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我最喜欢的老师英语写作汇集20篇

老师是世界上最高尚的职业,也是祖国花园里的辛勤园丁。老师,您真伟大!虽然我的老师是一个普普通通的教师,但在我的心中她最美!下面是小编整理的我最喜欢的老师英语写作,欢迎大家阅读!

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我最喜欢的语文老师

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人们常说:“老师像一艘小船,带着我们驶向知识的海洋;老师像一把金钥匙,为我们打开知识的大门;老是想指南针,为我们指明成功的大门……教我们语文的徐老师就是这样一位工作负责、教学水平高,要求严格的好老师。

我们的语文老师有着乌黑发亮的头发,上面似乎还参杂着几根银丝,一对孙悟空那样的火眼金睛,有时里面还有一丝丝血丝。上课时,所有的人都逃不过那双大眼睛。他有一对耳听四方的大耳朵,就像顺风耳一样,上课时只要有一个人在讲话,老师就可以立马知道他是谁。一个能说会道的大嘴巴,总是滔滔不觉的给我们传送知识。一双粗糙大手,每天上面都有一层粉笔灰,但在我的心中是最美的。

最让我敬佩的语文老师徐老师工作认真负责的精神。他上课认真,从来不迟到,课文讲的引人入胜,让我们听得津津有味,带着我们遨游知识的海洋。特别是他批改作文最认真,记得又一次,老师把作文本发下来,我把我的作文打开一看,让我目瞪口呆,作文本上全是老师批改的地方。我的作文只要写的不通畅的地方,都给我改的非常通顺了;我的作文有很多的错别字都给我写在了作文的后面;就连一个小小的标点符号都没有放过;只要是优美句子,都会画上优美的符号。

徐老师不仅工作负责,而且语文课也上的很好。徐老师的声音是那样的清晰,音调是那样的宏亮,感情是那样的真实感人。有时上课时把我们从沙漠带来大自然嬉戏玩耍;有时上课时带我们去祖国的大好山河游玩、欣赏;有时上课时当我们回答正确时,他总是边微笑边点头;有时上课时当我们回答错误时,会给我们一细不苟的讲解……特备是许老师在给我们上《我是猫》这课时,老师读了一遍,让我们边读边想象,我听着听着,不知不觉地进入到课文中,仿佛看到那只可怜的小猫,用尽了所有的办法也挣脱不了那块年糕,我的心仿佛在流泪……经过老师的讲解,到现在还让我回味无穷。

“春蚕到死丝方尽,蜡烛成灰泪始干。”我们的徐老师就是这样一位工作负责,要求严格,语文课上的精彩的好老师。

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篇1:英语老师给学生的建议书

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单位或集体向有关单位或上级机关和领导,就某项工作提出某种建议时使用的一种常用书信。以下是小编整理的英语老师学生建议书,欢迎阅读!

在新的学校呆了近两个月,不久刚举行了一次月考,学生都反映成绩不理想。借分析试卷的机会,我布置学生对我两个月的初一语文教学提出自己的意见,学生们踊跃参与,各抒己见。现归纳如下,并加上自己的感悟,以期指导今后的教学。

1、 上课速度要放慢,课文讲解要详细些。

感悟:中学的学科增加了,学习任务也加重了,可学生还停留在小学的阶段,要求老师咀嚼慢磨可见与小学的接轨工作没有做好。

2、上课要让学生把手放在书桌上,以防学生在下面做小动作。

感悟:还是小孩子的思维,或者说小学的许多做法在学生心中留下了深刻的印象,甚至是一些错误的做法也被学生视为法宝,习惯的力量大得吓人!

3、 上课不能接电话,请假也不能耽误课程。

感悟:曾经有两次在课堂接电话,后来我不再带手机进教室了,不想学的记忆那么棒。老师实在是一个高标准的职业!

4、学校的图书馆要对学生开放,允许学生借阅图书,开拓学生的视野。班级要办图书角,争取成立班级图书馆。

感悟:学生的知识来源渠道太窄,尤其是农村的学生。他们对知识充满了渴望。可惜学校图书馆暂时没有办法满足他们的要求。“书香校园”的建设任重道远!

5、 多布置作业,甚至抄作业做,对未完成作业的同学要严厉惩罚。

感悟:对最后一点我赞成,可前两点我有自己的看法。大概是小学的“题海

战术”功勋“卓著”,小学毕业考试的成绩让学生们体会到了它的巨大功能,令她们念念不忘。到初中之后学习的难度增加,他们又想起来对自己用这一狠招。我的可怜的学生!

6、 多讲课本上的课后习题。

感悟:自己的确对课后的“研讨与练习”关注不够,大部分是要求学生自己

完成,事后的检查也没有。学生是在提醒我不能丢了教材!

7、不能拖课,要将课间十分钟还给学生。

感悟:以后无条件执行!

8、上课声音洪亮,多讲普通话。

感悟:自己是外乡人,普通话有时讲的不标准,带有很重的地方口音。本来一进新学校,我自己格外注意这个问题,不想还是出问题。还是要加强普通话训练,“说”是教师的重要基本功之一!

9、多写正楷字,一笔一画的写!

感悟:本来自认为自己的字写得不错,周围同事也是这么说的,可在学生面前却行不通了。究其原因是,自己的字连笔多,有时字多或者一急,就显得潦草。这真是一个不应该出现的意见。

10、课堂上多训练朗读。

感悟:与自己的想法不谋而合。在教学中我一贯主张读中感、读中悟,甚至仿照韩军的名文写了《没有朗读,语文教学找不到回家的路》一文,表达自己的观点。可能问题出在自己的朗读水平不高,对学生朗读指导不到位上。

11、多举行如书法、朗诵等形式的竞赛。

感悟:以赛代练,以赛代学,在丰富多彩的活动中学习语文,是大家的一致追求。我在今后要多动脑筋,丰富他们的学习与生活!上次的“这就是我”语文实践活动,以“赛”的形式,鼓励学生全程参与,气氛热烈,学生的热情十分高涨!

12、多用多媒体和扩音器。

感悟:现代化的东西大家都喜欢!

13、平时测验要写作文,可以训练学生作文的速度,提高写作水平!

感悟:有两次单元检测,我考虑到时间的关系,就不要求他们作文,没有想到他们自动请缨。我的感觉是:喜从天降,何乐而不为!写作是语文教学的重点和难点,次数训练是基础,所谓量变导致质变嘛。学生都懂这个道理!

14、抓好预习,利用多种机会养成学生自学的习惯。

感悟:教学的最高境界就是:教是为了不教。好的学习习惯会让他们受益终生!“地球人都知道”!

15、不准对学生瞪眼睛,不准大声批评学生,不准打断学生的发言,不准拐弯批评学生。

感悟:学生是聪明和敏感的,我们每个老师都要当心呀!

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篇2:我最喜欢的老师

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鱼离不开水,鸟离不开树,我们的成长自然离不开老师。我最喜欢的老师是我们的班主任兼语文老师张老师。

她长的很漂亮,头发是棕红色的波浪卷长发;浓密的眉毛嵌着一双会说话的眼睛,虽然不大,但很有神;她的鼻梁很高,很挺;她的一张红红的樱桃小嘴,很会朗读课文;他走起路来,亭亭玉立的,很有气质。她身材很苗条,穿什么衣服都很时尚、合体。

张老师从一年级就教我们语文,她教我们读书、写作文……我们是柔嫩的花朵,老师就是园丁,我们在园丁的培育下成长;我们是鱼儿,老师就是海水,我们在辽阔的海中畅游。

张老师很会上课,同学们都喜欢上语文课,他朗读课文的时候,声音非常好听。他还经常运用多媒体课件,有些还是她自己做的呢。

张老师不仅很会上课,而且也很关心同学。

记得有一次,季子天面色苍白,当时是在上语文课,张老师发现了,就问他:“季子天,你怎么啦?脸色这么苍白,是不是哪不舒服?”季子天微微的点了点头,但还是仍然继续上课。张老师很不忍心季子天带病上课,便说:“季子天你就趴在桌子上休息一会吧!我打电话给你爸爸,让他来接你回家。”张老师一边说一边伸手掏手机。张老师走了出去给季子天爸爸打了个电话。不一会儿,季子天爸爸来了,张老师拎着季子天的书包,搀扶着他走出了校门。

从上学开始,教过我们的老师不计其数,但我最喜欢张老师。

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篇3:最喜欢的王老师作文500字

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从幼儿园到大学甚至到更高的学府,这个过程中我们会遇到很多个老师,接受很多的教诲,虽然每个老师都值得我们尊重和喜爱,但是小学的班主任王老师却给我留下了深刻的印象,让我打心眼里对待这个老师多了一份尊重和喜爱。

初识王老师,觉得他是个很严厉的老师,我好像从来就没有见到王老师笑过。起初我喜欢那种和蔼可亲和学生们打成一片的老师,对这个王老师并不怎么喜欢。在那天发生了那件事之后,我就更不喜欢他了,但是后来我发现误解了他,在心里便开始敬佩起了这个老师,因为只有这个老师会认真的守护自己学生就像守护自己的孩子一般。

那是上午的最后一节课,上了一上午的课肚子早就咕咕叫起来了,回想起书包里还有一个面包,鼓起了胆子我就咬了一口,这可倒好没被老师发现,被在后窗巡视的主任看到了,我本以为王老师会护着学生,没想到王老师却比主任更先开口,让我去办公室反省。

老师的行为让我很是伤心,自己的学生都不知道护着,我气哄哄的回到办公室,语文老师看到了,向我询问一番,听完之后老师却笑了,她说:“傻孩子,你们班主任这是在护着你呢,他不先罚你,主任不解气,不一定会怎么惩罚你呢!”听完之后,我恍然大悟,原来是这样。

这件事一直记挂在心中,而老师的爱学生如爱子般的情谊让我始终铭记在心,他值得学生的喜爱和尊重。

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篇4:我最爱的老师英语作文

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Our new English teacher of this term is called Miss Li who is about 25 years old.She is very thin and about average height.She has a pair of big eyes which will narrowed into lines when she smiles though.

As much different as our other teachers did before,her first class began with a game.Shes so funny and humorous that the whole class was amused.Everyone of my classmates tooke part in the game initiatively and actively.We easily learned the words and how to use them in oral English while playing.

Unlike other teachers,she never blame and look down upon us bad students.She always makes us to think with our mind about the mistakes we made and encourages us to correct them .

Miss Li is the best teacher ive ever met.I love my new English teacher.

我们这个学期的新英语老师是李老师,她大概25岁左右。她身材消瘦,中等个子。她的眼睛很大,但是当她笑起来的时候却会眯成一条线。

和我们其他老师以前教法不同,她的第一堂课是在游戏中开始的。她是如此的风趣幽默,我们全班同学都被逗乐了。我的每一个同学都积极主动地参与到这个游戏中。在玩耍的过程中我们轻轻松松地记住了单词,学会了它们在口语中的用法。

跟其他老师不一样的是,她从来不责备和看不起我们这些差生。她总是让我们动脑子思考我们所犯的错误,鼓励我们去更正。

李老师是我遇见的最好的老师。我爱我的新英语老师

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篇5:我喜欢读书英语小作文

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篇一:我喜欢读书

My father likes to tell me a story before I sleep,so I like to read story book.My parents buy me a lot of books,I read them everyday,I always finish reading a book in a week.I like adventure story very much,I imagine I am the guy who is so great.Books gives me happiness,I like reading.

篇二:我爱读书

I like reading very much. When I was a small girl,I was interested in reading picture books on science and history. At the age of seven,I entered a primary school and began to read more books.

Now I am a middle school student. I have many subjects to learn. Every day I must finish a lot of homework. I am very busy. But when I have spare time I still want to read some story books. One day my young sister brought me a book XI YOU JI.I read the book with great interest.much.

I like Monkey King very much.

[我喜欢读书英语小作文

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篇6:新年给老师的一封信英语

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Dear Mr. Cao

happy new year!

On the night of new years Eve, my parents and I went to Lianhua Mountain

to visit Deng Xiaoping after the reunion. The streets are deserted, and many

people have returned to their hometown. I think of the 23rd day of the twelfth

lunar month when my grandparents were busy cleaning the house and buying all

kinds of new years products. I am curious: why is the Spring Festival so busy?

Why are so many people desperate to buy tickets back home for the new year? What

are the customs and traditions of Chinese Spring Festival? Why do my parents

take me to pay a new years visit to grandfather Deng?

With these questions, I immediately found a book about Chinese Spring

Festival folklore when I went home. The book introduces many customs, including

pasting New Year pictures. It is said that the characters in the New Year

pictures can ward off evil spirits, eat reunion dinner, legend of new year

animals, offering sacrifices to the kitchen and sweeping the Chen, meeting the

God of wealth, etc. One of the most impressive is the kitchen and sweeping the

Chen.

Among the people, the traditional Spring Festival begins on the 23rd of the

twelfth lunar month and ends with the Lantern Festival. As the saying goes, "23,

sacrifice to the kitchen official." The kitchen official is the monitoring God

of the world. At this time of year, the kitchen official will go to heaven to

report everything on earth, so the people will worship him on the 23rd of the

twelfth lunar month. No matter how small the household is, they should clean up

the stove, several cases, pots and pans, and prepare kitchen cakes and sugar for

sacrifice. The kitchen cake is the dry food that the kitchen god wants to bring,

and the kitchen sugar should be put on the kitchen gods mouth. The cooking

sugar is made from malt. It tastes very sweet and sticky. It is put on the

kitchen gods mouth to let him "say good things from heaven and keep peace in

the lower world".

After the sacrifice, the kitchen was cleaned up. In the old days, it was

called "sweeping Chen", and "Chen" was homophonic with "dust", so sweeping Chen

was to sweep the dust in an all-round way. This is more detailed and

comprehensive than the usual cleaning. The places that are not easy to clean at

ordinary times, such as spider webs on the roof, dust, furniture corners, doors

and windows, etc., should be wiped clean with bamboo poles and rags. Bed sheets

and quilt covers will also be removed and cleaned. Some people even paint the

walls and paint doors and windows to make the interior look brand new.

There is no custom of offering sacrifices to the kitchen in our family. We

will "sweep the Chen" every year. This is the traditional virtue of the Chinese

nation, which loves to be clean and clean. In the future, I will also help my

family to clean up the house together.

There are also a lot of folk stories, I will tell you slowly after the

beginning of school.

Best wishes

Good health and good luck!

Your student: Li Chenhao

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俗语说:“一日为师,终身为父”。林老师是我们的语文老师,又是我们的班主任,也是我最喜欢的好老师。

林老师中等身材,长得不胖不瘦,脸色总是白里透红,像个红彤彤的大苹果。弯弯的眉毛像一轮皎洁的明月。眉毛下面还有一双会说话的浓眉大眼,高兴时眼睛笑成了一条缝,生气时眼睛鼓得大大的,显得非常严厉,让人不寒而粟。她还有一头乌黑而秀丽的长发,在微风中像婀娜多姿的柳树姑娘。

林老师既严厉又和蔼可亲。因为我比较胆小,所以一到上课提问时,我总是不敢举手。林老师就会用语言和举止来鼓励我,让我回答问题,如果答对了,她就会用慈眉善目的眼神看着我,表扬我真棒;如果我答错了,她就会投来温和、鼓励的目光,让我继续加油。我喜欢这样严厉可亲的好老师。

我很喜欢上语文课。林老师上起语文课来总是滔滔不绝,口齿伶俐,能说会道的,让我听得津津有味,仿佛亲历其境。当我开小差的时侯,她总是妙语惊人,让我翻然醒悟,自觉地学习起来。当我响亮地回答对了问题的时候,她会大张旗鼓地表扬我,使我对语文的学习充满了信心。

林老师很爱她的工作,总是兢兢业业,勤勤恳恳,任劳任怨。对我们很是负责。有时她生病了还带病上课,讲话声音都有些沙哑了,但她仍然放大嗓子给我们讲课,生怕我们学不好。最后都讲不出来了,我们都于心不忍,在心底大声说:“老师,您休息吧!”可是老师却只是皱了皱眉头,又继续讲课了。课堂上她对我们依然很亲切,像妈妈一样。总是叫我们孩子来,孩子去。有时还亲热地称我们“小乖乖”呢!”我真爱像妈妈一样亲的林老师!

听完我的介绍,你喜欢我的勤劳又负责的林老师了吗?在我心里,她是世上最好的老师。

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篇8:我们的老师英语作文

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Our new English teacher is Mr. Smith.

He wears a pair of thick glasses. He is very serious and strict to us.

I never saw him smile until the Teachers’ Day. On the Teachers’ Day, my classmates and I planned to give him a special gift——a smile. So the naughty John pretended to have passed out in the classroom.

When Mr. Smith came in, he was so scared that he held John in his arms right away. On the way to the hospital, John burst into laughter suddenly, which made the teacher confused. After we told him that it was only a joke, Mr. Smith laughed too.

We were all pleased to see him smiling at last.

[我们的老师英语作文

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篇9:我最喜欢的运动优秀初中英语作文

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Some people love to play badminton, some love to play football, others love swimming, but my favorite sport is basketball. It is very popular in China because of Yao Ming. Because of him, many boys in China get to know about basketball. He is so excellent that everybody wants to play like him. He is my idol.

有些人喜欢打羽毛球,有些人喜欢踢足球,其他人喜欢游泳。而我最喜欢的运动是篮球。因为姚明,篮球在中国很受欢迎。许多男孩子因为姚明而了解篮球。他如此的优秀,以至于每个人都想向他那样打球。他是我的偶像。

After school, I often play basketball with my friends. I am the tallest boy in my class, so I play as center. Playing basketball is not only good for our health, but also helping us to make friends. I hope someday I can be an outstanding player just like Yao Ming. Maybe in the future, I will go to NBA and win the champion.

放学后,我经常与朋友们打篮球。我是班里最高的男孩子,所以我打中锋。打篮球不但让我们保持身体健康,也让我们结交朋友。我希望有一天我能够成为向姚明那样优秀的篮球运动员。也许在不久的将来,我会去NBA打球,并赢得冠军。

[我最喜欢的运动优秀初中英语作文

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篇10:写给老师的一封信英语

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Dear Peter,

I’m very glad to know that you are a table tennis fan. So am I. Table

tennis is the national ball of China. Almost everyone in China, whether old or

young, can play it. The tables for playing it can be seen here and there, in

parks, squares and in many working places, even at some people’s homes. The

Chinese table tennis players have very excellent skills. Since 1959 when a man

named Rong Guotuan won the first world champion at the 25th World Table

Tennis

Championship, China has had many table tennis world champions, and the

Chinese people are very proud of them. Hope one day you will come to China, and

we can play a game together.

Best regards.

Yours,

Li Hua

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篇11:六年级作文我的英语老师

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我们的身边有一位工作认真,对待学生细心、负责的好老师,她就是教我们英语的赵老师。

赵老师个子不高,讲起课来语速很快,不过我们也都适应了。她的课也许讲的不是最出色的,但她对我们无微不至的关心才是我喜欢她的原因。她说的每一句话都是有道理的,可能她说的时候你感觉不到,但事后你细细一想,也都不无道理。

她对学生日常生活也很关注。那是一年初夏,我和缪严寒、陈思豪都穿了长袖衣服到学校,在她的英语课上,讲课之余,她说到:“最近气温都升到了35度以上,可我们班有些同学还穿着长袖衣服,我希望你们明天把衣服换成短袖的。”

在我的印象中好像没有哪个老师会像赵老师那样关注我们,都做些什么,说些什么。在课堂上,她时时刻刻抓住我们的注意力,任何一个小动作,都逃不过她的眼睛。

这就是我的英语老师——赵老师。

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篇12:我的英语老师大学英语作文

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mr shao taught me english when i was in senior three.with the bald head and hunchback, the fifty or some man distinguished himself from his counterparts in many ways.

he was so addicted to tobacco that he couldnt even skip acigarette in the corridor at the interval between two classes. due to the long time consumption of cigarettes, his teeth had gone totally bad and occasionally let off unpleasant smell which really disturbed us when we were talking to him. at times, he came to recognize it and consequently found out a solution. he suggested we write down our problems and he answer them in the written form. although i knew all along that he was a careful man, his quotations of five different dictionaries on a single multiple choice problem was still beyond my wildest dream.

whats more, none of us could imagine how ecellent his ancient chinese literature was. what he tended to do in his class was to recite several segments of the famous ancient prose and then put them into english. however, under the pressure of college entrance eam, the students didnt seem to be so interested in his performance. therefore, he tried to stimulate the class by editions of times as prizes for answering questions. it worked on us instantly.

on the day of the entrance eam, he waited nervously with us out of the eamination room. he kept reminding us not to drink water in case that we would feel like going to toilet during the eam. not withstanding his constant claims that we students were far less important than his beloved daughter, we did feel his devotion to us.

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篇13:我的英语老师英语

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我的英语老师My English Teacher

Mr. He is my Englishteacher. He is a tall and thin young man. His English is very good and we likehim talking. Besides, he can sing many English songs. We learn some simple onesfrom him. He graduated from a famous university of our country. He always tellshis stories in school. They are very interesting. I want to grow up soon and bea college student.

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篇14:我最难忘的老师初中英语作文

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In the past in the junior middle school time,I believe that everyone has a memorable teacher yourself。I also dont listed outside。 She is my teacher in charge——Miss He.Shes very beautiful and very kind to us. She has long hair and big eyes and she is 1.70 metres tall. In the second day, I had a bad illness。So take a week off to the teacher. After Miss He knows told I have a good for illness.A week later, back to school. Miss He find I talk to say I teach math, immediately to the mid-term exam, you have been away for a week of class. Your math foundation and thin. Meet dont understand in class and after class can come to me, also can turn to the math class representative for help, I have a greeting。In what the help of the teacher and theclassrepresentative, mid-term exam I had obvious increase in math. I never say thank you to the teacher, borrow the composition today say thank you. I wish the teacher everything goes well.

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篇15:中考英语阅卷老师揭秘满分作文是如何炼成的

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中考英语作文难不难?其实不难,大部分同学都能得到12分以上,13、14分也是平常,但是要想得到15分甚至以上,就难上加难了。到底什么样的作文能得到16分以上?下面是经过和中考命题组和阅卷老师的交流,对中考英语作文评分标准做出了更深的理解。

一、中考英语写作的概述

你对于在中考英语写作中拿高分有把握吗?实际考试中,许多学生却常常有“无话可说”的感觉。那要如何我们才能克服这种无话的状态,取得高分呢?

归根到底这是一个英语基本功——单词、短语和句型的问题。

英语作文的前提条件是掌握了一定量的词汇、语法及体裁、题材等方面的知识。学生如果想要在写作方面有本质上的提升,必须进行多次的写作练习。因此,必须合理地设置训练步骤,遵循从初级到高级,从简单到复杂的原则去练习,经过一段写作实践之后,写作水平一定会有大幅度的提高。

中考英语作文对考生的要求有四点:1、内容要完整。2、语句流畅。3、没有语法错误。4、书写规范。

二、中考英语写作的评分标准

1、老师拿到的标准

写作水平的高低和文章的好坏,分数是最直接的评分标准,也是考生们最关心的。但是多少考生真正透彻知道中考英语写作的评分标准?什么样的文章才是阅卷老师眼中的好文章?

评分标准:

(1)整篇作文满分20分,其中内容8分,语言8分,结构4分。

(2)内容贴切,句子流畅,用语准确,加整体印象分1分。

(3)不满60个词,少1——5个词扣0.5分,6——10个词扣1分。

(4)所有给出问题涉及的三项内容,每少一项扣3分。

(5)每个拼写,大小写,标点符号等错误扣0.5分;同一的拼写错误不重复扣分,扣分总和不超过2分。

(6)语法错误每项扣1分,同一错误不重复扣分,扣分总和不超过2分。

2、老师想看到的标准

语言(8分):

词——固定搭配、高频重点词汇;

句——复杂句(各种从句)、特殊句型、正确的句子!

内容(8分):(总、分)论点、论据支持句;简洁、切合主题的记叙内容。

结构(4分):

语言结构——句子重点突出、内容清晰;

内容结构——论点、论据以及记叙之间的逻辑关系;

句数控制——对于相对内容的句数掌握;

亮点、出彩点——排比、拟人、谚语、成语、押韵等。

三、扣分

内容方面:要点缺失,可酌情扣分。比如中考作文“Iwanttodosomethingformyschool”,若没有写一件具体的事情,是要扣3分以上的;若写的事情太过于虚幻,没有实际内容,也会扣1-2分。

字数:少于60字的作文要酌情扣分。

中考英语作文要求60字以上,标点符号不算,少了就要扣分。

但是60字的作文能不能得高分?从我们拿到的实例作文来看,16分以上的作文,没有少于75字的,甚至少于80字的也少之又少。

当然,也极少有超过100字的,因为中考试卷的短线格一共80个,在格子下面大约还有2行的空间,可以加20字左右,再多阅卷人就很难看清了,也会影响卷面的美观。

所以,同学们如果想让作文得到高分,最好是让字数在75-100字之间。

语法和拼写错误:每个扣0.5,重复错误不计;

标点错误:每4个扣0.5。

四、加分

作文的组织结构分。就是根据学生使用复杂句型、单词和谚语、俗语的情况来加分。只要文章中有1个亮点,基本就可以争取到1分(3分的文采分是很难全部拿到的)。而这1分的亮点,是可以提前准备的。

“万金油”式的复杂句型,例如强调句型、only相关的倒装句等,只要同学们多操练几次,几乎是一定能用到作文当中,从而为自己争取到这1分。

其次就是卷面分。很多家长和同学,尤其是部分书法并不是十分整洁的同学,都会关心是否真的有“卷面分”的存在。虽然在阅卷标准里面并没有卷面分这一项,但是这个分数却真切地反映在了同学们的分数里面。

据阅卷老师的经验,在阅卷的时候并不是按这3个部分逐项打分的,而是在第一遍读完全文之后,心里已经形成了一个“印象分”,然后再细读第二、三遍,把印象分分配到各个打分部分。

因此,这个“印象分”就非常重要,而同学们的书法,也正是在这个环节,影响到了自己的分数。所以初三的考生,如果书法不好,一定要注意。

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篇16:我最喜欢的季节英语

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How glad I am that summer has come!

I like summer best because I can have a very happy time then. Every summer I stay at my uncles house in the country for some time and enjoy the life there. I can also catch worms that are not found in cities. In addition, we can see many kinds of birds. I think the country is certainly a better place than the city for vacation.

Summer is my favourite season.

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篇17:英语写作基础语法

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1

主语+谓语(不及物动词):S+V

It will rain tomorrow.

He often runs in the morning.

They cried.

Tom exercises every day.

2

主语+谓语(及物动词)+宾语:S+V+O

I miss my mother very much.

She wants to go home now.

The English club is going to hold an English party.

They all love her.

3

主语+系动词+表语:S+V+P

The music sounds wonderful.

The leaves have turned red.

She is a student.

We keep silent about that.

4

主语+谓语(及物动词)+间接宾语(人)+直接宾语(物):S+V+IO+DO

The teacher gave a book to him.=The teacher gave him a book.

They told me an interesting story.

The waitress offered me a bottle of wine.

My father will buy me a bike.=My father will buy a bike for me.

Miss Smith teaches us English.

5

主语+谓语(及物动词)+宾语+宾语补足语:                                      S+V+O+C

They call me Xiao Wang.

I saw him swimming in the river.

We elected him monitor of the class.

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篇18:致我的英语老师五年级学生作文

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老师

您好!

您最近还好吗?我已经转校很久了。

在我六年级刚学英语的时候,笨笨的,什么都不知道,但是英语老师,依然耐心的给我讲课,给我复习,不断的给我鼓励。

你对我说:“雨烟,我对你很有信心,我特别努力,对待英语,你是第一个那么认真学习英语的!比那些早学的聪明很多!一定要好好学,我看重你!”我点点头,信誓旦旦的跟您说:“老师,我一定不会辜负您的期望的!”

在期中考试下来后,我并没有考及格,你找我私人谈话,我们站在教室门口,你说:“雨烟,我很想不通,为什么你这么努力,那么认真的孩子,为什么没有考及格呢?你大意了!加油!老师相信你!”我点点头颓丧的说:“老师,对不起!我让您失望了!”您只拍拍我的肩,我瞬间有了信心,斗志昂扬的抬起头,再一次信誓旦旦地说:“老师,请您再相信我一次吧!我一定会好好学的,这一次,我一定会好好学的!”“嗯!加油!”

之后,我发奋学习,你每次都在课堂上鼓励我,让我带大家早读,教大家读句子,我内心信心满满。

考试以后,我的成绩果然不负您的期望,从不及格到距离满分只差五分,也就是九十五分,我知道这个成绩的时候,我特别开心。

但是,在爸爸妈妈的一再坚持下,我不得不被转到了贵族学校,我就再也没有见过你,听我以前的同学说,学校里,还流传着我们的这个故事。

我的印象里,你是十分和谐、慈祥的,但是,那次,我却看到您发火,是对一届新的学生,我站在门外,亲眼目睹了您的发火,我从未看到您发火,继而,我听到你再次讲起我的故事,我眼里泛起泪花,你看到了门前的我,一把拍在我的肩上,说道:“加油!”我甜甜的笑笑。

我的英语老师,谢谢您!

您的学生:叶雨烟

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篇19:我喜欢的老师作文500字

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老师是个心地善良、内热外冷的人,因为她年轻得像我们的大姐姐,所以我就在心里叫她“姐姐”。

她有一头乌黑亮丽的头发,一双圆溜溜的眼睛忽闪忽闪的,好像会说话,一个秀气高挺的鼻子,还有一个能说会道的嘴巴,说起话来滔滔不绝。

庄老师很勤劳。每天早上,她总是早早地来到学校,那时全班同学都不见半个影子,教室里空荡荡的。有一次,老师一进门,就看见教室里一片狼藉:桌椅歪歪扭扭,地上满是纸屑,像给地板铺上了一层厚厚的地毯。老师二话不说,拿来扫帚,扫呀扫呀,一直扫到干净为止,又把桌椅摆得整整齐齐。同学们一来,看见教室焕然一新,又看见老师累得气喘吁吁,脸红得像一个又大又红的苹果。同学们便知道这到底是怎么回事了。

庄老师有时很严厉。上课时,只要有谁开小差,她就用“火眼金睛“一扫,从58个人中把他(她)揪出来,那个人便只有“死路一条”了。

庄老师很关心同学,有时也很温柔。一次,一个女同学在上体育课时摔伤了。老师以火箭般的速度赶来,背着女同学到医务室。一路上,她不停地、关心地问着:“疼不疼呀?血还在流吗?……”直到到了医务室,老师又忙碌着帮这位女同学处理完伤口才放下心来。

我非常喜欢这位老师!你们喜欢这位老师吗?

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篇20:关于老师的英语作文MissLi

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My Chinese teacher is Miss Li, she is very nice. The first day I saw her, I like her. Miss Li is good at teaching us, she will tell us the story to catch our attention. At her class, all the students listen to her carefully, because we don’t want to miss every word. Miss Li is also patient, she will answer all the questions. Miss Li is a good teacher.

我的语文老师是李老师,她人很好。第一天见到她的时候,我就喜欢上她。李老师很擅长教我们,她会给我们讲故事来吸引我们的注意力。在她的课上,所有的学生都很认真听课,因为我们生怕错过任何话语。李老师也很有耐心,她会回答所有的问题。李老师是一个好老师。

[关于老师的英语作文Miss Li

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