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413寒假初一英语日记
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+ 加入清单The day before yesterday, the front wheel of my bike burst the tire, a tack of the ghost, I thought I accidentally got it. Yesterday, the back wheel of my bicycle also exploded, and it was a ghost of a tack. I doubted it very much.
Today, my bike leather are pulled away from my home holding the car, took more than half an hour. What is dad said I was a teacher at the school, really mad at me!
I must buy a bag of tacks, and every man who makes my car will put their car in a tack and let them try the taste of the walking car.
That is, my mother spent a lot of money, is to repair the car frame!
Really mad at me. You say, Ive been down and down???
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篇1:假期生活初一英语MyVacation
全文共 869 字
+ 加入清单Im going to the sun for my holiday. I will go there by spaceship. I will pilot a big blue spaceship to the sun. The sun is very hot. So I put on the super shirt.
In the morning, I will have some sun burger for my breakfast. At eight oclock, I will play with my friends there. They are super dog and super girl. Super dog is white and black. Super girl is very clever. Super girl and super dog like to play with me. So I play with them for forty minutes.
Then I do my homework in my little red room at a small blue table. After my homework, I will have my lunch. I will eat sun salad. I will have red juice, red fish and red rice.I will make some red toy bear to the sun babies. All the things are red.
Then I need a lot of water on the sun because the sun is too hot. So I will walk to the spaceship. Ill pilot the spaceship to the earth.
This is a good holiday on the sun.
篇2:初一作文读西游记有感
全文共 947 字
+ 加入清单《西游记》,又名《西游释厄传》,是中国古典四大名著之一,由明代小说家吴承恩编撰而成,作文 读 《西游记》有感。想必大家都看过吧!看了以后百看不厌吧!
今天我也读了《西游记》这本书,西游记不仅有书,还被人们拍沉了电视剧,写成了小说,还制作成动画片了,受到了老人和小孩还有年轻人的喜欢。
《西游记》中的人物有很多主要讲的是:师徒四人去西天取经路上的九九八十一难的故事。师父叫:唐三藏,大徒弟叫:孙悟空,二徒弟叫:猪八戒,三徒弟叫:沙和尚。
师父唐三藏是一个小说里的唐僧是虚构的人物,与历史上的真实人物玄奘法师是有区别的。小说里的唐僧,俗姓陈,小名江流,法号玄奘。他是遗腹子,自幼在寺庙中出家、长大。由于父母凄惨、离奇的经历,他最终迁移到京城的著名寺院中落户、修行,读后感《作文 读 《西游记》有感》。唐僧勤敏好学,悟性极高,在寺庙僧人中脱颖而出。最终被唐朝皇上选定,前往西天取经。在取经的路上,唐僧先后收服了三个徒弟,孙悟空、猪八戒、沙僧。名玄奘法师,号三藏,俗姓陈。原为佛祖前的金蝉投胎。在生化寺出家。
孙悟空是一个系东胜神州傲来国花果山灵石孕育迸裂见风而成之石猴。在花果山占山为王三五百载。后历经八九载,跋山涉水,在西牛贺洲灵台方寸山拜菩提祖师为师,习得七十二变化之本领。此后,孙悟空大闹天宫,自封为齐天大圣,被如来佛祖压制于五行山下,无法行动。 五百年后唐僧西天取经,路过五行山,揭去符咒,才救下孙悟空。孙悟空感激涕零,经观世音菩萨点拨,拜唐僧为师,同往西天取经。取经路上,孙悟空降妖除怪,屡建奇功,然而两次三番被师傅唐僧误解、驱逐。终于师徒四人到达西天雷音寺,取得真经。孙悟空修得正果,加封斗战胜佛。孙悟空生性聪明、活泼,勇敢、忠诚,疾恶如仇,在中国文化中已经成为机智与勇敢的化身。在一个中国小男孩儿那里,孙悟空很容易就会成为他崇拜的偶像。
猪八戒原为天宫中的天蓬元帅,因调戏嫦娥,被罚下人间,但错投了猪胎,长成了猪脸人身的形状。在高老庄抢占民女。猪八戒的兵器是九齿钉钯。猪八戒只会三十六种变化。
沙和尚原为天宫中的卷帘大将,因在蟠桃会上打碎了琉璃盏,惹怒王母娘娘,被贬入人间,在流沙河畔当妖怪,后被唐僧师徒收服。
在这里面我佩服孙悟空,我要学习孙悟空的坚持不懈,生性聪明、活泼,勇敢、忠诚, 对而精神。
篇3:初一英语作文辅导
全文共 469 字
+ 加入清单My favourate animal is panda.i think panda is the cutist animal in the
world.It has black and white fur and especially it have black fur around eyes
which looks like wear a pair of sunglasses.
Panda likes banboo shoots and leaves a lot.I saw panda ate apply and cakes
in Zoo before,but I know in nature world they would not eat these things.
Now almost everyone in the world love panda,but only China has panda.
So as a Chinese I feel proud to be born in a country has panda.
篇4:初一英语Myday
全文共 235 字
+ 加入清单In the morning of yesterday ,I got up a little earlily.After my breakferst ,I began to stduyed until the moon . I played soccer and computer to rest.In the final of the day ,I spent 30 mins on watching TV berfore finishing my homework.
篇5:暑假游记初一作文
全文共 530 字
+ 加入清单华山给我的第一个感觉就是凉快!
华山风景独好,也极为险峻。远远看去,华山好像并没有什么险处,反而秀丽优美,特别是在听了“宝莲灯”与“华山论剑”的故事后,更觉得觉得毫无压力了。
登山之后可就不同了。我们选择了最有挑战性的路程——北峰上,西峰下。北峰往西峰正是上坡路,而且西峰极险。所以一路向上爬楼梯,总觉得摇摇晃晃,身子仿佛要向后倾倒一般。我们还特意去了长空栈道,由木板环山搭成一条只能一人通行的路,只能扶着环山铁链而行,往下看便是万丈深渊,令人毛骨悚然。我紧张得不敢闭眼,生怕走错一步会掉落悬崖。
爬山的路途漫长,特别消耗体力,虽然山上风清气爽,仍免不了大汗淋漓。后面的路上虽再没有长空栈道那么险峻,但有些地方的楼梯几乎接近垂直,也是要靠胆量才能度过,楼梯间距极窄,又凹凸不平,要十分小心才能通过。
清风徐徐,爬山旅途中,我越来越放松,也越来越大胆。一路上,欣赏了许多妙绝的景色。到达西峰索道时,看见有一位外国人正在买票,可惜售票员不懂英文。我在妈妈的鼓励下,自告奋勇去当了一回翻译,向他说明索道的最晚时间:是凌晨十二点。老外好像勉强听懂了我的话。
回顾华山的景色,疲累烟消云散,剩下的只有留恋。人生亦是如此,攀得险峰,小心翼翼,不畏艰险,方能成功!
华山之旅,不虚此行!
篇6:初一年级英语作文:Mothers love
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+ 加入清单All the people often say:"mothers love is the greatestin the world!"Yes,mothers love is very great.We mother give us very too much love.But a big number of us. dont know our mother give us too much love.Mothers are very tired .We dont know make her to rest.Mothers are thirsty.We dont know give they a cup of tea.When we beacome to father or mother.We know our parents give us much love .So,at this moment.We mut reture a good grades to our parents.
篇7:我的城市初一英语作文
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+ 加入清单I live in Hangzhou.It is a beautigul city.It’s my hometown.Every year it attracts large number of tourists come here all over the world.We have Xihu here and many places of interest.I think you will love it when you see it oneday.I want to grow up quickly.Andj I will try my best to protect our city and make a contribution to it.I think if everyone protects it ,my city will becone much more beautiful.I love my city!
我住在杭州。这是一个漂亮的城市。这是我的家乡。每年都吸引大量游客来这里世界各地。我们在这里拥有西湖和许多名胜古迹。我想你会爱它,当你看到这一天。我想快点长大。与我会尝试为保护自己的城市作出最大的贡献。我想,如果每个人都能保护它,我的城市将变得更加美丽。我爱我的城市!
篇8:新初一的英语自我介绍
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+ 加入清单hello, everyone! my name is i’m a student in a very beautiful school called liangbing middle school and i am in class 1 grade 7.my hometown liangbing is also a beautiful town. i’m very happy and i like to make friends with others. i also like singing but traveling is my favorite, i have been to many interesting places in china but i haven’t been to other countries. what a pity!
at school, i study chinese,math, english, history, politics and so on. i like all of them. i often help my teacher takecare of my class and i think i am a good helper. i live with my parents and we go home on time every day.
when i am at home, i often help my mother do some housework and my
mother said i am a good helper, too. my mother is a barber.she cuts hair very well.she is kind.many people like her. she often teaches me the way of
learning well, if you want to learn english well, here is some of my advice. at first , you must read many articles and know many words, if you meet up with some new words, you can look them up in the dictionary, you should know their meanings, how to read them and spell them. if you keep working hard, you will be successful. then, you ought to speak english as much as possible. remember an old saying, nothing is impossible in the world if you put your heart into it. that’s all, thank you.
篇9:寒假初一英语日记
全文共 770 字
+ 加入清单You know? Is tired, happy, is happy, because today I have a good spirit in class.
In the afternoon, I was very happy to answer the question, the teacher was very happy to boast of me. For a moment, when I was in math class, I was active. My teacher didnt call me. I was very angry. I would be very angry when I arrived in the afternoon. In the 3 or 4 class, I would answer the teachers questions in Chinese, math and Chinese classes. The "bell" class, we rushed out of the classroom, "bell" class, math class, the last section about the problem, I did not finish, I am afraid, the teacher said to take the book, 3 and 12 teacher said that a problem, I raised my hand and said the problem, the teacher praised me. I came home and I told my mother that my mother was happy.
篇10:初一英语作文:凡事量力而行
全文共 691 字
+ 加入清单The proverb "Haste makes waste" means that one may delay the time to complete one thing if he rushes to do it, because he may neglect something important in the process and has to do it again from the beginning. So one should do every step well.
Take remembering English words for example, every student wants to enlarge his vocabulary. But this aim cannot be achieved in one or two days. You should stick to remem bering some words a day and revise the words every few days. In this way you can keep the words in your mind firmly. There is mo shortcut. If you want to stuff all the words into your brain and mot to revise them, you will remember nothing. So dont be hasty. Haste makes waste.
篇11:初一英语周记
全文共 463 字
+ 加入清单It was the eighth day of our summer holiday.I felt good.I felt I am free.My parents went to camping.So I live alone but I don’t feel lonely.I stayed at home and watched TV.I wrote an English daily composition.It was my homework.Today,I have slept for 14 hours.I thought I was very tired.It was time for dinner.I must go!I am very hungry.
这是我们放暑假的第八天,我感觉棒极了,我感到十分自由.因为我的爸爸妈妈出去旅游了,所以我独自一人在家,但我并不孤独,我呆在家里看电视.我写了一篇英语日记,那是我的作业.今天我睡了十四个小时,我认为我是太累了.该是吃晚餐的时间了,我去吃了!我感觉太饿了.
篇12:初一的峨眉山游记作文600字
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+ 加入清单峨眉山美景久闻,迫不及待想亲身体验。于是我整天纠缠不休,大吵大闹,让父亲带我去峨眉山看看。偏偏有一个星期天我爸妈有空,爬山的机会终于来了,于是一家人就做好了去的准备,兴致勃勃的跑到了峨眉山。
我被沿途美丽的风景迷住了。据资料显示,峨眉山是一座领土突起的断层山。东边的山低如锦屏,中间的峰如竹笋,西边的山雄伟壮观,被誉为“峨眉天下第一”。主峰是金顶,海拔3099米。登上金顶,可以领略“云海”、“日出”、“佛光”、“圣灯”四大奇观。从山脚到山顶有三个不同的气候带,雨量充沛,植物3000多种。因此,峨眉山被称为“植物王国”。它是中国四大佛教名山之一,有许多名胜古迹,如国保寺、胡夫寺、万年寺、印青亭和西乡池风景区。这真是世界奇迹。
我说我忘了自己。我环顾四周,来到了董磊坪。下车准备吃饭。哦,我的上帝!怎么这么冷!还在下毛毛雨。就像一接触水就拿着冰一样。走吧!很快就要到达金顶了,天气晴朗。环顾四周,山峦绵长,云雾缭绕,处处生机勃勃,水绕山环,真是一派迷人的景象。再往深处走,此时的云淡如轻纱,使得群山显得格外清晰,所有的景观尽收眼底。为了保持这张美丽的照片,我很快拍了一些照片。走着走着,我看到了两把明亮的大同心锁,锁下有一颗红色的心。为了联系我们全家,我们在心锁拍了全家福。再往上走,突然,映入我眼帘的是点着香和蜡烛的大厅。多壮观啊!烧香拜佛后,我们高高兴兴地走在回家的路上。
可惜没有看到日出,没有看到佛光,没有看到活泼可爱的小猴子。
篇13:有关交通英语初一
全文共 841 字
+ 加入清单There is no doubt that traffic congestion becomes a growing worry for the
residents of most urban areas. Some major roads are regularly choked with
traffic in rush hours. The limited transport capacity contributes largely to the
vexing problem. How to solve the headache?
The existing solutions to traffic jam mainly aim at creating metro bus
systems and broadening major roads. Widening the existing roads can solve
traffic snarls on some level. Soaring car ownership compounds the chronic
annoying problem, so we must sharply reduce the heavy reliance on cars and drive
a shift to the mass transportation. It is a cheap and good way. We can create a
system of customized bus routes and highlight the development of subways,
trolleys and light rail. The effective combination of these solutions will
enable the urban areas to possess a smooth traffic.
篇14:我们的学校初一英语作文
全文共 555 字
+ 加入清单Our school is very beautiful. there are many trees and flowers here,so the air here is very clean. I can hear birds singing.It's so wonderful.On the playground,you can see the students play basketball.Sometimes our teacher play with us.We feel very happy.In each class,there are many pictures in the wall.the teachers work very hard.they love us as if we were their children.When we meet some problems,our teachers often help us.In our school,the teachers and students are like firends.I love our school.I wish our school will get more and more beautiful!
篇15:初一英语作文教学
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+ 加入清单初一英语作文如何教好呢,老师们有何看法?下面一起去看看小编整理的初一英语作文教学方法吧!
写作是书面表达和传递信息的重要途径,培养学生初步的写作的能力,是初中英语教学的目的之一。但是长期以来,中学英语写作教学一直徘徊于不理想的状态,尤其是在农村中学来讲更是不堪入目。平素测验中,不少学生只能写出寥寥数语,而且文章中拼写错误和其他语病随处可见,学生英语作文的质量不尽如人意。即使在有些学校所谓的实验班级效果也不是怎么理想。尽管在平素的教学评价环节中,我们花费大量的时间用于批改学生的作文,但是学生一次又一次的反馈给我们的并不是我们预期所料的,甚至是差之千里。如何解决这一难题,成为现阶段我们英语教学工作者面前的“拦路虎”。本文就这一问题作一些粗浅分析,力求找出了中学英语写作教学的瓶颈所在,结合教学实践,探索性的作一些关于中学英语写作教学的交流——“读、改、写”的实践。
七年的初中英语教学下来,留给我无穷的思考与困惑:不管在什么样的测试中,只要谈到英语写作,很多学生都感到头痛?即使有部分学生能动笔写写,其中的语法错误也是随处可见,写作要点不明确,语句不通顺,语言、词汇档次低,语言不地道或是汉语式的英语写作,让人看后很是费解。即使给材料作文学生也感到无从下手,在他们看来:翻译又是个问题,或是上面所说的汉语式的直接翻译出来。导致这些问题的缘由何在?是平时的教学没有到位,存在写作教学走过场?重视不够?还是学生根本就不是学英语的那块料?困惑,苦思、冥想!多方寻缘由。究其原因,我认为英语写作教学效果不理想主要问题出在平素的教学环节上。长期以来,我们很多英语教学者都重复着同一种模式:教师布置写作内容——学生完成作文——教师批阅作文——作文发还给学生。缺乏对学生的有效地针对性的指导,像那种简单而粗暴的评价方式,从根本上起不到什么作用。久而久之,还会使学生厌恶英语作文写作,甚至产生“写作恐惧症”,进而影响整个英语学习及考试效果!现我就英语写作教学的几点感悟与大家一起共勉。
一、读中不忘写,在阅读中适时穿插写作教学。
“读中教”指的是写作与阅读联系挂钩。因为单靠指导学生掌握写作要领进行写作,在实际的教学工作中是完全不够的,而当我们教学一篇篇阅读理解文章,才正是学生们学习写作的好时机,阅读理解也是我们教学写作的最有效武器,毕竟好文章是写作最好的老师和范例,更是我们教写作的法宝。因此,在每次学习和欣赏一篇阅读理解文章的时候,尤其是文中含有经典语句时,我都给学生设定四个目标:第一,理解作者写作的用意,即作者在文章中阐明了什么观点和段落的安排及其如何阐述的。第二,弄清作者运用了什么样的写作方法。比如是说明、记叙还是论证,包括文章运用的时态、语态以及其他种种语法手段。第三,学习作者的一些用词来扩大词汇量,积累词汇,同时让学生学习短语的搭配并收集词汇和短语。第四,收集作者在文章中写出的佳句、妙句、绝句。为今后的写作奠定基础。几年的教学实践证明了这样的教学有其独具的特色与效果
因此,我认为:写作教学完全应该,而且必须与阅读理解相结合才能真正让学生领悟和掌握写作方法与写作技巧的要领,没有阅读哪里来的模仿和借鉴?所以“读中教”是我的第一步,之后,在感性的基础上,我再给学生讲解具体的写作方法,这一点是我接下来要做的第二步“写中教”。
二、写作中不失恰如其分的指导,适时地开展“写中教”。
所谓“写中教”,就是在学生学作时给予写作方法的指导,通常我从三个方面入手:首先,概括初级写作的文体特点。书面表达在文体上以记叙文、应用文(书信、日记、通知、说明书等)的形式为多见。然后,概括其形式特点。近年来,初级写作题型在形式上以看图说话和根据中英文提出写作两种类型出现频率最高,要求能根据图画所提供的情景和英汉提出的词语,建立联想,创造性地运用所学过的词汇和语法知识来进行表达,比如根据一副或多幅图画及提示语,写出语法正确的六至八句话,或者一篇字数在60-100字的短文,充分地运用自己所学的知识,完整、准确地表达所需求的意思,考查的重点是在领会图意和提示语的前提下能简单创造语言的能力。最后是概括题材特点。在题材上,初级英文写作的表达题所给的大部分内容是比较贴近孩子们生活的人物和事件,诸如饮食、运动、爱好、环境、交友、旅行、娱乐等等,考查的是生活知识和语言知识学与用综合能力。
根据以上文体、形式、题材特点,我要求学生在看图写话时,掌握好以下一个要领:
1、看图说话书面表达题要领
首先,认真审题,弄清画意,把握中心。一般来说,写作题所提供的几幅图画虽然是整个故事情节中的一个或数个重要的情景片段,但每幅图的主体内容一定是清清楚楚、脉络分明的,这一点务必要准确把握,只有具体、透彻的理解画意,方能抓住抓准表达的重点。紧扣暗示内容,分析表达重点,看图题若也有语言提示,那么首先要细审提示材料。若是英文提示语,那就更加重要了,因为提示词语不但能有助于理解画意,而且告知如何围绕这些重点词语组织材料,然后表达出图画内容。但应注意,无论哪种形式的看图写话均不会给出所有的词语,因此,必须紧扣画面暗示的内容,再结合提示语的补充,酌情填补一些关键词语。
其次,运用正确的表达方式和准确的写作方法。用正确的表达方式准确地写出图画所表现的内容,形成一句或一段切合画意又无语法错误的句子是关键。具体应注意以下几点:
(1)确定基本时态。动词是做谓语还是做非谓语?是否需要用第三人称单数?这些必须考虑清楚再动笔。要抓住提示语中提供的或自己设置的时间状语,或抓住第一画图反映出来的故事背景。
(2)注意词语的变化。如该用形容词还是副词?名词是否可数?前面是否需用冠词?词尾是否丢失s或者其他变化形式?特指的定冠词the是否要用或不用?这些在平时演练时,都需要“斤斤计较”,养成习惯。
(3)句型的选择。尽量用自己所学过的句型表达,能用简单句尽量用简单句。
(4)书写规范、准确。
(5)反复检查。要逐字逐句检查词语搭配和句子的结构,是主系表还是主谓宾,注意时态是否完整等等。
2、写中英文提示作文的提纲要领
在做没有图画只有中英文提示语的书面表达题时,对学生要求更高,写作的难度也更大了。这种题型对八年级(下)和九年级学生较多用。我指导学生运用以下六条要领:
(1)、审清题意。反复仔细阅读、推敲提示,分析出文章的重点,弄清文章的格式,确定写什么内容,以免离题;
(2)、概括简要的中文提示中的部分要点,此时切记不可逐句翻译,题前所给的英文提示词语最好全部用上,采用扩写的方式,根据所给材料进行适当的恰如其分的扩写,可以由词到句,再有句到段,最后到篇的“点及面”的写法。
(3)、将提示中的有关信息融入自己的语句中,尽力做到语言规范、准确,文字通顺。
(4)、在抓住重点,不偏离主题的前提下,合理想象,拓展思路;
(5)、用好介词和连词,使文章简练、纹理通顺,尽量使用自己有把握的句式来表达,避免使用不熟练的词、短语和句型;
(6)、最后,正确把握文中的时态和语态,仔细揣摩、合理灵活变化时态和语态。
三、在写作评价中适时地给与指导,积极开展“改中教”。
我的最后一步是走“错误路线”,即在批改学生习作中利用学生的“错误资源”进行写作教学。在批改学生的习作时,我把其中的错字、别字以及大量的令人啼笑皆非的病句收集起来,这些东西常常是学生们的通病,虽说使我苦恼,但经验告诉我,其实这也是一种资源,颇有利用价值,而且用好了还是一剂治病句的“良药”呢!与此同时,我们也要善于发现学生的优点,适时不忘鼓励教学的开展,从而激发学生的写作兴趣。对于写得有水平、有档次的习作可以范读,从而进一步的调动学生的写作热情。
对于大多数学生容易犯的错误,我把一些比较典型的病句展示在黑板上,然后让学生互相订正。许多时候学生在“欣赏”他们自己的劣作时都忍不住哄堂大笑,但笑过之后,错误也在轻松愉快的气氛中改正了,这样既活跃了写作课堂的气氛,又达到了让学生纠正错误的效果。除此之外,我让每个学生准备一个纠错本,将他们平时在练习、造句和作文中出现的病句摘录在册并认真纠正,以避免重复出错,使文章中的病句逐渐减少。
以下是我在学生习作中遇到的典型案例,原文如下:
Nowadaays,the environment gets more and more bad.because of the pollution.Although the government take any measures to carry it , it isnt working well in it.
There is only one earth.I think we should do something useful we can to protect the environment.sach as we can use both sides of each piece of paper and use cotton handkerchiefs,not the paper ones to protect soil .if we go to a short distance.we can walk or by bike.we can also plant more trees and grass to protect air.
If we all do that,we will have healthy and happy.
从整体看,本文错误较多,汉语思维较严重.但总的来讲这篇作文的思路还是比较清晰的,
于是我和学生一道对该文进行了分析:
1、本文首先缺一个主题,从正文中我们不难看出本文是要求写作如何保护环境问题,作者应根据题目要求拟定题目,再进行写作!譬如:我们可以拟定为:HOW TO SAVE OUR MOTHER等。
2、该文的第一句就出现拉严重的语法错误,The environment gets more and more bad.变得越来越糟糕,应该是“worse and worse".在提出问题时,最好创设一定的语言情景,逐步导入,俗话说得好“好的开始就是成功了一半”。以本文为例,我们完全可以以这样导入:With the development of economy ,more and more factories have built .But there is more and more pollution coming.
3、该文的第二句中的take any measures to carry it 。意思没有表达清楚,让人看了费解,其实作者可能是想说政府采取一些措施去阻止污染。而采取一些措施去制止污染应为:take some measures to keep pollution.然而效果不好应为:it doesnt work well.
4、在第二自然段中有单词拼写错误及名词单复数误用的现象,比如“sach as ”应为"such as".
5、表意不清。"not the paper ones to protect soil"和we can also plant more trees and grass to protect air.都存在表意不清的现象。其应该表达为:第一句最好这样表达:not to use paper or use less paper to protect trees and because the trees can keep the earth from washing.第二句改写为we can also plant more trees and grass to keep the air clean and fresh.
5、标点符号用得不够恰当,如If we go to a short distance.we can walk or by bike.在这里我们最好这样用要好一些:If we go to a short distance,we can walk or by bike.
6、在最后一段发起倡议时,最好使用感叹句型或祈使句型这样会显得更有力!文章会显得更深入.如;my dear friends, lets get together to protect "The Blue Sky"!等。
除了上述“九字法”英文写作教学模式,我们还应重视做足“平时功夫”以促进学生写作。所谓平时功夫,是指背诵名篇佳作;收集各种话题,布置学生在假期或周末练笔,提倡“一周一文";传阅、张贴、展览学生优秀习作以资鼓励等。鼓励学生善于从平素的练习中总结经验、吸取教训,只要持之以恒,我们完全可以让越来越多的学生逐渐学会用第二语言来表达自己的思想,而且可以像用母语一样轻松自如。
结束语
路漫漫其修远兮。英语写作教学的探究征程远而富于变化,需要各位同仁在实际工作中不断探索。在英语写作教学中如何教学及讲评需要继续探索。但有一点鄙人是这样认为的:宽松、愉悦、不断获得鼓励的环境中,学生的思维才会变得活跃。所以教师要及时抓住学生稍纵即逝的新奇、独特的想法,给予赞扬,使学生的创造性思维得以发展。多给学生创造性思维活动的机会,鼓励学生勇于尝试,并在失败面前不气馁。在平素的写作教学实践中,教师应最大限度地创设和实施多种鼓励机制,充分调动全体学生动笔写作的积极性,这样才能促进学生的写作能力更快更好地实现,从而从整体上提高学生的英语语言应用能力。
篇16:关于格列佛游记英语读后感
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+ 加入清单During winter vacation I read "gullivers travels", the book read the interesting and thrilling story, as if really put me into the world of what gullivers travels.
The protagonist of the book gulliver is a people who love to travel, he is eager to travel around the world, almost every corner of the world. Perhaps his fearless spirit, let us also revealed to the peculiar four countries.
Make me the deepest impression is "Lilliput and brobdingnag". The made of pu, although residents are generally the size of the palm of your hand, but they are very diligent and intelligent. Gulliver made a number of force for the country, and finally by the court in impeachment, was forced to leave the country. From a certain Angle it reflected the at that time the British government is dim, and so on. In brobdingnag, gulliver and look up human small dwarf point of view, to satirize some human of some bad habits.
In the hui HSS Ma Guozhong, gulliver met with kindness, honesty and friendship virtue hui HSS horse. In the language of hui HSS countries did not "lie" and "deceit" this word, they dont know what is "suspect", what is a "no confidence", in their country everything is true, transparent, is a place where peoples pursuit and yearning. Here, you dont need to consider others speak of true and false, because they dont know what is lying. I want to go to the better place! I hope we can in our social efforts of generations, be like hui from country society!
The novel really paint a picture of gulliver travel, at the same time, let me see the bright side of society and the dark side.
寒假期间我读了《格列佛游记》这本书,仔细阅读着其中有趣、惊险的故事,仿佛真的把我带入格列佛所游历的世界。
书中的主人公格列佛是个爱好出游的人,他渴望着周游世界,走遍世界的每个角落。也许正是他那无畏的探索精神,才让我们也领略到了这奇特的四个国家吧。
令我印象最深的是“小人国和大人国”了。利立浦特的居民们虽然都是一般人手掌那么大的人,但他们却十分的勤奋和聪明。格列佛为这个国家出了不少力,最后却遭到了朝廷中人的弹劾,被迫离开这个国家。这从某个角度体现了当时英国政府的昏暗等等。在大人国,格列佛又从小矮人的角度仰视人类,讽刺了某些人类的一些不好的习性。
在慧嘶马国中,格列佛结识了具有仁慈、诚实和友谊美德的慧嘶马。在慧嘶国的语言中没有“撒谎”和“欺骗”这样的字眼,他们不懂什么叫“怀疑”、什么是“不信任”,在他们的国度里一切都是真实的、透明的,是人们所追求和向往的地方。在这里,你不需要考虑别人说话的真假,因为他们不知道说谎是什么。我也好向往去那种地方呀!我希望我们的社会能在我们一代代的努力下,成为像慧因国那样的社会!
这部小说真实地描绘出了一幅格列佛出游的图画,同时让我看到了社会上美好的一面与黑暗的一面。
篇17:初一英语作文:MYFAMILY
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+ 加入清单Look,this is my family .Its a small family .There are three people in my family,they are my father my mother and I.
My father is a engineer,he likes playing football and reading news paper.
My mother is a college teacher.She likes playing computer games and watching TV.She likes eating apples and pears.
Im a student in
a middle school.I am 13.I like playing tabletennis and reading books.I like eating ice-cream.My favourite colour is pink.
I have a dog. Its name is Mary.It is very lovely.I like it.
I have a very happy family.
篇18:初一作文:金山岭长城游记
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+ 加入清单如果从太空中俯瞰地球,只有两样建筑清晰可辨—中国长城和埃及金字塔。可见,长城是多么的气势恢宏,雄伟壮观!
长城东起山海关,西至嘉峪关。它翻越巍巍群山,穿过茫茫草原,绵延六千七百多公里,是世界八大奇迹之一。如果用长城的条石铺成6米多宽的大道,足以环绕地球三四周有余。它就像一条巨龙盘在有着五千多年历史的华夏大地。在这万里长城中,当属金山岭长城最为壮观,被誉为“万里长城,金山独秀!”
登上承德的金山岭长城,向四周望去,只见周围大大小小的景物尽收眼底,仿佛在我眼前展开了一副雄浑朴实的山水大画:碧蓝的天空一望无垠,翠绿的树木枝繁叶茂,壮观的山峦连绵起伏……再看那长城,它蜿蜒在崇山峻岭之间,立在高山峰顶之上。放眼望去,一眼看不到尽头。在长城上,每隔一段路就有一座烽火台。古时候,只要敌军入侵,烽火台就会燃起狼烟,拉响战斗警报。城墙上还有着一个隔一个的垛口,枪炮眼,用来架设强弓硬弩,守卫城池。墙砖也非常厚实,约有半米厚。这真是一片易守难攻的险地啊!不知道在冷兵器为主的古代,是怎样攻城的呀?不禁感叹道!
金山岭长城还有着用来攻击,打探消息的敌楼;管出入贸易的关隘;用来跑马的马道;阻拦马匹的拦马墙……形式多样,设施齐全,真是古代人民智慧的结晶啊!
如果你去过长城的敌楼,那你一定会发现:敌楼的楼梯非常窄,只可勉强通过一人。其实这样做也是有道理的:用来防止敌人迅速占领整个长城。就算敌人攻破长城,要攻敌楼也没那么好攻。楼道很窄,可令敌人的弓箭手,炮兵,骑兵,铠甲兵全部丧失优势,只能派一个步兵进去单独作战,使其丧失团队优势。而守城士兵又可在宽敞的楼道上放箭,楼道下搏斗,还可架设路障。真是“一夫当关,万夫莫开”的架势啊!如此人工修建出的险峻要塞,反映出古代人民保家卫国的决心。
看着这气势磅礴的万里长城和这一望无际的青山,一股豪迈之情油然而生,我不禁想到了毛泽东的一首词:“天高云淡,望断南飞雁!不到长城非好汉,屈指行程两万……”
建造长城在科技落后的古代是多么艰难啊!长城的每一段路,每一座楼都是用我们祖先的血和汗建成的呀!
长城真是我们祖先智慧与血汗的结晶啊!
篇19:乡村游记英语作文
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+ 加入清单导语:乡村是一个静寂的地方,乡村是一个与世无争的地方,乡村是一个淳朴的地方。下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的英语日记,欢迎阅读与借鉴,谢谢!
I went to the countryside to spend my summer holidays this year. I liked green plants, clear rivers lovely amimals there.I breathed the fresh air on the mountain sometimes I went swimming in the river. I kept a diary every day.
I liked not the scene of the countryside, 8ttt8.comalso the people there. I helped them to do farm work. I also helped the children in the neighbourhood with their lessons. The children were interested in English. They were good at reading writing, 8ttt8.comdid not do well in listening speaking. I helped them improve their listening speaking. Their parents thought highly of me. I realized that knowledge is greatly needed in the countryside.
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今年我去农村过暑假。我喜欢那儿绿油油的植物,清澈的小河和可爱的动物。我在山上呼吸新鲜的空气,有时在河里游泳。我每天记日记。
我不仅喜欢那里的景色,而且喜欢那里的人。我帮他们干农活,帮助邻家的孩子复习功课。孩子们对英语很感兴趣,他们在读、写方面很好,但听、说不好。我帮助他们提高听、说能力,他们的父母高度赞扬了我。我意识到农村确实需要知识。
篇20:初一英语作文写一封信
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+ 加入清单Nowadays, most people, especially those who live in the country, want to
move to the city. But is the city life perfect? Every coin has two sides.
现在很多人,特别是那些生活在农村的人,都想去都市生活。但是,都市生活真的很好吗?每面硬币都有两面,每件事都有利有弊。
Its true that things seem to be more convenient in some ways such as
finding jobs, transportation service, etc. Also places for relaxing like parks
and hotels are attractive.
事实上,有些事似乎(因为在城市生活而)变得更方便,比如找工作、交通运输服务等等。有些供人放松的地方也非常吸引人,比如公园和旅馆。
But we have to say something bad, too. The environment is awful because the
population is too large and too much rubbish make the air unfresh.We have to pay
lots of money on our life including the bad things above!
但是,我们也必须说些弊端。因为众多的人口和大量的垃圾污染了空气,所以(城市)环境是很可怕的。我们必须花费非常多的钱在(改善)生活方面,其中便包括之前提到的那些不好的事。
In my opinion, we must take a correct attitude to it. No matter where we
are, we can creat our own sky if we try our best!
在我看来,我们必须采取正确的态度去面对都市生活。无论我们在哪儿,我们都可以尽自己所能,创造出一片属于自己的天空!