暑假打工英语作文带翻译【实用20篇】

A Present For Mother’s Birthday

Everyone should give his mother a present when his mother’s birthday is coming. It is 25th May Sunday. Today is Han Mei’s mother’s birthday. So she wanted to give her mother a special present. What present should she give? Maybe a bunch of flowers a birthday card are the best presents. A card is cheaper. But it is bad for trees. The more I buy cards, the more trees will be cut by people. So what another present should she give? Let me tell you this present.

It was five o’clock. It was time to surprise her mother. When Han Mei’s mother came home, Han Mei said Happy Birthday to her mother. Then she cleaned her mother’s feet. As you can see, her mother was very surprise.

Why do you think it was a good present?

Last summer holiday I went to Paris with my parents by plane. First we visited the Arc and Triomphe, and we took many photos. Then we went to the Notre Dame, which is very wonderful. We saw a lot of interesting things. Finally we came to the Eiffel tower, and there were so many people, but they were all friendly. After that we sat on the grass, looking at the view. We felt very happy.

去年暑假我和父母坐飞机去了巴黎。我们先参观了阿尔克和凯旋门，我们拍了很多照片。然后我们去了巴黎圣母院，那里很壮观。我们看到很多有趣的东西。最后我们来到埃菲尔铁塔，那里人很多，不过他们都很友好。之后，我们坐在草地上，看风景。我们都非常高兴。

What a pleasant trip! I will never forget it.

真是一个愉快的旅行!我永远都不会忘记的。

Dear John， It’s Father’s Day today. It’s a special day， isn’t it？ I think we should do something to show our love for our fathers on this special day. My father and I are good friends. Whenever I meet with difficulties， he is always there， ready to help me. Today I will make a beautiful card for him， with my thanks and best wishes on it. Then I will help him wash the car this afternoon and cook his favorite food in the evening. Besides， I’ll take a walk with him after dinner and then play chess with him， for he likes it very much. I’m sure he’ll be very happy. What’s your plan for Father’s Day？ I’m looking forward to hearing from you. Yours，

亲爱的约翰： 今天是父亲节。它是一个特别的日子， 不是吗？ 在这个特别的日子我认为我们应该做一些事情来向我们的父亲表达我们的爱。我的爸爸和我是好朋友。不论我什么时候遇到困难， 他总是在那里准备帮助我。今天， 我将为他制作一张漂亮的卡片， 在上面写上我的谢意和最美好的祝愿。然后下午我将帮助他洗汽车， 在晚上做他最喜欢吃的食物。此外， 晚饭后我将和他散步， 然后和他下象棋， 因为他非常喜欢下象棋。我确信他将非常高兴。你的父亲节计划是什么？ 我期盼着你的来信。

暑假过了一半，爸爸学会了烤鸡，让我和他去烤鸡，每天给30元钱工钱，让我给他打工，我便答应了。到下午1点半时，我们就向蒓湖出发了!

到了蒓湖菜场，太阳火辣辣的，而爸爸却顶着烈日认真的一块一块的夹着木炭。爸爸满头大汗，我心里也不好地受，心想：“既然我是来打工的，就该行动起来!”我拿起毛巾，帮爸爸把脸上的汗擦地光光的，然后把毛巾挂在爸爸的肩膀上，有汗就可擦了，我想的周到吧!哈哈。垒好木炭，就往里面放硬纸、木头，这些可用于引火。爸爸发现打火机没了，就让我去商店买一个，我去买了个2元的，因为这种比较耐用!我把它交给爸爸，爸爸一下子就点着了火。半个小时后......炭烧红了，爸爸把它们像排兵布阵一样地摆放了起来，然后架上烤鸡，过程差不多每半个小时五串十五只，本来还可以再烤一串，可是最后一个烤位坏掉了，真是太气人了，差一串真是巨大的损失啊，你们不要不信，悲剧很快来到。下午4点时，一群人争先恐后的来买烤鸡，爸爸头次卖，手忙脚乱的，关键时刻还靠我，我帮他拿袋子、撒芝麻，另外我还是个小收银员哦!卖了二十多只，就没了，剩下的还没烤熟，走了好多人!导致剩下的卖了好长时间!到了6点多，就全卖完了，一共卖了六十多只，可真辛苦啊!

要回家喽，我做在车里，得到了我的30元工钱，但对我来说，得到的却不止三十元钱，还看到了大人们的辛苦，我暗下决心，一定要好好上学，长大之后来分担父母的辛苦!

导语：经历了高考后的暑假你有想过做什么吗?下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的优秀英语作文，欢迎阅读与借鉴，谢谢! ​

After the challenging College Entrance Examination, my anticipated summer holiday has begun. I will have a long winter holiday for almost three month. But I have already planned for it. Firstly, I will have a good rest at home and spend some time with my parents. I studied at school before, so I don’t have much time to company them. And then, I want to take a part-time job. I have graduated from senior school, and I think that a part-time job can help me being independent. I hope what I learn in school will be helpful to my new job. After earning some money, I want to have an after-graduation trip that I have been dreaming of for a very long time. My first choice is Xiamen, which is an attractive city. When the trip ends, it’s time for the college.

紧张的高考过后，我期待已久的暑假终于开始了。我将会有一个差不多三个月之久的暑假，而我也已经做好暑期计划了。首先，我会在家好好休息，花一些时间好好陪陪我的爸爸妈妈。之前我一直在学校上学，没有很多的时间可以陪伴他们。之后，我想做一份暑期兼职。我已经高中毕业了，我想做兼职能帮助我学会独立，也希望我以前所学的能用在工作中。等赚了一些钱之后，我想要梦想已久一次毕业旅行。我的首选之地是厦门，那是一个非常吸引人的城市。旅行结束的时候，我的大学生活就要开始了。

Some peolpe think there are more advantages for colleges students to take part-time jobs than disadvantagesothers dont think so.Whats your view on this?And tell why.

A serious problem has arisen in recent several years that more and more college students abandon study because of their taking part-time jobsso quite a few people are opposed to part-time jobs.Howevertaking part-time jobs has at least three benefits for college studens in my eyes.

Firststudents can promote their study through part-time jobs.For instanceIf a law student finds a part-time job in a law firmhis practice will enable him to better understand what hes learned from books.Whats morethe part-time job can offer him opportunities to go beyond what hes been taught in classand hell learn something that doesnt exist in books but in practice.

Secondstudents can also accumulate work experiences through part-time jobswhich will benefit their future job-hunting.Actuallypart-time jobs act as warm-up exercises for students to take full-time jobs after they graduateand help them prepare for their future careers.In additionas fresh blood in the societygraduated students are often unfavored in job-hunting markets for lack of practical work experiences.Its easier to find jobs for those who have accumulated experiences in part-time jobs.

Last but not the leastpart-time jobs can partly relieve students financial burdenespecially those who are from poor families.College tution fees have greatly increased in the past ten years due to the new educational policy.Many students from poor families cannot afford college feesand our bank system fail to loan college students as effectively as it does in developed countriesso taking part-time jobs becomes a way for them to meet their great expenses in campus lives.

Its an undenied fact that students break the balance between their jobs and studiesespecially when they fall into conflict with each other.But I think students should spend their spare time taking part-time jobs.Only following this principle can they benefit from their part-time jobs.

有些人认为有高校学生兼职利大于弊，其他人不这么认为。你怎么看？并告诉为什么。

出现了一个严重的问题在最近几年，越来越多的大学生放弃学习，因为他们的兼职工作，所以不少人都反对兼职。然而，兼职工作，至少有三个好处学院studens在我的眼睛。

首先，学生可以促进他们的研究通过兼职工作。例如，如果一个法律系的学生，在一家法律公司找到一份兼职工作，他的做法使他能够更好地了解他的书。更重要的是，兼职工作可以给他机会超越他已经在课堂上讲授，并他将学到的东西并不存在于书籍，但在实践中。

其次，学生也可以积累工作经验，通过做兼职工作，这将有利于他们未来的工作。实际上，兼职作为热身运动，让学生全职工作后，他们毕业，并帮助他们准备为他们的未来职业生涯。此外，作为社会的新鲜血液，毕业的学生往往unfavored在求职市场由于缺乏实际的工作经验，这是寻找那些在兼职工作中积累的经验的工作更容易。

最后但并非最不重要的，兼职工作可以减轻学生的经济负担，尤其是那些来自贫困家庭。学院tution费用大大增加在过去的十年里，由于新的教育政策。许多学生来自贫困家庭负担不起大学学费，我们的银行系统无法贷款大学生有效它在发达国家，因此兼职工作成为他们满足其巨大的开支在校园生活方式。

这是学生打破他们的工作和学习之间的平衡的一个无可争议的事实，特别是当他们陷入互相冲突。但我认为学生应该把业余时间兼职工作。只有遵循这一原则可以受益于他们的兼职工作。

January 16 20xx

20xx年1月16号

Today, I still went to my mothers office. My mother was very busy, so was my father. They always live in Beijing. They must get up early. Because they will manage the factory. So I know they are very laborious. So I should save my money. Also I should help them. Although I cant do something useful, but I think I should share the work with them. I am one of my family member. In the future, I will take a job and work. It time for me to begin to learn how to work.

今天,我还是去了我母亲的办公室。我母亲很忙碌,所以是我父亲。他们一直生活在北京。他们必须早起。因为他们将管理工厂。所以我知道他们很辛苦。因此,我要节省我的钱。此外,我应该帮助他们。虽然我不能做一些有用的,但我认为我应该与他们共同工作。我对我的家庭成员之一。今后,我将工作和工作。它的时候我开始学习如何工作。

I like riding bicycle

Today,I rode bicycle to travel around the Guilin central.I enjoy the

scenery while riding bicycle.The scenery of Guilin was so beautiful that I

couldnt help to take photos,which finally cause my cellphone lacked of

memory.Riding bicycle is not only helps me to keep fit，it also a good way for me

to travel and enjoy scenery.I like riding bicycle.

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我喜欢骑自行车

今天，我骑自行车游玩桂林市区。我一边骑车一边欣赏风景。桂林的风景真的很美丽，让我忍不住拍照，结果导致我手机内存不足。骑车不仅帮助我保持身体健康，对我来说也是可以用于游玩和欣赏风景的好方式。

Today ,my mother and I cleaned the house. I cleaned the windows hard because

it is so dirty. Then I cleaded it again. After that, I cleaned the floor and

swept it. I thought it is dirtier than windows. Then I cleaned the tables and

lots of chairs. We washed all of the clothes and quilts. Until four o`clock, we

tidied all of the rooms up. My room was the cleanest and brightest. I was so

happy and satisfied. Then my mother said: "You`re successful."

今天,我的母亲,我打扫了房间。我擦窗户难的,因为它太脏了。然后我cleaded一遍。之后,我打扫地板和清扫。我认为这是肮脏窗口。然后我打扫桌子和大量的椅子。我们所有的衣服和棉被。4点钟之前,我们整理所有的房间。我的房间是最亮的。我非常高兴并且很满意。然后我母亲说:“你是成功的。”

The summer vacation had come again. I was happy that I could forget about school at least for a while. Lest I fool around all through this summer vacation, I made a plan as to how to spend it. First, I thought I should go over all the knowledges that my teachers taught in the previous term so that I could have a better understanding of them. Then I thought I should take up some forms of exercise, such as running and playing basketbal , to keep me physically strong. It stood to reason that with such a good plan I would make the best of my vacation time. I did, because I lived up to what I had planned.

暑假又一次来临了。我很高兴我至少能忘记学校一段时间。比起我游手好闲度过整个暑假，我做了个计划来度过它。首先，我觉得我应该复习一遍所有上个学期老师教过的知识以至于能够让我更好的理解。然后，我觉得我应该做些各种形式的锻炼，比如跑步，打篮球来让我的身体更强壮。因为有这么一个计划我将最好的利用这个暑假的时间。我就是这样做的，因为我按照我的计划在生活。

[初二暑假英语日记带翻译

你的暑假是怎么样过的呢?一起看看以下作者们的英语暑假日记作文吧! 暑假的英语日记一

It was a sunny day today,when i got up in the morning,i decided to see my grandparents.so i took the bus and got there at noon,they were happy to see me,and i was very happy,too.

In the afternoon,my farther asked me to help him water the plant,and i was happy to see the flowers smiling in the wind.

In a word,today is a unforgetive day.because i saw my relatives and helped people. 暑假的英语日记二

I enjoy summer vacation very much. Because summer vacation is the longest vacation of the year. We have more than fifty days to rest. Though it is very hot, we can either go to swim or stay in the air-conditioned room . In the evening, I like to go shopping with my friends. We can eat many things in summer, such as ice creams, watermelons, grapes,so on.In summer, I always go on a trip with my parents. Its a good chance for us to visit some nice interesting places. 暑假的英语日记三

In the morning, it is very fine! Then I climb the mountain with family, the air on the mountain is very fresh, the flowers plants and trees on the mountain all seem extremely beautiful. In the afternoon, I go to friends home to play, the friend entertains me warmly, show me a lot of books of his , has listened to his CD for me , then also ask me to eat a sumptuous dinner. Coming back home in the evening, family and I sat and watched TV together, we are returning and eating the fruit while chatting, the whole family is happy and harmonious! 暑假的英语日记四

Last year, I go to Beijing with my parents. We go to the Great Wall and visit it.And we visit the famous Forbidden City.They are the prettiest buildings I have ever seen.But there is so hot ,we could bear.So, we buy many drinks and ice-creams,We are play have fun very much and very much! 暑假的英语日记五

Times flys. My summer holiday is coming to the end. My holiday is just so so. It is not too much difference as before. At the biginning of the vacation, I was doing my homework. After all, study comes first. After I finished my homework, it was almost the end of July. It is the time for me to help my family for harvest. It is so tired to to the farm work. Howevr, being a member of our family, I have to give a hand. Watching the achievement, I felt proud though I just help a little. After finished the farm work, I found myself become much more tan. Who cares! It was my happy time, when I finished all the things. I went out with my friends almost everyday. Sometimes we played games or sport or went hiking. Sometimes we went shopping in the evening for the sun is too heavy in the daytime. We felt uncomfortable. But now there are two days left before the school opening time. So I have to stay at home for a good rest to store energy for my study. Everything is so perfect. It is 11 o’clock. I think I have to say good ninght now.

时间飞逝。我的暑假就要结束了。我的假期一般般。在假期一开始的时候，我写家庭作业。毕竟，学习是最重要的嘛。我做完作业后，几乎到了七月底了。是时候帮助家人收获了。干农活是如此的累。然而，作为家庭的一员，我不得不帮忙。虽然我只是帮了一点点，但是看着那些成果我感到很骄傲。干完农活后，我发现自己变得更黑了。不过，谁在乎呢。当我完成了所有的事情就是我的快乐时光。我几乎每天都和我的朋友出去玩。有时我们玩游戏或运动或去爬山。有时我们晚上出去购物，因为白天太阳太烈了。我们觉得难受。但现在离开学还有两天的时间。所以我必须呆在家里为学习养精蓄锐。一切都是那么的美好。现在已经十一点了。我想是该说晚安的时候了。 暑假的英语日记六

This July, I graduated from primary school. I was enrolled to a good middle school. Therefore, I had a happy and leisure summer holiday. In the middle of July, I attended to a summer camp. It’s about English. There were twenty five students in the camp. We all like English very much. Together, we studied and played. There were many activities, team work or single performance. We tried our best to put ourselves into this big family. Most of the time, we talked to each other in English. If we really don’t know how to express in English, we could ask for help. Our teachers were so great that they could help us a lot. They were so active that make us acted as they did. I am happy to attend this activity.

这个七月，我从小学毕业了。我被一所优秀的中学录取了。因此，我度过了一个开心闲暇的暑假。七月中旬，我参加了英语夏令营。营里总共有25名学生，我们都很喜欢英语。我们一起学习，一起玩耍。有很多活动，有团队和个人表演。我们尽自己最大努力融入这个大家庭。大部分的时间，我们都是用英语交谈。如果我们真的不知道怎样用英语表达的话，我们可以寻求帮助。能够帮助我们很多，我们老师觉得很棒。他们是如此活跃以至于使我们也像他们一样。我很开心能够参加这次活动。

[暑假初二英语日记6篇

Chinese Spring Festival celebrating the end of winter and the warmth of

spring. It began in the last day of the lunar year, end in the 15th day of lunar

New Year, also is the Lantern Festival.

During the Spring Festival, people use red lantern and Spring Festival

couplets decorate a house, put on all kinds of colored clothes, often visit

friends and relatives or together eat dumplings, fish, meat and other delicious

food. The children are looking forward to receiving red envelope money, and

together they play each other the fireworks, with happy.

Street with dragon and lion dance and some other carnival activities, CCTV

will held the grand Spring Festival gala.

中国的春节庆祝冬天的结束和春天的温暖。从农历年的最后一天开始，到了农历的第十五天结束，也是元宵节。

春节期间，人们用红灯笼和春联装饰房子，穿上各种颜色的衣服，经常拜访亲朋好友，或者一起吃饺子、鱼、肉和其他美味的食物。孩子们盼望着收到红包，他们一起玩烟花，开心地玩着。

街上有舞龙舞狮等狂欢活动，中央电视台将举行盛大的春节联欢晚会。

The weather of today is very comfortable, though the weather forecast said

it is cloudy, but just a little bit rain, very cool.The weather forecast said it

is cloudy, and friends are about to play basketball, but unfortunately, in the

rain it can not play. after afternoon the rain stopped to help my mother to buy

food supermarket. Generally it was not bad mood today.

今天的天气很舒适，虽然天气预报说今天是阴天，但只是一点点的雨，很cool.The天气预报说今天是阴天，和朋友约打篮球，但不幸的是，在雨中它不能玩。下午雨停后要帮妈妈买菜的超市。通常它不是今天心情不好。

.To celebrate the 60th anniversary of Peoples Republic of China.

In this unusual year,the number of tragic,how many have touched,how many dreams,how much glory there is,bearing in mind the hearts of the people in China,written into the history of the Republic.

The success of the Beijing Olympic Games,the Chinese people realize the dream of a century.Chinese athletes to outstanding athletic ability and indomitable fighting spirit of the first gold medal total to create the best score in history.

Win back the Shenzhou VII,the three astronauts returned to space out all smiles.Shenzhou VII manned space mission a complete success,the implementation of Chinas space technology development milestone major leap forward,the people of China are climbing the peak of world science and technology of another great feat,but also dedicated to the great homeland of the precious 60-year-old birthday present

We firmly believe that the great rejuvenation of the Chinese nation on the journey is bound to occur one after another glorious 30 years!The rise of the Chinese nation will surely make the world as we can be proud of!

Everyone always has a good Sunday. On Sundays, everybody does some things

what he like.Last Sunday, Jack had a relaxing Sunday. He got up 6 o’clock. After

breakfast, Jack played basketball with his friends. They were very happy. Then

he played the guitar in the room. And he sang songs very loudly. Though it’s

very relaxing for him, it also make very noisy for neighbors. Maybe he should

turn down the music. At noon, jack fed his pet cat henry. He is Jack’s favorite.

Jack always play with him on the weekends. At night, he watched TV on the sofa.

At the some time, he ate many delicious snacks. So he really had a great time.At

the of day, jack thought if I always have a relaxing Sunday like today. I will

become the happiest boy all over the world.

这几天总想试试打工的滋味，我先鬼鬼祟祟的站到老妈身后，把老妈吓了一大跳。我说道：“妈，我准备给您打工，工资一小时一元，十五分钟五角。”妈妈怔了一下就说：“好吧！打一个暑假的工吧！”我就抢下妈妈的水电刀，帮妈妈切西瓜，吃完后，帮妈妈拖了地。妈妈就付了一元，说：“我先预付下午的工资，好好干哦！”我打趣道：“是！金长官。”妈妈说：“去洗手！”我洗完手后，乖乖地去做作业了。

下午，全家吃完饭后，我主动收好了碗筷，拿去洗了。妈妈说：“工作积极，奖励——一角！”我差点没晕倒……

我认为：打工可以锻炼体力，帮妈妈分担家务，还可以赚到零花钱呢！真是一举两得！但可惜，爸爸极力反对，我的零花钱只存了6元就中止了，我不明白，我赚的钱又没用它，我只是想拥有自己的钱而已。在学校时忘带什么必需品就可以买的。真想不透爸爸是什么心思。

One day in this summer vacation, my mother solemnly said to me, "child,

prevention of drowning is a major safety issue for your students during their

holidays. For the sake of safety, you should learn how to swim. I signed up for

a training class for you. Lets go and experience it! " I cant help shivering

when I hear the word "swimming". Thought: no! Im a "dry duck", in case I fall

into the water... Although I dont want to, my mother still takes me to the

swimming pool in a hurry.

With everything ready, I walked slowly to the pool in my swimsuit. Looking

around carefully, the environment in the pool was very clean. There were many

adults and children playing in the pool, with laughter. The water in front of me

is clear and there are waves rippling away from time to time

I unknowingly came to the entrance of the pool, holding the railing tightly

in both hands and walking down the ladder step by step. Just touched the water,

a cool then hit, I scared legs are soft. All of a sudden, a black figure like an

arrow quickly swam, only to see the black figure suddenly raised his head,

seriously said to me: "in the future, I will be your male coach!" It turned out

to be the coach. He was dark, tall, and severe. I cant help getting nervous

again for fear that if I dont study well, I will be criticized by the coach.

But the way the coach swam just now is really like a fish in the water. Its

really enviable.

The first class soon began, just listen to the coach shouting: "now start

learning to hold your breath, first take a deep breath, and then drill your head

into the water, exhale!" While talking, he demonstrated to us that there were

many small bubbles in the water from time to time. After a while, the coach

looked up and said, "OK, now you practice freely. Dont be lazy. Ill check it."

Finally, its our turn to "show our skills". Im so excited that I dance. I bury

my head in the water like a coach and spit bubbles under the water. Strings of

bubbles are like pearls, beautiful; In the blink of an eye, it broke up.

Immersed in the bubble, I suddenly felt a little bit difficult to breathe and

uncomfortable, so I had to look up and return to the water.

Later, I calmly passed the "suffocation" of this pass, but also got the

praise of the coach, not to mention how happy I was, and my face was full of

happy brilliance. Before the tension like the winter swallow, disappeared

without a trace. The next training, I will try to learn more swimming skills,

can not be proud of a small success!

July 22th Thursday sunny

Today I came to the city of Bishan,its a beautiful city.Its the shoes centre of western china. I think many people know it. It developed very quickly these years.More more people move in it. Im pleased to be a Bishan people.

July 13 2014

It was the first day of our summer holiday. All of us were very happy. Why? Because we have one months to do things we love to do. We are free. Although we have some homework. But we can finish them in several days. And the rest time we can make good use of. My god! We have been very tired after hard studying. In summer holidays, I will have a good rest.

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2014年7月13日

这是我们的暑季假期的第一天。我们大家都非常高兴。为什么呢?因为我们有一个月做我们爱做的事情。我们是自由的。虽然我们有一些功课。但我们可以在数天内完成。和休息时间，我们可以好好利用。我的上帝!我们一直很疲倦经过艰难学习。在冬季假期，我将有一个良好的休息时间。

[初三英语日记带翻译范本

My Father

There is always a brilliant image living in my heart. That is my dear father. Seen through the eyes of many other people, father seems to be a very ordinary person. But he is quite extraordinary in my eyes, I have never lost my wonder at his good-personalities such as diligence, devotion, care, optimism ever since my childhood.Being a farmer, father works very hard in the fields all the year round. He works from dawn till dusk every day and even till midnight when it is the harvest season. He seldom enjoys leisure with other farmers even if the farm work is not much. He chooses to live a busy life with reluctance to stop for a while.

Father devotes all himself to our family. As we are poor, he always tries his best to support our family and afford the tuitions for my brother and me. For the whole family, for brother and me, he never stops working laboriously in the fields throughout the year. Now he has got a wrinkled face and white hair because of excessive hard work, looking much older and weaker than any other person of his age. In spite of all this, father never complains to us. It is his full devotion that were living a better life now. It is his full devotion that both my brother and I are able to study at college.Father shows much care to us children and my mother as well. Whenever there is any delicious food on the table, he just leaves it to us while he takes the simple one himself. If my brother and I fall ill, he will not hesitate a moment to get some medicine for us or take us to see the doctor. My mother suffers a bad disease. Father looks after her very carefully. He never lets mother do any heavy work both at home and in the field. Mother appreciates him m much that she often praises him as a model husband before others.

Father is a person full of optimism. He never complains about our poor life. He is never frustrated by trouble. He often tells us that everything will be all right if we have enough confidence in life. Due to his optimism, we are all confident to face our life and work.

We all think that father is not in the least an ordinary man. He plays an extraordinary role in my family. We cant have anything without him. Now Im pursuing further studies at college far away from father. I miss him very much. And I often see him in my dreams. His great image is deeply carved in my mind.

我父亲的光辉形象永远是一种生活在我的心里吧.”那是我亲爱的爸爸.在许多其他人的眼中,父亲似乎是一个很普通的人.但在我的眼里他很特别,自从我的童年他在我眼中一直都是勤奋、敬业、保健、乐观.

作为一个农民,父亲在田里工作很努力.收获的季节，他每天从早到晚工作,直到午夜时.他很少像其他的农民享受休闲,即使在农场工作不多的时候.他选择一个繁忙的生活不情愿停下来。

父亲为了我们这个家奉献了他的全部.当我们贫穷时,他总是尽自己最大的努力来支持我们的家庭和支付我哥哥和我的学费.为整个家庭,为哥哥和我,他总是不停地在地里工作一整年.现在他因为过度辛勤工作已经有了一个满是皱纹的脸和白色毛发,岁,比任何其他与他相同的年龄的人.虽有这一切的事,父亲从不抱怨.这是他的全部奉献,我们正处在一个更好的生活.这是他的全部奉献,我的兄弟和我都能在大学读书。

父亲十分关心我们，和我母亲一样.每当有什么好吃的食物放在桌子上,他只是让我们吃自己吃少点.如果我和我兄弟生病,他会毫不犹豫地让拿些药给我们或带我们去看医生.我的母亲受严重的疾病.父亲照料得很认真.他从不让妈妈在家里和田间做什么繁重的工作.感谢他的母亲,她经常在别人面前称赞他为模范丈夫。

父亲是一个十分乐观的人.他从不抱怨我们贫穷的生活.他从未灰心丧气.他经常告诉我们,一切都会好起来的,如果我们有足够的信心.由于他的乐观,我们都是自信的面对我们的生活和工作。我们都认为,父亲是不平凡的人.他在我的家庭中具有非常重要的作用.我们能不能有什么东西.现在我继续进修大学远离的父亲.我怀念他.我经常看到他在我的梦.他的伟大的形象深深刻在我的脑海里.

评语： 本文作者以朴实的语言充满感情地刻画了父亲的不平凡的形象，分别从四个不同的角度描述了父亲的勤劳、奉献、关爱和乐观。内容真实感人，行文简洁流畅，结构清晰，组织有条有理，首尾呼应，给读者以强烈的感染力。 作者用词简洁精确，并能很好地尝试一些新学的词汇及表达，使简洁的行。文更为生动。作者没有运用太多复杂的句式，但能适当运用介词短语、分词结构、强调及重复的手法，恰到好处 地突出了行文句式的变化，使文章更耐读。

I have a best friend, we know each other when we are five years old, now we talk about everything. But sometimes we will have the argument, none of us want to give in first. We make a deal that the next day we will meet in a place every time, so we become good again. I cherish our friendship so much.

我有一个最好的朋友,我们彼此认识的时候是在我们五岁的时候,现在我们无所不谈。但有时我们会有争吵,谁也不想先屈服。我们达成协议,第二天我们会在一个地方见面,这样我们再次和好。我珍惜我们的友谊。