写小白兔的英文作文最新20篇

吴伊涵

“小白兔，白又白，两只耳朵竖起来。”小朋友，你知道吗？我也有一只小白兔呢，它的名字叫糖宝。

这只小兔子是朋友送我的。一开始，我以为它是柔弱的“小女孩”，其实呀，它是一个强壮的“女汉子”。

糖宝的耳朵又长又直，像极了天线，眼睛水灵灵的，红红的眼珠像极了红宝石，嘴巴分成三瓣，吃东西的时候，三瓣嘴快速地一张一合，连胡须也动了起来，可爱极了。糖宝身上披着白大衣，身体缩成一团，远远望去，像一个雪球。

糖宝的腿矫健敏捷十分有力，只见它前腿一蹲，后腿一蹦，便跳出了几十厘米。我暗暗地想：糖宝，你快长大，将来一定能做一名为小兔国效劳的跳远运动员！

糖宝的警惕性可高了。每次给它喂食，它都是小心翼翼地碰一碰，又闻了闻，见没什么动静，才用力咬住食物，拖回窝饱餐一顿。

糖宝有时候也是淘气包。有一次，我准备去阳台浇花，发现有什么东西在吱吱作响，定睛一看，原来是糖宝在吃花盆里的花。结果妈妈以为是我摘了花，把我骂了一顿，真是让人哭笑不得。

这就是我那可爱又淘气的小白兔糖宝，我很喜欢它！

People always say that spring is the most beautiful season. But I don’t

think so. I like summer, autumn even winter better than spring. Because the

weather in spring is changeable. Maybe it is warm today, it will be cold

tomorrow. I often catch a cold in spring. Besides this, it often rains in

spring. I can’t go out to play ball games. I have to stay at home to spend my

time. How boring it is! Some people think the flowers in spring are very

beautiful, but I think the flowers in winter are more beautiful, because they

live through the extremely cold weather and we should learn from them.

Dear Mother,

How are you these days? How is your work going?

Mom, I know that I have done a lot of sorry for you since I was a child, but

you never beat me and scolded me, instead, you reasoned with me.

Once, you and dad took me to the store to buy clothes, the lamplight shine,

there there are many beautiful clothes, all of a sudden I didnt concern about

the small store in a saw a white dress, the dress with a picture of a man

holding a little girl, little girl holding a womans picture, are there beside

the picture of a bunch of pink small butterfly in dance. I wanted the dress so

badly that I ran to you and said, "Mommy, mommy, do you see that white dress? I

want that dress!" You go over and look at the price tag. A: wow! This dress

costs a thousand dollars! You shook your head. I see you dont buy for me, use

"cry", while crying also on the ground roll. I had no choice but to buy the

dress.

Mother I want to say to you: "Sorry!" I have acted in love with you many

times since I was a child, but you always bought me what I wanted with a smile.

I know that you have worked hard for this money. So, here, I say to you:

"Sorry!"

Mom, I know how much you have given to our family over the years. Behind your

success are always a lot of difficulties around you, but you are not afraid of

difficulties, you overcome the difficulties. Mom, I hope you will pay more

attention to your health in the future!

Finally, I wish my mother a long life and a successful job!

Your child:

Last summer holiday, I went to Beijing for a week. The first day when I took off at the capital airport , it gave me the first feeling was cleanand tidy. The people in Beijing were very friendly. T he second day, I visited Beijing city. I went to the WangFujing Ave , I tasted many famous snacksand Beijing Roast Duck, they are very delicious. I also went to the XinDongfang square, it was a very big shopping mall, it took me about half an hour to walk between two doors. I can saw many famous brands: Cucci, Chanel, Rolex, Seiko, even the new Audi cars. It made me really want to stay in Beijing .The third day I visited the Tian’anmen Square, and it’s very beautiful. And the Chang’an Ave is wide ,straight and clean. The forth day, I went to the Forbidden City. It made me felt the emperor ’ s royal mausoleum was very luxury. The fifth day I went to the Summer Palace, I went boating there. The sixth day, I visited the Great Wall, it’s very terrific, this great architectural complex told us how clever the Chinese people are ! T he last day, I visited the Beijing University ----one of the topest universities of China . There are many famous people were graduated t here.

That’s a happy travel. In the future, I want to visit many countries. This is my dream.

一天，万里无云，小白兔在森林里采蘑菇，突然它听见了一阵嚎啕大哭，它想：到底是谁在哭呀？于是它像风一样跑到了一片草地上。原来是小花猫在哭叫。小白兔问小花猫：“你为什么在哭呀？”“森林里有一只凶猛的狮子，他说明天就要把我给吃掉。”小花猫说。

小白兔灵机一动，想到了一个好办法。第二天很快就到了，小白兔上气不接下气地跑到狮子身边说：“狮子大王，井里有一只和你一样的大狮子。”狮子半信半疑地说：“怎么可能？”小白兔说“不信你跟我到井边看一看。”小白兔和狮子来到了了井边，狮子趴在井口一看果然有一只和自己一样的狮子。狮子大王问井里的狮子：“听说你要和我战斗。”井里的狮子没有回应，狮子大王怒气冲冲，就跳下井，没过多久，狮子就被水淹死了。

从此森林里的动物们就过上了安居乐业的生活！

周子熙

我家养了一只可爱的小兔子。它是我七岁生日时，我爸爸送给我的。

它长着一身雪白的毛，有着一对长长的耳朵，眼睛红得像红宝石，所以我给它取名叫“红宝石”，你觉得我给它取的名字好听吗？

不过，这可不是它的特点，它的特点可鲜明啦，请听我一一道来。

它可怕生了。记得有一次，我表妹到我家来吗，一看见它，便喜欢得不得了，伸出手来就要抱。可是红宝石马上躲开表妹的手，向别处奔逃。表妹马上追上去，结果他们太不小心，表妹把一个精美花瓶打碎在地上，而红宝石以为是自己撞掉的，马上躲进了一个橱柜里。而小妹追过去，发现找不到它了，便坐在地板上大哭起来。我生气地走过去，心里想：你打碎了花瓶还好意思哭？我批评了她，但谁知她哭得更萌了，搞得我心浮气躁。没办法，我只好从冰箱里取出两个新鲜胡萝卜，切成片放在盘子里，引诱它出来，但红宝石一直保持高度警惕不肯出来。小妹急得又蹦又跳，把我快烦死了。

终于，过了几分钟，红宝石抵不住胡萝卜的诱惑，慢慢地出来了，本来红宝石就怕生，所以它一看见小妹在旁边，又马上躲起来了，最后我不知如何是好，只好让小妹先去看电视，而我慢慢把它引出来，抱在手上，就只能让小妹摸摸了。

红宝石不仅非常怕生，而且还是个大吃货。

记得有一次，我和妈妈在外面买了一大袋胡萝卜，准备以后慢慢喂给它吃，买完后，放在家里后我和妈妈出去了。但是一回来，就发现，那个袋子破了一个大洞，而里面的胡萝卜也面目全非。我一惊，走过去一看，发现红宝石正在里面津津有味地啃胡萝卜呢！那可爱的萌样子真是惹人喜爱。

这怕生又贪吃的红宝石，我喜欢你，你真可爱。

白兔是一种可爱的动物，很讨人喜欢。

它四肢灵活，行动敏捷。小小的鼻子上，有一双红红的眼睛。身上毛茸茸的毛，柔软得像一条棉被。一条短而粗的尾巴总放在屁股正面，显得非常可爱。

小白兔跑得非常快。有一次，我和小白兔出去玩，我走着走着，“咦？小白兔哪去了？”原来小白兔到草丛里去了，我用手一抓，没抓到，又用手一抓，嘿！又没抓到，因为小白兔跑得实在是太快了，我得一路小跑才能追上它。我还小白兔玩起了捉迷藏，我躲在树后，小白兔根据我的气味找到了我。小白兔真聪明。小白兔最喜欢吃白菜和切片的胡萝卜，有时给它苹果它也吃，吃东西的时候总是一小口一小口地吃，细嚼慢咽的样子真好玩。晚上的时候，它睡在纸箱子里，我还在纸箱子里放一些白菜和胡萝卜，我会在在纸箱子里放些麦草，如果它大小便了，我会保持它清洁。

小白兔给我的生活添加了许多乐趣，我要爱护小白兔，保护小白兔，不让它受到伤害。

孙博乐

今天下午，阳光明媚，风和日丽。兔妈妈让小兔去采蘑菇。小兔走到了一条小河旁，它准备过河，可是桥不见了，怎么办呢？小兔急得像热锅上的蚂蚁团团转，但是他就是不肯向其他的小动物求助。忽然小兔听到了一个巨大的声音，原来是一头大象正往这边走来，大象看见了小兔在这里转来转去，他便问小兔：“小兔，你怎么了”，小兔回答道：“我想去河对岸，但是河挡住了我的去路”。大象俯下身子说：“你到我的背上来我背着你过河”，小兔高兴地蹦到了大象的背上，大象背着小兔慢慢地过了河，小兔对大象说：“谢谢你背我过河”，大象说：“不客气，但是你要记住，有困难就要求助”，小白兔惭愧的低下了头。

a letter to my parents

dear mom & dad,

i love you! i love you so much! i love you with all my heart!

thank you so much for bringing up! thank you so much for raising me. i know

how hard you’ve worked during the past years. i can image how many difficulties

and obstacles you’ve conquered. i can imagine all the problems you have faced

and all the sweat and tears you have shed to make my life better. i can fully

understand what a huge responsibility it is to raise a child. you’ve been very

patient with me. you’ve encouraged me and you’ve helped me. you’ve tried your

hardest to give me the best things in life. you’ve made a lot of sacrifices and

many difficult choices. i also know that you have great expectations of me. you

want me to be very successful and happy. you want me to be the best person i can

be. you want me to do great things with my life. you want me to make the world a

better place. i know you have so many so many hopes and dreams for my

future.

today i want to tell you something extremely important.

today i want to tell you that you dont need to worry about me any more.

im grown up! i will be responsible for my life and for my future. i will study

very hard. i will exercise everyday to keep fit. i will read english every

morning and every night. i will make the best use of every spare minute. i will

be happy, confident, positive and energetic everyday!! i will develop good

habits and use them to constantly improve myself. i will never do anything that

would harm my body or my mind. i will never do anything that would make you feel

disappointed or ashamed. i will learn as much as i can and become smarter and

stronger every day. i have learned by watching you that the best way to reach my

goals is to work hard and never give up. you’re my best role models. you set a

great example for me.

i have so many great dreams. i know that realizing these dreams will take a

lot of time and effort. but dont worry about me. i have strong confidence in

myself. i know if i keep trying, keep working hard and keep dreaming, i will

definitely realize all my dreams. i will be somebody special. but i will not

only care about myself. i will contribute to my school, my hometown and my

country. i will contribute to society. i will use all my abilities and talents

to help my family and my country have a glorious future. i will make a

difference in this world.

dear mom and dad, you’ll be proud of me! you will see great results from

all your hard work and sacrifice. thank you very much for your continued

support! thank you very much for your patience, love and understanding. i love

you! i appreciate you! i’m very proud of you!

exercise every day to keep healthy! enjoy life every day and stay happy! my

only hope for you is you both to enjoy continued health and happiness. you

brought me into this word to share your life. i will do my best to make sure

each day of it is filled with joy and pride.

mom & dad, you are the best parents in the world! i don’t know what i

would have done without you.

all my everlasting love,

your daughter

前不久，我家买来了两只小白兔，准备饲养，我可高兴极了！

小白兔身上毛茸茸的，摸上去软软的，暖暖的，两只耳朵竖得直直的，眼睛睁得圆圆的。它们一蹦一跳，煞是可爱。

我发现小白兔很能吃：白菜叶、萝卜、莴苣叶及各种野菜，都是它们的最爱，从早到晚不停的吃。不过，兔子不能喝水，哪怕菜叶上有一丁点水珠都要揩干了才能吃，否则就会拉稀。它们吃菜可有趣啦，咬着一片菜叶，牙齿不停的咀嚼，嘴唇不停的颤动，菜叶不停的往肚里送，就像一台不停运转的机器。它们吃菜还有一个特点，就是喜欢抢着吃，明明摆着很多菜，只要第一只咬了一片菜叶，另一只马上从它嘴里抢。那抢吃的镜头，真让我百看不厌。

它们还很讲卫生。我打扫兔笼时，两只小白兔俨然两个小孩子，蹦蹦跳跳的，不时的用两只前脚抹抹脸、抹抹胡须，那是它们洗脸。它们的大小便都拉在一个角落，从不乱拉。

爸爸说过年了宰了吃，我可舍不得呢！

In school,I work very hard and I rank in the top of my class.Therefore,my classmates would like to ask me some questions about study when they do not ask for teachers.I like helping others.Firstly,when others need help,I want to give them a hand.They come to me,because they trust me.

This makes me happy.Secondly,I can get help from others,too.Once you did some favors to them,they are more likely to help you.Finally,helping others is helping myself,too.When I solve problems,I get improvement at the same time.

201X年 X月X日 晴天以前我家养了两只活泼可爱的小白兔，我给他们起了两个名字，分别是：贝贝、丫丫。贝贝比较听话，丫丫比较淘气。

它们身上披着雪白的大绵袄。一对长长的小耳朵，常常转向左，转向右，好像在探听着什么秘密。一双红红的眼睛闪闪有光，特别引人注目。一个小小的翘翘的鼻子，总是一纵一纵的。小兔子的嘴巴是三瓣嘴，吃起东西来，三瓣嘴一动一动的非常有趣。它的前脚短，后脚长。走起路来总是一蹦一跳的，跑的又快又远。它的尾巴很短，像是一个毛绒绒的小球贴在屁股上，可爱极了!

早上，我总是先喂它们吃东西然后我在吃早饭。每次我拿大白菜和胡萝卜去喂它们时，它们就会争先恐后的吃起来。吃饱后，贝贝和丫丫就会眯着眼睛挤在一个角落里舒舒服服地睡觉了，但是它们的嘴还在动，好像还在品尝菜叶的味道。

有一次我不在家。兔子饿了，自己跑去吃黄瓜。我回来后，我马上到厨房拿两大片菜叶喂它们吃，谁知丫丫一闻就跑开，贝贝津津有味的吃了起来。这时我才明白，厨房里的几根鲜嫩的黄瓜是丫丫这个淘气包偷吃了黄瓜。我把它轻轻的打了一顿，从此以后它再也不敢偷吃黄瓜了。作文

我多么喜欢这两只又活泼又可爱的小白兔啊!

Dear Santa claus:

Hello

My name is Yifan, Christmas is coming, I wish you a merry christmas! I

would like to get a gift like the "viaduct" this year! My mom and dad told me

that you would meet my requirements, right? I promise: I will take good care of

you gave me the gift, and after the play, I will own the good to clean up their

own toys, no need to help me. So, you will continue to give me a gift next year,

right?

OK, just write it, Im looking forward to the coming of Christmas. I wish

you a happy day!

This

Salute!

Love you all

亲爱的圣诞老人：

您好!

我叫一凡，圣诞节就要来了，我先祝您圣诞快乐!今年的圣诞节我多想得到一件像“高架桥”的礼物啊!我的爸爸妈妈告诉我说您会满足我的要求的，对吧?我保证：我会好好的爱护您送给我的礼物，而且玩过之后，我会自己收拾好自己的玩具，不用爷爷帮我的。这样，您明年会继续送我礼物的，对吧?

好吧，就写到这力了，我盼望着圣诞节早点到来，再次祝您快乐每一天!

此致

敬礼!

爱您的一凡

我养过许多小动物，有忠诚的小狗，五颜六色的小金鱼，还有白白胖胖的蚕宝宝。不过，我今天要介绍的，是我家的小白兔萌萌

萌萌的毛雪白雪白的，仿佛冬天里的雪。它的耳朵长长的好像能听见千里之外的声音。它那圆溜溜、红宝石般的眼睛镶嵌在它那白白净净的脸上，显得特别机灵。

萌萌吃东西，十分可爱。每当我们喊吃饭了的时候，它就屁颠屁颠地跑到饭桌旁，用它那炯炯有神的眼晴望着我，仿佛在说：求求你给我一点吃的吧。我们在它的碗里放入食物，它一看见食物，就狼吞虎咽地吃起来，生怕别人抢它的似的。

萌萌特别贪玩，你瞧，它又在玩它最喜欢的游戏找东西。它最喜欢我的一个萝卜玩偶了。每次我把娃娃收起来，它找不到的时候，就会跑到我的身旁，蹭蹭我的腿，仿佛在说：好主人，你就告诉我娃娃在哪里吧。我才不吃它那一套，便扭头走人。萌萌见我不告诉它，就开始寻找娃娃。它跳到沙发上、床上、桌子上，找遍了，也没找到。它又开始翻东西，后来终于在茫茫娃娃海中找到萝卜娃娃，唉!可家里已经杂乱不堪了。

我爱我家的小白兔。

Dear Dave,

Thanks for your letter.Its interesting to learn your story.Now Id like to answer your questions. Those problems that confused you, in fact, is the different culture betwwen different countries. In China, it is a polite manners to ask some questions such as what you have mationed to greet others. In your country, people ofen hear some questions,for example; "Wha a hot day!t","How cold it is" and so on. I believe you will be accustomed to it after a period of time. If you have any problem at any time, you can ask me for help. It is my pleasure to help you. Meanwhile, you can learn Chinese culture more and I can learn the culture about your country more.

Best wishes for you.

Your sincerely,Li Lin

A Happy Family幸福的家庭

I have a happy family. Though there is only a little furniture in my home and everything in the rooms seems rather disorderly, I love my home very much.

My father is an engineer, nearly fifty years old. As a Party member, quite often he works late into the night. He even forgets himself when he is reading. Once when having supper, I found that the soup tasted watery. It soon became clear that my father, deep in his reading, had forgotten to put salt in the soup.

I have a kind mother. She is a primary school teacher. She loves her pupils and her job very much and puts all her heart into her work. All our clothes are made by tailors, for she is too busy to sew for us. As a housewife, she has to do almost all the housework. So she is the busiest one in our family.

We all keep a lot of books and we love reading. During our leisure time, reading is our main hobby. Evening is the happiest hour in our family. We usually sit in my parents room, reading and discussing everything were interested in.

I love my family. It not only gives me much happiness and warmth but also teaches me how to be a real man.

我有一个幸福的家庭。尽管家里只有很少几件家具而且房内显得有些零乱，但我却很爱我家。

爸爸是一位工程师，年龄将近50岁。作为·党员；他常常工作到深夜，在读书时他甚至能把自己忘了。曾经有一次吃晚饭时，我觉得汤淡得没味。很快真相大白，原来是爸爸埋头于读书而忘了加盐。

我妈妈很和蔼可亲。她是一名小学老师。她很喜欢她的学生和她的工作，把全部心血投入到了工作中。我们的衣服都是由裁缝做的，她因为太忙而．没时间给我们缝制。作为家庭主妇，她几乎做了全部家务。所以她是全家最忙的人。

我家有很多藏书，我们很喜欢读书。闲暇时间，读书便是我们的最大爱好。晚上是我们家最幸福的时光。我们通常坐在父母的房间里读书、讨论我们感兴趣的问题。

我爱我家，它不仅给我快乐、温暖，而且教我做人。

[幸福的家庭英文作文

森林里的兔子们都是分为两类的，一类是黑兔，一类则是白兔。白兔是贵族，它们拥有宽阔的土地，美好的家园，成天吃大餐，可以说要什么有什么。黑兔呢？刚好相反。

一场大雪过后，一只叫飞飞的黑兔醒来，发现自己有了一件白衣服，“难道我变成白兔了？”飞飞自言自语。

飞飞知道，这不是一场梦，不过，现在要干什么就可以干什么了。

飞飞走进白兔们的家园。哇，一座座豪华的宫殿，金碧辉煌，闪闪发光。旁边是花园，一朵朵高贵、优雅的花多么漂亮啊。“哦，游乐场在那儿！”飞飞叫起来。一样样有趣的游戏，黑兔国从来没有过。还有学堂……每个地方都是飞飞的梦想。

飞飞便在白兔国住下来了，成天享受着幸福的生活。但是，飞飞并不像白兔们那么骄傲，不愿意帮助黑兔国，飞飞是愿意的。

为了帮助黑兔国，飞飞勤奋好学，严格地要求自己，经过一次又一次的努力，飞飞终于成为了知识渊博的兔子，并赢得了白兔国所有兔子的信任。

不知不觉的，冬天一眨眼过去了，小溪又开始流动了，雪都融化了，柳树也开出了绿芽，春天来了。

飞飞身上的雪也自然融化了，它又变成黑兔子了。

第二天早晨，飞飞走出家门，白兔们看见飞飞竟然是一只黑兔，很生气，纷纷推着飞飞，让它离开这个白兔国。但飞飞没有大叫，它只是平静地告诉白兔们：“黑白并不重要，我们都是兔子的家族，应该和睦相处，团结友爱才对。”飞飞的一番话让白兔们听得心服口服。它们答应，把黑兔家族的兔子都请来。（这段黑兔的话说服力太强了吧？）

从此，白兔国的名字也改了，改成了“黑白兔国”。黑白兔国每天都很热闹，成天洋溢着幸福的欢笑声。

我家养了一只调皮可爱的小白兔，这样的动物让人喜爱，怎能不帮它取个好听的名字呢?所以我帮它取了个名字，叫小雪。

它穿着一身白色绒毛，远远望去，像一个白绒球，她有一双水汪汪的大眼睛，一个小小的鼻子下面有一张三瓣嘴，脑袋上有一对长长的耳朵，有一点声音它都能听得见。

小雪最喜欢吃青菜。记得有一次我给小雪喂青菜吃，它不吃，我就想说：“小雪，你为什么不吃呀?”我想应该是不饿吧，正转身想走，突然它使劲一蹦，把青菜叼走了，欢快的吃起来，三瓣嘴像机关枪开枪一样，动个不停，逗得我哈哈大笑。

小雪还很顽皮。记得有一次，我觉得它在笼子里太不自由了，就把小雪放了出来，可是它一出来就活蹦乱跳，玩了一会儿，我叫它回笼子里，可它不听，我只好叫爸爸，爸爸来了，它他身手敏捷，捉到了小雪，小雪吓得直叫，好像在说：“让爸爸放了我吧，我在和你闹着玩呢。”

我最喜欢这可爱调皮的小白兔了，有它的陪伴，会更加幸福。

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有一天，我和妈妈去公园玩，看到了一个小白兔。

它长长的耳朵非常灵敏，可以听到20甚至是30米之外的地方。大大的眼睛亮晶晶的，像两颗红宝石。小小的三瓣嘴有两颗洁白的大板牙，很锋利。尾巴短短的，圆圆的，像一个小毛球。全身穿着白色的毛茸茸的衣服，远远看去像一团棉花。走起路来一蹦一跳，看起来非常可爱。小白兔的尾巴作用可大了。当小白兔遇到危险时，兔子的尾巴可以褪皮帮助它脱离危险。

你们说，小白兔是不是可爱有神奇呢？

每年都有很多考生问老师，怎么提高写作？除了阅读，考研英语中占分值最大的就是写作。对于各位考研学子，大家无论学习阅读还是写作，首先要弄清楚一个问题，什么叫做好句子？

好句子绝不仅仅是把主谓宾或者主系表堆砌在一起。好句子具有一些特点。如果同学们能够把握这些特点，那么相信大家一定能够提升作文句式的表达。下面英语老师跟大家分享一下好句子的特点。

特点一：整体性

句子的整体性：即能表达单独的、完整的思想。

Eg. Born in a small town in South China in the early 50s, he grew up to be a famous musician.

【分析】这个句子表达了两层思想：1. Born in a small town出生在一个小镇 2. grew up to be a musician.长大成为了音乐家。这个句子应该分成两句来写。除此之外，还需要增加一些信息来连接两层思想。

【提升】He was born in a small town in South China in the early 50s. In his childhood he liked to sing. Later he entered a music conservatory. In the 70s, he grew up to be an accomplished musician.

特点二：连贯性

句子的连贯性：即能清晰地连接句子的各个部分，没有虚假的平行结构，没有指代不请的代词，没有不清晰的句内关系。

Eg. Upon entering the classroom, the students stood up and said, "good morning!"

【分析】这个句子从语法来讲是正确的，但是句内关系不清楚，到底谁进入了教室？

【提升】When the teacher entered the classroom, the students stood up and said, "good morning!"

Eg. Elizabeth and I enjoy walking, to ski, travel and teaching university students.

【分析】这个句子的连贯性较差，可以利用平行结构来体现连贯性。

【提升】Elizabeth and I enjoy walking, skiing, traveling and teaching university students.

特点三：准确性

句子的准确性指句子内部没有不准确的，不必要的词。

Eg. He returned in the early part of the month of August.

【分析】这个句子感觉有故意写长之嫌，需要精简。

【提升】He returned in early August.

特点四：重点突出

好的句子应该重点突出，词的选择，词的重复都有助于句子的重点突出。

Eg. When the bank robbers entered the bank they yelled, "dont move!"

【分析】这个句子比较平淡，可以修改一下动词。

【提升】When the bank robbers rushed into the bank they yelled, "dont move!"

特点五：语法正确，句式多变

句式多变指句子长短结合。如果全篇都是复杂的长难句，文章读起来会晦涩难懂，并且有挑衅阅卷人之嫌。反之，全篇都是短句，感觉有侮辱阅卷人之感。

Eg. Daisy, who was the first-year student of college, would go to a par near her school every day in morning, she would bring a small recorder with her, in park she would find quiet corner and listen to a tape of English stories.

【分析】这个句子不仅仅存在语法问题，另外还有完整性，准确性问题。

【提升】Daisy, a first-year college student, enjoys studying in the park near her school. Each morning she brings a small recorder, finds a quiet corner in the park, and listens to a tape of English stories.

如果同学们在写句子的时候，注意以上五点，相信大家一定能够写出正确，完整，准确的英文句子。

我家养了一只小白兔。它的额头上镶嵌着一双红色闪闪发亮的宝石。它有一张小巧玲珑的三瓣嘴，嘴巴两旁长着长长的胡须。他长着一对耳朵和一只尾巴，她的耳朵较长，而它的尾巴却非常的短。小白兔的腿也非常的短。因为小白兔的腿短一些，所以走起路来一蹦一跳的。它的毛软绵绵的，热乎乎的，整个身体抱在一块像一团雪白的棉花。

小白兔不仅仅是长得美丽可爱，而且她的胆子还非常的大。

有一次，我去我的一个亲戚家去做客，那时候是带着小白兔去的，我发现亲戚家也有一只小兔子，不过那只小兔子是棕黑色的，而我家的是雪白雪白的。我看它们俩挺孤独的，所以我就把它们放在一个笼子里，好让它们成为好朋友。可是我家的兔子老是欺负另一只兔子，所以我又把我的小兔子放到了桌子上，小白兔一蹦一跳的，非常的逍遥自在。

我看了看，于是决定让他们两个小兔子比赛爬楼梯。我家的小兔子非常的胆大，一下子就跳了两层台阶。而另一只兔子却一动也不动，非常胆小。

我回到家突然想到应该给小白兔起个名字。不然老是叫小白兔小免子的不好听。名字叫什么好呢？……我看你美丽可爱，而且胆子还挺大的！那我就叫你丽可多吧！

同学们如果你们喜欢这只小兔子的名字那就为我点赞吧！