学生英语作文中经常出现的错误（热门20篇）

1审错题，立意错误

我告诉你，你完了....

多读几遍题目，找找关键词，争取不要审错题

2中心论点千呼万唤始出来

简单点，提论点的方式简单直白点。老师看那么多卷子很累的。

3过于追求标新立异

年轻人，你这种做法很危险啊

4文体似是而非

不要考验老师对于文体的认识。千万别写“四不像”的文体。

5论据太多却缺乏论述

不要过多描述论据，论据要简洁有力，更多的是要对论据进行论述。要一直提醒自己啊，平时看到论据，要自己概述一下。

6论据不贴切

其实提问者的第二个例子我觉得有点不贴切。平时多注意积累论据。千万别觉得某一个论据特别好，到哪都想用它。

Recovery of all things spring, spring rain Sasa it like a fluttering gently footsteps of the painter, a Buliu Shen it has to every corner of the earth printed on a color.

春天万物复苏，春雨飘飘洒洒它像一个脚步轻轻的画家，一不留神它已经把大地每一个角落都印上了色彩.

Field, flower garden, the forest have a girl left behind traces of the spring, she decorated in earth Huanran, a new, beautiful and peaceful

田野上,花圃上,森林里都有着春姑娘留下足迹,她把大地装饰得涣然一新,美丽,祥和

Lovely girl-chun, strode the world came to light steps, and that picture will be a very lively scene in all directions then came, the whole world like a long sleep just wakened up.

可爱的春姑娘，迈着轻盈的步子来到人间，那一片生机的景象便随之来到四面八方，整个世界像刚从一个漫长的睡梦中苏醒过来。

fields confusing wheat green, I looked boundless, as if the green wave. That golden wild flowers, in the Green Wave in flash.

田野上，麦苗返青，一望无边，仿佛绿色的波浪。那金黄色的野菜花，在绿波中闪光。

Spring makes everything young again except man.

春天使万物重返青春，除了人之外。

A single flower does not make a spring.

一花独放不是春，百花齐放春满园。

Spring returns to the earth. (或：Spring is here again.)

大地回春。

Spring makes everything young again except man.

春天使万物重返青春，除了人之外。

Dear John,

How time flies! Four moths have passed since we saw each other last time. I cannot help but miss you. You asked me about Chinese Spring Festival. Now I would like to tell you something about it。

The Spring Festival is a Chinese traditional festival. It is the most important and enjoyable one. A few days before the festival, houses are cleaned and red couplets are put up on the doors of every household. They are said to frighten away the ghosts. On that day, people are dressed up. Firecrackers ring out in the air, which adds to the atmosphere of the festival. People after a year’s hard work begin to relax and visit one another. Presents and dinners are given to celebrate the happy reunionof friends and relatives. Families get together. They have jiaozi and enjoy the New Year TV show. Customs may vary from place to place, but the same happy atmosphere is to be found everywhere in the country。

Now, I hope you have some idea of Chinese Spring Festival。

Best wishes,

Yours,

Li Hua

When I learned English, I felt so hard, because no matter hard I tried, I just could not understand the grammar. One day, my sister asked me why was I so confused with English, I told her I did not know, I was so afraid of it. Then she asked me to watch English movie and listened to the English songs. At first, I fell in love with these songs, I learned to sing them, I found I could remember more and more words. I also felt very interested in the movie, I could learn the local words. With interest, I make great progress, I am not afraid of English any more. Interest is the best teacher.

在我学英语的时候，我觉得很困难，因为无论我多么努力去尝试，我就是无法理解语法。一天，我的姐姐问我为什么对英语感到困惑，我告诉她我也不知道，我就是很怕英语。然后她叫我去看英语电影和听英语歌曲。刚开始，我爱上了英文歌，我学着去唱，我发现我能记住越来越多的词。我也对电影很感兴趣，我能学到当地词汇。有了兴趣，我进步很大，再也不害怕英语了。兴趣是最好的老师。

The annual Chinese New Year came in 2008, the Spring Festival has come exceptionally busy, it is accompanied by the festive sound of firecrackers, sky in full bloom, and colorful fireworks came. The ancients as "firecrackers of the year" to commemorate Chinese New Year. The return of fireworks and firecrackers, so that the ancient city of Beijing is full of a thick smell of years, sound of firecrackers brings us endless joy, filled with a wonderful interesting traditional festivals.

As a girl, I do not like to put those little on the "crackling" sound of Mei Wan and loud firecrackers. I like those colorful light emitted after, four run around fireworks. There is a called channeling smallpox, a carefully ed in the ground began to release, and later on the secure enough to put in the hand grip, lit "squeak" is heard, a group with a small ball of fire flew up into the sky, screaming, "pit" Suddenly the sky on a flower in full bloom out, quite exciting. My favorite is called Setaria fireworks in one hand and a lit continuously emitted after the bright, constantly changing colors of the fireworks. My hands turned, arms on the emergence of two very nice Ring of Fire; my arms open, 4 running, I became a "Firebird." I have a another one to lying, I cried, ran, happy with ... ...

Chinese New Year fireworks is a traditional custom. Legend of the so-called "year" is an evil beast, people set fire to bamboo, the sound of bamboo bursting scared off "year", "years" away is the Chinese New Year in. I like fireworks, it made me able to live a traditional feature of the year. I think as long as we pay attention to safety, stressing civilization, this tradition will be able to have a wonderful New Year.

In 2014, when June comes, it means the college entrance exam comes, too. It is the most important moment for the high school students, they have worked for three years, they are ready to go to further study.

This year, on that day, some accidents happened, some gangsters cut people, two brave high school students stood out, both of them fought for the gangster, and stopped the tragedy happening. The brave students got hurt, they missed the important exam. They are the real heroes, they never thought a second to stopping the gangster, other students chose to be quiet.

In my eyes, they are the most beautiful students, their spirit inspires the young generation, they are the new Lei Feng. The public is touched by their behavior, some colleges are willing to offer them the chance to go to college.

I am so happy for them, because they deserve the chances.

在2014年，当六月来临的时候，这意味着高考也到来了。这对于高中生来说是最重要的时刻，他们已经努力学习了三年，为更深远的学习做好了准备。

今年，在那一天，发生了一些意外，一些歹徒砍人，两个勇敢的高中生站了出来，他们两个和歹徒做斗争，制止了悲剧的发生。这两个勇敢的学生受伤了，他们错过了重要的考试。

他们是真正的英雄，毫不犹豫地制止了歹徒，其他学生选择了沉默。在我看来，他们是最美丽的学生，他们的精神鼓舞着新一代年轻人，他们是新的雷锋。大众被他们的行为感动，一些大学愿意给他们提供上大学的机会。

我为他们感到高兴，因为他们值得拥有这样的机会。

假定你是王伟，你的英国笔友David来信问及你们学校在暑假期间对学生的要求。请你根据以下要点给他回一封电子邮件。

家庭安全：小心用火用电，外出时关好门窗;

游泳安全：不独自去游泳，不去河、湖游泳;

交通安全：过马路要当心，不在马路上玩耍。

提示词：electricity(n.电)

注意：1、词数80~100;

2、请不要逐句翻译，可适当发挥;

3、文中不能出现真实的校名和人名;

4、邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。

Dear David,

Glad to receive your e-mail.Our school has made many safety rules for us to follow. Let me tell you something about them. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

I think these rules are necessary as safety comes first.

Have a good summer holiday!

Yours,

Wang Wei

1.多一份欢欣就多一份快乐，多一份快乐就多一份如意。愿大家天天欢欣，月月快乐，年年如意!Yesterdayisaway,forgetit.Tomorrowis notexist, do notworry. Todayishere, useit. 回顾过去，我们用真诚感恩回忆的点点滴滴，珍惜现在，我们用奋斗充实工作的分分秒秒，展望未来，我们用责任创造天琴新的辉煌。

2.我愿倾我所有，全力以赴——以最宽阔的胸怀，接纳你们;以最大的努力培育你们;学生的成功就是我的喜悦。

3.用辛勤的汗水浇灌每一棵“幼苗” ，用真诚的爱心滋润每一朵“鲜花”，用永恒的热情创造一个个奇迹。

4.眼睛能看到的地方，就是你能到达的地方。而同样，你想成为更加优秀的人，你就一定能成功。

5.大家在新的一年有棒棒的body，满满的knowledge，每天心情sunny，更加的happy，无忧无虑像个baby。

6.年岁首，我把祝福和希望悄悄地放在将融的雪被下，让我们随着春天成长，送给你一年的丰硕与芬芳。

7.感恩父母，感恩老师，感恩社会，学会做人，学会学习，学会处事。 走近孩子的世界，聆听孩子的声音，新年的阳光将洒在你们的身上，新年的春风将吹在你们的脸上，请坚信我将和你们同行，因为我对你们的爱是那么的深沉和执着。

8.新的一年，新希望，新历程，新突破，承载我们新的梦想。绿叶饱含着对根的情谊，爱是老师教好学生的前提和基础，孩子的笑容是我们心中最美的词汇，我愿用真心、爱心呵护每一张阳光灿烂的笑脸。用真心品味工作，用勤奋品味学习，用宽容品味缺憾，用感恩品味幸福，用真情品味朋友，用真诚品味回忆，祝大家新年快乐，一年更比一年好!

9.装满一车幸福，让平安开道，抛开一切烦恼，让快乐环绕,存储所有温暖，将寒冷赶跑，释放一生真情，让幸福永远对你们微笑!

10.历经磨难体验生活的艰辛，真诚付出享受成功的喜悦，憧憬未来激出蓬勃的斗志，心存梦想追求美好生活，祝福你奋斗就是爱自己。爱是一首动人的旋律，爱是一幅优美的画卷，让我们用爱的翅膀托起明天的希望! Believeme,believeyourself.

My holiday

Jack

I have a very cheerful holiday in “The National Day”. My parent and I went to Shanghai about nine days ago. We got there by plane, I think that shanghai must be a very big city, and there are a lot of tall buildings. First we went into the hotel named”chuang ye”. And we saw the tall big building “Shanghai TV Tower”, at nine in the evening, we got back to the hotel. The second day, we visited Zhouzhuang. It’s very beautiful and the air was good, I bought my favorite toy : weapons. I like them very much. Shanghai’s food tasted good. Today we are very happy and tired, so we slept early in the night. The third day however, we didn’t go anywhere, we stayed in the hotel until late in the afternoon. In the evening, we came back to Tianjin by plane to. This travel was fantastic!

那天，我把同桌的钢笔摔坏了，我和同桌之间发生了激烈的争吵。

那是星期五课间时间，我想跟同桌同学开个小玩笑，于是我悄悄走过去，想吓她一下，结果碰到了她的课桌，桌子上的钢笔落在地上，我感到很惊讶，赶快捡起钢笔，看了看，没有想到这个钢笔太脆弱了，笔尖摔断了。我红着脸，对同桌说：”对不起，我不是故意的“。可是同桌一句话也不听，就让我还给她，我也生气了心想”不就是一个破钢笔吗？有什么大不了的。“她又说：”这是我妈妈给我的生日礼物，是我最喜爱的钢笔“。我生气头也不回地就走了。

我的心里也很难过，因为这事虽然是因为我而发生的，可她的做法也不好，我的心里很矛盾。

我就跟老师说了这件事，老师告诉我：”要勇于承认自己的错误，改正了就是好样的。“听了老师的话，心里就像开了一扇明亮的窗户，于是，我用自己的零花钱买了一支新的钢笔，还给了她并真心的向她道歉：”对不起，那一次是我错了，请你原谅我。“同桌说：”我那次的态度也不好，我也向你道歉。“我们彼此都开心地笑了！

语言是评判作文的一个极其重要的因素。在实际的阅卷过程中，语法错误，尤其是较为严重的错误，是阅卷人员的主要“照顾点”，有时甚至是惟一的点;当然那样处理是有道理的，大家可以设想一下，一篇语法上漏洞百出、严重影响表达的作文又会有什么样的好内容呢?如果因为语言上的错误而导致失分，那将得不偿失。因此，认清各种各样的语法错误，尽可能地避免少犯，对于提高作文分是有极大的帮助的。现将我们在阅卷过程中所发现的大量语言错误逐一归类，抽出其中的典型错误，以警示大家，供参考。

In China, the subjects that students learnt are necessary. They can learn special classes when they enter university. Sometimes I think it will be perfect to have the special class in middle school. On the one hand, students can learn more things besides the necessary subjects. They can develop more practical skills. On the other hand, students can cultivate their interest by learning something different. Though it is a little hard to open special classes, because education pays attention to scores, I believe that someday more special classes will be open, as the class reform calls on people to pay attention to the development of student mind.

在中国，学生所学习的科目都是有必要的。当他们进入大学以后，他们可以学习特色课程。有时我觉得在初中开设特色课程是非常好的。一方面，学生除了必要科目之外还可以学到更多的东西。可以发展更多实用技巧。另一方面，学生可以培养他们的兴趣，学习不同的东西。虽然因为教育注重分数导致开设特色课程有一定难度，但我相信总有一天将会开设更多的特色课程，因为教育改革呼吁人们关注学生的思维发展。

Please allow me to introduce myself fou you. My name is xx, my 20-year-old, was born in Qinghai Province. Very honored to have this opportunity to come here to interview. Now I will briefly introduce themselves. I graduated from the Qinghai first vocational schools My specialty is computer software applications. In the past year I have the basic expertise. I like reading books, watching movies, listening to music, and so on. I think I am an honest and optimistic, can also work under great pressure. This is probably, thank you。

学生问候父母

Aug. 12, 20xx

Dear Mum and Dad,

I am sorry for not having written to you for such a long time. I am afraid you must think I have forgotten you and the whole family. Actually I really miss you, but I have been busy preparing my exam these days. And now I have passed the exam and feel very relaxed as if a heavy burden has been removed. I can’t help waiting to write to you and so here I am.

What about Dad’s health? Is he still coughing at night? I have been worrying about it. The last day I saw an advertisement on a newspaper introducing a new kind of syrup which is said to have magic effect on coughing. I have bought one bottle and sent it back home by post. Have you received it? What about the effect?

Please write to me soon, I am eager to hear from you.

Your daughter,

Li Hua

译文

亲爱的爸爸妈妈：

我为这么长时间没有给你们写信而感到抱歉，恐怕你们都认为我把你们和家人都忘了吧。其实我真的非常想念你们，但这些日子我在忙着准备考试。现在考试通过了，我感觉如释重负，迫不及待地要提笔给你们写信。

爸爸的身体怎么样？晚上还咳嗽吗？我一直非常担心。前几天我在报纸上看到一则广告，其中介绍了的那种咳嗽药，据说有奇效。我已经买了一瓶寄回去了。你们收到了吗？效果怎么样？

尽快给我回信好吗？我早就想收到你们的信了。

女儿：李华

20xx年8月12日

[英语作文：学生问候父母

Since I watched the movie and was attracted by the girl who was dancing like an angel, I wanted to be her. I told my mother that I wanted to take the dance class. She was very happy and took me to the dance studio. At first, I practised so hard and felt great to make progress step by step. But a month passed, I felt so bored to do the same movement everyday, and I wanted to quit the class. But thinking about letting my mother down and if I gave up this time, I would do the same thing next time, so I decided to insist. This was the road that I chose, so I can’t give up.

因为我看了一部电影，被一个跳舞跳得像天使的女孩吸引了，所以我就想要像她一样。我告诉我的母亲，我想学舞蹈课。她很高兴地带我去舞蹈工作室。一开始，我很努力练习，一步一步取得进步让我感觉棒极了。但一个月过去了，我感到很厌烦因为每天做同样的运动，我想要退学。但是想到这会让我的妈妈失望，而且如果我这一次放弃了，下一次我还会做同样的事情，所以我决定坚持下去。这是我选择的路，所以我不能放弃。

[我选择的路初中学生英语作文

Father’s Day is coming and you must be thinking of giving a present to your father。 Different people like different kinds of gifts。

If you have enough pocket money， you can buy a useful but not expensive thing， like a tie。 I think your father will like it。 But if you don’t have enough pocket money， you can do something that you can do， for example， you can prepare a cup of tea。 When your father comes back from work， he can drink it。

No matter what you do， the most important thing is to make your father happy on Father’s Day。 Don’t you think so?

How to be a good learner?

As a good learner， we should have good habits and ways of learning。

We need to get ready for our lessons before class and always listen carefully in class。 It’s good to study in groups and help each other。 We should do more reading in our free time。 If we have some problems， we’d better ask others for help。 As a student， working hard is important， but don’t forget to do sports and keep healthy。

I think all these above will be helpful to us。

在社会发展的今天，越来越多的学生拥有手机，你赞成中学生使用手机吗?

赞成意见：1.现在是信息社会，手机是最快的信息交流的工具之一。2.应充分利用好手机。如偶遇突发事故，可立即拨打手机求助。3.可在每天学习之余利用手机游戏放松一下自己。4.只要正确使用好手机，紧跟时间并无过错，追求时尚可以理解，但学习是首要任务。

反对意见：1.学校已提供了公共电话，因此手机并不能带来更多的方便，而且花费较多。2.若课堂接听手机会影响上课。3.学生玩手机游戏或接发短信，将无法集中精力学习。

Nowadays mobile phones are becoming more and more popular among the middle school students. Some think it is good for students to bring a mobile phone. But some people do not think so. They think it is bad for students to bring a mobile phone. Because the students will use mobile phones to play games， sent text messages， watch movies， etc which will do harm to their study. And if a mobile phone ring in the class， the teacher and students would be disturbed.

In my opinion， we can bring mobile phones to school.As we know， the 21st century is a modern age and full of information. A mobile phone is one of the quickest tools for us to exchange information. The mobile phone is a fashionable and useful invention， so we ought to make the best use of it. Suppose there’s a sudden accident， it is more convenient for us to dial for help immediately. There’re also some games in the mobile phone. We can relax ourselves by playing them when we’re tired of our studies. In my opinion， it’s not wrong to follow the fashion， but the most important thing is how to use the mobile phone in a right way and do not disturbed others.

Today I found time was a cruel thing. Whatever man is, time always goes on.It won‘t stay to wait for somebody. You can‘t use anything to exchange time. Time is also a fair thing. Although you have a lot of money or you enjoy high reputation, time won‘t leave them more. Today I found I hadn‘t enough time. Although I have 50-day holiday, but I found I had a lot of things to do.

I had a lot of homework to do and I had something necessary to do.

[时间初三学生英语日记

Life is like a piano,what you get out of it,depends on how you play it.

No sweat, no sweet.

没有辛勤的劳动，哪有甜美的收获?

There is no end to knowledge.There is no end to perfect character.

读不尽者书，造诣不尽者人品。

Great works are performed not by strength, but by perseverance.

做大事，靠的是毅力而不是力量。

Cease to struggle and you cease to live.

停止奋斗，就等于放弃生活。

Great works are performed not by strength but by perseverance

伟大的工作是源于坚持不懈，而不是一时的热情。

Congratulations on your graduation! Whishing you a future filled with success and joy of seeing your dreams come true.

祝贺您的毕业!希望您有一个成功的未来，感受到梦想成真的快乐。

Boys, be ambitious.

男孩，是雄心勃勃的

Man can survive, only when he has the substance, man can live only when he has ideal.

人依靠物质就能生存，但只有拥有理想时，才叫生活。

Goals determine what you are going to be.

目标取决于您的愿望。

Great hope makes great men.

伟大的愿望成就伟大的人。

An aim in life is the only fortune worth finding. Pursue your object, be it what it will, steadily and indefatigably.

Man who has a settled purpose will surely succeed.

目标专一的人肯定会成功。

Follow your own course, and let people talk.

走自己的路，让别人去说。

Life is a leaf of paper white, thereon each of us may write his word.

There is a limit to ones youth, but no limit to his wisdom. Draw on the limitless wisdom during the short span of youth.

Self-reverence, self-knowledge, self-control, these three alone lead life to sovereign power.

自我尊敬，自知之明，自我控制，这是生活的最高境界。

Character decided the fate ,and knowledge changes ours fate.

当玖龙纸业总裁张茵被提名经济人物灿烂地笑时，我知道了为事业而奋斗是美丽的；

当关颖珊在外交舞台上展露风采时，我知道没有奥运金牌的遗憾也可以美丽；

当弗莱明因为操作失误而意外发现青霉素时，我知道了原来“错误”也是一种美。

——题记

当人们看到残疾儿童时总会哀其不幸，更有人会说他们的出生是个错误，你如何想？她本有幸福的童年，却因医生用药错误而聋哑，但凡是知道她的人无不称赞她的勤奋、坚强与美丽。她——邰丽华在舞台上展示着她那份与众不同的美，谁能说她的一生会是错误？谁能否定她的美丽？残疾，或许是命运错误的安排，但她却将其变为了一个美丽的“错误”！

王皓，身为中国乒乓球男队的领军人物之一，他的运动生涯并不平顺。他有过失败，他有过苦闷，他甚至曾有“千年老二”的封号。2004年雅典一役，他在决赛场上负于柳承敏，由于轻敌，由于经验不足，由于心态不稳，在年少轻狂时犯下的“错误”曾一度压制着他，但历经磨难后王皓拼回了亚运金牌，拼回了世界巡回赛金牌，更在为奥运而拼搏。我们肯定他的成绩，也感叹

他的失败，但从失败中走出，从错误中崛起的他并未推动什么，反而拥有了另一份美丽，他曾经的错误已转化为经验，在前途中闪耀。

从1921年到现在，中国共产党走过了八十余年的风风雨雨。曾经，我们有过大跃进，人民公社化运动的错误；曾经，中央甚至错误发动过文化大革命。但历经沧桑，我们收获的是探索中的经验教训；曲折的路我们迎来的是光明的前途。活着是美丽的，工作是美丽的，错误同样是一种美。正因为有了曾经的错，我们才有了今天的安定和谐，历史的“错误”已成为前进中的美丽。

麦克劳德幼年的错误成就了一位著名的解剖学家；丁俊晖英国大奖赛上一次错误的击球激励他捧得了大师赛亚军奖杯；孙振耀曾经的错误投资勉励他成为了惠普中国区总裁。。。

犯错误不可避免，但它未必是坏事，与其强求完美，何不把错误变得美丽？成功的人生，我们需要那些有助益的美丽的“错误”！

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