给父母的建议的英语作文（推荐20篇）

写作要求：

1.短文开头已给出，不计入总词数；

2.考生可适当发挥，使文章内容充实、连贯；

3.词数120左右；

4. 文中不能出现考生的具体信息。

参考词汇:pave the way

【参考范文】

From the picture we can see a family of three walking on a long red carpet. The son , well dressed, waves proudly in the middle while the father behind bends forward to hold the jacket and the mother in front rolls out the carpet, sweating.

It shows a common phenomenon nowadays that children are the focus of families, shouldering the hope of their parents. Parents arrange everything for their children and spare no effort to pave the way for their success. As a consequence, children become so reliant on their parents that they have no independent thought or creative ideas.

Such a situation is of great concern. In my opinion, overprotection and too much care are extremely bad for children’s development. Instead of doing everything for them, parents should encourage their children to overcome difficulties and inspire them to develop by themselves. Only in this way can they grow up to be independent and become truly successful.

[英语作文：父母关注孩子成长问题

Thanksgiving Day, first of all I would like to thank the students I raised my father and mother, and then thanks to teach me to train my teacher.

Today, I would like to thank my extracurricular chess teacher, when I was eight years old, I first met in 2005, "61" children game, get encouragement, since then set my chess determination, So that I fell in love with Go. I will Baili teacher as a teacher, in his careful teaching, I gradually learned to "eat, layout, ending ... ..." by a chess blind "layman" into a strength of the amateur 4 small players, in the Repeatedly won several competitions. I remember the best results are the citys race and the sixth session of the eighth championship, the provinces "Linchuan Evening News Cup" second, the International Shanghai Invitational sixth, these hard-won results are Is the teachers hard education of the credit, how can I forget your education grace it?

In the future I will use practical action to thank you for my training, the ancients said: one day for the division, life for the father, dripping grace, when Yongquan phase newspaper. The results can only represent the past, I have to study hard, so that their chess does not continue to improve, humbly learn from chess, sum up experience, get rid of their shortcomings, learn someone elses superb chess and others, the future better To return to my mentor. Never let mentor disappointed.

Dear editor,

亲爱的编辑：

I have read many articles on the school magazine. I find that almost all the essays on the school magazine are about the daily trifles in the campus. It is good for us to know the whole things in the campus. But I think if there are some articls about current affairs andlearning methods must be better. Current affairs can open students’ eyes to know more about the world. Sharing learning methods can help some students find the best way for themselves to study.I hope you will find these proposals useful and put into effect as soon as possible.

Yours Sincerely,

Li Lei

我看过校刊上的很多文章。我发现几乎校刊上所有的文章都是关于校园里的一些日常琐事。这对于我们了解整个校园的情况是很好的。但我想如果有一些关于时事和学习方法的文章一定会更好。时事可以开阔学生们的视野，了解世界。共享学习方法可以帮助一些学生找到最适合自己的学习方法。我希望你会觉得这些建议是有用的，并尽落实。

李磊

Our each children all have own parents, we live every day in the seawhich the parents shows loving concern. Parents love, likes a mountain, GREat and is generous; Parents love, likes that tree root, firm and is deep; Parents love, likes the honey which that hundred flowers breeds, but is happy.

Thanks you, is you gets us to arrive this full of vitality world.

Thanks you, all follows in each minute each second side us, to our careful protecting with attendance.

Thanks you, my dear daddy, in the busy work, you would to squeeze out the time to accompany us, lets us feel the father loves existence.

Thanks you, my dear mother, you likely are our route indicator, all the time directs the path for us.

When I meet is difficult, your always first time catches up with, extricates the difficulty for me. When I handle the wrong matter time, you would to me to explain slowly ......Looks you that exhausted facial features, I am unable to restrain somewhat sadly ......

Thanks you to scatter the cheers and the joke in ours childhood, all considers every time for us.

When I obtain teachers praise, you split open the such bright smiling face. Not long after starts sensible us, had known parents pressure, knew we should do any, but should not do any, we must let the parents feel relieved, do not have again to let them worry again.

We likely are one all do not have the water bucket, is you works hard, rushes about, but accumulates water one drop of one drop, but packs ......

You on likely space sun and moon, but we are a commonplace star, must pass through disciplines with diligently, only then can obtain the sweet fruit, only then can fall from the space has an achievement.

Too many too many thanks, said also could not say, you forever on all my guide, forever always care about, the loving care in mine side to me.

The world has many parents all is so, they coontinuously to usAll is contributes silently, lets us say with one voice that,“Thanks your continuously attendance, you forever all are our root and the prop!”Parents love, let me sensibly many, mature many. We meet the jail to keep firmly in mind the bottom, biggest repays them diligently by us.

Who says the blade of grass heart, the newspaper three parental affections!

In here, I must ordinary and the GREat parents deep bow deeply for all children to us one gong! Let us simultaneously say together that,“Thanks the daddy, thanks mother, thanks you! Thanks you!!”

●适当放慢进度，留出思考时间

●反复训练重要、易错知识点

●指导方法

●减少作业量以保证质量

●给予更多鼓励

注意：1.根据以上内容写一篇短文，不要逐句翻译，可适当增加细节以使行文连贯。

2.要准确使用语法和词汇;使用一定的句型、词汇，清楚、连贯地表达自己的意思;

3. 词数：100个左右。开头已给出，不计词数。

Dear Mr. Wang,

We’re so pleased that you are willing to share our views.

In the course of the general revision, what we need is solid foundation.

______________________________________________________________________

______________________________________________________________________

范文(One possible version)

Dear Mr. Wang,

We’re so pleased that you are willing to share our views.

In the course of the general revision, what we need is solid foundation. As you know, we didn’t learn well enough in the first two years, so please slow down and make sure we have really mastered something. Besides, we need a little more time to think for ourselves. As for those important points which also make us confused, would you please give us more practice in case we forget? Meanwhile, we need your instruction, for example, in how to write in natural English. I still have another request: assign us less homework in order that we can do it more efficiently.

By the way, we often feel frustrated, which has a very bad effect on our study. We would appreciate it if you would give us some encouragement from time to time.

如果说“如此结论”是结尾最没用的废话，那么“如此建议”应该是最有价值的废话了，因为这里虽然也是废话，但是却用了一个很经典的虚拟语气的句型。

Obviously， it is high time that we took some measures to solve the problem.

这里的虚拟语气用得很经典，因为考官本来经常考这个句型，而如果我们自己写出来，你说考官会怎么想呢?

更多句型：

Accordingly， I recommend that some measures be taken.

Consequently， to solve the problem， some measures should be taken.

假定你是某中学的学生李华。请用英语给出版社的编辑写一封信，表达你对现在使用的英语教材的看法，内容主要包括：

优点：1. 话题广泛;

2. 图片丰富;

3. 有助于提高学习兴趣。

建议：适当降低词汇难度。

注意：1. 词数100左右;

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;

3. 开头语已为你写好，不计入总词数。

满分作文

Dear Editor,

As a student reader, I am writing to talk about the English textbooks published by your house.

In my eyes, these books have a lot of advantages. To begin with, there are such a wide variety of topics in the books that they can satisfy students’ curiosity better. In addition, the pictures in the textbooks are very interesting and attractive. Not only can they draw students’ attention, but they can also arouse our interest in learning English. In short, we have benefited a lot from these books.

However, in my opinion, there are still some shortcomings in the textbooks. We find some words are a bit difficult to remember. Therefore, I suggest that you can make them easier to understand.

Best regards,

Li Hua

亲爱的编辑，

作为学生的读者，我写了一个关于你家出版的英语教材的作文。

在我的眼里，这些书有很多优点。首先，他们可以更好地满足学生的好奇心，有这样一个各种各样的主题的书籍。此外，在教科书中的图片是非常有趣和有吸引力的。他们不仅能吸引学生的注意力，而且能激发我们学习英语的兴趣。总之，我们从这些书中受益匪浅。

然而，在我看来，教科书中仍有一些不足之处。我们发现有些话是有点难以记住。因此，我建议你可以让他们更容易理解。

最好的问候，

李华

There are three people in my family, my parents and I. We live happily together. Every morning, mother makes breakfast for us. Sometimes, it’s my father’s job. And then, father drives mother and me to school. My mother is an English teacher in my school. We have lunch and dinner at home. Sometime, my father eats outside, but he would call and tell us advanced. My family is a traditional Chinese family. Father is the backbone and mother takes care of our daily lives. I don’t have to worry about anything and all I have to do is working hard on my study. I have a happy family.

我的家有三口人，我和我的爸爸妈妈，我们幸福地生活在一起。每天清晨，妈妈为我们做早餐，有的时候，这也是爸爸的任务。之后，爸爸开车送我和妈妈去学校。妈妈是我学校的一名英语老师。我们回家吃午饭和晚餐。有的时候爸爸会在外面吃饭，但是他会提前打电话通知我们。我家是传统的中国家庭，爸爸是家里的主心骨，妈妈照顾家里的日常起居。我不用担心任何事情，只要努力学习就好了。我有一个幸福的家。

Dear principal:

Hello! Is the body coming in well?

headmaster! Have you found any shortcomings in the school recently? At the

back of the school there is a trail to the outside of the school. Sometimes when

the last class is physical education, some people go back from there first; when

the school door is not open at noon, some students enter the school from there,

disturbing other students to take a nap.

headmaster! In the middle of the teaching building and the laboratory

building, there are two lawns. When spring and summer come, a lot of grass will

grow, making it impossible for people to play on it. headmaster! I suggest that

you turn those two lawns into lotus ponds with pavilions and paths. When the

students have finished a few classes, they are a little tired, so they can rest

on it; relax. In this way, you will have sufficient energy in class and listen

carefully.

Wish: Good health and smooth work!

Sincerely,

Your student:

尊敬的校长：

您好!进来的身体是否很好?

校长!最近您有没有发现学校不足的地方?在学校的后面有一条小道可同往学校外。在有时是最后一节课是体育课时，有人就从那儿先回去了;中午午睡时学校的大门还没有开，有些同学就从那儿进了学校，打扰别的同学午睡。

校长!在教学楼和实验楼的中间，有两块草坪。每当春夏季节来临时，就会长出许多的草，让人无法在上面嬉戏。校长!我建议您把那两块草坪修成荷花池，上面有亭子和小道。当同学们上完几节课时，有点累了，就可以在上面休息;放松一下心情。这样在上课就会有充分的精神，认真听讲。

祝：身体健康，工作顺利!

你的学生：

Be Grateful to Our Parents

Just as the famous saying goes，"Thanksgiving is a spiritual treasure. Since we were born, many people have helped us more or less and we should be grateful for everything that other people have done for us. And among all the people we should appreciate, our parents are the ones who deserve our appreciation most.

Nowadays，as young men，we always take our parents love and care for granted, without any gratitude to our parents. However, we should come to realize that our parents will become old one day, and they will need our care, just like those days when we were little children. Therefore, however busy we may be, we should spend more time accompanying them, because they once devoted so much selfless love to us, and we should return them the same from the bottom of our heart.

From the first day we appeared in their lives, it is our parents who give us all their love but never expect anything in return. In order to make our lives better, they endure a lot of hardships. Therefore, we should be grateful to our parents, respect them and be a good kid with a grateful heart.

Dear Mr. President,

My name is __, a sophomore majoring in International Trade. Having

learned and lived on campus for nearly two years, I have found university life

most exciting and instructive.

What happens around me every day has left a deep impression on me, but what

strikes me most is the canteen service on campus, so that for some time I have

had the keen desire to write to you, sharing with you my positive comments on

and negative feelings about it. On the one hand, we are happy to see that the

canteen staff has been sparing no efforts to guarantee food quality. As a

result, we are relieved from the anxiety that some food might be dirty, stale

and inedible. We also feel contented with the service provided by the canteen,

enjoying food in a homely atmosphere. On the other hand, improvements should be

made for the simple reason that prices for dishes are unreasonably high, and

that the canteen is not spacious enough and too noisy at times.

Therefore, to improve the overall service of the canteen the strengths

should be encouraged, while the weaknesses ought to be overcome by lowering

prices and expanding the canteen if possible.

Yours,

____

尊敬的校长:

我叫__，是国际贸易专业的大二学生,经历了将近两年的校园生活,我感觉大学生活非常令人兴奋。

周围每天所发生的一切都让我印象深刻,但是学校食堂的服务却很难让人满意。因此有好几次我都很想给你写信,与你分享好的评论和不好的感受。一方面,食堂不遗余力的`保证饭菜质量很让人欣慰,这样我们不用担心某些事物不干净,不新鲜,不宜食。对于食堂的服务我们也感到满意,学校为我们创造了家一样的氛围。另一方面,显而易见饭菜的价格太高,食堂不够宽敞,有时会很吵,这些都是需要改进的地方。

因此,应当加大力度改善食堂的整体服务,通过降低价格和扩大食堂来克服缺点。

尊敬您的____

June 1st,2013

Dear mom and dad, How time flies! And it has been really seven years since I entered the middle school, during which time I spent the unforgettable time with my friends; what’s more, the most precious ages with my family. Instead of calling you regularly, I thought I’d write a letter to tell you exactly what I want to say. To be good parents is by no means an easy job as I imagined before. It includes patience, responsibility and affection. Through these years, I here really gained a lot from your experience. I still remember when I failed in maths and even wanted to give it up, you just patted me on the shoulder and encouraged me to have another try. Later, you praised me for my progress and earnest effort, which really gave me a sense of achievement. Looking younger children, I suddenly saw myself in teenage years. I was so rebellious and inconsiderate at that time. You must have gone to a lot of troubles for me. I am really sorry for the time I made you irritated. Mom and dad, thank you for being firm with me when I went through my rebellious stage. I do appreciate what you have done for me. I love you forever. Yours loving boy,

Zhu Bajie

[写一封信给父母的英语作文

导语：如今微信已成为我们生活中的一部分，尤其受到年轻人的欢迎。下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的英语作文，欢迎阅读与借鉴，谢谢!

在11月英语节中，你校举行了一次英语辩论会，主题是“微信朋友圈是否要屏蔽父母”。作为学校通讯员，请你为学校的微信公众平台推送一篇英文简讯，报道这次的活动，内容包括：

活动的时间：11月12日

正方的观点：

1.可以保护隐私

2.......

反方的观点：

1.父母有权利了解孩子

2.......

本次活动的意义

注意：

1.词数100-120

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯

3.标题已为你写好

参考词汇 隐私 privacy 微信朋友圈 WeChat Moments

Should adolescents block their parents in WeChat Moments?

On Nov. 12th, a heated debate was conducted in the school lecture hall. Its topic is whether teenagers should blacklist their parents in Moments.

Some students believe it’s quite necessary for an independent individual to have privacy and block their parents. Besides, the negative comments or complaints they carelessly share on WeChat are bound to worry their parents, which is not what they intend. However, their opponents argue that parents shouldn’t be excluded. For one thing, parents have rights to know what their kids are doing. For another, the roles of parents keep changing. Adolescents should adapt to the changes and befriend their parents.

This successful activity has inspired youngsters’ second thought about the relationship with their parents. (123 words) ​

【参考译文】

微信朋友圈是否要屏蔽父母?

11月12日，学校演讲厅进行了激烈的辩论。它的主题是青少年微信朋友圈是否要屏蔽父母。

一些学生认为一个独立的人有隐私和阻止他们的父母是非常必要的。此外，负面的评论或抱怨他们不小心分享微信一定会担心自己的父母，这不是他们的意愿。然而，他们的反对者认为父母不应该被排除在外。一方面，父母有权知道他们的孩子在做什么。另一方面，父母的角色不断变化。青少年应该适应变化和帮助他们的父母。

这个成功的活动激发了年轻人对父母关系的第二次思考。(123字)

I have a busy father and a kind mother。

My father is a businessman。 He is 42 years old。 He is short。 He likes reading newspapers after meals。 He watches TV in the evening。 He goes to work by car。 He has got a nice black car。 He often plays golf with his friends on the weekend。 He does not often eat dinner with us。

My mother is a housewife。 She doesn’t work。 She stays at home。 She is beautiful。 She has long hair。 She does housework in the morning。 She often goes shopping in the afternoon。 She is kind， but she is strict to my study。 She likes reading。 She watches TV at night， too。

I love my parents。 And they love me too。

[英语作文：我爱我的父母

My father is a worker. He works in a factory.He has a bicycle.He often goes to work by bike.He likes taking execrises. He does not watch TV every night,but hereads the newspapers. My mother is 42 years old.She is an English teacher.She works in the Second Middle School.She often goes to work on foot.She does not have lunch at home.She teaches English well.She often helps me in English.My mother has a radio.She likes listening to the music in the music in the evening.I like my parents very much!

We live in an age of happiness, in this age, parents give us the most. First of all, the parents gave us life, and put up and raised us, for us to learn, give us warm.

How we will use the actual action to return our parents?

When parents tired, to a sweet greetings: "dad, mom, you hard, dont too tired." Then, pass a cup of hot tea fragrance 4 excessive, warm parents tired heart; When the parents are very busy, take the initiative to reach out and do something useful, share a little bit heavy burden to the parents, let parents worry; When parents forget his birthday, timely offer a small wish, the abundance of a table birthday dinner, send a sincere blessing. In addition, we should be more open-minded, studious, diligent, the best parents favor, with very good grades to reduce the parents worry, noble quality win parents with a healthy body.

"The trees may prefer calm but the wind will not subside, son, but kiss is not a". Yes, do a little more filial piety while parents alive, do a little more obligations and responsibilities, let oneself do not regret it, is always irreparable regret.

With a grateful heart return their parents, it is an unshirkable responsibility, this is a sacred mission. Lets learn to share, learn to be grateful.

Thanksgiving parents, starts from me, start from every little bit, start from now, action! Dear classmates!

我们生活在一个快乐的时代，在这个时代里，父母给予我们的最多。首先，父母给了我们生命，又含辛茹苦地把我们抚养成人，供我们学习，给我们温暖。

我们将用怎样的实际行动来回敬我们的父母呢?

当父母疲惫不堪的时候，为他们送上一句甜甜的问候：“爸爸，妈妈，你们辛苦了，别太累了。”然后，递上一杯清香四溢的热茶，暖暖父母疲惫的心;当父母忙得不可开交的时候，主动伸出双手，做一些力所能及的事情，给父母分担一点点重担，让父母省省心;当父母淡忘自己生日的时候，及时献上一份小小的心愿，摆一桌丰盛的生日晚餐，送上一句诚挚的祝福。除此之外，我们更应该虚心好学，勤奋上进，以优秀的成绩搏得父母的欢心，以高尚的品质减少父母的担心，以健康的体魄赢得父母的放心。

“树欲静而风不止，子欲养而亲不在”。是啊，趁父母健在的时候多尽一点孝道，多尽一点义务和责任，让自己不要留下遗憾，一点永远无法挽回的遗憾。

用一颗感恩的心回报自己的父母，这是一份不可推卸的责任，这是一份神圣的使命。让我们学会分担，学会感恩。

感恩父母，从我做起，从一点一滴做起，从现在做起，行动吧!亲爱的同学们!

Dear Mr. Headmaster,

I am Li Hua , a student from class one ,senior II . I am writing to draw

your attention to some improper behavior among us students : littering and

scribbling . It makes our school dirty and unpleasant , and does harm to the

image of our school . I always feel ashamed whenever I see this . It is clearly

not appropriate for a student to litter and scribble about. I wonder if the

school could place more dustbins around and set up specific rules against such

behavior. At the same time , students should be encouraged to develop good

habits and better behave themselves.

I believe that , with the joint efforts of bother teachers and students

,our school will become a more enjoyable place in the near future. Thank for

your consideration.

Yours faithfully,

Li Hua

What are some of the qualities of a good parentUse specific details and

examples to explain your answer.

Parents play a leading role in the process of children’s development in our society. Whether a parent is good or not has a major influence on kids’ future. Then, what are some of the qualities of a good parentWhen faced with the question, people will present many different answers such as kind-hearted, sensible etc. In my view,

however, I advocate that a good parent should be the person who is responsible, patient and has outstanding ability to communicate with kids. My arguments are presented as follows.

My parents very love me.When I was a young girl,my parents took good care of me.If I had a bad cold,my parents would very worry about me.My parents sent me to have English lessons.It improved my English writing and listening skills.Thanks a lot to my parents.Ill study hard and look good after my parents.Ill cant let my parents down.

Some people know how hard, some people know how to honor, some people know how to respect, know how to cherish. I know a different kind of friendship - thanksgiving. When I was toddler, my parents were leaning on the side; when my life was rugged. Is the parents to help me through the ups and downs; when I study the pressure when the parents gave me a cup of hot tea; when I was bullied, the parents for me to fight injustice ... ... parents paid so much for us, do not we Should you learn to be grateful?

I remember once, school sooner or later, I said to my mother: "Mom, why do not you call me to get up early? I should be late!" I complained. "Well, you hurry, Ill wait for you downstairs." Mother said, while walking out the door. I dawdle to finish the teeth, casually grilled a few mouthfuls of rice, dressed, rushed to the downstairs. Mom has long been waiting downstairs. Breath of the north wind, I was shivering coldly. Mother took his big coat and put it on. Im still talking about it: "You are so late to call me up, will be late, late criticized!" Mom opened the car faster. Cold wind "wind" from my ear blowing, scraping my ear sore. Im late.

Back home, my father said more, "your mother because the morning too little wear, cold cold, is resting, you do not argue to him." Tears like a broken line of pearls, fell down. All this is because of me, all because of love! I went to the mothers bed, guilty to say "mother, sorry".

Is that experience, let me understand the love of parents. Let me learn a more care, less complain. More than a Thanksgiving, less a bit disgusted!

Dear Mom and Dad,

The time has come: I’m graduating, and I thank you both for all your help

during these 15 years. I still remember when you guys used to say, “You can be

whatever you want.” I’m so glad you are my parents, especially when I hear kids

say they don’t get along with theirs. I’m glad we do, and that you support me in

my decisions. You always try to help, and that’s important to me.

Dad, I remember when you first took me fishing. I loved going even though I

never caught anything. I also remember when you would get mad at me. I realize

you were only trying to show me the right way. When I would cry, you would

always be there to try to cheer me up. That’s what I call a good, loving, caring

dad. Sometimes you and Mom don’t agree with the decisions I make, but you are

there by my side in whatever I do, and that’s why I love you both so much.

Mom, we have our girls night out every Friday and I hope that never

changes, even when I am in college. I love telling you everything; the best part

about you is that you listen. Not only do you have great style, but you love to

have fun, and Dad does, too. You always give me your opinion and I listen. And

when I don’t, you are usually right!

I thank God every day that you are my parents and that you guys brought me

up right. I’m very fortunate having the two of you by me side when some kids

don’t have this kind of relationship with their parents. It makes me know how

lucky I am that you two are still together and get along so well. That’s what

makes you both so special to me and I take in every moment that I get with you

guys. Love always,

Allison