关于拖延的英文演讲（实用20篇）

A good name is sooner lost than won.

美誉难得而易失。

A good name is earlier lost than won.

失去美名易，得到美名难。

A good name is better than riches.

好名誉胜过有财富。

A good medicine tastes bitter.

良药苦口，忠言逆耳。

A good maxim is never out of season.

至理名言不会过时。

A good marksman may miss.

智者千虑，必有一失。

A good horse often needs a good spur.

好马常要好靴刺。

A good horse cannot be of a bad colour.

良马的毛色不会差。

A good heart conquers ill fortune.

善心克厄运。

A good healthy body is worth more a crown in gold.

健康的身体贵於黄金铸成的皇冠。

A good head and an industrious hand are worth gold in any land.

聪明脑袋勤劳手，走遍天下贵如金。

A good friend is my nearest relation.

良友如近亲。

A good fame is better than a good face.

好的名望胜於好的相貌。

A good face is a letter of recommendation.

好的相貌就是一封推荐的介绍信。

A good dog deserves a good bone.

有劳得奖。

A good example is the best sermon.

身教胜似言教。

Not until I arrived at home after watching the movie ”Peddington Bear” with my family when a feeling of warmth and strength suddenly came to me. It’s about love, it’s about family.

The plot of the movie is really simple, even predictable and a little bit cliche. However, it’s so rare for me to meet such a snug film. Maybe there’s some resonance between the core topic ---- family and myself, or, it’s just relaxing and touching, depending on how you look at it.

The film has little input and obvious theme (dream, kindness, tolerance, trust, and love... Americans love that!), and you can even see it as an advertising video made by the U.K. Government! But, things always act like that---- the simpler the emotion is, the easier we forget. The film has it’s meaning to arouse something ignored by us. And treasure everyone, everything you have.

You can either imagine family as a gasoline station, or the safest harbor. Family won’t mind your lose, your excuse, your fault, it will give you a hand, and ask you to have a rest. Family is the most supportive one behind you, forever and always.

Good luck to everyone!

Dear pen Pal ____ :

Hello,my pen Pal!Let me talk about my favorite animals.

I like cats,because he has a round face,big eyes,always so lovely.His ears were small,furry above.It is small,my favorite.

The second is the dog.Some dogs have curly body.And it also and humans are good friends,it often helps to human beings.His faithful let me also like it.

I also like the rabbit.Especially those with white rabbit fur,wool is slippery.At the same time it is also very good,so I like it.

I like the three small animals,I dont know what do you like?

I wish you:

Learning progress

your pen Pal:

对于求职者来说，如何用心创造有个性的求职信？英文求职信的写作方法有哪些呢？

虽然求职信一般来说包括1.你得知这份工作的管道。2.学历及职历的概要。3.你的个性以及能力。4.联络地点、联络方式，以及最后的感谢语等，但其实这里可以发挥创意的空间非常的大。求职信的诉求在于延续求职简历的内容，更清楚的表现工作企图心、个性、特质等。另外，有时写些自己平时喜欢从事的活动来补充履历也很不错。

举例来说，你甚至可以这么写：「我工作时专注的耐力就是从钓鱼中培养出来的」。

求职信的书写诀窍

1.表现自我的个性及特质

建议使用积极正面的陈述方式。

2.文章不可冗长

控制在总共四段、每段五行以内。

3.前瞻性的气魄

具有勇于突破与开创气质的人是外商公司的最爱。因此并不需要对之前辞职的原委做太多的解释。

4.少用第一人称

为了避免流于自大与主观的缺点，尽量少用第一人称。

说明你从何处得知这个工作机会

这是最基本的部份。一般来说会将媒体广告的名称改用别的字体书写或用底线加以标记。在这个段落中也可加上你的目标。

强调自己就是最佳的人选

这是最精华的段落。要依据求才广告的内容，将自己的能力及特色恰如其份的包装起来。不过在工作经验不足的情况下，要避免将自己吹嘘的过分离谱。

在结尾部份注意应有的礼貌

最后的部份建议要以感谢对方在百忙之中阅读这份履历表，并且“诚挚的期望能得到面试的机会”、“希望有荣幸能为公司效力”这样的句子作为结尾，让主管留下好的印象。

Last autumn we took a trip to Qianshan by bus.It is about thirty miles from the city.We planned to put up in a hotel there in order to watch the sun rise the next morning.

As soon as we got there,we began to climb up the mountains.How great the sight is!We felt as if we had entered amother world full of beauty,peaeefulness and loveliness.There are hundreds of mountains,one after another.there are magnificent cliffs,one above another.We climbed up vigorously and breathed the fresh air greedily.As the sun was going down,we descended to a little hotel at the foot of the hill,where we had a big dinner,and then went to bed early so as to regain the energy ior the expedition next morning.

Before daybreak,we reached the peak of the highest mountain after a hard groping and climbing in the dark.Unaware of the cold wind,we stood motionlessly,with our eyes fixing at the hr end of the east.Suddenly thin ravs of red hue spread across the sky.As the redness deepened,some mysterious clouds moved across thc sky,dividing heaven from the earth.Just at this moment,up from the brightening far east rose the sun.It was so red and yet so tender that we could gaze at it with naked eyes.and a slight applause from us.the amazed spectators,rang through the peak.Up,up it rose,adding to itself strength and glory at every step.It dazzled with vigour,driving away darkness,cold,and misery from the earth,and bring light,warmth,and happiness to men.

We were completely amazed at the wonder and the greatness of nature.We jumped and shouted like innocent children and we bathed in the first rays of the sun with the peak till it was time for our return.

In last years eleven holiday, our family went to Lanzhou and Xining to travel. That afternoon, Dad suddenly told us to travel, we promised.

Our first goal is Lanzhou, and we dont know the road at high speed. It was dark. We went all the way in the mountain road. Finally, we arrived in Lanzhou. After dinner, we began to find hotels, went to many hotels, but they were all overcrowded. We searched and searched, and finally found a guest house. The second day, we went to Wuquanshan, many people drove up to the door of my difficult to calm the mood. Bought a ticket in the first eye to is Huo statue around the past is a temple, called Confucian Temple.

Where we took a photo and went out to the mountain, we go on a mountain is wuquanshan. Because of the rain, many roads were mud, a lot of mud was stained on the shoes, and then I saw the attic. It seems the Huo, we went down the steps down the road I inadvertently looked down is a small squirrel on the tree to jump for a while and then disappeared. Down the hill, we did not stop at Xining again. In the evening, we came to Xining in Qinghai province. We found the hotel, lived and slept for a night to relieve the fatigue of the day. In the morning, we were ready to go to Qinghai, and we started out after breakfast. On the way we came to a place and had a strong wind. I came out and shook and went to sleep in the car. When I woke up to the edge of the lake in Qinghai, I stretched out, and I knew that the ticket for Qinghai Lake was 50 yuan.

I see mom and dads eyes know is not to buy a ticket, we had to walk along the road and found no fence, there is one family living they took us to the lake, took a photo, listen to them before the Qinghai Lake is great, but now more and more small, this is not the results of the protection ring. We went to a rape place, the smell of the faint fragrance, has gone down in the west of the west, will our hearts call back. Passing by, we found a bucket of honey and a sweet taste! We slept early in the evening, because we were going home tomorrow.

I dont want to go back! Ill come again if theres a chance!

Winter has come, people are wearing a thick cotton padded jacket, put on a coat.

Uncle tree stripped off his big coat to feel the cool North wind. The grass also loses its coat, shrinks into the soil and rests, … …

The north wind mother-in-law also for the autumn wind grandpa stand guard, optimistic about the winter of all creatures, protect the earth. As long as someone destroys the earth and the living, the north wind mother will come in time to stop the people.

The snow sister also gradually came to the earth covered with snow, make the earth into a take on an altogether new aspect, the white sea.

How beautiful the winter is! I like the winter scenery!

I love the snowflakes flying in winter. It makes the fields spotless. The insect trembled with cold, and the farmer smiled and opened it.

I love the snowflakes flying in winter. They make the fields white and clean. It covers the fields with thick quilts and snows and moistens the roots of the crops.

I love the snowflakes flying in winter. It makes the city white. It brings the scenery of the north to the city, and the children play happily in the snow.

During the summer holidays, I went to my grandmothers home. One evening after supper, I stood on the balcony to look at the sky.

The stars in the sky were twinkling. Some were crowded, and others were separate. Then I found that the stars were not the same colour. They were white, grey, light blue and orange. It was really beautiful. At that time, the sky was like blue damask decorated by millions of bright dimonds.

Looking up at the sky, I saw the moon. It was like a naughty child, sometimes it hid in the clouds and sometimes it got out of the clouds. It seemed to play “hide and seek” with us. The stars around the moon, however, were as shy as girls, and hid themselves in the clouds.

Oh, what a beautiful sky!

在暑假期间，我去了我奶奶家。晚餐后的一个晚上，我站在阳台上看天空。

天上的星星闪烁着。有些人很拥挤，有些人则是分开的。然后我发现星星不一样的颜色。他们是白色，灰色，浅蓝色和橙色。真漂亮。那时候，天空是蓝色的缎子数以百万计的明亮的钻石装饰。

抬头望着天空，我看到了月亮。它就像一个顽皮的孩子，有时它藏在云层里，有时它就从云层里出来了。它似乎和我们玩“捉捉”。然而，月亮周围的星星，像女孩一样害羞，并躲在云层里。

哦，多么美丽的天空!

Dear Robert,：

Im glad to receive your letter. Now I will tell you something about my plan for summer vacation after the final exam. Firstly, I will learn to drive. I think driving can be useful. Secondly, I will take some English courses. Thirdly, I will visit some tourist attractions. It must be very exciting. Last, I will do some reading in the vacation. What about you? I hope you can have a pretty vacation.

John

[给朋友的一封信英文作文

Our shool， Wuhan Heping Middle School， lies in the center of Wuhan city。 It was just built and has the perfect size。 The school yard is two hundred meters long， one hundred meters wide， and is surrounded by trees。

When you walk throught the front gate， there is a huge garden that greets you with every kind of natural things。 To the left is the school library in which there are more than 100， 000 books。 To the right is the experiment building。 In the very middle of the school yard stands the teaching building that stretches for one hundred and fifty meters。 This teaching building has four floors with the teachers offices at either end of each floor。 Standing on the top of the teaching building， you can see a flower bed。 Behind the teaching building is a large playground on the right side。 The students often do sports here after class。 To the left lies the dining hall which can hold 500 people。 This is our school， a beautiful one。

我们的学校，武汉和平中学，位于武汉市的中央。学校刚刚建立，规模适当。校园长2百米，宽1百米，四面环绕着树木。

当你进入前门时，一个具有各种自然风景的巨大花园在欢迎你。左边是图书馆，馆内藏书10万多册。右边为实验楼。校园的正中央是长150米的教学楼。该楼共四层，两头为教师办公室。站在教学楼楼顶，你能看到楼前有一个花园，楼后右侧是一个大操场，课后同学们经常在这做运动。左边是可容纳500人的食堂。这就是我们的学校，一座美丽的学校。

Our school， Wuhan Heping Middle School， is in the center of Wuhan city。 The school yard is two hundred meters long， one hundred meters wide， and is surrounded by trees。 It is 20， 000 square meters in area。

When you walk into the school yard， you will see a wide road in front of you。 On your left， you will see the school library in which there are more than 100， 000 books。 On your right is the experiment building， Walk ahead，and you will see a beautiful garden in front of you。 When you go through it，there stands the teaching building: It has four floors with the teachers of rices at either end of each floor。 Behind it， there stands the dining-room on the left side。 To the right lies the playground where the students often play football。 This is our school， a beautiful one。

我们的学校，武汉和平中学，位于武汉市的中央，校园长2百米，宽1百米，四面环绕树木。校园占地2万平方米。

当你走进校园时，你会发现你的面前是一条宽阔的道路。左侧有一座图书馆，馆内藏书10万多册，右侧是实验楼。再往前走，是一个美丽的花园。穿过花园是一座教学楼，共四层，两头为教师办公室。在教学楼的后面，左侧是食堂，右侧是一个大操场，学生们经常在这踢球。这就是我们的学校，一座美丽的学校。

[武汉和平中学英文作文

敬爱的老师亲爱的同学

大家好！

有一个人，她永远占据在你心里最柔软的地方，你愿用自己的一生去爱她；有一种爱，它让你肆意的索取、享用，却不要你任何的回报。这一个人，叫母亲；这一种爱，叫母爱！一个平凡而又伟大的名字。

母亲对我们有三重恩：生我之痛；养我之幸；育我之苦！母亲给了我们生命，教会我们怎么做人，给予我们教育和开导。我们在渐渐长大，而妈妈却渐渐老去！

同学们，其实人的一生，很短！眼睛一闭一睁，一天就过去了；眼睛一闭不睁，一辈子就过去了！人生苦短，不过也就那几个十年而已！妈妈为我们的成长付出的心血，是无法估量的！或许比天高，或许比地厚，或许比水深。

有首歌，叫《感恩的心》。这首歌告诉我们：拥有一颗“感恩”的心，善于发现事物的美好，感受平凡中的美丽，那我们就会以坦荡的心境、开阔的胸怀来应对生活中的酸甜苦辣，让原本平淡的生活焕发出迷人的光彩！

感恩，读懂它，它可以让你知道许多你不曾发现的真理！报答不一定要奢华！感恩不一定要轰烈，只有你有那颗真挚的心，就已经足够了！

妈妈的一生都是在操劳！她忘我的工作，只为满足我们的那小小的私心！她不辞辛苦的唠叨，只为我们的健康着想，！她不知疲惫的做家务，只为让我们有一个舒适，干净的家！感恩我们的母亲吧！因为她，我们没有理由不去做好每一件事！

现在的我们长大了，懂事了！不再是以往那个调皮捣蛋的小朋友了！也许我们都在准备，等待一个时机去行动，给妈妈一个意外的惊喜！

行动吧！现在是时候了！

最后，我祝福天底下所有饱经风霜的妈妈们，祝你们三八节快乐，永远幸福，年轻！

I have a happy, happy family.

My father, the advantage. Dad ready to help others. Since we bought a printer back home. Relatives and friends need to print something, came to find my father. Gave the information to us, the friend went away. When he finished print, just call me to send it in the past. My mother said that here is bad there bad there.

Dad is very good at math, and sometimes I dont math problem you can ask him to help. He like the teacher, read the question first, yourself, the equations. After these ready, began to thin to speak up for me. The formula or the equations listed from that place, he said. Then let me repeat. It is difficult to imagine the math problem is a piece of cake in his hand. Every time he told me the topic, understand fast, high efficiency, less time consuming. This is a major bright spot.

My mother much more special, have financial and life, and nutrition. Want to buy something in the home, to her this. Moms food is delicious, and safety, and nutrition. Every cook according to her diet. My father is the most like to eat bacon, every time want to toward to my mother. Mother said: "eat many bacon can harm the body, should eat less." So our bacon rarely eat, bacon this year and last year. It is hard to want to these.

My brother is the most naughty home, one of the most annoying people. He is the most headache, when you eat. You dont give he said a good word, he is not to eat. He is running around the house while eating, also cant catch him. After we finished eating, he is still in a bite to eat slowly. When he was playing in the room, dont know how many things he broke.

Look, this is our family. The typical character in our house is my brother.

我有一个快乐，幸福的大家庭。

我的爸爸，优点特别多。爸爸乐于助人。自从我们家里买了一台打印机回来以后。亲戚朋友们需要什么要打印的东西时，就找我爸爸来了。把资料给了我们，朋友就走了。等他打印完的时候，就叫我把它送过去。我妈妈就在那里说这里不好那里不好的。

爸爸的数学学的很好，有时我不会的数学题就可以请教他来帮助。他就像老师一样，先把题读了，自己做好，列出方程。这些做好了以后，就开始给我细细的讲了起来。那个算式或那个等式是从那个地方列出来的，他说完后。然后就让我重复。再难的数学题在他手上是小菜一碟。每次他给我讲题时，懂得快，效率高，费时少。这就是他的一大亮点。

我妈妈管的事特别多，有金融，生活，营养。家里要买什么东西，要过她这一关才行。妈妈做的饭菜又好吃，又安全，又营养。每天做饭都要按照她的食谱走。我爸爸是最喜欢吃腊肉的人，每次想吃时就要向着我妈去要。妈妈说：“吃多了腊肉会伤害到身体的，要少吃。”所以我们家的腊肉很少吃，去年的腊肉今年还有。想吃到这些是很难的。

我的弟弟是家里最调皮的，最烦的一个人了。他吃饭的时候，是最头痛的。你不给他说好话，他是不会吃的。他吃饭时还在屋子里到处跑，抓也抓不住他。等我们吃完了以后，他还在一口一口地慢慢吃。他在屋子里玩时，不知他弄坏了多少东西。

瞧，这就是我们这一家子。我们家的典型人物就是我的弟弟。

I am cheerful, modest, self-confident and good at communicating with others. I study industriously and rigorously. Whenever I come across a problem in study, Im able to consult with an open mind and try my best to get an indepth knowledge. Possessing the honest credible moral character, a sense of teamwork and responsibility for my work, I have strong endurance, willpower and hard-working quality of the work to identify persistent optimism, the courage to face difficulties and challenges.

At the same time, I have taken an active part in all kinds of activities in order to improve my personal qualities. From these experiences, I have not only realized the importance of unity and cooperation, but also learned a lot of social knowledge, and I believe all these will play an important role in my future career.

Yesterday was Sunday ,the weather was sunny.And my friends asked me to go to the park with them.We went to the park by bike,and brought some foods and fruits with us .

The park was very quiet ,and we saw many old persons sang songs or dance in it.We looked for a long time .Then we went to see the beautiful flowers and also took some photoes .

At last ,we sat down on the glasses and had a picnic.

We all had a good time yesterday.

Reading makes people happy． Golgi once said， "reading a good book is talking to many noble people．"

When I was young， I had very little knowledge of vocabulary． I often saw my mother reading a thick Olympic math book． A solution does not come out of the title mothers eyebrows knit into a question mark， when mom finally solved a problem， will beam with joy． I went around my father， I saw my father also was all eyes looking at a book in English， he watched and learned， not to say a few words in english．

I doubted， thinking： why the book can make them so fascinating？ So I picked up a book and read it． But I knew very little words， and I told my mother to tell me stories before going to bed every night． "Good children bedtime ten minutes story"， "Snow White and the Seven Dwarfs"， "Zheng Yuanjie fairy tales"， "Romance of the Three Kingdoms"， "outlaws of the marsh"．．． "

Gradually， as I grew up， I began to read books myself． I know Cao Cao in the romance of the Three Kingdoms， and his every move reveals his cunning． Zhang Feis reckless， Liu Bei heavy friendship etc．． In the "Water Margin"， I also know the outspoken Song Jiang and gallant heroes of Liangshan．

It is the three of us are walking together， there must be my teacher， is the good from it， the poor instead． "！ More reading makes my eloquence and writing very good， writing composition is easy， and my writing level has improved a lot．

Reading makes me understand a lot of extra—curricular knowledge， understand the infinite fun of knowledge． Reading makes me happy． I love reading！

It is a truth universally acknowledged, that a single man in possession of a good fortune must be in want of a wife. However little known the feelings or views of such a man may be on his first entering a neighbourhood, this truth is so well fixed in the minds of the surrounding families, that he is considered as the rightful property of some one or other of their daughters.

凡是有钱的单身汉，总想娶位太太，这已经成了一条举世公认的真理。这样的单身汉，每逢新搬到一个地方，四邻八舍虽然完全不了解他的性情如何，见解如何，可是，既然这样的一条真理早已在人们心目中根深蒂固，因此人们总是把他看作自己某一个女儿理所应得的一笔财产。

"My dear Mr. Bennet," said his lady to him one day, "have you heard that Netherfield Park is let at last?"

有一天班纳特太太对她的丈夫说：“我的好老爷，尼日斐花园终于租出去了，你听说过没有?”

Mr. Bennet replied that he had not.

班纳特先生回答道，他没有听说过。

"But it is," returned she; "for Mrs. Long has just been here, and she told me all about it."

“的确租出去了，”她说，“朗格太太刚刚上这儿来过，她把这件事的底细，一五一十地告诉了我。”

Mr. Bennet made no answer.

班纳特先生没有理睬她。

"Do not you want to know who has taken it?" cried his wife impatiently.

“你难道不想知道是谁租去的吗?”太太不耐烦地嚷起来了。

"You want to tell me, and I have no objection to hearing it."

“既是你要说给我听，我听听也无妨。”

This was invitation enough.

这句话足够鼓励她讲下去了。

"Why, my dear, you must know, Mrs. Long says that Netherfield is taken by a young man of large fortune from the north of England; that he came down on Monday in a chaise and four to see the place, and was so much delighted with it that he agreed with Mr. Morris immediately; that he is to take possession before Michaelmas, and some of his servants are to be in the house by the end of next week."

“哦!亲爱的，你得知道，郎格太太说，租尼日斐花园的是个阔少爷，他是英格兰北部的人;听说他星期一那天，乘着一辆驷马大轿车来看房子，看得非常中意，当场就和莫理斯先生谈妥了;他要在‘米迦勒节’以前搬进来，打算下个周未先叫几个佣人来住。”

"What is his name?"

“这个人叫什么名字?”

"Bingley."

“彬格莱。”

"Is he married or single?"

“有太太的呢，还是单身汉?”

"Oh! single, my dear, to be sure! A single man of large fortune; four or five thousand a year. What a fine thing for our girls!"

“噢!是个单身汉，亲爱的，确确实实是个单身汉!一个有钱的单身汉;每年有四五千磅的收入。真是女儿们的福气!”

"How so? how can it affect them?"

“这怎么说?关女儿女儿们什么事?”

"My dear Mr. Bennet," replied his wife, "how can you be so tiresome! You must know that I am thinking of his marrying one of them."

“我的好老爷，”太太回答道，“你怎么这样叫人讨厌!告诉你吧，我正在盘算，他要是挑中我们一个女儿做老婆，可多好!”

"Is that his design in settling here?"

“他住到这儿来，就是为了这个打算吗?”

"Design! nonsense, how can you talk so! But it is very likely that he may fall in love with one of them, and therefore you must visit him as soon as he comes."

“打算!胡扯，这是哪儿的话!不过，他倒作兴看中我们的某一个女儿呢。他一搬来，你就得去拜访拜访他。”

"I see no occasion for that. You and the girls may go, or you may send them by themselves, which perhaps will be still better; for, as you are as handsome as any of them, Mr. Bingley might like you the best of the party."

“我不用去。你带着女儿们去就得啦，要不你干脆打发她们自己去，那或许倒更好些，因为你跟女儿们比起来，她们哪一个都不能胜过你的美貌,你去了，彬格莱先生倒可能挑中你呢?”

"My dear, you flatter me. I certainly have had my share of beauty, but I do not pretend to be any thing extraordinary now. When a woman has five grown up daughters, she ought to give over thinking of her own beauty."

“我的好老爷，你太捧我啦。从前也的确有人赞赏过我的美貌，现在我可有敢说有什么出众的地方了。一个女人家有了五个成年的女儿，就不该对自己的美貌再转什么念头。”

Hainan not have winer.In Hainanover here is very very hot!You can go to there in winter.Because the winter in HaiNan is warmer than most areas of China.Swimming in the sea playing on the beach or having meals outside are very good choices for travellers. But you must be good sunscreen preparations.There are usually 40 degrees Celsius .But before and after Septemberthere are usually 30 degrees Celsius.I like Hainan very much!

每年都有很多考生问老师，怎么提高写作？除了阅读，考研英语中占分值最大的就是写作。对于各位考研学子，大家无论学习阅读还是写作，首先要弄清楚一个问题，什么叫做好句子？

好句子绝不仅仅是把主谓宾或者主系表堆砌在一起。好句子具有一些特点。如果同学们能够把握这些特点，那么相信大家一定能够提升作文句式的表达。下面英语老师跟大家分享一下好句子的特点。

特点一：整体性

句子的整体性：即能表达单独的、完整的思想。

Eg. Born in a small town in South China in the early 50s, he grew up to be a famous musician.

【分析】这个句子表达了两层思想：1. Born in a small town出生在一个小镇 2. grew up to be a musician.长大成为了音乐家。这个句子应该分成两句来写。除此之外，还需要增加一些信息来连接两层思想。

【提升】He was born in a small town in South China in the early 50s. In his childhood he liked to sing. Later he entered a music conservatory. In the 70s, he grew up to be an accomplished musician.

特点二：连贯性

句子的连贯性：即能清晰地连接句子的各个部分，没有虚假的平行结构，没有指代不请的代词，没有不清晰的句内关系。

Eg. Upon entering the classroom, the students stood up and said, "good morning!"

【分析】这个句子从语法来讲是正确的，但是句内关系不清楚，到底谁进入了教室？

【提升】When the teacher entered the classroom, the students stood up and said, "good morning!"

Eg. Elizabeth and I enjoy walking, to ski, travel and teaching university students.

【分析】这个句子的连贯性较差，可以利用平行结构来体现连贯性。

【提升】Elizabeth and I enjoy walking, skiing, traveling and teaching university students.

特点三：准确性

句子的准确性指句子内部没有不准确的，不必要的词。

Eg. He returned in the early part of the month of August.

【分析】这个句子感觉有故意写长之嫌，需要精简。

【提升】He returned in early August.

特点四：重点突出

好的句子应该重点突出，词的选择，词的重复都有助于句子的重点突出。

Eg. When the bank robbers entered the bank they yelled, "dont move!"

【分析】这个句子比较平淡，可以修改一下动词。

【提升】When the bank robbers rushed into the bank they yelled, "dont move!"

特点五：语法正确，句式多变

句式多变指句子长短结合。如果全篇都是复杂的长难句，文章读起来会晦涩难懂，并且有挑衅阅卷人之嫌。反之，全篇都是短句，感觉有侮辱阅卷人之感。

Eg. Daisy, who was the first-year student of college, would go to a par near her school every day in morning, she would bring a small recorder with her, in park she would find quiet corner and listen to a tape of English stories.

【分析】这个句子不仅仅存在语法问题，另外还有完整性，准确性问题。

【提升】Daisy, a first-year college student, enjoys studying in the park near her school. Each morning she brings a small recorder, finds a quiet corner in the park, and listens to a tape of English stories.

如果同学们在写句子的时候，注意以上五点，相信大家一定能够写出正确，完整，准确的英文句子。

Welcome to my hometown!Shanghai is my hometown.It is a modern and busy town.It has a long history.There are many big supermarkets,beautiful gardens and good factories here.It is very easy to go shopping.You can see big trees and nice flowers.There are many restaurants in Shanghai.The food tastes very delicious.You can enjoy eyery minutes of it.Many visitors come here to enjoy it.

Dear customer:

Welcome to our shop. We are a cosmetics enterprise with 20 years of

production experience. For the first time, we put on the "coat" of the brand to

come to you. Maybe we dont know marketing, maybe we have few products, maybe we

dont have gorgeous packaging, maybe we dont pay enough attention to greeting,

but we can guarantee that every product we sell is a conscientious product

researched and developed by heart. We dont pursue variety, we only pursue Keep

improving; we dont pursue the glory of big brand, only pursue every detail to

make you satisfied.

Our customer service is a very lovely little beauty, sincere and warm, but

in order to better serve you, she cant even drink a sip of water when she is

busy, and even sits in front of the computer all day waiting. Even so, she may

miss your information because of many things. I hope you can be more

considerate.

The annoying express brothers attitude is incompatible and often makes you

angry, which is also a headache for us. We will try our best to negotiate and

bring you a satisfactory shopping experience. Please give us a little

encouragement when you are satisfied. Five points of praise is the driving force

for us to adhere to. Of course, the twists and turns of shopping always hinder

our communication, If you have any dissatisfaction, please dont rush to

evaluate, contact our customer service as soon as possible, we will give you a

beautiful mood in the best way. Thank you again for coming to our shop and look

forward to your coming again.

If you give five points of praise, we have prepared a small idea for you:

screenshot to customer service, give you five yuan discount, unlimited,

universal.

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