高考英语作文利弊分析通用20篇

导语：小编就高考英语广东卷写作题将由基础写作(满分15分)和任务型写作(满分25分)两节组成。为了更有效地备考基础写作题，需要搞清楚基础写作题的特点和对考生写作能力的要求。本文将探讨这两个方面的问题，并对备考给出一些建议，供考生参考。

一、基础写作题的特点

高考设置基础写作题目的目的是要检测考生最基础的书面语言表达能力，如用词的合理性、句子结构的复杂度、语法运用的正确性、信息内容的完整性、句子之间的连贯性等。因此，基础写作题与往年的书面表达依然会有很多相似点，但也会出现一些新的特点。

1. 写作题材贴近考生的学习和生活。历年来高考作文题的题材都非常贴近考生的学习和生活，如校园活动、校外见闻、交友、旅游，和考生有关的话题讨论等。可以预料明年高考写作题的题材还会在这些范围之内，并为所有所考所熟悉。

2. 写作的体裁主要是故事性描述和应用文。基础写作题的体裁主要有故事性描写和应用文写作两大类。命题形式可能是看图写故事、看图表说明、根据表格信息完成一封短信或一份通知这类的应用文等。

3. 内容呈现的方式具有半封闭性。作文试题逐步走向开放将是大势所趋。但是，基础写作题还只能是半封闭的，其特点是写作的内容是被规定了的，考生必须将文章所规定的信息点完整、全面地表达出来，但对于语言表达的方式、信息组织的先后秩序、需要补充哪些必要的信息等，考生又有一定的自主构思空间。

4. 用5句话表达。这是基础写作题与往年书面表达题最显著的不同点。往年是规定字数(100词左右)，句子的数量不作规定，所以很多考生为了不犯句法错误总是用一些简单句。而基础写作只能用5句话来表达题目所给的全部信息点，但所给的信息点与往年的书面表达相比并不会减少，所以，用5个简单句很难完成任务，必须使用复合句或并列句来综合多个信息点，而且还要照顾句子之间的衔接和语意上的连贯。从这一点来说，基础写作题对考生运用语言能力的要求大大提高了。

二、基础写作题提出的新要求

由基础写作题的特点可以看出，它对考生提出了一些新的要求。

1. 信息组织能力。笔者认为，信息组织能力包括信息归类、信息排列和信息表达三个环节。对于题目所提供的各种信息点，考生首先需要依照一定的标准将信息进行归类，并初步计划将哪些信息放到同一个句子中;其次是将信息进行合理的排列，排列必须依照一定的标准，如时间顺序、空间顺序、因果关系、递进关系等;第三是选择信息表达的秩序，确定句子之间的先后关系，这既要考虑语法上能否衔接，还要考虑语意上的连贯。在组织信息的过程中，还要对某些信息进行必要的增删，使文章意思连贯、语言畅通、逻辑严密。

2. 运用复杂句子的能力。在整理和归类信息点之后，就需要正确地使用比较复杂的句子，综合地表达信息。复杂句子主要有三类：

第一类是复合句，包括含有名词性从句的复合句，含有定语从句的复合句，含有状语从句的复合句。

第二类是并列句，包括具有递进关系的并列句， 如由and，then，besides，in addition, furthermore，moreover, what’s more等连接的并列句，具有转折关系的并列句，如由but，however，on the contrary, after all等连接的并列句，具有平行选择关系的并列句，如由both…and…，as well as，as well，neither…nor…or，either…or…，not only…but also…等连接的并列句。

第三类是一些特殊句型，如使用强调句、倒装句、含有with复合结构的句子、there be开头的句子、以形式主语it开头的句子等。

正确地使用各种句型，不仅能够完成题目所要求的任务，还能使文章的句式变得丰富、行文更加流畅、中心和主旨更加突出。

三、基础写作题的备考策略

在基础写作的备考过程中，一方面要重视养成一些良好的写作习惯，如认真审题、巧妙构思、常写草稿、工整誊写、仔细核对等好习惯，另一方面在组织信息和训练复杂句子结构方面要多下些功夫。下面我们以“广东省普通高等学校招生全国统一考试广东省英语科考试说明”中的样题为例，探讨如何备考基础写作题。

第一节：基础写作(共1小题，满分15分)

假设你最近参加了由某电视台举办的中考生英语演讲比赛并获奖，该台准备组织获奖者去北京参加一次英语夏令营活动，下表是这次活动的时间安排和活动内容。

活动时间

7月15日-22日或8月15日-22日

活动内容

参加英语角 学唱英语歌曲

听英语讲座 表演英语短剧

看英语电影 教外宾学中文

【写作内容】

电视台现就活动时间和活动内容征求你的意见。请按照以下要求用英语以书信形式给予答复。

1. 选择适合你的时间并说明理由;

2. 解释你只能参加其中的两项活动(听英语讲座和教外宾学中文)，虽然你认为所有的活动都很有意义;

3. 说明你选择的理由：听英语讲座了解英美文化的信息;教外宾学中文因为2008北京奥运让越来越多的外宾想了解中国。

【写作要求】

1. 必须使用5个句子表达全部的内容

2. 信的开头和结尾已给出。

Dear Sir or Madame,

I’m glad to be invited to the English summer camp.

Thank you very much.

Yours truly,

Li Ping

【评分标准】

句子结构的准确性和复杂度;信息内容的完整性和连贯性。

由此我们可以看出，信息点的数量与往年的书面表达题相比并没有减少，要想用5个句子把所有的信息都表达出来，考生必须从以下三个方面进行备考：

1. 养成重视审题的习惯。虽然基础写作题是半封闭性的，但审题仍然十分重要。现以样题为例，谈谈如何审题：

思考的问题

样题分析

要写的文章主题是什么?(topic)

参加夏令营。

为什么要写这篇文章?(purpose)

电视台邀请参加夏令营，写信回复

要写文章的信息点有哪些?(information items)

选择的时间、参加活动的内容、解释为什么。

怎样安排信息点的逻辑顺序?(order)

说明要参加的活动并解释原因—→说明要参加的时间并解释原因。

动作是什么时候发生的(时态)?(when)

夏令营还没有开始，文章主要用一般将来时。

2. 提高组织信息的能力。组织信息的过程包括信息分类、信息排列和信息表达三个环节。这些步骤看起来好像很繁琐，但对于中下成绩的考生来说，一步一步地思考这些问题是很有必要的。现以样题为例，说明该怎样组织信息。

信息分类

信息排列

信息表达

时间信息：两个时间段。

内容信息：6项活动。

选择信息：其中的两个活动及其理由。

夏令营的内容信息点排列：可以将自己要参加的两项活动放在前面，其它信息点可以略写。

作者的选择信息点排列：依照自己所参与的活动顺序逐项表述，紧接着给出选择的理由。

结合已经给出的头和尾，写作的顺序可安排如下：

很高兴被邀请(已给出)——感谢安排这么多的活动——说明活动的意义——表达自己只能参加两项活动的遗憾和原因——说明参加的活动内容及原因(两项活动用两句话)——说明自己选择的时间及原因。

3. 夯实基础，掌握基本的句子结构及其用法。对于大多数考生来说，用词不准和句子结构错误是写作失分的“罪魁祸首”。夯实基础、掌握基本的句子结构及其用法是基础写作备考的主要任务，完成这项任务可以分步骤进行：

第一步：练习写简单句，练就写简单句基本不犯语言错误的“真功”。简单句大体上可以分为两个基本类型，考生必须掌握：“主语+谓语+(其它成分)”“主语+系动词+表语”。

第二步：练习运用复杂句。要提高运用复杂句的能力，考生必须要攻克三个易错点：一是主句与从句之间主谓结构混乱，造成主句缺谓语;二是没有掌握关联词的用法，错用、多用、漏用关联词;三是该使用简单句的地方人为地复杂化，如可以用分词或介词短语来表达的，却偏要用从句。

下面以样题为例，介绍笔者是如何思考写这篇文章的(为了分析方便，笔者将5个句子进行编号)，仅供参考：

Dear Sir or Madam,

I’m glad to be invited to the English summer camp. ①Thank you very much for arranging so many activities, such as English corner, English lectures, English films, English songs, English plays and helping foreigners learn Chinese. ②I am sure all the activities will do a lot of good to us students. ③But it’s a pity that I can only take part in two of them, because I will have to spend some time in doing my research project. ④I would like to listen to the lectures, by which I will learn more about western culture, and help foreigners learn Chinese, as more and more foreigners want to know about China and the 2008 Beijing Olympic Games.

⑤I want to see my grandparents in the country right after our school finishes in mid-July, so I am going to attend the camp from August 15th to 22nd.

Thank you very much.

Yours truly,

Li Ping

第①句顺应已给出的句中的glad心情，表示感谢安排这么多的活动，具有较好的连贯性。同时很自然地将活动内容做一介绍。

第②句用简单句表达活动的意义，语意上连贯，句式上没有继续用“长”句，有变化。

第③句用but转折并用it’s a pity 句型表示委婉的歉意，然后解释原因。

第④句用一个长句子表达自己要参加的两个项目，并解释原因，解释原因的第一句用定语从句，第二句用状语从句，使句子结构富于变化。

第⑤句解释参加的时间并给出解释。之所以把时间放在后面，主要是考虑它与题目已经给出的句子之间在语意上的连贯性不够。

假设你是李华，你的英国网友Peter希望了解一下我国高考英语试卷（NMET）中的“短

文改错”（Error Correction）题型的情况。请你写一封回复邮件。并特别强调自己某一次因为没有严格按照要求答题被扣掉了本可得到的7分。

注意：1．词数100左右

2．内容请参照本卷该大题内容。

3．生词：（打）勾：tick 分：point 逻辑（的）：logic

Hi, Peter:

Thanks for your e-mail. Here I’m going to tell you what you asked about.

Error Correction, as the 1st section of Written Part of NMET, mainly tests the mastery of the use of words and grammar of English. The understanding of the given text is course important to the performance.

There are 10 numbered lines, each of which may have one mistake. You have to decide firstly whether there is a mistake or not. If not, put a tick in the numbered blank. If there is a mistake, you may have to add a word, cross out a word, or change word. You have to find out the mistakes in the use of words and/or grammar. Sometimes there may be a logic problem, which would be the most difficult.

Last time I got 7 points less than expected. Why? I didn’t put the answers strictly following the rule, although I did know how to do it.

Anything still unclear? Just write to me.

嗨，彼得：

谢谢你的邮件。在这里我要告诉你，你问。

误差校正，作为高考英语笔试部分第一部分，主要测试词汇和语法的掌握英语的使用。对文本的理解是很重要的。

一共有10株，其中可能有一个错误。首先你要确定是否有错误。如果没有，空格的空白。如果有一个错误，你可以添加一个词，划掉一个字，或改变的话。你要找到的词语或语法错误使用。有时可能会有一个逻辑问题，这将是最困难的。

上次我得了7分，比预期的少。为什么？我没有把答案的严格规则，虽然我不知道如何去做。

还不清楚什么呢？就给我写信。

Dear Mr. Smith ,

I am Lihua ,chairman of the student union , from chenguang high schoo. I am

very pleased to learn that you are coming to visit our school on June 26. I am

writing to tell you what we have arranged for you.

In the morning , there will be a forum in the school auditorium , where

visitors and students from our school communicate with each other ,talking about

school life and cultural differences . At noon, you are invited to have lunch in

our school cafeteria with students from our school. You can taste dumplings

,noodles and other Chinese foods .In the afternoon, the students in our school

will show you around the HaiHe river .

How do you like the arrangements ? I hope you will have a nice time in Tian

jing

Yours sincerely ,

Li Hua

The Memory About College Entrance Exam

The college entrance exam is a big exam for students, they have learned so many years for the purpose of entering the college. For most person, they have the very deep impression about the big exam, it has changes so many people’s destinies. I had taken part in the exam, I remember it clearly, the situation just like happened yesterday. I studied so hard, in those days that were nearing the exam, all the students focus their attention on the study, we fought together. The paper and the books were piled up our desks, when I entered the classroom, I hardly could see my classmates’ heads. Though it was the tough days for us, we felt happy, because we fought for our future, we believe what we do will bring us a promising future. These memories will linger on my mind forever.

高考对于学生来说是一个大的考试，他们已经学了那么多年，目的是考上大学。对于大部分人来说，他们对于这个重大的考试有很深的印象，它改变了很多人的命运。我已经参加了高考，我能清楚地记得它，那情形就像发生在昨天。我很努力学习，在那些接近考试的日子，所有的学生都集中他们的精力来学习，我们一起奋斗。那些书本和试卷堆满了我们的桌子，当我今日教室时，我几乎看不到同学的头。虽然那些日子很艰苦，但是我们觉得很开心，因为我们为未来奋斗，我们相信所做的会让我们的将来更加的明朗。这些记忆将永存在我的脑海里

[难忘的高考记忆英语作文

一.开头句型

1.As far as ...is concerned 就……而言

2.It goes without saying that... 不言而喻，...

3.It can be said with certainty that... 可以肯定地说......

4.As the proverb says， 正如谚语所说的，

5.It has to be noticed that... 它必须注意到，...

6.Its generally recognized that... 它普遍认为...

7.Its likely that ... 这可能是因为...

8.Its hardly that... 这是很难的......

9.Its hardly too much to say that... 它几乎没有太多的说…

10.What calls for special attention is that...需要特别注意的是

11.Theres no denying the fact that...毫无疑问，无可否认

12.Nothing is more important than the fact that... 没有什么比这更重要的是…

13.whats far more important is that... 更重要的是…

二.衔接句型

1.A case in point is ... 一个典型的例子是...

2.As is often the case...由于通常情况下...

3.As stated in the previous paragraph 如前段所述

4.But the problem is not so simple. Therefore 然而问题并非如此简单，所以……

5.But its a pity that... 但遗憾的是…

6.For all that...对于这一切...... In spite of the fact that...尽管事实......

7.Further, we hold opinion that... 此外，我们坚持认为，...

8.However , the difficulty lies in...然而，困难在于…

9.Similarly, we should pay attention to... 同样，我们要注意...

10.not(that)...but(that)...不是，而是

11.In view of the present station.鉴于目前形势

12.As has been mentioned above...正如上面所提到的…

13.In this respect, we may as well (say) 从这个角度上我们可以说

14.However, we have to look at the other side of the coin, that is... 然而我们还得看到事物的另一方面，即 …

三.结尾句型

1.I will conclude by saying... 最后我要说…

2.Therefore, we have the reason to believe that...因此，我们有理由相信…

3.All things considered,总而言之 It may be safely said that...它可以有把握地说......

4.Therefore, in my opinion, its more advisable...因此，在我看来，更可取的是…

5.From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that….通过以上讨论，我们可以得出结论…

6.The data/statistics/figures lead us to the conclusion that….通过数据我们得到的结论是，....

7.It can be concluded from the discussion that...从中我们可以得出这样的结论

8.From my point of view, it would be better if...在我看来……也许更好

四.举例句型

1.Lets take...to illustrate this.2.lets take the above chart as an example to illustrate this.3. Here is one more example. 4.Take … for example. 5.The same is true of….6.This offers a typical instance of….7.We may quote a common example of….8.Just think of….

五.常用于引言段的句型

1. Some people think that …. 有些人认为…To be frank, I can not agree with their opinion for the reasons below. 坦率地说，我不能同意他们的意见，理由如下。

2. For years, … has been seen as …, but things are quite different now.多年来，……一直被视为……，但今天的情况有很大的不同。

3. I believe the title statement is valid because…. 我认为这个论点是正确的，因为…

4. I cannot entirely agree with the idea that ….我无法完全同意这一观点的… I believe….

5. My argument for this view goes as follows.我对这个问题的看法如下。

6. Along with the development of…, more and more….随着……的发展，越来越多…

7. There is a long-running debate as to whether….有一个长期运行的辩论，是否…

8. It is commonly/generally/widely/ believed /held/accepted/recognized that….它通常是认为…

9. As far as I am concerned, I completely agree with the former/ the latter.就我而言，我完全同意前者/后者。

10. Before giving my opinion, I think it is essential to look at the argument of both sides.在给出我的观点之前，我想有必要看看双方的论据。

六 表示比较和对比的常用句型和表达法

1. A is completely / totally / entirely different from B.2. A and B are different in some/every way / respect / aspect.3. A and B differ in…. 4. A differs from B in….5. The difference between A and B is/lies in/exists in….6. Compared with/In contrast to/Unlike A, B….7. A…, on the other hand,/in contrast,/while/whereas B….8. While it is generally believed that A …, I believe B….9. Despite their similarities, A and B are also different.10. Both A and B …. However, A…; on the other hand, B….11. The most striking difference is that A…, while B….

七 演绎法常用的句型

1. There are several reasons for…, but in general, they come down to three major ones.有几个原因……，但一般，他们可以归结为三个主要的。

2. There are many factors that may account for…, but the following are the most typical ones.有许多因素可能占...，但以下是最典型的。

3. Many ways can contribute to solving this problem, but the following ones may be most effective.有很多方法可以解决这个问题，但下面的可能是最有效的。

4. Generally, the advantages can be listed as follows.一般来说，这些优势可以列举如下。

5. The reasons are as follows.

八 因果推理法常用句型

1.Because/Since we read the book, we have learned a lot. 2. If we read the book, we would learn a lot. 3. We read the book; as a result / therefore / thus / hence / consequently / for this reason / because of this, weve learned a lot. 4. As a result of /Because of/Due to/Owing to reading the book, weve learned a lot. 由于阅读这本书，我们已经学到了很多。

5. The cause of/reason for/overweight is eating too much.6.Overweight is caused by/due to/because of eating too much.7. The effect/consequence/result of eating too much is overweight. 8. Eating too much causes/results in/leads to overweight. 吃太多导致超重。

Examination is the most familiar word to the students for we all need to face it. Each existence has its own reason. The exam which has existed for long time also has its advantages. Firstly, it can check how much or how hard you learned in this period of time. This can make you learn more about the study situation of yourself. Secondly, you can see some defects via the exam. Then you can decide how to correct them.

Meanwhile, exam also has some disadvantages. Some schools take too much exam even makes it as a burden to the students. If teachers and parents regard the exam as the most important thing, the students would feel stressful. These maybes lead to cheating.

So, we should take the appropriate attitude towards the examination. If everyone does so, exams will no more scare.

Fast-food is becoming more and more popular in China, especially among children, teenagers and white-collars.

快餐在中国越来越流行，尤其在小孩子，年轻人和白领这些人群中。

There are several reasons for its popularity. First, its so convenient that saves a lot of time. Your just need to go into a fast-food restaurant, order your food, and your food is ready in time. Second, you can have many choices, various collocations of food. And you can eat it there or take it away. Third, the environment of fast-food restaurants is both clean and comfortable.

有很多理由可以解释它兴起的原因，首先，它很方便，能节省很多时间。你只需进入一家快餐店，然后点餐，你的食物就会按时送上来。其次，你有多种选择，他们提供各种各样的食物。你可以选择在那吃或带走。第三，快餐店的环境相对干净又舒适。

However, in terns of nutrition, it is usually not a balanced diet and low in nutritional value. Usually, fast-food is rich in sugar, so that regularly eat fast-food may cause obesity.

然而，从营养方面讲，快餐没有提供平衡的饮食，营养价值也很低。通常，快餐都是高糖的，所以经常吃快餐会导致肥胖。

Fast-food is only a good choice when you are in a hurry and turn to it once in a while. But for people, especially children, eat fast-food as little as possible.

当你时间比较赶时，偶尔吃一次快餐，还是不错的选择。但人们还是得尽量少吃，尤其是孩子。

导语：做一个诚实可靠的人会让别人相信你，这会给你带来很多好处，给你机会，下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的相关优秀英语作文，欢迎阅读与借鉴，谢谢!

Almost all of us heard the story "Here Comes the Wolf" when we were little kids. What we can learn from the story is that we must be honest. However, therere lots of phenomena of dishonesty nowadays.

Being dishonest does great harm not only to other people but also to yourself. Take the case of fake milk powder for example. After drinking this kind of milk, the babies had big heads while their legs and arms were still thin, which badly affected their health. To our great relief, the producers got accused and punished for all the serious consequences in the end.

Having the reputation of being honest and reliable will make other people trust you, which will provide you many benefits and give you opportunities that others may not get. Being honest, you will find it easier to cooperate with others and people will be friendly to you and support you. In a sense, if life is a longjourney, honesty will be the backpack that should be taken along all the way.

Lets pick up our "backpack" -- honesty, and start the wonderful journey!

【参考翻译】

几乎所有的人都听过这个故事：“狼来了”，当我们小的时候。我们可以从这个故事中得到的东西是我们必须诚实。然而，现在有很多不诚实的现象。

不诚实不仅对别人有害，而且对你自己也有很大的危害。以假奶粉为例。喝了这种牛奶后，婴儿的腿和胳膊仍然很瘦，他们的健康状况很差，他们的健康状况很严重。我们的杰出的救济，生产者有指责和受到惩罚的结束所有的严重后果。

做一个诚实可靠的人会让别人相信你，这会给你带来很多好处，给你机会。诚实，你会发现很容易与他人合作，人们会对你友好和支持你。从某种意义上说，如果人生是长途旅行，诚实将要采取的路上背包。

让我们拿起我们的“背包”-诚实，并开始精彩旅程!

相关标签: 真诚Sincere 重要Important

“灿烂星空，谁是真的英雄?”做出惊天动地业绩的人是英雄，为追求真理献出生命的人是英雄，在平凡岗位上默默奉献的人是英雄……

一．Dr Norman Bethune

1．Nationality(国籍): Canada

2．Hobby: taking photos

3．Main stories: saved a lot of Chinese people; opened hospitals; invented medical tools

二．Liu Xiang

1．Nationality: China

2．Hobby: singing

3．Main stories: won the first

4．Olympic gold medal in the men s 110m hurdles event in Athens; set a world record in the same event in Lausanne

从上面信息卡中选择一位英雄，以The Hero in My Heart为题写一篇短文。

要求：① 包含所选信息卡上的内容；② 适当拓展，如学英雄的感想、行动等；③ 不能出现表明你身份的信息；④ 词数80左右，不含已给出部分。

The Hero in My Heart

As we know, most people have heroes in their hearts. Forme,

【优秀满分范文1】

The Hero in My Heart

As we know， most people have heroes in their hearts. For me, Dr Norman Bethune is the hero in my heart. He was a great doctor from Canada.

Dr Bethune was good at performing operations. And taking photos was his hobby. In 1938, he came to China. He opened hospitals and invented medical tools. He worked so hard that he saved thousands of Chinese people. He didn’t stop to take care of his own injured hand and died.

I am deeply moved by his stories. So I’ll work hard today and do my best to help others.

【优秀满分范文2】

The Hero in My Heart

As we know, most people have heroes in their hearts. For me，Liu Xiang is the hero in my heart. He is a famous Chinese sports man.

Liu Xiang is good at running. In 2004，he won his first Olympic gold medal in the mens 110m hurdles event in Athens. Then, he set a world record in the same event in Lausanne. Besides training and taking part in competitions, Liu Xiang also likes singing and he sings well.

With his hard work, he is winning competitions one after another. This encourages me to study harder from now on.

[2018英语高考作文模拟题

阅读下面文字，按要求作文。(50分)

一段时间以来，“中学生有三怕，奥数、英文、周树人”成了校园流行语。实际情况是，有些同学有这“三怕”(或其中“一怕”“二怕”)，有些同学不但不怕反倒喜欢。

你对上述“怕”或“不怕”(含喜欢)有何体验或思考?请自选角度，自拟题目，写一篇文章。

要求：(1)写记叙文或议论文。(2)不得透露个人信息。(3)不得抄袭，不得套用。(4)不少于700字。

命题方式：材料作文

材料性质：社会生活类(关注生活、人生、哲理)

材料内容(关键词)：中学生，三怕，奥数，英文，周树人，怕与不怕。

材料特点：这是今年看似最贴近学生实际生活的一道考题，出题者选取了学生生活中的一种现象来做评价，讲中学生有三怕：奥数、英文、周树人。但出题者显然是转了一个弯，他并没有让你评价所怕的对象——奥数、英文、周树人，而是让你就“怕”与“不怕”展开感想和思考。这样，作文实质上还是由具体的事件让学生上升到生活中的普遍性的道理上来思考。

审题立意：先说说中学生为什么会怕——奥数、英文、周树人。

首先说奥数。国际上有奥数比赛，也许外国人并没有怎么当回事，而我们中国人因为历来有讳忌别人说我们“病夫”“弱智”的口实，所以向来重视各种比赛，尤其是国际上的比赛，——我们可以不管全民身体素有多差，但奥运会一定要多拿金牌;我们可以不管全民的文艺素养有多低下，但钢琴比赛、歌剧大赛一定要出现朗朗、李云迪和戴玉强、廖昌永等样人;甚至我们可以不管文化保护得如何如何，但我们的“申遗”一定要多。因此，有国际奥数比赛，中国的孩子的聪明劲就必须得显露出来。所以全中国的中学生就得学奥数，学好奥数就可以上重点初中、重点高中甚至保送上重点大学，问题是中国这些年获得国际奥林匹克学科竞赛的金牌没少往回拿，可是风云消散过后，并没听说他们后来发明创造什么。不过后遗症显然出来了，那就是奥数似乎是理科思维、聪明或是能上名牌大学的代名词了，于是普天之下莫非奥数。这样，对于那些不喜欢奥数的同学而言，自然是怕之又怕了。

再说，英文。世界上恐怕没有任何一个国家像中国这样学习一门外语甚于学习本国语言的。其原因也是不言自明的，那就是英文也是晋级食禄的台阶，中考要考，高考要考，大学“四级”、“六级”要考，研究生要考，出国更要考。所以，作为中国的孩子其学英文苦不堪言的情状就可想而知了，说起“英文”就不是一个“怕”字了得的事。

说起怕“周树人”，这恐怕是出题者有些落伍了。因为现今的初高中教材中“周树人”已经删得没几篇了。前些年确实有“怕”的现象，鲁迅的文章在一定程度上的确晦涩难懂，再加上有些作品具有一定的时代性，就使得一些中学生怕“周树人”，其实，这和教师的教学方式也有一定的关系。就今天而论，“周树人”也可以代指传统语言教学，学生确有“怕”的现象。

从客观上分析这些“怕”的对象，并不是本材料要论述的重点，这只是帮助我们明确一些问题。而本材料要论述的重点应是“‘怕’与‘不怕’”的主观态度。其实，不光是奥数、英文、周树人，对于任何一个科目来说，都有其对其“怕”与“不怕”的学生;而对于任何一个学生来说，也都有其“怕”与“不怕”的科目。“怕”与“不怕”总应该是因人而异的。可能有些喜欢挑战的学生正因为有此“三怕”而喜欢它们呢?因为叫别人“怕”的东西正可以展示自己的能力与水平。所以，写作此文，考生可以从主观和客观两个方面来考虑问题。考“奥数、英文、周树人”，这是不可改变的客观事实，是在一定时期内都无法撼动的。这正如世界上的许多事一样，它不因我们个人的“喜欢与不喜欢”“怕与不怕”而存在，“喜欢与不喜欢”“怕与不怕”，这只是我们个人的思想态度而已，外界客观改变不了的东西，我们可以通过主观的努力来改变它。

(一)《为学》中有言：天下事有难易乎?为之，则难者亦易矣;不为，则易者亦难矣。套用这样的说法我们来问自己：学习有难易乎?怕之，则易者亦难矣;不怕，则难者亦易矣。喜欢，则难者亦易矣;不喜欢，则易者亦难矣。“怕”与“不怕”不在难易，而在态度。

(二)有些人因为距离而密切，有些物因为可怕而喜欢，有些事因为繁难而接近。因为距离，我们想拉近彼此;因为可怕，我们想战胜畏惧;因为繁难，我们想迎接挑战。因此，“怕”是“不怕”的开始，“不喜欢”是“喜欢”的前缘。

【高考例文1】：急功与慢利

长期以来，“中学生有三怕：奥数、英文、周树人”成了校园流行语。同学们一说起这句话，都会心照不宣地摇头一笑：难啊，太难了!这些凌乱的数字和线条之间，有着什么神秘的联系?这些A、B、C、D排列组合之后，该用怎样的读音和语气?天啊，这篇课文的作者竟然又是鲁迅，必然有几个重点段落老师会要求大家狂背狂记!

头疼归头疼，可看看身边的同学，利用业余时间去参加各种奥数、英文补习班的绝不在少数。补习奥数的同学是崇拜陈景润教授，想证明1+1=2?还是着迷于数理逻辑，想藉此探究宇宙的真谛?补习英文的同学是想要师夷长技以自强，将来能够实现中西文化的友好联系?还是打心眼里喜欢莎士比亚，想要看懂原文的真意?他们背着沉重的书包笑我迂腐：你说的未免太不切实际，奥数比赛一旦获奖，升学便可以享受加分待遇;英文说得流利，将来出国镀金根本不是难题!

我恍然大悟，“三怕”同样是怕，学好奥数、英文两科的益处唾手可得，即使恨得咬牙切齿也趋之若鹜，拧着眉头勤学苦练，希望自此走上一条捷径，凭借这两科的特长平步青云。而鲁迅先生的文章诘屈聱牙，何必下这个死力?能加分吗?能出国吗?顶多草草应付老师抄写几遍，便自认无愧于心，很对得起这位平头胡子伯伯了!

时下人心浮躁，事事言利，即使教育概莫能外，让人不免唏嘘。不少少年只看眼前是否得益，恨不得今日种苗明日便能吃瓜，否则绝不肯多花一丝一毫力气。北师大学者史杰鹏说鲁迅的文字“敲之铿然，触之也濡;望之俨然，即之也温。”白话文诞生的初期，他已能把文字使得出神入化，开启民智，余荫当今。鲁迅斗争的酷烈、文笔的华美、考证的精研，如能化入少年的灵魂中，则他们真正可以成为未来的栋梁，这是一笔不可多得的财富。可惜有几个耐得住这个年深日久、潜移默化的过程呢?

校园里依然流传着“三怕”，奥数、英文却越来越热门。鲁迅还是寂寞着，被一句轻慢的“太难了”掷到墙角，静静地等待。

【高考例文2】： 英语，想说爱你真不容易

英语，想说爱真你不容易。在你这里，我找不到那“才上眉头，却上心头”的担忧，找不到那“抽刀断水，水更流”的感慨，也找不到那“雁字回时，月满西楼”的场景，更找不到那“日日思君不见君，共饮长江水”的真情……

唉!读你还真难啊!拗口的发音令我愁眉不展，无序的单词使我被得死去活来，晦涩的意思让我丈二摸不着头脑……为你而吃的哭真是一言难尽啊!

正但我津津有味地沉迷于电视里，那感人肺腑的话语，晶莹剔透的泪水，那依依不舍的画面……我顿时情不自禁地热泪盈眶。“读English!”老妈“河东狮吼”道。

“妈妈!一下下吗!快End了!”我哀求道。

“NO!刻不容缓!一分钟也不能耽误!宝贝，听话!千万不要将宝贵时间和美好青春浪费在看TV上，现在竞争很激烈，稍稍不留神就名落孙山，到时候又后悔莫及……”老妈“口水四溅”，开始了长篇大论!唉，真是一个紧箍咒呀!

可“母”命难违，我只能一步三回头地来到房间，垂头丧气地读那枯燥无味的英语，脑海里反复播放着电视情节，把英语抛到九霄云外处。忘我地沉醉在想像之中，极力地想象这影片的“下集预告”。

又一次，我的任务是：记“Box”(盒子)，我的舌头都快烂了，仍然记不住，无计可施，只得标土音，我绞尽脑汁，还找不到合适的词语，只得在下面住“博士”。

为此，我还洋洋得意一阵，可风光不了多久，半路杀出一个“程咬金”，妈妈突然来了个“临时检查”，准备已久的我胸有成竹地应对。

“盒子。”

“太简单了，不久是合资吗?‘博士’。”一帆风顺的我大声读道。

“乱七八糟，什么‘博士’，敢情想当博士想疯了!是Box!笨!”妈妈恶狠狠地说，趁机嘲笑我一番。

结果，可想而知，我被骂了个狗血喷头。

英语，在你身上，我找不到快乐，你是我头上的紧箍咒，想说爱你不容易。

Dear Peter,

I read in a newspaper today that a “Learn Chinese, Sing Chinese Songs” Foreigners’ Talent Show will be held in Beijing Television Station on July 18. I know you like singing, and you are in Beijing during that period. I think this is a good chance for you to show your singing talent, and how well you’ve learned Chinese. If you would like to try, you have to go to the TV station to sign up before the end of June. If there is anything I can do for you, I would be more than glad to help.

Yours,

Li Hua

[高考满分英语作文欣赏

导语：2016年高考正在紧张的复习当中，英语作文是其中不可或缺的一部分。下面是yjbs作文网小编为您收集整理的英语词汇，希望对您有所帮助。

1.不可否认It is undeniablethat./There is no denying that.

2.采取措施 take effectivemeasures to do sth./something effective must be done to.

3.充分利用 make full use of/take advantage of

4.大有裨益 do good to/be beneficial to

5.导致引起 lead to/give rise to/contribute to

6.对……有害 do harm to/be harmful to

7.奉献社会 make contributions to society

8.毫无疑问 Undoubtedly/There ia no doubt that

9.交流思想 exchange ideas/emotions/information

10.交流情感 exchange emotions

11.解压减负 relieve stress/burden

12.经济负担 financial burden

13.开阔眼界 widen ones horizen/broaden ones vision

14.课业负担 too much homework/heavy burden of homework

15.普遍认为 It is commonly believed /recognized that

16.恰恰相反 in contrast/on the contrary

17.热烈讨论 have a heated discussion/debate

18.投身于 be devoted to

20.扬长避短 adopt ones good pionts and avoid the shortcomings

21.引起关注 draw public attention

22.与某相比 compared with/in comparison with

23.与时俱进 keep pace with times

24.自然资源 valuable natural resources

25.综合素质 comprehensivequality

26.遵守秩序 observe public order/observe discipline

27.把时间精力放在……上 focus ones time and energy on

28.不可推卸的义务 unshakableduty

29.产生有利影响 have positive effects on

30.产生不利影响 have negative effects on

31.持不同态度 hold different attitudes towards this issue

32.考虑到多方面因素 take many factors into account/consideration

33.扩大知识面 expand ones scope of knowledge

34.切实减轻我们的课业负担 effectively reduce our heavy homework assignments

35.身心两方面 both physically and mentally

36.我们生活的各方面 in all aspects of human life

37.因特网方便快捷 Its convenientand efficientto use computer and the Internet.

38.对这一问题持有不同态度 hold different attitudes towards this issue

39.致力于/ 投身于 be committed / devoted to…

40. 应当承认 Admittedly,

41.不可推卸的义务 unshakable duty

42. 满足需求 satisfy/ meet the needs of…

43.可靠的信息源 a reliable source of information

44.宝贵的自然资源 valuable natural resources

45.因特网 the Internet (一定要由冠词，字母I 大写)

46.方便快捷 convenient and efficient

47.在人类生活的方方面面 in all aspects of human life

48.环保(的) environmental protection / environmentally friendly

49.社会进步的体现 a symbol of society progress

50.科技的飞速更新 the ever-accelerated updating of science and technology

【提要】高考英语作文 : 2017年高考英语作文写作模板：图画类写作模板

图画类写作模板

1.开头

Look at this picture./The picture shows that.../From this picture, we can see.../As is shown in the picture.../As is seen in the picture...

2.衔接句

As we all know, .../As is known to all,.../It is well known that.../In my opinion,.../As far as I am concerned,.../This sight reminds me of something in my daily life.

3.结尾句

In conclusion.../In brief.../On the whole.../In short.../In a word.../Generally speaking.../As has been stated...

下面是由语文迷网小编精心为大家整理的英语写作高分技巧，供大家阅读参考。

一、要善于模仿

一些同学的办法往往是背一堆范文，然后再到考场上进行一个“剪切”、“粘贴”的工作，真正的模仿重点永远要放在一定的句式结构上，而非个别的词汇。有一个句式说：“…for the simple reason that…”表示某种现象的原因是什么，用在高考(课程)写作中，我们就可以拿来解释为什么自行车在中国如此的流行：“The bicycle is very popular in China for the simple reason that…”。然而，很多同学一谈到原因仍然是“…because…”。如果要表示“总是能够”的概念，很多同学提笔就会写can always，但理想的句子应该是用双重否定表示强烈的肯定，用never fail to。

二、要灵活变通

在批改过上万份同学们英语(课程)作文中，经常能发现一些将中文生硬地翻译成英文的表达法。有一句话叫做“立志如山，行道如水”，写英文作文，一定要有决心把它写好，有信心把意思表达清楚，这是“立志如山”;但关键是遇到问题时要有个灵活的态度，能像流水一样变通解决问题。有个翻译界的故事说：在某大型国际会议的招待会上，一道菜是用鸡蛋做的。与会的客人问翻译：“What is it made of”本来是非常简单的一个问题，结果翻译太紧张，忘了“egg”这个词，但是他急中生智，回答：“It is made of Miss Hen’s son.”这里，就是一个灵活变通的范例。绕道表达，是写作中应该常常运用的一种方法。

三、要细心观察

注意英语中一些表达上的习惯。比如在正式文体的写作中，很少用 “it isn’t”这样的略缩形式，而往往是一板一眼地写作 “it is not”。同理，在正式文体中的日期一般不缩写，阿拉伯数字一般会用英文表达(特别长的数字除外)。

许多同学在写作文时，习惯于把 “since” “because” “for”这样的词放在句首引导原因状语从句。事实上，在我们见到的英语报刊杂志文章中，这样的从句一般都是放在主句之后的。另外, “and”也常常被误放在一句话的开头，表示两个句子之间的并列或递进关系。其实，经常留心地道的英语文章能发现，如果是并列关系，完全可以不用连词;如果是递进关系，用 “furthermore” “what is more”更为普遍。

四、要心有全局

英文写作如果结构意识良好，应试写作就简化成为一个填空的过程了，适当地填入观点、素材，文章就自然而然立起来了。

More and more people has begun to consider their mental health that plays an important role in our daily life. Nowadays ,many students suffer from mental illness ,which seriously influence on their study and daily life.

越来越多的人开始担心在日常生活中起着重要作用的心理健康。如今，许多学生都有严重影响他们学习和生活的心理问题。

Consequently, schools should take effect measures to solve this problem. The mental health consul department should be built in school to help those students who suffer from mental illness. In this way, those who are subjected to the mental illness can get rid of the unhealthy shadow and build up their confident. On the one hand, school can provide a chance for students to show their tension. On the other hand, president and teachers should try their best to help those students. In addition, giving more concentration on their physical health would help them to rebuild their mental health.

因此，学校应采取有效的措施来解决这个问题。学校应建立心理健康咨询室来帮助那些患有心理问题的学生。这样，那些正遭受心理疾病的学生可以从不健康的阴影中解脱，建立信心。另一方面，学校可以为学生提供机会来展示他们的紧张。另一方面，校长和教师应尽力帮助那些学生。此外，对他们的身体健康提供更多的关注会帮助他们重建良好的心理健康。

From what has been mentioned above, as students, we should try our best to communicate with our, friends, parents or teachers. Last but not the least; we should not hesitate to go to the mental health consult room for help when we have trouble in mental illness. Only in this way, can we reduce our mental illness, and we will become a strong and confident person in the end.

综上所述，作为学生，我们应该尽我们最大的努力与我们的朋友，父母或老师交流。最后但并非最不重要的；在我们有心理问题的时候，我们应该毫不犹豫地去心理健康咨询室求助。只有这样，我们才可以减少心理疾病，最终成为一个坚强自信的人。

2016高考英语作文热点话题作文 马老师寄语：从年前发生的雾霾事件可以预测今年的热点作

文是环境保护。望你们将有关的句子背熟，切记切记。

1、低碳生活 现在全世界都在倡导―低碳生活‖(low-carbon life)，即：降低二氧化碳的排放，采取低能量、低消耗、低开支的生活方式。低碳生活对我们大家都有好处，请你写一篇短文向一家英文报社投稿。内容包括：你的具体做法、你的感受以及建议。

提示词语：be good for, everyone, ride a bike, think, make a difference, environment, suggest, reuse

★范文

Low-carbon life is good for everyone. To help with the environment, I always walk or ride a bike to school instead of taking a car. Besides, I will try to use things that can be recycled and I never forget to turn off the lights when I leave the classroom. I think it’s my duty to live a low-carbon life. And even the simplest activities can make a real difference to the environment. So I suggest we should reuse books as long as possible. And we’d better not spend much money on expensive clothes. If everyone does something for the environment, I believe the earth will be a better place。

2. 假如你是Li Lin，你的英国笔友Eric来信询问你家乡是否有雾霾(thick haze)，情况如何。请按提示写一封不少于60词的电子邮件回复他。要求卷面整洁书写工整;内容可在包含要点的基础上适当发挥。提示：1. 感谢他的关心;

2. 介绍:(1)去年冬天有多次雾霾; (2)空气被严重污，危害：车祸，生病等;

3. 正采取各种举措减少其发生。

Dear Erik,

I’m glad to receive your letter. You asked if there is thick haze in my hometown. Thank you for your caring for the weather and my health.There was heavy haze last winter. The air is badly polluted. Many traffic accidents happened and more and more people have to go to see

the doctor because of the smog. People have realized the great harm caused by the smog and the importance of protecting the environment.The government suggests people to go to work or school with the public traffic, such as the bus and the underground. Also we should plant more trees. According to me, I will go to school by bike or on foot, and I won’t throw the waste anywhere.

Would you like to tell me some good ideasI’m looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Lin

3、保持健康生活习惯 健康的生活习惯对于成长中的我们是非常重要的。你认为健康的生活习惯应当是怎样的呢？请根据下面的信息提示，写一篇短文，首句已给出。

信息提示：健康饮食；早睡早起，不熬夜；参加运动，强身健体。

要求：根据信息提示，把握要点，适当发挥，不逐字翻译。字数在80词左右。

★范文

I think healthy habits are very important for us.

All of us want to be healthy. First, we should get enough sleep during the night. We can go to bed early and get up early. Staying up late is bad for our health. Second, we must have the right kinds of food. We should eat more fruit and vegetables and less meat. We should drink a lot of water. We should have healthy eating habits. Third, we should do more exercise to build up our bodies. Finally, we should wash hands before meals and brush our teeth twice a day. If we don’t feel well, we should go to see the doctor at once。

4、怎样学好英语 世界在发展，文化在交融，英语已经成为人们沟通的桥梁。怎样学好英语是我们一直在探索的问题。几年的学习经历你一定积累了许多成功的经验，请从听、说、读、写四方面谈谈你的建议。

要求：1. 词数：80—100词(开头已给出，不计入总词数)

2. 字迹工整，语言流畅，表达正确，逻辑清晰。

★范文

How to learn English well

English is important and useful to us. How can we learn it wellHere are my suggestions。

First, we should often listen to the tapes, English songs and programs. Watching English movies is also helpful to us. Second, we should speak English in class as much as possible. Don’t be afraid of making mistakes. The more you speak, the fewer mistakes you’ll make. Wed better join the English club and practice with others. Third, we can read more English newspapers and magazines. It’s good for us. At last, we should recite some good passages and keep diaries。

In a word, as long as we do more listening, speaking, reading and writing, we will learn English well。

5、感恩 对父母心存感恩，因为他们给予我生命，让我健康成长；对老师心存感恩，因为他们给了我教诲，让我抛却愚昧；对朋友心存感恩，因为他们给了我友爱；对社会心存感恩，因为社会给了我智慧和力量。自从国家实施义务教育以来，书本免费，食宿免费，而且还有贫困助学金等。面对这些，我们应该心存感恩，感谢祖国对我们的厚望和期盼。让我们永远记住：感谢父母、感谢老师、感谢朋友、感谢全社会！请以―感恩‖为话题写一篇80—100字的作文。

★ 范文

What should we thank

The thankful great universe provides the environment of existence for us and give us sunlight, air, water and everything in keeping with us existence of space, bring storm to let us accept to toughen for us, bring to us mysterious let us look for. The thankful parents give us the life, make us feel the merriment of the human life, feel the genuine feeling of the human life, feel the comity of the human life, feel happiness of the human life, also feel hardships and pain and sufferings of the human life! The thankful teacher works with diligence and without fatigue everyday of teach, give us knowledge ability, and put on the wing which flies toward the ideal for us. The thankful classmate and friend grow up with us and let us no longer stand alone in the itinerary of life. The thankful our country provides us with free books, dormitory and food. Whenever it is, we should keep a thankful heart towards everything existed. Only thus, can we become a useful man.

6.目前，越来越多的中学生利用周末上各种各样的培训班或请家教。对于这一现象，存在两种不同观点：

请根据以上提示，以“Is a training class or a tutor necessary”为题，写一篇短文阐述自己的观点。

要求：1. 包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥。

2. 信中不要涉及真实的人名和校名及其它相关信息, 否则不予评分。

3. 词数：不少于60词，开头已给出，不计入总词数。

More and more middle school students are going to all kinds of training class or getting a tutor at the weekend. There are two different opinions about it.

Some think it is necessary. First, they can learn better with the help of the teachers than by themselves. Second, they can strengthen what they learn in class. Third, they can get more useful things in those classes.

However, other people insist that it is not necessary. For one thing, students will not listen carefully in their normal classes if they can get the same knowledge in training classes. For another thing, most senior

students haven’t enough time to rest. What’s worse, the purpose of most of the training classes and family teachers is to earn money.

In my opinion, a training class or family teacher is not necessary. We can study well at school if we work hard. (In my opinion, whether a training class or family teacher is needed just depends. If you are really very weak at or interested in a certain subject, maybe it’s OK for you. But be sure to choose a good and suitable class or teacher, otherwise it would be a waste of time and money.)

7、如何减压让生活更美好 许多学习生活中的烦恼都会使人产生压力，为了更好地发现及解决同学们中存在的心理压力问题，你们班特意开展了一次以"Less Pressure, Better Life"为主题的英语演讲比赛，请你准备发言稿，谈谈你的一些缓解压力的好办法，与同学分享，内容包括：

(1) 同学们中普遍存在的压力是什么；

(2) 我的压力是什么；

(3) 我是如何成功缓解我的压力的。

注意：文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。词数80~100。

★ 范文

Less Pressure, Better Life

Hello, boys and girls!

Pressure is a serious problem in today’s world. Students in our class are under too much pressure. Some students can’t get on well with their classmates, while others may worry about their exams。

I’m always under pressure, too. My parents want me to be the top student in class. So they send me to all kinds of after-classes at weekends. Last Monday evening, I had a talk with my mother. I told her I was not lazy. I really felt tired. I needed time to relax. My mother agreed with me at last. So I think a conversation with parents is necessary to solve the problem。

That’s all. Thank you!

8、节约用水 水是生命之源。随着水资源的短缺，节约用水是我们每个人的责任，请以此为话题写一篇不少于80字的短文。

★ 范文 As we know, water is very important to man, we can’t live without water. The amount of water which is suitable to drink is less and less. But some people don’t care

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英语作文精彩句子集锦

1. Nothing is more important than …没有什么比。。。更重要

Eg。Nothing is more important than health./ to be independent.

没有什么比健康独立更重要。

2. sb./sth. is the +最高级+(n.) that I have ever met/ seen/ known.。。。

是我所遇到、见到、知道最。。。

Eg。 Mr zhang is the kindest teacher that I have ever met/ seen/ known.

张老师是我所遇到/见过/知道的最好的老师。

Freindship is the most valuable thing that I have ever had.

友谊是我所拥有的最宝贵的东西。

3. We can not/ never emphasize the importance of(doing)sth … too much.

We can never attach too much importance to(doing)sth ….

我们再怎么强调。。。的重要性也不过分。

Eg。 We can not/ never emphasize the importance of protecting our eyes too much.

我们再怎么强调保护眼睛的重要性也不过分。

We can never attach too much importance to reading books widely and wisely.

广泛而聪明地看书是非常重要的。

4. Only when we。。。。。can we….只有当我们。。。时候，我们才能。。。。。

Eg。Only when we devote ourselves to study can we achieve great success.

只有当我们投身于学习，我们才能获得成功。

Only when we have a healthy body can we do what we want.

只有身体健康我们才能做想做的事。

5. As the saying goes 正如谚语所说

There is a saying that goes,

As a proverb says,

Eg。As the saying goes, where there is a will, there is a way.

正如谚语所说，“有志者事竟成”。

There is a saying that goes, “failure is the mother of success.”

有谚语说：“失败乃成功之母。”

As a proverb says, no pains, no gains.

正如谚语所说，“不劳则无获。”

6. Perhaps the most dangerous phenomenon gripping the nation today is…

也许当今困扰国家的最危险的现象是……

7. Never before in history has the issue of…been more evident than now。

历史上，……的问题从来没有比现在更加突出。

8. Perhaps it is time to reexamine the idea that…

也许现在是应该重新考虑……的时候了。

9. A growing number of people are beginning to realize that…is not the sole prerequisite for happiness。

越来越多的人开始意识到……并不是幸福的惟一条件。

10. Years of observing human behavior has enabled me to conclude that the major difference between…and…lies solely with…

对人们行为的多年观察使我能够得出这样的结论：……和……的主要区别仅仅在于……

Dear Jeff,

Im Li Hua from Beijing Hongxing Middle School. I m very happy to learn that youre going to stay with my family while youre in Beijing.

To Jeff

Dear Jeff,

Im Li Hua from Beijing I-Iongxing Middle School. Im very happy to learn that youre going to stay with my family while youre in Beijing.

While you are here, well provide you with a room of your own with a bed, a desk, a couple of chairs and a TV. Youll also have your own bathroom. Our school is quite close to our home. So we could go to school together by bike. At noon well eat at the school dining hall. Im sure youll like the delicious Chinese food there,and enjoy talking with friends over lunch. Classes in our school usually finish at 4 in the afternoon. You can then join other students in playing ball games or swimming. Itll be a lot of fun.

If you have any questions or requests, please let me know. Well try our best to make your stay here in Beijing a pleasant experience.

[高考英语满分作文写给杰夫的一封信

看图作文在高考书面表达中占有相当大的比例。怎么样写看图作文呢?下面是语文迷网为大家带来的技巧。

1.仔细阅读图画及文字说明，首先应确定文章体裁。这类文章一般以记叙文或说明文为主。

记叙文：要抓住记叙文的六要素：时间(when)、地点(where)、人物(who)、事件(what)、原因(w～)和过程(how)。即：五个“W”和一个“H”。根据图画提示把这六个问题写清楚了，至少可得及格分数。如2000年的全国高考题，时间：2000年2月8日清晨;地点：公园外的公园路上;A物;“我”、一个老头;事件;这个老头被一辆黄色小车撞倒，“我”把他送到了附近的医院;原因：司机害怕承担责任而逃走，过程：“我”当时正沿着公园路散步。

说明文：一般先要把图画联系起来，弄清楚图画的目的、意图;然后进行抽象概括，找出一个说明对象，接着根据图画从时间、过程、步骤等方面加以解释、说明;最后进行总结，得出结论。对事物进行说明时，一定要做到条理清楚，明了易懂。如20典型例题考英语试题，作者首先告诉对方已经为他找到了房间，接着介绍房间的情况，最后征求对方的意见。

2.确定人称。如果以日记、回忆录等形式来写，一般采用第一人称;如果是以讲故事的形式来写，则一般采用第三人称来写比较方便。但不管用哪种人称，全文都必须一致。

3.确定时态。根据图画内容及所采用的文章体裁，确定文章所要用的时态。切记全文时态的一致性。

4.发挥联想要合理、适度。这类文章的说明一般都要求考生作适当的联想和发挥，以便使上下文能更好地连贯起来。但联想和发挥一定要根据图画做到合情合理，不能过多地胡乱联想和发挥。如20典型例题考题，如果告诉对方：我几乎把城市找遍了，终于为你找到了一套房子。这样联想显然是可以的。然而，倘若你写成：我到东城区去找，那边的房子太贵;于是，我又到西城区去找，而那里正在建设之中，条件不太好;接着，我又到南城区去找，发现那里离新建的华文学校又太远了……像这样的联想和发挥就太夸张了。

5.虚实结合，详略得当。对于图画中的内容，该详细叙述、描写的，就必须要详细、具体;可以一笔带过的就一笔带过。也就是平常老师所讲的有时要泼墨如水，而有时又要惜墨如金。如图画中所有的时间、数字或言论需一词不漏地写清楚，而有些过程或原因则可适当简略。

典型例题

假设你是图①中的男孩。请根据以下图画提供情节线索，以SharingH。usework为题，用英文叙述你帮妈妈做家务的经过及感想。

注意：

1.书面表达必须包括图画所表现的主要内容，可以适当增减细节，使其连贯、完整;

2.词数：100词左右.

题目的与解题技巧：本题考查看图写一个故事。

【解析】本文记叙“我”帮妈妈做家务的经过，叙述的是已经做过的事，因此用过去时。要点：1.见妈妈同时做几件事情，觉得妈妈太累，决定帮妈妈做一点家务活;2.在帮妈妈洗衣服时，“我”的朋友来叫我去踢球，“我”拒绝了;3.等把衣服洗完时，“我”累得满头大汗;4.妈妈见“我”把衣服洗好了，夸“我”是个好孩子，“我”感到非常高兴。

One possible version:

One day when I was about to play football, I saw Mother was taking a lot of dirty clothes to wash and a bucket to carry water. I thought Mother was very tired, so I decided to help her wash clothes. While I was doing the washing , Li Ming came and asked me to play football with him. I refused him and told him that I would help Mother finish the housework first. When I got the housework done,I was so tired that I was sweating all over. When Mother came back home, she found I had washed all the dirty clothes and said that I was a good child . I felt very happy.

一轮考试结束了，成绩在意料之中，有点不理想，有一些就应能考的很好的学生，也没有考好，思其原因，也找不到合理的解释，所以我让学生自我反思总结找出原因和不足之处，以下是几个有代表性的几个学生的总结。

魏洁说：“一轮考试的试卷的分数下来，我很吃惊，但我细细想起来，也并不是没有道理。这些天，我并不是没有认真学，只是这些天来，我没有深入其中，没有真正的领悟，以致于考试成绩如此的差，让我心中自责的很。但是我想说的是对于英语我会尽自我最大的努力，不为别的就为自我，为了自我的水平，为了自我的付出，做最好的自我。

邵云说：“透过这次英语一模考试，我觉得主要失分在有关单词及时态的把握方面，是基础知识没有掌握好的原因，一些单词明明白是什么，却不会写，一些选取粗心大意也错了，各方面因素结合起来以致英语成绩不理想。

王玉霞说：“本次考试，由于自我粗心大意和对课本知识掌握的不牢固，一些不就应错的题却错了，而作文失分最不就应，我没有按其要求写作，写离题了，导致作文分数太低，影响成绩。在今后的复习过程中，课本资料就应更加牢固

导语：随着互联网的发展，网站慢慢取代了报纸的作用，下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的优秀英语作文，欢迎阅读与借鉴，谢谢!

报纸

1.传统媒体，天天更新，信息可靠 2. 携带方便，随时随地可以阅读 3.仅有文字和图片

网站

1.新兴媒体，信息更新速度快 2.依赖于电脑及互联网 3. 包含文字、图片、音频和视频

注意：

1.短文必须包括表中所有内容，可以适当发挥; 2. 词数：100-120 3. 参考词汇：更新update;音频audio;视频video

Newspapers and Websites

Newspapers and websites are two major new media in the world today, both of which can provide us with lots of news and information. But theyre different in some ways.

Newspapers enjoy a longer history and often come out daily with more reliable news and information. They can be carried and read almost anywhere you like. So many people like reading them. But they can only contain texts and photos.

On the other hand, websites are quite new and popular, especially among young people. Websites have not only texts with pictures but also audios and videos, which makes stories more interesting. Whats more, they are updated from time to time. So the latest news is always seen on websites instead of in newspapers. But it is not quite convenient for people without a computer connected with the Internet to get information from websites.

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报纸和网站

报纸和网站是当今世界上的两大新兴媒体，它可以为我们提供大量的新闻和信息。但他们在某些方面不同。

报纸有着较长的历史，每天都会出现更可靠的新闻和信息。他们可以携带和阅读几乎任何地方你喜欢。这么多人喜欢读。但它们只能包含文本和照片。

另一方面，网站是新的和流行的，尤其是在年轻人。网站不仅有图片文字，还有音频和视频，这使得故事更有趣。更重要的是，他们不时更新。所以最新的新闻总是出现在网站上而不是报纸上。但是没有电脑连接的人从网站上获取信息并不太方便。