高一年级英语作文：No Pains,No Gains【合集20篇】

I enjoy singing very much. While singing, my heart as well as my body is joyful. When Im happy, I often sing out to share my happiness with others. I also sing out to pour out my bad feelings when Im upset.

我很喜欢唱歌。唱歌的时候，我的心以及我的身体都是快乐的。我高兴的时候，我常常唱出来与大家分享我的快乐。我难过的时候，我也唱出了我不好的心情来倾诉。

I like pop music most, because I want to follow the trend. I prefer soft music to rock music. Since we may be very tired after a long days work, we need a rest very much. Perhaps soft music is the best recreation for us. My favorite pop stars are JJ and Jay Chou. They always make a wonderful performance on the stage. Their songs are so charming. I admire them very much.

我喜欢流行音乐，因为我想跟随潮流。相对摇滚乐来说我更喜欢轻柔的音乐。因为经过漫长的一天工作后我们可能会很累，非常需要休息。也许柔和的音乐对我们是最好的娱乐。我最喜欢的明星是林俊杰和周杰伦。他们在舞台上的表演总是很精彩。他们的歌曲是如此的令人着迷。我很佩服他们。

In my spare time, I often sing a song to others. Everyone is so happy to be my listener, because Im very brave and confident. Even though I couldnt be a professional singer, I can still get a lot of good fun from singing. Because of singing, my life becomes more colorful.

在我的空余时间里，我经常为别人唱歌。每个人都很开心的做我的听众，因为我很勇敢和自信。即使我不能成为一名专业歌手，我还是可以从唱歌中得到很多乐趣。因为唱歌，我的生活变得更加丰富多彩。

My mother high stature, not fat or thin, a few silk shallow wrinkles on the forehead, often hang a smile on his face.

Mother is kind, she taught me at an early age to be honest, treat people to be generous, since the childhood to cultivate my good character.

Remember there is one thing I always forget. It was a hot afternoon, the sun like a ball of fire to bake the earth. I do in the room, fan fan, but sweat kept rolling down. I said to mother: "mom! The weather was too hot, hot as hell! I want to eat Popsicle." Mother said: "go, Ill take you to buy some ice stick." Then picked up a wallet.

Where to buy, I chose a Popsicle, mother from the purse and took out a piece of 50 yuan to buy the ticket of uncle, uncle to find the money, my mother and I went hurried home.

At home, mother put back counted, soliloquize ground to say: "yi? Well, there are 7 yuan, how do I find 45 yuan?" Once I listen to and happily say: "good! People buy really confused, looking for more 3 yuan. Mom, the 2 yuan to me?" Mother stared my one eye, said angrily: "find the 2 yuan more, we should give the money back, do not want the covet petty gain! Besides, somebody else sell Popsicle more not easy!" Say that finish, mother take fire up the sun, give somebody else sent 3 yuan.

When you go to sleep at night, I lay in bed cant sleep, thinking of things during the day, suddenly understood, to start from little things, not because of a little advantage, make some excuse me one thing. Its great education to me, I love my mother, I admire her in heart.

我的妈妈高高身材，不胖不瘦，额头上有几丝浅浅的皱纹，脸上常常挂着微笑。

妈妈为人善良，她从小就教导我做人要诚实，待人要宽厚，从小就来培养我好的品德。

记得有件事我总是忘不了。那是一个炎热的下午，太阳像个大火球烤着大地。我做在房间里，不停地扇着扇子，但汗珠还是不停地滚落下来。我对妈妈说：“妈!天气太热了，热得要命!我想吃冰棍。”妈妈说：“走，我带你去买些冰棍。”说着便拿起钱包。

到了买冰棍的地方，我挑选了冰棍，妈妈从钱包里拿出了一张50元的整票递给买冰棍的叔叔，叔叔找完钱，我和妈妈便匆匆回家去了。

回到家，妈妈把找回来数了数，自言自语地说：“咦?不对呀，一共是7元钱，怎么找回45元?”我一听，高兴地说：“太好了!买冰棍的人真糊涂了，找多了3元。妈妈，那2元给我行吗?”妈妈瞪了我一眼，生气地说：“多找了2元，我们应该送回去，不能贪图那些小便宜!再说，人家卖冰棍多不容易呀!”说完，妈妈冒着火辣辣的太阳，把3元钱给人家送去了。

晚上睡觉的时候，我躺在床上睡不着，想起白天的事情，忽然明白了，做人要从一点一滴的事情做起，不能因为眼前的一点小便宜，做出一些对不起人的事。这件事对我有了很大的教育，我爱我的妈妈，我打心里佩她。

Today is Saturday, the weather is very nice. I’m very happy to finally have the opportunity to go to the zoo with my parents. My parents work very hard to support the family every day, so they often do not have time to stay with me. I hope that they can accompany me to the zoo for a long time.

今天是星期六。天气很好。我很开心最后有这个机会和我爸爸妈妈一起去动物园。为了这个家，我爸爸妈妈每天都很努力工作，所以他们经常是没有时间陪我的。很久之前我就希望他们能够陪我去动物园玩了。

Because it’s weekend, there are many people in the zoo. First, we go to see some birds. There are many kinds of birds in cages, I can not tell all their names. Then, we go to visit the dolphin show, the dolphin is very lovely and its show brings everyone happiness. At the end, we go to the shop in the zoo; my mother bought me a bear doll that I like very much.

因为是周末，动物园里面有很多人。首先，我们去看了鸟儿。笼子里面有各种各样的鸟，我都不能把它们的名字说全。之后，我们去看了海豚表演。海豚很可爱，它的表演也给大家带来了欢乐。最后我们去了动物园里面的商店，妈妈给我买了一个我很喜欢的玩具熊。

Today is a happy day, thank you my parents to giving me a beautiful memory. I hope that they can have more time to take a break and have more time to stay with me. I love them so much.

今天是开心的一天。谢谢我的父母给了我这么好的回忆。我希望他们能够好好休息一下并抽更多的时间陪陪我。我很爱他们。

Each year, people burn or cut down 143,000 square kilometers (55,000 square

miles) of the forest. People who burn or cut down trees do it for different

reasons: farmers cut down trees in order to get more fertilize lands to grow

rice or vegetables, and use the woods as fuel. Timber companies cut down trees

and turn them into furniture or paper productions. As to goal miners, they

remove the forests to find out whether there are goal underground.

However, many of us fail to realize that forests are the lungs of the

earth. When we cut down trees, we also push ourselves in to a dangerous

situation. That is the global warming. When you come to think about it, there

are only few ways to solve these negative effects: stop cutting down trees

blindly; try to find some clear energy that can replace oil and coal. But these

solutions can be impractical to some degreed.

Why trees can be so important to the whole nature? First of all, trees are

the habitat of many animals. When we cut down trees, we not only destroy

animals’ habitats but also ourselves. We just gradually destroy natural links.

The result is that many spices of animals and plants are dying out. Secondly,

cutting down trees cause global warming, to some degree. Naturalists compare

forest to human’s lungs. The forests absorb the carbon dioxide and other gas

that cause global warming, and then give off the oxygen that good for the human

beings and other living creatures. It’s refreshed the air as well as reduced the

noise. If the air quality is bad, people may die from cancers, or the new

diseases for which they have no immunity. Forests also play an important role in

the prevention of natural disasters. Warmer temperatures cause water to expand

and also create more water by melting polar ice caps. That’s to say, the nations

which near the ocean may have been flooded by the water. But the forests can

prevent water loss and soil erosion, and cool off the global temperatures. It’s

the key to keep the balance of the nature.

Sometimes people only care about money making; they don’t care about the

price we pay for the pollution. When the disaster is around the corner, we may

be afraid and frustrated. The earth, on which our economies have always been

based, is suddenly threatening our existence. All we hope that is this

overpopulated, over industrialized planet can carry on for a longer time. And

maybe, it’s time for us to realize that we should protect the earth, stop

cutting down trees blindly and madly.

星期天一大早，姥爷和姥姥到街上购物上，家里只留下我（当时上二年级）和妹妹。呆着真没意思，干点什么呢？我望着姥爷那只小黄鹂出神。突然，我像发现了什么，拉着妹妹指着小鸟说：“这只黄鹂身上脏兮兮的，咱们给它洗个澡吧！”妹妹拍手叫好！“哥哥，用水管子洗太费水了，不如用喷水枪和针管吧！”我听这个主意好，连忙吩咐：“你去准备‘武器’，我准备‘药’。”说完，我搬来了一盆水，准备“战斗”。

随着我的一声枪响，给鸟洗澡的战斗打响了。可是黄鹂太机灵，一躲，没打着。我接着又打了一枪，还是不中。这回妹妹抢了先，没等黄鹂站稳，开了一枪，结果打中了，她高兴地喊：“打中了，哥，你真笨！”

我不服气，心里想着计策，目光移到了针管上，连忙把针管灌满了水，在笼子四周架起来。我先朝小鸟虚打一枪，让它进入我的一根针管的射程里，然后随着一道光亮的水线射出，小黄鹂终于被射中了。就在这一瞬间，我又扣动喷水枪的板机，小黄鹂又挨了一枪。

一盆水用完了，小黄鹂成了“落汤鸡”，全身发抖地蹲在笼子底下，一动也不动。“快，用吹风机把它吹干。”妹妹真机灵，我赶紧拿出吹风机，插上电源，这一下，小黄鹂成了“小

刺猬”了。

就在这时，姥爷回来了。他赶紧对小黄鹂进行“抢救”。事后，姥爷哭笑不得地教训我们：“有你们这样做好事的吗？真拿你们没办法，鸟儿不能这样洗澡！以后可不许胡闹了！”“这是胡闹吗？”妹妹还在不解地问，我和姥姥、姥爷都笑了。

点评

童年的生活是充满遐想，令人回味无穷的。童年的我们也一定是幼稚、可笑的。小作者的童年虽比不上童年捕猎的闰土那样充满神奇，然而小作者与他妹妹的行动足以让人忍俊不禁。

这件趣事的确很有意思。小兄妹俩本想做件好事，但终因年幼无知而事与愿违。事情紧张而有趣，作者开门见山，直插事情发生的时间，以“准备——给鸟洗澡——给鸟吹风——大人抢救”的事情发展顺序，有条理地描述了事情的来龙去脉。仿佛两位天真、勇敢的“小战土”就在我们面前。

小作者克服了写“童年生活”经常以“那是发生在我××时的事情”为开头的写法，而结尾也戛然而止，给人以整洁、流畅的感觉，使得一对纯情少年形象较为突出的跃然纸上。

[初一年级作文童年趣事

Table tennis is one of the most popular sports in China. It’s my favorite,

too. It’s a good way of exercise, and it’s easy to play. You don’t need many

skills. I often play table tennis after class. Most of my classmates like it. So

we always have partners. But if you want to play well, it’s not so easy. You

must focus on your gesture, your hands and your steps. I want to be better, so I

practice it very often. I have my own teacher to teach me. I work hard on

it.

A pair of brothers received a letter which gave him a million pounds.

It turned out that the brothers made a bet, bet if a poor, honest man fall from the sky received one million pounds, he will have what results?

Brother that he would starve to death because he could not prove the money was his own, someone else will be suspected, even banks will not allow him to save money.

Brother believes that he will very well, so they brothers will check for one million pounds lent the poor, and abroad spent thirty days.

I did not expect at this time, people who suddenly rich riches rare, hard to actually draw him from the free food, buy clothes, to free accommodation, one by one like a beggar, like to please him, and continue to improve his social position, until the outdoor addition to the king on top of Duke!

Not only that, he got a good wife and thirty thousand pounds of bank interest.Since then lived very, very happy life.

See here, I am so envious of the "lucky" the hero, but I want to: The reason why people please him, not because it was too much focus on money yet?

Worship of money is shameful, something for nothing we should not!

Money is not everything in the world there are many more important things than money.

Article on the "money is everything" "Money is omnipotent," the idea for a satire and expose the ugly face of capitalist society and the rule of darkness.

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一对兄弟收到了一封信,给了他一百万英镑。

原来兄弟打赌,赌如果一个贫穷、诚实的人从天空坠落收到一百万英镑,他会有什么结果?

哥哥,他会饿死,因为他无法证明这些钱是他自己的,别人会怀疑,甚至银行不会允许他省钱。

哥哥认为他会很好,所以他们兄弟将一百万英镑的支票借给穷人,和国外花了三十天。

我没有想到在这个时候,突然间丰富的财富的人罕见,很难真正吸引他从免费食物,买衣服,到免费住宿,一个个像乞丐一样,喜欢取悦他,并不断提高他的社会地位,直到室外除了国王公爵之上!

不仅如此,他有一个好妻子和三万英镑的银行利息。自那以后生活非常幸福的生活。

看到这儿,我很羡慕“幸运”的主人公,但我想:为什么人们请他,不是因为它太注重钱了吗?

敬拜的钱是可耻的,不劳而获我们不应该!

钱不是万能的世界上有许多比金钱更重要的东西。

文章对“金钱就是一切”“金钱是万能的,“讽刺和揭露资本主义社会的丑恶嘴脸,和黑暗的统治。

Hello!My name is Liu Ya Min.I am a Chinese girl.I am fourteen.I am a middle school student.Frankly speaking,Irene is not beautiful.I like autumn,the ground is covered with fallen leaves.I like basketball,but I dislikes sports.I very love sit in the sun.I like sduty,sing and shopping,too.I think I am a happy girl.My family is not big.There are my parents,my two brother and I.Being the eldest,I must look after my brothers.My desire was to become a writer.

你好!我的名字是刘丫Min.I是个中国女孩。我十四岁。我是一名中学学生。坦率地说,艾琳不是美丽的。我喜欢秋天,地面被落叶覆盖着。我喜欢篮球,但我不喜欢运动。我非常喜欢坐在太阳底下。我喜欢sduty,唱歌和购物。我认为我是一个快乐的女孩。我的家人并不大。有我的父母,我的两个哥哥和我。老大,我必须照顾我的兄弟。我的愿望是成为一名作家。

Thanksgiving Day is the USA and Canadas holiday. Later, people often thank the others on this day.

It’s in November of last Thursday is Thanksgiving Day.

Thanksgiving Food

Cornbread, English Cheese Pie, Venison, Ducks and Geese, Wild Turkey, Garlic and Onions, Pumpkin Pudding are Thanksgiving Day’s food.

Thanksgiving Day a very traditional color of the food. Every Thanksgiving Day, Americans must eat a fat chicken. Because turkey is the traditional course.

Thanksgiving Day Blessings

Thank the parents. They give me the life, let me to study.

Thank the sisters and brothers. They let me healthy growth. In my difficult times, they stretched out their hands warm.

Thank the teachers. You let me to study, let me have the ability to pay for someone else.

Thank the friends. You bring me a lot of funny, bring me a lot of self-confidence. You bring me a lot of help, let me better to face all, too.

Oh, THANK YOU EVERYONE!

My favourite song is a popular song ,its name is Heal the world, Micheal Jackson sang this song.Meanwhile , this song was produced by Micheal.The song is about our worse and worse environment and the cons people on protecting earth..For example from the song ,’heal the world ,make it a better place, for you and for me and the entire human race’I like this lyric very much.I like this song because its melody and content .By this song ,we can realize what about our earth and how we can do in the future.

我最喜爱的歌曲是一首流行歌曲，它的名字是拯救世界，这首歌是迈克尔·杰克逊唱的。同时，这首歌是由迈克尔创作的。这首歌是唱出了我们每况愈下的环境和呵护地球上的利弊......例如，从歌曲“拯救世界，创作发明一个更好的处所为你，为我和整个人类，”我很喜欢这些歌词。我喜欢这首歌，因为它的旋律和内容。通过这首歌，我们意识到在未来对于我们的地球我们可以可以做些什么

我低下头去，吃着可口的饭菜，聆听着别人对我的赞赏与祝福，蓦地，在餐桌前谈的起兴的时候，我看见了薄荷，我想起了薄荷和这个餐桌的往事。

那是在两年前，薄荷刚搬进家来，便遇到了寒冬，整个家失去了温暖的气息，因为我期末考得不好。我将它放在了餐桌上，在餐桌前，它显得小而无助，暗淡无活力。那次，父母在餐桌前和我谈了一次话。父母用焦急的的眼光注视着我，温和的问我考差的原因。父亲时而一言不发的看着我，时而愤怒的责备我，时而又无奈的坐着。而母亲则是一直持续的沉默，我则是无助的等待着暴风雨的来临，就像一株小小的薄荷。

最终，父亲开口了。“你知道吗？薄荷在那个商家口中被称为“疯狂的植物。”“我不知道。”我低沉的回答道。‘那你知道我们为什么给你买这盆薄荷吗？’“不知道”。他依旧平静，我依旧低迷。“一年之后你就知道了！”

后来，我们依旧坐在餐桌旁，“现在你懂了吗？”爸爸问道。“薄荷喜光，并且它还喜寒。”我说。 “你还是没懂”爸爸说。我们为了你买了这盆薄荷，你在那时心情不好，看什么都像看浮云，说着他看了一眼薄荷，那叶片在光下舒展，我们就是想让你有战胜冬的决心，崇尚光的心灵，尽力向上的勇气。爸爸轻声的说。

现在，我依旧看着那盆薄荷，犹如他那时看着我，我们注视着成长，有如他注视着我。可能我们每当遇到风雨的时候，都会有人替我们档，低谷时，总有人伸出双手，而他，注视着我们，不求回报。

海龙老师点评：部编版语文七年级上第五单元写作中心是突出中心。

一、作者在《餐桌前的谈话》作文中，能够借物抒情，借薄荷抒发人生道理，突出成长过程中向上的主题，中心突出，突出自信的中心。

二、构思上选取薄荷这一意象构思新颖，给读者以思考和启迪。

三、能在叙述中运用插叙的记叙方法，有很强驾驭文字的能力。

When the small eyes on a pair of thick eyebrows, and a small by the mouth, dont look at my head is small, actually very clever.

On one occasion, the teacher a comprehensive assignment, for us to interview love smoking father. I got home, immediately call mom take video recorder, help me to take the interview process. All of a sudden, I thought: this empty-handed interview dad a bit not good. My little head a thought of a way to immediately ran to the front of the a drawer take out a bad microphone poser, said: "Im ready." Mom smiled said: "you really can recycling."

In my mother and I, under the guidance of finding out the relevant information, but dad bad memory, is back not to come out, my mother and I walk around to find a way to. Suddenly I a brainwave, excited, said: "I figure out a way, to print the information down first, and then mother take video recorder at the front, data get behind, so dad appears, video cant see, this is not kill two birds with one stone?" Mom, dad listened to the straight nodded said: "why didnt we think? Thanks to your head and clever, dont dismiss your little head anymore." In this way, our interview smoothly completed, also praised by the teacher the classmates. Im glad to touch the little head, said to himself: "little head count you enough today!" Thinking about, and took a few little head.

Ha ha! This is a clever and smart I, you say?

一双时大时小的眼睛上有一双浓浓的眉毛，还有一张能说会道的小嘴巴，别看我脑袋小，其实机灵得很。

有一次，老师布置了一个综合作业，要我们去采访一下爱吸烟的爸爸。我一回到家，马上叫妈妈拿好录像机，帮我拍采访的过程。突然，我想：这样空手采访爸爸有点不大好。我的小脑袋一转想到了办法，马上跑到一个抽屉前拿出一个坏的话筒装样子，说：“我已经准备好了。”妈妈笑笑说：“你真会废物利用呀。”

在我和妈妈的指点下，找出了相关资料，但爸爸记性太差，实在是背不出来，我和妈妈走来走去想办法。忽然我灵机一动，兴奋的说：“我想出办法了，先把这段资料打印下来，然后妈妈把录像机拿在前面，资料拿在后面，这样爸爸看得见，可录像机却看不见，这不是一举两得了吗?”妈妈爸爸听了，直点头称赞说：“我们怎么没想到呢?多亏你脑袋机灵，以后再也不小瞧你的小脑袋了。” 就这样，我们的采访很顺利的完成了，还得到了老师同学们的赞扬。我高兴地摸着小脑袋，心里说：“小脑子今天算你够厉害!”想着，又拍了几下小脑袋。

哈哈!这就是一个又机灵又聪明的我，你们说呢?

作文是衡量学生语文素质的重要尺度,是现代社会进行交际的重要手段,作文教学是语文教学的重要组成部分。下面是小编为大家整理的初一年级作文教学实录，欢迎阅读。

一、引言

初中语文教学中，令人最苦恼的莫过于学生的作文教学，这是一个我执教的差班，共有21名学生，各科成绩普遍很差，这些学生平时写作文字数总在四百字左右，所写内容单调乏味，不会综合运用多种表达方式，平铺直叙较为简单的生活、学习事件。为了激发他们的写作兴趣，使他们感受到作文并不是一件困难的事，我设计了一堂作文课，从学生的角度出发，为增强学生的信心，力求拓展学生作文的思路，引导学生自由写作，表达自己对社会、自然、人生的独特感受和真切体验。

二、教学设计说明

面对这些基础并不好的学生，如果只是简单地告诉他们这次作文的要求，读几篇范文，然后叫他们写作，这样效果肯定不好，因此在设计时必须抓住学生感兴趣的内容，让他们即兴说、想说爱说，让他们通过畅所欲言萌发写作的信心，进而产生写作的欲望，于是我就选取了“兴趣”这个话题。

三、教学进程

作文课上，当我走进教室正准备上课时，突然有两个学生在下面窃窃私语，打打闹闹。我站在讲台上，平静地望着他们，直到教室完全安静下来，我便微笑着说：“初三即将毕业，老师以前对你们关心不够，没有过多地与你们交流沟通，今天想跟同学们聊聊天，好吗？”学生听了我的话，开心地笑了（对他们来说由于基础差，上课是一种折磨）。于是，我提出第一个问题：“你们平时最喜欢干什么？”“一石激起千层浪”，学生都在下面说了起来，这时我要求学生一个个清楚地告诉我。

“最喜欢打篮球、最喜欢看NBA；最喜欢踢足球；最喜欢看电视；最喜欢上网；最喜欢看小说；最喜欢逛街……”也许是找到了学生说话的兴奋点，学生们在下面显得格外起劲。看到这种情景，我又欲擒故纵，“大家说了这么多喜欢的事，能告诉我你为什么喜欢”话刚完，下面学生安静下来了，没过多久，学生又开始“动作”了，我抓住这一时机，叫了一个平时不爱学习的学生，那学生平时非常喜欢打篮球，一起来，那学生语出惊人：“打篮球给我自信，使我快乐，所以篮球是我的最爱”，说得好，我立即鼓掌叫好，下面同学也拍手叫好。由于开了一个好头和对学生的鼓励，接下来学生都积极配合，思维活跃，说话热情高涨。

“足球是男人的运动，踢足球可显示一个人的风采，足球使我找到感觉”，“逛街，让我边散步边欣赏风景，让我没钱的人能大饱眼福。”“上网，能让我一网情深，使我跟人聊天玩游戏听音乐，上网查各种有用的资料。”“读书，使我不出家门了解天下，使我感受书中有无穷无尽的知识和乐趣……”

这些即兴的发言使我一下子惊呆了，也使学生对自己的出色表现感到兴奋，于是我因势利导，抛出早已准备好的话题作文——以兴趣为话题写一篇作文，“以上我们每个同学谈了自己的兴趣爱好，说得非常精彩，只要我们每个同学把刚才说的话整理好，说具体，就可以写成一篇较好的作文；其实，写兴趣，第一步要告诉别人你的兴趣是什么，第二步需要介绍你是如何拥有这个兴趣的，如何保持这个兴趣的；第三步，最关键要写出你对这个兴趣的体验，对你的学习生活有什么帮助等。就举我们同学刚才的例子，如“篮球”这个话题，其实大家只要写清楚你从什么时候就喜欢打球、看篮球，篮球怎么成了你学习生活中重要的一块，同时还要写从打球中学到哪些对人生有益的知识，获得哪些人生的感悟，如……”这时我又发问了，“喜欢打篮球的同学，请你说说，从打球中获得了哪些有价值的东西，你有哪些独到的感受？”话一完，学生就低头思考起来。过了一会儿开始举手发言了：“打球讲究的是配合，我们同学在平时也应相互支持鼓励，不要因为我们是差班学生而看不起自己。”“打球最需要顽强的毅力和永不言败的精神，在我们的人生中也会遇到困难挫折，打球使我懂得如何对付这些困难挫折。” ……“说了这么多，我们要对“兴趣”这个话题拟个题目，先看老师的，《我的兴趣爱好》，大家说好不好？”

“不好，这个题目太一般，不能吸引人。”

“不好，这个题目不能体现自己的个性。”

“不好，这个题目太笼统，不能突出自己的哪个兴趣爱好。”

“不好，不如改为《噢，我的篮球！》”

“可改为《音乐，让我与你相伴》”

“《生活因篮球而精彩！》”…………当学生说出《生活因篮球而精彩！》时所有学生都拍手叫好，如果不是亲耳听见，确实很难相信这个题目出自这个差班学生之口，有了这个好题目，作文就已完成了一半。

接下来，进行作文开头结尾辅导，我给他们作了两组示范：1、开头：“阳光、空气、水是人类生存的三元素，在我每天的生活中，也有一样少不了，那就是篮球，它陪伴我每一天，给我莫大的快乐和幸福，在此，让我慢慢告诉你。”

结尾：感谢你，是你给了我信心和勇气；是你给了我快乐和幸福；是你使我从幼稚走向成熟，从软弱走向坚强；感谢你，篮球，你是我一生的最爱！

2、开头：“音乐一直是我的挚爱，我是一个不折不扣的乐迷。音乐已融入我的生活，我实在无法想像要是没有音乐，我的生活会成什么样。我经常光顾音像店，那些美妙的声音从而陆续流进了我的家、流进了我的心中。”

结尾：生活，成长，在音乐中，我觉得自己在音乐中永远是一个孩子，一直跟着它一起哭、笑，感受生命的存在与灿烂。听音乐时，闭上眼睛，放飞心灵吧！

即兴开了两组开头结尾，是让学生明白，对自己喜爱的事物一定要把这种强烈的感受抒发出来，尽可能打动读者，产生共鸣，尽管要求过高，但要让每一个同学相信自己有这个能力，尝试着去写，相信会有奇迹发生。

围绕“兴趣”写一篇作文，采用开门见山、“先情夺人”的开头方式，使学生有一种创作的新奇感；中间的叙事也做到了选材于生活，真实生动感人，在叙事中表现这个兴趣所带来的启示或感悟；结尾采用抒情式结尾，亦显得感情浓烈，得以升华。在学生已充分理解作文目的的基础上，学生们开始写下刚才说的话，写得认真快速。

四、教学反思

通过这样一堂课，作文的火花在每一个学生心中点亮，就连平时写作文最差的学生也写出了400字左右。由此可见，差生的作文是可以写好的，只要是触动了学生的感情神经，选材得当，命题新颖，相信作文自然会绽放其独有的光芒，也会让差生自主地发挥主观能动性，变厌写为乐写，变白话为含蓄，变浅层为深刻，使学生在琢磨中悟道，在坚持中获得乐趣。

作文教学是一个循序渐进、不断积累发展的过程，仅仅通过一堂课，其实很难断定学生已对作文有了浓厚的兴趣，并能坚持写作。要全面提高学生的写作水平，功在课外。但通过这堂课，使我对这些学生有了新的认识，也感觉到新课标新教学理念学习实践的重要性。这堂课我认为有几点是成功的：

1、树立学生的主体意识，发挥差生说话写作的主观能动性，让学生活动起来，对自己感兴趣的话题能畅所欲言。

2、找准切入点，让学生找到生活与写作的桥梁。每个学生都有自己感兴趣的事物，即使再差的学生，他也有自己的“一技之长”，作为教师一定要善于发现并利用学生的这些“亮点”，从而有效点燃写作兴趣之火。特别是学生所表达的有关活动的感受，言语自然有味，确实体现了学生的个性。

3、实践“跳摘”理论，化解作文难度，使学生稍微一跳便能摘到“果子”。课堂上与学生聊天说话，消除学生对作文的紧张恐惧心理，让他们轻松进入写作状态，调动学生学习生活中的知识积累，使作文有话可说。从学生拟写的作文题目来分析，远远超出平时的水平，若不是采用这种方式，很难让这些学生有这种水平发挥。

但这节课也存在一些不足，未能采用灵活多样的方法，使学生自主探究，如条件允许，可在学生叙说的同时，播放有关NBA篮球赛、世界杯足球赛的画面，把学生的情感推向高潮，更有利于激发差生的写作热情。另外由于学生基础水平的局限，写作思维仍旧单一，未能进行较好的想象联想，在文本中呈现的语句表达仍旧直露，不含蓄，未能综合运用多种表达方式和修辞方法。

因而我认为，在写作教学中尽可能为学生创设自主探究的“境”，即提供自主的机遇，设计自主探究的情境，创设自主探究的氛围，来有效激发学生的写作兴趣。教师应善于营造平等、民主、和谐、轻松的课堂气氛，使用最佳的教学艺术，为学生自主写作提供有利条件和广阔空间，减少束缚，使学生易于动笔，乐于表达，思维灵动，笔下生辉。写的文章自然就富有创新，富有真情实感和情趣

在写作教学中，应注重培养观察、思考、表现、评价的能力。要求学生说真话、实话、心里话，不说假话、空话、套话，使作文朝自然、生活、哲理的方向迈进，真正做到“让写作快乐起来”！

[初一年级作文教学实录

When we are little, we are eager to grow up, so that we can break free of parental discipline even leave them far. Since we were a little child, we have to be governed by teachers in school and endure parent’s ramble at home. These are our growing pains. Besides, study, friendship, sometimes campus romance may trouble us. However, as we grow up, we gradually find that things mentioned above are not pains at all. There are much more serious things brother us. For example, we may be less sensitive to the simple happiness and loss them gradually. It’s hard for us to laugh from our heart. Moreover, we are in the age that we are eager to grow up but afraid to grow up either. The ambivalence afflicts us a lot. However, no matter what happens in our growth, they are parts of our lives. We must accept them actively and do not let the pains prevent us from happiness.

小的时候，我们都渴望长大，以便能脱离父母的管束，甚至离他们远远的。自从孩提起，在学校我们就被老师管着，在家又得忍受父母的絮絮叨叨。这就是我们成长中的烦恼。此外，学习、友情，有时候甚至校园恋情都会来叨扰我们。但是，随着慢慢长大，我们逐渐发现以上这些根本称不上是成长的烦恼，还有很多更烦恼的事让我们纠结不已。例如，我们慢慢地对一些简单的快乐麻木了，于是就失去这些快乐了，我们变得很难发自内心地微笑了。还有，我们正处在渴望长大但又害怕长大的阶段，这种矛盾情绪折磨着我们。但是，不管在成长的过程中遭遇到什么，它们都是我们生活中的一部分，我们要乐观地接受，不让烦恼挤走快乐。

[高一英语作文烦恼

With the deepening of reform and opening-up of our country, many people dream of going abroad for further study. They insist that the modern research facilities, world famous professors and excellent environment in those foreign colleges can help lay a perfect foundation for their future development.

However, there are still many people who favor studying at home. They argue that studying abroad is too expensive and doesnt pay. They also point out that there are no language and cultural barriers if they study at home.

Both opinions are acceptable in some sense. If students have the chance and financial resources, they should seize the opportunity to study abroad and broaden their eyes. On the other hand, if conditions dont permit, they can pursue their studies in top universities at home. What counts is not the place where you study, but the desire to learn.

随着我国改革开放的加深，很多人梦想着出国深造。他们认为国外大学的先进研究设备，闻名世界的教授以及优越的环境能够帮助他们为未来的发展打下完美的基础。

然而，仍然有很多人赞成在国内学习。他们认为出国留学太贵了，付不起费用。他们还指出如果他们在国内学习就不会存在语言和文化障碍。

从某种意义上说着两种观点都可以接受。如果学生拥有机会和经济来源，他们应该抓住机会出国留学，开阔他们的视野。另一方面，如果条件不允许，他们可以在国内顶级大学追求学业。重要的不是你在哪个地方学习而是你学习的渴望。

I have many hobbies, such as sports, singing, playing the violin and keeping a diary。我有许多爱好，如体育，唱歌，拉小提琴和写日记。

In school, I often hear the P.E. teacher say, sports do good to ones health, and will make one live longer. So, I like sports very much. I go running at five oclock in the morning, and after classes in the afternoon. I play pingpong with my friends. These sports have kept me healthy.在学校，我经常听体育老师说，运动有助于健康，并会让人活得更长。所以，我非常喜欢运动。我每天早上五点去跑步，而在下午的课之后。我和我的朋友们打乒乓球。这些运动使我保持健康。

At home, I like to sing and play the violin. I hope I will be a singer and a violinist① when I grow up. In order to attain these goals②,I go to the teachers home for a lesson every Saturday, and practise singing and playing the violin every day. Busy as I am, I am quite happy.在家，我喜欢唱歌和拉小提琴。我希望我长大后要当一个歌手和小提琴①。为了实现这些目标②，我去老师家的一个教训，每个星期六，练习唱歌和拉小提琴的每一天。我很忙，我很高兴。

Of all my hobbies I like reading books best. In my bedroom there are nearly six hundred books. There are story books, textbooks, magazines, and others. When I grow up, I will serve the people with the knowledge I have learned from them.我所有的爱好，我最喜欢读的书。在我的卧室里有将近六百本书。有故事书，教科书，杂志，和其他人。当我长大了，我要为人民服务的知识，我从他们身上学到。

一大早爸爸、妈妈和我一起乘车去了乡下奶奶家，准备一起去山上墓地扫尘。 奶奶家可热闹啦!大姑、二姑都带着家人来走娘家，爷爷和奶奶忙着炸丸子，姑姑忙着包水饺，爸爸当厨师做菜，妈妈给他当助手，我就当孩子王，领着六七个小孩给他们讲我身边发生的新奇故事，忙活了一个中午，我们全家人吃了一顿丰盛团圆地午餐。 下午两点钟左右(当地风俗中午不能去扫尘)，爷爷、爸爸和我带上早已准备好的祭品和香火，沿着水泥路走了二十分钟左右，穿过层层梯田，沿着蜿蜒曲折的小道一步一步艰难的奋力向山上墓地攀登。

终于来到老爷爷和老奶奶的墓地前，庄重而又肃穆的几颗四季常青松树早已在那迎接我们，我们三人都是肃然起敬，直立在他们的墓前。爸爸递给我一根已经燃烧起来的不时向外冒着缕缕烟的香，那香味是那么的浓重，使人一闻到这这股香味，马上就会感觉出一副沮丧而又难过的滋味，我们手里都拿着香，一起为在“九泉之下”的老爷爷、老奶奶鞠了一个九十度的躬，以表示我们对他们的哀悼和敬意。

爷爷熟练地把一些祭品恭恭敬敬地放在了老爷爷和老奶奶的墓前。然后拿出很多黄纸，巧妙地用两手摊成扇形，又在纸上面放上了很多一百万元和一亿元的阴间的钞票，爷爷嘴里不停的念叨"这是老爷爷的，这是老奶奶的，这是二老爷爷的„„”，我听后觉得真好玩，可当时的情景又不敢多嘴问，只好跟在爷爷身后拜了又拜，才依依不舍地离开。，

在回家的路上，爷爷告诉我以前老爷爷过着贫穷的日子，像我这样大的时候，还给人家当小工混饭吃，没上一天学，凭自己的努力奋斗为爷爷创下了这份家业„„。”我听后觉得很受感动，我现在有着优越的家庭，过着无忧无虑，丰衣足食的日子，却不知道老爷爷过去吃过那么多苦、受过那么多难，才为我们换来今天来之不易的幸福生活，我应该好好珍惜，在学校要好好学习，长大为社会贡献一份力量，我坚信老爷爷在另一个天堂也有这份心愿。

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The Flag of the World Health OrganizationThe World Health Organization (WHO) is a specialised United Nations agency which acts as a coordinator and researcher for public health around the world. Established on 7 April 1948， and headquartered in Geneva， Switzerland， the agency inherited the mandate and resources of its predecessor， the Health Organization， which had been an agency of the League of Nations. The WHOs constitution states that its mission "is the attainment by all peoples of the highest possible level of health." Its major task is to combat disease， especially key infectious diseases， and to promote the general health of the peoples of the world. Examples of its work include years of fighting smallpox. In 1979 the WHO declared that the disease had been eradicated - the first disease in history to be completely eliminated by deliberate human design. The WHO is nearing success in developing vaccines against malaria and schistosomiasis and aims to eradicate polio within the next few years. The organization has already endorsed the worlds first official HIV/AIDS Toolkit for Zimbabwe from October 3， 2006， making it an international standard.

The WHO is financed by contributions from member states and from donors. In recent years the WHOs work has involved more collaboration， currently around 80 such partnerships， with NGOs and the pharmaceutical industry， as well as with foundations such as the Bill and Melinda Gates Foundation and the Rockefeller Foundation. Voluntary contributions to the WHO from national and local governments， foundations and NGOs， other UN organizations， and the private sector (including pharmaceutical companies)， now exceed that of assessed contributions (dues) from its 193 member nations.

世界卫生的旗帜OrganizationThe世界卫生组织(世卫组织)是联合国的一个专门机构作为协调员,世界各地的公共卫生研究员。成立于1948年4月7日,总部设在日内瓦,瑞士,该机构继承了其前任的授权和资源,卫生组织,这是联盟的一个机构。宪法规定,其使命是谁”是实现各国人民的最高水平的健康。“它的主要任务是对抗疾病的侵袭,尤其是关键的传染病,并促进世界人民的健康。其工作的例子包括多年的战斗天花。1979年世界卫生组织宣布这种疾病已经根除——历史上第一疾病完全消除故意人类设计。谁是接近成功发展中疟疾和血吸虫病和旨在根除脊髓灰质炎疫苗在未来几年内。组织已经批准了世界上第一个官方艾滋病毒/艾滋病工具包津巴布韦从10月3日,2006年,一个国际标准。

世卫组织是由贡献从会员国和捐助者。近年来,他的工作涉及到更多的合作机会,目前大约有80这样的伙伴关系,与非政府组织和制药业,以及比尔和梅林达•盖茨基金会等基础和洛克菲勒基金会。自愿捐款的那些国家和地方政府、基金会和非政府组织、其他联合国组织和私营部门(包括制药公司),现在超过评估的贡献从其193个成员国(费)。

The Importance of Breakfast

As people are so busy with their work, they go to work directly in the morning without eating breakfast. Some people think not having breakfast does no influence on their body health. Some believe breakfast is important to peoples body health. In my opinion, Im convinced that we should have breakfast because it is good for our body health.

First of all, breakfast offer us the energy we need for the day. Before breakfast, our body has consumed all the energy we get from previous meal. Consequently, we need to eat some food in the morning to get enough energy and nutrient to support our body. If we dont have breakfast, then we have no enough energy to do our work efficiently.

Secondly, people who skip breakfast will get weight easily. If you dont have breakfast, then you will eat more food at noon and in the evening. Generally speaking, we dont have much excise in the evening while we eat too much food. As a result, the surplus calorie will be stored in our body and make us fat.

All in all, people should eat breakfast for the good of our health and for the good of keeping a good body shape.

人们都忙于自己的工作，所以在早上都会选择直接上班，而不吃早餐。一些人认为不吃早餐不会影响自己的身体健康。一些人认为早餐对健康很重要。就我来说，我觉得为了身体健康着想，我们应该吃早餐。

首先，早餐能够给我们提供自己一天所需的能量。在吃早餐前，我们的身体一斤高消耗完了前一餐的食物提供给我们的能量。说以，我们需要在早上吃点儿东西来给我们的身体提供一些能量和营养。如果我们不吃早餐，那么我们没有足够的能量，这样会导致我们工作效率低。

其次，不吃早餐的人更容易肥胖。如果不吃早餐，你将会在中午和晚上吃大量的食物。通常来说，一般人们在晚上的活动量会很少，但是，我们由于吃了太多的食物，那些多余的热量会储存在我们的身体里，让我们变胖。

总之，人们应该吃早餐，不仅为了身体健康着想，也为我们能够保持一个好的身材着想。

The Spring Festival is a traditional festival for all Chinese people. On

that evening there is a very traditional ceremony----Spring Festival Gala, which

is the favorite for many people. It brings so much happiness to Chinese all

around the world .

When asked about their opinion on Spring Festival Gala, people always

reason differently. Some people deem that it should be cancelled, while there

are also other people who argue that it should be continued.

Some people take it for granted that the Gala should not exist because it

is too boring on the evening of the Lunar New Year. Besides, the form of the

Evening seems the same every year. In comparison, there are, however, a large

number of people who hold a different view concerning this issue, they insist

that the Gala must be continued. They argue that it is one of the most important

celebration customs. And they think the Gala is worth expecting.

As far as I am concerned, I am intending to stand on the side of the latter

group of people. Admittedly, the former point of view seems reasonable, but the

latter is more persuasive. Taking the above-mentioned factors into

consideration, I can safely conclude that the Gala just needs a reform in the

future but not to be cancelled.

清明，正是桃花遍野的日子。山上大片大片的桃花中几棵高大的老树显得有些突兀，冬天的狂风叫那本就危在旦夕的它们格外衰老。秃秃的树枝擎着干涩的分叉，显得有些哀寂。都说春天是新生的孩子，我倒觉得像那快要去世的老人，抱着刚出生的孙子，那种独特的结合不仅不会让人感到唐突，而是一种别样的美感。

Clear and bright, is the day of peach blossom everywhere. The Hill Tracts of peach blossom in some tall trees seem a bit abrupt, the winter wind called the on them especially aging. The bare branches holding dry fork, somewhat sad silence. That spring is a newborn baby, I feel like that was the death of the elderly, and her newborn son, the unique combination of not only wont let a person feel abrupt, but a different kind of aesthetic.

小草冒出那娇绿的新芽，一个劲地向上蹿，也不怕那厚实的泥土折断了腰。一切都在以最快的速度拼命与时间竞跑，就连夏日里那倚在墙边风儿吹过才肯动一动的慵懒的爬山虎也努力地攀上墙体，长出紫色的小芽。春天是一场竞速快跑，所有的生命都从冬天的沉睡中醒来，一切都焕然一新。

The grass to take out the tender green shoots, an effort to jump up, also broke his waist is not afraid of the thick mud. Everything at the fastest speed to race and time, even the summer wind blowing against the wall will move to the lazy ivy climbed the wall, a long purple gemmule. Spring is a race run, all life to wake up from sleep in winter, everything is new.

春天是个漂亮的姑娘，带来一片又一片美好色彩。杜鹃花舒展鲜艳的花瓣，映着山峦，红红一片，好不热闹。春姑娘披着一身艳丽的新装，用长长的裙摆，给连绵起伏的山脉染上一层新绿;用和煦温暖的春风，将冰冷刺骨的溪水吹进一丝温暖;用淅淅沥沥的春雨，把唇焦舌燥的大地从昏睡中敲醒。方才因春天温柔的呼唤而苏醒的万物，睁着惺忪的睡眼，让这个细雨里的季节显得更为迷离。春姑娘那如墨色蝴蝶般的睫毛，每扑闪一次，便送来阵阵春风。春天那浸染着各种颜色的美好画布，给冬日的素银装束泼上满满春光。

Spring is a beautiful girl, bring a bright color. Rhododendron stretch colorful petals, against the mountains, is a very lively. Spring girl dressed in a beautiful new clothes, with a long skirt, to the rolling hills with a layer of green; with the warm spring breeze, the icy water blowing warm; by the pitter patter of the rain, the lips parched earth from sleep wake up. Just because the spring tender call to wake up the world, open eyes, let the rain season is more blurred. Spring girl that like black butterfly eyelashes, every blink once, then sent bursts of spring breeze. The spring that disseminated with various kinds of beautiful white canvas elements on full beam in winter spring.

风暖鸟声碎，日高花影重。春天演奏着舒缓的交响乐，描绘着饱蘸墨色的绮丽画卷。清明踏春，将春天的美好尽收眼底，何尝不是一件乐事呢?

Warm air into the ground, NIKKO heavy shadows of flowers. Spring played soothing symphony, depicting beautiful picture scroll with ink. Qingming spring, spring beautiful panoramic view, is it not a pleasure?