小学英语的教学反思范文【汇集20篇】

My family lives in Taiwan, but my father doesnt. He lives in China. My family name is Jian. I have one brother and one sister. My name is Jeff. My brothers name is Art. My sisters name is Sophia. My fathers name is Jian Zong-he and my mothers name is Jenny. I like to watch TV and play PC games. My brother likes them, too. My father and my mother both like to watch TV. My brother and I are both junior high school students. My father is a businessman. My mother is a businesswoman. I like my family very much.

老实说，这次期末考试我考得确实不好，尤其是语文，竟与上次期中考试的成绩一模一样，没有半点进步。这到底是为什么呢？

首先，我觉得是因为粗心，比如把“已经”的“已”写成“自己”的“己”；作文里通篇的错字……那么多的0·5分离我而去，怎能不让我心疼？可是我却没有办法， 只能在心里默默地说：“下次一定要细心，一定要细心啊！”

老师说过，我们最大的问题就是不爱审题。许多同学都在审题方面上丢了分，我也是其中一员。《那片绿绿的爬山虎》里有一句话：“刚进里院，一墙绿葱葱的爬山虎扑入眼帘，夏日的燥热仿佛一下子减去了许多。”阅读题里有一道题就问“一墙的爬山虎使肖复兴感到……”我想都没想地填到：凉爽，便放心地去做其它题了。但试卷发下来，这道题却是错的，我百思不得奇解，还是等到老师讲了以后，才知道应该写舒服。唉！那就更不用说了，明明是写自己玩的，我却把玩的规则写了一大堆，罗罗嗦嗦，到头来整整扣了三分, 好后悔啊!

每次考试后我都是后悔再后悔，可是世上没有后悔药，所以我以后要细心、要审题，那样才能取得好成绩。

Today morning, my mother took me to the bird market to buy a lively and lovely little rabbit back.

I gave this little rabbit a name called white. Because it is snow white, without a little miscellaneous color, looks like a group of white cotton. White eyes red like two sparkling rubies, a small mouth lip in half, revealing two rows of white teeth. When you eat something will be issued creak sound.

Little rabbits legs are short before and after the long, running away from the particularly fast Its short tail like a small pompon. Can be funny!

I really like the white rabbits lively and lovely, because it brought me endless fun.

人教版小学六年级语文上册第五组的主题是初识鲁迅。这组的口语交际是让学生讲述留在心里的印象。体现三个层次：谁给你的印象深，当时的情景和留给印象，后来发生的事以及对他印象的变化。习作要求用一两件事介绍自己的小伙伴，要求通过描写人物的动作、神态、心理活动来写人。不仅要把人物写活，而且能够把事情写清楚，写具体，写得打动人心。

我根据这一要求，设置“抓逃手指”游戏，让学生在游戏中，既要写出自己的体验（动作、心理活动），又要观察同伴的动作、表情等。

今天作文课上，一上课就告诉大家一起做个游戏，获得冠军的同学还有一份奖励。板书课题后，让学生学习了游戏规则，为了让学生领会的更深，我让四名学生做了示范。

游戏正式开始，向学生强调这个游戏考察的是注意力。听老师读故事，听到有关“3”的字音时，快速用手去抓身边同学的右手食指，同时将自己的右手食指从另一个同学的左手掌心逃脱出来。

在玩游戏之前，我提醒他们去观察同学们的表情、动作、语言并记住自己的想法。一切就绪，我开始讲故事。故事不长，为了达到突然的效果，我故意说“是大山，不是大三”结果有许多同学都愣在那里，不知所措。有时在说数时，说到1，2，我故意说数1不说3，很多自作聪明的学生觉得肯定是“3”，立刻伸手去抓别人，结果答案是“1”但是我立马用很快的速度读出“3”马上刚刚还在幸灾乐祸的学生由于注意力不集中淘汰了。有的学生主动去抓别人的手指，但是自己的手指不幸被别人抓住，在课堂上出现了“螳螂捕蝉黄雀在后”的精彩一幕。这些都成了学生写作时一个很好的素材。这个游戏，我在自己班里做时，学生很兴奋，有时，我都有点控制不住课堂，学生都在兴奋地谈论自己刚才地感受，也不去听老师讲故事。这一次学生表现的很好，没有出现我担心的场面。

游戏结束后，我和同学们一起回忆，谈感受。这一环节共5分钟，浪费了2分钟，没有调动起学生的积极说的兴趣。

“游戏马上开始了，你是什么心情？心里在想些什么？”

“你是哪一回合被淘汰的，为什么淘汰？现在什么心情？”

“刚刚谁的表现让你最难忘？”

“作为最后的胜利者，你现在什么感受？

最后让学生趁热打铁，根据这次游戏动手写习作。同学们不仅写作热情很高，还写出了看到的、听到的、想到的，并结合自己的实际情况进行对比。

这次习作，字数都很多。最少的396字1人，442字1人，500-600字的11人；600-700字的18人；700-800字的7人，800字以上的2人。学生书写认真，习作有条理，无论是游戏开始前的，还是游戏被淘汰后的，还是游戏获胜后，都有自己的心理活动描写。写游戏感受的有32人（共40人）有的学生写到：这次游戏，让我悟到获胜的关键所在就是身体的协调性和大脑的反应能力。还有的学生说：“这全游戏的关键是练习你的反应力、敏捷力、听力这三点。没有这三点。你很难取得冠军。”这足之处是，只有很少部分学生能把动作写具体，还用上了比喻句。

有很多学生的动作描写不具体，怎么抓，怎么逃，没有写出来。我感受到：小学生写不具体，不仅是一次活动体验不足，更重要的是缺少有意观察，刻意观察。有的同学只注重了表面现象，没有仔细地观察活动中的一行一动，这就缺少了真情实感。游戏虽然能激发他们想要表达的欲望，让他们为兴趣而写，但观察不细致，就不可能写出充满童真色彩的习作。

一、 复习导入

1、 板书课题，今天我们继续学习24课，齐读课题

2、 通过上节课的学习，你了解了王冕的哪些事情？

（相机板书：孝敬母亲、勤奋读书、刻苦学画）

3、这节课让我们再次走进课文，走进人物的内心世界，细细品读文字，感受人物的独特魅力

二、 品读课文

（一）自学课文，要求：

请大家快速的浏览课文，用“——”划出王冕孝敬母亲的句子，用“ ”划出他勤奋读书的句子，用“ ”划出他刻苦学画的句子，可以在感受深的地方圈圈划划，也可以写写批注

（二）全班交流

1、你找到哪些句子描写了王冕孝敬母亲，教师相机指导朗读、感悟

（1）王冕说：“娘，我在学堂里也闷得慌，不如帮人家放牛，心里倒快活些。这样可以贴补些家用，还能带几本书去读呢。”（出示）

A、你读的听起来很轻松，读好哪几个词就能读出这份轻松（闷得慌、快活些）

B、再请一位同学大声的，轻松的读读，其他同学边听边思考：王冕是真的不想去学堂读书了吗？

C、交流要点：安慰母亲，体谅母亲，不想让母亲为难、伤心、难过

师：是呀，这份孝顺正是出于对母亲的爱呀！

D、（出示母亲的一段话）母亲是怎么说的，谁来读读，其他同学边听边体会母亲当时是什么心情？

交流要点：万般无奈，不忍心，有心却无能为力

从哪些词语读懂的？（不是、只靠、实在、只好）抓住这些词通过朗读表现母亲的心情

请2位同学分角色读一读，读出人物不同的心情

师：看，刻画人物语言描写是最直白的表达方式

（2）王冕一一答应，母亲含着眼泪回去了。（出示）

A、 他是怎么答应母亲的，可以联系上文用自己的话说说

要点：母亲放心吧，一定听你的话，处处小心，每天早出晚归，自己照顾好自己，不用为我担心

B、（理理衣服、含着眼泪）从这两个词中你读出了母亲的什么心情？

要点：对孩子的关怀和疼爱，伤心、难过、不忍心、无可奈何

这种伤心和不忍正是出于对孩子的爱呀！

把母亲的这种心情通过朗读表现出来

师：是呀，刻画人物还可以通过人物的动作和神态描写，展现人物的内心世界

（3）从此，王冕白天……陪伴母亲。

即使再累也要陪母亲，多孝顺呀！

（4）遇上秦家煮些……回家孝敬母亲。

是呀，好吃的都留给母亲，多懂事呀！把“总舍不得”读的慢点、

重点就能读好（读）

（5）王冕得了钱，就买些好东西孝敬母亲。

心中总是挂念着母亲，真是体贴呀！

（6）春光明媚的时候……母亲心里十分欢喜。

对，为母亲解闷散心，真是孝顺呀！

过渡：王冕用自己的实际行动表达了对母亲的爱，的确是孝敬母亲呀！

2、同时，他读书也很勤奋，交流你找到的句子

（1）每天给的点心钱……买几本旧书。

从哪里体会到他勤奋的？（也舍不得）

是呀，宁愿饿肚子也要买书读，多爱学习呀！

大家请注意“旧书“，一个旧字你读懂了什么？

要点：旧书便宜，可以省下一些钱贴补家用——多懂事，多孝顺！

旧书便宜，可以多买几本读——多读书，好学呀！

抓住这两个词读出王冕的勤奋和孝顺！（读）

（2）白天牛吃饱了……柳树阴下看书。

一有空就看书，真是勤学呀！

（3）他每天画些画，读读古人的诗文。

长大后还是每天读，多勤奋呀！有句话说的好：活到老，学到老呀！

（4）不知不觉三四年过去了，王冕读了不少书，也明白了许多道理。

对，书是最好的老师，从中能学到很多道理！几年中他读的书可真多呀！（读）

3、过渡：王冕不仅孝敬母亲，他还勤奋读书，多么好学呀！他学画更

是刻苦，交流你找到的句子

（1）自此以后……学着画荷花。

一个“攒“你读懂了什么？（不容易，懂事）

是呀，再难也要学，多好学呀！（读）

（2）起初画的不好……没有一处不象真的。

（起初、三个月、大有长进）读读这几个词语，你读懂了什么？

（时间短，进步大）

有怎样的进步？用哪些词语形容他画的荷花？（栩栩如生、形象逼真、惟妙惟肖、活灵活现）

同学们，从不会画到大有长进，他靠的是什么？（坚强的毅力，坚忍不拔的意志，坚持不懈，勤学苦练，勇往直前，毫不气馁、锲而不舍的精神，只要功夫深，铁杵磨成针）

对呀，这些是通向成功的铺路石，看图，他还靠的是什么？

（细致的观察，耐心的练习，对荷花的喜爱）

抓住这些词，读出他学画的刻苦！

是呀，他眼中有荷花，心中有荷花，才能把荷花的精神、形态、颜色画的如此传神！他的刻苦勤奋终于使他成为一位画荷高手，他的作品也受到人们的青睐。

（3）过渡：同学们，他怎么会从放牛娃成为一个画家呢？其实这是出于一次偶然的机会

A、 请大家闭上眼睛静静地听，边听边想象，思考：这一段写的是什么？给你最大的感受是什么？师配乐范读

B、 交流：雨后景色，很美

C、 美在哪呢？请大家各自轻声读读，选择你觉得最美的地方好好的读一读，比比谁读的最美

D、 比赛读，边体会（指导朗读的方法）

（欣赏荷花图）

（瞧，花苞上雨水点点，在阳光的照耀下，伸展着婀娜的身姿，抖开了美丽的霓装，如含笑的少女，如顽皮的孩童，如穿着粉装的仙子，冰清玉洁，妩媚娇艳，真是“花中君子来哪方，亭亭玉立展娇容”

再看，那碧绿的大圆盘上，颗颗水珠晶莹透亮，水晶似的闪动着灵气，如颗颗珍珠，光彩夺目，真是“暖日和风香不尽，伸展枝叶碧无穷”呀）

[小学六年级作文语文少年王冕教学设计

Today is sunday may 25 20xx.i go to the zoo whit my friends.the weather is sunny and cool!look!the elephants are drinking water.the birds are flying,the tiger is walking with lion.look at the river !

the fish are swimming in the water . the mokeys are swinging .oh no!the weather is terrible.it’s rainy. we are go home watch tv and play the game!i very not happy!

我的好朋友英语作文(一)

One of my friend is a beautiful and clever girl whoes name is Li Hua.

with rosy cheeks,she has a pair of bright eyes,which shine below her

arch eyebrows. within her small mouth there are two lines of white teeth.

Her hair is straight and long. hanging down to her shoulders. she is healthy and attractive.

she is loved by her classmates.

我的好朋友英语作文(二)

Blair is my classmate as well as my best friend. We have already known each other for ten years. We live in the same block so that we always go to school together. She has long hair, big eyes and sweet smile, which makes her popular in my class. Blair works hard and she is a good student in the eyes of teachers. Besides, she is clever and kindhearted. When others turn to her for help, she always tries her best to help. I feel proud to have such a good friend.

My mother and I are cattle, 33 years old, she looks fat, medium build, laugh when the left side of the face always have a dimple.

May be a cows sake, my mother is working very seriously. As a result of the relationship between the work, my mother often need to take the bus to go out, sometimes to very far away, you must transfer to several buses to, and back also late. I remember one time, my mother participated in the review of a company in Zichuan, home has been 10 oclock at night, but my mother did not care to eat dinner yet. Mothers work is very hard.

Mother not only love their work, but also very concerned about my study. Since childhood, my mother often tell me stories, teach me to read words. Now, as long as there is time, my mother gave me check the work, accompany me to listen to English, to help me prepare homework. Not long ago, my mother in order to improve my writing level, but also specifically for me to write an essay tutorial. Mother also often buy books for me, there are animals, there are literary masterpieces ... ...

I am so happy, because I have a hard-working kind, care for me, love my good mother.

一次新的体验 A new experience

Yesterday I did commonweal in library to earn my public service

scores(which is similar to the compulsory credits).I arrived library at 8’clock

in the morning,a librarian let me to wipe the mirror in every toilet from one to

six floor.Then I started to wipe the mirrors.It was been two hours after I

finished all work.I was very tired,but looking at the shiny and clean mirrors I

had wiped, I felt very happy.To be honest,I had never done the things like it at

home,so it was a new experience to me,and it make me realize the hard work of my

parent.

昨天，我在图书馆做公益去获取公益实数(类似于学分)。我早上8点到达图书馆，一个图书馆管理员让我去擦一楼到六楼的厕所里的镜子。然后

就开始擦镜子了。等我完成了所有的工作，已经过去两个小时了。我非常地累，但是看着被我擦得干净闪亮的镜子，我感到很开心。说实话，我在家里从来没有做过像这样的事情，所以，这对我来说是一次新的体验，这也让我体会到了父母的艰辛。

说明文即是客观地说明事物、阐明事理的一种文体。对这种类型的文章，大部分学生学起来觉得枯燥乏味，没有兴趣，但说明文历来又是要求中学生必须掌握的一种文体。因此，在教学时无疑成为了一个难点。在平时的课堂教学过程中，我极力寻找一些有效的方法引导学生学习这类文章。现将针对说明文的教学反思总结如下：

一、兴趣培养法

人们常说：“兴趣是最好的老师，是开启成功大门的最为有效的一把钥匙。”因此，在平时的课堂教学活动中，我十分注重对学生学习兴趣的培养。比如，在教授八年级上册的《核舟记》（这篇文章比三四单元的说明文先讲授）时，我便提前一个星期找了两位画画画得比较好的同学和平时比较爱动手制作的同学，提前让他们明确了文章的说明对象，并梳理了文章的大意，要求其在周六时画一幅《苏轼泛赤壁》的图画，并制作一个“核舟”的模型。这样，在教授课文时，这幅图画和核舟模型对整个课堂教学起到了不可低估的作用。它不仅让学生快速地了解了核舟的特征，而且大部分学生都能够当堂背诵课文，对说明文的相关知识也有了一定程度的了解，对以后学习说明文作了很好的铺垫。

二、理清文章的写作思路与说明文的要点

在阅读一篇说明文时，教师可先引导学生朗读文章的标题，从标题中猜想文章的写作思路、说明对象、说明顺序及说明方法等，对说明对象有了初步的感知后，再细读文章，明确作者的写作思路、说明对象、说明顺序、说明方法等。然后将自己猜想的与细读后的加以分析，这样，学生对说明文的基本要点易于进行梳理与分析了。比如，在学习《故宫博物院》时，我先让学生思考怎样介绍我们的教室，比如可以采用哪些说明顺序与说明方法，可以抓住哪些特征进行介绍等。在学生对教室的介绍有了初步感知后，再提出一些简单的问题让学生对“故宫”有总体的了解，这样，学生在学起枯燥的说明文时，也会觉得很有兴趣。

三、知识与技能结合法

学生在对说明文有了一定的学习兴趣后，在课堂教学中，我也十分注重培养学生对说明文知识进行理解与巩固。遇到一个知识点时，教师适当进行阐释，然后再找一些不同层次的学生进行分析，教师便可了解学生对说明文的掌握情况，以便采取相应的策略对学生还未充分掌握的知识加以复习巩固。如在讲到说明文用词的准确性时，我采取让学生反复朗读、然后再把那些用得准确的词删掉（换掉），重新组织成文，让学生与原文进行比较的方法体会说明文语言的准确性，这样，学生对说明文用词的准确性体会就深得多了。

此外，在教授说明文时，也存在一些问题：

首先，我感觉我有些过于强调教师的中心作用。由于学生是第一次系统地接触说明文，怕学生不能理解，所以，在课堂上，每当提问问题学生无动于衷时，我便代替了学生，枯燥地给学生讲解知识点。

其次，在教学过程中，我还有些过高估计学生的能力，对每篇文章都满堂灌。既想把说明文的知识点全部传授给学生，又想让学生准确全面的掌握说明文的知识，能够自主地对一篇说明文进行分析，由于对学生要求较高，在一定程度上打消了学生的积极性。

在华附这段时间里，可以说时时感受到华附教学的有序性和系统性，尤其是作文教学更是如此。反观我们自己的作文教学，可以说问题多多，主要是一下几个方面：

不足之一：作文教学缺乏目的性

在平时的作文训练中，大多带有明显的随意性。先从作文题目的拟定说起，大多情况下，作文题目的拟定比较随意和盲目——要写作文了，才去找题目。而题目又往往从网上搜索或从往年做过的题目找，找到什么就写什么。这样的作文命题方式就造成了作文教学的盲目性。学校规定每两周要做一次作文，所以往往每周连堂的语文课就用来写作文，这样，只满足于作文的次数，根本不去管学生的作文水平提高多少或是会造成什么样的后果等等。一句话，作文教学没有方向性，没有设定明确又科学的目标。

不足之二：作文教学缺乏系统性

与作文教学的随意性相伴而生的，是作文教学缺乏有序性和系统性。大多教师没有作文教学计划，作文教学无序化无系统性。这样，上作文课也没有具体的教案，只是布置一篇作文让学生去写，然后批改然后讲评，至于效果如何则另当别论。试想一想，作文教学没有明确的目的和明确的难点、重点，不是循序渐进，而是随心所欲，这样进行作文教学只能使学生成为完成作文任务的机器，很难明白自己作文的长处与缺点，很难有针对性地进行作文能力训练使自己的写作能力有所提高从而激起自己写作的动力。

Today is my busy day.Let me tell you the plan of me .In the morning,I must  get up very eariy to  makes breakfast for my family . They have  breakfast at about 7:00.  Then will I play badminton outside with my goodfriend at 8:00.In the noon,I should back home and make lunch for   them .After having lunch ,I will wash the dish.Then I will take part in  a gathering of friends after 2:00.At 7:00pm,I should make supper.At night,I  should cieal the room and do some homework.I think I will  be  tired.what a busy day of me !

The Spring Festival is the most solemn and most grand festival of the year. The Spring Festival, the streets and lanes, men and women, young and old face with a smile, enjoy the happiness of the festival.

The new year is to eat dumplings, I helped my mother wash the coins, then Zhaomaohuahu also together to wrap dumplings. All kinds of dumplings are like a treasure, carrying peoples longing for a good life. Steaming dumplings on the table at the end, the father ate the first, I didnt think the first coin, and then my brother, mom, the most fortunate, of course, I am! Our family is happy and laughable, tasting delicious food and talking about the happiest things of the day. Of course, my brother and I are most happy, of course, is "congratulations on getting rich, the red envelopes are coming". This year I also learned an interesting event, listen to my grandma said, send kitchen is celebrated on the twenty-four day of the twelfth lunar month, the day God banished to the emperor to report the things of the earth. People want God to speak, so this day people will prepare such a tribute special worship god. This new years Eve and day was the old man back in the day, of course also cannot neglect. I help grandma for fruit and snacks, on the three minute reverent and respectful, pray our family happiness, health, happiness in the coming year.

We have been playing late at night, the sound of the outside, the sound of laughter in the house! I like the Chinese new year, because I can eat dumplings in the new year, see the Spring Festival evening, and the most important thing to enjoy the fireworks is to share happiness with you. Its a good feeling for the New Year!

In China, the number of college students increases every year, as more and

more students get the college education, college students are under great

pressure. We hear from the news that a lot of students can’t find jobs after

graduation, then the next year, the other students gets graduating, the two

years’ students compete for the jobs! I just can’t imagine such situation. The

pressure from college students is getting greater, they should relieve it now

and then, because too much pressure will bring bad effect, some may distort

their minds, once their emotion can’t relieve in time, some tragical things may

happen. It is said that some students suicide themselves because they have much

pressure. Everybody will have pressure, but we must know that pressure brings

motivation, at the same time, it also brings burden, we have to balance it. When

we deal with it well, we can live a better life.

national day is coming,and we can have a seven-day.my family are going to hainan.its a good seaside city.we are staying there for a week. we are going to the beach and going swimming in the sea.were visiting tianya haijiao,wanquan river and many other beautiful places.i think well have a good time there.

国庆节来了，我有七天的假期。我们一家去海南。那是一个美丽的海滨城市。我们在那里待上一个星期。我们去沙滩，还在海里游泳。我们游览“天涯海角”，菀泉河还有别的许多好地方。我想我们在那里会玩得很开心。

[小学关于国庆的英语作文

October 1stis the national day of our country, which is a public holiday for the whole country. It’s an important day that marks the beginning of PRC. On that day, there are plenty of celebrations holding throughout the country, from the central government to the general people. And public places, including big squares, parks are decorated in festive theme. In recent years, the national holiday means the golden week as well, which is a short holiday that all people expect to. With the improvement of living standards, people have more money and desire to travel and the golden week is a good chance for them. Besides, for those people who would not go out, it’s a good time to have a good rest as well. Therefore, the national day means a lot to the Chinese.

10月1日是我国的国庆节，这是全国的共同节日。这一天是中华人民共和国开始的标志。在那天，全国到处都有很多庆祝活动，上至中央政府到普通老百姓。公共场所，包括大的广场和公园，都装饰成节日主题。近年，国庆节同样也是所有人都期待的短假黄金周。随着生活水平的提高，人们又更多的钱和渴望去旅游，黄金周对他们来说是一个很好的机会。除此之外，对于那些不想外出的人来说同样也是休息的好时机。因此，国庆节对中国人来说意味着很多。

There are many traditional festivals in China, such as the childrens day, the national day, the Dragon Boat Festival and the Mid Autumn Festival, but my favorite and most expected is the Spring Festival.

Lets talk about the origin of the Spring Festival. Legend has a monster called "year", the head long antennae, fierce and abnormal. "Year" years of deep seabed, every new years Eve just climbed out, devouring livestock harm human life. Therefore, every new years Eve, people help the aged and the young stockaded village fled to the mountains, to avoid "year" damage. A new years Eve, peach blossom village people are to help the aged and the young to take refuge, an old man came to the village, at this time, everyone on the run, who do not care about the old man, only an old woman carrying food to persuade the elderly, said: "everyone in the refugee! You can run away with the food, too. " The old man said unhurried, "can I stay in your house for a while?" The old woman hurried to persuade the elderly, the old man just only smiled but did not reply the old woman had to promise the elderly. The old man hung a red lantern in front of the house, and there was a lot of red things in front of the door. Suddenly, "year", "year" went to the front of the wife, I saw the red light scattered, "year" was scared away. At this time, sounded crackling sound of firecrackers, "year" was scared to death, escape from the village of peach blossom. Later, people called the happy day of the people "Spring Festival".

The Spring Festival is coming, the street is very busy! Malone on the road, the flow of water. A row of shops at the entrance, some hanging on every kind of lanterns, some big red lanterns hang, some affixed with "longevity, happiness as immense as the Eastern Sea" auspicious antithetical couplet. The street shop owners are Strike while the iron is hot. peddled. The small shop selling special purchases for the Spring Festival display, the size of the red lanterns and printed with a picture of auspicious antithetical couplet, dizzying, customers coming in a steady stream of Shaoxing, the boss too busy to attend to all. The children are wearing new clothes brightly coloured shuttle in the high streets and back lanes, face hung sweet smile. The streets were full of people, adults and children. The sound of firecrackers, fireworks, cheers and laughter filled the whole town, everywhere permeated with a festive atmosphere.

Not only in the street, but also at home. At home, people eat reunion dinner with relatives coming back from far away, then watch the Spring Festival Gala together, chat together, and my family is no exception. That year, our family and some relatives around the table to eat hot pot, mom and dad ate while chatting. I just sat there quietly enjoying the delicious food. After dinner, we put the fireworks in the square, a branch of a dragon like fireworks into the sky, blooming in the bright moonlight beside. I also tried to put one, but since then I cant put the fireworks again. The Spring Festival is really a beautiful day.

My father doesnt talk much. Though he is not funny, he loves me very much.

Last week, he travelled for business and when he came home, he took out a box

and brought me a nice present. I was so happy. He always remembered to bring me

some surprises. It was a special notebook and I could use it to write

diaries.

这次的习作要求是在听说读写中培养学生的写作能力，写一篇习作。在对学生进行写作指导的时候，我强调一定要抓住写景作文的主要特征来写，为了使文章能够生动形象给读者留下深刻的印象可以多用一些比喻拟人的修辞，多想像。

由于我是第一次上作文课，在备课时，我准备一节课就把课讲完，听说读写的练习都有，但是一上课我就觉得时间不够用，还是自己的教学经验不足，驾驭课堂的能力有限，以至于到最后作文的写这一部分没有落实到位。

一上课，我出示了几张很美的图片让他们用一句话练习，孩子们一脸的茫然与无奈，后面通过我的不断引导孩子们才想说，才有的话可说，现在在想我要是说在图片上你看到了什么景色，孩子们可能更有话可说。

在选择阅读篇目时，我想贴近学生的生活，所以选择了一篇写校园生活的文章，但是这里写景的地方太少了，和我的知识有点脱节，所以孩子们的兴趣也不高。

最后，我出示了孔雀河一年四季的图片让孩子们说，他们说了，可以由于时间关系，说的不是很到位，我指导的也不是很到位，听课的老师可能觉得那个图片的作用不是很大，没有把图片上的景物说完整。课下我也反思了，其实让学生说完图片上的景物，还有图片以外的东西可以让学生想象着去说，让学生把自己生活中看到的景物都说不出来。

在今后指导学生写景时，一定要再细一些，真正让学生学会习作的方法。在讲解作文时多从他们的身上找一些闪光点，让学生把自己想说的话都说出来，再让他们用上一些修辞书法把句子说的形象、生动，并且发挥出他们的想象能力，把我们身边的景色写的比现实中更美。让他们把写作文当成一种期待，让快乐的情感体验伴随他们的写作。

My chinese name is 范依昀。My English name is Kate. Brown. My family name is Brown. My first name is Kate. I’m 12 years old. I am chinese. I’m from Huzhou. I have many hobbies. I like playing football, and playing computer. I like blue best. I have a friend. Her name is 蒋姣姣。 She looks happy, she is lovely. I like her very much. She likes watching TV and singing.there is three people in my family, my father, mother and me. My father is a doctor, my mother is a doctor too. I like them very much. I am happy every day. My telephone number is ********. Welcome to my home.

班主任评语：very good! Your hand-writhing is very nice.

Is tiny, mom told me the story of Christmas, my mother said that Christmas day, as long as hang Christmas stockings on door, there will be a Christmas grandpa send gifts to the socks, then I know send gift Christmas grandpa is my father. Kindergarten, on Christmas day the teacher asked the children all wear Christmas hat, the children take a nice Christmas hat do morning exercise! Then the teacher will give us some candy.

Looking forward to Christmas every year, I go to the streets can feel the Christmas festive atmosphere. Hear nice Christmas songs, see beautiful Christmas trees and Christmas grandpa, can also receive gifts.

This Christmas I have an idea, I want to learn to sing the Christmas songs, and sing it as a gift to my teacher, classmates, and surrounded by all the people who care about me. I want to say to you: "my friends, merry Christmas!"

翻译：

很小很小的时候，是妈妈给我讲圣诞节的故事：妈妈说，过圣诞节那天，只要把圣诞袜挂到房门口，就会有圣诞爷爷发礼物到袜子里，后来我知道发礼物的圣诞爷爷就是我的爸爸。

上幼儿园的时候，过圣诞节那天老师让小朋友们都带上圣诞帽，小朋友们带上圣诞帽做早操真好看啊!然后老师还会给我们发些糖果。

我每年都盼着过圣诞节，走到大街小巷都能感受到圣诞节日的气氛。听到好听的圣诞歌，看到美丽的圣诞树和圣诞爷爷，也能收到礼物。

今年圣诞节我有一个想法，我要自己学会唱那首圣诞歌，并把它当作礼物唱给我的老师、同学，还有身边所有关心我的人听。我想对大家说：“朋友们，圣诞节快乐!”