小学英语的教学反思范文(汇集20篇)

today is tree-planting day.

we went to plant trees in daning greenland. as soon as we arrived, we began to work.some were digging holes, some were planting and others were watering. we all know trees are very useful to man. growing trees means saving man himself. we all worked very hard. when the sun went down, we came back home.

although we were very tired, we felt very happy.

at the weekendsitssunday evening. the read families are at home. mr. read is watching tv. mrs. read is reading a book. ann is sitting at the desk and reading, too. shes doing her homework. her brother, tom, is sitting on the floor andmaking a kite. he is doing his homework, too. mimi is playing with something near tom. where is tom’s bird? oh, it’s near the window. it’s looking at tom and singing. they are having a good time.

老实说，这次期末考试我考得确实不好，尤其是语文，竟与上次期中考试的成绩一模一样，没有半点进步。这到底是为什么呢？

首先，我觉得是因为粗心，比如把“已经”的“已”写成“自己”的“己”；作文里通篇的错字……那么多的0·5分离我而去，怎能不让我心疼？可是我却没有办法， 只能在心里默默地说：“下次一定要细心，一定要细心啊！”

老师说过，我们最大的问题就是不爱审题。许多同学都在审题方面上丢了分，我也是其中一员。《那片绿绿的爬山虎》里有一句话：“刚进里院，一墙绿葱葱的爬山虎扑入眼帘，夏日的燥热仿佛一下子减去了许多。”阅读题里有一道题就问“一墙的爬山虎使肖复兴感到……”我想都没想地填到：凉爽，便放心地去做其它题了。但试卷发下来，这道题却是错的，我百思不得奇解，还是等到老师讲了以后，才知道应该写舒服。唉！那就更不用说了，明明是写自己玩的，我却把玩的规则写了一大堆，罗罗嗦嗦，到头来整整扣了三分, 好后悔啊!

每次考试后我都是后悔再后悔，可是世上没有后悔药，所以我以后要细心、要审题，那样才能取得好成绩。

My school life in primary school is wonderful! I have a lot of friends. They are friendly to me.We study together play together and talk together.My teachers are very patient .They teach me a lot and help me with many problems. The school life is unforgettable

一、小学暑假英语日记带翻译

第一篇：Today and friends of foreign travel,outside air is very good,people feel very comfortable.We all appreciate the fine girls bicycles.We enjoyed the beautiful nature brought.We happily spent a happy day.今天和朋友一起出外交游,外面的空气很好,人感觉很舒服.我们骑着自行车一路欣赏鸟语花香.享受着大自然带给我们的无限美好.大家开开心心地度过了愉快的一天.

第二篇：Today is a boring day, because my dad and mom went to work, home I alone, I play a computer I soon feel dizzy, and then I go to visit my classmate but they are traveling, I can only one on the road, really boring!

今天是一个无聊的一天，因为我爸爸妈妈都出去上班了，家了只有我一个人，我玩了一会儿电脑不一会我就感到头晕，然后我出去拜访我的同学可是他们都去旅游了，我只能一个人在路上闲逛，真是无聊啊!先写到这儿，明天在来写

第三篇：This evening I went for a walk out of the stadium, found near my home, they have many people running, some people are playing basketball, others are playing football. I saw them in the movement to join them, I play very happy.

今天晚上我出门去散步，发现我家旁边的体育场人很多，他们有的人在跑步，有的人在打篮球，还有人在踢足球。我看见他们在运动也加入到他们的队伍里，我玩地很开心。

二、英语日记100字

篇一：the day after yesterday i received 200yuan from my relatives as my pocket money. i was so happy but my father and mother said that i should give a half to them and the rest would be my pocket money in one year. “what!” i shouted.

前天我收到了200元作为零用钱来自于我的亲戚，我很高兴，但是爸爸妈妈说要上交一半而且另一半要做为我一年里的零用钱。“什么！”我大叫到。

篇二： july 22, cloudy today i got up early in order to wait for the legend of the total solar eclipse was visible. why is the legends? because not seen.but from 7:30 a.m. start raining, i was depressed. ok just online see the news experts say yinyutian look more like shock, total solar eclipse was visible because originally clouds and thick, plus the dark sky will total solar eclipse was visible.

7月22日 阴天 我今天起的很早，为了等待那传说中的日全食。为什么是传说中呢？因为没亲眼见过嘛。不过从早上7：30就开始下雨，害我郁闷了半天。还好刚刚在网上看了新闻专家说阴雨天看日 全食会更震撼，好像是因为本来云层很厚，再加上日全食天空会更加的黑暗

三：多篇暑假英语日记作文带翻译

篇1、Today my parents took me to my grandfather’s house. I played with my cousin. Suddenly my cousin suggested going to the park and having a rest. “that’s a good idea.” I said. Then we prepared for the traveling. After lunch, the sky turned dark. After that , it rained heavily. It meant our plan is impossible. What a pity day!

今天我父母带我去了外公家，我和唐/表，兄/弟/姐/妹一起玩。突然，我我和唐/表，兄/弟/姐/妹建议去公园玩，顺便休息一下。“那是一个好主意”我说到。然后我们为旅行准备着。午饭后，天变得昏暗，接着下起了大雨。那意味着我们的计划不可能实行了，多遗憾的一天哪！

篇2、Tomorrow is New Year’s Day, my family have had a completely cleaning for two days. Then my father and I decorated our flat and my mother cooked delicious food for our meal. After supper we watched TV program. How happy we were!

明天是春节，我家里以近在两天前做了彻底的大扫除。然后我和爸爸一起装饰家里，妈妈则在烧好吃的东西。晚饭以后，我们一起看电视节目，我们多高兴呀！

篇3、The day after yesterday I received 200yuan from my relatives as my pocket money. I was so happy but my father and mother said that I should give a half to them and the rest would be my pocket money in one year. “what!” I shouted.

前天我收到了200元作为零用钱来自于我的亲戚，我很高兴，但是爸爸妈妈说要上交一半而且另一半要做为我一年里的零用钱。“什么！”我大叫到。

篇4、On July 20, sunny Get up early today is very hot, hot feeling uncomfortable. Breakfast mother let me accompany her to go shopping and I didnt go. Because it is too hot, move feeling on the finger to sweat.The city library to read a book this afternoon. Because the library have air conditioning can blow, but also more than books at home too. Conveniently checked total solar eclipse was visible material.

7月20日 晴 今天非常炎热，一大早起床就感觉闷热的难受。吃完早饭妈妈让我陪同她去买菜我也没去。因为实在是太热了，感觉动一下手指头身上都在向外冒汗。下午到市图书馆看了一下午的书。因为图书馆有空调可以吹，而且书也比家里的多太多了。顺便查了一下日全食的资料。

篇5、On July 21, rainy days The weather of today is very comfortable, though the weather forecast said it is cloudy, but just a little bit rain, very cool.The weather forecast said it is cloudy, and friends about to play basketball, but unfortunately, in the rain can play. Afternoon after the rain stopped to help my mother to buy food supermarket. Generally bad mood today.

7月21日 雨天 今天天气很舒适，虽然天气预报说今天是阴天，可是下了点小雨，很凉爽。天气预报说今天是阴天，本来都和朋友们约好要去打篮球的，可是很遗憾，在下雨没法去玩。下午雨停了之后有去超市帮妈妈买菜。总的来说今天心情不算太坏。

篇6、July 22, cloudy Today I got up early in order to wait for the legend of the total solar eclipse was visible. Why is the legends? Because not seen.But from 7:30 a.m. start raining, I was depressed. Ok just online see the news experts say YinYuTian look more like shock, total solar eclipse was visible because originally clouds and thick, plus the dark sky will total solar eclipse was visible.

7月22日 阴天 我今天起的很早，为了等待那传说中的日全食。为什么是传说中呢？因为没亲眼见过嘛。不过从早上7：30就开始下雨，害我郁闷了半天。还好刚刚在网上看了新闻专家说阴雨天看日 全食会更震撼，好像是因为本来云层很厚，再加上日全食天空会更加的黑暗

篇8、Today I found time was a cruel thing.Whatever man is, time always goes on. It won’t stay to wait for somebody. Youcan’t use anything to exchange time. Time is also a fair thing. Although youhave a lot of money or you enjoy high reputation, time won’t leave them more.Today I found I hadn’t enough time. Although I have more than a-month holiday,but I found I had a lot of things to do. I had a lot of homework to do and I amessential to complete the homework as soon as I have time.

今天，我发现时间是一个残忍的东西。无论人们怎样，时间总在流逝。它不会留下来等待某人。你不能使用任何东西去交换时间。时间也是一个公平的东西。虽然你有很多钱，或者你享有很高的声誉，时间不会离开他们更多。今天，我发现我已经没有足够的时间。虽然我有超过一个月假期，但我发现我有很多事情要做。我有很多功课要做，我要，只要我有时间完成的功课。

篇9、I have rested for 10 days. In these days, Ifelt very bored. I didn’t know to do what. Although I had a lot of things todo, I felt uncomfortable. I was ill because of the hot weather. I was tired,sleepy and had no strength. My parents are worried about my health. in fact, itdidn’t matter. I was always in the room with air-conditioner and opened it in alow temperature. So when I went out, the high temperature disagreed to me.Atlast, I was ill.

我已经休息了10天。在这些日子里，我觉得很无聊。我不知道做什么。虽然我有很多事情要做，我觉得不舒服。我是因为炎热的天气而生病。我累了，困了，没有力气。我的父母担心我的健康。事实上，这并不重要。我总是在有空调的房间里，并在开了低温。所以，当我走了出去，高温不适宜我.在最后，我生病了。

篇10、It was sunny today. I was excited. I got upat a quarter to seven. I made a appointment to meet at nine o’clock. After Ihad my breakfast, I went to the Wanjia Market . It was hot outside. When Iarrived, my friends didn’t arrive. I waited for him infront of the KFC’s door.I haven’t seen them for a year. And in a year, we didn’t come into contact withothers frequently. About ten minutes left, my friends arrived one by one. Afterwe greeted,we went to play basketball in Liwan Gymnasium. The match last fortow hours.Oh!I fill very happy today!

这是阳光明媚的一天。我很兴奋。我起床时四十五分。我制定了一个九点钟见面的约会。吃完我的早餐后，我去了万家市场。外面很热。当我到达时，我的朋友并没有到。我在肯德基的大门外面等他。我有一年没有看到他们了。并且在一年内，我们没有与对方频繁接触。大约十分钟过去，我的朋友们一个接一个地打来。在我们打招呼后，我们去荔湾体育馆打篮球。这场比赛持续了两个小时。哦！我觉得我今天很开心！

篇11、I live very happily today! In the morning,it is very fine! Then I climb the mountain with family, the air on the mountainis very fresh, the flowers plants and trees on the mountain all seem extremelybeautiful. Coming back home in the evening, family and I sat and watched TVtogether, we are returning and eating the fruit while chatting, the wholefamily is happy and harmonious!

今天我过得非常开心！在早上，天气非常好！然后，我与家人爬上山，山上的空气非常清新，山上的花草树木都显得格外美丽。回来晚上回家，我与家人坐在一起看电视，我们还吃着水果，一边聊天，全家其乐融融！

篇12 、The weather of today is very comfortable, thoughthe weather forecast said it is cloudy, but just a little bit rain, very cool.Theweather forecast said it is cloudy, and friends are planning to play basketball,but unfortunately, in the rain we can not play it. In the afternoon, the rain stopped,I have to help my mother to buy food in the supermarket. Generally it was not bad mood today.

今天的天气很舒适，虽然天气预报说今天是阴天，但只是下了一点点的雨，非常凉爽.天气预报说今天是阴天，和朋友计划打篮球，但不幸的是，在雨中我们不能打球。在下午，雨停了，我要帮妈妈买菜的超市。大体说今天心情还不错。

篇13、It was the second day of our summerholiday. I felt good. I felt I am free. I had a lot of time to do things Ilike. My parents are in Zhongshan. So I live alone but I don’t feel lonely. ButI didn’t do something special. I stayed at home and watched TV. Oh! I wrote anEnglishdaily composition. It was my homework. Today, I have slept for 14hours.I thought I was very tired. It was time for dinner. I must go! I am veryhungry.

这是我们暑假的第二天。我感觉很好。我觉得我是自由的。我有很多时间做我喜欢的事情。我的父母都在中山。所以，我独自生活，但我并不感到孤独。但我没有做一些特别的东西。我住在家里看电视。哦！我写了英语日记作文。这是我的功课。今天，我睡了14小时。我认为我很疲惫。这是去吃晚饭的时间。我必须去！我非常饿。

banana always grows in the warm area.

its nice to eat, and it is good for our healths.

like us ,monkeys also like to eat bananas.

you can see this in the zoo.

im a student.i like eggs and coconut.because eggs is very good for me .its very healthy.the coconut is a very sweet .the haunans coconut is very great.i like them.

Dear Sir,

I would like to apply for the post of Works Manager, which was advertised in The Guardian of I2 October 2004. I feel that my qualifications and experience are ideally suited for the position.

I was born in 1968, and I went to school from 1973 to 1988. In 1987 I took the General Certificate of Education, and I got good grades in Mathematics, Physics and Chemistry. After leaving school, I attended the Orient Technical College, where I first studied Fiber Technology and Color Chemistry; later I studied other subjects related to textile manufacture, and in 1991 I obtained the Diploma in Textiles.

After completing my studies, I joined the Top Clothing Company where I worked until 1996. In that year I moved to Prior Productions, who was pleased with my work, and as a result, in 1998, I was promoted to Assistant Works Manager there.

I enjoy my work, and I am prepared to work hard. Moreover, I am sure that Prior Productions would give me an excellent reference. I therefore feel that my application deserves your serious consideration.

I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours faithfully,

Mary Ma

The Spring Festival is the most solemn and most grand festival of the year. The Spring Festival, the streets and lanes, men and women, young and old face with a smile, enjoy the happiness of the festival.

The new year is to eat dumplings, I helped my mother wash the coins, then Zhaomaohuahu also together to wrap dumplings. All kinds of dumplings are like a treasure, carrying peoples longing for a good life. Steaming dumplings on the table at the end, the father ate the first, I didnt think the first coin, and then my brother, mom, the most fortunate, of course, I am! Our family is happy and laughable, tasting delicious food and talking about the happiest things of the day. Of course, my brother and I are most happy, of course, is "congratulations on getting rich, the red envelopes are coming". This year I also learned an interesting event, listen to my grandma said, send kitchen is celebrated on the twenty-four day of the twelfth lunar month, the day God banished to the emperor to report the things of the earth. People want God to speak, so this day people will prepare such a tribute special worship god. This new years Eve and day was the old man back in the day, of course also cannot neglect. I help grandma for fruit and snacks, on the three minute reverent and respectful, pray our family happiness, health, happiness in the coming year.

We have been playing late at night, the sound of the outside, the sound of laughter in the house! I like the Chinese new year, because I can eat dumplings in the new year, see the Spring Festival evening, and the most important thing to enjoy the fireworks is to share happiness with you. Its a good feeling for the New Year!

英语作文篇一：This is me

Hello, everybody! My name is Michael. Im a happy boy. Because I laugh every day. I have a big family. There are three people in my family, my mother, my father and I.

My parents are managers and Im a student. I study in Grade Seven, Class Eleven, Dongzhou Middle School. Its a nice place. There are many students in my class. I have a good teacher, Miss Jiang.

My favorite lessons are English and Maths. I like dogs very much. I have only one dog. Its name is Doudou. Its a pretty dog.

Oh, I forgot to tell you something about my old friend. His name is Tad. His hobby is playing basketball. So he is taller and stronger than I. He has two big eyes and long hair. He is my best friend.

This is me, a happy boy!

英语作文篇二：This is me

Hello! I am Zhou Xiaolin. I’m 11 years old. I study in the No.1 Primary School. I am quiet, kind and smart. I don’t like sports. But like reading books very much. My favourite dood is fish. Because it’s tasty and yummy. My favourite fruit is apples and bananas. Because they are sweet. Do you like Friday? Oh I like it very much. Because the weekend is coming. Who’s my favourite teacher? She’s Miss Zhu. She’s a unversity student. She’s young, tall and active. So her class is so much fun. On Sundays, I often do homework and play computer games. Saturday is fun for me! How about Sunday? I often read books and watch TV. It’s sweet for me! I love weekends. On weekends I often do housework, too. I can clean my bedroom, empty the trash, set the table and do the dishes. But I can’t cook the meals. This is me! Can you cook the meals? Are you helpful at home,too? Tell me, please?

英语作文篇三：This is me

Hello，My neme is Any.I am a nice girl. Im 13 years old.

Im very helpful. at home ,I can sweep the floor、wash the clothes and cook dinner.

I have a so happy family . Ther are five people. my parents , My grandma , my sister , and me. My mom is a good teacher . My dad is asupper doctor.I love my family.

My birthdy in October.On my birthday .My friends are go to my home . We are piay together .and eat biethday caek together.

My favourite season is winter . Because I can play with snow with my friends.

This is me.do you like me?

It is neither genius nor extraordinary ability that gives us power to deal

with and overcome whatever hardship one is confronted with.2、As in the picture,

the athlete is running, with a determined spirit, towards the finishing line in

order to obtain the gold medal, considered as the symbol of success for any

sportsman.I most like the human is Liu Xiang 。 the famous athlete Liu Xiang

striding forward in the Olympics Games in Athens. Determination is universally

regarded asa highly praised quality. It is neither genius nor extraordinary

ability that gives us power to deal with and overcome whatever hardship one is

confronted with. It is this kind of spirit that enables us to endure the

difficult moments and attain our goals.

The determined spirit gives us light when we are in dark moments and

encourages when we are frustrated. With this quality, no enemy can overwhelm us,

and noobstacles can stand in our way. There are many examples of success being

achieved solely through the strong will of the spirit. As in the picture, the

athlete is running, with a determined spirit, towards the finishing line in

order to obtain the gold medal, considered as the symbol of success for any

sportsman. It is determination that leads to success. ?

It is not easy to cultivate this determined spirit. To do this, we must

establish a firm faith in our actions and be ready to devote ourselves to them.

We must boldly go through trials and hardships to train our will so as to get

rid of the weak points of our moral character. Around us, there are quite a few

people with this intense determination and spirit and set a good example for us

to follow.

Hi everybody, my name is XX ,whats your name?

Im 11 years old, how old are you?

My favourite sport is swimming, whats your favourite sport?

My favourite food is hamburgers,what food do you like?

There are three people in my family, which are : my father, my mother and me. How much people are there in you family and who are they?

I love my home ,Do you love your home also?

Thats all.

Best Regards,

thank you!

一位教师的最大成就是什么呢？我想就是看到学生的表现时的惊喜。今天我就惊喜了一下。

一年级的学生，自控能力差，课堂上常常管不住自己，课堂纪律需要老师不停的提醒。而今天我要上的数学课又是关于平面图形的拼一拼，需要学生用学具来拼图形，其实，在备这节课的时候我是十分忧愁，每次有这样需要学生动手操作的活动时，我就忧愁，不知道该怎样收场，每次都是“威逼利诱”的，“把学具收起来，不然下节课不让你们用学具了。”“谁再让我看见你偷偷玩学具，我就没收，用学具时你看着别人用。”各种方法，算是想尽了，但总是有几个胆大的，没有在我的“恐吓”下屈服，趁我不注意，以为我没有看见，在下面偷偷的玩学具，有时我的视线从他们身上略过，他们看到了，眼睛还时不时的朝上看看我，还以为我没有看见，其实，他们的眼神早就出卖了他们，被我“收拾”了一顿，是会好很多，但真不想在课堂上发脾气。可是，今天的课堂，同样是用学具，我明显的感觉到，这种现象好了许多，我让他们用完一次学具就把学具收起来放在桌角，然后坐端，今天我同样下达了这样的口令，发现好了许多，虽然仍有许多学生对学具恋恋不舍，但是我又提醒了一次，就收好了。这节课，学生在动手操作中的表现也是让我十分惊奇，看着他们拿着手中的学具拼成各种新的图形，脸上也满是自豪，时不时有学生在拼的时候叫我“老师，快看！我拼成了平行四边形。”边说还边用手指着。就连平时上课我提问十以内的口算都需要掰手指的良宇兄，都在我问他这时什么图形的时候很快的说出来。

其实早在这学期刚开学的第一天，我就觉得惊喜了。第一天上课，学生早早的就来到学校，坐在自己的位置上读书，因为前一天，在黑板上写上了早读任务。其实在不知不觉中，学生习惯了我的要求，他们适应了我，而我也适应了他们。有时候并不是他们犯了错，而是我的要求不具体，他们并不懂，不知道该怎样做。把规矩给他们慢慢的讲清楚了，他们慢慢就知道该怎么做了。

我是第一次当一年级当一年级的老师，他们也是第一次当一年级的学生，互相学习，共同进步。

I have a pet and it is my dog .In my eyes ,he is my closest friend in the world .He is loyal and cute.When I am alone,he can play with me.When I feel sad ,he always touches my foot with his claws.

Mostly after that ,I always feel better and more happy .It is all because of he.So,I love my dog and we are best friends .

Monday, August 2nd, Sunny

It was sunny and hot today. I got up early at half past six. I read English and then had breakfast. I helped my mother washed the dishes. Then I did my homework and cleaned my room. I went shopping with my mother in the afternoon. Then I played table tennis with my friends. In the evening I watched TV and read a book. I really had a busy and interesting day.

Music is part of our life, nearly everybody will listen to the music, no

matter what nation they are from. Music is divided into many types, such as the

blues, the country music, the rock and roll. Once blues belonged to the black

people, but as time went by, music is accepted by all classes. People always

share the hottest songs together, just like they can communicate. Once in the

foreign country, I had dinner in a restaurant, where there had the singers.

People enjoyed the music when they were eating. At this moment, it was music

that brought people together, and they share the same emotion.

I had a lovely little white rabbit, it was long with a pair of long ears, red eyes like two rubies, a pink little nose, smooth very, under the nose there is a three mouth, mouth In the long two white teeth, the body of the hair like a large cashmere, his front legs are relatively short retreat relatively long. There is a short tail behind the ass, very beautiful!

Every morning, I am prepared to ask the mysterious guests breakfast, who do you guess I told you that is the lovely little rabbit, I took out his favorite carrots and leaves, it went to her door to the leaves Put it in the bowl, and said loudly: "Come on, come out to eat." Soon it will come out, I want to give it a joke, I picked up the leaves, it desperately pull, who knows me Let go, just hear "when" it fell a four feet overturned, funny I laughed, it relish to eat up.

I like this cute little white rabbit.

When the founder of Facebook, Mark Zuckerbergs daughter was born, he

announced a general decision and surprised the world. Mark told media that he

would donate 99 percent of his fortune to the charity organizations. Some people

wonder why he did not save the heritage for his offspring. In fact, in western

countries, for some rich people, they dont trend to leave much fortune for

their kids, instead, they use the money to educate their children and cultivate

them to be the wise persons. The rich people leave the invisible fortune, which

is their fame. Their children can have more chances to do their business or

receive better education with their family names. The wise rich men know the

best way to educate their offspring. They teach skills and the way of thinking,

which values everything.

写作是运用语言文字进行表达和交流的重要方式，是认识世界、认识自我、进行创造性表述的过程。写作能力是语文素养的综合体现。写作教学应贴近学生实际，让学生易于动笔，乐于表达，应引导学生关注现实，热爱生活，表达真情实感。”大多学生作文时的所表现出的共性是“眼看着事物的形象，笔下却形容不出来。”所以在实际教学中，我们必须做到：

一、要浅化习作入门眼前闪烁

对于语文教师，特别是教启蒙作文的老师来说，切忌一开始就和学生讲述许多作文的理论、技法，这样会让学生感到枯燥而有压力，觉得自己根本写不出那样的作文而厌恶作文，丧失对作文的兴趣。习作入门课上，老师可以这样告诉学生：作文就是写你看到的、听到的、想到的；写你的快乐、你的忧愁；写一盆花、一棵草、一只小蚂蚁；写和同学做的小游戏；写考试得到100分；写你犯的错误??。必要的时候，教师可以现场示范，以自己的实际写作过程引导学生动笔，将自己的的身边时说出来。至于作文是什么，怎样才能写好作文，这些都需学生在长期的作文实践中慢慢去理解、体会。

二、练写观察日记，积累素材

学会观察事物，提高写作能力，从何入门呢？练写“观察日记”就是一种行之有效的方法，也是作文教学重要组成部分和不可缺少的一个重要环节。我们少年儿童热情敏感，充满活力，而丰富多彩的现实生活中，我们每天都能观察到许许多多的东西，如自然景物的状态，气候的千变万化，人物的音容笑貌，社会的各种现象等，而光观察不记录，那么有多少新鲜印象，有趣的事物、生动感人的场面难免会忘记，即便日后能回忆，也是朦胧的。所以，在教导学生养成观察习惯的同时，还要养成练写观察日记的好习惯。正如鲁迅先生所说：“必须如蜜蜂一样，采过许多花，这样才能酿出蜜来。”要提高学生的写作能力，就要提倡“观察教学，”特别是语文教师，在平时，要有意识引导学生去观察.在课堂上要经常指导学生练笔,使每个学生都能练出一双锐利的眼睛，学会观察事物，提高观察能力，养成观察事物的良好习惯。从而使生活周围的人和物烂熟于心，出口成章。

三、多做游戏，在玩中写，培养写作兴趣。

爱玩是孩子们的天性，用游戏的方法教孩子们写作十分有效，可以激发他们的想象力，提高兴趣，调动积极性和主动性，启发他们的创造性思维。将游戏融入到作文训练中，教学生玩中写作，写中再现玩趣，使作文成为最轻松平常的事。这样，学生有话可写，有情可抒，有感可发，再也不觉得作文是一件痛苦的事。

四、要引导学生积累

“读书破万卷，下笔如有神”、“不积跬步，无以致千里”，只有量的积累才有可能导致质的提升。没有大量的语言积累，学生是无法写好作文的。而小学生大多缺乏自觉性，只有不断的鼓励和督促，才能帮助他们积累语言，提高语言的储备量。可以布置学生每天摘抄好词好句，定期检查；可以课外向学生推荐一些名言、古诗词、儿童诗歌，要求他们熟读成诵，并学习运用；可以开展读书交流会、朗诵比赛、文学知识竞赛、成语接龙等有趣有益的活动。除了让学生多进行课外阅读积累词句之外，还应引导他们掌握更多的积累方法。比如从互联网上查阅资料，做实验，咨询别人等等。这样经过长期的积累和内化，学生写作的语言资料库不断丰富完善了，写作时遇到的障碍就会大大减少，作文兴趣也就更高了。

五、要写好作文批语

学生的作文是他们辛勤劳动的成果，因而强烈地期待得到老师的客观、公正、实事求是的评价——或热情地赞扬、鼓励，或诚心地帮助、指点。老师在作文批语中表现出的态度、情感、准确性直接影响学生的写作情绪和兴趣因此，老师对学生的作文要用赞赏的眼光去批改，并通过作文批语使学生得到知识上的满足，学习上的动力，心理上的平衡。

总而言之，作文教学中教师要注重培养学生的写作兴趣，激发学生爱作文的情感，同时，要培养学生勤于动笔的习惯，在生活中多积累一些素材，这样，学生就不会再视写作为难事，无话说可以变成有话说，不会写可以变成会写，用词干巴可以变成行文流畅，千篇一律可以变成百花齐放

it has been 2 days since i didnt come here and write my diary.today is the totally holiday for the first time. i got so much fun.i went to meet a friend who i didnt know before.she is my colleges girlfriend in the future.hehe.but unfortunately, when we get there,she wasnt there.we got a little depress .

im recieved a lot of messages from many friends unkonwn.here,im wanna say thanks to all of you and your supporting.because i am lazy, so sometimes i cant find the right time to read your diarys,and leave some message to show my support,hope you will not think me slefish.thats all today.thanks to all of you.

内容摘要：在党中央推进新农村建设时期，我们教育工作者，要与时俱进，实事求是，搞好学生的教育工作，尤其是小学生的写作水平尤为重要。我们要在作文教学中，尽力让学生从身边之事写起，写出自己熟悉的人和事，使学生的作文在求真务实上，表达出真情实感，这样，学生的作文就会越写越灵活，并逐渐达到新课标的要求，进而达到提高学生写作水平。

叶圣陶先生说过，“生活如泉源，文章如溪水，泉源丰富而不枯竭，溪水自然活泼地流个不歇。”为此，在新课改与时代要求下，为了使学生的作文得到新的突破，在作文教学中，尽力让学生从身边之事写起，写出自己熟悉的人和事，使学生的作文在求真务实上，表达出真情实感，这样，学生的作文就会越写越灵活，并逐渐达到新课标的要求，进而达到提高学生写作水平。我看主要从写法和情感方面来考虑：

一、从“我”写起，激发学生的兴趣；撒播爱心，呵护创新的萌芽

“我”是学生自己最熟悉不过的了，其一举一动，一言一行，在一定的时间之内，应该非常清楚。因此刚进入习作阶段，就应该从“我”写起，写出自己亲身经历的事，写出自己的真实感受来。首先，写“我”所做。学生每天所做的事还是很多的，比如在学校做的事：学习，劳动，活动；在家里做的事：家务活，玩耍；在社区、路上，街道、野外等地做的事……有意义的事。其次，写“我”所见。“做”是自已的亲身参与，而“见”则是用眼观察到的事物及活动。每天，学生除自己做的事外，还会看见更多的事，比如，有人物的活动，有动物的活动，有景物的变化，有事物的发展……。再次，写“我”所想。人是有思维的动物，而且可以说，其思维无时不有。就学生来说，每天不知要想多少的事，虽然有些事很简单，很平常，也有的事很无聊，但总会有些事是有意义，有价值的。这样的话，学生觉得不难，写作文很快乐，很高兴，那我们就可以大大地让学生发挥他们的想象力。这样，学生的信心有了，对作文有兴趣了。让他们自己来写作文，

我认为要大力给每个学生的每篇作文“唱”赞歌。所以在每篇习作里，我千方百计找学生的闪光点，诚恳地表示肯定、赞扬。哪有学生不为自己创造出来的闪亮闪光的东西所感动的？连我也常常被自己找到作文中的闪光点而感动，比如在一篇描写小草的习作中，也许城里孩子大多会写一些赞美小草如何如何美的作文，而我的一个学生却是这样写的：“那些可恨的小草，无时无刻地插在爸爸的菜田中，那纵横交错的根爬满了爸爸的双手。”这样的语句，也只有经历了劳作的山里孩子才有的。

二、写更多的“他”，培养学生的信心；激荡思维，点燃创新的火花

学生是生活在群体中的，“我”之外，还有更多的“他”。在作文教学中，把学生的习作思路由“我”再引向“他”，那么，其可写的内容也就丰富了许多。其实，只要我们引导学生认真观察，人们都常常有自己喜欢的东西，比如，有的人总是整天都抱着书本，喜欢读书；有的人爱好穿着打扮，喜欢服装；有的人经常玩赏某个东西……而这些“物”都与“他”有着非常特殊的关系，只要我们爱人之所爱，想人之所想，那么，要写出“他”，也就得心应手了。

孩子的思维是纯朴简单的，而想象又是丰富多彩的，如一个月亮可以想象成圆盆、小船，同样也可以想象成香蕉、气球┈┈，记得在我教五年级时，我们班举行一次别开生面的野餐活动，同学都玩得挺高兴，回来后，我就要求学生写一篇作文，作文题目为《野餐》。在指导时，我也强调写自己感受最深的地方，要写真情实感。我想有这么好的材料，肯定能写出精彩的文章。可是，结果出乎我的意料，班上大部分同学都是写时间、地点、人物、事件，接着描写野餐的经过，最后高高兴兴回来。作文显得很平坦，没有一点感人之处。经过一夜的沉思，我终于找到了问题的结症，问题好象是自己在教学中指导不当，使学生的思维没有放开想象，所以我又采取别的指导方法。第二天，我对作文进行了讲评，再次指导学生写这次野餐活动，我采用拟题作文，一上课，我就激发学生介绍这次活动中感触最深的事。同学非常活跃，都急着想说自己感人的事，有的说“搭灶”，有的说“烧面条的方法”，有的说“我终于吃到自己亲手做的饭”┈┈我就趁热打铁，又耍出一招，你们用什么题目好呢？这样同学们又激动地说起来，取“高兴”、取“搭灶”、取“丰盛的午餐”、“老师笑了”┈┈。想不到，学生竞一连说了十几个题目，而且都说出自己取这个题目的理由。这次作文同学们写的特别顺，不但课堂气氛轻松，而且写的文章也是千姿百态，富有感染力，通过这两次作文的对比，使我感触很深：这样，由“命题作文”改为“拟题作文”，一字之差，却体现了不同的教学方法，让学生自己“拟题作文”较好地体现了学生主体的教学，让学生“写自己感受最深的事”，学生就会有自己的话可写，有自己有内容可写，作文就会生动活泼、千姿百态。在作文指导中，我们教师应该设计提问方法和引导，营造一个比较宽松的课堂作文氛围，提高学生的学习兴趣，调动学生的主动性，积极性，这样使学生在学习上的创新精神和实践能力得到发展，这也是我们当今教育的总趋势。

三、向“周围”发展，提升学生的水平，慎下禁令，忌以死板之“箍圈”框孩子的思维

学生的习作经过以上两方面的反复训练后，其作文基本功已经较强了，这时候，再向纵深发展，写周围更多的内容，那么，学生的习作水平就能得到进一步加强。第一、写周围的事物。在学生生活的周围，往往有许多的事物在不断地发展变化，引导学生平时观察好这些事物，抓住其发展的规律特征，然后再写成作文。比如，社会的发展，人们生活的变化，动植物的生长等等。第二、写周围的环境。我们熟悉的环境有：学校、家庭、社区……只要用心观察，就会有写之不尽的作文内容，更能培养我们热爱环境，保护环境的好品质。第三、写周围的景色。无论是白天晚上，还是春夏秋冬，也不管是刮风下雨，还是远山近水，都有不同的景色，也在不断地变化。写景色，关键要抓住其变化特点，才能栩栩如生，有血有肉。

总之，《语文课程标准》指出：“作文教学应做到，让学生易于动笔，乐于表达，而且要有创意地表达。”对于这一点，每位语文老师都在努力地尝试着。而作为农村小学的语文教师，要做到这一点，确实有一定的难度。因为农村小孩生活范围小，见识少，语言表达能力不强，由于众多因素的原因，他们写作时常觉得困难重重,作文教学是语文教师重要的教学内容之一，也是学生学好语文的关键之一。教无定法，各师专家各有技法，我一个普通的农村教师正在农村作文教学这块净土上不断地寻求，探索，以开辟出一片新天地，努力实现新的突破！让我的学生在欢乐中写作文，在写快乐作文中健康成长！

Today is sunday may 25 20xx.i go to the zoo whit my friends.the weather is sunny and cool!look!the elephants are drinking water.the birds are flying,the tiger is walking with lion.look at the river !

the fish are swimming in the water . the mokeys are swinging .oh no!the weather is terrible.it’s rainy. we are go home watch tv and play the game!i very not happy!