写一篇我的父亲的作文英语精选20篇

Hi. Everyone! My name is Peng Jiadong. I m 15 years old. Today I tell you about my father.

My father is a good man. He washes dishes every day and cleans the house every week. He wakes up early, then he has breakfast. After breakfast, he goes to work. He works for 10 hours. It s time for him to go home at 6 p.m. After supper, he sits on the sofa and reads newspapers. He likes playing basketball and playing with me. But he doesn t run fast, because he seldom does any exercise.

He wears a pair of glasses. He works hard; he usually goes to the library to buy some books. He loves reading books very much. He always says, A man is never too old to learn! So he knows lots of things. I can ask him to teach me Chinese, Maths and other subjects. But he doesn t know English and can t speak English. So he always asks me for help when he meets English-speaking people.

Mother and I both like him very much!

My father is a handsome man . He has short black hair and big eyes.hes very smart.My dad is very fun.He likes playing basketball.My father also likes listening to music and watching TV. he works very hard.My father thinks healthy food is good for our health. So we eat apples every day. We dont eat French fries. We often eat vegetables,fruits and fish.he loves me.

Fathers Day

Yesterday was Fathers Day. I had planned to give my father a present. But I didnt remember it until in the morning.It was too late to post a card to him. So I decided to buy something. When I was in the department store. I found it was not easy for me to choose something right for him. Suddenly I

got an idea. I ran home and opened my computer. I made a beautiful card and mailed him through the Internet. then I began to make supper. When father came home, he was very glad to find a big meal on the table. then I asked him to check his e-mail. He was amazed to find a beautiful card in his e-mail-box.

What a wonderful surprise!

Dear Dad,

Long time no see, I do miss you. Well, let me tell you something about my life here.To tell the truth, i live a normal life just as anywhere i can live.(我过着一个在任何地方都普通的生活) My life is revolved on work and work.(我的生活除了学习还是学习)Frankly,i feel tired sometimes(老实说，我有时候觉得很累).But i see, studying is the whole life to students like me.(但是我知道，学习是像我这样的学生的全部) So no matter how difficult, i will do my utmost .所以不管多艰难，我都会尽自己最大的努力。

Best wishes for you .

Before, how much I dont understand, always cut class, make you angry, still fight with people, to do this, you hold a lot of heart for me, although you hit me, scold me, but I still love you. Because I know it is my own fault, you dozen I scold me, just to put my back into the right direction. Whenever someone asked me "what do you like your mom or dad?" I would not hesitate to tell him "I like all parents, but I like my father." Others asked "why do you like my dad? Your father hit you, punish you, you should not hate him, isnt it?" I can honestly tell him "I the fight with person, father will be scold me, sometimes will scold me, but at night he would quietly coated for me several times, I still see him touch my wounds tears, then I will tell myself, I must not let dad sad so sad."

Now I wont fight, dont skip class, I am much better than before. These are all  dads credit. No longer make my father angry, no longer get bothered by dad. Dads mood than they used to be happy, I also feel very happy.

October 8, 2011

Dear Daddy,

Hows your life in America? Does everything go well? Mother and I miss you very much.

Now, I am writing to tell you my entrance examination. I did very well in the exam and got high scores. The most exciting thing is that I was admitted to my dreaming schoolPeking University. Until now, I have been studying in Peking University for a month. The campus is very beautiful and well equipped. There is a great library with abundant books. In spare time, I like going to the library where is quiet so that I can read and learn intently. Teachers are the most valuable wealth of Peking University. They are very knowledgeable but kind to students. Attending their lectures seems an enjoyable thing. I am very satisfied with here. I will study harder to learn more.

Dear daddy, you dont have to worry about me and mother. I have grown up and I can handle well with my own matters. Hope you everything goes well in America. Look forward to hearing from you.

Yours

Mike

亲爱的爸爸，

你在美国的生活怎么样了?一切是否顺利?妈妈和我都很想念你。

现在我写信是想告诉你有关我的高考情况。我考得很好得到了高分。最令人兴奋的事是我被梦想中的北京大学录取了。到现在为止，我已经在北大学习了一个月了。北大校园很美，设备也很先进。图书馆有很多的书。课余时间我喜欢去图书馆，那里很安静，我可以有目的的看书学习。老师是北京大学最宝贵的财富。他们学识渊博，对学生也很和蔼。上他们的课似乎是一种享受。我对这里很满意。我会更努力学习以学到更多知识。

[给父亲的信英语作文

70-year-old father was in town to live after I received one to dusk, he always liked the balcony, looking at the misty sky in a daze.

One day, my father asked me: "Son, this city people, do not have firewood to cook it how there is so much smoke.?" My father always get lost in the city, he said: "Son, village crossed a ridge on the home, home town road too many. "

Came to town, my father always felt weak legs, not as brisk pace in the country field. Dinner, my father always Qieqie look, just kept Grilled rice, rarely bite, not soup.

Middle of the night, I got up to go the bathroom, there is a shadow on the living room couch to see. I turned on the light, and asked: "? Dad, you do Why do not sleep."

"Take a ride with me okay? Son, I always feel that I am a person Chixian Fan." Father deflated lips, eyelids droop, like a child full of grievances.

"Dad, how do you say you are, you kept me for my college life so much pain to eat, enjoy life now that you go to sleep, tomorrow morning, I had a meeting to be open."

Father hurriedly got up and said:. "Well, well, Ill go to bed."

The next morning, my father quietly got up to go out. Later, I was making breakfast for her son. He came back. My father said: "I think people in town all morning workout, I walk out, exercise, exercise." Since then every day.

One weekend a month later, his father suddenly go to the market, buy a black hen, he gasped excitedly said: "This is the authentic chicken countryside, killed after you taste the stew soup . "

That night, a man sipping fragrant soil chicken soup, my wife and I have Zaza Zui that does not taste the same. This time my son asked: "Grandpa, where only chicken that way?" Father startled by startled, said to me: "? You let me go home, give you specialized feeding chicken okay," I patted his fathers shoulder, smiled and said: "Now we keep you very much, want you to go back and raise chickens doing ah."

When watching TV, I quietly asked his father: "? Money wheres your chicken," his father said:. "Im kind of in the countryside pipe down for so many years, how many have little savings."

Since then, every ten days and a half, my father always buy a chicken, a duck stuff like that. Watching us eat tasty look, he grinned at the side. On the table, he is no longer buried dinner. After consultation with my wife said it would follow the father, lest his heart, let him feel Chixian Fan.

One night I came home late, in an unused garage downstairs and saw a shadow in the rock. I walked over and opened the phone screen by light, a look, a father, I saw the garage heap there are a lot of plastic bags, water bottles, waste paper stuff like that.

Father saw me, Dayton was embarrassed, he arrayed his hands, motioning me not to say anything.

Father pulled me into a tree, said:. "I put the garbage to retrieve, to sell the waste station, could always sell some money thing."

My nose acid, said: "Dad, you do this, how long?" Father Hehedixiao said, from the morning to go "exercise" the day began. My father said: "do this, do not hard to grow crops in the country, while in rural Reaper, I do not often go to the wheat fields also pick up some wheat it."

Father whisper begged me not to let daughter know this, should I keep his secret.

I promised my father. Helped his father upstairs, I could not help but suddenly, grabbed a small, emaciated father, tears dripping on his shoulders gradually collapse. It is the city after his father, the first time I come to embrace this old town scavengers.

父亲的爱

The only thing on my husband‘s description would be the word fun written in big red letters along the top. Although he is a selfless caregiver and provider, our children think of him more as a combination of a jungle gym and bozo and clown.

Our parenting styles compliment each other. His style is a nonstop adventure where no one has to worry about washing their hands, eating vegetables, or getting cavities. My style is similar to Mussolini. I‘m too busy worrying to be fun. Besides, every time I try, I am constantly outdone by my husband.I bought my children bubble gum flavored toothpaste and I taught them how to brush their teeth in tiny circles so they wouldn‘t get cavities. They thought it was neat until my husband taught them how to rinse by spitting out water between their two front teeth like a fountain.I took the children on a walk in the woods and, after two hours, I managed to corral a slow ladybug into my son‘s insect cage. I was cool until their father came home, spent two minutes in the backyard, and captured a beetle the size of a Chihuahua.

I try to tell myself I am a good parent even if my husband does things I can‘t do. I can make sure my children are safe, warm, and dry. I‘ll stand in line for five hours so the children can see Santa at the mall or be first in line to see the latest Disney movie. But I can‘t wire the VCR so my

children can watch their favorite video.I can carry my children in my arms when they are tired, tuck them into bed, and kiss them goodnight. But I can‘t flip them upside down so they can walk on the ceiling or prop them on my shoulders so they can see the moths flying inside of the light fixture.I can take them to doctor appointments, scout meetings, or field trips to the aquarium, but I‘ll never go into the wilderness, skewer a

worm on a hook, reel in a fish, and cook it over an open flame on a piece of tin foil.

I‘ll even sit in the first row of every Little League game and cheer until my throat is sore and my tonsils are raw, but I‘ll never teach my son how to hit a home run or slide into first base.

As a mother I can do a lot of things for my children, but no matter how hard I try--I can never be their father.

My father was born in 1962, in He Bei. He began working at the age of 22. He is good at English, Math,

Music and PE, but he doesnt do well in science. He likes sports very much. Volleyball is his favorite. He is an English teacher now. My father is outgoing and humorous that his students all like him very much. He is kind but strict. I love my father.

My father

My father is very busy. Every day he goes to work by subway. He teaches math at school, His math is very good! In the afternoon, he eats lunch at school. After lunch, he reads newspapers. Then he goes home at 5:30. He eats dinner. Then, he takes a bath in the evening. He watches TV at living room. After watching TV, he goes to bed at 10:00.

My father works hard. I like my father very much!

【参考翻译】

我父亲很忙。他每天都坐地铁去上班。他在学校教数学,数学很好!下午,他在学校吃午饭。午饭后,他读报纸。然后他5:30回家。他吃晚饭。然后,他在晚上洗澡。他在客厅看电视。看电视后,他十点上床睡觉。

我父亲努力工作。我非常喜欢我的父亲!

Fathers day, what a memorable day! Since I came into the world, my father took me by the hand, with the great and ordinary father, took me through more than ten years, this period have happiness, happy, has a bitter, tired. I wont forget, when I face the successful father is how to praise me and told me "someone outside the person, behind." Dont forget, when I was in the face of setbacks, father is how to encourage me, and comforted me. More than thousands of day and night, I smile to his delight, my troubles, make him worried, Im in a hurry to make him try so hard, I became his things, he always worried about me.

Dear father,

Father’s Day is coming. I’d like to say something to you.

You always work hard so that I can receive a better education and live a better life. You are strict with me in my study and help me with my homework. When I failed an exam, you encouraged me to be confident and keep trying. When I had trouble in life, you always told me to be brave and smile at life.

You have given me so much, not only in my study but also in my life. Thank you for your deep love. Thank you for all that you have done for me. I love you! I hope you will be healthy and happy forever!

Happy Father’s Day!

Yours,

Li Hua

Ive been happily drifting for a lot of years, Dad, and I didnt see you getting older.

I suppose I saw us and our relationship as aging together, rather like a fine wine. Numbers never seemed important. But the oddest thing happened last week. I was at a stop sign and I watched as you turned the corner in your car. It didnt immediately occur to me that it was you because the man driving looked so elderly and fragile behind the wheel of that huge car. It was rather like a slap in the face delivered from out of nowhere. Perhaps I saw your age for the first time that day. Or maybe I saw my own.

Somewhere along the line, the generation gap evaporated. Age separates us now and little else. We agree on most everything, perhaps because weve learned there isnt much worth disagreeing about. However, I would like to mention that fly fishing isnt all youve cracked it up to be, Dad. You can say what you want about wrist action and stance and blah, blah, blah...

My father’s name is Wang Yaohan. He has an English name, Jack. He is thirty-eight years old.

My father is a worker. He works in a factory. He has two big eyes and two big ears. He has short hair. My father is very thin. He is only fifty kilograms. He likes learning English very much. He learns English everyday. My father likes watching TV. His favorite television channel is CCTV-10, because he can learn a lot English from the program Outlook English at that channel.

English is my father’s good friend. I am my father’s friend, too.

My father has small eyes,Wear a pair of glasses,looking more gently,the daddys hair are not many, he said "the intelligent head does not grow hair"，daddy does the management, but daddy usually ever not talk bureaucratically to others, therefore his personal connection is specially good,is the same as me.daddy speaks always extremely temperately,never say hit the person,curse at people are also few,calculated scolded people not to be big, although sometimes also can be angry for a longtime,but just only about one day,could no surpass in one day-long.

He usually educate me that the person must to be honestly,friendly to other,and working diligently.This is my father, I love him forever.

My Father My father is a teacher. He was born on January 5th, 1968 in Beijing. He works very hard. Three years ago, he worked in a middle school in the countryside. He often went to work by bus. Now he works in No. 4 Middle School. He walks to school every day. In the school, he often plays basketball with his students. He likes his students and they like him very much too. He wants to be a policeman. He thinks it’s kind of dangerous but very exciting. Thieves are afraid of him. I love my father and I’m proud of him.

我的父亲我的父亲是一名教师。他于1968年1月5日出生于北京。他工作很努力。三年前，他在乡下的一所中学工作。他经常乘公共汽车去上班。现在他在4中学工作。他每天步行去上学。在学校里，他经常和他的学生打篮球。他喜欢他的学生，他们也很喜欢他。他想当一名警察。他认为这是一种危险，但非常令人兴奋。小偷都怕他。我爱我的父亲，我为他感到骄傲。

[My father 我的父亲：高二英语作文

My father is very tall, short hair, thin face, black eyebrows, small eyes, but very God, high nose, thick lips. Father is to do the wine business, every day now, but my father loved me, have time to play with me, my father has a lot of advantages, father is my chauffeur, accompanied me to school every day. Dad never beat me, and bought me a lot of good food.

This is my father, "I love my father."

用英语写一件事不简单，欢迎阅读我给父亲打欠条英语作文，从中学会事件类英语作文的写作技巧。

To buy a house, we come up with all their savings, leaving a shortfall of fifty thousand down payment. Wife said: "Where your parents first borrow some of it, and so we have money on them." I was reluctant.

In my mind, my father does not like me, I do not like his father, and even some hate him.

Thirty years, I have rarely seen his father smile. His face was overcast all day, and told me to do this or that. Stubbs ragweed, for cooking ...... let me do anything live, as long as a tired, his father scolded: "! Little bastard, I think you are lazy, fast work."

Thirty years, and Ive never heard him praise me. Have time to participate in the citys math contest, I won the second prize, holding a certificate excitedly ran home. But the father casually glance at, disdain and said: "how not to test a prize home ah?" "But ......" I want to tell him that I was the only school prize. But the father interrupted me: "! Not nothing to be proud of the first prize on" My heart burst of sad, tears in his eyes. Mother came to comfort me: "Do not cry, Mom gave you eat boiled eggs, incentives to reward you." But the father shouted: "?! Not have any prize can not cook worth celebrating," I was so angry bite root Rattle, vowed to test one of the first to give him a look.

Thirty years, he rarely cared about me. High school years, I have been in residence, living only in the home when it runs out. Then I go to college, to report that day, I thought my father would accompany me to go, he said the family is busy, get away. I was unhappy, but did not say anything, carrying out a few simple things far door. In the newborn reported everywhere, see other students escorted by parents to the school newspaper that I envy a long time, and then a man quietly do the admission procedures. At that moment, my heart sour, his father had a trace of resentment.

After graduation, I got a job in the city, a few years later their home. I was relieved - as far away from his father and happy. To my headache is always in my fathers rest day phone call, let me go home to work, I refuse, will provoke meal swearword.

The father to borrow money, I think he would flatly rejected the. However, to live in a new house, I decided to try. I came home and the mother said quietly this thing. Mothers difficult to say: "This matter was and talk to your dad, I Zuobulezhu." No way, I had to bite the bullet to his father to tell their own ideas, but did not think his father readily agreed. I was delighted, his father said: "But you have to give me a sheet IOU." I felt very bad, it is necessary to do so, but I think between father and son needed money, I had to depend him?.

Since then, I resent father. Weekends can not go home do not go home, even though home and his father rarely spoke. All this mother in the eyes. Once while the father was not at home, she asked me: "You are not hate your dad?" Biting my lip, do not speak. The mother said: "In fact, your dad loves you, he often boast behind you honest, hardworking he makes you work, because you are poor health, make you exercise more; well you score, he more than anyone else happy for him. know youre prone to pride, deliberately belittle you; him not send you to school, want you to learn to be independent; he let you go home to work on rest days, you want to see your money to buy a house, your dad and I have a good discussion. , and is given to you, deliberately let you play IOUs, is to make you feel a pressing debt, good thrifty live ...... "

So that! Dawned on me, my fathers love is a deep love, a great love, the fathers love is our intention to sentiment.

译文：

为了买房，我们拿出所有积蓄，首付还缺五万。爱人说：“先到你父母那里借一点吧，等我们有了钱就还他们。”我心里很不情愿。

在我的印象里，父亲不喜欢我，我也不喜欢父亲，甚至有些怨恨他。

三十多年了，我很少看到父亲微笑。他整天阴着脸，吩咐我干这干那。拔猪草、烧火做饭……什么活都让我干，只要一喊累，父亲就骂：“小兔崽子，我看你是懒，快干活!”

三十多年了，我从没听到他夸奖过我。有一次参加市里的数学竞赛，我得了二等奖，拿着奖状兴冲冲跑回家。父亲却漫不经心地瞄了一眼，不屑地说：“怎么没考个一等奖回家呀?”“可是……”我想告诉他，我是全校唯一得奖的。父亲却打断我：“不是一等奖就没什么好骄傲的!”我心里一阵难过，眼泪在眼眶里打转。母亲过来安慰我：“别哭，妈给你煮鸡蛋吃，奖励奖励你。”父亲却吼道：“不是一等奖有什么值得庆贺的?不许煮!”我气得牙根咬得咯咯响，发誓一定要考个第一给他看看。

三十多年了，他很少关心我。高中三年，我一直住校，只有在生活费用完的时候才回家。后来我考上大学，去报到那天，本以为父亲会陪我一起去，他却说家里忙，走不开。我心里不悦，但没说什么，背着简单的行囊出了远门。在新生报到处，看到其他同学都由家长护送来校报到，我羡慕了很久，然后一个人默默地办了入学手续。那一刻，我心里酸酸的，对父亲有了一丝怨恨。

毕业后，我在城里找了工作，几年后又安了家。我松了口气——为远离父亲而高兴。令我头痛的是，父亲却总在我的休息日打来电话，让我回家干活,我一推辞，就会招来一顿臭骂。

这次向父亲借钱，我想他会一口回绝的。但为住新房，我决定还是试一下。回到家，我悄悄和母亲说了这事。母亲为难地说：“这事得和你爸商量，我做不了主。”没办法，我只好硬着头皮向父亲说出了自己的想法，没想到父亲却爽快地答应了。我正窃喜，父亲却说：“不过你得给我打张欠条。”我心里很不是滋味，父子之间有必要这样吗?但一想到急需用钱，我只好依了他。

从此以后，我更怨恨父亲了。双休日能不回家就不回家，即使回家也很少和父亲说话。这一切，母亲都看在眼里。一次趁父亲不在家，她问我：“你是不是恨你爸?”我咬着嘴唇，不说话。母亲说：“其实你爸很喜欢你，他常在背后夸你老实，能吃苦。他让你干活，是因为你体质差，让你多锻炼;你成绩好，他比谁都开心，他知道你容易骄傲，故意贬低你;他不送你去学校，是想让你学会独立;他让你休息日回家干活，是想看看你们。你们买房的钱，你爸和我商量好了，是送给你们的，故意让你打欠条，是想让你们感觉有债压着，好勤俭过日子……”

原来如此!我恍然大悟，父亲的爱是一种深沉的爱，是一种博大的爱，父亲的爱是需要我们用心去感悟的。

[我给父亲打欠条英语作文

My father always stands in the center of my life, from past till now and possibly in the future.

My family was rather poor when I was in my childhood. We didnt have our own house and had to live in a shabby, small room rented from my fathers factory. The room was so small that there was little space for people to walk. I didnt have my own bed and had to sleep with my parents. This is terrible both for my parents and me.

But father made this all different! Since the room was on the third floor, namely, the top floor in that old style building, the roof was quite high above the floor. So father got an idea.  He bought two thick ropes and a flat wood that later was planed smooth, painted and drilled two holes on both ends.

Then he hung the ends of ropes up to the roof. During the daytime, these two ropes would be tied up so that people down could walk freely! When night came, father would loose the ropes and tied them to the two holes of that flat wood.  The length of these ropes was just long enough for me to sit or sleep on the board without others help.

So in this way my lovely, removable bed was born.

When winter came, this special bed obviously wouldnt be able to make me feel warm enough. But father always had his so lution! He built a garret using some flat wood and iron sticks right above the bed. With some used iron tubes, he made an iron ladder for us to climb up to the garret. Besides, he made a wood en desk for me to do my homework, and some simple furniture for my clothes, books and something else  he had in fact made a small bedroom for me.

At first, my mother and I dared not climb for fear that it might collapse. But father climbed it everyday to prove its safety. The garret looked simple even shabby and the ladder seemed to decline soon. But later when I got used to it, I found it as solid as those made by professional carpenters.

I carried all my personal things onto that garret. My father and I pasted red papers on the wall and painted the ugly furniture red. So the garret became the first "room" that belonged to me.When I was about to move to my new house, I just didnt want to leave.  That garret was created with my fathers love and sweat and intelligence, beautified with my hand and filled with so many sweet memories of my family! That hard but sweet life time would live in my memory forever with father stands in the center of it.

My Father

There is always a brilliant image living in my heart. That is my dear father. Seen through the eyes of many other people, father seems to be a very ordinary person. But he is quite extraordinary in my eyes, I have never lost my wonder at his good-personalities such as diligence, devotion, care, optimism ever since my childhood.Being a farmer, father works very hard in the fields all the year round. He works from dawn till dusk every day and even till midnight when it is the harvest season. He seldom enjoys leisure with other farmers even if the farm work is not much. He chooses to live a busy life with reluctance to stop for a while.

Father devotes all himself to our family. As we are poor, he always tries his best to support our family and afford the tuitions for my brother and me. For the whole family, for brother and me, he never stops working laboriously in the fields throughout the year. Now he has got a wrinkled face and white hair because of excessive hard work, looking much older and weaker than any other person of his age. In spite of all this, father never complains to us. It is his full devotion that were living a better life now. It is his full devotion that both my brother and I are able to study at college.Father shows much care to us children and my mother as well. Whenever there is any delicious food on the table, he just leaves it to us while he takes the simple one himself. If my brother and I fall ill, he will not hesitate a moment to get some medicine for us or take us to see the doctor. My mother suffers a bad disease. Father looks after her very carefully. He never lets mother do any heavy work both at home and in the field. Mother appreciates him m much that she often praises him as a model husband before others.

Father is a person full of optimism. He never complains about our poor life. He is never frustrated by trouble. He often tells us that everything will be all right if we have enough confidence in life. Due to his optimism, we are all confident to face our life and work.

We all think that father is not in the least an ordinary man. He plays an extraordinary role in my family. We cant have anything without him. Now Im pursuing further studies at college far away from father. I miss him very much. And I often see him in my dreams. His great image is deeply carved in my mind.

我父亲的光辉形象永远是一种生活在我的心里吧.”那是我亲爱的爸爸.在许多其他人的眼中,父亲似乎是一个很普通的人.但在我的眼里他很特别,自从我的童年他在我眼中一直都是勤奋、敬业、保健、乐观.

作为一个农民,父亲在田里工作很努力.收获的季节，他每天从早到晚工作,直到午夜时.他很少像其他的农民享受休闲,即使在农场工作不多的时候.他选择一个繁忙的生活不情愿停下来。

父亲为了我们这个家奉献了他的全部.当我们贫穷时,他总是尽自己最大的努力来支持我们的家庭和支付我哥哥和我的学费.为整个家庭,为哥哥和我,他总是不停地在地里工作一整年.现在他因为过度辛勤工作已经有了一个满是皱纹的脸和白色毛发,岁,比任何其他与他相同的年龄的人.虽有这一切的事,父亲从不抱怨.这是他的全部奉献,我们正处在一个更好的生活.这是他的全部奉献,我的兄弟和我都能在大学读书。

父亲十分关心我们，和我母亲一样.每当有什么好吃的食物放在桌子上,他只是让我们吃自己吃少点.如果我和我兄弟生病,他会毫不犹豫地让拿些药给我们或带我们去看医生.我的母亲受严重的疾病.父亲照料得很认真.他从不让妈妈在家里和田间做什么繁重的工作.感谢他的母亲,她经常在别人面前称赞他为模范丈夫。

父亲是一个十分乐观的人.他从不抱怨我们贫穷的生活.他从未灰心丧气.他经常告诉我们,一切都会好起来的,如果我们有足够的信心.由于他的乐观,我们都是自信的面对我们的生活和工作。我们都认为,父亲是不平凡的人.他在我的家庭中具有非常重要的作用.我们能不能有什么东西.现在我继续进修大学远离的父亲.我怀念他.我经常看到他在我的梦.他的伟大的形象深深刻在我的脑海里.

评语： 本文作者以朴实的语言充满感情地刻画了父亲的不平凡的形象，分别从四个不同的角度描述了父亲的勤劳、奉献、关爱和乐观。内容真实感人，行文简洁流畅，结构清晰，组织有条有理，首尾呼应，给读者以强烈的感染力。 作者用词简洁精确，并能很好地尝试一些新学的词汇及表达，使简洁的行。文更为生动。作者没有运用太多复杂的句式，但能适当运用介词短语、分词结构、强调及重复的手法，恰到好处 地突出了行文句式的变化，使文章更耐读。

My father did a noble thing in World War II, and it may have saved his life…

Dad often spoke about the he had as a young man in World War II. He still remembered the time he and some other soldiers some German prisoners of war.

Dad was part of George Patton’s Third Army, which in Normandy on D-Day. A few days after that great , Dad and a few members of his unit were on patrol (巡逻) in a French . Walking along the path, they arrived at a top of a mountain, two German soldiers did at the same time. Quickly, Dad and his fellow soldiers their guns. The Germans and turned in their weapons.

“We should them right now,” said one member of Dad’s unit. After what he’d seen at Normandy, Dad didn’t . This was war, and these were enemy soldiers. But Dad . He ordered the soldiers to empty their . One of the Germans held out a picture of a young woman and a baby.

Dad took them from the soldier. The of the photo made him think twice. He them to the man. Dad knew how to speak German, so he spoke to the man. “Pray for the war to be over, so we can all go home,” Dad said. The German was . “You are not going to kill us?” Dad shook his head. “If so, of us want to surrender (投降),” the German said.

Dad and the other American soldiers stood as German after German came out of their place on the other side of the mountain. 37 in all. They their weapons: machine guns. In fact, all of them were ready for . If they’d killed the first two men, Dad and his buddies would have been gunned down on the spot.

[英语作文:父亲和两个德国兵