如何用英语口语作自我介绍(汇总20篇)

Today is 61 Childrens Festivals, my early gets up, eat a meal, went happily going to school, to class when, I see inside opening TV, run to class hastily inside, sit quietly to look, not a little while, the teacher calls us to move the chair, we began to move, arrived rock-bottom, I see in front placing an arena, we had moved the chair, sat to come down, before long, whole ground floor is a person, I sit inter, within an inch of is crowded flat, because the person is really too much. 61 congratulatory ceremony began, there are a few teachers on arena, still have a fellow student above speech. A little while, the classmate of Pu cropland city also comes to our school, we welcome them with enthusiastic applause. Began to perform, a lot of classmates agitato stood up, make I was lost sight of, perform everybody to want to applause, and applause is very resonant.

It is to play game next, some classmates were washed out too quickly because of speed, really regretful, between the process that plays game, a classmate at the back of me tosses paper to me here come, just was seen by the teacher, call him to go on the floor pick up of a piece of a piece of ground comes, this calls be apt to to have cable of be apt to, sow the wind and reap the whirlwind, ah. Todays program was finished, the teacher says with us: Want to hold pleasance activity afternoon, everybody should get ready, certificate of merit also is afternoon reappearance.what meaning is pleasance activity? We go to school afternoon, the table that sees us runs to the side, be to should play game so, when attending class, the teacher prepared a lot of ping-pongs, use those who play game, the first group game regulation is: Use 3 ping-pongs to cast in the case, in casting even if win. The 2nd group game regulation is: Take bat of a ping-pong, a ping-pong is above, put the table tennis ball in ping-pong bat above, should from pass among two chairs, who holds to terminus, who calculates win. Began to play, I play the first group first, took 3 table tennises, I begin to cast, the first ball was entered originally, but be received,that classmate of the ball gives catching, I ask this ball does not calculate the teacher, the teacher says not to calculate actually, if calculate can get a candy.

I walk along the 2nd group disappointedly, but I took one step only, the ping-pong drops. I play again, but they had not begun to play, we waited a little while in the doorway, began eventually, we rush at once, come to 3, their game regulation is: Cover the eye, informal in front a place draws a circle, if this classmate walks into that circle inside the time of 10 seconds, even if won. There are a few fellow students before me very fierce, go in, when be turn for me, the teacher quited sport, she says: Did not play, very tired.I answer a class, on stair, I say alone: How to meet such, be turn for me, did not play unexpectedly?return class in, the teacher prepares award prize account, the teacher sends the certificate of merit of 3 good students first, I am thinking all the time: Be sure I also am 3 good students. As a result I became 3 good students as expected, I am too excited, the teacher still grants me articles for use of a bag of study, I return a seat to look, it is to write belt of diarial notebook, small staple, stationery, pen, rule, semicircle to measure feet of measuring implement, triangle to wait so, I looked very glad, effort study just gets this, I want to try hard to learn even later, strive for become 3 good students every year.

Still study activist, labor activist, literary activist waits, these classmates have award prize to taste, a classmate got literary activist, but he does not know to ran where to go, the teacher sends a few classmates to look for him, but entire school has searched, also do not have the message of that classmate, at this moment, a classmate found him 4 classes in 2 years, he looks 4 classes in 2 yearscalabash childcartoon, tell a teacher immediately, say: Teacher, that classmate looks 4 classes in 2 yearscalabash childcartoon.before the teacher calls that fellow student teacher range, come, say: Be award prize shape important still lookcalabash childis cartoon important ah? If if want,looking from now on you attend class 4 classes to 2 years.that classmate feels very feel embarrassed, do not say to gave a word to come, the teacher says: This certificate of merit is withheld first in here, if had been behaved after you, certificate of merit sends you, if behave bad word, send expression good fellow student.classessed are over, I am returned this thing says with the person in the home in the home, everybody says: Study is good, we also want award your award.award of little mothers brother my pen box; Grandfather and grandmother award my shoe; Award of big wife of mothers brother my chocolate; A friend of big mothers brother is a teacher, his award my UFO is labyrinthian, I am too glad really.

The Great Wall was renovated from time to time after the Qin Dynasty. A major renovation started with the founding of the Ming Dynasty in 1368, and took 200 years to complete. The wall we see today is almost exactly the result of this effort. With a total length of over 6,000 kilometers, it extends to the jiayu Pass in Gansu Province in the west and to the mouth of the Yalu River in Liaoning Province in the east. What lies north of Beijing is but a small section of it.

I have a good friend.Her name is Huang Jiayan .She was twelve years

old.She is very polite and helpful.She has two big eyes,a small nose and long hair .Her hobby is singing ,dancing,read books and surfing the internet.

This is my good friend.

Hi! Hello, my name is Pan Ziyang, I am a lively and lovely little girl, I would like to introduce myself to you!

I have curly hair, sometimes is the "lion Mao" is sometimes beautiful wave volume, I have a cherry small mouth, the one and only.

My dress is sometimes very fashionable, avant-garde fashion sweater, sometimes cute skirt, I sometimes wear cool coat.

My body is round, tall, everybody calls me "fat girl", round body is also very distressed, alas!

I put the "female man" image of the performance of the most incisive, at that time, I took a box of apples from the ground floor has been carried to the seventh floor, have no rest, on the floor, I gasped, aunt suddenly said Mom gave both box watermelon to me, let me get down, no I can only take measures! I was carrying two boxes of watermelon, carrying a bag from the first floor to the seven floor, and when I got home, I immediately fell asleep in bed.

This is me, a lively and lovely woman.

Hi, my name is Victor. Look, this is my bedroom.

大家好，我是Victor。看，这是我的卧室。

Its small but nice. I have a big bed and it is very soft and comfortable. There is a lovely Teddy bear on the bed and it is a gift from my mother. I have a small desk and I usually do my homework there. In the corner, there is a shelf. There are a lot of books on it. There is also a closet. All my clothes are in it.

很小但是很漂亮。我有一张大床，它很软很舒服。床上有一只泰迪熊，那是我妈妈送我的礼物。我有一张小桌子，我一般都会在那里做作业。角落里，有个书架。上面有很多书。还有一个衣橱。我的衣服都在那里。

I often clean my room, so it is very tidy.

经常打扫房间，所以很整洁。

Hello! My name is XX, XX Normal University, is a 2006 graduate. Graduation has taught more than a year. Have long teaching experience gained! Lively and outgoing personality, nice, treat people in good faith, understanding, strong language skills and com#munication skills; diligent, strong and determined, serious and responsible work, down to earth, patient, attentive, careful thinking, have becom#e teachers the basic quality and potential.

Determined to be a teacher since childhood, college entrance examination chosen university, is not only a solid basic knowledge of mathematics, but also on the accumulation of educational theory and practice, especially during the internship period, absorbing the best teaching experience of teachers, and students from morning till evening in the day, and more loving education.

With self-learning and research capacity in × × × University graduate student during a more thorough understanding of mathematical knowledge. Believe they will be both professional research and teaching skills of educational personnel.

The qingming (Pure Brightness) Festival is one of the 24 seasonal division points in China, falling on April 4-6 each year. After the festival, the temperature will rise up and rainfall increases. It is the high time for spring plowing and sowing. But the qingming Festival is not only a seasonal point to guide farm work, it is more a festival of commemoration.

The qingming Festival sees a combination of sadness and happiness.

This is the most important day of sacrifice. Both the Han and minority ethnic groups at this time offer sacrifices to their ancestors and sweep the tombs of the diseased. Also, they will not cook on this day and only cold food is served.

The Hanshi (Cold Food) Festival was usually one day before the qingming Festival. As our ancestors often extended the day to the qingming, they were later combined.

On each qingming Festival, all cemeteries are crowded with people who came to sweep tombs and offer sacrifices. Traffic on the way to the cemeteries becomes extremely jammed. The customs have been greatly simplified today. After slightly sweeping the tombs, people offer food, flowers and favorites of the dead, then burn incense and paper money and bow before the memorial tablet.

In contrast to the sadness of the tomb sweepers, people also enjoy hope of Spring on this day. The qingming Festival is a time when the sun shines brightly, the trees and grass become green and nature is again lively. Since ancient times, people have followed the custom of Spring outings. At this time tourists are everywhere.

People love to fly kites during the qingming Festival. Kite flying is actually not limited to the qingming Festival. Its uniqueness lies in that people fly kites not during the day, but also at night. A string of little lanterns tied onto the kite or the thread look like shining stars, and therefore, are called "gods lanterns."

The qingming Festival is also a time to plant trees, for the survival rate of saplings is high and trees grow fast later. In the past, the qingming Festival was called "Arbor Day". But since 1979, "Arbor Day" was settled as March 12 according to the Gregorian calendar.

If ask me who my favorite teacher is, I will no doubt answer you that Miss Hou is my favorite teacher. She is an English teacher, she is kind to everyone, she is not like other teachers who are so strict to students.

As Miss Hou is so popular among students, students learn English with high enthusiasm, that is what they return to her.

Miss Hou is a good teacher.

I have two good friends. Theyre Zhang Ping and Jim. Zhang Ping is 12. Jim is three years older than her. Hes 15.

Jim is heavier than Zhang Ping. Hes 60 kilograms. Jim is taller than her. Hes 162cm. Zhang Ping is a Chinese girl. She lives in Xinhui. Jim is a Canadian boy. He lives in Guangzhou now. Zhang Ping likes red. Her favorite sport is badminton.

Jim likes blue. His favorite sport is swimming. I like them very much.

Hi, My name is Jay, Im from the beautiful ancient city of Kaifeng. As you can see, I am a very casual girl, and a lot of people here, like 18-year-old, I love a lot, I love guitar, love to sing love dancing, very fond of English, I am very love to watch "Prison Break", like the actor micheal clever wit I like making friends, and hope you will be able to and I have become good friends, I think I will, and you get along with.Hello, everyone, please allow me to introduce myself with a minute let you know me, know me and accept me. I come from Shandong, xxx, 20-year-old, my hometown Qilu earth gave me a straightforward character, and yet steady, and later the city of Nanjing travel long distances to school.As one saying goes: "Ten years out of sharpening sharp, sword-jun to knowledge only pending." Zaikuzailei, I am willing to try, "eat life of hardship, Fang Wei Ren Exalted", in later school life, I will definitely be one to make their own efforts, but had a substantial significance of post-secondary life. Student life in the future please give more concern, a simple self-introduction is completed, thank you!

One explanation is that the Duanwu Festival originated from people’s worship of dragons. In ancient China, people believed the dragon was the god in charge of water, which was vitally important to daily life and agricultural production. On the day of Duanwu, people raced dragon boats to entertain the god and offered him Zongzi as a treat. The sole purpose was to please the god to ensure a year of favorable weather.

Some people believe Duanwu comes from activities instigated by ancient sorcerers. These activities were held in early summer when the hot weather was about to bring diseases to people who didn’t have modern devices and medicines to protect themselves. So, ancient sorcerers encouraged people to wear fragrant pouches and hang mugwort and calamus on their doors to drive away the so-called evil spirits that caused diseases.

Scholars may provide many other explanations about the origin of the Duanwu Festival. But if you ask ordinary people about its origin, you’ll get the same answer. They will tell you that the Duanwu Festival honors the great poet, Qu Yuan. They’ll also tell you the story that has been passed down for more than 2,000 years.

Qu Yuan was born in 340 BC, during the Warring States Period. At that time, there were seven states struggling among themselves to unify China. Of the seven states, Qin was the strongest and Chu the largest.

Qu Yuan was a noble of Chu. During his lifetime, the powerful kingdom of Chu fell into a decline.

Early in his life, Qu Yuan won the confidence of the King of Chu, and was his deputy prime minister, helping draft laws and determine foreign-policy. When he saw the danger posed by the ambitious Qin State, he proposed government reforms and an alliance with the neighboring Qi state as a way to ensure Chu’s safety.

But the King of Chu was surrounded by self-seekers, who were jealous of Qu Yuan. They accepted bribes from the Qin’s envoy, dissuaded the King from taking Qu Yuan’s advice and brought about the poet’s estrangement from the King. Qu Yuan was finally sent into exile for 20 years.

During those desperate years, Qu Yuan helplessly watched his beloved country become weaker every day. In the year 278 BC, the capital of Chu was stormed by troops from Qin. In great pain, Qu Yuan wrote “Lisao” or “The Lament”, the greatest of all his poems. On the fifth day of the fifth lunar month, he drowned himself in the Milo River, because he was hopeless about his country’s future.

Qu Yuan died thousands of years ago, but he is remembered every year for his love of and loyalty to his country and his people.

Xiamen is Chinas first four special economic zones,it is Taiwanese,southern Jiangxi,southern Hunan to the east to the sea,the Pacific Rim will be developed into an international harbor.

"City at sea,the sea in the city," Xiamen is a graceful charm of the "Sea Garden." Island,reef,rock,temple,flowers,wood backed each other,the hometown of overseas Chinese customs,practices Fujian and Taiwan,coastal cuisine,exotic blend of construction,year-round spring weather is more of the charm of the sea icing on the cake.Beautiful scenery and pleasant weather,it can be said here is the best environment for cities.Surrounded by sea water,broad sandy beaches,warm sunshine,as a good ecological environment,Xiamens clean air,a habitat for hundreds of thousands of egrets,Xiamen has formed a unique natural landscape,since ancient times,Xiamen Egret is one of the major habitats,so Xiamen Also known as "Lu Dao"; in addition to the beautiful natural scenery,Xiamens urban environment is also very clean,is well-known tourist city.

厦门是中国第一个四个经济特区,它是台湾,江西南部,湖南南部,东至大海,环太平洋地区将发展成为一个国际港口。

“城在海上,海在城中,“厦门是一个“海上花园的优雅魅力。“岛、礁、岩、寺、花、木相互支持,海外中国海关的家乡,实践福建和台湾沿海美食,充满异国情调的建筑融合,全年春天天气是大海的魅力锦上添花。美丽的风景和宜人的天气,这里可以说是最好的城市环境。被海水包围,宽阔的沙滩,温暖的阳光,良好的生态环境,厦门的空气清洁,成百上千的白鹭的栖息地,厦门已形成一种独特的自然景观,自古以来,厦门白鹭的主要栖息地之一,所以厦门也称为“陆道”;除了美丽的自然风光,厦门的城市环境也非常干净,是著名的旅游城市。

Goodafternoon, teachers! Today, I`m very happy to make a speech here. Now, let me introduce myself.

My name is ZhuRuijie. My English name is Molly. I`m 12. I come from Class1 Grade 6 of TongPu No.2 Primary School. I`m an active girl. I like playing basketball. Because I think it`s very interesting. I`d like to eat potatoes. They`re tasty. My favourite colour is green. And I like math best. It`s fun. On weekend, I like reading books in my room. I have a happy family.

My father is tall and strong.My mother is hard-working and tall, too. My brother is smart. And I`m a good student. My dream is to be a teacher, because I want to help the poor children in the future. Thank you for listening! Please remember me!

Hello everyone！ Im - Wang Jie.

I grow high, fat, a pair of small eyes always from time to time, I have a pair of big ears, usually seldom laugh, even if the smile is just a smile. My clothes generally wear white or red, my character is a little introverted, few friends, usually taciturn, my learning is general. My advantage is that I can take notes in class and record the truth and meaning of it. The shortcoming is recalcitrant character and refusing to listen to advice. Of course, I have tried several times to correct it, but I cant do it. My greatest determination is to correct the problems and strive to be the front spear!

Well, Im finished. Please make a lot of changes! Show me your introduction!

The experience of painting

Im a girl who loves painting. Actually. Listen to my mother, when I was young cursive are reluctant to get it! Later, why did I like to take a stroke? This is the first thing to say: listen to mom, when she was a kid, she held my hand and taught me to write. I was sleepy, writing and dozing. My mother had no choice but to force me. Later my mother taught me to read the chant, in order to improve my interest in every song beside the mother with a nice painting (mother love painting) did not think, I am very interested in these pictures, often with a pen in drawing, my mother found my interest, teach me how to learn to draw.

Mom started to buy a first in the body of the red, I treasure every day, according to draw pictures. Then I do not trace will be able to draw simple pictures. My mother once drew a circle, and I followed a circle. With the pattern, into a small cat. Mother was surprised, and she didnt think I could draw such a beautiful cat when I had just learned to paint. She felt that I should be trained more systematically and sent me to the art training class. Under the guidance of the teacher, my painting techniques continue to improve, I have to draw more and more interest in the!

Spring Festival is the most important and popular festival in China.Before Spring Festival ,the people usually clean and decorate their houses.And they go to the Flower Fairs to buy some flowers.During Spring Festival ,the adults usually give lucky money to children.People often get together and have a big meal.Some people eat dumpling for dinner.

I love Spring Festival.

春节是中国最重要和最受欢迎的节日。在春节之前,人们通常打扫卫生和装饰他们的房子。他们去花集市买一些花。春节期间,大人通常给孩子压岁钱。人们经常聚在一起,一顿大餐。有些人吃饺子吃晚饭。

我爱春节。

The large number of our population has become one of the most serious problems of our society. according to a recent survey of the national bureau of statistics, there are more than 1.3 billion people in our country, which account for about 1/5 of all the people in the world. the same survey also predicts that our population will grow quickly in the years to come.

overpopulation has brought about a series of negative effects to our economic development and social security. in the first place, too many people impose a heavy burden on our environment. as a result, we suffer from a shortage of fresh water and natural resources. in the second place, as the supply of labor greatly exceeds the demand of the society, many people become employed. this is a source of social unrest. last but not least, we have to manufacture all kinds of products to meet the needs of the people, which causes environment pollution to our lakes and land.

serious though the problem seems, we have to take some measures to tackle it. on the one hand, the government should carry out more strictly the policy of family planning, thus reducing the total number of population. on the other hand, all the people should realize the harms of overpopulation. with the concerted efforts of all the parties concerned, we’re sure to solve the problem in the future.

[介绍人口英语作文

First tell me about my weakness, my weakness is in learning is very sloppy,

the class is not listening, have time to do little affectations; Class I seldom

raise your hand to answer questions, dont write homework seriously, always so

so, a homework there are many wrong topic, few of the topic.

I like to dance, because every time the holiday I let my mother sent me to

learn to dance, since then I fell in love with the dance, dancing can bring me

happiness and laughter; Would it be possible for me to have a quick response;

Can also give me joy of the dream.

I like singing, because singing throat is good to me, since then I fell in

love with singing. Singing has a characteristic is singing and dancing.

But, I have a bad habit, every day home from school homework slowly, always

let mom and dad would be angry.

Ha ha, this is me, a little girl who love singing, dancing.

From now on, I must get rid of all these bad temper, do a study seriously,

to do things, not careless good students, teachers and students, please help me,

supervision and I, thank the teacher and classmates for help, let me get rid of

the bad habit.

先说说我的缺点吧，我的缺点就是在学习上非常的马虎，上课的时候一点也不认真听讲，有时光做小动作;上课的时候我很少举手回答问题，写作业的时候一点都不认真，总是马马虎虎的，一写作业就有许多的错题，没有几个对题。

我喜欢跳舞，因为每当放假的时候我就让妈妈送我学跳舞，从那时起我就爱上了跳舞，跳舞可以给我带来快乐和欢笑;可以让我反应快;也可以给我带来快乐的梦想。

我喜欢唱歌，因为唱歌对我的嗓子好，从那时起我就爱上了唱歌。唱歌有一个特点就是可以边唱歌边跳舞。

可是，我有一个坏毛病，每天放学回家都慢慢地写作业，老是让爸爸妈妈生气。

哈哈，这就是我，一个爱唱歌、跳舞的小姑娘。

从现在起，我一定要把以上这些不好的毛病都改掉，做一个学习认真，做事不马虎的好学生，请老师和同学们帮助我，监督我，谢谢老师和同学的帮助，让我改掉这个坏毛病。

Di Yage is my good friend. She’s in Class1, Grade4 of Tianjiao Primary School. She’s a model student. She’s clever and she’s helpful, too. She often helps teachers and young students at school. She is good at Chinese, maths, English, arts and crafts, music and so on. She has a lot of hobbies. She likes painting and drawing. And she likes listening to music, having picnics with her parents. Oh yeah, she likes fishing, too. But she doesn’t like playing basketball, football, table tennis or volleyball. Zhang Ying is the best friend of mine. I like playing with her. We always work together and help each other.

我的好朋友

蒂亚戈是我的好朋友。她在Class1 ， Grade4的天骄小学。她是一个模范学生。她的聪明，她的帮助，太。她常常帮助教师和青年学生在学校。她是在中国好，数学，英语，艺术和手工艺，音乐等等。她有很多爱好。她喜欢绘画和绘图。和她喜欢听音乐，野餐后与她的父母。噢是的，她喜欢钓鱼，太。但她并不喜欢打篮球，足球，乒乓球和排球。张颖是最好的朋友。我喜欢与她一起玩。我们总是一起工作，互相帮助。

Hi，boys and girls, good morning, it is my pleasure to take this change to introduce myself, my name is Leo, I am 10 years old. About my family, there are 4 people in my family, father, mother, brother and me, my father and mother are all very kind, welcome you to visit my family if you have time!

嗨，男孩女孩们，大家上午好，很荣幸能有这个机会来介绍我自己，我叫力欧，今年10岁。关于我的家庭，我家有四口人，爸爸妈妈，哥哥，还有我，我的爸爸妈妈都是很友善的人，如果你有时间欢迎来我家玩。

I ’m a very outgoing boy(girl), I like reading、playing games and listening to music, of course, I also like to make friends with all the people in the school, I hope I will be your best friends in the school life.

我是一个很外向的男孩（女孩），我喜欢阅读，玩游戏，听音乐，当然，我也喜欢与学校里所有的人交朋友，希望在以后的学校生活中，我能成为你们最好的朋友。

中考英语作文是一大难点，怎么样让自己的作文更加的高分呢?下面请看语文迷网为大家整理的技巧。

1、为了保证文章层次分明、条理清楚，要把时间固定下来，如：记叙一件事要用过去时;写经常发生的事或对人物的描写，要用一般现在时。整个文章中的人称要一致，首尾呼应，不要随意改动，以免造成误解。

2、不要为了追求“一鸣惊人”而去找一些生冷的词汇，对这些一知半解的词你不会用，不知道如何搭配，结果可能适得其反，使文章显的生硬、不协调，甚至错误百出，所以要使用有把握的词，避免不必要的失分。比如说发生了一起意外事件，我们通常用“have an accident ”来表示，不要错误的使用“have an incident”。

3、注意不同语言的表达习惯，也是写好英语作文的重要环节，如“我的理想是做一名歌手”，很多同学写成“My ambition is to do/make a singer，” “to do”表示“做”或者“干”，“to make”表示“制作”，而“做一名歌手”则表示“成为一名歌手”应该用“be/become a singer”;又如“看书、看报”应用“read a book/newspaper”，而不是“see a book/newspaper”。因此，平时应该注意不同语言的表达习惯，切忌望文生义或一味生搬硬套。

4、有些同学因怕出错而只写短句或简单句，写出的文章过于幼稚、空洞乏味。要使文章有血有肉就要把平时学的知识用进去，如：定语从句、宾语从句、非谓语动词和比较等句型，关键时用上一、二个，就能使文章不同凡响，更有文采，特别是对关联词的使用，如“so that”、“not…but ”“not only...but also”等，会使你的文章逻辑结构紧密、层次鲜明、条理清楚，更能显示出你的英文功底，但要做到这些并非一日之功，要靠平时的不断训练和积累。

5、最简单的增分点就是认真的书写。工整漂亮的书写会给评卷老师留下美好的第一印象，在扣分时自然会“手下留情”，而且很多地区都在写作上有1分的书写分。只要平时多下点功夫，得到这一分并不难。

注意事项：

最后将中考写作的基本步骤和技巧归纳为以下几个环节：

1、细心审题细读题目中每一项提示或观察所给的每一幅画，明确文章的中心思想，弄清题意，确定写作体裁，掌握所要表达的要点做到心中有数，避免随心所欲，文不对题。

2、理顺要点在所给提示或图上标出要点，然后按事件先后的顺序或各要点之间的内在联系排序，分出层次。如果是看图作文，则要按图构思，这样做既可避免要点遗漏，又可使表达内容条理清楚。

3、构成框架将理顺的要点或每幅图画的含义加以连贯，构成写作的整体框架，进一步定人称、定时态语态、定顺序、定段落、定开头结尾。基本框架构成后，写作就有了把握。

4、组织句子用自己最熟悉的短语或句型将理顺的要点逐句表达出来，多用简单句，用有把握的复合句。要扬长避短，避难就易。若遇到表达障碍，可换一种说法，将一句变成两、三句，只求达意。

5、串句成篇将写好的句子连贯地组织起来，注意上下句的逻辑关系，适当采用递进、让步、转折、因果等关联词语，使短文浑然一体，层次分明，过渡自然。6、检查修改文章草成后，默读1～2遍，检查修改，尤其要注意人称、大小写、拼写、习惯用语、格式有无错误，要点有无遗漏，文句有无语病，词数是否恰当，行文是否连贯。

英语写作水平的提高是一个渐进的过程，只要同学们在平时多加训练，多读文章，做一个有心人，就能在中考作文中取得理想的成绩。

My grandfather is in his seventies now. He is a kind and warm-hearted old man.

He used to live with my family. At that time he always spent more than one hour examining my homework every day. When I was ill, he took good care of me. He showed great concern.

Grandfather is very warm-hearted to his neighbors and is always ready to help them. One day, a girl who is one of his neighbors injured her leg carelessly. My grandfather took her to the hospital at once and paid the fees with his own savings.

Now my grandfather is living in another city with my aunt. My parents and I all miss him very much. And I hope that I can go to visit him soon.