高一年级英语作文：No Pains,No Gains【20篇】

Last night, I played football match with my friends. We were divided into

two teams and the lose team would get some punishment. At last, my team lost,

the score was so close and I felt so pity. My friends from other team came to

console me, he said all of us done so well. I know friendship comes first, don’t

let the result affect our friendship.

Haze is mist floating a lot of smoke, dust and other particles and

formation of the turbidity phenomenon. January 29, according to the ministry of

remote sensing satellite monitoring: China has 130 square kilometers of regional

haze shrouded, serious pollution of air quality.

The fog haze weather how? Many families have a car, we have to travel more

convenient, but the car exhaust pollution of the air; Power plant, oil

refineries, chemical plants in our city "game", but the clock keep emit soot and

dust; The colorful fireworks let a person too many things to see, but air

ZhongYan WuTengTeng, become very cloudy, air quality has fallen sharply, PM2. 5,

PM10 index has soared, these are the main cause of fog, they bring us quick and

convenient and enjoyable at the same time, also quietly gave us the unintended

consequences.

Haze weather, our breathing is cloudy gas. The haze in the air can cause

diseases such as pneumonia, sore throat, bronchitis, heart, decline. In 1952,

the fog in London, England is like invisible killer, seized 4000 people in just

five days of life, after two months has killed 8000 people in the life, the

power of the fog, and this is a wake-up call for us.

We need the fresh air, is a healthy body. Please do not at the expense of

the health, and for the so-called good life. Driving less, green travel, a

variety of trees, protect forests. Haze, starts from me.

Home is a warm words, a warm place. I believe that every classmate have a warm home. My home also is such, is the serious cautious father alive, tender and beautiful mom and I together.

My dad, the top of the square face, a head of black shiny hair, thick eyebrows below with a pair of eyes, high bridge of the nose more foil out of his culture. My father as my tutor, all assignments to please him, sometimes I met wisdom surfing math very hard, my mother and I dont use the standard equation solutions, one to ask dad, a few simple formula has solved the problem easily. My father was a geek, home in the evening every day the first thing to do is open a computer. But hes learning with a computer, dont like someone turned on the computer is pure to play games.

My mother, long brown hair perms beside the oval face, big eyes are so bright, I would have been she found all the little affectations. My mother not only looks affable, also special bright and broad minded, every time I quarrel with my sister, she will tell me the importance of friendship, let me and her sister and good, maybe I touched my sister, whenever the two of us quarrel, she will learn to me let us be friends.

This is my home, a warm home, a warm home, a family full of happiness. This is a story of a love knitting, reading the rest of my life, forever aftertaste, touched a lifetime.

家是一个温暖的字眼，一个温馨的地方。我相信每一个同学都有一个温暖的家。我的家也是这样，是由严肃谨慎的老爸、温柔美丽的老妈和活蹦乱跳的我组成的。

我的老爸，方形的脸的上方，一头乌黑光亮的短发，浓浓的眉毛下面高高的鼻梁上夹着一副眼睛，更衬托出了他的文化。我的爸爸就像我的家庭教师，所有的作业都要请他过目，有的时候我遇到了很难的智慧冲浪数学题，我和妈妈都不会用标准的算式解答，一去问爸爸，几道简单的算式就把题轻松的解开了。我的爸爸还是个电脑迷，每天晚上回到家的第一件事就是打开电脑。不过他可是在用电脑学习，不像某些人打开电脑纯是为了玩游戏。

我的妈妈，长长的褐色烫发披在那椭圆的脸的旁边，那双大大的眼睛是那么明亮，我的一切小动作都会被她发现。我的妈妈不仅面容和蔼可亲，心胸也特别的宽广，每当我和妹妹吵架时，她都会告诉我友谊的重要性，让我主动和妹妹和好，也许我的行为感动了我的妹妹，每当我们两个吵架的时候，她也会学着我让我们和好。

这就是我的家，一个温馨的家，一个温暖的家，一个充满快乐的家。这是一个有爱编织的故事，叫人阅读一辈子，回味一辈子，感动一辈子。

Travel is a very good means of broadening a person39s perspective.Travel

may relieve a person of boredom and gloom. Travelers can choose differentmodes

of transportation which have advantage s and disadvantages. Travel is avery good

means of broadening a person39s perspective. It makes you come intocontact with

different cultures， meet people of different colors and go through peculiarrites

and ceremonies. Travelling much， you will not on ly enrich your knowledge

andexperiences， but also be aware of the vastness of nature. Travel may also

relieve personof boredom and gloom. Travel brings you enjo yment and attraction.

It gives you apleasant experience， which will disperse your boredom and make you

forget whateverannoys you. Travel broadens your mind and leaves you good

memories. Later， you maygo over these memories and enjoy your past experiences，

thus keeping a fresh and sunnymind. The field39s his study， nature was his book.

Travelers can choose different modes oftransportation which have advantage s and

disadvantages. Airplanes are the fastest butalso the most expensive. Bus es and

trains are less expensive， but they soon make youfeel cramped and unco

mfortable. Ships provide you with comfort unless you get seasick.Most people c

an afford traveling by bicycle， which， although slow， can limber upyour mus cles

and get you closer to nature. I love traveling.Traveling not only broadens my

horizons but also opens my eye s to the world.What39s more it refreshes me. You

can go to Disneyland and expe rience whatit39s like to be “a child again” You

can visit one of the “seven wonders of theworld” such as the Grand Canyon and

feel the magnificence of n ature You can taste the“magicial” ice water on a

glacier which can help yo u become more beautiful and makeyou live longer. Just

forget all trifles and b urdens that you have in your mind. Experienceis a type

of living knowledge. Yo u39ll be sure to experience many new things

whentraveling. You don39t even need a tour guide if you long for more freedom.

Justdon39t forget to bring your back pack.

Ah! Christmas morning! Children like to wake up early while its still dark and sneak into the living room to check the presents----find any with their name on it, shake them to guess whats inside, and then maybe theyll go back to bed and pretend they are still asleep when their parents come to wake them with a "Merry Christmas!"

But almost no one I know gets completely dressed or eats a regular breakfast first thing Christmas morning. They just put on a robe or wear their pajamas and go to see whats under the Christmas tree. Some Christian families have a tradition of reading the Bible story of Jesus birth. Maybe its to remind the children that Christmas is Jesus birthday.

Someone will begin to take the presents out from under the tree, see whose name is on the package, and then pass them around. Some families wait until all the presents have been given out before opening any of them, while others open each one as it comes to them. There are many "thank you" to the ones who gave the gifts, new clothes are tried on to see if they fit, and of course the most interesting toys will immediately be played with.

Usually among the Christmas gifts will be some especially delicious candy or cake or cookies which everyone tastes. These sweet things may be the only breakfast many people eat Christmas morning. After the gifts have been opened, the room will be tidied up except where the children are playing with their toys. Everyone will wash and get dressed for the day.

Some people may go to a Christmas morning church service around ten oclock if their church didnt have one on Christmas Eve. But most people will just watch TV. Well, most men will. The children may play outside or inside with their new toys, but the mothers will be in the kitchen preparing Christmas Dinner.

啊!圣诞节的早晨!孩子们喜欢早起,它仍然是黑暗和溜进客厅去检查礼物——找到任何与他们的名字,动摇他们猜里面有什么,然后他们可能会回到床上,假装他们是还在睡觉当他们的父母叫他们“圣诞快乐!”

但是我几乎没有人知道会完全打扮或吃普通的早餐圣诞节早晨的第一件事。他们只是穿上长袍或穿睡衣去看圣诞树下会有什么。一些基督教家庭的传统阅读圣经耶稣诞生的故事。也许是提醒孩子们,圣诞节是耶稣的生日。

有人会开始把礼物从树下,看到包装上是谁的名字,然后通过周围。一些家庭等到已经给所有的礼物之前打开其中任何一个,而其他人打开每一个涉及到他们。有很多“谢谢”的人给了礼物,新衣服试穿,看看是否合适,当然最有趣的玩具就会玩。

通常会在圣诞礼物一些特别美味的糖果、蛋糕或饼干,每个人的口味。这些甜食可能是唯一早餐很多人吃圣诞节的早晨。礼物被打开后,会整理房间除外孩子们玩他们的玩具。每个人都会洗干净,穿好衣服。

有些人可能会去一个圣诞节的早晨教堂服务大约10点钟如果他们的教会没有一个在圣诞前夜。但大多数人只会看电视。嗯,大多数人的意愿。孩子们可能会在外面玩或在他们的新玩具,但妈妈会在厨房里准备圣诞晚餐。

My loved ones,Happy New Year!I am very grateful that you accompany me though 13 wonderful New Years!I will always remember: You are my f*ourite relatives! Thank you for you giving life and a warm home,let me grow up happily.

Forgivr I always make you angry,my dear mother,and father,please believe that I always love and wish you be healthy and happy!

Since its rise, the Internet has been playing a more and more important

role in our daily life. It brings tremendous convenience and efficiency to our

lives. Online shopping is also a new rising thing brought by the Internet. Since

its increasing developing speed, some people think that online shopping will

replace traditional shopping. However, as far as I am concerned, it wont happen

in a short time.

Although online shopping is really very convenient, there are still some

strong points of traditional shopping which cannot be replaced by online

shopping. Firstly, online shopping lacks the intuitional impression of goods.

Sometimes the photos offered by the sellers are beautified with softwares, and

you will be disappointed to find the actual item is far from your expectation.

Secondly, returning goods in online shopping is quite troublesome, and sometimes

you only can achieve your goal at the cost of the payment of the postage by

yourself. Finally, there are too many fake products and cheats in online

shopping, and the quality of goods cannot be guaranteed as those in traditional

shops.

According to the points above, online shopping still needs some

improvements to totally replace the functions of traditional shopping. However,

the potential of online business is so huge that it will certainly take a great

share in the trade market.

I think everyone will have a busy and interesting weekend. Now, let me introduce my busy weekend to you.

On Saturday morning, I am going to the bookstore. I’m going to buy some story-books and a Chinese-English and English-Chinese dictionary. I like reading story-books. I find them very interesting. Then I am going home. My home is near the bookstore. So I am going by bike. I like riding my bike. In the evening, I am going to play piano. Playing piano is my hobby.

On Sunday morning, I am going to do my homework. Now I am in Grade Six. I want to enter a good middle school next year. So I must study hard. In the afternoon, I am going shopping with my parents and my little brother. My mom says she is going to buy a pair of sneakers for me. I love going shopping. I think all of the girls like going shopping. Am I right.

On Sunday evening, I am going back to school by school bus. I love my weekend, how about you? Tell me something about your weekend.

There is nothing complicated about eating a proper diet. For good health,

eat a variety of foods. Do not eat the same foods day after day! Foods should be

selected everyday from each of basic four. They are the four groups of food

essential to proper nutrition: the milk group, meat group, vegetable-fruit

group, and bread- cereal group, Your body will then be supplied with all the

nutrients it requires; they are water, minerals, carbohydrate, fats and oils,

proteins, and vitamins. A persons diet is determined by his attitudes, likes

and dislikes. If you eat foods from each of the basic four groups each day, you

will have a balanced diet.

Today, more and more young people are crazy about western festivals. When western festivals come, they usually go to restaurants or shopping malls to have fun.

如今，越来越多的年轻人都对西方的节日着迷。当西方节日到来的时候，他们常常去餐厅或是商场娱乐。

Why do the young enjoy western festivals so much? Since they worship everything new, and they can’t resist the temptation. In their opinions, western festivals symbolize the fashion, while our Chinese traditional festivals are out of date. No wonder we always feel so boring during our traditional holidays. If we still turn a blind eye to our traditional festivals, our culture and civilization will disappear someday. Accordingly, it is high time for us to pay close attention to our Chinese festivals.

为什么年轻人这么喜爱西方节日呢?大抵是因为他们喜爱新鲜事物，抗拒不了诱惑。在他们看来，西方节日代表着时尚，而中国传统节日则太土了。这也难怪我们也觉得我们的传统节日太过无聊了。如果我们对传统节日漠然置之，那么某天我们的文化文明终会消失。因此，我们该多多关注我们中国自己的节日了。

As a Chinese, we have the obligation to protect our culture and custom. So I think we should celebrate our Chinese festivals by doing some traditional activities. As for western festivals, we needn’t to be too excited about them. We can just send our best wishes to our best friends during those festivals.

作为一名中国人，我们有责任保护自己的文化习俗。所以我认为应当在庆祝中国传统节日时候举办一些传统活动。而对于西方节日，我们不需要太过激动。在这些节日里我们应该只需简单的送上祝福就好。

There is no doubt that football is the NO.1 sport in the world, though our

football players don’t play it very well, still a lot of fans keep their

enthusiasm on this sport. They watch the matches even staying up. These fans

like to make up a group. They share the same interest and watch the match

together. It is football that brings them together.

The biggest match for football is the World Cup. As it holds every four

years, it is like the biggest event, and the whole world is crazy about it. All

the media are reporting the event and fans from all over the world gather

together, discussing it all the time.

As English is the international language, football is the international

sport. People, no matter poor or rich, can share the same topic as they come

together. People talk about their favorite players and predict the results.

Football is like the silent language, bringing people together. As the most

popular sport, it will attract more fans.

导语：每个人都有自己的书包，你能给我们介绍你的书包吗?下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的相关优秀英语作文，欢迎阅读与借鉴，谢谢!

I have a good friend. Her name is school bag. She is a very beautiful girl. Look! There is a picture on her face. It’s a picture of a lovely girl. She wears a red coat. There are some books, some copybooks and a pencil case in her tummy. From Monday to Friday, I go to school with her. She helps me a lot. And I like her very much.

【参考翻译】

我有一个好朋友。她的名字叫书包。她是一个非常美丽的女孩。看!她脸上有一幅画。这是一个可爱的女孩的照片。她穿着一件红色的外套。有一些书，一些字帖和一个铅笔盒在她的肚子里。从周一到周五，我和她一起去学校。她帮助我很多，我非常喜欢她。

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July 6 20**

It was the first day of our summer holiday. All of us were very happy. Why? Because we have one months to do things we love to do. We are free.Although we have some homework. But we can finish them in several days. And the rest time we can make good use of. My god! We have been very tired after hard studying. In winter holidays, I want to have full sleepand eat good food in order to replenish myself. Last but not the least, I will have a good rest.

这是第一天，我们的暑假。我们大家都非常高兴。为什么?因为我们有一个月的事我们都爱做的事。我们很空闲.虽然我们有一些功课。但是，我们可以完成他们的若干天。其余的时间我们可以好好利用。我的上帝!我们已经很疲惫后很难学习。在冬季假期，我希望能有充分的很好吃的食物，以补充自己。最后但并非最不重要，我会好好休息。

July 9 20**

It was the second day of our summer holiday. I felt good. I felt I am free. I had a lot of time to do things I like. My parents are in Zhongshan. So I live alone but I don’t feel lonely. But I didn’t do something special. I stayed at home and watched TV. Oh! I wrote an Englishdaily composition. It was my homework. Today, I have slept for 14 hours.I thought I was very tired. It was time for dinner. I must go! I am very hungry.

这是我们第二天的暑假。我感觉很好。我觉得我很自由。我有很多时间做我喜欢。我的父母都在中山。所以，我独自生活，但我并不感到孤独。但是，我没有做什么特别。我住在家里看电视。噢!我写了英语日记组成。这是我的功课。今天，我睡了14 小时.我以为我很疲惫。现在是吃晚饭。我必须去!我非常渴望。

July 10 20**

I am planning to spend my summer holiday on sports this year. Playing basketball is always my favourite, so some of my classmates and I will form a small team and play basketball together. Sometimes we may have a match against some other teams and I do enjoy the sense when we win the game.

我计划花费我暑假体育今年。打篮球是我最喜欢的，所以我的一些同学和我将组建一个小团队，一起打篮球。有时，我们可能有一些其他的比赛队伍和我喜欢的感觉，当我们赢了这场比赛。

July 14 20**

Today I found time was a cruel thing. Whatever man is, time always goes on. It won’t stay to wait for somebody. You can’t use anything to exchange time. Time is also a fair thing. Although you have a lot of money or you enjoy high reputation, time won’t leave them more. Today I found I hadn’t enoughh time. Although I have more than a-month holiday, but I found I had a lot of things to do. I had a lot of homework to do and I am essential to complete the homework as soon as I have time.

今天，我发现时间是一个残忍的事情。无论男人，总是对的时间。它不会留下来等待某人。您不能使用任何交流时间。时间也是一个公平的事情。虽然你有很多钱，或者您享有很高的声誉，时间不会离开他们更多。今天，我发现我已经没有足够的时间。虽然我已经超过一个月假期，但我发现我有很多事情要做。我有很多功课要做，我必须完成的功课只要我有时间。

July 16 20**

I have rested for 10 days. In these days, I felt very bored. I didn’t know to do what. Although I had a lot of things to do, I felt uncomfortable. I was ill because of the hot weather. I was tired, sleepy and had no strength. My parents are worried about my health. in fact, it didn’t matter. I was always in the room with air-conditioner and opened it in a low temperature. So when I went out, the high temperature disagreed to me.At last, I was ill.

我已经休息了10天。在这些日子里，我觉得很无聊。我不知道做什么。虽然我有很多事情要做，我觉得不舒服。我生病是因为炎热的天气。我累了，困，也没有力量。我的父母担心我的健康。事实上，这并不重要。我总是在房间空调打开了它在低温。因此，当我走了出去，高温不给我.在最后，我被虐待。

July 16 20**

It was sunny today. I was excited. I got up at a quarter to seven. I made a appointment to meet at nine o’clock. After I had my breakfast, I went to the Wanjia Market . It was hot outside. When I arrived, my friends didn’t arrive. I waited for him in front of the KFC’s door. I haven’t seen them for a year. And in a year, we didn’t come into contact with others frequently. About ten minutes left, my friends arrived one by one. After we greeted,we went to play basketball in Liwan Gymnasium. The match last for tow hours.Oh!I fill very happy today!

这是今天阳光明媚。我很兴奋。我得到了在六时四十五分。我的任命，以满足九点钟。之后，我有我的早餐，我去了万家市场。这是热外面。当我到达，我的朋友们并没有达成。我等待着他前面的肯德基的大门。我还没有看到他们为一年。并在一年内，我们没有接触到其他人频繁。约10分钟离开，我的朋友们来到一个又一个。在我们迎接，我们去打球荔湾体育馆。这场比赛最后的拖车小时.Oh ，我非常高兴今天填补!

July 19 20**

Yesterday we played happily, but there were only ten people. I remembered last year there were twenty-two people at all. I heard some my friends had gone abroad. They went abroad to study. Maybe I couldn’t see them in the future. I think next year we won’t make a party. Next year is a very important year. We all will prepare the new term’s new subject.I know, it is the most important for us now.

昨天，我们高兴地发挥，但只有10人。我记得去年有22人在所有。我听到一些我的朋友已经出国。他们去国外学习。也许我没有看到他们的未来。我想明年我们将不作党。明年是一个非常重要的一年。我们都将编制新的任期的新课程.我知道，这是最重要的是，我们现在。

July 18 20**

It is very hot and wet today and is called sauna weather.

During my mom did the cooking in the kitchen, I saw her head was sweaty.I told her I could help her and she accepted.

After cooking,we were all sweaty .However, mum and I all felt happy. She said I was growing up and became her good assistant.

这是非常炎热和潮湿的今天，被称为桑拿天气。

在我妈妈没有做饭的厨房，我看到她的头部很漂亮.我告诉她，我可以帮助她，她接受。

经过烹饪，我们都汗流浃背。然而，妈妈和我都感到高兴。她说，我的成长过程，并成为她的好助手。

July 19 20**

I think my teacher got out of bedon the wtong side this afternoon as she hasn’t cries.i went to office saw the boys unhappy.Because the students got their teacher’s goat became they didn’t do their homework..I think this is my teacher unhappy’s cause. Today, I saw a boy ,he played the handset.But didn’t saw the walls so he Rnocked we laugh up our sleeve at he knocked ,but he hurt his norse in the accident, and he was laying it on thick about how painful it was .

It’s also a happy day, isn’t it ?

我想我的老师走出bedon的错误方向今天下午，她就一直没有哭.我到办公室看到男孩不高兴.因为学生得到老师的山羊成为他们没有做功课..我认为这是我的老师不愉快的事业。今天，我看到了一个男孩，他发挥了handset.但是没有看到这样的墙壁，他使我们笑了我们套在他撞倒，但他伤了挪威在这起事故，他就铺设厚如何痛苦这是。

这也是一个快乐的日子，是不是?

20**, July 20

I went to summer camp on vacation. On the first day, we went to a beautiful beach. It was a sunny and hot day, so we went swimming. The water was warm and we had great fun. Then the next day, we went to the mountains. There were many trees and I really enjoyed them. On the last day, we had a great party. We sang and danced happily. We didn’t want to leave(离开) the friends and the teachers. I hope I can go to summer camp again next year.

我去夏令营度假。第一天，我们去了美丽的海滩。这是一个阳光和炎热的一天，所以我们去游泳。水是温暖的，我们有很大的乐趣。然后第二天，我们去了山区。有许多树木，我非常喜欢他们。在最后一天，我们有一个伟大的党。我们高兴地载歌载舞。我们不想离开(离开)的朋友和老师。我希望我可以去夏令营明年再次。

20**,July 21

I had a good time last weekend. On Sunday morning, I stayed at home and did my homework. The homework wasn’t difficult. After that, I played volleyball with my friends. It was tired, but very exciting. In the afternoon, I cooked dinner for my parents. It was a little difficult, I think. After dinner, I went to swim in the river. I can swim very well. I had a relaxing weekend.

我有一个很好的时间上周末。星期天早上，我留在家里和我的家庭作业。作业并不困难。在此之后，我打排球我的朋友。这是很累，但非常兴奋。下午，我煮晚餐我的父母。这是一个什么困难，我想。晚餐后，我去游泳，在河里。我可以游得很好。我有一个轻松的周末。

My Favourite detective

In the world of detective novels, Sherlock Holmes is undoubtedly the most

famous one. But for me, the greatest detective in novels is Hercule Poirot, a

little Belgian who always uses his little grey cells to find the truth.

I really appreciate him for various reasons, such as his having an insight

into other peoples psychology, his understanding on hunman nature and his being

merciful. But most improtant thing is that he looks more like a real human

being, compared with Holmes or other legend detectives. He has such a funny

appearance, an egg-shaped head and exaggerated moustache . He enjoys delicious

cuisine and focuses on his own dressing. He is always humor and likes to mock

himself. he prefers to stay with young peole for being attracted by their vigor

and energy. And there are still so many lovely features of him I can list.

Anyway, I like him and appreciate him. I always get touched by the

philosophy of life in his storys. Hercule Poirot is indeed my favourite

detective.

作文是衡量学生语文素质的重要尺度,是现代社会进行交际的重要手段,作文教学是语文教学的重要组成部分。下面是小编为大家整理的初一年级作文教学实录，欢迎阅读。

一、引言

初中语文教学中，令人最苦恼的莫过于学生的作文教学，这是一个我执教的差班，共有21名学生，各科成绩普遍很差，这些学生平时写作文字数总在四百字左右，所写内容单调乏味，不会综合运用多种表达方式，平铺直叙较为简单的生活、学习事件。为了激发他们的写作兴趣，使他们感受到作文并不是一件困难的事，我设计了一堂作文课，从学生的角度出发，为增强学生的信心，力求拓展学生作文的思路，引导学生自由写作，表达自己对社会、自然、人生的独特感受和真切体验。

二、教学设计说明

面对这些基础并不好的学生，如果只是简单地告诉他们这次作文的要求，读几篇范文，然后叫他们写作，这样效果肯定不好，因此在设计时必须抓住学生感兴趣的内容，让他们即兴说、想说爱说，让他们通过畅所欲言萌发写作的信心，进而产生写作的欲望，于是我就选取了“兴趣”这个话题。

三、教学进程

作文课上，当我走进教室正准备上课时，突然有两个学生在下面窃窃私语，打打闹闹。我站在讲台上，平静地望着他们，直到教室完全安静下来，我便微笑着说：“初三即将毕业，老师以前对你们关心不够，没有过多地与你们交流沟通，今天想跟同学们聊聊天，好吗？”学生听了我的话，开心地笑了（对他们来说由于基础差，上课是一种折磨）。于是，我提出第一个问题：“你们平时最喜欢干什么？”“一石激起千层浪”，学生都在下面说了起来，这时我要求学生一个个清楚地告诉我。

“最喜欢打篮球、最喜欢看NBA；最喜欢踢足球；最喜欢看电视；最喜欢上网；最喜欢看小说；最喜欢逛街……”也许是找到了学生说话的兴奋点，学生们在下面显得格外起劲。看到这种情景，我又欲擒故纵，“大家说了这么多喜欢的事，能告诉我你为什么喜欢”话刚完，下面学生安静下来了，没过多久，学生又开始“动作”了，我抓住这一时机，叫了一个平时不爱学习的学生，那学生平时非常喜欢打篮球，一起来，那学生语出惊人：“打篮球给我自信，使我快乐，所以篮球是我的最爱”，说得好，我立即鼓掌叫好，下面同学也拍手叫好。由于开了一个好头和对学生的鼓励，接下来学生都积极配合，思维活跃，说话热情高涨。

“足球是男人的运动，踢足球可显示一个人的风采，足球使我找到感觉”，“逛街，让我边散步边欣赏风景，让我没钱的人能大饱眼福。”“上网，能让我一网情深，使我跟人聊天玩游戏听音乐，上网查各种有用的资料。”“读书，使我不出家门了解天下，使我感受书中有无穷无尽的知识和乐趣……”

这些即兴的发言使我一下子惊呆了，也使学生对自己的出色表现感到兴奋，于是我因势利导，抛出早已准备好的话题作文——以兴趣为话题写一篇作文，“以上我们每个同学谈了自己的兴趣爱好，说得非常精彩，只要我们每个同学把刚才说的话整理好，说具体，就可以写成一篇较好的作文；其实，写兴趣，第一步要告诉别人你的兴趣是什么，第二步需要介绍你是如何拥有这个兴趣的，如何保持这个兴趣的；第三步，最关键要写出你对这个兴趣的体验，对你的学习生活有什么帮助等。就举我们同学刚才的例子，如“篮球”这个话题，其实大家只要写清楚你从什么时候就喜欢打球、看篮球，篮球怎么成了你学习生活中重要的一块，同时还要写从打球中学到哪些对人生有益的知识，获得哪些人生的感悟，如……”这时我又发问了，“喜欢打篮球的同学，请你说说，从打球中获得了哪些有价值的东西，你有哪些独到的感受？”话一完，学生就低头思考起来。过了一会儿开始举手发言了：“打球讲究的是配合，我们同学在平时也应相互支持鼓励，不要因为我们是差班学生而看不起自己。”“打球最需要顽强的毅力和永不言败的精神，在我们的人生中也会遇到困难挫折，打球使我懂得如何对付这些困难挫折。” ……“说了这么多，我们要对“兴趣”这个话题拟个题目，先看老师的，《我的兴趣爱好》，大家说好不好？”

“不好，这个题目太一般，不能吸引人。”

“不好，这个题目不能体现自己的个性。”

“不好，这个题目太笼统，不能突出自己的哪个兴趣爱好。”

“不好，不如改为《噢，我的篮球！》”

“可改为《音乐，让我与你相伴》”

“《生活因篮球而精彩！》”…………当学生说出《生活因篮球而精彩！》时所有学生都拍手叫好，如果不是亲耳听见，确实很难相信这个题目出自这个差班学生之口，有了这个好题目，作文就已完成了一半。

接下来，进行作文开头结尾辅导，我给他们作了两组示范：1、开头：“阳光、空气、水是人类生存的三元素，在我每天的生活中，也有一样少不了，那就是篮球，它陪伴我每一天，给我莫大的快乐和幸福，在此，让我慢慢告诉你。”

结尾：感谢你，是你给了我信心和勇气；是你给了我快乐和幸福；是你使我从幼稚走向成熟，从软弱走向坚强；感谢你，篮球，你是我一生的最爱！

2、开头：“音乐一直是我的挚爱，我是一个不折不扣的乐迷。音乐已融入我的生活，我实在无法想像要是没有音乐，我的生活会成什么样。我经常光顾音像店，那些美妙的声音从而陆续流进了我的家、流进了我的心中。”

结尾：生活，成长，在音乐中，我觉得自己在音乐中永远是一个孩子，一直跟着它一起哭、笑，感受生命的存在与灿烂。听音乐时，闭上眼睛，放飞心灵吧！

即兴开了两组开头结尾，是让学生明白，对自己喜爱的事物一定要把这种强烈的感受抒发出来，尽可能打动读者，产生共鸣，尽管要求过高，但要让每一个同学相信自己有这个能力，尝试着去写，相信会有奇迹发生。

围绕“兴趣”写一篇作文，采用开门见山、“先情夺人”的开头方式，使学生有一种创作的新奇感；中间的叙事也做到了选材于生活，真实生动感人，在叙事中表现这个兴趣所带来的启示或感悟；结尾采用抒情式结尾，亦显得感情浓烈，得以升华。在学生已充分理解作文目的的基础上，学生们开始写下刚才说的话，写得认真快速。

四、教学反思

通过这样一堂课，作文的火花在每一个学生心中点亮，就连平时写作文最差的学生也写出了400字左右。由此可见，差生的作文是可以写好的，只要是触动了学生的感情神经，选材得当，命题新颖，相信作文自然会绽放其独有的光芒，也会让差生自主地发挥主观能动性，变厌写为乐写，变白话为含蓄，变浅层为深刻，使学生在琢磨中悟道，在坚持中获得乐趣。

作文教学是一个循序渐进、不断积累发展的过程，仅仅通过一堂课，其实很难断定学生已对作文有了浓厚的兴趣，并能坚持写作。要全面提高学生的写作水平，功在课外。但通过这堂课，使我对这些学生有了新的认识，也感觉到新课标新教学理念学习实践的重要性。这堂课我认为有几点是成功的：

1、树立学生的主体意识，发挥差生说话写作的主观能动性，让学生活动起来，对自己感兴趣的话题能畅所欲言。

2、找准切入点，让学生找到生活与写作的桥梁。每个学生都有自己感兴趣的事物，即使再差的学生，他也有自己的“一技之长”，作为教师一定要善于发现并利用学生的这些“亮点”，从而有效点燃写作兴趣之火。特别是学生所表达的有关活动的感受，言语自然有味，确实体现了学生的个性。

3、实践“跳摘”理论，化解作文难度，使学生稍微一跳便能摘到“果子”。课堂上与学生聊天说话，消除学生对作文的紧张恐惧心理，让他们轻松进入写作状态，调动学生学习生活中的知识积累，使作文有话可说。从学生拟写的作文题目来分析，远远超出平时的水平，若不是采用这种方式，很难让这些学生有这种水平发挥。

但这节课也存在一些不足，未能采用灵活多样的方法，使学生自主探究，如条件允许，可在学生叙说的同时，播放有关NBA篮球赛、世界杯足球赛的画面，把学生的情感推向高潮，更有利于激发差生的写作热情。另外由于学生基础水平的局限，写作思维仍旧单一，未能进行较好的想象联想，在文本中呈现的语句表达仍旧直露，不含蓄，未能综合运用多种表达方式和修辞方法。

因而我认为，在写作教学中尽可能为学生创设自主探究的“境”，即提供自主的机遇，设计自主探究的情境，创设自主探究的氛围，来有效激发学生的写作兴趣。教师应善于营造平等、民主、和谐、轻松的课堂气氛，使用最佳的教学艺术，为学生自主写作提供有利条件和广阔空间，减少束缚，使学生易于动笔，乐于表达，思维灵动，笔下生辉。写的文章自然就富有创新，富有真情实感和情趣

在写作教学中，应注重培养观察、思考、表现、评价的能力。要求学生说真话、实话、心里话，不说假话、空话、套话，使作文朝自然、生活、哲理的方向迈进，真正做到“让写作快乐起来”！

[初一年级作文教学实录

Headmaster:

Hello,

My name is LiHong. I heard of our school will hold a activity about welcoming exchange students from Canada. I want to let one exchange student come to my home.

I want to know the culture about Canada. I think they are very happy to tell me their culture. And I can introduce our culture to them. My parents want to talk with a person who comes from Canada. It’s a good chance for them. So I hope I can invite an exchange student to come to my home.

Maybe you will ask me if I have ability to talk with them. I can speak English very well. And my family is rich, so I can make them fell comfortable.

I can make school be proud of me!

LiHong

Mountain is located in the hometown of the green, green and lovely; Home of the water is so clear, clear and moving; People of hometown is so industrious, make people always remember them.

In my hometown, there is a rising mountain - xuefeng mountain.

The xuefeng mountain overlapping peaks overlapping ailian, rolling, like a dragon lying there, and like a giant, stands in the mountains, the kindness of looking down on the earth. Every morning, a grey morning mist is like the light smoke curling, wrapped around the top of the mountain, as if it did anything wrong, ashamed to show up. Xuefeng mountain more than one mountain, big, small, long, short, horizontal, straight, equal a than a high.

Here not only has a materialist magnificent xuefeng mountain, and winding ruanjiang.

The long river is like a horse green giant silks and satins, the depths of the mountains in the distance has been spread to my feet. Its a beautiful ruanjiang! Clear, green, quiet, fascinating, and far to see it is so green, green like a jade ribbon; It is as close to the qing, the qing could see the fish and shrimp, a recently night that curved crescent reflected on the "silk", is so beautiful, gentle and charming.

Here in addition to the lakes and mountains, and simple and hardworking people.

Every morning, when you walk the street, you will find the hardworking farmers uncle early came to the farmers market, threaten, want every passer-by to taste the joy of harvest. Now, in this small town, high-rise buildings have been built building, built the highway... There is also a solved the food problem of the worlds great man - the father of hybrid rice "yuan longping".

I love my lovely hometown - an giang, because beauty more beautiful mountain American water here!

家乡的山是那样绿，绿得可爱;家乡的水是那样清，清得动人;家乡的人们是那样勤劳，使人永远记得他们。

在我的家乡，有一座拔地而起的山——雪峰山。

这座雪峰山峰峦迭嶂、连绵起伏，像一条青龙卧在那里，又恰似一个巨人，矗立在万山之中，盛情的俯视着大地。每天清晨，灰蒙蒙的晨雾似袅袅的轻烟，缠绕在山顶，仿佛它做错了什么事，羞于露面。雪峰山不止一座山，大的、小的、长的、短的、横的、直的都有，争雄似的一座比一座高。

这里不仅有唯物雄壮的雪峰山，还有蜿蜒曲折的沅江。

这悠悠江水仿佛是一匹翠绿的巨幅绸缎，从远处高山深处一直铺到我的脚下。这沅江真美呀!清澈、碧绿、恬静，令人神往，远看它是那样的绿，绿的像一条翡翠的绸带;近看是那样清，清的可以看见江底的鱼虾，夜晚那弯弯的月牙倒映在“绸带”上，是那样美丽、温柔、迷人。

这儿除了湖光山色，还有勤劳朴实的人们。

每天清晨，当你漫步大街时，你就会发现勤劳的农民伯伯早早来到农贸市场，吆喝着，想让每一位路人尝尝秋收的喜悦。如今，在这个小镇上，已经建起了一座座高楼大厦，建起了高速公路……这里还有一位解决了世界上粮食问题的伟人——杂交水稻之父——“袁隆平”。

我爱我可爱的家乡——安江，因为这里山美水美人更美!

I am a senior three student. I often quarrel with my mother over whether I can watch TV after school. My mother... An Agreement I am a senior three student. I often quarrel with my mother over whether I can watch TV after school. My mother holds the view that students in senior three, shouldering heavy loads, are too busy to spare any time to watch TV. It seems to her that＇ once I am allowed to do that I＇ll not be able to control myself and forget all about my study. She also thinks that it is bad for my eyes to watch TV too often. But I really can＇t accept her ideas. I think it a relaxation to watch TV after a day＇s hard work. Watching TV can not only relax me, but broaden my horizons. Now we＇ve at last reached an agreement that I can only watch TV at weekends, and the programs should be limited to news,programs of entertainment, sports or science.

Hello! My dear friends! First, let me introduce myself to you. My name is Wu Dongxiang and my friend usually call me Kina. Im a 20-year-old girl who comes from Guilin Guangxi China. It’s known to all,Guilin is a beautiful city in China. Have you ever been to Guilin? If the answer is no, dont warry about it. Please come on, I am very glad to be you guide .Welcome to our city!

In my college, I majored in Tourism and English. I want to be a tour guide when I graduate from my college. Because Im a lovely girl and I like to travel to different places. I have about ten courses to learn this term. What about you?

I have a lot of hobbies. In my spare time, I often go sightseeing, play badminton and go out running. Sometimes go shopping or stay at home. I also like reading and planting flowers. Do you have the same hobby with me?If you want to talk with me, please send me an E-mail.My E -mail :kinakl920@126.I m looking forward to seeing you!

成长就像剥洋葱,剥掉一层就会留一次眼泪。成长是一次次的蜕皮。你对于成长有什么感悟呢?请你就成长写一篇600字作文吧。下面学习啦小编给大家带来初一关于成长的优秀作文，供你参阅。 初一关于成长的作文1：书伴我成长

高尔基曾说过一句话：“书是人类进步的阶梯。”我认为，书知识的源泉。有书相伴的日子真是不亦乐乎。

儿时，一翻开那多姿多彩的童话故事，眼前就会浮现出白雪公主的纯洁，皇后的恶毒;渔夫的善良，妻子的贪婪……一篇篇精彩的故事，至今还依旧深深地印在我的心上。它使我辨认了方向，让我看到了世上的美与丑，善与恶。

童年，翻开那本充满书香的《十万个问什么》，是它教给我知识，使我明白了含羞草“害羞”的道理、企鹅的不怕冷……《小学生诗词80首》是我的宝贝，它不仅让我认识了许多诗人，还使我背诵了许多诗句。有时候，我会不时吟诵一曲：“东边日出西边雨，道是无情还有情。”就因为这样，我常常受到了家人的夸奖，真是无比兴奋。

书，就像一盏明灯，照亮了我前进的道路，书永远是我的精神粮食。

自从踏入小学，我就已不再看幼稚的童话故事。现在，我喜欢上了中国的四大名著。《西游记》书中淋漓尽致的介绍了孙悟空的天资聪敏，思想跟行动都敏捷如风;唐僧善良仁慈;猪八戒贪吃懒惰，重视物质享受;沙僧纯朴善良。一提《三国演义》，自然就会想到刘备，孔明，张飞……但我最佩服的人是“?天子以令诸侯”曹操，他才气纵横，文韬武略，令我钦佩无已。《水浒传》和《红楼梦》，各有各的特色，宋江的为人仗义，李逵的心粗胆大，率直忠诚……在我的眼里，这一百零八位梁山好汉都是折不扣的英雄。而《红楼梦》，曹雪芹用他的“神笔”创作出了这部著作，《红楼梦》的故事情节扑朔迷离，让我如痴如醉得沉浸在故事中去。

古人常云：“书中自有黄金屋，书中自有颜如玉。”从中可见，古人对书可谓情有独钟。确实，读书能得到许多的知识。

书籍是全世界的营养品。伟大的诗人杜甫说过：“读书破万卷，下笔如有神。”这些名言警句时时刻刻在激励着我。那一本本散发着油墨芬芳的好书，就像一块快强劲有力的磁铁，只要我一翻开仔细阅读，就会被牢牢吸引住了。

书既让我的生活变得愉快，也让我获取更多的知识。这真可谓是“书香伴我走天涯，天涯海角书为伴”啊。 初一关于成长的作文2：成长的脚印

十五个春秋冬夏，浓缩了人生精华。当我回过头品味所走过的那串串脚印时，心中便感慨万千。

成长的脚印里饱含了亲情的关爱。难忘记忆里儿时的童稚。骑在父亲脖子上撒欢儿，倚在妈妈膝上数天上的星星。睡觉时缠着他们讲大灰狼的故事，半夜里被吓醒了，钻到妈妈的被窝里，让妈妈紧紧搂住，生怕被它叼去。不会忘记，在生病时，送到面前的一片片药片，一杯杯开水，一声声问候，那是同学们悉心的照顾。更不会忘记，在取得成绩时，老师送来欣慰和赞许的眼神，考试失败了她又送来鼓励的目光，增添了我与挫折斗争的勇气。所有关怀我的人都与我同欢笑，同呼吸。

生活中也有挥之不去，甩之不尽的少年烦恼。我希望做一只展翅欲飞的雏鹰，翱翔在自己自由的天地。当我提出自立，可是迎来的却是父母“你还小，等你长大了”的话语。无奈的我就在这一次次的拒绝中期盼成熟的希冀。繁重的学习生活压得我喘不过气，我真想向老师提出减负的建议，可是我不敢，胳膊拧不过大腿，小小的我又怎能拧过强大的老师?我想反抗，却又无力反抗。烦恼、孤寂，不被理解总是困扰着我。

我的脚印里也充满着艰难的选择。时光真的是十分可贵，可惜的是我曾经蹉跎了岁月。上中学时，同学们已懂得了“一寸光阴一寸金”的道理，都在拼命学习。只有我还在虚度美好的光阴，每天在金庸的江湖中和游戏里度过本该努力的生活。成绩对每个人都是公平的，当同学们手捧沉甸甸的硕果时，我却躲在角落里黯然落泪，后悔，沮丧。老师告诉我：“业精于勤，荒于嬉。只有付出了，才有收获。失败了，爬起来，做个生活的强者。”我懂得了这个道理，于是再次融入莘莘学子的行列，优异的成绩让我重新赢得自信。正确的选择让我更明白了，人不能第二次在同一地方摔倒，否则你会摔得更惨的道理。

酸甜苦辣，这就是成长的脚印。她伴我走进成熟，走过青春四季。

[初一年级的作文

Hello! I am Zhou Xiaolin. I’m 11 years old. I study in the No.1 Primary School. I am quiet, kind and smart. I don’t like sports. But like reading books very much. My favourite food is fish. Because it’s tasty and yummy. My favourite fruit is apples and bananas. Because they are sweet. Do you like Friday? Oh I like it very much. Because the weekend is coming. Who’s my favourite teacher? She’s Miss Zhu. She’s a unversity student. She’s young, tall and active. So her class is so much fun. On Sundays, I often do homework and play computer games. Saturday is fun for me! How about Sunday? I often read books and watch TV. It’s sweet for me! I love weekends. On weekends I often do housework, too. I can clean my bedroom, empty the trash, set the table and do the dishes. But I can’t cook the meals. This is me! Can you cook the meals? Are you helpful at home,too? Tell me, please?

你好!我是周少林。我11岁。我在第一小学学习。我是安静的,善良和聪明。我不喜欢运动。但是非常喜欢读书。我最喜欢的食物是鱼。因为它的美味和美味。我最喜欢的水果是苹果和香蕉。因为他们是甜的。你喜欢星期五吗?哦,我非常喜欢。因为周末来了。我最喜欢的老师是谁?她是朱小姐。她是一个大学的学生。她年轻、高大和活跃。所以她的课是如此有趣。在星期天,我经常做作业和玩电脑游戏。星期六对我来说是有趣的!周日怎么样?我经常看书和看电视。对我来说是甜蜜的!我喜欢周末。在周末我经常做家务。我可以打扫我的卧室,倒垃圾,把桌子和洗碗。但是我不能做饭。这是我!你能做饭吗?你也是有帮助的在家里,吗?告诉我,好吗?