关于旅行的英语作文高中英语作文【汇集20篇】

Im the only child in my family, the apple of my parents eyes. my mother

and father take good care of my and give me a lot of support throughout my

life.

My father is the manager of a company and my mother is a teacher. they are

both well educated and do well in their jobs. they know that knowledge is power.

father often communicates with foreign friends and is good at english. i can

learn a lot from him, especially english. his oninion on education is as

advanced as that of my mothers. they often give me advice on my studies but

never interfere in them. they seldom force me to do what i dont like to. they

permit me to have different opinions. if something is good for me, they will

persuade me to do it as they want. many people of our age say that there is a

generation gap between their parents and them. however, it doesnt exist between

us.

My mother is a math teacher. she is very clever and good at teaching. she

can work out a problem within 10 minutes which would cost me 2 hours. i envy and

admire her. i want to be a math teacher like her.

Im lucky to have such enlightened parents. im lucky to have been brought

up in such a happy family.

An Enlightening Night

That was really an unforgettable night.I was waiting for buses at the station.There came an old lady, who was running to catch the bus.However,she was knocked down by a bike and the rider just ran away.The first thing came to my mind was the famous Pengyu’s incident,which shocked the ethic line of our society.All of a sudden,I was in a dilemma.I worried that I may be involved in troubles if I gave a hand to the

elderly,as Pengyu’s incident was like a warning.So I was frozen.What surprised me most was that a passer-by girl,rushing across the street without hesitation,putting the old lady on her back and carrying her to a hospital nearby.At that moment,I felt so embarrassed and ashamed that I wanted to crawl a hole and never come out.She was just a student but she did something what an adult like me was afraid of.

Never in my dream did I imagine that girl could have such an impact on my view of moral obligation.From then on,I decide to help strangers who is in need without hesitation and reservation.Because only in this way can our society become more harmonious.From my perspective,that little girl teaches me a lot that night.The

conscience of the many outweighs the wicked behaviors of the few.That’s what we should keep in mind no matter what we experience.

It is known to all that Christmas Day is on December 25th. It is the

biggest day in the western countries. But not so many people know about the

White Christmas in China. The day before Christmas Day, if it snows, then the

world is in white color. People are happy about that, because they think it

means the happiness and luck. So that’s the meaning of White Christmas. It

always snows a lot on Christmas Eve, because it is in winter in the western

countries. All the families get together and enjoy their moment while watching

the white snow. What an enjoyable atmosphere for a family.

one day on my way home from school, i saw an old woman standing by the roadside①, with a heavy bag on her back. she seemed very worried. i went up to ask her what the matter was. the granny② told me that she had just come from the countryside to see her son, who worked in the steel works. as she had never been here before, she did not know the way to the factory. so i took her there. there was really a lot of difficulty in finding her son＇s place. the granny and her son were very thankful to me.

i got home very late, tired and hungry, but i felt happy, for i had done a good deed for the people.

Who has the most unforgettable thing, no one brigade to swim. Remember the fifth grade one weekend, my mother called the travel agency travel agency take everyone to play in the hengdian studios. We went to four places, one is the Ming and qing dynasties today, one is guangzhou street there is a valley of Hong Kong street, with a dream. Travel to hengdian, but my dream.

I saw the tiananmen square in the Ming and qing dynasties today, my mother told me this is imitation, really tiananmen square in Beijing. Later, I saw the meridian gate, the guide told me that there is a place where the beheading, I took a photo on the meridian gate. I found there is a lawn, taihe door is a place where play "curse".

We are all helping the journey tired, hengdian studios is guided to the gates. Dad told me that the studio is the place where a film, also tells us "the princess huanzhu" shot is taken here. We walk while see, feel the artistic crystallization of generations of craftsmen. There will be "Ming yuan yuan" panoramic display. We went to visit the emperor to eat the "man-han banquet". Im sitting on the dragon took photos.

Play in the morning, at noon we casually find a place to eat lunch, take a break and began the next trip. In the afternoon, we went to see the horse eight flag visited the imperial palace of the internal structure of acting. Each other inside the night we went to the water-sprinkling festival, people in water at the end we all got wet. The next day we Chen car return.

This is a good weekend, happy memories, happy weekend. I like it here. I gently waved, get on the bus say goodbye to everything here. Look at the city ran back.

谁都有最难忘的事，谁都旅过游。记得五年级的一个周末，妈妈报了旅行社旅行社带大家去横店影视城玩。我们去了四个地方，一个是明清宫苑，一个是广州街还有一个香港街加一个梦幻谷。到横店旅游，可是我梦寐以求的情。

我在明清宫苑里看到了天安门，妈妈告诉我这是模仿的，真的天安门在北京。后来，我又看了午门，导游告诉我，那里是砍头的地方，我在午门上拍了照片。我发现太和门前有一个草坪，是演《满城尽带黄金甲》的地方。

我们大家顾不上旅途的劳累，就跟着导游来到横店影视城城门。爸爸告诉我影视城就是拍电影的地方，还告诉我们《还珠格格》就在这里拍射的。我们边走边看，感受着几代工匠的艺术结晶。还有“圆明圆”全景展示。我们参观了皇上吃的“满汉全席”。我还坐在龙椅上拍了照。

上午玩好了，中午我们就随便找了个地方匆匆吃了中饭，稍作休息又开始了接下来的行程。下午我们去看了战马旗八的表演参观了故宫的内部构造。晚上我们去了泼水节，人们在里面互相泼水在最后我们全身都湿透了。第二天我们陈车返程。

这是一个美好的周末，美好的回忆，快乐的周末。我喜欢这里。我轻轻的挥手，上了车告别这里的一切。看着这座城市向后奔去。

teacherare the most brilliant career and also the most extraordinarcareer.

tanghong thiyear over 20 yearold, ia beautiful young dance teacher. the earthquake, she iwelcome to the studentrehearsing june 1 childrendaof the dance. found dangerousituation, she pushed the studenta corner, thehold in their arms, fell to the collapse of the buildingon her her bodwafound, she fushen趴the wall in the corner. her arms, three girlsurvived.

the ruins, her broken bodinto liangjie, facial xueroumohu. her handstill firmlyongzhe two students! bai how people can not baikai her handtightllouzhu students! when the earthquake happened, she waevacuated studentleave the classroo shouzuwucuo see there are two students, she ran the last step, a first-hand louzhu, outside-in. teaching building suddenlcollapsed, she and several studentburied in the rubble. the teacher called to qian, graduated from universitlast year, to shifang-habitat when english teacherin primarschools. qian to the father of allegiance to the sea ishifang nanquan, deputprincipalin primarschools, he beitongyujue: i can understand that, ateachers, should be so! should do!

落雨纷飞的季节里，我凭栏远眺，缅怀着那年江南锦绣，金陵雅情……

——题记

千年已过，那些音容笑貌，我们只能在史书中找寻，在梦境中描绘。越女如花，亡帝似叶，冗长的历史中留下的只不过是零星的点缀，白描轻轻勾勒一笔。六朝金粉，才子佳人终不过如一缕青烟，随风而逝。而入了戏，动了情的我们，又将坠入谁的梦境，孤独又执著地流自己的泪。

仍记那年桃花纷飞，一曲《秦淮景》凌驾于那丝竹的靡靡之音，直至心灵，荡起涟漪，无可救药。那琉璃盏映着绝世舞，桃花扇下哼着惊鸿曲。绸缎与折扇的并肩游，伊人笑涡红透。我曾以为那三生三世的执念足以让他们永生永世，相偎相依。不过良辰美景怎敌得过锦绣河山？结局落笔后，墨迹纷飞，落花成泥，只余栖霞岭的无可奈何。

我倚在那株漫天飞舞的桃树下，落英缤纷，恰是蝶陨落后的凄美弧度。三春芳菲，巧笑嫣然，过往从不清晰。轻轻捻住两片桃花，那血染的颜色灼伤了我的眼，刻痛了我的心，我把它们埋在土里，似乎仍能闻到那血洗沙石，催人泪下的味道。这份遗憾是我旅行中最浪漫的缅怀。

犹记当时少年容，惊鸿一梦若春秋，血色月光下，你饮尽那鸠酒，在你心爱之人温暖的怀中，颤抖着合上眼眸，飞去那个不属于你的天堂，而你嘴角那滴酒，划过一生沧桑，凝成艳如雪的朱砂。

深深宫墙，红颜白骨枯，几重围墙，愁似春水流。褪去浮华后的你，用凄婉哀绝的诗词，抒发你家国危亡的凉薄，待它流传千古。我在昏黄的孤灯下，回味着你倾尽天下的不羁。满树芳华，满纸苍凉，你曾妄想伸手可触的未来，几度萧索，倚楼听雨，你终放下此生牵绊折枝落梅，奏鸣古琴。我闭上双眸，感受那金戈铁马的落魄岁月——泪光点点，血色斑斑，还有那些落寞的痴缠时光，也许，命薄如纸，世人才说美，这会是此番旅途中最痛心的缅怀。

千年的岁月，终沦为画卷中的一滴墨晕蹉跎了相思。我走在秦淮的每一寸土地上，河水拥着落日的余晖脉脉流动。我聆听着那凄凄切切的唱词，呆望着那舞台上的人儿，如泣如诉，如怨如慕。我入了戏，缅怀着那桨声灯影中不复存在的血色脂粉。可褪去罗衣，卸了红妆，却找寻不到那血泪交织的乱世佳话，那也不过是凄凉梦一场。

时光流逝，我带着缅怀寻找尘封的记忆，流连于秦淮的媚景中，但终不过是我永远抵达不了的世界……

名师点评：文章的语言绮丽哀婉，作者怀着一缕心动去缅怀那秦淮河的几缕浮华与几多哀怨。作者将古典诗词里的人、情、事纳入笔端，又将之灵活化用于自己的文字里，显示出作者很高的的文学才情。倾听者作者的低吟哀唱，我们仿佛徜徉于秦淮河里细数历史的凄恻与哀伤，能深深地打动读者的心。作者且吟且行，带着对历史的缅怀去尽情地想象。

[带着缅怀去旅行高中作文

Everyone admires beauty. Everyone has his own standard about beauty.

Nowadays some people tend to think that they own beauty if they have a good

looking. They are not satisfied with their appearance. They spend much money

taking a kind of operation. Can beauty really be man-made? If so， everybody can

get beauty. As a result， there is no beauty at all.

The appearance is given by our parents and is unique in the world. Everyone

should value it. Id rather prefer nature as the standard of beauty. Just accept

yourself， accept everything the god gives to you， and create the beautiful life

belong to you.

Many heroes dont have beautiful surface. However， their beautiful images

often come to our minds. Their beauty comes from their contributions to the

society.

Dont be eager to judge whether a person is beautiful or not without a

thorough understanding of him. A beautiful person is not the one with a good

looking， but with a broad and kind heart.

Good looking is pleasant while spiritual beauty is more important. As an

old saying goes， “ Virtue is fairer than beauty. ” If you have a kind heart， you

own real beauty.

Many traditional arts are losing nowadays, because some of them have been

replaced by the new machines and the scientific products. I feel so sorry about

the losing arts, in my opinion, they are so classic and their charm will never

fade away. Take my grandma for example. She is good at paper-cut which was

inherited from her mother. But when comes to my mother’s generation, paper-cut

seems to be kicked out, there are less people need it, so my mother doesn’t

learn this skill. The paper-cut art is losing in my family. When I found my

grandma had this skill, I was so surprised and curious about it. I asked my

grandma to teach me this skill. During the process, I found this art was so

great, I was attracted by it. Some traditional arts like paper-cup should be

kept.

在全球经济一体化的今天,世界旅游市场竞争愈演愈烈,尤其是旅游景区品牌竞争已经达到了白热化的程度。下面是小编帮大家整理的假期旅行英语作文，希望大家喜欢。

关于假期旅游英文作文篇1

Qingdao -- Haiyang sunshine beach, sitting on a sailing boat, feel the sea breezeblowing comfortable.

Located in the Yellow Sea coast of Qingdao is Chinas important regional economic center, international shipping center in Northeast Asia, the international coastal tourist resort, famous international port city. The 2008 Olympic Games so that everyone on the Qingdao more of an impression label -- sailing to Qingdao sea, rent a sailboat,feelings of the maritime customs.

关于假期旅游英文作文篇2

Shangri-La world is a rare perfect natural ecology and traditional culture of the pure land, known as "mountain garden", "Kingdom of animals and plants," "Kingdom of non-ferrous metals" reputation. From Dali along the Yunnan Tibet Highway North 315 kilometers, is the capital of Diqing Tibetan Autonomous Prefecture Zhongdian County town centre, 659 km away from Kunming, up to 50 minutes by plane. Is a Tibetan as the main body, a vast territory, rich resources of the county. Zhongdian a total of 24 well-known tourist attractions, is a natural landscape, rich cultural landscape of thestate tourism hotline, is one of the eight gold.

关于假期旅游英文作文篇3

Now National Day is coming. I have made a plan for it .I am going to Beijing with my parents.Because there are many places of interest .First we want to visit the Great Wall ,which is considered one of the seven wonders in the world. Second we want to visit the summer palace ,where lived many emperors during the hot days. Then we want to visit the Water Cube,where many important events are held .Finally we want to visit hutong to get a knowledge of the culture of old Beijing .I think this trip must be very interesting and we will have a good time.

关于假期旅游英文作文篇4

Old Town of Lijiang is also called Dayan Town, Dayan, may also refer to the Lijiang Naxi Autonomous County Administrative System "has been withdrawn". Old Town of Lijiang in the Southern Song Dynasty has begun to take shape, the existing eight,nine hundred years of history. Since the Ming Dynasty, Old Town of Lijiang says"Dayan car", Lijiang dam Center for their home, surrounded on all sides of Castle Peak, green water between a hover, like a jasper big inkstone, hence the name.

导语：环境污染变得愈加严重，在一些地区,空气也变得又脏又有害。因此,动物和植物濒临绝种。下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的优秀英语作文，欢迎阅读与借鉴，谢谢!

Today the quality of our natural environment has become an important issue. The world population is rising so quickly that the world has become too

crowded. We are using up our natural resources and at the same time polluting our environment with dangerous chemicals. If we continue to do this, life on earth cannot survive.

Concerned people have made some progress in environmental protection. Governments of many countries have established laws to protect the air, forests and sea resources and to stop environmental pollution.

Still more measures should be taken to solve environmental problems. People should be further educated to recognize the importance of the problems, to use modern methods of birth control, to conserve(保存) our natural resources and recycle(再循环) our products. We are sure that we can have a better and cleaner place in the future.

今天,自然环境质量已成为一个重要议题。世界人口增长如此之快以至于世界已经变得太拥挤了。我们正在用尽自然资源,同时,用化学危险品污染环境。如果我们继续这样做,地球上的生命将无法继续存活。

有关人员有了一些进展在环境保护。许多国家的政府都制定了法律以保护空气,森林和海洋资源并停止环境污染。

更多措施应该被采取解决环境问题。受过教育的人应该是进一步认识问题的重要性,要运用现代控制生育的方法来保存(保存)我们的自然资源和循环(再循环)我们的产品。我们相信,我们可以有更好的和比较干净的地方,在未来的。

With the development ofscience and technology ,different kinds of pollution has been produced andcaused global concern recently.

As we know, people have beenliving on the earth for thousands of years, human activity damaged natural environment, such as excessive abuse of natural resources ,the sewage dischargedfrom factories ,the animal slaughter ,kinds of chemical fertilizers andgreen-house effect. All that is mentioned above has a bad impact on the eco-system .Now, many animals aredying out. We are suffering from unhealthy food and water, we are faced withharmful rays and global warming. It was ourselves who had made a series oftroubles. As you can see, we are the final victim.

Above all, if we human beings cannot recognize theseserious problems and try our best to solve them soon, we would finally lose theenvironment suitable for us to live. So, it is our duty to protect theenvironment ,but what should we do to protect it?

In my opinion, the first and important thing is tounite all forces ,that is to say---gather all hearts together. Next we shouldprotect and plant more trees, which can dispose of the dust in the air. As forfamilies, it is effective to ride bicycles rather than drive cars. Don’t litteranywhere as you like. In addition, sorting and recycling the rubbish also playan essential role in the protection of our earth. We’d better call on everyone aroundus to lead a low-carbon life, as it may make a difference to the environment.

Thus, it’s high time that we did something to improveour surroundings. Everybody should raise the awareness to protect our motherearth. Let’s appeal to more people to join us.

All in all ,there’s no doubt that keeping the balanceof human and nature ,we will benefit a lot.

I went to Beijing on my holidays.

I went to Beijing more than eight times. Beijing is the capital of China. It’s a big city. I am very familiar with Beijing. It takes an hour and forty minutes from Nantong to Beijing by plane. There are many tall buildings in Beijing. It’s a modern city. My family visited the Great Wall, the Summer Palace, the Palace Museum, the Beihai Park, the Space Museum, etc. I went to the countryside of Beijing to go boating and fishing. It was very interesting. I went shopping in WangFuJing. I bought lots of souvenirs and other things. I like eating Beijing snacks. They are delicious. Don’t mithe Beijing Duck. It is really nice.

“沙啦啦，沙啦啦!”一场春雨将我吵醒了，我把小脑袋一顶，调皮的雨弟弟便跳到我的身上来了。

我是一棵刚出生的蒲公英，我刚来到这个世界上，对整个大自然充满了新奇，环顾四周，可爱的小草妹妹都围在我的周围，一只小甲虫连滚带爬地爬上了一株小草，嘿，大概是有大毛毛虫追它吧!不一会儿，雨停了，蔚蓝的天空中漂浮着朵朵白云，它们缓缓移动着，一会儿变成了小鹿，一会儿又变成了一些奇形怪状的东西。

大自然多美妙啊，有时一只蝴蝶飞到我的身边，扇动着它那美丽的大翅膀，在空中划出一道又一道的弧线。我多希望也飞起来啊，去参观整个世界。很快，我长大了。一天早晨，一缕晨风扑来，我的身体顿时轻了起来，我飞起来了!

我在空中飘着，风姐姐把我推去了不同的地方，但不一会儿，风小了下去，我慢慢地落在了一片土地上，我望望四周，那棵大树多高啊，还有几棵更是直插云天，十分雄伟。

我饱览了整个世界，飞过富春江，看见了那条美丽的母亲河，它时而平静，时而波涛滚滚，我又飞到了公园里，那些晨练的老人多有精神啊!阳光从树叶的隙缝中射了出来，尿儿在枝头尽情欢唱，我还飞过鹿山，那么多山连绵不断，拔地而起，高耸云峰，一座连着一座，一峰连着一峰，十分壮观……

我不禁感叹：世界真大啊!而我的身上，花瓣儿几乎掉光了，它们都会在我去过的地方生长。

我轻轻地落在一棵树下，小小的雨点又来凡间玩了，我闭着眼，任水浇洗我的全身，又是一缕缕微风，我又飞过了几个地方，也亲眼看见了小草的成长，花儿的发芽，与许多小生灵对了话，甚至还飘过一条小溪……

时间过得真快，我只剩最后几粒种子了。我又飞回了我曾经去过的地方，看见了许多小蒲公英正在长出来，我继续飞，飞啊飞……

一天，我看见一位老爷爷带着一群外国孩子向我走来，他问我去不去太空，我当然想去啦!老爷爷把我轻轻地抱起来，飞向天空，我心里又兴奋又害怕。到了太空，老人给了我一套特殊的太空服，穿上它就可以自由自在地在太空飞翔。

后来，老人带着我和许多地球孩子们到太空参观。一路上，我看到了许多美景。太空和地球不一样，太空的“路”就是天空，“路”上有许多星星，眼睛一眨一眨的，还发着金光呢!首先，老人把我们带到新时代白洞。哇，里面就像天堂一样，雪白一片，踩在上面软棉棉的，就像踩在了云朵上。走到白洞深处，就出现了许多的神话人物：仙女下凡、八仙过海……然后，我们又来到星星城堡，那里全都是可爱的星星。星星国王热情地招待了我们，还和我们一起举办宴会，一起参观金光闪闪的城堡……

最后，我们去参观广寒宫。广寒宫好玩极了，那里有温和的月亮婆婆、美丽的嫦娥姐姐、还有可爱的玉兔宝宝和爱打扮的星星公主。我们一起做了许多游戏，嫦娥姐姐翩翩起舞，之后又捧出了桂花酒。在太空旅行了几天，我们要走了。我们恋恋不舍地告别了美丽的太空。太空美好的景色和人们的热情深深地印在我的心中。“太空，我会再来的!”

Every child needs to receive education and they spend so much time to learn

knowledge, whether they are like or not. The adults always tell their children

that as they are young and full of energy, so they should learn knowledge and

skills, but most kids dont know the necessity of study. The most important

reason to study is to keep pace with the time. We live in the society that we

need to make connections with others. If we dont get the newest information, we

will be kicked out and have no idea what they are talking about, then isolation

happens. Whats more, when we are equipped with skills, we can make our choices

and take charge of our life. In order to live the comfortable life, we must

study hard and fight for our future.

The Dragon Boat Festival, also called Double Fifth Festival, is celebrated on the fifth day of the fifth moon of the lunar calendar. It is one of the most important Chinese festivals, the other two being the Autumn Moon Festival and Chinese New Year。

The origin of this summer festival centers around a scholarly government official named Chu Yuan. He was a good and respected man, but because of the misdeeds of jealous rivals he eventually fell into disfavor in the emperors court。

Unable to regain the respect of the emperor, in his sorrow Chu Yuan threw himself into the Mi Low river. Because of their admiration for Chu Yuan, the local people living adjacent to the Mi Lo River rushed into their boats to search for him while throwing rice into the waters to appease the river dragons。

Although they were unable to find Chu Yuan, their efforts are still commemorated today during the Dragon Boat Festival。

端午节，又称为五五节，因为端午节是在农历的五月五日，是三个重要的中国节庆之一，其他两个分别是中秋节和农历新年。

这个节日的由来是古代中国有一位博学多闻的官吏屈原，他是一位爱民而且又受到尊崇的官吏，但是由於一位充满嫉妒的官吏陷害，从此在朝廷中被皇帝所冷落。由於无法获得皇帝的重视，屈原在忧郁的情况下投汨罗江自尽。

由於对屈原的爱戴，汨罗江畔的居民匆忙的划船在江内寻找屈原，并且将米丢入汨罗江中，以平息汨罗江中的蛟龙。即使他们当时并没有找到屈原，但是他们的行为，直到今天在端午节的时候，仍然被人们传颂纪念着。

I havent write diaries for a period of time. I am now writing this just want to remember one thing. My study has fallen behind a lot this term. I can keep my score in the top ten in the whole school ranking before. But this term I fall behind. I nearly draw back to fifty. I know the reason is because I am too arrogant. I think I can be the best without studying hard. So I usually not pay too much attention on my study. When I find myself lag behind, I comfort myself it is accident. I have learnt a serious lesson this time. So, I want to write it down to warn myself.

我已经有一段时间没有写日记了。我现在写这篇日记只是想要记住一件事。这个学期我的学业落后了很多。我成绩之前可以保持在全校前十名。但这个学期我后退了。我差点就退到了五十名了。我知道原因是我太自大了。我觉得我不努力学习也可以保持最好。所以我一般都不怎么在意我的学习。当我发现自己落后时，我安慰自己只是意外。这一次我吸取了深刻的教训。所以，我想把它写下来以此警示着我。

[Dear Diary我的日记高中英语作文

When girls get together, they like gossip. They always talk about the topic of beauty. They will discuss who is the most beautiful girl in school or they will compare the girls and see who is more charming. As the young people, they usually judge people from appearance. The definition of beauty of course is the one who is thinner and has the pretty face. When they ask me which one is more attractive, then I will look at them for a while, because I want to perceive their personality. My view on beauty is not only from appearance as I think most girls have the pretty faces, but also from the inside, only the quality that differentiates them. The pretty faces will fade away anyway, only the quality that helps people to keep charming. So we need to cultivate the good quality.

女孩喜欢八卦，当她们聚在一起时，总是谈论美的话题。她们会讨论谁是学校里最美丽的女孩或者比较谁更有魅力。因为年轻，所以她们通常是从外貌判断一个人，理所当然的认为美丽的定义是瘦跟漂亮的脸蛋。当她们问我哪一个女孩子更有魅力的时候，我会看一会，因为我想想想她们的品行。我觉得大多数女孩都有着漂亮的脸蛋，所以我认为美不仅是外表，还有内心美，只有品行能把她们区分开来。漂亮的面孔会逐渐老去，只有品行可以永远保持魅力。所以我们需要培养良好的品行。

写作是对同学们英语综合能力的考查，是最能体现大家英语水平的一种检测方式。学生在写作的过程当中经常会暴露一些弱点、犯一些错误。今天，我们对大家英语作文中的常见错误进行简要归纳，并举以实例，大家在今后的英语写作中要尽量避免这些错误的发生。

一.名词

写作中，学生们常把握不好名词的数、所有格以及一些集合名词的用法。

1.Hegavemeaverygoodadviceyesterday.

句中的a要去掉，因为advice是不可数名词。一些汉语概念为可数的词在英语中却是不可数的，表示数量时在要其前加apieceof，类似的词有：news,bread,work,paper,chalk,furniture,information等等。

2.Thatgirllovesreadingbook.

可数名词单数不能孤零零地放在句子里，或前面加冠词，或将其变为复数。此处最好变为books.

3.Hewentintoabooksshopandboughtadictionary.

一般表示有生命的东西的名词的所有格用’s，如mymother’scar,而此处适宜用名词修饰名词，改为abookshop.

4.MyfamilyiswatchingTV.

一些集合名词如看成一个整体，则用单数的谓语动词，如Myfamilyisahappyone.如果强调集合中每个个体的个人行为，则用复数的谓语动词。此处看电视是个体行为，应把is改为are。类似的词有：team,class,audience等。

5.Iboughtsomepotatosandtomatosatthesupermarket.

中学阶段，以“o”结尾的名词中有四个词变复数时要加es，它们是tomato,potato,Negro,hero;其余的都加s变为复数。

6.Thishasnothingtodowiththeirbelieves.（这和他们的信仰没关系。）

以f,fe结尾的词变为复数时一般去f,fe加ves，如knife—knives,

thief—thieves;而roof和belief直接加s变为复数。所以应把believes改为beliefs.

二.冠词

7.Thebosswantstohireanusefulperson.

用a还是an，取决于后面单词音标中的第一个音，如为元音用an，为辅音用a。useful的第一个音是辅音所以应把an改为a。类似的，我们说aEuropeancountry.

8.Planeisamachinethatcanfly.

plane为可数名词单数，不能单独放在句中，应在其前加冠词或把它变为复数，而本句后有amachine,因此只能在其前面加a，变为Aplane。

9.Heplayedapianoatthepartyyesterday.

把a改为the，因为乐器前用定冠词。

10.Themachinewasinventedin1920s.

在in后加the，因为表示年代用in加the再加几十的复数，如在八十年代inthe80s。

11.XiaoHongwenttoschoolbythebuseveryday.

去掉the，因为表示交通方式用by直接加交通工具。

三.代词

使用代词时请注意其单、复数，主、宾格以及形容词性物主代词和名词性物主代词的用法。

12.Heisoneofthosespeakerswhomakehisideasperfectlyclear.

定语从句的先行词是thosespeakers，为复数，因此从句中的指示代词应为复数，应把his改为their。

13.Whomdoyouthinkhasleftthelightson?

放在疑问句特殊疑问词后的doyouthink/believe/guess/imagine/suppose等都不参与句子成分。本句中去掉doyouthink后缺的是主语，应把Whom改为Who。

14.ThebosspretendednottoseeJohnandI.

John和I在句中都做的宾语，应把I改为me。

15.Thesebooksaremine；thoseinthebagareher.

her是形容词性物主代词，后面应该加名词books，或把her改为hers。

四.数词

16.Therearefourteenhundredsstudentsinourschool.

hundred/thousand/million/score/dozen等词前有具体数字时后不加s，前面没有具体数字时在其后加s和of，表示大约几百几千的概念。如two

hundredstudents（两百个学生），hundredsofstudents（成百上千个学生）。例句中应把hundreds改为hundred。

17.Theirschoolistwiceaslargerasourschool.

表倍数关系的as...as中间只能用形容词或副词的原级。因此应把larger改为large.

18.Today’shomeworkisafive-hundred-wordscomposition.

几个单词由连字符连接而组成的复合形容词中的名词只能用单数，所以把five-hundred-words改为five-hundred-word.

19.TwothirdofthestudentsinourschoolarefromAmerica.

英语表达中分数的分子用基数词，分母用序数词，分子大于一时分母后要加s，所以就把third改为thirds.

五.形容词和副词

形容词和副词容易被误用，形容词和副词的比较级和最高级也是应注意的重点。

20.Thepatientappearednervouslywhenhetalkedtothedoctor.

appear在此是个系动词，其后应接形容词作表语。所以应把nervously改为nervous.

21.Theartistworkedhardlytofinishhisdrawingsontime.

此句需要一个副词来修饰，hardly是副词，但意为“几乎不”，hard也可以是副词，表努力，因此把hardly改为hard.

22.Thisshirtismorecheaperthanthatone.

more只构成比较级，而不能修饰比较级。因此把more去掉。

23.Heisthemostsuccessfulofthetwobusinessmen.

两者相比较时，比较级前用定冠词，三者或三者以上才用most，因此把most改为more.

24.Heworkslessharderthanheusedto.

表不如?...时用less加上形容词和副词的原级，因此把harder改为hard.

25.Thebookisfairlymoreinterestingthanthatone.

fairly只能修饰形容词和副词的原级，可以修饰比较级的副词或短语有：much,even,still,far,alot,alittle,abit,any,no,byfar,rather等，因此把fairly改为rather.

26.Thisisasaninterestingastoryastheoneinthemagazine.

as?as中间的词序是as加上形容词加上a(n)加上名词再加上as，因此应改为asinterestingastoryastheone.

27.Theweatherhereisnicerthan.

同样的事物才能相比较，weather和不具有可比性，因此应改为Theweatherhereisnicerthanthatof.

29.Iwouldrathertakeatrainthanwentbybus.

这个词组为wouldratherdo?thando?，因此把went改为go.

30.Isthereinterestinganythingatthemeeting?

修饰anything,something,everything,nothing的形容词都要放在它们的后面。

31.Ineverhaveseensuchapersonbefore.

像never之类的副词在句中应放在be动词、助动词之后，实意动词之前。因为应改为Ihaveneverseensuchapersonbefore.

32.Thebookisworthtoberead.

beworthdoing意为值得被做。因此改为Thebookisworthreading.

33.Itissurethathewillsucceed.

sure的主语只能为人，而certain的主语可为人和物。因此把sure改为certain.

34.Heisregardedasoneofthebestalivewritersatpresent.

alive为表语形容词，偶尔也做后置定语。因此把alive改为living，或把alive放在writers后面。

35.Idon’tknowthathehasfinishedtheworkyet.

yet用于否定和疑问句，already用于肯定句。把yet改为already.

36.Hesaidnearlynothingatthemeeting.

nearly不与否定词用在同一个句子中，而almost可以。因此把nearly改为almost。

六.介词

37.Heusuallygoestoschoolbyhisfather’scar.

by加上名词表示一种交通方式，中间什么都不加，如bycar,bybus,byplane等；如果名词前有其他的词修饰，则应用除by以外的其他介词，此处把by改为in.

38.Pleasewaitmeattheschoolgate.

wait为不及物动词，需加介词for后才能再跟名词或代词做宾语。

39.HehasbeenmarriedwithBettyformorethantwentyyears.

marry不跟with连用，应把with改为to。

40.Ifinishedtheworkontimeunderthehelpofhim.

Traveling to Dalian

Summer holidday is coming.I have a good plan for it.My best friend Tony who is from Britain will spend the holiday with mw.Tom is 17 years old ,he like China very much.One week ago,I wrote him a letter,inviting him to come to Dalian for the holidays.Tony has accepted my invitation and will fly to Dalian next week.I will go to the airport to pick him up.Then well show him around the city.Well go to the beach to watch the sea first.Then well visit some insteresing places.Tony will live in my house during the holiday.I hope well have a good time.