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考研英语作文常见的四个写作格式错误

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【摘要】考研英语作文的评分,首先关注的就是单词、句子、格式的正确性。因此,在作文的复习中,不能只关注高端句型,正确的格式也是不容忽视的。

写作格式错误主要包括题目的写法、文章的格式、大小写以及标点符号等四个方面。

题目的写法

题目是首先映入读者眼帘的,所以要注意题目的书写位置。一定要在试卷作文纸上的上方中间位置书写。同时还应在话题和正文之间留出一定的距离,即比正文行距稍宽一些。

其次,要注意题目的大小写,实词的首字母一定要大写。其它虚词如冠词、连词(但如连词的字母多于5个时则大写)和介词首字母不需要大写。比如:

跳动的心(例子)

误:Attitudes Toward Money

正:Attitudes toward Money

文章的格式

1、四边留空:卷面的四边一定要留出适当的空白。这样的文章才能整齐、美观,给人以清晰、明快的感觉。

2、空格:文章的每段的首行一定要有统一的空格(一般缩进4-6个字节)。

大小写方面的错误

在考研文章的评改过程中,有关大小写方面的错误层出不穷,这是考生的一个弱点。一般来说,大写规则有以下几条:

1、大写每句话的第一个字母和直接引语的第一字母

如:He said,He is going to Shanghai next week.

2、大写专有名词,或用作专有名词的部分普通名词,通常是缩略形式

如:DrG .G . East

3、大写缩写字母

如:MPA ,MBA ,BBC

4、文章标题要大写

5、头衔在专有名词前要大写,在专有名词后就小写

例如:Captain SmithSmith, the captain;Uncle GeorgeGeorge ,my uncle

标点符号

考生在写文章时,一定要注意正确使用标点符号,切忌从头到尾只用逗号的现象。一定要熟练掌握常用标点符号的基本用法,尤其要正确使用逗号和分号。

三段式作文注意事项

1、作文卷面要保持整洁,不要连笔,不要涂改,这是获取印象分的重点。很多考生由于在考场过于紧张导致作文的单词老是写错,这是致命伤啊,会直接让你越写越没感觉就越没信心了,所以平常要加强练笔!

2、全文的第一句和各段的第一句必须是文章的中心句,最好能用复杂句表达。这是因为阅卷老师一般没有那么多的时间去看作文,所以只能大概浏览下各段的首句,这是获得高分的关键。

3、全文结构布局:全文分为三段,第一段3句,第二段5句,第三段4句,可根据具体情况调整。段落中,第一句是topic ,第二三句是detail ,第三句是conclusion 。

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学生问候父母

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Dear Mum and Dad,

I am sorry for not having written to you for such a long time. I am afraid you must think I have forgotten you and the whole family. Actually I really miss you, but I have been busy preparing my exam these days. And now I have passed the exam and feel very relaxed as if a heavy burden has been removed. I can’t help waiting to write to you and so here I am.

What about Dad’s health? Is he still coughing at night? I have been worrying about it. The last day I saw an advertisement on a newspaper introducing a new kind of syrup which is said to have magic effect on coughing. I have bought one bottle and sent it back home by post. Have you received it? What about the effect?

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亲爱的爸爸妈妈:

我为这么长时间没有给你们写信而感到抱歉,恐怕你们都认为我把你们和家人都忘了吧。其实我真的非常想念你们,但这些日子我在忙着准备考试。现在考试通过了,我感觉如释重负,迫不及待地要提笔给你们写信。

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尽快给我回信好吗?我早就想收到你们的信了。

女儿:李华

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How to improve students mental health

Students mental health has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life. Indeed, it is widely accepted that it has gained growing popularity among persons in all walks of life. There is a general discussion today about the issue of disorder in brains.

Obviously, it is necessary that effective actions should be taken to prevent problems. Authorities in universities play a critical role in the situation. To begin with, schools, such as colleges or universities, can provide chances for the young men to ease their attention. Whats more, some are physically strong, but psychological problems are able to bring potential threats. Teaches may have a chance to find them in advance. Besides, specialists in this field are to be required to make full preparation for cases in time. Facing the crisis, experts can deal with it in a professional way, which means they have more or better opportunities to save us than others.

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A funny thing happened during the summer vacation.

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Friends, is your summer vacation interesting? Tell us about it!

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Spring Festival is coming,I am very happy.On this winter holiday,I went to visit my grandparents with my parents.

My grandmother is very zeal.Our dinner is very delicious.After the dinner,the people gave me money in red envelopes.I am very happy in this family with my grandparents.

Sometimes,we go to climb the mountains.The mountain is very high.Look!There is a clean river near the mountain.And there are some beautiful flowers,grass and big trees.Some trees are orange trees,the others are banana trees.Oh,I am very tired but interesting.

I am very happy on this holiday because I like Spring Festival very much.What about you?

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在社会发展的今天,越来越多的学生拥有手机,你赞成中学生使用手机吗?

赞成意见:1.现在是信息社会,手机是最快的信息交流的工具之一。2.应充分利用好手机。如偶遇突发事故,可立即拨打手机求助。3.可在每天学习之余利用手机游戏放松一下自己。4.只要正确使用好手机,紧跟时间并无过错,追求时尚可以理解,但学习是首要任务。

反对意见:1.学校已提供了公共电话,因此手机并不能带来更多的方便,而且花费较多。2.若课堂接听手机会影响上课。3.学生玩手机游戏或接发短信,将无法集中精力学习。

Nowadays mobile phones are becoming more and more popular among the middle school students. Some think it is good for students to bring a mobile phone. But some people do not think so. They think it is bad for students to bring a mobile phone. Because the students will use mobile phones to play games, sent text messages, watch movies, etc which will do harm to their study. And if a mobile phone ring in the class, the teacher and students would be disturbed.

In my opinion, we can bring mobile phones to school.As we know, the 21st century is a modern age and full of information. A mobile phone is one of the quickest tools for us to exchange information. The mobile phone is a fashionable and useful invention, so we ought to make the best use of it. Suppose there’s a sudden accident, it is more convenient for us to dial for help immediately. There’re also some games in the mobile phone. We can relax ourselves by playing them when we’re tired of our studies. In my opinion, it’s not wrong to follow the fashion, but the most important thing is how to use the mobile phone in a right way and do not disturbed others.

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How to be a good learner?

As a good learner, we should have good habits and ways of learning。

We need to get ready for our lessons before class and always listen carefully in class。 It’s good to study in groups and help each other。 We should do more reading in our free time。 If we have some problems, we’d better ask others for help。 As a student, working hard is important, but don’t forget to do sports and keep healthy。

I think all these above will be helpful to us。

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I have a happy holiday. In the holiday. I have do lots of thing.

First, I make a plan. Plan about everyday life and study. My life have rule.

Second, I according to plan execuition. Enable my holiday is very amplitude.

I watch TV, too. I love English today. Because I like English very much.

Sometimes I play the computer. I can watch MTV and learn English on computer.

I have a good holiday.

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What Am I Going to Do in the Summer Holiday

The new summer holiday is coming. As we know, summer is a beautiful season. During the coming summer holiday, I am going to study English. Then I am going to borrow some science books from

the library and discuss problems with my classmates, I’ll help my parents do some housework in my house, and I’ll water the flowers and trees our garden. I am going to play basketball, volleyball and

badminton with my neighbours in the afternoon. At the same time, if my father has time, he’ll teach me to swim. I’ll have fun.

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1。句子成分残缺不全

we always working till late at night before taking exams。(误)

we are always working /we always work till late at night before taking exams(正)

we should read books may be useful to us。 (误)

we should read books which may be useful to us。 (正)

2。句子成分多余

this test is end, but there is another test is waiting for you。 (误)

one test ends, but another is waiting for you。 (正)

the driver of the red car was died on the spot。 (误)

the driver of the red car died on the spot。 (正)

3。主谓不一致

someone/somebody think that reading should be selective。 (误)

some think that reading should be selective。 (正)

my sister go to the cinema at least once a week。 (误)

my sister goes to the cinema at least once a week。 (正)

4。动词时态、语态的误用

i was walking along the road, and there are not so many cars on the street。 (误)

i was walking along the road and there were not so many vehicles on the street。 (正)

we have little time to read some books which we interest。 (误)

we have little time to read some books in which we are interested。 (正)

i am a student who has studying in the college for two years。 (误)

i have been studying in the college for two years(正)

5。词类混淆

it is my point that reading must be selectively。 (误)

in my opinion, reading must be selective。 (正)

honest is so important for everyperson。 (误)

honesty is so important for everyone。 (正)

the old man was hit by a car when he across the street。 (误)

the old man was hit by a car when he was crossing the street。 (正)

[英语作文中常见的典型语法错误分析

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篇15:学校搬新址后493名学生出现环境异常反应

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3月下旬,记者来到常州外国语学校。有学生反映,自从去年9月份搬到这个新校址后,很多学生因为环境污染,出现了各种不适症状。

12岁的学生小曾从去年以来,一直咳个不停,皮肤上出现了多种异常反应

13岁的小金也出现了大面积红疹,还伴随剧烈头痛,一直查不出病因。从今年1月17日以后,他被迫让父母转到了另一所学校。

据了解,常州外国语学校先后有641名学生被送到医院进行检查。有493人出现皮炎、湿疹、支气管炎、血液指标异常、白细胞减少等异常症状,个别的还被查出了淋巴癌、白血病等恶性疾病。

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篇16:一次难忘的经历英语学生

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Disappointed at my study results, I didn’t want to go to school any longer. I found a temporary job during my summer vacation. Because I was poor in knowledge, the manager only asked me to deliver newspapers from house to house.

At the beginning, I took it for granted that it would be a piece of cake. There would be no difficultly in finishing it.

But to my surprise, when I went to people’s houses, they looked me up and down. I could feel that they looked down upon me. I was badly hurt. Though I was discouraged, I came to another house. A black dog jumped out suddenly. I was frightened and screamed with fear. But no one came to help me. At that time, I came to realize that delivering newspapers was more difficult than reading in the classroom. I wanted to give up, but I couldn’t.

I tried my best to do the job better. Although I was very tired, I made it finally.

From this unforgettable experience, I have learnt that if we put our heart into it, nothing is difficult and nothing is impossible.

Now, I am sitting in the classroom, happy, confident, and hard-working. As long as I don’t lose heart and work harder and harder, I will make much progress.

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篇17:高一学生英语日记

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Today, my mother and I went to Xiaohe Gou, and we had fun.

When we got there, we saw that the fish pond in Xiaohe ditch was covered with ice. I want to go down to play on the ice, so I decided to try the ice thickness first. Because there were no thick branches on the riverside, so I lifted a big stone and threw it all in to the ice. There was a huge hole in the ice, and the shadow of a small fish was hidden below. Fortunately, I didnt go down easily, otherwise...

We continue to move forward. Those fish ponds show their true colors: I have made the "mask people" one by one.

A small stream blocked our way further. I looked at what could be used without wood boards around. Because the water is very shallow, I move a piece of big stone, three lower five in addition to two set up a stone bridge, my mother and my mother passed the brook, and also helped people to pass a bridge.

After crossing the bridge, we began to move forward. We saw a vacant area in front of us, and it was scraped evenly by bulldozers. Mother said that it might have been a natural ancient granary. The center of the loess slope is a circular open space, which is transformed into a natural granary. Why do I think so good things should be leveled and destroyed? I ask mother, mother said that this is the conflict between modern civilization and ancient history, and now people have destroyed the historical relics left by their predecessors for their own existence. If I want to live in the air, I will not destroy so many precious and rare historical sites.

Im very happy to go out today. At the same time, I realized the importance of life to human beings, and realized that the development and construction of society could damage the civilization of ancient society. I think life is very important, but ancient civilization is also important. We should coordinate the relationship between the development of modern civilization and the preservation of ancient civilization.

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篇18:时间初三学生英语日记

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Today I found time was a cruel thing. Whatever man is, time always goes on.It won‘t stay to wait for somebody. You can‘t use anything to exchange time. Time is also a fair thing. Although you have a lot of money or you enjoy high reputation, time won‘t leave them more. Today I found I hadn‘t enough time. Although I have 50-day holiday, but I found I had a lot of things to do.

I had a lot of homework to do and I had something necessary to do.

[时间初三学生英语日记

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篇19:最新的学生英语日记

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Hello, I today am in Hangzhou. Hanghzou was very hot.

We are in Zhejiang University. It’s very big and beautiful. We study English. It has a lot of fun. We play English game. The teacher Jenny and Sara are kind to us. In lunch, it was very good. I eat slowly.

I think Hangzhou is a beautiful city, and it’s very big. The car was going away. The house study.

I study happily, living happily. So I’m happy in Hangzhou.

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篇20:学生作文:美丽的错误

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当玖龙纸业总裁张茵被提名经济人物灿烂地笑时,我知道了为事业而奋斗是美丽的;

当关颖珊在外交舞台上展露风采时,我知道没有奥运金牌的遗憾也可以美丽;

当弗莱明因为操作失误而意外发现青霉素时,我知道了原来“错误”也是一种美。

——题记

当人们看到残疾儿童时总会哀其不幸,更有人会说他们的出生是个错误,你如何想?她本有幸福的童年,却因医生用药错误而聋哑,但凡是知道她的人无不称赞她的勤奋、坚强与美丽。她——邰丽华在舞台上展示着她那份与众不同的美,谁能说她的一生会是错误?谁能否定她的美丽?残疾,或许是命运错误的安排,但她却将其变为了一个美丽的“错误”!

王皓,身为中国乒乓球男队的领军人物之一,他的运动生涯并不平顺。他有过失败,他有过苦闷,他甚至曾有“千年老二”的封号。2004年雅典一役,他在决赛场上负于柳承敏,由于轻敌,由于经验不足,由于心态不稳,在年少轻狂时犯下的“错误”曾一度压制着他,但历经磨难后王皓拼回了亚运金牌,拼回了世界巡回赛金牌,更在为奥运而拼搏。我们肯定他的成绩,也感叹

他的失败,但从失败中走出,从错误中崛起的他并未推动什么,反而拥有了另一份美丽,他曾经的错误已转化为经验,在前途中闪耀。

从1921年到现在,中国共产党走过了八十余年的风风雨雨。曾经,我们有过大跃进,人民公社化运动的错误;曾经,中央甚至错误发动过文化大革命。但历经沧桑,我们收获的是探索中的经验教训;曲折的路我们迎来的是光明的前途。活着是美丽的,工作是美丽的,错误同样是一种美。正因为有了曾经的错,我们才有了今天的安定和谐,历史的“错误”已成为前进中的美丽。

麦克劳德幼年的错误成就了一位著名的解剖学家;丁俊晖英国大奖赛上一次错误的击球激励他捧得了大师赛亚军奖杯;孙振耀曾经的错误投资勉励他成为了惠普中国区总裁。。。

犯错误不可避免,但它未必是坏事,与其强求完美,何不把错误变得美丽?成功的人生,我们需要那些有助益的美丽的“错误”!

[学生作文:美丽的错误

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