家乡为主题的高中英语作文(汇总20篇)

I was born in Xiangtan,Huan.Its a beautiful place.I love it very much.

Now please let me tell you something about my hometown--Hunan Province.

Hunan Province is in the south of China,which covers an area of 211,800 square kilometers.The population is about 66 million and the capital city is Changsha.

There are many places of interest in Hunan,such as Zhangjiajie and Mount Heng.And a lot of famous persons were born here like Mao Zedong and Zeng Guofan.

Hunan is rich in natural resources.And it has made great achievements in economic development.

I love my hometown.And welcome to visit it!

导语：不识庐山真面目，只缘身在此山中，下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的优秀英语作文，欢迎阅读与借鉴，谢谢!

My hometown is Mount Lushan. Have you ever been there? Mount Lushan is very famous for its beautiful scenery, excellent climate and long history.

Mount Lushan stands on the south bank of the Changjiang River and the north bank of the Poyang Lake. It has many nice scenic spots, such as the Flower Path,the Five-Old-Man Peak, the Three-Step Waterfalls and so on. Thousands of people from other parts of China and foreign countries come here every year, especially in summer.

Summeron Mount Lushan is very cool. It can be called a huge natural air-conditioner in summer; Winter here is nice, too. Heavy snow falls every year. There is a popular saying: "Mount Lushan in summer is green like a clear fountain, and in winter is white like a white jade."

Im sure you will have a wonderful time in my hometown.. Mount Lushan.

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我的家乡——庐山

我的家乡在庐山。你去过那儿吗?庐山因美丽的风景、宜人的气候、悠久的历史而闻名于世。

庐山位于长江南岸，鄱阳湖北岸，有许多著名;的风景区：诸如花径、五老峰、三叠泉等等。成千上万的来自中国其他地方和外国的游人每年都来这儿，特别是在夏天。

庐山的夏天是非常凉爽的，夏季庐山被喻为是巨大的天然空调。冬天的景色也美，每年冬天都会下大雪。有一句谚语：“庐山夏天绿如清泉，冬天白如碧玉。”

我相信你在我的家乡——庐山将会有一段美好的时光。

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My hometown in dinghai, is an ancient city. It is surrounded on three sides by mountains and faces the matsu islands in the east, is a famous lienchiang harbour. Have "city center" of the name, and beautiful scenery. Today, let me take you to go and have a look.

Village, is the endless sea. There, also often hear the sound of the fishing boat engine. And the childrens favorite is to pick sea shells on the beach, they have different color, different size, can pick up to all kinds of seashells. If youre lucky, can also pick up milky large clams, perhaps there are pearls. But to tell you, pick up shells is the best time in the afternoon, because the morning high tide, ha ha. In the evening, the sea quiet, seems like our people to sleep in peace, prepare for a new day.

Midsummer, scorching sun, the earth is "dry". Dont have to worry about home no air conditioning. Come on, let to our dinghai docks. Just standing there, there is a cool and refreshing sea breeze blows over your cheek, make you feel cool. And it, the cool sea breeze never-ending service for you 24 hours a day.

Take a look at new village, is the village where we dinghai expansion. This much better than the old city, new buildings with hotels everywhere, all kinds of shops are everywhere, put stall in business is also dotted, is really very busy!

Walked into the wall engraved with the "city center" of the gates, we came to dinghai old city. A channel here, a corner, there is the old list of convenient. My cousin and I often inside drill to drill, hee hee, seemed very suitable for play the game of hide-and-seek. The road here and houses are made of stone, full of antique. My favorite, is the ancient city of dinghai in the early morning. Early morning, the mist rose from the valley, in the mountains of the ancient city of dinghai, vast expanse of whiteness fog put the old letters. At that moment, the sun rose, ray of golden light through the trees, like a sword stone road light in every corner. Call the cicada, birds stopped singing on the trees, quiet resurrectedold dinghai immediately.

This is my hometown, the lienchiangs famous harbour, dinghai.

我的故乡在定海，是一座古城。它三面环山，东临马祖列岛，是连江一个著名的港湾。曾有“会城重镇”之威名，而且风景优美。今天，就让我带大家一起去看看。

村外，就是一望无际的大海。那儿美不胜收，还时常听到渔船发动机的声音。而小朋友们最喜欢的就是到海滩上捡贝壳了，它们颜色不一，大小各不相同，能捡到各种各样的贝壳。要是你幸运的话，还能捡到乳白色的大蚌，说不定还有珍珠呢。不过要告诉你，捡贝壳最佳时间是下午，因为早上会涨潮的，哈哈。晚上，大海安静的出奇，似乎也跟我们人一样安详地进入梦乡，为新的一天做准备。

盛夏，骄阳似火，大地都被“烤干”了。不用愁家里没有空调。来来来，到我们定海的码头来吧。只要站在那里，就有一丝丝清凉的海风吹过你的面颊，让你感到凉爽。而它，那凉爽的海风24小时永不停息地为你服务。

再来看看新村，是我们定海扩建的村子。这可比旧城好多了，新楼林立，宾馆酒店随处可见，各种店铺到处都是，摆小摊做生意的也是星罗密布，真是热闹非凡!

走进那城墙上刻着“会城重镇”的城门，我们来到了定海旧城。这儿一个通道，那儿一个巷口，就把旧城串的四通八达。我和表弟经常在里面钻来钻去，嘻嘻，好像很适合玩躲猫猫的游戏。这里的路和房子都是用石头砌成的，充满了古色古香。我最喜欢的，就是清晨时的定海古城。清晨，雾从山谷里升起，穿插在山间的定海古城白茫茫一片，雾把旧城封得严严实实的。就在这时，太阳升起来了，千万缕像利剑一样的金光穿过树梢，照射在各个巷口的石板路上。知了叫了，鸟儿停在树梢上唱起歌来，宁静的定海顿时又热闹起来。

这就是我的故乡，那连江著名的港湾—定海。

every one has a dream. i have a dream, too. i have a dream that one day i could become a math teacher.

i love math very much, because i think math is quite useful. its useful when people are buying things. its useful when students are learning subjects like physics and chemitry. and its useful when scientists are doing experiments. teachers can not only help students to learn things but also teach the students to apply what they learn into practice.

therefore, i hope to be a math teacher in the future. i want to help more students learn math.

Every child is surrounded by the deep mother love. However, we often turn a

blind eye to the love. One day I deeply felt the love.

One day I hurried home for lunch after school, because there would be an exam

in the afternoon and I had expected to go back to school early to prepare for

the exam. But when I got home, the lunch was not ready yet. I felt unhappy. When

the dishes were served, I forund none I like. I ran out of my house angrily and

wanderde on the street for a while,hungry. Then I walked to school.

When I got into the classroom, I saw a lunch box on my desk. One classmate

told me that it was my mother ther that had brought it here.After opening the

box, I found my favorite food inside. My eyes was moist with tears.

Mother gave me her love without asking for return, How deep mother love

is!

20XX年X月X日 晴

Last summer vacation,my family and I went to Qingdao by train.There was always sunshine and fresh air,which made us so comfortable.We went to the seaside,the sea was as blue as the sky,and bathing in the sunshine on the beach, was really an enjoyable thing.I also picked up a lot of colorful shells with my little sister.

There we bought many interesting souvenirs,I was planing to send them to my friends.We ate many tings there,such as fish,prawn,and so on.They are very delicious.Then we lived in a clean and tidy hotel,and the price was not so expensive.I like Qingdao very much,and if I got a chance,I hope to come here again,it is such a beautiful and interesting place.

one day on my way home from school, i saw an old woman standing by the roadside①, with a heavy bag on her back. she seemed very worried. i went up to ask her what the matter was. the granny② told me that she had just come from the countryside to see her son, who worked in the steel works. as she had never been here before, she did not know the way to the factory. so i took her there. there was really a lot of difficulty in finding her son＇s place. the granny and her son were very thankful to me.

i got home very late, tired and hungry, but i felt happy, for i had done a good deed for the people.

选修课(Selective Courses) This term our school laid down a new rule about selective court. For the first two weeks, we may sit in as many classes as we like before we decide on which courses to choose. We jumped for joy. The first week I attended classes for four evenings on end and found out that most of the teachers took it serioualy. They were busy in "winning votes" for fear, that later on no one would attend their lectures.

For example, the teacher of Modern Literature of Taiwan said, "Actually the flrst two hours of my lecture were only a prelude. The real contents have not been involved. In the furore, we shall discuss such famous writers as Qiong Yao, Xi Murong, etc, and such famous aetresses as Lin Fengjiao, Lin Qingxia etc. We have lots of vedio-taped films to watch. These are confined only to those who co-major in this court." See, after all, the last sentence is the core of everything he said.

The teacher of Appreciation and Critics of Modern Opera said, "We have a variety of contents and the teaching method is changable. For instance, l may choose one act from a play and let you perform it in class. If you do a good job, you can put on the play at the school theater festival. Also, we shall arrange for you to watch current plays. The school is in charge of the traffic and tickets, Of course, only those who co-major this course are eligible." You see, the most important thing comes at last through twists and turns.

[新年计划初中英语作文三篇

导语：以下是小编精心整理的高中英语作文教学反思，欢迎大家参考阅读。

高中学生的想象更趋于现实化，创造想象也日益占优势地位。表现 出更大的主动性和有意性，能够运用自己的创造力去解决新的问题。

由于高中学生在英语学习方面有了一定的词汇积累、阅读经验以及掌握了一些基本的语法规则，使他们已初步具备了将心中所思转化为英语文字的能力。在这个阶段，教师如果通过影像、音乐、语言等多种手段，在学生的作文训练中大力发展学生思维的变通性和独创性，那么，学生想象力的提高将会成为可能。

一、利用表象，丰富想象

观察图画和实物作文符合英语作文起步阶段需要有一定的情景要求，也符合高中学生有意想象占优势的特点，同时避免了文字情节作文易使学生中译英的缺点，但若每一次训练都是刻板的再现材料，创造想象则难以增长。如果在教学设计时，在图中留有空白，或对实物设置悬念，不仅可以引发学生的好奇心，激发他们对英语作文的兴趣，减轻他们的惧怕心理，而且可以促使学生通过创造性的想象去填补空白，解决悬念。

如Senior BookⅠ,Unit 3 中的“Help! Help!”，可按发展顺序设计几幅救落水儿童的图，但只给学生展示第一、二两幅图，图画的内容大致与课文内容相同，但是后几幅的空白，使学生必须通过创造性的想象才能填补材料的空白。学生可以引用课文中的材料，也可以自由发挥。有学生这样写到：

Last week, we had a picnic in Forest Park. We found a shady place by the river. As soon as we had sat down, Tom suddenly got up and shouted, “Someone has fallen into the river!" It was true. A boy was struggling in the water, and the children in a boat looked hopeless. Tom and Jack took off their shoes while running to wards the water. They swam very quickly towards the boy who was sinking fast. Tom and Jack got hold of the boy by the arms and lifted his head above the water. Together they pulled the boy to the shore.

之后，再给学生展示其中一幅图，或一句话的情景：……,a man/a woman/a child, etc. has fallen into the river/the lake, etc.……。让学生自由选择自由发挥。有的根据曾在报上看到的新闻，称颂一身怀六甲的妇女勇救落水儿童的事迹，也有的谴责那些对落水者无动于衷的旁观者。学生的作文体裁记叙文、议论文不限。这样，既训练了他们书面的表达能力，又发挥了他们的想象和创造能力、思维表达能力。同时也让他们思索了做人的道理。

二、精选图画，激发想象

处于英语作文起步阶段的学生的想象具有直观性，片面性和模仿性的特点，为其提供的观察材料越具体、越完整、越详实，他们的这些特点往往表现得越明显，有时甚至强化了他们的这些特点。换个方式，为他们提供一些抽象的图画，他们的创造想象反而被激活，因为他们必须在原有的图画上进行创造才可能有新的形象产生。而“抽象画作品所表现的物象与参照物相差甚远，它最大限度地把形与色对视觉作用的潜力发挥出来，直观效果非常强烈。它经过夸张、简化、分解、组合等变化手段，将客观事物的表象创造成为富于想象力。”如荷兰画家蒙德里安的表达百老汇街道的嘈杂与热闹的《百老汇爵士》（Jazz in Broadway）是一幅看上去比较抽象的图画，学生通过观察、运用合理的想象，写出了内容各异的作品。

有学生这样写到：

It is the downtown of Shanghai. The streets, such as Nanjing Road and Huaihai Road, etc are busy. Cars, buses and trucks with all kinds of advertisements are running. People dressed in their best are walking happily or hurrying to work on their bikes. Beautifully decorated stores are crowded with people shopping. They all look in high spirits. The traffic policemen at the crossings are directing the traffic attentively and seriously. Everything is in good order. Such is our city. I love our city.

而另有学生在他们的作文中认为这是一个“排污系统”（drain outlet system ）或电路板（circuit board）或房屋平面图（a plane figure of a house）等等。

可见，由抽象的图画到生动画面的产生，到一篇作文的写作成功，是创造想象不断发展的过程，也是提高英语语言运用能力的过程。

三、借助音乐，拓宽想象

音乐能有效地丰富学生的精神生活，促进学生感知、情感、想象等方面的健康成长，能给学生提供想象和联想的广阔空间，有利于培养学生的发散性思维能力，促进人的全脑开发，为学生的创新精神和实践能力在各方面的延伸乃至终身发展提供良好的基础。因此，在英语写作训练中有时借助音乐等艺术形式，对丰富学生的想象力是一种有益的尝试。

如Senior Book Ⅵ ,Unit 7中的“The Waltz king ”这一课文，根据内容，可设计让学生听一首Beethoven的“命运”(Fate)，让学生根据自己的理解，写一篇作文，一位学生这样写到：

I am a graduate from high school, and I will enter for the Collage Entrance Examination. Whether I will be admitted to a collage, I will work harder than before , since our country is still poor and weak.

从作品中我们可以发现，借助音乐，学生的想象力得到了较大幅度的拓展。“音乐艺术对学生的创造能力的发展具有独特的作用。

四、灵活方法，发展想象

“创造想象是严格的构思过程，它是由思维调节的。”想象会产生全新的物象与情景、独特的认识和感悟。一段文字、一篇文章，给不同的读者，就有不同的想象余地。正如：A thousand readers, a thousand Hamlets.（一千个读者，就有一千个哈姆雷特。）在英语作文教学中根据一定的线索或情节，提供学生广阔的思维空间，让学生进行想象描述（创造性的描述），会收到很好的锻炼效果。

例如 “After Twenty Years" (Senior Book Ⅵ,Unit 5) 这一课，可要求学生在学完之后， 简单续写一个结尾。这是一篇根据O. Henry 同名原作改写的文章。文章的故事情节虽然简单，但很能挖掘、发挥学生的创造想象力。学生这样写到：

As soon as the police officer wanted to catch Bob by the arm, he took out a gun, aimed at the officer and said, “I knew I was wanted, but I dont want to be arrested anyway. Tell Jim Wells I will come to visit him one day." Just at that time, the police officer found himself surrounded by some strong men, gun in hand, pointing to him. Bob then walked into the street and got into a car parking there, followed by those strong men. The car soon disappeared.

另有学生这样写到：

The moment the officer caught Bob by the arm, he got rid of it and ran away at once. He was running down the street as fast as he could, when he was shot on the right shoulder. He turned round. To his great surprise, it was Jim Wells, his o ld friend. He fell on the ground and fainted.

在作文教学中，通过对一定的语言材料进行不同方式的处理，确实是锻炼学生的思维，发展学生的想象力的一条重要途径。当学生对当前的语言材料进行阅读、处理时，进行了充分的分析、比较，又充分展示了自己的想象力，其思维得到了充分的发散。

心理学研究已经证实，发散思维对个体的创造性有着重要影响，我们应该根据教材特点，结合教学内容，注意这种思维能力的训练，并创造一些行之有效的教学技术。可以说，续写结尾、续写故事、改写、扩写等，都是高中英语作文教学中锻炼学生思维，发展学生想象力的有效手段。

[关于高中英语作文的教学反思

The New Year, new weather. Out of their homes, families are decorated; Street, beaming everywhere, laughter. The breath of spring flowers reflected the joy of thepeople in the face.

New Years eve firecrackers rang a hanging outside and another hung, thunderbolt barak ring; Inside the home, everyone was laughing, lively!

In these days, in the morning, people usually watch TV, play computer, only a few people in the homework. In the afternoon, a lot of people in Chen yi square to play, I also went to, Im going to fly a kite. First of all, I put the kite on the ground, thewind blows I started to run... But, I tried many times without success. Chen yi squareand merry-go-round, small train, plane, pirate ship, and a rolling chair, my brother and I played a lot of, can be fun. In the evening, everyone out fireworks, my sister and I are no exception. Lets play with the color fireworks, its appearance is a red and green cross, when lit, start is red, slowly becomes green, can be fun! We also play a lot of fireworks, among them, there is a call "auspicious colorful rain" fireworks, lit up, there will be many "rain" fly to heaven. On one occasion, I put thetwo "auspicious colorful rain" light stick together, fly higher!

Looking at the sky of fireworks, listening to the scratching of firecrackers everywhere, the Spring Festival, is really busy!

The moment I go to high school, I have made up my mind to study hard. It is

known to all that the period of high school is the turning point of people’s

life, which may decide my future career. So I know the importance of striving

for my future. The reason why I study so hard are various. First, I want my

parents to be proud of me. When my mothers’ friends come to visit her, they

always brag about how excellent their children are, but my mother would never

take me as the topic, because she does not want me to have the pressure. I

appreciate what my mother does to me and really want her to be proud of me.

Second, If I enter a good university, I can have the promising future. It is

time for me to return my parents’ love.

我的家乡在鞍山，小朋友你们都吃过南国梨吧，它就是我们鞍山的特产！

春天是南国梨成长的季节，春雨滋润着大地南国梨树也争先恐后的允吸着春雨，在阳光和雨露的哺育下，终于雪白的梨花冒了出来，一朵朵一簇簇美丽极了。在微风的吹拂下像一张张美丽的笑脸在对我们点头。清明节前后如果去爬千山，你就会看到满山遍野都是雪白的梨花一派喜气洋洋的景象。时而你还会闻到一阵阵沁人心田的花香。那时我真想上去采摘几朵但还是忍住了，应为过段时间花儿就会变成一个个诱人的果实。转眼间三五天的时间那一朵朵雪白的花朵凋谢了，慢慢的树上长出了嫩绿的小叶子，你还会发现这时南国梨也出现了。但它现在像一个涂了绿颜色的小球。不过经过一阵风雨的洗礼它会渐渐长大，这时它像一个乒乓球，头上那黑色的小把也粗壮起来。满树挂满了青涩的果子。这可不是成熟的南国梨哟！它还要经过太阳公公的照射再变化一回呢，经过阳光的沐浴一个个又大又黄的南国梨终于成熟了。有一半绿一半黄的；有金灿灿的；有一半黄一半微红的；颜色鲜艳极了。还有那一股股醉人的香气会扑面而来，真是让人陶醉啊！不知为什么里面还有淡淡的酒香，后来问妈妈才知道这是应为南国梨成熟时，果肉会自然发酵。也只有发酵后的南国梨才最好吃。怪不得妈妈有时候买的南国梨很硬要捂上一段时间才好吃。等他变软了我就会拿出来，轻轻的咬一口黄白色的果肉细腻极了，真是爽口多汁啊！吃了一个还想吃呵呵！这可是我最爱吃的水果啊！

南国梨不仅好吃还有一个悠久的传说呢！在一千多年前的千山，常有南方飞来的大雁落在老龙潭一带歇着。有一年春天有一只像天鹅似的紫褐色大雁从南方飞来，在千山九百九十九座山峰中间飞来飞去，一个劲的打旋儿。它把从南方叼来的一粒梨籽吐出来，这粒种子一落地就入土了，并立刻发了芽，抽了枝。这一切刚巧被一个采野果子的老道看见了。他感到很新奇便常常到这里看望这棵树。不久这棵树就开花结果了，但结出的果子不好吃。后来老道把山丁子树与它嫁接，再结出的果子香甜可口好吃极了。人们从老道那里得知，这梨树的种子是从南方叼来的，古时候也称南方叫南国，于是人们就把这种梨起名为南国梨。

现在南国梨已经远近闻名，就连外国友人都很喜欢吃我们的南国梨，我真为我的家乡鞍山感到骄傲！

My hometown is in ShangTian, picturesque scenery, rich products, there is a beautiful place!

ShangTian is the hometown of strawberry, famous quartet. Whenever spring flowers, strawberry picking base of greenhouse, with a delicious, brilliant red, attractive. Every season of strawberry picking, from ningbo, fenghua, picking around the tourists, group after group. Look, white in the greenhouses are tourists bent down to pick strawberries. Strawberry color not only good-looking, delicious, and nutritious, is the national green food, is to make excellent gifts for family and friends.

In addition to strawberry delicious attractive, ShangTian picturesque scenery, county river through the ShangTian. Since 2008 renovation, clear river, river on both sides of the road level off, pavilions, attics, flower beds, square flowers fragrance, became a good place for running, such as tai chi exercise. Summer night, people take a walk along the river, cool, fishing, eat food taken late at night, the river light, as if heaven! ShangTian spacious roads, the transportation is convenient. And through the village in line, on the road to the car, flow. Old women in the park where she was dancing fitness dance, beautiful music makes people relaxed and happy.

A beautiful hometown? I love my hometown!

我的家乡在尚田，那儿山清水秀、物产丰富，是一个美丽的地方!

尚田是草莓之乡，名扬四方。每当春暖花开的时候，草莓采摘基地的大棚内，种着一只只香喷喷、红艳艳、诱人垂涎三尺。每到草莓采摘的时节，来自宁波、奉化，各地的采摘游客，一批又一批。放眼望去，白色的大棚内都是游客弯下腰采摘草莓的画面。草莓不但颜色好看、味道鲜美，而且营养丰富，是国家级绿色食品，是馈赠亲友的上佳礼品。

除了草莓的可口诱人，尚田山清水秀，县江从尚田穿过。自从2008年整治后，江水清澈，江的两岸道路平整、亭台阁楼、花坛、广场花草芬芳，成了人们跑步、打太极拳等锻炼身体的好去处。夏天的晚上，人们在江边散步、乘凉、钓鱼、吃夜宵、江边灯光闪烁，仿佛人间仙境!尚田道路宽敞，交通便捷。甬临线穿村而过，马路上车来车往、川流不息。公园里中老妇女在那儿跳健身舞，美妙的音乐使人心旷神怡。

家乡真美啊!我爱我的家乡!

Dragon Boat race Traditions

At the center of this festival are the dragon boat races. Competing teams drive their colorful dragon boats forward to the rhythm of beating drums. These exciting races were inspired by the villagers valiant attempts to rescue Chu Yuan from the Mi Luo river. This tradition has remained unbroken for centuries.

Tzung Tzu

A very popular dish during the Dragon Boat festival is tzung tzu. This tasty dish consists of rice dumplings with meat, peanut, egg yolk, or other fillings wrapped in bamboo leaves. The tradition of tzung tzu is meant to remind us of the village fishermen scattering rice across the water of the Mi Luo river in order to appease the river dragons so that they would not devour Chu Yuan.

Ay Taso

The time of year of the Dragon Boat Festival, the fifth lunar moon, has more significance than just the story of Qu Yuan. Many Chinese consider this time of year an especially dangerous time when extra efforts must be made to protect their family from illness. Families will hang various herbs, called Ay Tsao, on their door for protection. The drinking of realgar wine is thought to remove poisons from the body. Hsiang Bao are also worn. These sachets contain various fragrant medicinal herbs thought to protect the wearer from illness.

翻译：风俗习惯端午节最重要的活动是龙舟竞赛。比赛的队伍他们多彩的龙舟前进的鼓声中。这项活动的灵感是来自村民的勇敢的尝试营救汨罗江畔的屈原。这个传统一直保持了几个世纪。

粽子非常受欢迎的菜在端午节粽子。粽子的米包着肉、花生、蛋黄及其他材料，再以竹叶包裹。而粽子的传统是为了提醒我们的渔夫，将米丢进汨罗河水安抚蛟龙，希望他们不要将屈原吃掉。

塔索(Taso)的时间每年的端午节，农历的第五天，具有更多的意义，不仅仅是屈原的故事。许多中国人认为每年的这个时候，一个特别危险的时候，必须做出额外的努力，保护家人免受疾病。家庭在门上将挂各种草药，叫驱邪。喝雄黄酒被认为是去除体内的毒物。香包也穿，它是以含有多种香味药草认为保护人们远离疾病。

七月八月是学生们的假日！

放假后，我在家里度过了七月份，在这一个月里可想而知我过得有多无趣，但是八月份的到来让我重新找到了暑假的真正意义。

某天早晨， 我很早就起了床，因为我这天我们要去外婆家替外婆过寿！正好表姐也要一同前往，所以我们我们一起来到外婆家。进入村子，两旁全是绿油油的柚子树，再进一点就看见那些高大的峻山，像将军一样的威武雄壮，叫人忍不住赞叹！进了村子，我一眼就看见了表妹。我下车过去找她，聊着聊着，我们决定去摘荷花。

池塘边，一簇簇美丽动人的荷叶呈现在我眼前。我一连摘了好几片！我们还把荷叶当做“遮阳帽”戴在头上，瞬间感到凉快多了。不久，哥哥跟表姐拿着什么东西向我们走来。近来一看，原来他们准备钓鱼。我跟随他们钓了一会儿，发现没什么好玩就放弃继续摘荷花了。走了几步，我看见小泥巴路的边上有一朵婀娜多姿的“美人”站立在水里。我走过去轻轻的将她摘下，啊！多么美丽的花儿！我想没有什么花能够比的了。

我们准备回家时，听见哥哥他们传来喜音:“啊哈哈！钓到了两条大鱼，今天吃鱼咯！”我好奇的过去看了看，真的有两条大鱼哎！我羡慕死了！我试着碰碰运气，十几分钟过去了，有鱼上钩了！我赶紧让哥哥帮我拉上来。虽然是只小鱼，但是我已经很满足了。大家一起高高兴兴的回家咯～

暑假里我虽然开始无聊至极，但是最后发生的事却使我开心好久！我爱暑假！

杭州位于浙江省东南部，它是我的家乡。

Hangzhou is located in the southeast of Zhejiang Province, it is my hometown.

我年年在长大，杭州也年年在成长，而且是巨大的改变。党的十六大之后，杭州全面贯彻科学发展观，以富民强市和“两个率先”总揽全局，经过全市上下的共同奋斗，于2005年底率先实现江苏省全面小康社会指标，基本实现现代化的新征程，走出了一条以科学发展为主要特征的新时期“杭州之路”。2006年1月省委、省政府召开学习杭州经验报告，标志着杭州在全省率先基本达到全面小康社会水平。

I grew up in Hangzhou every year, every year in the growth, but also is a huge change. After sixteen big party, Hangzhou fully implement the Kexue Fazhan Guan, to enrich the people strong city and "two first" the overall situation, through the joint efforts of the city, at the end of 2005 to achieve a comprehensive well-off society in Jiangsu Province, the index, a new journey to basically realize modernization, out of a scientific development in the new period as the main the characteristics of the "Hangzhou road". In 2006 January, the provincial government held a provincial learning experience in Hangzhou, marking the Hangzhou first in the province has basically reached the level of a well-off society in an all-round way.

大的不去说，作为一个小学生的我，最让我深有体会的是我们家门口的那条马路，原来是一条窄窄的，坑坑洼洼的小马路，并且旁边还有一条臭水沟，因为是条死河，一到夏天就冒泡，一阵阵的臭味扑鼻而来，虽然一直有工作人员抽干，再放水，但一直没有什么效果。小马路一到下雨天就有一个个水潭，汽车、自行车、摩托车、行人经常会堵塞交通。旁边的店面也是矮矮的，不是很明亮的那种。现在臭水河已经不复存在了，小马路也变成了宽宽的柏油路，并且设立了路灯、斑马线、红绿灯、人行道，再也不会有堵塞的现象了。马路两侧开满了各种商店，商店的招牌也全都换成了夜光的，哪怕是在晚上也一眼就能望得清清楚楚。每天的早上，晚上就有许多的老爷爷、老奶奶在马路两边的休息道上锻炼身体，舞剑的，打拳的，跳舞的，竞走的……热闹极了，这在以前是从来没有过的。

Big is not to say, as a student I, let me the most deep is the road in front of our house, the original is a narrow, bumpy roads, and there is a drainage ditch, because it is a dead, a summer bubble bursts, smell come, although there have been working out, and then turn on the water, but there has been no what effect. Small road one rainy day there is a pool, automobile, motorcycle, bicycle, pedestrian often traffic jam. Next to the store is short, not very bright, that. Now a smelly river has ceased to exist, the small road has become a wide road, and set up lights, zebra crossing, traffic lights, sidewalks, no blocking phenomenon. On both sides of the road filled with a variety of shops, shop signs are all changed into the night, even if it is in the evening, one can see clearly. Every morning, at night there are many old grandpa, grandma on both sides of the road to rest on the exercise, fencing, boxing, dancing, walking...... This is a very lively, never before.

这个新学期，我们也搬进了新建的学校，崭新、宽敞、明亮的教室，让我们的身心都愉悦起来，新的大操场，专门的电脑室，美术室，音乐室，最重要的是室内体育室，再也不用担心下雨天不能上体育课了。

The new semester, we have moved into a new school, new, spacious, bright classroom, let the body and mind are a pleasure, a new playground, specialized computer room, art room, music room, is the most important indoor sports room, dont worry about the rain can not class.

为了让我的家乡更进步，让我们共同努力吧!

In order to make our hometown more progress, let us work together!

HuangMei is my hometown. It is in the East in HuBei.It is East on the city named AnQing of AnHui.And it is south to the city named JiuJiang of JiangXi. It is a great city in my heart.It has a long history for about 1800 years in China .Example .The temple named SiZu and WuZu were in HuangMei for a long years-old.Today,Every year many visitor come different part to there.As a daughter from Huangmei.I leaved it away for about seven years. But I miss it everyday .Even in a lot of my dream in the night .I belive HuangMei will be richer and richer .The new year 2009 will going .Tonight I hope everything will be well in my new 26 years-old.All my friends will be well.I must work hard in the new year.I will be ain growth as my hometown .

一、遣词方面：用词要贴切而丰富，善用短语 ,词汇是语言的建筑材料，文章的好坏，选词很关键，如果用词精湛，就会使文章“亮”起来。

1、措辞要贴切具体

试比较下面句子：

A man is walking down the street.

A man is strolling down the street.

通过比较可以看出，前一句不如后一句表达得具体、生动。一个词如果内涵越具体，那么在特定的场景中恰当地使用它，就会收到意想不到的效果。很多同学写作时常随便用一个很笼统的词来描述一个具体事物或人，如 a nice man给人感觉很笼统空泛，我们可以用很多有个性的、具体的词描绘一个人，如 generous(大方的，慷慨的)，humorous(幽默的)，smart(漂亮的，潇洒的)，kind-hearted，warm-hearted，hospitable(好客的,招待周到的)，gentle(文雅的)，optimistic(乐观的)，easy-going(随和的)，spirited(英勇的)，cultivated(有教养的)，manly(有男子气概的)，knowledgeable(知识渊博的)等等。

2、要善于运用短语

短语用得好，会给评卷员留下深刻印象。如：

When he was a child，he wanted to learn everything.( 普通)

When he was a child，he had a strong appetite(胃口) for knowledge.(高级)

3、要避免汉语思维

用词要符合英语习惯，避免汉语思维的影响，如某些名词和动词搭配已约定俗成，不能随意打乱其搭配习惯，否则会显得生硬和词不达意。如汉语中的“学到知识”，英语中就不能说“learn knowledge”，而要说acquire knowledge (获得知识) 。类似的动宾结构还有achieve success (获得成功)，gain reputation (获得声誉)，attain ones end (达到目的)等。

二、造句方面：句式要准确而多变，活用复合句

简单句用得太多，会造成文章读起来乏味。在评卷员看来，同样意思的内容，能够运用比较复杂的句式结构来表达，当然会认为其运用语言的能力要比只会用简单句来表达要强，评分自然就高。

1、巧用非谓语动词

运用非谓语动词，可使文句看起来更简洁，使语言更加丰富多彩，重点更加突出，增加文采。如：

I covered my ears，trying to keep the noise out，but failed. (2004广东卷)

2、巧用with复合结构

“with+名词/代词+现在分词/过去分词/形容词/副词/介词”结构，常作伴随状语以增加被描绘内容的生动性和情感性，使文章读起来更简洁明了。试比较：

I couldnt go on studying because there was so much noise troubling me. (普通)

I couldnt go on studying with so much noise troubling me. (高级)

3、巧用复合句

高考评分标准强调使用语法结构的数量和复杂性，鼓励考生尽量使用较复杂的结构，并且对由此产生的错误采取了宽容的态度。如果恰当运用各类从句，就会使文章出彩。

如：(定语从句) Whats more，people have easy access to the Internet，which enables them to send and receive e-mails whenever they like.

4、巧用倒装句、感叹句、强调句、虚拟语气句等

使用这些句式可使文章化平淡为生动，加强语气，使评卷老师感受作者的强烈情感。

(倒装句)Only in this way can Internet Bars be well used by people.

(感叹句)I thought，“How hard mum is working! She must be very tired.”

5、巧用排山倒海句

如能运用一个个排比句、对偶句、不定式或短语，可令文章增色不少，会给评卷员眼前一亮的感觉。如：

The purpose of the program are to make our school more beautiful，to make the air cleaner and fresher，and to turn our school into a better place for us to study and live in.

三、谋篇方面：结构要清晰而流畅，巧用过渡词

众所周知，语言的最高层次不是传统语法所说的句子，而是语篇。语篇指的是一系列连接的语段或句子构成的语言整体。一篇好的文章不但句子正确，要点齐全，更重要的是有效地使用了语句间的连接成分。因此，恰当使用好连接性的词语和句子，是使作文获得高分的一个重要因素。

下列各组表示列举或补充的短语或句式非常实用，对高考写作很有帮助：

(1)Firstly...，secondly...，thirdly...，finally...

(2)In the first place...，in the second place...，in the third place...，lastly...

(3)to begin with...，then...，furthermore...，finally...

(4)to start with...，next...，in addition...，finally...

(5)first and foremost...，besides...，last but not least...

(6)most important of all...，moreover...，finally...

如果只有两层意思，可选用下列两组中的任一组：

(1)On the one hand...，on the other hand...

(2)For one thing..., and for another thing...技巧，希望对大家有帮助

时光如箭，日月如梭，已经过去了二十年，在海上工作的，我很想回故乡看一看，看看故乡有什么大变化。

第二天我乘着飞机回到了故乡，下了飞机，看到家乡的变化，我的眼睛都快从眼眶里跳了出来。天上下着大雨，而我的身上没有一滴雨水，我向四周望瞭望，原来是机场旁有一个强力吸水机，把雨水吸了进去。然后把雨水过滤，排到河里供人们食用。我走出机场还是看见强力吸水机在工作，这要是在从前，我身上早已淋湿了。

我走在斑马线上，突然一辆车从我的头顶上飞过。原来是汽车的声音太小，驾驶员又开启飞行模式，从我头顶上飞过时我没发觉。如果要是从前，汽车声音大的很，要是我的动作再迟钝一些，我就要成肉饼了。这时我不禁感叹科技的发达，和家乡的变化。

我过了马路等公交车回家，我一按旁边的按钮，等了一会儿，公交车就来了。我上了公交车，只感觉被夹了一下一个机器人手臂，把我抱上了公交车四层的一个位置上，帮我系上了安全带，就去帮另一个人了。速度很快，时间也有所节省。也不用劳烦人去行走，去费力的寻找座位。更是给人们的生活加了一分便利。这要是从前，还要自己动脚呢。要多不方便就有多不方便，现在可好了，有了自动机器人，我再也都不用自己费力的寻找座位了。

家乡的变化太大了，从前的楼矮得很，现在都是高楼大厦;从前地上脏乱，现在干净的很;从前科技不发达，现在科技十分发达……

Mountain is located in the hometown of the green, green and lovely; Home of the water is so clear, clear and moving; People of hometown is so industrious, make people always remember them.

In my hometown, there is a rising mountain - xuefeng mountain.

The xuefeng mountain overlapping peaks overlapping ailian, rolling, like a dragon lying there, and like a giant, stands in the mountains, the kindness of looking down on the earth. Every morning, a grey morning mist is like the light smoke curling, wrapped around the top of the mountain, as if it did anything wrong, ashamed to show up. Xuefeng mountain more than one mountain, big, small, long, short, horizontal, straight, equal a than a high.

Here not only has a materialist magnificent xuefeng mountain, and winding ruanjiang.

The long river is like a horse green giant silks and satins, the depths of the mountains in the distance has been spread to my feet. Its a beautiful ruanjiang! Clear, green, quiet, fascinating, and far to see it is so green, green like a jade ribbon; It is as close to the qing, the qing could see the fish and shrimp, a recently night that curved crescent reflected on the "silk", is so beautiful, gentle and charming.

Here in addition to the lakes and mountains, and simple and hardworking people.

Every morning, when you walk the street, you will find the hardworking farmers uncle early came to the farmers market, threaten, want every passer-by to taste the joy of harvest. Now, in this small town, high-rise buildings have been built building, built the highway... There is also a solved the food problem of the worlds great man - the father of hybrid rice "yuan longping".

I love my lovely hometown - an giang, because beauty more beautiful mountain American water here!

家乡的山是那样绿，绿得可爱;家乡的水是那样清，清得动人;家乡的人们是那样勤劳，使人永远记得他们。

在我的家乡，有一座拔地而起的山——雪峰山。

这座雪峰山峰峦迭嶂、连绵起伏，像一条青龙卧在那里，又恰似一个巨人，矗立在万山之中，盛情的俯视着大地。每天清晨，灰蒙蒙的晨雾似袅袅的轻烟，缠绕在山顶，仿佛它做错了什么事，羞于露面。雪峰山不止一座山，大的、小的、长的、短的、横的、直的都有，争雄似的一座比一座高。

这里不仅有唯物雄壮的雪峰山，还有蜿蜒曲折的沅江。

这悠悠江水仿佛是一匹翠绿的巨幅绸缎，从远处高山深处一直铺到我的脚下。这沅江真美呀!清澈、碧绿、恬静，令人神往，远看它是那样的绿，绿的像一条翡翠的绸带;近看是那样清，清的可以看见江底的鱼虾，夜晚那弯弯的月牙倒映在“绸带”上，是那样美丽、温柔、迷人。

这儿除了湖光山色，还有勤劳朴实的人们。

每天清晨，当你漫步大街时，你就会发现勤劳的农民伯伯早早来到农贸市场，吆喝着，想让每一位路人尝尝秋收的喜悦。如今，在这个小镇上，已经建起了一座座高楼大厦，建起了高速公路……这里还有一位解决了世界上粮食问题的伟人——杂交水稻之父——“袁隆平”。

我爱我可爱的家乡——安江，因为这里山美水美人更美!

我的家乡是在荆州，我相信每个人应该都很熟悉吧，我的家乡是一座历史悠久充满文化底蕴的古城，家乡有很多民风民俗，像关帝庙会、荆河戏、荆州花鼓......但是我最喜欢的还是要数“采莲船”啦。

“采莲船”又称旱船，是荆州市民众喜闻乐见的一种传统民间习俗舞蹈，以采莲船为道具，多在春节和元宵节期间表演。民间传说，采莲船是为了纪念蔡状元和观音娘娘坐船筹款的善举而表演采莲船的。

传说，有一个叫蔡状元的人，想为乡亲们做点好事。他觉得乡亲们过河没有桥，就动了修桥的念头。哪知道，桥只修了一半，蔡状元的家产就卖光了，他无可奈何，只好到处乞讨。正月初一这天，家家户户都在过年。蔡状元打着莲花闹，一边拜年，一边乞讨，想讨些钱来修桥。可是，一些有钱的人家看他像个叫花子，不想让他在自己家门前乞讨，老远就把门关上了。蔡状元一分钱也没讨到，就来到河边，望着半截桥哭了起来。一会儿，河里漂来一只花花绿绿的彩船。人们哪见过这种船，就都赶来看彩船。只见划船的是一位老汉，打着赤脚，船上坐着一位漂亮的女子。这时，老汉向围观的人边拱手，边说：“哪位公子能用银子抛中女子，就把她许配哪位为妻。”话音刚落，一些公子少爷就都跑回家，抱着大包小包的银子，朝女子身上抛。可抛了半天，谁都没有抛中。抛去的银子也都落在了船舱里，险些把船压沉了。原来，船里坐的是观音娘娘，划桨的老汉是赤脚大仙。观音娘娘看蔡状元很善良，才想这个办法帮他募捐修桥。那些公子怎么可能抛得中观音娘娘呢?后来，人们为了纪念蔡状元和观音娘娘的善举，就玩起了“采莲船”。

采莲船一般用竹篾做龙骨，扎成船状，外用各色布块和彩纸糊成，船顶犹如楼阁，底部成船形，船中可容一人站立，当锣鼓响起时，采莲船便开始舞动起来，一名漂亮的女子站立在船内，做出采莲船行进的各种姿态，船外，男的化装成花脸做丑角，手摇大蒲扇，扮成滑稽的样子赶艄，逗趣取乐，女的手持竹桨在旁撑船并表演各种唱词，锣歇歌起，歌词多是自己临场即兴自编的，尽是恭喜发财、心想事成、健康长寿、家庭和睦、五谷丰登和大吉大利等方面的吉庆内容，而采莲船玩到哪家，哪家就得给点东西呀!因为观音娘娘坐彩船时，为的是募捐，如果不给点东西，就会显得主人太小气!

采莲船是荆州特有的风俗，怎么样，是不是很有趣呢?如果你到荆州来，一定要好好玩一下“采莲船”哦!