描述我的英语老师英语作文推荐20篇

陈老师,您好:

我是五年三班vv

简单的讲,我曾经以为通过这个假期的努力,我会让他喜欢上英语,但看起来我是错了.尽管这个假期又重新补了第八册的英语,但是他还是有些抵触心态......只是希望这学期能得到陈老师的积极支持与鼓励.哪怕是

每一课的单词认真写了,课文很流利的背出来了,课堂会积极回答问题了,课外又读了一个英语故事或笑话等.我希望他得到你的赞赏和鼓励.因为您的一句话,一个鼓励,一句赞赏,可能就会增加他的学习兴趣,也会给他留下终生的记忆.......也可能因此而改变他的一生!!!

陈老师,其实我们知道您非常希望您的每一个学生都学好它......喜欢它.......甚至从他们中间走出未来的外交家,出色的外商,即便是个出租车司机也是可以和老外自如交流的人.

是的,但是有时也许只是一个鼓励的眼神,一句积极的语言,他们都可能会增加学习外语的

兴趣.而且如果能够让他们用外语交流感兴趣的话题,这也不失为一种提高学习英语兴趣的方法.他们可能会因此而改变一生,因为他因你的鼓励支持而喜欢上了它.

我希望也盼望着听到他不断喜欢英语学习的消息.发自内心的说声谢谢您.!!!

我的联系电话是_____________.任何时候都愿意听到您美妙的声音.

祝您工作愉快!!!

vv

编者按：谁是最可爱的人呢？对于学生来说，当然使我们的老师们啦！每一个学生都爱自己的老师，在教师节之际，让我们再说一声：老师，您辛苦了！

National Teacher Day is always the Tuesday of the first full week of May. And it is always for our students to give our special thanks to our lovely teacher.

I still remember last year when I was feeling lost,down and out,I had no idea about my life,my love,my study even doubt why I was here in the world.So then came so much wine and smoke,I was tired,physical and mental.I even wanted to end my life just jumping from the top of our building.

Then my teacher came to me, she said she knew what I was afraid of, she also told me thats very common like many young people of my age. She told me to call her anytime I need her help.I did so ,we often chat miracle and made some phone call.I just cant remember when come the mirical.I have found myself now!!!

Another teachers day,to all the teachers,to our parents.

dear teacher,

how time flies! it is ahnost a month since i arrived here and began a new

life as a university student. but all this time, i have been missing you and my

dear school. i just can not tell you how grateful i am to you for the help you

gave me during my preparation for the university entrance examination. now i

will tell you something about my university and life here.

our university lies at the foot of mount zijin, in the eastern suburbs of

nanjing city. the campus is very big,with a big sportsground surrounded by lots

of modern classroom buildings. what have impressed me most are the big library

and the well-equipped language lab. our campus is also very beautiful. there are

quite a few well-kept gardens. every road is lined with trees. how happy we are

to study in such an enviromnent!

life here is both busy and coloufful. we have classes every morning. in the

afternoon, we either work in the laboratory or do assignments in the classroom.

in the evening, we can go to talks or do reading in the library. this keeps us

occupied most of the week. but on weekends, there are always many

entertainments. we may go to the club to have a dance or go to the cinema to see

a fihn. sometimes we may also hold a party to practise oral english. in a word,

we like our life here very much.

are you still teaching one of the senior classes? i really think that the

students in your class are lucky for they will certainly benefit greatly under

your instruction. but take care not to overwork yourself. i do hope you will

have a chance of visiting me here.

with best wishes for you and your family. i will be looking forward to

hearing from you soon.

Yours,

____

郭老师是我们的班主任兼英语老师。她有着国字形的脸，看起来很对称。虽然是女老师，但眉宇中却透着一股威严，说起话来干脆利落，我爸爸就说我们班主任是巾帼不让须眉。她对我们要求特别严格，一切按班规办事，不管谁违反规定，决对定“斩”不饶。郭老师的英语非常棒，我想在全校是数一数二的，教学非常严谨。我在上小学时，自以为英语学的很不错。刚入初中时，班主任让每个人做一个座右铭。由于受《天天向上》这个娱乐节目影响的缘故，我加上了一句DAYDAYUP，郭老师看到后，很快帮我纠正了这个中国式英语的错误。作为班主任，郭老师对每个学生都严格要求。她有一套“来无影，去无踪”的神技。虽然，她表面上对我们不闻不问，可是对我们的情况了如指掌。有好几次上别的课时，有人小声说话，课后老师对那些同学说“你们，给我出来一趟”(这是老师最经典的话)。吓得他们腿都软了，其他同学吓得也是后背直冒凉气，甚至怀疑班主任有“千里眼”或“顺风耳”。不过如果哪位同学有了那怕一丁点儿的进步，她也会有世上最好听的语言来表扬他。说实在的，现在的学生都是独生子女，在家里都是娇生惯养的，确实需要一个严格的老师来为我们的成长保驾护航。英语老师——我们的良师益友。

I like many animals, but my favorite is the giant panda. Giant pandas are rare animals in China, their hometown in sichuan province.

Giant panda looks interesting, chubby, plump and cute. Its head and body are white, only the rim of the eye, ear, and the shoulder is dark brown. Especially that a pair of black rim of the eye, long in white face, like wearing a pair of sunglasses, plus the clumsiness and go up and look in all directions, appear very lovely.

Pandas in zoos, through training the breeder uncles and aunts, also many performance! Such as drilling circle, upright, upside down, or cartwheel and pushing the car. I most like to see the giant panda says. It huddled in her chubby body, like a big ball rolling, funny, very fun. Pandas dont like the cat that greediness eat fish meat, dont eat the delicious fruit, like a monkey pandas like eating bamboo leaves and shoots.

I love pandas, it can be seen everywhere in my little world. My pencil-box. The head of a bed, desk, plastered with pictures of giant pandas. In art class, if the teacher asked the paint free proposition, I often draw a panda. These, may all is because I am too fond of pandas!

我的班主任张老师是我的英语老师。她有一双明亮的眼睛，乌黑的头发，显得特别有精神，说起话来很温柔，我很喜欢她。

进入三年级，我们增加了一门新课程——英语。之前我对英语一点也不感兴趣，觉得特别难。第一节英语课，老师给我们播放了英语录音，还和我们做有趣的游戏。老师饶有风趣的话语，充满激情的讲 解，丰富多样的课堂活动，让我一下子就喜欢上英语。从此以后，每天晚上都认真听英语录音，和妈妈用英语对话。这次期中考试我的英语考了100分，心里甭提多高兴了，这应该感谢英语老师的教导。

老师像一盏明亮的灯塔，指引我们走出黑暗的迷茫。老师像蜡烛，燃烧了自己，照亮了别人。感谢你，老师！

“咻——”命中目标！

“哎哟，我的脑袋！”洪凯青大声喊道。

这不，咱班的瞌睡大王洪凯青瞌睡虫又犯了，上课没两分钟就趴在桌子上睡着了。你以为他能进入美美的梦乡吗？这一点儿小举动可逃不过MssLin那双法眼。只见MssLin眼睛直冒火花，纤纤细手从粉笔盒迅速拿出一根粉笔，用扔垒球的姿势直接向洪凯青投去。那速度简直惊人，“子弹”从我耳边一掠而过，不偏不倚地命中目标——洪凯青的脑袋，接着便是一阵惨叫。你们说，MssLin投粉笔的技术是不是“快准狠”？

洪凯青从桌上缓缓爬起，深深打了一口哈欠，他抹一抹眼睛，一看见MssLin正目不转睛地狠狠地盯着他，洪凯青吓得浑身发抖，赶紧坐正。全班同学也都不敢动，只能听见“扑通扑通”的心跳声，没错，MssLin的眼睛把全班都给kill了。

如果看到这你觉得MssLin很凶，那你就错了，她可是veryinteresting的哦！

MissLin上课很有趣！告诉你们呀，MssLin从来都没给我们上过课，她都是在与我们玩游戏，玩什么呢？玩英语！

“Drdrinkdrink！动起手！”她教我们一边做手部动作，一边和她学发音技巧拼单词。我们左手做一个杯子的形状，右手也做一个杯子的形状，再做一个要喝水的样子，有趣极了！同学们的学习兴趣都被调动起来了，在这样轻松有趣的学习氛围下，我们班大部分同学们考试都能得到优秀。

看，我们的MssLin是不是很interesting呢？羡慕我们拥有一个幽默风趣的老师吗？不过要是你也想来我们班级体验一下，可千万别像洪凯青那样爱睡觉，不然MssLin可不会饶了你的！

My high school headteacher teaches my English. He is handsome.  And he is very thin for hardwork. He is about forty years old. He looks serious. But in fact, he is kind, nice and warmhearted.

我的高中班主任教我们英语。他很帅气。因为工作辛苦，所以他很瘦。大概40岁左右。他看起来很严肃，但实际上他是很友好、善良、热心肠的

On the one hand, he is serious on study. Whoever doesn’t finish the homework or cheat in the exam, he will punish him or her badly. Sometimes he will let those students do doble homework or have  another exam. Sometimes he will ask those students write reports on that behavior. But when teaching us in class, he is so patient. It’s the same when asking him questions. On the other hand, he will play with us after class. Meanwhile, if anyone has any difficuty in study or daily life, he will give a hand without hesitation.

一方面，他在学习上是很严格的。不管是谁没完成作业或者在考试中作弊他都会重重是惩罚他或她。有时候他会让他们做双倍的家庭作业或者重新再参加过另一个考试。有时候他会让他们对自己的行为写报告。但是，在课堂上教我们的时候他是很有耐心的。我们向他请教问题的时候也是一样的。另一方面，在课后他会和我们一起玩。同时，如果我们任何人有任何关于学习或者日常生活上的困难，他都会毫不犹豫的伸出援手

All in all, we love our headteacher, though sometimes he is serious. We like his responsibility. We also appreciate his spirit to work for students heart and soul.

总之，虽然有时候他很严肃，但是我们爱我们的班主任。我们喜欢他的责任心。我们也欣赏他为了学生全心全意工作的精神。

我有一位幽默风趣的英语老师一一冼老师。

冼老师的头发短短的，眼睛不大却炯炯有神。身材微瘦，走起路来总是昂首挺胸的，给人的感觉是那么有精神，那么有活力。

冼老师课上总能把无趣的英语字母讲得风趣搞笑，总能让简单的表扬带上几分幽默，总能让同学们在轻松愉快的氛围中学到知识。

记得有一次，上课铃响了我们还在说话。冼老师进来了，我们原本吵吵闹闹的班级，一下就变得鸦雀无声了。一进来，冼老师就打开电脑，开始给我们讲课，我们听得津津有味。忽然，冼老师打了一下响指。笑着说：“现在问你们一个问题，Ihaveabooks，这句话有什么毛病？”许多同学都争先恐后地举起手来。冼老师环视一圈，说：“那就请这位同学来回答。”我看着冼老师指向我的大手，心头一紧，冼老师微笑着冲我挑了挑眉毛。我只得站起来说：“把s去掉，因为前面有个a。”老师喜笑颜开，两只眼睛咪成一条缝说：“完全正确！”顿了一会儿，冼老师接着说：“大家看这个s就像一条蛇，而这个a就像长着尾巴的小蝌蚪，蝌蚪可是青蛙的孩子啊。它当然也不能跟蛇一起做朋友啦，所以啊，看到这个a，后面就不能再有s啦。”

这节课真是生动啊！这一堂英语课虽然很短暂，但是让我们对英语有了兴趣，同时也让我们对学习充满了信心！

As the proverb goes, “no one knows the value of health until he loses it.”

From this, we know that health is very important to everybody. But how to keep

fit? Many people believe that sports can offer people health and pleasure. As

far as I concern, I think doing physical exercises have lots of advantages.

First of all, doing exercises in the morning will refresh my body as well

as give me a good appetite to eat my breakfast. What’s more, the air in the

morning is really fresh and clean, so I can keep my mind clear and sound in the

class. By doing physical every day I can keep my mind alert that I can finish my

tasks in time. If I do not do any physical exercise, I will feel tired and my

body becomes quite sluggish. During the night, I may find it becomes harder to

fall asleep. Second, doing exercises everyday will help me to mound a better

personality. It takes time and patient to do exercises. Sometimes I just want to

give up, but my friends encourage me to carry on, then I feel a lot of

satisfaction. Doing physical exercises makes me stronger and healthier. That’s

my personal experience.

As a student, sports are indispensable. You can pick up your favorite sport

and do it every day. Only in this way, you can have both pleasure and a healthy

body.

Mr Qin is our history teacher. He has a wonderful name Qin Han. He is over fifty now, and he is in good health. He likes history. He is not only interested in Chinese history, but also the history of the world. He likes reading, and goes to the book shop every Saturday. He often tells us something interesting in the history, such as the Great Wall, the World War II and so on. We are all happy to have his classes. Mr Qin wrote a thick book on history and it was published last year. We all admire him!

秦先生是我们的历史老师，他有一个好听的名字秦汉。他已经年过半百，可是身体健康。他喜欢历史。他不仅对中国历史感兴趣，对世界历史也感兴趣。他喜欢读书，每星期六都去书店。他经常给我们讲一些历史上有趣的事，如万里长城，第二次世界大战等等。我们都喜欢上他的课。秦先生写了一本有关历史的厚厚的书，去年出版了。我们都很敬佩他!

Love you, my teacher. You like a match, lit the light, at the expense of their own; you like a pencil, access to knowledge, worn on their own; you like Sassafras, get rid of the error, the oneself. Would you like a trainer, let me like you second soar to great heights; mother, let me carefree and content. Love you, my teacher."You dont have a job, how do you work? This powerful and solemn words left a mark in my heart. Once, I was not able to hold the book to the office because of my homework. After class, you called me to the office, I fear has taken a step by step, for fear you would fly into a rage, but you carefully told me a lot, and then, without saying a word. Your deep eyes, let me be afraid.Love you, my teacher.

In the past in the junior middle school time，I believe that everyone has a memorable teacher yourself。I also dont listed outside。 She is my teacher in charge——Miss He.Shes very beautiful and very kind to us. She has long hair and big eyes and she is 1.70 metres tall. In the second day, I had a bad illness。So take a week off to the teacher. After Miss He knows told I have a good for illness.A week later, back to school. Miss He find I talk to say I teach math, immediately to the mid-term exam, you have been away for a week of class. Your math foundation and thin. Meet dont understand in class and after class can come to me, also can turn to the math class representative for help, I have a greeting。In what the help of the teacher and theclassrepresentative, mid-term exam I had obvious increase in math. I never say thank you to the teacher, borrow the composition today say thank you. I wish the teacher everything goes well.

今天我要给大家介绍一位新老师，在五年级这一学期里她将担任我们的英语老师。

他很年轻，23岁。他的名字非常潇洒——邴超。长着一头棕色的长发。一双葡萄似会说话水灵灵的大眼睛。一张樱桃嘴，一双灵巧的手。一身打扮非常漂亮，像动画片中我们我们喜欢的花仙子，可以用 美不胜收来形容。

我还记得他给我们上的第一节课时的样子。“大家好！我叫邴超，以后大家叫我miss邴就可以了”她那清脆的声音让我更喜欢她了。还记得一次，他给我们上课就觉得跟玩差不多，不仅风趣幽默，还让 我们学得更快更好。他让我们学会本节课的知识。用金太阳动画式来教我们，还给我门看了他在美国时的照片并讲解给我们听，大家都听入迷了。就连我们班最不爱听讲的小凡这节课都听的入神了。

Miss邴还利用自己休息的时间来给我补习英语。因此我从心里感激他。我以后上课一定要好好学习，老这么辛苦的给我补习，又时很忙都不能给我补又是在我补习时她都忙得不可开交还有他有时身体不 舒服还坚持给我补课，我千万不能把英语给落下了所以我要用好成绩来回报老师对我的关爱！我真想在这对您说声：“谢谢您！Miss邴！您辛苦了！我爱您miss邴！你对我付出了这么多，我到现在还没 有回报您，真是对不起了！还有我真想有一个这样的好姐姐。

我爱您！邴老师！

Dear teacher

Hello!

Im writing to you again. Its the new year. 2020 is coming and 2021 is

coming. Do you look forward to the holidays again and again, just like us? But

every time we go home, we are speeding up our separation.

Forgive the students for talking about such a sad topic in this jubilant

time. 2020 is the difference, it is tension, it is pressure, it is sentimental.

2020 will change a lot and take away a lot. It will take away our best three

years and the time we spend together. It passed, it will never come back,

leaving only memories. What is good as long as the heart is together, isnt it

even more painful when the heart is together but people are not around? It also

said that there was no emotion at that time, and it came true when you said that

you would walk away. However, the feelings between you and us have been deeply

rooted and can not be broken at all, so it is inevitable to be sad.

There is no feast that will never end. We have been together for three

years. Isnt it just a gift from God? Teacher, you should believe that it is

fate to meet us and good fortune to meet you. Over the past three years, we have

cried and laughed together. When we have to leave, we cant help but stir up

emotions. At this time, no one will feel superfluous. No ones heart is made of

iron. You should know that everyone has been remembering your good, your smile

and the way you stand behind the door in the past three years. Even if you are

angry, you will always come to the class unconsciously and take a look at us.

You are really worried.

But your worry is not in vain. Now, although some people have learned to

smoke, drink and make friends, those people are still grateful to you, but they

are not good at expressing themselves. In other words, Thanksgiving is like

"fruit of human body". Once it blooms in three thousand years and bears fruit in

four thousand years, its seeds are planted in my heart early. Although it grows

slowly, it has great power when it grows.

You said that in the self-study class, we dont study hard. We look at the

watch and glance at the teacher. We are so cute. But when you are looking at us,

we are also looking at you. Moreover, you look up and you always frighten

us.

The last excellent diary of this semester has changed. It is not happy and

naive, but full of sadness and maturity. In that class, everyone was thinking of

something in their hearts. It was from the heart and could not be covered up. It

was the most significant excellent diary ever.

I think there is no literary talent, like every excellent diary, everyone

will think hard about what to write. Even if they do, they cant write anything.

But now, writing this topic, everyone has a lot to say. As long as the heart, is

a good article.

Old wusky once described the scene of a year: when we came back one day and

wanted to see you, you had to call the guard and tell them to let us in before

we could enter the campus. Come to your class, not only you and me, but also a

group of students waiting to grow up like us at that time. Looking at them, I

think of myself. What happened in the New Glasgow is unfolding in front of us.

However, people are not those people anymore.

Its so sad. Old wusky is great.

At noon, I have been dreaming for half a day. In the dream, we have

graduated. All of a sudden, everything moves up, and the essence is condensed

into a small world. Its just in the air, playing everything weve been doing

for three years. When it disappeared, we all cried, and simply broke into the

small world. Everything in the small world has not changed at all, that is our

three years, but we can not touch it. We saw our performance at that time, so

proud. I saw you and wanted to talk to you, but you ignored me. I envy myself at

that time, tears stop in the eyes.

Teacher, how I wish that small world really exists! Teacher, the feelings

of the past three years are not clear. I cant find any words, a sentence to

describe our previous feelings, which only those of us who have experienced can

understand. But everyone wants to express, cherish and grasp.

Teacher, thank you! Thank you for your meticulous care when we are ill,

thank you for your restraint when we indulge, and thank you for the punishment

when we make mistakes. Each of us is a piece of white paper, you can sketch

everything on it. Thank you for sketching so many beautiful things, bitter and

sweet, let us have a good start.

Teacher, Im sorry, please forgive our treason. Every time we make a

mistake, you will say, "or a child?" this is to comfort us, but also to comfort

yourself. But we dont understand you. We always misunderstand you, blame you,

get angry with you, and dislike you all day. Its not good here and there. In

fact, we also know that you are indeed a good teacher.

Teacher, please forgive these children, please fall in love with these

children, please remember these children These children will never forget

you.

Elves

The last day of 2020

Mrs Zhao is a kindly teacher, she always make us laugh and at the same time, she will teach us more knowledge.She doesnt seem like a teacher, and her friendly always make her like our friend, however, it doesnt mean that she is not care about our grade and homework. She is also strict, every time, she checks our homework very carefully, and make us understand anything in class. so that is our teacher who is kindly and serious.

赵老师是一个亲切的老师,她总是逗我们笑,同时,她将教我们更多的知识。她似乎并不像一个老师,她总是让她像我们的朋友一样,然而,这并不意味着她不关心我们的成绩和作业。她也很严格,每一次,她很仔细地检查我们的家庭作业,在课堂上使我们了解很多事,所以这就是我们慈祥和严肃的老师。

我的英语老师Nancy是从五年级开始教我的，虽然她教我的时间不长，但是我却跟她有了难舍难分的感情。

我的英语老师可以算是办公室的一大美女呢！柳叶眉，水灵灵的大眼睛，小巧玲珑的鼻子，还有一张樱桃小嘴，红通通的真可爱。即像动画片里的美少女又像我梦里的可爱天使。

我的英语老师不仅外表美丽而且关心学生。

记得在去年冬天的时候，我们正在上一节英语课，英语老师带着微笑，穿着轻便的羽绒服来上课，同学们专心致志地听并仔仔细细地做好笔记。上完课之后胡老师把我单独拉到外面，她的手慢慢地从口袋里掏出两对花结，那花结的外环是蝴蝶的外型，中间还有一个金黄光闪闪的小蝴蝶，那花结的外环是橘黄色的。我当时看的十分喜欢，想要，但心里并不敢想那是送给自己的。可谁知那真的送给我的。我真不敢相信，英语老师说要6元钱，她送给我这个是因为她见我的头上没有像其他女生头上的花结：另外还有个原因是我工作负责。我感觉她就像我的妈妈一样，可我的妈妈还送我这么漂亮的花结呢！我收到这个礼物心里甜滋滋的，心想一定不辜负她对我的期望。我至今还保留着这个礼物呢！就像上个月的教师节我因为家庭条件不富裕，所以没买贺卡之类的礼物送给老师，但我一定会取得更好的成绩来报答她，报答母校。我还要祝所有的老师每年教师节快乐！

[我的英语老师作文汇编

导语：从小到大，有哪个老师让你印象深刻呢?下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的优秀作文，欢迎阅读与借鉴，谢谢!

The person I admire best in the middle school is my head teacher.

He is a responsible person. He cares about us very much. He often tells us that we shouldn’t wait for what we want to come and we should try our best to go after what we want. He not only teaches us knowledge, but also tells us how to face difficulties and challenges, what to do with the career in the future and how to communicate with friends.

He is a strict person. He always says to us that details decide success or failure. Even if we make a small mistake, he will encourage us to deal with it and correct it in a proper way.

He is also an intellectual person. He is good at math and physics. Besides, he has a wide knowledge of literature and art. So he always gives us great help on our studies.

In short, he is a good teacher. He helps us understand how important the study is, inspire us to keep advancing, share the happiness and sorrow of our studies. With the help of such an excellent teacher, we will study better and more happily.

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在中学我最钦佩的人是我的班主任。

他是一个负责任的人。他非常关心我们。他经常告诉我们，我们不应该等待我们想要的东西，我们应该尽全力去追求我们想要的。他不仅教我们知识，而且告诉我们如何面对困难和挑战，如何对待未来的事业以及如何与朋友交流。

他是个严格的人。他总是对我们说细节决定成败。即使我们犯了一个小错误，他也会鼓励我们处理它，并以适当的方式改正它。

他也是一个知识分子。他擅长数学和物理。此外，他对文学和艺术有广博的知识。所以他总是在我们的学习上给我们很大的帮助。

简言之，他是一个好老师。他帮助我们了解学习是多么的重要，激励我们继续前进，分享我们学习的快乐和悲伤。在这样一位优秀教师的帮助下，我们会学得更好、更快乐。

虽然小姨的学历比我高，但她会读的英语却只有可怜的一小撮。为了让小姨也能跟上时代，有事没事说两句英语，我就给小姨当了一回临时小老师，教她学英语。

跟我读，each，each。我说。each，什么意思？的意思。小姨哦了一声，低下头在本子上记下几笔。再多练几遍，小姨！小姨一边看着本子一边念：each，each。唔，不错。再来下一个。桃子，peach。我大声说。peach，peach。小姨跟着读了两遍，又在本子上写了些什么。

我继续教小姨，她读得挺认真，但总是要在本子上写一写。我可不管这么多，只要她读对就行了。最后，我要小姨把刚才学的单词读一遍，她照着那个小本子，一个一个地念，居然全读对了。我兴奋得一蹦三尺高，这个小老师当得真不错！

吃过晚饭，小姨洗衣服去了，我偷偷拿起小姨的本子，想看看她到底写了什么。真是不看不知道，一看吓一跳――each一尺，桃子僻起

我又好气又好笑地对小姨说：要你学英语，不是汉字！给单词注上汉字怎么能学好呢？小姨有点理亏地说：可我光看单词不会读呀！我只好又不厌其烦地教小姨认音标读单词。

也怪，小姨的单词越学越好，胃口也大了。于是，我又开始教小姨英语句子。有时候，小姨学着学着就会唠叨几句：这外国人说话真麻烦，乱七八糟，连顺序都没有！不过说白了，妈妈学习的劲头足足的，很快在我的指导下掌握了一些英语句子。

渐渐地，小姨会说了很多的英语句子和单词，我开心极了。

中考英语作文难不难？其实不难，大部分同学都能得到12分以上，13、14分也是平常，但是要想得到15分甚至以上，就难上加难了。到底什么样的作文能得到16分以上？下面是经过和中考命题组和阅卷组老师的交流，对中考英语作文评分标准做出了更深的理解。

一、中考英语写作的概述

你对于在中考英语写作中拿高分有把握吗？实际考试中，许多学生却常常有“无话可说”的感觉。那要如何我们才能克服这种无话的状态，取得高分呢？

归根到底这是一个英语基本功——单词、短语和句型的问题。

英语作文的前提条件是掌握了一定量的词汇、语法及体裁、题材等方面的知识。学生如果想要在写作方面有本质上的提升，必须进行多次的写作练习。因此，必须合理地设置训练步骤，遵循从初级到高级，从简单到复杂的原则去练习，经过一段写作实践之后，写作水平一定会有大幅度的提高。

中考英语作文对考生的要求有四点：1、内容要完整。2、语句流畅。3、没有语法错误。4、书写规范。

二、中考英语写作的评分标准

1、老师拿到的标准

写作水平的高低和文章的好坏，分数是最直接的评分标准，也是考生们最关心的。但是多少考生真正透彻知道中考英语写作的评分标准？什么样的文章才是阅卷老师眼中的好文章？

评分标准：

(1)整篇作文满分20分，其中内容8分，语言8分，结构4分。

(2)内容贴切，句子流畅，用语准确，加整体印象分1分。

(3)不满60个词，少1——5个词扣0.5分，6——10个词扣1分。

(4)所有给出问题涉及的三项内容，每少一项扣3分。

(5)每个拼写，大小写，标点符号等错误扣0.5分；同一的拼写错误不重复扣分，扣分总和不超过2分。

(6)语法错误每项扣1分，同一错误不重复扣分，扣分总和不超过2分。

2、老师想看到的标准

语言(8分)：

词——固定搭配、高频重点词汇；

句——复杂句(各种从句)、特殊句型、正确的句子!

内容(8分)：(总、分)论点、论据支持句；简洁、切合主题的记叙内容。

结构(4分)：

语言结构——句子重点突出、内容清晰；

内容结构——论点、论据以及记叙之间的逻辑关系；

句数控制——对于相对内容的句数掌握；

亮点、出彩点——排比、拟人、谚语、成语、押韵等。

三、扣分

内容方面：要点缺失，可酌情扣分。比如中考作文“Iwanttodosomethingformyschool”，若没有写一件具体的事情，是要扣3分以上的；若写的事情太过于虚幻，没有实际内容，也会扣1-2分。

字数：少于60字的作文要酌情扣分。

中考英语作文要求60字以上，标点符号不算，少了就要扣分。

但是60字的作文能不能得高分？从我们拿到的实例作文来看，16分以上的作文，没有少于75字的，甚至少于80字的也少之又少。

当然，也极少有超过100字的，因为中考试卷的短线格一共80个，在格子下面大约还有2行的空间，可以加20字左右，再多阅卷人就很难看清了，也会影响卷面的美观。

所以，同学们如果想让作文得到高分，最好是让字数在75-100字之间。

语法和拼写错误：每个扣0.5，重复错误不计；

标点错误：每4个扣0.5。

四、加分

作文的组织结构分。就是根据学生使用复杂句型、单词和谚语、俗语的情况来加分。只要文章中有1个亮点，基本就可以争取到1分(3分的文采分是很难全部拿到的)。而这1分的亮点，是可以提前准备的。

“万金油”式的复杂句型，例如强调句型、only相关的倒装句等，只要同学们多操练几次，几乎是一定能用到作文当中，从而为自己争取到这1分。

其次就是卷面分。很多家长和同学，尤其是部分书法并不是十分整洁的同学，都会关心是否真的有“卷面分”的存在。虽然在阅卷标准里面并没有卷面分这一项，但是这个分数却真切地反映在了同学们的分数里面。

据阅卷老师的经验，在阅卷的时候并不是按这3个部分逐项打分的，而是在第一遍读完全文之后，心里已经形成了一个“印象分”，然后再细读第二、三遍，把印象分分配到各个打分部分。

因此，这个“印象分”就非常重要，而同学们的书法，也正是在这个环节，影响到了自己的分数。所以初三的考生，如果书法不好，一定要注意。

话说我们班的英语老师啊，那可谓是相当相当地有责任心。这不，一个学期就这样飞速而过，期末的“黑暗时刻”来临了。英语老师又开始到处“借债”了，以下是英语老师的“债务清单”，大家可以过目过目：

“债务”一：借(美术)老师(15)分钟

英语作文，是我们班同学的弱项，令英语老师头疼，她一心要把我们的作文水平提上去。今天下午有上美术课，美术老师正在给我们绘声绘色地讲着动物故事，我们笑得乐不思蜀。突然，一个恐怖的“身硬”——英语老师出现在门口。美术老师走过去之后，英语老师对着他说了些话，美术老师也只是一直点头。难道……英语老师又要借时间？

果然不出我们所料，美术老师上了半小时之后，提着他的文件袋走了，来换班的正是英语老师。Oh！全班惊呼。“拿出练习册！抄一篇范文！”英语老师一声令下，全班鸦雀无声，谁敢违抗？只得拿着笔，皱着眉，抄，抄，抄！

“债务”二：借(全班同学)(10)分钟

抄到范文一半的时候，救命之神“下课铃……”清脆地响着。同学把笔和练习册都收了起来。突然，英语老师一转身，“恶狠狠”地盯了我们一下，真令人毛骨悚然。同学们像老鼠见到猫似的，顺从的把笔和练习册拿了出来。

当作文抄完之后，我们长长地吁了一口气。没想到英语老师还要讲重点词句，易错点啊，说得滔滔不绝啊~如果英语老师到CCTV百家讲坛去，说不定收视率会一路飚升！！讲完之后，数学老师也踩着上课铃声来了……

“债务”三：借(体育)老师(40)分钟

今天早上，有一节心爱的体育课，我们兴高采烈地想飞奔到操场上，没想到一到门口就被“反弹”回来——英语老师在门口挡着呗。只见她手里抱着一叠已阅过的考卷，走进班上，先环顾了一下四周，让我们感到非常的寒冷！

这时，咱们班的小强站起来说：“老师，为什么不上体育课？”

说罢，其他同学在小强的带领之下也“就是，就是”地起哄。

“你们以为你们考得很好是吧，看看，英语科代表才考了八十多，不及格的已经超过一半啦……”

恐怖啊，震得我们班的玻璃“哐铛”响，同学们只能忍气吞声，硬着头皮熬过这“艰难”又“黑暗”的45分钟……

“债务”四：借(音乐)老师(40)分钟

……

总计：105分钟！

天哪，俗话说有借有还，再借不难！

尊敬的英语老师大人，您借的“债”该何年何月还清？