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2024年高考英语作文预测三大原则

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高考临近,有关2012年高考英语作文的命题预测很多,参考命题预测可在一定程度上帮助考生把握复习的整体方向,有的放矢。历年高考作文题的功能,主要表现在两个方面,一个是评价功能,第二个是导向功能。高分网高考频道小编支招考生,考生可参考当地最近五年的高考作文题目,结合社会热点,从中分析规律,得出2012高考英语作文大的命题方向。

1、参考历年真题,总结规律。一般来说,高考英语作文体裁相对稳定,考生可参考当地最近五年的高考作文题目,从中分析规律,得出大的命题方向。如陕西对高考英语作文这一板块的考察,从新课改后重点突出的是学生对日常文体的应用,从09年至11年分别以电子邮件或写回信的方式让学生表达出对老师的真挚友谊、与家长沟通学习压力、或解决一些基本的学习难点等。因此我们不难看出,高考对学生作文的考察,会从学生的生活、学习、交友、家庭、社会活动等高中生较熟悉的层面,结合应用文的常见考察点:申请类、投诉类、感谢类、祝贺类等进行综合考察。

2、把对语言基础的应用作为考前强化重点。近年来的高考作文都非常注重考查学生的语言综合运用能力,根据《普通高中英语课程标准》对写作技能目标的要求,英语作文写作须“能根据所读文章进行转述或写摘要;能根据用文字及图表提供的信息写短文或报告;能写出语意连贯且结构完整的短文,叙述事情或表达观点和态度;能在写作中做到问题规范、语句通顺。”2012年高考英语作文的命题趋势,仍将会把学生对语言基础的应用作为首要考察点。

3、关注热点话题。纵观近几年的高考作文,可以发现,题材始终贴近社会、贴近现代生活,是中学生所熟知的热点话题。

除了把握好命题原则,掌握高考英语作文写作技巧更不可少:

1、审题:审题是做到切题的第一步。所谓审题就是要看清题意,确定文章的中心思想、主题,并围绕中心思想组织材料。

2、进行构思,列出简单的提纲,打造文章之骨架:审好题、立好意后,就要写提纲,打造文章的骨架。文章布局要做好几件事:安排好层次段落,铺设好过渡,处理好开头和结尾。

3、扩展成文:根据字数多少扩展成篇。扩展的内容一定要紧扣主题,千万不要写那些与主题不相关的内容。展开的方式包括:顺序法、举例法、比较法、对比法、说明法、因果法、推导法、归纳法和下定义等。可以根据需要任选一种或几种方式。

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篇1:高考的英语满分作文

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【试题回放】

假定你是李华,从小喜爱大熊猫(panda),一直通过有关网站(website)关注三年前在美国圣迭哥动物园出生的大熊猫“苏琳”和她的母亲“白云”。现在苏琳即将三岁。请根据以下要点给动物园工作人员写一封信:

1、自我介绍;2、祝贺苏琳生日;3、 感谢工作人员;4、索取苏琳三岁生日照。

注意:

1、词数100左右;2、可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3、开头语已为你写好。

【例文】

Dear Sir/Madam,

Greetings from China!

I’m Li Hua, a student in Sichuan. I’ve been a panda lover since I was a child. About three years ago I was delighted to learn that Baiyun gave birth to her daughter Sulin and I’ve been watching her grow on your website,. Now she’s going to be three. I’d like to wish her a happy birthday and to express my thanks to you for your hard work, because of which Sulin and her parents are living a happy and healthy life in the US.

By the way, could I have a photo of Sulin taken on her third birthday? Thank you very much in advance.

Yours truly,

Li Hua

【译文】

亲爱的先生/女士,

来自中国的问候!

我是李华,四川的一个学生。我被一只熊猫的爱人因为我还是个孩子的时候。大约三年前,我很高兴得知白云产下女儿Sulin和我一直看着她成长在你的网站上,。现在,她将是三个。我想祝她生日快乐,来表达我的感谢你的辛勤工作,因为Sulin和她的父母在美国生活愉快、健康的生活。

顺便问一下,我可以要一Sulin了她三岁生日的照片吗?非常感谢你提前。

敬启

李华

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篇2:高考英语作文模板——建议措施段

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【示例一】

①Considering all these reasons/this situation/Confronted with such a problem, I think we need to take some positive measures. ②On the one hand, ________ (方法/建议一). ③On the other hand, it is necessary for us to ________(方法/建议二). ④Thus/Only in this way, can ________(总结自己的观点/建议/态度).

【示例二】

①In order to improve the situation/To sum up the above argument/Confronted with such an issue/problem, we should find several solutions to it/need to take some positive measures. ②On the one hand/For one thing, we should ________ (方法/建议一). ③On the other hand/For another, ________(方法/建议二). ④Therefore/Thus/Only in this way, can ________ (段落总结句).

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篇3:2024年重庆高考英语作文题目:用英文给WWF写一封信

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2013年重庆高考英语作文题目:用英文给WWF写一封

写作一(满分15分)

请结合材料,按要求用英文写作。

A mother said,"My son is always on the phone, sleeping,out with his friends,or in his room He never has time to talk to me."

要求:(1)就此材料发表你的看法;

(2)紧扣材料,有明确的观点;

(3)词数不少于60;

(4)在答题卡上作答。

写作二(满分20分)

调查显示,中国长江江豚(finless porpoise)受人类活动影响而濒临灭绝,目前总数不足1000只。假设你是李华,现请用英文给WWF(世界自然保护基金组织)写一封信,请他们关注这一状况并提供帮助。内容应包括:

1.说明写信的目的

2.简述江豚现状

3.希望WWF如何帮助(比如:资助江豚保护项目等)

4.表示感谢并期待回复

注意:

(1)词数不少于80

(2)在答题卡上作答;

(3)书信格式及开头均已给出(不计入总词数)。

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篇4:2024高考英语作文预测俗语写作

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俗语写作

根据下面中文提示写一篇150词左右的短文。

俗话说:早起的鸟儿有虫吃。请根据你生活中亲身经历的一件事,说明一切成功源于干凡事早做规划,不断追求,辛勤劳作。

The early bird will catch worms

【猜题理由】2010年高考写作题应该是学生较为熟悉的、身边的与他们生活、学习和当今的教育密切相关的话题。一些俗语具有教育意义。2010年有些省份可能对考生进行人生规范、立志等方面有关的俗语进行考查。

【构思点拨】本题属于题目、提纲式作文,给出的要点虽然不多,但要求考生根据生活中亲身经历的一件事,说明一切成功来源于凡事早做规划,不断追求,辛勤劳作这个道理。因此要注意结合自己的经历,谈出自己对此的感受即可。

【参考范文】

The early bird will catch worms

An old saying The early bird will catch worms reminds us that if people want to be successful and outstanding, they must plan ahead of time and make their efforts to overcome all the possible difficulties.

For example, the Chinese athletes excellent performance in 2010 Olympic Winter Games in Vancouver is definitely the result of their early planning and hard training. If they don t set the aim and word work, even though they have the best talents, they cant compete with others and get more medals.

Another case in point is my learning experience. I was good at English, but I couldnt pass the exam, for I wasnt prepared well before the examination. I had many things to solve at that time. As I met the complex things, I was at a loss. The reason was that I had no plan and involved in many things and didnt study more hard, so I failed.

In short, the saying shows us the important of planning, working hard and constantly trying.

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篇5:高考英语满分作文:给动物园工作人员的一封信

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导语:小编为你整理,每年全国各地的高考英语满分作文,说不定其中就有你不知如何下笔的类型。拿起你的笔记来记录吧,为你的英语作文添亮点,让英语成绩更出色。

【全国卷】

【试题回放】假定你是李华,从小喜爱大熊猫(panda),一直通过有关网站(website)关注三年前在美国圣迭哥动物园出生的大熊猫苏琳和她的母亲白云。现在苏琳即将三岁。请根据以下要点给动物园工作人员写一封

1、 自我介绍; 2、祝贺苏琳生日; 3、感谢工作人员; 4、索取苏琳三岁生日照。

注意:1、词数100左右;2、可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3、开头语已为你写好。

例文:

Dear Sir/Madam,

Greetings from China!

Im Li Hua, a student in Sichuan. Ive been a panda lover since I was a child. About three years ago I was delighted to learn that Baiyun gave birth to her daughter Sulin and Ive been watching her grow on your website,. Now shes going to be three. Id like to wish her a happy birthday and to express my thanks to you for your hard work, because of which Sulin and her parents are living a happy and healthy life in the US.

By the way, could I have a photo of Sulin taken on her third birthday? Thank you very much in advance.

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篇6:高考英语作文模板——现象/现状说明段

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【示例一】

①With the rapid advances of ________ in recent years, ________has ________(引出现象). ②However, ________has ________, as ________(提出问题). ③As a result, ________(指出影响),which has aroused close social attention from all walks of life.

【示例二】

①With the rapid development of science and technology (electronic industry/higher education), more and more people come to realize that ________(引出现象). ②It is estimated, over the past decade, that ________(用具体数据说明现象).

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篇7:高考英语作文预测:自信是成功的一半

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导语:人们说自信成功的一半,它能给你带来勇气去坚持你所做的事。下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的优秀英语作文,欢迎阅读与借鉴,谢谢!

People say that self-confidence is half of the success that can bring you courage to stick to what you do. Without self-confidence, one can not do well in anything. Self-confidence is of great importance and value to a person.

Firstly, self-confidence enables us to have the ambition of being successful. Only when you have the ambition to be successful, can you be successful eventually. Secondly, once we gain self-confidence, we will possess the courage and strength to overcome the setbacks and difficulties. With self-confidence, no one and nothing can stop you to success.Thirdly, with self-confidence we may accomplish something which seems to be impossible previously. No great thing is easy for us, therefore we should hold the idea that anything is possible. We should, or have to trust in ourselves.

In short, self-confidence is the spiritual pillar of a person as well as the inherent power, which is of great importance and value to a person.

【参考译文】

人们说自信是成功的一半,它能给你带来勇气去坚持你所做的事。没有自信,一个人就不能做好任何事。自信对一个人很重要也很有价值。

首先,自信使我们拥有成功的雄心。只有当你有成功的野心的时候,你最后才能成功。其次,一旦我们获得了自信,我们就拥有了勇气和力量去克服挫折和困难。有了自信,没有人也没有什么能够阻止你成功。再次,有了自信我们可能实现一些以前看起来不可能的事。没有什么大事对我们是容易的,因此我们应该相信一切皆有可能。我们应该,或者必须相信自己。

总之,自信是一个人的精神支柱也是一个人的内在力量,它对一个人很重要也很有价值。

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篇8:2024高考英语作文预测:建议信

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在紧张的高三备考阶段,英语老师为了提高复习效率,广泛征求学生意见。假如你叫张华,请根据以下提示,给英语老师写封,表达你们的需求和建议

·适当放慢进度,留出思考时间

·反复训练重要、易错知识点

·指导方法

·减少作业量以保证质量

·给予鼓励

注意:1.根据以上内容写一篇短文,不要逐句翻译,可适当增加细节以使行文连贯。

2.要准确使用语法和词汇;使用一定的句型、词汇,清楚、连贯地表达自己的意思;

3. 词数:100个左右。开头已给出,不计词数。

Dear Mr. Wang,

We’re so pleased that you are willing to share our views.

In the course of the general revision, what we need is solid foundation.

______________________________________________________________________

______________________________________________________________________

范文(One possible version)

Dear Mr. Wang,

We’re so pleased that you are willing to share our views.

In the course of the general revision, what we need is solid foundation. As you know, we didn’t learn well enough in the first two years, so please slow down and make sure we have really mastered something. Besides, we need a little more time to think for ourselves. As for those important points which also make us confused, would you please give us more practice in case we forget? Meanwhile, we need your instruction, for example, in how to write in natural English. I still have another request: assign us less homework in order that we can do it more efficiently.

By the way, we often feel frustrated, which has a very bad effect on our study. We would appreciate it if you would give us some encouragement from time to time.

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篇9:英语高考

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Dear zhuanghua ,

It’s three months since I heard from you last time . Now I want to tell you

an impressive story happening on my first lesson .

On hearing the bell students ran into the classroom as quickly as they

could. But a boy ,LIMing , whose father died a month ago , was late for the

class. He stood outside the classroom silently . I smiled to him and let him

come in. After a while ,he cried on his desk . Then I walked to him and asked

what had happened . He told me that his mother was ill and he had to take some

medicine for her . At the same time ,he apologized to me for his lateness .

Moved by his words , I praised him for his deeds and decided to sing a song

named “mother” for the students . How time flies ! Class was over before I

realized it .

From the story I felt we should respect our parents and do our best to help

them . Do you think so ? I’m looking forward to your reply .

Yours truly ,

Li Hong

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篇10:高考英语作文之地点的表达必备万能模板

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导语:英语作文经常要我们介绍同一个地方,下面是yuwenmi小编为还在备考的同学整理的优秀英语素材,欢迎阅读与借鉴,谢谢!

一、“地址”的表达

(一)表示“在某村”:in + the village of + 村名。如:

In the village of Huaxi在华西村

(二)表示“在某县”:in + 县名 + county。

In Lingtai county 在灵台县

(三)表示“在某市”:in the city of + 市名。

In the city of Beijing 在北京市

(四)表示“在某省”:① in + 省名+province。② in the province of +省名。如:in Shanxi Province 在陕西省

(五)表示“在门牌号,街道”:at +门牌号(基数词) + 街道名+ (Street/Road)。如:at 1203 Washington Street在华盛顿大街1203号

at 88 Pingliang Road 在平凉路88号

(六)综合表达是:at +门牌号+ 街道名+ Street, in the city/village of +村名/市名, in +县名 + county, in the province of +省名。

【注意】①英语表示地址是从小地名开始,逐步到大地名。②如地名过多,可多用几个表示地点的介词,不要多用表示领属关系的介词of。③ 除门牌号用介词at, 其他均用介词in。

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篇11:2024年高考英语满分作文素材积累

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Sharpening your axe will not delay your jobof cutting wood.磨刀不误砍柴功。

Will is power. 意志就是力量。

Seeing is believing.眼见为实。

Necessity is the mother of invention. 需要是发明的动力。

Truth never fears investigation.事实从来不怕调查。

Virtue is fairer far than beauty.美德远远胜过美貌。

Well begun is half done.好的开端是成功的一半。

Where there is life,there is hope.留得青山在,不怕没柴烧。

Never fish in trouble water.不要混水摸鱼。

Reading makes a full man.读书使人完善。

Speech is silver,silence is gold.能言是银,沉默是金。

You cannot burn the candle at both ends. 蜡烛不能两头点,精力不可过分耗。

You cannot eat your cake and have it.鱼与熊掌,不可得兼。

Time cures all things.时间是医治一切创伤的良药。

Where there is a will,there is a way.有志者事竟成。

Wisdom in the mind is better than money in the hand.

脑中有知识,胜过手中有金钱。

Actions speak louder than words.事实胜于雄辩。

It’s never too late to mend. 亡羊补牢。

Keep good men company and you shall be of the number.

近朱者赤,近墨者黑。

A good book is a good friend. 好书如挚友。

Nothing is impossible for a willing heart.

心之所愿,无所不成。

One today is worth two tomorrows.一个今天胜似两个明天。

Poverty is stranger to industry. 勤劳之人不受穷。

Genius is nothing but labor and diligence.

天才不过是勤奋而已。

A bird in the hand is worth than two in the bush.

一鸟在手胜过双鸟在林。

Four short words sum up what has lifted most successful individuals above the crowd: a little bit more.四个简短的词汇概括了成功秘诀:多一点点!

It is never too old to learn. 活到老,学到老。

From small beginning come great things.伟大始于渺小。

A good beginning is half done.良好的开端是成功的一半。

New wine in old bottles.旧瓶装新酒。

All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.

只会用功不玩耍,聪明孩子也变傻。

Hope for the best, but prepare for the worst.

抱最好的愿望,做最坏的打算。

Good health is over wealth. 健康是最大的财富。

A fall into a pit,a gain in your wit.吃一堑,长一智。

Better late than never.迟做总比不做好;晚来总比不来好。

A friend in need is a friend indeed.患难见真情。

Birds of a feather flock together. 物以类聚,人以群分。

Complacency is the enemy of study.

学习的敌人是自己的满足。

Content is better than riches. 知足者常乐。

Books and friends should be few but good.

读书如交友,应求少而精。

All that ends well is well.结果好,就一切都好。

A close mouth catches no flies.病从口入。

By reading we enrich the mind, by conversation we polish it.

读书使人充实,交谈使人精明。

Care and diligence bring luck. 谨慎和勤奋才能抓住机遇。

A good book is the best of friends, the same today and forever.

一本好书,相伴一生。

A young idler,an old beggar. 少壮不努力,老大徒伤悲。

Caution is the parent of safety.小心驶得万年船。

A miss is as good as a mile.失之毫厘,差之千里。

An apple a day keeps the doctor away. 一天一苹果,不用请医生。

Many hands make light work. 人多力量大。

All things are difficult before they are easy.

凡事总是由难而易。

As a man sows, so he shall reap.种瓜得瓜,种豆得豆。

Misfortunes never come alone/single.祸不单行。

A bad beginning makes a bad ending.不善始者不善终。

No news is good news. 没有消息就是好消息。

No pains, no gains. 没有付出就没有收获。

All that glitters is not gold. 闪光的不一定都是金子。

A sound mind in a sound body. 健全的精神寓于健康的身体。

Don’t put off till tomorrow what should be done today. 今日事,今日毕。

Early to bed andearly to rise makes a man healthy,

wealthy and wise.

早睡早起身体好。

East or west,home is best.东好西好,还是家里最好。

Diligence is the mother of success. 勤奋是成功之母。

Easier said than done. 说得容易,做得难。

Do as you would be done by. 己所不欲,勿施于人。

Eat to live,but not live to eat.

人吃饭是为了活着,但活着不是为了吃饭。

Life is not all roses. 人生并不是康庄大道。

Every little helps a mickle. 聚沙成塔,集腋成裘。

Fortune favors those who use their judgement. 机遇偏爱善断之人。

Every man has his faults.金无足赤,人无完人。

A candle lights others and consumes itself.蜡烛照亮别人,却毁灭了自己。

All roads lead to Rome. 条条大路通罗马。

Every man is the architect of his own fortune.自己的命运自己掌握。

Fact speak louder than words. 事实胜于雄辩。

God helps those who help themselves.自助者天助。

Good advice is beyond all price.忠告是无价宝。

He who does not advance loses ground.逆水行舟,不进则退。

Knowledge makes humble, ignorance makes proud.

博学使人谦逊,无知使人骄傲。

Like father,like son.有其父必有其子。

Honesty is the best policy. 做人诚信为本。

Gold will not buy anything. 黄金并非万能。

Happiness takes no account of time. 欢乐不觉时光过。

Adversity leads to prosperity.穷则思变。

A friend is easier lost than found.得朋友难,失朋友易。

He is wise that is honest.诚实者最明智。

He laughs best who laughs last.谁笑到最后,谁笑得最好。

Kill two birds with one stone.一箭双雕。

Knowledge is power.知识就是力量。

Make hay while the sun shines.良机勿失。

Many heads are better than one.三个臭皮匠,赛过诸葛亮。

No rose without a thorn.没有不带刺的玫瑰。

Man proposes,God disposes. 谋事在人,成事在天。

No smoke without fire.无风不起浪。

Success belongs to the persevering. 坚持就是胜利。

The greatest talkers are always least doers.

语言的巨人总是行动的矮子。

Time and tide wait for no man. 时不我待。

Wise men love truth,whereas fools shun it.智者热爱真理,愚者回避真理

Practice makes perfect.熟能生巧。

Misfortune tests the sincerity of friends.患难见真情。

Money isn’t everything.钱不是万能的。

Rome is not built in a day. 冰冻三尺,非一日之寒。

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篇12:高考优秀英语作文之无烟日

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高考英语作文 世界无烟日 World No Tobacco Day

This years observance of World No Tobacco Day focuses on "Gender and tobacco, with an emphasis on marketing to women".

今年的世界无烟日,关注“性别与烟草,强调对女性的营销”。

Although fewer than 1 out of 10 women are smokers, that still adds up to an estimated 200 million women around the world. Moreover, that number could grow, since the tobacco industry is spending heavily on advertisements that target women and associate tobacco use with beauty and liberation.

虽然不到10名女性中有1名女性吸烟者,但仍有200000000名妇女在全世界估计有名妇女被吸烟。而且,这个数字可能会增长,因为烟草业在广告上投入巨资,针对妇女和联想烟草使用的广告与美和解放。

According to a recent study by the World Health Organization (WHO), the number of girls and boys who smoked was about equal in half the 151 countries surveyed. This finding is even more worrisome since young people who smoke are likely to continue in adulthood.

据世界卫生组织最近的一项调查显示,有一半的女孩和男孩在调查的151个国家中大约有一半是平等的。这一发现更令人担忧,因为吸烟的年轻人很可能在成年后继续继续下去。

Evidence indicates that the prevalence rate of tobacco use among women is on the rise in some countries. Governments everywhere must take action to protect women from tobacco advertising, promotion and sponsorship, as stipulated in the WHO Framework Convention on Tobacco Control.

有证据表明,在一些国家,妇女使用烟草的患病率在上升。各国政府都必须采取行动,保护妇女不受烟草控制的“世界卫组织公约”规定的烟草广告、促销和赞助。

The Convention also calls on Governments to protect women from second-hand tobacco smoke -- especially in countries where women feel powerless to protect themselves and their children. As WHO data show, of the 430,000 adults who die each year from second-hand smoke, nearly two thirds are women.

该公约还呼吁各国政府保护妇女免受二手烟草烟雾的保护,特别是在妇女认为自己无力保护自己和子女的国家。正如世卫组织数据显示,每年死于二手烟的430000名成年人中,有近三分之二名是女性。

Around the world, more than 1.5 million women die each year from tobacco use. Most of these deaths occur in low-and middle-income countries. Without concerted action, that number could rise to 2.5 million women by the year 2030.

在世界各地,每年有超过1500000名妇女死于烟草使用。大多数这些死亡发生在低收入和中等收入国家。如果没有协调一致的行动,这一数字可能会上升到2500000,2030岁的女性。

We must turn back the global tobacco epidemic. On World No Tobacco Day, I urge all Governments to address this public health threat. Tobacco use is not stylish or empowering. It is ugly and deadly.

我们必须把全球烟草流行化。在世界无烟日,我呼吁各国政府应对这一公共卫生威胁。烟草使用是不时尚的或授权的。它是丑陋和致命的。

Would My Father Have to Operate父亲得动手术吗

I was waiting for the doctor to finish his examination.I was worried and nervous.Would my father have to operate?Would a blood transfusion be necessary?What would he have to say?

Dr Lin was a heart expert.He was an excellent doctor and his examinations were always complete.He listened to the patients heart,took his blood pressure and temperature,gave him an X-ray and examined his eyes and ears.The doctor finall completed his examination and spoke to me.He told me that heart trouble is never a minor illness,but this wasnt a serious heart attack.He advised losing weight,getting plenty of sleep and eating good meals.Smoking and drinking would be harmful,of course.Dr Lin said it would be necessary to be careful for a while,but he was confident that there was nothing to worry about.

I felt much better after I spoke to Dr Lin.I was certain that my father would be up and around again very soon.Hes seventy five years old now,but he can still live for a long time if he takes good care of himself.

我在等医生来完成他的检查,我很担心,紧张,我父亲必须要手术吗?输血是必要的吗?他要说什么?

林博士是心脏病专家。他是一名优秀的医生,他考试总是完成。他听病人的心脏,把他的血压和体温,给他X光检查了他的眼睛和耳朵。医生finall完成他的考试和我谈话。他告诉我,心脏问题从来不是一个轻微的疾病,但这并不是一个严重的心脏病。他建议减肥,获得充足的睡眠和饮食。吸烟和饮酒会是有害的,当然。林博士说,就必须要小心而,但他有信心,有什么可担心。

我觉得好多了之后我说林博士,我是一定的,我父亲会很快再四处走动。他的七十五年现在老了,但他仍能活很长一段时间,如果他需要好好照顾自己。

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篇13:2024高考英语作文:网络公开课

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导语:现在网络公开课很盛行;网络公开课有不少好处,也存在一些问题;对此你有什么建议吗?下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的优秀英语作文,欢迎阅读与借鉴,谢谢!

话题:Open Courses

1. 现在网络公开课很盛行;

2. 网络公开课有不少好处,也存在一些问题;

3. 我对此的建议。

范文:

Online open courses are gaining popularity in recent years. Follwoing globally famous universities like Yale and Harvard, some universities in China have also started to offer online open courses. Those courses have attracted people from all classes with different occupations.

The courses have brought many benefits to people. Many of the courses are provided by universities in foreign countries, and thus offer fresh ideas to us. Through them, we can keep up with what people are thinking all over the world. But that can also be a problem. Some of the courses may not be very suitable for Chinese students because of cultural differences and may cause chaos on Chinese campus.

In my opinion, online open course is useful and we should make use of it to broaden our horizons. But we should also remember to have our own thinking and not be brainwashed by improper ideas.

【参考译文】

在线开放课程近年来越来越受欢迎。以下全球知名大学喜欢耶鲁和哈佛,在中国一些大学也开始提供网上开放课程。这些课程吸引了来自不同职业的班级的人们。

这些课程给人们带来了许多好处。许多课程都是由国外的大学提供的,从而为我们提供了新的思路。通过他们,我们可以跟上世界各地的人们在想什么。但这也可能是一个问题。一些课程可能不适合中国学生,因为文化差异,可能会造成混乱的中国校园。

在我看来,网上开放课程是有用的,我们应该利用它来扩大我们的视野。但我们也要记住,要有自己的思想,不要被错误的想法洗脑。

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篇14:2024年高三英语高考全国卷英语作文最后几天的备考资料

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全国英语作文最后几天的备考资料。备考目的性、指导性、猜押性都很强。最后几天一定

要看的。

一、全国卷书面表达分析

2015全国I:应用文、写信约稿、介绍美节日风俗和中学生生活。

2015全国II:应用文、邮件邀约、去敬老院陪老人过重阳节。

2014全国I:应用文、写信咨询、英语学习班广告的咨询。

2014全国II:应用文、报社正文、十年后的我

2013全国I:应用文、写信问是否接机(带着中国画)

2013全国II:应用文、写信让友代卖中国结

2012课标卷:应用文、写邮件、申请参加夏令营

2012大纲卷:应用文、邀请信、邀请外教参加生日聚会

二、综上分析,干货如下:

1.都是应用文。

说明文、议论文、夹叙夹议文不考,尤其要杜绝那些高大上的,平时经常训练的正反观点对

比的文章也要果断抛弃。

2.与学生生活、学习、交友息息相关。

生活相关:15I、15II、14II、13I、13II、12大纲

学习相关:14I、12

交友相关:12大纲

注意生活、学习、交友三大话题。有些作文也许会跨其中两个话题。凡是不符合这三个话题

的作文,高考最后这10几天少复习,甚至不复习的好。地震、环保、食品安全、雾霾、河流

空气污染、交通拥挤、良心道德、服不服等等的高大上,都抛弃吧(这些都是大学作文解决

的问题)。所以与学生生活、学习、交友相关的词汇、句式还是好好总结的。

3.渗透传统文化的元素。

传统文化:2015II重阳节、2013中国画。

这方面的词汇还是要适当准备一些滴。例如:paper cutting 剪纸,Lantern Festival 元

宵节, Mid-autumn Day 中秋节,tang yuan/ sweet rice dumpling 元宵,Chinese New Year’

s Eve 除夕,Dragon Boat Festival 龙舟节,DoubleNinth Festival 重阳节, Chinese tea

中国茶

4.生活、学习、交友三大话题·必须掌握的【词汇 + 短语】

①schools English newspaper,Chinese / foreign cultures, more information,

volunteer, great fun,opportunity, confidence in, experience,lecture,

excellence in, speech competitions, a better idea,

②be popular with/among,especially, exciting,excited, patiently,be

patient with,be interested in,the most important, various, outgoing,

successfully, successful, be good at/for, more than glad, be willing to help you

with,be familiar with,delicious, with joy

③welcome, spend their holidays,invite you to join us,make dumplings,intend

to join,enjoy,invite sb. to, gave him a warm welcome, have a try,give

me a piece of advice, takeseriously,depend on, get a higher education,

improve ourselves,would like to, interview,I believe,learn a great deal

fromabout, organize class activities,deal with, stick to, share

with,express myself, go for an outing, manage to do,persuade, accept,

receive,have a good/wonderful time,benefit, benefit from,different,

give up, have a picnic, go to a museum, have lots of fun,take pains to improve,

get prepared for, be able to, get along well with,have a good command of,

appreciate, made up my mind to do, make a great difference (to someone), think

highly of, pay much attention to,take notice of,keep it in mind that,in

return, helpwith, feel nervous, make you familiar with, long to, broaden

my mind, have trouble doing,communicate,suffer from, speak English fluently,

visit some famous places, chat with, participate in, take part in, won prizes,

take into consideration, it’s necessary to do,respect, trust,protect

from,agree with, in order to,encourage sb. to do,organize

5.必须熟练运用的【句型 + 连接词】

Im writing to tell you

I wonder if youd like to

Im writing to apply for the position as a student volunteer.

I am writing an e-mail to tell you something about

Only in this way can we make a great contribution to

If I could ,I would

Hard work pays off.

We shouldWe’d betterIt is better to do

I am sure that I can perfectly live up to your expectations. I will be grateful if

you could give me a kind consideration.

Only if we put our heart into our lessons could we make great progress

Could you give me some advice on how to

If you are able to come with us, please let us know and

Im looking forward to hearing from you.

Looking forward to your reply.

May I have your attention

First,Second,Third

so long as,even though, at the same time, By the way, Besides, not onlybut

also, What’s more, as well as

6.三大从句和非谓语的运用是必不可少的。每篇文章这两类至少运用一次。同学们都知道,

在此不必多说。

三、透过2015年全国I的作文,看清标准范文的猫腻

假定你是李华,你校英文报“外国文化”栏目拟刊登介绍美国节日风俗和中学生生活的短文。

请给美国朋友彼得写信约稿,要点如下:

1.栏目介绍; 2.稿件内容; 3.稿件长度:约400词;4.交稿日期:6月28日前。

注意:1.词数100左右。2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。3.开头语已为你写好。

Dear Peter,

Id like to ask you to write an article for our schools English newspaper.

下面把标准答案给与了分解,同学们务必要逐字逐句地研读,找出标准范文为什么这样

写,发现范文写作时的思考过程,挖掘范文和作文原题中的一一对等的字眼提示。通过研读

分析,再回扣题目本身。写作也就那么回事儿,其实一点也不难。希望同学们可以悟出基本

的写作思路、技巧。以下英语连起来就是标准范文。

称呼,已给:

Dear Peter,

开头语,已给:

Id like to ask you to write an article for our schools English newspaper.

开篇,介绍“外国文化”栏目概况 (要点1:点出栏目名称、特点popular、进行栏目介绍):

The “Foreign Cultures” section in our newspaper is very popular among us students.

It carries articles written by foreign friends about the cultures of their home

countries. (搭配be popular among、carry一词用得好、过去分词短语written by作后

置定语)

进行约稿 (写作目的,这可是正事儿):

Would you please write something about the culture in your part ofthe United States

稿件内容 (要点2):

And (and一词虽然简单,但用得巧妙,呈上衔接,过渡自然,读起来还有抑扬顿挫之感觉) we

would especially (强调递进) welcome articles about how Americans spend their holidays

and festivals (节日风俗,扣栏目) and the life of American high school students (中

学生生活,扣栏目).

适当拓展,根据字数灵活安排

You can write anything relevant so long as its interesting and informative. (高

级词汇、so long as好句式)

稿件长度 (要点3):

400 words would be fine.

交稿日期 (要点4):

Could we have your article before June 28

合适的结尾 (万能句式,一定背下):

Im looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours,

Li Hua

四、2016作文模拟猜押如下:

(一)书信/邮件

Passage 1(建议信、学习、文化)

你打算毕业后到美国留学, 想咨询你的美国朋友Chris。请你根据以下提示写一封信。

1.目的:增长见识,体验文化;2.困惑:语言障碍,学业压力;3.征求建议。

注意:1.词数100左右;2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3. 开头和结尾已给出,不

计入总词数。

Dear Chris,

Yours,

Joe

One possible version

DearChris,

I’ve finally made my decision to go to America for further study after high school.

I’ve been longing to go to America, mainly for two reasons. One is that I

can experience American culture, and the other is that I can broaden my mind in this

country. But I have some worries. My English is a bit poor, especially spoken English.

I’m afraid I’ll have trouble communicating. Besides, I may suffer from heavy pressure

from college courses.

I hope you can offer me some practical advice.

Looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Joe

Passage2(学习、文化)

假如你是李华。开学之初,你的英语老师Ms Li希望了解每位同学的英语学习情况,并征求

教学建议。请按以下要点用英语给她写一封信。

1.对英语学习的认识。

2.自己目前的英语水平。

3.自己英语学习存在的主要问题。

4.对英语教学的两点建议。

注意:1.词数100左右。2.信的开头和结尾已给出。

Dear Ms Li,

I’m very happy to have you as our English teacher

_________________________________ Thank you!

Li Hua

One possible version

Dear Ms Li,

I am very happy to have you as our English teacher.

As the world is becoming a global village, English is getting more and more

important, so mastering English means we can see the world through a new window.

My English is just OK and the two main problems in my study are that I feel

it difficult to learn words by heart, and that I often feel nervous when speaking

English. I really hope that you can give me good advice on how to memorize new words.

Another suggestion is to give us more chances to practice speaking. I believe we can

make much progress in English with your help.

Thank you!

Li Hua

Passage3(学习、文化)

作为班长,请你根据以下内容给新任外教Mr. Smith 写一封信,向他表示欢迎并转达同学们

对英语课的希望:

1.介绍西方文化;2.组织多样活动;3.关注学生发音。

注意: 1.词数100左右;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3.开头和结尾已给出,不计

入总词数。

Dear Mr. Smith,

_____________________________________________________________

Yours,

Chris

One possible version

Dear Mr. Smith,

I’m writing on behalf of my class to extend our warm welcome to you. Here are some of our expectations for your English class.

First, we’d like to have topics in class about Western culture. We are all very interested in knowing more about culture behind the language. Besides, we’d appreciate various activities to get everyone involved in speaking English. Last but not least, please give us some guidance and training in our pronunciation, because we all hope to speak English fluently and clearly just as you native speakers do. Thank you very much. Looking forward to meeting you!

Yours,

Chris

Passage 4(生活)

假定你是刘芳。今年暑期加拿大的一所中学将组织该校的学生来你所就读的学校访问。其间,Lucy将借住在你家。请你给她写封信,代表全家欢迎她的到来并告之有关事宜,内容要点如下:

上午:参观学校各教学场所及设施。

下午:游览繁华市区及周遍景点。

晚上:看电视、玩游戏、聊天等。

注意:词数100左右;

Dear Lucy,

_____________________________________________________________

I’m looking forward very much to meeting you soon.

Yours,

Liu Fang

One possible version

Dear Lucy,

I am glad to learn that you are coming to China and will stay at my home.

My parents and I are very pleased to have you with us. Now let me tell you what we have arranged for you. As far as I know, you will be shown around the school in the morning, but in the afternoon I’ll take you to the downtown and then some places of interest. We’ll mostly stay at home in the evening watching TV, playing games, or meeting people. I’m sure you will have a wonderful time and learn more about Chinese culture.

I’m looking forward very much to meeting you soon.

Yours sincerely,

Liu Fang

Passage5(生活、文化)

假设你是高三(1)班的学生李华。你的英国朋友Chris八月份来北京度假,来信向你咨询如

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篇15:2024年高考英语作文预测:交通与环保

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这几年全国中东部地区17省市持续雾霾,陷入大范围的重度和严重污染。造成这一现象的主要原因是工厂排出的废气和汽车尾气等。绿色低碳,保护环境,从我们身边小事做起。现请你根据以下三个方面的提示,以“Let’s Do Something to Save Our Environment”为题写一篇80词左右的短文。

内容包括:

1.重要性:只有一个地球。

2.主要问题:污染、疾病、灾难。

3.措施:停止污染、保护大自然。

Let’s Do Something to save Our Environment

We all live on the earth. The earth is our home. We have only one earth. We must take care of it. It gives us the best environment. If we harm it, it will be angry. And then we will have a terrible end. There are three problems in our earth, they are pollution, disaster and illness.

It’s our duty to protect our environment. So we must plant more trees, protect the flowers and the trees, save energy, reduce the pollution. We should ask our government to control the pollution from the factories.

Protecting the nature is very important. It’s our duty to keep our environment clean and tidy.

If everyone makes a contribution to protecting the environment, the earth will become much more beautiful.

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The Dragon Boat Festival is one of the most popular traditional festivals

celebrated in China, which is on the fifth of the fifth lunar month, also known

as Duanwu Festival. It’s said that it is to commemorate the death of a Chinese

patriotic poet, Qu Yuan, who was snared by corrupt officials in ancient China

and finally committed suicide by drowning himself in the Miluo River to protest

against them.

The traditions and customs held on this festival differ from place to

place, but there are some common in them. First, the most famous and great

tradition is holding Dragon Boat races, which are held by fishermen’s attempt to

protect Qu Yuan’s body against attacking by fishes and other animals in the

river by beating drums and row the dragon shaped boat. Nowadays dragon boat

races have been an annual popular sport activity among people. In addition,

making and eating Zongzi—a dumpling made of glutinous rice and wrapped in bamboo

or reed leaves—is also a popular custom during this day. It can be made by many

kinds of stuffing. What’s more, hanging herbs on the front door, drinking

realgar wine and pasting up picture of Zhongkui—a mythic guardian figure in

ancient china—are also popular during the festival, which are mean to protect

people from evil and disease.

These customs and traditions have been changed a little in recent years,

but they still make contribution to the spread and inheritance of Chinese

culture.

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篇17:2024年高考英语作文万能句子及模板

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对比观点作文

(1) 要求论述两个对立的观点并给出自己的看法。 1. 有一些人认为。。。 2. 另一些人认为。。。3. 我的看法。。。

The topic of +名词或者动名词或者名词性从句is becoming more and more popular recently.最近___话题已经越来越受热议 There are two sides of opinions about it. 关于这个话题有两方面的观点Some people

say A is their favorite.一些人说A观点是他们最支持的 They hold their view for the reason of

②-----------------(支持A的理由是一)What is more, ③------------并且理由二是。。。). Moreover,

④---------------(还有理由三是).

While others think that B is a better choice in the following three

reasons.(其他一些人认为在以下三个原因下B观点是更好的选择) Firstly,-----------------(首先支持B的理由

一). Secondly (besides),⑥------------------(其次理由二是). Thirdly

(finally),⑦------------------(最后理由三是).

From my point of view,以我而言 I think ⑧----------------(我认为我的观点是). The reason

is that+从句 ⑨--------------------(我的原因是). As a matter of fact,事实上 there are some

other reasons to explain my choice.还有一些其他的原因可以解释我的选择 For me,对我而言 the former is

surely a wise choice . 前者的选择确实很明确

Some people believe that ①---------一些人相信). For example,例如 they think+从句

②他们认为。。。).And it will bring them ③-----------------( 。。。为他们带来。。。的好处).

In my opinion,在我看来 I never think this reason can be the

point我从没想过这些是支持。。。的原因. For one thing,④-------------(我不同意该看法的理由一). For another

thing, ⑤-----------------(我反对的理由之二).

Form all what I have said,根据以上我所说的 I agree to the thought that

⑥------------------(我同意。。。的观点)

英语作文:阐述主题题型

要求从一句话或一个主题出发,按照提纲的要求进行论述. 1. 阐述名言或主题所蕴涵的意义. 2.

分析并举例使其更充实.

The good old proverb ----------------(名言或谚语)reminds us that

----------------(释义). 古老的名言谚语告诉我们。。。Indeed,的确,确实 we can learn many things form

it. 我们可以从那些名言学到很多东西

First of all,-----------------(首先我们可以学到。。。). For example,

-------------------(例如。。。). Secondly,----------------(第二我们可以学到). Another case is

that ---------------(举例说明).另一个例子为。。。 Furthermore , 并且------------------(理由三)

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篇18:高考英语写作素材:常用英语句子

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英文写作中常用的句子有哪些?下面来看看小编为大家整理的内容吧。

Never think yourself above business.勿自视过高;不要眼高手低;永远不要认为自己是大才小用。

Life is measured by thought and action, not by time. 衡量生命的尺度是思想和行为,而不是时间。

It pays to help others. 帮助别人是值得的。

It is time the authorities concerned took proper steps to solve the traffic problems.该是有关当局采取适当的措施来解决交通问题的时候了。

He that thinks his business below him will always be above his business.自命大才小用,往往眼高手低。

Business may be troublesome,but idleness is pernicious.事业虽扰人,懒惰害更大。

We should get into the habit of keeping good hours.我们应该养成早睡早起的习惯。

We should bring home to people the value of working hard.我们应该让人们明白努力的价值。

Time tries truth.时间检验真理。

Time past cannot be called back again.光阴一去不复返。

Those who violate traffic regulations should be punished.违反交通规则的人应该受到处罚。

There is no one but longs to go to college.人们都希望上大学。

The progress of thee society is based on harmony.社会的进步是以和谐为基础的。

The great use of life is to spend it for something that overlasts it.生命的最大用处是将它用于能比生命更长久的事物上。

Taking exercise is closely related to health.做运动与健康息息相关。

Since the examination is around the corner, I am compelled to give up doing sports.既然考试迫在眉睫,我不得不放弃作运动。

常用短语:

1. 有利有弊 Every coin has its two sides。(不推荐用。。。) No gardenwithout weeds。

2. 对…观点因人而异 Views on …vary from person to person。

3. 重视 attach great importance to…

4. 社会地位 social status

5. 把时间和精力放在…上 focus time and energy on…

6. 扩大知识面 expand one’s scopeof knowledge

7. 身心两方面 both physically and mentally

8. 有直接/间接关系 be directly / indirectly related to…

9. 提出折中提议 set forth a compromise proposal

10. 可以取代 “think”的词 believe, claim, hold the opinion/beliefthat

11. 缓解压力/ 减轻负担 relievestress/ burden

12. 优先考虑/发展… give (top) priority to sth。

13. 与…比较 compared with…/ in comparison with

14. 对这一问题持有不同态度 hold different attitudes towards this issue

15. 支持前/后种观点的人 people / those in favor of theformer/latteropinion

16. 有/ 提供如下理由/ 证据 have/ provide the followingreasons/evidence

17. 在一定程度上 to some extent/ degree / in some way

18. 理论和实践相结合 integratetheory with practice

19. …必然趋势 an irresistible trend of…

20. 日益激烈的社会竞争 the increasingly fierce social competition

21. 眼前利益 immediate interest/ short-term interest

22. 长远利益. interest in the long run

23. …有其自身的优缺点 … has its merits and demerits/ advantagesanddisadvantages

24. 扬长避短 Exploit to the full one’s favorableconditions andavoidunfavorable ones

25. 取其精髓,去其糟粕 Take the essence and discard the dregs。

26. 对…有害 do harm to / be harmful to/ be detrimental to

27. 交流思想/ 情感/ 信息 exchange ideas/ emotions/ information

28. 跟上…的最新发展 keep pace with / catch up with/ keep abreastwiththe latest development of …

29. 采取有效措施来… take effective measures to do sth。

30. …的健康发展 the healthy development of …

31. 相反 in contrast / on the contrary。

32. 代替 replace/ substitute / take the place of 大写)

33. 经不起推敲 cannot bear closer analysis / cannot hold water

34. 提供就业机会 offer job opportunities

35. 社会进步的反映 mirror of social progress

36. 毫无疑问 Undoubtedly, / There is no doubt that…

37. 增进相互了解 enhance/ promote mutualunderstanding

38. 充分利用 make full use of / take advantage of

39. 承受更大的工作压力 suffer from heavier work pressure

40. 保障社会的稳定和繁荣 guarantee the stability and prosperity ofoursociety

41. 更多地强调 put more emphasis on…

42. 适应社会发展 adapt oneself to the development of society

43. 实现梦想 realize one’s dream/ make one’s dream come true

44. 主要理由列举如下 The main reasons are listed as follows:

45. 首先 First, Firstly, In the first place, To begin with

46. 其次 Second, Secondly, In the second place

47. 再次 Besides,In addition, Additionally,Moreover,Furthermore

48. 最后 Finally, Last but not the least, Above all, Lastly,

49. 总而言之 All in all, To sum up, In summary, In a word,

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篇19:高考英语作文话题预测:家乡的变化

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导语:随着科技的发展,你发现家乡有什么变化吗?下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的优秀英语作文,欢迎阅读与借鉴,谢谢!

My home town is in the center of Xuzhou which was a quiet and beautiful place. In the past, there were many animals. They were lovely and nice. The air was fresh and there were many birds fly in the sky.

Over the past years, it has changed a lot. At the present, it becomes a modern town and develops a lot. Now, the people in Xuzhou are richer than before, so most of people go to work by bus or by underground. Sometimes, they also drive their private cars to work. Many people sell out their old houses and move into new flats.

In some ways, the development has brought some good things, but it has also causes much environment pollution. I think we should take action to reduce the pollution.

​【参考译文】

我的家乡在徐州,是一个安静而美丽的地方中心。在过去,有许多动物。他们是可爱的,漂亮的。空气清新,有许多鸟在天空飞翔。

过去的那些年,它已经发生了很大的变化。现在,它已经成为一个现代化城市,也得到了很大的发展。现在徐州的人都比以前富有,所以大多数人都是乘巴士或地铁去工作的。有时候,他们也开私家车去上班。很多人卖了他们的老房子,然后搬进新公寓。

在某些方面,发展带来了好处,但是也带来了环境污染。我认为我们应该采取措施来减少污染。

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篇20:2024年高考英语写作高分秘籍

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导语:英语作文是最容易拿分,也是最容易丢分的题型。写作上面有什么技巧呢?下面是yjbs作文网小编为您收集整理的资料,希望能够对您有所帮助。

一:开头

句子的开头方式,不要一味地都是主语开头,接着是谓语、宾语,最后再加一个状语。可以把状语置于句首,或用分词做状语等。

〔原文〕We met at the school gate and went there together early in the morning.

〔修正〕Early in the morning we met at the school gate and went there together.

〔原文〕The young man couldn’t help crying when he heard the bad news.

〔修正〕Hearing the bad news, the young man couldn’t help crying.

二:经过

2.在整篇文章中,避免只使用一两个句式,要灵活运用诸如倒装句、强调句、主从复合句、分词状语等。

①强调句

〔原文〕I met him in the street yesterday.

〔修正〕It was in the street that I met him yesterday.

It was yesterday that I met him in the street.

②由with或without引导的短语。如:

He sat in a chair with a newspaper in the hand.

③分词短语。如:

Satisfied with the result,He decided to go on with a new experiment.

④倒装句。如:

Only in this way can we achieve our goal.

Never before have I seen such a wonderful film.

Not only should we study in the college, but also learn how to be a decent person.

⑤省略句。如:

If so,victory will be ours.

You can make some changes wherever necessary.

3.通过分句和合句,增强句子的连贯性和表现力。

〔原文〕He stopped us half an hour ago. He made us catch the next offender.

〔修正〕He stopped us half an hour ago and made us catch the next offender.

〔原文〕We had a short rest. Then we began to play happily. We sang and danced.

Some told stories. Some played chess.

〔修正〕After a short rest, we had great fun singing and dancing, telling jokes and playing chess.注意使用不同长度的句子,要结合使用,不能只用短句或只用长句。

4.学会使用过渡词。如:

①递进: then(然后), besides(还有), furthermore(而且), moreover(此外)等。

②转折: however(然而), but(但是), on the contrary (相反), after all(毕竟)等。

③总结: finally(最后), at last(最后), in brief(总之), in conclusion(最后)等。

④强调: indeed(确实), certainly(一定), surely(确定), above all(尤其)等。

⑤对比: in the same way(同样地), just as(正如), on the one hand…on the other hand(一方面……另一方面……)等。

相似的比较: similarly, in the same manner 相反的比较: on the other hand, conversely, whereas, while, instead, nevertheless, in contrast, on the contrary, compared with …,

5.注意使用词组、习语来代替一些单词,以增加文采。如:

〔原文〕A new railway is being built in my hometown.

〔修正〕A new railway is under construction in my hometown.

6.避免重复使用某一单词或短语。如:

〔原文〕I like reading while my brother likes watching television.

〔修正〕I like reading while my brother enjoys watching television.

I like reading while watching television appeals to my brother.

三、 结尾

1、 All in all, what really matters is, in fact, that……(比如说到和谐社会 All in all, what really matters is, in fact, that we should build our society a harmonious society.)

2、 Therefore, it’s not difficult to draw a conclusion that……

3、 As a result , we should take effective measures to do sth.(我们必须采取一些有效的措施来做些什么)

4、 From what has been discussed above , we may conclude that ……

5、 Obviously(此为过渡短语), we can draw the conclusion that good manners arise from politeness and respect for others.

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