精选高考英语作文常用语句合集3篇 作文精选20篇

假定你是李华，正是英国牛津参加短期语言培训，计划星期天去伦敦旅游。互联网上一则广告引起了你的注意，但一些具体信息不明确(箭头所指内容)。请给该旅行社发一封电子邮件，询问有关情况。

注意：

1.词数100左右，信的格式已为你写好。

2.可根据内容要点适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

3.参考词汇：牛津——Oxford 费用——fee

Dear Sir/Madame,

I’m writing for more information about the day tour to London.

As a student at Oxford University, I’d like to know if you have any special price for students. As for the money you charge, does it cover the entrance fees for visiting the places listed? What about lunch? Is it included? Or do I need to bring along my own food?

How long will the tour last? Since I need to prepare my lessons for the next day, I’d like to know the time to return. Besides, is there any time for shopping? I really want to have a look at the big stores in London.

Yours,

Li Hua

尊敬的先生/女士，

我写的更多的信息，在伦敦的一日游。

作为牛津大学的一名学生，我想知道你是否对学生有特殊的价格。至于你所收取的钱，它是否包括了所列地方的入场费？午饭怎么样？是否包括？还是我需要带上我自己的食物？

巡演将持续多久？既然我需要准备第二天的功课，我想知道的时间可以返回。再说，还有没有时间去购物？我真的很想看看伦敦的大商店。

你的，

李华

[高考英语满分作文：伦敦一日游

The majority of people would agree that cigarette smoking has caused serious problems. But the tobacco companies insist that they contribute greatly to the world economy by paying taxes to the government and employing hundreds of workers.

Personally, I believe that cigarette production and consumption threatens to do more harm than good. Firstly, smoking is responsible for many fatal diseases such as lung cancer, heart diseases and so on. According to the survey, tobacco consumers account for about 20% of the world population, and among them, three million people die from smoking-related diseases every year. The fact that the output of tobacco production is reduced from 143.64 billion pounds in 1994 to 142 billion pounds in 1995 also suggests that people have come to realize the negative effects of smoking. Secondly, tobacco consumption is extremely wasteful of money. As is indicated in the pictures, 200 billion US dollars is lost due to smoking each year. Obviously, the total loss of money around the globe substantially exceeds the gain in the industry.

In conclusion, as the economic development aims at making our life better, we cannot sacrifice our health for short-term financial benefits. If we have to spend more and more money providing medical services for those who suffer from smoking-related illnesses, the notion of promoting economy via tobacco production is not justifiable. It is high time that we fought for the total tobacco ban.

大多数人认为吸烟引起了严重的问题。但烟草公司坚持认为,他们为世界经济带来很大的纳税,政府和雇佣数百名工人。

就我个人而言,我认为香烟生产和消费可能弊大于利。首先,吸烟是负责许多致命的疾病,如肺癌,心脏病等等。据调查,烟草消费者约占世界人口的20%,其中,每年有三百万人死于和吸烟有关的疾病。烟草生产的产量是降低1436.4亿年从1436.4亿年的1994磅到1436.4亿磅也表明,人们已经意识到吸烟的负面影响。其次,烟草消费是非常浪费钱。图片所示,2000亿美元每年损失是由于吸烟。显然,全球资金的总损失大大超过业内获得。

总之,随着经济发展旨在使我们的生活更好,我们不能为了短期的经济利益而牺牲我们的健康。如果我们花越来越多的钱为那些遭受吸烟有关的疾病提供医疗服务,促进经济的概念通过烟草生产是不合理的。是时候,我们争取总烟草禁令。

Dear zhuanghua ,

It’s three months since I heard from you last time . Now I want to tell you

an impressive story happening on my first lesson .

On hearing the bell students ran into the classroom as quickly as they

could. But a boy ,LIMing , whose father died a month ago , was late for the

class. He stood outside the classroom silently . I smiled to him and let him

come in. After a while ,he cried on his desk . Then I walked to him and asked

what had happened . He told me that his mother was ill and he had to take some

medicine for her . At the same time ,he apologized to me for his lateness .

Moved by his words , I praised him for his deeds and decided to sing a song

named “mother” for the students . How time flies ! Class was over before I

realized it .

From the story I felt we should respect our parents and do our best to help

them . Do you think so ? I’m looking forward to your reply .

Yours truly ,

Li Hong

从每年的考试情况来看，很多同学能完整地按照要求把文章写出来，但得分却较低。实际上，高考英语书面表达是一个分值颇高且易得分的题型，只是很多同学没有掌握得分技巧。下面我们一起看看怎样才能让高考作文“拽”起来。

一、几点重要原则

1.智者利用押题，傻子依赖押题!

2.书面表达整篇背诵绝无必要，可以以看读为主，关键是从中汲取一些常用的词汇和表达，并能得体熟练地运用。考场上应变能力很重要!

3.英文写作模仿很重要。有时也很有效。但不能过于牵强，尤其是对一些长难句的刻意模仿使用。

4.文似看山不喜平，起承转合一定要有!

5.“见微知著，一叶知秋”，几个亮点足矣：有道是：浓妆淡抹总相宜，作文写得简洁到位要比长篇大论更显功力。

6.心不为形役。不要身陷逐字逐句“英汉对号”式的字面翻译，要把表达的主动权始终握在自己手里。

二、善用万能句以不变应万变

历届高考，书面表达考得最多是提示作文，即提供一定的情景内容，要求考生完成100词左右的短文。

从命题方式看，有短文提示、要点提示、图画提示、情景提示以及图表提示等；体裁以应用文为主，记叙文为辅：题材为广大中学生所熟悉的日常生活。从提供要点的情景方面看，历届高考书面表达题均属供料小作文，采用文字供料或文字说明加图画(图表)的方式供料。

备考时，同学们要利用有限的时间把以前背的范文整理一下，从中选出不同体裁、不同题材的范文各一篇(范文以高考真题的高分作文为佳)，把它们重新记忆，一定记牢。这样，高考时不管什么样的文章都可套用背诵好的格式。避免考场上因紧张而无章可循。

最后阶段，还要总结一下写作时常用且能出彩的固定句型、句式，比如强调句型、定语从句、名诃性从句等，牢记英语的五个基本句式，背诵平时老师总结的万能句。以不变应万变。

考场答题前，应仔细审题，研究所提供的文字和图画(图表)材料和作文要求。分析、提炼要点，理顺要点，确立基本的写作思路，不要忽略任何一个词。关键的词更不能遗漏，构思好写几个方面，缺一不可。

写作时，尽量用学过的英语句型和词组。少写长句和复杂句以免弄巧成拙、漏洞百出。但目前高考有关书面表达的评分标准要求作文中应有“较多的语法结构和词汇”，因此同学们在书面表达中不能都写小句、短句和单句，还要正确运用高级词汇和复杂结构。恰当运用过渡词，使写出来的文章含金量更高，更具可读性。

三、高分作文六大特性

1.条理性。指的是合理安排文章结构。首先，在文章思路、组织材料、叙述顺序等方面要有一定的条理性。其次。根据需要，安排好段落，各段之间要层次分明，也要重视每一段的开头和结尾，开头语往往是总起句，结尾语往往是总结句。

2.准确性。指要求写出语法正确的句子，包括时态、语态、用词和句法等，要准确、地道地表达。必须要牢牢掌握一些常用句型或习惯表达，避免中式英语，在实践中不断总结中英用法的差异，养成用英语思维写作的习惯。

3.流畅性。指根据整篇文章思想的需要，有效采用不同的连接手段，使文章层次清楚、行文连贯。

4.简洁多样性。简洁性就是语言简洁，不重复。多样性就是能随情景内容的变化写出句式多样的语句。这也是新课程标准对写作的评价标准。

5.思想性。新标准对写作的要求，增加了情感因素，在准确流畅表达写作要点的同时，适当增加句子的感情色彩，增加一些人情味，使文章读起来更亲切，完全达到与读者进行交流的目的。

6.美观性。指的是卷面书写规范、清楚、干净、整洁。

四、怎样才能有‘拽”的感觉

1.高考写作的实质——变相考查句型与词汇的灵活应用

英语写作不同于语文作文的写作，如果说语文作文是一个自由发挥的舞蹈，那么高考英语写作就是带着枷锁在跳舞。我之所以这样来形容，是因为高考英语写作的内容都已经通过文字、表格、图片这三种形式给定，内容方面，不需要学生进行发挥，大家所需要发挥的就是不要老去给这个不变的内容穿毫无变化的校服(简单句)，而要去穿一些不一样的衣服，让它显得不那么单调，让阅卷老师能看到不同，而那些所谓的衣服也就是多变句型与词汇。

2.写作的评分标准——怎么去迎合评卷老师的胃口

我了解到目前很大一部分学生的作文都处在15分左右，写作满分25分，15分也就是个及格分，那么15分和20多分的作文到底差在哪里?这个问题很容易回答。15分的作文中规中矩，该对的都对，包括内容要点的完整，语法与词形的正确，但是全都是简单句子的堆砌，没有任何亮点。而20多分的作文在句型词汇方面就做了很好的包装，它的句子穿的衣服已经不是校服，而是李宁、耐克，或者是阿迪，所以让人觉得很“拽”，而高考英语写作要的就是这种很“拽”的感觉。

3.写作提分的三要素——句型。连词。高级词汇

句子是我们写作文最大的单位。有了漂亮的句子。用好的连词将其连句成段，再加上一些如星星般亮点词汇的点缀，一篇好的高考英语作文就诞生了。而这三个因素中最容易把握的是句子，最难的是高级词汇，限于大家的词汇还比较有限。一篇文章中出现那么一两个就够了。我们应该把重心放在句型上，因为这个最容易把握。

但是大家又有这样的困惑，学校里老师也给了我们很多的句型啊，动辄成五十上百句的，大家背得挺多，但是面对考试的时候，发现背的那些怎么也用不上。其实不是那些东西没有用，而是它们太干了，就好比一根干骨头，大家嚼起来很没有味。也不知道该把它们往哪里放。

在这里我给大家提供一种比较切实可行、迅速提高的练习方法，在接下来的时间里只要大家按照这个方法来，就一定会有收获。

找出历年真题，一周只需要写两篇。但是要这么来写。

1.把你要写的内容要点用九到十句的汉语表达出来。

2.逐一地进行翻译，不是用简单句。而是要刻意地去想：

(1)可以用什么样的复杂句；

(2)怎样去避开不会的表达，转义。

例如：

这本书是如此的有趣，以至于我读了一遍又一遍。

1.This book was so interest，ing that l read it again and again，

2.This was such an interest，ing book that l read it again andagain，

3.This was s0 jnteresting abook that l read it again and a—gain

4.So interesting was thisbook that l read it again and a—gain

这四句译文当中无疑评卷老师最欣赏的是第四句，因为它用了倒装。

4.如何备考

其实这种思维大家都有。但是没有成为一种思路，让它能在考试中起到作用，那是因为大家练得少。英语写作处在一种很尴尬的境地，一方面大家要分数。但另外一方面大家一个学期里写的作文也就是期中期末的两篇。毫不夸张地说，有的学生上了三年的高中可能只写了六篇作文，所以练习是很重要的，要是现在不练而把高考当练习。那么作文只拿14、15分也合情合理了，到那时你不要骂评卷老师不公平，而应该问问自己备考的时候为什么不多练几篇。时间都是挤出来的，希望大家可以挤出时间来练写作。

The important of readingIt is certain that reading is so important. First of all, without reading you cant even speak logically. It is also ridiculous that you dont read but learning english. Just for speaking? In my opinion sooner or later you have to read and try to comprehend.

There are variety of benefit for reading. If you read, you can widen your vocabulary.With consistent reading you may speak logically and write easily for anyting. And also if you read aloud per day, your pronounciation will be improved and be used to the language. Reading can improve your comprehension. With reading many books you become wiser,because the only method of learning from past which is called history is reading.

阅读的重要肯定阅读是如此重要。首先,没有阅读你甚至不能讲逻辑。这也是可笑的,你不读,但学习英语。只是为了说话吗?在我看来迟早你必须阅读并试图理解。

有各种各样的阅读中受益。如果你读,你可以扩大你的词汇量。与一致的阅读你可能很容易讲逻辑,写出去的。和如果你每天大声朗读,发音将改进和使用语言。阅读可以提高你的理解力。阅读很多书你变得更明智,因为唯一的学习方法从过去被称为历史是阅读。

People say that self-confidence is half of the success that can bring you courage to stick to what you do. Without self-confidence, one can not do well in anything. Self-confidence is of great importance and value to a person.

人们说自信是成功的一半，它能给你带来勇气去坚持你所做的事。没有自信，一个人就不能做好任何事。自信对一个人很重要也很有价值。

Firstly, self-confidence enables us to have the ambition of being successful. Only when you have the ambition to be successful, can you be successful eventually. Secondly, once we gain self-confidence, we will possess the courage and strength to overcome the setbacks and difficulties. With self-confidence, no one and nothing can stop you to success.Thirdly, with self-confidence we may accomplish something which seems to be impossible previously. No great thing is easy for us, therefore we should hold the idea that anything is possible. We should, or have to trust in ourselves.

首先，自信使我们拥有成功的雄心。只有当你有成功的野心的时候，你最后才能成功。其次，一旦我们获得了自信，我们就拥有了勇气和力量去克服挫折和困难。有了自信，没有人也没有什么能够阻止你成功。再次，有了自信我们可能实现一些以前看起来不可能的事。没有什么大事对我们是容易的，因此我们应该相信一切皆有可能。我们应该，或者必须相信自己。

In short, self-confidence is the spiritual pillar of a person as well as the inherent power, which is of great importance and value to a person.

总之，自信是一个人的精神支柱也是一个人的内在力量，它对一个人很重要也很有价值。

中考英语作文怎么写更能吸引别人呢?下面是语文迷网小编为大家带的方法技巧，一起来看看吧。

一、怎样写好文章的开头

开头是作文在阅卷老师面前的第一次亮相，它将决定你所写的文章在阅卷老师心中所留下的第一印象。如果第一印象好，就意味着有了良好的开端，也就成功了一半。Good beginning is half done，我们该怎样一提起笔就让自己成功一半呢?

(一)“开门见山”式开头

一般来说，文章的开头应尽量做到“开门见山”，即要用简单明了的语言引出文章的话题，使人一开始就能了解文章要说明的内容。

1. 对于叙事类的文章，可以在开头把人物、时间、事件和环境交代清楚。如“A Trip to Huangshan(黄山之旅)”的开头可以是：Last month, my family went to Huangshan by train. It took us ten hours to get there. What a long and tiring journey! We were tired but the beautiful scenery excited us.

2. 对于论述性的文章，可以在开头处先阐明自己的观点，接着展开进一步的论述。如“The Time and the Money(时间和金钱)” 的开头可以是：Most people say that money is more important than time. But I don’t think so. First, when money is used up, you can earn it back， but……

(二)回忆性开头

在描述事件或游记类的文章中，采用回忆性的开头往往更能吸引人的眼球。这种类型的开头中通常含有描述自己心情或情绪的词汇，如never forget (永远无法忘记), remember (记得)，unforgettable (难以忘怀的), exciting(令人激动的)，surprising(令人惊讶的), sad (难过的)……如“A Trip to Huangshan(黄山之旅)”的开头还以这样写：I will never forget my first trip to Huangshan. 或It was really an unforgettable experience I had.

(三)疑问性开头

在叙事类或论述性的文章中，都可采用疑问型开头，这样既可以吸引阅卷者的注意又容易抓住中心。如“Planting Trees(种树)”的开头可以是：Have you ever planted trees? Don’t you think planting trees is ……

再如“Traveling Abroad(出国之旅)”的开头可以是：If you have an opportunity to travel abroad, why not consider Singapore?

(四)倒叙式开头

在有的文章，特别是叙事类的文章中，可以采用倒叙的写作手法，先写出事件的结果，再陈述过程。如“Catching Thieves (捉贼)”的开头可以这样写：I lay in bed in the hospital. I smiled at my friends even though my legs hurt. Do you want to know what happened to me? Let me tell you. It’s a … story.

二、怎样写好文章的结尾

文章的结尾没有固定的模式，同学们可以根据表达主题的需要灵活创造。一般情况下，记叙文和说明文经常采用自然结尾的方法;但夹叙夹议和发表观点类的文章则往往有结束语，以使文章首尾呼应，结构完整。文章结尾的形式也因文章类别和开头的风格而灵活多变。

(一)自然结尾，点明主题

随着文章的结束，文章自然而然地结尾。如“Helping the Policeman(帮助警察)”的结尾可以是：The two children were praised by the police and they felt happy.

再如“The Tortoise and the Hare(龟兔赛跑)” 的结尾可以是：When the hare got to the tree, the tortoise had already been there。

(二)首尾呼应，升华主题

在文章的结尾可以用含义较深的话点明主题，深化主题，起到“画龙点睛”的效果。如“I Love My Hometown(我爱家乡)”的结尾可以是：I love my hometown, and I am proud of it.

(三)反问结尾，引起深思

这种方式的结尾虽然形式是问句，但意义却是肯定的，而且具有一定的强调作用，可引起他人的深思。如 “Learning English can Give us a Lot of Pleasure (学英语能为我们带来许多乐趣)” 的结尾可以是：If we learn English well, we can …Don’t you think learning English is great fun?

(四)表达祝愿，阐述愿望

这种方式的结尾常出现在书信或演讲稿的文体中，表示对他人的祝福或对将来的展望等。如“A Letter to the Farmers(给农民们的一封信)”的结尾可以是：I hope the farmers’ life will be better and better.

另外，书信的结尾常有以下形式的祝福语：Best wishes;I wish you a merry Christmas and a happy new year;I wish you have a good time等。

1.It is important for everyone to learn English well in our rapidly developing world.

在这个迅速发展的世界里，对每个人来说，学好英语是非常重要的。

2.The harder you work at it, the more progress you will make.

你工作越努力，你取得的进步就越大。

3.If everyone makes a contribution to protecting the environment, the world will become much more beautiful.

如果每个人都为保护环境做出贡献，世界会变得更加美好。

4.The best way to remember new words is to practice them everyday.

记忆新单词最好的方法是每天操练这些单词。

5.The atmosphere in my family is fantastic

我的家庭气氛温馨和睦。

6.The reason why people choose to live in the city is that the life is more convenient and colorful.

人们为什么选择生活在城市的原因是因为城市的生活更方便、更多彩。

7.I had a great first impression of American people.

我对美国人民有了很好的第一印象。

8.We have lots of confidence in our ability to solve any problem.

我们对自己解决问题的能力有足够的信心。

9.With the rapid development of modern technology, the Internet has become a necessary part of our daily life and work.

随着现代科技的迅速发展，互联网已经成为生活和工作中必不可少的一部分。

10.You should read as many books as you possibly can.

大家应该尽可能的多读书。

中考英语满分作文： Talking about Having Sports 谈论运动

David： Susan, you like sports, don’t you?

Susan： Yes. I have sports every afternoon.

David： Do you often go swimming?

Susan： Yes, I go swimming once a week.

David： I used to swim at middle school, but I don’t have time any more.

Susan： That’s too bad! Exercise is very important.

David： I know. I am getting fat, you see. Anyway, I don’t want to be heavy.

Susan： Well, I’m going to swim this afternoon. Do you want to go with me?

David： OK! I really need more exercises. When and where shall we meet?

Susan： How about three o’clock, at the swimming-pool?

David： All right. Good-bye!

Susan： Good-bye!

大卫:苏珊,你喜欢运动,不是吗?

苏珊:是的。我每天下午进行体育活动。

大卫:你经常去游泳吗?

苏珊:是的,我每周去游泳一次。

大卫:我曾经在中学游泳,但我现在没有时间。

苏珊:那太糟了!锻炼是非常重要的。

大卫:我知道。我变胖了,你看到的。无论如何,我不想重。

苏珊:嗯,我今天下午去游泳。你想和我一起去吗?

大卫:好的!我需要更多练习。我们何时何地见面?

苏珊:三点,在游泳池吗?

大卫:好的。再见!

苏珊:再见!

高考英语满分作文:志愿者申请 Volunteer Application

书面表达： 假设你的名字是李华，亚洲冬季运动会将在你居住的地方举办，现招募志愿者。你希望成为志愿者。申请信的格式已经写好了，你直接写内容就可以。你的个人情况：年龄性别学历，个人条件。英语好，爱好体育，擅长交际，乐于助人。承诺提供最佳服务。字数100左右。

范文：

I was quite excited when I heard the Asian Winter Games will be held in the city I live. My name is Li Hua. I am an 18-year-old boy student in a senior middle school. And I want to be a volunteer for the games. I like English and sports very much. I like making friends and I am ready to help others. I can be a good interpreter in every sports during the time. Hope the games will be a great success. Hope I will be chosen to be one. Thanks. Li Hua

当我听说冬季奥运会将在我的城市里举行，我感到非常兴奋。我的名字是李华。我是一个高中学生，一个18岁的男孩。我想做一名志愿者。我非常喜欢英语和体育。我喜欢交朋友，我随时准备帮助别人。我可以做一个好的翻译，在每一个体育的时间。希望奥运会取得巨大的成功。希望我会被选为一个。谢谢李华

满分作文 时间是宝贵的 THE VALUE OF TIME

I always think there is not enough time. For example, I have just taken a three-day holiday. But when I look back, I just feel that it’s only one day. There goes a proverb, “Time is money”. Now I want to say, time is more precious than money, because when money is spent, we can earn some more again. However, when time is gone or lost, never will it return.

我总是认为没有足够的时间。例如，我刚拍了三天假。但当我回头看时，我只是觉得它只是一天。俗话说“时间就是金钱”。现在我想说的是，时间比金钱更宝贵，因为当钱花了，我们可以再挣一些。但是，当时间消失或失去，永远不会返回。

Time goes without being noticed. The time for our study and work is usually limited. So I think we must make full use of our time. But it’s a pity that I am always not aware of the importance of time until it’s too late.

时间不被注意。我们学习和工作的时间通常是有限的。所以我认为我们必须充分利用我们的时间。但遗憾的是，我始终没有意识到时间的重要性，直到为时已晚。

So I think, I should get into the good habit of saving time because wasting time is equal to wasting one’s life. Do not put off what can be done today till tomorrow!

所以我想，我应该养成节约时间的好习惯，因为浪费时间等于浪费生命。不要把今天能做的事拖到明天！

高考英语满分作文 My Friend

作文一：

Zhang Dong is my best friend. He entered our class last semester. He is a boy. Both of us are good at English, so we often have a chat in English in our spare time. After school, we often play football together on the playground. He runs so fast that I can not catch up with him. He is an excellent student. He not only gets good marks in all subjects but also is very kind and modest. He loves popular songs and also classical music.

There are three people in his family and he is the only child. His father is a doctor and his mother is a Beijing Opera actress. Though Zhang Dongs family is wealthy, he is usually simply dressed. He has a dream which is to be a lawyer.

Such is my friend, a clever and kind boy. He is highly praised by the teachers and students.

张东是我最好的朋友。他是上学期来我们班的，他是个男孩。我们两个人都擅长英语，因此我们经常在课余时间用英语聊天。放学后，我们经常在操场上踢足球。他跑得特别快，我追不上他。他是个优秀的学生，他不但各科功课好而且很友善、谦虚。他喜欢流行音乐，也喜欢古典音乐。

他家有三口人，他是独生子。父亲是个医生，母亲是个京剧演员。尽管张东家境比较富裕，但是他的穿着却十分朴素。他有一个梦想，就是将来当个律师。

这就是我的朋友，一个聪明、友好的男孩。老师和同学们都喜欢他。

作文二：

Zhang Dong is my best friend. He is a boy. Both of us are good at English, so we often have a chat in English in our spare time. Besides,football is our favourite sport. We like watching football match. Zhang Dong works hard at his lessons. He often studies late into the night. No matter how tired he is, he insists on doing his homework. So he gets good marks in all his subjects. He loves popular songs and classical music, too.

There are three people in his family and he is the only child. His father is a doctor and his mother is a Beijing Opera actress. Though Zhang Dongs family is wealthy, he is usually simply dressed. He dreams of being a lawyer in the future.

Such is my friend, a clever and kind boy. I highly value the friendship with him.

张东是我最要好的朋友，他是个男孩。我们两个人都擅长英语，因此我们经常在课余时间用英语聊天。此外，我们两人都喜欢足球，爱看足球赛。张东学习很努力，他经常学习到深夜。不管他多么累，他都坚持完成他的功课，所以他各科功课都很好。他喜欢流行音乐，也喜欢古典音乐。

他家有三口人，他是独生子。父亲是个医生，母亲是个京剧演员。尽管张东家境比较富裕，但是他的穿着却十分朴素。他梦想将来当个律师。

这就是我的朋友，一个聪明、友好的男孩。我珍视同他之间的友谊。

高考英语作文满分范文背诵14 关于照片展示的新闻报道 A news report on the photo show.

A news report on the photo show.

关于照片展示的新闻报道

A photo show WuHan 4th Middle School HuBei. Early May a photo show was held in our school. It was a great success. All the photoes were taken by students themselves. There were black-white and color photoes visitig ourclass life, the beautiful nature, festival activities and so on. All the works are well on show in the reading room on the third floor. Everyday a large number of students went to enjoy ad they were surprised to find that the pictures were so wonderful. Those whole photoes were chosen the best or given an expected prices. In sure, this photo show really made our life colorful.

湖北武汉第四中学的照片展示。五月初，我们学校举办了照片展示的活动。活动取得了成功。所有的照片都是学生自己拍摄的。有黑白照，彩色照，照片有学生的生活，美丽的自然照、节日活动等。所有的作品都展示在了三层的阅览室中。每天都有大量的学生前去参观，他们对照片的美丽而感到惊讶。所有的照片都经过的精心的挑选，并价格不菲。的确，这些照片让我们的生活变得更加美丽。

话题作文：求职简历介绍自己 Resume introduction

青岛某旅游区一家外资饭店要招聘一位懂英语的大堂副经理，以下是张红的一份登记表。请用英语写一篇介绍张红情况的短文。词数：80－120.

Name : Zhang HongSex : femaleDate of birth : 4/07 / 1980Birthplace : QingdaoOccupation : TeacherHeight : 1.72Education :Graduated from Qing Teachers’ College in 1999Interests : Singing and dancingmanagementAspiration : BusinessMastery of English : Having learned English for eight years. Be good at listening and reading

Zhang Hong， female， is a twenty-year-old teacher of a middle school. She was born in July 4， 1980 in Qingdao， and graduated from Qingdao Teachers’ College in July 1999. She has learned English for eight years. Zhang Hong is good at listening and spoken English. She can get along very well with others. She is 1.72 metres tall. She is interested in singing and dancing， and she wants very much to devote her life to business management.

张宏，女，是一所中学的一二零岁教师。她于1980年7月4日出生于青岛，七月毕业于青岛师范学院1999。她学了八年英语了。张宏擅长听和说英语。她和别人相处得很好。她身高1.72米。她对唱歌和跳舞很感兴趣，她很想把自己的生命奉献给企业管理。

About the Chinese as a foreign educator, is one of the good things of Chinese students are so eager to learn from you. They are trained since childhood is a knowledge of the sponge, we hope as much as possible to absorb new information from their teacher, they can. Second, the Confucian education requires high degree of respect for the teacher. The title "old history" is one of the worship in our society, but the teacher is often low wages. In China of foreign teachers or foreign experts "respect", because they are called. Although most of the foreign experts in China not as a teacher of English as a foreign language professional knowledge, but before, therefore, our country government welcome dont give them a title of respect for their contribution to employment. As a result, Chinese students hold attaches great importance to, in particular, this may be why so who has a lot of people in China to live here dean ended their foreign teachers.

It will be difficult to find such appreciation level between the American student teachers. In the United States has a young peoples attitude toward education worker is different, they are taught the problem, rather than simply absorb, so they decide for themselves, if a teacher is credible. American students may lead to the rejection of their teacher, they even openly against dont agree with them, as part of the learning process. American young people dont accept The face value of information, rather than their evaluate whether or not The teacher said is true or useful. The eastern and western education teachers status The way have a significant effect on The students responsibility for their learning. Chinese students become highly dependent on their teachers to give them the "right" information and can easily blame the teacher, if they do not in the classroom and said, "the teacher did not teach me enough." American students tend to be more independent learners, teachers encourage them to do themselves, form the teams research, and to seek the answer to external sources. This makes the American students in collecting data greater flexibility, and encourage them to be responsible for their own learning. In this responsibility does not only mean the rote learning of "right" answer to pass the exam, it refers to the ownership, to make learning meaningful significance.

In China, people have said, they gave all the knowledge back to the teacher of humility. This means that the person never actually have knowledge in the first place, but just borrowed from the teacher it to pass the exam. However, this also means that people will never cherish these knowledge, because he or she never had it, so they ignored it, and eventually forget it. Its like living in a dormitory, differences in their own home life. No one who lives in the dormitory needs to be well taken care of it, especially in public places. However, once you have a home, you keep beautiful and clean, because it has more value. This is the pride of ownership, is to have what is cherish. What is a treasure.

As much as Chinese students understand their foreign teachers, they should not forget that learning responsibility from within, not from the outside. The teacher cant "to" others English. No one can "get" or as a book from the teacher can get a cold English. Learning can only come from learners, responsibility, his or her own freedom to choose his or her learning experience quality, or borrowed rely on the experts knowledge.

关于在中国作为一个外国教育家的美妙的事情之一是，中国学生是如此急于向你学习。他们被训练从小是知识的海绵，希望尽可能多吸收新的信息从他们的老师，他们可以。其次，儒家教育要求对教师的尊重程度很高。标题“老史”是我国社会的崇敬之一，但教师往往是工资低。更是在中国的外籍教师或“外国专家的尊重”，因为它们被调用。尽管在中国大部分外国专家作为一门外语不作为英语教师的专业知识，但以前因此，我国政府欢迎不给予他们尊重他们的贡献称号就业。因此，中国学生尤其是持有高度重视，这也许是为什么那么谁中国有很多人来教长住在这里结束了他们的外籍教师。

这将是很难找到这样的美国学生教师之间的欣赏水平。在美国有一个年轻人对教育工作者的态度有所不同，他们被教导的问题，而不是简单地吸收，因此他们自己决定，如果一名教师是可信的。美国学生可能会拒绝他们的老师，他们甚至公开对抗与他们不同意，作为学习过程的一部分。美国的年轻人不太接受信息的面值，宁可自己评估是否或不是老师说的是真的还是useful.The的东部和西部教育教师地位对学生采取的方式产生重大影响责任为他们的学习。中国学生成为高度依赖于他们的老师给他们的“正确”的信息，可以方便地责怪老师，如果他们不这样做在课堂上也说，“老师没有教我就够了。”美国学生往往更独立的学习者，教师鼓励他们做自己，形成研究组的研究，并寻求外部来源的答案。这使美国学生在收集资料更大的灵活性，并鼓励他们对自己的学习负责。在这方面的责任并不仅仅意味着死记硬背的“正确”的答案通过考试，它指的是所有权，使学习有意义的意义。

在中国，人民对此表示说，他们给所有的知识回到老师谦虚。这意味着此人从来没有真正拥有的知识摆在首位，而只是借用了老师它通过考试。但是，这也意味着，人永远不会珍惜这些知识，因为他或她从未拥有过它，所以他们忽略了它，并最终忘记它。这就像在一间宿舍，生活在自己家里生活的差异。没有人谁在宿舍生活需要很好的照顾它，尤其是公共场所。但是，一旦你拥有一个家，你让美丽和保持清洁，因为它有更大的价值。这是所有权的骄傲，是拥有什么是珍惜。什么是珍惜下去。

高达中国学生了解他们的外籍教师，他们不应该忘记，学习的责任来自内部，而不是来自外部。老师不能“给”别人英语。没有人可以“得到”从老师或像一本书可以得到一个寒冷的英语。学习只能来自于学习者，责任时，他或她自己的自由选择他或她的学习经验的质量，还是借来的依赖专家的知识。

还记得这句英文谚语"Never judge a book by its cover"吗 下面四幅图就描述了这样一个故事.假设你是第一幅图中左边的男孩,站在右边的是你的朋友Jack,你的妈妈一开始因为他的穿着打扮很不喜欢他,可是后来又发生了什么呢

请根据图画写一篇日记,并适当加以评论,发表自己的看法.

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Possible Version:

March 21th Sunday Sunny

My new friend Jack is a fashion follower who often wears strange clothes and long hair. But my mother drove him away from our flat at the first sight yesterday. She thought he was a bad person, although she didnt know him at all.

However, mom totally changed her mind this morning. When we were walking down the street near our home, we witnessed an accident. A boy was hit by a car when he was walking across the road with headphones. Many people saw it, but at first no one knew how to help. Then someone rushed forwards and covered the boy with his coat to keep warm. He looked after him well until the ambulance came. It was Jack! His calmness and seasoned first aid skills moved mom. She went and apolpgized to Jack for her former attitute, and told him that he was always welcome to our home.

That gives me a lesson. The appearance may reflect ones interest, but it isnt the symbol of ones quality. We should never judge a book with its cover.

可能版本：

三月二十一日星期日晴

我的新朋友杰克是一个时尚的追随者经常穿着奇怪的衣服，长长的头发。但是我妈妈昨天第一眼就把他从我们的公寓里赶走了。她认为他是个坏人，虽然她根本不认识他。

然而，今天早上妈妈完全改变了主意。当我们走在我们家附近的街道时，我们目睹了一场事故。一个男孩被一辆汽车撞在马路上时，戴着耳机。很多人看到它，但在第一，没有人知道如何帮助。然后有人冲了上去，用外套盖住了那个男孩，以保持温暖。他很好的照顾了他，直到救护车来了。这是杰克！他冷静和老练的急救技巧感动了妈妈。她为她以前对杰克的态度道歉，并告诉他，他总是欢迎我回家。

这给了我一个教训。外表可以反映一个人的兴趣，但这不是一个人素质的象征。我们决不应该用它的封面来判断一本书。

When my teacher told me to prepare for this competition I restated, hesitated.Everybody in my class knows that. I never learned English in my primary school.I couldnt speak English one year ago, but now, could I take part in this competition? No, I cant. Is aid to myself? Im afraid of making mistakes before so many learned professors and before my classmates and teachers.Suddenly!

A voice came to my ears.“Everybody will make mistakes. Even the very famous American president George Bush” My English teacher said in my class.When I heard that, I think I can. I run into my teachers office happily. “I will do it.” I said. So I stand here today. In front of you.

A proud man hath many crosses. 骄傲者挫折多。

A shy cat makes a proud mouse. 猫儿胆小耗子闹。

All is not at hand that helps. 世间没有唾手可得之事.

The exception proves the rule. 例外证明法则的存在。

No man is a hero to his valet. 在最贴身的人眼中，谁也充不了伟人。

The used key is always bright.常用的钥匙不长锈.

The sun shines upon all alike. 太阳照人，不分贵贱。

We are not born for ourselves. 人之有生,不为一已.

Two heads are better than one. 两人智慧胜一人.

True praise roots and spreads. 诚实的赞美深入人心.

Truth is the daughter of time. 真理是时间的女儿.

True friendship lasts forever. 真正的友谊恒久不变.

Shallow streams make most din. 溪浅声喧。

Slow and steady wins the race. 稳扎稳打;无往不胜.

Time and tide wait for no man. 时光如逝水,岁月不待人.

There is no joy without alloy. 世上没有十全十美的快乐。/ 金无足赤，乐无十全。

Theres no wisdom like silence. 保持沉默最聪明。

Think today and speak tomorrow. 熟思而后言.

Time is money for enterprisers. 对企业家来说,时间就是金钱.

Too many cooks spoil the broth. 厨师太多烧坏汤。

We soon believe what we desire. 心里想什么就会相信什么。

Speech is the image of actions. 语言是行动的图象。

Two wrongs do not make a right. 两个错误,加不出一个正确. /用错误改正不了错误.

What man has done,man can do. 前人能办的事,后人也能做.

Wishes never can fill a sack. 愿望装不满口袋。

He goes far that never turns. 不回头的人走得远.

He that talks much errs much. 语多必失。

He that talks much lies much. 言多必妄。

Before friends all is common. 朋友之间应不分彼此.

Far fowls have fair feathers. 远方的鸟羽毛美。/弄不到手的东西是最好的。

Eyes are as eloquent as lips. 眼睛会和嘴一样说话.

Easy and success are fellows. 从容与成功是伙伴。

Many a little makes a mickle. 积少成多;集腋成裘.

Love and cough cannot be hid. 爱情象咳嗽,压也压不住.

Life is compared to a voyage. 人生好比是一次航程.

Life is real,life is earnest. 人生真实,人生诚挚.

Time flies. 光阴似箭.

Time is life. 时间就是生命.

Times change. 时代在改变.

Time is money. 时间就是金钱.

Life is sweet. 人生是美好的.

Love is blind. 爱情是盲目的.

Extremes meet. 两极相通，有无相生。

Like knows like 人识其类。

Let well alone. 不要画蛇添足. /事已成功,不必多弄.

Marry thy like. 结婚须找同类人.

One man,no man. 个人是渺小的.

Hsitory is bunk. 历史是一堆废话。

Time marches on. 岁月如流

Murder will out. 恶行终会败露。

Never say "die. 永远不要说" 完了".

Care is no cure. 忧虑治不了病。

Beware beginning. 慎始为上。

Deeds, not words. 行动胜于空谈.

No mill, no meal. 不磨面,没饭吃.

Like begets like. 龙生龙，凤生凤。

Love begets love. 爱爱相生.

In doing we learn. 我们在干中学习.

No cross,no crown. 未经苦难,得不到荣冠.

Care killed a cat. 忧虑能杀人。

Boys will be boys. 男孩子总是男孩子.

No song, no supper. 不出力,不得食.

The truth will out. 真相总会大白.

Time works wonders. 时间能创造奇迹.

To think is to see. 思考就是明白.

Truth will prevail. 真理必胜

A lie begets a lie. 谎言生谎言。

Years bring wisdom. 年岁带来智慧.

In love is no lack. 爱情不会感到缺乏.

Easy come, easy go. 来得容易去得 . /悖入悖出.

Every little helps. 点滴都有用.

Forgive and forget. 恢弘大度，勿念旧恶。

Manners maketh man. 举止造人品.

Laugh and grow fat. 心宽体胖 。

Knowledge is power. 知识就是力量.

Let the world slide. 人世沧桑,听其自然.

Love me,love my dog. 爱屋及乌.

Life means struggle. 生活就是斗争.

Fair plays a jewel. 比赛风格好,胜过珠宝.

Early sow,early mow. 种得早,收得早.

Grasp all, lose all. 贪多必失.

Whats lost is lost. 失者不可复得。

Waste not, want not. 不浪费,不会穷.

高考中的写作部分既限制字数，又要包含所有要点，且不能逐条翻译。如果写作方法运动得当，会有明显的提分效果。下面来看看小编为大家带来的方法吧。

一、 从词汇入手，强化短语写作

有研究表明，词汇学习可以促进英语水平的提高(文秋方，1998)。培养和提高学生的英语写作能力应从词和句入手，抓好基础训练。英语是结构语言，具有其自身的固定搭配、习惯用语和基本句型(陈立华，2003)。而《牛津高中英语》教材大量的词汇和地道的生活语言、任务型编排体系以及文本体裁的多样性，为“写”提供了基本素材。教师可根据不同话题的写作要求，采用不同形式的方法对学生进行写作基础训练。比如：关键词和短语写作训练法，即教师根据本单元的写作话题，每天精心选择2～3个词组或句型，让学生做翻译和造句练习;一周之后，让学生运用这些词组和句型进行写作。通过这种训练方法，既可以培养学生的写作能力，又可以提高写作的效率，还可以帮助学生掌握一些习惯用语和句子结构，从而提高学生遣词造句的能力。

二、抓好基本句型的训练，促进写作

书面表达题是由许多句子组成的，句子是写文章的基础。要完成书面表达题，首先要从句子入手，指导学生如何用句子表意。从语言形态学的角度看，英语属于分析型的语言，它有较为固定的基本句型、稳定搭配、俗成短语等，要想在写作中用好它们，必须加强这方面的基本训练。

首先，要加强五种基本句型的教学训练。几乎所有的英语句型都是这五种句型的扩大、延伸或变化，因此训练学生“写”就要抓住五种基本句型，熟练掌握这五种基本句型。五种基本句型是：S+V，S+V+O，S+V+O+O，S+V+O+C，S+V+P。五种基本句型虽然能表达一定的意思，但无法比较自由地表达思想，因此还必须对学生进行扩句训练，在课堂上充分发挥学生的想象力。

其次，加强句型教学，要对一些句子进行分析，增强学生利用各种句子进行一意多种表达的训练。

最后，充分利用教材，对学生进行基本语感的训练。

三、从阅读入手，培养写作表达技巧

阅读与写作密不可分，阅读是写作的基础，是搜集素材、学习词汇句型和新颖表达方式的源泉。因此，教师应想方设法把阅读与写作结合起来，利用教材训练学生的写作技能，在阅读能力的培养过程中融入多种形式的写作技能训练，将写作教学贯穿于阅读教学中。笔者采用了如下方法：

1.利用教材，开展改写

在完成阅读教学，学生基本掌握文章内容的基础上，笔者进一步指导学生改写文章。改写要求学生注意人称、时态、直接引语、间接引语、遣词造句和谋篇布局等方面的变化，充分理解课文内容，认真思考，写出语言得体、内容完整的文章。例如：《牛津高中英语》模块6 Unit 2What Is Happiness to You?的Reading部分是一篇以对话采访形式出现的课文，在采访过程中，嘉宾Dr.Brain以体操运动员桑兰的经历为例，谈到他对幸福的理解。在完成阅读教学后，笔者要求学生用第三人称写一篇介绍桑兰的作文，并鼓励学生引用课文中描述桑兰的经典词汇和例句。如：hard?鄄working, energet?鄄ic, stay optimistic/positive, in good spir?鄄its; She was happy to devote herself to gym?鄄nastics等。通过这些训练，学生既加深了对课文的理解，又运用了所学重点词汇，同时学生的写作技能得到了实际的锻炼。

2.模仿范文，鼓励仿写

写的过程实际上是模拟读者阅读的过程;而阅读也是模拟写作的行为(戴军熔，2002)。教师可给学生一篇与书面表达体裁和题材相同的范文，让学生通过阅读完成类似话题的写作任务。例如：《牛津高中英语》模块1 Unit 3 Looking Good，Feeling Good的写作话题是保持健康。笔者从英文报刊上选择一篇有关如何科学合理地减肥、健身的报道，先让学生在课堂上进行限时阅读，然后提问学生：Which do you think is more important，looking good or feeling good? How would you keep fit?Why?等。学生通过模仿阅读材料的结构进行写作。通过阅读带动写作，由知识的输入到知识的输出，提高了学生表达的条理性和连贯性，为学生提供了写作策略和技能。

四、培养学生用英语写作的习惯

“临渊羡鱼，不如退而结网。”如果仅仅掌握了写作技巧，熟背了大量文章，不亲自动手实践还是不行的，没有一成不变的文章让你照搬。《英语课程标准》指出：基础教育阶段英语课程的总体目标是培养学生的综合语言运用能力。因此，我们要遵循“一切为了运用”的原则，提倡和鼓励学生亲自实践，动手写作，用英语给亲人、朋友、老师写信，用英语写日记，或用英语写便条，写留言短信，还可以用英语与老师谈心或反映情况，或给老师写每周情况报告或总结。只有将所学内容适时地运用于实际生活，才能内化成自己的能力。

五、重视写作的规范化训练

起始阶段的写作训练，培养学生良好的写作习惯非常重要。首先，书写和文体格式要规范。严格要求学生正确、端正、熟练地书写字母、单词和句子，注意大小写和标点符号，养成良好的书写习惯。同时对各种文体特点、格式要清楚，使学生熟悉规范的书面表达形式，用正确的标准评析和规范自己的书面表达。其次，写作过程要规范。一般来说，短文写作都要有以下步骤：审清题目要求;确定写作要点;选好动词，搭好句子骨架;有效连接，使短文结构紧凑;认真检查，保证卷面整洁。对学生进行写作模式的训练，这样看起来比较麻烦，但避免了反复，养成了好的写作习惯。

总之，随着新课改的实施和近几年高考(微博)评分标准的完善，对学生的书面表达能力提出了新的要求。作为高中英语教师，在教学中要根据不同时期学生的具体情况采取相应的教学方法，灵活多样地开展英语写作教学，有效调动学生的积极性，定能使学生厚积薄发，写出行文通顺、流畅、有文采的佳篇妙作来。

2005年英语考纲有重大变化，其中之一就是作文考查的变化。新增加一篇小作文，使作文考查由一篇变为两篇，而原来的大作文的字数也由“不少于200字”调整为“150至200字”，满分20分。新增的作文是一篇100字左右的应用性短文，文体包括有信件、便笺、备忘录等，满分10分。既然是新增题型，就不会太难，但不好预测文体，这就要求考生复习时力求面面俱到，掌握写作规律及注意事项，尤其是对常见的应用文体如书信等

大作文的写作一般会给考生写作提纲，或图表，图画，或图文并茂。命题方式虽然多样，但题目涉及面往往是考生比较熟悉的内容，目的是测定考生语言的实际应用能力。要求表达清楚，文字连贯，中心突出，内容丰富，句式多变，句子结构和用词正确。

语言的应用能力不可能一蹴而就，必须厚积薄发，必须经过长期的实践锻炼。在提高英语写作能力方面，我觉得：一是要背大量的优秀范文，整段整篇地背，并转换为自己的语言，写作时自己能随心所欲支配。考试时避免套用以前死记硬背的几个范文，把一些不达意的词堆积在一起，没有统一性，无法很好地表现主题；二是要多动手。包括对背过的文章进行词语替换，句式转换，句子重组等，以及对某一主题展开写作。多动手才能提高笔下功夫，才能保证在考场上顺利写作。可以说背诵范文是培养语感，积累素材，掌握写作方法，动手写作是实践，是最终目的，这两者结合起来，就是“理论联系了实际”。另外，背诵范文应有针对性，写作训练也是一样，在训练中要掌握每一类型作文的写作规律，根据其每一类作文的写作特点——如提纲式作文就要求考生根据提纲提示的思路和规定的要点展开段落——全面训练，但不要带有押题的心理，靠背几篇范文就能应付考试的心态是不可取的。

下面说一下英语写作过程中的注意事项

一、认真审题

作文第一步是仔细审题，考生要仔细阅读试题要求及相关信息，如图表，图画，数字等，准确把握出题者意图。考研作文忌信手掂来，提笔就写，根本不审题，想到哪儿就写到哪儿，或完全凭自己想象编故事，置考试要求于不顾， “下笔千言，离题万里”。比如1998是一幅卡通画，老母鸡申明外加一首打油诗，讽刺一些企业把该尽职之事作为推销产品的承诺。如果考生说老母鸡很可爱，但爱自夸，然后说自己某个同学也爱自夸，这就偏离主题。2000年的作文“A Brief Histiry of World Commercial Fishing ”.它给出了两张图，从1900年的渔船和鱼量之比到1995年的渔船和鱼量之比的变化谈如何保护渔业资源，应从商业性滥捕鱼这一主题展开话题，有的考生却大谈环境污染。这就偏离了主题，因为题中自始自终都没有谈到环境污染问题。

有的同学没有审题习惯，或担心时间不够草草审题，最后发现文不对题，草草收场，这就影响了英语成绩，同时也会影响后两门考试的考试心情。

二、列出提纲

考试规定的时间是很有限的，所以不能花太多时间准备一个详细的提纲，但关键词提纲或粗略提纲还是非常有必要的。对原始材料分析归纳后要形成一个基本的框架。文章打算分几段写，每段大概怎样写，自数控制在多少，开头段落是道破主题，点名要旨，引人入胜还是先给出主题一般的背景情况和对主题进行浓缩的陈述呢，中间段落和结尾有怎样写呢。这些都要心中有数。有的考生习惯用汉语构思文章，逐句翻译提纲，当碰到某个词卡住时就翻译不下去，僵在那里。要注意列提纲是为了更好更全面的表达主题。主题的表达可有多种形式，不一定非要寻找一个特定的词或句子。考试时考生要充分调动大脑，灵活运用以前所学知识。

三、开始写作

一篇文章往往由四部分组成，标题(title)，首段(opening paragraph),主体(body paragraph),结尾段( concluding paragraph)。标题要新颖，能引起读者兴趣，首段的内容根据文章的体裁而变化，比如议论文可以从一种现象，一种观点出发引出作者的观点。记叙文往往交代人物和故事背景。主体是文章的主要部分，通过合适的语篇模式表达一定的观点，考生要围绕中心按一定顺序分层次有重点的展开叙述，描写，议论。结尾段是对全文的总结，论点上要与前面的叙述一致和统一。写作时要注意以下几点。

1、要统一，连贯。

选择那些最能体现中心思想最具代表性的材料，这些材料要共同表达一致的信息。选材时切忌胡子眉毛一把抓。词语堆积，不伦不类。前后及段落之间在逻辑关系上要紧密衔接，不能把没有任何逻辑关系的词放在一起。可以用恰当的关联词把思想连贯的表达出来。

2、用词准确，语法正确

考试时要特别注意语法，此语，语气，标点符号等，为了避免太多单词拼写错误，语法错误，不要为了追求词语的华丽而堆积一些自己也没把握的单词，不要刻意追求长句而写一些自己不知对错的有多个从句组成的长句。考试时最好选择自己最有把握的词汇，短语，句式。

3、足够字数，卷面整洁

绝对不能字数不够，即使一句话颠来倒去说也要凑够字数。字数不够，即使写的非常精彩，也不能拿高分。

四、修改

英语写作时考生由于仓促，紧张等原因，很容易犯一些简单的，一眼就能发现的错误。所以考生一定要留出几分钟时间用于修改。不要大幅度进行修改，更不要因为修改破坏卷面整洁，影响阅卷老师心情。修改时可以从以下几点进行

1、语法

包括时态是否一致，主谓是否一致，名词单复数是否对应，被动主动语态是否错用等

2、词汇

包括连接上下句或段落的关联词，习惯用语，固定搭配，词类混淆，误用及物不及物动词等。

3、拼写和标点符号

One possible version

There was a problem with the parking place for bikes in our school, I

noticed the entrance was small and almost blocked. So my classmates and I had a

discussion and wrote a report. Then we went to meet the schoolmaster in his

office and gave the report to him. He accepted our suggfestions. Soon

afterwards, a second entrance was opened to the parking place. Now it is easy to

park our bikes there.

This illustration depicts_________ (图画中的人物)with______________(补充说明)Recently

it has become commonfor people in many ways of life to_____________(进一步阐释) It

seems to me that thecartoonist is sending a message about _______(图画主题)，which

is______________(进一步的说明)He seems to be sayingthat_____________(给出细节)In my

opinion，___________(个人阐述)This simple picture is a wakeup call for

______(所涉群体，如thewhole of the human race)Therefore，it is imperative for us totake

drastic measures to put an end to ___________(问题所在)One the one hand，we

must_________________(建议一)It is clear that the drawerof the illustration is

urging us to _________(进一步说明)On the other hand，_______________(建议二)Onlyin this

way can we___________(展望前景)

1、We are not born for ourselves.我们不是为自己而生的。

2、Life is not all roses.人生并不是康庄大道。

3、Haste makes waste.欲速则不达。

4、They that know nothing fear nothing.初生牛犊不怕虎。

5、Failure is the mother of success.失败是成功之母。

6、Time and tide wait for no man.时不待我。

7、East or west, home is best.东好西好，还是家里最好。

8、A mother’s love never changes.母爱永不移。

9、He laughs best who laughs last.笑在最后，笑得最好。

10、You are not a man until you have climbed the Great Wall.不到长城非好汉。

11、A good book is the best of friends, the same today and forever.一本好书，相伴一生。

12、Blood is thicker than water.血浓于水。

13、Fortune favors those who use their judgement.机遇偏爱善断之人。

14、If winter comes, can spring be far behind?——Shelley 冬天来了，春天还会远吗？——雪莱

15、Knowledge is power.——F.Bacon 知识就是力量。——培根

16、Rome was not built in a day.伟业非一日建成。

17、A bad beginning makes a bad ending.不善始者不善终。

18、Eat to live, but do not live to eat.吃饭为了活着，活着不是为了吃饭。

19、Every little helps a mickle.聚沙成塔，集腋成裘。

20、Time fleets away without delay.光阴似箭。

21、Great hopes make great men.伟大的希望造就伟大的人物。

22、Life is not all roses.人生并非处处鸟语花香。

23、Every man is the architect of his own fortune.自己的命运自己掌握。

24、The true value of life is not in what we get but in what we give.人生的价值不在于索取，而在于奉献。

25、Don‘t put off till tomorrow what should be done today.今日事，今日毕。

26、All roads lead to Rome.条条大路通罗马。

27、Live and learn.活到老，学到老。

28、Every man has his faults.金无足赤，人无完人。

29、While there is life, there is hope.有生命就有希望（留得青山在，不怕没柴烧）。

30、Early to bed and early to rise makes a man healthy, wealthy and wise.早睡早起身体好。

31、Do as you would be done by.己所不欲，勿施于人。

32、Practice makes perfect.熟能生巧。

33、It is never too late to mend.亡羊补牢，为时未晚。

34、Health is wealth.健康就是财富。

35、All roads lead to Rome.条条道路通罗马。

36、Misfortunes never come alone/single.祸不单行。

37、A sound mind in a sound body.健全的精神寓于健康的身体。

38、The early bird catches the worm.早出巢的鸟儿捉到虫（捷足先登）。

39、An apple a day keeps the doctor away.一天一苹果，不用请医生。

40、As a man sows, so he shall reap.种瓜得瓜，种豆得豆。

41、A friend in need is a friend indeed.患难见真交。

42、A miss is as good as a mile.失之毫厘，差之千里。

43、All that glitters is not gold.闪光的不一定都是金子。

44、Many hands make light work.人多力量大。

45、Where there is a will, there is a way.有志者事竟成

46、He is wise that is honest.老实人才是聪明人。

47、Eat to live, but not live to eat.人吃饭是为了活着，但活着不是为了吃饭。

48、Diligence is the mother of success.勤奋是成功之母。

49、Caution is the parent of safety.小心驶得万年船。

50、The frog in the well knows nothing of the great ocean.坐井观天，孤陋寡闻。

51、Speech is silver, silence is gold.雄辩是银，沉默是金。

52、All beginnings are hard.万事开头难。

53、Lookers-on see most of the game.旁观者清。

54、Strike while the iron is hot.趁热打铁。

55、No pains, no gains.没有付出就没有收获。

56、A candle lights others and consumes itself.蜡烛照亮别人，却毁灭了自己。

57、Genius is one percent inspiration and ninety percent of perspiration.天才是一分灵感加上九十九分汗水。

58、Well begun is half done.良好的开端是成功的一半。

59、A young idler, an old beggar.少壮不努力，老大徒伤悲。

60、Seeing is believing.眼见为实。

61、Time tries all things.时间检验一切。

62、No news is good news.没有消息就是好消息。

63、Easier said than done.说得容易，做得难。

64、All things are difficult before they are easy.凡事总是由难而易。

[英语作文常用谚语大全

小学英语常用句子

1、 Hello, … 你好。

2、 Hi, … 喂，你好。

3、 How do you do? 你好。

4、 Good morning/ afternoon/evening. 早上/下午/晚上好。

5、 Goodbye. 再见

6、 Good night. 晚安。

7、 How are you(this morning/afternoon/evening)? 你今天早晨/下午/晚上好吗?

8、 Fine, thank you/ thanks. 我很好，谢谢。

9、 Not bad, thank you. 不错，谢谢。

10、 Welcome back to school. 欢迎回到学校来。

11、 Welcome to our school. 欢迎到我们学校来。

12、 Happy birthday! 生日快乐!

13、 What’s your name, please? 你的名字是什么?

14、 Your name, please? 你叫什么名字?

15、 My name is…/ I’m… 我的名字是…/ 我名叫…

16、 This is Miss/ Mr/ Mrs… 这位是…小姐/先生/女士。

17、 This is my friend. 这是我的朋友。

18、 Nice to meet /see you. 很高兴认识/见到你。

19、 How old is he? 他多大了?

I 询问姓名、年龄。

1. ----What’s your name? ----你叫什么名字?

----My name is ________. ----我叫……。

2. ----How old are you? ----你几岁了?

----I’m 12. ----我十二岁。

II 询问颜色。

1. ----What colour is it? ----它是什么颜色的?

----It’s yellow and white. ----黄白相间。

2. ----What colour are they? ----它们是什么颜色的?

----They’re green. ----绿色的。

III 询问数量或价钱。

1. ----How many kites can you see? ----你可以看见几只风筝?

-------I can see 12. ----我可以看见十二只风筝。

2. ----How many crayons do you have? ----你有多少支彩笔?

-------I have 16. ----我有十六支。

3.-----How many people are there in your family? ----你家有几口人?

-------Three. ----三口人。

4.-----How much is this dress? ----这条连衣裙多少钱?

-------It’s ninety-nine yuan. ----九十九元。

5.-----How much are these apples? ----这些苹果多少钱?

-------They’re thirty-five yuan. ----三十五元。

IV 询问时间或日期。

1. --What time is it now? ----现在几点钟?

-----It’s nine o’clock.It’s time for English class.九点。该上英语课了。

-----It’s eight o’clock. It’s time to go to bed. 八点。该上床睡觉了。

2.--What day is it today? ----今天星期几?

----It’s Monday. ----星期一。

----What do we have on Mondays? ----我们星期一上哪些课?

----We have Chinese, English, math …----语文、英语、数学……

3.----When is your birthday? ----你的生日是什么时候?

------It’s October 1st, our National Day.---十月一日，国庆节。

4.----When do you do morning exercises? ---你们什么时候做早锻炼?

------I usually do morning exercises at 8:30.--我们通常8：30做早锻炼。

V 询问方位或地方。

1. ----Where is my toy car? ----我的玩具汽车在哪儿?

-------It’s here, under the chair. ----在这儿，在椅子下面。

2.----Where is the canteen? ----餐厅在哪儿?

------It’s on the first floor ----在一楼。

3. ---Where are the keys? ----钥匙在哪儿?

------They’re in the door. ----在门上。

4.--Excuse me. Where is the library, please? 对不起，请问图书馆在哪儿?

----It’s near the post office. ----在邮局附近。

5. ---Where are you from? ----你从哪儿来?

------I’m from China. ----我从中国来。

6. ---Where does the rain come from? ----雨是从哪儿来的?

------It comes from the clouds. ----它是从云层里来的。

VI 询问想吃的东西。

1.----What would you like for breakfast / lunch / dinner ?

你早餐/中餐/晚餐想吃点什么?

------I’d like some bread and milk / rice and soup.

我想吃面包和牛奶/米饭和汤。

2.----What’s for breakfast / lunch / dinner?---早餐/中餐/晚餐吃什么?

------Hamburgers and orange juice. ----汉堡包和橙汁。

VII 询问天气状况。

1.----What’s the weather like in Beijing? ----北京的天气如何?

------It’s rainy today. How about New York? 今天是雨天。纽约呢?

------It’s sunny and hot. ----今天是晴天，天气很热。

VIII 询问身体状况或情绪。

1. ----How do you feel? ----你感觉如何?

----I feel sick. ----我觉得不舒服。

2. ----What’s the matter? ----怎么了?

----My throat is sore. / I have a sore throat.---我的喉咙疼。

3. ----How are you, Sarah? You look so happy. ---你好吗，莎拉?你看起来这么伤心。

----I failed the math test. ----我的数学考试没有通过。

IX 询问职业、身份或人物。

1.----What’s your father / mother? ---你的父亲 / 母亲是做什么的?

----He’s a doctor. / She’s a teacher.---他是一名医生。/ 她是一名教师。

2.----What does your mother / father do? ---你的母亲 / 父亲是做什么的?

----She’s a TV reporter. / He’s a teacher. He teaches English.

她是一名电视台记者。/他是一名教师。他教英语。

3.----Who’s that man / woman? ----那位男士 / 女士是谁?

----He’s my father. / She’s my mother. 他是我父亲。 / 她是我母亲。

4.----Who’s this boy / girl? ----那个男孩儿 / 女孩儿是谁?

----He’s my brother. / She’s my sister.--他是我兄弟。 / 她是我姐妹。

5.----Who’s your art teacher? ----你们的美术老师是谁?

----Miss Wang. ----王老师。

----What’s she like? ----她长什么样儿?

----She’s young and thin. ----她很年轻、苗条。

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1) on the other hand, the contribution of day schools cant be ignored.

2) due to high tuition fee, most of ordinary families cannot afford to send their children to boarding schools.

3) since it is unnecessary to consider students routinelife, day school can lay stress on teaching instead of other aspects, such as management of dormitory and cafeteria.

4) furthermore, students living in their own home would have access to a comfortable life and have more opportunities to communicate with their parents, which have beneficial impact on development of their personal character.

5) from what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that both of day schools and boarding schools are important to train young students for our society.

6) there is much discussion over science and technology. one of the questions under debate is whether traditional technology and methods are bound to die out when a country begins to develop modern science and technology.

7) According to a recent survey, four million people die each year from diseases linked to smoking.

8) The latest surveys show that quite a few children have unpleasant associations with homework.

9) No invention has received more praise and abuse than Internet.

10) People seem to fail to take into account the fact that education does not end with graduation.

11) An increasing number of people are beginning to realize that education is not complete with graduation.

12) When it comes to education, the majority of people believe that education is a lifetime study.

13) Many experts point out that physical exercise contributes directly to a persons physical fitness.

14) Proper measures must be taken to limit the number of foreign tourists and the great efforts should be made to protect local environment and history from the harmful

15) An increasing number of experts believe that migrants will exert positive effects on construction of city. However, this opinion is now being questioned by more and more city residents, who complain that the migrants have brought many serious problems like crime and prostitution.

16) Many city residents complain that it is so few buses in their city that they have to spend much more time waiting for a bus, which is usually crowded with a large number of passengers.

17) There is no denying the fact that air pollution is an extremely serious problem: the city authorities should take strong measures to deal with it.

18) An investigation shows that female workers tend to have a favorable attitude toward retirement.

19) A proper part-time job does not occupy students too much time. In fact, it is unhealthy for them to spend all of time on their study. As an old saying goes: All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.

20) Any government, which is blind to this point, may pay a heavy price.

21) Nowadays, many students always go into raptures at the mere mention of the coming life of high school or college they will begin. Unfortunately, for most young people, it is not pleasant experience on their first day on campus.

22) In view of the seriousness of this problem, effective measures should be taken before things get worse.

23) The majority of students believe that part-time job will provide them with more opportunities to develop their interpersonal skills, which may put them in a favorable position in the future job markets.

24) It is indisputable that there are millions of people who still have a miserable life and have to face the dangers of starvation and exposure.

25) Although this view is wildly held, this is little evidence that education can be obtained at any age and at any place.

26) No one can deny the fact that a persons education is the most important aspect of his life.

27) People equate success in life with the ability of operating computer.

28) In the last decades, advances in medical technology have made it possible for people to live longer than in the past.

29) In fact, we have to admit the fact that the quality of life is as important as life itself.

30) We should spare no effort to beautify our environment.

31) People believe that computer skills will enhance their job opportunities or promotion opportunities.

32) The information Ive collected over last few years leads me to believe that this knowledge may be less useful than most people think.

33) Now, it is generally accepted that no college or university can educate its students by the time they graduation.

34) This is a matter of life and death--a matter no country can afford to ignore.

35) For my part, I agree with the latter opinion for the following reasons:

36) Before giving my opinion, I think it is important to look at the arguments on both sides.

37) This view is now being questioned by more and more people.

38) Although many people claim that, along with the rapidly economic development, the number of people who use bicycle are decreasing and bicycle is bound to die out. The information Ive collected over the recent years leads me to believe that bicycle will continue to play extremely important roles in modern society.

39) Environmental experts point out that increasing pollution not only causes serious problems such as global warming but also could threaten to end human life on our planet.

40) In view of such serious situation, environmental tools of transportation like bicycle are more important than any time before.

41) Using bicycle contributes greatly to peoples physical fitness as well as easing traffic jams.

42) Despite many obvious advantages of bicycle, it is not without its problem.

43) Bicycle cant be compared with other means of transportation like car and train for speed and comfort.

44) From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that advantages of bicycle far outweigh its disadvantages and it will still play essential roles in modern society.

45) There is a general discussion these days over education in many colleges and institutes. One of the questions under debate is whether education is a lifetime study.

46) This issue has caused wide public concern.

47) It must be noted that learning must be done by a person himself.

48) A large number of people tend to live under the illusion that they had completed their education when they finished their schooling. Obviously, they seem to fail to take into account the basic fact that a persons education is a most important aspect of his life.

49) As for me, Im in favor of the opinion that education is not complete with graduation, for the following reasons:

50) It is commonly accepted that no college or university can educate its students by the time they graduate.

51) Even the best possible graduate needs to continue learning before she or he becomes an educated person.

52) It is commonly thought that our society had dramatically changed by modern science and technology, and human had made extraordinary progress in knowledge and technology over the recent decades.

53) For lack of distinct culture, some places will not attract tourists any more. Consequently, the fast rise in number of foreign tourists may eventually lead to the decline of local tourism.

54) There is a growing tendency for parents to ask their children to accept extra educational programs over the recent years.

55) This phenomenon has caused wide public concern in many places of world.

56) Many parents believe that additional educational activities enjoy obvious advantage. By extra studies, they maintain, their children are able to obtain many kinds of practical skills and useful knowledge, which will put them in a beneficial position in the future job markets when they grow up.

57) In the first place, extra studies bring about unhealthy impacts on physical growth of children. Educational experts point out that, it is equally important to take some sport activities instead of extra studies when children have spent the whole day in a boring classroom.

58) Children are undergoing fast physical development; lack of physical exercise may produce disastrous influence on their later life.

59) In the second place, from psychological aspect, the majority of children seem to tend to have an unfavorable attitude toward additional educational activities.

60) It is hard to imagine a student focusing their energy on textbook while other children are playing.

61) Moreover, children will have less time to play and communicate with their peers due to extra studies, consequently, it is difficult to develop and cultivate their character and interpersonal skills. They may become more solitary and even suffer from certain mental illness.

62) From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that, although extra studies indeed enjoy many obvious advantages, its disadvantages shouldnt be ignored and far outweigh its advantages. It is absurd to force children to take extra studies after school.

63) Any parents should place considerable emphasis on their children to keep the balance between play and study. As an old saying goes: All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.

64) There is a growing tendency for parent these days to stay at home to look after their children instead of returning to work earlier.

65) Parents are firmly convinced that, to send their child to kindergartens or nursery schools will have an unfavorable influence on the growth of children.

66) However, this idea is now being questioned by more and more experts, who point out that it is unhealthy for children who always stay with their parents at home.

67) Although parent would be able to devote much more time and energy to their children, it must be admitted that, parent has less experience and knowledge about how to educate and supervise children, when compared with professional teachers working in kindergartens or nursery schools.

68) From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw a conclusion that, although the parents desire to look after children by themselves is understandable, its disadvantages far outweigh the advantages.

69) Parents should be encouraged to send their children to nursery schools, which will bring about profound impacts on children and families, and even the society as a whole.

70) Many leaders of government always go into raptures at the mere mention of artistic and cultural projects. They are forever talking about the nice parks, the smart sculptures in central city and the art galleries with various valuable rarities. Nothing, they maintain, is more essential than such projects in the economic growth.

71) But is it really the case? The information Ive collected over last few years leads me to believe that artistic and cultural projects may be less useful than many governments think. In fact, basic infrastructure projects are playing extremely important role and should be given priority.

72) Those who are in favor of artistic and cultural projects advocate that cultural environment will attract more tourists, which will bring huge profits to local residents. Some people even equate the build of such projects with the improving of economic construction.

73) Unfortunately, there is very few evidence that big companies are willing to invest a huge sums of money in a place without sufficient basic projects, such as supplies of electricity and water.

74) From what has been discussed above, it would be reasonable to believe that basic projects play far more important role than artistic and cultural projects in peoples life and economic growth.

75) Those urban planners who are blind to this point will pay a heavy price, which they cannot afford it.

76) There is a growing tendency these days for many people who live in rural areas to come into and work in city. This problem has caused wide public concern in most cities all over the world.

77) An investigation shows that many emigrants think that working at city provide them with not only a higher salary but also the opportunity of learning new skills.

78) It must be noted that improvement in agriculture seems to not be able to catch up with the increase in population of rural areas and there are millions of peasants who still live a miserable life and have to face the dangers of exposure and starvation.

79) Although rural emigrants contribute greatly to the economic growth of the cities, they may inevitably bring about many negative impacts.

80) Many sociologists point out that rural emigrants are putting pressure on population control and social order; that they are threatening to take already scarce city jobs; and that they have worsened traffic and public health problems.

81) Now people in growing numbers are beginning to believe that learning new skills and knowledge contributes directly to enhancing their job opportunities or promotion opportunities.

82) An investigation shows that many older people express a strong desire to continue studying in university or college.

83) For the majority of people, reading or learning a new skill has become the focus of their lives and the source of their happiness and contentment after their retirement.

84) For people who want to adopt a healthy and meaningful life style, it is important to find time to learn certain new knowledge. Just as an old saying goes: it is never too late to learn.

85) There is a general debate on the campus today over the phenomenon of college or high school students doing a part-time job.

86) By taking a major-related part-job, students can not only improve their academic studies, but gain much experience, experience they will never be able to get from the textbooks.

87) Although peoples lives have been dramatically changed over the last decades, it must be admitted that, shortage of funds is still the one of the biggest questions that students nowadays have to face because that tuition fees and prices of books are soaring by the day

88) Consequently, the extra money obtained from part-time job will strongly support students to continue to their study life.

89) From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw a conclusion that part-time job can produce a far-reaching impact on students and they should be encouraged to take part-time job, which will benefit students and their family, even the society as a whole.

90) These days, people in growing numbers are beginning to complain that work is more stressful and less leisurely than in past. Many experts point out that, along with the development of modern society, it is an inevitable result and there is no way to avoid it.