初三感恩英语作文（优秀20篇）

The pattern of the Thanksgiving celebration has never changed through the years. The big family dinner is planned months ahead. On the dinner table, people will find apples, oranges, chestnuts, walnuts and grapes. There will be plum pudding, mince pie, other varieties of food and cranberry juice and squash. The best and most attractive among them are roast turkey and pumpkin pie. They have been the most traditional and favorite food on Thanksgiving Day throughout the years.

Tomorrow is fathers day， and my fathers busy figure is shaking in front of my eyes， how can I express my love for my father? Id like to go， oh， yeah， thats the way to do it.

Fathers day came， and I said to my mother， "mom， today is fathers day. Lets give dad a surprise." "Mom said，" ok." I put it on my mothers ear and whispered， "we are..."

My mother and I messed up the house， as if we didnt know anything. Dad went home， looked at his house and asked， "do you know what day it is?" My mother said， "let me see， is the world anti-drug day?" "No." Dad pointed to the day on the clock. I cried out， "its our banjis birthday!" Dad listened， as if his heart were broken.

Baba bowed his head and entered the room. My mother and I broke into the room and said， "happy fathers day!" Then my father hugged me and mom， and we all laughed.

This is my happiest day of the year.

俗话说得好，“百善孝为先”，孝敬父母一直是从古至今，不分性别，不分年龄，不分教派，是所有人心目中共同的理念。父母给予我们生命，抚养我们长大，我们要孝敬父母，懂得感恩，感恩他们为我们辛苦操劳的一生!

孝顺不只是对父母好，也是对自己负责，古往今来，二十四孝子的大名流芳百世，为后人所称赞，除此之外，上天往往会眷顾孝子。

从前，有一个士兵，非常孝顺，他知道母亲喜欢吃锅底饭，也就是锅巴，便总把军中吃剩的锅巴留一些下来，装进一个小布袋中，每隔几天送回家一次。有一次，他和往常一样，刚存好锅巴时，突然，敌军从四面八方涌来，将他们打得大败而逃，都被围困到了山林之中，一连围困十几天，山林中的士兵死的死，伤的伤，加上毒虫猛兽的危害，饥饿的困扰，几乎死光，而他却依靠存下的锅巴活了下来。

真是孝顺的人上天都眷顾，所以我们也要孝敬父母，感恩父母。

还有一个故事，讲的是从前有一个大财主，天天吃斋念佛，却总是厄运连连，他疑惑不解，去问了寺庙里一个得道高僧，高僧看着他，只说了一句话，“你要好好待你的父母。”财主恍然大悟，他从未关心过父母，只是让他们吃粗粮，喝冷水，对他们从来都是不理不睬，不管不问。后来，他好好的对待父母，还因此得到一个好名声。

由此可见，感恩父母是多么重要。孝敬父母，尊敬长辈，是做人的本分，是天经地义的美德，也是各种品德形成的前提。

感恩父母其实并不难，我们并不需要像二十四孝子一样扬名天下，我们有时的一杯水，一声问候，一次主动，都能让父母感动，所以，感恩父母，人人都应该做到。

My teacher gave me an assignment "experience life" last week. I had been thinking how to finish it because I had never done any thing by myself before.

Mother was out today. It was a good chance to complete the assignment. Seeing the barrel was empty, I decided to fetch water from the well.

I took the empty barrel and went towards the well outside the yard. It snowed yesterday, so the alley was very slippery. A layer of thickice was frozen on the platform of the well. I was frightened by the sight, but I gathered my courage to walk towards it.

The alley was so slippery that I walked with difficultly. Suddenly, I slipped and fell down, water in the barrel totally poured down on the ground. I stepped on the platform carefully. After standing steadily and squatting down slowly, I hooked the barrel at the end of the rope and put the rope down slowly. I made an effort to drag the barrel up after it was filled with water. I was very careful because it was easy to slip and fall. Then, I carried the barrel of water and returned to my house. My figners were frozen stiff. I realized my effort was in vain. I hated myself.

I failed to finish the assignment but I did experience life through a trifle which seemed easy but difficult to do well. Such was my first experience of life.

Thanksgiving parents, always thought is a simple thing, but there is only one word, do it. However, we have only two words, to parents of gratitude.

If we dont want to parents, parents tend to put the thing to us, is that you dont feel warm? We are in trouble, not just parents to help us solve?

We always say repay their parents when they grow up, parents waiting for this day is too long for too long, we should start small, do every detail let parents moved, grow up, parents etc. This day is happy, moved.

We should repay our parents, if parents beat you is because you naughty, many parents have high expectations, a less-pressured expectations, grow up, dont failed to live up to their parents expect of you.

感恩父母，总以为是一个简单的事，但做起来只有一个字，难。但是，我们得对父母只有两个字，感恩。

如果我们非要父母的东西，父母往往会把东西给我们，难道这温暖你感觉不到吗?我们遇到困难，还不是父母帮我们解决?

我们总是说长大后报答父母，父母等这一天可是等得太久太久了，我们应该要从小事做起，做每一个细节都让父母感动，长大后，父母等这一天也是开心的，感动的。

我们应该报答父母，如果父母打你也是因为你调皮，很多父母都抱有望子成龙，望女成凤的期望，长大后，别辜负了父母对你的期望。

More than any other holiday, Thanksgiving is a celebration of family and home. Many people say that this year they are especially thankful for their families and friends and the good things in their lives. On Thanksgiving, people enjoy a long day of cooking, eating and talking. The traditional meal almost always includes a turkey with a bread mixture cooked inside.

Other traditional Thanksgiving foods served with turkey are sweet potatoes, cranberries and pumpkin pie. Stores are said to sell more food at Thanksgiving than at any other time of the year. And many people eat more food at Thanksgiving than at any other time of the year.

Thanksgiving Day

In the United States， the fourth Thursday in November is called Thanksgiving Day。 On that day， Americans give thanks for the blessings they have enjoyed during the year。Thanksgiving Day is usually a family day。 People always celebrate with big dinners and happy reunions。 Pumpkin pie and Indian pudding are traditional Thanksgiving desserts。 Relatives from other cities， students who have been away at school， and many other Americans travel a long distance to spend the holiday at home。

The moment I stepped in high school, I have made up my mind to study hard

for the purpose to enter a good university. In the first year, I made a lot of

new friends. All of them were so excellent that I wanted to learn from them. As

the second year has come, I felt great pressure. My scores went up and down and

I felt so worried. I told myself that I should find a way to relieve pressure.

Listening to music was a good way. I would sing with the music and shake my

body, which made me forget everything but the joyous music. Second, I would like

to talk to my friends, because they understood me. We would have some tea in the

shop and then shared our secrets. When we laughed out loudly, all the annoyance

would disappear.

Mother, it is we are thankful people was born. Who is how many years, every day in the laundry to cook for us, who are both in sorching summer, or in the snow after send us to school, and hurried off to work, who is lets us grow from day to day in her arms, and she is getting old, who has raised us, but I do not wish for any return. Is mother! Life, some people are looking for a mothers love, but dont ignore the ubiquity of maternal love!

Remember the night I was only five years old, it was raining, I have a fever, my father on a business trip is not at home, mother picked up I will go to the hospital, my mother in the hospital a night didnt sleep a wink, eyes staring at the bottle of intravenous drip, until my fever is gone, she finally breathed a sigh of relief. Then my mother again give me water, and to buy me a delicious. Looked at his mother busy figure, I secretly in my heart swear: must study hard repay mother.

Another time, just learning English month, I had to 81 points, the bottom of the class. In the face of such scores, I would be ready to get training, returned home after mother knew, not only not scold me, comfort me, dont lose heart, and now the English course at the beginning, as long as you listen more from now on, read more, write more, practice more. Performance will improve soon. Mother said. This time is I overlooked your English study, later I accompany you a piece of learning. This situation really than scold me, hit me also makes me uncomfortable. From then on, no matter how busy mom, always "nutrition" for me, everything comes to him who waits, the mid-term exam, I achieved good scores of 95 points.

Mother, you have to use solid arms hold up a piece of blue sky for me, when I am frustrated fall, is the care you with infinite comfort me, encouraged me, so I can stand up again. Today, I will use my growing plump wings for you -- -- my mother from the rain.

母亲，是我们一出生都值得感恩的人。多少个岁月，是谁每天起早贪黑的为我们洗衣做饭，是谁无论在炎炎夏日，还是在冰天雪地送我们上学之后，又匆匆赶去上班，是谁让我们在她的臂弯一天天成长，而她却一天天变老，是谁养育了我们，却不求任何的回报。是母亲!生活中，有些人在寻找着母爱，却不忽略了无处不在的母爱!

记得5岁那年的一天晚上，天下着雨，我发烧了，父亲出差不在家，母亲抱起我就去医院，在医院里妈妈一宿没合眼，两眼一直盯着瓶子里的点滴，直到我的发烧退了，妈妈才长舒了一口气。接着妈妈又是给我喂水，又是给我买好吃的。看着妈妈忙碌的身影，我暗暗在心里发誓：一定要努力学习报答妈妈。

还有一次，刚学英语月考时，我只得了81分，全班倒数几名。面对这样的分数，我做好了挨训的准备，回到家妈妈知道后，不但没有训我，反而安慰我，不要灰心，现在英语这门课刚开始，只要你从现在开始多听，多读，多写，多练习。成绩会提高很快。妈妈还说。这段时间是我忽略了你的英语学习，以后我陪你一块学。这情景真比骂我，打我还令我难受。从那以后，妈妈不管多忙，总是为我“补充营养”，功夫不负有心人，期中考试时，我取得了95分的好成绩。

母亲，您曾用坚实的臂弯为我撑起一片蓝天，当我受到挫折跌倒时，是您用无限的关怀安慰我，鼓励我，使我能重新站起来。而今，我也要用我日益丰满的羽翼为您————我的妈妈遮风挡雨。

In recent years, studying abroad has been popular in our country. More and more middle school students would like to go abroad through mediators. Is it good or bad to study abroad? In my opinion, on one hand, it has some advantages. Studying abroad can provide better studying conditions. People can make rapid progress in their foreign language study and it can also help widen their field of vision. Meanwhile, young students can learn advanced science and technology from foreign countries and spread cultures of different nations.

On the other hand, it has disadvantages. For example, because of the lack of living experience and poor capability to take care of themselves, they may feel lonely and homesick. In addition, high living expenses and tuition fees will become a heavy burden upon their parents.

So I think whether studying abroad or not should be decided according to oneself and ones family. It is not right to follow others.

[精选初三英语作文：Studying Abroad

I used to be a problem student. I was always late for school, listened to music and ate snacks in class. What’s worse, I hardly ever finished my homework on time.Luckily, with the help of my teachers and classmates, things changed a lot. Now I behave well and study hard. I can almost finish my homework well with the help of my classmates. What’s more, I get on well with others and always help others. I have learned a lot over these three years, but I know I could hardly succeed without the people who helped and supported me—my teachers, my parents and my classmates.

I won’t forget the days I have spent in my junior high school. I’m looking forward to new experiences in senior high school. Although the life in high school is hard ，I have confidence to do better in the future.

I am a middle school student. I am active. I like going out to play.

Recently, I am fond of skating. I want a pair of skating shoes, but my mother doesn’t allow, because she worries about me to be hurt in playing. So, I want to find a part-time job to earn money to buy a pair of skating shoes. I am always free at weekends. During the weekday, I think I can’t have spare to work. I am tough and I am willing to do everything I can do.

Anyone has the information about part-time job, please recommend to me.

我是一名中学生。我很活泼开朗。我喜欢出去玩。

最近，我迷上了溜冰。我想要一双溜冰鞋，可是我妈妈不允许，因为她担心我会受伤。所以，我想找份兼职来挣钱买一双滑冰鞋。周末我一般都是有空的。星期一到星期五，我觉得我没有多余的时间工作。我很能吃苦耐劳的，而且我愿意做我能做的任何工作。

谁有关于兼职的信息，请向我推荐一下。

As more and more people focus on health diet,green food has begun to draw more and more attention by the public.In recent years,the market demand for green food has increased dramatically,and all kinds of green food have emerged in an endless stream.Why does green food become so popular in China?Above all,compared with ordinary food,green food is healthier,safer and more nutritious.Moreover,nowadays,many vegetables are polluted because of the usage of agricultural chemicals,while green food is free of pollution.Besides,with the improvement of the living standards,more people can afford a healthier but more expensive lifestyle.So green food,despite its higher price,still becomes peoples favorite food.

However,nowadays the market is full of real and fake green food,making many consumers confused.Therefore,the government must strengthen the supervision and administration of green food market.Besides,consumers should increase the knowledge of green food.Only in this way can green food play a more positive role in peoples life.

随着越来越多的人关注健康饮食,绿色食品已经开始吸引越来越多的公众关注。近年来,市场对绿色食品的需求急剧增加,并出现了各种各样的绿色食品在无穷无尽。为什么在中国绿色食品变得如此受欢迎?最重要的是,与普通食品相比,绿色食品更健康、更安全、更有营养。此外,如今,许多蔬菜污染由于农用化学品的使用,而绿色食品没有污染。此外,随着生活水平的提高,越来越多的人能买得起一个更健康更昂贵的生活方式。所以绿色食品,尽管其更高的价格,还成为人们最喜欢的食物。

然而,如今的市场充满真实和假的绿色食品,使许多消费者感到困惑。因此,政府必须加强绿色食品市场的监督管理。此外,消费者应该提高绿色食品的知识。只有这样才能绿色食品在人们的生活中发挥更积极的作用。

曲月光曲是贝多芬报予坎坷的命运最灿烂的微笑， Qu Yueguangqu is the most brilliant smile that Beethoven gives a bumpy fate,

一本《假如给我三天光明》是海伦凯勒报予失明的一生最平和的微笑。

一部《史记》是司马迁报予不公的生命最动人的微笑。

人生在世，难免有失败与无奈，这需要我们怀抱感恩的心，用对生命所有的爱与希望，感恩挫折。

低矮的牢房里闪烁着昏暗的烛火，小小的天窗连接着外面沉沉的黑。牢房外冷雨瓢泼的下，雨丝如万箭齐发，大地无处可逃，只能静静的躺在那一片透明的血泊中。牢房中，你独自踱步，内心的泪如万箭齐射，你无所适从，唯有任凭冰冷的泪水淹没你的颈，你的头，等待那最后窒息的一刻。桌上的圣旨静静的躺着，刺眼的大字一点一点灼伤了你的眼睛。当慷慨的死与苟且的活成为你的选择时，你迷茫了。命运待你如此不公，也许你该顺随他意，用一死来了却无尽的屈辱与悲痛。

你还依稀记得那天朝堂上汉武帝的盛怒，你还依稀记得那天周围文武百官丑恶的嘴脸，你还依稀记得这期间你受的百般煎熬种.种屈辱，你恨，恨苍天无眼恨奸人当道，恨一生多艰命运不公。

你不再留恋这黑暗的人世，不再留连这无道的世间，你决定用死来结束这本不该然而耳畔响起了父亲临终时的遗愿，脑中浮现出那未完成的史记，文中充斥着拘而演《周易》的文王，厄而作《春秋》的仲尼，失明却著有《国语》的左丘……

你对生命所有的爱与希望重新被点燃，你对生命的感恩燃起了无穷的勇气。你毅然决定苟且的活下来，用高贵的姿态俯视屈辱，用有意义的一生对挫折微笑。在你余下的一生中充斥着世人的嘲笑，充斥着旁人的不屑，充斥着无数的不理解，但这都不能浇灭你对生命的爱与希望，都不能让你埋怨生活意志消沉，都不能阻止你勇敢的面对不幸，豁达的处理挫折。

终于一部《史记》使你能以胜利者的姿态面对挫折。

终于一部《史记》使你的光芒永垂千古。

终于一部《史记》让你向世人证明了生命的永生。

那一夜，那一座低矮的牢房，那一颗感恩的心，那一种对生命的态度，造就了你这颗历史长空的启明星，造就了《史记》那一部爱的赞歌恨的诅曲，造就了千百年来笑对挫折的态度，造就了这史坛永远的奇迹。

The Great Wall runs across North China like a huge dragon, It winds its way

from west to east, across deserts, over mountains, through valleys till at last

it reaches the sea. Its the longest wall on the earth, also one of the wonders

in the world.The Great Wall has a history of more than 2000 years. The first part was

built during the Spring and Autumn Period.

All the walls were joined up in Qin Dynasty.All tile work was done by

hand.Thousands of people died while building the wall.Thus the Great Wall came

into existence.Since then, it has been rebuilt and repaired many times.

Now the Great Wall,the admiration of the world, has taken on a new look.

Its visited by large numbers of people from all parts of the country and the

world.

Human love, love compatriots, and in a race against time. We believe that life can not be separated by mountains and rivers of love, can not be buried ruins of the love of life, heavy rain pouring on the life of the immortal love, dark clouds overhead can not be the love of life.

When disaster comes, we can not avoid, we can do only with strong and smiles to the world that we are strong, no difficulty can make us lose the hope of Health.

Is who Im grateful for my parents. I dont know what words to describe them. I only know that they since the childhood is the most hurt me. On that occasion, I do not know is I do wrong, or if they do wrong. I dont know how they love me, and I know, how they education I.

Since the childhood, my father often said to me: "good good study, you will have a way out, dad believe you." I dont know how to answer. Only she complains and chagrin. Now, I grow up, is no longer that easily to "swept" my dad; Is no longer the only a day I will cry; No longer is that the I couldnt climb up. Experienced a lot of things, I understand a lot.

Do you understand the heart? I dont know my heart is warm is cold. Because, I too cold to parents, and they are still to me every possible way to caress. Maybe every parents to their children! Sometimes you will because and their contradiction and conflict, sometimes you will because of his capricious caused you and their relationship broke down and sometimes, you will be an exam because they blame you angry.

Now, lets cherish every second, learn to be grateful, starts from oneself.

我要感恩的是我的父母。我不知道用哪个词来形容他们。我只知道，他们从小是最疼我的。那一次，不知是我做错了，还是他们做错了。我并不懂他们是怎样爱我的，而我，知道，他们是怎样教育我的。

从小，爸爸就常常对我说：“好好学习，你会有出路的，爸爸相信你。”我不知道该怎样回答。只是一句句的埋怨与懊恼。现在，我长大了，再也不是那个动不动就对爸爸进行“批斗会”的我;再也不是那个每天只会哭鼻子的我;再也不是那个跌打了爬不起来的我。经历过很多事，我懂得了很多。

你懂人心吗?我不知道我的心是暖的是冷的。因为，我对父母太冷，而他们对我依旧是百般呵护。也许每个父母都会这样对他们的子女吧!有时候，你会因为和他们的一次矛盾而起冲突，有时候，你会因为自己的任性而导致你和他们的关系破裂，有时候，你会因为他们埋怨你的一次考试而愤怒。

让我们珍惜现在的每一秒，学会感恩，从自身做起。

Every year on the fourth Thursday of November is Thanksgiving Day.It’s a festival for American and Canadian with the purpose of thanks for harvest.While canadians celebrate on the second Monday of October.I have a penfriend in America.He wrote to me his Thanksgiving Day last year.He told me that it was a time for family reunion.Families would come back home to celebrate the festival together.Most of the time it was his mother who prepared the dinner.Turkey is must for the festival.It looks like huge chicken.His mother also made pumpkin pie and many other delicious food for them.After the dinner,they talked with each other with the old thing or the future plan.He said sometimes they would invite some friends to share the happiness of Thanksgiving Day.In a word,he had a great time on Thanksgiving Day.

每年11月的第四个星期四是感恩节。它是美国和加拿大的节日感谢丰收的目的。而加拿大人庆祝10月的第二个星期一。我有一个美国笔友。他写信给我去年的感恩节。他告诉我,这是一个家人团聚的时间。家庭将会回家一起庆祝节日。大部分时间都是他母亲准备了晚餐。土耳其是必须的。它看起来像巨大的鸡。他的母亲也做了南瓜饼和许多其他美味的食物。晚饭后,他们互相交谈与旧的或未来的计划。他说有时他们会邀请一些朋友来分享快乐的感恩节。总之,他有一个伟大的时间在感恩节。

My mother is a simple woman who comes from the countryside with little education. But in my eyes, she is the greatest mother in the world. Her perseverance gives me courage in all my life. Whenever I have trouble doing something and think about giving up, the scene that happened three years ago to mother just come into my mind.

我的母亲是一个简单的女人，从农村来的小教育。但在我的眼里，她是世界上最伟大的母亲。她的毅力让我在所有我的生活的勇气。每当我有困难做某事，想放弃的时候，妈妈刚开始我的脑海里，发生在三年前的场景。

Having asked for a leave from the teacher, I left the boring class and went to home with my favorite novel tucked under my arm. Father was at work, brother was at school, mother wouldnt be back from her small store until evening. I felt very happy thinking that I would have the entire house to myself. I bounded up steps, burst into the room but was shocked by whatever I saw. Mother was sitting in the sofa, sobbing with her shoulder twitching. I had never seen mother crying before. I went close to her, asking what had happened. She wiped her tears, forced a smile, and told me calmly that her small store was going to break. I didn’t know how to comfort her at the moment, but I did know what the small store meant to her.

有一个由老师请假，我把无聊的课，去家里我最喜欢的小说藏在我的胳膊。爸爸在工作，弟弟在学校里，母亲就不会从她的小商店后面，直到晚上。我觉得我会以自己的整个房子非常快乐的思考。我跳上台阶，冲进房间而感到震惊，我看到。母亲坐在沙发上，与她的肩膀抽动抽泣。我以前从未看过妈妈哭了。我走近她，问发生了什么事。她擦了擦眼泪，强作笑容，和冷静地告诉我，她的小商店是要打破。我不知道现在如何安慰她，但我知道为了她的小商店。

Now both my brother and I are studying at college. Mother works harder to finance our education. She is struggling by all means to keep the store business going. Her unusual perseverance is so inspiring to me that I will never give up halfway in my life.

现在我的两个哥哥和我在大学学习。母亲工程融资难的教育。她正在努力采取一切手段保持商店经营。她不寻常的毅力使振奋的是我，我不会放弃我的生命一半。

This years "51" holiday, I am in Singapore and Malaysia. The view of the Singapore and Malaysia are very good-looking, but the most memorable to my one night in Singapore. In the evening, I in st tauscha park, watched a wonderful music fountain performance.

Everyone knows the merlion in Singapore? The merlion is the sign of Singapore, a total of three the merlion sculpture; This a few the merlion is made up of the head and body. They have one in the center of Singapore; One of the highest mountain in Singapore, There is a holy tauscha in Singapore. One of the most beautiful, the most memorable to me or st tauscha the merlion.

On May 5, in the evening, we came to the st tauscha park early, viewing the merlion, here also here waiting for the beginning of the music fountain performance. Waiting for a period of time, the performance finally started. First appeared as a "clown", baton in his hand, like a conductor. Ah, really right, he is the conductor of the music fountain performance. He shook her hand, water fountain followed his hand type; If his two hands are moving, all the fountains of water together, color of light on the fountains, colorful water column, is really fantastic!

Music in the music fountain performance when high low, fast when slow; Sometimes is the rhythm of the pop songs, sometimes is a classic old songs tone, its good to listen! Fountain with this beautiful dance music.

"Wow," at this time, there was a surprise, the original is the water curtain movie started. Since I was young until now I have never seen the water curtain movie, this is my first time to see! Water curtain movie is sprayed water imaging a screen, and then put the animation projection, this is called the water curtain movie. The water curtain movie the main character is a naughty again, lovely little monkey, called "keykey", it would invite the conductor "clown" to play with it, that is, water curtain is appeared in the movie "clown" conductor, is really amazing! I know its projection, but why really was splashing water? Hey, dont understand...

Time so unknowingly passed, and the wonderful performances in a wonderful, wonderful music has come to an end. Although the music fountain performance time is very short, only 25 minutes, but it left a deep impression on me.

The evening let me very unforgettable, it is very memorable for me, because this is my first time to travel abroad, and in the new horse tourism, one of the most happy night was my first time in this beautiful night watching the water curtain movie Ive never seen since birth!

今年的“五一”假期，我是在新加坡和马来西亚度过的。新加坡和马来西亚的景色虽然都非常的好看，但令我最难忘的还是在新加坡的一个晚上。在这个晚上，我在圣陶沙公园，观看了一场精彩的音乐喷泉表演。

大家是不是都知道新加坡的鱼尾狮?鱼尾狮是新加坡的标志，一共有三座鱼尾狮雕塑;这几座鱼尾狮都是由狮头和鱼身组成的。它们有一个在新加坡的市中心;有一个在新加坡最高的山上;还有一个在新加坡的圣陶沙。其中最好看、最令我难忘的还是圣陶沙的那座鱼尾狮。

5月5日的晚上，我们早早地就来到了圣陶沙公园，观赏这里的鱼尾狮，也在这里等候着音乐喷泉演出的开始。等了一段时间，演出终于开始了。首先出场的是一位“小丑”，他手拿指挥棒，很像一位指挥家。哎，还真没说错，他就是这场音乐喷泉演出的指挥家。他的手一摇，喷泉就跟着他的手型喷水;要是他两只手都在动，所有的喷泉都一起喷水，彩色的灯光照在喷泉上，五颜六色的水柱，真是好看极了!

在这场音乐喷泉演出里，音乐时高时低，时快时慢;有时是流行歌曲的节奏，有时是经典的古老歌曲的声调，真是好听极了!喷泉也随着这动听的音乐翩翩起舞了。

“哇”，此时，全场传来一阵惊讶声，原来是水幕电影开始了。我从小一直到现在从来没有看过水幕电影，这还是我第一次看呢!水幕电影就是把水喷成像一块屏幕，然后再把动画投影上去，这就叫水幕电影了。这场水幕电影里的主要人物是一只又淘气，又可爱的小猴子，叫“keykey”，它欢蹦乱跳的邀请了“小丑指挥家”去跟它一起玩，没想到的是，水幕电影里还真出现了“小丑指挥家”的样子，真是太神奇了!我知道是投影的，但是水为什么真的被溅起了呢?哎，搞不懂……

时间就这样不知不觉的过去了，这场精彩的演出在美妙、动听的音乐声中结束了。虽然这场音乐喷泉的表演时间很短，只有25分钟，但却给我留下了深刻的印象。

这个晚上让我非常难忘，它对我来说是非常的具有纪念意义，因为这是我第一次出国旅游，也是在这次新马旅游中过得最开心的一个晚上，还是我第一次在这美好的夜晚观看我出生以来从来没看过的水幕电影!

一、认真审题，切中题意

《中考考试说明》指出，书面表达要切中题意。看到考题后，先不要急于动笔，要仔细看清题目要求的内容，在自己的头脑中构思出一个框架或画面，确定短文的中心思想，不要匆匆下笔，看懂题意，审清格式、体裁、人物关系、故事情节、主体时态、活动时间、地点等。

二、围绕中心，拟定提纲

书面表达评分原则有四条：(1)内容要点;

(2)运用词汇和结构的数量;

(3)运用语法结构和词汇的准确性;(4)上下文的连贯性。

由此可见，要点是给分的一个重要因素。为了防止写作过程中遗漏要点，同学们要充分发挥自己的观察力，把情景中给出的各个要点逐条列出。注意短文字数不要低于或超过规定的字数太多。

三、语言通顺，表达准确

(1)避免使用汉语式英语，尽量使用

自己熟悉的句型。几种句型可交替使用，以避免重复和呆板。

(2)多用简单句型，记事、写人一般都不需要复杂的句型。可适当地使用陈述句、一般疑问句、祈使句和感叹句。不用或少用非谓语或情态动词等较复杂的句型。

(3)注意语法、句法知识的灵活运用。(4)描写人物时，要生动具体，例如：①外表特征：tall，short，fat，thin，strong，weak，ordinary-looking等;②内心境界：

glad，happy，sad，excited，anxious，interested等;③感情描写：love，like，hate，feel，laugh，cry，smile，shout等;④动作描写：come，go，get，have，take，bring，fetch等。

(5)上下文要连贯。上下文的连贯性也是评分的一条原则，同学们应注意下面过渡的用法：①表示并列关系的过渡词：and，aswellas，or等;②表示转折关系的过渡词：but，yet，however等;③表示时间关系的过渡词：first，andthen，

finally，after，before，atlast，atthattime，later，inthepast，immediately，inthe

meanwhile等;④表示空间关系的过渡词：near(to)，far(from)，inthefrontof，beside等;⑤表示比较关系的过渡词：inthesameway，justlike，justas等;⑥表示对照关系的过渡词：but，still，yet，however，ontheotherhand等;⑦表示递进关系的过渡词：also，and，then，too，inaddition，moreover，again等;⑧表示因果关系的过渡词：because，since，then，thus，otherwise，so，therefore，asaresult等;⑨表示解释说明的过渡词：forexample，infact，inthiscase，for，actually等。

四、不会表达，另辟蹊径

中考作文给分是以要点和语言准确度而定，不以文采打分。造句越简单准确越好，造复合句容易出错，容易被扣分，阅卷场上有句话：“错误面前人人平等，文采好不加分。”如遇到个别要点表达不出来或难以表达，可采用变通的办法，化难为易，化繁为简。总之，所造句子要正确、得体、符合英语表达习惯。

五、锦上添花，量力而行

如果你还有时间和精力，想把书面表达写得更好，那么，请注意以下几点：(1)句型多样化，不要i(we)……到底，使人觉得乏味;(2)适当使用一些并列句或主从复合句;(3)进一步描绘人或事物时，适当使用定语从句;(4)适当使用分词或分词短语，烘托谓语动词;(5)偶尔使用一下倒装句，增加新鲜感;(6)适当调换一下状语在句子中的位置，使句子不雷同;(7)上下句子紧接时，其中完全相同的成分可以省略，以节省篇幅。

六、书写工整，卷面整洁

字迹要清晰，让阅卷人看得清楚，不可字迹潦草，难以辨认，要保持卷面的整洁。

七、检查错误

检查错误应从以下几个方面入手：(1)格式是否有错;(2)拼写有无错误;(3)语言是否用错;(4)时态、语态错误;(5)标点错误;(6)人称是否用错。

总之，只要平时同学们多练习写作并有意运用上述方法和技巧，合理分配时间，在中考时一定能写出高质量的作文，得到令人满意的考分。