高三年级英语作文：About Examinations（通用20篇）

人生的路上，难免会有许多十字路口，当你面临艰难的抉择时，总会觉得纠结痛苦。是选择走向爱和希望，即使自己会付出一些精力?或是扭曲或愤怒，虽然这通向黑暗，但自己很爽快?这时，请你务必想一想你究竟离你的梦想还有多远，你承受得住一路行来飞雪多么明媚少么?

其实，不完美的才是人生。——题记

俗话说，看中华上下五千年，唯有长安。虽然它的面貌已逐渐现代化，但有些人，有些事，终究无法泯灭。

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一轮新月挂在天上，时时有乌云盖过。这是个寂寞难耐的晚上。大汉的宫殿建的华丽漂亮，流光溢彩，但这牢房却沿袭了几百年来的历史传统无法言喻的恶劣环境。

茅草似乎发出阵阵臭味，还不时有老鼠吱吱作响，狱卒抠门的连蜡烛都不给，直比的上客栈里倒泔水的地方。

司马迁一席宽袍坐在中间，闭眼，似乎在聆听什么，丝毫不染凡尘，半缕月光打着发冠和鬓边，说不出的凄清寂寥。他心中似乎有玩着沟壑，起起伏伏，萧簧合奏，似乎自己只是盛世的下一个不和谐的音符罢了。

皇上身边贴身服饰的太监昨日来传过话。语气里满是谄媚和阴冷：“司马大人，好了没有啊?”是啊，是选择像一个大男人一样轰轰烈烈的奔向死亡，还是像那太监一样人皮狗脸地活着?司马迁心中填满了厌烦。

他睁开眼睛，通过牢房的窗户向外望去。忽然想起许多年前父亲临终的那个夜晚。老人家一双忽明忽暗的双眼闪烁着希冀(骥)，嘴里只不断嗫嚅两个字：“史书……史……书……”当自己双膝落地下跪，并励志要完成父亲的遗愿时，老人家终于安心地驾鹤西去了。不会忘记之后的几千个日夜，跋山涉水，只为还原从上古炎黄时期开始华夏三千年的变迁。

临近黎明，又有人来了，司马迁面向墙壁，没有去看那狱卒，半晌之后，悠悠说出几个字：“我选择宫刑。”狱卒去了，只剩司马迁和他脸上两行淡淡清泪。

司马迁做到了。他为了希望而选择耻辱，为了家国而放弃了自己。他告诉我们，在人生的道路上，有时候要学会另避一条路，即使荆棘遍布，也要勇敢的走下去。

张学良和杨虎城为了大义而愤怒，双十二时令，没有丝毫犹豫，顶着金党的反对浪潮，扣住了蒋家元老，打开了抗日新篇章……

“文革”时邓小平为了实现中国富强之梦而忍耐。或许他是恐惧的，但三起三落之后，终于铸就了民族复兴的基础……

从古至今，从中到外，多少成功人士是这样，为了希望暂时选择耻辱，为了大义暂时选择愤怒。即使有可能顶着千古骂名，但我认为，只要为了践行心中永恒的追求而戴上黑色面具的人，这点都值得尊重。长风破浪会有时，直挂云帆济沧海。让我们在不断面临选择的过程中学会换一个角度来思考，相信，另一个选择，走一种弯路，你会拥抱更加精彩的人生。

Environmental protection needs the maintenance of all of us. Only if we are active to maintain. Our environment will become better.

Once, father, mother and I go to the park for a walk, just going to the park to see some of the white plastic bag fell to the ground, is very obvious. "The litter is not civilization", my in the mind in blame them. My eyes are bright, by the way, I am a little green guards, should take good care of the environment. I bent down and picked up to throw garbage into the trash. Mother said: "with the hand to pick up more health, with branches clip". So, I use two branch, with his hands a clip, garbage will obediently followed I go. A bridge, lets go to the park to see rubbish was strewn all over the grass, cleft. As they walked along, I pick up. Went to the amusement park, at first glance I saw a white stone chair plastic bags, they like a terrible enemy attack us. I run to get rid of them one by one all. I found on the lake and some white plastic bags, Ill give it all up, but, I catch a have a plastic bag, dad said: "let me help you." So, my father took my hand, I go to pick another hand holding a branch, finally got the scoop up plastic bags. I like the battles of soldiers happy.

Though today just me and my parents clean up the garbage, but I believe that people will take good care of the environment, there will be more people to do the green small guard.

环保需要我们所有人的维护。只有大家都主动去维护。我们的环境才会变得更好。

有一次，我和爸爸、妈妈去公园散步，刚走进公园就看见了一些白色的塑料袋落在地上，非常明显。“这些乱扔垃圾的人真是不文明”，我心里在埋怨他们。我眼睛一亮，对了，我是绿色小卫士，应该爱护环境。我就弯下腰捡起垃圾往垃圾桶扔。妈妈说：“用手捡多不卫生呀，用树枝夹”。于是，我用两根树枝，双手一夹，垃圾便乖乖地跟着我走。我们走到公园的一座桥，看见草丛、石缝到处是垃圾。我一边走一边捡。来到了游乐园，我一眼就看见石椅子上有白色塑料袋，它们像可怕的敌人一样攻击者我们。我跑过去把它们一个个都消灭掉。我又发现湖面上还有一些白色塑料袋，我就把它们都捞上来，可是，有一个塑料袋我捞不着，爸爸说：“我来帮你。”于是，爸爸拉着我的手，我另一只手拿着树枝去挑，终于把这个塑料袋捞了上来。我像打了胜仗的士兵一样高兴。

虽然今天只有我和爸妈在清理垃圾，但我相信，人们一定会爱护环境，会有更多人来做绿色小卫士的。

From the chart, it is obvious that renting a room near the university is more comfortable to live in. However, If let choose, I will choose the former without hesitation.

For one thing, Im a person who is afraid of loudiness. So I would like to live with other 3 persons rather than myself alone. Moreover, I can learn how to communicate with others and help each other if I live with other people. I also can make more friends in the university.

Secondly, even though there is no single cleaning facility in the dormitory, it can help me adapt myself to the surrounding and learn how to live in harmony with others. Whats more, although Im a person who loves freedom, I hope the dormitory life could make my life more regular and meaningful.

Last but not least, the fees of the dormitory is far cheaper than the renting room. Choosing the former one will make easier to me to afford it by myself.

In a word, it is absolute for me to choose the university dormitory. As the facts I mentioned, I believe it is a wise choice.

The Mid-Autumn Festival is a very important Chinese festival. It’s on lunar

fifth of August.

In the evening, we have a big dinner. Look, there is a lot of delicious

food on the table. We can drink a glass of juice. We stand beside the table and

we say, “Cheers, cheers, happy Mid-Autumn Festival!” We make a wish to each

other. At night, the moon is usually round and bright. It looks like a ball. We

can enjoy the moon. Moon cakes are the special food for this festival. We can

eat moon cakes, too. In the Mid-Autumn Festival, my parents and I are all very

happy and excited.

【范文】

Are You Happy

Two year ago, Chinese biggest TV Channel played an interview which brought great response to the audience. The interview is about a journalist asked a worker that if he felt happy, the worker didnt react what the question is, he answered that he his name is not happy. The interview became hot, everyone was taking about it, "Are you happy" has become a greeting when people meet, they made fun of it. The reason why the interview becomes so popular is that people lack of sense of happiness today, they find a way to make fun of happiness. As the development of technology, people live in a fast-pace lifestyle, the pressure from work is so heavy that people focus too much on work, they dont have time to relax, many people bring the work issues to home, keeping busy all the time. We should find the balance between work and family life, try to enjoy life.

【译文】

你幸福吗

两年以前，中国最大的电视频道播放了一条采访片子，引起了观众的巨大反应。采访是关于一位记者问一位农民工“你幸福吗?”，农民工没反应过来，他说他不叫幸福。这条采访片子很热门，大家都在谈论，“你幸福吗”成为了人们见面时的问候语，成为了一个玩笑。这条采访片子红的原因在于人们对幸福感的缺失， 他们找到了开玩笑的方式。随着科技的发展，人们生活节奏变得很快，工作的压力太大以至于工作投入过多，他们没有时间去放松，很多人把工作事情带回家，一直 工作。我们应该找到工作和家庭生活的平衡点，多享受生活。

The Importance of Breakfast

As people are so busy with their work, they go to work directly in the morning without eating breakfast. Some people think not having breakfast does no influence on their body health. Some believe breakfast is important to peoples body health. In my opinion, Im convinced that we should have breakfast because it is good for our body health.

First of all, breakfast offer us the energy we need for the day. Before breakfast, our body has consumed all the energy we get from previous meal. Consequently, we need to eat some food in the morning to get enough energy and nutrient to support our body. If we dont have breakfast, then we have no enough energy to do our work efficiently.

Secondly, people who skip breakfast will get weight easily. If you dont have breakfast, then you will eat more food at noon and in the evening. Generally speaking, we dont have much excise in the evening while we eat too much food. As a result, the surplus calorie will be stored in our body and make us fat.

All in all, people should eat breakfast for the good of our health and for the good of keeping a good body shape.

人们都忙于自己的工作，所以在早上都会选择直接上班，而不吃早餐。一些人认为不吃早餐不会影响自己的身体健康。一些人认为早餐对健康很重要。就我来说，我觉得为了身体健康着想，我们应该吃早餐。

首先，早餐能够给我们提供自己一天所需的能量。在吃早餐前，我们的身体一斤高消耗完了前一餐的食物提供给我们的能量。说以，我们需要在早上吃点儿东西来给我们的身体提供一些能量和营养。如果我们不吃早餐，那么我们没有足够的能量，这样会导致我们工作效率低。

其次，不吃早餐的人更容易肥胖。如果不吃早餐，你将会在中午和晚上吃大量的食物。通常来说，一般人们在晚上的活动量会很少，但是，我们由于吃了太多的食物，那些多余的热量会储存在我们的身体里，让我们变胖。

总之，人们应该吃早餐，不仅为了身体健康着想，也为我们能够保持一个好的身材着想。

The Yangzte River is the longest river in China. And it’s important and helpful to us Chinese. But these days the Yangtze River is bringing us serious floods.

Many villages were destroyed by floods. The floods made hundreds of millions of people lose their homes, relatives and friends. Many children can’t go to school as usual .Now the foods have drawn the attention of the whole world. People from abroad have offered their help too. In China, millions of soldiers are busy fighting against the floods. They are working very hard. Many of them have lost their lives in their attempt to save the villagers.

Though we can’t help them to fight against floods, we should help them to rebuild their homeland. We can present them our pocketmoney and clothes. I believe most of the people will return to their homeland in the near future.

Success means different things for different people. Some may equate it

with money, some with work and still some with ohter. For me, it means

fulfilling ones dreams. Whatever your dreams are, you have a goal there and

then focus all your attention on it. Dreams bring you hope and happiness. May be

you cry, sweat, complain or even curse, but the joy of harvesting makes you

forget all the pains and troubles you have gone through. So an old proverb says

that the sweetest fruit is one that has undergone the bitterest ordeal.There are

several keys to success. First, your goal must be practical and practicable. If

you set your goal too high, maybe that you will never attain it. Next, you have

to make a plan of doing it. Since the dream is quite tough, you need to be hard,

Even if you meet with some difficulties, just take them in your stride. You can

always tell yourself that there is nothing about. With this will and

determination, success is sure to wait for you at the end of the tunnel!

我们不是为自己而生，我们的国家赋予我们应尽的责任。——题记

突如其来的疫情打乱了人们的生活节奏，大家本来应该在温暖家中陪伴家人等待新年钟声敲响，但是有些人却又义无反顾地奔赴前线，他们就是一位位无私奉献的医护人员。

因为新冠病毒会感染，他们需要穿几层专用隔离防护服，一穿就是三四个小时，换班休息时汗水湿透了衣衫，但他们没有叫苦喊累，因为他们是白衣天使，他们要给病人带来希望。

记得在电视上看到一名记者采访抗战一线的医护人员：“参加这场没有硝烟的抗疫战争，您顾虑过吗?”那位医护人员说：“顾虑肯定是有的。”记者又问：“那你为什么还是义无反顾地来到抗疫一线?”她是这样回答说：“国家有难，作为医护人员的我们理应担当起保家卫国的责任。穿上白大褂，我们就要扮演好我们的角色。”听到她的回答，一刹那间，我对医护人员的敬佩之情油然而生，因为他们是医生，他们心中有“治病为民”的信念，这种信念深深扎在他们的心中!

担当是一种责任，面对严重的疫情，医护人员们主动请战，救死扶伤，迎难而上……用他们的行动，让我看到了白衣天使的无畏、坚韧，顽强、与坚守，用他们的生命，守护大众的生命，让我们一起致敬抗疫一线的白衣天使们吧!

If a book is the sky, I was the birds fly freely in the sky; If a book is

the sea, I will be the swimming fish; If the book is the forest, I is the forest

the jubilant fawn; If the book garden, then I will be the dancing butterfly. Is

ah, gorky said: the book said that the ladder of human progress. The status of

books in peoples minds.

The classmates, dont your parents let you read, think to learn major

courses is the most important? The benefits of reading: not only can improve the

ability of project, it is a great way of reading comprehension.

Remember once, the teacher arranged a composition, only a minority of the

whole class classmate "optimal" I one of its top, one might ask: how do you only

into their "team"? What is the "secret weapon"? Let me tell you: "secret weapon"

that book! Reading is not enough light to read a few times, read read through

the book, and those who make you feel good good words we accumulation. I also

specially prepared a unaccustomed strain. You look! The "king" composition is

leisurely leisurely reading! Accumulation of his words have a Big Ben, think of

is dazzling, how could he not write good, good composition?

I often read books, the romance of The Three Kingdoms, "journey to the

west", "the Wolf dream king", "red ribbon lion king" is favored by me, such as

read book is ever new, one of the "the black swan amethyst" I have read a dozen

times.

Books are necessary in my life, also is the most gorgeous rainbow in my

life, because it brings the colorful life.

Today is the National Day holiday for the fourth day, time can be really

fast. My mother took me to my grandmothers home for the first two days, and the

home of my grandmother was really busy. A lot of Grandpa and grandma, aunt,

uncle and brother, sisters, I almost fainted, that is to recognize the halo, ha

ha ha ha. My mother told me that I was the fifth generation. This is called the

fifth world. Each holiday to see grandma, Grandpa too too, they are wearing

special festive costume, really good-looking.

The morning I was at home to review the homework, mother was glad to praise

my mamas boy. So in the afternoon to take me to the Tang Dynasty city people

here to play, really much ah! The atmosphere of a festival on the square is

happy. The development of the game we went to the west city play scouts, there

are a lot of kids, because I was the first time to play, so start from the

simple to play for a while, I was familiar with the essentials, but also know a

lot of new friends. Mom said this is the fun of games. In the process, you will

make up for the shortage, accept good suggestions, and recognize new friends.

Its important to exercise our willpower. Only by persisting efforts can we get

to the end. Next time I will come here. I want to play the game that is more

difficult. I believe I can go smoothly. I cheer for myself: Liu Zhuoya, you are

the best.

I had a good day today, and I hope it can be like this every day.

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这个春天像是个美丽的幻觉，我觉得自己始终处于悬浮状态，这种状态让我恐惧，厚厚的日历早已开始以页页无情的坠落……走到这一步我开始彷徨，离开还是留下?

看满天耀眼的烟花，绚丽多彩，在最辉煌的一刻过后，暗淡、消灭。正如人生的轨迹。而这却是一个悲剧，所以我说：人生就是一场悲剧。

我大脑里储存的姿势好像是越来越少，大概识别人的多了之后显得自己的少了。为什么别人的都在快速不停的增长，而我的大脑则停留在了这里呢?原因与我，很简单，我想让自己的生命在这爱与同的边缘暂停，来思考怎样才能让人生的悲剧不过于太悲。

烟花若把自己的全部都在自己生命的高潮一刻全部爆发，这样他将格外明亮，被世人所瞩目。之后它所残留的以是微小的尘埃，潇潇洒洒，无人会再次将他注意，也不会有人记得它的存在，记得他曾给人以愉悦。

当烟花在自己生命的高潮时，不把自己完全的献出，在它一生的高潮中显得平淡，生命结束，他所残留的尸体大块大块的落向大地，人们可以看到他，直到他曾经存在过，辉煌过。

我在这两种选择之间徘徊。我想让自己的青春比别人的更辉煌、引人注目，想让别人记住我的名字，让后人知道曾经有过我这个人的存在……

鲁迅曾说：有一分热发一分光。我呢?

流星急速刺破阴黑无际的苍穹，匆匆消失了。我是该留还是该去?

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News, used to be the most dont like to see it. Since the childhood has been like watching cartoon and foam. Now over the years is already 15 years old girl, the adults always said I dont understand, I also often because of his bad temper, or not doing things. "Knowledge too little" finally let me find the dawn, from then on began to like the news.

Compared to the past, only reading does make me understand a lot of knowledge, also became the academic leaders, but its a downright failure in life. While reading can also know society, but after all the writers praise is the truth in life, and that I love watching cartoons, and eulogize justice and goodness, degeneration and reject evil. In such an environment, my heart has been living in the white cloud, so that as the growth of the age, heart is still very naive. But I will contact with the reality of society, the essence of this society is not absolutely fair, not cheated can only let oneself become strong. But when he does not know this, just complain, disposition also become bad. Fortunately, when I was going to despair, when the news took me, no let me into the who also do not know to have bottomless pit.

Know only after watching the news of the worlds largest and I small. The content of the news is very rich, I also have different preferences, from country to country, down to between people. I see from a real case: "some of the good qualities: honesty, integrity, good Samaritan, wisdom... how important it is for this society!

新闻，以前是最不喜欢看的。从小到大一直喜看动画片和泡沫剧。现今过了年已是十五岁的大姑娘了，大人们常说我不懂事，我也常因自己脾气不好，或是不会处理事情而烦恼。一句“见识太少”终于让我找到了曙光，从此便开始喜欢上新闻。

对比以往，只读书确实让我懂了不少知识，也成为了学业上的佼佼者，但在生活上却是一个失败透顶的人。虽然读书也可以认识社会，但毕竟作家们歌颂的都是生活中的真善美，以及那我爱看的动画片，也是讴歌正义和善良，贬低和排斥邪恶势力。在这样的环境影响下，我的心一直生活在洁白无瑕的云端，以至于随着年龄的增长，心确仍然很幼稚。但我终究要与现实的社会接触，这个社会的本质就是没有绝对的公平，要想不吃亏就只能让自己成为强者。可惜当初的自己并不懂得这点，只是一味的抱怨，性格也变得恶劣。幸运的是，当我快要绝望的时候，新闻拉住了我，没有让我滑向那个谁也不知道有没有底的深渊。

在看了新闻后才知道世界之大与我之渺小。新闻的内容很丰富，我的喜好也不尽相同，上到国家与国家之间，下到人与人之间。我从一个个真实的例子中看出：“人的一些美好的品质：诚信、正直、见义勇为、智慧……对于这个社会是多么重要!

书面表达评分标准“最高档”要求:“应用了较多的语法结构或词汇;语法结构或词汇方面有少许错误,但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致;有效地使用了语句间连接成分,使全文结构紧凑。”从历年书面表达高分文章来看,每篇文章都有“亮”点,即在用词、造句或段落安排上都有独到之处。要想获得高分就应在“正确”表达的基础上写出自己的特色,写出自己的“亮”点。

一、词汇选择——标新立异

在写作中“较高级词汇”的使用主要是指使用《大纲》上没有的词语、使用通过构词法变化来的新词、使用同(近)义词或反义词等来代替常见词语。

1)这栋房子在芳草街的一栋楼上。

A: The flat is in a building on Fangcao Street.

B: The flat situates in a building on Fangcao Street.

分析:is in是常见词语,而situates in则是《大纲》上没有的,属于高级词汇。

2)在周末我们做很多作业。

A: At weekends, we have a lot of homework to do.

B: At weekends, we have endless homework to do.

分析:B句在表达时没有使用过于直接的a lot of,而是使用了endless。endless就是由《大纲》词汇end加后缀-less变化来的。

3)洗澡间和厨房都很好。

A: The bathroom and the kitchen are good.

B. The bathroom and the kitchen are well-furnished.

在表达要点时,B句使用了well furnished,这比good语气强,也显得生动。

在造句时,“较高级词汇”如能运用贴切自然,哪怕整篇文章只用上一个,也会使你的作文显示出与众不同。

二、结构造句——与众不同

在造句时,既要使句子生动,又要使其简明扼要。

1、使用与人不同的表达方式,特别是提倡打破汉语句子结构的束缚而重组的句子更受欢迎。

1)唐山曾在二十世纪八十年代发生过一次大地震。

A: There was a strong earthquake in Tangshan in the 1980s.

B: A terrible earthquake hit/struck Tangshan in the 1980s.

大多数同学使用了there be结构,这是对的,但是B句却摒弃了常见句式。另辟蹊径而使用了“主语+谓语+宾语”结构,且使用了terrible,hit/strike这样的词汇,更是难

可贵的。

2)你八月十五日的来信我今天早晨收到了。

A:I received your letter which was written on August 15th this morning.(多数人使用的方式)

B: Your letter of August 15th reached/ got to me this morning.(与多数人使用的方式不同,简洁)

2.使用一些强势句式,如强调句、感叹句、倒装句等,增强语句的表现力。如:

3)阿福救了我妹妹。

A: Ah Fu saved my sister.(一般句式)

B: It was Ah Fu that saved my sister.(强调句式)

4)我们看到庄稼和蔬菜长势喜人很是高兴。

A: We were glad to see crops and vegetables growing well.(一般陈述句)

B: How glad we were to see crops and vegetables growing well.(感叹句)

3、句式多样,复杂得体。在写作中应避免使用相同长度的相同句型,而应注意句式的变化,如长短句结合,简单句、并列句与复合句共用,还可使用简化句等;一些较复杂的结构如独立主格,分词结构等也可使用。下面的表达中A句简单句多,而且多处使用there be结构,显得单调、乏味,而B句就有自己的特色(请同学们自己分析)。

5)这是一套25平方米的住房,住房里面有卧室、有洗澡间、有厨房;卧室里有床、沙发、桌子和椅子等。

A: Its a flat of 25 square metres. There is a bedroom in the flat. There is a bathroom and a kitchen in it, too. In the bedroom, there is a bed; there is a sofa, a desk and a chair as well.

B: Its a flat of 25 square metres, with a bedroom, a bathroom and a kitchen. In the bedroom there is a bed, a sofa, a desk and a chair.

三、布局谋篇——独具匠心

在写作中,我们可按时间、空间或其它逻辑顺序来安排各要点,同时为使主题突出,结构严谨,我们应注意学习和使用交代句以及段落的主题句等。在布局谋篇上,2002高考范文堪称典范。请看:

Opinions are pided on the question.

60% of the students are against the idea of entrance fees. They believe a public park should be free of charge. People need a place where they can rest and enjoy themselves. Charging entrance fees will no doubt keep some people away. What is more, it will become necessary to build gates and walls, which will do harm to the appearance of a city.

On the other hand, 40% think that fees should be charged because you need money to pay gardens and other workers, and to buy plants and young trees. They suggested, however, fees should be charged low.

1)该文使用Opinions are pided...作交代句,开门见山,随后两个段落均使用了主题句，使全文结构紧凑,表达严谨。

2)在表述要点时范文还对要点出场顺序作了调整,如“40%的同学认为应收门票,但不宜过高。”前部分作为主题句放在句首,而后部分另起一句放在句末:They suggested, however, fees should be charged low.这样就分清了轻重缓急,主题突出,条理清楚。

3)范文使用了and, what is more, however等连词,在段落之间使用了on the other hand(说明前后两个观点是相悖的),这些连接手段的运用加强了句子之间、段落之间的联系,使文章表达连贯,浑然一体。

4)范文在第二段为说明不收门票的“原因”时增加了Charging entrance fees will no doubt keep some people away.等细节,这也是解决句与句之间缺少连贯性的常见方法。

总之,要想使自己的文章有亮点,吸引读者,在考试中获得高分,就应在用词、造句、谋篇上下功夫,哪怕是有一处特长都是“亮”点,都是值得肯定的。

Water is the source of life. Human can not do without water, animals, plants cannot survive without water. We every day to drink water, water, not only we need water, the fish in the water, the crops of the fields, the trees on the hill, and so on all need water. Some people may think so: water is to burn forever, love how how waste waste, this idea is wrong, we should change the idea.

I listen to mama said, in our city the creek, at the time of their small river on the bottom, they often catch fish in the river, catch shrimp, game play, but now is full of rubbish, into a dry river.

Water had a close relationship with each one of us, if there is no water, crops cant grow, we have no food to eat and vegetables, we wash hands, wash dishes, laundry every day... A moment also can not do without water. We cant live without water. Since the water effect, we should save water, form the good habit of saving water, do people go to close the tap, dont throw the rubbish into the river... Keep water clean.

For all of us have a good living environment, let us together hand in hand together, starts from me, start from now, sets up the idea of saving water, protecting water, take good care of water is to take care of ourselves.

In order to our better future, we all work together!

水是生命的源泉。人类离不开水，动物、植物也离不开水。我们每天要喝水、用水，不光我们需要水，水里的鱼儿、田里的庄稼、山上的树木等等都需要水。有的人可能这么想：水是永远用不完，爱怎么浪费就怎么浪费，这种想法是不对的，我们应该改变这种想法。

我听妈妈说，在我们城里的这条小河，在她们小的时候河里清澈见底，她们经常在河水里捉鱼、捉虾、游戏玩耍，可是到了现在却到处是垃圾，成了一条干枯的小河。

水与我们每一个人都关系密切，如果没有水，农作物就无法生长，我们就没有吃的粮食和蔬菜了，我们每天洗手、洗菜、洗衣…一刻也离不开水。如果没有水，我们就不能生存。既然水的作用那么大，我们就应该节约用水，从小养成节约用水的好习惯，做到人走关好水龙头、不把垃圾扔到河里…使水能够保持干净。

为了我们大家有一个良好的生活环境，让我们一起携手起来，从我做起，从现在做起，树立起节水、护水的观念，爱护水就是爱护我们自己。

为了我们美好的未来，我们大家一起努力吧!

我的家乡在六朝古都南京，南京是个风景优美的大都市。

My hometown is in the ancient capital of Nanjing, Nanjing is a beautiful city.

南京有许多名胜古迹和风景区，比如：梅花山、夫子庙、雨花台、珍珠泉、玄武湖、中山陵……其中最吸引人的就是梅花山和夫子庙了。

There are many places of historic interest and scenic beauty and scenic areas, such as: Nanjing, Yuhuatai, plum hill, Confucius temple, Xuanwu Lake, Dr. Sun Yat-sens Mausoleum, Pearl spring...... One of the most attractive is the Plum Blossom Hill and Confucius temple.

春天一到，梅花山上的梅花就一朵接着一朵的开放了，它们张开粉红色的笑脸，好像在欢迎来自四面八方的客人哩。这时候，梅花山上人山人海、观者如堵，好像一幅美丽的图画。

In the spring, Plum Blossom Hill plum then a flower open, they open the pink face, seemed to welcome guests from all sides. At this time, the Plum Blossom Hill, Spectators stood round like a wall. huge crowds of people, like a beautiful picture.

一到休息日，夫子庙就人声鼎沸，人一走进去，就感觉挤得快要透不过气来了。每年春节这儿都会举办花灯展览，有荷花灯、兔子灯、狮子灯等各种各样的花灯。

A rest day, Confucius temple is Jaleo, people walked in, feel the squeeze to breathe. The annual Spring Festival will be held here lantern exhibition, lotus lamp, lamp, lamp rabbit lion and a variety of lanterns.

如果你不信的话，可以来我的家乡做客哦!

If you dont believe me, you can come to visit my hometown!

Mother’s love wins people’s praises for its selflessness. In fact, father’s love is as great as that. They bury their love in the deep bottom of their hearts and will never show it. My father is of this kind. I remembered once I felt ill. Mother wasn’t at home at that moment. Father acted as a father and as a mother as well. When he came home from work, he would cook dinner for me first. The way he fed me made me think of my kind and tender mother. His eyes were full of love and expectation. I did feel a father’s love at that time.

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Sports in our school have changed a lot.Now we have more than 30

minutes’rest after the second period in the morning every day.And we have more

than 30 minutes’exercise after the second class in the afternoon.So we have at

least one hour to exercise each day. Students get so excited at these

changes.More and more students take an active part in the ball

games，running，dancing，and jumping on the playground.Our school life is becoming

more wonderful. Doing sports is a good way to relax and keep fit.What’s more，a

healthy body call help us to study better and live a happier life.

With the development of Internet, more and more people tend to shop on the Internet. Online shopping has provided some benefits for us, but it also has some disadvantages at the same time.

For one thing, online shopping has brought some convenience for consumers. Instead of going one shop to another, people can choose and buy all kinds of commodities they like as long as they click the mouse gently. This is not only a better choice for the old who do not have enough energy to go outside but also a great convenience for those who have no time to go shopping in person. In addition, consumers have more choices and can do some comparison when they are shopping on the Internet. They can glance over various commodities in all shapes, sizes and colors and decided to buy or not. Furthermore, online shopping has made a great contribution to the development of express delivery industry.

However, for another, shopping on the Internet also has some shortcomings. Firstly, those who shop on the Internet can’t try the goods before they buy. Sometimes, the real goods are not the same as the goods they see on the Internet. Secondly, some shops on the Internet are dishonest and they would not deliver the goods after paying. And if this situation happens, the consumers would find nowhere to complain and never pull out the money any longer.

Therefore, we should pay more attention when shopping on the Internet.

随着互联网的发展,越来越多的人们倾向于在网上购物。网上购物为我们提供了一些好处,但同时它也有一些缺点。

首先,网上购物为消费者带来了一些便利。而不是一个商店到另一个地方,人们可以选择和购买各种各样的商品他们喜欢只要轻轻点击鼠标。这不仅是一个更好的选择的那些没有足够的精力去外出也很方便的,对于那些没有时间去购物。此外,消费者有更多的选择,可以做一些比较当他们在互联网上购物。他们可以浏览各种商品的形状,大小和颜色和决定购买与否。此外,网上购物的发展做出了很大贡献快递行业。

然而,另一方面,网上购物也有一些缺点。首先,那些在网上购物不能尝试之前购买的商品。有时,真正的货物不一样的货物他们看到在互联网上。其次,一些商店在互联网上是不诚实的,他们不会支付后交货。如果发生这种情况,消费者会发现没有抱怨,从不拿出这笔钱了。

因此,我们在网上购物时应该多注意。

There are seven people in my family. They are my father, my mother, my three sisters, my brother and I. Do you want to know my familys job? OK, let me tell you! My father is a doctor, and my mother is a nurse. They are work in same hospital. My father and my mother work are very hard. My three sisters, my brother and I are student. We are study very hard. Were like study, best. My father is strict with we, but we know he is very love we, and my mother she is benign with we, she is very love me, too. I am very happy, because I have a happy family.