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对英语试卷的评价与建议

篇一:介绍自己情况英语作文

每一次考完试之后,仅仅由别人的评价来判定自己是不全面的,当自己也沉淀下来,窥探自己的内心,写下自己的自我评价,这样才可以不断进步。但是自我评价要怎么写呢?下面是小编为大家带来的对英语试卷的评价与建议,相信对你会有帮助的。

对试卷的评价与建议篇一

一、 试卷基本结构分析

安徽卷英语试卷卷面满分150分,共86道题目。全卷由选择题和非选择题组成,第Ⅰ卷选择题包括听力、英语知识运用和阅读理解三个部分;第Ⅱ卷为第四部分写作,分为第一节任务型阅读和第二节书面表达。具体情况分布如下表:

二、总体评价

本套试卷是严格按照XXXX年安徽省高考英语《考试说明》,结合新课标《考试大纲》精心命制的,难度适中。整套试卷立足教材,突出语篇,强调应用,注重交际,语言考查的灵活性更强,

完全符合安徽高考英语试题的命题原则。其特点有下列几个方面:语言注重时代性及隐含的情感态度和文化意识,关注社会热点,语言考查的灵活性增加。

三、具体分析

第一部分 听力

.听力注重以考生熟悉的话题考查考生听英语的能力,从今年的听力试题可以看出,直接获取信息的试题有所减少,推断题有所增多。选用的材料特别注重语言的真实性和交际性,对话的内容涉及面较广,口语化程度较高。

第二部分:英语知识运用

(I)单项填空

单项填空题在保证知识覆盖面的基础上,突出一贯倡导的语境化、交际化的特点,题干力求语言生动、地道,语境真实、新颖,所选考点都是《考试说明》中所列的语法知识和要求掌握的词汇。该部分涉及动词时态和语态、固定搭配考查的有24、26、28题,33题考查倍数表达法,25、35题考查交际用语。同时兼顾对代词、形容词短语等项目的考查。整体考查全面,要求考生掌握好基础知识。

XXX年安徽卷单项填空试题考查项目数据统计:

从这个统计表格中我们可以看出,2013年高考在单项填空部分考查了考试大纲所要求的基本考点,考查的项目多达13项。主要考查了动词的时态与语态、非谓语动词以及交际用语。但去掉了对冠词、主谓一致和其它特殊句式的考查。各题题干简洁,却能够给考生创设一个个较为完整的语言情景,这有利于考查学生在具体语境下对所学过语言知识的掌握情况。

(II)完形填空

完形填空是一篇议论文,作者谈了如何学好一门语言,难度属于中等。综合考查考生在语篇中对词汇的掌握和运用能力,以及对篇章逻辑的理解和把握能力。从考点上看,主要考查实词,兼顾虚词。请看下表。

2010-2013年安徽省高考英语完形填空考点分布:

从这个统计表格中我们可以看出,高考完形填空题重点考查名词、形容词、和动词等实词。这就要求考生在了解语篇的基础上,加强语义、语境的深层次理解,同时还应具备一定的逻辑思维能力。所以在平时的学习中一定要注意高频词汇的积累,对于这些常考词的词性、词义与用法要准确无误的把握。

第三部分:阅读理解

根据考试说明,阅读理解主要考查学生六个方面的能力,即理解事实细节、理解主旨要义、推理判断、猜测词义、理解文章的基本结构、理解作者的意图,观点和态度。下面是近四年的阅读理解题的考点分布表。

XX安徽省高考英语阅读理解相关考点统计表:

从上表可以看出,2013年试卷阅读理解选材广泛。文章涉及健康习惯调查、如何确保有足够的生活用水慈善基金会、网络的发展让人们忽视了现实中交往、探戈舞的介绍等话题, 题型设计多样 ,细节理解题、推理判断题考查较多,兼顾对主旨大意、句意推测题的考查,试题整体难度适中。

第四部分:写作

该部分共分两节,第一节为任务型读写,考查考生对书面语言的监察能力;第二节为书面表达题,考查考生根据所提供的话题和特定的要求进行书面表达的能力。

(I)任务型读写

任务型读写题与2012年相比,难度相当,内容是关于幸福,学生读起来较为轻松,题目设置有梯度,答题要求简练和规范。涉及词语释义、同意替换、归纳演绎、细节理解等。 近几年安徽卷任务型读写所选文章以说明文为主,内容贴近现代社会生活。2013年此题的难度与往年持平。这就要求考生在阅读理解的基础上,对文中所提供的信息的有效信息进行筛选、整合和综合概括,并根据表格的形式,把加工后的信息准确、有序地完成与短文有关的表格,这一题型共10题,每个空格只能填一个词。其特点是任务型阅读属于综合能力考查题,考查的能力有:(1)捕捉信息能力,属基础题,快速获取信息的能力;在这十个空中,捕捉信息题要占一半。(2)组织信息能力,属活用题,考查学生组织信息和表叙信息以及对文中的有效信息进行筛选、整合和综合概括的能力。(3)概括信息能力,属概括题,要求学生在获取相关信息后,根据表格相关要求,对所获取的信息进行二次加工,这主要考查学生综合运用语言的能力。

(II)书面表达

XX年安徽省高考英语书面表达题统计表:

书面表达依旧属于话题作文,关于文明校园征稿,难度不大。命题贴近考生生活,符合考生的认知水平,能够让不同层次的考生都能不同程度地发挥自己的英语水平,体现考试的公平性。

总之,整套试卷命题科学,充分体现安徽新课标高考的精神。紧扣时代热点,整套试题渗透着对考生人文素养的培养,让考生在答题的同时受到思想感情、文化意识、价值观等方面的启发和教育。

对试卷的评价与建议篇二

期中考试已经结束了,这次考试是对于不少刚刚接触英语的初一新生而言是一次重要的考试,是全面衡量学生这段时间学习情况的一次考试。下面我主要从以下几个方面来分析:

一、考试质量分析

1.试题方面

就整个试题而言,考点分布均匀,覆盖面广,考题难度适中,大部分试题能够体现目前注重基础、体现能力的考试命题要求。

2.试卷方面

本次考试题型,分为听力部分、辨音、单项选择、阅读理解、完形填空,词汇运用,阅读表达,翻译句子和写作几个大部分,各部分难易程度不同。大部分题都比较基础,和平时的练习比较起来相对集中一些,更能反映出学生在这一阶段学习中的问题。

此次英语考试的听力部分,内容为与日常教学相关的材料,与所学教材难度相当,较为简单。朗读速度适中,对平日教学的听力训练有着良好的导向作用。但在第一节中还是有部分学生容易犯书写不规范的错误,也有些学生“g”、“j”不分,“r”、“l”混淆,因而造成较多失分。这学期对学生在听力方面的练习不是很多,除了在课堂上少量练习外,平时课下学生几乎得不到练习。

单项选择,突出了课本和平常练习中较基础的知识,学生训练较多,此部分得分较好。

完形填空,对于我校大部分基础较薄弱学生而言觉得难度较大,因选项具有大的灵活性,而学生在平时对单词的记忆和对句子的积累还不够牢,而且也没有掌握好做题技巧,没有联系上下文推测出正确答案,以至于此部分得分较低。

翻译句子,由于平时练习较多,且反复强调大小写及单词、字母的正确书写,因此这部分得分比预计要好。阅读表达学生在此题得分较少,不是多了这个就是漏了那个,答的不好,得分非常低。

写作部分大部分学生书写较差,只有极少数学生在这部分未动笔。

二、分析原因

教师方面的原因:

这段时间由于课时多,时间紧,因此对学生部分知识掌握情况的落实不够,这也是这次考试成绩不高的原因之一。从这次考试中应该吸取这样的教训。在以后的英语教学中,加大管理力度,提高学生在课堂上的学习效率。

学生方面的原因:

1.部分学生的基础知识不够扎实,且大部分学生毫无学习习惯而言,记忆知识极难,遗忘知识快,过去滚瓜烂熟的东西一段时间不用就忘了。

2.学生的应变能力有待提高,不能正确写出单词的正确形式。

3.理解能力不强,完形填空、阅读理解失分较多,不能理解通篇大意。

4.不能熟练运用学过的句型。很容易漏掉be动词。

三、今后采取的措施

抓好单词、词组过关,狠抓知识落实。在进行单词和词组教学时,首先让学生读准音,然后反复读单词和词组,并找出同义词、反义词、类似用法的词一起记。在进行句型时,以小组合作等方式举一反三,反复练习课堂上学习的句型。平时督促学生多听录音磁带,一星期集中训练两次听力,在培养学生的听力技巧和听力能力上多下功夫,提高他们的听力能力和听力技巧。

在阅读教学中,设计一些问题,通过学生自读文章找出其答案,在整体上感知文章内容。而且讲解文章时,注意生词在句中的运用、注意文章里出现的词组,注意对关键句子的理解。针对学生阅读能力差的问题,将通过大量阅读来培养学生的语感以及通过上下文捕捉信息的能力,还要注意文化背景知识的学习,拓宽学生的知识,开阔学生的视野。

不会用英文写作文是绝大多数学生的通病。作文是由句子构成,一个正确的句子需要用正确的句型、正确的词组,正确的时态构成。训练学生的答题技巧和书写方面的好习惯。写好作文,没有诀窍,只有多写多练。

在今后的教学中,我们将继续抓好双基知识的训练,打牢基本功;引导学生梳理知识,掌握语法规则,逐步引导学生灵活运用英语知识的能力;培养学生上课时的听课习惯,要求学生全神贯注,要和老师同步思考出现的问题;讲课时,尽量使用简明、准确、形象、生动的语言,坚持用英语教学,让学生用英语来想英语;在平时要通过阅读,培养学生阅读多种文体的能力,如何从文章中获取信息的能力和运用英语解决实际问题的能力。在训练中要注意方法的多样化和灵活性,同时,启发他们学会运用多种不同的方法来表达同样的思想,逐步培养良好的英语语感。在培优辅差上下功夫,大面积提高学生的优秀率和合格率。

对试卷的评价与建议篇三

英语测试对于提高教学质量起着有效的促进作用。通过测试一方面教师可以取得教学工作的信息反馈,另一方面,可以调动学生的学习积极性,使学生在今后的测试中不断发扬成绩,克服缺点,取得最佳效果。测试的重要性是显而易见的,对试卷的评讲就显得尤为重要。高考英语满分作文,介绍自己的基本情况

高质量的试卷评讲会让师生收益非浅。有效的评讲,能让老师更成功地总结教学经验,分析学生学习情况以改进教学,提高教学效率和教学效果。有效的评讲,能让学生找到自己的不足和改进学习的方法。

有效地评讲英语试卷应该坚持三个原则:

一、评讲的内容和细节必须由学生实情决定。学生才是课堂的主体,教师只是引导者。学生在测试中暴露了他们自己在英语各方面存在的问题或漏洞,学生有他们自己的难点和疑惑。教师具体该讲什么和怎样讲必须根据学生的情况和特点来进行。对于学生普遍存在的难点,应该仔细分析,详细评讲。对于个别学生存在的难题,可以个别辅导,个别评讲。

二、评讲必须结合试卷特点。尽管都是英语测试,但不同阶段,不同时间的测试试卷是有其自身的特点的。教师应该在认真分析和研究试卷的基础上评讲试卷,切不可千篇一律的对待各种英语试卷。试卷的评讲步骤和时间长度都要根据试题的难度来定,当然必须结合学生实际。对于不同类别的试卷应该有不同的评讲方式,对于试卷中的不同题型也应该用不同的方法。

三、评讲时必须给予学生必要的反馈和消化的时间。英语课堂的师生互动性很强,即使是评讲试卷也应如此。评讲时切不可让老师一个人唱独角戏,其间必须穿插必要的互动和反馈。尤其在评讲典型错题时,有必要先让学生自述答题思路,然后由老师根据学生的错误根源进行讲解,最后让学生再读题目和正确的解答依据。学生始终是受教育的主体,教师切勿包办一切。

简而言之,评讲试卷必须结合试卷的特点和学生的实际情况,切不可草率行事。 怎样才能有效的评讲英语试卷呢?

第一、认真了解和初步分析试卷。在评讲前,教师有必要用自己教给学生的方法亲自把试卷做一遍,以便确定试题的检测范围和感受试题的难度。在做题的过程中可以预测学生的难点,也可以根据学生所学内容,看看哪些题目超出了学生的学习范围。当然,也可以检阅试卷的不足,以便今后选择并合理利用英语试卷。

第二、认真统计学生成绩。在批阅完学生试卷后,认真统计学生的成绩是很有必要的。统计的项目主要有:求出平均值和求出差距。在统计出平均成绩后,可以参照其他班的情况分析,确定该班的成绩位置。平均分较低,就说明该班的成绩较差。如果平均分较高,那该班的整体情况就较好。另外,还要排列出全班考生中的最高分和最低分,找出二者之间的差距。差距越大,两级分化就越严重,教学的难度就越大。在排列学生成绩时,最好由高分到低分排列,找出中间位置考生的分数,并把该成绩列为全班成绩的中位数。在评讲试题时,要特别注意中位段的学生的反映和效果。

第三、根据学生的成绩和分析情况,再次分析试卷,并做好学生的错误统计。在分析学生成绩后,及时的看学生答题的错误率,从中找出学生的典型错题。错误率较高的题目,就是要评讲的重点部位。这部分题目,既是学生应该关注的,也是教师应该详细评讲的。在统计错误率后,教师应该耐心的查阅典型错题,分析学生答错的原因,反思自己教学上的不足。对于,教师很难作分析的题目,要及时与学生进行交流,然后再确定学生做错的根源。 第四、认真耐心的评讲试卷。在试卷发给学生之后,教师可以安排学生自主讨论和简单分析自己的试卷。教师最好要提示学生如何讨论和分析。例如,要求学生发现自己的错题,并尽力分析出错题的知识类别:是宾语从句还是动词不定式,还是动名词或是其他的。

在学生分析错误类别后,可让学生互相讨论解答的方法或依据等,让学生达到初步了解解答出错的根源,并试着改正自己的错误。对于学生猜对的题目,也要要求学生诚实地标出来,一并作为错题对待,设法杜绝学生答题的侥幸心理。在学生讨论分析试卷后,教师就可以开始评讲试卷了。对于学生错误率较高的试题,教师必须详细的评讲。评讲时不光要书写答题的根据,还要多举相关的例子,最终要让学生能正确解答这些题和相似的试题。对于错误率较低的试题,蜻蜓点水般的评讲就可以了。当然,这部分错题的分析可以让成绩优秀的学生来完成。既可以从分发挥优生的能力,又能给其他学生提供鲜活的榜样。最后,就要解答学生的疑问了。

在评讲试题时,教师最好不要全部评讲,而是留一些小的疑问给学生。这样便于引导学生学会提问和思考。在教师评讲了主要错题之后,可以让学生之间互相讨论,让他们尝试相互探讨相互学习。在讨论和研究的过程中,激发学生学习的激情,启发他们思考和解决问题。在学生提出疑问后及时有针对性地给予解答,并随时肯定学生的质疑能力和探讨精神。

第五、师生认真翔实地做好总结。在师生互动地评讲完试卷后,教师和学生都有必要进行各自的总结。学生需要总结初自己在知识和能力上的薄弱环节,并写好错题集。在学生收集错题时,教师应要求他们写明解题的正确依据。英语教师也有自己的总结。要总结学生的薄弱环节,要总结自己评讲时出现的不足(范围过大,语言不清楚,讲解欠通俗等)。教师也要收集学生的典型错题。以便今后检测时插入以往的错题,让学生巩固和弥补以前的不足。

总而言之,坚持实事求是的原则,坚持师生互动的方式,让英语试卷的评讲体现教师、学生、试题和环境之间的相互作用的关系,让英语试卷的评讲更有效,才能真正的体现英语检测对学生的评价和督促作用,才能真正地增强英语教学的实际效果。

高考英语满分作文-我的秘密

篇二:介绍自己情况英语作文

高考英语满分作文:我的秘密

This evening there was a broadcast of an exciting football match on TV. It was between Chinese team and the team of the United Arab Emirates. I am a loyal football fan and I had expected the match for a long time, so after class I hurried home. But on the way, I found a little boy crying. He lost his way. Considering his parents must be very worried, I

immediately decided to send him home. Seeing their son back, the boys parents showed their gratitude. They also invited me to stay for supper. But thinking of the football match, I refused them politely. When I got home, it was very late. Therefore, I missed the match,However, I felt very happy because I helped other people. Although my mother asked why ! came back so late, I said nothing.Perhaps this will become my own secret.

10月10日 星期六 晴

今天晚上电视播放了一场令人兴奋的足球比赛。这场比赛是在中国队和阿联酋队之间展开的。我是一个忠实的足球迷,而且我盼望这场比赛很长时间了,所以放学后我就匆忙往家赶。但是在路上我发现一个小男孩在哭。他迷路了。考虑到他的父母一定很担心,我立刻决定送他回家。看到他们的儿子回来,小孩妁父母感激之情溢于言表。他们留我吃晚饭,但想着足球比赛我婉言拒绝了。 我到家时已经很晚了,因此我错过了比赛。然而我很高兴因为我帮助了他人。

尽管妈妈问我为什么这么晚回来,我什么也没说。或许这将成为我自己的小秘密。

Oct. 10 Saturday Fine

There was an exciting football match on TV this evening. It was played between China and the United Arab Emirates. As a loyal football fan, I had expected the match for a long time, so after class I hurried home. But on the way, I saw a little boy crying. He told me that he lost his way. Maybe his parents were worrying about him. Thinking of this, I decided to send him home. It was a long way. It took us much time to reach his home.Seeing their son, the boys parents were very grateful and asked me to stay for supper. I refused politely because I still wanted to watch the match.

But when I arrived home, it was so late that the match had been over.What a pity! However, I was very happy all the same because I helped others. I told nobody about it. It was just my secret.

10月10日 星期六 晴

今天晚上电视播放了一场令人兴奋的足球比赛。这场比赛是在中国队和阿联酋队之间展开的。作为一个忠实的足球迷,我已盼望这场比赛很长时间了,所以放学后我就匆忙往家赶。但是在路上我看见一个小男孩在哭。他告诉我他迷路了。可能他父母正担心他呢p想到这,我决定送他回家。那是一段很长的路。到他家花了很长时间。看到他们的儿子,小孩的父母非常感激并留我吃晚饭。我婉言拒绝了,因为我依旧想看比赛。

但是我到家太晚了,比赛已经结束了。真遗憾!然而我仍然很高兴因为我帮助了他人。我没有将这件事告诉其他人,这只是我的秘密。

高考英语作文优秀范文分类(全)

篇三:介绍自己情况英语作文

经典范文

1、表达观点类

在英语课堂上,你喜欢你的老师授课时只用英语,还是英语、汉语兼用?某英语杂志社就此话题邀请中学生发表看法。请围绕“How do you prefer your English classes to be taught?In English only,or in both English and Chinese?”这个问题,参考所给要点,选择一种授课形式,写一篇英语短文。

授课形式一:只用英语

优点:有助于提高听说能力等

缺憾:不易听懂等

结论:??

授课形式二:英语、汉语兼用

优点:易于理解等

缺憾:英语氛围不浓等

结论:??

注意:1.词数 100~120,短文开头已给出(不计词数)。

2.参考词汇:atmosphere 氛围

I prefer my English classes to be taught in...

满分文(一)

I prefer my English classes to be taught in both English and Chinese, whose advantage is that it is easy for us to understand what the teacher talks about. The teacher first teaches the class in English, and then she explains those that are hard to understand to us so that we get a better knowing of the passage. That will be good for us.

However, teaching the class in two languages will make the English atmosphere not so strong. Some students who wish to be taught in English will be disappointed.

Except for the disadvantage, I think it is really good to hear two languages in classes. It can make us more familiar with the foreign culture.

名师点评:

审题是作文的第一要素,本文的审题准确无误。无论是要点的把握还是结构的组织都证明了这一点。本文运用多种复杂句式,整体看来是不错的。文中的一个复合句式显示了作者的英语功底。其他出彩短语的使用也很地道,可以参看好句中的分析。

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背诵内容:

好词1.advantage n.优点2.be familiar with,对某人熟悉3. atmosphere n.气氛高考英语满分作文,介绍自己的基本情况

1. I prefer my English classes to be taught in both English and Chinese, whose advantage is that it is easy for us to understand what the teacher talks about.

我更喜欢采用双语教学,其优点是可以更好地理解老师的话。

2. Some students who wish to be taught in English will be disappointed.

满分文(二)

I prefer my English classes to be taught only in English because it is helpful for us to improve the ability of speaking and listening in a very short time. I have strong interest in English study and foreign culture, so I’d like to be totally immersed in the atmosphere of English so that I can quickly make progress. That’s why I prefer total English. However, since we are all English beginners, it’s really hard to understand all that the teacher says. Sometimes we need Chinese explanation. So my viewpoint is that we are taught not only in English but also using Chinese as a minor way to explain things that are hard to understand.

名师点评:

本文写作十分成功。语言和句式是本文最大的特点。好词中词汇的使用,将作者的意思表达得完整而准确,从而映衬了词汇的重要性;其次,本文的句式以复杂句为主,表语、定语和状语从句的使用都十分到位。

应背好词:1. immerse v.沉浸2. explanation n.解释3. make progress 取得进步

应背好句:1. I have strong interest in English study and foreign culture, so Id like to be totally immersed in the atmosphere of English so that I can quickly make progress.高考英语满分作文,介绍自己的基本情况

2. So my viewpoint is that we are taught not only in English but using Chinese as a minor way to explain things that are hard to understand.( 表语从句)

因此,我的观点是,用英文教授,同时对于一些难以理解的内容用中文进行辅助讲解。

练习篇目:

请根据下列内容,在你校英语校刊上发表一篇稿件。

1、目前中国西南部发生严重干旱。

2、学生会将于5月6日中午12:30在餐厅门口举行用自己的零花钱为受灾地区孩子买水的活动。

3、希望全校同学从我做起,节约水资源。 2

参考词汇:干旱drought 注意:词数不少于60。

From the news we know that there is a severe drought in southwest China now. Most places we hope that all of us can realize the

2、演讲稿

假设你是晨光中学的学生会主席李华。学生会将举办每年一度的英语演讲比赛,本年度的主题为“The English Novel I Like Best”。作为组织者,你将在演讲比赛开幕时发言,请你根据以下提示用英语写一篇发言稿。(2009·天津)

1. 说明比赛的意义,如提高英语听说能力,养成读书的习惯等;

2. 说明比赛的注意事项,如每人演讲不超过5分钟,语言流利,发音准确等;

3. 预祝比赛圆满成功。

注意: 1. 词数:不少于100词;2. 可适当加入细节,以使行文连贯。

范文背诵:

Good afternoon, ladies and gentlemen,

Welcome to this year’s English speech competition. In order to improve the abilities of both English speaking and listening, we continue to hold the English speech competition. I believe it will be of great help to form the good habit of reading, too.

There are some important points every speaker should be aware of. Please listen to me carefully. First of all, the speech must be finished within five minutes. Second, you should speak fluent English. At last, everyone should pronounce correctly. We expect to hear the fluent expression and standard pronunciation.

Finally, I’d like to wish the competition a great success and I hope every competitor can

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perform at your best!

Thank you!

句型背诵

①In order to improve the abilities of both English speaking and listening, we continue to hold the English speech competition.

②I believe it will be of great help to form the good habit of reading...

③...I’d like to wish the competition a great success and I hope every competitor can perform at your best!

练习篇目:

假如你是李华,美国一所友好学校准备与你们学校共同创办一份中学生英文刊物,该校格林先生来信询问有关情况。请你给她写封回信,假如你是李华,美国一所友好学校准备与你们学校共同创办一份中学生英文刊物,该校格林先生来信询问有关情况。请你给她写封回信,主要内容如下:

l 表示赞成。 l 提出你喜欢的栏目。 l 简要说明理由。

注意: 1. 词数100左右。 2. 新的开头和结尾已为你写好。

3. 适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 4. 参考栏目:栏目—column

Dear Mr. Green,

I am very excited to learn that we are going to start a magazine together. That sounds great! And I definitely agree with you on that.

Some of the columns which you mentioned in the letter are really my cup of tea. Say, “culture express” gives us a better understanding of the world. Since people from different parts of the world have different values, it’s necessary to learn from each other. This will offer a wonderful chance. Apart from that, “blurt out” is pretty good for Chinese students to learn English idioms and improve oral English. Last but not least, “entertainment” is so cool! The popular singers, actors and celebrities are so catchy and attractive that you absolutely can’t miss it! Teenagers are just fond of the trendy things.

Well, I can’t list more. I really can’t wait to read that magazine!

Yours faithfully,

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Li Hua

【名师点评】

这是一篇满分作文。仔细分析了这篇文章,写的的确是好,很地道的美式英语,一些词语的大胆使用,这么地道标准的英语,可不是一朝一夕所能写出来的。比如说:my cup of tea, apart from that, oral English, last but not least, celebrities, catchy和trendy的大胆运用,list, cant wait to 简直是perfect! 况且文章中没有一个错误,不管是书写还是语法。

(3)利弊分析类

假设你班最近就圆明园是否重建开展了一场讨论,同学们观点有分歧,各自理由主要如下表所示,请根据表格提供的讨论情况写一篇英文报道。

注意:1.词数:150左右 2.标题、开头已经写好,不计入词数。3. 要自拟结论。 参考词汇:故宫the Palace Museum; 颐和园the Summer Palace

Should Yuanmingyuan Be Rebuilt?

Recently my classmates had a discussion about whether it should be rebuilt or not.

Supporters of rebuilding the garden say only by doing so can we see the original sight of the garden, which reflects the Chinese civilization(文明). And it will be another place of interest for tourists. If partly rebuilt, it will provide a comparison and help us remember the

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高考英语满分作文 一次受表扬的经历

篇四:介绍自己情况英语作文

高考英语满分作文 一次受表扬的经历

July 17th Fine

This morning, on my way to school, I was riding when I heard a call for help. A little girl was calling for help in the river nearby. I immediately got off my bike, took off my clothes and jumped into the river. At last the girl was saved, After sending the girl back home, I hurried to school. But I was still late for class. Not knowing the reason, the teacher criticized me.

However, in the afternoon the girls parents came to my school and thanked me for having saved their daughter. Soon the story spread all over the school. TherefOre, the teacher knew why I was late this morning and he apologized to me. The headmaster also praised me and called on all the students to learn from me.

7月17日 晴

今天早晨,在上学的路上,我正骑着车突然听到呼救声。一个小女孩正在附近的河里喊救命。我立即跳下车,脱掉衣服,跳到河里。女孩终于得救了。把小女孩送回家后,我急忙赶到学校,但是仍然迟到了。由于不知道原因,老师批评了我。

然而下午小女孩的父母来学校感谢我救了他们的女儿,很快我的事迹传遍了整个校园。由此老师知道了我今早迟到的原因,他向我道歉。校长表扬了我并号召所有的学生向我学习。

July 17th Fine

Today I did a thing that was well worth doing although I was misunderstood at the beginning.

This morning on my way to school, I was riding when I heard a call for help. A girl fell into the river! I got off my bike, took off my clothes and jumped into the river. After a few minutes struggle, I finally saved the girl, I informed the girls parents and then hurried to school. But I was still late for class. Not knowing the reason, the teacher criticized me.

In the afternoon, the girls parents came to my school and thanked me for having saved their daughter. After the teacher learned the whole thing,he made an apology to me. And the headmaster praised me and also called on all the students to learn from me. I felt very proud.

7月17日 晴

今天我做了一件非常值得做的事情,尽管开始我被误会了。

今天早晨,在上学的路上,我正骑着车突然听到呼救声。一个小女孩落水了!我立即跳下车,脱掉衣服,跳到河里。几分钟的努力后我终于救了小女孩。我通知了小女孩的父母然后就急忙赶到学校,但是仍然迟到了。由于不知道原因,老师批评了我。

下午女孩的父母来学校感谢我救了他们的女儿。老师知道了整件事后向我道了歉。校长表扬了我并号召所有的学生向我学习。我感到非常自豪。

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拿到英语试题不知道从哪里下手吗?那么下面这套英语写作流程对你会有一定的帮助。

一.审题。

拿到题目后,手中拿铅笔,手脑眼嘴并用,开始审题。看题目的要求是什么,要点是什么,特殊要求是什么。譬如你是叫李华,还是随便一个名字? 要议论文还是记叙文?对分几段写有无要求?等等。诸如此类的硬性要求信息,都最好用铅笔划下来,以免出错,也许你一开始会记得,可随着时间的流逝,你会不会因紧张而遗忘这些信息呢?还是小心为妙。边看最好边张嘴默读,这样就不会遗漏或忽略任何一个字了。

二.草稿。

有的同学怕出错,全文都打草稿再誊写,我姑且认为不太可取,毕竟考场时间宝贵,即使我有四十分钟时间写作文也不敢贸然这么做,更何况考场时我们留给作文的时间往往一再被压缩。有的同学不打草稿,我认为更不太可取。一来容易出错,二来边写边想思维不连贯,即使思维连贯也无法审词酌句,展现自己最好的一面,容易后悔。

草稿怎么打?

1.结构就是你打算分几段写,每段都写什么?哪段转哪段承哪段起合?心里都要是有谱的。

2.关键词:结构拟定后,迅速在草稿纸上写下自己这篇作文可能用到的一些关键词。包括一些漂亮的词和自己可能会忘记的词。主要是动词和名词。

譬如一省作文题: 假设你的名字是李华,亚洲冬季运动会将在你居住的地方举办,现招募志愿者。你希望成为志愿者。申请信的格式已经写好了,你直接写内容就可以。你的个人情况:年龄性别学历,个人条件。英语好,爱好体育,擅长交际,乐于助人。承诺提供最佳服务。

关键词就是学历、爱好、擅长、乐于、承诺,和你对这篇作文初步构思时想到的一些词。先把这些词(指词的英文表达)写在纸上。有一些词的拼写,譬如学历,可能你本身就记得不是特别清楚,这时一定要在开始写作文前先把它写下来,以免一会因干扰而遗忘。

可能看到聪明这个关键词时,你最初写下的往往是clever,再仔细想想,你是不是又想到了smart,deligient好多词,挑个漂亮和合适的用吧。再比如转折,你写了but,这会再想想,是不是又有一堆表示转折的词在你脑里打转呢?挑一个吧。千万别用but.

3.句式:词写下来了,其实你构建这篇作文的建筑材料就到位了,下步就是要把它们盖成漂亮的作文。先用最普通的陈述句把它们在头脑中过一遍,然后看看都能改成什么句式。能不能把一句陈述句改成问句?能不能用上一个双重否定句?能不能用一个主语从句套定语从句的长句?能不能用一个插入语?等等。把你高中三年的英语积累展示出来。在草稿纸上同样标注。

三.正式写。

这样的草稿打完后,就要快快写了。注意,英语作文的卷面简直太重要了,一定要把字写整齐,写大。没有把握的词和句子不用。别忘了遵守你最初用铅笔划下的题目的规定。

四.检查。

注意,最最重要的一步来了。尽管很小心,可是我们写英语作文还是会犯下很多错误。单词拼写的,大小写的,等等。这些错误会极大破坏我们在阅卷老师心目中的形象,一定要坚决誓死消灭。即使时间再紧,请务必留下1——2分钟检查作文的时间,消除隐性错误。

需要说明的是,英语的开头和结尾是最关键的,尤其是开头。基本上,不跑题,遵守题目要求,一个漂亮的开头,一个还过得去的结尾,2-3个高级词汇,1-2个漂亮的句子,加上整齐的字迹,作文的分就不会低了哦。所以,精心为你的作文想个漂亮的开头吧。

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篇8:上课学生英语自我介绍

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Please allow me to introduce myself fou you. My name is xx, my 20-year-old, was born in Qinghai Province. Very honored to have this opportunity to come here to interview. Now I will briefly introduce themselves. I graduated from the Qinghai first vocational schools My specialty is computer software applications. In the past year I have the basic expertise. I like reading books, watching movies, listening to music, and so on. I think I am an honest and optimistic, can also work under great pressure. This is probably, thank you。

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篇9:初一英语自我介绍80词作文

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Hello everybody!My name is Gao Pinhui,i an 13 years old,i am a student of Grade eight ,it is really a great honor to have this opportunity for a interview. My hobby is playing the electronic organ.Because playing it will bring me a lot of fun and i can fell very happy when playing it.I hope that everyone would like me and i believe i can get on well with you.Thank you!

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篇10:做自我介绍英语翻译

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I am an ordinary girl with soft and smooth hair on her head. Liu Haijian has to pull her hair up like an innocent, gentle and lovely fairy. Round cheeks with delicate facial features with a glib mouth a high nose; a sharp chin, the sides of the head has a pair of ears". There is that I am a happy girl, either at home or at school, parents, classmates, friends and teachers are called me "happy". I feel a great deal of pride and joy for this name.

My character is variable and weird. It is a change, and no one can understand my character (including my parents). If you are not careful with angry tone to contradict me, or foul language to insult me, scold me. Im sure that even a moment ago I was joking with you, but after a moment I will be furious to refute you, then go away in the fly into a rage, not you. But after an hour, I will take the initiative to go and you may, at the time of the bowl, I will put what happened an hour ago like eraser typos as erased and forgotten. If you ask me, Ill say, "cut it!" Trifle, never mind."

Hee! Is my character unpredictable? Its not hard, as long as you know everything about me and get along with me. Its as easy to catch my character as you eat, and find me a close - up girl.

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篇11:高中自我介绍英语作文

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高中自我介绍英语作文1

i am linjiang. i was born in jilin changchun. i graduate from henan university of urban construction. i started learning english since i was 15 years old.my father is a farmer . and my mother is a housewife. i am the youngest one in my family. my brother have a lot of american friends. that’s why i have no problem communicating with americans or others by speaking english.

in my spare time, i like to do anything relating to english such as listening to english songs, watching english movies or tv programs, or even attending the activities held by some english clubs or institutes. i used to go university for a short- term english study. during that time, i learned a lot of daily life english and saw a lot of different things.

i think language is very interesting. i could express one substanceby using different sounds. so i wish i could study and read more english enlarge my knowledge.

我是。我出生英寸我毕业的高中和英语专业。我开始学习英语,因为我是12岁。我的父母有很多美国朋友。这就是为什么我没有问题,与美国或其他国家的英语沟通。

我在业余时间,我喜欢做的任何与英语的听英文歌曲,看英文电影或电视节目,甚至参加一些英超俱乐部或学院所举行的活动。我曾经去作短期英语留学。在此期间,我学到了很多日常生活的英语,看到了很多不同的事情。

我觉得语言很有意思。我可以表达一种substanceby使用不同的声音。所以,我希望我能学习更多英语文学和扩大我的知识

高中自我介绍英语作文2

my name is . there are 4 people in my family. my father is a chemistryteacher. he teaches chemistry in senior high school. my mother is an english teacher. she teaches english in the university. i have a younger brother, he is a junior high school student and is preparing for the entrance exam.

i like to read english story books in my free time. sometimes i surf the internet and download the e- books to read. reading e- books is fun. in addition, it also enlarges my vocabulary words because of the advanced technology and the vivid animations.

i hope to study both english and computer technology because i am interested in both of the subjects. maybe one day i could combine both of them and apply to my research in the future.

我的名字是。有4人在我的家人。我的父亲是一个chemistryteacher。他教高中化学。我的母亲是一名英文教师。她教英语的大学。我有一个弟弟,他是一个初中学生,是联考的准备。

我喜欢阅读,在我空闲时,英文故事书。有时我上网冲浪和下载电子书籍阅读。阅读电子书籍的乐趣。此外,还扩大了,因为我的先进技术词汇和生动的动画。

我希望学习英语和计算机技术,因为我感兴趣的是两个科目。也许有一天,我可以把他们和今后适用于我的研究。

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篇12:关于自我介绍的英语作文

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My name  . I am from . There are people in my family. My father works in a computer company. He  a computer engineer. My mother works in a international trade company. She  also a busy woman. I have a older ster and a younger brother. My ster  a junior in National Taiwan University. She majors in Englh. My brother  an elementary school student. He  8 years old.

Because of my father, I love surfing the Internet very much. I play the on-line game for about 2 hours every day. I wh I could be a computer program designer in the future. And that  why I am applying for the electronics program in your school.

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篇13:介绍自己的英语

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Hi!My name is Yang Yang,and my English teacher is Li.

I have big eyes and long hairs.I am an active,lovely and clever girl.My face but also round and I love smile very much so that my smile also is sweet very much.

Maybe you know me,I am good at Chinese and Math,and especially English.So Miss Li likes me very much.I get on well with my teachers and classmates.

I am in class 3,Grade 4.I have many good friends,such as Zhang Na,You Si Qi and Zhou Chu Han and so on.

And do you love to make friends with me?

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篇14:考博英语口语自我介绍

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Good morning, Dear Professors:

it is my pleasure to introduce myself to you. My name is  MSJ. I major in Pesticide Science and I will graduate from the Research and Development Center of Biorational Pesticide Northwest A&F University in July ,2015. Hope a chance to work and develop myself in your department.

I passed the CET band 6 test in2012, after that, I tried my best to learn Medical English and mastered a lot of professional vocabulary. I can manipulate computer proficiently and master Microsoft Office software, also be familiar with SPSS and Photoshop.

During the past three years, under the strict guidance of my tutor, professor MA.I have learned systematically the theory of profession and got the basic manipulative skills about Phytochemistry. With the help of my supervisor, I have successfully finished the subject “Agricultural Activity of Alkaloids from Cephalotaxus

sinensis ” and grasped some experimental skill , such as abstraction, separation, ….. ..

I am looking forward to working in your department. If I am admitted, I will be thankful and try my best to work for you.

That’s all, thanks!

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篇15:介绍城市环境英语城市生活515字

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Living in a city has both advantages and disadvantages. It is often easier to find work. There are always many choices of public transport. Besides, there are a lot of interesting things to do and places to see. You can eat in good restaurants, visit museums, go to cinemas and go to parks whenever you want to relax. However, living in a city is often very expensive. You must find a well-paid job, otherwise, you will not be able to afford the things you will do. Whats more, the city is always crowded, noisy and dirty. It is very difficult to find a good place where people can enjoy peace and fresh air as in the countryside.

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篇16:电话面试英语自我介绍

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Good morning,my name is XXX,Im a girl. it is a great honor to have the opportunity for this interview, I would like to answer whatever you may raise, and I hope I can make a good performance today, eventually enroll in this prestigious university in ***.

I know I am optimistic and confident. sometimes I prefer to stay alone, reading, listening to music, but I am not lonely, I like to chat with my classmates, almost talk everything ,my favorite pastime is valleyball,playing cards or surf online. through college e,i learn how to balance between study and entertainment.Thank you for the attention,thats all.

[电话面试英语自我介绍

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篇17:[英语自我介绍]

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My name is XXX dragons, Mistress (2) class of students, who lives in Funan side of Shuijingfang community.

I am very ordinary, in the whole school more than one thousand students are very inconspicuous. In grade two, my grades are 18 and 11 in the class.

But I also have different experiences with my classmates. I finished my freshman year course when I was four years old. In order to go to school earlier, I left Chengdu to study in Huanggang at the age of five. Back in Chengdu, I was less than six years old when I was in grade two. Maybe its dad who wants me to go to his study place later.

I like to shoot balls, jump rope, run, eat Kentucky Fried Chicken, Beijing roast duck, of course, my favorite is to read. My bookcase is full of Chinese and foreign famous books, and every book is covered with my stamp. Dad says there arent many people in my class who read so many books.

Friday was my lucky day. My English teacher gave me a little certificate of "learning English dolls" and an English book. I put him in a book with Chinese and mathematical rewards and pencils, and treasured them in my desk.

I never buy toys or snacks myself. Want to eat, want to play, want to see and parents say a word, buy or not buy by them to decide. I rarely play games on the computer, too.

My weakness is watching TV and playing games. Ill fix it later.

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篇18:中考英语作文高分秘诀介绍

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想要获得更加高分的英语写作,在语言表达需要增加一些"亮点"。下面是语文迷为大家提供的具体指导,大家一起来阅读吧。

一、了解高分作文的特点

要想作文获得高分,必须了解高分作文具有的特点,才有助于我们朝之而努力。高分作文一般具有以下特点:

1、书写工整,书面整洁,很少有涂改痕迹。

2、分段合理。全文分段一般不止一个自然段,让阅卷老师很容易就能找到作文所要求写的要点和重要句子。

3、要点齐全,不缺要点。

4、首尾呼应,自然成一体。

5、使用了大量的高级词汇和句型。阅卷老师一看就知道这个同学的功底非不一般,自然就给打高分了。

6、开头言简意赅,不啰嗦,不偏题,迅速引入主题。

7、段与段之间,自然过渡。有合适的连接词。

8、句与句之间,有恰当的连接词,使之自然成一体。

9、全文中同一个意思,基本没有重复使用某一个词、短语或者句型等,说明这个同学的词汇量不同寻常。老师自然就对该作文有好感了。

10、能够恰当使用谚语、格言等给文章添彩。

二、勤积累,巧准备

要想作文得高分,除了了解以上的特点外,还要在平时的学习中注意一下方面:

1、牢记课标词汇是基础

一篇作文多数是由积极词汇写出来的,这些词汇主要来源于课标。因此,牢记课标词汇是写好作文的基础。

2、掌握课标词汇和短语的用法

要想作文不扣分或者少扣分,有个要求是作文的语病少。怎么能够减少语病呢?这就要求我们在平时的学习过程中反复通过练习,掌握课标词汇和短语等的用法。例如,对于as soon as 、stop some body from doing something 、other 、another等的用法很多学生就经常出错。

3、高度重视同一个意思的多种表达方式

高分作文有个特点是:让老师发现你拥有丰富的词汇量,你的水平高人一筹。这由何而来?靠我们在平时学习过程中,逐步积累起来的。比如:今年的中考作文,谈的就是帮助他人的问题。同一个意思“帮助”,假如你就用一个动词“help”,岂不显得你词汇贫乏?假如你在作文中不断地变换方式,用help、give somebody a hand、 give a hand to somebody 、be in need of 等以表达“帮助”同一个意思,岂不更好呢?

像这样的例子很多,比如:大家都觉得很简单又很基础的“表示姓名的方式”就有:My name is Jim. I’m Jim. I’m called/named Jim. I’m a boy called /named /with the name of Jim. 等等。

表达年龄的方式有:She is 12. She is 12 years old. She is aged 12. She is a girl of 12(years old). She is a girl aged 12.等等。

很显然,使用高级一点的更好。

4、加强练习,积累经验

学习语言最好的方法是运用,作文也不例外。我们要想作文得高分,必须经常练习,才能提高水平。

5、充分利用作文范文

很多资料书上都有作文范文。诚然,他们有很多值得借鉴的地方。

我们怎么利用它们呢?首先,我们先不要看文章,自己先思考一下:假如你来写,你会怎么去写,会用到哪些词或者句子等。然后去比较,勾出其中的好词佳句,并且把它摘录在专门的作文册子上。供写作时选用。

另外,背一些范文也是很有必要的。

6、背诵一些谚语和警句

作文中如果出现恰当的谚语和警句,会有锦上添花的效果。

三、精心审题,沉着写初稿

很多同学看到作文后,下笔就写。这是不对的。一则很容易写偏题、写出病句,涂改后书面又不整洁,影响得分。

其实,会写作文的同学都知道,审题非常的重要,可以防止很多毛病,提高得分。那么我们审题要做些什么呢?

审题主要要做一下事情:

1、审人称、时态、体裁等

审题时,要求我们要弄清楚这篇文章主要使用的人称是第几人称,什么时态、什么体裁。这些问题解决后至少不会犯很严重的错误:全文皆错。例如,如果一篇文章,本来应该一般过去时,你的每句话却用了一般现在时态。你想想,那还能得高分吗?

2、明确必须表达的要点

高分作文有个特点是要点齐全。如果漏掉一个要点,则要扣分。因此我们必须认真细读其要求,把必须表达的要点勾出来。保证不漏掉任何一个要点。

3、罗列出可能会用到的短语、句型,确定好使用哪个?

4、确定好如何分段

就是要确定好,将哪些要点放在一个自然段里面,首段、尾段打算写哪些?

拓展阅读:写好作文"加分点"

合理使用动词使表达更生动

(例)In front of the building, there was a tall tree。

In front of the building stood a tall tree。巧妙使用动词短语增加表达的新颖性

(例)I like writing poems at middle school。。

I took great interest in writing poems at middle school。

改变动词增强文章的感染色彩

(例)When she heard he had died, she was very sad。

At the news of his death, she felt very sad。

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篇19:英语作文介绍一个名人篇

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When people say the word "hero", what will you think? Do you have a hero in your heart? Maybe your hero is a famous singer, a movie star or a great-man. But my hero is around me, who gives me more love than others. She is my mother, the hero in my heart. My mother isnt great in the way of a famous singer or a movie star. She does nothing big, but what she does make others inferior. From her, I learn a lot.

When I was a baby, she taught me how to walk and how to speak. When I go to school, she helps me solve many problems. She also tells me be kind to others. When I do badly in study, she encourages me and tries to cheer me up. My mother is a teacher, and she is always busy with her work. When she corrects students homework, she is always very serious. My mother is responsible to all of her students. She cares much about students study and life, and she tries her best to help students in need.

My mother is a loving mother, a qualified teacher, and a real hero in my heart.

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篇20:介绍深圳英语介绍深圳1007字

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Speaking of Shenzhen’s tourism, of course there are numerous "theme parks" famous both in China and overseas, because Shenzhen’s theme parks are not only multitudinous but also excellent, they take the lead in China’s theme parks, some people even entitle Shenzhen the "Capital of Thematic Parks" as a good fame. Whether it is the Window of the World of "You give me one day, and I will give one world" or the Splendid China Folk Culture Village of "Walking into the history by one step, and traveling all around China by one day"; whether it is the happy valley of "prosperous bustling urban happy land" or Minsk Aircraft Carrier bearing glory and dreams, all of them are not only a series of wonderful exhibitions, but also one vivid miniature after another of blend of the Chinese culture with the world civilization. A tour of Shenzhen’s thematic parks should not miss several large-scale literary performances there – the music epic Distinguished and Admirable Heroes of Bygone Years in the Window of the World, the singing and dancing pageant Dragons and Phoenixes Dancing in China in the China Folk Culture Village, and the urban melodrama Unlimited Gladness in the Happy Valley.All of the.

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