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710如何实现梦想的英语作文
全文共 852 字
+ 加入清单导语:我们每个人都有梦想,但如何使我们的梦想成真呢?下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的相关优秀英语作文,欢迎阅读与借鉴,谢谢!
Dream is like a star in the sky,it shows the direction in the night.
every one of us has dreams,but how to make our dream come true?I think there are 3 ways to make our dreams come true.
first,never give up your dream.you should always do the things which will help you to make your dream come true.
second,keeping reading books every day.Books help us to know what we did is right and what wrong.
finally,be confident.every one should be confident in daily life,especially when faced with difficulties.
Dream ,the most beautiful word in the world.let work hard to achieve our dreams from now.
【参考译文】
梦就像天空中的一颗星,它在黑夜里指明了方向。
我们每个人都有梦想,但如何使我们的梦想成真?我认为有3种方法可以让我们的梦想成真。
第一,永远不要放弃你的梦想。要做这将帮助你实现你的梦想的东西。
第二,每天坚持读书,书帮助我们知道我们做的是对的,什么是错的。
最后,是一个confident.every日常生活应充满信心,特别是当面对困难。
在梦中,让努力工作从现在开始实现我们的梦想的最美丽的词语。
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篇1:我的梦想英语
全文共 1038 字
+ 加入清单I have a dream that a lot! but some macant do but i heard: "a person, have a dream, have goals, have goals, there ipower; a power; hathe power, life ifull of meaning." so im going to like the wordof one layer upward, become a successful person!
from third grade i have a dream ito have been admitted to the universitdepartment of insects, or other subjectabout biological, although thiroad itough, but i believe that: "along ahave a dream can come true in all things." so i trto effortto tragain upwards.
i have thiverbig dreams, because i have a passion for biologand insect, love, i think everone of umust have complete mission in the world, and i came into the world should be dedicated to the insect world.
anyway, everyone hagoaland dreamhe will be vertrmbest to make their own dreams, no matter adults, children and old grandpa and grandma must have been hidream, but someone hadied still unfinished, so be sure to cherish their own dreams, let him not onlthe big dreams, but most true eternal dream, everone of the world must come on!
篇2:中考英语作文答题技巧
全文共 1590 字
+ 加入清单提高中考写作水平,需要有效的训练。正确无误的造句能力和各种文体的写作技巧,两者缺一不可。
正确无误的造句能力
这得从初中一开始就抓起,首先可以从替换单词、扩词造句训练,做到有效积累,扩大视野,灵活运用。
如:如何修饰一个最简单、最常用的“说”?我们就可以写出许多:say some thing gladly(merrily excitedly sadly kindly worriedly loudly sweetl ytimidly bravely confidently)
还可说say some thing in a friendly way.替换了一个副词,生动地表达了说话时的不同心情。
扩词有:play football——play foot ball in the play ground——play football in the play ground with my friends——play football in the play ground with my friends after school.对其中的动词我们还可替换成playgames,play the piano…等,后面的状语都可以有相应的更换。
又如:a friend——my friend——my close friend——my close friend named Mary.以此类推,我们可以模仿着进行扩句训练。The students love life.——The studentsof Class One love enjoyable school life verymuch.为了避免句型的重复,我们还可以转换不同的句型,来表达同一内容。如:The dictionary is so big that it doesn’t fit in tomy pocket.——The dic ti on ary is too big to fit into my pocket.——The dictionary is not small enough to fit into my pocket.
这样训练写句的方法,可以帮助学生克服心里先想好中文,然后逐字翻译的不良习惯,从而造的句子符合英语表达的习惯。
在平时的学习中,我们可以试着用课文中所学的句型和词汇,设计一些中译英句子,虽然对初中学生有一定的难度,但长此以往可以有效地掌握正确的句子结构,巩固所学词汇,做到活学活用,为中考作文作好铺垫。
在《牛津》7B开始,我们针对所学的句型和学生日常学习生活的真实情景,设计了许多中译英,如:
1.尽管我的爷爷奶奶已80多岁了,他们还能每天早上坚持锻炼。(although…)
2.你与其他同学不同,你总是喜欢独自一人呆在家里。(be different from)
3.去天目山参观是一件很开心的事。(It’sfun…)
4.我有个建议,把我们旧的书报杂志送给班级阅览角,这样同学们就会有更多的书可以分享。(suggestion)
5.在暴风雨中,我们最好不放风筝,因为它可能让我们触电。(because,get a electric shock)
6.新的隧道将把上海和崇明岛连接起来。(linkup…with)
7.这位驾驶员从这次事故中吸取了教训。(learn a lesson)
8.我们赢了这场比赛,他们看上去很失望。(win,look)
9.你们校运会准备工作进展如何?(get on with…)
10.我们盼望着2008年的北京奥运会.(look forward to)有了扎实的组词、造句能力,要写好一篇中考作文,就如同裁缝做服装准备好了上等的面料,如果学生对中考中可能出现的各种文体的格式,一般行文规律能了解掌握,那么中考作文定能获得满意的成绩。
篇3:有关沉迷网络的中考英语作文
全文共 1191 字
+ 加入清单导语:现在是互联网的时代,很多人都沉迷于网络游戏中,你觉得这种现象是好是坏呢?下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的优秀英语作文,欢迎阅读与借鉴,谢谢!
Li Hua spent too much time playing computer games and he fell behind others. As a good friend of his, I must do something to help him.
Firstly, I think it’s very important for him to learn lessons well. He should spend most of his time on his study instead of computer games. Secondly, I must tell him that playing computer games too much is bad for his health, especially for his eyes. So he must give it up. I can play more sports with him after school. Maybe he will become more interested in sports than computer games. And then Ill ask him to concentrate more on his study. Of course, I will try my best to help him with all his subjects. I think I can do it in many fun ways and let him find much fun in studying. At the same time, Ill ask both his parents and our teachers to help him, too. If I try these, Im sure he will make great progress soon.
【参考译文】
李华花太多时间玩电脑游戏,他落后于别人。作为他的好朋友,我必须做些事来帮助他。
首先,我认为学好功课对他很重要。他应该把大部分时间花在学习上而不是电脑游戏上。其次,我必须告诉他玩电脑游戏太多对他的健康有害,尤其是对他的眼睛。所以他必须放弃。放学后我可以和他多做运动。也许他会对体育更感兴趣而不是电脑游戏。然后我会让他更加专心学习。当然,我会尽我所能帮助他的所有科目。我认为我可以在许多有趣的方式,让他在学习中找到很多乐趣。同时,我会请他的父母和我们的老师帮助他,太。如果我尝试这些,我相信他很快就会取得很大的进步。
篇4:中考英语作文欣赏:Myviewonschooluniform
全文共 808 字
+ 加入清单At our school , we have to wear uniforms every day. The problem is that all my classmates think the uniforms are ugly. We think young people should look smart and so we would like to wear our own clo
At our school , we have to wear uniforms every day. The problem is that all my classmates think the uniforms are ugly. We think young people should look smart and so we would like to wear our own clothes. Our teachers believe that if we did that. We would concentrate more on our clothes than our studies.We disagree. We should feel more comfortable and thate is good for studying. If we can’t do that, we should be allowed to design our own uniforms. We also think everyone should be different from others. That would be a good way to keep both teachers and students happy.
篇5:学会放松自己中考英语作文
全文共 901 字
+ 加入清单中招考试即将到来,许多学生感到压力很大,为此很烦恼。你校的校刊特意进行了课后放松方式的调查。请你以”Learn to relax yourself “为题写一篇80词左右的短文。要点提示:
1)学生压力大及其表现
2)学会放松很重要
3)常见的放松方式
4)最适合的自我放松方式
5)我的建议
Learn to relax yourself
Now many students of Grade 9 are under too much pressure. They always feel too tired to listen to the teachers carefully in class.
It’s important for students to relax. Only in this way can they study well and be healthy. Here are some different ways to relax themselves. For example, they can try to have enough sleep,or they can listen to their favourite music after class. They can also read some books or do some sports. For me, I often hang out with my friends.
While you are studying, don’t forget to relax. You will study better after a good rest.
参考译文
学会放松自己
现在许多9年级的学生压力太大。上课时他们总是觉得太累了以至于不能认真听老师讲课。
对学生来说放松是很重要的。只有这样他们才能学习健康。这里有一些不同的方法来放松自己。例如,他们可以尝试有足够的睡眠,或者他们可以听他们喜欢的音乐课后。他们也可以读一些书或做一些运动。对我来说,我经常和朋友们出去玩。
当你在学习的时候,不要忘记放松。好好休息后你会学得更好。
篇6:中考英语作文范例:酒店投诉
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+ 加入清单You are writing a complaint to the manager about the hotel.
(以e-mail的形式出现)
On the whole, my stay here was satisfactory. The hotel was comfortable and the room was bright, but it was too dirty. Whats more the food was compeletely awful and the service was really terrible. I have stayed in your hotel for several times and everything is getting worse, though the price is fair.
总体而言,我在这边住得比较满意。酒店很舒服,房间也很明亮,但是太脏了。另外,这儿的食物太糟糕了,服务也很差。我已经在这里住过好几次了,虽然价钱还不错,但每件事都越来越糟糕。
Please try to clean the room a bit more often and find someone who is capable of cooking and who knows how to talk friendly to others.
请时常打扫一下房间,找个真正懂烹饪的和懂得跟别人和睦相处的员工!
篇7:高一英语作文我的梦想
全文共 1038 字
+ 加入清单i have a dream that a lot! but some macant do but i heard: "a person, have a dream, have goals, have goals, there ipower; a power; hathe power, life ifull of meaning." so im going to like the wordof one layer upward, become a successful person!
from third grade i have a dream ito have been admitted to the universitdepartment of insects, or other subjectabout biological, although thiroad itough, but i believe that: "along ahave a dream can come true in all things." so i trto effortto tragain upwards.
i have thiverbig dreams, because i have a passion for biologand insect, love, i think everone of umust have complete mission in the world, and i came into the world should be dedicated to the insect world.
anyway, everyone hagoaland dreamhe will be vertrmbest to make their own dreams, no matter adults, children and old grandpa and grandma must have been hidream, but someone hadied still unfinished, so be sure to cherish their own dreams, let him not onlthe big dreams, but most true eternal dream, everone of the world must come on!
篇8:中考英语作文:关于国庆节的英语作文NationalDay
全文共 1306 字
+ 加入清单例1:
National Day is coming,and we can have a seven-day.My family are going to Hainan.Its a good seaside city.We are staying there for a week. We are going to the beach and going swimming in the sea.Were visiting Tianya Haijiao,Wanquan River and many other beautiful places.I think well have a good time there.
国庆节来了,我有七天的假期。我们一家去海南。那是一个美丽的海滨城市。我们在那里待上一个星期。我们去沙滩,还在海里游泳。我们游览“天涯海角”,菀泉河还有别的许多好地方。我想我们在那里会玩得很开心。
例2:
National Day Holidays
I went to my cousins house on the first day of the holidays and got a piece of good news that his wife was pregnant;She said shes worrying about getting fat,but on her face there was a unconcealable pleasure of conceiving a baby.My cousin told me that hell educate his child in a severe way,with a future fathers matureness.Im happy for them.:)
Yesterday,our research schools soccer team had a match with the graduate students from the department of international business.It was almost a close game in the first half,but we seemed lacking of vigor in the second half,so,we lost the game.
Half of the National Day holidays have passed by...life still goes with good and bad times.
国庆假期
我去表哥家在第一天的假期和有一条好消息,他的妻子怀孕了;她说她的担心发胖,但她脸上有掩饰不住的怀孕的喜悦。我表哥告诉我他将教育他的孩子在一场严重的方式,用未来的父亲的口吻。我为他们高兴。:)
昨天,我们的研究学校的足球队有比赛与国际商务系的研究生。这几乎是一场势均力敌的比赛的上半场,但我们似乎缺乏活力,在下半年,但是,我们失去了游戏。
有一半的国庆假期已经过了……生活仍然持续好与不好的时光。
篇9:以梦想奋斗为主题的中考话题
全文共 1104 字
+ 加入清单我有时候,会忽然莫名的心动而感慨给予我的正能量;有时候,因批判的声音颤动而低头;有时候,愤世嫉俗地利用无能为力做为冲破梦想束缚的理由;有时候,躲在无人角落中抚慰自己追梦路上被荆棘划出的伤。 Sometimes I will suddenly feel the positive energy that gives me inexplicablely; sometimes, I bow my head due to the trembling of critical sounds;As a reason to break through the constraints of dreams; sometimes, hiding in the corner of unmanned soothe the injuries drawn by thorns on the road of dreaming.
但是,一切活的动力与生的努力似乎都归于我的梦想,一个尚渺小却又逐明晰的梦——服装设计师。记得有一次,在一个阳光明媚的下午,我和妈妈上街去买衣服,走进一家服装店,哇!好漂亮呀!于是我左瞧瞧这件衣,右瞧瞧那件衣,突然一个穿着破烂不堪的衣服与鞋子的乞丐把我深深地吸引住了,只见他趴在服装店的透明玻璃上,痴痴地望着那些美丽繁华的衣服,好像在幻想自己穿上那件衣服的时候,可那个服务员看见了却拿起扫把无情地说:“唉!把手拿开,玻璃脏了你赔不起,啊!走——走——走呀,你!”她一边说,一边用扫把赶他。看见这一幕我产生了同情。
他们四处流浪,到处安家可没有一个地方让他们幸福的安身下去。他们春天,光着脚丫,兄弟几个在屋檐下躲雨;夏天没有衣服,兄弟几个在树荫下乘凉;秋天,光着脚丫,翻翻垃圾箱看是否有避冬的衣服。大家看,他们是多么可怜呀!一年四季没有一件像样的衣服,甚至没有一双鞋子,就因为这样在我幼小的心灵中,种下了一颗小树苗。
虽然,我的梦想一生只能做一些衣服,但我会为我这所做的一切而感到自豪,快乐,值得。这如正作家古龙所说“梦想绝不是梦,两者之间的差别通常都有一段非常值得人们深思的距离”。所以,就像这样,可我也帮助了那些四处流浪的乞丐们,帮助了那些贫苦山区山的孩子们。我不后悔走这条路。就算这路上会有痛苦和荆棘,但我相信黎明就在不远处!
也许,在别人眼中的我的梦是平凡的,可在我眼里却亦是不平凡的,我好似一只还未学会飞翔的雏鹰,隐藏着稚嫩的羽翼,正迎着苦难的风暴,泅过岁月沼泽,爬上命运的峭壁,踏着期待的步履,我做的这些只为了追逐我平凡而绚丽的梦想。
我要带着我的中国梦在人海中扬帆起航,为我的中国梦拼搏,努力吧!加油吧!
篇10:2024年6月中考英语作文预测:环境保护
全文共 1613 字
+ 加入清单Life, environmental pollution continuously affects our lives. Such as: polluted air, rivers and garbage pollution, etc., has seriously damaged our living environment.
Rivers are polluted, the creature will not be able to survive in the water, also cant use it to irrigate crops, the human will not eat fresh food. If same, groundwater contamination, people will drink less than clean water, humans will get sick, poisoning, and it may even die. So, no one should be put on the possible environmental pollution of waste into the river.
Air is a guarantee to the survival of all living creatures. If the air is polluted, all creatures will live in the "gas", disease and all kinds of disasters will be the humanitys greatest enemy. Last, mankind will perish. Visible, clean air is how important!
Garbage can be seen everywhere in our daily life, the visible human bad habits - littering behavior is really too serious. Random pile up garbage can cause great harm to the environment, such as: air pollution in a breeding ground for germs, sexually transmitted diseases, and river and so on.
The pollution was terrible! To prevent the pollution, we must care for the environment, protect the earth, to stop all the pollution of the environment.
生活中,环境污染不断地影响着我们的生活。比如:被污染的空气、河流和垃圾污染等等,已经严重地破坏了我们的生活环境。
河流被污染了,水中的生物将无法生存,也不能用它浇灌庄稼,人类将吃不到新鲜的食物。同样,地下水如果被污染,人们将喝不到洁净的水,人类将会生病、中毒,甚至可能会死亡。所以,任何人都不应该往河里投放有可能污染环境的废弃物。
空气是所有生物赖以生存的保证。如果空气被污染了,所有生物将会生活在“毒气室”一样的环境里,疾病和各种灾难将会是人类最大的敌人。日久天长,人类就会灭亡。可见,洁净的空气是多么重要啊!
垃圾在生活中随处可见,可见人类的坏习惯——乱丢垃圾的行为实在太严重了。随意堆放的垃圾会对环境造成很大的危害,例如:滋生病菌、传播疾病、污染空气以及河流等等。
这些污染真是可怕呀!要预防这些污染,我们一定要爱护环境,保护地球,制止一切污染环境的行为。
篇11:2024年中考关于代沟英语作文
全文共 1286 字
+ 加入清单Nowadays, there is often a lack of understanding between parents and children. Children always complain that their parents are out of date, while parents can’t approve of what their children say and do. Thus, a big generation gap is formed.
如今,往往是缺乏了解父母与子女之间。孩子们总是抱怨他们的父母都是过时的,而父母并不赞同他们的孩子说的和做的。因此,形成一个大的代沟。
The gap remains wide for many reasons. Children want to be free to choose their own friends, select their own classes in school, plan their own future, earn and spend their own money, and generally run their own life in a more independent way than many parents allow. Also, young children wish to be understood by their parents, but most parents don’t quite understand their children. They regard it as their responsibility to teach their offspring traditional beliefs. They want them to be obedient and do well in school. Therefore, misunderstanding often arise from parents’ tendency to interfere in children’s daily activities.
产生代沟的原因有很多。孩子们想要自由的选择自己的朋友,选择在学校自己的班级,规划自己的未来,自己挣钱自己花,和一般运行自己的更独立的生活方式比父母允许的。同时,年轻的孩子们希望能够得到父母的,但大多数父母不太了解他们的孩子。他们认为这是他们教他们的后代的传统信仰的责任。他们想让他们听话,在学校做得很好。因此,误解往往从父母倾向于干涉孩子的日常活动。
In my opinion, most problems between parents and children could be solved by joint efforts of both sides to enhance mutual understanding.
在我看来,父母和子女间的代沟问题可以通过双方的共同努力,增进相互理解的解决。
篇12:三年级英语作文:我的梦想教师
全文共 634 字
+ 加入清单I have a dream about my career. I want to be a teacher, because I think teacher is a good job. Generally speaking, teachers have much knowledge. They can help students to enrich their knowledge. Besides, teachers can communicate with students all the time. It helps teachers keep young at heart. Finally, teachers have two long holidays a year. In the free time, I can do many things I like. And I have time to travel. It makes me exciting. I must work hard to realize my dream.
我有一个职业梦想。我想成为一名老师,因为我觉得教师是一份好工作。一般来说,老师懂得很多知识。他们可以帮助学生丰富他们的知识。此外,老师可以随时可以与学生沟通,这有助于老师保持年轻的心态。最后,老师一年有两个长假。在空闲时间,我还可以做很多我喜欢的事。而且我也有时间去旅游,这使我感到兴奋。我必须努力实现我的梦想。
篇13:以梦想期望为主题的中考满分
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+ 加入清单梦想的指引,让我们不辞辛劳的工作。是因为期待梦想成为现实,我们才会无所畏惧地执着于自己的工作。让我们以梦想为帆,工作为桨去迎接美好人生。
袁隆平梦见自己培育的水稻能养活更多的人,能大到可以在树下乘凉,是因为有这一份对梦想实现的期盼,才能执着于自己的科学事业。
无独有偶,著名的印象派大师雷阿诺以“美会留下”为立志名言,决心通过自己一切努力去创造奇迹。他坚守自己的诺言,致力于自己的信念,甚至在疾病缠身之际,仍百折不挠地在画架前作画,最终倒在画架旁。因为有梦想的牵引,一切的付出和辛劳都是值得的,一番执着的工作受得到世人的肯定。
不仅雷阿诺这样,法国大文豪巴尔扎克也有同样的人生经历,巴尔扎克决心用自己犀利的笔法来无情揭露资本主义社会的现实,来给受伤的人们的心灵开一剂良药,他曾经说过“拿破仑用剑没有完成的,我要用笔把它写完。”正因为这样,他才能在一贫如洗的小木屋内,数十年如一日的笔耕不辍,才能著成人间巨著《人间喜剧》,才能践行自己的承诺,才能实现梦想,问鼎辉煌。
以梦想为帆,才能坚定自己的信念,以工作为桨,才能使梦想实现成为一种可能。
是因为希望再续经典传奇,卡梅隆才能全新力作,震撼推出《阿凡达》;是因为希望圆梦奥运,冰坛伉俪申雪和赵宏博才能不离不弃共同奋斗了十三个春秋;是因为希望能在NBA上创造一番佳绩,乔丹才能在投失几千个球后,仍旧毫不气馁地执着于篮球梦。
他们,都有梦想,他们都以梦想为导航,用自身百折不挠和无所畏惧和付出,去实现自己曾经的梦。
有了梦想,我们就要用心去呵护,用自己十倍百倍地辛劳去浇灌它的成长,让梦想最终成为现实,不必在乎工作的过程中,遇到什么样的坎坷。也不必在意将来在追求梦想的道路上,会面临什么样无法克服的挑战,只要把握现在,用工作去成就梦想!
让我们以梦想为帆,以工作为桨去践行自己的承诺,迎接美好未来!
篇14:2024年中考英语作文写作技巧解读
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+ 加入清单一、写作决窍
总体把握,要点齐全;人称时态,逻辑清楚;
关键词汇,动词第一;组词成句,结构完整;
组句成文,连词增色;此路不通,绕道迂回;
字迹工整,留好印象;从句适量,高分有望。
二、写作步骤
1.认真审题。审题包括要点、格式、词数以及此篇文章要传递给读者什么样的信息,告诫读者什么(即写作目的)。
2.确定文体和时态。确定文体后,根据不同文体的特点和要求进行组织材料;同时确定出该篇文章的总时态与时态的变化。
3.写完要点,但不随意发挥。
4.先草稿,后抄写。
三、作文案例
[2004年全国中学生英语能力竞赛初赛初三组] (14分)
Choose one of your hobbies and write an article for the school magazine about it. Tell the magazine readers.
·What exactly your hobby is;
·When and how you became interested in this hobby;
·Why you enjoy your hobby;
·About your hopes and plans for the future.
写作要求:
1.根据所提供的内容,适当拓展想象空间,灵活地将提供的信息体现在文章中。
2.条理清楚,语句通顺,书写清晰、规范。
3.词数60-80.
[学生解答A]
My hobby is read books①.When I was seven years old.I became interested in reading books.I like needing books because there are a lot of useful things in books.I can learn a lot of knowledge from books. Books also② can teach me how to be a good person.Books even can solve many problems for me.I will read more good books to improve myself.
①改为reading books,动词作表语时应该用动名词。
②also的位置应放在can之后。
[点评]:档次9-11分。
①要点不全,漏掉最后一个要点。
②句子基本无误,能正确传递信息给读者但文章不流畅,句子与句子之间过渡不自然,给读者感觉在回答上述问题。
③有少量错误。
[学生解答B]
My hobby is reading.Reading books is very enjoyable.When I was young ,my mother used to tell me a story before.I went to bed every night.The stories were so interesting that I always felt they weren’t enough.So I began to read books by myself.Little by little I became interested in reading.I can learn much knowledge and many interesting things all over the world.When I read books,I can enjoy the beautiful sentences.At the same time I can improvemy writing.I want to be a writer in the future,so I must study hard and read more books so that my dream can come true.
①开门见山、点题。
②真情流露,理由充分。
③文中带圈的连词使用得恰当,使文章过渡自然、
④巧妙使用句型以表决心。
[点评]:档次13-14分。
①清楚表达写作目的,要点齐全。
②语言表达灵活多样,字里行间流露出真情实感,文章有感染力。
③恰当使用连词和从句,语言流畅,且无错误,是一篇高质量的作文。
[高分突破]
①文体:记叙文。
②要点:what → when →how → why → hope and plan for the future.
③时态:一般现在时,一般过去时,一般将来时的自然变化。
内容具有开放性,但它也是“控制性”的写作试题,因此不能随意发挥,要善于抓信息,写完要点。选用这两篇学生真实习作,一是因为他们选材相同,二是因为他们都是英语成绩优秀的同学。同学B灵活使用连词so…that,so,little by little,when,so that等,恰到好处地使用新句型和短语used to,became interested in,come true……等,使内容丰富,读起来优美流畅。其实这些表达同学A也会,只是缺乏技术加工。通过这两篇作文点评,同学们便能悟出其中的奥妙。
四、培养途径
1.根据老师布置的写作内容,独立完成一篇写作。
2.与同伴合作,交流自己的写作,通过交流找出各自作文中写得好的地方和优美的句子,合作创造一篇新的文章,供大家欣赏。
3.找老师点评,请求老师指点,尤其是怎样润色。
4.自己纠错,写下反思。
五、备考演练
A
缙云山是重庆著名的游览胜地,每天有大量的游客。请你根据下面提供的信息写一篇报道,说明现在的游客在环境保护方面的变化。
写作要求:
1.词数在100左右。
2.条理清楚,语句通顺。
3.开头已写好,但不计入总词数。
Jinyun Mountain is a famous place of interest …
B
阅读电视广告词:“If we don’t save water,the last drop of water will be a tear-drop.”根据提示,写一篇60-80词的短文。
提示:
1.生活离不开水。
2.可饮用水在减少。
3.水污染严重。
4.应保护水源,再利用水。
思路点拨与参考答案
A. [思路点拨]:
①文体:记叙文。
②时态:一般过去时态,一般现在时态。采用正反对比的写作手法,增加感染力。
③写作目的:告诉读者保护环境的重要性。
Jinyun Mountain is a famous place of interest.Every day a lot of tourists come here to enjoy its beauty. But a few years ago,some of them paid no attention to protecting theenvironment.They threw their rubbish,such as plastic bags,fruit skins and waste paper on the ground.Sometimes they broke trees,picked flowers and killed birds. Some even made fires in the woods to cook food.How dangerous it was.Luckily,great changes have taken place here.Tourists are used to putting their rubbish into dustbins,and they are doing their best to protect the birds and plants as well.They bring their own meals instead of cooking to preventstarting a forest fire in the mountains.All these changes make us very happy.
B. [思路点拨]:
①夹叙夹议(说明现状,谈谈感想)。
②时态:一般现在时态。
③广告词的含义——水很重要,应保护和再利用(写作意图)。
Water is very important to humans.We can’t live without water.The water we can drink is falling.But some people don’t seem to care about it.They waste a lot of water.They pour dirtywater into rivers and lakes.Water pollution is getting more and more serious.So we must do something to stop the pollution.We not only protect the water but also find ways to reuse it.If we don’t do this,the last drop of water will be a tear-drop.
篇15:梦想中考
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+ 加入清单人生总是要有些梦想和追求,做人没有梦想的话,那跟咸鱼有什么区别呢?俗话说:“有梦才有希望,有梦想才会不断的进步与发展。”理想,是激动人们前进的动力,能帮人们找到信心与希望。去努力,去坚持,去奋斗,不被挫折打倒,一步步走向成功,这是多么的神圣不可触犯呀!
周恩来总理曾说过:“为中华之崛起而读书。”就像少年的梦想和个人的目标与时代的脉搏紧密相连,更与中国梦密不可分。
我也不例外,我从小就一个梦想。那就是成为一名律师。说起我这个梦想,还有一段经历呢?之前我曾在新闻报道上听说,本该有罪的人,用金钱收买了在法场上有官职的人,并把无辜的人判刑。还有的是律师书被收买了,被告者起诉失败了。
也有公平公正的律师,为人民申诉冤情,我的梦想也是如此,既然别人肯找我,我就一定要为人家负责、承担责任。如果通过我的不懈努力,考取律师证的话,我就实现我的梦想了,我定不会辜负众望,负起责任,完成自己职业的使命。把世上所有的冤案翻底,还人家一个公道。我也并不会辜负律师这两个字的。我一定会珍惜当下,脚踏实地、追逐梦想、开创未来,为明天的美好不懈努力!
虽然我的梦想很美好,但我知道还差得太远了。不过,我会坚持,会立志努力把我的梦想实现。希望我未来的职业,可以在为他人、为社会带来福祉的过程中实现。正所谓这句话“路也漫漫,遥遥其途,心向往之,虽远莫阻!”
篇16:2024中考英语作文预测:毕业感想
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+ 加入清单初中生活马上就要结束了,你有什么感想呢?下面是语文迷为大家整理提供的毕业感想的作文,希望对你有帮助。
初中生活马上就要结束了,三年的初中生活一定给你留下了很多挥之不去的回忆。请你给大家讲一个最值得你回忆的故事。包括时间、人物、事情经过和事后你的感想(请不要写出真实的学校名称以及真实姓名)。
提示词语: three years, memories, one of, one day, think, happy/ sorry
How time flies! I have studied in my school for three years. And I will graduate from middle school in a month. I am eager to share my happiness and sadness with you. I had so many memories in three years’ life. One of them impressed me very much. I still remember, when I began to learn English, I found it too difficult. No matter how hard I tried, I still couldn’t do well in it and almost gave it up. As soon as my English teacher found my problem, she had a talk with me about how to learn English well. Since then, she has kept helping me. Little by little, I’ve become interested in English and I’m good at it. I think I am so lucky to become one of her students. I’ve learned a lot from her. I will try to help others when they are in trouble. I think it is a happy thing to help others.
篇17:我有一个梦想中考话题
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+ 加入清单梦想是五彩斑斓的翅膀,每个人都有一对五彩的翅膀。有了它,生活会更加充实、快乐。 Dream is colorful wings, and everyone has a pair of colorful wings.With it, life will be more fulfilling and happy.
我有一个梦想,我愿是一名救死扶伤的医生,在治疗病人时,细心周到地为每一位病人创造一个健康的身体;在生死一线的治疗战场上,我将竭尽所能救治每一个病人,救治每一个家庭,让每一个家庭都幸福完整。这是一对粉红色的翅膀,它象征着善良!
我有一个梦想,希望成为一名爱的大使,每走到一处地方,我就将爱的种子播种在那儿,让爱在每一个人的心间萌芽,让爱传遍千家万户,让爱给街头的孤儿温暖一生吧!给地震中失去亲人的人们送上爱的祝福……这是一对心形的翅膀,它象征着爱!
我有一个梦想,成为一只翱翔的和平鸽,担任和平的信使。不再看见硝烟弥漫的战场,不再饱尝失去亲人的痛楚,不再感受生活的艰辛。让每个地区都充满和平和美好,让人们都幸福快乐,让家庭都完整快乐。这是一对天蓝色的翅膀,它象征着和平美好!
我有一个梦想,建造一所希望小学,为贫苦的孩子们创造学习的机会。让孩子们可以上学,学到知识,学会道理,学懂事理。让所有的儿童都可以上学读书。不再束缚在文盲的范围内。这是一对橙色的翅膀,它象征着祝福!
我有一个梦想,消灭世界上所有的坏人,让人们不再担惊受怕的生活,没有烦恼,没有恐惧,社会也没有祸害。社会美好,家庭幸福,人们安心。这是一对洁白的翅膀,它象征着纯洁。
我有一个梦想……
在生活的天空上,我们有了梦想的翅膀,才能有始有终,生活幸福快乐……
篇18:中考英语作文:初中生活的回顾
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+ 加入清单Dear parents,
Words fail me when I want to express my thanks to you. You have taken good care of me since I was born.When I am in trouble,you always encourage me and cheer me up.Once I argued with my best friend and was upset,you talked with me the whole night and finally helped me solve the problem. With your help,I have become a good student.I am so thankful for your love that I will work harder and try to do better in the future.
Best wishes
Yours,
Zhang hua
篇19:中考英语作文指导:电子邮件
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+ 加入清单李明要到加拿大上大学,必须找一间住房。请帮他发一封电子邮件给Jenny, 叫她帮忙找一间较便宜的房间(大约150美元),因为那里的房租较贵。李明的邮箱是Liming @163.com, Jenny的邮箱是mail:Jenny@com From: Liming@163.com
Subject Help Rent a Room Date 30/06 9:04AM
Dear Jenny,
Im going to study in Canada, so Ill have to find a room to live in. I know housing is very expensive there. Please help me find a room at a lower price (about 150 dollars). Please e-mail me if you have any good news. I am looking forward to seeing you soon.
Yours,
Li Ming
篇20:梦想与行动的中考满分作文
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+ 加入清单乘一夜扁舟,载一世遐想,带着梦想远航。
初始———————汨罗江畔
汨罗江畔,你孤独的守望
一袭青衣,一腔忠魂,一把无形的利刃,载着你的满腹愁绪,奔涌而来。站在江畔,滚滚江水流走了你心里最后的一点希望。终于,你做出了决定一跃起、前倾、激荡。一代浪漫主义诗人的你,从此绝笔,文坛与政坛的双重绝笔为你的人生画上了逗号。你走了,带着你执着的梦想,曾经的你,怀揣着兴国安邦的梦想,尽心辅佐楚怀王。但他,此刻正在与美人良宵共度吧!或许,你的梦想是错的;在那个时代,你永远不会被人接纳,你的梦想永远只是逆君,但那已成历史,后人对你的赞扬不知你可曾听到了。不知你可曾想过,在你纵身一跃时,你的梦想就在汨罗江畔升腾了上千年,你的名字也被镌刻在史书上。。。。。。
世人皆醉,唯你独醒。梦想的执着斩不断世俗的仇恶,《离骚》的万古也诉不尽你的品德!固然如此,假如当初你能稍稍忍耐一下,用行动践行你的梦想,或许你的生命也不会就这样消逝。。。。。。
蓦然—————盛唐长安街
酒肆中,你无奈的狂欢。 ————————题记
街上,华灯初上,杯筹交错,盛世的繁华在这一刻彰显无遗。而你,跌跌撞撞,行走在略显凄凉的小巷,脑中想着曾经的是是非非,一滴浊泪从脸颊滴落,衬托着你的无奈。你想怀抱国大志,也曾为了他奋斗了几十年,却苦于无处发泄。满怀壮志豪情,却只能胎死腹中。本以为玄宗召见就是你铁柱磨成针的时光。可他竟如此不识人才,让你倍感心碎,高力土的阿叟做作更让你的梦想灰飞烟灭。不得已,你只得用一支笔,一腔热血来书写半个盛唐的繁华,咏叹出“长风破浪会有时,直挂云帆济沧海 ”的旷世绝句,一代诗仙得你,被绘成了一个行动的践行者。而今,千古仙客已化为古,但英明永随,那是你用行动践行梦想的写照!那是穿越红尘的悲欢与惆怅,还是梧桐更兼细雨的悠长与寂寥!
延续—————洛宁实验二中
教室里,你奋笔疾书。
天际之外,点点星光象征这黎明的到来。你又要开始追逐梦想。从小,你就立志当一名主持人,为此,你付出了很多努力,把自己从胆小变为了胆大,从无知变为了成熟。你喜欢自己的梦想,并为此付出了好多。你不曾言过苦,也未曾言过泪。你喜欢讲演台,你渴望成为那上面最夺目的一颗,尽管你的水平不高,但你却仍会坚持、坚持再坚持。对梦想的执着让你的人生丰富起来,对梦的向往让你的心多彩了起来。你喜欢读自己的文章,因为他们都是你内心的结晶,是你梦想实现的步步基石。
你还未曾成功,你也尝试过许多失败,但只要梦想相伴,行动为
标,我相信你,终会成功。
前方的路对于逝者来说,已经停止,但你梦想的帆又将扬起,浩缈大海前途未卜,握紧行动的船杆,你就可以品味人生的真谛!