很低,才可以感受到生活的美好和幸福。名利是身外之物,我们应该学会从“最平常的日子、最琐碎的事情里品尝幸福的滋味”。
[适用话题]这个个素材可以用在“珍惜、幸福、生活”为主题的作文中。
10.越是别人都羡慕我的幸福,我就觉得这幸福更有滋味。——巴尔扎克
11.承担更大的责任,他们就更加幸福。——雨果
12.巨大的幸福压弯了腰。他感觉他的四肢软弱无力;在他的胜利面前,这人从来没有被危险动摇过
的人,开始战栗起来。——雨果
13.因为真正的幸福就是:成为完全客观,从而体现自己的抱负。——罗曼?罗兰
14.世界上没有幸福,但有自由和宁静。——普希金
15.我们的幸福与否,决不能凭借我们获得了或者丧失了什么,而只能在于我们自身怎样。——罗曼?罗兰
16.哪里有生活,哪里就有幸福。越往前去,它就越多,越多。——罗曼?罗兰
17.幸福并不存在于外在的因素,而是以我们对外界原因的态度为转移,一个吃苦耐劳惯了的人就不可能不幸福。——托尔斯泰
18.我一生中,还从未尝到一滴没有掺和毒汁的幸福。——高尔基
19.太阳是幸福的,因为它光芒四射;海也是幸福的,因为它反射着太阳欢乐的光芒。——高尔基
20.幸福只不过是一种期待。——高尔基
21.幸福这东西就像星星一样,黑暗是遮不住它们的,总会有空隙可寻。我们在人生的历程中,不管犯了多少过错,产生过多少误解,然而,在过错和误解的空隙之中,不正闪烁着幸福之光吗?——泰戈尔
22.要使孩子们从小就懂得和领会到:他的每一步、每一个行动都会在他身边的人——同志、父母、教师和“陌生者”的精神生活引起反响。只有当他不给别人带来灾难,不欺负和扰乱别人时,才能成为一个生活得平静而又幸福的人。——苏霍姆林斯基
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篇1:2024中考英语作文写作指导汇总
全文共 2810 字
+ 加入清单英语写作是中考学生的一个盲点,缺乏对英语写作的专门训练和反思,老师的工作量大,造成作文讲评大多数时候只谈现象,因此学生学得也不具体、不深入,忽略写作技能的提高,甚至误认为只要句子结构正确,无单词拼写错误就应该得满分。同学们应该走出对英语写作认识上的误区。那么怎样才能写出一篇优秀作文,而在中考中获取高分呢?下面是YJBYS网作文频道为大家整理的英语写作指导。
一、写作决窍
总体把握,要点齐全;人称时态,逻辑清楚;
关键词汇,动词第一;组词成句,结构完整;
组句成文,连词增色;此路不通,绕道迂回;
字迹工整,留好印象;从句适量,高分有望。
二、写作步骤
1.认真审题。审题包括要点、格式、词数以及此篇文章要传递给读者什么样的信息,告诫读者什么(即写作目的)。
2.确定文体和时态。确定文体后,根据不同文体的特点和要求进行组织材料;同时确定出该篇文章的总时态与时态的变化。
3.写完要点,但不随意发挥。
4.先草稿,后抄写。
三、习作点评
[2004年全国中学生英语能力竞赛初赛初三组] (14分)
Choose one of your hobbies and write an article for the school magazine about it. Tell the magazine readers.
·What exactly your hobby is;
·When and how you became interested in this hobby;
·Why you enjoy your hobby;
·About your hopes and plans for the future.
写作要求:
1.根据所提供的内容,适当拓展想象空间,灵活地将提供的信息体现在文章中。
2.条理清楚,语句通顺,书写清晰、规范。
3.词数60-80.
[高分突破]
①文体:记叙文。
②要点:what → when →how → why → hope and plan for the future.
③时态:一般现在时,一般过去时,一般将来时的自然变化。
内容具有开放性,但它也是“控制性”的写作试题,因此不能随意发挥,要善于抓信息,写完要点。选用这两篇学生真实习作,一是因为他们选材相同,二是因为他们都是英语成绩优秀的同学。同学B灵活使用连词so…that,so,little by little,when,so that等,恰到好处地使用新句型和短语used to,became interested in,come true……等,使内容丰富,读起来优美流畅。其实这些表达同学A也会,只是缺乏技术加工。通过这两篇作文点评,同学们便能悟出其中的奥妙。
四、培养途径
1.根据老师布置的写作内容,独立完成一篇写作。
2.与同伴合作,交流自己的写作,通过交流找出各自作文中写得好的地方和优美的句子,合作创造一篇新的文章,供大家欣赏。
3.找老师点评,请求老师指点,尤其是怎样润色。
4.自己纠错,写下反思。
五、备考演练
A
缙云山是重庆著名的游览胜地,每天有大量的游客。请你根据下面提供的信息写一篇报道,说明现在的游客在环境保护方面的变化。
写作要求:
1.词数在100左右。
2.条理清楚,语句通顺。
3.开头已写好,但不计入总词数。
Jinyun Mountain is a famous place of interest …
B
阅读电视广告词:“If we don’t save water,the last drop of water will be a tear-drop.”根据提示,写一篇60-80词的短文。
提示:
1.生活离不开水。
2.可饮用水在减少。
3.水污染严重。
4.应保护水源,再利用水。
思路点拨与参考答案
A. [思路点拨]:
①文体:记叙文。
②时态:一般过去时态,一般现在时态。采用正反对比的写作手法,增加感染力。
③写作目的:告诉读者保护环境的重要性。
Jinyun Mountain is a famous place of interest.Every day a lot of tourists come here to enjoy its beauty. But a few years ago,some of them paid no attention to protecting the environment.They threw their rubbish,such as plastic bags,fruit skins and waste paper on the ground.Sometimes they broke trees,picked flowers and killed birds. Some even made fires in the woods to cook food.How dangerous it was.Luckily,great changes have taken place here.Tourists are used to putting their rubbish into dustbins,and they are doing their best to protect the birds and plants as well.They bring their own meals instead of cooking to prevent starting a forest fire in the mountains.All these changes make us very happy.
B. [思路点拨]:
①夹叙夹议(说明现状,谈谈感想)。
②时态:一般现在时态。
③广告词的含义——水很重要,应保护和再利用(写作意图)。
Water is very important to humans.We can’t live without water.The water we can drink is falling.But some people don’t seem to care about it.They waste a lot of water.They pour dirty water into rivers and lakes.Water pollution is getting more and more serious.So we must do something to stop the pollution.We not only protect the water but also find ways to reuse it.If we don’t do this,the last drop of water will be a tear-drop.
篇2:中考英语作文模板:Thecomputer
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+ 加入清单The computer is widely used in education,and some people think teachers do not play important roles in the classroom. To what extend do you agree or disagree?
In this period of communication, computer has been used in all kinds of fields widely, and plays a particular role in our lives. Especially computer has become more and more important in educational field, therefore dozens of people considered teachers could be replaced computers that will go with the current of the times. The above point is certainly wrong; this essay will outline three reasons.
The main reason is that peoples brain better than computer. Firstly, people design all kinds of computers programs. Secondly, computer doesnt have logistic ideation. Computer only can defend on that designer inputted computers programs to judge a questions right or wrong. In other words, computer cant defend on thinking that computer independently analyzes a questions right or wrong. In case, designer inputted programs that are wrong. Computer output the result that also will be wrong. If this kind of problem happened in classroom, students would be infused plenty of wrong information.
Another reason is that computers programs designed software of education that could be amended difficultly. If software of education of bugs were found, commonly these of problems couldnt be solved in the classroom. The software was amended that means total of program were corrected, not only parts of program were ed or amended usually.
Last but not the least reason is computer is mechanical, it couldnt be suited all kinds of students and different demands. As students intellect is different, same of software couldnt base on every status of student to set a perfect project.
In conclusion, computers couldnt instead of the position of teachers in the classroom, however computer is an absolutely good helper for teacher.
计算机计算机在教育领域中的广泛应用,一些人认为没有老师在课堂上发挥重要作用。你同意还是不同意?在这一时期的通信,计算机已被应用于各种领域广泛,并且在我们的生活中起着独特的作用。尤其是在教育领域,计算机已成为越来越重要的作用,因此教师数十人认为可以取代电脑,将顺应时代的潮流。上述观点肯定是错误的;本文将概述三个原因。主要的原因是,人们的大脑比电脑。首先,人们设计了各种各样的计算机程序。其次,计算机没有逻辑思维能力。计算机只能在该设计师保卫输入计算机的程序来判断问题的对错。换句话说,计算机不能捍卫独立思考的计算机分析问题的正确或错误。在情况下,输入的程序设计是错误的。计算机输出的结果,也将是错误的。如果这类问题发生在课堂上,学生将注入大量的错误信息。另一个原因是计算机程序设计的软件教育可以修改难。如果教育软件的漏洞被发现,通常这类问题不能在课堂上解决。该软件进行了修订,这意味着总计划得到纠正,不仅在程序部分,插入或修改通常。最后但并非最不重要的原因是计算机的机械,它不可能适合学生和各种不同的要求。学生的智力是不同的,相同的软件无法根据每一个学生的身份设定一个完美的计划。总之,计算机不能代替教师在课堂上的位置,但是计算机是教师绝对的好帮手。
篇3:中考英语满分作文努力
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+ 加入清单As we all know, our life is full of challenges as well as opportunities. Every one of us expects to be successful and deserve others’ respect. In my opinion, the key to success is that we should manage to make the most of what we’ve already had.
When I was a child, I am fond of making things by hand. At one time, I took part in a hand-made activity in our school. I wanted to make a model house as I usually did, but suddenly I found the materials that I had weren’t enough. Faced with such a situation, I really wanted to give up. However, after a second thought, I thought of an idea to pide some of the materials into small parts and I finally succeeded in making a special model plane. To my great joy, I was given the first prize because of my creativity.
After that, I understand whenever we face trouble, it is no use complaining. We should try our best to make use of what we have already had to solve problems.
我们都知道,我们的生活充满了挑战和机遇。我们中的每一个人都希望获得成功,并得到别人的尊重。在我看来,成功的关键在于我们应该设法使我们所拥有的。
当我还是个孩子的时候,我喜欢用手做东西。有一次,我参加了一个手工制作的活动在我们学校。我想做一个模型房子,我通常做的,但突然发现我的材料是不够的。面对这样的情况,我真的很想放弃。然而,经过一次思考,我想到了一个想法把一些材料分成几个小部分,最后我成功地制作了一个特殊的模型飞机。我非常高兴,因为我的创造力,我得到了第一个奖。
之后,我明白每当我们面对麻烦,抱怨是没有用的。我们应该尽我们最大的努力去利用我们已经解决的问题。
篇4:2024中考英语作文:英语励志名言
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+ 加入清单好的句子运用得到可以为作文提高分值。下面是语文迷为大家整理的英语励志名言,希望对你写作有帮助。
1、When all else is lost the future still remains.就是失去了一切别的,也还有未来。
2、Sow nothing, reap nothing.春不播,秋不收。
3、Keep on going never give up.勇往直前, 决不放弃!
4、The wealth of the mind is the only wealth.精神的财富是唯一的财富。
5、Never say die.永不气馁!
6、Nurture passes nature.教养胜过天性。
7、There is no garden without its weeds.没有不长杂草的花园。
8、The best preparation for tomorrow is doing your best today.对明天做好的准备就是今天做到最好!
9、The reason why a great man is great is that he resolves to be a great man.伟人之所以伟大,是因为他立志要成为伟大的人。
10、The best preparation for tomorrow is doing your best today.
对明天做好的准备就是今天做到最好!
11、You cannot improve your past, but you can improve your future. Once time is wasted, life is wasted.
你不能改变你的过去,但你可以让你的未来变得更美好。一旦时间浪费了,生命就浪费了。
12、Knowlegde can change your fate and English can accomplish your future.
知识改变命运,英语成就未来。
13、Dont aim for success if you want it; just do what you love and believe in, and it will come naturally.
如果你想要成功,不要去追求成功;尽管做你自己热爱的事情并且相信它,成功自然到来。
14、Jack of all trades and master of none.
门门精通,样样稀松。
15、Judge not from appearances.
人不可貌相,海不可斗量。
16、Justice has long arms.
天网恢恢,疏而不漏。
17、Keep good men company and you shall be of the number.
近朱者赤,近墨者黑。
18、Kill two birds with one stone.
一箭双雕。
19、Kings go mad, and the people suffer for it.
君王发狂,百姓遭殃。
20、Kings have long arms.
普天之下,莫非王土。
21、Knowledge is power.
知识就是力量。
21、Knowledge makes humble, ignorance makes proud.
博学使人谦逊,无知使人骄傲。
22、Learn and live.
活着,为了学习。
23、Learning makes a good man better and ill man worse.
好人越学越好,坏人越学越坏。
24、Learn not and know not.
不学无术。
25、Learn to walk before you run.
先学走,再学跑。
26、Let bygones be bygones.
过去的就让它过去吧。
27、Let sleeping dogs lie.
别惹麻烦。
28、Let the cat out of the bag.
泄漏天机。
29、Lies can never changes fact.
谎言终究是谎言。
30、Lies have short legs.
谎言站不长。
31、While there is life there is hope.一息若存,希望不灭。
32、I am a slow walker,but I never walk backwards.我走得很慢,但是我从来不会后退。
33、Cease to struggle and you cease to live. 生命不止,奋斗不息。
34、Never underestimate your power to change yourself!永远不要低估你改变自我的能力!
35、Nothing is impossible!没有什么不可能!
36、Do what you say,say what you do.做你说过的,说你能做的。
37、The man who has made up his mind to win will never say "impossible ".凡是决心取得胜利的人是从来不说“不可能的”。
38、Live a noble and honest life. Reviving past times in your old age will help you to enjoy your life again.过一种高尚而诚实的生活。当你年老时回想起过去,你就能再一次享受人生。
39、You have to believe in yourself . Thats the secret of success.人必须相信自己,这是成功的秘诀。
40、If you fail, dont forget to learn your lesson.如果你失败了,千万别忘了汲取教训。
41、You cannot improve your past, but you can improve your future. Once time is wasted, life is wasted.你不能改变你的过去,但你可以让你的未来变得更美好。一旦时间浪费了,生命就浪费了。
42、There is but one secret to sucess---never give up!成功只有一个秘诀--永不放弃!
43、For man is man and master of his fate.人就是人,是自己命运的主人。
44、What makes life dreary is the want of motive.没有了目的,生活便郁闷无光。
45、Difficult circumstances serve as a textbook of life for people.困难坎坷是人们的生活教科书。
46、Gods determine what youre going to be.人生的奋斗目标决定你将成为怎样的人。
篇5:预测2024中考英语作文题目:我的家乡
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+ 加入清单My hometown is a country known as "jujube township" town -- linze county. All say "landscape jiatianxia guilin, my home is not in guilin the wonderland is beautiful, but also has a small city of beauty. Town, the beauty of the static Shi green beauty, charming beauty, make each town residents of the mind is also beautiful.
To say small core of beauty, that they belong to the h and rokuen. There are more than thousand trees, trees, is a good place for summer!
Spring, the city is green, the leaves cui lust drops, h and rokuen, grass swinging with the breeze, the green grass, green leaves, all kinds of bright flowers together. Forsythia flower park blows the golden horn, square, various kite and baiyun mountain, everything is so quiet Shi.
People wear sandals in summer, h and rokuen step in waterways, music fountain, the children got into drill and adults were standing to the side, a smile the night in the square thick fragrance, barbecue flavor, mutton changing, town in summer is really hot!
Golden autumn, a town full of jujube aroma, h and rokuen jujube branches full of big, red jujube, it could make tea and can be used as a traditional Chinese medicine, passing pedestrians can resist the urge to take one. People in the street, selling red jujube mine, be happy.
Winter, although winter is so cold, but people is such a warm heart, a nice snow world, the groups of childrens play, added a few for city landscape for brilliance.
Not to have such a song? "Small story, full of joy and joy, if you come to town, much harvest", the beauty of the static Shi, charming beauty, unique beauty.
I love you -- -- hometown linze!
我的家乡是一个被祖国誉为“枣乡”的小城—临泽。都说“桂林山水甲天下”,我的家乡虽没有桂林那仙境般的美,但也别有一番小城美景。小城那静谥的美,绿色的美,迷人的美,使每个小城的居民心灵也美。
要说小城美的核心,那便属颐和绿苑了。那儿有千多棵树,绿树成荫,是避暑的好地方呢!
春天,小城是翠绿色的,树叶翠色欲滴,颐和绿苑里,小草随微风摆动,青的草,绿的叶,各色鲜艳的花聚拢而来。街心公园连翘花吹起金黄的小喇叭,广场里,千姿百态的风筝与白云戏耍,一切都是那么静谥。
盛夏,颐和绿苑里人们穿着凉鞋踏在水道里,音乐喷泉中,孩子们钻进钻出,站在一旁的大人个个露出笑容,广场上的夜市香味浓浓,烧烤味、羊肉串味,小城的夏天真是火辣辣啊!
金秋,小城充满了枣香味,颐和绿苑的枣树枝上挂满了又大又红的红枣,它可以泡茶,可以作中药,过路的行人都忍不住要尝一个。大街上,卖红枣的人们各各喜笑颜开。
隆冬,虽然冬天是那么的冷,可人们心中是那么暖和,雪的世界真好看,那一群群孩子的嬉戏,为小城景色增添了几争光彩。
不是有这样一首歌吗?“小城故事多,充满喜和乐,若是你到小城来,收获特别多”,静谥的美,迷人的美,独特的美。
我爱你——家乡临泽!
篇6:中考英语作文的写作技巧
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+ 加入清单要写好英语作文,还要带着敏锐的目光细心地观察,注意英语中一些表达上的习惯。小编收集了中考英语作文的写作技巧,欢迎阅读。
一、要善于模仿
对大多数学习英语的同学来说,英语的词汇量、句式的积累还极其有限,远不能达到用英文流畅表达,挥洒自如的境地。在这一阶段进行创作是不合时宜的,如果非要创造,只能写出“long time no see”这样的文字来。因此,模仿是这一阶段的必经途径。
谈到模仿,一些同学的办法就是背一堆范文,然后再到考场上进行一个“剪切”、“粘贴”的工作,效果可想而知。这不是真正意义上的模仿,充其量算是默写课文。如何模仿呢?
首先,模仿的目标要明确。模仿的重点永远要放在一定的句式结构上,而非个别的词汇。道理很简单:一个词,随着文章内容的变换,可能就不能用了;而句式结构是放置四海而皆准的东西,适用的范围广,学来对写作的帮助也就明显。
其次,模仿的材料要地道。像新概念英语这样的教材就提供了很多原汁原味的英语表达法。盲目选择文章学习,记一些不中不洋的句子,以讹传讹,浪费时间。
最后,模仿要体现在实际动笔上。比如说,新概念第三册有一个句式说:“…for the simple reason that…”表示某种现象的原因是什么,用在大学英语考试中,我们就可以拿来解释为什么自行车在中国如此的流行,表达为:“the bicycle is very popular in china for the simple reason that…”。然而,很多同学经常背了这些句式不用,一谈到原因仍然是“…because…”,等等。
二、要灵活变通
在批改英语作文的过程中,经常能发现一些将中文生硬地翻译成英文的表达法。由于中英文之间的差异和词汇量、表达法积累的不足,出现难于表达的情况是十分正常的。关键问题在于如何处理。有一句话叫做“立志如山,行道如水”,套用在这个问题上就很合适。写英文作文,一定要有决心把它写好,有信心把意思表达清楚,这是“立志如山”;但关键是遇到问题时要有个灵活的态度,能像流水一样变通解决问题。
有个翻译界的故事说:在某大型国际会议的招待会上,一道菜是用鸡蛋做的。与会的客人问翻译:“what is it made of?”本来是非常简单的一个问题,结果翻译太紧张,忘了“egg”这个词,但是他急中生智,回答:“it is made of miss hen’s son.”这里,就是一个灵活变通的范例。绕道表达,是写作中应该常常运用的一种方法。
三、要细心观察
要写好英语作文,还要带着敏锐的目光细心地观察,注意英语中一些表达上的习惯。
比如说,在正式文体的写作中,很少用 “it isn"t”这样的略缩形式,而往往是一板一眼地写作 “it is not”。同理,在正式文体中的日期一般不缩写,阿拉伯数字一般会用英文表达(特别长的数字除外)。
再比如说,翻翻新概念第三册所有的课文,会发现凡是一段文章的段首句出现转折时,转折词however都放在句子结构中的第二部分,以插入语的形式出现。分析原因,是因为段落一开始就用转折词,会时转折显得较生硬、突兀。
最后,许多同学在写作文时,习惯于把 “since” “because” “for”这样的词放在句首引导原因状语从句。事实上,在我们见到的英语报刊杂志文章中,这样的从句一般都是放在主句之后的。另外, “and”也常常被误放在一句话的开头,表示两个句子之间的并列或递进关系。其实,经常留心地道的英语文章能发现,如果是并列关系,完全可以不用连词;如果是递进关系,用 “furthermore” “what is more”更为普遍。
四、要心有全局
英文写作十分强调形式上的严谨性,特别是全局的丝丝入扣。如果写作时结构意识良好,应试写作就简化成为一个填空的过程了。框架万变不离其宗,适当地填如观点、素材,文章就自然而然地立起来了。
掌握了这些英文写作中的练习技巧,会使提高英文写作水平的努力有更大的收益。
下面智康教育跟大家分享写作的“五项基本原则” :
1、 长短句原则
工作还得一张一驰呢,老让读者读长句,累死人!写一个短小精辟的句子,相反,却可以起到画龙点睛的作用。而且如果我们把短句放在段首或者段末,也可以揭示主题:
as a creature, i eat; as a man, i read. although one action is to meet the primary need of my body and the other is to satisfy the intellectual need of mind, they are in a way quite similar.
如此可见,长短句结合,抑扬顿挫,岂不爽哉?牢记!
强烈建议:在文章第一段(开头)用一长一短,且先长后短;在文章主体部分,要先用一个短句解释主要意思,然后在阐述几个要点的时候采用先短后长的句群形式,定会让主体部分妙笔生辉!文章结尾一般用一长一短就可以了。
2、 主题句原则
国有其君,家有其主,文章也要有其主。否则会给人造成“群龙无首”之感!相信各位读过一些破烂文学,故意把主体隐藏在文章之内,结果造成我们稀里糊涂!不知所云!所以奉劝各位一定要写一个主题句,放在文章的开头(保险型)或者结尾,让读者一目了然,必会平安无事!
特别提示:隐藏主体句可是要冒险的!
to begin with, you must work hard at your lessons and be fully prepared before the exam(主题句). without sufficient preparation, you can hardly expect to answer all the questions correctly.
3、 一二三原则
领导讲话总是第一部分、第一点、第二点、第三点、第二部分、第一点… 如此罗嗦。可毕竟还是条理清楚。考官们看文章也必然要通过这些关键性的“标签”来判定你的文章是否结构清楚,条理自然。破解方法很简单,只要把下面任何一组的词汇加入到你的几个要点前就清楚了。
1)first, second, third, last(不推荐,原因:俗)
2)firstly, secondly, thirdly, finally(不推荐,原因:俗)
3)the first, the second, the third, the last(不推荐,原因:俗)
4)in the first place, in the second place, in the third place, lastly(不推荐,原因:俗)
5)to begin with, then, furthermore, finally(强烈推荐)
6)to start with, next, in addition, finally(强烈推荐)
7)first and foremost, besides, last but not least(强烈推荐)
8)most important of all, moreover, finally
9)on the one hand, on the other hand(适用于两点的情况)
10)for one thing, for another thing(适用于两点的情况)
4、 短语优先原则
写作时,尤其是在考试时,如果使用短语,有两个好处:其一、用短语会使文章增加亮点,如果老师们看到你的文章太简单,看不到一个自己不认识的短语,必然会看你低一等。相反,如果发现亮点—精彩的短语,那么你的文章定会得高分了。其二、关键时刻思维短路,只有凑字数,怎么办?用短语是一个办法!比如:
i cannot bear it.
可以用短语表达:i cannot put up with it.
i want it.
可以用短语表达:i am looking forward to it.
这样字数明显增加,表达也更准确。
5、 多变句式原则
1)加法(串联)
都希望写下很长的句子,像个老外似的,可就是怕写错,怎么办,最保险的写长句的方法就是这些,可以在任何句子之间加and, 但最好是前后的句子又先后关系或者并列关系。比如说:
i enjor music and he is fond of playing guitar.
如果是二者并列的,我们可以用一个超级句式:
not only the fur coat is soft, but it is also warm.
其它的短语可以用:
besides, furthermore, likewise, moreover
2)转折(拐弯抹角)
批评某人缺点的时候,我们总习惯先拐弯抹角说说他的优点,然后转入正题,再说缺点,这种方式虽然阴险了点,可毕竟还比较容易让人接受。所以呢,我们说话的时候,只要在要点之前先来点废话,注意二者之间用个专这次就够了。
the car was quite old, yet it was in excellent condition.
the coat was thin, but it was warm.
更多的短语:
despite that, still, however, nevertheless, in spite of, despite, notwithstanding
3)因果(so, so, so)
昨天在街上我看到了一个女孩,然后我主动搭讪,然后我们去咖啡厅,然后我们认识了,然后我们成为了朋友…可见,讲故事的时候我们总要追求先后顺序,先什么,后什么,所以然后这个词就变得很常见了。其实这个词表示的是先后或因果关系!
the snow began to fall, so we went home.
更多短语:
then, therefore, consequently, accordingly, hence, as a result, for this reason, so that
4)失衡句(头重脚轻,或者头轻脚重)
有些人脑袋大,身体小,或者有些人脑袋小,身体大,虽然我们不希望长成这个样子,可如果真的是这样了,也就必然会吸引别人的注意力。文章中如果出现这样的句子,就更会让考官看到你的句子与众不同。其实就是主语从句,表语从句,宾语从句的变形。
举例:this is what i can do.
whether he can go with us or not is not sure.
同样主语、宾语、表语可以改成如下的复杂成分:
when to go, why he goes away…
5)附加(多此一举)
如果有了老婆,总会遇到这样的情况,当你再讲某个人的时候,她会插一句说,我昨天见过他;或者说,就是某某某,如果把老婆的话插入到我们的话里面,那就是定语从句和同位语从句或者是插入语。
the man whom you met yesterday is a friend of mine.
i don’t enjoy that book you are reading.
mr liu, our oral english teacher, is easy-going.
其实很简单,同位语--要解释的东西删除后不影响整个句子的构成;定语从句—借用之前的关键词并且用其重新组成一个句子插入其中,但是whom or that 关键词必须要紧跟在先行词之前。
篇7:中考英语作文出色善用“潜规则”的方法
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+ 加入清单很多同学对英语书面表达的部分都感到头疼,一是因为突然拿到一个题目,脑中一片空白,写不出几个句子来,二是写好一篇文章,可是总是流于平淡,语言枯燥,不得老师喜爱,分数也一直不高不低,难以突破。建议同学们,第一类问题,是可以通过练习而补救的,第二类问题,则需要我们的积累和智慧了。
每一次考试或练习,我们的语文写作中总是时不时的会出现很多诗词,名言,他们或哲理,或抒情,或励志,或优美,总能让我们的文章读来津津有味,而且让老师觉得有文学感,甚至会因此而觉得有文采。同样是作文,我们为什么不能把这种思路搬到英文中来呢?答案当然是可以的,而且成功的例子也不少。
在英文的写作当中,运用名言警句这样的潜规则也是存在的。根据目前的要求,一篇英文作文篇幅在100词以上,这样的长度相对于语文作文来说自然是很简单了,但是对于高考水平的英语写作来说,是完全有空间在其中运用名言警句的,只要我们用的合适,就会取得意想不到的效果。
那么,我们如何善用这些名言警句呢?
第一,积累是必需的。英语是一门语言,语言是没有速成的,尤其是一些经典的词句,是需要我们一点一滴积累的。在收集名言警句的过程中,我们可以有目的性地收集。所谓目的性,是指在作文中,命题的形式和题材一般是固定的,那么针对这样的内容,我们就要尽量收集能用得上的名言警句,或者说,名言警句要对的上路子,这么做可能有一点功利,但咱们毕竟是应试,退一步说,这样收集的句子也不一定都是没有用的,所以,我们要首先找准方向,少走弯路。
第一类是哲理类的,这一类名言警句可以说是万精油,放之四海而皆准,几乎在每一篇作文中都能用到它们。比如说描写做家务活。我们就可以用上Just as the saying goes: It is never too late to learn!来说明学习做家务活的积极性。再比如以汶川地震为背景描写一个叫Lin Hao的小孩救出同学的事迹,我们就能用As we all know, where there is a life, there is a hope.或者where there is a will, there is a way来赞扬Lin Hao的精神品质等等,诸如此类的命题比比皆是,只要我们用得恰当,就一定能波的阅卷老师的青睐;
第二类是励志类的,这种语句在涉及到个人成长经历内容的文章中,可以发挥很大作用;
第三类是情感类的,表现家庭生活或者个人情感的内容能用到它。
篇8:关于狗的英语中考作文
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+ 加入清单Dogs
Nowadays many people like to have dogs as their pets. Dogs are friends of man not only because they are lovely but also because they are faithful to their masters.
Dogs can do a lot of work for man. They play with us. They hunt with us. They keep door for us. But long ago, dogs all over the world were wild.
Dogs can date back to the Stone Age. All dogs have the same ancestor. It is believed that their ancestor was much like a wolf. Other animals, such as the fox, came from this ancestor, too. Hundreds of thousands of years ago, man began to tame wild dogs. After the dogs were tamed, they were trained. The strong dogs became working animals. They were trained to pull heavy loads. They learned to keep an eye on the sheep and other animals. Working dogs had other jobs, too.
Some dogs were not strong. But they could help man hunt for game. Other dogs were best as pets.
Today, there are more than 100 kinds of dogs in the world.
现在许多人都把狗当作他们的宠物。狗是人类的朋友,不仅因为它们可爱,而且因为它们对主人忠诚。
狗能为人类做很多工作。它们可以和我们玩,它们可以跟我们一起打猎,它们可以给我们看家。但是以前世界上的狗都是野生的。
狗可以追溯到石器时代。所有的狗都是同一个祖先,人们相信狗的祖先很像狼。其他动物,如狐狸,也是来自这个祖先。几千年前人类就开始驯服野狗,狗被驯服后,人们就训练它们。强壮的狗成为人类工作的帮手,人们训练它们拉重的货物。它们学会了帮人们照看绵羊和其它的动物。
有些狗不够强壮,但它们能帮人们寻找猎物。还有些狗成了人们的宠物。
目前世界上狗的种类已经达到100多种。
篇9:一场足球比赛中考英语作文
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+ 加入清单Yesterday was the ninth day of the World Cup. There was a football match between China and Brazil. We know Brazilian Team is the top one of the world. Though the players of the Chinese Team tried their best, they still lost the game. The result of the game was 4:0. I think they did better than the first game.I believe they can learn a lot from Brazilian Team.
I hope the team of China will be a strong team one day.
昨天是世界杯赛的第九天。中国队对巴西队。我们都知道巴西队是世界上最好的足球队。虽然中国队队员竭尽了全力,但是还是输了。比赛结果四比零。我觉得中国队表现比第一场要好多了。我相信,他们能从巴西队那里学到很多东西。
我希望中国足球队终有一天成为强队。
Yesterday evening the team of China played against the team of Brazil. The game started at 7: 30. It was an exciting game.Brazilian Team is the best one in the world. Everyone in the team of China tried his best, but the team of Brazil was too strong.Chinese Team couldn't stop them. They kicked four goals, and our team lost the game.
We hope the players in Chinese Team can make great progress, and it will be a strong team one day.
昨天晚上,中国足球对迎战巴西足球队。比赛在7:30开始。那是一场令人激动的比赛。巴西队是世界上最好的足球队,中国队的每个队员都尽了最大努力,但是巴西队太强大了。中国队根本抵御不住他们的进攻,最终以零比四输了这场比赛。
我们希望中国足球队队员能取得较大的进步,将来能成为一个强队。
篇10:2024中考英语写作高分秘诀
全文共 1599 字
+ 加入清单英语写作要拿高分其实并不是很难,只要掌握了一定的词量以及写作方法就有可以能拿到高分。下面是语文迷为大家整理的英语写作高分秘诀,希望对你有帮助。
一、中考英语写作的概述
你对于在中考英语写作中拿高分有把握吗?实际考试中,许多学生却常常有“无话可说”的感觉。那要如何我们才能克服这种无话的状态,取得高分呢?
归根到底这是一个英语基本功——单词、短语和句型的问题。
英语作文的前提条件是掌握了一定量的词汇、语法及体裁、题材等方面的知识。学生如果想要在写作方面有本质上的提升,必须进行多次的写作练习。因此,必须合理地设置训练步骤,遵循从初级到高级,从简单到复杂的原则去练习,经过一段写作实践之后,写作水平一定会有大幅度的提高。
中考英语作文对考生的要求有四点:1、内容要完整。2、语句流畅。3、没有语法错误。4、书写规范。
二、中考英语写作的评分标准
1、老师拿到的标准
写作水平的高低和文章的好坏,分数是最直接的评分标准,也是考生们最关心的。但是多少考生真正透彻知道中考英语写作的评分标准?什么样的文章才是阅卷老师眼中的好文章?
评分标准:
(1)整篇作文满分20分,其中内容8分,语言8分,结构4分。
(2)内容贴切,句子流畅,用语准确,加整体印象分1分。
(3)不满60个词,少1——5个词扣0.5分,6——10个词扣1分。
(4)所有给出问题涉及的三项内容,每少一项扣3分。
(5)每个拼写,大小写,标点符号等错误扣0.5分;同一的拼写错误不重复扣分,扣分总和不超过2分。
(6)语法错误每项扣1分,同一错误不重复扣分,扣分总和不超过2分。
2、老师想看到的标准
语言(8分):
词——固定搭配、高频重点词汇;
句——复杂句(各种从句)、特殊句型、正确的句子!
内容(8分):(总、分)论点、论据支持句;简洁、切合主题的记叙内容。
结构(4分):
语言结构——句子重点突出、内容清晰;
内容结构——论点、论据以及记叙之间的逻辑关系;
句数控制——对于相对内容的句数掌握;
亮点、出彩点——排比、拟人、谚语、成语、押韵等。
三、扣分
内容方面:要点缺失,可酌情扣分。比如中考作文“Iwanttodosomethingformyschool”,若没有写一件具体的事情,是要扣3分以上的;若写的事情太过于虚幻,没有实际内容,也会扣1-2分。
字数:少于60字的作文要酌情扣分。
中考英语作文要求60字以上,标点符号不算,少了就要扣分。
但是60字的作文能不能得高分?从我们拿到的实例作文来看,16分以上的作文,没有少于75字的,甚至少于80字的也少之又少。
当然,也极少有超过100字的,因为中考试卷的短线格一共80个,在格子下面大约还有2行的空间,可以加20字左右,再多阅卷人就很难看清了,也会影响卷面的美观。
所以,同学们如果想让作文得到高分,最好是让字数在75-100字之间。
语法和拼写错误:每个扣0.5,重复错误不计;
标点错误:每4个扣0.5。
四、加分
作文的组织结构分。就是根据学生使用复杂句型、单词和谚语、俗语的情况来加分。只要文章中有1个亮点,基本就可以争取到1分(3分的文采分是很难全部拿到的)。而这1分的亮点,是可以提前准备的。
“万金油”式的复杂句型,例如强调句型、only相关的倒装句等,只要同学们多操练几次,几乎是一定能用到作文当中,从而为自己争取到这1分。
其次就是卷面分。很多家长(微博)和同学,尤其是部分书法并不是十分整洁的同学,都会关心是否真的有“卷面分”的存在。虽然在阅卷标准里面并没有卷面分这一项,但是这个分数却真切地反映在了同学们的分数里面。
据阅卷老师的经验,在阅卷的时候并不是按这3个部分逐项打分的,而是在第一遍读完全文之后,心里已经形成了一个“印象分”,然后再细读第二、三遍,把印象分分配到各个打分部分。
因此,这个“印象分”就非常重要,而同学们的书法,也正是在这个环节,影响到了自己的分数。所以初三的考生,如果书法不好,一定要注意。
篇11:2024中考英语作文热点话题:交通问题
全文共 928 字
+ 加入清单越来越多汽车进入我们的家庭生活,改善了我们的生活,但同时也带来了很多问题,如塞车和车祸,给家庭和社会带来极大的危害。作为中学生,我们应该怎样做呢?
请写一篇有关交通安全的短文(80字左右)
内容包含:
遵守交通规则,如走人行道/过斑马线。
别在街道上或马路上玩耍和踢球。
劝父母不能酒后驾车。
你可以适当增加内容,让短文通顺,过渡自然。
参考词汇:sidewalk 人行道 zebra-crossing 斑马线
注:第一段已给出,不计入总数
★ 参考范文
With more and more cars coming into our families, we are happy that it has greatly improved our life. But unluckily, it has also brought many problems, such as heavy traffic and traffic accidents.
Traffic safety is everybodys business. We must obey the rules. For example, we must walk on walk side, when we cross zebra – crossing, stop and look right and left, then go across fast. Don’t play football on the road .we can tell our parents not to drink before they drive, not to run through red lights, not to talk and laugh while driving etc.
We can say cars are coming into our life, but only when everybody thinks traffic safety is everybodys business can we be safe driving on roads and walking on sidewalks.
篇12:2024中考英语作文热点话题:保护环境作文1000字
全文共 1203 字
+ 加入清单6月5日( June 5)是世界环境保护日, 我们周围的环境变得越来越糟糕,污染越来越严重。环境问题影响着人们的工作,学习,生活等,而我们的工作,生活,生产等又使环境污染越来越严重....。。如何保护我们的环境? 请以“ How to protect/save our environment/world? ”为题写一篇短文。
提示:存在问题:1.水污染越来越严重;2.砍伐森林严重;3. 大气污染严重;4. 白色垃圾等。
要求:如何改善/保护环境?至少:3---4个方面, 80字左右的。
★ 范文
How to protect/save our environment/world?
The environmental pollution is worse and worse /more and more seriously today. Water is polluted; we have no clean water to drink. Many trees are cutting down, some animals is getting less and less. Some factories are pouring dirty air in the sky, the population is increasing faster and faster, resources are getting less and less…etc. Not only does it affect our lives and health, it but also has a great affection in the future. Peoples health has been greatly affected by air, noise and water pollution. Many people died of diseases. In order to live a better life, we need protect our world。
We shouldn’t throw away rubbish everywhere. We want to recycle, reduce, reuse things .Don’t waste things. This saves money and reduces pollution. Use things for as long as possible. We don’t use plastic bags. We must plant more trees and stop the people cutting them .We hope our world becomes more and more beautiful。
篇13:2024中考英语作文预测:环境保护
全文共 2154 字
+ 加入清单Environmental protection is a big project, but we can start from around things, do a lot of things to protect the environment.
Our paper every day, do you know the paper is how to? Is made of trees to make paper. Every year around the world to cut down many trees to make paper. I have seen a special TV, save 1500 sheets of paper, you can leave a big tree. The tree is our good friend, it can turn carbon dioxide into oxygen, can reduce the noise, can block the sand, can prevent water loss and soil erosion... Starts from me, saving every piece of paper, children all over the world can save a lot of a lot of paper, you can retain a lot of trees, you can leave a big forest, desert, less and less, more and more pure and fresh air, green more and more. How I wish my hometown mountain more green, and blue, the water environment of our lives forever charactizing a fine spring day.
We used in battery life; it contains lead, if throw it carelessly, section 1 waste batteries can lose one square metre of soil utilization value forever. In many countries, many areas have carried out recycling of waste batteries. In Germany, to buy a new battery, used batteries must be pay back. So, we should to find a "home" for waste batteries. I hope we panzhihua environmental protection departments also set up waste battery recycling. Thoroughly protect the soil so that it can always grow crops.
Save a piece of paper, recycling waste battery section... Although we do is small, but it made great contribution for environmental protection. I hope my classmates from now on, all to do an environmental small guards. There is only one earth, we have to take care of it.
环保是一个很大的工程,但我们可以从身边的小事做起,为保护环境做很多事。
我们每天都要用纸,你知道纸张是怎么来的吗?是用大树来造纸的。全世界每年都要砍掉很多树来造纸。我看过一个专题电视,节约1500张纸,就可以保留一棵大树。大树是我们的好朋友,它可以把二氧化碳变为氧气,可以降低噪音,可以挡住风沙,可以防止水土流失……从我做起,节约每一张纸,全世界的小朋友可以节约很多很多纸,就可以保留很多很多大树,就可以留下一片大森林,沙漠越来越少,空气越来越清新,绿色越来越多。我多希望我的家乡山更青、水更绿,我们生活的环境永远鸟语花香。
我们生活中用到的电池,它含有铅,如果把它随手乱扔,1节废电池可以使一平方米的土壤失去永远的利用价值。很多国家、很多地区都开展了废电池的回收。在德国,购买新电池的时候,必须将废旧电池交回来。所以,我们应该给给废电池找个“家”。我希望我们攀枝花的环保部门也设立废旧电池回收站。好好的保护土壤,让它可以永远长出庄稼。
节约一张纸、回收一节废旧电池……我们做的虽然是小事,但却为环保做了大贡献。我希望我的同学们从现在开始,都来做一个环保小卫士。地球只有一个,我们都要好好爱护它。
篇14:2024年中考英语作文预测:全球变暖
全文共 1576 字
+ 加入清单Earth’s temperature begins with the Sun. Roughly 30 percent of incoming sunlight is reflected back into space by bright surfaces like clouds and ice. Of the remaining 70 percent, most is absorbed by the land and ocean, and the rest is absorbed by the atmosphere. The absorbed solar energy heats our planet.
地球的温度开始太阳。大约百分之30的太阳光被反射回太空的光明面与云冰。在余下的百分之70,多数是由陆地和海洋吸收,其余的被大气层吸收。吸收太阳能加热我们的星球。
As the rocks, the air, and the seas warm, they radiate “heat” energy (thermal infrared radiation). From the surface, this energy travels into the atmosphere where much of it is absorbed by water vapor and long-lived greenhouse gases such as carbon dioxide and methane.
当岩石,空气,和温暖的海洋,他们辐射热能源(热辐射)。从表面上看,这种能量进入大气层,大部分是由水蒸气和长寿命的温室气体如二氧化碳和甲烷的吸收。
When they absorb the energy radiating from Earth’s surface, microscopic water or greenhouse gas molecules turn into tiny heaters— like the bricks in a fireplace, they radiate heat even after the fire goes out. They radiate in all directions. The energy that radiates back toward Earth heats both the lower atmosphere and the surface, enhancing the heating they get from direct sunlight.
当他们吸收辐射能量从地球表面,微观水或温室气体分子变成小加热器-就像在壁炉的砖,他们散发热量,即使在火熄灭。他们在所有方向辐射。能量辐射回地球加热低层大气和表面,增强他们从阳光直射加热。
This absorption and radiation of heat by the atmosphere—the natural greenhouse effect—is beneficial for life on Earth. If there were no greenhouse effect, the Earth’s average surface temperature would be a very chilly -18°C (0°F) instead of the comfortable 15°C (59°F) that it is today.
这种吸收和辐射热的气氛自然温室效应有利于地球上的生命。如果没有温室效应,地球表面的平均温度将是一个非常寒冷的18°C(0°F)而不是舒适的15°C(59°F),它是今天。
篇15:Springiscomingon中考英语作文
全文共 658 字
+ 加入清单Winter has gone,and spring is coming on .
Watching the ice melting,I know the whole earth is being rejuvenated from the winter. A variety of flowers come out to show their beauty and bring us fragrance .It is a feast for our eyes and souls. The yellow grass suddenly turn green.The young leaves grow on the branches.The swallows fly back home with the greeting of spring .
Everything is coming to life.Feeling the warm sunshine,enjoying the beautiful scenery,listening to the wonderful music,drinking the new tea,my mood is perfect and I have nothing else to desire. Spring is the most fantastic season in the year .It means so much to the other three seasons.
篇16:中考英语话题作文预测范本
全文共 1293 字
+ 加入清单1、(福建宁德)健康饮食关系到青少年的身心健康成长。请根据以下提供的内容和提示词,以"Healthy Eating"为题写一篇作文.
提示:1.健康饮食的重要性(important, energy); 2.良好的饮食习惯(keep a balanced diet); 3.健康饮食的益处(make…..stong)
Healthy eating is important for us in our daily life. Food can give us energy and help us build up our body. What and how should we eat to be healthier? First, we should have enough clean food each meal. Second, its important to keep a balanced diet. Different kinds of food provide us different nutrition we need every day. Third, we should have a regular meal. In this way, well be strong and healthy, and well do well in our study.
2、根据中英文提示,写出内容完整、意思连贯、符合逻辑的稿件。(字数不少于60词,英文提示词供选用)
有写学生不爱吃学校的午饭,常到校外去吃他们所喜欢吃的食物。但有些食物并不利于他们的身体健康。"英语角"打算针对这个问题展开讨论。请你准备一篇讨论稿,谈谈你的看法和建议。
参考词汇:not like, go out of school, be afraid, be back, more delicious, offer
范文:
We know that some of our students do not like eating lunch at school because the food isnt delicious. So they often go out of school to buy something they like to eat. But Im afraid its bad for their health to eat lunch outside because some of the food they buy isnt healthy enough.
In my opinion, if our schools want more students to be back and enjoy lunch inside, they should make the food more delicious, and also they should offer our students a larger choice of food as well.
篇17:中考英语备考拯救地球的作文题目
全文共 1139 字
+ 加入清单地球是我们人类共同的家园,人类只有一个地球。“低碳、环保”已成为当今时代主题。目前,我市英语学会准备在全市中学生中开展以“Save(拯救)our earth”为主题的英文征文活动。现请你根据以下三个方面的提示,写一篇80词左右的短文参评。
1。重要性:只有一个地球
2。主要问题:污染、疾病、灾难
3。措施:停止污染、保护大自然
参考词汇:disaster n。灾难 protect V。 保护
注意:(1)文中不能出现真实姓名、校名;
(2)文章标题已给出,但不计入总词数;
(3)可适当发挥,以使行文连贯。
★ 范文
Let’s Do Something to Save Our Environment
It is recently reported that some rivers and lakes have dried up in South China。 A lot of fishes died。 The bottoms of the rivers and lakes have become grass land。 The water is becoming less and less because of the bad weather。
So everyone should do something to save our environment。 First, we should save every drop of water, such as turning off the taps after using it and recycling the water。 For example, we can water the plants and clean the rest room with our used water。 Second, we should save energy, such as less turning on the lights and turning off the lights when we leave;Do more walking, more bicycling and less driving and so on。 Third, we should ask our government to control the pollution from the factories。
Let’s act now from everything to save our environment。 Don’t let our tears be the last drop of water in the world!
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篇18:中考英语作文万能模板:十字结构
全文共 1101 字
+ 加入清单教给大家十个字,搞定初中英语写作,帮你拿到一等文。
问:“哪十字?”
“结构+要点+逻辑+语法+亮点!”
结构:中考最流行的结构就是三段式,深受各地区中考英语写作阅卷老师的喜爱。为什么尼?因为这种结构十分清晰。“观点——要点——总结”让人一目了然。三段式的第一段:简单明了,开门见山,不超过2句话,如,我们想表达小强很强壮,第一段直接说 XQ is extremely strong. 观点明确,这一句足矣。第二段:分2-3点说为什么他强壮。1. 每天吃10顿饭,He has ten meals everyday! 详举吃的是什么。2. 每天运动2小时,He does exercise 2 hours a day! 详举做了什么运动。第三段:经过第二段的论证,可以得出结论。但请注意,不能完全照抄第一段,要有升华。也可以提出希望和建议等。如,How strong and robust XQ is! I hope to be? him one day!
要点:实际上中考英语写作就等于两个字,翻译!因为中考英语写作一般会给出几个要点,要求必须在文章中有所体现。文章写的再好,只要缺少要点就会扣分。所以要点,也就是文章的第二段内容,要做到全,围绕中心。
逻辑:这里的逻辑实际指的就是逻辑词。最常用的就是表示递进的,转折的,总结的逻辑词等。递进:除了first, second, third, finally 等还可以使用高级点的,如first of all(首先),in addition, whats more, moreover(都是另外的意思),in a word, all in all(表示总结的)。转折:but, yet, however等。真正有经验的阅卷老师会很注意这些逻辑连接词,因为这些词体现了这个文章的思路。
语法:其他几点都不是硬性的要求,不那样做不能说是错,只能说是不好,但是语法却是硬性的。如,单词的使用,时态等。
亮点:当我们将前八个字都做得很完美的时候也只能得到一个二等文的上。要想得到一等文,最后两个字,亮点至关重要。大家设想如果我们是阅卷老师。有两篇写人美丽的作文摆在我们面前,都是结构清晰的三段式,要点都很全,都用了一些逻辑词,都没有语法错误,但是A篇只用了beautiful,good- looking,B篇却用到了attractive,charming,catching等,我坚信正常人都会给B篇高分的。这些高级一点的词汇,词组,句型便是我们得到一等文的最有力的绝招。所以,以后写英语作文要养成一般词汇限量用的好习惯。
只要把这十个字都搞定了,那么初中英语写作就一定能搞定!
篇19:中考英语作文经典常用句:环保
全文共 1289 字
+ 加入清单导语:无论是什么时候环境保护问题都是中考热门话题,尤其在今年这种大范围的环境污染下,下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的优秀英语作文,欢迎阅读与借鉴,谢谢!
典型句子:
1. It s our duty to save wate
2. As we know , water is very important to man,
3. we can t live without water.
4. The amount of water which is suitable to drink is less and less.
5. But some people don t care about it .
6. Many rivers and lakes are seriously polluted.Something must be done to stop the pollution.
7. Its our duty to protect our environment。
8. It is very important to take care of our environment
9. We should not throw litter onto the ground
10. We should not spit in a public place/ cut down the trees
11. We should plant more flowers and trees。
12. We must pick up some rubbish and throw it into a dustbin
13. If everyone makes contribution to protecting the environment, the world will become much more beautiful.
14.Trees are very helpful and important for us.
15.We should plant more and more trees in order to live better and more healthy in the future.It s everyone s duty to love and protect the environment.
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1.它是我们的责任来节约水
2.正如我们所知,水是非常重要的人,
3.没有水我们不能生存。
4.适合饮用的水的量越来越少。
5.但有些人不在乎。
6.许多河流和湖泊受到严重污染,必须采取措施制止污染。
7.保护环境是我们的职责。
8.照顾我们的环境是非常重要的
9.我们不应该扔垃圾到地上
10.我们不应该在公共场所吐痰/砍伐树木
11.我们应该种更多的花草树木。
12.我们必须捡起一些垃圾扔进垃圾箱
13.如果每个人都为保护环境做出贡献,世界将变得更加美丽。
14.树对我们非常有益和重要。
15.我们应该种植越来越多的树为了将来生活得更好更健康每个人都有责任保护和保护环境。