理想英语作文初三(20篇)

初三英语作文

An Accident

意外之祸

It was Saturday. Mr, Li was going to go fishing.He put a fishing pole on his shoulder. His dogs were running after him.

But he forgot there was something wrong with his bike, and he hadnt mended it.He was so excited that he couldnt watch buses and ears carefully.Suddenly, a truck was coming and he didnt notice.He was hit by the truck and he threw away the pole. His bike was broken and a lump appeared on his forehead.

那是个星期六，李先生打算去钓鱼。他肩上扛着鱼杆，爱犬在后面跟随。

但他忘了他的自行车有毛病，还没修理。他特别兴奋，没注意来往车辆。突然一辆大卡车开过来，他没看见。他被撞着了， 鱼杆扔了，自行车也坏了，前额还起了个大包。

Working for My Mother

为妈妈打工

The summer vacation began. I decided to work to make money for the next term.

But I didnt know what work I could do.At that time, my mother was writing a book.I decided to type for her for pay. She agreed and paid me 5 yuan for 1000 words.

I began to work.I typed so slowly that I could type only several hundred words a day.It was a hard job for me.I kept typing all day long.

I finished the work two weeks later.I came to know how hard it was to make money.

暑假开始了，我决定打工为下学期挣些钱。

但我不知道我能做什么工作。那时，妈妈在写一本书。我想为她有偿打字，她同意了，答应每千字付我5元钱。 我开始工作。我打字很慢，每天才能打几百字。对我来说这是一项辛苦的工作，我只能整天工作着。 两周后我终于完成了这项工作。我认识到挣钱是多么的不容易啊!

My Life in Summer Holiday

暑假生活

Good morning, my dear fellows.I am happy to see all of our classmates come back to school.I would like to

share my life in holiday with you.This summer holiday, I spent most of my time in playing, like watching TV, playing games, outing with friends and so on.But I also pay attention to my study.For example, I like watching the educational TV programs, so that I can both have fun and learn something new at the same time.Besides, I get up early to do some morning reading to practice my English.Of course, I finish my summer exercises on time.In short, my summer holiday is colorful and meaningful.How about your life in summer holiday?I am eager to know.

早上好，我亲爱的同学们。我很高兴看到所有的同学都返校了。我想要与大家分享我的假期生活。这个暑假，我花大部分的时间玩耍，比如看电视，玩游戏，和朋友出去玩等等。但是我也关心我的学习。比如说，我喜欢看教育电视节目，这样我既可以得到乐趣又可以同时学到一些新的东西。除此之外，我早上起得很早进行早读以锻炼我的英语。当然，我也按时完成了暑假作业。总是，我的暑假多彩且富有意义。你们的暑假生活是怎么样的呢？我很想知道。

Tiger

老虎

A tiger is a kind of catamount animal. It looks like a cat, but much bigger than a cat.A tiger is very ferocious and it eats mainly meat.It has yellow and black streaks all over its body and it looks very beautiful.Its tail is long and strong and it can hit its quarry dying.

Tigers live in the thick forests and small animals in the forests are tigers food.

During the past years, many forests have been cut down and the living conditions of the tigers are becoming worse and worse.There are fewer tigers left in the world now.Tigers are the animals of the world, and they should have their own living spaces.We must do our best to protect the tigers and their living environment.

老虎是猫科动物的一种，它看起来像猫却比猫大很多。老虎非常凶猛，是肉食性动物。它全身是黑黄相间的斑纹，看起来非常漂亮。它的尾巴又长又有力，能够打死它的猎物。

老虎生活在密林里，以森林中妁小动物为食。

在过去妁几年中，许多森林被砍伐，这使者虎的生存环境越来越糟。现在世界上老虎的数量非常少。老虎是世界性妁动物，它们应该有自己的生存空间。我们必须尽全力保护老虎和它们的生存环境。

Dont Watch Too Much TV

看电视别太多

Tom watched TV too late last night. He didn＇t go to bed until twelve.This morning he got up late. He hurried to school without breakfast.He got school at 8:20 and he was late for class.When his teacher asked him a

question in class,he couldn＇t answer it.AFter he came back home, he couldn＇t finish his homework.He felt very sorry and decided not to watch too much TV.

Last night Tom watched a TV play until after twelve.He got up late this morning.He had no time to have his breakfast and hurried to school.

When he got school, the first class had begun.He felt so sleepy that he got to sleep after a while.The teacher asked him to answer a question, but he couldn＇t.

After school he came back home, but he found it difficult to do his homework.He needed to have a good sleep at once.He felt very sorry and decided not to watch TV too late.

汤姆昨天晚上看电视太晚了，直到12：00他才去睡觉。今天早晨他起床也晚了，没来得及吃早饭便急急忙忙上学去了。他8：20才到学校，上课迟到了。老师问他问题，他也答不上来。回到家，作业不会做。他觉得很后悔，他决心不再看那么长时间的电视了。

昨天晚上汤姆看一部电视剧直到12：00多。今天早晨他起晚了。他没有时间吃早饭就匆匆忙忙上学去了。

他到校时，第一节课已经开始了。他觉得太困了，不一会儿他就睡着了。老师让他回答问题，他不会。

放学后他回到家，但是他发现作业太难了。他只是困，需要马上睡觉。他很后悔并下决心再不看电视看到那么晚了。

After Supper

晚饭后

After supper, my father leaves the table fight away and starts to water his dear flowers on the balcony every day.He takes his sprayer in his hand, appreciating their beauty and smelling their fragrance.Sometimes he smiles at the flowers, as if he is talking with them.Mom washes the dishes, cleans up the floor and at the same time singing Beijing Opera. Sometimes she stops to ask me how I do in my school.After supper, I play the piano for two hours.What a happy life we live.

每天吃完晚饭，爸爸就立即离开饭桌，到阳台给他那些可爱的花儿浇水。他手里拿着喷壶,津津有味地欣赏着花的美丽，闻着花的芳香。有时他还对着花儿微笑，似乎在跟它们交谈着什么。妈妈则一边洗碗扫地一边哼着京戏，有时停下采询问一下我在学校学习的情况。晚饭后，我弹两个小时的钢琴。我们生活得多幸福呀。

The Color I Love Best

我最喜欢的颜色

Of all the colors, I love blue best.Blue is the color of sky and sea.When the sky is blue, we will feel happy to

have a nice day.Blue is also related to the sea.When we come to the seaside, the deep blue color will attract us much.I like swimming in the sea very much. It makes me feel free and happy.Blue can make us feel easy, cool us down when we are too anxious.Its a color of ration and calm.

所有的颜色中，我最喜欢蓝色。蓝色是天空和大海的颜色。碧蓝的天空可以给我们带来晴朗的一天。蓝色还与海洋有关。当我们来到海边，那湛蓝的海洋会让我们流连忘返。我喜欢在海水中游泳的感觉，自由而快乐。蓝色可以使我们感觉轻松，当我们焦急的时候，它还可以平静我们的心灵。蓝色代表着理性和沉着。

My Family

我的一家

In my life, I am proud of having a happy family.I have a kind father, strict mother and a naught little brother.As most other families, there are laughs and tears at my home. My father is friendly to others.Our neighbors speak highly of him.Mother is strict to me and my little brother. She has high expectation to us, wanting us to have bright future.My little brother is a primary school student, but he doesn’t work very hard. All he wants is playing with his friends. It worries my parents a lot.But in general, we have more laughs than tears.I love my lovely family.

在我的生命中，我最自豪的就是有一个快乐的家。我有一个和蔼的父亲，严厉的母亲和一个淘气的弟弟。像其他大多数家庭一样，我家也充满着喜怒哀乐。我的爸爸对别人很有好，邻居们对他的评价很高。妈妈对我和弟弟很严厉，希望我们能有一个光明的未来。我的弟弟是一名小学生，但他却不怎么努力学习，他所想的就是和朋友们一起玩，这让我的父母很操心。总的来说，我的家里是欢笑多于泪水。我爱我可爱的家。

THE NATIONAL FLAG

国旗

It is the duty of every citizen to honor the national flag.Why?Because the national flag is the symbol of a (the) country.To respect it means to respect the country.In other words, if a man loves his country, he must love the national flag.

In school, the national flag is usually raised at a certain time every day.Then the principal, teachers, staff and students are to (must) stand before it and sing the national anthem.It is indeed extremely meaningful to attend such a ceremony.

尊敬国旗是每个公民的责任（义务）。为什么？因为国旗是国家的象征。尊敬它意思就是尊敬国家。换句话说，如果一个人爱国，他必须爱国旗。

在学校里，通常每天定时要升旗。那时，校长，老师，教职员学生教师将恭敬地站在它前面并且唱国歌。参加此项仪式确实非常有意义。

Make Dumplings

包饺子

dumpling is a traditional chinese food.On the lunar new year s day, most families make a lot of delicious dumplings.To make them, follow this easy process.

The first step is to mix the flour with water.when the dough is ready, we can begin to make dumpling wrappers.we use a rolling pole to roll the dough into small, thin and round pieces so that they will be easy to cook.when the wrappers are done, it s time to prepare the filling.Usually, we use meat such as beef or mutton, and some vegetables such as cabbage or carrots for filling.You may actually choose whatever you like to put into it.we must chop those things into small pieces.Then put some salt, oil and other condiments into it and stir it evenly.When all these preparations are done, we can start making dumplings.First put a spoonful of filling in the center of the wrapper.Then stick the two opposite sides together and then the rest.Don t just cover the filling with the wrappers.The best shape of dumplings is that of a ship, because when they are boiling in the pan, they look like ships sailing in the sea.The smell can make your mouth water.

饺子是中国的传统食物。在农历新年，大多数家庭都会包很多美味的饺子。要包成饺子，遵循以下那容易的步骤。

第一步就是把面粉和水和在一起。和好面之后，我们可以开始擀皮。我们使用一个滚动杆，把它揉成又薄又小的圆形面皮，这样会比较容易煮。皮弄完后，就是弄馅的时候了。通常我们用肉(比如牛肉和羊肉)还有蔬菜(比如白菜和胡萝卜)作馅。 你可能选择任何你喜欢的馅包进去。我们必须把这些东西剁小。然后放上盐，油和其他调料搅拌它均匀。当所有这些准备工作都完成了,我们就可以开始包饺子了。首先放一勺馅在皮的中心。然后把两个相反的两边粘在一起，然后就是其他的了。不只是只是把馅包在皮里面。饺子最好看的形状是像一艘船，因为当它们在锅里煮时，他们看起来就像是大海里的船只。它们的香味会让你流口水。

Why Are Bicycles So Commonly Used in China

为什么中国大量使用自行车

Bicycle is a convenient means of transportation. It has been very popular in China.During the rush hours, particularly in big cities, you can often see a sea of bicycle riders in the streets.People can ride bicycles to their working places, to schools, to shopping centres and so on.In a word, bicycles play an important role in daily life.

托尔斯泰说：“理想是指路明灯，没有理想，就没有坚定的方向，没有方向就没有生活。”理想是力量的泉源、智慧的摇篮、冲锋的战旗、斩棘的利剑。我们每一个人都有自己的追求，都拥有自己的理想。

科学家为真的理想而活，慈善家为善的理想而活，艺术家为美的理想而活。他们在理想中得到力量，在追梦的旅程中实现生命的价值。我们每天也在为自己的理想去努力奋斗，去拼搏。

近年来很流行一句话：“理想很丰满，现实很骨感。”这句话主要形容我们都有远大的理想，可是现实往往让人折了腰。很多时候我们都意识到，在现实面前，我们的理想总是显得有些渺小，现实太残酷了，理想只能够是寄托了我们对生活的美好憧憬，总是遥不可及的。其实，理想它只是一个目标，一种动力，一个方向。它是激励我们前进的动力，而我们就是为了实现自己心中远大的理想，努力的朝着它奋斗。

说起瞎子阿炳，我相信大家会立刻想起他的的作品《二泉映月》。他出生在江苏无锡。对民间音乐有着强烈的兴趣，从小就开始学习击鼓，吹笛，拉二胡，弹琵琶。十五六岁时，已成为当地一名出色的乐师。但是在他三十四岁的时候，疾病使他双目失明了。生活的逼迫使他走上了乞讨为生的道路。贫病交加的他，流落在街头，生活极为艰苦。在命运一次又一次将他推入苦难的深渊之际，他始终没有放弃自己耳朵里的世界，耳朵里的信仰。现实如此残酷，命运这样虐待他，可是他从来没有想过放弃，一直坚定自己的理想。无论身在何处，他都在演奏，演奏。阿炳把自己的生命锤炼成了东方的树阴下或广袤的荒漠中的一潭深水。

在人生的道路上，无论遭遇什么困难，我们都不能抛弃理想，向现实屈服。我们可以立足现实，调整理想，却不能放弃对美好未来的憧憬，对人生理想的追求。只有把持着你的理想。立足现实，用现实的方式去实现理想，你的人生终会看到成功的曙光，走向成功的道路!

Spring Festival, a day Im looking forward to for a long time, should be

full of happiness, bustle and laughter. But this years novel coronavirus is so

rampant that I can only stay at home and wear masks when I go out, and my

parents remind me to keep warm and pay attention to personal hygiene every day.

The novel coronavirus seemed to have no intention of retreat, but doctors

struggled for many days and nights. In these days, I dont know how many people

have been killed by the virus, and how many doctors are still fighting against

the virus in order to fight the epidemic.

Sports benefit me in many ways. Firstly, sports call can make me fit and strong physically. When taking part in sports, I get the chance to train almost all parts of our bodies. In addition, sports call can maintain my psychological well being, Whenever Im in low spirit,aking part in sports can help me forget my anxieties and worries. Besides, sports can teach me some lessons about life. Through participation, I can learn that on the playground I not only struggle for my own self but also fight for my team. Sports teach me to be considerate, cooperative and optimistic.

I am fond of sports very much. I feel that I not only gain a well balanced life through going in for sports, but also get more chances to make more friends, to move closer to nature. Sports add happiness to my everyday life when I participate in them in a proper way.

My favourite sport is football, as it is very exciting. I play footetball three times a week. Most often I play it in my school. I feel very happy when I play football in school with my friends. Sometimes I play football in the playground near my school.Football is very easy to play. If you play football very well, you can form a football team to take part in the competition. You may become a famous football star.

Therefore, football is a very good sport. I think, you can play football, cant you?

I am Mary .My father is a teacher,and my mother is a teacher ,too. They think teacher is a good job. But they hope I can be a great scientist. I want to be a scientist. Because I can make our country strong. I am interested in science. I know it not easy to be a scientist. I often do morning exercise. I am doing my best to make my dream com ture.

最近，你班就“你的理想职业”展开了一次调查。请根据你们小组的情况写一篇英语短文，向英语校刊投稿。

组员 理想职业 原因

mary 时装设计师(fashion designer) 喜欢漂亮衣服，擅长绘画

kate 园艺工(gardener) 喜爱植物，想让城市更美

mike 作家 愿意与别人分享精彩故事

tom 厨师 为别人煮健康美味的食物

你 ? ?

注意：1.词数80左右(短文的开头和结尾已给出，不计入词数);

2.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。

recently we did a survey in our class in order to learn about students’ ideal jobs. here’s a report about my group members’ ideas.

……

hopefully everyone can realize their dreams in the future.

★ 范文

recently we did a survey in our class in order to learn about students’ ideal jobs. here’s a report about my group members’ ideas.

mary wants to be a fashion designer because she likes beautiful clothes and is good at drawing. kate wants to be a gardener, she lives plants, and she wants to make the cities better. mike would like to be a writer. he’d like to share his wonderful stories with others. tom would like to be a cook. he’d like to cook delicious food for others. i would like to be a policeman. i want to protect the people safe.

hopefully everyone can realize their dreams in the future.

Different people have different career outlooks. Some people want to become

civil servants; some people hope to start their own business; some people dream

of being freelancers, and so on.

However, my ideal job is teaching. Firstly, I’m told that teachers have a

high income. With the high income, I can open a training school to help the

children in poor families with their education. Secondly, teachers always have

summer and winter holidays, thus I will have more free time to relax myself.

More importantly, teachers are angels to students, who can pass on the knowledge

to students as well as help them develop their hobbies and interests. I can’t

imagine how happy I will feel when I see my students become elites.

In order to be a qualified teacher, I should read more books to acquire

more knowledge, and train my patience and improve my communication and

handwriting abilities.

有人说人生犹如大海上的一叶小舟，那么毫无疑问理想便是我们前进道路上的灯塔。有了这明亮的灯塔，我们就不会迷航，不会气馁，坚定果敢地向前，最终才会乘风破浪直达成功的彼岸! Some people say that life is like a small boat on the sea, then there is no doubt that ideals are the lighthouse on our road.With this bright lighthouse, we will not be lost, we will not be discouraged, and we will move forward firmly, and finally we will take the wind and waves to achieve the other side!

雄鹰的理想是振翅长空翱翔九天;海燕的理想是搏击风浪穿越茫茫海面;蛟龙的理想是行云布雨畅游深潭;当代青年的理想是与时俱进屹立风口浪尖。

回首往昔，多少凄风苦雨，多少艰难险阻，但却涌现出了一批又一批优秀的中华儿女。她们枪林弹雨冲锋陷阵;她们危难关头杀身成仁;她们热血沸腾力挽狂澜。他们为理想奋斗过，因而留下了一座又一座不朽的丰碑。他们的理想便是建立新中国。她们崇高的理想引领着他们走上光辉大道。千秋万代人们去敬仰他们的丰功伟绩;沧海桑田人们去感叹他们的崇高理想……

踏着时光的脊背走了一年又一年，早已走过那阴冷的冬，走进了百花盛开的春天。迎改革、继开放、不停留、四化奋斗一派欣欣向荣。时代给了我们机遇，社会给了我们挑战。不必回首，不必空叹，新一代有理想的青年只需阔步向前。谁有这样的机遇，谁有这样的信念?我们最终会站在时代浪尖。

既然有着崇高的理想，不灭的信念，我们只需勇敢的走下去，不屑的去奋斗，不要在意身后是否会袭来寒风冷雨，脚下是否会有坎坷崎岖。选择了前方，留给地平线的只能是背影。或许我们会遇到挫折，但不要气馁，因为我们明白：不经历风雨，怎能见彩虹!挫折不会让我们裹足不前，相反它只会给我们添一份曾经沧海的成熟。

只要我们心存远大理想，我们就能找准前进的方向，不要管外面的风风雨雨，它怎能淋湿我们心头青春的火焰!

我们有理想，我们有毅力，我们有正确的前进方向，梦回唐朝需要我们去实现!相信我们成功那一天，展现在我们面前的将是一个吐气扬眉的中华民族!

理想是暮色天空中闪烁的星星，是黑夜里指路的灯塔。理想不像空想、幻想、梦想如空中楼阁，海市蜃楼那样的虚无飘渺，它似春日里姹紫嫣红的花朵，是天空中洁白的云朵，那样的美好。一个有崇高理想的人他的生活态度是激昂的，向上的。有目标有进取心他的生活的充满阳光和希望的。

一个没有崇高理想的人，就好像是在没有星辰的黑夜里行走，他的生活中没有促使他奋斗的目标，这样他的一生将永远碌碌无为，在空虚、无聊中度过。

一个人要想有所作为，就必须先确立自己的人生奋斗目标，并为之去努力，去奋斗。只有这样你才能有幸品尝到成功的喜悦。

不同的年龄阶段，人的奋斗方向和所追求的东西也是不同的，童年我们的理想是将来要做科学家、工程师、画家、企业家等等。每个人的心目中都有自己崇拜的对象，对未来充满罗曼蒂克的梦想。但随着年龄的增长，知识的增加，阅历的增多，我们的理想与追求也越来越符合现实，符合我们自己的实际能力。

每个人都应该相信自己是一个开发不尽的小金矿，对于自己的未来和前程充满憧憬和希望。每天都要保持积极乐观的心态，树立好自己的人生目标，并为之去努力，去拼搏。限度的去开发自己的潜能。这样你的人生之路一定会熠熠发光的，成功也会与你一路同行。

青年朋友们我们要做一个有理想的人，并为自己的目标去奋斗，以更加自信，意气风发的姿态每一个充满希望的明天。能梦的时候不要放弃梦，能飞的时候不要放弃飞。为了自己的理想努力拼搏奋斗吧!

We all like to make friends, because no one can survive without a friend.

If you ask someone how many friends do they have, most will answer a lot.

Indeed, we make friends in different stage, even we are old, we still make

friends. But not all friends are as honest as they are, some friends we made

since we are young, some are just meet a couple of times and we don’t know much

about them. The former are real friends, while the latter are not true friends.

What is the real friend, a real friend is someone who you can talk about

anything and can be show up the moment you need. Other friends are just for

drinking and eating, they will not help you if you are in trouble. When we make

friends, the real one is what we need.

导语：虽然离别的钟声即将敲响，校园的生活不再漫长，但请展开笑容收起悲伤，因为真挚的情谊不会远航，下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理了优秀英语作文，欢迎阅读与借鉴，谢谢!

Learn to give up wisely Never give up has been accepted by many people as a positive life attitude. Admittly persistence often plays an important role in one success. However,in many cases to give up might be wiser than to persist blindly. The following reasons can support this argument. Firstly,sometimes our goal may be unrealistic. If we insist on it blindly, it will finally bring us nothing but failure. At this time,what we should do is give up the orignal goal and reset a more pratical one. Secondly,not all persistence can bring deserving results. For a very simple example if we keep waiting in line for hours, only to have a luncheon restaurant may be it is unwise .

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学会明智地放弃不放弃已经被许多人接受为积极的生活态度。承认坚持经常在一个成功中扮演重要的角色。然而,在许多情况下放弃可能比一味坚持更明智。以下原因可以支持这一论点。首先,有时我们的目标可能是不现实的。如果我们盲目地坚持,它最终会给我们带来失败。此时,我们应该做的是放弃及目标,重新设置一个更实用的目标。第二,不是所有的坚持都能带来值得的结果。对于一个非常简单的例子,如果我们一直排队等几个小时,只有一家午餐餐厅可能是不明智的。

Everyone has his ideals. A businessman wishes to make greater profit; a farmer expects plumper harvests; a student tries to learn more and better.

However, one should be sensible about whether his ideal is well founded or not. If it is, one has to plan and work hard for its realization. Effort, skill and persistence are all necessary. And very often, one has to get help from others, including advice and support in one form or another.

My ideal is to become a doctor. It is said that the field of medicine is a well-paid profession, but I take it as a lofty profession entrusted with saving peoples lives. To realize my ideal I have concentrated on laboratory work to develop the analytical skills necessary to become a qualified doctor. Im sure Ill realize my ideal if I keep on striving for it.

导语：英语写作能力作为体现语言交际能力至关重要的一个方面,写作测试是对学生书面交际水平及能力进行检验最有效的途径。以下是yjbs作文网小编为您收集整理的写作技巧，希望对您有所帮助。

要想获得高分就应在“正确”表达的基础上写出自己的特色，写出自己的“亮”点。

一、词汇选择——标新立异

在写作中“较高级词汇”的使用主要是指使用《大纲》上没有的词语、使用通过构词法变化来的新词、使用同(近)义词或反义词等来代替常见词语。

1)这栋房子在芳草街的一栋楼上。

A: The flat is in a building on Fangcao Street.

B: The flat situates in a building on Fangcao Street.

分析:is in是常见词语，而situates in则是《大纲》上没有的，属于高级词汇。

2)在周末我们做很多作业。

A: At weekends, we have a lot of homework to do.

B: At weekends, we have endless homework to do.

分析:B句在表达时没有使用过于直接的a lot of，而是使用了endless。endless就是由《大纲》词汇end加后缀-less变化来的。

3)洗澡间和厨房都很好。

A: The bathroom and the kitchen are good.

B. The bathroom and the kitchen are well-furnished.

在表达要点时，B句使用了well furnished,这比good语气强，也显得生动。

在造句时,“较高级词汇”如能运用贴切自然，哪怕整篇文章只用上一个，也会使你的作文显示出与众不同。

二、结构造句——与众不同

在造句时,既要使句子生动，又要使其简明扼要。

1、使用与人不同的表达方式，特别是提倡打破汉语句子结构的束缚而重组的句子更受欢迎。

1)唐山曾在二十世纪八十年代发生过一次大地震。

A: There was a strong earthquake in Tangshan in the 1980s.

B: A terrible earthquake hit/struck Tangshan in the 1980s.

大多数同学使用了there be结构，这是对的，但是B句却摒弃了常见句式。另辟蹊径而使用了“主语+谓语+宾语”结构，且使用了terrible,hit/strike这样的词汇，更是难能可贵的。

2)你八月十五日的来信我今天早晨收到了。

A:I received your letter which was written on August 15th this morning.(多数人使用的方式)

B: Your letter of August 15th reached/ got to me this morning.(与多数人使用的方式不同,简洁)

2.使用一些强势句式，如强调句、感叹句、倒装句等，增强语句的表现力。如：

3)阿福救了我妹妹。

A: Ah Fu saved my sister.(一般句式)

B: It was Ah Fu that saved my sister.(强调句式)

4)我们看到庄稼和蔬菜长势喜人很是高兴。

A: We were glad to see crops and vegetables growing well.(一般陈述句)

B: How glad we were to see crops and vegetables growing well.(感叹句)

3、句式多样,复杂得体。在写作中应避免使用相同长度的相同句型，而应注意句式的变化，如长短句结合，简单句、并列句与复合句共用，还可使用简化句等;一些较复杂的结构如独立主格，分词结构等也可使用。下面的表达中A句简单句多，而且多处使用there be结构，显得单调、乏味，而B句就有自己的特色(请同学们自己分析)。

5)这是一套25平方米的住房，住房里面有卧室、有洗澡间、有厨房;卧室里有床、沙发、桌子和椅子等。

A: Its a flat of 25 square metres. There is a bedroom in the flat. There is a bathroom and a kitchen in it, too. In the bedroom, there is a bed; there is a sofa, a desk and a chair as well.

B: Its a flat of 25 square metres, with a bedroom, a bathroom and a kitchen. In the bedroom there is a bed, a sofa, a desk and a chair.

三、布局谋篇——独具匠心

在写作中，我们可按时间、空间或其它逻辑顺序来安排各要点，同时为使主题突出,结构严谨，我们应注意学习和使用交代句以及段落的主题句等。在布局谋篇上，NMET2002范文堪称典范。请看：

Opinions are divided on the question.

60% of the students are against the idea of entrance fees. They believe a public park should be free of charge. People need a place where they can rest and enjoy themselves. Charging entrance fees will no doubt keep some people away. What is more, it will become necessary to build gates and walls, which will do harm to the appearance of a city.

On the other hand, 40% think that fees should be charged because you need money to pay gardens and other workers, and to buy plants and young trees. They suggested, however, fees should be charged low.

1)该文使用Opinions are divided...作交代句，开门见山，随后两个段落均使用了主题句(见黑体字部分)，使全文结构紧凑，表达严谨。

2)在表述要点时范文还对要点出场顺序作了调整，如“40%的同学认为应收门票，但不宜过高。”前部分作为主题句放在句首，而后部分另起一句放在句末：They suggested, however, fees should be charged low.这样就分清了轻重缓急，主题突出，条理清楚。

3)范文使用了and, what is more, however等连词，在段落之间使用了on the other hand(说明前后两个观点是相悖的)，这些连接手段的运用加强了句子之间、段落之间的联系，使文章表达连贯，浑然一体。

4)范文在第二段为说明不收门票的“原因”时增加了Charging entrance fees will no doubt keep some people away.等细节，这也是解决句与句之间缺少连贯性的常见方法。

写作技巧：

一、要善于模仿

对大多数学习英语的同学来说，英语的词汇量、句式的积累还极其有限，远不能达到用英文流畅表达，挥洒自如的境地。在这一阶段进行创作是不合时宜的，如果非要创造，只能写出“long time no see”这样的文字来。因此，模仿是这一阶段的必经途径。

谈到模仿，一些同学的办法就是背一堆范文，然后再到考场上进行一个“剪切”、“粘贴”的工作，效果可想而知。这不是真正意义上的模仿，充其量算是默写课文。如何模仿呢?

首先，模仿的目标要明确。模仿的重点永远要放在一定的句式结构上，而非个别的词汇。道理很简单：一个词，随着文章内容的变换，可能就不能用了;而句式结构是放置四海而皆准的东西，适用的范围广，学来对写作的帮助也就明显。

其次，模仿的材料要地道。像新概念英语这样的教材就提供了很多原汁原味的英语表达法。盲目选择文章学习，记一些不中不洋的句子，以讹传讹，浪费时间。

最后，模仿要体现在实际动笔上。比如说，新概念第三册有一个句式说：“…for the simple reason that…”表示某种现象的原因是什么，用在大学英语考试中，我们就可以拿来解释为什么自行车在中国如此的流行，表达为：“the bicycle is very popular in china for the simple reason that…”。然而，很多同学经常背了这些句式不用，一谈到原因仍然是“…because…”，等等。

二、要灵活变通

在批改英语作文的过程中，经常能发现一些将中文生硬地翻译成英文的表达法。由于中英文之间的差异和词汇量、表达法积累的不足，出现难于表达的情况是十分正常的。关键问题在于如何处理。有一句话叫做“立志如山，行道如水”，套用在这个问题上就很合适。写英文作文，一定要有决心把它写好，有信心把意思表达清楚，这是“立志如山”;但关键是遇到问题时要有个灵活的态度，能像流水一样变通解决问题。

有个翻译界的故事说：在某大型国际会议的招待会上，一道菜是用鸡蛋做的。与会的客人问翻译：“what is it made of?”本来是非常简单的一个问题，结果翻译太紧张，忘了“egg”这个词，但是他急中生智，回答：“it is made of miss hen’s son.”这里，就是一个灵活变通的范例。绕道表达，是写作中应该常常运用的一种方法。

三、要细心观察

要写好英语作文，还要带着敏锐的目光细心地观察，注意英语中一些表达上的习惯。

比如说，在正式文体的写作中，很少用 “it isn"t”这样的略缩形式，而往往是一板一眼地写作 “it is not”。同理，在正式文体中的日期一般不缩写，阿拉伯数字一般会用英文表达(特别长的数字除外)。

再比如说，翻翻新概念第三册所有的课文，会发现凡是一段文章的段首句出现转折时，转折词however都放在句子结构中的第二部分，以插入语的形式出现。分析原因，是因为段落一开始就用转折词，会时转折显得较生硬、突兀。

最后，许多同学在写作文时，习惯于把 “since” “because” “for”这样的词放在句首引导原因状语从句。事实上，在我们见到的英语报刊杂志文章中，这样的从句一般都是放在主句之后的。另外, “and”也常常被误放在一句话的开头，表示两个句子之间的并列或递进关系。其实，经常留心地道的英语文章能发现，如果是并列关系，完全可以不用连词;如果是递进关系，用 “furthermore” “what is more”更为普遍。

Today is Qingming Festival. Its a traditional Chinese Tomb Sweeping Festival. Dad drives grandma, mom, my brother and I to Xianyou home together. My hometown is on a big mountain near Xianyou County town. After 1 hours of winding roads, we finally arrived at the destination -- my familiar hometown in dreams.

As soon as we got off the train, we could smell a fresh country smell, surrounded by green hills, and the whole countryside was so peaceful. We walked a few minutes to see an old house covered with mud, a place where Grandpa, grandma and Dad had lived before, and only Granny and grandfather lived there. As soon as I entered the door, I saw grandpa and grandma. They were elderly people. They smiled when they saw our arrival. After greeting grandpa and grandma, we are going to sweep grandpas grave. We climbed the hillside behind the house. Sunny, bright spring days, both sides began to busy road. The small green grass shows the small head, the busy ant in the spring transportation, the spring bamboo shoots also sneak out the small head, the mountain path is really interesting, while the chicken, the duck and us play, and the little sheep and the puppy race us in a moment. The distant green wheat fields and golden rape flowers add a bright color to the hometown of spring. After a while, we came to Grandpas tomb. My father took three bow to Grandpas gravestone with my mother and me. How I wish Grandpa would live beside us and enjoy this wonderful life with us.

一个人有了理想就好像是找到了人生努力的方向，就像迷途的扁舟发现了灯塔一样，便会为之而努力奋斗。

我的理想是长大以后当一名书法家，当一名硬笔和毛笔的书法家，为什么我要当一名书法家呢?因为我写的字是在我的班里名列前茅的，当然我想当书法家可不止这个原因。

记得那一次，我们学校举行硬笔书法大赛，一到六年级写字好的同学都被选去参赛了，当然我也被选去参赛了，比赛地点在新电教室里，我去了那里后，看见了许多写字好的同学，比赛的项目是硬笔书法纸，老师给每一个人两张硬笔书法纸，然后再两天的时间内写好一张，哈哈!这简直对我来说是小菜一碟，不说两天，半天我就能写好一张。于是到了下午放学，我赶快回家，赶快做完作业，然后再写作品纸。到了第三天我把作品纸交给老师，之后再过几天，比赛结果就出来了，我获得了一等奖，我非常开心，心想：没想到我在写字这方面还挺有天赋的，不如我长大以后当一名书法家吧!

于是我就开始了实现理想的旅程。我每天都在学校里努力学习，下午放学回家先做完作业，然后再练字。就这样一日复一日，一年复一年，每当我练字的时候爸爸总是对我说：“要想当一名书法家，就要把书法学好，每天都要努力学习，努力练字，当然学好书法可不止这点，还要有耐心，不能半途而废，这样才能学好书法。”爸爸说的这句话，我每天都铭记在心，每天都在练好书法……

但万事总是开头难，在实现理想的过程中，不会一帆风顺的，总会遇到这样那样的困难，我们要坚定信心，勇往直前，始终朝着自己的方向努力，才能达到自己的目标，掌握各科文化知识，理想才可能实现。

Do you know what dish is the most popular in the cold winter in China? I know it s hot pot. Hot pot is a Chinese tasteful folk dish. No matter in the north or in the south, people like hot pot very much and every region has its local features. For example, Sihuan hot pot is hot while Guangdong hot pot is famous for its fresh. Usually, there is a metal hot pot in the middle of table. When the soup in the pot is kept simmering, dishes are put into the pot. Beef, mutton, fish and vegetables are the main dishes. It is extremely popular in winter because it can keep the dishes warm all the time. And the atmosphere is hot, too. Friends or relatives sit down together to have a feast. It s a good way to relax.

在我国，你知道冬天什么食物最受欢迎吗?我知道是火锅。火锅是我国的民间美食，不管是北方还是南方，人们都爱吃火锅，而每个地方的火锅也有自身的地域特点。比如，四川火锅是辣的而广东的火锅则以味道鲜美著称。通常来说，吃火锅时，会在桌子的中间放一个金属锅，当锅里的汤料沸腾时，就可以把菜放到火锅里了。牛肉、羊肉、鱼和蔬菜都是火锅的主要食材。火锅在冬天大受欢迎是因为它能一直保持热度，并且吃火锅的气氛很热烈，亲人朋友团座一桌，享受大餐，这是一种很放松的就餐方式。

[初三英语作文-Hot Pot

我的理想有许许多多，比天上的星星还多几百倍。可是，我最想完成的一个愿望就是：当一个全球最伟大的发明大王! My ideal has many more, hundreds of times more than the stars in the sky.However, one of the wishes I want to complete is: being the greatest king of invention in the world!

我想当发明大王的原因是因为发明了新事物，既可以威风八面，还可以造福人类，受众人尊敬与爱戴。

在电灯发明以前，每到伸手不见五指的夜晚，人们只有点燃火把，灯笼，油灯……漆黑的夜里才有了几分光明，不仅十分不方便，而且还很容易发生火灾。爱迪生发明的电灯不用担心会被风吹灭，会被雨浇熄，会被老鼠碰翻。到了夜晚，只要轻轻一按开关，就满室光明，连路上也有为夜行人照明的路灯，多么方便呀。后来，电灯经过人们的改进，它的用途就更广泛了：医院用的无影灯，使医生在做手术时更精确，给病人减少了危险;街上闪烁的霓虹灯为我们的生活增添了五彩缤纷的色彩;路口的红灯，绿灯，黄灯，指挥着交通……

我要成为发明大王的话，一定要从小开始认真学习，天天向上。我要利用所学的知识发明许多的东西。

首先，我要发明垃圾转换器：它把垃圾吞进肚子里后，能在短时间内把垃圾变废为宝，再排泄出来。变出来的化肥可以让植物生长得更快更美，我们将生活在绿草如茵，树木繁茂，鸟语花香的地方;变出来的玩具可以送给孤儿院的小朋友们玩，让他们不会感到孤单;变出来的图画可以装扮教室，同学们更加快乐的学习……

其次，我要发明警察机器人，它不怕刀砍枪击及炸弹轰炸，可以代替警察叔叔近距离的与坏人交锋，将犯罪份子捉拿归案，使人们远离危险。

我还要发明变色礼服，它可以随意变色;发明空间转换仪，它可以根据我们的要求转换房子的样子……

大人们都说我聪明，爱动脑筋，不过呢，没有耐心，而且很粗心，又不虚心。为了成为发明大王，我一定要改正缺点，我相信经过我的努力，我的理想一定会实现的，请大家拭目以待吧。

i will be graduating from middle school in the coming days. i have a lot of feelings that i want to express. first, i want to thank all the teachers. you have been working hard to teach us. i would also like to thank my classmates. you have been offering great help to me.

i am so happy today. this will be an end to my middle school life, and soon we will begin the new life in high school. dear teachers, dear classmates, i will always remember you.

i would like to thank you for all the help you gave me during this past semester. you were alway so patient when i asked you questions. you listened to them carefully and explained everything so thoroughly. you showed me different ways to practice and remember new words and usage. i felt so encouraged and became more comfortable in speaking english. you made the excercise so interesting that i was always very eager to participate and practice. my english has improved so much. how could i thank you enough?! i cannot wait to take your class next semester and keep working on my english.

Every studentis excited about the freshmen year, they are looking forward to seeing theirclassmates and will open the new chapter of their lives. While when the senioryear comes, it means saying goodbye to their classmates and is it time to leaveschool. Freshmen year brings happiness and senior year brings sorrow, students don’twant to say goodbye to their classmates, after the long time’s acquaintance,classmates have built strong friendship, it is hard to say goodbye. In China,there is an old saying that all good things must come to an end, for everystudent, they will leave school and fight for each other’s future. Thoughsenior year is a little sad, it is another turning point for the students, theysome will find a job, some will study abroad, all of them are fighting for theirfuture. Senior year in not the end, it is the beginning.

每个学生都会对入学季感到兴奋，他们期待看到新同学，即将展开新的生活篇章。然而当毕业季到来的时候，这意味着和同学说再见，是时候离开学校了。入学季带来了快乐，而毕业季带来了悲伤。学生不想要和同学说再见，经过长时间的认识，学生间已经建立了深厚的友谊，很难说再见。在中国，有一句方言“天下无不散之筵席”，对于每个学生来说，他们将要离开学校，为彼此的未来奋斗。虽然毕业季有点悲伤，但是确实另一个转折点，有些同学找工作，有些同学出国深造，他们都要为将来奋斗。毕业季不是终点，而是开始。

This afternoon, we play a game called Family Tree. This game is very interesting. Im very interested in it. Our teachers family is very large. She has many brothers and sisters.

But I am unlucky, I has only a sister and I without brothers. But I think I have the best parents in the world. They are very friendly to me. I live in a good family. My grand parents loves me, too. When they buy meat, they will give the best parts of the meat to me.

When I was a child, I cant undertand them. I want to have bread. My grand father took a bike to Qu Tang. Because in our village there is no bread house. Qu Tang is far from our village. Now I grow up. I understand them when I think of this things. I will cry I cant use words to say I love them.

I love my family!

班主任评语：Excellent! Whenever you write with your heart and soul and pour your emotions, it will be the most beautiful work in the world!

spring comes with all its glories. the new grass exposes green color .the pretty flowers open their blossoms. we are tempted to go for an outing.

last tuesday, the weather was fine. we went to the chimelong paradise. it took us about half an hour to get there by bus. what a beautiful city it is! there stand countless tall buildings. half an hour later, we entered the gate of chimelong paradise. we jumped with joy. we rode many rides there. we were very excited and tired, and quite out of breath. as long as you have courage, you can conquer any ride, no matter how dangerous it is. it was about half past four and we had rode all of the rides. we had to take a bus to go back to our school.

what a nice day we had!

[以A Spring Outing为题目的初三英语作文

The girl is not my hobbies, even rarely play games online. However, Im weibo, there have been a fan for nearly two hundred people, but a lot of people envy.

On Saturday night, as usual, I open the weibo, find incredibly direct messages was written to me! May be I take "I to help you" the net, people often ask me for help, but I was the first received the letter! I am open on see, what is this:

"I was in primary school grade three, three years has always been the same deskmate, recently he always affect me, because I should to do?"

See this letter, I cant help himself a slight quiver, so ah! Deskmate always affect me, even though my grades didnt drop, but listening to lectures efficiency obviously is not good enough.

I with a sincere heart, with their own feelings, reply to her:

"First of all thank you for your trust me, so I can see from your letter you must be a clever child, your deskmate may learn bad, and naughty, but would you please more inclusive. Also, do you know why the teacher always let him be your deskmate? Thats because the teacher trust you, we cant live up to the expectations of the teacher, are you? You can help your neighbor, let he also experience the fun of learning, let him fall in love with learning, you said right?"

Looked at her and sending a smiling face, I seem to have also been infected, involuntarily smiled. Yes, ready to help others, this is the real "weibos got talent"!

I looked out the window, thinking: that star tonight, must be sunny tomorrow.

我这个女孩没什么爱好，即使上网也很少玩游戏。不过，我可是微博达人，现在已经有粉丝将近两百人了，可是有不少人羡慕呢。

星期六晚上，我照例打开微博，发现居然有人给我写私信!也许是我取“我来帮助你”的网名的缘故，经常有人找我帮忙，但我还是第一次收到信!我打开一看，大致内容是这样的：

“我上小学三年级了，三年以来一直都是同一个同桌，最近他老是影响我，我因该怎么办呢?”

看到这封信，我不禁微微一颤——自己也是这样的呀!同桌总是影响我，虽然我的学习成绩没有下降，但听课效率明显不够好。

我怀着一颗真挚的心，带着自己的感情，回复给了她：

“首先感谢你如此信任我，从你的信中我可以看出你一定是个乖巧的孩子，你的同桌可能学习不好，而且调皮，但请你多多包容。还有，你知道老师为什么一直让他做你的同桌吗?那是因为老师信任你，我们不能辜负老师的期望，是吗?你可以多帮助同桌，让他也体会到学习的乐趣，让他爱上学习，你说对吗?”

看着她发过来的笑脸，我仿佛也被传染了，不由自主地笑了。是啊，乐于助人，这才是真正的“微博达人”!

我望着窗外，心想：今夜星光灿烂，想必明天阳光明媚。