关于旅行的英语作文高中英语作文（合集20篇）

噢耶！过年喽！吃年夜饭了！”我高兴地到处嚷嚷。

除夕之夜是一家人团聚的时刻，俗话说得好：“有钱没钱，回家过年。”这一天是中华民族团聚欢乐的好时光。

我家也不例外，妈妈和姥姥做年夜饭，爸爸和姥爷贴春联，我呢在楼下和小伙伴玩鞭炮，大家都忙得不亦乐乎。

随着“久经菜场”的妈妈一声大喊：“上菜了……”拉开了年夜饭的序幕。望着这一桌热气腾腾的年夜饭，我馋得口水直往肚子里流。妈妈指着一盘红烧鲤鱼说：“这是‘年年有余’！”姥姥指着红烧鸡说：“这是‘吉祥如意’！”爸爸与姥爷碰杯进酒：“祝您老福如东海，寿比南山！”并夹起青菜对二老说：“这是长庚菜，祝您二老长命百岁。”姥爷捋捋胡须，夹起用玉米粉做起的龙须饼说：“这是‘双龙戏珠’该外孙吃，争取考双百！”我开玩笑地回答：“考试有四门呢！”“哦，那就再夹两个！”姥爷乐呵呵地又往我的碗里夹了两个，“那就考两个双百!”“好，好!”我狼吞虎咽地吃了起来……

这时，姥爷笑咪咪地说：“我来给大家发红包，前提是每人必须回答一个问题。”大家顿时安静了下来。“老婆子，请听题：“长长一串，一爆赛过红豆子。”姥姥稍思片刻说：“爆竹。”“中奖！”姥爷乐呵呵得将红包递给了姥姥。

后来姥爷又对爸爸说：“小小一个本，计算是第一。”爸爸脱口而出：“是计算机。”爸爸笑嘻嘻地接过了红包。

“外孙，该你了。我来考考你的数学，5×6×3.14等于多少？”我思考了一下：“等于94.2。”“正确！”我也赢得了一个红包。

“女儿，你是家庭主妇，我问你，什么东西越洗越小？”“肥皂。”妈妈也顺理成章地得到了一个大红包。

屋内笑声阵阵，屋外鞭炮声声，这也正应了门外那副春联：四海为春春不老，九州同乐乐无穷。

Traveling is a good activity. When you are fed up with your work and study, and when you are free, you can go to a beautiful place to enjoy the beauty of nature, you can breathe fresh air, and make some friends. But sometimes, it is not a good thing. The weather often changes, you may be caught in the rain and may catch a cold while traveling. Therefore, you should prepare yourself carefully before the trip. You had better find a companion, so that you can help each other.

The population of the world has already passed six billion. The population problem may be the greatest challenge of the world today. The earth has been very crowded and there will be standing room only before long.

China’s One Child Policy is a good way to solve this problem and stop the population from growing so fast. It also can help our country develop quickly then people’s standard of living will become higher and higher.

At the same time a lot of other problems will be done with, such as employment problems, food problems, water problems and so on…So I think it is necessary for China to carry out this policy.

There is no doubt that learning English is vital for us. On the onehand, English has become an international language that people can communicatewith each other in many countries. On the other hand, if we learn English well,we could get more chance of success.

毫无疑问，学习英语对于我们来说是至关重要的。一方面，英语已成为国际语言人们在很多国家都可以用之来交流。另一方面，如果我们学好英语，我们成功的几率就会更高。

However, it is well-known that there are many methods for us tolearn English well. There are some tips. First, we can study in a group toimprove learning efficiency. Second, we could listen to English songs and watchEnglish movies; this way is very suitable for student to improve theirlistening and speaking abilities. Third, I have believed that a great deal ofpractice can strengthen language knowledge.

然而，众所周知学好英语有很多方法。这有一些小提示。首先，我们可以集体学习来提高学习效率。第二，我们可以听英文歌曲或者看英文电影；这种方式非常适合学生用来提高他们的听力和口语能力。第三，我认为，大量的练习可以加强语言知识。

In a word, it is natural for us to learn English well by making efforts.If we didnt work hard, we would never do well in learning English.

总之，学好英语要付出努力是很自然的。如果我们不努力，我们永远都不会学好英语。

[高中英语作文：如何高效学习英语

Every child has pocket money, when they get the money from parents, most of them will buy what they want and spend the money quickly. Parents will give their children pocket money in the certain time, the children can use the money in a wise way. They can take out some money to buy what they need, like the food and clothes, there are still some money left, what should they do to deal with the rest of the money? I advise the children to save the money, they can keep it, and in case of their special need. I will save the money to take a trip in the summer vacation, my parents will agree with my plan, because I take out the money, they have no reason to go against me. Sometimes I will use the saved money to support my emergent situation, so there is no need for them to worry about me.

每个孩子都有零花钱，当父母给钱他们的时候，大部分人会买他们想要的，钱很快就被用完了。父母会在特定的时间给他们的孩子零花钱，孩子可以用更加理智的方式使用钱。他们可以拿出一些钱来买他们需要的，比如食物和衣服，仍然会有一些钱剩下了，他们应该怎么处理剩下的钱呢?我建议孩子们把钱省下来，他们可以存起来，以防特殊的需要。我会把钱省下来，在暑假里去旅游，父母会同意我的计划，因为我出的钱，他们没有理由反对我。有时候我会使用存起来的钱来应对我的紧急情况，这样就不必让父母担心我。

This month, I will travel to Changsha and Zhangjiajie with my two friends, which is supposed to be a seven-day trip. We will set out on 10th, June. Now, we have prepared many things, snacks and medicines included. Firstly, we will go to Changsha by plane. The tickets are cheap, so it’s a good choice to save time. We will stay there for two days. The main goal staying there is to enjoy the delicious food in Changsha. My friend has prepared a map of must-tries and I believe they must be good. Then we will go to Zhangjiajie by train. It’s not so far from Changsha, taking about five hours to get there. Zhangjiajie is famous for its wonderful mountains. The sceneries there are amazing that no one should miss. But we will have a tough journey for climbing high mountains, which is not easy for us all. This is why we will stay there for longer. In the end, we will go home by train. This is my plan for the journey. I am sure it will be a wonderful and fruitful journey.

这个月，我要和我的两个朋友一起去长沙和张家界旅行，为期7天左右。我们会在6月10日出发。现在，我们已经准备了许多东西，包括零食和药品。首先，我们会坐飞机去长沙，机票很便宜，所以这是节约在路上时间的好选择。我们会在长沙待两天，主要目的是品尝长沙美食。我的朋友准备了长沙美食地图，我想那必定很诱人。接着，我们会坐火车前往张家界。张家界离长沙不太远，只需5个小时的车程。张家界以奇山闻名，风景十分壮美，我想没人会想错过这样的美景的。但是由于要爬山，所以在张家界的旅行不会太轻松，这也是我们要在张家界待久一些的原因。最后，我们会坐火车回家。这就是我这次旅行的计划，我确信这会是一个美妙而又充实的旅程。

For most people, they will choose to travelduring holiday because they want to relieve themselves from the high pressureof work. However, it happens quite often that people often ran into trafficjams on the way to travel. Some people think that we can relax ourselves bytraveling no matter of how many people there. Some people would rather to stayin home than going out to travel because they think there are too many people swarminto the scenic spots. In my point of view, I would rather to stay indoorsrather than going out to travel. Reasons are listed below.

Firstly, during holiday, so many peopleswarm into the travel spots that we can’t enjoy ourselves to the full. For mostpeople, they want to travel because during holiday, they can have several days torelieve themselves by traveling. However, so many people crowd together willmake their tour lose the original fun.

Secondly, during holiday, price will berising drastically. It is known to all that you need to spend much more to buythings or taking bus or any other transportation since many retailers will raisegoods’ price during this holiday to get fat profits.

All in all, travel during holiday is not agood choice for us since its inconvenience in traveling among a huge crowd ofpeople and also the dramatically high price for goods and transportations willlet us pay extra money.

转眼一个学习又要结束了，大家都期盼着在假期中踏踏实实的玩的愉快，下面是小编帮大家整理的假期旅行英语作文，希望大家喜欢。

【我的假期英语作文篇一】

This year’s National Day I went to Beihai for travel with my friends. As we were afraid Beihai will be too many people on National Day, so we went there on Oct.4. Our first stop is to the Bei Hai silver beach. We found ther are huge people on the beach. Outside the beach, we can’t see the sea but only people. Though I was shock, we still joined the people on the beach quickly. We swam in the sea and played with each other. We all felt happy about that trip.

【我的假期英语作文篇二】

Summer holiday is coming . I want to go to Beijing . I go to Beijing with my father , my mother and my brother . We want to go there by plane because it takes less time . We can see many things in it . First we can visit the Great Wall , it is very famous for the world ,so I like it very much . Second we can go to the zoo because I like to see animals . There are many foreigners in this city ,too . I want to talk with them in English . I want to learn English from them . I think we can have a good time then . I hope it is coming soon .

I really have a meaningful holiday. I want to finish doing my homework as soon as possible, so that I can have a lot of free time. I spent three days with my grandparents and help them do some homework. I also visited my old friend, and they go to the park. In addition, I learned how to play tennis, its so cool. And, more importantly, I reviewed their lessons, and preparation of the new curriculum and read some interesting books. This is a wonderful holiday.

【我的假期英语作文篇三】

In my vacation,I went to my aunts house.I miss her really much and I was so excited to see her.I had a lot of fun with my aunt,she taught me how to cook.It was kind hot where my aunt lives,so I stayed at her house for the most of the time.I had so much fun,cant wait to visit her again!

the best way of traveling

people travel by plane, by train, by ship, by bus. to me, the best way of traveling on a summer vacation is to go on foot.

on a summer vacation i travel to refresh myself and to see the countryside. when i use my feet and walk on a grass covered path or among the hills i feel detached from the noise of the city and closer to the nature. and when i travel on foot i get more freedom. i can plan my own schedule. i can choose my own route. i can stop where i like. and i can see things and people that i might miss if i travel on a train or on a bus.

when faster and more convenient ways for travel are becoming available, i still favor using my own feet. i get much pleasure from it.

When students go into college, they need to join in the group, because there is no way for them to live alone. They have new classmates and roommates. How to fit in the group is the main problem for them to solve. A successful student can handle it well.

To fit in the group, the students must have the collective consciousness. As most students are only child in the family, so they don’t know how to get along well with their roommates. They always notice themselves and ignore others’ feelings. But as they live in a dormitory, they need to realize these. Only in this way can make everybody live in a harmonious environment.

To fit in a group, students also need to be honest. As many students live in a common surrounding, it is easy to have conflict, because different cultures happen among students from different regions. Then it is important to be honest and try to talk about the problem, or the conflict will bigger.

It is a big lesson for students to learn get along with others. The one who handles well are trend to be get successfully easily.

Once， when I was a teenager， my father and I were standing in line to buy tickets for the circus. Finally， there was only one family between us and the ticket counter.

This family made a big impression on me. There were eight children， all probably under the age of 12. You could tell they didnt have a lot of money.

Their clothes were not expensive， but they were clean. The children were well-behaved， all of them standing in line， two-by-two behind their parents， holding hands. They were excitedly jabbering about the clowns， elephants， and other acts they would see that night.

One could sense they had never been to the circus before. It promised to be a highlight of their young lives. The father and mother were at the head of the pack， standing proud as could be.

The mother was holding her husbands hand， looking up at him as if to say， "Youre my knight in shining armor."

He was smiling and basking in pride， looking back at her as if to reply， "You got that right."

The ticket lady asked the father how many tickets he wanted. He proudly responded， "Please let me buy eight childrens tickets and two adult tickets so I can take my family to the circus."

The ticket lady quoted the price. The mans wife let go of his hand， her head dropped， and his lip began to quiver. The father leaned a little closer and asked， "How much did you say?"

The ticket lady again quoted the price. The man didnt have enough money.

How was he supposed to turn and tell his eight kids that he didn‘t have enough money to take them to the circus? Seeing what was going on， my dad put his hand in his pocket， pulled out a $20 bill and dropped it on the ground. (We were not wealthy in any sense of the word!)

在全球经济一体化的今天,世界旅游市场竞争愈演愈烈,尤其是旅游景区品牌竞争已经达到了白热化的程度。下面是小编帮大家整理的假期旅行英语作文，希望大家喜欢。

关于假期旅游英文作文篇1

Qingdao -- Haiyang sunshine beach, sitting on a sailing boat, feel the sea breezeblowing comfortable.

Located in the Yellow Sea coast of Qingdao is Chinas important regional economic center, international shipping center in Northeast Asia, the international coastal tourist resort, famous international port city. The 2008 Olympic Games so that everyone on the Qingdao more of an impression label -- sailing to Qingdao sea, rent a sailboat,feelings of the maritime customs.

关于假期旅游英文作文篇2

Shangri-La world is a rare perfect natural ecology and traditional culture of the pure land, known as "mountain garden", "Kingdom of animals and plants," "Kingdom of non-ferrous metals" reputation. From Dali along the Yunnan Tibet Highway North 315 kilometers, is the capital of Diqing Tibetan Autonomous Prefecture Zhongdian County town centre, 659 km away from Kunming, up to 50 minutes by plane. Is a Tibetan as the main body, a vast territory, rich resources of the county. Zhongdian a total of 24 well-known tourist attractions, is a natural landscape, rich cultural landscape of thestate tourism hotline, is one of the eight gold.

关于假期旅游英文作文篇3

Now National Day is coming. I have made a plan for it .I am going to Beijing with my parents.Because there are many places of interest .First we want to visit the Great Wall ,which is considered one of the seven wonders in the world. Second we want to visit the summer palace ,where lived many emperors during the hot days. Then we want to visit the Water Cube,where many important events are held .Finally we want to visit hutong to get a knowledge of the culture of old Beijing .I think this trip must be very interesting and we will have a good time.

关于假期旅游英文作文篇4

Old Town of Lijiang is also called Dayan Town, Dayan, may also refer to the Lijiang Naxi Autonomous County Administrative System "has been withdrawn". Old Town of Lijiang in the Southern Song Dynasty has begun to take shape, the existing eight,nine hundred years of history. Since the Ming Dynasty, Old Town of Lijiang says"Dayan car", Lijiang dam Center for their home, surrounded on all sides of Castle Peak, green water between a hover, like a jasper big inkstone, hence the name.

寒山白云，曲径人家，人生就像一场行走在高山峡谷的旅行。寒来暑往，春秋冬夏，我们一路品尝生活的酸甜苦辣，一路采撷人生的千百般滋味，调制成独绝的美味。

旅行途中，带上味蕾，慢慢发现，细细品味，默默承受，静静沉淀。

带上味蕾去旅行，品味苦后甘甜。越王勾践，卧薪尝胆，上天不负苦心人，最终三千越甲破吴归；无臂刘伟，命运多舛，但为梦想前行的信念依旧支撑着他战胜一次又一次苦难，最终让脚趾间的音符在维也纳金色大厅奏响。苦是人生常味，苦难更是人生一剂良药。苦使人清醒，使人警觉，更使人坚韧。在漫长而短暂的人生之旅中，只要我们忍受住这淡淡苦涩，细细咀嚼这苦中韵味，留给我们的，必定是余味的甘甜和成功的喜悦。

带上味蕾去旅行，品味咸辣浓香。肝胆医学之父吴孟超，手术台前留下了辛勤的汗水，九十高龄依旧坚守在医学一线，为病人们带来生的希望；罗阳，为“歼十五”的诞生竭心尽力，一直到生命的最后一刻。人生就如同一个火热的战场，他们用青春与汗水为社会贡献力量，用智慧与坚守为人生点亮希望。品味人生路上辛勤的汗水，留给我们的是永不消散的浓香和值得回味一生的奋斗历程。

带上味蕾去旅行，品味人生淡远清新。陶渊明在田野间自娱，“采菊东篱下，悠然见南山”；欧阳修在山水间自乐，“醉翁之意不在酒，在乎山水之间也”；苏轼在明月之下超脱，“纵一苇之所如，凌万顷之茫然”。面对仕途的不顺抑或是官场的黑暗，他们超然物外，追求淡然。生活的图景多半是偶起涟漪的小潭，在平淡中找寻生活的乐趣，在清净中找寻生命的惊喜，用舌苔去品味人生的淡远幽香。

带上味蕾去旅行，我们不仅是味道的搜寻者，而且是味道的品味者，更是味道的创造者。每探寻到一种味道，我们便珍藏一份记忆，收获一份经验，更萌生诸多感悟，从而用心地积累，用耐心与努力熬制出属于自己的美味，创造出属于自己的人生味道。

苦涩是根，清淡是茎，花朵散发的是清香。让我们把清淡当作人生的底味，加以香甜、苦涩与酸辣调配，这是旅行的收获，我们一路采撷，满载而归。

名师点评：这篇文章有几大成功之处，一，开头简练，妙用比喻，直接点题；二，从几个方面写生活的味道，举例精当，论证充分；三，结尾呼应开头，自然升华主题，结构完美；四，语言简洁生动，句式、修辞的采用使文章更加文质兼美。推荐大家去欣赏、评鉴。

[带上味蕾去旅行高中作文

夜晚，皓月当空，星星对我眨着眼睛，月亮对我微笑，看着美丽的星空，真想飞上天去太空旅行了。

突然，天上电闪雷鸣，一道金光照着我，我兴奋地说：“哇!!飞碟!”快带我去太空吧!飞碟的们打开了，金光把我吸进飞碟里面。

飞碟起飞了，越过了摩天大厦，越飞越高，进入了太空，我看见了星星，好想装一颗带到地球去，可是我一碰它就从我的手指尖溜走了。

飞碟把我带到了一个不知名的星球，外星人走过来说：“欢迎你来到A星球。”奇怪，外星人怎么会说地球话呢?看着我迷惑不解地样子，他自豪地说：“我们发明了一种语言交流器，可以说各种不同星球的语言。

外星人把我带到他们的公园，那里的溪水清澈见底，鱼儿地球上的不一样，只有一只眼睛;风一吹，鸟语花香，绿树成荫。我们的地球树木被砍伐了，河水污染严重，鱼儿无法生存，地球和A星球真是天壤之别。

外星人把我带到餐厅，这里的食物应有尽有，而且还能根据自己的喜好变形，变色，变味。按红色按钮会出现一杯热乎乎的牛奶，按绿色按钮，会出现一杯冰镇果汁，每一个座位上有一个按钮，一按就会出现一个机器人为我服务。

享受完美味佳肴，我来到奇异动物园，那里动物很奇怪，羊头长在狗头上，虎头长在鸟头上，孔雀的羽毛长在乌鸦身上，而且这些动物都可以和人类交谈，好奇妙!

不知不觉该回家了，望着美丽的A星球，我恋恋不舍，这时，一阵凉风吹过把我吹醒了，原来时幻想，但我相信，不久将来就能乘飞船去太空做客呢!

I havent write diaries for a period of time. I am now writing this just want to remember one thing. My study has fallen behind a lot this term. I can keep my score in the top ten in the whole school ranking before. But this term I fall behind. I nearly draw back to fifty. I know the reason is because I am too arrogant. I think I can be the best without studying hard. So I usually not pay too much attention on my study. When I find myself lag behind, I comfort myself it is accident. I have learnt a serious lesson this time. So, I want to write it down to warn myself.

我已经有一段时间没有写日记了。我现在写这篇日记只是想要记住一件事。这个学期我的学业落后了很多。我成绩之前可以保持在全校前十名。但这个学期我后退了。我差点就退到了五十名了。我知道原因是我太自大了。我觉得我不努力学习也可以保持最好。所以我一般都不怎么在意我的学习。当我发现自己落后时，我安慰自己只是意外。这一次我吸取了深刻的教训。所以，我想把它写下来以此警示着我。

[Dear Diary我的日记高中英语作文

For most people， they will choose to travel during holiday because they want to relieve themselves from the high pressure of work。 However， it happens quite often that people often ran into traffic jams on the way to travel。 Some people think that we can relax ourselves by traveling no matter of how many people there。 Some people would rather to stay in home than going out to travel because they think there are too many people swarm into the scenic spots。 In my point of view， I would rather to stay indoors rather than going out to travel。 Reasons are listed below。

Firstly， during holiday， so many people swarm into the travel spots that we can’t enjoy ourselves to the full。 For most people， they want to travel because during holiday， they can have several days to relieve themselves by traveling。 However， so many people crowd together will make their tour lose the original fun。

Secondly， during holiday， price will be rising drastically。 It is known to all that you need to spend much more to buy things or taking bus or any other transportation since many retailers will raise goods’ price during this holiday to get fat profits。

All in all， travel during holiday is not a good choice for us since its inconvenience in traveling among a huge crowd of people and also the dramatically high price for goods and transportations will let us pay extra money。

Hello, everyone. I’m am a student in No.1 Middle School. I’m very proud that I have been chosen to speak to you all today.How to protect/save our environment/world?

The environmental pollution is worse and worse /more and more seriously today. Water is polluted ,we have no clean water to drink Many trees are cutting down, some animals is getting less and less.Some factories is poring dirty air in the sky , the population is increasing faster and faster ,resources is getting less and less…etc. Not only does it affect our lives and health, it also has a great affection in the future.

The first fact I worry about is noise pollution. People can"t sleep well if there is too much noise. That"s why so many people prefer to live in the countryside rather than live in the noisy city. I suggest all the factories and cars shouldn"t make terrible noises. If they make terrible noise that isn"t allowed, they will be fined, and we can also produce the cars which can"t make terrible noise.

The other pollution is rubbish pollution. If everyone makes so much rubbish, one day we may live in a world filled with rubbish. Some people throw the waste paper about. I suggest rubbish should be put into different kinds of dustbins or paper bags.

[高中保护环境的英语作文

Travel is beneficial to us in at least three ways. First, by traveling we can enjoy the beautiful scenery in different places. We will see with our own eyes many places read of in books, and visit some famous cities and scenic spots.

Second, we will meet people with different interests and see strange and different things when we travel. We can get ideas of the conditions and customs of other people, taste different foods and local flavours if we like. In this way, we can understand how differently other people live.

Third, travel will not only help us to gain knowledge of geography and history and other knowledge, which will arouse our deep love for our motherland, but also will help us keep healthy and make u s less narrow-minded . Travel does benefit us both mentally and physically .

With all these advantages of travel, it is no wonder that travel has now become more popular than ever in China.

旅游有利于我们至少在三个方面。首先,通过旅游我们可以享受美丽的风景在不同的地方。我们用自己的眼睛会看到许多地方阅读的书籍,并参观一些著名的城市和景点。

第二,我们将与不同的利益和满足人们看到奇怪的和不同的东西,当我们旅行。我们可以得到别人的条件和海关的想法,如果我们喜欢品尝不同的食物和地方风味。通过这种方式,我们可以了解不同的人。

第三,旅游不仅能帮助我们获得的地理和历史知识和其他知识,这将激发我们热爱我们的祖国,还可以帮助我们保持身体健康和减少美国心胸狭窄。旅行的好处我们无论在心理上还是身体上。

与所有这些旅行的好处,难怪旅游现在已经成为在中国比以往更受欢迎。

高考英语作文需要将有自己的想法，并且掌握好写作的方法，这样英语才能得到高分。

1、审题：审题是做到切题的第一步。所谓审题就是要看清题意，确定文章的中心思想、主题，并围绕中心思想组织材料。

2、进行构思，列出简单的提纲，打造文章之骨架：审好题、立好意后，就要写提纲，打造文章的骨架。文章布局要做好几件事：安排好层次段落，铺设好过渡，处理好开头和结尾。

3、扩展成文：根据字数多少扩展成篇。扩展的内容一定要紧扣主题，千万不要写那些与主题不相关的内容。展开的方式包括：顺序法、举例法、比较法、对比法、说明法、因果法、推导法、归纳法和下定义等。可以根据需要任选一种或几种方式。

在这一步骤中还需注意三方面问题：

1)确保提纲中段落结构的思路与各段主题句的一致性。只有这样，才能保证所写段落不偏题、不跑题。

2)要综合考虑各个段落的内容安排，避免段落内容的交叉。

3)用好连接词，注意段落间、句子间的连贯性。要做到所写文章层次分明，思路清晰，文字连贯，就需要在句与句之间、段与段之间架起一座座桥梁，而连接词起的正是桥梁作用。

在扩展的过程中也有些窍门，以下几点可供参考：

1)在整篇文章中，避免只是用一两个句式或重复用同一词语。英语中存在着极为丰富的同义词，准确地使用同义词可以给读者清新的感觉。同时要灵活运用各种句式，如倒装句、强调句、省略句、主从复合句、对比句、分词短语、介词短语等，从而增加文章的可读性。

2)使用不同长度的句子。如果一个意思用一句话写不清楚的话，通过分句和合句或用两句、三句来表达，增强句子的连贯性和表现力。

3)改变句子的开头方式，不要总是以主、谓、宾、状的次序。可以把状语至于句首，或用分词等。

4)学会使用过渡词。

(1) 递进furthermore，moreover，besides，in addition，then，etc

(2) 转折however，but，nevertheless，afterwards，etc

(3) 总结finally，at last，in brief，to conclude，etc

(4) 强调really，indeed，certainly，surely，above a11，etc

(5) 对比in the same way，just as，on the other hand，etc

5)确定文章用第几人称写，基本时态是什么。使用人称时人物不能张冠李戴或指代不明。

时态要尽量保持一致。

4、检查修改：要检查复核，不要写完了事。

要留时间通读全文，修改可能出现的错误。检查上下文是否连贯，句子衔接是否自然流畅。检验的标准主要是句子是否通畅，该用连词的地方用了没有，所用的连词是否合适，是否有语法错误，主谓是否一致，动词的时态、语态、语气的使用是否正确，词组的搭配是否合乎习惯，是否有大小写、拼写、标点错误等，还有就是注意卷面整洁。

可归纳为：中心突出，主题明确;层次清楚，条理清晰; 表达力强，传情达意;语句通顺，句型多变;过渡自然，衔接紧凑;标点正确，大小无误;字迹清楚，卷面整洁。

高中英语写作常用开头句型

1.As far as …is concerned 就……而言

2.It goes without saying that… 不言而喻，…

3.It can be said with certainty that… 可以肯定地说……

4.As the proverb says， 正如谚语所说的，

5.It has to be noticed that… 它必须注意到，…

6.Its generally recognized that… 它普遍认为…

7.Its likely that … 这可能是因为…

8.Its hardly that… 这是很难的……

9.Its hardly too much to say that… 它几乎没有太多的说…

10.What calls for special attention is that…需要特别注意的是

11.Theres no denying the fact that…毫无疑问，无可否认

12.Nothing is more important than the fact that… 没有什么比这更重要的是…

13.whats far more important is that… 更重要的是…

My sister is Alice. She is very lovely. She has long hair .Her hobby is flying kites. She likes collecting stamps too. Her favourite fruit is apples. She likes noodles very much.

She is a good girl. She often helps her mother do the housework. She is very kind. She has many friends in her school. She likes riding bikes with me. This is my sister. I love her very much.

我想，一个人背起行囊，穿越多伦多最美的春天。

——题记

从小我就是一个爱旅行的人，总喜欢看旅游卫视，喜欢听有关旅游的一切。喜欢三毛，喜欢浪游，去每一个陌生的城市，听陌生的歌，看陌生的风景，对每一个陌生人微笑，然后站在落日后的黄昏中，看天光向晚，云多次第。对我而言，只有走在路上，心才不会寂寞。所以我会不停行走，去寻找我的梦中天堂。

布拉格的第一场雪，布鲁塞尔喧嚣而空洞的机场，上海黄昏的天空和外滩发黄的外墙，阿里一尘不染的蓝天，普兰干净明媚的阳光，苏州深远悠扬的暮鼓晨钟，东京飘零绚烂的樱花，普罗旺斯浪漫唯美的薰衣草，札幌的最后一班地铁……所有的一切我都向往着，期待着……

梦中我成了一位流浪诗人，带着梦想和信仰去流浪。从爱琴海沿岸到斯堪的纳维亚翻山越岭去寻找我的梦中天堂。骑一匹马，穿过波德平原，听见肖邦的钢琴在暗夜里哭泣，那深沉的莱茵河里流逝了多少旋律；波恩巷，二七二号，墨绿色的窗，看到贝多芬在里面弹月光。亚得里亚海酒红色的晨光里，行吟诗人用爱尔兰语，唱一首古老的歌谣。穿过塞尔维亚的小巷，路过一片金色向日葵盛开的田野，想起梵高和莫扎特，干净而清澈地布拉格黄昏的广场，许愿池里的金币闪闪发光……我仿佛看见在春光明媚的苏格兰乡下，充满矢菊香气的阳光铺满整个房间，鹅毛笔在厚质纸上轻轻地摩擦，桌旁的咖啡袅袅地散发着热气，我正在提笔写下苏格兰温暖的春天。

游过成都，到过昆明，每一个城市都是一个印记，诉说着一个又一个不同的故事。看当地传统的民俗表演，游览风光旖旎的旅游圣地，品尝当地最负盛名的美食，与外国人交流几句英语，和陌生人一起围绕着篝火跳舞，让火光映衬着彼此微笑的脸，突然间才发现，生活竟可以如此简单，简单的快乐。

布拉格广场，夕阳穿透歌德式教堂彩绘的玻璃窗；潺潺流动的多瑙河，清澈的河水倒映者的波光。身未动，心已远。沿途的风景不会定格，我不会停留，因为梦想在远方。

我有预感，有一天我将随着铁轨流浪，那轨道蜿蜒去的远方，是我无尽的梦想。梦想，远方爱尔兰的翡翠岛灌输我绿色的血液，撒哈拉的风将抚摸我的脸庞，弯曲的密西西比河是夜里曲折的小道，而我将永远睡在巴厘岛松软的沙滩上，享受蓝天白云，海枫轻抚，最后融合入瓦特西玫瑰色的晨曦中，不再醒来……

[眼睛想旅行高中优秀作文

When the young people start their career, they will do everything to get

the chance to help their career to make breakthrough, such as follow the

business rules. They choose to drink as much as possible, which is over the

limitation of their bodies. The coming wealth is based on the loss of health.

The media reported the news about how the young people died of drinking a lot of

alcohol. Their ambition made them to undertake the limitation. As a result, they

died at the young age. There is no doubt that health overweighs wealth. If a

rich people didnt have a sound body, how he can enjoy life. A man who has been

badly ill will take special attention to the health. No matter how much money he

is paid, he will turn down the invitation that hurts his body.