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1000短篇英语日记带翻译
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+ 加入清单今天天上下起蒙蒙细雨,好想披上轻纱,我正在上学的路上。
Today, its drizzling. I want to put on the veil. Im on my way to
school.
突然我听到哎呀的.一声,我往后看见一个小女孩摔在地上,我赶紧把那个小女孩扶了起,那个小女孩说:“谢谢你”,我心里美滋滋的。
Suddenly
I heard a cry. I saw a little girl fall on the ground. I quickly picked up the
little girl. The little girl said, "thank you." I was very
happy.
最后,我和那个小女孩一起上学去了。
Finally, I went to school with the little
girl.
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篇1:短篇英语日记带翻译
全文共 679 字
+ 加入清单In the morning, it is very fine! Then I climb the mountain with family, the
air on the mountain is very fresh, the flowers plants and trees on the mountain
all seem extremely beautiful. In the afternoon, I go to friends home to play,
the friend entertains me warmly, show me a lot of books of his , has listened to
his CD for me , then also ask me to eat a sumptuous dinner. Coming back home in
the evening, family and I sat and watched TV together, we are returning and
eating the fruit while chatting, the whole family is happy and harmonious!
早上,天气非常好!于是我和家人一起去登山,山上的空气非常清新,花草树木在山上都显得格外美丽。在下午,我去了朋友家玩,朋友热情地招待我,给我看了他的很多书,给我听了他的CD,然后还请我吃了一顿丰盛的晚餐。晚上回到家,我与家人坐在一起看电视,我们还一边聊天一边吃着水果,全家其乐融融。
篇2:英语旅游日记
全文共 460 字
+ 加入清单I think most people like traveling because they can feel the beauty of the nature and breathe the fresh air at the same time.Whats more they can make friends.But there are some disadvantages of travelling,such as,the weather may change quickly and you may be wet in the rain.So my suggestion is that before you travel,you should listen to the weather report and get to know about the weather and youd better travel with others so that you are not into trouble.
篇3:英语日记
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+ 加入清单Monday, August 2nd, Sunny
It was sunny and hot today。 I got up early at half past six。 I read English and then had breakfast。 I helped my mother washed the dishes。 Then I did my homework and cleaned my room。 I went shopping with my mother in the afternoon。 Then I played table tennis with my friends。 In the evening I watched TV and read a book。 I really had a busy and interesting day。
今天天气晴朗,热。 我在6:30很早就起了床。我读英语然后吃早饭。我帮助母亲洗碗。然后做作业打扫房间。下午我和母亲去买东西。然后和朋友们打乒乓球。晚上我看电视、看书。我今天的确很忙、过得很有趣。
篇4:英语日记格式
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+ 加入清单日记的正文是日记的主要部分,写在星期和日期的正下方,可以顶格写,也可以内缩3至5个字母的空间。由于记载的内容通常已经发生,谓语动词多用一般过去时。但也可根据具体情况,用其它时态。如:记叙天气、描写景色,为了描写生动,可以使用现在时,以表现当时的情景。再如文后发表感想或评论可用现在时态或将来时态。记日记力求简单明了,有连贯性。若有文字提示,则应重视提示,把握要点。在句式上尽量使用简单句,以防繁杂,造成语法、句型错误。
范例:
I was very sleepy in the morning, so I didnt go running as usual. I had
something for breakfast. My new day has began. The results would come out today.
My classmates all felt very nervous, so did I. Then one of my classmates called
me, and invited me to play basketball in the afternoon. I like play basketball,
though Im really poor at play it.
My parent and I visited redstart farm last Saturday,the environment is so
good there.Were scavenge the horse,The horse was leaded into the stable and
each was put in a stall.Cows and sheep depends forage to feed.this so
lifelikeness,were got a lot of enjoyment from my job. in the end.owner
preparative feasted on me.
加:
Though my daily life is extremely monotonous, I try hard to adapt myself to
it. Why? Because I intend to be a good student. I wish to render service to my
country.
I get up at six o’clock every day. After I wash my face and brush my teeth,
I begin to review my lessons. I go to school at seven o’clock.
After school is over, I return home. We usually have supper at seven
o’clock.Then I begin to do my homework. I want to finish it before I go to
bed.
例:
It was the first day of our winter holiday. All of us were very happy. Why?
Because we have one months to do things we love to do. We are free. Although we
have some homework. we can finish them in several days. And the rest time we can
make good use of. My god! We have been very tired after hard studying. In winter
holidays, I want to have full sleep and eat good food in order to replenish
myself.Last but not least, I will have a good rest.
It was the second day of our winter holiday. I felt good. I felt I’m free.
I had a lot of time to do things I like. My parents are in Beijing. So I live
alone but I don’t feel lonely. But I didn’t do something special. I stayed at
home and watched TV. Oh! I wrote an English daily composition. It was my
homework. Today, I have slept for 14 hours. I thought I was very tired. It is
time for dinner. I must go! I am very hungry.
It was the third day of our winter holiday. Today, there are many business
in my mother’s company. So my mother told me to help my uncle who is the manager
of my mother’s company. I sat in my mother’s office and help her answer the
telephone. While I was free, I was writing my homework. Although I also have a
lot of time to do my homework, I still do it. Because in my mother’s office, I
had nothing to do. If I did nothing, I was wasting my time and my life. I can’t
do the foolish thing. We should take good use of our time.
翻译:
我早上非常困,所以我没有像平常一样去跑步。我吃了早饭。我的新的一天已经开始。结果将在今天被公布。我的同学们都感到很紧张,我也是。后来我的一位同学打电话给我,并邀我在下午打篮球。我喜欢打篮球,虽然我的水平不怎么样。
我和我的父母上星期六去参观农场,那里的环境很好。我们清洁了心爱的马。马被牵入马棚,而且每匹马都被放在各自的栏内。牛和羊依靠喂给它们的饲料,这是多么的生动啊。我们从我的工作里得到了很多乐趣。最后,农场主宴请了我。
加:虽然我的日常生活十分单调,但我却竭力去适应它。为什么?因为我打算做一个好学生。我希望能为国家服务。
我每天六点起床。在洗脸、刷牙之后,我开始复习功课。我7点去学校。
放学后,我回家了。我们通常七点吃晚饭。之后我开始做家庭作业。因为我打算睡觉之前完成它。
例:这是我们寒假的第一天。我们都很高兴。为什么?因为我们有一个月的时间可以做我们喜欢做的事。我们很自由。虽然我们有一些作业,但我们能在几天之内完成。我们能利用好休息的时间。天啊!我们在学习之后总是感觉很累。在寒假期间,我想拥有充足的睡眠,享用丰富的食物来补充自己。最后但同样重要的是,我要好好休息一下。
这是我们寒假的第二天。我感觉很好。我觉得我很自由。我有很多的时间做我喜欢的事情。我的父母在北京。所以我独自生活,但我不觉得寂寞。但我从来没做一件特别的事。我呆在家里看电视。哦!我写了一个英语日常写作。这是我的家庭作业。今天,我睡了14个小时。我想我很累。到吃晚饭的时间了。我必须去了!我饿极了。
这是我们寒假的第三天。今天,我妈妈的公司有不少事情。所以我妈妈告诉我帮助她公司的经理,我的叔叔。我坐在我妈妈的办公室,帮她接电话。当我空闲的时候,我写我的家庭作业。虽然我也有很多时间做家庭作业,但我还是写了。因为在我妈妈的办公室,我无事可做。如果我什么都没做,我是在浪费我的时间和我的生命。我没办法做那么愚蠢的事。我们应该充分利用我们的时间。
篇5:期末考试考砸的反省日记
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+ 加入清单唉哟哟!一想起我的数学卷子我就头疼,如果你问我怎么了,我准会羞红了脸,因为我这次数学考试——考砸了——!
这个星期,我们数学进行了小数除法考试,我自以为自己学得很扎实,很用功,老师让复习时我却不当回事,没有认真地复习,想一想不会做的题该怎么做,而是装出一副似懂非懂的样子,这真是自欺欺人呀!卷子上的分数上下跳动取笑我的自以为是,鲜红的X左右摇摆取笑我的自作聪明,泪水在眼眶里打转,我伤心得都快哭了。一想到这仿佛有100多块石头压着我,让我心里沉甸甸的,十分难受。
妈妈虽然没有严厉地批评我、责怪我,只是让我下次考试要认真复习和不要粗心,但我却真希望妈妈狠狠地批评我一顿,这样我心里也会好受些。通过这次考试,我明白了,考试的目的不是为了分数,而是通过考试让你正视到自己的不足,及时改正,并不断总结经验和教训。
这次我考砸了,只有一个原因就是我自己太不虚心了,没有认真复习,下次我一定不会再犯同样的毛病了。挫折是锻炼意志增加能力的好机会,遇到挫折只要努力,充满信心、希望和斗志,就一定会成功。所以,我一定会加油加油再加油,相信我自己,一定行!
篇6:期中考试之——轻敌
全文共 585 字
+ 加入清单刘嘉馨
考考考,老师的妙招,分分分,学生的命根。俗话说的好:考试,就是一场没有硝烟的战争。在这次考试中,最使我印象深刻的是数学。
发下卷子,我的第一感觉就是太简单了!开头几道选择题,我大笔一挥,分数就乖乖送上前来。正当我势如破竹,披荆斩棘,一道道题目诚惶诚恐地送上分来之时,一座大山赫然矗立在眼前。这是选择题的最后一道,十多个圆圈在我眼前忽左忽右,若隐若现。我算了又算,就是算不出这选择中的任何一项,我仿佛已经看到那些小圆圈们在嘲笑我了。我虽不甘心,也无可奈何。
我做出了理智的选择,暂时放弃。其他同学连后半面都已答了大半,我却在选择题上踌躇!我连忙接着“刷题”,甚至连大题我也毫无惧意——都是练过的“经典”,一点新意都没有。我不禁有些喜不自胜,沾沾自喜——看来数学有把握考个高分了!我在其他人都在苦思冥想之时,“过五关,斩六将”,杀向敌营,来了个耀武扬威!当我看到最后一题时,胜者的笑容洋溢在我的脸上——这可是刚讲过的题啊!我单刀直入,三下五除二就“打倒”了压轴大题。一看,时间还早得很。我不假思索,回头对付那座大山。
离收卷还有10分钟,我用尽浑身解数,侥幸棋过一招,打败了“大山”。检查要争分夺秒,在背面盘旋一阵,最后一题看都不看就信心满满地等打铃交卷。
我一对答案,竟是最后一题犯了错——没认真审题,分母两个数可是差二呀,丢了个二分之一!我懊悔不已,最后还是轻敌打败了我。
篇7:寒假英语日记例文
全文共 429 字
+ 加入清单It was the second day of our winter vacation. I felt good. I felt I’m free. I had a lot of time to do things I like. My parents are in Beijing. So I live alone but I don’t feel lonely. But I didn’t do something special. I stayed at home and watched TV. Oh! I wrote an English daily composition. It was my homework. Today, I have slept for 14 hours. I thought I was very tired. It was time for dinner. I must go! I am very hungry.
篇8:关于考试作弊问题的英语作文
全文共 1792 字
+ 加入清单It never be explained why so many students on campus cheat in their examinations nowadays, regardless of the danger that teachers find their secret, as it did in the case of the boy student in the cartoon/photo above. What is conveyed in the drawing is most thought-provoking and should arouse our social concern.
The implied meaning of the picture is worth discussing. Firstly, the youngs always become quite illogical when they try to descide what can be done and what can not be done. In the light of this statement, some students are often willing to sacrifice their credibility for the privillage of getting more points and being regarded as outstanding students. Furthermore, some one is afired that he can‘t pass the final exams leading to his degree, in the fruit of being absorbed into computer games or disappointment in love.
Consequently, only by cheating can they graduate and get the degree on time. Although many reasons share the problem of this drawing, one of them can be singled out for recognition: the conditions of our sociaty. Such is human nature, that we can‘t avoid being influenced by environment. In short, the root of cheating in examinations and credibilililess on campus is combinition of many factors.
There is no blinding at the fact that, in dealing with a challenge on such scale, some strong, effective and necessary counter-measures should be put on our agenda. To the begin with, a widespread education campaign should be launched to make students realize the importance of credibility. What‘s more, the government departments at different levels and related orgnizations should make joint efforts and coordination of programs to creat a more credit environment for us. Only by this package deal, can build up a harmonious and healthy sociaty.
篇9:英语日记
全文共 497 字
+ 加入清单我印象中,有许多老师关心过我,教育过我,但使我记忆中最深刻的是我的英语老师——刘老师。她既是我们一到四年级的英语老师,也是我们在外面学习的老师。
刘老师圆圆的脸上嵌着一双炯炯有神的大眼睛,高高的鼻梁下面有一张能说会道的嘴巴,乌黑发亮的头发,我一看就知道她是一个很有学问的人。她博古通今,满腹经纶,上知天文,下知地理,有许多老师都羡慕她有很多学问。
记得有一次,我英语默写没默好,心里很伤心总是闷闷不乐。“叮铃铃”,课间十分钟很快过了,我一直垂着头正准备趴下。突然,我的眼光与刘老师的目光相碰,她好像看出了我的心思,睁大了眼睛望了我一下,好像在用慈祥的目光在对我说“别灰心,加把劲!你这次默不好,不是代表永远默不好”。顿时,我感到一股股暖流流遍浑身上下。
记得还有一次,刘老师生病了。第二天,我们想她不会来了。谁知道当上课铃打响了,刘老师像往常一样满面笑容地走进教室。上课时,刘老师用沙哑的声音给我们讲课。在上完课后就去挂水了,一连几天都这样。
啊,老师,我敬爱的老师,您像慈母一样,用爱把我们从无知的儿童带到四年级;您像红烛一样,点燃自己,照亮我们……这就是我的英语老师——刘老师,您是天下最好的老师。
篇10:英语日记格式
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+ 加入清单MondaySeptember1,20__weather:__
I went to the home for the aged with my friends on July 30th. As soon as
the eldly people saw us, they were all happy. 1.We sang songs and danced for
them. Then we helped the worker clean the rooms and washes the clothes. They
praized us a lot and said that we were good boys. Although we felt tired, we had
a good time.
篇11:大学英语日记感恩节
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+ 加入清单Thanksgiving, or Thanksgiving Day, is coming. Its a traditional North
American holiday,and is a form of harvest festival. In the United States, the
fourth Thursday in November is called Thanksgiving Day. Thanksgiving was about
the Pilgrims, the first settlers in America. They shared the first harvest with
the Indians and gave thanks.
Thanksgiving Day is usually a family day. People always celebrate with big
dinners and happy reunions. Pumpkin pie and Indian pudding are traditional
Thanksgiving desserts. Relatives from other cities, students who have been away
at school, and many other Americans travel a long distance to spend the holiday
at home.
On that day, Americans give thanks for the blessings they have enjoyed
during the year. And I am sure that we all must have a lot to be thankful for.
Maybe you would like to give thanks for being here with your family and for
being well,or give thanks for a healthy year, a good job,or thank your friends
for encouraging you when you are in dismay,etc.
篇12:英语日记带翻译
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+ 加入清单My Foreign Teacher
Hello! I’m He Baoyi. We have three new teachers this term. But my favourite
teacher is English teacher. Who is she? Yes, she’s Linda.
Do you want to know her? Linda is very beautiful. Look! She has a round
face, two small black eyes, a straight nose, a big mouth and two small ears. Her
hair is very long. She is not tall and not short. She likes wearing a white
dress. She looks like an angle. Linda works very hard every day. And she is
strict to us. But she is kind. Her class is so much fun. Really? Yes. In class,
she is our good teacher. After class, she is our good friend.
Her favourite food is tofu. It ’s very very healthy. She is not only good
at pingpong, but also good at singing. She likes talking with us. We all like
her.
你好!我他Baoyi啦。这学期我们有三位新老师。但是我最喜欢的老师是英语老师。她是谁?是的,自己是琳达。
你想认识她吗?琳达非常漂亮。看!她有一张圆圆的脸,两只黑色的小眼睛,一个直鼻梁,一个大嘴巴和两只小耳朵。她的头发很长。她个子不高,个子不矮。她喜欢穿白色的衣服。她看起来像个天使。琳达每天工作很努力。她对我们很严格。但她是善良的。她的课很有趣。真的吗?是的。在课堂上,她是我们的好老师。下课后,她是我们的好朋友。
她最喜欢的食物是豆腐。它非常健康。她不仅擅长乒乓球,而且擅长唱歌。她喜欢和我们谈话。我们都喜欢她。
篇13:寒假英语小学生日记
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+ 加入清单During the winter vacation, I was idle at home and went to grandmas home to play.
When she came to grandmas house, I saw that grandma was making a fire. I saw it soon, and I wanted to try. So I said to the granny who was burning, "grandma, let me make a fire!" Did not think of grandma unexpectedly categorically said: "no.!" Do not change this trick: "grandma, my grandmother, let me try it, just a minute!" Grandma could not resist my persistence, readily agreed. So I took the match immediately and sat in front of the kitchen.
"Chi", lit, a gentle and brilliant light. I immediately took a straw like something lit into the kitchen. Im afraid the fire will go out soon, so I put a lot of firewood in. "Wow," the fire suddenly busy up, but soon went out, but also emitting a smell of smoke, choking me coughing. So I said, "the country and the city are not the same, and even a gas stove is not!" After that, I lit a match and threw it in. But it soon went out. The smoke not only did not dissipate, but it was thicker. I cant eat this time, choking out of the kitchen. Grandma washing meters, see my gray appearance, smiled and said: "who said the fire must be good?" As my grandmother said that, my head went down involuntarily. But I immediately regain confidence: "a word can never be withdrawn." said we should do. I must have a good fire! " So I went to the front of the kitchen, and then, I learned the old people to take a fan with a fan. There was no smoke, but the smoother was smaller. Not easy to fan the fire, open the pot to see, the rice just put in. So I had to pick up the fan and fan it again.
When I went home that day, my face had already become a big face in Beijing Opera!
篇14:英语日记
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+ 加入清单Today, I got up at 8:00 at usual. And I have a busy day. In the morning, I
studied for two hours. And then my father told me to visit my uncle with him. We
took something to him and had lunch at his home. We went home at 14:00. When we
got home, my mother was cleaning our home, so my father and I helped her. I
cleaned my room. It was a little dirty. After that, we went to the supermarket.
I bought some snacks. I was tired today.
篇15:英语日记
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+ 加入清单Ah! Its a warm spring! On the nice day, I, Linda and Sally go the MeiYuan
Park, have a picnic together. I must go the supermarket in advance, buy some
sock and coke.
It’s all right! We must on foot go park. We are starting the school. First,
we go straight, turn right, and then go straight, too. We are getting to the
park. Oh, the park its very beautiful! People playing so happy, the flower is
lovely, too. We eat the delicious food. Linda has many crackers and cakes, Sally
have a box of chocolates. We are playing the carrousel over a cup of coke. We
are very pleased.
Its a nicety day!
篇16:2024年日记期中考试过后
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+ 加入清单期中考试已逐渐落下帷幕,而这周期中考试的成绩也陆续出来了。不少学生会在考试后焦虑,最多听到的就是“完了,考砸了”“考的知识点,我明明复习到了,可是就是想不起来了”。但不管考得如何,这次考试都反应出了我们学习上的问题。
错题重新做一遍不是目的,目的是找出错题背后的本质原因。
本质原因无非是以下三类:知识点没掌握、题型和解题技巧不熟练、作答时表述不清。把第一步标注的题归入这三类中,有针对性地解决。
1.知识点没掌握。针对题目所涉及的有关知识要点及原理内容认真地再复习再巩固,真正把其弄懂弄通,千万不要搁置一边,小心它成为你永远跨不过去的小阴沟。
2.题型和解题技巧不熟练。接下来要求自己务必掌握住某一题型的答题要领,无论是哪一类题型,都有其作答的一般思路和方法。然后围绕这类题型,选择题目,题并不需要多,类似的题,只要两三道就足够,做题中用心体会,才会有所感悟和提高。
3.作答时表述不清。平时做题练习中,有意识地培养和锻炼自己的答题习惯,答题时做到“从容不迫、沉着冷静”,合理分配时间,书写规范,答题有条理。
“这几道题我明明会做,只是因为马虎,多扣了十几分。”这种情况值得大家去关注。同学们总是在认为自己做错题的原因不是自己没有掌握好知识点,而是因为自己当时做题马虎,没有意识到自己学习中的不足。
正视“马虎”!杜绝“马虎”!
如果丢了2~3分,那么可能是由于一时马虎。但是超过了5分,那就不再是马虎的问题,而是能力不足,掌握得不够好。学生要正视自己的不足,虚心地从考试中发现问题,如果某部分知识点掌握得不好,那就加大训练量。
总之,做好期中考的总结十分重要,它决定你在后续考试中能否抓住要点,避免失分。要想取得好成绩,单纯依靠努力是不够的,更重要的是掌握技巧。既然考试已拉下帷幕,大家就应该放宽心,尽管考试不尽如人意但是这不要紧,只要学习扎实,认真对待,为期末考试做好准备,过年了一定要考出个好的成绩。
篇17:跟老外学英语日记
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+ 加入清单今天,天气很热,烈日炎炎。妈妈五点带我去学英语。
到了那里,我看见有很多的同学。老师是一个男的,个子高高的,眼睛下有一双炯炯有神的眼睛。总是穿着绿色的衣服,像个环保员。我们每个人,都觉得老师很有趣!张老师对我们都很亲切,我们语音读不好,他就很和蔼地帮助我们,直到读准语音,张老师真有耐心。张老师让我们表演课本剧,我们表演第13课的时候,我表演苏,老师表扬我演得好。轮到迈克表演,他不会读的时候,他很不好意思地脸红了。老师亲切地说:“你翻开课本看一下,下次要准备好。”老师对我们太好了。下课时,老师买了很多棋,让我们玩,老师就休息,改改作业。
今天,我的英语成绩得了Very good,好开心好高兴。
篇18:英语日记带翻译
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+ 加入清单This morning, my father took me to school by bike. I sat at the back of the
bike, eating a banana. After I ate it up, I threw the skin onto the street
randomly.
今天早晨,爸爸骑车带我去上学。我坐在后车座上,吃着香蕉。吃完后,我顺手将香蕉皮扔到了街上。
No sooner had I done this than I realized that I had done something bad to
our environment. And maybe someone would step on it and tumble over. I must pick
it up. Thinking of these, I asked father to stop. I jumped off the bike and ran
back to pick up the banana skin and threw it into a roadside dustbin. Seeing
this, father praised me and I felt very happy.
我马上意识到我的所作所为破坏了我们的环境,或许有人会踩在上面而跌倒,我必须把它拾起来。想到这些,我让爸爸停车。我跳下自行车,跑回去拾起香蕉皮,并扔到了路边的垃圾箱里。看到这些,爸爸表扬了我。我感到很高兴。
In future I will protect the surroundings more consciously and think more
about others.
将来我要更自觉地保护周围的环境,更多地为他人着想。
篇19:英语日记50词
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+ 加入清单This morning I woke up at 6 o ’clock is to the kitchen for mom made a bowl
of beef and tomato noodles, mother looked at me as she do breakfast is very
happy, she finally put all eat noodles, very delicious, also say I grew up, not
a kid, can look after himself, I listened also very happy.
译文:今天早上我6点钟就醒来了然后到厨房为妈妈做了一碗牛肉西红柿面,妈妈看了我为她做的早饭很高兴,最后她把面条全部吃了,说很好吃,还说我长大了,不在是小孩了,可以自己照顾自己了,我听了也很开心。
篇20:初二期中考试备考:高分英语作文技巧
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+ 加入清单要点+结构+逻辑+语法+亮点
要点:实际上中考[微博]英语写作就等于两个字,翻译!因为中考英语写作一般会给出几个要点,要求必须在文章中有所体现。文章写的再好,只要缺少要点就会扣分。所以要点,也就是文章的第二段内容,要做到全,围绕中心。
结构:中考最流行的结构就是三段式,深受各地区中考英语写作阅卷老师的喜爱。为什么尼?因为这种结构十分清晰。“观点——要点——总结”让人一目了然。三段式的第一段:简单明了,开门见山,不超过2句话,如,我们想表达小强很强壮,第一段直接说XQis extremely strong。观点明确,这一句足矣。
第二段:分2-3点说为什么他强壮。1. 每天吃10顿饭,He has ten mealseveryday!详举吃的是什么。2. 每天运动2小时,He does exercise 2 hours a day!详举做了什么运动。
第三段:经过第二段的论证,可以得出结论。但请注意,不能完全照抄第一段,要有升华。也可以提出希望和建议等。如,Howstrong and robust XQ is!I hope to be him one day!
逻辑:这里的逻辑实际指的就是逻辑词。最常用的就是表示递进的,转折的,总结的逻辑词等。递进:除了first,second,third,finally等还可以使用高级点的,如first of all(首先),in addition,whatsmore,moreover(都是另外的意思),in a word,all inall(表示总结的)。转折:but,yet,however等。真正有经验的阅卷老师会很注意这些逻辑连接词,因为这些词体现了这个文章的思路。
语法:其他几点都不是硬性的要求,不那样做不能说是错,只能说是不好,但是语法却是硬性的。如,单词的使用,时态等。
亮点:当我们将前八个字都做得很完美的时候也只能得到一个二等文的上。要想得到一等文,最后两个字,亮点至关重要。大家设想如果我们是阅卷老师。有两篇写人美丽的作文摆在我们面前,都是结构清晰的三段式,要点都很全,都用了一些逻辑词,都没有语法错误,但是A篇只用了beautiful,good-looking,B篇却用到了attractive,charming,catching等,我坚信正常人都会给B篇高分的。这些高级一点的词汇,词组,句型便是我们得到一等文的最有力的绝招。所以,以后写英语作文要养成一般词汇限量用的好习惯。