我的梦想英语作文带翻译大学汇集20篇

First day of losing weight

Today is the first day of my plan of losing weight.This morning , i drunk

only a cup of milk oatmeal as plan,and then i started to studied my english.when

it was 10：00 am, the inner man began to crave the nourishment, i couldnt

concentrate my attention to study， and there fried all kinds of delicious food

in my brain:hamburgers、dumplings、egg fried rice and omelette…… .After ten

minutes strugling，I couldnt help that anymore! I rushed to the kitchen, in

which then i ate whatever that was eatable!After that i finally gave up to lose

weight, thinking that im not that fat to need to go on a diet. Anyway, i should

continue to enjoy delicious food which i think is most beautiful thing in the

world.

参考翻译

减肥的第一天

今天是我减肥计划的第一天。今天早上，按照计划，我只喝了一杯牛奶燕麦，然后就去学习英语了。到了上午10点钟的时候，我的肚子开始咕咕叫想要吃东西了，我不能集中精神好好学习，满脑子飞过各种各样的美食：汉堡包、饺子、蛋炒饭、煎蛋……经过10分钟的挣扎，我终于忍不住了!我冲进厨房，把所有能吃的食物都吃了!吃完之后，想着自己其实并没有胖到要节食的地步，我最终决定放弃减肥。不过怎么样，我应该继续享受我所认为是世界上最美好的东西——美食。

导语：从小到大，我们有很多老师，你最喜欢的老师是哪个呢?下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的英语作文，欢迎阅读与借鉴，谢谢!

Miss Li is my Chinese teacher . She is about thirty years old . She is very pretty and young . Her hair is brown and curly .

Miss Li always wears a blue coat . I think her favourite colour will be blue .

Miss Li is very friendly and kindly .Her classes are very interesting ,we all like to have Chinese class .

She always smiles when she speak to us .Sometimes she is very strict with us,when we make a mistake,she often makes us stand up .

Miss Li often sticks to have lessons when she is ill , She looked weak,but still beautiful .

Miss Li love us very much, she teaches us so carefully .I think she is a good teacher. We all love her,too .

I think teachers are like candles , giving off light for others by burning themselves 。

英语作文翻译：

李小姐是我的语文老师。她大约三十岁。她非常漂亮和年轻。她的头发是棕色卷曲的。

李小姐总是穿着一件蓝色的外套。我认为她最喜欢的颜色是蓝色。

李老师很友好，很和蔼，她的课很有趣，我们都喜欢上语文课。

她和我们说话时总是面带微笑，有时她对我们要求很严格，当我们犯错时，她经常让我们站起来。

李小姐生病的时候经常坚持上课，她看上去很虚弱，但仍然很漂亮。

李老师非常爱我们，她教我们很认真，我认为她是个好老师。我们都爱她，太。

我认为教师就像蜡烛，燃烧自己照亮别人。

8College life

When I was young at high school,I couldnt stop dreaming about my college life again and again.Suffering too much pressure form college entrance test,I always admired college students for their relaxed life in college.

In my personal opinion,living in university is  an enjoyment.Every day we can open our eyes naturally,and put on clothes in our own style without warring about teachers rigid control.Communicating with great master is no longer beyond our reach.Each course we take can be a feast for our mind and soul.After class,we will lead a rich and colorful life filled with various leisure activities such as .Library in  university is another factor I pursue.I think its an access to enhancing our comprehensive abilities to read even just scan all  sorts of

writings.Whats more,we will have so much disposable time that we can do whatever worthy.And our contact group will be extended signally via organizing and participating many activities.All in all,I once imagined that I can live a life that is substantial but meaningful.

However,I just have to admit that what I just describe is really dream.Now living in SD I cant figure out what I pursue and make a feasible career planning.So many young cynics in this schoolyard  argue for something meaningless.Worse still,the academic atmosphere has already done with nothing left.I havent found a busy but rich thing to try my best.As a matter of fact,I even cant choose a lifestyle I prefer.What a tragedy it is between dream and reality. 篇二：大学生活的英语作文怎么写

Life in the university is not as satisfactory as what we had expected.

First of all, we are tightly hound by continual classes, excessive homework and exams; some students complain that we are becoming “exam machines”. Secondly, the teaching method is boring; instead of lecturing, some teachers just “read” lessons. Finally, living conditions need to be improved; and food in the dining-hall is far from being attractive and tasteful.

In spite of all these adversities we still enjoy our life in the university. During the four-year university study, we can not only acquire a lot of book learning, but also foster various abilities. All types of extracurricular activities such as sports meets, speech contests, different social gatherings and dancing parties provide opportunities to make friends; many of these friendships may last a long time.

In short,we should value our life in the university. Four years is only a short period when compared with our whole lifetime. In the university we mature, and in the university we prepare ourselves for the real world. Although there are many things lacking, the four years in the university is a worthwhile period in our whole lifetime.

我梦想的职业 My Dreaming Career

In the past two years， my parents took me to travel to many places， including big cities， small towns， famous mountians and so on。 Therefore， I like traveling and I hope I can visit to many more places。 Since then， I hope I can be a tour guide in the future， so I can travel to many tourist attractions。 Besides， I can meet various people and I think municating with different people is interesting， wchich can broaden my field of vision。 I hope they can share their life stories with me so that I can know the general life of a place。 I know it would be a challenging job， but I believe I can do well in my job。

在过去的两年里，我父母带我到很多地方旅游，包括大城市，小城镇，著名的大山等等。因此，我喜欢旅游，我期望能够参观更多地方。从那开始，我就期望我将来能够成为一名导游，这样我就能够到很多旅游景点旅游了。此外，我能够认识各种各样的人，我认为和不一样的人沟通很搞笑，能够开阔我的视野。我期望他们能够和我分享他们的生活故事，这样我就能够了解一个地方的普通生活。我明白这是一份具有挑战性的工作，但是我相信我能够在工作中表现得很好。

Today, my parents were not at home, they had something to deal with, so

they left me alone. I was so happy because I could be in charge in my own house,

it made me feel like I was a grow-up. I wanted to give my parents a surprise, so

I planned to clean the house. It was not easy to do the house chores, first, I

swept the floor and took notice of every corner. And then I rearranged the

messed things. I just wanted to make sure the room would be very clean at first

sign. When my parents went home, they couldnt believe what I had done, they

were so happy that I could take care of myself.

今天，我的父母不在家，他们有事情要去处理，所以他们让我一个人在家。我很开心，因为我能在自己的家里面做主，这让我觉得自己是个成年人。我想要给父母一个惊喜，所以我计划清理房子。做家务真是不容易啊，第一，我要扫地，并且注意房子的每一个角落。让后我重新安置了那些混乱的东西。我只是想要确保房子的每一个角落一眼看过去是很干净的。当父母回到家里的时候，他们无法相信我所做的，他们很开心我能照顾自己。

I am so looking forward to my college life. I have pictured it thousands of

times in my mind. The free lifestyle and lively parties are always appearing my

mind. The great expectation of campus life endows me a lot of passion to keep

study. After two years’ study, I would find my lifestyle.

The first thing for me is to learn more knowledge. Most students find a way

to release themselves and skip or sleep in the class. They think study is just

the task, so they give up improving themselves and take part in all kinds of

activities, which bring them great joy. The wrong conception about college stage

makes most students miss the best time to equip themselves with skills. I

realize my job and dare not to loose study.

The second thing for me to learn is to make friends by joining activities.

I am a shy girl, but inside my heart, I am so eager to make more friends, so I

choose to join many activities in the spared time. I learn dancing and playing

tennis. The lucky thing is that I know many nice people and we become good

friends, who make my college colorful.

Mingming came to my house today. We spent some time playing computer games.

We played basketball game online. I chose NBA and Mingming had to take CBA. Of

course, I won finally. We had a good time.

明明今天来我家。我们一起玩电脑游戏。我们打在线篮球游戏。我选NBA 球队，明明只能选CBA球队。当然，我赢了。我们玩的很开心。

Today, my family go to the zoo. We go there by car, and we arrive there at

around 3 p.m. I see many kinds of animals in the zoo, like dog, elephant, rabbit

and giraffe. They are so cute. I watch them for a long time. At around 6 p.m, we

go back home. This trip is interesting.

今天，我们一家去了动物园。我们坐小汽车去的，下午3点左右到达了那里。在动物园里我看到了好多种动物，比如小狗，大象，兔子还有长颈鹿。它们很可爱。我观察它们很长时间。在下午6点左右，我们回到了家。这次旅行真有趣。

My College---My New Life

New life begins! Ive been expecting this moment for a long time.Finally,I become a college student .

All good things must come to an end ! I am now apart from my family members and many good friends.I am awared that I will have to do everything on my own .

Being responsible is the exact thing that I am supposed to think about! Im now dealing something responsibly with my new rommates.I enjoy being together with them,they just like my good friends in high school,being kind and thoughtful !

My college is a place for a new beginning ,Im sure Im taking a new life ,everything here is full of challenge,quite different from things in high school,teachers are not going to tell you exactly what you are going to do ,you will have to make your own decisions.

So far,Im geting along so well with people aroud me ,college provides me with chances and challenge,Im going to make a difference to my life!And I have every confidence on myself.I will still have to move on......

解释：

我的大学----我的新生

新的生命开始了！ 我期待这一刻很久了。终于，我成为大学生了。

天下没有不散的宴席！我与我的家人和许多好朋友分开了！我意识到我做一切事情都要靠自己了！

有责任感，这是我首先要考虑的！ 我现在能够带着一种责任感与我的新室友一起处理一些事情，我很享

受跟他们在一起的时光，他们就想我高中的朋友，一样的友好，体贴！

大学是一个重新开始的地方，我确信我已经在过我的新活，这里的一切是那么的有挑战性，不像高中的时候，

大学老师是不会什么事都告诉你，你该做什么，要怎么做。你必须自己做决定。

目前，我和身边的人都相处得很好，大学给我提供了很多机会，也同时给我带来挑战，我将使我的人生变得不同，我对自己有100%的信心。我还将继续向前走......

[我的大学英语精选作文

this is not only the city where I was born, but also the only place Ive never been able to leave. 5 years ago, I moved from here to another city to begin my college life. The day I left ## I felt as a fish out of water.

this is the only place where Ive walked past a schoolyard and pictured a future son or daughter of mine playing balls.

I love this city. She’s small and quiet. Every day I live here, I could have the safety feeling which I got when my mother held me in her arms.

I love this city. She is very beautiful and lovely. Everywhere you can see the flowers, grass and trees. The shops are full of all kinds of goods. When you walk in the street, you can feel the gentle wind touching your face and breathe the fresh air.

I love this city. The climate here is very warm which is very suitable for people to do some outdoors activities.

I love this city. She is where I have lived for ____ years with my parents, my good friends, and my teachers who have supported me. She has almost all my memories.

I love the night of ##. People sit in the gardens of their houses or in the small restaurants, chatting, drinking and enjoying the delicious seafood which is abundant in our city.

I love the sunrise of ##. When I was still a little girl, my parents and I used to climb up the hill in the morning to see the sunrise. When the beautiful sun went up, the gentle breeze brought us the fragrance of the flowers, the golden sunshine made our hair shimmer, and my heart would be filled with hope and happiness!

Maybe someday I will have to leave this city, but no matter where I would go I will never forget this city, its people, its trees and its sunrise. Yes, everything that it gave me could be given by other places, but my love won’t be changed, because it is my home town.

不但是我出生的城市，也是我无法离开的唯一地方，我的家乡。5年以前，我离开这里到另外一个城市开始我的大学生活。离开##的那天，我感觉自己像是一条离开了水的鱼儿。

当我走过一座校园，想象我未来的儿子或女儿能在这里玩耍。##，就是唯一一个让我有这种想法的地方。

[大学英语作文：我的家乡

My name is WangLei . My birthday is on August 11. We have a good

birthday party. My mother makes a birthday cake for me. It’s big and tasty. My

father give me a football. Because I like playing football. Many friends come to

my home .We are very happy. They give me a lot of presents and some birthday

cards. We sing and dance. We eat food and fruit. We play games together. We have

a good

time.

【参考翻译】

我的名字叫王磊。我的生日是8月11日。我们有一个很好的生日聚会。我妈妈使我一个生日蛋糕。它是又大又好吃。我父亲给我一个足球。因为我喜欢踢足球。很多朋友来我家。我们非常高兴。他们给了我很多的礼物和一些生日贺卡。我们唱歌跳舞。我们吃的食物和水果。我们一起玩游戏。我们有一个美好的时光。

I have a grandpa, he is nearly 70 years old, it sounds old for him, but in his heart, he is really young. Two years ago, when I was in summer holiday, I went back to hometown and visited him. When I used my cellphone, my grandpa could say out which brand it belonged to, he also told me the advantage and disadvantage of my cellphone. I was so surprised, my grandpa said since I went to school, he had nothing to do, so he became interested in the digital products. He is familiar with all kinds of digital products, he is so cool to me. My grandpa is so lovely, he is so fashionable, he is never old.

我有一个爷爷，他将近70岁了，这听起来有点老，但是在他的心里，他很年轻。两年前，当我在放暑假，我回到家乡，看望爷爷。当我用手机的时候，我的爷爷能说出手机属于哪个品牌，他也告诉我手机的优点和缺点。我很吃惊，爷爷说打从我上学起，他就没有事情做，所以他就会数字产品很感兴趣。他熟悉各种各样的数字产品，对我来说他真酷。爷爷是如此的可爱，很时尚，他永远都不老。

Hello, my name is Shi Yunjie, 22 years old this year. I am a Junior from the Jiangsu University. My hometown is Nantong, a city in Jiangsu Province.It is a seaside city, which has pleasant weather all year around. My character is optimistic.I like to communicate with people.For about three years in the university, I have made a lot of friends, coming from different professions and hometown all over the country. My hobby is listening to music, watching movies and reading. I especially like to read biographies,such as Franklin、Mao Zedong and so on, to get some useful inspiration about Life planning through this way,

你好，我叫石云杰，今年22周岁。来自江苏大学，是一名大三学生。我的家乡是江苏南通，它是一座海边城市，四季宜人。我的性格是乐观积极，喜欢与人交流，在大学中自己结交了很多的朋友，他们来自不同的专业，家乡是祖国各地。我的爱好是听歌、看电影、读书。我喜欢读一些人物传记，希望通过这样的方式，给自己的人生规划一些启示。

July 10

I am planning to spend my summer holiday on sports this year. Playing

basketball is always my favourite, so some of my classmates and I will form a

small team and play basketball together. Sometimes we may have a match against

some other teams and I do enjoy the sense when we win the game.

参考译文

我打算今年暑假我要好好的运动。打篮球一直是我最喜欢的，所以我的一些同学和我将组建一个小团队，一起打篮球。有时，我们回合其他的对于进行对抗比赛，当我们赢得球赛的时候，我很享受这种感觉。

Christmas Day

圣诞节

Most westerners always celebrate Christmas Day as their major festival, in order to memorialize Jesus.During that time, they always have several days off, so they can enjoy this festival with all their hearts.The children often get together with their friends.The adults are busy with decorating their houses.They also send the postcards with their best wishes to each other. In the streets, there are so many Fathers Christmas sending presents to the passers-by.And everything is on a discount in the supermarkets.Thus the supermarkets are the busiest places.

为了纪念耶稣大部分西方人都庆祝圣诞节作为他们的主要节日。在这段时间里，他们总是有好几天假，所以他们可以全身心的享受这个节日。小孩们经常与他们的朋友聚在一起。大人都忙着装饰他们的房子。他们还互相赠送明信片以及他们对彼此的祝福。 在街上，有很多圣诞老人在派送礼物给路人。超市里面的所有东西都在打折。所以，超市是最忙的地方。

Direction: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic Choosing an Occupation. You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below in Chinese:

1.职业的选择很重要

2. 如何明智的选择自己的职业

3. 你的职业选择。

作文范文

Every individual faces the problem of choosing an occupation after graduating from university, which is of great importance in ones whole life. An appropriate occupation makes a man work with vigor and zest. Besides, it is beneficial for both the individual and the country。

To make an advisable choice, a graduate should take into account at least two aspects, namely, individual interest and the demand of the society. Only when the two aspects are connected, can a man show his ability and talent to the best advantage. If the two factors conflict, the former, in most cases, should give way to the latter, for it is interests that stimulate ones vigor and potentials。

In regard to my choice in the future, I want to work as an interpreter. I am keen on learning foreign languages, English in particular. Moreover, in the contemporary society, international exchange in economy and culture has been growing significantly. However, competent interpreters are far from enough. So I am determined to be a qualified interpreter。

[大学英语四级考试预测作文职业选择

梦里那一度，落花纷扬。

是母亲站在别离的路口，伫立，凝望，眼神中布满沧桑。微唇亲启，欲说些什么，可又凝固了下来。接着，便转了一个身，远去了。只留下我和一双似乎永不会闭合的眼睛，看着母亲消逝渐远的身影。

浓雾般沉睡的生命，把人类分成两截。一半是喧嚣的城市，一半是贫瘠的小山村。而我，一出生，便如一个耄耋的老人，默默守望着这个小山村。

家境的贫困构成我人生中第一个牢笼，祖祖辈辈守着那几亩干巴巴的土地，含辛茹苦的耕耘着自己的一生，一代又一代。而我童年坐标上，留下的也惟有风化的泪水和生命几经垂危的微光。

贫困，落后像洪水般无情地咆哮着这个村庄。每当青黄不接时，剩下的只有揭不开锅的惊慌与吵闹。父母被贫困压弯了脊梁，被坎坷饮尽了风霜，被时光换去了容装。

为了我和弟弟能够上得起学，长期在外，奔波劳顿。已记不清有几年，而我和五岁的弟弟，就这样被安排到奶奶家，长此以往，已数不清有多少日子。

重男轻女，亘古不变的信念。一直以来，灌输着这里的每一位老人，而奶奶只是其中的一个。

小时候的我，便在这种思想的阴云的笼罩下成长。也正因为这种思想，我便要不舍昼夜的做着童年时期本不应该做的事。

秋走过冬，春流到夏。那些孩子们应享有的幸福，似乎已成为我每天在梦里回味的梦幻，充满着憧憬和期盼。有时，偷着跑出去，为的只是找回遗失的童年，咀嚼童年的香味。当看到奶奶时，却每每都是伙伴们把我藏在一个漆黑落寞的角落，回去后，便迎接的是奶奶尖锐犀利的目光和不加思索的谩骂。

在外，我从未流过一滴眼泪，可又有谁知道和了解我心里的苦楚。想念母亲，便成为抚慰我心灵的药剂，也正因为这样，我常常流着泪对自己说：“还好，不是孤儿。”

夜深人静时，我便与花私私而语。吐露着自己积压的苦痛与磨难，而它，也最能了解我心里难忍的痛苦与哀伤。

月华铅尽，微风轻拂。撩拨着我的枯划，伴随着散发浓郁的馨香，带着我进入另一个梦，那里有糖果，有玩具。。。。还有妈妈最温馨的笑靥。

就这样，翻阅，一季又一季。走过，一年又一年。

在学校，我忍着饥饿。读书，做笔记，听老师讲课。每当母亲打电话来时，说着关切的话语，询问我的情况。为了不让母亲担心和流泪，我隐忍着泪水，舒展着自己的心情，喃喃的说着那句重复多年的话：“我和弟弟都很好。今天，奶奶还给我们煎了荷包蛋。”夜幕降临时，我便把痛苦压进书本，压缩成文字和符号，刻在心里，印在青春的日记里。

最后，终于凭着自己的努力，考上了大学。望尘莫及的学费，却染白了母亲的鬓发。而我，也为了减轻家庭的负担，便出外打工。在风里，在雨中，在烈日下，在生活的夹缝间。。。。。。。。。

母亲的东拼西凑，让我进入了来之不易的大学。在学校，我为了省那几元钱，为以后做准备。记不清有几次由于营养不良而晕倒在地。醒来，便是头顶着吊瓶，滴滴液体，正缓缓渗入我的脉管，冰凉了我的心。

由于得到老师和同学的帮助，我申请到了学校的助学金。此后，同学们便纷纷向我伸出热情，温暖的手。使我冰冷破碎的心，在寒意瑟瑟的秋风中，依旧暖流如驻。

课外，我尽力去做兼职，在学校里，在社会中。

我体会到了天地虽宽，这条路却难走的道理。

我知道，我没有别人雍容华贵的容装，没有别人名声显赫的身份背景，也没有别人值得骄傲的资本。却只有一个脆弱的生命和一颗永不屈服凋零的心。

也许，正因为这种磨难，让我在贫瘠的土地上，自立成人。用勇敢和信念去面对自己的人生。

我别无选择！

梦里，又一度的落英缤纷。而我，站在路口。伫立，凝望。又一次，那熟悉的身影映入眼帘。顿时，满天的落花纷扬.

I have many dreams， such as I am rich in the future。 Therefore， I can buy all what I want。 But my greatest dream is that I want to be an astronaut。 Our country develops fast and our space make great progress in the last several decades。 It has great achievements。 All of our country are proud of it。 Therefore， I want to be one of this amazing area。 In order to make my dream e true， I must work hard now。 So that I can go to a good university to learn more knowledge。 I hope my dream can e true one day。

In a large, I need to do as much as possible to participate in some extracurricular activities, give yourself some training opportunities, including: regularly learning, understanding and practice of the party constitution, as well as their own words and deeds, feelings, as soon as possible through the audit, to join the Communist Party of China; actively participate in school the art style of campus activities, community activities, debate, speech contest, painting and calligraphy competition, in order to fully exercise the courage and ability to display personal style. Learn something new (simple dance, basketball, table tennis etc.) but the premise of all activities, must first learn! In the sophomore year, we must learn professional skills and make full use of school libraries, outsourced bookstores and network information, expand our horizons and expand our knowledge range, so as to inspire and develop our ideas and try to design academic innovation and technological innovation. Do more part-time jobs, contact more social practice, let yourself know more about the society, lay the foundation for entering the society after graduation, and prepare for some qualification tests. The target English is over four levels.

Machine two and so on. In the third, fully ready to go for a certificate, such as securities qualification certificate, qualification certificate and professional related to finished in Sandu, for the future lay the foundation for the accumulation of experience. You have to have some capital to talk to others. In the fourth year, the goal should be to improve the job hunting skills, collect the information of the company, and determine whether you want to get it. In professionalwritingacademicarticles, can boldly put forward their own views, exercise their ability to solve problems independently and creatively; to participate in the summer and professional work experience and exchange students work experience, understand the collection of information sources, and actively try to join the network, and have alumni, schoolmates talk about the job situation in previous years. More experience, as soon as possible for your career orientation, and try to make full preparation for the employment. Besides, we also need to develop the practical skills needed by the profession. Because employers, not only pay attention to the professional knowledge and skills of college students, but also pay attention to the plasticity of college students and some potential quality abilities. Take part in useful vocational training. Vocational training includes vocational skills training. Scientific evaluation of self professional ability, professional adaptability and professional values. In general, we should constantly improve the ability to cope with frustration, cultivate self - will and shape a good personality. Only with these basic abilities can we set up their own team and lay a solid foundation for their own development.

In the University, there is a popular sentence, "the university will regret for four years, and the university will regret for a lifetime without being in love." This view is at least disagreed at the moment. It may be an inevitable process to be in love at a university, and it should also be within the plan. It doesnt matter whether its important or not. Whats important is how to deal with it well. Its not only bad for oneself, but also affects itself, and more importantly, it may affect academic study and make oneself indulge in unrealistic imagination. Im afraid its not just regret for four years.

Dear Miss Brown,

I am writing to express my sincere thanks to you for caring me in the last

two years. During the days of being your student, I learn a lot. Firstly, your

serious attitude towards teaching and our students moves me too much. You

inspire and push me to work harder and harder. Secondly, I fall in love with

English under the influence of you. As a student of science and engineering,

I’ve been thinking that English does no good to me, but you help me to find the

fabulous glamour of English that leads me to know a totally different world and

develop a different way of thinking. Finally, your continuous encouragement

supports me a lot when I meet challenges or difficulties. You said that

everything to the last will certainly become a good thing, if it is not, not yet

to the last. Every time, remembering your words, I am so inspired to keep

going.

Above all, I want to say thank you again and please accept my sincere

appreciation. Best wishes for you.

Cruse

敬爱的布朗老师：

我谨以此向您表达我最真诚的谢意，感谢您在过去两年里对我的帮助。在过去的两年里，成为您的学生，我学到了许多。首先，您对教学和学生的认真态度使我深受感动。您鼓舞着我不断地努力学习。其次，在您的影响下，我深深地喜欢上了英语。作为一名理工科学生，我以前一直认为英语对我毫无用处，但您使我认识到了英语的魅力所在，带我走进了一个全新的世界，培养了不同的思维方式。最后，您的鼓励总在我遭遇困难或挑战是鼓励着我。您曾经说过：“每一件事情到了最后都会变成好事，如果不是，那说明还没有到最后。”每当想起您说过的话，我就有了坚持下去的动力。

最后，请允许我再次向您表达我的感谢，接受我真诚的谢意。献上最美好的祝福。

My Father

There is always a brilliant image living in my heart. That is my dear father. Seen through the eyes of many other people, father seems to be a very ordinary person. But he is quite extraordinary in my eyes, I have never lost my wonder at his good-personalities such as diligence, devotion, care, optimism ever since my childhood.Being a farmer, father works very hard in the fields all the year round. He works from dawn till dusk every day and even till midnight when it is the harvest season. He seldom enjoys leisure with other farmers even if the farm work is not much. He chooses to live a busy life with reluctance to stop for a while.

Father devotes all himself to our family. As we are poor, he always tries his best to support our family and afford the tuitions for my brother and me. For the whole family, for brother and me, he never stops working laboriously in the fields throughout the year. Now he has got a wrinkled face and white hair because of excessive hard work, looking much older and weaker than any other person of his age. In spite of all this, father never complains to us. It is his full devotion that were living a better life now. It is his full devotion that both my brother and I are able to study at college.Father shows much care to us children and my mother as well. Whenever there is any delicious food on the table, he just leaves it to us while he takes the simple one himself. If my brother and I fall ill, he will not hesitate a moment to get some medicine for us or take us to see the doctor. My mother suffers a bad disease. Father looks after her very carefully. He never lets mother do any heavy work both at home and in the field. Mother appreciates him m much that she often praises him as a model husband before others.

Father is a person full of optimism. He never complains about our poor life. He is never frustrated by trouble. He often tells us that everything will be all right if we have enough confidence in life. Due to his optimism, we are all confident to face our life and work.

We all think that father is not in the least an ordinary man. He plays an extraordinary role in my family. We cant have anything without him. Now Im pursuing further studies at college far away from father. I miss him very much. And I often see him in my dreams. His great image is deeply carved in my mind.

我父亲的光辉形象永远是一种生活在我的心里吧.”那是我亲爱的爸爸.在许多其他人的眼中,父亲似乎是一个很普通的人.但在我的眼里他很特别,自从我的童年他在我眼中一直都是勤奋、敬业、保健、乐观.

作为一个农民,父亲在田里工作很努力.收获的季节，他每天从早到晚工作,直到午夜时.他很少像其他的农民享受休闲,即使在农场工作不多的时候.他选择一个繁忙的生活不情愿停下来。

父亲为了我们这个家奉献了他的全部.当我们贫穷时,他总是尽自己最大的努力来支持我们的家庭和支付我哥哥和我的学费.为整个家庭,为哥哥和我,他总是不停地在地里工作一整年.现在他因为过度辛勤工作已经有了一个满是皱纹的脸和白色毛发,岁,比任何其他与他相同的年龄的人.虽有这一切的事,父亲从不抱怨.这是他的全部奉献,我们正处在一个更好的生活.这是他的全部奉献,我的兄弟和我都能在大学读书。

父亲十分关心我们，和我母亲一样.每当有什么好吃的食物放在桌子上,他只是让我们吃自己吃少点.如果我和我兄弟生病,他会毫不犹豫地让拿些药给我们或带我们去看医生.我的母亲受严重的疾病.父亲照料得很认真.他从不让妈妈在家里和田间做什么繁重的工作.感谢他的母亲,她经常在别人面前称赞他为模范丈夫。

父亲是一个十分乐观的人.他从不抱怨我们贫穷的生活.他从未灰心丧气.他经常告诉我们,一切都会好起来的,如果我们有足够的信心.由于他的乐观,我们都是自信的面对我们的生活和工作。我们都认为,父亲是不平凡的人.他在我的家庭中具有非常重要的作用.我们能不能有什么东西.现在我继续进修大学远离的父亲.我怀念他.我经常看到他在我的梦.他的伟大的形象深深刻在我的脑海里.

评语： 本文作者以朴实的语言充满感情地刻画了父亲的不平凡的形象，分别从四个不同的角度描述了父亲的勤劳、奉献、关爱和乐观。内容真实感人，行文简洁流畅，结构清晰，组织有条有理，首尾呼应，给读者以强烈的感染力。 作者用词简洁精确，并能很好地尝试一些新学的词汇及表达，使简洁的行。文更为生动。作者没有运用太多复杂的句式，但能适当运用介词短语、分词结构、强调及重复的手法，恰到好处 地突出了行文句式的变化，使文章更耐读。