写我的妈妈英语作文40个单词带翻译中文（汇总20篇）

My favorite animal is the dolphin. They live in the ocean. And they are cute and beautiful. They not only swim fast, but are also smart. Their color is gray. They can swim and jump in the ocean. They look like fish, but they are mammals. Dolphins can be trained by people because they can learn things very quickly. They are very friendly, so I love them very much.

我最喜欢的动物是海豚。他们生活在海洋。他们可爱，漂亮。他们不仅游得很快还很聪明。它们是灰色的。他们可以在海里游泳和跳跃。它们看起来像鱼但它们是哺乳动物。海豚可以被人训练，因为它们学习得很快,它们都很友好，所以我很爱它们。

Green, tree and grass planting. Growing these plants containing chlorophyll, is of great help to improve air quality.

First of all, the green plants can be in the sun for photosynthesis, absorb carbon dioxide and release oxygen. Studies show that plant growth and each 1 ton, can produce 5 tons of oxygen. Per hectare woods can absorb one ton of carbon dioxide every day, 0.735 tons of oxygen; The grass can absorb every day 0.9 tonnes of carbon dioxide per hectare, produce 0.6 tons of oxygen. Adequate and clean oxygen can keep human body and mind health.

Second, trees on earth every day can send out 170 million tons of terpenes substances into the atmosphere, the aromatic substance has incomparable sterilization ability and excitation.

Then, the green is good for the dust in the air, dust filtration and absorption, and dust into the air dispersion can stop work. According to the determination, the atmosphere through the forest, can reduce dust amount 32% - 32%, fly ash quantity reduced by 30%.

Do you know? The negative oxygen ion in forest can reach 10-1 million. Negative oxygen ion can adjust the excitement and inhibition of the nervous system, improve the function of the cerebral cortex. Medical experts to simulate forest magic effect, negative oxygen ion into ward. The results found that when the environment is negative oxygen ions and the proportion of oxygen ions control at 9:1, for asthma, burns, ulcers, the treatment of trauma patients can promote role

In addition, greening and absorb the noise, reduce water loss and soil erosion, etc. Your a power to go into our countrys green enterprise, the green idea slowly tell it to you will reap the benefits.

绿化，乃植树种草也。种植这些含有叶绿素的植物，对改善空气质量有很大的帮助。

首先，绿色植物可以在阳光下进行光合作用，吸收二氧化碳，释放氧气。研究表明，植物每生长1吨，可以产生5吨氧。每公顷树林每天可以吸收1吨二氧化碳，产生0.735吨氧气;每公顷草地每天能吸收0.9吨二氧化碳，产生0.6吨氧气。充足而洁净的氧气能让人类身心保持健康。

其次，地球上的树林每天可向大气中散发1.7亿吨萜烯物质，这种芳香物质具有无可比拟的杀菌能力和兴奋作用。

然后，绿色植物对空气中的灰尘、粉尘有良好的过滤和吸收作用，并能阻挡工作粉尘向空气弥散。据测定，大气通过林带，可使粉尘量减少32%-52%，飘尘量减少30%。

你知道吗?森林中的负氧离子可达到10-100万个。负氧离子能调节神经系统的兴奋和抑制状态，改善大脑皮层的功能。医学专家模拟森林的神奇作用，把负氧离子引进病房。结果发现，当环境中负氧离子与正氧离子的比例控制在9：1时，对气喘、烧伤、溃疡、外伤病人的治疗可起促进作用

除此之外，绿化还有吸收噪音、减少水土流失等功能。把你的一份力量投入到我国的绿化事业中去吧，那一抹绿意会向你慢慢诉说它的好处。

"Spring, an hour in the morning is worth two in the evening". Spring is the most beautiful season in a year. The twinkling of an eye, charactizing a fine spring has come.

I myself have a heart in the spring. After spring, with tender green grass, grass, crammed with all sorts of flowers, the grass decorated like to embroider the flower green carpet. I walk on the grass, feel the foot soft, very comfortable. There are many butterflies on the grass. They were wearing colorful make-up, or flying up and down, or through the grass. To go far, a large area of a large fields, fields, fruit trees into shadow, red fruit hanging branches, like on the trees full of numerous large stones. Over the orchard, and many birds fly light dances; They are covered with colorful feathers, singing songs. Through the forest a brook, extends to the green grass, from my feet flowed. Sends out the ringing sound when water bottom, stream, want to heart making the music of this song is moving, and the song of birds should be matched.

On both sides of trails, covered with many beautiful flowers, yellow, white, red, purple... Its colorful, very beautiful flowers. Especially flowers everywhere filled with large poppy flower. It is so bright, red dazzling, bright yellow, under the sun, peoples eyes were drove hard to open...

This is the spring, this is the spring in my heart. I couldnt help shout out: I love you, in the heart of the spring!

“一年之计在于春，一日之计在于晨”。春天是一年中最美的季节。一眨眼，鸟语花香的春天就到来了。

我自己也有心中的春天。春天来后，到处是嫩嫩的绿草，草丛中开满了各种各样的花，把草地装点得就像绣了花得绿绒地毯。我走在草地上，感到脚下软绵绵的，非常舒服。草地上还有许多蝴蝶，它们都穿着五颜六色的彩装，或上下飞舞，或在草间歇息。向远望去，有一大片一大片的原野，原野上，果树成荫，红色的果实挂满枝头，就像在绿树上嵌满了无数硕大的宝石。果园上空，还有许多小鸟轻飞漫舞;它们披着色彩缤纷的羽毛，唱着婉转的歌儿。一条小溪穿林而过，延伸到绿色的草地上，从我脚边潺潺流过。溪水清澈见底，流动时发出清脆的声响，想奏这一首动人的乐曲，与小鸟的歌声应和成趣。

在一条条小路两旁，铺满了许许多多美丽的花朵，黄的、白的、红的、紫的……真是五颜六色，姹紫嫣红。尤其是花丛中到处都开满了硕大的花。它是那么鲜艳，红的炫目，黄的耀眼，在阳光的照射下，人们的眼睛都被逼得睁不开了……

这就是春，这就是我心中的春。我不由得发出赞叹：我爱你，心中的春!

Today is Christmas Eve once a year. We have three at home. We burn delicious hot pot in the kitchen for mom, dad and I are in the sitting room decorate the Christmas tree together.

First of all, my father and I put the branches stretching, then put the tree is installed on a tripod.

Finally, my father and I put the small bells, Musical Instruments, gifts, fawn, Santa Claus, bowknot, five-pointed star and snowflake decorations hanging in the branches. Also has a long string of colorful lights around the branch.

A: wow! A beautiful Christmas tree appeared in front of our eyes, just like that. The mother of hot pot also burn well. The three of us to sit down and eating hot pot, hot side sing Christmas songs, was quite happy!

今天是一年一次的圣诞平安夜。我们一家三口开开心心地在家里。妈妈在厨房为我们烧美味可口的火锅，我和爸爸在客厅一起装饰圣诞树。

首先，我和爸爸把树枝舒展开来，然后把树安装在一个三角架上。最后，我和爸爸把一个个铃铛、乐器、礼物、小鹿、圣诞老人、蝴蝶结、五角星、雪花的装饰用品挂在树枝上。还把一长串五彩缤纷的彩灯绕在树枝上。

哇!一棵美丽的圣诞树就这样出现在我们的眼前。这时妈妈的火锅也烧好了。我们三人坐下来一边吃着热腾腾的火锅，一边唱着圣诞节的歌曲，真是太开心了!

to introduce myself（介绍我自己）

hello,every one!（大家好）

my name is **** . （我叫****）

im a 15 years old boy. （我是一个15岁的男孩）（具体情况自己改）

i live in the beautiful city of rizhao.（我住在美丽的rizhao城）（你可以把rizhao改成自己家乡的城市的名称的拼音）

im an active ,lovely and clever boy.(我是一个活跃的可爱的聪明的男孩） in the school , my favourite subject is maths . （在学校，我最喜欢数学） perhaps someone thinks its difficult to study well .（也许有些人认为这很难学） but i like it.（但我喜欢他）

i belive that if you try your best, everything can be done well.（我相信每件事付出努力就会有害结果）

i also like sports very much.（我也很喜欢运动）

such as,running,volleyball and so on. （像跑步、排球等等）

im kind-hearted.（我很热心）

i hope we can be good friends!（我希望我们能成为好朋友）

ok.this is me .a sunny boy.（好了，这就是我，一个阳光男孩）

Last night, I watched a movie, it is about two teenagers, they have cancer,

but the boy is positive about life while the girl is negative about life. They

meet each other, then the girl is affected by the boy, she starts to see the

beautiful things in her life. I am so moved by the movie, though the ending of

the movie is not so perfect, we see the change of the girls life. The topic of

the movie is to tell people to be positive about life, no matter what happens,

even the bad fortune they get, they still need to smile every day. People need

to find the beauty of life, so they wont life live without meaning.

昨晚，我看了一部电影，那是关于两个青少年，他们身患癌症，但是男孩对生活很乐观，然而女孩子却对生活很悲观。他们遇见了彼此，然后女孩受到了男孩子的影响，她开始看到了生活的美好食物。我被这部电影深深地感动，虽然电影的结局不是那么的完美，但是我们看到了女孩生活的改变。电影的主题是告诉人们要对生活乐观，无论发生什么事情，即使他们遇到不幸，仍然需要每天乐观面对生活。人们需要发现生活的美，这样他们就不会活得没有意义。

I like to eat different kinds of delicious food , however, my favorite

food is dumplings. In my spare time , I like to make dumplings with my mother .

I think home-made dumplings are more delicious than those in supermarket .My

mother knows I love to eat them ,so she makes dumplings at every weekend . I

prefer eating dumplings . How about you

?

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我喜欢吃各种各样的美味的食物,但是,我最喜欢的食物是饺子。在我的业余时间,我喜欢和我妈妈包饺子。我认为自制的饺子比超市更美味。我妈妈知道我爱吃,所以她在每个周末做饺子。我喜欢吃饺子。你呢？

In recent days, the sky is very gray, can not see the sun, give a person a kind of chilly. You see: close, plant area of two cooling towers, looming; In the distance the mid-levels, gone. Also let a person mental laziness, depressed all day. Newspapers, television publicity: recent haze, out less and less as far as possible to open a window. Visible haze serious air pollution, the air quality to drop, affect human body health. I would like to know the fog haze and its harm to people, then go online to check, it was "dont know, a look startled!"

There are hundreds of different fog atmospheric chemical composition of particulate matter. Among them include: organic aerosol particles, fuel, and automobile exhaust. It can directly enter and adhesion in the human respiratory tract and alveolar, cause acute rhinitis and acute bronchitis. For obstructive emphysema, bronchial asthma patients, such as fog weather condition of acute attacks. If this kind of environment for a long time, will also cause cancer.

It have an impact on the cardiovascular system. Pollutants in haze weather, low air pressure, easy to cause acute episodes of cardiovascular system. Such as heavy fog, the water vapor content is high, if people in the outdoor sports, can cause chest tightness, high blood pressure and other symptoms.

Haze weather can also lead to nearly formation ultraviolet ray is abate, infectious germs. Due to the lack, children lack of ultraviolet irradiation, vitamin D production, for the absorption of calcium, cause rickets in infants, growth slows down. Will directly affect peoples mental health, mental laziness, depressed, etc. No wonder these days the mood will be so happy.

Point of view, to eliminate the fog, we should reduce waste emissions; Reduce the dust; Especially to do less drive a car, use public transit. In order to better tomorrow, lets start environmental action today, the blue sky, green water, green and quiet we need to create your own!

最近几天，天空都是阴沉沉地，看不到太阳，给人一种冷飕飕的感觉。你看：近处，半山电厂的两个冷却塔，若隐若现;远处的半山，没了踪影。还整天让人精神懒散、心情低落。报纸、电视都在宣传：近期雾霾严重，要尽量减少外出、少开窗户。可见雾霾严重污染空气，使空气质量下降，影响人体健康。我很想了解雾霾对人的危害，于是上网去查了一下，真是“不看不知道，一看吓一跳啊!”

雾霾有数百种大气化学颗粒物质组成。其中就包含：有机溶胶粒子、燃料和汽车废气等。它可以直接进入并粘附在人体呼吸道和肺泡中，引起急性鼻炎和急性支气管炎。对于阻塞性肺气肿、支气管哮喘等患者，雾霾天气会使病情急性发作。如果长期处于这种环境，还会诱发癌。

它对心血管系统有影响。雾霾天气中污染物多，气压低，容易引起心血管系统的急性发作。比如雾大的时候，水汽含量高，如果人们在户外运动的话，会造成胸闷，血压升高等症状。

雾霾天气还会导致近地层紫外线减弱，传染性病菌滋生。由于日照减少，儿童紫外线照射不足，体内维生素D生成不足，对钙的吸收减少，引起婴儿佝偻病，生长减慢。还会直接影响到人们的心理健康，让人精神懒散、情绪低落等。难怪这几天心情会这么不舒畅。

看来，要消除雾霾，我们要减少废弃物的排放;减少扬尘的行动;尤其要做到少开汽车，多用公交出行的方式。为了更好的明天，让我们今天就开始环保行动吧，蓝天、碧水、绿色、清静需要我们自己创造的!

Youth is not a time of life; it is a state of mind; it is not a matter of rosy cheeks, red lips and supple knees; it is a matter of the will, a quality of the imagination, a vigor of the emotions; it is the freshness of the deep springs of life.

Youth means a temperamental predominance of courage over timidity, of the appetite for adventure over the love of ease.

This often exists in a man of 60 more than a boy of 20. Nobody grows old merely by a number of years. We grow old by deserting our ideals.

Years may wrinkle the skin, but to give up enthusiasm wrinkles the soul. Worry, fear, self-distrust bows the heart and turns the spirit back to dust.

Whether 60 or 16, there is in every human being’s heart the lure of wonders, the unfailing appetite for what’s next and the joy of the game of living.

In the center of your heart and my heart, there is a wireless station; so long as it receives messages of beauty, hope, courage and power from man and from the infinite, so long as you are young.

When your aerials are down, and your spirit is covered with snows of cynicism and the ice of pessimism, then you’ve grown old, even at 20; but as long as your aerials are up, to catch waves of optimism, there’s hope you may die young at 80.

This morning, my father took me to school by bike. I sat at the back of the bike, eating a banana. After I ate it up, I threw the skin onto the street randomly.

今天早晨，爸爸骑车带我去上学。我坐在后车座上，吃着香蕉。吃完后，我顺手将香蕉皮扔到了街上。

No sooner had I done this than I realized that I had done something bad to our environment. And maybe someone would step on it and tumble over. I must pick it up. Thinking of these, I asked father to stop. I jumped off the bike and ran back to pick up the banana skin and threw it into a roadside dustbin. Seeing this, father praised me and I felt very happy.

我马上意识到我的所作所为破坏了我们的环境，或许有人会踩在上面而跌倒，我必须把它拾起来。想到这些，我让爸爸停车。我跳下自行车，跑回去拾起香蕉皮，并扔到了路边的垃圾箱里。看到这些，爸爸表扬了我。我感到很高兴。

In future I will protect the surroundings more consciously and think more about others.

将来我要更自觉地保护周围的环境，更多地为他人着想。

Spring festival is on the first day of the first lunar month. Chinese people most like the Spring Festival. During Spring Festival， Chinese people like having meals with their families， playing fireworks in the open air. My sisters and I played fireworks on that day. We had many fireworks. They were very beautiful. They were running into the sky and breaking into pieces. They looked like flowers in the sky. We were very happy and excited. After that， I made a wish. I hope that， we can have a happy and healthy life next year and everyone in my family can be happy.

I enjoy the festival very happy.

译文：

春节是在农历的第一天。中国人最喜欢春节。春节期间,中国人喜欢与家人吃饭,烟花在户外玩。那天我和我的姐妹玩烟花。我们有很多烟花。他们非常漂亮。他们跑到天空,摔成了碎片。他们看起来像花在天空中。我们非常高兴和激动。在那之后,我做了一个愿望。我希望我们明年能有一个快乐和健康的生活,家里每个人都可以快乐。

我很喜欢这个节日快乐。

Next week I would like to go to Kaifeng and parents。 Kaifeng has many great snacks， such as steamed buns， sesame seed Gaul。 Kaifeng also on the famous Qingming River Park， I think it has to be very beautiful。 My parents will be opened to see my uncle and live in his house one night。翻译：下周我要和我的父母去开封。开封有许多十分棒的小吃，比如小笼包子、高卢烧饼。开封还有著名的清明上河园，我想那必须十分的漂亮。我和我的父母将会在开封见到我的叔叔，并住在他家一晚。

From school in the afternoon, I walked on the familiar country road, the in the mind think: today, the teacher let us say "I love you" to your parents. This problem is also really put me in a puzzled, inner struggle, whether said or not？

Unconsciously, came to the village, just see what mum is busy on the ground. I use the 100 - meter sprint speed, came to my mother. "Mom, let me help you accept rice！" Said he picked up his pockets to hold up, although I want to say to his mother, but Im sorry.

Just a moment, I was too tired to waist sour backache. Mother got good years of rice, wheat and rapeseed, how to put up with？ I know, in fact, mother also very tired, also very pain, just mouth not to say.

Packed rice, mother will go to wash the dishes, I thought to myself, this time I will say to mother. Before I went to the mother quietly said to her: "mother I love you！" "Oh," mother looked down from his pocket 5 yuan gave it to me. "Oh？" I puzzling, "mom, you listen to wrong？ Not mom I want money, is mother I love you！" "Oh？" Mother accident and joyful smile on his face. I fly threw himself into his mothers arms, tightly holding the mother.

My mother stroked the rough hands, said: "mom, you for our life, so hard every day, hand all long out of the mediocrity." I kissed mother weather-beaten cheek, and went into his mothers arms. Mother patted me on the back, murmured: "son, you are grown up, sensible."

Dear Miss Liang,

I am writing to thank you for your hard work for me. With your help, I make

great progress in my study. A year ago, my study was bad and I didn’t want to

learn, but you never give me up. You told me that I was clever. As long as I

work hard, I would be great. In this year, you cared much about my study and

helped me a lot. When I made mistakes, you always pointed them out and helped me

to correct. Now, my study is much better than before, and I want to express my

gratitude to you. Hope you everything goes well.

Sincerely yours,

Lily

亲爱的梁老师：

您好!我写信是想要感谢你为我做出的努力。在你的帮助下，我在学习上取得了很大的进步。一年前，我的学习成绩很差，我不想再学习了，但是你从来没有放弃我。你告诉我我很聪明。只要努力，我一定很棒。近年，你很关心我的学习，帮了我很多。当我犯错的时候，你总是指出错误并帮我更正。现在，我的学习比以前好多了，我想向你表达我的感激。祝您一切顺利。

A young apple tree begins to grow from a seed. When its roots reach into the soil, it gets water. The young tree uses light from the sun and makes its own food. For several years, the tree grows bigger.

Then, in spring, it grows sweet flowers. During the summer, apples begin to grow. They grow bigger and bigger. In autumn, they began to fall from the tree.

People like apples because they taste good. And they are good for health.

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小苹果树是由一颗种子长大的。当它的根扎到土壤里，它就得到了水分。小树利用阳光，制造了自己的食物。几年以后，小树长大了。

后来，到了春天，树长出了清香的花朵。夏天时，蘋果开始生长。它们长得越来越大。到了秋天，蘋果开始从树上落下来。

人们喜欢苹果，因为它们味道好，而且对健康有益。

[英语作文及翻译：苹果树

The Yellow Mountain is one of the most famous mountains in China. It lies in the south of Anhui. Every year thousands of Chinese and foreigners pay a visit there. It s not far from here. It takes you about three hours to get there by bus. You can also go there by train or by plane. While you are climbing the mountain, you can enjoy the sea of clouds, wondrous pines and unique rocks around you. In the early morning when the sun rises, the sky looks very beautiful. It s really a nice place to visit.

黄山是中国最著名的山脉之一。它位于安徽的南部。每年都有成千上万的中国人和外国人去那里参观。离这儿不远。乘公共汽车到那儿大约需要三个小时的时间。你也可以乘火车或乘飞机去那里。当你在爬山的时候，你可以欣赏到你周围的云朵，奇异的松树和独特的岩石。清晨，太阳升起时，天空看起来很漂亮。这真是一个很好的地方。

[介绍黄山的英语作文带翻译

Weekends to people mean that they can have a two-day good rest. For example, people can go out to enjoy themselves or get together with relatives and friends to talk with each other or watch interesting video tapes with the whole family.

Everyone spends weekends in his own way. Within two days, some people can relax themselves by listening to music, reading novels, or watching films. Others perhaps are more active by playing basketball, wimming or dancing. Different people have different relaxations.

I often spend weekends with my family or my friends. Sometimes my parents take me on a visit to their old friends. Sometimes I go to the library to study or borrow some books to gain much knowledge. I also go to see various exhibition to broaden my vision. An excursion to seashore or mountain resorts is my favorite way of spending weekends. Weekends are always enjoyable for me.

周末的人意味着他们可以有两天的休息好。例如，人们可以走出去，享受自己或亲友与对方交谈，或观看有趣的录像带与全家人聚在一起。每个人都度过周末在他自己的方式。两天之内，有些人可以通过听音乐，看小说，或看电影放松一下自己。其他人或许是打篮球，游泳或者舞蹈更加活跃。不同的人有不同的放松方式。我经常花周末与我的家人和我的朋友们。有时我父母带我参观他们的老朋友。有时候我去图书馆学习或借一些书，获得很多知识。我也去看看各种展览，开阔了我的视野。游览到海边或山区度假胜地是我最喜欢的消费周末的方式。周末总是愉快的我。

[我的周末英语作文及翻译

Dear John,

亲爱的约翰：

Long time no see, how is your summer vacation? I’m really sorry for writing so late. I have been too busy at this moment. I am happy to hear that you have traveled to Tibet at this summer holiday. How I wish I could go there with you!

好久不见，你的`暑假过得还好吗?很抱歉那么晚才写信给你。这段时间我真的太忙了。我很高兴听说暑假你去了西藏旅游。我真希望我也和你一起去。

Let me tell you something about my summer holiday. My summer holiday is rich and colorful. My parents take me to Hong Kong. That’s a beautiful place. I buy a lot of funny things at there. Such as pretty dresses, cute dolls and the snacks I never eat before. I really want to stay there and never come back! In a word, I really appreciate the life there.

让我告诉你我的暑假趣事吧。我的暑假过得丰富多彩。我父母带我去了香港。那是个美丽的地方。我在香港买了很多新奇的玩意。比如漂亮的裙子，可爱的娃娃和一些从来没有吃过的零食。我真想待在那里再也不回来了。一句话，我喜欢那里的生活。

I’m really looking forward to your reply!

我很期待你的回复!

Truly yours,

Zoey

你忠实的朋友

柔伊

How to have a healthy body? First of all, you have to play sports like

playing basketball and running. You should also eat more fruits and vegetables,

such as apples and bananas, which are rich in vitamins. If you do that, you

wont get sick often. And you can not stay up late, to early to bed and early to

rise, you should speak hygiene, clean themselves, often to drink lots of water

every day, not to eat junk food, and so on are conducive to a healthy body, the

most important thing is to pay attention to safety.

怎样拥有一个健康的身体?首先你必须经常运动比如打篮球，跑步。你还要多吃蔬菜水果，例如苹果，香蕉，它们含有丰富的维生素。如果这样做，你就不会经常得病。并且你不可以熬夜，要早睡早起，你要讲卫生，经常清洁自己，每天要喝很多水，不能吃垃圾食品等等都利于身体健康，最重要的是注意安全。

Everyone has a hobby, some people like swimming, some people like playing

video games. Fishing is my fathers favorite hobby. He goes fishing every Sunday

morning, and goes home in the afternoon.My hobby is playing piano. I started

playing piano from five years old. I like to play it after school. I have a

plan, I want to play a birthday song for my mother, because next monday is her

birthday. I think she will like my present very much.

每个人都有爱好，有些人喜欢游泳，有些人喜欢玩电子游戏。我父亲最喜欢的爱好是钓鱼，他每个星期天的早晨都会去钓鱼，下午才回家。我的爱好是弹钢琴。我从5岁就开始弹了。我喜欢在放学后弹。我有一个计划，我想在给我妈妈弹一首生日歌，因为下周一就是她的生日。我想她会非常喜欢我的礼物的。

My Father

There is always a brilliant image living in my heart. That is my dear father. Seen through the eyes of many other people, father seems to be a very ordinary person. But he is quite extraordinary in my eyes, I have never lost my wonder at his good-personalities such as diligence, devotion, care, optimism ever since my childhood.Being a farmer, father works very hard in the fields all the year round. He works from dawn till dusk every day and even till midnight when it is the harvest season. He seldom enjoys leisure with other farmers even if the farm work is not much. He chooses to live a busy life with reluctance to stop for a while.

Father devotes all himself to our family. As we are poor, he always tries his best to support our family and afford the tuitions for my brother and me. For the whole family, for brother and me, he never stops working laboriously in the fields throughout the year. Now he has got a wrinkled face and white hair because of excessive hard work, looking much older and weaker than any other person of his age. In spite of all this, father never complains to us. It is his full devotion that were living a better life now. It is his full devotion that both my brother and I are able to study at college.Father shows much care to us children and my mother as well. Whenever there is any delicious food on the table, he just leaves it to us while he takes the simple one himself. If my brother and I fall ill, he will not hesitate a moment to get some medicine for us or take us to see the doctor. My mother suffers a bad disease. Father looks after her very carefully. He never lets mother do any heavy work both at home and in the field. Mother appreciates him m much that she often praises him as a model husband before others.

Father is a person full of optimism. He never complains about our poor life. He is never frustrated by trouble. He often tells us that everything will be all right if we have enough confidence in life. Due to his optimism, we are all confident to face our life and work.

We all think that father is not in the least an ordinary man. He plays an extraordinary role in my family. We cant have anything without him. Now Im pursuing further studies at college far away from father. I miss him very much. And I often see him in my dreams. His great image is deeply carved in my mind.

我父亲的光辉形象永远是一种生活在我的心里吧.”那是我亲爱的爸爸.在许多其他人的眼中,父亲似乎是一个很普通的人.但在我的眼里他很特别,自从我的童年他在我眼中一直都是勤奋、敬业、保健、乐观.

作为一个农民,父亲在田里工作很努力.收获的季节，他每天从早到晚工作,直到午夜时.他很少像其他的农民享受休闲,即使在农场工作不多的时候.他选择一个繁忙的生活不情愿停下来。

父亲为了我们这个家奉献了他的全部.当我们贫穷时,他总是尽自己最大的努力来支持我们的家庭和支付我哥哥和我的学费.为整个家庭,为哥哥和我,他总是不停地在地里工作一整年.现在他因为过度辛勤工作已经有了一个满是皱纹的脸和白色毛发,岁,比任何其他与他相同的年龄的人.虽有这一切的事,父亲从不抱怨.这是他的全部奉献,我们正处在一个更好的生活.这是他的全部奉献,我的兄弟和我都能在大学读书。

父亲十分关心我们，和我母亲一样.每当有什么好吃的食物放在桌子上,他只是让我们吃自己吃少点.如果我和我兄弟生病,他会毫不犹豫地让拿些药给我们或带我们去看医生.我的母亲受严重的疾病.父亲照料得很认真.他从不让妈妈在家里和田间做什么繁重的工作.感谢他的母亲,她经常在别人面前称赞他为模范丈夫。

父亲是一个十分乐观的人.他从不抱怨我们贫穷的生活.他从未灰心丧气.他经常告诉我们,一切都会好起来的,如果我们有足够的信心.由于他的乐观,我们都是自信的面对我们的生活和工作。我们都认为,父亲是不平凡的人.他在我的家庭中具有非常重要的作用.我们能不能有什么东西.现在我继续进修大学远离的父亲.我怀念他.我经常看到他在我的梦.他的伟大的形象深深刻在我的脑海里.

评语： 本文作者以朴实的语言充满感情地刻画了父亲的不平凡的形象，分别从四个不同的角度描述了父亲的勤劳、奉献、关爱和乐观。内容真实感人，行文简洁流畅，结构清晰，组织有条有理，首尾呼应，给读者以强烈的感染力。 作者用词简洁精确，并能很好地尝试一些新学的词汇及表达，使简洁的行。文更为生动。作者没有运用太多复杂的句式，但能适当运用介词短语、分词结构、强调及重复的手法，恰到好处 地突出了行文句式的变化，使文章更耐读。