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596高考英语满分
全文共 294 字
+ 加入清单某校开展"研究性学习",要求学生设计一下未来的居室.下面请以"My Dream House"为题,描述你设计的居室.内容要点如下:
我梦中的住房将是建在海边的一幢别墅.前后有两个庭院,前面是一个四季都开满鲜花的花园,后面是一个游泳池,因为我的家人喜欢游泳.
第一层进门有一个大厅,大厅的右边有一个客厅,平时大家可以在这里放松休息,看电视,娱乐等.左边有个电脑房,还有一毡属于我的书房.
第二层有6间卧室,每一间卧室都有浴室.
别墅配有现代化设备,如电脑控制的安全报警器,电梯,可视电话,自动门等.
参考词汇: 书房study 安全报警器security alarm 可视电话vision phone
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篇1:高考英语作文开头技巧集锦
全文共 717 字
+ 加入清单一篇文章通常可分为三个部分,即开头、正文和结尾。这三个部分安排是否得体,直接影响到文章的质量。
文章的开头一般来说应尽量做到开门见山,用简单明白的叙述引出文章的话题,使读者了解文章要谈论什么,一下于引起读者的兴趣。
作文常见的开头形式大致有以下几种:
1.开门见山,揭示主题
文章一开头,,就交待清楚文章的主题是什么。如How I Spent My Vacation的开头可以写成:
I Spent my last vacation happily.
Honesty的开头可以写成:
Honesty is one of the best virtues.An honest man is always trusted and respected.On the contrary, one who tells lies is regarded as a liar,and is looked upon by honest people.
2.交代人物、事情、时间或环境开头
在文章的开头,先把人物、事件和环境交待清楚。例如A Trip to Jinshan 的开头可以写成:
The day before yesterday my class went on a bus trip to Jinshan. The bus ride there took three hours. The long trip made us very tired, but the sight of the beautiful sea refreshed us.
3. 回忆性的开头
用回忆的方法来开头。例如A Trip to the Taishan Mountain的开头是:
篇2:2024年高考英语专题之写作基础知识
全文共 1830 字
+ 加入清单从历年高考写作题来看, 特别是基础写作, 要点都是一目了然的, 写什么, 对于考生来说不是问题, 问题是不知如何写。
实践证明, 只有写出正确地道的句子, 才有可能把文章写好。磨刀不误砍柴功, 写作需练基本功。你有了扎实的基本功, 不管是基础写作还是读写任务, 也不管考什么作文题, 你都能得高分。因此, 从某种意义上说, 我们不必刻意追求猜题押题, 而应脚踏实地地去练好基本功, 这才是高考高分的备考上策。
【基本句型特训】
这里的基本句型包括简单句的五个基本句型和there be句型。
所谓简单句就是由一个主语 (包括并列主语)和一个谓语 (包括并列谓语) 组成的句子, 即一个主谓关系的句子。
六个基本句型
典型例句
主+谓
He studies very hard.
主+谓+宾
We enjoy sports.
主+谓+间宾+直宾
Sports bring me happiness.
主+谓+宾+宾补
Exercise mades me healthy.
主+系+表
Exercise is very beneficial.
There be句型
There are three reasons why I like it.
特别提醒: 根据历年高考阅卷的情况, 考生写句子最易犯的错是: 不用be时却用了, 或者该用be时却没用。因此, 我们须注意:
1.英语句子通常要有谓语动词, 否则就不完整。如表达 “他很累”, 不能说He very tired.
而要说He is very tired. 因为tired是形容词, 句中无动词。切记: 当句子意思完整, 但句中没有动词时, 一定要加上be。
2. 当句中已有谓语动词时, 若不是进行时态或被动语态, 一定不要再用be。如表达 “他昨天来过这里”, 不能说He was came here yesterday. 而要说He came here yesterday.
[课堂练习]
用基本句型翻译下列各组句子, 然后合并成一篇通顺自然的5句话的短文。
●心中有梦:
单句翻译
1. David 7岁了。 (主系表)
2. 他有一个梦想。 (主谓宾)
3. 他想在天上飞。 (主谓宾)
4. 他做了一架纸飞机。 (主谓双宾)
5. 他完成了作业。 (主谓宾)
6. 他玩纸飞机。 (主谓)
7. 有一天, 天上有一架飞机在飞。 (there be句型)
8. 他的父亲鼓励他努力学习成为飞行员。 (主谓宾宾补)
9. 他非常努力地学习。 (主谓)
10. 十八年后他实现了他的梦想。 (主谓宾)
合并成文
______________________________________________________________________________________________
【标准答案】
1. David was seven years old.
2. He had a dream.
3. He wanted to fly in the sky.
4. He made himself a paper plane.
5. He finished homework.
6. He always played with the paper plane.
7. There was a plane flying in the sky.
8. His father encouraged him to study hard and be a pilot.
9. He worked very hard at his lessons.
10. He made his dream come true 18 years later.
合并成文: When David was seven years old, he dreamed of flying in the sky. Having finished his homework, he made himself a paper plane to play with. One day, there was a plane flying in the sky. His father
encouraged him to be a pilot in the future. It was by working hard that he made his dream come true eighteen years later.
篇3:2024年高考英语作文热门话题之五---中国式过马路
全文共 2036 字
+ 加入清单前不久,中央电视台“焦点访谈”栏目曾就“中国式过马路”现象进行了不少采访和评论。请用英语写一篇100-120 词的短文,结合自己的所见所闻或亲身经历描述“行人闯红灯”(pedestrians run the red light)引发的若干问题,并就此提出一些解决措施。 注意;短文的开头已给出(不计词数)。
Not long ago, CCTV “Focus Talk” carried out many interviews and made some relevant comments on the phenomena---“Crossing roads in the Chinese style”.______________________
参考范文:
Not long ago, CCTV “Focus Talk” carried out many interviews and made some relevant comments on the phenomena---“Crossing roads in the Chinese style”.
There is a very common phenomenon around us that people just run the light totally ignoring the running vehicles, which can lead to serious consequences. Last week a traffic accident happened near our school, a rushing car knocked down a student who was running the red light. And because of the car’s sudden stop, several cars behind crashed into each other. Of course this caused a terrible traffic jam.
In my opinion, effective measures should be taken to solve the problem. First, we can make good use of the media, such as TV, newspaper, magazine, to raise people’s awareness of obeying the traffic rules and road safety. Second, government must make severe laws to punish people who dare to break the law and run the red light.
优秀作文:
Not long ago, CCTV “Focus Talk” carried out many interviews and made some relevant comments on the phenomena---“Crossing roads in the Chinese style”.
Take one of my experiences for example. It was a Tuesday and it rained cat and dog. There was only a few minutes left for me to go to school on time. I was so hurried that I ignored the red light. It was so dangerous for me that the car hardly hit me seriouly. From then on, I never dare to run the red light. I think it can lead to many problems. There is no doubt that it will not only make the traffic heavier but also lose your own life.
As far as I am concerned, it has profound significance to take actions. For the government, they should make laws and appeal to the importance of safety. For the other people, we should cherish our lives and obey the traffic rules.
篇4:2024高考英语作文预测:食品安全
全文共 1631 字
+ 加入清单随着社会的发展,很多人为了个人利于不顾大家的人生安全。就拿食品安全来说,越来越多食品问题被爆出来。下面语文迷网为大家整理了食品安全的英语作文,希望对你有帮助。
【预测作文】食品安全——[倡议信]
【猜题理由】食品安全问题是近两年人们生活最关注的话题之一。从三氯氰胺到禽流感、假羊肉,人们越来越担心食品安全,也很有可能成为高考英语作文的热点。
【预测题目】假设你的同学因食用从某超市买回的食品而食物中毒,后经治疗康复。请给报社写一封信,描述他(们)的中毒与脱险经过,呼吁社会各界重视食品安全。
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参考范文:
June 15th, 2010
Dear Sir or Madam,
Thank you for taking time to read this letter. As the problem of food safety has been becoming worse and worse nowadays, I am obliged to write to you.
Several days ago, one of my classmates came back from supermarket with a large bag of food. Because of having found a new style of tinned? In the food store, she was very glad. Several other roommates were invited to enjoy the “mouthwatering chicken”. Unfortunately, after finishing the food, all of my three friends had stomachaches and vomited, their faces having become paler and paler. Due to sensitivity to that kind of tinned food, I escaped that suffer. At that time, my mind went blank. I dialed the emergency number with my trembling hand, therefore they were quickly sent to hospital. The doctor said they were lucky to be out of danger because they did not eat too much of that rotten fish and were hospitalized on time.
This is the matter that happened around me which made me realize the seriousness of the food safety problem. I sincerely hope that the whole society could attach much importance to this issue.
Thanks!
Yours,
Julie
篇5:暴力无助于减少种族偏见高考英语作文
全文共 2560 字
+ 加入清单in some countries where racial prejudice is acute, violence has so come to be taken for granted as a means of solving differences, that it is not even questioned. what is really frightening, what really fills you with despair, is the realization that when it comes to the crunch, we have made no actual progress at all. we may wear collars and ties instead of war-paint, but our instincts remain basically unchanged. the whole of the recorded history of the human race, that tedious documentation of violence, has taught us absolutely nothing. we have still not learnt that violence never solves a problem but makes it more acute. the sheer horror, the bloodshed, the suffering mean nothing. no solution ever comes to light the morning after when we dismally contemplate the smoking ruins and wonder what hit us.
the truly reasonable men who know where the solutions lie are finding it harder and harder to get a hearing. they are despised, mistrusted and even persecuted by their own kind because they advocate such apparently outrageous things own kind because they advocate such apparently outrageous things as law enforcement. if half the energy that goes into violent acts were put to good use, if our efforts were directed at cleaning up the slums and ghettos, at improving living-standards and providing education and employment for all, we would have gone a long way to arriving at a solution. our strength is sapped by having to mop up the mess that violence leaves in its wake. in a welldirected effort, it would not be impossible to fulfil the ideals of a stable social programme. the benefits that can be derived from contructive solutions are everywhere apparent in the world around us. genuine and lasting solutions are always, possible, providing we work within the framework of the law.
before we can even begin to contemplate peaceful co-existence between the races, we must appreciate each other’s problems. and to do this, we must learn about them: it is a simple exercise in communication, in exchanging information, ‘talk, talk talk,’ the advocates of violence say, ‘all you ever do is talk, and we are none the wiser.’ it’s rather like the story of the famous barrister who painstakingly explained his case to the judge. after listening to a lengthy argument the judge complained that after all this talk, he was none the wiser. ‘possibly, my lord’ the barrister replied, ‘none the wiser, but surely far better informed.’ knowledge is the necessary prerequisite to wisdom: the knowledge that violence creates the evils it pretends to solve.
篇6:高考英语作文预测邀请函
全文共 1352 字
+ 加入清单假定你是李华,你的一位美国朋友Jane在中国学习中文两年,即将回国。现在由你给她发E-mail,邀请她参加为她举办的欢送会,要点如下:
(1)祝贺她顺利通过考试,她的学习进步很大,为她骄傲;
(2)感谢她帮助你们学习英语;
(3)时间:星期六晚六点;
(4)地点:阳光俱乐部(The Sun Club)302房间;
(5)路线:在你所住宾馆门口乘坐332路公共汽车可直达。
注意:
(1)须包括以上主要内容,可以适当增加细节,使内容连贯;
(2)词数:100左右。开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
(3)参考词汇:欢送会 farewell party
Dear Jane,Congratulations on your passing all the exams.
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Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
【猜题理由】该素材围绕与学生的日常生活相关的话题,体现"生活化"的特点。本篇写作要求写一篇邀请函,能够充分体现生活实际和语言的交际功能。
【构思点拨】写邀请函时一方面需要说明邀请理由,另 一方面要把活动的时间、地点、乘车路线等细节问题一定要交代清楚。
【参考范文】
Dear Jane,
Congratulations on your passing all the exams. I am delighted you have really made great progress in your two years of studying in China. All you have gained is the result of your hard work. We are proud of you and we all appreciate your help with our English Well always remember the wonderful time we spent together.
Its pity that you have to go back soon! So a farewell party for you will be held in Room 302 in the Sun Club this Saturday evening. Could you come by 6:00 p.m.? Well have dinner together. By the way,you may take Bus No. 332 in front of your hotel and it will take you directly to the club.
I wish you success and fulfillment in the years ahead!
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
篇7:2024年高考英语作文万能句子及模板
全文共 766 字
+ 加入清单比较
1.The advantage far outweigh the disadvantages.
2.The advantages of A are much greater than those of B.
3.A may be preferable to B, but A suffers from the disadvantages
that...
4.It is reasonable to maintain that ...but it would be foolish to claim
that...
5.For all the disadvantages, it has its compensating advantages.
6.Like anything else, it has its faults.
7.A and B has several points in common.
8.A bears some resemblances to B.
9.However, the same is not applicable to B.
10. A and B differ in several ways.
11. Evidently, it has both negative and positive effects.
12. People used to think ..., but things are different now.
13. The same is true of B.
14. Wondering as A is ,it has its drawbacks.
15. It is true that A ... , but the chief faults (obvious defects )are
...
篇8:以电子产品为话题的高考英语作文
全文共 911 字
+ 加入清单Varieties of electronic gadgets, without which some of us cant live, come into being. Despite their conveniences, they bring people much stress, so people have to balance their advantages and disadvantages before buying them.
I cant agree more with the author. With the development of science and technology, more and more fantastic electronic gadgets come into being, which dazzles people. People cant resist the temptation to buy and update them since these gadgets become outdated too quickly.
I have a lot of favourite electronic gadgets, one of which is a video MP3. As well as carrying my favourite music, a video MP3 player can play up to 150 hours of movies and TV programmes. However, it cost me 2,000 yuan. Besides, the loud volume will damage my hearing if I overuse it.
If I want to buy a necessary electronical gadget, the first factor that should be taken into consideration is whether its practical.
篇9:2024高考英语作文预测
全文共 1062 字
+ 加入清单Fast food becomes more popular now, especially among the teenagers and the children. Why do so many people like fast food?
快餐食品现在越来越流行,特别是在青少年和儿童中。为什么那么多人喜欢快餐呢?
For one thing, its very fast and convenient. It always serves in no time, so we can either eat it in the restaurant or take it away. For another, because of the different ways of cooking, it looks nice and tastes delicious. Whats more, the service and environment is good, so that we can have our dinner in a happy mood.
一方面,快餐很快也很方便。总是很快就能上菜,所以我们可以在餐厅里吃或者把它带走。另一方面,因为烹饪方式的不同,它看起来很好看,吃起来也很好吃。更重要的是,服务和环境都很好,这样我们就可以在一个愉快的环境吃晚餐。
However, in terms of nutrition, its far from satisfactory. Most fast food is junk food. It contains so much sugar and fat, which makes us put on weight so easily. Since the westerners have the fast food every day, most of them have heavy weights, high blood pressure and bad teeth.
然而,在营养方面,它是远远不能令人满意。大多数的快餐都是垃圾食品。它含有太多的糖份和脂肪,这会很容易增加我们的体重。因为西方人每天都吃快餐,所以他们大多数人都超重,血压高,有坏牙齿。
Therefore, I suggest that we should eat less fast food but more nutritious dishes.
因此,我建议我们应该少吃快餐多吃更有营养的菜肴。
篇10:2024高考英语作文高分技巧:议论文三段式
全文共 2531 字
+ 加入清单随着越来越多的省市进行自主命题,开放式、半开放式作文愈加受到青睐。因为此种题型可以更准确地考查考生是否能使用英语准确表达自己的观点,充分体现了对实际解决问题的能力的考查。此类作文多为议论文性质,所以议论文的写作显得愈加重要根据议论文的特点,最好采用三段式论证法,第一段提出问题(总写),即主题段,陈述自己的观点;第二段用论据进行正反两个方面的论证(分写),即拓展段,摆出支撑论点的论据;第三段得出相应的结论(总写),为总结段,总结自己的观点。类似中文里(总——分——总)的写法。这种写法可以使文章层次分明,结构清晰。
1.在议论文三段式里,首先要写好开头,好的开头是成功的一半。开头写得好,会给阅卷者留下美好的印象,有吸引力。任何一篇文章都应该做到主题鲜明,中心突出,提出论点要开门见山,紧扣题目。高考作文篇幅短小,因此开头不能冗长拖沓,务必要点题,即说清楚文章的人物、事件和作者的观点。
2.要深化中间段。中意部分是文章的主体,需要用具体的事例、细节来阐释主题句,因此中意的部分应该是具体的、详细的,不可泛泛而谈或点到即止,安需要围绕主题句的内容而展开,不能谈论与之无关的东西,即论述主题要具体而又有说服力。常用方法有:比较法、举例法、归纳法、推理法、对照法和驳论法。
3.把好结尾关,避免虎头蛇尾,使结尾缺乏力量。好的结尾会深化主题,进一步强化阅卷老师的良好印象。文章最后可以回到开头提出的中心思想上,达到再次肯定强调的效果;或者引用格言或名人名言总结全文,即言简赅又有较强的说明力;也可用几句话概括全文的内容,并进一步肯定文章的中心思想或作者观点。
4.注意一些关联词的使用,使文章更连贯顺畅、条理清晰。
表因果的:as, as a result, because of, for, due to, owing to, thanks to, etc.
表意思的:in one’s opinion, have different ideas on, my idea/view is, it strikes me that, etc.
表比较的:unlike, in the same way, on the contrary, etc.
表结论的:in brief, to end/ sum up, in other words, in conclusion, in short, in summary, etc.
5.注意文章的层次和段落。
为了更好地考试中运用三段式的写作手法,考生在平时的学习中要进行严格、系统的训练,练习题材要丰富,选票质量要高,讲求写作效果,训练时要限时完成,只有严格的训练,才能确保考试中的超水平发挥。
【典例1】根据以下关键字,并谈谈你对学生在业余时间参加过多的补习和培训的看法。
【范文】
We want to have our own time.
As we all know, today students have more and more homework. They spend their spare time doing the homework and taking lessons. Therefore, students have no time for themselves. In my opinion, students should have more time to develop themselves.
First, students should have time to relax and play. It doesn’t mean that they will waste time. They also can study and learn from playing. After doing homework for a long time, it is necessary to have some time to relax. As saying goes, “All work and no play make Jack a dull boy.” We don’t want to dull boys. Second, we should have our own time in order to make our body strong enough. This can be helpful in our further study.
In short, I want to say, students should have their own time to develop themselves.
专家点评:这篇范文充分体现了议论文的三段式的精髓,从以下几个方面我们可以充分感受到它和闪亮之处。
1.结构合理,富有条理性。文章分为三段。第一段简要描述了图画内容,直接点题,观点明确;第二段提出了自己的观点并列瘵出论据支撑论点;第三段简明扼要地概括了自己的观点。
2、开门见山,没有在图画上费太多笔墨,简要描述后直接引入主题:Students should have more time to develop themselves.
3、文章描述得非常清晰,有层次感,逻辑性强。段落间和句子间连贯自然,过渡巧妙。作者充分地发挥了连词及副词的功能,例如:as we all know, therefore, in my opinion, first, second, in short等。
谋篇布局
1.仔细审题,确定体裁格式,选择文章主体时态,弄清中心人称。
2.确定文章的中心论点。
3.围绕中心论点列出提纲,选好论据。
4.选择合适的短语与句型表达论点与论据。
5.利用所列短语、句型组句成文,打好草稿。要避免出现汉语式的表达,根据自己所掌握的词汇,在比较有把握的情况下可以大胆使用较高级词汇,使文章增色。
6.将草稿写到卷面上并再次审视文章结构。
7.最后做一次全面检查,注意文章的文体、格式是否正确,要点是否全面,是否有明显的语法错误和低级的失误,是否有单词摭写错误,字母大小写是不是恰当,词数是否符合要求。
篇11:2024年高考英语书面表达突破技巧
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+ 加入清单书面表达一直在历年高考中占有很重要的地位,而且相对于其他题型,书面表达最容易在短期内有所突破。下面小编为大家整理了英语作文的突破技巧,欢迎大家阅读。
书面表达在评阅时遵循语言第一位(语言高级),内容第二位(要点齐全),结构第三位(文章分段)的原则,也就是说阅卷老师最注重的是语言,换句话说是亮点,根据语言使用情况,亮点的多少而定出档次,所以同学们在书面表达中语言上的亮点是得高分的关键。
亮点一共有四种:
一、高级词汇和语法;
二、修辞手法;
三、有效的连词;
四、名人名言或谚语。
首先简单介绍亮点当中至关重要的高级语法,以及修辞手法当中的一些技巧的使用。
肯定不如否定好
修辞的使用在书面表达中算作很大的亮点,在高中阶段很少有学生会注重修辞的应用。双重否定也是种修辞,而且对于考生来说,只要稍加注意,可以在文章中设计双重否定的句子。例如想表达“邮递员天天准时到”,如果写成The postman comes on time every day,就不如变成双重否定,The postman never fails to come on time,就变成了亮点句,起到强调作用。几乎每个人对生活的态度都不同程度受到地震的影响,写成双重否定There was hardly a man or a woman whose attitude
towards life had not affected by the earthquake.应用类似的修辞会在高考中为同学们加分。
陈述不如倒装妙
在书面表达中阅卷老师喜欢看到的高级语法共有五种:倒装,强调,从句,独立主格和分词结构,以及虚拟语气。倒装是一种最简单易行的使句子呈现亮点的方法。在高中阶段只需掌握倒装的四种形式,足以应对书面表达,如何应用倒装,有很多方法和技巧。
否定词开头
如果写出的句子中有否定词, 例如I will never marry you. 不如变成倒装,用否定词开头Never will I marry you. 就算作使用了高级语法。其他的否定词,如not, seldom, hardly等开头后面的句子倒装都是比较好的句子。
地点状语开头
在很多年的高考书面表达中都有表达地点的句子,一个建筑位于什么位置,或什么地方有什么东西,都可以应用倒装。例如在2006年的全国卷中,图书馆位于学校的中央,Our library is in the center of our school.变成倒装就用地点状语开头:In the center of our school lies our library. 其他的例子,想表达河岸上有很多花:On the bank stand some flowers. 天空中繁星点点:In the sky hang little stars. 总之在想表达地点时就把地点状语放在句首后面主谓倒装。
这样做的好处之一是倒装本身就是高级结构,第二是倒装后把真正的主语放到了句子的末尾,后面还可以继续加从句,使整个句子再呈现更多的亮点。例如In the center of our school lies our library,which is between the garden and the teaching building.
Only+介词短语
例如在2007年全国卷中,让外教帮你找个笔友,有一句可以表达成只有通过这种方式我才能提高英语,这句话可以写成Only in this way can I improve my English.其他的例子还有Only by taking exercises can we keep healthy.
形容词+as+主语+be动词
例如Young as I am, I can manage it; Rich as our country is, we have a lot of problems. 2000年书面表达中:Badly injured as he was, he managed to take down the
car’s number. 还有其他的倒装结构,很高兴收到的你的来信:So glad am I to hear from you.在高考中要尽量使用一两个倒装。
主动不如被动巧
在近些年的阅卷中,发现考生在写作中很少使用被动语态,也许是受中文思维的影响,几乎整篇文章都使用主动语态。其实在英文中,被动语态的使用是很重要的。因为英语是一门客观的语言,而汉语是主观的语言,具体体现在英语中经常用被动语态,汉语经常用主动语态;英语中经常用物称或形式主语开头,强调一件事发生在什么人身上,而汉语经常用人称开头强调一个人发生了什么事。所以使用被动语态符合英语的习惯,如果能将整个文章中两个句子变成被动语态,就会呈现句型的变化,使整个文章句型丰富。
例如在2006年的高考中,很多学生在表达我们每次可以借五本书最多借十天时,都是用:We can borrow five books at most, and we can keep them for ten days.这句话如果写成:At most five books can be borrowed at a time and they can be kept for ten days,分数会更高。
分词结构不能少
在前文提到,在书面表达中老师喜欢看到的高级语法共有五种:倒装,强调,从句,独立主格和分词结构,以及虚拟语气。在所有的高级语法中,阅卷老师最喜欢看到的是独立主格和分词结构,其次是剩下的几项。但很多学生不知道如何在文章中使用这个最大的亮点。其实几乎所有的状语从句都可以变成独立主格或分词结构,时间状语从句,原因状语,条件状语等。例如条件状语从句:If such is the case, you should apologize to her. 如何变成独立主格或分词结构呢?学会下面的口诀,如果你的作文中有状语从句,马上可改成独立主格或分词结构这个最大的亮点。
口诀:一去,二看,三改。一去:去连词;二看:看主语;三改:改分词。
If such is the case, you should apologize to her.按照这个口诀来改,第一步,去掉连词if;第二步,看前后两句话的主语,前后主语不一致,所以要改成独立主格;第三步,改分词,is 变成分词是being,所以最后变成Such being the case, you should apologize to her.就变成了独立主格。
如果前后两句话主语一致,就变成分词结构,例如2005年高考书面表达中的一句话Because I am a student, I’d like to know the price for students. 改成Being a student, I’d like to know the price for students.其他想表达状语从句的时候几乎都一样。所以想表达由于,因为,如果等都写成独立主格或分词结构会让阅卷老师多给几分。
以上技巧有语文迷小编整理,看过后你真的学到了吗?
篇12:高考英语写作指导:五步写好英语作文
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+ 加入清单想要写好一篇英语作文有哪些方法步骤呢?下面来看看语文迷网为大家带来的写作指导吧。
(一)仔细审题,确定要点。在开始写作这前一定要认真阅读题目中的所有信息(中文提示、图示、注意事项等)把需要表达的全部信息要点列成提纲,列要点时,如果提示是图表,要认真审图,从图中找出要表达的信息要点,如事件发生的背景,人物的衣着、表情、动作、位置、年龄、外貌、图中的英汉文字等,如果有参考词汇,一定要用上。
(二)根据要点,先词组句。近年来高考书面表达的要求不断提高,高分文章要有较多的词汇,较高级的词汇用法。比如表达丰富可以用rich,但如果你用abundant这个词就属于较高级的词汇。再比如“他强调小心驾驶的重要”这个句子 He emphasized the importance of careful driving.其中“强调”这个词如果你用 attach much importance to 效果更佳。
(三)确定时态及人称,内容连贯,结构紧凑。高考书面表达评分标准明确规定,如人称错误要扣分,不同的文体一般都有基本时态。日记通常记叙发生过的事情,多用一般过去时。议论文多用一般现在时,通知等文体通常用一般将来时。每个句子写好之后,句与句之间要选择恰当的连接词。比如:(1)表示承接、递进用语,besides(并且)、whats more(并且),moreover(而且),firstly,secondly,finally(最后),from now on (从此),afterwards I after that(后来),to make things worse/ whats worse(使事情更为糟糕的是),the worst thing of all(最糟糕的是)。(2)表示转折关系用语。but bowever,otherwise,though,despite,in spite of...(尽管)on the other hand(另一方面),as(尽管),all the same(尽管如此)。(3)表示因果关系用语。because/because of......for(因为),owing to (由于),thanks to (由于),due to (由于),so that (结果)。(4)归纳总结用语。to summarize(总而言之),in short/in a word(简而言之),on the whole(从总体看),generally speaking(一般说来),in my view(我的观点),in conclusion(总之)。
(四)句式丰富,避免单词。英语书面表达评分标准第五档(21-25分)要求,“应使用较复杂结构,这要求学生不仅会运用基本句型,也要有意识地使用复杂句型,这是文章的亮点。如何使用复杂结构,我认为适当运用非谓语结构(分词短语、动名词或不定式短语)适当运用各种从句(定语从句、名词性从句、状语从句)是有效什么途径。比如:when he arrived in Beijing,he gave me an e-mail.(时间状语从句。一般)→On arriving in Beijing,he gave me an e-mail.Having arrived in Beijing.he gave me an e-mail.(使用了动名词,分别作状语。高级) Hardly had he arrived in Beijing when he gave me an e-mail.(改变时态,句子结构。高级)I wont believe what he says.(一般)→No matter what he says,I wont believe.(让步状从句,高级)。
(五)认真答写,卷面整洁。高考书面表达评分标准中对书写有较高要求。尤其今年英语作文要进行网上阅卷,如果书写较差,会影响到扫描质量,因此,考生在答卷时,一定要认真、清楚规范地书写,以保卷面整洁。
篇13:2024高考英语作文经典句型集锦
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+ 加入清单英语作文精彩句子集锦 (2011-01-13 16:55:46)转载▼
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英语作文精彩句子集锦
1. Nothing is more important than …没有什么比。。。更重要
Eg。Nothing is more important than health./ to be independent.
没有什么比健康独立更重要。
2. sb./sth. is the +最高级+(n.) that I have ever met/ seen/ known.。。。
是我所遇到、见到、知道最。。。
Eg。 Mr zhang is the kindest teacher that I have ever met/ seen/ known.
张老师是我所遇到/见过/知道的最好的老师。
Freindship is the most valuable thing that I have ever had.
友谊是我所拥有的最宝贵的东西。
3. We can not/ never emphasize the importance of(doing)sth … too much.
We can never attach too much importance to(doing)sth ….
我们再怎么强调。。。的重要性也不过分。
Eg。 We can not/ never emphasize the importance of protecting our eyes too much.
我们再怎么强调保护眼睛的重要性也不过分。
We can never attach too much importance to reading books widely and wisely.
广泛而聪明地看书是非常重要的。
4. Only when we。。。。。can we….只有当我们。。。时候,我们才能。。。。。
Eg。Only when we devote ourselves to study can we achieve great success.
只有当我们投身于学习,我们才能获得成功。
Only when we have a healthy body can we do what we want.
只有身体健康我们才能做想做的事。
5. As the saying goes 正如谚语所说
There is a saying that goes,
As a proverb says,
Eg。As the saying goes, where there is a will, there is a way.
正如谚语所说,“有志者事竟成”。
There is a saying that goes, “failure is the mother of success.”
有谚语说:“失败乃成功之母。”
As a proverb says, no pains, no gains.
正如谚语所说,“不劳则无获。”
6. Perhaps the most dangerous phenomenon gripping the nation today is…
也许当今困扰国家的最危险的现象是……
7. Never before in history has the issue of…been more evident than now。
历史上,……的问题从来没有比现在更加突出。
8. Perhaps it is time to reexamine the idea that…
也许现在是应该重新考虑……的时候了。
9. A growing number of people are beginning to realize that…is not the sole prerequisite for happiness。
越来越多的人开始意识到……并不是幸福的惟一条件。
10. Years of observing human behavior has enabled me to conclude that the major difference between…and…lies solely with…
对人们行为的多年观察使我能够得出这样的结论:……和……的主要区别仅仅在于……
篇14:高考英语语法:形同意合的谚语口译
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+ 加入清单Pride goes before a fall 骄者必败
Fish in troubled waters 浑水摸鱼
Business is business 公事公办
The style is the man 文如其人
More haste,less speed 欲速则不达
Great minds think alike 英雄所见略同
Misfortunes never come alone 祸不单行
Hedges have eyes,walls have ears 隔篱有眼,隔墙有耳
Man proposes,God disposes. 谋事在人,成事在天
Beauty is in the eye of beholder 情人眼里出西施
Time and tide wait for no man 时不待我/岁月无情
A young idler,an old beggar 少壮不努力,老大徒伤悲
A man should not bite the hand that feeds him 不要恩将仇报
Health is better than wealth 家有万贯财,不如一身健
Out of office,out of danger 无官一身轻
In time of peace prepare for war 居安当思危
The tongue cuts the throat 祸从口出/言多必失
Out of sight,out of mind /far from eye,far from heart 眼不见为净
All shall be well,Jack shall have Jill 有情人终成眷属
篇15:高考英语作文:机器人的影响
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+ 加入清单导语:几个世纪以来,人们就幻想,有一天也有智慧的机器能像人类工作和忠实的仆人。今天,这个梦想已经在许多领域由于研究人工智能的迅速发展成真。下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的优秀英语作文,欢迎阅读与借鉴,谢谢!
Intelligent machines such as robots are increasingly being used.They can do many things that used to be done by human.Discuss the benefits and dangers.
For centuriespeople have fantasized that someday machines could have intelligence like mankind and work as faithful servants.Today this dream has come true in many fields thanks to rapid development in artificial intelligence research.Wonderful as this seemsmachines have problems.
To begin withpeople lose jobs when machines take their placesespecially in the mass production industry such as automobile business.In factories of the famous car company Fordalmost every step of car making is done by giant robots that work faster with higher reliability and precision than human labor.Because of the adoption of robotsthousands of workers are put out of their old jobs and forced to make changes in their work.Even such changes create job opportunities because robots need people to take care of and operatethe number of new jobs is much smaller than that of lostthus causing huge pressure on the labor market and government.
People become less smart because of the wide use of machines in their life.Nowadays people need to use their brain less than they did in the past.Everything is programmed and the only thing we need to do is to push a button or throw on a switch.This has given us great convenience but made us lazier and less smart.Everyone has the awkward moment troubling with the spelling of a simple word when writing with a pen.But with a computerit will automatically proofread the spelling and grammar of your writing.So people become less concerned with learning things right.This is not a progress but a regress of our intelligence and culture.
But machines have many benefits that nobody can deny such as great work efficiency and low cost of mass production.The workload that could take months to finish by manual labor could be done flawlessly by robots in minutes.We have more purchasing power to enjoy a wider variety of goods and services because of the reduction of production costs with factories using machines.Other benefits include that machines could do dangerous jobs for people in high risk businesses like mining and construction.
To concludemachines have many merits that make our life easier and more convenientbut they have caused many problems such as undercutting our job opportunities and overdependence on machines.
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机器人等智能机器正越来越多地被使用,他们可以做许多人类以前做过的事情,讨论它的好处和危险.。
几个世纪以来,人们就幻想,有一天也有智慧的机器能像人类工作和忠实的仆人。今天,这个梦想已经在许多领域由于研究人工智能的迅速发展成真。这似乎是最棒的,机器有问题。
首先,人们失去工作的机器取代他们的位置的时候,特别是在大规模生产汽车行业等业务。在著名的福特汽车公司的汽车制造工厂,几乎每一步都是由巨型机器人工作速度比人力更高的可靠性和精度。由于采用机器人,把从他们的旧的工作和被迫改变他们的工作是成千上万的工人。即使这样的变化创造就业机会,因为机器人需要人照顾和操作,新增工作岗位的数量要小得多的流失,造成巨大的压力对劳动力市场和政府。
聪明的人越来越少,因为机器在他们的生活中广泛使用。现在人们需要使用他们的大脑比他们在过去所做的,一切都是程序,我们唯一需要做的就是按下一个按钮或扔在一个开关。这给了我们很大的便利,却使我们越来越不聪明的。每个人都有尴尬的时刻困扰的一个简单的单词拼写时用钢笔写。但有一个计算机,它会自动检查拼写和语法的写作。这样的人越来越少,学习有关的事情。这不是进步而是倒退了我们的智力和文化。
但是机器有许多好处,没有人可以否认大工作效率和低成本大批量生产。工作量可能需要几个月时间才能完成的体力劳动可以完美无缺的机器人以分钟完成。我们有了更多的购买力来享受更多种类的商品和服务的生产成本和工厂使用机器减少。其他的福利包括机器可以做高风险业务如采矿和建筑的人危险的工作。
最后,机器有许多优点,使我们的生活更轻松、更方便,但会引起如削弱我们的工作机会和过度依赖机器的许多问题。
篇16:2024高考英语作文常用句型汇总
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+ 加入清单spend one’sweekend in many different ways过周末的方式各不相同
enjoy doing things by oneself喜欢独立做事
go swimming去游泳
go for an outing/have an outing at (the seashore)去海边玩
see the sights of Beijing游览北京风光
play the piano弹钢琴
play chess下棋
have dances on weekends参加周末舞会
have a picnic over the weekend周末野餐
go to the cinema去看电影
have a party聚会
hold a sports meeting举行运动会
do some reading看书
help sb. do sth.帮某人做某事
enjoy a family trip家人共同出游
get everything ready for...为……做准备
ride one’sbike with sb. to the park骑自行车载某人去公园
She would like to bring...to the picnic.她要带……去野餐。
It was a very relaxing Sunday.这个周日过得很轻松。
There are good programs on TV on weekends.周末有好看的电视节目。
take a message for sb.给某人留口信
send a message to sb.给某人发信息
Every day is not Sunday.好景不常在,好花不常开。
hear from sb.收到某人的来信
talk about/of sth.提到某事
tell sb. to do sth.告诉某人做某事
get information about...得到……的消息
express one’sidea/feelings in English用英语表达某人的思想(感情)
Write sb. a letter saying...给某人写信说……
apologize to sb. for...因……向某人道歉
thank you for...感谢你……
make a speech at the meeting在会上讲话
篇17:历年高考英语满分作文GreenActioninOurClass
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+ 加入清单April 12 is memorable because our class had a meaningful experience on that day. In the morning, we bicycled to the suburbs to plant trees, talking and laughing all the way. Upon arrival, we began to work immediately. Some were digging holes. Some were carrying and planting young trees. Others were watering . After getting the work done, we put up a board reminding people to protect the trees. Before leaving we took some photos to record our green action. Seeing the lines of trees, we all had a sense of achievement. We feel it’s our duty to protect and beautify our environment.
4月12日是难忘的,因为我们班有一个有意义的经验。早上,我们骑自行车到郊区植树,一路说笑着。货到后,我们立即开始工作。一些人挖洞。一些人携带和种植小树。另一些人浇水。完成工作后,我们把董事会提醒人们保护树木。离开前我们拍了一些照片来记录我们的绿色行动。看到的树,我们都有成就感。我们觉得这是我们的责任保护和美化我们的环境。
篇18:高考优秀英语作文:AboutWeight-losing
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+ 加入清单导语:现如今很多女孩子追求漂亮都会选择减肥,下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的优秀英语作文,欢迎阅读与借鉴,谢谢!
Nowadays weight-losinghas become popular among young and middle-aged women. In order to make themselves pretty-looking, they try many different ways of losing weight. Some go on a diet, some take exercise,some eat medicine ,others even turn to operation for help. As a result,a lot of products have come into being,such as special medicines, tea and equipment. They are used in different ways and work differently, but some have side effects.
In my opinion, its understandable that women seek beauty, but they should do it in a proper way. Taking exercise is the way that I most favor. But the other methods are likely to do harm to peoples health more or less.
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如今减肥已经成为中青年女性的热门话题。为了使自己看起来漂亮,他们尝试了许多不同的减肥方法。有的节食,有的运动,有的吃药,有的甚至转手术求助。因此,许多产品应运而生,如特殊药品、茶叶和设备等。它们用不同的方式和不同的工作,但有些有副作用。
在我看来,女人追求美是可以理解的,但她们应该以正确的方式去做。锻炼是我最喜欢的方式。但是其他的方法或多或少会危害人们的健康。
篇19:2024年高考英语满分作文素材积累
全文共 4385 字
+ 加入清单Sharpening your axe will not delay your jobof cutting wood.磨刀不误砍柴功。
Will is power. 意志就是力量。
Seeing is believing.眼见为实。
Necessity is the mother of invention. 需要是发明的动力。
Truth never fears investigation.事实从来不怕调查。
Virtue is fairer far than beauty.美德远远胜过美貌。
Well begun is half done.好的开端是成功的一半。
Where there is life,there is hope.留得青山在,不怕没柴烧。
Never fish in trouble water.不要混水摸鱼。
Reading makes a full man.读书使人完善。
Speech is silver,silence is gold.能言是银,沉默是金。
You cannot burn the candle at both ends. 蜡烛不能两头点,精力不可过分耗。
You cannot eat your cake and have it.鱼与熊掌,不可得兼。
Time cures all things.时间是医治一切创伤的良药。
Where there is a will,there is a way.有志者事竟成。
Wisdom in the mind is better than money in the hand.
脑中有知识,胜过手中有金钱。
Actions speak louder than words.事实胜于雄辩。
It’s never too late to mend. 亡羊补牢。
Keep good men company and you shall be of the number.
近朱者赤,近墨者黑。
A good book is a good friend. 好书如挚友。
Nothing is impossible for a willing heart.
心之所愿,无所不成。
One today is worth two tomorrows.一个今天胜似两个明天。
Poverty is stranger to industry. 勤劳之人不受穷。
Genius is nothing but labor and diligence.
天才不过是勤奋而已。
A bird in the hand is worth than two in the bush.
一鸟在手胜过双鸟在林。
Four short words sum up what has lifted most successful individuals above the crowd: a little bit more.四个简短的词汇概括了成功秘诀:多一点点!
It is never too old to learn. 活到老,学到老。
From small beginning come great things.伟大始于渺小。
A good beginning is half done.良好的开端是成功的一半。
New wine in old bottles.旧瓶装新酒。
All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.
只会用功不玩耍,聪明孩子也变傻。
Hope for the best, but prepare for the worst.
抱最好的愿望,做最坏的打算。
Good health is over wealth. 健康是最大的财富。
A fall into a pit,a gain in your wit.吃一堑,长一智。
Better late than never.迟做总比不做好;晚来总比不来好。
A friend in need is a friend indeed.患难见真情。
Birds of a feather flock together. 物以类聚,人以群分。
Complacency is the enemy of study.
学习的敌人是自己的满足。
Content is better than riches. 知足者常乐。
Books and friends should be few but good.
读书如交友,应求少而精。
All that ends well is well.结果好,就一切都好。
A close mouth catches no flies.病从口入。
By reading we enrich the mind, by conversation we polish it.
读书使人充实,交谈使人精明。
Care and diligence bring luck. 谨慎和勤奋才能抓住机遇。
A good book is the best of friends, the same today and forever.
一本好书,相伴一生。
A young idler,an old beggar. 少壮不努力,老大徒伤悲。
Caution is the parent of safety.小心驶得万年船。
A miss is as good as a mile.失之毫厘,差之千里。
An apple a day keeps the doctor away. 一天一苹果,不用请医生。
Many hands make light work. 人多力量大。
All things are difficult before they are easy.
凡事总是由难而易。
As a man sows, so he shall reap.种瓜得瓜,种豆得豆。
Misfortunes never come alone/single.祸不单行。
A bad beginning makes a bad ending.不善始者不善终。
No news is good news. 没有消息就是好消息。
No pains, no gains. 没有付出就没有收获。
All that glitters is not gold. 闪光的不一定都是金子。
A sound mind in a sound body. 健全的精神寓于健康的身体。
Don’t put off till tomorrow what should be done today. 今日事,今日毕。
Early to bed andearly to rise makes a man healthy,
wealthy and wise.
早睡早起身体好。
East or west,home is best.东好西好,还是家里最好。
Diligence is the mother of success. 勤奋是成功之母。
Easier said than done. 说得容易,做得难。
Do as you would be done by. 己所不欲,勿施于人。
Eat to live,but not live to eat.
人吃饭是为了活着,但活着不是为了吃饭。
Life is not all roses. 人生并不是康庄大道。
Every little helps a mickle. 聚沙成塔,集腋成裘。
Fortune favors those who use their judgement. 机遇偏爱善断之人。
Every man has his faults.金无足赤,人无完人。
A candle lights others and consumes itself.蜡烛照亮别人,却毁灭了自己。
All roads lead to Rome. 条条大路通罗马。
Every man is the architect of his own fortune.自己的命运自己掌握。
Fact speak louder than words. 事实胜于雄辩。
God helps those who help themselves.自助者天助。
Good advice is beyond all price.忠告是无价宝。
He who does not advance loses ground.逆水行舟,不进则退。
Knowledge makes humble, ignorance makes proud.
博学使人谦逊,无知使人骄傲。
Like father,like son.有其父必有其子。
Honesty is the best policy. 做人诚信为本。
Gold will not buy anything. 黄金并非万能。
Happiness takes no account of time. 欢乐不觉时光过。
Adversity leads to prosperity.穷则思变。
A friend is easier lost than found.得朋友难,失朋友易。
He is wise that is honest.诚实者最明智。
He laughs best who laughs last.谁笑到最后,谁笑得最好。
Kill two birds with one stone.一箭双雕。
Knowledge is power.知识就是力量。
Make hay while the sun shines.良机勿失。
Many heads are better than one.三个臭皮匠,赛过诸葛亮。
No rose without a thorn.没有不带刺的玫瑰。
Man proposes,God disposes. 谋事在人,成事在天。
No smoke without fire.无风不起浪。
Success belongs to the persevering. 坚持就是胜利。
The greatest talkers are always least doers.
语言的巨人总是行动的矮子。
Time and tide wait for no man. 时不我待。
Wise men love truth,whereas fools shun it.智者热爱真理,愚者回避真理
Practice makes perfect.熟能生巧。
Misfortune tests the sincerity of friends.患难见真情。
Money isn’t everything.钱不是万能的。
Rome is not built in a day. 冰冻三尺,非一日之寒。
篇20:2024高考英语作文素材:英语励志名言
全文共 1673 字
+ 加入清单1、When all else is lost the future still remains.就是失去了一切别的,也还有未来。
2、Sow nothing, reap nothing.春不播,秋不收。
3、Keep on going never give up.勇往直前, 决不放弃!
4、The wealth of the mind is the only wealth.精神的财富是唯一的财富。
5、Never say die.永不气馁!
6、Nurture passes nature.教养胜过天性。
7、There is no garden without its weeds.没有不长杂草的花园。
8、The best preparation for tomorrow is doing your best today.对明天做好的准备就是今天做到最好!
9、The reason why a great man is great is that he resolves to be a great man.伟人之所以伟大,是因为他立志要成为伟大的人。
10、Suffering is the most powerful teacher of life.苦难是人生最伟大的老师。
12、A man cant ride your back unless it is bent.你的腰不弯,别人就不能骑在你的背上。
13、Although again sweet candy, also has a bitter day.即使再甜的糖,也有苦的一天。
14、Sharp tools make good work.工欲善其事,必先利其器。
15、Never put off what you can do today until tomorrow.今日事今日毕!
16、Wasting time is robbing oneself.浪费时间就是掠夺自己。
17、The greatest test of courage on earth is to bear defeat without losing heart.世界上对勇气的最大考验是忍受失败而不丧失信心。
18、A mans best friends are his ten fingers.人最好的朋友是自己的十个手指。
19、Only they who fulfill their duties in everyday matters will fulfill them on great occasions.只有在日常生活中尽责的人才会在重大时刻尽责。
20、The shortest way to do many things is to only one thing at a time.做许多事情的捷径就是一次只做一件事。
21、Theres only one corner of the universe you can be sure of improving, and thats your own self.这个宇宙中只有一个角落你肯定可以改进,那就是你自己。
22、The first step is as good as half over.第一步是最关键的一步。
23、Do one thing at a time, and do well.一次只做一件事,做到最好!
24、Believe that god is fair.相信上帝是公平的。
25、Wealth is the test of a mans character.财富是对一个人品格的试金石。
26、Let bygones be bygones.
过去的就让它过去吧。
27、Let sleeping dogs lie.
别惹麻烦。
28、Let the cat out of the bag.
泄漏天机。
29、Lies can never changes fact.
谎言终究是谎言。
30、Lies have short legs.
谎言站不长。