求职时的自我介绍范文英语【汇集20篇】

各位考官：

早上好！

大家好！我叫xx，是xx大学xxx专业的学生，我在学校，积极参加各项活动，锻炼了自己的能力。

我能来到这里学习非常高兴，一直以来我都很看好xxx这个行业。随着xx的展，它为xx世纪xxx。后来，我开始对xx产生兴趣，用心钻研，三年的大专就是在不断的培养兴趣，不断的学习进步中度过的。

三年的大专生活有如过眼云烟，一去不返，唯一留下的就是我的知识和技能，现在的我将要走向我所热衷的岗位，面对当今激烈的人才竞争，我很清楚自己知识有限，但我更清楚我有着不甘落后的精神和不断学习、不断提高的愿望。我拥有自己年轻和执着的事业热情，我相信我会做的更好！我需要一个机会，一个展示自己、锻炼自己的机会。再苦再累，我都愿意一试。

自我介绍完毕，谢谢大家！

i come from china.i am 13.i am a lively girl.my name is wang ting,and my english name is linda.i am keen on sports,because it can make me strong.i also like reading book,because i can learn some knowladge.i like reading best.i enjoy it when i was a child,i think it has many attractions.my ambition is to be a teacher in poor mountain region schools,the children there cannot go to school for theyre so poor.they are so clever and lovely,it is really a pity if they cannot go to school.so i want to help them.thank you

[自我介绍初中英语作文

I would like to tell you a secret. I have a great penfriend. We haven’t see each other ever. But we are good friends. We have common interest and always know what each other thinks. We both like reading, watching movies and listening to soft music. If anyone of us find any new books, latest movies or some wonderful music, we will recommend to the other one. And then we will share the feeling after reading, watching or listening. If I have any trouble, I will tell him. And almost everytime he knows the best way to comfort me. If he is upset, I would do the same thing for him.

我想告诉你一个秘密。我有一个很好的笔友。我们彼此都没见面。但我们是好朋友。我们有着共同的兴趣而且总是知道对方的想法。我们都喜欢读书，看电影和听音乐。如果我们中的任何人发现任何新书，新电影或一些美妙的音乐，我们会推荐给另一个。之后我们会分享读后感。如果我碰到什么困难，我都会告诉他。几乎每次他都知道安慰我的最好方法。如果他不高兴，我会为他做同样的事情。

Penguins live around the South Pole. They usually spend all their waking hours in the water. Only during the egg-laying and mating periods do penguins actually live on land. During the egg-laying period, the female penguin lays usually one egg. This egg is kept in a flap of skin, much like a pocket, located near the top of the penguin’s feet. The male and female penguins take turns caring for the egg. After the baby penguin is hatched, its mother takes care of it until it is able to walk. Then it joins the other babies, and the whole group is watched by a few adults.

Penguins commonly are black with black heads and white breasts. Large penguins often stand about 3 feet in height. Since a penguin’s legs are placed far back, it is able to maintain a very erect posture. It is amusing to watch penguins and to see how much the upright birds resemble humans in dress suits walking in a comical fashion.

I have a puppy, and its name is black, it has a black shiny hair, very nice. Its eyes like a large pepper seeds, tilted a curved tail, shake to shake, very fun.

One day, I went out shopping, the little black to the neighbors little sister strolling play, my father at home, if the little sister play tired, you can Give the little black to my father. In the afternoon, I came back, opened the door to see, suddenly stunned! TV open, black lying on the bed in the above sleep, the house a messy, the table on the book scattered, open the page is small Black ink treasure, fruit plate fruit has been bitten, the walls are blue dog paw prints. No! I shouted, toward the study. The door of the study cover, I pushed the door into, really did not I expected, my bottle of hero brand of expensive blue ink sprinkled a table, I saved money to buy 20 yuan copper sets of pen Fell to the ground, the pen tip has been bent. I feel very distressed, and quickly go up and clean up the mess. At this time, the living room came a little black screams, I look out, it was mother locked into the cage, and then with the help of the eyes looked at me, I white it: deserve it!

Black is very naughty. Grandmother 81-year-old birthday that day, our family with a small black to her home to play, to her home, met the sheep and the cow, the lair can be tempted, and it for a while to scratch the hoof, , Full garden everywhere run. We spent a great effort to clean the yard, so my mother and closed it for two months confined. I posted a note on the cage. Do not close the dog!

Black and we have been together for many years, has become an indispensable part of our family. Although he was naughty, but I still like it.

My Sister goes to Taipei First Municipal Girls High School and is in her second year there. This is the best girl high school in the city, and My sister is a very good student. My sister likes Sports. And now she is a member of the school track team. The regular schoolwork and the sports keep my sister very busy and yet very happy. She hopes to be able to go to college when she graduates. She enjoys English which they have nine sessions of one hours class every week she hopes to major in English in the future. Usually she goes to school at six in the morning and in the afternoon she comes home at six, too. After dinner she usually studies until ten oclock or so and then goes to bed. On Saturday afternoons she spends her time at the school track. I think I have a very good sister; she also likes to smile often.

What I expect for city life is not just about drink bars, shopping mall, entertainment center etc, although they are indeed better than the facility in the rural areas. What I expect for city life is a clearer environment, not only in the surroundings but also in peoples spirit. I hope the people around me are all good mannered with politeness and courtesy, there is no quarrel, no battle, people treat each other with respect. I hope there would be no traffic jam as in Beijing our country capital today where traffic jam happened everyday, which make the citizens feel depressed and great pressure.

Nowadays playing computer games is a very common hobbies, especially among young people and teenagers. However there are many arguements on whether computer games are advantageous to people or not.

Although many people doubt the advantages of computer games, if used wisely computer games can actually be used in educational purposes, for example typing games to allow students to learn typing English or Chinese. Also another advantage of computer game is that the games may be played together among friends or family members, which may improve the relationship between family members and allow parents to know more about their children on their hobbies and interests.

However computer games if misused can also have very bad effects on human beings. Firstly spending long time in front of the computer screen will bring to various health problems, such as eye sore, back pain and headache. Also if people spend too much time on computer games rather than the work they should do, for example school work for students and projects and presentations for employees, it may have bad effects on their real life and social life status.

It is true for everything that it is beneficial if used wisely, therefore although computer games are widely said to be bad for people, it can still be used as a good tool if used wisely.

Teachers, students, everybody!

My name is ××, a little boy love reading.

I  have a pair of big eyes, high bridge of the nose, mouth, adults say cherry small mouth, I want to tube size, he still in my eyes, because I like reading the most. My eyes wet, is very good-looking, he is my the window to the soul, in order to protect him, I cant work, for example, when reading a book after I pay attention to the distance of eyes from the book and pay attention to rest in a timely manner. And my hair black, black, like a dark cloud. A mother said: lets hair is the same ah, you are black hair, I am black hair, your father is. Is a family ah. My hair is like eyes, swarthy. Mom and dad said: its nice of your hair. My hair is black and very hard, not only like my personality is straightforward. Im fine to identify, as long as see black hair, big eyes is me. Remember, dont have.

I am a love of making friends. Remember in first grade, wei classmate off an eraser, I helped him pick it up, since then, he would have regarded me as a friend. How, I love to make friends?

My specialty is: drawing and the violin. My ideal is: after be brought up as a painter or a famous violinist. Like me?

Thank you very much!

老师们,同学们,大家好!

我叫××。要想了解我,请往下看。

长着一双大大的眼睛,高鼻梁,嘴嘛,大人都说是樱桃小嘴,我想管他大小呢,还是我的眼睛重要,因为我最喜欢看书了。我的眼睛水灵灵的很好看,他是我心灵的窗户,为了保护他,我可没少下功夫,比如说,在看书时我既注意眼睛离书的距离又注意及时休息。还有我的头发,乌黑乌黑的,像黑黑的云一样。妈妈说:咱们一家头发真是一样呀,你是黑头发,我是黑头发,你爸爸还是。真是一家人呀。我的头发简直跟眼珠一样,黑黝黝的。爸爸妈妈都说:你的头发真好呀。我的头发不仅黑而且很硬,像我的性格一样爽直。我很好辨认,只要看到大眼睛黑头发的就是我。记好了,别找错啊。

我是一个爱交朋友的人。记得在一年级,魏同学掉了一块橡皮,我帮他捡起来,从此,他就把我当成了朋友。怎么样,我是不是爱交朋友呢?

我的特长是:画画和小提琴。我的理想是:长大后当一名画家或著名的小提琴家。喜欢我吗?

谢谢!

介绍自己学习英语的方法(introduced that oneself studies english the method)

now i’m going to share my experience of studying english with all of you.

i shall mention that speaking is the first skill we must learn by heart. the more we speak, the better we understand. and it’s good for you to try to speak well. as a language, english is really useful. so, we should practice it more, not only study for the examinations.

the next question is listening. if you can’t listen well, you won’t be able to understand what others say. perhaps you should do some more listening exercises when you are free, or talk with your teachers and friends in english more. reading after the tapes is also a good idea. in this way, you could try to imitate their pronunciation and improve your listening.

do you often read articles in english? i enjoy it very much. there are many great english storybooks and magazines in the stores. i have been reading the 21st century teens for a long time, and i think this copy of english newspaper is pretty good. if you are interested in them, read by yourself and you will find lots of fun from reading. and one day, you may fall in love with it.

some students may have a serious problem writing compositions. they worry about it but don’t know what to do, for their compositions are short and rambling, and they often make mistakes in grammar. of course, it’s a long process to improve your writing, but it’s not so difficult. for example, i have been keeping diaries in english since eight months ago. on the one hand, you could write more and get more experience in this way; on the other hand, you could express your feelings. isn’t it a good idea to kill two birds with one stone?

well, the most important thing is that you must think out why you study english so hard. i think i shall stress on this problem. don’t think of your test paper and marks now, think about your own life and the future of your homeland. that’s why we study so hard.

nothing is impossible in the world, believe it ,do it !

[介绍自己学习英语的方法作文

我叫周智广，xxxx年7月毕业于阜新工业学校音师专业，9月份被分配到大好农都小学担任语文教学工作xxxx年7月加入中国共产党。xxxx年取得专科学历。xxxx年被聘为学区中心校语文兼职教研员。2007年8月调到镇小工作，现担任教科研副主任职务，主要负责学区中心校时事报道工作，至今在教育网上发表了7篇基层速递。

我能坚持四项基本原则，拥护中国共产党的领导，热爱党的教育事业，坚持贯彻落实党的教育路线和方针政策，以身作则，为人师表，敬业爱岗，乐于奉献，深受校领导及师生的好评。xxxx年5月被评为旗级教学能手，7月代表八仙筒教办参加镇政府组织的党知识问答比赛，获团体第一名，9月被镇政府评为“优秀教师”。 2003年所带班级被评为旗级先进班集体，xxxx年8月在八仙筒镇保持共产党员先进性教育活动“我为党旗添光彩”演讲比赛中获一等奖，之后代表镇政府参加旗委组织的演讲比赛获优胜奖。xxxx年6月参加旗教育局组织的庆祝建党八十五周年“知荣辱，树新风”演讲比赛获得二等奖。xxxx年9月被镇政府评为优秀教育工作者，本人担任的四年级语文教学在全镇质量检测中获得第一名。

我爱好文艺，曾参与过八仙筒孟家段那达慕大会，与40人一起为大会起舞助兴，参与过奈曼广场文化周活动，并和两位老师演唱了歌曲《为内蒙古喝彩》。

我就是这样一个普普通通的教师，我的内在就像我的外表一样，敦厚和实在是我对自己最好的概括。我不飘，不浮，不躁，不懒。我内心充实，物质享乐和精神刺激都不是我的嗜好。我待人诚实，从没有花言巧语，但真诚和厚道使我总能赢得朋友的信赖。我专业扎实，做事踏实，再小的事情我也要一丝不苟地完成。我希望我能默默无闻地、悄无声息地给我的团队装一点点绿色。

请您相信我，给我一个机会，我一定用我的实际能力给你带来惊喜。

Good afternoon everyone, my name is XXX, I’m 29 years old, and I’m from Beijing.

I’d like to introduce myself through the next points:

About working: There are three main aspects of my daily work:

The first, I teach courses such as basic laws and politics. I can feel the strong responsibilities on a teacher, because I have to not only teach knowledge well, but also let students know how to be a good person.

The second, I’m responsible for some administrative work, such as students recruiting and employment. The main majors in our college are urban metro, car repairing, transportation management, logistics and so on.

I think the students recruiting and employment are very important to our college as well as to students and their parents, the serious working attitude and consciousness are highly required.

The third part of my daily work is to be a head teacher, there is an idea I respect very much: there is no bad students, but only bad teachers. If a family is a component of our society, then the class is a component of the school.

When we judge a class good or bad, the key ruler is the organization and management ability of a head teacher, as well as the good working attitude and teaching methods. A head teacher is the pathfinder on the way of students growing, as a young teacher, I’ll try my best to be an excellent head teacher.

About daily life: I have a wide range of hobbies, especially sports and reading.

Sport: We have very good sports facilities in our college, I play badminton every Tuesday, and play basketball every Friday. I think that sports is the best flavor of our life, it can release the pressure and relax our mood.

Reading: I have good reading habits since I was a child, I like the famous four classic very much, and I’m also interested in some biography and news commentaries. I think books can help people being mature, they affect me gradually.

And of course, I have the confused moment, but I think the difficulties can help me grow. Thank you.

My name is ****. I’m eight. I’m in Class two, Grade Three from **** First Primary school. I’m a lovely girl.

我的名字叫****。我八岁。我在***第一小学上三年级二班。我是一个可爱的小女孩。I have many hobbies. I like drawing, Playing the zither, and dancing. Look, this is my

painting. This is my school. This is classroom. This is my English teacher. And this is me. I’m a pupil.

我有很多爱好。弹古筝,我喜欢画画和跳舞。看,这是我的画。这是我的学校。这是教室。这是我的英语老师。这是我。我是一个学生。

I like English very much. I believe I can fly.

我非常喜欢英语。我相信我能飞。

I won’t let you down. Do you remember meI’m ****

我不会让你失望的。你还记得我吗我****。

That’s all. Thank you.

这是所有。谢谢你!

I am ****. Usually a lot of my hobbies, such as skating, playing 356 Didesmococcus feather, draw, watch extra-curricular book, watch TV and so on, so my life is very rich extra-curricular. Ago is a more introverted person, I have very few words, only and I am very good friends to so many before, but after school at the time of my personality to change slowly, and not, as previously Like very few words, and students are also very harmonious relationship.

In fact, since childhood I dare not interested in English, so my English very poor, then let us hear English, introduce myself, I really do not know how to do, nervous for some time, so I think in the future of English class can have more understanding of English can have more interest in English. Families are. Usually a lot of my hobbies, such as skating, playing 356 Didesmococcus feather, draw, watch extra-curricular book, watch TV and so on, so my life is very rich extra-curricular. Ago is a more introverted person, I have very few words, only and I am very good friends to so many before, but after school at the time of my personality to change slowly, and not, as previously Like very few words, and students are also very harmonious relationship.

I think noting is difficult if you put your heart into it,so I can say will make my English be nice in future.

Thank you！

Good morning, everyone! I am glad to be here to introduce myself. 各位早上好，很高兴在这里介绍自己。 Although this is my first time to introduce myself in English, but I believe that I can make a good

performance . and hope that through this simple introduction, you can

remember my name ，remember my face and i believe that we will become friends in no distant future。 虽然这是我第一次用这种方式介绍自己，但是我相信我会有个良好的表现。希望通过这 个简单的介绍，更多的人们能认识我，记住我的样子。也同样相信我们不久有机会会成为朋 友。 My name is TB and I am 24 years old, born in HEBEI province. I graduated from QinGdao University. My major is Hotel Managerment. I spend most of my time on study and I’ve acquired basic knowledge of my major. It is my long cherished dream to be an manager in hotel and I am eager to get an opportunity to fully play my ability. 我叫 tb，24 岁。河北人。毕业于青岛岛大学。所学的专业是旅游管理。上学期间努力 学习专业知识，现在我同样希望能有机会实现我做酒店管理的愿望，充分发挥自己的专业能 力。 In addition to the above-mentioned , in my spare time I like playing badminton, listening to pop music and surfing the Internet. Playing badminton can exercise my body, let me have more perseverance. Listen to music can make me relax, make me more confident. Internet can eich my knowledge, so that I have more experience. 除了上面说到的，在我的业余时间，我喜欢打羽毛球， 听流行音乐和上网冲浪。打羽毛球可以锻炼我的身体，让我有更多的毅力。听音乐可以让我 放松，让我更有信心。互联网可以丰富我的知识，扩充更多的知识。 ok .Thats a little about myself，thank you 好，那就是关于我的简单介绍。谢谢。

导语：一般到了新的班级我们都会进行一次自我介绍，下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的英语作文，欢迎阅读与借鉴，谢谢!

Hello，everyone!

My name is Winnie.Im a 15 years old girl. I live in the beautiful city of Rizhao.

Im an active，lovely and clever girl.In the school，my favourite subject is maths.Perhaps someone thinks its difficult to study well.But I like it.I belive that if you try your best，everything can be done well.

I also like sports very much.Such as，running，volleyball and so on.

Im kind-hearted. If you need help，please come to me .

I hope we can be good friends!

OK.This is me .A sunny girl.

【参考译文】

大家好!

我的名字是温妮。我一个15岁的女孩。我住在美丽的城市日照。

我一个活跃的,可爱的,聪明的女孩。在学校,我最喜欢的科目是数学。也许有人认为很难学好。但我喜欢它。我相信如果你尽你最大的努力,一切都可以做得很好。

我也非常喜欢运动。例如,跑步、排球等等

我善良。如果你需要帮助,请到我这里来。

我希望我们能成为好朋友!

好吧。这就是我。一个阳光明媚的女孩。

“I have a dream that one day this nation will rise up and live out the true meaning of its creed:"We hold these truths to be self-evident:that all men are created equal."

Mr.Kings dream of all men created equal is mine too.When I hear his speech,I come to know thatI have the same dream that people should work together and live together like brothers.Nobody will take advantage of others,with less work but more income.But no,Mr Kings dream remains as a dream even after so many decades since he left us.Look,people who have more houses want to keep them all for themselves,although there are so many people who do not even have a room to stay in.On the other hand,many people ,who have nothing,do not want to work harder to earn something on their own.They just complain that all men are not created equal.

So,if we look close at human beings,we will realize that Mr.Kings dream will be a dream for a long,long time.Still,I admire him because at least he has a great dream,which is leading many people to treat others better.

My name is xxx. I was born in (Dalian, Liaoning )xxx province in February 1994. I am average height, medium build.(我中等身高，不胖不瘦)I have long black hair and I wear a pear of glasses. I usually wear a red coat and a black trousers.Bcause my favourite colours are black and red .My father is a worker,and he works very hard .My mother is an Enlish teacher ,and she is kind to her students. I have a small room .There is a bed and a desk in it . The main subjects I studied at school included Chinese, maths, English, physics, chemistry and computer.I have many haobbis ,for example, I like English and computer best and I am very good at them. Last year I won a prize in the school computer competition. In my spare time I enjoy listening to popular music and collecting stamps. My favorite sports are swimming in summer and skating in winter. That is me ,a lovely girl.

My plan for the future is that I would like to stay with children and share the moments in their lives and provide them with helpful advice, making friends with them and letting them feel you are the one they can talk and trust. I like English very much.with this idea, I want to combine my love for children with my ability of English together,so I can work in a pleasant environment doing the great things I enjoy doing.

I consider myself with rich potential of qualifying out as a good English teacher.I have a heart for children,a loving and caring heart.And I would certainly place it upon my students,being their close friend and sister.while with my creative and relaxing English teaching method,students would learn English through interacting with me or the others instead of being told what to say. I am also very open-minded and easy-going,which will make myself a popular figure everywhere.And of course I am very much the type of the girl next door.always willing to take in suggestions and create a fun classroom for our next generation.

I believe Ive said quite enough of myself. I hope you now know more about me than just now. I would certainly cherish this job and get along very well with all people out here.I thank you very much again for giving me this opportunity to talk with you.

I am looking forward to hearing good news from you.

Thank you !

[教师求职英语自我介绍

导读：自我介绍是每一个职场中人都必然要经历的一件事情，只不过，有的人一年用不上几次，而有的人则一个星期可能需要做N次。众所周知，自我介绍是日常工作中与陌生人建立关系、打开局面的一种非常重要的手段，因此，让自己通过自我介绍或得到对方的认识甚至认可，一种非常重要的职场技术。

个人单独面试基本上都是从开场问候开始，开场问候很重要，它有可能决定整个面试的基调，求职自我介绍。开场问候是给面试考官的第一印象，从言谈举止到穿着打扮将直接影响到你被录取的机会。进门应该面带微笑，但不要谄媚。话不要多，称呼一声“老师好”就足够，声音要足够洪亮，底气要足，语速自然，总之彬彬有礼而大方得体，不要过分殷勤，也不要拘谨或过分谦让。

接下来就是面试自我介绍；面试中一般都会要求考生先做简单的自我介绍，自我介绍的时间一般为2-3分钟左右。自我介绍是很好的表现机会，应把握以下几个要点：首先，要突出个人的优点和特长，并要有相当的可信度。特别是具有实际管理经验的要突出自己在管理方面的优势，最好是通过自己做过什么项目这样的方式来验证一下；其次，要展示个性，使个人形象鲜明，可以适当引用别人的言论，如老师、朋友等的评论来支持自己的描述；第三，不可夸张，坚持以事实说话，少用虚词、感叹词之类；最后，要符合常规，介绍的内容和层次应合理、有序地展开。最后，要符合逻辑，介绍时应层次分明、重点突出，使自己的优势很自然地逐步显露，不要一上来就急于罗列自己的优点。

有一个笔试分很低，并且只有4年工作经验的考生被录取，其中一份6易其稿的个人介绍底稿起了关键的作用，因为在将近25分钟的面试时间里，面试老师的提问都是围绕着您个人介绍以及基于这个介绍制作的一个ppt图进行的。现整理该底稿如下，仅供大家参考：

《自我介绍的概要》

各位老师好，我叫邓小群，1998年毕业于哈尔滨工业大学，同年分配到北京工作，现在就职一家外企亿书堂公司市场部部门经理。

(下面我想从两个方面介绍一下我自己。)

工作业绩：

1：1998年7月分配到北京*****公司重点实验室；

1999年4月作为首席代表组建并运作上海办事处，一年就为公司实现了***万销售业绩，自我介绍《求职自我介绍》。

2：XX年5月加入******公司，在市场部任商务经理，带领sales人员，推动中小企业的网站建设。

3：XX年元月份，加盟美资企业亿书堂科技发展有限公司，任职市场部部门经理，主要负责培养销售团队，带领我的客户经理人及销售人员推广我们的软件系统。

其中最大的成绩：

在亿书堂公司，作为市场部部门经理，带领客户经理，面对包括北大方正等竞争对手，最终将我们的软件系统与惠普、康柏、恒基伟业四大随身电脑硬件平台捆绑成功！使我们的软件成为该行业的一种标准！

(实例：去年华纳与联想fm365合并后，由于我们的成功，他们希望收购我们公司，为此我们还专门给联想总裁柳传志做了一场融资报告，其中的产品竞争对手分析以及未来市场预测两部分就是我负责的！)

个人的几个特点：

在个人求职自我介绍中有几点值得读者来探讨体会的：

是你需要深造还是你值得名校录取？

自我介绍必须非常简洁地回答清楚这样一个问题“我需要得到来名校来深造的机会，同时我也值得北大选择我”。很多同学的介绍里都急切地表明无论从哪个方面讲都到了急需充电，急需到最高学府深造，往往都忽略了前面这个问题。记得在参加265-269分段第一次面试时，王教授就曾直接问过我：“你们都需要到北大来，可是北大今年只有260个招生名额，能否谈谈北大为什么要选择你，你有哪些工作业绩，有哪些潜质？”北大的招生原则就是宁缺勿滥，北大希望录取的考生是全国最具有管理潜质的青年。所以介绍的核心是你值得学校录取，而不是你需要深造！

重在个人经历介绍还是个人品质和能力？

在写自我介绍前，要静下心来想一想，自己这些年的所有发生的事情，从十年寒窗到每一年的工作经历，自己到底拥有哪些优秀的品质，哪些事情反映了这些品质；在本章第一节的自我分析一定要当作一个重要的事情去做。

自我介绍要用事实说话，切忌使用含糊的字眼，要知道主考老师都是有很强的辨别能力，比如：你的第一学位学校在很大程度上反映你学习新知识的能力，你在很短的时间内被提拔为部门经理在很大程度上反映你工作方面的能力。所以在写自我介绍时候要用个人的经历来证明自己的品质和能力！

露出马脚还是流下伏笔？

作为考官都有很强的鉴别能力，对你面试中的表现出的不严密的地方，能够很快感觉到，从而进一步提问，很多考生就乱了阵脚。漏洞更多。其实自我介绍对突出业绩的介绍要精炼，要点到为止，必要的时候要为主考官设置一些案例伏笔，引起主考官对你进行提问，然后你才将早已准备的内容娓娓道来。

Good morning/afternoon. It is really my honor to have this opportunity for a interview. I hope I can make a good performance today.My name is xx. I am 20 years old，born in a little village in Southern Zhejiang. My parents are farmers,and I am the only child. Though not well-to-do，the family always be hopeful. My major is engineering technology. I will graduate in July，20xx.

I have some hobbies like listening to music，swimming，and especially seeing western movies. In the passed two years，I have learned some practical skills and gained some major certificates. I paid more attention to learn Engling，and I have passed CET4 in my efforts. I am looking forward to becoming a member of your company . Thankyou！