写人的英语作文100词【汇集20篇】

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(一)I think she is the most beautiful girl I have ever seen. 我认为她是我见过的女孩中最漂亮的一个，She is exciting, amazing and sexy. When we first met I felt her erotic emanation. Now I know that she is extremely intelligent too.

(二)She is 24 years old, and she has a 3-year-old son. So she is a mother. A sharp mother. She has a piercing in her tongue and two tattoos, one on her stomach (an Indian man’s face) and one on her back (it is non-figurative). I like them very much. If you meet her, look at her face; it is so sweet. She has a birthmark on the tip of her nose.

(三)Sometimes I call her ”spotted nose.” It is so sweet. Really. Like a little cat. But her eyes. They are blue like the sky in spring or the ocean in a stormy night. They are so maddening. Well, let’s talk about her mouth. When she is smiling she has two little face-lines by the side of her lips. (dimples)

(四)She is the most beautiful mother in the world and she is a real muse, a muse which every poet wants, lovely, wild, tender, sweet, and deep with secrets and love. A real woman.

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(一)我认为她是我见过的最美丽的女孩。我认为她是我见过的女孩中最漂亮的一个，她是令人兴奋的，惊人的，性感的。我们第一次见面时，我感觉到她所散发出的性感。现在我知道她也很聪明。

(二)她24岁，她有一个三岁的儿子。所以她是母亲。严厉的母亲。她有一个穿孔在她的舌头和两个纹身，一个在她的胃(一个印度男子的脸)和一个在她的背上(这是非比喻)。我非常喜欢他们。如果你遇见她，看看她的脸，它是如此甜蜜。她在她的鼻子尖上的一个胎记。

(三)有时我叫她“斑点的鼻子。“它是如此的甜蜜。真正地.像一只小猫。但她的眼睛。它们是蓝色的，就像春天的天空，或是暴风雨中的海洋。他们是如此的疯狂。好吧，让我们谈谈她的嘴。当她微笑时，她的嘴唇旁边有两条小脸。(酒窝)

(四)她是世界上最漂亮的妈妈，她是一个真正的女神，缪斯每位诗人想要的，可爱的，野性的，温柔的，甜蜜的，和深爱的秘密。一个真正的女人。

In the winter of 1953, a powerful jump from a Chinese woman attracted world attention.

Twenty-year-old Chinese athlete Zheng Fengrong shattered the womens high jump world record with a leap of 1.77 metres in a Beijing athletic meet on November 17, 1957.

The new record, the first womens world record for the Peoples Republic of China, was one centimetre higher than the old mark held by American Mildred McDaniel .

The jump also made Zheng the first Asian athlete to break a world track and field record since 1936.

The record jump, although by a tiny margin, was described by the foreign media as "an explosive jump" because it generated Chinas first athletic world record.

Dubbed " a spring swallow （燕子） awakening （唤醒了）Chinese sports, " Zheng sent a message to the world that China was Nolonger the "sick man of the East. "

Born in the spring city of Jinan, Shandong Province, Zheng, who stands at 1.70 metres, has a good physique and a skillful scissor----sharp jump which was seldom seen among top jumpers in the world.

She once leapt 1.78 metres, a national record in 1963.

She claimed a well-merited place in sporting history when her achievement was listed in the Guinness Book of World Records （吉尼斯世界纪录） .

Due to her contribution （贡献） to athletics, Zheng was awarded a series of honours. She was named among the nations greatest athletes （运动员） in 1984.

My father is a teacher, he looks fat, but also wearing a pair of glasses, the rationale of a flat head, not tall.

Dad likes to swim, run, play table tennis, read books, travel.

My dad asked me very strict, he often taught me to be polite. Once to a uncle home to a guest, my uncle gave me a big and round apple, I took over from the hands of uncle apples, relish to eat up, on the way home, my father taught me: Make a polite child, someone else give you something, say thank you.

Dad asked me to be an honest man. Once I secretly in the room watching TV, my father told me to open the door, I quickly turn off the TV, my father asked me: "What are you doing?" I said: "I am reading." He looked at it and said, "Are you lying too? Are you deceiving me? Do you know?" I had to admit. Dad said to me: "I have to do something wrong to take the initiative to admit, do not lie, know wrong to change or a good boy." Dads teachings I keep in mind.

My father is a demanding person, I like my father, he taught me to do a very polite, honest and honest people.

My father is long with a pair of bright eyes, high nose, wearing a pair of thick glasses, laughing very cute, like a rubber doll. However, the raw gas is very terrible. I remember one time, I would not play the piano, my father gave me a teachers shelf, his eyes staring round, fingertips almost to my nose, and said angrily: "You in the end is playing, or Do not play? "Looks like only ready to eat sheep wolf.

My dad is a teacher, he loves to learn. Every morning, after eating breakfast, began to read English. He usually did not work against the computer, that is, reading, but also wrote a lot of books.

Dad usually likes to tell me jokes, often amused me laughing. Do not know when he gave his students class, will not this?

Dad went to exercise every afternoon, sometimes running, sometimes skating, sometimes at home doing sit-ups, and sometimes as my sports equipment, lifted it!

I love my dad, no matter what I am, I will not change my father.

My mother has a pair of keen eyes which can speak. Whenever I encounter difficulties， her eyes will encourage me and help me cheer up. When I began learning to walk， mother always lent me a hand and encouraged me to stand up while I fell down.

我的母亲有一双敏锐的、会说话的眼睛。每当我遇到困难的时候，她的眼睛总是鼓励我，帮我振作起来。在我开始学走路时，母亲总是帮助我，鼓励我站起来，我摔倒了。

As I finally threw myself into her arms， her eyes Smiled with praise. Aftei I entered the school， mothers eyes still encouraged me.

最后我晃晃悠悠扑到她的怀里，她的双眼充满了赞扬。我长大上学后，母亲的眼睛仍旧鼓励我。

Once I failed my Chinese exam， my mother helped me find out the reasons instead of blaming me. Now I have grown up and become more independent， but whenever I come across setbacks， my mothers eyes are always with me encouraging me wherever I go.

一旦我语文考试不及格，妈妈帮我找出原因而责备我。现在我已经长大了，变得更加独立，但每当我遇到挫折时，母亲的眼睛总是伴随着我，给我鼓励。

I think she is the most beautiful girl I have ever seen. 我认为她是我见过的女孩中最漂亮的一个，She is exciting, amazing and sexy. When we first met I felt her erotic emanation. Now I know that she isextremely intelligent too.

我妈妈的脸圆圆的，眼睛大大的，中等身材，一笑就会露出一颗虎牙。

My mother has a round face, big eyes, of medium build, a smile will show a tiger.

我妈妈以前是一位中学英语老师，现在在一所大学里作教学工作，所以她平时特别忙。但是，只要一有时间，她就会和我一起玩。

My mother is an English teacher in a middle school, as a teaching job in a university now, so she usually very busy. However, as long as I have time, she would play with me.

如果天气比较好，我们会去打羽毛球;有时，我们会一起读一本书，一起分享在书里得到的快乐;有时，我们会为一则幽默笑话大笑不止;有时我们还会做许许多多的小游戏。高兴起来时，妈妈会像一个小孩子似的和我一起笑闹。

If the weather is fine, we will go to play badminton; sometimes, we will read a book together, to share in the book are happy together; sometimes, we will not just for a joke laugh; sometimes we do lots of small game. Cheer up, my mother will be like a kid and I laugh and joke.

平日里我和她玩的时候， 她总能用他那幽默风趣的话语把我逗得哈哈大笑，笑得没有力气站起来，让我“不战而败”。当然，大多数情况下都是我强忍着不笑，这种把脸涨得通红，面部肌肉紧绷的表情反而会使我妈妈先笑起来，随后我们俩就一起笑的没完没了了。

On weekdays, I play with her, she always with his humorous words make me laugh, smile dont have the strength to stand up, let me not to fight and defeat". Of course, most cases are I tried not to smile, the face flushed, facial muscles look will make my mother smile but first, then well laugh endless.

I am a man without memory. Sketch it myself. I have a pair of bright eyes, a simple mind have a words of mouth. The biggest characteristic is my simple and without memory, often forget things. Can be more I forget things, is countless.

Is it happened recently. That day, my mother go out to buy things, call me before going out to take out your meat in the refrigerator food thawing, say that finish, mother will open the door. I just want to get meat dishes of thawing time, my friend came to my house to the door knocking at the door, I would like to open the door after: whats the rush? Anyway, my mother hasnt come back, I and a friend to play, to open the refrigerator is not late. I went over to them, the house with the building blocks, play happily, soon forgot mom told things just now.

Finally, my mother came back, but I didnt remember it. Mother went into the house, with his eyes look at the table, look at the refrigerator, without saying a word, with round eyes staring at me. I suddenly remind of that thing just now, three steps two step to go to the refrigerator with food thawing.

You said, if I was a man without memory.

我是一个没有记性的人。自我素描一下吧，我有一双明亮的眼睛，一个简单的头脑里长着一张张口结舌的嘴巴。最大的特点的就是我头脑简单，又没有记性，经常会忘记一些事情。我忘记的事情可多了，简直数不胜数。

就是最近发生的这件事吧。那天，妈妈出去买东西，出门前叫我要把冰箱里的肉菜拿出来解冻，说完，妈妈就开门走了。我刚要拿肉菜解冻的时候，我的朋友就到我家门口敲门来了，我去开门后想：急什么?反正妈妈还没回来，我和小伙伴先玩一玩，再开冰箱也不迟。我走过去跟他们一起搭积木、起屋子，玩得兴高采烈，很快就忘记了妈妈刚才交待过的事情了。

终于，妈妈回来了，但我还是没记起那件事情。妈妈进了家后，用眼睛看看餐桌，看看冰箱，一声不吭，用圆溜溜的眼瞪着我。我这猛然想起刚才那件事，三步两步地走到冰箱前拿菜解冻。

你说，我是不是一个没有记性的人。

She has a black hair, like a ponytail, a pair of black pearl-like eyes, a pair of curved eyebrows, laughing when there is a pair of sweet dimples, but also exposed two small teeth, high nose , Little mouth, like a small cherry, every day smiling. - thats my mother.

My mother is the person I am most familiar with, I will not do the subject she taught me, life she care about me, whenever I was sick when she was more than anyone else, and sometimes I wake up from sleep also see She bedside with me until I burn. My mother is also a day to send me to school, and my mother is also helpful.

Once, my mother and I went to Ganoderma Park for a walk, walked, suddenly heard a little girl crying: "Mom ... ... mother." My mother and went to the little girls side, my mother asked the little girl: "where your mother?" The little girl cried and said: "Do not know." "Where do you live?" Mother asked. The little girl shook her head. My mother told me to play the game with the little girl, we side of the game with the little girl while playing her mother, and soon, I saw aunt rushed to run over, the little girl saw his mother ran past, tightly Live a mother. Aunt said: "Thank you." Mom smiled and said: "You are welcome, should."

Later, I must be like a mother to help people around the difficulties, whether it is familiar or not familiar with the people. My mother is my good example, I love my mother.

I have an inseparable friends, he is XXX.

XXX x years old this year, is XXX x grade students. He is a tall, not fat nor thin, appear very spirit. Round head with plank inch, hair pitch-black shine. Also like the apple face inlaid with a pair of intense big eyes, like two black pearls. He is especially love to laugh, laugh to reveal a pair of small dimples on her face. Usually like to wear school uniforms, because it is convenient to wear school uniform activity.

XXX is a love to help others, no matter big or small, in the class to find his help for it. Remember that math test, the teacher let we all use pen paper. The moment when I open the pen bag, immediately dumbfounded. Oh, my pen is missing. "Hitched" my heart once, in a hurry to find, but not see it. Was I like a cat on hot bricks - around. Because courage small, so cant and the teacher said, his tears secretly. XXX at this moment, sitting behind me saw I worry of appearance, then quietly asked me: "XXX, whats the matter with you?" I sobbed, said: "my pen is missing, how to answer?" He said: "dont be sad, use mine, I have two pens." Say, from took a look the new pen in the pencil case, gave it to me. Look at the pen, I am excited to tears, quietly say: "thank you!" He says with a laugh: "youre welcome, who let we are good friends."

This is my good friend, listen to my introduction, you also willing to become friends with him!

我有一个形影不离的好朋友，他就是——xxx。

xxx今年x岁了，是xxx小学x年级的学生。他的个子高高的，不胖也不瘦，显得很精神。圆圆的脑袋上留着板寸，头发乌黑发亮。在苹果似的脸上还镶嵌着一双炯炯有神的大眼睛，像两个黑珍珠一样。他特别爱笑，笑起来脸上就露出一对小酒窝。平时喜欢穿校服，因为穿校服活动起来很方便。

xxx可是一个爱助人为乐的人，班里无论大小事，找他帮忙准没错。记得那次数学测试，老师让我们都用钢笔答卷。当我打开笔袋的那一刻，顿时傻眼了。糟了，我的钢笔不见了。我的心“咯噔”一下，急急忙忙找了起来，可就是不见它的踪影。急得我像热锅上的蚂蚁——团团转。因为胆子小，所以也不敢和老师说，只好自己暗自落泪。这时，坐在我后面的xxx看见我着急的样子，便小声地问我：“xxx，你怎么了?”我抽泣着说：“我的钢笔不见了，怎么答卷啊?”他说：“别难过了，用我的吧，我有两支笔。”说着，就从笔袋里拿出一支看起来很新的笔，递给了我。看着这支笔，我激动得热泪盈眶，小声地说：“谢谢你!”他笑着说：“不客气，谁让我们是好朋友呢。”

这就是我的好朋友，听了我的介绍，你们也愿意和他成为朋友吧!

My sister is a university student, wearing a black shiny hair, a pair of big eyes, as if talking, slightly raised nose, very beautiful.

My sister and I feel particularly good, my sister is meticulous care about me. I remember one time, I was sick, in the middle of the night coughing, wake up the sister, sister did not want to disturb mom and Dad, so he went up to the pharmacy to buy medicine. Some pharmacies have been closed, the sister ran far enough to buy the right medicine. I was moved to tears brim over with tears.

My sister is not only concerned about life, take care of me, in other ways, too. On one occasion, my sister gave her beloved watch to me, I did not take good care of the table lost. I thought to myself: This is finished, must be scolded by my sister. When sister asked me, I would hide, finally found my sister. My sister said: "sincere words and earnest wishes must be honest, have Never mind is the key to mistakes, correct them in time, it is good. In addition, others to give things to take care of, to develop good habits, to have a big." I nod.

Although my sister often does not go home, I miss her very much. I will study hard and be a useful person. Live up to my sisters hope.

Sep 7, 2011

It is my great honor to interview Flor and introduce her to you all. She is a charming and expressive girl with brightly voluminous eyes, which always sparkle with wisdom. Besides, she has a pretty name, Flor Alba Rocha Vorgas. Flor is the short form of flower in her native language, and Alba means sunrise while Rocha Vorgas is a combination of her father’s and mother’s family name. Meanwhile, Flor speaks Spanish as her native language and she is capable of speaking French and English as well. Coming from Bogota, the capital of Colombia, she regards Monserrate, located on the peak of a small mountain, as her favorite part about her home city. According to what she describes, the mountain where Monserrate is situated lies on the east of Bogota, and it takes you approximately an hour to climb from the foot to the top while just around fifteen minutes to get there by cableway. Moreover, there is no denying the fact that you are bond to fulfill your eyesight with the amazing overlook of the whole city as long as you stand there.

When it comes to her own experience, she takes pride in graduating from one of the best law schools in Colombia. I am sure that Flor has been an assiduous and sagacious student in her school, because she is so outstanding that starts to work as a lawyer just three months after graduation, doing some research for the government on the Internet. Currently, she is studying English in New York, renting house from a Colombian family in East Elmhurst with her roommate. As a result of being an only child in her traditional family, Flor has been cherished as the most valuable treasure in the solar system all the time, which somewhat limits her independence. Thus, she is dying for the opportunity to live alone, and, in fact, she has succeeded in proving herself nowadays as she is able to pay for herself via becoming a part-time seller. With the aim of managing the Master Degree in US after accomplishing learning language, she also has a great number of further plans for the future, such as returning to Colombia and teaching in a law school. Ridiculously, however, becoming a pianist and a ballet dancer was once her childhood ambition, but it never comes true.

Furthermore, Flor possesses a large variety of interests, among which watching movies may be the most attractive event to her. With an affinity for films like dramas, documental ones and European ones, she even sets a record of seeing a movie every other day! As far as she is concerned, her grandmother is the hero in her heart due to her strong mind. What’s more, the fondest memory in her perspective is the happy life with her grandmother. All of a sudden, it occurs to me that when I was a little child, my grandmother always did her utmost to encourage me and exalted my every single merit. Last but not least, I believe that she is the most unforgettable woman I have ever known. In addition, I think it certain for you to fall in love with her, Flor. th

Is a lovely girl, her innocence is the origin of our happy, brings us her happy smile.

Her name is li zhang, her eyes wide, mouth like a cherry, very lovely, long hair, she is good at jumping rope, run, jump, etc...

Shes good at her grades in school, take the first every time, once dropped her grades, was beaten by her mother and father, the next day I went to school found that she didnt come to school.

I came to her shes at home, a corner to cry, I used to have a look at herll hurt all over, I asked her, "whats wrong with you." She said to me: "mom hit me, I good sad, she is the first hit me."

I was angry for her mother said: "shes your daughter, even if she is bad to also can not call her again." Her mother said: "Im sorry, daughter, mother is wrong, please let we trust." Li sent zhang said: mom, I would like to challenge you.

This is my friend, my good friend forever.

是一个可爱的女生，她的天真是我们快乐的起源，她的快乐带给了我们笑容。

她的名字叫李送张，她的眼睛大大的，嘴巴像樱桃，可爱极了，头发长长的，她擅长跳绳，跑步，跳远，等等……

她在学校她的成绩很好，每次都拿第一，有一次她的成绩下降了，被她的爸爸妈妈打了，第二天我来到学校发现她没来上学。

我来到她家她在家的一个角落哭，我过去一看她满身都是伤，我问她：“你怎么了。”她对我说：“妈妈打我，我好伤心，她是第一次打我。”

我生气的对她的妈妈说：“她是你女儿，即使她考的再不好也不可以打她啊。”她妈妈说：“对不起，女儿，妈妈错了，请你愿谅。”李送张说：妈妈我愿谅你。

这就是我的朋友，我永远的好朋友。

My mother has a pair of small eyes, smiling and narrowing into a seam. She

had a small cherry mouth under her straight nose. My mothers hair is a little

different - its curly, and shes joked that she doesnt need a perm.

My mother likes cooking. When mum is free, she will cook delicious meals

for my brother and me. There are her best fried dumplings, spicy dry pot

bullfrogs and crispy fried chicken legs. My brother says they are better than

KFC chicken legs.

Mother is very kind. Every time we meet beggars in the street, my mother

will give them change and teach me to be helpful.

I love my mother.

I am an ordinary girl. Learning in general, people also generally. But I have extraordinary thing, this kind of thing everyone has, but this kind of thing everyone is different, have such things -- friendship. I have two good friends, they callXXX, XXX. They are my good sister, they gave me a lot of happy and moved. They in my sad comfort me, when I am happy happy together with me. A lot of fun in our body.

My dad is not tall, black eyebrows with a pair of sharp eyes below, I do nothing to escape his eyes, because my father was a child often do housework, so the body is very strong.

My father is very amiable, but he also has a serious side, when I test the poor test, the father will become serious up, will be angry and asked me: "how do you test this is so bad, is not to I am fan you ah? "However, when I test well, my father will smile and said to me:" Son, very good Well, worthy of reward, next time make persistent efforts to test better! "

Every time my father came to my house, my family became a humorous theater, my father often lying in bed tease me, I do, sometimes often lying on my fathers stomach, suppress him, he is not angry, but also Filled with: "package adults mercy, small also did not dare to say." I have already laughing broken belly. And sometimes, I play will be a bit too far, my father will say: "play is to play, do not play too far, this is very bad, very dangerous.

This is my humorous, amiable, there is a serious side of the father, I like him!

The Pregant Teenage Girl

Recently, a girl who was born after the year of 2000 showing a picture of her pregant image in Weibo. This teenage girl wrote down the words that she was busying giving birth to a child for her so called husband, who was also a teenager. Soon this picture became the hot issue. People were so shocked by the girl’s young face, which looked so innocent and she was just no more than 16!Such a young girl surely did not have the ability to raise a kid, what’s more, they even did not figure out the meaning of responsibility. The problem of family education was brought to the public again. The root of young pregancy lies in the parents’ caring. The lack of communication between parents and chidren is easy to have such problem. It is not appropriate to have baby at such early age.

最近,一个出生在2000年后的女孩在微博展示了她怀孕的照片。这少女写下一些话,她忙着为所谓的丈夫生孩子,他丈夫也是一个少年。很快这张照片成为了热点。人们如此震惊于这位女孩稚嫩的脸,她看上去很天真,不超过16 岁!这样一个年轻的女孩肯定没有能力抚养孩子,更重要的是,他们甚至没有弄清楚责任的意义。家庭教育的问题再次被带到公众面前。如此年轻就怀孕的根源在于父母的关怀程度。父母和子女之间缺乏沟通很容易有这样的问题。如此小的年纪就有孩子是不合适的。

[高中写人英语作文

写人的英语作文在高考中不少见，什么样的作文更能吸引人呢?下面请看语文迷为大家带来的技巧。

写人记叙文，一般为肖像描写、行动描写、语言描写、心理描写以及对细节的描写，应根据要求，灵活掌握，突出重点。

【几点注意】

1.使用正确人称和时态。

①时态：

一般现在时--描写人物外貌、性格、兴趣等

一般过去时-- 描写人物出生、教育背景、经历、事迹

②人称：第一人称或第三人称

2.介绍人物的姓名、年龄、外貌、学历、经历、专业、爱好、特长、事迹、性格等，包括所给的全部信息点，不能遗漏或随意添加。

3.对所给的信息进行适当重组，安排好写作顺序，突出重点信息。

4.正确运用描写人物的词汇和句型。

【常见词语】

①外貌特征：

pretty, beautiful, good-looking，handsome,ordinary-looking, with a big nose, with a big

smile, short, tall,thin, strong, white-haired，1.80 metres tall, …

②性格特点：

absent-minded, charming, attractive, bright, wise smart, confident, naughty，talkative, diligent,

lazy, friendly, generous, be ready to help others,kind-hearted, warm-hearted, patient, humorous,

have a good/ bad temper, independent,narrow-minded, …

③童年情况：

as a boy of 15, be born on, during his childhood, live a happy/hard life, the son of a poor family,

spend his childhood in, ...

④兴趣爱好： be delighted in doing, be good at , be interested in , be fond of , be crazy about, be pleased with, do well in, enjoy doing, have a strong desire to do, long for/long to do), take a pleasure in doing,…

⑤教育背景： be admitted to Beijing University, be enrolled in, fail in the test, get a master’s

degree, get on well with one’s lessons, go abroad to further one’s study, graduate from,major in, receive a doctor’s degree, pass the examination, take an active part in, …

⑥ 成就或事迹：

become a member of the team, encourage sb to do sth, give up one’s life for sth, receive the

Nobel Prize for physics, set a new world record of,win the first prize in, win a gold /silver/ bronze

medal, have a talent for, make up one’s mind to do sth., put one’s heart into, work hard at,

concentrate oneself to, devote oneself to,do sth.with great determination and perseverance, ...

⑦他人评价：

an inspiring leader, a model worker, an advanced teacher, be respected by , be honored as, be

considered/regarded as, be famous/known as,his hard work brought him great success, make

great contributions to our country, set a good example for , be highly spoken of for, ...

例文

你班要举办以“Ordinary but Great”为题的英语主题班会。

请根据下列信息准备一篇发言稿，介绍赵郁的成长经历。

注意： 1、词数不少于60。

2、文章的题目和开头已经给出。

3、可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

提示词：首席技师 chief technician

Ordinary but Great

We are all ordinary people, but following what we are interested in and doing what we are good

at can help us make great achievements for society and go far. Here’s a convincing and inspiring example.

______________________________________

【范文】

Zhao Yu, the chief technician in the Benz Company,is regarded as a great success. However, his success is no accident. As a young boy with a sense of creativity, he was eager to learn and to make a lot of inventions. Being an ordinary worker in the Benz Company for 17 years, not only did he do well in his job, but he also made efforts to teach himself English and to learn how to use computers. Now it is easy for him to read English materials about cars. Besides, he became expert at solving various technical problems.Because of his great contribution, he has received awards many times.

Zhao Yu has set a good example that ordinary people can stand out by doing their jobs with interest and enthusiasm.

【评析】

1.作者运用了所给出的全部信息：姓名、职务、经历。对所给的信息进行了适当重组，突出了重点信息(赵郁的经历)，内容完整、详略得当，体现了话题“Ordinary but great”所表达的内容。

2. 正确使用人称(第三人称)，灵活使用时态(一般过去时、一般现在时);合理使用过渡词，使文章层次分明、结构紧凑。

3. 语言规范，表达准确。文章运用了一些高级句式，如同位语、介词短语、分词短语、倒装句、同位语从句等，增加了文章的亮点。

My mother is a clean worker, she has a long hair, perennial hard work, so that she made a hair of a long hair white hair. She has a pair of big eyes, but now it becomes boring. Her face darkened, eyes wrinkles began to rise more. In order to make more money for the family, in order to let me and my brother and other children as comfortable day, my mother swept the streets during the day and night to someone elses restaurant to wash the dishes, she washed every day like a bowl of rice, only to the Late at night, she can drag her tired body to go home.

She for our family to eat a lot of bitter, she will get up at three or four every morning, help us find clothes, boiled porridge to us as breakfast. After doing these things, she also went to the street to clean up. I only know that the cleaners are looked down upon by the people, I told my mother, said: "Mom! You find other work is good, open the parents will be when someone elses children are pointing to you," that persons mother is a clean Ah! Is such a job ah! "I have been looked down upon others, hum! You better find out the job soon." Mother did not speak, she head down, silently tears. My mother did not listen to me, still doing the job, I know my mother did not want to change jobs, it did not force her.

Until now, I understand that the mother is for our family will be so tired, here I want to call the world: mother, I love you!

The first memory I have of him- of anything, really is his strength. It was in the late afternoon in a house under construction near ours. The unfinished wood floor had large, terrifying holes whose big and opening darkness I knew led to nowhere good. His powerful hands,then age 33, wrapped all the way around my tiny arms, then age 4, and easily swung me up to his shoulders to command all I surveyed。

The relationship between a son and his father changes over time. It may grow and flourish in mutual maturity. It may sour in hated dependence or independence. With many children living in single-parent homes today, it may not even exist。

But to a little boy right after World War II, a father seemed a god with strange strengths and strange powers enabling him to do and know things that no mortal could do or know. Amazing things, like putting a bicycle chain back on,just like that. Or building a hamster cage. Or guiding a Jigsaw

so it forms the letter F: I learned the alphabet that way in those pre-television days。

There were, of course, rules to learn. First came the handshake. None of those cold little finger grips, but a good firm squeeze accompanied by an equally strong gaze into the others eyes. "The first thing anyone knows about you is your handshake , he would say. And we d practice it each night on his return from work, the serious toddler in the battered Cleveland Indians cap running up to the giant father to shake hands again and again until it was firm enough。

"Only my mother is good, mothers like a treasure ... ..." hear this familiar melody, a picture of my moving picture and surfaced in my eyes.

That day, under heavy rain, blowing winds, even the trees outside the window is also staggering. Day crying, I am crying, because I have a fever of 39 degrees. My mother regardless of thirty-seven twenty-one, holding me to the hospital to run, her face wet, can not tell is the rain, sweat, or tears ... ...

Mom finally took me to the hospital, then it is already morning, the doctors are asleep. Mom kept knocking on the door, after a long time the doctor was blind to appear in front of us, his attitude is very bad. Mom busy said: "I am sorry, my son made a high fever, please help him look at it!" Doctor see my mother so polite, attitude also improved. Help me read the disease, the doctor called my nurse sister to help me injections, take medicine ... ...

Home is already 4 oclock in the morning, I lay in bed, see my mother was busy helping me get medicine, when she handed me the drug, I clearly see her hands covered with cocoon, and my heart said no Out of the taste, this pair of hard work is hard-working performance, is the performance of love ah!

Mom, you are my favorite person, I will keep your love in mind, learn, become a knowledgeable person, never live up to your love for me. Mom, here, I want to say thank you, but also say "I love you!"