高二年级教师评语【汇总20篇】

今年9月，是我的14岁的开端。

今年9月是我初二学年的开端。

今年9月以后的每一天是我一天的开端。

面对全新的开端的我定会全身心得投入新的开端，于是我心中的正反方展开了一场激烈的辩论。正方：今年是乐文彬同学比较关键的时期，其父母也认为面对初二这个新的开端，乐文彬同学应该更努力的学习，这样就能为以后的初三打好基础!这初三的书念的好了，那么重点高中久有望了反方：虽然今年是比较关键的时期，但是如果不在今年初三而的时候赶紧玩的话，今后可就真没有时间玩了，况且乐文彬同学还只是少年，不玩更待何时?正方：初二时的功课还不上去，到初三久完了，还考什么重点高中?那如果考不上重点高中以后难生大学了岂不?反方：嗨!你可以在初三的时候临时抱佛脚呀!正方：不!初二一定要加紧努力，新的开端一定要把握好，否则恐失大业!反方：什么恐失大业!即使不读高中，也照样可以寻找工作啊!恐怕会得“大业”呢!正方：知识是事业得基础，不读高中不读大学，知识浅薄，人可能成“大业”么?要想成大业，必须从现在开始努力学习。乐文彬同学，你从前已经玩得够了，从前，人家在玩得时候，你在玩，玩得心安理得，而当人家专心听课时，你还在偷偷得其得其乐地玩，一到考试时，你便临时抱佛脚，结果考出来得成绩呢?可想而知了!现在初二关键时期你竟然还想玩下去?反方：不!这样吧，该玩的时候痛快的玩，不该玩的时候专心读书吧……正方：哈哈哈哈!对对对!你竟然主张让乐文彬同学再初二时期少玩多学啦?反方：不!我还没讲玩呢!，当学习到不痛快的时候也就要玩一玩!调节调节精神，否则一天到晚神经绷的紧紧的，有什么意思啊!学习真讨厌!正方：如果你从今专心学习了，成绩上去了，也就有了成就感，有了成就感，也就会有学习兴趣啦!我还是主张乐文彬同学刻苦学习，在初二学年中有个新的发展。为今后前途打基础。反方：今后?那么遥远啊!过好今天玩好今天才快乐呢!快快乐乐每一天……正方：乐文彬同学，父母花了大钱送你到这所好学校读书，你竟然还想快快乐乐玩

啊?赶紧读书!父母的事业要你去继承呢!祖国的明天要你去建设呢!反方：啊!你何必想得这么远?正方：人无近忧，必有远虑!……反方 ：今日有玩今日玩……正方：知识改变命运，思想缔造未来………………

辩论还在继续

Newspapers and websites are two major new media in the world today, both of which can provide us with lots of news and information. But they’re different in some ways.

Newspapers enjoy a longer history and often come out daily with more reliable news and information. They can be carried and read almost anywhere you like. So many people like reading them. But they can only contain texts and photos.

On the other hand, websites are quite new and popular, especially among young people. Websites have not only texts with pictures but also audios and videos, which makes stories more interesting. What’s more, they are updated from time to time. So the latest news is always seen on websites instead of in newspapers. But it is not quite convenient for people without a computer connected with the Internet to get information from websites.

那是一件令我难忘的事，它发生在学校，让我在全班同学面前尴尬地抬不起头。

在一个秋高气爽的早上，我走进教室，放下书包，准备读书，刚打开书一张试卷就掉了下来，我一看，这不是要签字的卷子吗?我没有签字，心中十分紧张，但因为是早读时间，我便趁机将书挡在面前。可是我完全没有心情读书，满脑子都在想着签字的事情。我想：“烦死了，这一天天的什么烂事都发生在我的身上，试卷没签字，一定又要被批评了。等等，我可以自己签啊!但，被发现就会……算了算了，签吧!”

于是，我紧张地取出卷子，在卷子上犹豫着签上了我爸的名字，然后双手发抖地交给组长。自从把卷子交出去之后，没一节课让我省心的。但最不好的事情终于还是发生了，老师把我请到办公室问：“你这字是谁签的?”“我爸。”我低着头说。“是么?我问过了，这是你自己签的，你下节课和我去班上跟同学们说一说这件事。”老师说。我听了之后无奈地摇摇头，走出了办公室。

我迈着沉重的步伐，走进教室，站在讲台上。同学们对我指指点点的，不知道他们在下面说什么。不一会儿，老师大步流星地走了进来，把试卷放在讲台上，说：“这个字，是他自己签的，不是家长签的。我昨天是不是说过，这个卷子必须由家长签字?他倒好，自己签，明天把你家长叫来!”

我听后一阵心凉，同学们在台下，看的看，笑的笑，说的说，我仿佛像是生活在黑暗中一样，外面的天也似乎灰蒙蒙的下起了雨。老师让我站到一边，同学们都看着我，我十分不开心，想着：“今天运气差极了，让我在同学面前出了丑，让我尴尬了一整节课。面子丢光了，明天还要请家长，完了，这事要丑大发了。”

我以后可不能再干这种事情了!

过年后的几天，我们全家人一起去了韩国的首尔玩。

出发的那一天，我们先到杭州的萧山机场，然后坐着飞机去了韩国首尔的机场，韩国那里的地上有雪，放眼望去，雪白一片，美极了!

第一天，当地的导游带我们去吃了那里的蛤蜊刀削面，韩国没有像中国那样的一大桌的菜，他们那边都是方桌子，每桌四人，不能多也不能少，桌上每人只有四碟小菜，一盘是泡菜，一盘是腌萝卜，一盘是麻辣豆腐，还有一盘是甜酱。我们吃完了饭，便回了酒店。导游对我们说，虽然韩国十分冷，但是韩国人却很少穿棉衣，因为他们家里的地板是热的，他们有地热，我们迫不及待地进了旅馆房间，赶紧伸出脚来体验，一踩上去，地热马上传了上来，没过一会，房间就很热了，晚上睡觉的时候都不用盖被子。

第二天，我们去了韩国的人文博物馆，体验了韩国人从小到大，从上学到成家立业的景象。然后，我们去喝了参鸡汤，韩国的高丽太极人蔘特别好，外面是白皮，里面是红肉，阴阳相合，八个月大的小孩到八十岁大的老人都可以服用。吃完饭后，我们去了朝鲜和韩国的“三八线”，“三八线”两头便是韩国和朝鲜，两国各向后退二公里，后退的那部分谁也不能进去，飞机也不能从它的上空经过，要是有人进去，两国的军队都会开炮，周围围着铁丝网，还有军队埋的地雷。

最特别的便是韩国的牙签，韩国那里的牙签不像中国的牙签，不是竹子做的，而是用绿豆，淀粉混合而成，就像粉条一样，在热水里泡久了便可以吃，韩国十分环保，垃圾每周只能倒两次，一次是星期二，一次是星期五，所以韩国人会十分节制得减少垃圾的产生。

要是中国也有韩国那样环保，这里的空气就不会那么浑浊了，多希望以后的国家也能做到环保意识强一点啊。

In China, the period of high school is very important for students, they will go to college after finishing high school. Because there are so many students in our country, the students have to take the college entrance exam, the test will decide which school they should go to. Every student in high school will study many course, when the second year comes, students will choose some courses for the college entrance exam. The first thing they should pay attention to is to measure what subject they are good at. Some students are good at math and geography, these students are always weak in politics, then they should keep on learning science. Some students are good at Chinese and English, they should choose to study art. What if the students are good at both? I will advise them to learn the course they are interested.

在中国，高中时期对于学生来说是很重要的，完成高中的课程以后，他们就要上大学。因为我国有很多学生，因此学生不得不参加高考，高考将会决定他们去哪所学校。每个学生在高中都要学很多课程，当第二年到来的时候，学生将要选择一些针对高考的课程。他们要注意的第一件事就是衡量他们擅长的科目。一些学生擅长数学和物理，他们总是不擅长政治，他们应该继续学习理科。一些学生擅长语文和英语，他们应该选择文科。如果学生两者都擅长呢?我会建议他们选择他们感兴趣的科目。

你是一位内心世界十分丰富的女孩，当老师看到你一篇篇内涵丰富，文情并茂的作文，了解到你独到的见解时，是多么喜悦，你的特长真不少，画画、弹琴样样都行，成绩也十分优异是难得的全面发展的聪明学生。

7在你的学习生活中，有成功的欢笑，也有失败的痛惜。成功时你没有陶醉，失败时你没有气馁，你用坚强的信念和不懈的努力去面对它们，我欣赏的并不是你那优异的成绩，而是你执着的学习精神。

你像沙地上温暖的阳光，给人关爱，你像轻轻滴落的雨点，多愁善感，文静、腼腆、懂事勾勒出你的特点，学习上的认真与执着又给同学们留下了深刻的印象，敞开心扉，创造出自己明日的辉煌。

你时时都在思考问题，渴望得到更多的知识;你时时都在伏案苦读，所以成绩十分优秀，你能完成好学校交给的一切任务，受到大家的一致好评，这就是你，一个勤学、善问的好孩子，愿你不断锤炼自己，争取百尺竿头，更进一步。

你是一位正直，坦诚的好孩子，爱憎分明，遇事有一定的主见。数学是你喜爱的科目，且成绩优秀，要知道，胜利者不一定是跑得最快的人，但一定是最能耐久的人。

你像只快乐的鸟儿，你的大眼睛里盛着的是聪明、机灵、乖巧……老师是那么的喜欢你。讲台旁，你是位小老师，领着大家整齐有序的进行早朗读;你还是位小指挥官，分配同学们值日工作时，那样子，可真神气!谁说你个子小，你的心灵像海洋一样宽阔，笔，本子，橡皮……你借给同学多少次，谁也记不清，怪不得同学们都喜欢围在你身旁。你那工整、漂亮的字也给老师留下了深深得印象。

每一节课，你都有新鲜的见解，每一次发言，都有自己的独到之处，每一次竞赛和考试都能创造出奇迹，给老师和同学流下深刻的印象，但令老师遗憾的是你与同学相处往往会发生不该有的“战争”，哪一天你能发挥自己的聪明才智，搞好外交关系，与同学友好相处，化干戈为玉帛----你是一个有灵气的孩子，老师相信你会与同学建立“睦邻友好”关系的。

Christmas Day-December 25-which celebrates the birth of Jesus Christ, the founder of the Christian religion, is the biggest and best-loved holiday in the Christian World.

According to the Bible, the holy book of Christians, God decided to allow his only son, Jesus Christ, to be born to a human mother and live on earth so that people could understand God better and learn to love God and each other more. "Christmas"- meaning "celebration of Christ "- honors the time when Jesus was born to a young Jewish woman Mary.

Mary was engaged to be married to Joseph, a carpenter, but before they came together, she was found to be with child. Because Joseph, her husband, was a righteous man and did not want to expose her to public disgrace, he had in mind to divorce her quietly.

But after he had considered this, an angel of the Lord appeared to him in a dream and said, "Do not be afraid to take Mary home as your wife, because what is conceived in her is from the Holy Spirit. She will give birth to a son, and you are to give him the name Jesus, because he will save his people from their sins."

Although the exact date of the birth of Jesus nearly 2,000 years ago is not known, the calendar on the supposed date divides all time into B.C. (Before Christ )and A.D. ( a Latin phrase, Anno Domini, "in the year of our Lord.") For the first 300 years, Jesus birthday was celebrated on different dates. Finally, in the year 354, church leaders chose December 25 as his birthday.

尊敬的家长：

您好!

高二年是您的孩子在高中三年求学生涯中最黄金最难把握的一年，它既没有了高一的新鲜感，也还不具有高三的紧迫感，是高中学习阶段的“断层”时期，是高中生活的关键。您的孩子在我校经过一年的学习生活，历经文理分科分班后，经过半学期的努力，他(她)更成熟了吗?性格有了怎样的转变呢?文理分科后的学习成绩是提高了还是退步了?各科成绩是否平衡、有没有严重的偏科现象?学习方法应该进行怎样的转变?您又如何指孩子的学习?该怎样和孩子更好地沟通呢?许多问题都需要您与学校老师进行沟通交流。为此，学校决定召开高二学生家长座谈会，邀请您莅临出席!现将有关事项通知如下：

一、会议时间：

xx年x月x日(星期六)下午13：00——15：00召开家长会

(考虑到各位家长都很忙，路途也远，怕影响您的工作，所以我们把时间定于周六下午13：00开始。您可以提前来，在11：35学生下课后与自己的子女共进午餐，下午1点到班级参加家长会。)

二、会议地点：景行楼3楼学生所在班级(有志愿者指引)

三、主要议程：

(1)致欢迎词; (2)介绍本班任课教师情况;

(3)介绍高二第一学期期中考试情况;(4)高中学生家长应注意的问题;

(5)家长交流经验; (6)任课老师与家长交流。

四、其他：

(1)您若开车或骑车来校，请将汽车、摩托车等有序停放在学校东门或南门口，并服从有关人员的管理。

(2)会议期间，请将手机设置成静音或震动状态，不要高声谈话、抽烟。

(3)建议您带上纸笔，以便将重要内容作一记录。会后您一定要与孩子认真交流。

(4)您如有事不能出席家长会，烦请您与班主任主动联系，可委托亲属参加，以便及时了解家长会相关内容。班主任： 电话：

最后，感谢您对学校工作的关心、支持!祝愿您的孩子，能在xx年的高考中，实现自己的理想!也祝愿您和您的家人阖家欢乐，健康幸福!

xx大学附属实验中学

xx年xx月xx日

xx-xx学年xx附中高二年级家长会回执

Last year’s Spring Festival is special. My uncle and my aunt came back from Shanghai. My family were very happy to keep the Spring Festival with them. And it was the most exciting festival of all the festivals.

On New Year’s Eve, my father and my uncle talked about their work together. My mum did some cooking with my aunt Grandparents and I watched the New Year TV programmes. At about six o’clock, we had a special family dinner. We all thought the dumplings were delicious.

On the first day of the New Year, we visited our relatives. In the afternoon, we went shopping in Jiefanf Road. My uncle bought some Jay’s CDs. He likes Jay’s music very much. There were so many people on the road. It was more alive than any other time of a year.

On the second and the third days, we spent a wonderful weekend in the country. There were much bigger trees than in the city. And the animals were more beautiful than in the city. We all enjoyed ourselves.

I had an interesting Spring Festival. How about you?

Smoke has something for people in poor health, nicotine.

Nicotine in a cigarette can kill a mouse, 25 g of nicotine in cigarettes can kill a few cows, 40 to 60 mg of pure nicotine can kill a person.

The dangers of nicotine is also quite big, it can cause stomach or other stomach disease; Also can make the person causes heart disease cause rhythm of the heart is not straight; The outbreak of serious still can cause cancer.

Cigarettes are hidden in the invisible killer, around us are all should be vigilant.

According to scientists, the chemical composition of tobacco contains hundreds of complex, most harmful to human body, including tar, nicotine, phenols, alcohols, acids, aldehyde is 40 kinds of toxic and carcinogenic substance. Smoke after the fire, smoke, contains the chemical composition of tobacco in all, at the same time than the tobacco itself and added some harmful substances, such as carbon monoxide, tobacco tar and so on. This is because in addition to the tobacco itself, in the process of cigarette made, to add some cocoa in raw materials, liquorice, sugar, glycerin, such as ethylene glycol, moist, taste fragrance and combustion-supporting material. Although these additive itself is harmless, but changed in the process of combustion. For example, in the back of the rat with cocoa after burning smoke oil, can grow skin tumor. Glycyrrhizic acid in glycyrrhiza after burning, with other ingredients, can generate have carcinogenic polycyclic aromatic hydrocarbons. Sugar increased after combustion with tobacco tar, and the product of sugar after combustion is an important carcinogens in tobacco. Glycerin and glycol after the burning of the material, not only can make smokers bladder cancer, and the acrolein inhibits the trachea and cilia secretion from the lungs, thereby increase the chances of suffering from bronchitis and emphysema, and make people with both became seriously ill.

Smoke harm to people is how great! So we cant smoke. Stop smoking, the benefit of future generations.

烟里有一种对人身体不好的东西——尼古丁。

一枝香烟中的尼古丁可以毒死一只小白鼠，25g的香烟里的尼古丁可 毒死几头牛，40至60毫克纯尼古丁可以毒死一个人。

尼古丁的危害也是相当的大，它可以引起胃痛或其它胃病;还会使人引起心律不正诱发心脏病;严重的还可能引起癌症的爆发。

香烟是隐藏在我们身边的隐形杀手，是大家所应警惕的。

据科学家测定，烟草中含有数百种复杂的化学成分，大部分对人体有害，其中焦油、尼古丁、酚类、醇类、酸类、醛类等40种是有毒和有致癌作用的物质。烟在点燃后，所产生的烟雾，包含了烟草中所有的化学成分，同时比烟草本身又增加了一些有害物质，如一氧化碳和烟焦油等。这是因为除烟草本身外，在制成卷烟的过程中，要在原料中加入一些可可、甘草、糖、甘油、乙二醇等调味、湿润、产香、助燃物质。这些添加剂虽然本身无害，但在燃烧过程中却起了变化。例如，在鼠背涂上可可燃烧后产生的烟油，可长出皮肤瘤。甘草中的甘草酸在燃烧后，与其他成分化合，可生成有致癌作用的多环芳烃。糖与烟草一起燃烧后增加了焦油量，而糖燃烧后的产物是烟中的一个重要致癌物。甘油和乙二醇在燃烧后的物质，不但可能使吸烟者患膀胱癌，而且所产生的丙烯醛可抑制气管和纤毛分泌物从肺内排出，从而增加患气管炎和肺气肿的机会，并使患有这两种病的人病情加重。

烟对人的危害是多么大啊!所以我们不能吸烟。杜绝吸烟，造福后人。

Do your teachers still use traditional techniques to teach you nowadays? A revol- ution in teaching techniques is required now. In the past, we just took it for granted that a teacher s aim was to teach the students all that he knew and solve all the problems for them. Therefore, students could mot judge things on their own under this circumstance. Thus students gradually lost the ability to learn by themselves. In addition, they were only equipped with the knowledge that were taught in class and made the same judgement upon every problem which might crop up. Of course, they would find their knowledge not enough to solve practical problems.

So it is time to change the teaching method. A teacher s goal is to help the students develop not only the ability to learn by themselves but the skills to make judgements on every aspect on their own. It s not necessary for the students to turn to teachers for help while meeting with difficulties. The first thing is to develop the students abilities to make sound judgements upon any problem and overcome difficulties.

All in all, the aim of teaching is to liberate, but mot to fetter the students innate powers of making sound judgements.

你们的老师仍使用传统技术，现在教你?阿revol在教学技巧ution现在需要。在过去，我们只是把它理所当然地认为一老师的目的是要教导学生，他知道，解决他们的所有问题。因此，学生可以摩托罗拉自行判断在此情况下的东西。因此，学生们逐渐失去了学习能力本身。此外，他们只配备了那些在课堂上教授时所作的每一个问题，可能会突然出现相同的判断的知识。当然，他们会发现自己的知识不足以解决实际问题。

因此，现在是改变教学方法。甲老师的目标是帮助学生发展，不仅学习的能力，但自己的技能，就在自己的每一个方面的判断。那不为学生需要寻求帮助教师在会见困难。首先是培养学生的能力作出的任何问题，正确的判断和克服困难。

总之，教学是解放的目标，但摩托罗拉束缚作出正确的判断学生的固有权力。

Australia is one of the famous Oceanian country. The country is famous for its wool production and seashore tour. As the climate there is warm and comfortable, many people spend vocations there every year. I’m a super fan of water entertainment, so I choose it as my destination.

In Australia, the sky is bluer than blue, the clouds are whiter than white, all the local people enjoy an optimistic and active life. They also show their kindness and enthusiasm to the tourists.

The first step should be Sydney Opera which is among the most brilliant and splendid architectures in the world. Many world-class plays are put on in it .The surface and shape of it is like a seashell with glory decorations inside.

Then Melbourne is a good choice to be as the next step. In Melbourne, skin screen is a must to take with as the sunshine is upset and may burn your skin. The most attractive thing to me is the Australia Open, which is one of the biggest world-class tennis competition. Many great players such as Roddick Federer and its local player Hewitt etc. gather to compete. It’s really a feast for the eyes.

Australia is also home to one of the most challenging and exciting surfing and diving projects. As we know, it is always called “a country riding on the back of sheep”. From the interesting saying ,we can know something about the rich wool-production country. If you love animals, kangaroos and kaolas are good company to you .

So don’t forget Australia when you plan a trip.

端午节，我就想起一首儿歌“五月五，是端阳。插艾叶，带香囊。吃粽子，撒白糖。龙舟下水喜洋洋。”一曲简单的儿歌就道出我国两千多年的传统节日——端午节。一到端午这一天全国各地的人们都要吃粽子，赛龙舟。

在我的家乡也一样，每到这一天，家家户户都忙得不亦乐乎，大家都在为过节准备。端午节的前两天，就看到奶奶，去市场买粽叶，糯米，回到家以后，奶奶先把粽叶放到一个盆子里，用水浸泡，使它变柔软，然后把糯米洗净，用水浸泡，经过一段时间的浸泡后，奶奶开始包粽子了。

首先先拿起一片粽叶，把它卷成一个椎体，然后再把糯米填到这个椎体李，填满以后，用其余的粽叶把它紧紧的裹住，接着用麻线把它困起来，奶奶就像这样一个一个的包着，不一会，一串粽子就包好了。终于到了端午这一天，妈妈一早就出去买菜了，奶奶从冰箱里取出之前包好的粽子，放到锅里开始煮，妈妈不久也回来了，这时妈妈拿出在市场买的艾叶，把它挂在门上面，然后准备菜肴。

经过了一天的准备，我们的晚餐开始了，我们一家人围坐在饭桌前，为先人屈原祈祷后开始用餐，这是电视里也在播放赛龙舟的画面，我不由得想起屈原，希望他能听到我们的祈祷，不会刚到寂寞。

端午节是我们中国人两千多年的传统节日，他的延续不仅是龙的节日，还是一种精神的延续。

作文是我们考试经常遇到的，教师评语可以让学生清楚知道自己的作文有什么问题。下面小编带来的是小学作文语文教师评语，希望对你有所帮助！

1、…要求通过虚构的故事来表达一种哲理。

2、字迹龙飞凤舞，大概你想当草书书法家吧？

3、"让座"是件极平常的事，但你的作文，却令人耳目一新；你不只写事，还具体而又真实地写出了自己让座前后复杂的内心世界，层次分明，语句生动，情节自然，富有感人的魅力；此外，你提出的社会问题，令人深思。

4、小作者对景物的描写生动细致，捉住色彩外形香味等方面的特点，并且用了比喻拟人排比等多种手法，令人处处感受到秋天的美。

5、观点明确，好恶立场分明，让人一目了然。

6、你能够由雪联想到人生追求，从生活细节出发，创新精神可嘉；本文体现了你平白的文风，谁说“白开水”不是最佳的饮料？

7、你的文章告诉我，用眼睛和心灵发现世界，我们就仿佛比别人多活了很多年。

8、文章有理有据，说服力强，突出人物个性。上下文过渡自然，条理清晰，首尾照应。结尾点题，突出中心思想。

9、当老师打开你的作文本时，总能听到一阵哭泣，原来是标点符号。因为你太不重视他们了，你想想，当老师也像你轻视标点符号那样而轻视你的作文时，你不是也会哭吗。

10、文章的语言很流畅，也写出了老师的感受。

11、巧妙地运用拟人手法，使文中的物像具备了人的行为特征、人的思想情感，使之从侧面体现文中主人公的心灵历程。

12、为什么总有错字？我等待你的回答！

13、文章边叙事边抒情。

14、充分运用动静结合的写法，并辅以比喻，拟人等手法，通过生动，形象的语言的描绘，使读者仿佛置身于梦境一般。结尾处对人物的赞美，情真意切，感人至深。

15、文章主题明确，感情质朴鲜明，行文自然有序，段落分明，结构完整。善于运用对比。

16、丢字现象严重，我猜想你是不是雨天常打破伞？

17、情节变化平淡无奇，缺乏新意。

18、通过生动、形象的语言的描绘，使读者仿佛置身于梦境一般。

19、详略不得当！

20、对…生动而详细的叙述，是本文的一天特色，也体现了作者观察的敏锐与细致。这是文章成功的一大要素。

21、文章真实生动，情真意切，特别是…使用权文章极具感染力，发人深思。

22、语言朴实，简洁，流畅，开头和结尾都很自然，准确。

23、没有规矩，不成方圆，对吧？

24、你是一个想象力多么丰富的孩子啊！把美丽的春光写得特别有诗意，语句也非常优美。平常你一定积累了丰富的词汇，观察了许多景物。愿你做个有心人，写出更多更美的文章。

25、关心生活，关注社会，并不是成年人的特权。通过这一篇《意外》看得出来，在你的心中，不仅装盛着童真和书本、学校，而更多的是不尽的关注社会的心事。这一篇文字，一波三折，尤其心理描写很突出，结尾的议论升华了文章的主题。

26、与时代气息不符，内容过于陈旧老化。

27、选材平淡无奇，过于老旧、粗俗、简单幼稚，不具新意，难于深刻地反映生活的时代性、真实性。

28、语言准确，鲜明、生动，内容极其丰富具体。

29、本文文笔优美，抒情浓郁，是一曲对童年生活的美好颂歌。作者以抒情的笔调，浓墨重彩地描绘了ｘｘ一角的春夏秋冬四季景色，深情地回忆了在那里度过的美好童年生活。

30、构思不合常理，内容漏洞百出，不能反映生活的真实。

31、文如其人，你的文章和你的为人一样朴实、豁达。你的作文功底很好，这也是你长期磨练的结晶。希望你在未来的学习过程中，用心感受和体味生活，写出更加感人的好文章。

32、拟人化语言使文章更显得生动活泼。

33、字潦草得和地上的草一样，东倒西歪，直不起腰来。

34、本文三大成功之处：首先注意选取最美好的片断来写，其次用词准确，第三文章结构紧凑。

35、不可以对自己降低要求！因为你能做到更好！

36、景物描写传神逼真，遣词造句贴切得体，景随情生，情景交融，呈现在读者面前的恰似一幅生动传情的写生画。

37、标点打得规规矩矩，如光滑的地板砖一样。

38、文章结尾不落俗套，给人以欲还休的感觉。

39、本文以…为线索，使用权文章连贯，流畅，衔接自然，同时，通过前后具体事例的对比。抨击了……，文章语言生动丰富，可读性强。

40、作者能按方位顺序向读者先容其可爱的ｘｘ，从校门——教学区（教学楼巨型花坛）——活动区（大操场），条理清楚，有选择有重点地绘景，自然地反映出学校朝气蓬勃的气氛。

41、尚缺乏典型事例或生活片段，因而文章欠充实、饱满，分量也减弱了。

42、有进步啦！

43、过程详细，结尾却简略不全。结构不合理，给人以虎头蛇尾之感。

44、取材真实生活，选材恰当，很有新意，段落分明，过渡自然，情趣盎然，可读性强。

45、生动具体，让人爱莫能助释手卷。文章含蓄的结尾，既点题，又耐人寻味。

46、文章内容新颖，结构合理，流畅连贯，自然通达。

47、事件虽小，但反映出较深刻的道理，具有一定的普遍性。

48、对自己的要求有多高，就能达到多高的水平！

49、文章用孩子的语言叙事，显得自然，朴素，犹如一股清泉。结尾点题，起到了画龙点睛的作用。

50、通篇文章语调轻松幽默，显得妙趣横生，读来令人爱不释手。

春节是我国一个古老的节日，也是全年最重要的一个节日，如何过庆贺这个节日，在千百年的历史发展中，形成了一些较为固定的风俗习惯，有许多还相传至今。 The Spring Festival is an ancient festival in my country and the most important festival in the year. Many fixed customs and habits have been passed down to this day.

爆竹中国民间有“开门爆竹”一说。即在新的一年到来之际，家家户户开门的第一件事就是燃放爆竹，以哔哔叭叭的爆竹声除旧迎新。爆竹是中国特产，亦称“爆仗”、“炮仗”、“鞭炮”。其起源很早，至今已有两千多年的历史。放爆竹可以创造出喜庆热闹的气氛，是节日的一种娱乐活动，可以给人们带来欢愉和吉利。

拜年新年的初一，人们都早早起来，穿上最漂亮的衣服，打扮得整整齐齐，出门去走亲访友，相互拜年，恭祝来年大吉大利。拜年的方式多种多样，有的是同族长带领若干人挨家挨户地拜年;有的是同事相邀几个人去拜年;也有大家聚在一起相互祝贺，称为“团拜”。晚上，就剩下自己家的人了。在看春节联欢晚会之前，是我最期待的时候：收压岁钱。恭喜发财，红包拿来!舅舅一个，外公一个，外婆一个……我满载而归，手中十几个大红包。

春节拜年时，晚辈要先给长辈拜年，祝长辈人长寿安康，长辈可将事先准备好的压岁钱分给晚辈，据说压岁钱可以压住邪祟，因为“岁”与“祟”谐音，晚辈得到压岁钱就可以平平安安度过一岁。压岁钱有两种，一种是以彩绳穿线编作龙形，置于床脚，此记载见于《燕京岁时记》;另一种是最常见的，即由家长用红纸包裹分给孩子的钱。压岁钱可在晚辈拜年后当众赏给，亦可在除夕夜孩子睡着时，由家长偷偷地放在孩子的枕头底下。倒贴“福”字。

在贴春联的同时，一些人家要在屋门上、墙壁上、门楣上贴上大大小小的“福”字。春节贴“福”字，是我国民间由来已久的风俗。“福”字指福气、福运，寄托了人们对幸福生活的向往，对美好未来的祝愿。为了更充分地体现这种向往和祝愿，有的人干脆将“福”字倒过来贴，表示“幸福已到”“福气已到”。

I have not only a lot of common friends, but also a special friend. He is my father. My father isn’t tall but he is very kind and lovely. He usually helps me with my maths and physics in the evening. At weekends he plays chess, cards with me. When I am in trouble. He always help me in time. I prefer my father to any other friend. I think he is not only a good father, but also one of my best friends. I love my father very much.

In China, there is a saying that the children who live in the countryside areEarly-maturing, it is not about the physiology, it is about the mentality. The reason for the children being premature is various. Some children live in an unhappy family, such their parents get divorced or their parents don’t get along with each other. Living in such a family, the children will not grow up in a normal way, they will have sad feelings and become to know more about the unlucky things. Some children who live in the country need to take more responsibility, because their parents work in the big cities, so the children have to take care of themselves and also learn to do the house work. It is not good for the children to be early-maturing, they should grow up step by step, the parents need to give more care on the kids.

在中国，有一句话，农村的孩子早当家，这不是说生理上的，而是说心里上的。造成孩子早熟的原因有很多。一些孩子生活在不幸福的家庭，比如他们的父母离婚或者他们的父母相处不好。生活在这样的家庭，孩子不会正常的长大，他们会感到悲伤，了解更多不幸的事情。一些住在农村的孩子需要承担更多的责任，因为他们的父母在大城市打工，所以孩子需要照顾自己，也要学着去做家务。孩子早熟是不好的，他们应该一步一步地成长，家长需要给予孩子更多的关爱。

家校合力共成长！

十四岁，诗一般的年龄。

一个有权利做梦的年龄，

一个从幼稚迈向沉稳的年龄，

一个青春起步的年龄。

青春，一个多么美妙的词语，

它将见证你们人生的起伏变迁，

它将见证你们生命中最为精彩的历程。

汗水、泪水是青春路上的甘霖，

它们必将浇灌出成功之花；

烦恼、困惑是青春旅途必经风景，

有我，有我，有我们，

做你的向导，

引你轻松跨越人生的迷途。

青春，是人生最大的筹码，

只有把握它，珍惜它，

青春之舟，才能鼓起时代的风帆，

在岁月的长河里永不停息地航行。

青春，是人生最大的筹码，

对于每一个拥有它却不懂得把握的人，

失掉的却是整个人生的高度。

服装显示的是身体的美丑，

行为显示的是心灵的美丑；

不要崇拜别人，

如果足够努力，

你也可以成为自己的偶像；

名言不能充当铅笔盒里的装饰品，

它是我们的行为准则，

它是我们的实践指南；

用真诚换取信任和尊重，

用谦逊换取逆耳之忠言；

一个人最可怜的是无知，

最可悲的是等待，

最可敬的是奋斗。

让我们唱响奋斗的主旋律，

把种子和信念播进青春的天地，

让青春的嫩绿和奉献的金黄，

写进我们生命的履历，

见证我们灿烂的成长，

记录我们无悔的记忆，

在我们多彩的人生之路上，

竖起一座坚实的里程碑。

I have a sister. Her name is Alice . She is one year old. She has short hair. She has a fat face. It looks like a big red apple. She has big eyes and a small mouth. She has only one tooth, but she can eat cookies. Her arms and legs are fat, too. But she can crawl very fast on the floor.

My sister is very naughty. She doesn’t sleep at night but sleeps at daytime. So my mother is tired to take care of her. She always crawls here and there, sofa, bed, chair, everywhere she likes to go. She likes to play with the toys. Bricks are her favourite. She likes to make different shapes with the bricks. Sometime it’s a house, sometimes it’s a bus. I think she is a smart girl. She likes to play with me. She likes my story-telling. She always asks me to tell stories for her.

There is a cartoon “Present Sheep and Mr. Wolf” on TV. My sister likes it so much. Every time when I turn on the TV, she always says “present sheep” to me, asks me to watch the cartoon. And every time she hears the theme song of the cartoon, she will sing and dance on the floor. Actually she can not sing and dance, she just shakes her little body to show us she likes it very much. She is so cute.

My sister is smooth-tongued. She likes to call me “sister”, call my dad “daddy”, call my mom “mummy”. She often call us many times a day.

In my eyes, my sister is naughty, lovely and smart. I like her.

Human, science and nature, the three phase was quoted rates are inseparable. The wonders of nature, a little thing, through the baptism of the time, and meticulous observation, often can give a person with enlightenment.

Vast forests, sunshine give plants grace, to be able to get the nutrients and thrive. Such as the morning sun open the eyes of animals, everything is ready. Squirrels, squirrel, embarks from the house, looking for full sweet red pine nuts, all kinds of plant seeds and slowly by seeding them to other places. While the weasel feed on smaller herbivores, sable and then ate the weasel... As if people eat the big fish, big fish eat small fish, small fish eat shrimp, shrimp eat plankton, interlocking between RACES, interdependence restricts each other.

Foreign scientists have done an experiment: introduce the sheep in a rare nature reserve, where the bamiyan, natural environment is superior, and there is special personnel to the group of kids to their natural enemies, Wolf, moved to another place. So the sheep started in the breeding. Until grass and low shrubs are eaten, the number of sheep instead of less. Because they live too comfortable, there is no enemy attack, the number that is too carefree life let their constitution also fell. Then the scientists tried to introduce wolves again. The result is in the relationship between predator and prey, good robust species to survive, wolves eat sick defect part. Natural selection and evolution, has been the nature and even the survival of human society the same criteria.

Cut down some trees, is to destroy a part of birds and insects; Killing of bees, small fish, can also cause cannot spread pollen, fish cannot reproduce problem... Sabotaged a part of the food chain, will bring ill-defined disaster. Because in front of the natural fair, each species, each independent individual organisms is so beautiful and full of value.

Because of the diversity of species and colorful nature. Want to live in harmony with her and get the kind of treatment, will be good to nature, to understand the nature, and have good at discovering and innovative mind.

人类、科学、自然，这三者相生相息密不可分。大自然的奇妙之处在于：一件小小的事物，经过时间的洗礼以及细致入微的观察，往往能给人以启示。

广袤的森林中，阳光雨露给予植物恩泽，使其能够得到养料然后茁壮成长。等清晨的阳光掀开动物们的眼睛，一切也准备好了。松鼠、灰鼠从居所里出发，寻找饱满香甜的红松子，各种植物的种子于是慢慢的被他们带到其他的地方落地生根。而此时黄鼠狼以体型较小的草食动物为食，紫貂继而吃掉了黄鼠狼……就好像人吃大鱼，大鱼吃小鱼，小鱼吃虾米，虾米又吃浮游生物一样，各种族之间环环相扣，相互依存相互制约着。

外国的科学家曾做过一个实验：将一种稀有的羊引进自然保护区，那里水草丰美，自然环境优越，并且还有专门的人员为这群天之骄子将她们的天敌——狼，迁往另外的地方。于是羊群开始在此生息繁衍。直到草和低矮的灌木被吃光了，羊群的数量反而越来越少。原来是因为它们生活的太过安逸，没有天敌进犯，数量过于膨胀，太过悠闲的生活让它们的体质也下降了。后来科学家们尝试着再一次引进狼群。结果是在捕食者与猎物的关系中，健壮优良的品种得以存活，狼群则吃掉病弱残疾的部分。物竞天择，优胜劣汰，一直都是自然界乃至人类社会不变的生存准则。

砍掉了某种树林，就等于灭绝了一部分鸟类、昆虫;捕杀蜜蜂、幼小鱼类，也会造成花粉无法传播，鱼群无法繁衍的问题……大肆破坏生物链中的某一环，都会带来难以言说的灾难。因为在公平的自然面前，每个物种，每个独立的生物个体都是如此的美丽而富有价值。

大自然因为物种的多样性而五彩缤纷。想要与她和谐相处并得到其慈祥的对待，就要善待自然，了解自然，并拥有一刻善于发现与创新的心。

In an era of information explosion, people can easily be distracted by irrelevant information. It is particularly well-known that a wealth of information creates a poverty of attention.

在这个信息膨胀的时代，人们很容易受到不相干的信息的困扰，众所周知，过于丰富的信息反而导致注意力的缺失。Admittedly, a consideration amount of information expands our horizon and gives us convenience. Just with a simple click, we can get a plenty of information from the Internet. We are so skilled at searching information online. Nevertheless, we seem at sea of information invariably when we open webpages for which the information is too abundant and much of them turn out to be useless. How can we avoid being lost in a wealth of information?可以肯定的是，一定量的信息可以开阔我们的眼界，给予方便。只是简单地敲击按键，我们就能从网络上获得大量的信息。我们是如此的熟悉搜索网络信息。尽管如此，当我们打开网页浏览这大量的信息时候，我们好像处在信息大海之中，而这些内容很多都是无用的。我们如何才能不迷失在这海量的信息之中?First of all, ensuring what information you want and make a list of them. Then you can save useful webpages which get you out of the time-consuming information. Last but not least, we should be self-control and never be attracted by the distracting information. As long as you follow those tips, you will get what you want efficiently.首先，确定好你想要找的内容并做好清单。然后你可以保存好那些有用的网站，这样你就能摆脱不相干信息的干扰。最后同样重要的是，我们要自我控制，不被那些转移注意力的信息给吸引。只要做到这几点，你就能有效地找到你想要的信息。