英语作文游记初一【推荐20篇】

My cousin is only five years old. She comes to my house every weekend. We like her very much. Though she is very young she has ideas of her own. She says she wants to invite a fairy to help my mother to clean the kitchen. She prefers to be a super model. So she keeps on learning English and practising walking every day. Last week her mother told her to sleep in my bed. Half an hour later, she didnt fall asleep. Her mother was very angry. Then I went into the room, and asked whether she had slept. She closed her eyes tightly and said "Yes".

Shes such a naughty and clever girl.

[初一英语作文推荐： My Cousin

When it comes to the 5th day of the fifth month of the Chinese lunar calendar, you will think of Dragon Boat Festival and zongzi. Do you know the origin of Dragon Boat Festival? Let me tell you something about it.

Qu Yuan, a doctor in the state of Chu, had always loved the country, but his patriotic heart was unfairly treated by Zi Lan and Jin Shang. In the early May ad 278, five, Qu Yuan was patriotic and angry, holding a big stone, jumping into the Miluo River and suicidal. The people of the state of Chu were all sorrowful. They all rowed a boat to save Qu Yuan. But a vast ocean, where there was Qu Yuans shadow, the gang had been in the Miluo river for half a day, and had no choice but to find Qu Yuan corpse. The bamboo tube in Steamed Rice cast the hope that the fish in the water is not the original body of gnawing humiliation. After that, every year on the 5th day of the fifth month of the Chinese lunar calendar, the local people rowed the rice into the river in the bamboo tube, and later, the rice in the bamboo tube was changed to zongzi.

On the annual Dragon Boat Festival, people pack zongzi, buy zongzi and eat zongzi. The shape of zongzi is very special, neither square nor round. The zongzi is wrapped with green rice dumplings wrapped in glutinous rice and jujube. The color and appearance of the dumplings are very good. The taste of the dumplings is unique. It is a unique taste of the zongzi. It is both a delicacy of summer and an appetizing food, and a good nourishing nourishing product.

Whenever I eat zongzi, I think of Qu Yuans patriotism.

This holiday is my best busy holiday for I am learning English, computer and word and I fall in the weekend exam. Many times I want to take today off, but my mother said to me:“go on, you must belive that you can do it.” So I have to try. Now my English is better than 2months ago. I must thanks my mother, she is good for me. Practices makes perfect.

We all know, summer holiday is a long time. Well how should we speng it? I have a good plan to spend my summer holiday.First, Im going to visit my grandparents.

First, Im going to visit my grandpa--ents for three weeks.

Then,Im doing my homework, sounds boring. "When you finish my home work, we are going to aquarium"my mother says. When I finish my homework,we are going to aquarium, and going to take many photos. I am so happy.Two weeks later Im going to school.

This is my plan to speng my sommer holiday. How about you?

All the people often say:"mothers love is the greatestin the world!"Yes,mothers love is very great.We mother give us very too much love.But a big number of us. dont know our mother give us too much love.Mothers are very tired .We dont know make her to rest.Mothers are thirsty.We dont know give they a cup of tea.When we beacome to father or mother.We know our parents give us much love .So,at this moment.We mut reture a good grades to our parents.

im a tall and lively boy. i like playing basketball very much because its

interesting. i like nba, too. there are many famous stars in it. such as alan,

iveson, tim, donken, jordan, kobe, oneal and so on. yao ming is in the nba,

too. hes chinese. he plays basketball well. hes a center forward. hes our

pride. all the ball stars can jump, shoot and pour in the basket. so each game

of the nba is wonderful. sometimes the players can perform miracles, i

think.

this years champion is spur team. it’s one of the strongest

contenders.

i like nba. i love basketball.

Blowing balloons is an interesting game. You may have some ideas of it. It is of great value to your health, especially to those who are fat. People usually make an airless balloon halfairfilled, put it on the hand, then blow it hard. Shortly after it flies up, his partner blows it away towards the opposite party. And the opposite blows it back.

Repeat doing so until the balloon drops onto the follr. Any party onto whose floor the balloon drops will be the loser. So any party who tries to control the balloon’s direction and blows it with great efforts will make the balloon fly straight to the other party and will have more opportunities to win.

[初一英语作文 Blowing Balloons

假设你叫李红，请你给Lucy写一封信，向她介绍你的家庭情况和学校情况，60词以上。

X. One possible version：

May 23th， 2005

Dear Mr Qiu，

Thank you so much for teaching me so well. You are very kind to me. During the last three years I have learnt a lot of knowledge from you. I’ll never forget you. I’ll keep on studying hard as usual in the senior middle school.

Wish you success in the future teaching work. Wish you a healthy body for ever. And wish you a happy life in the future. And I also hope that everything will go well in our school！ Best wishes for you and for our school！

Your student，

Li Hong

[初一英语上册作文写给Lucy的一封信

Many years ago, I saw the movie Harry Porter and I was so impressed by it. The magical world was so wonderful that I wanted to live there. My thoughts were so active that I always dreamed about myself walking in the magical world and taking the risk. So I decided to write down the things I dreamed about and then made these become a book. This is my little dream, when the book is finished, I want to read them to my friends and my brother. Now I have written down a few pages, I continue to write every day. I get great motivation to finish my little dream. I imagine how happy I will be when I finish the book, so I keep writing it when I have the thoughts. I am so proud of myself for I never giving up to finish my dream.

华山给我的第一个感觉就是凉快！

华山风景独好，也极为险峻。远远看去，华山好像并没有什么险处，反而秀丽优美，特别是在听了“宝莲灯”与“华山论剑”的故事后，更觉得觉得毫无压力了。

登山之后可就不同了。我们选择了最有挑战性的路程——北峰上，西峰下。北峰往西峰正是上坡路，而且西峰极险。所以一路向上爬楼梯，总觉得摇摇晃晃，身子仿佛要向后倾倒一般。我们还特意去了长空栈道，由木板环山搭成一条只能一人通行的路，只能扶着环山铁链而行，往下看便是万丈深渊，令人毛骨悚然。我紧张得不敢闭眼，生怕走错一步会掉落悬崖。

爬山的路途漫长，特别消耗体力，虽然山上风清气爽，仍免不了大汗淋漓。后面的路上虽再没有长空栈道那么险峻，但有些地方的楼梯几乎接近垂直，也是要靠胆量才能度过，楼梯间距极窄，又凹凸不平，要十分小心才能通过。

清风徐徐，爬山旅途中，我越来越放松，也越来越大胆。一路上，欣赏了许多妙绝的景色。到达西峰索道时，看见有一位外国人正在买票，可惜售票员不懂英文。我在妈妈的鼓励下，自告奋勇去当了一回翻译，向他说明索道的最晚时间：是凌晨十二点。老外好像勉强听懂了我的话。

回顾华山的景色，疲累烟消云散，剩下的只有留恋。人生亦是如此，攀得险峰，小心翼翼，不畏艰险，方能成功！

华山之旅，不虚此行！

Its important for us to be healthy all our life. We cant study or work well without healthy body.

Therere many ways to keep healthy. First of all, we should keep taking exercises every day. We can walk to school instead of taking a bus. After school, we can spend an hour playing ball games. If we live in a high-rise, we can walk upstairs or downstairs. Second, we should have a balanced diet. Finally, we must remember: "Early to bed, early to rise is the way to keep healthy, wealthy and wise."

My favorite holiday is New Year. It is a very important festival in Chinese

culture. In fact, its the highlight of the year. Everyone returns home for a

family reunion.We have a big feast and chat about all the things that have

happened in our lives. People also visit each other. We exchange gifts and good

wishes for the next year.

我最喜欢的节日是新年。在中国文化中，新年是一个非常重要的节日。事实上，它是一年中最好的(日子)。每个人都回家与家人团聚。我们有一个比较大的盛会并且(与他人)畅聊所有发生在我们生活中的事。人们总是互相拜访。我们交换礼物和来年的祝福。

New Year is especially fun for kids. Thats because we get presents and

treats, including red envelopes filled with money. We also get to set off

fireworks. But we never forget that this holiday is a time to give thanks. We

feel grateful for our family and the things that we have. Finally, we think

about the future and the great year ahead.

对孩子来说，新年是一个特别快乐(的日子)。因为我们可以得到礼物和乐趣，这其中就包括红包。我们也可以放烟火。但我们从未忘记新年是一个给予(他人)感恩的日子。我们对家人以及拥有的事物感恩。最后，我们考虑未来和美好的新一年。

Computers are changing our life. You can do a lot of things with a

computer. Such as, you can use a computer to write articles, watch video CDs,

play games and do office work. But the most important use of a computer is to

join the Internet. By joining a computer to Internet, we can get the latest

information in all fields. We don’t need to leave home to borrow books from a

library or to do shopping in a supermarket.

Computers help us live a more convenient life. With the development of

computers, the word is becoming a large family.

现在越来越多的外国人开始学习中文，了解中国的文化。作为中国的传统节日过年，更应该向大家介绍介绍。接下来小编为你带来过年话题初一英语作文，希望对你有帮助。

The Spring Festival is very important to Chinese people. In the past，people could not often have meat，rice or other delicious food. They could only eat these during the Spring festival. So every year they hoped that the Spring Festival would come soon. Now， although people‘s life is much better，and we can eat the delicious foods everyday. People still like the festival. Because most people can have a long holiday，and we are free to go on a trip or visit our friends or have parties with our family. In the evenings，we can have a big meal in the restaurant or stay at home with family and watch the TV programs.

过年对中国人来说非常重要。在过去，人们往往没有肉，大米或其他美味的食物吃。他们通常只能在过年吃到这些。所以每年他们都希望过年可以快点来。现在，虽然人们的生活好多了，我和家人每天都可以吃美味的食物。人们仍然喜欢的过年。因为大多数人可以有一个很长的假期，我和家人可以自由地去旅行或拜访我和家人的朋友或与我和家人的家人聚会。晚上，我和家人可以在餐厅大吃一顿，或与家人留在家里看电视节目。

I like the Spring Festival very much. How wonderful the Spring Festival is！

我非常喜欢过年。过年是多么的美妙啊！

I have got two baby cats. They are very beautiful. One is yellow. The other is white. They are very lovely. The yellow cat is very naughty. He likes to play with people. He often runs here and there. His favourite game is playing with balls, ropes and stones. But the white cat is very gentle. She likes to wash her face. And she doesn′t like to play with people. She often jumps onto my knees. I like to give her a bath.

Oh, my baby cats bring me much happiness. We are very good friends. I love them.

Today is my busy day.Let me tell you the plan of me .

In the morningI must get up very early to makes breakfast for my family .They have breakfast at about 7:00.Then will I play badminton outside with my good friend at 8:00.

In the noonI should back home and make lunch for them .After having lunch I will wash the dish.Then I will take part in a gathering of friends after 2:00.At 7:00pmI should make supper.

At nightI should clean the room and do some homework.

今天是我忙碌的一天。让我告诉你我的计划。

早上我必须很早就起床做早餐为我的家人。他们大约在7点吃早餐。然后将八点我和我的好朋友在外面打羽毛球。

在中午我回家应该为他们的午餐。午饭后我将洗菜。然后我将参加一个朋友的聚会在两点之后。我晚上7:00应该做晚饭。

在晚上我要打扫房间和做一些作业。

[初一英语作文：my busy day

截然不同的男孩！

本集出场人物：（从地球来的孩子）欣帝羽箬，爱翼天玄

“羽箬，来，给大家打个招呼吧！”CQ把羽箬拉到人群中。大家都惊讶地长大了嘴巴，长得好帅啊！不是哗众取宠的帅，而是不随流俗的帅！就像春天的第一缕阳光一样亲切，透露着卡哇伊的神色。

“真是帅的可爱！”萧萧一鸣惊人，“你好，小王子！”“谢谢，呵呵。”羽箬脸上泛起了红光。萧萧对CQ说：“话说，你的眼光真不错。”“嗯，这个小家伙真可爱。”小沫补充道。“谢谢，他也是迷茫的孩子哟！”CQ说道。

“注意了，注意了，真正的主角在这里，看，史上最帅，最有前途，最聪明的孩子在我这，哈哈……”奥玛卧半膝，两只手为天玄做出场陪伴。大家的目光转移到天玄身上，这个家伙还低着头，咧着嘴，不知在瞅什么东西，奥玛拉拉他的衣角，他才反应过来。“大家好，哈哈，我就是人见人爱，花见花开，载歌载舞，唯我独尊的爱翼天玄，哈哈哈哈……”“萧萧，这出场台词真雷人啊！”小沫对萧萧说。“嗯，这孩子有自恋倾向啊！”萧萧小声嘟囔着。

“天天天天天天…天玄！”

“贝贝贝贝贝贝…贝贝！”

贝贝和天玄愉快地拥抱起来！“怎么回事？”雪儿叫了起来。“雪儿，他们应该很熟悉吧！”小沫走过来说。“童心贝贝，你和爱翼天玄认识吗？”雪儿眨着那双明亮的大眼。“嗯，他就是我小时的玩伴—鼻涕虫。”贝贝指着天玄笑了起来。“哼！”天玄把头扭到一边，“你才是那个爱哭的小丫头呢！”“呵呵，没想到你们很有缘分呀！这每一个我雪儿都不熟悉。”雪儿说道。“不过，我们在三年级就分开了……”贝贝低声说道。“嗯，三年级，贝贝搬家了，呵呵。于是也换了学校，呵呵，贝贝，你走后老师同学都想念你呢！你以前每次考试都是第一！呵呵！”天玄大大咧咧地说道。“每次？”羽箬把头探过来。贝贝把头低下来，沉默不语。

“大家别闹了，快中午了，到我家吃饭吧！”小沫提议道。“嗯，我赞同。”萧萧把手举得高高的。“嗯，走吧！”奥玛等随声附和着。

四个小精灵带着他们从人类世界带过来的四个小伙伴，一起前往小沫家。

“哇，到了！”贝贝高兴地说道。“好美的宫殿，哇！”羽箬感慨道。“哈哈，这才符合我高贵的身份！”天玄插道。“这就是小沫家，我在这已住些日子了，小沫是最求完美的人，这粉红色的宫殿象征高贵，进去看看吧！”雪儿兴致勃勃介绍道。

“好像很长时间，我们都没来了，小沫。”萧萧说道。“嗯，小沫做饭最好吃了！”奥玛对大家说。“进去吧！”CQ拉着贝贝，萧萧，小沫，奔向大厅。

“吃的好饱，我们回家吧，贝贝。”萧萧对贝贝说道。“嗯，大家明天见。”贝贝朝大家挥手。“真开心啊，再见了！”雪儿优雅的招手。

于是奥玛带着天玄，CQ带着羽箬，萧萧带着贝贝，一同向雪儿和小沫招手……

[初一想象作文:童心贝贝的天空遨游记

初一英语作文如何教好呢，老师们有何看法？下面一起去看看小编整理的初一英语作文教学方法吧！

写作是书面表达和传递信息的重要途径，培养学生初步的写作的能力，是初中英语教学的目的之一。但是长期以来，中学英语写作教学一直徘徊于不理想的状态，尤其是在农村中学来讲更是不堪入目。平素测验中，不少学生只能写出寥寥数语，而且文章中拼写错误和其他语病随处可见，学生英语作文的质量不尽如人意。即使在有些学校所谓的实验班级效果也不是怎么理想。尽管在平素的教学评价环节中，我们花费大量的时间用于批改学生的作文，但是学生一次又一次的反馈给我们的并不是我们预期所料的，甚至是差之千里。如何解决这一难题，成为现阶段我们英语教学工作者面前的“拦路虎”。本文就这一问题作一些粗浅分析，力求找出了中学英语写作教学的瓶颈所在，结合教学实践，探索性的作一些关于中学英语写作教学的交流——“读、改、写”的实践。

七年的初中英语教学下来，留给我无穷的思考与困惑：不管在什么样的测试中，只要谈到英语写作，很多学生都感到头痛？即使有部分学生能动笔写写，其中的语法错误也是随处可见，写作要点不明确，语句不通顺，语言、词汇档次低，语言不地道或是汉语式的英语写作，让人看后很是费解。即使给材料作文学生也感到无从下手，在他们看来：翻译又是个问题，或是上面所说的汉语式的直接翻译出来。导致这些问题的缘由何在？是平时的教学没有到位，存在写作教学走过场？重视不够？还是学生根本就不是学英语的那块料？困惑，苦思、冥想！多方寻缘由。究其原因，我认为英语写作教学效果不理想主要问题出在平素的教学环节上。长期以来，我们很多英语教学者都重复着同一种模式：教师布置写作内容——学生完成作文——教师批阅作文——作文发还给学生。缺乏对学生的有效地针对性的指导，像那种简单而粗暴的评价方式，从根本上起不到什么作用。久而久之，还会使学生厌恶英语作文写作，甚至产生“写作恐惧症”，进而影响整个英语学习及考试效果！现我就英语写作教学的几点感悟与大家一起共勉。

一、读中不忘写，在阅读中适时穿插写作教学。

“读中教”指的是写作与阅读联系挂钩。因为单靠指导学生掌握写作要领进行写作，在实际的教学工作中是完全不够的，而当我们教学一篇篇阅读理解文章，才正是学生们学习写作的好时机，阅读理解也是我们教学写作的最有效武器，毕竟好文章是写作最好的老师和范例，更是我们教写作的法宝。因此，在每次学习和欣赏一篇阅读理解文章的时候，尤其是文中含有经典语句时，我都给学生设定四个目标：第一，理解作者写作的用意，即作者在文章中阐明了什么观点和段落的安排及其如何阐述的。第二，弄清作者运用了什么样的写作方法。比如是说明、记叙还是论证，包括文章运用的时态、语态以及其他种种语法手段。第三，学习作者的一些用词来扩大词汇量，积累词汇，同时让学生学习短语的搭配并收集词汇和短语。第四，收集作者在文章中写出的佳句、妙句、绝句。为今后的写作奠定基础。几年的教学实践证明了这样的教学有其独具的特色与效果

因此，我认为：写作教学完全应该，而且必须与阅读理解相结合才能真正让学生领悟和掌握写作方法与写作技巧的要领，没有阅读哪里来的模仿和借鉴？所以“读中教”是我的第一步，之后，在感性的基础上，我再给学生讲解具体的写作方法，这一点是我接下来要做的第二步“写中教”。

二、写作中不失恰如其分的指导，适时地开展“写中教”。

所谓“写中教”，就是在学生学作时给予写作方法的指导，通常我从三个方面入手：首先，概括初级写作的文体特点。书面表达在文体上以记叙文、应用文（书信、日记、通知、说明书等）的形式为多见。然后，概括其形式特点。近年来，初级写作题型在形式上以看图说话和根据中英文提出写作两种类型出现频率最高，要求能根据图画所提供的情景和英汉提出的词语，建立联想，创造性地运用所学过的词汇和语法知识来进行表达，比如根据一副或多幅图画及提示语，写出语法正确的六至八句话，或者一篇字数在60－100字的短文，充分地运用自己所学的知识，完整、准确地表达所需求的意思，考查的重点是在领会图意和提示语的前提下能简单创造语言的能力。最后是概括题材特点。在题材上，初级英文写作的表达题所给的大部分内容是比较贴近孩子们生活的人物和事件，诸如饮食、运动、爱好、环境、交友、旅行、娱乐等等，考查的是生活知识和语言知识学与用综合能力。

根据以上文体、形式、题材特点，我要求学生在看图写话时，掌握好以下一个要领：

1、看图说话书面表达题要领

首先，认真审题，弄清画意，把握中心。一般来说，写作题所提供的几幅图画虽然是整个故事情节中的一个或数个重要的情景片段，但每幅图的主体内容一定是清清楚楚、脉络分明的，这一点务必要准确把握，只有具体、透彻的理解画意，方能抓住抓准表达的重点。紧扣暗示内容，分析表达重点，看图题若也有语言提示，那么首先要细审提示材料。若是英文提示语，那就更加重要了，因为提示词语不但能有助于理解画意，而且告知如何围绕这些重点词语组织材料，然后表达出图画内容。但应注意，无论哪种形式的看图写话均不会给出所有的词语，因此，必须紧扣画面暗示的内容，再结合提示语的补充，酌情填补一些关键词语。

其次，运用正确的表达方式和准确的写作方法。用正确的表达方式准确地写出图画所表现的内容，形成一句或一段切合画意又无语法错误的句子是关键。具体应注意以下几点：

（1）确定基本时态。动词是做谓语还是做非谓语？是否需要用第三人称单数？这些必须考虑清楚再动笔。要抓住提示语中提供的或自己设置的时间状语，或抓住第一画图反映出来的故事背景。

（2）注意词语的变化。如该用形容词还是副词？名词是否可数？前面是否需用冠词？词尾是否丢失s或者其他变化形式？特指的定冠词the是否要用或不用？这些在平时演练时，都需要“斤斤计较”，养成习惯。

（3）句型的选择。尽量用自己所学过的句型表达，能用简单句尽量用简单句。

（4）书写规范、准确。

（5）反复检查。要逐字逐句检查词语搭配和句子的结构，是主系表还是主谓宾，注意时态是否完整等等。

2、写中英文提示作文的提纲要领

在做没有图画只有中英文提示语的书面表达题时，对学生要求更高，写作的难度也更大了。这种题型对八年级（下）和九年级学生较多用。我指导学生运用以下六条要领：

（1）、审清题意。反复仔细阅读、推敲提示，分析出文章的重点，弄清文章的格式，确定写什么内容，以免离题；

（2）、概括简要的中文提示中的部分要点，此时切记不可逐句翻译，题前所给的英文提示词语最好全部用上，采用扩写的方式，根据所给材料进行适当的恰如其分的扩写，可以由词到句，再有句到段，最后到篇的“点及面”的写法。

（3）、将提示中的有关信息融入自己的语句中，尽力做到语言规范、准确，文字通顺。

（4）、在抓住重点，不偏离主题的前提下，合理想象，拓展思路；

（5）、用好介词和连词，使文章简练、纹理通顺，尽量使用自己有把握的句式来表达，避免使用不熟练的词、短语和句型；

（6）、最后，正确把握文中的时态和语态，仔细揣摩、合理灵活变化时态和语态。

三、在写作评价中适时地给与指导，积极开展“改中教”。

我的最后一步是走“错误路线”，即在批改学生习作中利用学生的“错误资源”进行写作教学。在批改学生的习作时，我把其中的错字、别字以及大量的令人啼笑皆非的病句收集起来，这些东西常常是学生们的通病，虽说使我苦恼，但经验告诉我，其实这也是一种资源，颇有利用价值，而且用好了还是一剂治病句的“良药”呢！与此同时，我们也要善于发现学生的优点，适时不忘鼓励教学的开展，从而激发学生的写作兴趣。对于写得有水平、有档次的习作可以范读，从而进一步的调动学生的写作热情。

对于大多数学生容易犯的错误，我把一些比较典型的病句展示在黑板上，然后让学生互相订正。许多时候学生在“欣赏”他们自己的劣作时都忍不住哄堂大笑，但笑过之后，错误也在轻松愉快的气氛中改正了，这样既活跃了写作课堂的气氛，又达到了让学生纠正错误的效果。除此之外，我让每个学生准备一个纠错本，将他们平时在练习、造句和作文中出现的病句摘录在册并认真纠正，以避免重复出错，使文章中的病句逐渐减少。

以下是我在学生习作中遇到的典型案例，原文如下：

Nowadaays,the environment gets more and more bad.because of the pollution.Although the  government take any measures  to carry  it , it isnt working well  in it.

There is only one earth.I think we should do something useful we can to protect the environment.sach as we can use both sides of each piece of paper and use cotton handkerchiefs,not the paper ones to protect soil .if we go to a short distance.we can walk or by bike.we can also plant more trees and grass to protect air.

If  we  all do that,we will have healthy and  happy.

从整体看，本文错误较多，汉语思维较严重.但总的来讲这篇作文的思路还是比较清晰的，

于是我和学生一道对该文进行了分析：

1、本文首先缺一个主题，从正文中我们不难看出本文是要求写作如何保护环境问题，作者应根据题目要求拟定题目，再进行写作！譬如：我们可以拟定为：HOW  TO  SAVE  OUR  MOTHER等。

2、该文的第一句就出现拉严重的语法错误，The environment gets more and more bad.变得越来越糟糕，应该是“worse  and  worse".在提出问题时，最好创设一定的语言情景，逐步导入,俗话说得好“好的开始就是成功了一半”。以本文为例，我们完全可以以这样导入：With  the  development of  economy  ,more and more factories have built .But there is more and more pollution coming.

3、该文的第二句中的take any measures to carry  it  。意思没有表达清楚，让人看了费解，其实作者可能是想说政府采取一些措施去阻止污染。而采取一些措施去制止污染应为：take  some  measures  to  keep pollution.然而效果不好应为:it  doesnt  work  well.

4、在第二自然段中有单词拼写错误及名词单复数误用的现象，比如“sach as ”应为"such as".

5、表意不清。"not the paper ones to protect soil"和we can also plant more trees and grass to protect air.都存在表意不清的现象。其应该表达为：第一句最好这样表达：not to use paper or use less paper to protect  trees and  because the trees  can  keep the earth from washing.第二句改写为we  can also plant more trees and grass to keep the air clean and fresh.

5、标点符号用得不够恰当，如If we go to a short distance.we can walk or by bike.在这里我们最好这样用要好一些：If we go to a short distance，we can walk or by bike.

6、在最后一段发起倡议时，最好使用感叹句型或祈使句型这样会显得更有力！文章会显得更深入.如;my dear friends, lets get together to protect "The Blue Sky"!等。

除了上述“九字法”英文写作教学模式，我们还应重视做足“平时功夫”以促进学生写作。所谓平时功夫，是指背诵名篇佳作；收集各种话题，布置学生在假期或周末练笔，提倡“一周一文"；传阅、张贴、展览学生优秀习作以资鼓励等。鼓励学生善于从平素的练习中总结经验、吸取教训，只要持之以恒，我们完全可以让越来越多的学生逐渐学会用第二语言来表达自己的思想，而且可以像用母语一样轻松自如。

结束语

路漫漫其修远兮。英语写作教学的探究征程远而富于变化，需要各位同仁在实际工作中不断探索。在英语写作教学中如何教学及讲评需要继续探索。但有一点鄙人是这样认为的：宽松、愉悦、不断获得鼓励的环境中，学生的思维才会变得活跃。所以教师要及时抓住学生稍纵即逝的新奇、独特的想法，给予赞扬，使学生的创造性思维得以发展。多给学生创造性思维活动的机会，鼓励学生勇于尝试，并在失败面前不气馁。在平素的写作教学实践中，教师应最大限度地创设和实施多种鼓励机制，充分调动全体学生动笔写作的积极性，这样才能促进学生的写作能力更快更好地实现，从而从整体上提高学生的英语语言应用能力。

Henry is a little fatter than he wants to be. He is a bit worried. He

decides to lose weight. He eats only a little food for breakfast and supper, and

has some fruit. He doesn’t eat much sugar because he thinks it makes him

fatter.

Besides having only a little food, he keeps doing exercises every day. He

swims very often and runs every day. Some time later, he becomes stronger.

第一篇

To tell you the truth, I dont like the Spring Festival at all. When I was young I liked it very much,because I could had something tasty to eat during the Spring Festival,and I could enjoy very wonderful TV programmes,too. I also could had much free time during which I could did something I liked to do. I dont like it now, there are many reasons.

说实话，我一点都不喜欢春节。不过我年轻的时候，我非常喜欢，因为我可以在春节吃到美味佳肴，我可以享受到非常精彩的电视节目。我还可以有很多自由时间来做我喜欢做的事情。现在我不喜欢了，有许多理由。

Firstly, I cant have a good time during the Festival. Every New Years Eve something unpleasant often happens. Once I quarreled with my second brother.

首先，在节日期间我玩得不开心。每年除夕夜总有不愉快的事发生。有一次我跟我的二弟吵架。

Secondly, I cant relax myself during the Festival. I have to do many things, watch so many TV programmes, meet so many people,all these things make me very tired.

其次，在节日期间我自己无法得到放松。我要做很多事情，看很多的电视节目，见很多的人，所有这些都让我感到很累。

Thirdly, spending one Spring Festival means that I become one year older. I dont like to be old. I want to live longer and be young all the time.

第三，度过一个春节意味着我又老一岁了，我不喜欢老。我想活得更久，并且永远年轻。

Readers, what is your opinions about the Spring Festival? Please tell us, we can share our opinions. Thanks for reading! Goodbye.

读者们，你有什么关于春节的想法吗?请告诉我们，我们可以分享我们的想法。感谢您的阅读!再见。

第二篇

My Spring Festival is special. My uncle and my aunt came back from Shanghai. My family were very happy to keep the Spring Festival with them. And it was the most exciting festival of all the festivals.

我的春节很过得特别,我的叔叔阿姨重上海回来.我们家的人十分高兴可以和他们过春节.这是我最兴奋的一次春节。

On New Years Eve, my father and my uncle talked about their work together. My mum did some cooking with my aunt Grandparents and I watched the New Year TV programmes. At about six oclock, we had a special family dinner. We all thought the dumplings were delicious.

在新年的前夕(除夕夜)，我的父亲和我的叔父上一起谈论他们的工作。我妈和我的伯母和祖父母起做饭，而且我看了新年电视节目。 在大约六点钟，我们有了一份特别的家庭晚餐。 我们全部认为饺子很可口。

On the first day of the New Year, we visited our relatives. In the afternoon, we went shopping in Jiefang Road. My uncle bought some Jays CDs. He likes Jays music very much. There were so many people on the road. It was more alive than any other time of a year.

在新年的第一天，我们拜访了我们的亲戚。 午后，我们在解放路逛街。 我的叔父买了一些周杰伦的唱碟。 他非常喜欢周杰伦的音乐。 道路上很多人。

On the second and the third days, we spent a wonderful weekend in the country. There were much bigger trees than in the city. And the animals were more beautiful than in the city. We all enjoyed ourselves.

在第二、三天里，我们度过了一个好周末。有比较大的树比较在城市中。而且动物比在城市中更美丽。 我们玩得好高兴。

City cleanness is the symbol and reflection of the civilization of that city. It is obvious that if one comes to a clean and bright city, he will have a comfortable feeling and will be in a joyful mood. On the contrary, a dirty and polluted city may drive him away. So the deanness is very important to a city. But how can we get it?

The key lies in the citizensawareness of the importance of deanness. Citizens are the owners of their city. If everyone dwelling in the city keeps the city clean enthusiastically just as they keep their house clean, then streets will become cleaner and cleaner, buildings brighter and brighter, and consequently, the city will surely become more and more beautiful.

Some measures must be taken to keep our cities clean. For example, we should set a limit to noises and exhaust gases, and invest in the planting of trees and flowers. Moreover, some education and punish ment are necessary too. I believe in the future our city will become more beautiful gardens in a common effort of all the urban inhabitants.