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家庭给我的爱初中作文

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听妈妈说我从小体质就不好,1岁到5岁经常发烧所以渐渐地就得了肺炎,后来是经过努力治疗才康复的,然而四年级肺炎这个“灾难”又降临到了我的头上,妈妈焦急万分,马上就要期末考试了又接近过年,既影响了学习,又过不好年,为了不耽误我的学习第二天我还是坚持去上学可,可是到了第二天晚上的十二点我又开始发烧,妈妈发现了立刻穿好衣服带着我去了医院,我觉得浑身不舒服,头晕,整个人都是烫的,没多久我就吐了,接着迷迷糊糊睡着了,朦胧中我感觉到打针了。从这以后我就没去上学了,我常常担心如果治不好该怎么办?妈妈总是会看出我的心思,安慰我说:“没事的,肯定会好的。”妈妈的话使我坦然了许多,于是我便不再乱想,由于我配合治疗没一个星期就康复了。

今年五一我再次生病,那是去丹江二桥的时候,本来五年级去了趟宜昌坐了很多汽车也坐了火车,我已经不晕车了,没想到丹江二桥一路上很颠簸,四周都是山,当时坐着小轿车上去,随着盘山的公路一路上让我觉得很不舒服,本来我就讨厌坐小轿车,经路这么一折腾我又晕车了,庆幸的是下车居然没吐,没想到回来的时候吐了,我当时一点也不感觉晕只是觉得难受。由于我不觉得晕所以就没在意,随后就和弟弟去了他家,正在玩梦幻的时候不知为什么我的肚子疼了起来,那种感觉真是无法形容,姨妈让我去医院看我没同意,因为我怕,怕这一去就不再回来,爸爸就是去了医院不再回来的。我在心里想着或许睡觉会舒服点,如果不行的话……睡过去算了。姨妈给妈妈打了电话然后就送我回家,哪想到我连走路都不行了,没办法叫了个三轮车把我送回家,一到家门口妈妈就在那里等我,回到家我说想睡觉,妈妈又为我把床整理好,我才睡觉的。后来我醒来已经不觉得疼了,我觉得妈妈是伟大的!虽然我没有爸爸,没有爸爸的爱,没有一个完整的家,但是妈妈让感觉到了家庭的温暖。 我爱我家,更爱我的妈妈!

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篇1:我的学校初中英语作文

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1.你的学校位于什么地方

2.校园景色如何

3.你对同学和老师们的感受如何

4.请谈谈你对你学校的感觉等..

(在哪自己写吧).First here is our favourite place our beautifui garden many trees and many flowers in it. then you can go into it .Now,you know why we love it right .we can write red and chat in it.(tell you a secret:I like it because it is cool in summer and warm in winter

Now,I will tell you more about my friends &teachers. Over here teachers are friendly to us,so we never say a bad word about them.Because of these,students can get good grades at my school.(Would you like to come?)

I think my school is one of the best schools in the world.Because we have good teachers good students and everything is beautiful. I like it, every at it likes it.

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篇2:初中暑假的英语

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I have always had a wish in my heart, which is to go to the sea. This summer holiday, July 25, afternoon. We went to the changzhi railway station and sat down to the sun. The sound of the sound train slowly disappeared into the horizon.

On the train I saw the tall of taihang mountain, the Yellow River, the spectacular, sat for 7 hours, we finally come to rizhao railway station, the train get off a hot muggy, I know that I have come to rizhao.

Leave me the deepest reflected in sunshine is square, we went to the square, flew under the waves in the breeze of show more beautiful sea, it is really so beautiful sea grand, turbulent waters under the sway of sea breeze, contemplating the spirited, Mercedes, growled, rolled towards the shore. In rows of sea water, the waves of spray, and the thousands of beads of water, are sent to the sea. At this time. I admire the fact that the ancients could write such phrases as "the waves of the waves, the thousands of snow." I left 10,000 square beaches.

Seafood in the afternoon, we went to the supermarket, smell I go in I hate seafood flavor, under the advice of family I just know some seafood is delicious, I ate a lot. The suns seafood is cheap for 50 yuan for a 5 yuan sunshine.

In the two days of sunshine, we went to the sea by the sea. The journey is short but the scenery is always in my heart.

我心中一直有一个愿望,那就是去大海边看看。今年暑假的7月25日,下午。我们来到了长治火车站,坐上了到日照的专列。随着呜~呜~呜~的声音火车慢慢的消失在了地平在线。

在火车上我看见了太行山的高大,黄河的波澜壮阔,坐了7小时的火车我们终于来到了日照火车站,一下车闷热闷热的,我知道我已来到日照。

在日照给我留下最深映现的是万平口,我们到了万平口,哗哗哗的海浪在微风的吹拂下显的海更美丽了,那真的是太美了大海的气势恢弘,汹涌的海水在海风的吹拂下,似群群烈马,奔驰着,咆哮着,向岸边卷来。一排排海水,激起如雾的浪花,化做千千万万的水珠又汇向大海。此时;我真佩服古人能写出“惊涛拍岸,卷起千堆雪”这样的绝句。我依依不舍的离开了万平口海滩。

下午,我们来到了海鲜超市,我一进去就嗅到了我最讨厌的海鲜味,在家人的劝阻下我才知道有的海鲜好吃,我一口吃了一大把。日照的海鲜很便宜长治50元的日照买5元。

在日照的两天,我们在海边赶海。捕小鱼,行程虽短但,但美景却常绕在我心中。

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篇3:初中英语作文:我的入学考试

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My Entrance Examination

For going on with my further studies, I took the entrance examination in a Senior Middle School last week。 I still remember there were more than three hundred candidates taking part in this examination。 For the first day, in the morning, Chinese was easy。 We were required to write a composition of 250 words on "My Home Life", and give definitions and illustrations to twenty phrases。 In the afterno on, we took an English examination。 There were dictation, sentence formation, and analysis for oral English。 In the oral examination, I was questioned about my home life, my experience in the junior middle school and my future prospects。

On the second day, we were examined on history and geography in the morning and physics and chemistry in the afternoon。

我的入学考试

为了进一步学习,我上周在一所高中参加了入学考试。我还记得参加考试的有300多人,第一天上午,语文很简单,我们要写一篇250字的作文,关于“我的家庭生活”,并解释20个短语。下午,我们考英语,有听力,造句,分析口语。口语考试时,我被问道我的生活,中学经历以及未来的希望。

第二天,我们早上考历史、地理,下午考物理、化学。

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篇4:初中英语满分

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Every one has a different personality. I have an optimistic personality and

I always do everything happily. But not every one finds this easy. When I meet

people like this, I usually advise them to see the school councilor. There are

reasons why everyones personality is so different. If your parents love you and

care about you, then your personality will be healthy and happy. If your parents

dont, then your personality could sad and withdrawn. A persons personality

determines his or her future. So if you come across someone who is often

worried, you can try and help them or tell them to seek help from a

councilor.

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篇5:我的家庭的初中

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吃过香喷喷的晚饭,我和爸爸懒洋洋的坐在沙发上,悠哉的看着书,悠闲的打着饱嗝,妈妈又在勤奋的收拾卫生了。

过了一会儿,妈妈板着脸问:“你们还有没有这个家?家务活全是我做。”“有,当然有。”我和爸爸异口同声的说。闭目养神的姿势没有改变,“唉。”妈妈无可奈何的叹了一口气。

第二天,吃过晚饭之后。妈妈又迅速又麻利的干完家务,说:“你们心中既然有这个家,我们来一个小比赛好么?”“好!”“耶!”我和爸爸面带喜色的答应了。

“答对加10分,答错扣10分。请听题。”主持人妈妈开始提问了“晓晓选手。我们家的洗衣粉是什么牌子?”完了,完了,每次都不留心,好像是白猫的。我真后悔,平时太懒,不愿意帮助妈妈洗衣服。“对,是白猫牌的。”“错误,应该是超能洗衣粉。”

“爸爸选手。”爸爸听了他的名字,向我眨眨眼。“请问这个月我们家花费了多少元?”爸爸张口结舌,眼睛直直的,最终一个字也说不上来。和我一样扣了10分。

接着进行抢答赛。“请问日历图案是什么样的?”“菊花。”“拇指姑娘。”……几轮下来,我们一个负20分,一个负70分。我和爸爸真是不合格的家庭成员。

直到现在,我才深刻体会到妈妈的辛苦。

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篇6:初中英语满分

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When summer holiday comes, I always go back to my hometown and spend the

time with my grandparents. I like the life there, it is so simple and happy.

Living in the countryside, I feel the peace in my heart. It seems the days

become longer. In the morning, I hear the cock make out the sound, as if it is

singing, then I wake up. Sometimes I will go to the mountain and I can hear some

birds singing. I enjoy listening to these birds’ sound. I am so close to the

nature. I love everything that the nature brings. The green tree, the colorful

flower, the clean water even the fresh air. I find its beauty.

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篇7:家庭风波初中

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家庭是温暖的港湾,充满了许多幸福与快乐,但有的时候也会因为一些误会而闹得不愉快,使温馨的家庭产生风波

有一次,我和妹妹正在客厅里做游戏,而奶奶要上床休息一会儿,突然,一阵声音传来:“李欣瑶!瞅瞅你干的好事,把我床上的单子剪了个大洞!”我闻声赶去,不知道奶奶为什么不高兴。奶奶指着那个洞,气呼呼的指责我。我顿时懵了:“这不是我干的呀,我今天都没有进你们屋!”“你别狡辩了,除了你咱家还有第二个这么调皮的人?”奶奶的一枚枚“炸弹”在我身上。

我心里特别难受:我怎么这么倒霉呢,也不分个青红皂白就诬陷我,好歹也有的证据吧。想了想,虽然奶奶从小就勤俭节约,好好的一个被单被剪破了一个洞倒是挺可惜的,难怪大发雷霆,但也不能乱诬陷人呀!被冤枉的滋味是多么的难受。想到这,我感觉到自己的眼泪已经从眼眶里流到了脸上。

“冷静,要冷静”我在心里默念到。我猜这之间一定有什么误会没有解开。于是我当上了“名侦探福尔摩斯”从结果一点一点的往上推理。突然,我想到了什么,咧嘴一笑,对奶奶说:“你今天上午是不是坐在床上缝被子了?”“是呀,咋了?”奶奶的脸色阴沉沉的,看来她的气还是没有消掉。“你是不是剪被子的时候剪到了单子?”我在一旁咯咯地笑着。奶奶思考了一会儿,也笑了:“呃,好像就是我剪到的。”终于,真相大白了,奶奶也给我道了歉,一场家庭风波可算是结束了。

人生如海,时而平静,时而惊涛骇浪;生活也会又不断的起伏,难免会出现一些让人意想不到的风波,但正是因为有了风波,生活,家庭才会变得多姿多彩!

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篇8:家庭和谐初中作文

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我有一个和谐家庭,在这个大家庭里,有爸爸、妈妈、爷爷、奶奶和我,和谐的家庭作文450字。我们在一起生活得十分快乐。爸爸、妈妈十分关心爷爷和奶奶,为了让爷爷奶奶在家过得舒服,爸爸、妈妈安装了空调,还买了全自动洗衣机、微波炉等电器,减轻奶奶做家务的负担。最近,还花了两千多元安装了天然气管道,奶奶再也不用为煤气烧完而犯愁了。有一次,奶奶吃饭时突然头晕起来,妈妈立刻带她到医院看病挂水。

有时间妈妈还会上街为奶奶买衣服,不知内情的邻居都以为她们是母女呢。爸爸妈妈工作十分繁忙,但是只要有时间,就会关心我的学习。记得有一次,我数学考试没考好,回家时心里一直不安,生怕他们批评可妈妈看了考卷后,不但没有批评我,还和我一起分析试卷,哪里不该错,错的原因是什么,听得我心里暖暖的,下决心以后一定要好好学习,考个好成绩让爸爸妈妈高兴。因为爸爸妈妈经常加班不回家,我生活上的一切就由爷爷奶奶包了。爷爷总是变着花样买各种种样的菜回来,奶奶就烧给我吃。奶奶还给我辅导功课,每当要考试了,奶奶就格外紧张,好象是她要考试一样。总是千叮咛,万嘱咐,希望我考个好成绩。爷爷奶奶不遗余力,发挥余热;爸爸妈妈积极工作,尊敬老人;我健健康康,茁壮成长。这就是我的一家,和千千万万个家庭一样,我们沐浴在和谐社会的阳光里,幸福美满地生活在一起!

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篇9:初中英语作文:团结就是力量

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I like to play basketball very much, so when I went to middle school, I joined the basketball team. Last week, our team had a match, we were against another school, all of us were so excited and wanted to win.

When the match began, our team worked very slowly, we could not cooperate very well, because this was the first time for us to play.

When half match time went, we lagged behind, our team leader called us together and told us we must get united, so that we could have the chance to win. Then we played hard and cooperated so well, we won the game at last, it was so amazing, union is strength.

我很喜欢打篮球,因此当我上初中的时候,我加入了篮球队。上周,我们队有一场比赛,是对阵另一个学校,我们都感到很兴奋,因为这是我们第一次大比赛。当比赛半场过去了,我们处于落后,队长把我们叫在了一起,告诉我们必须要团结,这样才有机会赢。我们打得很拼命,配合得很好,最后终于赢得了比赛,真是美妙极了,团结就是力量

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篇10:初中英语作文大全之自我介绍

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在一个新的环境中自我介绍,是将我们更好地展现在大家面前的一种方法。

初中英语作文 自我介绍

根据以下要点提示写一篇60-80词的短文。

1、在学校学习汉语、英语、数学、历史和一些其他学科;

2、我学习很努力,最喜欢的学科是英语,经常找机会练习英语;

3、现在中国已经加入世贸组织wto,并且2008年奥运会将在北京举行,英语正变得越来越重要;

4、我将更加努力学习英语,将来为祖国作贡献。

I study Chinese、English、maths and History and some other subject at school.I study hard. My favorite subject is English.I often find chance to practice English.China has joined WTO and Beijing will host the 2008 Olympics,English is more and more important .I will study hard and be dedicate to my homeland.

同学们有没有准备好自己的自我介绍呢?这可是一个很好的表现的机会哦!

初中英语写作范文:保护眼睛

眼睛对我们很重要,同学们一定要很好的保护自己的眼睛哦。

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篇11:创造幸福家庭英语

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I have a happy and happy family. Family members have "good girl" I. "Shopaholics" Mom and Dad "handyman". Now, let me make the next introduction!

In our clean home, "handyman" is indispensable, he is my father. Every day when I see something in my house is broken or something is dirty, my dad always comes forward. I remember once, my lamp is broken, I hurried to find dad, after my dad looked at me, immediately brought the tools, began to repair, with a sound bite Ling clang repair after the sound, my lamp repaired! I was just going to say thank you daddy, but Dad took the rag, wiped the lamp carefully, and asked me how? I see, which is used for the lamp, just like a new, I happily ran into her fathers arms, and said: "thank you dad!" Dad smiled happily.

Looking at a full wardrobe, big and small, brightly coloured clothes, and I think "shopaholics" mother shopping scene. One day at noon, I just finished lunch, my mother took me to Xidan without demur. I asked my mother, "Why are you in such a hurry?"" Mother said, "todays Xidan sale."." We ran to the third floor, bought 3 pieces of clothes, and then bought a basket of daily necessities, when I was like a deflated balloon, just want her mother to go home, my mother just went home unhappily.

Im a "good girl" at home". Every day after school, carefully finished homework, carefully checked, every day to help mom and dad do housework. In fact, this is not my instinct, I ah, the most care of people. I remember once my mother was ill, and it happened that my father was on duty. So I decided to take care of my mother. I made a tomato egg noodle for my mother first, and then gave it to her gently. My mother was moved, and I was happy too. After eating one mouthful, the mother stroked her head and said, "well, my daughter has grown up."!" At that time my heart. The second day, under my care, mothers disease has improved. When she meets people, she says Im a good kid, and Im embarrassed.

This is our family, a happy family.

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篇12:初中英语

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Good morning, everyone! my name is lu xin. i am so happy to stand in front

of you to introduce myself. i am thirteen years old. i graduated from the no.1

primary school of our city. i like reading books and playing badminton. i hope

we can take exercises after class. besides, i like watching movies and listening

to pop music. i am sure there are some classmates have the common interests with

me. therefore, we can communicate with each other. in primary school, i did well

in chinese but math is not so good. i hope i can make progress in middle school.

i am very excited to be a classmate of you and i hope we can make progress and

have good days together.

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篇13:学会感恩初中英语作文

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Since we were born as a little baby, we get help from others all the time. Our parents raise us, our teachers teach us and our friends company us. Therefore, it’s important for us to be grateful to those people who give us a hand. Being grateful is a way to show them our appreciation and our love. No one in the world is supposed to love us without any conditions. Moreover, Being grateful to others and to what you get can lead you are ready to help others, too. I think this is the most important impact on people that being grateful. If we are all show our appreciation to others and then help others, we could build a friendly and harmonious society.

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篇14:初中英语作文旅游

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Last winter holiday, I went to Harbin with my mother. It‘s very cold in winter. There is snow and ice everywhere and you are always in a white world. You must wear warm clothes. The most exciting thing is playing with snow. Skating is also very interesting there. I will always remember Harbin, for the snow, the ice and all the beautiful things. I love Harbin.

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篇15:初中毕业英语作文

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Time flies, imperceptibly, you through the junior middle school three years of study and life. For three years, you are in the campus, left footprints, flying ideal, sweat, take away the maturity, left back memories. A few days ago, in my mind, often will save you present at work; crazy slapstick laughter; Art Festival in the song; the stadium endeavoring figure;

Time is a one-way road, you can not get the return ticket. But some of the scenery will not fade with time, some faces will not fade with time, some beliefs do not brown with time. Let all the sentimentally attached, depressed and repentant, hope and longing, become your eternal good memories!

"The blue cloud has a road to always have to have, life can have a few times to fight, at this time do not beat when to fight!" Anguish and resentment are not the main melody of youth, but struggle and struggle is the aria of life. Here, I hope that every one of you is successful in the mid-term exam.

After two days, you will go all out to accumulate steadily, ideal carrying luggage, with three years of travel over land and water, like a pilgrim, accept, dream ideal. Please remember: no matter where you are, people where the Maozhou middle school campus, there must be your teacher, your mentees, for you silently bless, pray silently, you can often come home to see more hope.

Students, youth is a too hasty book! Three years of time, more than 1000 days and nights in such a hurry to pass by, today you are proud of the school, tomorrow, you are proud of school! In the strange, I gave the students three words, as a graduation gift, and my classmates.

In the first sentence, study is regarded as a habit. A good habit is the most precious wealth of a mans life. I hope that no matter when, no matter where you are, dont forget your habits. We must start from small things, start from the side, start from scratch, pay attention to every detail, and you will have a bright future.

The second sentence, regard gratitude as a kind of gratitude responsibility. The students can grow up healthily, graduate, in addition to their own efforts, we should not forget our age, we grow up, we learn the campus, we cannot forget that behind us silently teachers and love, always worried about our parents, to the country and the school the teacher must be thankful, grateful!

The third sentence, the ideal as a goal. What kind of people have ideal, have what kind of development, in twenty-first Century as a master, you must aim high, do not linger in the past, not to dwell on today, must have ambition, ambition, to have the whole world in view in the future.

Students, graduating from junior high school is just a post station on the road of life. In the future, there will be a wider sky for students to fly. There will be better prospects for students to look forward to. Were going to say "goodbye". At the beginning of the meeting is to acquire knowledge, accumulate strength, this is goodbye in order to achieve the ideal vision exhibition! Your success starts from here! Start from a school in the alma mater!

Wide sea diving, sky. Today you are the peaches and plums fragrance, tomorrow you are the pillars of the state! I wish the students good grades in senior high school entrance examination to the stadium, Alma mater! Good news to the teachers!

Three years of groundless talk, three years of hard work, inculcate three years, three years of little concern, although I just can forget?

Junior high school, is a destination, more a starting point. I wish you more progress and better results in the coming time. For the alma mater.

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篇16:初中英语满分

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English is the necessary subject to learn. Since I went to school, I have

to learn it. But I am not interested in it because I cant find how useful it

is. Two months ago, there was a new English teacher taught us, I realized that

her teaching method was very different. Before the lesson, she would let us to

listen to the English songs, or sometimes we needed to do role play. It was so

funny for us. We were very interested in the songs. Sometimes we could enjoy the

movie, which just opened my eyes. I saw a different world. I wanted to learn

English well and then search the world.

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篇17:国庆节初中英语

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十月一日正好是国庆节,也就是祖国妈妈的生日。

每当国庆节来临之际,单位的门上挂起了灯笼,甚至上面都插上了彩旗,门上还张贴了“欢度国庆”四个大字。公园、大街小巷的树上都挂了灯笼。街道两边都摆满了五颜六色的鲜花。到处洋溢着节日气氛。

为了迎国庆,我们有的写作,有的画画,并且要从里面选出几个最好的作品贴在后面,办一个国庆专栏,作为送给祖国妈妈的生日礼物。

祝祖国妈妈生日快乐!

October is just the National Day, that is, the mothers mothers birthday.

When the National Day approaching, the unit hung on the door of the lantern, and even above the plug in the banners, the door also posted the "celebrate the National Day" four characters. Park, the streets of the trees are hung with lanterns. Both sides of the street are filled with colorful flowers. Filled with festive atmosphere everywhere.

In order to meet the National Day, we have some writing, some painting, and from the inside to choose a few best works posted in the back, do a national celebration column, as the mothers birthday gift to the motherland.

I wish my mother a happy birthday!

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篇18:初中写可爱的小狗英语

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I had a dog called a gray, because it was a long gray hair, and it was long with a pair of round eyes, and its eyes looked around and seemed to find something. It is always short ears always bowed, I looked like incredibly.

Its temper can be weird, and if it is happy to put the tail up in the barking applause, as if "master owner, today I am very happy, can take me out to play?" This can rely on its mood, if it is Unhappy, no matter how good it is, it is not heard. Remember that once out to play, where the dog will be fast ran over, as if there is very familiar with it, playing a long time, it ran back to me, I took him home.

The dog is very fond of eating meat, it is often the first to eat meat and then eat. He was very cute, once I test it, put the meat under the meal, but it smelled out, in the bark called "master you good or bad ah." I have a dog so that a friend is particularly happy.

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篇19:有关交通英语作文初中

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Many years ago, I saw a science fiction film, which described a future

world. The way people lived was very different. They could drive cars in the

sky. Everything in the future world was so convenient. Since then, I was always

curious about how the future world would become. The fling cars seemed so

ridiculous for now, but thinking about more than 100 years ago, people never

thought about flying in the sky, but now we could take planes and traveled

around the world. Everything was possible. Whats more, the development of

technology is so fast that the world changes so much every ten years. Nowadays,

people can pay the bill online. No matter where they go, a cell phone can solve

most problems. I believe that future transportation will be much efficient and

will surprise us all.

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篇20:初中英语说明文写作要点

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说明文是阐述事物的特征、本质、性能、结构、用途或科学原理的一种文体。其说明的对象可以是具体的,如:自然环境,仪表设备等;也可以是抽象的,如概念定律等。以下是小编整理的初中英语说明文写作要点,欢迎阅读!

说明文的写作相对于论说文来说,有一定的套路可循,因此不是十分复杂。说明科技方面的内容常用定义法、比较对比法、分类法、因果法等;说明自然环境方面的内容常用时间次序法、分类法等。当然,随着对象的不同,具体应该采用的方法也会有所不同。

说明文的写作应该注意的事项有下面几点:

1.语言简明扼要,通俗易懂,避免夸张华丽的辞藻,要把真实的一面展现在读者面前。

2.说明时一定要把握一个中心主题。说明文中细枝末节较多,但不能喧宾夺主。

3.说明的次序非常重要。合理的次序会使文章条理清楚,脉络明晰。因此,练习时可以尝试不同的次序进行写作,找出最合理的一种。

4.由于说明文写实性较强,有时难免会让人感到没有生气。因此,可以适当使用一些比喻、拟人等修辞手段,来增加文章的色彩。

下面是一篇说明一所医院布局的文章。文章虽短,但需要说明的内容却达11处之多。平均一句话就要描写一处,如果组织得不好,便会给人凌乱的感觉。

为了避免这一点,文章把整个布局图分三部分来写:

贯彻医院的是main road,第一部分以大门为参照物,介绍了靠大门且通过main road东西相对的急诊楼和门诊楼。

第二部分以湖为参照物,中心线还是main road,介绍其他分诊楼、实验室、放射室等。

第三部分写main road尽头的建筑物。

这样,繁多的细节显得井井有条。因此,选择好主线及参照物是决定文章成功的关键。

Directions:For this part,you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition about“THE LAYOUT OF A HOSPITAL”. Locate some important departments in the hospital based on the information given below.Your composition should be no less than 120 words.

(1)the Emergency Department

(2)the Out-patient Department

(3)the Surgery Department

(4)the Dispensary

(5)the Physician Department

(6)the Eye,Ear,and Throat Department

(7)the Dental Department

(8)the Laboratory

(9)the X-ray Department

(10)the Administrative Building

(11)the Ward

例文:

The Layout of a Hospital Near the gate,on the westside of the road is the Emergency Department. Opposite the Emergency Department across the Main Road is the Out-patient Department. The building to the southwest of the lake is the Dispensary,which face the Surgery Department lying on the other side of the road.Along the west wall,from south to north,stand three buildings:the Physician Department,the Eye,Ear,and Throat Department,and the Dental Department.

The Laboratory is to the northwest of the round about,and beside the Laboratory,the X-ray Department is located on the same side of the road. A winding road by the lake leads to the Ward.

Near the end of the Main Road,the Administrative Building is situated on the east side.The hospital is nicely and conveniently laid out.

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