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今天我批了作文《我的第一次……》,批了不到一半的时候就批不下去了,写的不够理想,因为上周五一部分孩子回家写的,可能是没有人指导,出现的问题太多。

一、内容不完整、具体。这跟平时课外读物的积累还有平时的语言积累也有很大的关系。几句话就结束了。我事先还让孩子先列出提纲,然后按提纲写,可很多孩子不会按要求去做。练的还是有点少了。

二、对于做什么,并没有弄清楚,没有生活经验也拿过来就写。比如:第一篇作文《我的课余生活》,其中有一个孩子写怎么养报春花,我当时一看内容非常好,也挺详细的,可仔细一看,问题就来了,报春花从种下种子到开花仅仅用了一个月的时间,并且每天都浇水,这是什么花也够呛啊。于是,回家我上网查了一下,根本不是那么回事,所以,我觉得孩子在没有生活经验的情况下,凭空捏造的东西太多。还有写“我的第一次”,写怎样在家做饭,也是这样,也没做过,也没问过家长,写饭用电饭锅做糊了,我怎么也没想明白,于是问了几个老师,都说既然放了米和水,怎么也做不糊呀,可爱的孩子们却犯了这样的错误,不能不说没有经验,并且连讨教都不讨教,就来一通胡编乱造。

三、明天上一节作文讲评课,把出现的问题都一一罗列

出来,再读一读优秀的作文,对于一下吧。要让他们知道:好的作文不是想出来的,是源自生活而写出来的。

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篇1:保护水资源小学英语作文

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water is very important for us.

we must drink water everyday. we can’t live without water. water is everywhere around us. at home, we use water to wash clothes, to wash dishes, to cook rice, to clean the flat, to have showers, to make drinks, to clean our teeth, to have a bath and so on.

at work, people use water to put out fires, to grow vegetables, to make things in factories and so on. we also can swim in the sea.

water is important for us, isn’t it?

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篇2:小学生反思的作文

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前段时间考试了,我考了92分,可我觉得我在努力一点就可以上96分了我觉得很可惜。

我的a卷错了很多第一大题选择题的,第四小题写错了,我把,关联词,写错了,本来我选的是b,但是呢,我还是选了d,所以我觉得这题应该是马虎粗心导致的,第三大题积累运用的第九小题,对联题,因为我没写几个字,就打了逗号所以扣了一分实在是不该,第三大题阅读理解的第一题课内阅读的12题,13题,都是因为少写了一个词,被扣了两分第14小题是写诗句,我没写,又被扣了三分,第二题的第17小题,因为我不知道,描写方法,所以被扣了两分,然后就是作文了,作文扣了十分,一是因为没有写完,第二个因为里面的内容没有写好,所以才导致扣掉了十分,最后就是附加题了附加题的,21,22和23题,都是因为没写完,只写了一句,之类的。

我觉得这次考试我是可能打96分以上的,为了这个目标,所以以后我就要多多看书,多多读书,记一记古诗,记一记名言,每天晚上睡觉的时候,看一篇作文,中午吃完饭以后就写一篇阅读,如果每天都这样,我的成绩一定会提高,一定会达到我梦想的分数。

以后我一定要考好努力考一个好分数。

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篇3:小学毕业聚会英语

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Two days later, we are going to graduate. Everyone must be happy, but weve been through a lot of rain and rain over the past six years. These storms include learning, joy, anger, sorrow, joy, and collective life in the Liantang base...... Thought of here, I am not tight shed tears. Because, until now I know to cherish the time.

I remember in Liantang base, I have wronged hiding in bed crying. Because I long, everyone has a lot of my opinions, or say I am stupid, or ignore me, I really dont understand why they do this to me? I dont offend them? So I have no courage to say to the teacher, if I say, my classmates would ignore me, primary school pupil composition "composition". Finally, on the evening of the second day, I couldnt help, to everyone that Chen Huimin said: "well, today I take a bath!" everyone had no objection, but she had to wash the bath for half an hour, my body is the room of course I told the teacher about it! The teacher in the shower, we had forced her to come out......

Remember the day when our teacher had a debate with us?. We were very nervous at the time because we had never tried a debate before. Then, the teacher said: "the classmates, today we will work in class, the theme is" students should follow the independent "?" the teacher said: "this is the open debate, so we will separate the" positive "and" against the two party. "." As soon as we finished speaking, the teacher organized us immediately. Later, the teacher repeated the words just now. We Party Yao Junyu said: "it is of course! If not independence, dont follow their parents generation after generation?" - "Yang Huaijie said:" that, you can live independently now? "" it can also ah! "" in addition to the Liantang based outside? Can? "" can! "" I cant say that! You to explain! "" cant explain! "At that time, the whole class was attracted by his jokes, even the teacher can not help but laugh out......

In the full of laughter in the campus, with the sound of reading aloud on campus, has let us feel joy, anger, sadness and joy in the campus, which contains a lot of memories. Hope that students should remember, let these memories forever stay in our alma mater, graduation, I miss!

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两天后,我们就要毕业了,小学毕业的作文。大家一定好开心,可是,这六年来,我们都经历过许许多多风雨。这些风雨包含了在学习上的喜、怒、哀、乐;在莲塘基地里的集体生活……想到这里,我不紧地流下眼泪。因为,到现在才知道要珍惜时间。

记得在莲塘基地里,我曾委屈地躲在被窝里哭。因为我室长,大家都对我有好多意见,要么就说我笨,要么就不理我,我真地不明白她们,为什么要这样对我?难道我得罪了她们?因此我没有勇气向老师说,如果我说了,同学们会更不理我,小学生作文《小学毕业的作文》。终于,在第二天晚上,我忍不住了,那个陈慧敏对着大家说:“哼,今天晚上我先洗澡!”大家当初都没反对,可是她洗澡足足洗了半个小时,我身为室长的我当然跟老师反映这件事啦!结果,老师也在洗澡,我们只好迫于无奈地等她出来了……

还记得一天,我们得老师跟我们开辩论会。当时,我们心情非常紧张,因为我们从未试过开辩论会。接着,老师就说:“同学们,今天我们上班会课,主题是‘小学生应不应该独立’?”跟着老师又说:“今次开的是辩论会,所以我们会分开‘正’、‘反’两方。”刚说完,老师就马上组织我们开始了。后来,老师又重复了刚刚那句话。我们‘正’方的姚骏宇说:“那是当然的啦!如果不独立,难道生生世世跟着父母啊?”‘反’方的杨怀杰又说:“那,你现在能独立生活么?”“那也能啊!”“除了去莲塘基之外呢?能吗?”“也能!”“那我可没话说了!你来解释解释一下!”“不能解释!”当时,全班都被他的笑话吸引住了,连老师也不禁地笑了出来了……

在那充满着欢声笑语的校园里,在那传着琅琅的读书声的校园里,在那曾让我们感到喜、怒、哀、乐的校园里,里面蕴涵着许多回忆。希望同学们要记住,让这些记忆永远留在我们的母校!毕业了,我好怀念!

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篇4:一次有趣的钓鱼小学六年级的英语作文

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My father likes fishing。 He always goes fishing with his friends in Autumn。

One day, he took me to fish, too。 In autumn, fish have grown up。 It is the best season to fish。 First, we chose a good place。 Then my father helped me put an earthworm onto the fishhook。 Afterwards, I threw the fishhook into the river。 I waited for a long time。 Suddenly, I saw the float sink。 I was very happy。 I pulled it out of the water but I only saw half of the earthworm。 The fish played a trick on me。 I was very angry。 But my father said to me, “it takes time。 You need to be more patient。” I tried again。 A few minutes later, I caught a big fish and I showed it to my father。 My father praised me, “what a good angler you are!”

我爸爸喜欢钓鱼。他总是和他的朋友们在秋天去钓鱼。

一天,他带我去钓鱼,太。在秋天,鱼长大了。这是最好的季节鱼。首先,我们选择了一个好地方。然后爸爸帮我把鱼钩上的蚯蚓。后来,我把鱼钩到河里。我等待了很长一段时间。突然,我看到了浮沉。我很高兴。我把它从水里拔了出来,但我只看见了一半的蚯蚓。那条鱼在我身上起了个圈套。我很生气。但我父亲对我说:“这需要时间。你需要有更多的耐心。”。几分钟后,我钓到一条大鱼,我把它拿给我爸爸看。我父亲表扬了我,“什么是一个好的钓鱼者你!“

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篇5:成语教学反思

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今天在组内上了一节研讨课,由于时间关系----第三节课只上了24分钟,没有如期完成教学任务,并非是执教者的原因。其次,由于时间紧张,课件制作不够精美;再者,在学生自主答问时,孩子们争相恐后地抢答,导致短暂的混乱。因此留下了些许遗憾。不管怎么样,我还是简单地说说这节课的感受:

这节课的主要任务是学习12个关于读书、治学的成语和趣味语文中的看图猜成语。如果说汉字是人类文化的瑰宝,那么,成语就是最闪亮的钻石。成语相沿已久,约定俗成,结构严谨。人教版教材从一年级的教材开始,每册教材都有意识地给孩子呈现一些平时常见的成语,如果我们的孩子只会读成语、背成语,那是有缺憾的,是与教材的呈现目的背道而驰的。于是,我便根据教学内容确定本节课的教学目标和环节设计。

成语在语言交际中的使用率很高,我们在学生年龄小、记性好的最佳学习时期,让他们多读、多记些成语,使学生们掌握一定数量的常用成语,对提高学生的语言能力,无疑是有意义的。然而以往的语文教学大纲中对成语的教学缺少明确的要求,在小学语文教学中,这一语言“精品”没有得到足够的重视。长期以来,成语教学形式比较单一。由于对成语教学任务不够明确,在教学中教师只注重成语的死记硬背,忽视了对成语的意义理解和使用的引导,成语教学流于形式,导致学生在使用成语时出现褒贬不分、望文生义、张冠李戴、自相矛盾、画蛇添足等乱用成语现象。让学生在自己喜闻乐见的多种形式中接触成语、了解成语、理解成语和运用成语,是目前成语教学的一个首要任务。

一、朗读中理解

学习成语首先得会读,在本节课中,我设计的第一个环节是充分地朗读,借助拼音读准,形式也多样,自由读、领读、男女赛读,小组开火车,然后再根据镂空式巩固熟读,达到熟读成诵。其次就是理解成语,这里的理解不是要求学生深入理解每一个成语的意思。于是我又设计了:看意思猜成语,读句子体会成语的含义,引导孩子们联系生活实际,大致了解成语的意思。几个环节下来,孩子对这些成语有了深刻的印象。

二、理解中积累

本次教学的任务是“日积月累”,这四个字已经明示了学习方法和目的,教学时,需要精心构思每一次积累的训练方式。古人云:“不积硅步无以成千里,不择细流无以成江海”。它重视的是长期坚持的积累过程。从二年级开始,我在鼓励学生看书的同时,也鼓励孩子们准备一个专用本做成语(佳句)积累,这是我一直比较注重的方面。平时教学中我也有意识的把包含生字的成语,抄在黑板的“词语百花园”里,让学生摘抄,在摘抄中积累。在本堂课的设计中,我也有意安排积累的环节。孩子们通过读、看、说大致了解成语的意思后,我便出示了与读书、治学相关的名言佳句,通过多形式的朗读、理解,再加镂空式的背诵,不知不觉孩子在课堂中便积累下来了。

附一:

子曰:“知之者,不如好之者,好之者,不如乐之者。”——《论语》

子曰:“默而识(zhì)之,学而不厌,诲人不倦,何有于我哉?”——《论语》

读书破万卷,下笔如有神 。——唐 杜甫

读万卷书,行万里路。——明末清初 顾炎武

业精于勤,荒于嬉;行成于思,毁于随。 ——韩愈《劝学》

三更灯火五更鸡,正是男儿读书时。黑发不知勤学早,白首方悔读书迟。——颜真卿

三、积累中运用

用学习积累成语的最终目的是为了运用,要现学现用,能将所学的成语在一个特定的语境中很自然地表现出来,那才是成功地学会了成语。教学这12个成语,我采用了“选词填空”,“联系生活用成语”,“读成语故事谈学习收获和体会”,丰富积累,学以致用。

短的二十四分钟分钟,孩子们的学习状态一直处于兴趣盎然,在学以致用的环节中,时时碰发出了令人惊喜的灵感火花,锻炼了学生的思维能力,达到了积聚、理解、运用成语的目的,更体验到了成语的无限魅力。可惜的是由于时间关系,“联系生活用成语”,“读成语故事谈学习收获和体会”,都没有完成。

新课标特别重视积累和实践。要学好语文,平时多积累最重要。在平时的语文教学中,教师都要重视学生“字词句”的积聚。采用多种方法来检测学生的学习效果,从而激发学生学习语文的兴趣,使学生的语文素养得到有效的提升。

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篇6:小学生英语日记-快乐的一天

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A happy Day

It was sunny and very hot today. I got up early and helped my parents cook breakfast. Then I washed the dishes and cleaned the room. After a short rest I did my homework in the morning. In the afternoon I went swimming in the nearest swimming pool with my friends. It was really cool to swim in such a hot day. I surfed the internet and read a storybook in the evening. I really had a busy and happy day.

今天天气晴朗比较热。 我起得很早,帮父母做早饭。然后我洗碗打扫屋子。休息一会后我上午做作业。 下午我和朋友去我家最近的游泳池游泳。 在如此炎热的夏天游泳的确很棒。 晚上我上网、看故事书。我今天很忙过得很快乐

[小学英语日记-快乐的一天

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篇7:竹子小学六年级英语作文120字

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almost everyone has seen bamboo. bamboo grows up straight and thin, with branches at the top. it has long leaves.it looks like a tree, but it is really a kind of grass.

there are more than five hundred kinds of bamboo. some grow over ten meters tall, and some are only a few inehes tall. bamboo grows best in places where it is warm and it rains often.

the long stem of bamboo is hollow, which makes them light and strong.people use it to build houses and bridges over rivers. it can be used to make tables,chairs, baskets and many other things. bamboo is also made into paper. the tender young shoots of bamboo are tasty. people like to eat them.

do you like bamboo?

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篇8:古村落作文修改教学反思

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今天继续完成昨天作文写作后的修改任务,教学反思—关于课堂教学的思考。学生兴趣不高,或者是因为我太着急?或者是学生已经厌倦?或者学生完全不知道该怎么办?

不得而知。总之不如上次更不如上上次的热烈。

教学内容和任务无疑应由教师确定,但教学过程中的具体操作方法,以及最终的教学效果,学生则应主导发言权。教学过程必须紧扣学生心理、学生该科目的学习情况、学习能力状况、学生学习状态和学生兴趣等,尽量激发学生的参与,并提高参与程度,大胆发言,相互倾听;教学效果究竟如何,必须由学生来反馈,。反观目前语文教学,反复讲反复忘的低效情况普遍存在,且枯燥反复的教学方式让学生在其中耗尽对语文学习的兴趣和求知欲,最终恶性循环。教师教学,应当在确定教学内容和任务之后集中思考讨论教学展开的方式,以便激发学生的参与;课堂进行中也应注重观察学生参与状态,并由此把握学生对知识或情感态度价值观的理解程度,同时捕捉恰当时机来引领全班倾听和交流,形成学习共同体;课堂之后,教师应当请该科目学习能力处于不同层次的学生代表前来交流,考查学习效果。最终教师群体、学生群体等一起来找出教学过程中存在的问题,并商讨解决这些问题的办法。

由此反观今日教学,即便学生反响并不太强烈,也有可能是因为在思考——毕竟学生的理解与教师的理解之间存在很大差异。而且,学生的写作自信并没有得到充分的发展,因而,很可能沉默。但仍然有多数同学认真参与,这就表明,这样的教学方式还是相对有效的。希望自己和学生更进一步提升,更加配合。

[古村落作文修改教学反思

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篇9:闹元宵英语作文小学80字

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New Year is the biggest festival for Chinese people. After about half a

month, there is a traditional festival, it is the Lantern Festival, which is

also important. The first round moon day in the New Year is special. People

continue to celebrate the New Year and enjoy the time with their families.

The coming of Lantern Festival is various. Some people said that it is

related with Buddha. When the Buddhas meditated, they need light in front of

them, so the light can drive away monster for people. Today, in some areas,

people light up lanterns to beg for a son from god. No matter what the story is,

the traditional festival is favored by people and the government pays special

attention to remind this tradition.

There are many activities on Lantern Festival, and the most traditional

game is the riddle. People can read some riddles that are written in the

lanterns. They can get prizes if they know the answers. I love riddle so much,

because when I figure out the answers, I will be very proud of myself, at the

same time, I can learn some funny knowledge.

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篇10:小学英语日记

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美好的一天

June 13thFriday

It is a fine day today. There are some clouds in the sky, but the sun is

shining. Mr Jones is with his family. They are walking on the bridge. There are

some boats on the river. Mr Jones and his wife are looking at them. Sally is

looking at a big ship. The ship is going under the bridge. Tim is looking at an

aeroplane. The aeroplane is flying over the river.

今天,天气晴朗,空中有少许云朵,天阳在照耀着。琼斯先生和他的家人在一起。她们在桥上走着,河面上有几艘小船,琼斯先生和他的夫人正看着它们,莎莉正看着一艘大船。它正从桥下经过。蒂姆在看着一架飞机,这架飞机正从河上空飞过。

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篇11:小学初级一封信英语

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Dear Mr. Williams,

Thank you for your letter of congratulation on my exam results. I was very pleased to hear from you. The results were a great relief. I did much better than I thought I would.

We are having a celebration party on Saturday 22 May and we shall be pleased if you can come. It is a party for me, but my parents and some of their old friends are joining in, so you will find "real people" as well as teenagers to talk to.

The party starts at half past six- drinks, and a buffet supper later. You said in your letter that youve given up driving, so my father will meet you with the car at San Mateo station. Please let me know what time your train arrives.

There is a good train back to San Palo at 10:30 and well arrange transport for you to catch that. I hope that wont be too late for you. It would be a pity if you had to leave while the party was still in full swing.

I do hope that you will be able to come.

Yours sincerely,

Lily Chen

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篇12:关于植树节的小学生英语作文

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march 12th is tree planting day. this year our school bought enough trees before that day . on that day , we didn‘t had classes . the teachers and our classmates planted trees around our school.

we began to planted trees as soon as we got to school . some students dug the holes . some students put the trees into the holes.

some students put the earth back to the holes. then we pushed the earth hard with our feet . at last we watered the trees as much as possible.

from then on we looked after the trees carefully and the trees grew very well . it made our shcool more beautiful .and how happy we are !

[关于植树节小学英语作文

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篇13:小学生英语作文可爱的小白兔

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I had a lively and lovely little white rabbit, it is very characteristic. To see what he looks like!

Its body is furry, shrink like a small pompon like, very cute! Its head round yo, red eyes, like two ruby-like, small nose, mouth is three petals. Its short tail, really the tail of the rabbit - can not grow!

It is very practical, I feed it when the pick pick, to check whether there is no vegetables, vegetables, there is no longs, or he did not eat it!

It always jumped at home, so I named it "jump".

"Jump" really cute, do you like it?

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篇14:我爱网购小学英语作文

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Nowadays, computer has been an important part of peoples life. They can use computer to work and talk to their friends and families. As for me, I like shopping online. I can compare the price and then buy the best one. I will use my mothers cell phone to pay the bill. It is so convenient. Online shopping saves a lot of time.

如今,电脑已经成为是人们生活的重要组成部分。人们可以使用电脑来工作,跟他们的朋友和家人聊天。我喜欢网上购物。我可以比较价格的高低然后买到最好的。我会用我妈妈的手机支付账单,这很方便。网上购物可以节省很多时间。

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篇15:我的家庭小学英语作文Myfamily

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My name is Yu Geqin. I’m nine years old. There are three members in my family, my father, my mother and I.

My father is a teacher. He is very handsome. He always wears a pair of glasses. He works very hard. He’s busy from morning to night. He’s the cleverest man of my family. He can solve the difficult problems, too.

My mother is very beautiful. She has two big eyes and her black hair is long. My mother is worker. She is good at her job. She is also a good housewife.

I have a happy family. I like it very much.

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篇16:小学四年级英语作文:如何做一个模范学生

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I want to be a model student. What shall I do?

I should be polite. I should study hard. I should capful and helpful. I should walk in the corridors. I should throw rubbish in the bin. I should be quiet in the library. I shouldn’t walk and run on the grass. I shouldn’t throw rubbish on the floor. I shouldn’t run in the corridors. I shouldn’t fight. I shouldn’t be noisy in the library.

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篇17:小学英语日记

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一次新的体验 A new experience

Yesterday I did commonweal in library to earn my public service

scores(which is similar to the compulsory credits).I arrived library at 8’clock

in the morning,a librarian let me to wipe the mirror in every toilet from one to

six floor.Then I started to wipe the mirrors.It was been two hours after I

finished all work.I was very tired,but looking at the shiny and clean mirrors I

had wiped, I felt very happy.To be honest,I had never done the things like it at

home,so it was a new experience to me,and it make me realize the hard work of my

parent.

昨天,我在图书馆做公益去获取公益实数(类似于学分)。我早上8点到达图书馆,一个图书馆管理员让我去擦一楼到六楼的厕所里的镜子。然后

就开始擦镜子了。等我完成了所有的工作,已经过去两个小时了。我非常地累,但是看着被我擦得干净闪亮的镜子,我感到很开心。说实话,我在家里从来没有做过像这样的事情,所以,这对我来说是一次新的体验,这也让我体会到了父母的艰辛。

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篇18:小学生关于秋天的英语

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美丽的秋天来了,果树上挂满了红艳艳的“小灯笼”。乡下的孩子欢蹦乱跳地跳着喊着,田野里回荡着他们银铃般的笑声。

Beautiful autumn, the trees hanging lanterns with red "". The children in the countryside and dance and skip with joy shouting, the field echoed with their laughter.

村里的人都忙忙碌碌的,姐姐带着弟弟去山上摘果子。到了果园,天呐!果树上的果子都成熟了,姐姐和弟弟欢天喜地的摘了满满三篮子。

All the people in the village were busy, and the elder sister took her younger brother to the mountain to pick the fruit. When we get to the orchard, God! The fruit on the tree was ripe, and the sister and brother picked up three baskets with great joy.

果园里的果子像海边的沙子一样多。秋天里漂浮着许多香甜的气味,梨香香的,苹果甜甜的,菠萝酸酸的,还有很多种香气在空气中漂浮着。

The fruit in the orchard is as much as the sand by the sea. There are many sweet scents floating in autumn. The pears are sweet, apple, sweet, pineapple and sour, and there are many kinds of scent floating in the air.

秋天它把黄色给了银杏树,它把红色给了枫叶,它把金黄色给了田野,它把橙红色给了果树,它把紫红的、淡黄的、雪白的给了菊花仙子。

In autumn, it gave yellow to the ginkgo tree. It gave the red to the maple leaves. It gave the golden color to the fields. It gave the orange red to the fruit trees. It gave the chrysanthemums the purple, the yellow and the snow-white.

秋天真美啊,我爱秋天!

Autumn is beautiful, I love autumn!

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篇19:英语作文教师教学反思怎么写

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究其原因,我结合自己的写作体会总结了三点。其一,对英语作文不熟悉,虽然篇幅要求不大,字数在150字左右,可还是难倒一大片。其二,对某一问题平时缺乏思考和总结,不能提出明确的看法和见解,缺乏层次感。其三,不熟悉英语语法和一些常见的单词,即使知道意思也无法清晰表达出真实意思。

为此,我结合本学期的第一篇作文,给学生做了详细讲解。写一篇作文需要四大步:First, consider it carefully. (第一,认真构思。)Next, draw up an outline.(第二,写出文章结构。)Then, write the composition.(第三,写出作文。)Finally, Check over the composition.(最后,检查文章。)四步骤中,难的是第二,第三步。现结合文章,具体谈一下怎么做。

题目是 Changes in Li Ming’s Hometown (李明家乡的变化)。文章Outline可以从一下几个方面来写:

A. Changes in living conditions.(生活条件的变化)

B. Changes in working tools. (劳动工具的变化)

C. Changes in education. (教育的变化)

Conclusion: Thanks to the government’s efforts, Li Ming’s hometown is becoming more and more better. (结论:多亏政府的努力,李明的家乡变得越来越好了。)

下面我把参考译文写出来,供大家参考。

Changes in Li Ming’s Hometown

Great changes have taken place in Li Ming’s Hometown in the past few years. In the past, people’s living conditions were poor. A big family was crowded in a low house. People usually planted crops with the help of farm animals. And the children studied in old schools. Since the reform and opening-up , his hometown has developed rapidly and people’s living

Conditions have improved a lot. Now, people live in tall bright buildings. They plant crops with the help of farm machines and the work in the fields has become much easier. What’s more, children now study in modern schools. Thanks to the government’s efforts, Li Ming’s hometown is becoming better and better.

郭智勇

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篇20:小学英语作文60字翻译

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I have a best friend, we know each other when we are five years old, now we talk about everything. But sometimes we will have the argument, none of us want to give in first. We make a deal that the next day we will meet in a place every time, so we become good again. I cherish our friendship so much.

我有一个最好的朋友,我们彼此认识的时候是在我们五岁的时候,现在我们无所不谈。但有时我们会有争吵,谁也不想先屈服。我们达成协议,第二天我们会在一个地方见面,这样我们再次和好。我珍惜我们的友谊。

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