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关于旅行的英语作文高中英语作文(经典19篇)

我想,我们每一个人在经历离别的时候,都会感到痛苦。下面是小编推荐给你的离别苦的高中作文,快来看看吧。

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关于朋友英语作文高中

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Should students make friends on line? Some people say yes. The Internet

helps make many friends. Chatting on line, students can express their feelings

and opinions more freely, and even get help with their foreign language

studies.

Others, however, think students should not. They say making friends on line

is a waste of time, which should be spent more meaningfully on study. Besides,

some students, get cheated on line.

It is my opinion that students should place their study, health and safety

before other, things. As for friendship, we can readily find it in our

classmates and other people around us.

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篇1:高中英语作文中常见的100个错误

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写作是对同学们英语综合能力的考查,是最能体现大家英语水平的一种检测方式。学生在写作的过程当中经常会暴露一些弱点、犯一些错误。今天,我们对大家英语作文中的常见错误进行简要归纳,并举以实例,大家在今后的英语写作中要尽量避免这些错误的发生。

一.名词

写作中,学生们常把握不好名词的数、所有格以及一些集合名词的用法。

1.Hegavemeaverygoodadviceyesterday.

句中的a要去掉,因为advice是不可数名词。一些汉语概念为可数的词在英语中却是不可数的,表示数量时在要其前加apieceof,类似的词有:news,bread,work,paper,chalk,furniture,information等等。

2.Thatgirllovesreadingbook.

可数名词单数不能孤零零地放在句子里,或前面加冠词,或将其变为复数。此处最好变为books.

3.Hewentintoabooksshopandboughtadictionary.

一般表示有生命的东西的名词的所有格用’s,如mymother’scar,而此处适宜用名词修饰名词,改为abookshop.

4.MyfamilyiswatchingTV.

一些集合名词如看成一个整体,则用单数的谓语动词,如Myfamilyisahappyone.如果强调集合中每个个体的个人行为,则用复数的谓语动词。此处看电视是个体行为,应把is改为are。类似的词有:team,class,audience等。

5.Iboughtsomepotatosandtomatosatthesupermarket.

中学阶段,以“o”结尾的名词中有四个词变复数时要加es,它们是tomato,potato,Negro,hero;其余的都加s变为复数。

6.Thishasnothingtodowiththeirbelieves.(这和他们的信仰没关系。)

以f,fe结尾的词变为复数时一般去f,fe加ves,如knife—knives,

thief—thieves;而roof和belief直接加s变为复数。所以应把believes改为beliefs.

二.冠词

7.Thebosswantstohireanusefulperson.

用a还是an,取决于后面单词音标中的第一个音,如为元音用an,为辅音用a。useful的第一个音是辅音所以应把an改为a。类似的,我们说aEuropeancountry.

8.Planeisamachinethatcanfly.

plane为可数名词单数,不能单独放在句中,应在其前加冠词或把它变为复数,而本句后有amachine,因此只能在其前面加a,变为Aplane。

9.Heplayedapianoatthepartyyesterday.

把a改为the,因为乐器前用定冠词。

10.Themachinewasinventedin1920s.

在in后加the,因为表示年代用in加the再加几十的复数,如在八十年代inthe80s。

11.XiaoHongwenttoschoolbythebuseveryday.

去掉the,因为表示交通方式用by直接加交通工具。

三.代词

使用代词时请注意其单、复数,主、宾格以及形容词性物主代词和名词性物主代词的用法。

12.Heisoneofthosespeakerswhomakehisideasperfectlyclear.

定语从句的先行词是thosespeakers,为复数,因此从句中的指示代词应为复数,应把his改为their。

13.Whomdoyouthinkhasleftthelightson?

放在疑问句特殊疑问词后的doyouthink/believe/guess/imagine/suppose等都不参与句子成分。本句中去掉doyouthink后缺的是主语,应把Whom改为Who。

14.ThebosspretendednottoseeJohnandI.

John和I在句中都做的宾语,应把I改为me。

15.Thesebooksaremine;thoseinthebagareher.

her是形容词性物主代词,后面应该加名词books,或把her改为hers。

四.数词

16.Therearefourteenhundredsstudentsinourschool.

hundred/thousand/million/score/dozen等词前有具体数字时后不加s,前面没有具体数字时在其后加s和of,表示大约几百几千的概念。如two

hundredstudents(两百个学生),hundredsofstudents(成百上千个学生)。例句中应把hundreds改为hundred。

17.Theirschoolistwiceaslargerasourschool.

表倍数关系的as...as中间只能用形容词或副词的原级。因此应把larger改为large.

18.Today’shomeworkisafive-hundred-wordscomposition.

几个单词由连字符连接而组成的复合形容词中的名词只能用单数,所以把five-hundred-words改为five-hundred-word.

19.TwothirdofthestudentsinourschoolarefromAmerica.

英语表达中分数的分子用基数词,分母用序数词,分子大于一时分母后要加s,所以就把third改为thirds.

五.形容词和副词

形容词和副词容易被误用,形容词和副词的比较级和最高级也是应注意的重点。

20.Thepatientappearednervouslywhenhetalkedtothedoctor.

appear在此是个系动词,其后应接形容词作表语。所以应把nervously改为nervous.

21.Theartistworkedhardlytofinishhisdrawingsontime.

此句需要一个副词来修饰,hardly是副词,但意为“几乎不”,hard也可以是副词,表努力,因此把hardly改为hard.

22.Thisshirtismorecheaperthanthatone.

more只构成比较级,而不能修饰比较级。因此把more去掉。

23.Heisthemostsuccessfulofthetwobusinessmen.

两者相比较时,比较级前用定冠词,三者或三者以上才用most,因此把most改为more.

24.Heworkslessharderthanheusedto.

表不如?...时用less加上形容词和副词的原级,因此把harder改为hard.

25.Thebookisfairlymoreinterestingthanthatone.

fairly只能修饰形容词和副词的原级,可以修饰比较级的副词或短语有:much,even,still,far,alot,alittle,abit,any,no,byfar,rather等,因此把fairly改为rather.

26.Thisisasaninterestingastoryastheoneinthemagazine.

as?as中间的词序是as加上形容词加上a(n)加上名词再加上as,因此应改为asinterestingastoryastheone.

27.Theweatherhereisnicerthan.

同样的事物才能相比较,weather和不具有可比性,因此应改为Theweatherhereisnicerthanthatof.

29.Iwouldrathertakeatrainthanwentbybus.

这个词组为wouldratherdo?thando?,因此把went改为go.

30.Isthereinterestinganythingatthemeeting?

修饰anything,something,everything,nothing的形容词都要放在它们的后面。

31.Ineverhaveseensuchapersonbefore.

像never之类的副词在句中应放在be动词、助动词之后,实意动词之前。因为应改为Ihaveneverseensuchapersonbefore.

32.Thebookisworthtoberead.

beworthdoing意为值得被做。因此改为Thebookisworthreading.

33.Itissurethathewillsucceed.

sure的主语只能为人,而certain的主语可为人和物。因此把sure改为certain.

34.Heisregardedasoneofthebestalivewritersatpresent.

alive为表语形容词,偶尔也做后置定语。因此把alive改为living,或把alive放在writers后面。

35.Idon’tknowthathehasfinishedtheworkyet.

yet用于否定和疑问句,already用于肯定句。把yet改为already.

36.Hesaidnearlynothingatthemeeting.

nearly不与否定词用在同一个句子中,而almost可以。因此把nearly改为almost。

六.介词

37.Heusuallygoestoschoolbyhisfather’scar.

by加上名词表示一种交通方式,中间什么都不加,如bycar,bybus,byplane等;如果名词前有其他的词修饰,则应用除by以外的其他介词,此处把by改为in.

38.Pleasewaitmeattheschoolgate.

wait为不及物动词,需加介词for后才能再跟名词或代词做宾语。

39.HehasbeenmarriedwithBettyformorethantwentyyears.

marry不跟with连用,应把with改为to。

40.Ifinishedtheworkontimeunderthehelpofhim.

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篇2:高中励志英语作文

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Some people in the fierce competition of the rough waves swept away, has never recovered. Some people are against the tuyere, set foot on top, on the shore, they succeeded. Because they have much a stick to it. Forefront for them is not a stumbling block, but padding their own foundation.

Born easy, live easy, life is not easy. Life is a process of life. No wind, no rain? It is because of the baptism of wind and rain to see the colorful rainbow; With the pain of failure will taste the joy of success. Turgenev in the rudin, said: "although our life short and small, but great everything is caused by the hand of the people; a life, realize the lofty mission, that is their supreme happiness in life." We are to create this society, inevitably some injury, through the tears.

Time, fast turn, across one dream magic song.

Life, be about to rush out a way to! In order to cause, in order to struggle in life, despite losing a lot of, but is there will be! And are often more important than lost, it is the value and meaning of life.

Life is long, the years.

How can we predict the future? But only clear conscience my heart! Life, because there is competition, people have power; Life, because of the struggle, the people to the pursuit of excellence.

Smoke in life, like a cloud, the wind. Transient. "Only the people and the backing car, there is no reverse time and road", since we came to today, and possession of todays social status and responsibility, only forward, forward, forward again! Dont retreat. Young people, more important is to see tomorrow, seize today, forge ahead in the quiet, perhaps before the sun mountain tomorrow, you created a miracle again!

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篇3:滑雪高中英语

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Skiing is a desirable activity fro' young people. It provides the excitement that the youth is commonly seeking. The skiers can enjoy the thrill of gliding at tremendous speed down a gleaming,white mountain slope. Often, with split second tinting, they must dodge trees, stumps, and rocks——or find themselves suddenly sprawling in the snow. If they have more than average skill, they can sall through the air in breathtaking leaps and jumps that bring excitement to the onlookers as well. True, there is danger in this excitement,but that is a risk the youth enjoys. Furthermore, skiing is healthful.

It provides exercise, often very strenuous as the skiers trudge up a mountain path or work their way on skis up a slope of deep snow. The best of skiers know that they need strong muscles to successfully control their skis, so they exercise to keep themselves physically fit. Another desirable feature is the companionship that usually develops wherever skiers gather. Friendships grow quickly on the slopes and in the usual nearby shelter where the skiers find food, warmth, and rest. Their experiences of the day and their youthfulness easily draw these people together in happy fellowship.

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篇4:有关合作英语作文高中

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Some people like to work alone while others enjoy teamwork. In my opinion,

everyone had better learn to work with others together because teamwork is

definitely necessary and important in modern society.

First, working in a team provides a chance for us to communicate with each

other. Just as the saying goes, “many hands make light job.” Working in a team,

teammates share their ideas with each other, which is helpful to create a better

achievement. Second, working in a team is a way to broaden our horizon.

Teammates in a team can learn something from each other because they are from

different places, owning various experiences and hold different views towards

things. Therefore, getting along with other teammates is also a process of

increasing our knowledge. Finally, working in a team is also a way to establish

our friendship. Teammates in a team have chances to help each other, to solve

the problems together, to share the happiness of being successful, which make a

great contribution to establishing friendship. Thus, working in a team is one of

the most effective ways to extend our personal relationships.

To sum up, to learn to work in a team is really necessary and important and

we should try to enjoy it.

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篇5:带上灵魂去旅行高中作文

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看过这样一则话:旅游和旅行的区别在于,前者只需带上脚和眼睛便已足够,而后者还需带上灵魂和感动,才能启程。

生活在喧嚣的城镇久了,也想出去走一走,于是我背起行囊,告别这片土地,于是内心充满了一片安宁。买了一张去往“远方”的票,不要问远方是哪里,要知道,只需心所宁静,任何地方都叫远方。

那里有着我向往的世界,山间清溪,古木苍松,一览无穷,放下行囊,高山流水,我听见心说:“这一刻世界属于自己。”周身没有外界的喧嚣,鸟鸣虫响都是那么悦耳,花朵绽放,草树荣茂,这是自然的声音,是生命的美好。我看到鹿儿在不远处的草地上觅食,我走近,它却没有逃开,而是抬起头望向我。我在它通透的眸子里看到,天真地无所谓惧,它是大自然所造就出的,最具有灵气的生命,纯朴的、清新的,且没有沾染外面世界的污浊。它的眸是清澈的,反射着太阳明媚的光线,我所爱便是如此。

海子说:“面朝大家,春暖花开。”

我趁天还未亮,便已启程,赶往那片海。那是一个湛蓝的世界,身前水海,身后便是花海。我张开双臂,拥抱着虚无的空气,仿佛它是美好、真实的存在。太阳在海平面上冉冉升起,海鸟嘶鸣划过天际,鱼儿翻腾跃出海面,我告诉自己,清晨第一缕阳光为我所有,我爱这世界。我想,林徽因那“你是一束一束的花开,是燕在梁间呢喃,你是爱,是暖,是希望,你是人间四月天。”便是如此心境。

后来,我去了沙漠。那里真让人生畏,环境恶劣,风沙如利刃,那是被上帝抛弃的世界吗?当然,不是!自然的正能量无穷大,生命的痕迹无处不在。沙丘上一排排蹄印,那是骆驼留下的,它们是人们穿梭于沙漠中不可获缺的“交通工具”,被称为“沙漠之舟”。仿佛古丝绸之路呈现在我眼前,我听见来自西域那片土地独有的号鸣声。在炽热中我看到一株植物依然生长着,它叫骆驼刺,有着比任何植物都强悍的生命力。为了得到水分,它的根扎进地底数米,甚至更深,我深深体会到“物竟天择,适者生存”这句话了。我被骆驼刺克服艰难环境的生命力所折服,我再一次体会到生命的强大与刚毅。

之后,我去了许多地方,或山或水,或林或谷;见到了许多事物,感性与偏见,善良与残忍,它们在向我诠释生命的真谛,让我看到了乌云阴雨后的蓝天烈日。

我说,旅行是一次次人生的缩影,当一个人不只用眼睛去观摩沿途一路风景,而还要学会用心去感知,用灵魂去体会时,那么,他一定会成长。

所以,我带上灵魂,即将奔向下一次旅程!

名师点评:生命是一次旅行,我们都在路上,一路走过看到了什么,得到了什么,那就千差万别了,根本的原因就在于仅仅是用眼睛看“风景”,还是用灵魂看“人生”,收获的全然不一样。那就一定要带上灵魂去旅行,去感受生活,去领悟人生。写文章要想得再透彻些,站得才能更高些,开头两段起点太低了。有些文字也不准确。

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篇6:有关艺术英语作文高中

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This weekend, there was an art festival in our school, it had been hold for

five years and the school insisted to make it become the feature. I was so

excited, this was the first time for me to join. Early in the morning, I saw

there were so many people coming to the campus, making the campus so lively. The

students dressed so well and gave the warm welcome to the guests. I walked

around and appreciated the painting, every work was drawn by the students, I was

so impressed by these works. There were also some handworks, which were so

creative, it reflected the students’ wisdom. Though we were busy with our

subjects most of the time, some students still kept on their hobbies and made it

their talent. I should learn from them and develop some interest.

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篇7:时光旅行高中作文

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平常所说的时光是什么呢?按照文人学子的话来说就是时间,但是站在物理学的角度来说能创造出时光这个词的人便已经知道光速与时间之内必然存在着一种联系。

光速可以改变时间。说到这个,便会有人问:“光速与时间之间会有什么关系?光速就是光速,时间就是时间,在两者之间没有什么嘛”。但我们知道,光速是宇宙中的极限速度,光的速度可达到每秒18。6万英里,任何物体任何物质永远不可能超过光速。但有一点,物体一但超过光速,就能改变时间,就有了穿越时空的能力,到达未来,现在可能很难理解,但让我们举一个通俗易懂的例子。比如,一枚硬币从高空落向水中,我们假设硬币的速度超过了光速在迅速下落,那我们将会看到怎样的景象呢?只会有一个景象,那便是先看到水花,而硬币却停留还在半空中。对于这个例子来说是很不现实的,第一是硬币无法超过光的速度,第二是就算能超过光速,速度也非常之快,我们也无法真正们观测到两者之间究竟是谁快谁慢。但这种现象在超光速的情况下是可以实现的,硬币超过了光速,这便说明硬币已经穿越到了未来,我们所看到的是结果而不是过程。

时间并不是恒定的,他会因速度的增大而改变。我们再假设有一艘飞船,它的燃料无限且它以超过光的速度行驶,那么飞船中的人只用一小会儿便可以达到几十年甚至几百年之后,如果在外面的人度过了100年,但在飞船中的人可能只会感觉到只过了一个星期左右。这便可以说明,飞船外面与里面时间的流逝是不一样快的。

质量可以改变时间。这一点可能大部分人都不清楚,质量越大的物体,在它旁边物体的时间就会流逝的越慢,这种差距在地球上微小的如同发丝一般,若想有极其明显的现象的话,质量必须非常大。还是举一个通俗的例子,若有一个比太阳的质量还要大500万倍的物体,一个人站在它的旁边,另一个人站在离它非常遥远的地方,相当于好几千光年左右的距离,这时两人同时开始计时,当同时停止计时时,在这个质量巨大的物体旁边的人计时器中的时间会比另一个人计时器中的时间慢。伟大的物理学家和预言家霍金认为宇宙中质量巨大的黑洞就是能进行时间旅行的工具,从上述讲的来看,这种想法未必是不现实的。

在我们生活的宇宙之中时间与空间是相互交迭的。当物体的质量与速度不断增加,其存在的时间和空间也将随之变化。一个粒子,我们假设能将它加速直到超过光速,那么这个粒子的寿命将会增加几十倍甚至几百倍,这相当于粒子超过光速的那一瞬间穿越到了未来,我们才误认为这个粒子的寿命增加了。对于这个问题,爱因斯坦也在相对论中有所指出,当我们以光速移动时,时间将不再流动,若超过光速,你所在的空间中时间也会相对变慢。

现在在世界上已经有了超音速飞机,科技在一点点的发达,人类在一点点的进步,古时候的神话小说现在大多都已成为了现实。相信在不久的将来,时光旅行将不再是梦,它将会是人类历史上的再一次进步。

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篇8:高中英语

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It goes without saying that english plays an important role in our modern

society. english is an international language. wherever you go, you can hear

english spoken by many people.

From this point of view, it is true that english is important to our daily

life. learning english is like learning to swim or learning to play ball. our

primary trouble is that we have tackled the study of language from the wrong

end. we are like theman who thinks he can learn to swim only by reading books

about swimming. in actuality, we learn by doing. the grammatical rules are

valuable as we plunge into the language and need some assistance. in the same

way, advanced instructions about swimming are helpful as we learn something from

actual experience in the water. but reading books never makes a swimmer and

learning rules never makes a practical linguist. the regular procedure in

learning english involves listening first, to be followed by speaking. then

comes reading, and finally the writing of the language. the way you learn

english is much the same as the way you learned your own language.

First of all you must listen and then repeat and repeat until you can use

the language easily. in other words, you have to build up language habits in

english just as you build up english habits in your own language. to sum up, we

must bear in mind that nobody can learn to swim for you. nobody can learn to

play ball for you. nobody can learn english for you. its up to you. you must

learn for yourself and you will learn if you really want to and are willing to

practice.

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篇9:我的宠物狗高中英语作文

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My House Dog

I’m a dog lover, because dogs are tame, friendly and easy to communicate with. I have kept one in my house, whose name is Chocolate. She is covered with brown curly hair and looks like a Teddy Bear. Now we have been living together for two years, so I’m very familiar with her characteristics. When she is hungry, she often barks loudly. At that time, I begin to realize that it’s time to feed her. She is keen on beef and fish. Sometimes, she also eats some rice.

我是一个爱的人,因为狗是很温顺,友好,也很容易交流。我在我家养了一只,它的名字叫巧克力。她的毛是棕色的卷毛,看起来就像泰迪熊。现在我们已经一起生活了两年了,所以我很熟悉她的性格。她饿了,她经常会大声吠。那个时候,我就会开始意识到是时候喂她了。她喜爱吃牛肉和鱼。有时候,她也吃一些米饭。

Every day when I come home, she always jumps up to me happily, with her tail moving. She seems to be my best friend. As time goes by, the relationship between us becomes closer and closer. Therefore, I think her as an important member in my family. I really have the pleasure of her company.

每天我回到家的时候,她都会用她的尾巴开心地跑向我。她就像是我最好的朋友一样。随着时间的流逝,我们两个的关系变得越来越亲密。因此,我觉得她是我们家里很重要的一员。有她在我真的很开心。

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篇10:高中英语写作指导:高中英语写作教学的体会

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一、勤读、多背词汇,好精句

要想写好一篇文章,没有充足的词汇量是不行的。课文中的俗语和谚语的识记是通过背诵来完成。背诵是语言学习的重要手段,也是语言学习的必经之路。

1.背词句,背诵课文中的重点句型和短语尤其是课文中的俗语、谚语和经典句子。

2.背范文,将近几年高考中的作文和课文中好的段落以及报刊上的各种各样的体裁和优秀文章让学生多背,这样学生才能在自己的脑子中形成一定的写作框架,做到心中有数。

3.多读书,用英语进行思维。为了培养学生用英语思维的定势,增加对英语国家文化、社会风俗、风土人情、思维方式的了解,扩大视野,选择课外阅读,提高学生分析、判断、猜测、推理和领悟的能力。部分学生在写作时习惯用汉语思维,然后再逐句译成英语,结果写出来的文章是汉语式的英语。要想学会用英语进行思维,就要有计划、有目的地培养学生的语感。一个重要的方法就是大量阅读,选择精彩的词句、文章和佳句,引导学生阅读,摘抄或背诵来培养语感。

二、亲自动手,自己写作

教师应注重基本功训练,严格要求学生正确,工整,熟练地书写字母,单词和句子,同时注意大小写和标点符号。进行组词造句,组句成段练习时,要学生写出最简单的短句,为以后英语作文打好扎实的基础。这种练习可以安排在刚开始的训练中,要求学生能够用最基本的时态去完成写作。另外结合高中英语基础知识的复习,对学生提出较高写作能力的要求。

1.范例引路

学生在进行短文写作训练时,教师应提供各种文体的范文,讲明各种文体的写作要求和注意事项,如日记,便条,书信,通知的格式等,并给予必要的提示,并掌握各种体裁文章的格式。在平时的教学中,教师应该指导学生应对高考中各种体裁文章。

2.限时训练

教师当场发题,限时交卷。这样能促使学生瞬间接受信息,快速理解信息,迅速表达信息,提高实际应用和应试能力。这一步是关键,也是学生的的难关。必须要求学生在写作过程中牢牢记住以下口诀:“先读提示,要点与格式要弄清;时态语态要当心,前后呼应要一致;结构搭配,莫违背;文章写好细检查,点滴小错别忽视”。学生明确目的,并掌握要领后,要严格在规定时间内完成作业。

3.多想精炼

在平时的教学中,教师要求学生多看、多听、多想,用心体验和感悟身边的人和事,然后将自己的体验和感受用英语写出来。教师可要求学生每周写两篇,有话则长,无话可短。对不同水平的学生作不同的要求。鼓励表达自己的看法和体会

此外,有时根据所学单元知识布置一篇作文,或给学生提供一些与时事或与学生学习活动和生活有关的材料。此类话题的现实性能诱发学生的写作兴趣,使其有话可写,有感而发;还能增强其信心,使其写作能力、技巧得到充分的锻炼和提高。对于有待进步的学生要及时励,激发其写作热情,增强其自信心。

4.自改互改

对照范文,学生先对已查出的表达有误的地方进行初改。范文不可能把各种表达方式都包括进去,况且学生作业中的错误也不尽相同,因此,还可安排学生互改。以同桌两人为宜,这样同时进行了改错训练。

三、培养学生良好的写作习惯

写作教学是一项“由简单到复杂,循环往复不断上升的”过程。不是一蹴而就的,需要教师在教学中由浅入深、由简入繁、由易到难、循序渐进。起始阶段,培养学生良好的写作习惯是非常重要的。要求学生做到以下几点:

1.认真审题。要求学生认真审读图表或提纲,领会意图,捕捉信息,确定文章时态及体裁。

2.写提纲。教师引导学生构思文章要点,写出每个段落主题句、关键词,然后确定细节和内容要点。

3.写初稿。经过审题和列提纲后,学生开始写作,教师指导学有意识地使用固定句型,使用关联词,把段落按逻辑顺序连成一体,形成基本连贯的初稿。

4.检查错误。检查是书面表达不可缺少的环节,学生完成初稿后,老师指导学生从以下六个方面进行修改和查错:(1)看要点是否齐全,有无遗漏;(2)体裁是否恰当,有无偏题;(3)内容是否连贯,有无缺词;(4)语法是否正确,人称、时态、语态、冠词及名词单复数等有无错误;(5)用词是否得当,有无习语及固定搭配等方面的错误(6)最后注意句与句、段与段之间有无合适的连接及过渡,经过有效的训练,学生犯的错误会逐渐减少,同时学生的书面表达能力会逐步提高。

总之,教学有法,教无定法。教师面对的教育对象是多样化的,因此在教学中一定要关注学生的个体差异,采取相应的措施,激发学生写作的兴趣。让学生参与实践,体验成功的快乐,循序引导,学生点滴积累,不断磨练,这样能达到理想的效果。

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篇11:香港旅行的英语

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We got to Hong Kong early in the morning. It had taken us about 2 hours to come here by plane. It is really an exciting city and very different from Taiyuan. My uncle showed my mother and me around Hong Kong. We visited Hong Kong Park.

我们在清晨到了香港。我们花了大约2个小时的飞机来到这里。这真是一个令人兴奋的城市,和太原完全不同。我叔叔带我和妈妈到处游览。我们参观了香港公园。

After lunch we went to St. Johns Cathedral. It is an old and quiet church. Then we did some shopping in a supermarket and bought a nice watch for my father. On the way back to the hotel we both felt tired but happy. We enjoyed ourselves very much.

午餐后我们去了圣约翰教堂。这是一个古老的、安静的教堂。然后我们在超市购物,买了一只很不错的手表给爸爸。在回酒店的路上,我们都感到很累但很高兴。我们玩的很开心.

Tomorrow we are going to Disneyland.

明天我们要去迪斯尼乐园。

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篇12:我的宠物狗高中英语作文

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last year, my friend gave me a little dog. i was fond of him very much. i liked to play with him after school and he liked to follow me wherever i went. i was very glad that i had a "body guard".

last winter i was very busy with my lessons and came home very late every day.however, no matter how late i went home, my dog used to stand at a comer near my school waiting for me. when i passed there, he barked two or three times then ran towards me. it seemed that he was calling me.

my dog not only,took good care of me, but also was respoasible at home. when strangers came to my house, he barked at them but not hurt them. what a lovely dog he is! (135 words)

我家的小

去年,朋友送我一只小狗,我非常喜欢它,放学后就和它一起玩耍,无论我走到哪儿它都跟在身后。我很高兴有这样一位“保镖”。

去年冬天我忙于功课,每天回家都很晚。然而无论我到家多晚,这只小狗总是在学校附近的一个角落处等我。当我从那经过时,它全冲我叫两声然后跑过来,似乎它是在叫我。

我家的狗不但对我照顾周到,而且还肩负着看家的重任,每当有陌生人来到我家,它总是叫个不停,但并不咬他们。多么可爱的一只狗啊!

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篇13:高中写人英语作文:怀孕的少女

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The Pregant Teenage Girl

Recently, a girl who was born after the year of 2000 showing a picture of her pregant image in Weibo. This teenage girl wrote down the words that she was busying giving birth to a child for her so called husband, who was also a teenager. Soon this picture became the hot issue. People were so shocked by the girl’s young face, which looked so innocent and she was just no more than 16!Such a young girl surely did not have the ability to raise a kid, what’s more, they even did not figure out the meaning of responsibility. The problem of family education was brought to the public again. The root of young pregancy lies in the parents’ caring. The lack of communication between parents and chidren is easy to have such problem. It is not appropriate to have baby at such early age.

最近,一个出生在2000年后的女孩在微博展示了她怀孕的照片。这少女写下一些话,她忙着为所谓的丈夫生孩子,他丈夫也是一个少年。很快这张照片成为了热点。人们如此震惊于这位女孩稚嫩的脸,她看上去很天真,不超过16 岁!这样一个年轻的女孩肯定没有能力抚养孩子,更重要的是,他们甚至没有弄清楚责任的意义。家庭教育的问题再次被带到公众面前。如此年轻就怀孕的根源在于父母的关怀程度。父母和子女之间缺乏沟通很容易有这样的问题。如此小的年纪就有孩子是不合适的。

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篇14:高中关于元宵节的英语作文

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the 15-day celebration of chinese new year

the first day of the lunar new year is the welcoming of the gods of the heavens and earth.many people abstain from meat on the first day of the new year because it is believed that this will ensure long and happy lives for them.

on the second day, the chinese pray to their ancestors as well as to all the gods. they are extra kind to dogs and feed them well as it is believed that the second day is the birthday of all dogs.

the third and fourth days are for the sons-in-laws to pay respect to their parents-in-law.

the fifth day is called po woo. on that day people stay home to welcome the god of wealth. no one visits families and friends on the fifth day because it will bring both parties bad luck.

on the sixth to the 10th day, the chinese visit their relatives and friends freely. they also visit the temples to pray for good fortune and health.

the seventh day of the new year is the day for farmers to display their produce. these farmers make a drink from seven types of vegetables to celebrate the occasion. the seventh day is also considered the birthday of human beings. noodles are eaten to promote longevity and raw fish for success.

on the eighth day the fujian people have another family reunion dinner, and at midnight they pray to tian gong, the god of heaven.

the ninth day is to make offerings to the jade emperor.

the 10th through the 12th are days that

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篇15:高中英语作文关于成功的建议

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I have some good advice for your work。 If you can do the following things, you will succeed in doing everything。

Firstly, whatever you do, you must be punctual and hard—working。 If you sow a good seed, you will get a good harvest。 If the seed is in poor quality, the harvest will also be very bad。 And if you sow nothing, you will get nothing at all。 Nothing。

Secondly, you must be honest。 As honesty is the moral tuition that everyone should have。 If you treat other people friendly and sincerely, others will also respect you。

Thirdly, you must be tolerant to others, since no one is perfect in the world。 Everyone has his own faults, but if you can see everything on other persons perspective, there will be no problem at all。

Whats more, when you are in a big company, you should not only respect the leaders, but also get on well with the colleagues。 Sometimes, you should try to please your boss, so that you could have more chances to be promoted。

Last but not the least, dont ignore the little things, because such a little thing will have a great effect on your life。 So you should start yourselves at the bottom, in order to get enough working experience。 As you have enough working experience, nothing you will be afraid。

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篇16:提高网络安全的高中英语作文

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Along with the time development accessing the net already turned the extremely universal matter. No matter is adult or the child so long as mentioning the computer all think of internet. But accessing the internet is advantageous but also has shortcoming.

I knew very many people access the net mainly is for playing games which is very bad for the study. Therefore some people believed the elementary and middle school students lack the self-control.

Butthere are many people approving to accessing internet why? Because internet can provide to the people very helps. First the network looks like a library we can look up very many materials easilyand it is quicker than the speed of consulting books; Next we may read a richer news on-line; In addition accessing the net also has other functions for example E-mail telephoning on the net and so on.

Actually accessing the net has its profit and the shortcoming place. We use it to open to expand the field of vision the study knowledge but must certainly grasp the discretion.随着时间的发展,接入网已经变成了极为普遍的问题。不管是大人还是孩子,只要一提电脑,都想到互联网。但是,上网是有利的,但也有缺点。

网络的好与坏高中英语作文 我知道很多人上网,主要是玩游戏,这对学习是很不好的。因此,有人认为,中小学生缺乏自我控制能力。

但是,有许多人赞成上网,为什么呢?因为互联网可以为人们提供很有帮助。首先,网络就像一个图书馆,我们可以看到很多材料很容易,而且比查阅书籍速度快;其次,我们可以读到更丰富的新闻在线;此外,上网还有其它作用,例如,电子邮件,网上通电话等等。

其实,上网有它的盈利和缺点的地方。我们用它来开阔视野,拓展视野,学习知识,但一定要把握自由裁量权。

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篇17:名著《茶花女》高中英语读后感

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导语:《茶花女》故事讲述了一个青年人与巴黎上流社会一位交际花曲折凄婉的爱情故事。下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的优秀英语作文,欢迎阅读与借鉴,谢谢!

I read the Chinese version of “Camille” a few years ago. At that time I was deeply moved by the main character Marguerite Gautier. “Camille” or “The Lady of the Camellias” by Alexandre Dumas, fils, is the story of Marguerite Gautier, a young courtesan, or kept woman, in Paris in the mid 1800s, and how she falls in love with a young man, Armand Duval, and then tries to escape from her questionable past. Unfortunately, it comes back to haunt her and she ends up returning to that life and dies painfully and alone, but with the knowledge that she was a noble woman at heart. When I first began to read the book, I did not care for Marguerite or her attitude or lifestyle, but as I got further into the narrative, I realized that her saucy attitude was a front to cover the lonely woman that she really was. She felt used, abused and unloved, until the gentle Armand Duval came into her life and showed her that he loved her as a person and not for what she could do for him. It must have taken great courage for Marguerite to leave the life she had lived for so long, knowing all along that it was probably too good to be true and would not last indefinitely. And it also showed that Marguerite really loved Armand Duval for she could even change herself for him.

However, happiness didn’t last for long. When M. Duval, Armands father, came to her, pleading for her to leave Armand to save both Armands reputation and that of his younger innocent sister, Marguerite saw a way to become pure of heart, if not in body. She felt that it was her duty, because she loved Armand so much, to do this even though it meant giving up her own happiness and hurting Armand temporarily. She reluctantly returned to her former life, knowing that some day Armand would forgive her. Sadly, she died in debt and basically alone, except for her one female friend, Julie Duprat, who helped her during her illness. She had her journal sent to Armand after her death, explaining why she had made the choices she had. I think Dumass last few lines about Marguerite being the exception, not the rule were quite true, and I also agreed with his view that while her lifestyle could not be condoned, we as a society assume that all of these type of women are cold and heartless, while this may not always be the case. A person can make the wrong choices in life when they are young, and try to redeem themselves, but sometimes past situations prevent them from changing their lives, even though they desperately wish to do so. This applies to both men and women in many different types of circumstances: involvement in crime; drug or alcohol abuse; gambling; prostitution; financial problems; poor marriage choices; etc. And this is the fact, which exists in the whole society.

As far as the other characters in the book, I think Marguerite was right in saying that no one truly cared about her, but only wanted something from her, the only exceptions being Armand and Julie Duprat. Of course, the Comte de G. and Comte de N. wanted her body and appearance. The Duke needed to “wake up and smell the coffee” and realize that she could never replace his dead daughter. If he truly cared, he could have helped her leave her lifestyle without “keeping” her himself. And lastly, Prudence was a blood-sucking leech who used Marguerite almost worse than the men. I also think she was jealous of the fact that Marguerite had so much more courage than herself and someone truly loved her.

Last morning, when tiding my bookshelf, I took this book out of the shelf, and a dried flower flew away from the book. It was pale blue, very transparent, with thin fine veins. a dried flower flew away from the book. It was pale blue, very transparent, with thin fine veins. I held it against the morning light and blew on it. The soft breeze carried it away. Camille is just like the camellia, she could never escape from the destiny of withering. But it wasn’t her fault; it’s because of the evil of Capitalism and the hideousness of that society.

Suddenly, I remembered a saying: “Women are like the flowers”. Those pretty women are like those beautiful flowers; their delicate beauty makes people feel they are the miracle of life. However, even the God envies their beauty. It seems that beautiful women always have tragic endings. As we are normal persons, even we can see the hideousness of humanity that results in their fate of withering, we can at most ask quietly in our hearts: Where have those beautiful flowers gone? Where have they gone?

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篇18:关于讨论小事和细节的重要性的高中英语作文

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The Importance of Details

"The devil is always in the details" is a proverb which means that details determine our success. Therefore, this quotation aims to tell us that every detail is important enough to be paid attention to.

Some people may think that one who wants to achieve great success shouldnt pay much attention to details,but those who desire to do something big at once will constantly be haunted by disappointment, frustration or even failures,as when something big " shows up,they can hardly seize the opportunity because of the lack of ability to deal with small things. Keeping an eye on details may help us in many ways. For instance, when we were small children, we were sometimes very careless and there were many lapses in our homework, but if we could pay much more attention to these trifles, we would get a higher mark in the exam. Whats more, when we make decisions, making every detail clear will reduce risks.

To sum up,under no circumstances should we undervalue the importance of details, for paying attention to small things is the first step of success and will lay root for doing something big.

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篇19:我的理想高中英语作文带翻译

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Ideal is good, is happy, is the ideal starting point for success. I think, every student has a beautiful ideal, to ask what is my ideal, I would say: "my ideal is that when a CCTV news".To ask why I have this ideal, or from the start of life. "CCTV news broadcast" is our Chinese important news, not only we the people of the whole country, there are many foreigners will see, so the occupation represents the image and language level in china. There is a reason: this work can make our country peoples access to the latest news, let us Chinese political connections. In this work the way repay our great motherland mother.The ideal is behind the efforts of one hundred thousand and difficult challenge. In the future days, I will try my best to learn culture while learning about presided over knowledge, and from the aspects of improving, show ego, challenge higher field. If you want to succeed, must fix its body, like a candle, you want to burn it up, there must be a match, the match is our efforts.The ideal is a life, in our heart sowed the young; the ideal is a whip, let us work hard; my ideal is that when a CCTV news, it is my life goal.

理想是好的,是快乐的,是成功的起点。我认为,每个学生都有一个美好的理想,问我的理想是什么,我会说:“我的理想是当一个央视新闻工作者”。问我为什么有这样的理想,因为这来源于生活。“央视新闻联播”是我们中国重要的新闻,不仅我们整个国家的人民,有许多外国人会看到,所以职业代表着中国形象和语言水平。还有一个原因:这个工作可以使我们的国家人民访问到最新的新闻及了解我们中国的政治关系。以这样工作的方式来偿还我们伟大的祖国母亲。理想的背后是十万年的努力和困难的挑战。在未来的日子里,我将尽我最大的努力学习文化,学习知识,学习改善这些方面,展示自我,挑战更高的领域,如果你想要成功,必须修复它的身体,像一根蜡烛,你想烧掉它,必须有一场比赛,对手是我们的努力。理想是生命,在我们心中播下了年轻;理想是鞭子,让我们努力工作,我的理想是当一个央视新闻工作者,这是我的人生目标。

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