山东高考英语作文题目：给美国朋友Tom的回信(合集20篇)

记叙文是以写人、记事、状物为主要内容，以叙述和描写为表达方式的文章。

以写人为主的记叙文，应该注意肖像描写、行动描写、语言描写、心理描写以及对细节的描写，考生应根据写作的要求，灵活掌握，突出重点。

以写事为主的记叙文，应该注意交待六要素(时间、地点、人物、事件、原因、结果)，应该注意描写先后顺序以及记事的相对完整，注意把握好事情的开始、发展、高潮及结局。

以与景为主的记叙文，应该注意景物的主要特征，景物描写的层次，以及人与物的情感交融。

记叙文写作要点如下：

1. 明确写作目的和叙述的中心思想，段落叙述始终围绕着主题而展开，避免空间的叙述和与主题无关的内容。

2. 一篇好叙述文需要直接或间接表达以下六个问题，即：when?该事发生的时间， where?该事发生的地点，who?人物角色是谁，what?发生的是什么事，why?该事发生的原因，以及how?事件的结果是如何造成的等等。

3. 一篇记叙文，无论长短如何都应该是一个完全独立的事实，因此，在下笔时必须明确：该从何处开始叙述，该在何处结束叙述，以及应该提供何种事实才能使叙述完整。

4. 写作顺序可以采用“顺叙”、“倒叙”和“穿插叙述”的方法，但初学者最好采用“顺叙”的方法进行训练，以情节发生时间的先后为序。

记叙文高考指引

记叙文是高考书面表达中比较常用的一种形式。

1)记叙文要写作者比较了解的人或事物。

2)仔细审题，看准题目要求，确定文章的主题。文章的内容、结构、层次及所用语言都应围绕主题进行。

3)具体详细地描述。要使文章有说服力，叙述就必须繁简疏密相间。详细具体的描写有助于读者对所叙述的人物或事件等有个深刻的印象。

4)写作时要避免句子单调、毫无花样。这就要求写作时长短句结合，注意衔接词的运用。

5)叙述要生动。要使文章叙述生动，具有吸引力，必须请注意词汇的选择，时态的运用以及上下文的一致问题。词语的运用应注意是否恰当、通顺、简洁和准确。时态的运用应注意上下文的相关性、连续性，要与表达的内容一致。

6)叙述的顺序。大多数情况下叙述都是按照事情的发展及时间的先后进行的，但有时也可以采用其它顺序，如倒叙、插叙等。

7)人称。一般说来，记叙文用第一人称或第三人称来叙述。用第一人称叙述的优点是：文章比较生动、形象，使读者有身临其境的感觉，因而加强了故事的真实感和感染力。其缺点是，描写的范围受到限制。一篇文章中，由于角色的变化，人称也要随之而变，但应注意前后一致性。

1、 Dear friend,

My name is Sally. I am from China. I want a pen pal in Australia. I am 14 years old. I have no brothers or sisters in my family. MY favorite subject in school is science, because I think its very interesting. I like playing the piano and playing basketball on weekends. How about you? Can you write and tell me something about yourself?

Yours,

Sally

2、 My name is Wang Lin . Now I live in Hangzhou , China. I want to find a pen pal in England. Im now 14 years old . I speak Chinese .And I can speak a little English. I like sports ,swimming is my favorite . I also like playing the computer games . My favorite subject in school is math. I like to go to movies with my friends. My favorite movie is Beauty and Beast . Now I live with my parents .

Can you write to me soon ?

Wang Lin

3、 I have a good friend, his name is Bill. He is from Sydney, Australia. Now he lives in Beijing with his parents. He is 14 years old and his birthday is in October. He speaks English and he can speak a little Chinese. He has lots of friends in Beijing. He often plays soccer after school with them. Its his favorite sport. He likes Chinese action movies very much. He thinks they are interesting. He favorite actor is Jet Li.

4、 Jenny is an American girl She is 13 years old. She is very tall and a little thin. She has long black straight hair. She is a good-looking girl .She likes wearing a red T-shirt and blue pant. She likes singing and dancing. Her favorite singer is Gloria Green. She thinks Gloria is great. Look! Jenny is coming. She is not wearing a red T-shirt today. She is wearing a red dress.

5、 My favorite animal is a cat. I have a cat in my family. Her name is Mimi, I think she is from China. She is two years old now. She likes to eat fish every day. She is kind of lazy, but she is very cute. I like to palsy with it after school.

6、 Lin Tao usually goes to the zoo with his parents. He likes to see animals. In his room there are many toys. Most of them are boy animals. All kinds of animals in his room are his good friend. Every day he plays with them. Sometimes he asks his friends to his home to play. On vacation or weekends he like to see the monkeys and elephants in the zoo, and the dolphin show is his favorite.

7、 Jim likes Zhejiang food because its delicious. He cant stand Sichuan food because its very hot(辣). He likes Guangdong food. He doesnt mind Beijing food and he sometimes eat it . He doesnt like Human food because it doesnt agree with him (它不合他的口味)。

8、I like playing basketball .Its very interesting . I often play it with my friends. Its a team work.. Everyone needs to work together with others. (每个人都需要和别人合作). I can also make many new friends in the game. My favorite basketball player is Yao Ming. He is very tall and plays basketball very well. I want to play in NBA one day like him.

9、This is a popular person. Most(大多数) people like him. Hes not young ,about 50 years old . But he looks kind of funny. He has a round face (脸) with round eyes , a big mouth and short black hair . He likes telling jokes and makes people laugh(笑). Do you know who he is ? He is Mr. Bean

10、Tom, Nancy , Lily and Jack are my good friends .They all love to watch different TV shows. Tom likes sports, so he likes sports shows. Nancy watches comedies and she loves sitcoms. But Lily cant stand them .She just likes game shows. Jack doesnt like sitcoms either. He enjoys talk shows. So you know they are all TV shows fans.(他们都是电视迷)

[描写朋友自己或家人的喜好七年级英语作文

American culture

The main content of American culture is the emphasize on individuals value,the pursue of democracy and freedom,the promotion of deploitation(开拓,经营) and competition and the need of realistic and practicality.Its core is individualism:self first,personal need first,pursue of individual benefit and enjoyment,emphasize on achieving individual value by self-strive and self-design.This type of intentionally build up of personality and pursue customized individualism has its pros and cons,it gives incentives to people and make them exert on their potential and wisdom and as a result accelerate the development of the entire race and nation; on the other hand it is difficult to keep good relationship among people if everyone is egocentric thus make the entire society lack of unity.

[美国文化特色英语作文

the name christmas is short for "christs mass". a mass is a kind of church service. christmas is a religious festival. it is the day we cele

ate as the birthday of jesus. there are special christmas services in christian churches all over the world. but many of the festivities of christmas do not have anything to do with religion. exchanging gifts and sending christmas cards are the modern ways of celeating the christmas in the world.

the birth of jesus had a story: in nazareth, a city of galilee. the virgins name was mary was betrothed to joseph. before they came together, she was found with child of the holy spirit. joseph her husband was minded to put her away secretly. while he thought about these things, gaiel, an angel of the lord appeared to him in a dream and told him did not be afraid to take mary as wife. and mary willing forth a son, and he shall call his name, jesus, for he will save his people from their sins.

before jesus births, joseph and mary came to quirnius was governing syria. so all went to be registered, everyone to his own city. joseph also went up out of galilee, out of the city of nazareth, into judea, to the city of david, which is called bethlehem, because he was of the house and of the lineage of david, to be registered with mary, his betrothed wife, who was with child. so it was that while they were there, the days were completed for her to bedelivered. and sheought forth her firstborn son, and wrapped him in swaddling cloths, and laid him in a manger, because there was no room for them in the inn.

The college entrance exam is a big exam for students, they have learned so many years for the purpose of entering the college. For most person, they have the very deep impression about the big exam, it has changes so many people’s destinies. I had taken part in the exam, I remember it clearly, the situation just like happened yesterday.

I studied so hard, in those days that were nearing the exam, all the students focus their attention on the study, we fought together. The paper and the books were piled up our desks, when I entered the classroom, I hardly could see my classmates’ heads. Though it was the tough days for us, we felt happy, because we fought for our future, we believe what we do will bring us a promising future. These memories will linger on my mind forever.

高考对于学生来说是一个大的考试，他们已经学了那么多年，目的是考上大学。对于大部分人来说，他们对于这个重大的考试有很深的印象，它改变了很多人的命运。我已经参加了高考，我能清楚地记得它，那情形就像发生在昨天。

我很努力学习，在那些接近考试的日子，所有的学生都集中他们的精力来学习，我们一起奋斗。那些书本和试卷堆满了我们的桌子，当我今日教室时，我几乎看不到同学的头。虽然那些日子很艰苦，但是我们觉得很开心，因为我们为未来奋斗，我们相信所做的会让我们的将来更加的明朗。这些记忆将永存在我的脑海里。

I had a big argument with my good friend yesterday because of the baseball teams.During the break time,we argument about which team is the best in the league big.I thought it is yangqi and he thought it is redsocks.After the argument,he went of to say goodbye to me and close the door loudly.I was so angry with him.

Then he still didnt talk to me during the next break time.He didnt even look at me.I started to feel sad because he is my best friend.When it was time to go home I asked him if he wanted to go with me as usual.He looked at me with a strange look and still turned away.But this time,he did say goodbye to me quietly.

In the end,while I was watching TV the phone ring.It was him and he said he was sorry about what he did,he felt childish.I said never mind we are still good friends.Now I feel much better I hope we wont argument any more.

[英语作文跟好朋友吵架

高考英语满分作文:社会呼唤英雄 Society Calls for Heroes

请你参加我们有关“英雄”问题的讨论，写一篇100词左右的议论文。短文需包括以下内容，题目自拟。

1．英雄具有什么样的品质?

2．为什么现在英雄(见义勇为的人)越来越少?

3．如果让你选择，你愿意做英雄还是普通人?

注意：

词数100左右。

Society Calls for Heroes

In my opinion, it is not so easy to be a hero. First,a hero must be brave. When he sees someone do a bad deed, he must be brave enough to catch him or to stop him. Secondly, he must be strong enough, otherwise he himself will be beaten to death. There are fewer heroes now because of several reasons. I think the most important reason is that people dont want to mind other peoples business. Because they think it will do them no good. But I think society calls for heroes. Fighting against crimes is not just the job of the police. Its the duty of every citizen.

社会呼唤英雄

在我看来，它不是那么容易就可以做一个英雄。第一，一个英雄要勇敢。当他看到有人做坏事，他必须勇敢地抓住他或制止他。其次，他必须足够强大，否则他会被殴打致死。由于几个原因少英雄现在。我认为最重要的原因是人们不想考虑其他人的业务。因为他们认为它会做不好。但我认为，社会呼唤英雄。打击犯罪不仅仅是警察的职责。这是每个公民的义务。

高考英语满分的作文Tiger(老虎)

A tiger is a kind of catamount animal. It looks like a cat, but much bigger than a cat. A tiger is very ferocious and it eats mainly meat. It has yellow and black streaks all over its body and it looks very beautiful. Its tail is long and strong and it can hit its quarry dying.

Tigers live in the thick forests and small animals in the forests are tigers food.

During the past years, many forests have been cut down and the living conditions of the tigers are becoming worse and worse. There are fewer tigers left in the world now. Tigers are the animals of the world, and they should have their own living spaces. We must do our best to protect the tigers and their living environment.

老虎

老虎是猫科动物的一种，它看起来像猫却比猫大很多。老虎非常凶猛，是肉食性动物。它全身是黑黄相间的斑纹，看起来非常漂亮。它的尾巴又长又有力，能够打死它的猎物。

老虎生活在密林里，以森林中妁小动物为食。

在过去妁几年中，许多森林被砍伐，这使者虎的生存环境越来越糟。现在世界上老虎的数量非常少。老虎是世界性妁动物，它们应该有自己的生存空间。我们必须尽全力保护老虎和它们的生存环境。

高考英语满分作文:Mobile Phone 手机

Being a product of high-technology,mobile phones are being more and more widely used. Its small in size, light in weight and easy to carry, offering fast and convenient service for communication.Its of multi-function. The users use it for calling, sending short messages and internet-surfing.

In recent years, mobile phones have become popular among middle school students. Quite a few use them at school to keep in touch with their families and friends instead of writing letters, which, of course brings convenience to them. But I dont think its good to do so.

In spite of the advantage mentioned above, student users often waste a lot of time chatting over the phone in their spare time, some even use them to cheat in exams. In addition, mobile phone bill is also a heavy burden on students families.

手机是高科技的产物,被越来越广泛的应用。它很小,重量轻,便于携带,提供快捷、方便的服务进行通信。这是多功能的。用户用它来打电话,发短信和上网。

近年来,手机已经成为受中学生的欢迎。不少使用它们的学生可以在学校保持与他们的家人和朋友的联系,而不是写信,当然,这给他们带来了方便。但我不认为这样做很好。

尽管上述优势,但学生用户经常浪费很多时间，在业余时间在电话里聊天,有些人甚至使用它们在考试作弊。此外,移动电话费也是一个学生的家庭沉重的负担。

满分作文 做一个好听众 Being a Good Listener

【试题回放】

实现有效的沟通，建立良好的人际关系，不仅要善于言表，更要学会倾听。请你根据下表中所提供的信息，写一篇题为 “Being a Good Listener” 的英文演讲稿。

注意：

1、对所给要点，逐一陈述，适当发挥，不要简单翻译。

2、词数150左右。开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数。

3、演讲稿中不得提及考生所在学校及本人姓名。

Good afternoon, everyone.

The topic of my speech today is “Being a Good Listener”.

Good listening can always show respect, promote understanding, and improve interpersonal relationship.

Many people suggest that parents should listen more to their children, so they will understand them better, and find it easy to narrow the generation gap; teachers should listen more to their students, then they can meet their needs better, and place themselves in a good relationship with their students; students should listen more to their classmates, thus they will help and learn from each other, and a friendship is likely to be formed.

What I want to stress is that each of us should listen to others. Show your respect and never stop others till they finish their talk; show you are interested by a supportive silence or a knowing smile; be open-minded to different opinions even though you don’t like them. In a word, good listening can really enable us to get closer to each other.

Thank you for your listening!

大家下午好。

今天我演讲的题目是“做一个好听众”。

善于倾听，能表现出尊重，增进理解，增进人际关系。

许多人认为父母应该多听他们的孩子，这样他们就会更好地理解他们，并发现很容易缩小代沟；教师应该多听他们的学生，然后他们可以满足他们的需要更好，并把自己在一个良好的关系，学生，学生应该多听他们的同学，从而他们将帮助和相互学习，和友谊可能会形成。

我想强调的是，我们每个人都应该听从别人的要求。表现出你的尊重，从不停止别人的谈话，表明你对一个支持性的沉默或是一个微笑的微笑很感兴趣；对不同意见的人持开放态度，即使你不喜欢他们。用一个词，好的听力可以使我们彼此接近。

谢谢你的聆听！

【名师点评】

这是一篇感情真挚、热情洋溢的演讲稿，文中大量运用排比句型，不但准确流畅地表达出题目中所提供的信息，而且体现出作者熟练运用英语的能力以及不俗的文采。第三段中所使用的相同结构的复合句式，将倾听的对象及其作用阐述得淋漓尽致;而第四段中用一系列的祈使句议论应如何倾听，则更进一步地增强了这篇演说稿的说服力。

高考满分英语作文 母亲的眼睛（My Mothers Eyes）

作文一：

My mother has a pair of keen eyes which can speak. With her eyes,she observed my mood, gave me courage and made me strong. Therefore, I could face difficulties.

When I was a baby learning to walk, my mother always lent me a hand and encouraged me to get up while I fell down. As I finally threw myself into her arms, her eyes smiled with praise. Later as I grew up, I met with more difficulties. But whenever I was frustrated, my mothers eyes always

gave me hope and encouragement. Once I failed in exams, my mother encouraged me to find out the reasons. Instead of blaming me she pushed me to do better. At last I overcame the difficulty. Now I have grown up and become more independent, but whenever I come across setbacks, my mothers eyes are always with me encouraging me wherever I go.

我母亲有一双敏锐的、会说话的眼睛。那双眼睛能洞察我的心情，给我鼓励，促我坚强，因此我能面对一切困难。

孩提学步时，妈妈总是帮助我，鼓励我摔倒了就爬起来。最后我晃晃悠悠地扑进她怀抱时，她的双眼充满了赞扬之情。成长过程中，我遇到了很多困难，但灰心失望时，妈妈的双眼总给我以希望和鼓励。一次我考试不及格，妈妈没有责备我，而是鼓励我找出原因，提高我的成绩。最后我终于度过了难关。现在，我长大了，不用再让她操心了。但每当遇到挫折时，妈妈的眼睛总是伴随着我，给我鼓励。

作文二：

My mother has a pair of keen eyes which can speak. Whenever I encounter difficulties, her eyes will encourage me and help me cheer up.

When I began learning to walk, mother always lent me a hand and encouraged me to stand up while I fell down. As I finally threw myself into her arms, her eyes Smiled with praise. Aftei I entered the school, mothers eyes still encouraged me. Once I failed my Chinese exam, my mother helped me find out the reasons instead of blaming me. Now I have grown up and become more independent, but whenever I come across setbacks, my mothers eyes are always with me encouraging me wherever I go.

我的母亲有一双敏锐的、会说话的眼睛。每当我遇到困难时，这双眼睛总是鼓励我，帮我振作起来。

在我开始学走路时，母亲总是帮助我，鼓励我摔倒了就爬起来。最后我晃晃悠悠扑进她怀抱时，她的双眼充满赞扬之情。我长大上学后，母亲的眼睛仍旧鼓励我。一次，我语文考试不及格，母亲没有责备我，而是帮助我找出原因。现在，我长大了，不再让她操心了。但每当我遇到挫折时，母亲的眼睛总是伴随着我，给我鼓励。

高考英语作文满分范文背诵18 探索学习 On an exploring study

On an exploring study

探索学习

Number 46 Jiangan avenue ,Beijing, China. February 28th 2003.

2003年2月28日，中国北京市江安大道46号

Dear Mr and Mrs Brown,

亲爱的布朗夫妇，

I was so move to hear that youd like to send me to another school. Thank you very much for your kindness.However,I cant go to school now. I have a good job and if I go to school, I will have to give up the job, besides. I have a good teacher who is a famous painter.He teaches me painting in my spare time. I am so glad that you like my painting. Right now, I am working on the new work, I think, I can send you a copy next month. Thank you again for your kindness.

听说你们想让我去其他学校上学，这让我很感动。你们对我真好。但是，我现在还不能上学。我现在有稳定的工作，如果我去上学，我就要辞职，此外，我认识一名老师，他是一位著名的画家。闲暇时间里，他会教我画画。你喜欢我的作品，这让我感到非常高兴。我现在正在创作一幅新的作品，我想下个月送你一个复印版。再一次感谢你。

Yours

敬礼。

Lili.

莉莉。

朋友间的信任

The Trust Between Friends

Friends are important for us, everyone has their own friends, we share sorrow and happiness with our friends. We are making new friends now and then, but it is hard to find the genius friends, the trust between friends are hard to build. If the trust exists, friends can talk anything, they are willing to show who they are in front of their friends. While if the trust doesn’t exist, the friendship is not real deep, people will ask you when they are in trouble. The real friendship is built on the basis of trust. My best friend will never ask me to do thing all the time, instead, she cares about me, and comforts me when I am upset. That’s a real friend.

译文：

朋友间的信任

朋友对于我们来说很重要，每人认都有他们的朋友，我们和朋友分享喜怒哀乐。我们会时而不时地交朋友，但是交到真正的朋友很难，朋友间的信任很难建立。如果信任存在，朋友间可以讨论任何事情，他们愿意在朋友面前展示真正的自己。

然而如果信任不存在,友情就不会很深，人们只会在他们有困难的时候才叫上你。真正的友情是建立在信任的基础上的。我最好的朋友永远都不会一直叫我去做事情，相反的，她一直关心我，当我感到烦恼时，给予我安慰。这是真正的朋友。

[英语作文：朋友间的信任

Live with thankfulness Do you know Thanksgiving Day?Do you know why human thank God? Thanksgiving falls on the fourth Thursday of November, a different date every year. The President must proclaim that date as the official celebration.

Thanksgiving is a time for tradition and sharing. Even if they live far away, family members gather for a reunion at the house of an older relative. All give thanks together for the good things that they have. In this spirit of sharing, civic groups and charitable organizations offer a traditional meal to those in need, particularly the homeless. On most tables throughout the United States, foods eaten at the first thanksgiving have become traditional. What should we thank?

The thankful great universe provides the environment of existence for us and give us sunlight, air, water and everything in keeping with we existence of space, bring storm to let us accept to toughen for us, bring to us mysterious let us look for. The thankful parents give us the life, make us feel the merriment of the human life, feel the genuine feeling of the human life, feel the comity of the human life, feel happiness of the human life, also feel hardships and pain and sufferings of the human life!

The thankful teacher works with diligence and without fatigue everyday of teach, give us knowledge ability, put on the wing which flies toward the ideal for us. The thankful classmate and friend grows up road of, let I no longer standing alone in the itinerary of life;The with gratitude is frustrated and let us become in a time the failure stronger.

[ 多与家人朋友沟通交流初中英语作文

从每年的考试情况来看，很多同学能完整地按照要求把文章写出来，但得分却较低。实际上，高考英语书面表达是一个分值颇高且易得分的题型，只是很多同学没有掌握得分技巧。下面我们一起看看怎样才能让高考作文拽起来。

一、几点重要原则

1.智者利用押题，傻子依赖押题!

2.书面表达整篇背诵绝无必要，可以以看读为主，关键是从中汲取一些常用的词汇和表达，并能得体熟练地运用。考场上应变能力很重要!

3.英文写作模仿很重要。有时也很有效。但不能过于牵强，尤其是对一些长难句的刻意模仿使用。

4.文似看山不喜平，起承转合一定要有!

5.见微知著，一叶知秋，几个亮点足矣：有道是：浓妆淡抹总相宜，作文写得简洁到位要比长篇大论更显功力。

6.心不为形役。不要身陷逐字逐句英汉对号式的字面翻译，要把表达的主动权始终握在自己手里。

二、善用万能句以不变应万变

历届高考，书面表达考得最多是提示作文，即提供一定的情景内容，要求考生完成100词左右的短文。

从命题方式看，有短文提示、要点提示、图画提示、情景提示以及图表提示等；体裁以应用文为主，记叙文为辅：题材为广大中学生所熟悉的日常生活。从提供要点的情景方面看，历届高考书面表达题均属供料小作文，采用文字供料或文字说明加图画(图表)的方式供料。

备考时，同学们要利用有限的时间把以前背的范文整理一下，从中选出不同体裁、不同题材的范文各一篇(范文以高考真题的高分作文为佳)，把它们重新记忆，一定记牢。这样，高考时不管什么样的文章都可套用背诵好的格式。避免考场上因紧张而无章可循。

最后阶段，还要总结一下写作时常用且能出彩的固定句型、句式，比如强调句型、定语从句、名诃性从句等，牢记英语的五个基本句式，背诵平时老师总结的万能句。以不变应万变。

考场答题前，应仔细审题，研究所提供的文字和图画(图表)材料和作文要求。分析、提炼要点，理顺要点，确立基本的写作思路，不要忽略任何一个词。关键的词更不能遗漏，构思好写几个方面，缺一不可。

写作时，尽量用学过的英语句型和词组。少写长句和复杂句以免弄巧成拙、漏洞百出。但目前高考有关书面表达的评分标准要求作文中应有较多的语法结构和词汇，因此同学们在书面表达中不能都写小句、短句和单句，还要正确运用高级词汇和复杂结构。恰当运用过渡词，使写出来的文章含金量更高，更具可读性。

三、高分作文六大特性

1.条理性。指的是合理安排文章结构。首先，在文章思路、组织材料、叙述顺序等方面要有一定的条理性。其次。根据需要，安排好段落，各段之间要层次分明，也要重视每一段的开头和结尾，开头语往往是总起句，结尾语往往是总结句。

2.准确性。指要求写出语法正确的句子，包括时态、语态、用词和句法等，要准确、地道地表达。必须要牢牢掌握一些常用句型或习惯表达，避免中式英语，在实践中不断总结中英用法的差异，养成用英语思维写作的习惯。

3.流畅性。指根据整篇文章思想的需要，有效采用不同的连接手段，使文章层次清楚、行文连贯。

4.简洁多样性。简洁性就是语言简洁，不重复。多样性就是能随情景内容的变化写出句式多样的语句。这也是新课程标准对写作的评价标准。

5.思想性。新标准对写作的要求，增加了情感因素，在准确流畅表达写作要点的同时，适当增加句子的感情色彩，增加一些人情味，使文章读起来更亲切，完全达到与读者进行交流的目的。

6.美观性。指的是卷面书写规范、清楚、干净、整洁。

四、怎样才能有拽的感觉

1.高考写作的实质变相考查句型与词汇的灵活应用

英语写作不同于语文作文的写作，如果说语文作文是一个自由发挥的舞蹈，那么高考英语写作就是带着枷锁在跳舞。我之所以这样来形容，是因为高考英语写作的内容都已经通过文字、表格、图片这三种形式给定，内容方面，不需要学生进行发挥，大家所需要发挥的就是不要老去给这个不变的内容穿毫无变化的校服(简单句)，而要去穿一些不一样的衣服，让它显得不那么单调，让阅卷老师能看到不同，而那些所谓的衣服也就是多变句型与词汇。

2.写作的评分标准怎么去迎合评卷老师的胃口

我了解到目前很大一部分学生的作文都处在15分左右，写作满分25分，15分也就是个及格分，那么15分和20多分的作文到底差在哪里?这个问题很容易回答。15分的作文中规中矩，该对的都对，包括内容要点的完整，语法与词形的正确，但是全都是简单句子的堆砌，没有任何亮点。而20多分的作文在句型词汇方面就做了很好的包装，它的句子穿的衣服已经不是校服，而是李宁、耐克，或者是阿迪，所以让人觉得很拽，而高考英语写作要的就是这种很拽的感觉。

3.写作提分的三要素句型。连词。高级词汇

句子是我们写作文最大的单位。有了漂亮的句子。用好的连词将其连句成段，再加上一些如星星般亮点词汇的点缀，一篇好的高考英语作文就诞生了。而这三个因素中最容易把握的是句子，最难的是高级词汇，限于大家的词汇还比较有限。一篇文章中出现那么一两个就够了。我们应该把重心放在句型上，因为这个最容易把握。

但是大家又有这样的困惑，学校里老师也给了我们很多的句型啊，动辄成五十上百句的，大家背得挺多，但是面对考试的时候，发现背的那些怎么也用不上。其实不是那些东西没有用，而是它们太干了，就好比一根干骨头，大家嚼起来很没有味。也不知道该把它们往哪里放。

在这里我给大家提供一种比较切实可行、迅速提高的练习方法，在接下来的时间里只要大家按照这个方法来，就一定会有收获。

找出历年真题，一周只需要写两篇。但是要这么来写。

1.把你要写的内容要点用九到十句的汉语表达出来。

2.逐一地进行翻译，不是用简单句。而是要刻意地去想：

(1)可以用什么样的复杂句；

(2)怎样去避开不会的表达，转义。

例如：

这本书是如此的有趣，以至于我读了一遍又一遍。

1.This book was so interest，ing that l read it again and again，

2.This was such an interest，ing book that l read it again andagain，

3.This was s0 jnteresting abook that l read it again and again

4.So interesting was thisbook that l read it again and again

这四句译文当中无疑评卷老师最欣赏的是第四句，因为它用了倒装。

4.如何备考

其实这种思维大家都有。但是没有成为一种思路，让它能在考试中起到作用，那是因为大家练得少。英语写作处在一种很尴尬的境地，一方面大家要分数。但另外一方面大家一个学期里写的作文也就是期中期末的两篇。毫不夸张地说，有的学生上了三年的高中可能只写了六篇作文，所以练习是很重要的，要是现在不练而把高考当练习。那么作文只拿14、15分也合情合理了，到那时你不要骂评卷老师不公平，而应该问问自己备考的时候为什么不多练几篇。时间都是挤出来的，希望大家可以挤出时间来练写作。

Dear Mercy,

亲爱的梅斯，

How is everything going! Last time you said you are anxious now because you

find it hard to learn English well. Don’t worry. I think you have to improve

your English step by step. And I will right behind you. In my view, you should

develop you interest on English first. According to my experience, I think

watching English movie, listen to some wonderful English songs and talk in

English on the Internet would be helpful. Secondly, you have to prepare lessons

before class that will help you understand what the teacher says in the class. I

know you feel bored in the class, but you have force yourself to be

concentrated. A few days later you will feel it a little easy to learn English.

The left steps I will tell next time. By the way, we have not seen each other

since your family move to Hunan a year ago. Have you ever thought about going

back to visit me and learn English together in the coming Summer vacation.

Looking forward to your reply.

过得可好。上次你说你现在很焦虑因为你觉得很难学好英语。别担心。我觉得要提高英语你得一步步来。我会帮你的。在我看来，首先应该要培养你对英语的兴趣。根据我的经验，我认为看英文电影，听美妙的英文歌曲以及在互联网上与他人用英语交流会有很大的帮助。其次，你要预习，这样可以让你理解老师在课堂上说的东西。我知道你觉得上英语课很无聊，但你必须强迫自己聚精会神的听。一段时间后，你会感觉到学习英语变得容易些了。剩下的步骤下一次我会告诉你的。顺便提一下，自从一年前你们家搬到湖南后我们就没见过面。你有没有想过暑假的时候回来看看我，我们可以一起学习英语。期待你的回复。

Best wishes,

Li

丽

关于春节的英语作文高考英语作文

关于春节的英语作文 高考英语作文 春节是中国最重要的节日之一。

Favorite Spring Festival is the most important festival in China .Its to celebrate the lunar calendar s new year .In the evening before the Spring Festival ,families get together and have a big meal .In many places people like to set off firecrackers .Dumplings are the most traditional food .Children like the festival very much ,because they can have delicious food and wear new clothes .They can also get some money from their parents. This money is given to children for good luck . People put New Year scrolls on the wall for good fortune .

The Spring Festival lasts about 15 days long .People visit relatives and friends with the words "Have all your wishes ". People enjoy the Spring Festival ,during this time they can have a good rest .

《“本”立思“俗”而“妙”生》

人理如棋理。落子出手之中，蕴含无穷哲思，颇为叹服。叹服之余，思及我辈青年学生，吾以为应以“本手”固基培元，“妙手”更上一层，而“俗手”亦能化为己用。

求学之途漫漫，我们大多数尚在“初学者”阶段——初学知识，初学方法。固本培元的重要性不言而喻。本手的功夫扎实，棋力才会提高;基础的知识学好，妙趣横想才会有据。然而有这样一种人，“根不固而求木之长”，急于在学习中寻求“大招”，“秒杀”，热衷于报名这样的课程，轻易抛却基础知识，不去究其原理，不去深度思考，遇到题目便想着“我要用妙手”，进而将那固有的模板套入。长此以往，思维却僵化了，却将题目化简为繁了，换个本质相似的题目便不会了，就这样陷入了痛苦的深渊，一切所谓的努力白白流失。若是这样而来的“妙”，又能妙在何处呢?

因此，我主张：打牢基础，深刻理解通法、常理，才有妙手生辉的可能。

而同时，我们却也不能拘泥于本手。要有一定的创新意识，敢于去打破常规。不能因基础知识重要就一直陷在对其研究中，打牢、夯实后就得开始盖高楼。此时便是比刚刚入门的初学者更高一层了。适当地将自己的思维放开，跳脱，有新的灵感不必马上否定，尽管去天马行空，尽管去放浪形骸之外。灵感落地，或许真正的妙手就出来了，思维空间提升上也因此大有裨益。

然有了本，甚至妙，失败仍然常在。该当何如?捶胸顿足，懊恼痛苦，批评指责?要想到，那可能便是“俗手”在作怪。何谓俗手?身在其中不自知，貌似合理，从全局看才会看到受损。此时需要的便是以全局意识去反思或是找高手探讨，去找出那步“俗手”，再针对自我情况加以改进。倘若是因为全然抛弃或是未深入理解根本、急于追求妙手所致，那的确得将自己好好骂醒，脱身而出，乖乖回去打好基础。

而倘若是在踏实探索更进一步的过程中出了俗手，那未必是坏事。出了俗手或许还是一次难能可贵的机会。及时反思，纵览全局，寻找故障所在，填补上这个缺口，也是在进一步完善，将错误化为己用，为以后的棋局多了一种可规避可提升的可能。于学习之中，遵照此理，我们应对错题有思考与积累，而非困顿于成绩下滑，排名下降的牢笼里痛哭流涕。

“本”立思“俗”而“妙”生，其中利害关系值得我们审慎。固本培元，创新思维，全局意识，及时反思......求学之路漫漫，我辈青年学生当将其串起，一同前行。不仅于学习有益，更给成人自立激发新思。

人生如棋，落子无悔，棋中妙理，理中得解。

A Great Friend

As I am now a senior high school student, I have a great many friends, but there is one whom I prize over all the rest. I first made his acquaintance when I began to go to school. He has been my constant companion ever since.

Though he is serious in appearance, he never fails to be interesting. Often he is clever, sometimes even merry and gay. He is the most knowledgeable friend a person could have. He knows virtually every language of the world, all the events of history, and the words of all the great poets and philosophers. A kindly benefactor, he is admired and enjoyed by everyonewho makes his acquaintance.

To me, he has been a great teacher as well as a friend. He first taught methe secrets of my own language and then those of others. With these keys he showed us how to unlock all the arts and sciences of man.

My friend is endlessly patient. Dull though I may be, I can return to him again and again, and he is always ready to teach me. When I am bored,he entertains me. When I am dispirited, he lifts me up. When I am lonely, he keeps me company. He is a friend not only to me but to millions around the world. Shall I tell you his name? His name is “reading”。

[非比寻常的好朋友的英语作文

初中英语作文:我的朋友-My friend

I have many friends. One of them is my classmate Ma Hua.He is a League member and one of the best students in my class.He is fond of English and good at it. He often practises reading aloud. So he has a good pronunciation.He is always ready to help others. With his help I have made GREat proGREss. I have made up my mind to catch up with him and to join the League in the near future.

《吾辈当奋斗》

“少年智则国智，少年强则国强，少年独立则国独立。”梁启超先生的《少年说》中这句振奋人心的话，让中国少年担起少年之则，圆强国之梦，成为民族希望。

狮子般的力量，强壮而有耐力，就像运动健儿在赛场上迸发出力量。

雅典奥运会上刘翔奋力奔跑，带着全国的希望，以12.91秒的成绩夺得桂冠。游泳健将孙杨，将自己的大好年华奉献给祖国，多次为国而战，为国争光。刘国梁，著名乒乓球选手集奥运会、世乒赛、世界杯冠军于一身，他将汗水凝成乒乓球，让乒乓球在赛场上擦出亮丽而绚烂的火花，在一次次赛事中获得辉煌。还有许多人，他们向全世界证明中国是体育强国!他们正在用自己的努力谱写体育强国之梦。

猎豹般的敏捷，快速而又聪慧，就像中国青年科技发展这快。

马云，带领他的商业团队发现了电商机遇。经过艰辛的努力，一手缔造中国的电商帝国，让中国经济踏入一个新纪元。国产大飞机C919试飞成功的背后，有多少科技人员呕心沥血。我国第一艘载人航天飞船神舟五号成功升飞的背后，多少科技人员黑发变白发白发，用尽毕生所学，在中国航天史上留下了令人难忘的一页。当飞船成功返回的那一刻，他们所付出的一切都得到了回应，向全世界证明了中国是科技强国!他们正在用自己的汗水谱写科技强国之梦。

慧星般的耀眼，精彩而又美丽，就像中国文学艺术之昌盛。

莫言，这位家喻户晓的作家是中国首位获得诺贝尔奖文学奖的作家，他的《红高粱》是众人皆知的作品。刘慈欣的《三体》将中国的科幻小说提高到了世界级。更有人出版古学书籍校补订正，大力推行阅读古诗词古文学，了解中国历史，让中国人变得有文化，有涵养，有丰富的知识。他们向全世界证明中国是文化大国!他们正在用自己的意志书写文化强国之梦。

而我们作为中华少年，身上也承担着振兴中华的责任。为此，我们应努力学习，认真读书，加强锻炼，拥有强健的体魄与智慧的头脑，未来祖国需要我们时方可挺身而出。

国之强盛，在于奋斗。前辈们既能如此，吾辈中华少年为何不能?我们要为中华之强盛而读书。用自己的恒心与能力，圆强国之梦!

Dear Jack,

Im glad to have received your e-mail but I am sorry you are having some

trouble in making friends.

In my opinion, friendship is one of the most important things in everyones

life because without friends we will suffer loneliness. If you would like to

take my advice, youll win real friendship. First, why not communicate with your

friend when possible and tell him/her what you think about friends and

friendship and let him/her know that you want to make friends with him/her.

Secondly, you should learn to share your happiness and sorrow with your friends.

Thirdly, it would be a good idea if you like to invite him/her to join in some

activities such as swimming and ball games, which can make you learn to

appreciate your friends and cherish your friendship.

I hope you will find these opinions and ideas useful. Best wishes!

没错，托尔斯泰就是中国教育马面换牛头的托。但换来换去，顶多就是要么一个禽，要么一个兽。

去年见证了高考的，变化了我的人生，却未曾见到一点一滴的魅力，我怀着忐忑不安的心情在这里执笔。人生是有光和影构成的，这是一个如此抽象的逻辑，让我们扎根于农村的娃娃无法思考的一个茫然问题。

我们就这样再次得变成了面包。

我们就像一个个没有蒸好的面包等待着高考的蒸烤。

今年的山东高考是一次跨越飞速的升华，但似乎有点急，没有揣摩考生在学校蒙蔽如何来回答一个人生的变化。

我只知道俺的人生遭到了高考的烘烤，遭遇了中国教育的，为啥还要说你的魅力，请你告诉我，你到底哪里美，哪里魅？

托尔斯泰爷爷，如果你活着，我想你肯定不愿意被这样利用成一个托来拯救一个悲哀的制度。

托尔斯泰爷爷，请你告诉我光和影到底是怎样一个传说。

托尔斯泰爷爷，当您的纯真遇上了我们这样一群调皮捣蛋的撒谎流氓，缩头乌龟，我想您只有无可奈何，您觉得我们敢说这个"影"么？抱歉，我们真的不能。去年的一次经历让我再也不敢走这个偏锋。

托尔斯泰爷爷，您只是一个托，甚至连个托的作用都没起到，我替命题今年山东高考作文的"教兽"给您道歉，希望您能接受。

我们都是可爱的小伙，怀着一颗原本纯真但现在却被烤得焦黑的木炭烂肉来面对光影和阴暗，抽象已经扭曲了托尔斯泰的本意，我想这位可爱的爷爷肯定不会单独拿出这么一句看上去很精辟，其实就是一个屁精的话来倒腾人生魅力哲学史。

我们只是一群刚满18岁的孩子，看上去很猛的命题人，对我们过分期望的中国教育却希望我们能够领悟托尔斯泰爷爷半个世纪的人生，您说难吗？

题跑了，不会越跑越偏，我会让它误入正途。

那些单纯的谈论人生观的，您不觉得您在扯淡吗？那些深究研究光和影的，您以为这是左手倒影右手年华呢？那些看上去就对这个题目如此醒目了然的，莫非您得到了托尔斯泰爷爷的真传？

字数已渐800，最后祈祷托尔斯泰爷爷能早日复活，给我们诠释一个真正的人生变化。

就算社会有了影，我们也不能说，因为我害怕突然有一天会被"扫白"了。

就算人生充满了黑暗，你也不能说，说了是要被杀头的。

就算你被了，你也不能呐喊，因为你会被抓进去滴。

所以，就算我的人生千变万化，我都不会说一个影，只有光，金光闪闪，万道光芒，啊！再说就要跑到凌霄宝殿去了……

终于完成任务，交题，希望阅卷老师的人生光彩夺目，脱离斑驳的歪门邪影。

请你根据下面的提纲，以“我的家乡”为题，写一篇100—120字的短文。

提纲：

(1) 家乡的地理位置;

(2) 解放前的情况;

(3) 解放后的变化;

(4) 对家乡的感情。

My Home Town

My home town is a beautiful place. It stands beside a wide river and is rich in fish and rice.

But in the old days it was a poor and backward little town. Many people had no work. They lived a hard life.

In 1949 my hometown was liberated. Since then great changes have taken place there. The streets have been widened. Factories, schools, hospitals, cinemas and theatres have sprung up one after another. The life of the people is greatly improved.

I love my hometown. All the more I love its people. They are working hard so as to make it still richer and more beautiful.

[题目为我的家乡的英语作文

中考英语作文范文 我的朋友

I have many friends. One of them is my classmate Ma Hua.He is a League member and one of the best students in my class.He is fond of English and good at it.

He often practises reading aloud. So he has a good

pronunciation. He is always ready to help others. With his help I have made great progress. I have made up my mind to catch up with him and to join the League in the near future.

Kelly is one of my classmates. She is a pretty girl but a little bit shy. She seldom talks to others. But my classmates still like her very much. Smiles are always on her face and she is friendly to others. Her study is very good. When we ask her some questions, she is always ready to help. Singing is her favorites and she sings well. I think she is a talented girl.

凯莉是我的同学之一。她是个漂亮的女孩，但是她有点害羞。她很少和别人说话，但是同学们仍然很喜欢她。她脸上总是露出微笑，对别人十分友善。她的成绩很好。当我们问她问题的时候，她总是乐意帮忙。她最喜欢唱歌，而且唱得很好。我觉得她是一个有天赋的女孩。