英语作文游记初一【经典20篇】

What Am I Going to Do in the Summer Holiday

The new summer holiday is coming. As we know, summer is a beautiful season. During the coming summer holiday, I am going to study English. Then I am going to borrow some science books from

the library and discuss problems with my classmates, I’ll help my parents do some housework in my house, and I’ll water the flowers and trees our garden. I am going to play basketball, volleyball and

badminton with my neighbours in the afternoon. At the same time, if my father has time, he’ll teach me to swim. I’ll have fun.

There are four seasons in a year.The first season is spring. In spring,

almost everything comes back to life. The snow begins to melt, the trees sprout

and the grass turns green.Spring is warm so that its a good time to go hiking

outdoors. After spring, itis summer. Summer is my favorite season,because I can

swim quite often. The third one is autumn. In autumn, the weather is cool and

comfortable. Farmers may be the busiest people, because autumn is a time of

harvest.Winter is the last season of the year. In winter, the weather is very

cold. In the north, it usually snows. Children can play games or make snowmen

after snow. It seems very funny. But, because of the cold weather, I dont like

winter very much. Whats your favorite season?

这周，我读了四大名著之《西游记》。《西游记》主要进述了唐僧师徒经过九九八十一难，终于取得真经的故事。书中的每个故事都那么精彩、引人入胜，以至于不喜欢看书只爱玩的我，也被深密吸引住了。

在唐僧、孙悟空，猎八城和沙和尚四个主要人物中，我最喜欢孙悟空。

我喜欢他的神通广大，一个筋斗可以翻十万八千里，还会七十二变。如果我也有这样的本领该多好哇！孙悟空把他的本领用在降妖除魔的好事上。想想我自己，有时仗着自己个高、力气大和同学们打架，真是害臊。以后我要向孙悟空学习，用自己的本领为同学们做好事。

我喜欢孙悟空的机智勇救和坚强不屈，天论遇到什么困难或是妖魔鬼怪，他都勇敢去面对，并且坚特到胜利为止。想想我自已，平时最怕困维，作业一碰到难题就叫妈妈教，甚至就放在那儿不管它，这样怎么能提高成绩呢？以后我做作业时，一定要静下来仔细读题，认真思考，努力攻克难题。

我还最喜欢孙悟空对师傅的忠心。每次唐僧被妖怪捉去，孙悟空总是奋不顾身地去救他，唐僧饥饿的时候，孙悟空就不远万里地去为师傅化斋，特别是在唐僧多次错怪孙悟空，并且念紧箍咒，让孙悟空痛苦无比时，孙悟空还是没有怨恨师傅，依然想着保护师傅。想想自己，有时爸爸妈妈批评我的时候，我还有时生他们的气，还有一次甚至和他们唱对台戏，真不应该。

读了西游记，我有了许多感悟。妈妈也夸我懂事多了，我以后也要经常读它，会发现更多更深的感悟。

一个秋天的早晨，我们在班主任王老师的带领下，怀着无 比兴奋的心情去爬赤城山。

“好高啊！”一到赤城山，有的同学惊叫起来。因为从学 校到赤城山，我们已经步行了四公里，一些同学早已累得气喘吁 吁了，再加上要爬到山顶，有的同学害怕了。

”出发！”王老师下了“命令”，我们就马上往上爬。两 旁的树好像欢迎我们来接受“挑战”爬到半山腰，许多同学已经 上气不接下气。有的同学把手放在地上，像小狗一样往上爬；有 的同学为了节省力气，手扶栏杆，一步一步艰难地往上“走”； 还有的一屁股坐在石阶上，大口大口地喝饮料，嘴里还喊着：

“累死我啦！”而我这个小胖子呢，喘着粗气，落在了后面，有 时真不想走了。这是，曹帅同学喊：“是男人就应该默默得面队 一切困难！”王老师也鼓励我：“加油，坚持就是胜利。”我 想，我也是个小男孩，不能让别人瞧不起。我咬着牙，继续往上 爬。

终于到了山顶，有的同学手舞足蹈。我站在山峰看风景。

一阵凉风吹来，好爽！往上看，天格外得蓝；往下望，田野.房 子.始丰溪......匣一幅巨大的彩画铺展在眼前。我在书上看 到：“无限风光在顶峰”。这还是真的呀！

下山时，我本来还以为下山比上山省力呢！哪知道，每走 一步就像走在有钉子的地方，脚又痛又痒，我心里叫苦连天。

花了四多个小时，我们才回到了校园。这一次爬山后，我 虽然全身酸痛，浑身发软，但我进一步明白了一个道理：世上无 难事，只要肯登攀。

[初一游记作文600字：游赤城山

Hi,everyone,Im excited to introduce myself to you.My name is __,and you can call me__.I was born in a tradition family,my father is a __,and my mother is a __.I am intrested in learning __,and in my spare time id like to play__.Now,we have went step to junior high school,Id like to be friend with you,angI think we will learn more during this period together.

初一英语作文 My Happiest Day

I am 13 years old now. Yesterday was my birthday. My parents had a birthday party. I invited some friends to the party.

In the morning my mother got up early and began to cook. My father helped her with cooking. They were so busy that they had no time io talk with me.

When all my friends arrived, my mother brought delicious food and a big birthday cake. My father gave me new clothes and some books as presents. I was moved to tears. My friends sang birthday songs for me and gave me some presents. I had a wonderful birthday.

[初一英语作文 My Happiest Day

Hello, everyone. This is my English teacher. His name is Wang Nengmin. His English name is Frank. He is a very good English teacher. He speaks English very well. Hes full of humor, too. Hes over 30 years old. He has two small eyes and a small mouth. He is near sighted so he wears glasses. He likes playing computer games and swimming. He also loves reading. He usually reads newspapers after school. His lesson is very interesting. We always learn a lot of things in his lessons. We all like him very much, although he is very strict with us.

My dream home is very big and nice.I have a house and it has at least three floors.On the first floor,there is a big dining room and we can have dinner together.There is also a nice kitchen and a big sitting room.On the second floor,there are all the bedrooms,so all my friends can stay in my house.There are computers,TVs and videos in each bedroom,so everyone can have fun.My own room is on the third floor.I can put the dolls,the posters and other things in it.I also have a balcony and I can see the whole city from it.

What a wonderful home!I hope I can live in it someday.

Many years ago, I saw the movie Harry Porter and I was so impressed by it. The magical world was so wonderful that I wanted to live there. My thoughts were so active that I always dreamed about myself walking in the magical world and taking the risk. So I decided to write down the things I dreamed about and then made these become a book. This is my little dream, when the book is finished, I want to read them to my friends and my brother. Now I have written down a few pages, I continue to write every day. I get great motivation to finish my little dream. I imagine how happy I will be when I finish the book, so I keep writing it when I have the thoughts. I am so proud of myself for I never giving up to finish my dream.

The traffic problem is one of the most serious problems in my hometown.

Recently, more and more people have private car, but the roads are so narrow

that we have to fight against the heavy traffic when we go out. Especially

during the rush hours, cars and buses are unable to move. To make things worse,

many people are killed in the traffic accidents. How miserable it is!

For the sake of our life and security, some measures must be taken to

change the present situation. In the first place, as there are a great many

cars, we should control the number of private cars and vehicles and use the

public transportation more often. Secondly, the government should widen the

roads and build more flyovers, so as to ease the traffic pressure and reduce the

traffic accidents. In addition, the undergrounds and light rails should be

constructed, so that we can have more choices when going out and do not have to

worry about the traffic jams in the future.

I believe the traffic problem could be solved if we devote our actions to

them.

Nowadays, more and more people like to travel in their holidays. The other day I read a report about the ways people spend their holidays. It is reported that in recent yiars several new holiday habits have been developed. Among them, the most interesting one is the growth of the so-called holiday camps.

如今，越来越多的人喜欢在假期旅游。前几天我看了一篇关于人们如何度过他们的假期。据报道，近年来新的假期习惯了。其中，最有趣的是所谓的假期增长。

From the report we can see that in 20XX,40 percent of people stayed at home for holidays. But now the proportion has reduced to 9 percent. More people go out for fun. The proportion of camping and traveling abroad was increasing steadily, from 10 percent in 20XX to 38 percent in 20XX, and 12 percent in 20XX to 26 percent in 20XX respectively. People enjoy the fresh air, clean Water and green hills when they go camping in the suburbs. In 20XX,38 percent people enjoyed going to the seaside while in 20XX only 27 percent prefer to go there. What great changes!

从报告中我们可以看到，在20xx年，百分之40的人在家里度假。但是现在这个比例已经降到百分之9。更多的人出去玩。出去郊游和出国旅行的比例不断增加，从百分之10到百分之38在20XX年20XX年，和百分之12至百分之26分别在20XX年20XX年。人们享受新鲜的空气，干净的水和绿色的山，当他们去郊区露营。在20xx年，百分之38的人喜欢去海边，而在20XX年只有百分之27选择去那里。多么大的变化!

Why did those changes appear? I think there are several reasons. First, it s because people can afford traveling. Second, people prefer to pursue a high-quality and colorful life. Third, their attitudes to relaxation have changed. Less people want to save much money by leading a simple life. In short, peoples living standard today has been rising greatly.

为什么会出现这些变化?我认为有几个原因。第一，因为人们能够负担得起旅游。第二，人们更愿意追求一种高质量、丰富多彩的生活。第三，人们对休闲的态度改变了。越来越少的人想过简朴的生活节省很多钱。总之，人民生活日渐变好。

Yesterday, we had a discussion. the topic is. What is my dreamEvery one has his dream. Some want to be teachers,others want to be scientists. My dream is to become a doctor.

My friends asked me why. I told them my story. When I was a small boy I was very weak. Once I was terribly iii. I had a high fever. My parents sent me to the hospital but the doctors could do nothing for me. then my parents heard there was a very good doctor in another town. they took me there. I was saved.

A good doctor can save peoples lives. From then on I decided to become a doctor. I know it is not easy to be a doctor.But I am determined to study hard. I am sure my dream will come true.

Dear John,

Long time no see, how is your summer vacation? I’m really sorry for writing so late. I have been too busy at this moment. I am happy to hear that you have traveled to Tibet at this summer holiday. How I wish I could go there with you!

Let me tell you something about my summer holiday. My summer holiday is rich and colorful. My parents take me to Hong Kong. That’s a beautiful place. I buy a lot of funny things at there. Such as pretty dresses, cute dolls and the snacks I never eat before. I really want to stay there and never come back! In a word, I really appreciate the life there.

I’m really looking forward to your reply!

亲爱的约翰：

好久不见，你的暑假过得还好吗?很抱歉那么晚才写信给你。这段时间我真的太忙了。我很高兴听说暑假你去了西藏旅游。我真希望我也和你一起去。

让我告诉你我的暑假趣事吧。我的暑假过得丰富多彩。我父母带我去了香港。那是个美丽的地方。我在香港买了很多新奇的玩意。比如漂亮的裙子，可爱的娃娃和一些从来没有吃过的零食。我真想待在那里再也不回来了。一句话，我喜欢那里的生活。

我很期待你的回复!

Park

Thereisaparknearmyhome.Therearealotofbeautifultrees,flowersandbirdsinthepark.Somanypeoplegototheparktoenjoytheirweekends.Theylikewalkingorhavingapicnicinthepark.ButIlikeflyingakitewithmysisiterthere.我家附近有一个公园。那里有很多美丽的树、花和小鸟。所以很多人都喜欢到那里去度周末。他们喜欢在公园里散步或是野餐.但是我喜欢和我姐姐在那里放风筝。

Bedroom

Ihaveasmallbedroom.Thereareonlyasmallbed,asmalldeskandasmallchairintheroom.Andthereisabeautifuldollonmybluebed.EverydayIdomyhomework,readbooksandplaygameswiththedollinmybedroom.Itissmall,butitgivesmemuchhappiness.我有一间小小的卧室。那里有一张小小的床、小小桌子和一把小小的椅子。而且还有一个漂亮的娃娃在我那张蓝色的小床上。我每天都在房间里写作业，看书和与我的娃娃玩。虽然房间很小，但是他给了我很多欢乐。

Myfather

Myfatherisatallandhandsomeman.Heisapoliceman.Everydayhecomesbackhomeverylate,becausehemusthelptheothers.Hedoesnthavetimetoexaminemyhomeworkandtakemetothepark.ButIlikemyfather,becauseheisagoodpoliceman.我的爸爸是一个高大帅气的男人。他是一个警察。他每天都很晚才回家，因为他要帮助其他的人。他没有时间给我检查作业和带我去公园。但是我仍然很喜欢我的爸爸，因为他是一个好警察。

IamfromShenZhen.Inspring,theweatheriswarmandwet.Icanplaykite.Insummer,theweatherishotandwet.Icanswimintheswimmingpool.Intheautumn,theweatheriscoolanddry.Icanplaykite,too.Inthewinter,theweatheriscoldanddry.Itneversnow.

我是来自深圳。在春天，在天气温暖及潮湿。我可以玩风筝。在夏季，天气炎热及潮湿。我可以游泳，在游泳池。在秋天，天气凉爽，干燥。我可以玩风筝，太。在冬季，天气寒冷及干燥。它从来没有积雪。

Todayismygrandpasbirthday.Ourfamilywentbacktomygrandpashomeinthemorning.Wegottogethertohaveabigfamilydinnertocelebratehisbirthady.Weboughtabigbirthdaycakeandgavesomepresentstomygrandpa.

Intheafternoon,wewenttotheparktogoboating.Wehadagoodtime.Mygrandpahadanicetimeonhisbirthday.

今天是爷爷的生日，我们全家早晨回到爷爷家。我们举行了大型家庭聚会来庆祝爷爷的生日。我们买了一个大生日蛋糕，并且送给爷爷一些礼物。

下午我们去公园划船。我们玩得很开心，爷爷过了一个愉快的生日

Mr.Knottisateacher.Heisathome.Thetelephonerings.Heanswersthephone.Hesays,“Hello.Thisis82654379.Whosthat?”“Watt”amananswers.“wattsyourname,please?”saysMr.Knottisangry.“Wattsmyname!”theothermanisangey,too.

knott先生是一名教师。他是在家中。电话响了。他回答接起电话，说，“你好，这是82654379。你是谁？”“瓦特”一个男人答道。“请问你的名字是什么？”knott先生生气地说。“瓦特就是我的名字！”另一名男子是也生气了。

Afarmerhasfivesons.TheyareTed,Bob,Tom,JohnandBill.Johnhasnoelderbrother.Hewasfouryearsolderwhenhisfirstyoungerbrotherwasborn.ThenumberofTom‘selderbrothersisequaltohisyoungerbrothers.Billwillbetwenty-oneyearsoldnextyear,andheisfiveyearsolderthanBob.BobistwoyearsyoungerthanTom.Tedwassadbecausehehasnoyoungerbrother.TherearetwelveyearsbetweenhimandJohn.一个农民有5个儿子。他们是Ted,Bob,Tom,John和Bill。John没有比他大的哥哥，他比第一个出生的比他小的那个弟弟大4岁，Tom哥哥的数量和他的弟弟的数量是一样的（就是他是老三）Bill明年就21岁了，他比Bob大5岁，比Tom小2岁，Ted因为没有弟弟而难过Ted和John之间差了12岁

Everythinginthisworldhasanatureofitsown.Somearecharming,someareseducing,likethecandy,chocolate,thecakes,andsomeburneverythinglikefire,assoonasyougetnear.

天地万物各有其本质，有些东西很有吸引力、很诱人，像糖果、巧克力、蛋糕等；有些则像火一样，任何东西一靠近就会被它烧掉。

OnMyWaytoSchool

TodayIgotupveryearlyinthemorning.AfterIfinishedbreakfast,Iwenttoschool.OnmywaytoschoolIsawsomethinglyingontheground.

Ipickeditupandfounditwasamobilephone.IwasafraidIwouldbelateforschool.Ihadnotimetowaitfortheowner.SoIgaveittothepoliceman.

ShortlyafterIreachedmyschool,theheadmastercametomyclassandpraisedmeinfrontoftheclass.Howcouldheknewallaboutit?IguessitmustbethepolicemanwhotoldhimwhatIdid.

IamveryhappythatIhavedoneagoodjob.

就我在上学的路上

今天，我得到了很早就在上午。当我完成早餐，我去了学校。就我在上学的路上我看到的东西躺在地上。我挑选它，并发现这是一部手提电话。我恐怕我会迟到的学校。我没有时间去等待的所有者。因此，我给它的警察。

不久后，我达到了我的学校，校长来到我的班级，并赞扬我在前面的阶级。他怎么会知道的所有关于它呢？我猜想，它必须是警察谁告诉他，我所做的。我很高兴我已经做得不错。

Chinahasbeenapowerfulcountryforthemostpartofthepastthreethousandyears.Chinaisnowrisingagain.Whyisthatsosurprisingtopeople?Historyisthebestevidence.TheriseofChinaisjustamatterofwhen,notif.Plus,doyouwant$100jeans?Doyouwant$200shoes?Doyouwant$3000computers?IftheanswersareNO,youdbetterthankChinaandappreciatethebenefitsthatitbringstoyourdailylife.

中国在过去3000年历史中大部分时间当中都是个强大的国家。中国现在再次崛起，为什么人们会感到如此奇怪？历史是最好的证明。中国崛起只是个时间问题，而不是是否能崛起的问题。另外，你希望卖100美元一条的牛仔裤，200美元一双鞋，3000美元的电脑吗？如果不愿意，你必须要感谢中国，感谢中国为你日常生活做出的贡献。

You know? Is tired, happy, is happy, because today I have a good spirit in class.

In the afternoon, I was very happy to answer the question, the teacher was very happy to boast of me. For a moment, when I was in math class, I was active. My teacher didnt call me. I was very angry. I would be very angry when I arrived in the afternoon. In the 3 or 4 class, I would answer the teachers questions in Chinese, math and Chinese classes. The "bell" class, we rushed out of the classroom, "bell" class, math class, the last section about the problem, I did not finish, I am afraid, the teacher said to take the book, 3 and 12 teacher said that a problem, I raised my hand and said the problem, the teacher praised me. I came home and I told my mother that my mother was happy.

第一次七年级英语月考试卷充分体现了新课改的精神，切实有效地考察了所学知识内容。下面对试卷试题进行具体分析：

一、试卷题型情况

1、注重对基础知识、基本技能的考察，题型新颖、覆盖面大，涉及到了所学的全部内容，促进学生有效学习。

2、注重从实际中选取素材，考察了学生的分析和处理问题能力。

3、试卷对学生探究能力是一个重点考察，增强了学生的探究分析能力。

二、试卷结构分析

试卷充分体现了新课标课改精神，注重了对学生基础知识和综合能力的考察，因此对学生的细心程度要求很高。

1、听力部分：试题难度不大，因此学生在该部分的得分率较高，但是学生的两极分化严重，高分很高，甚至满分，而低分则太低。

2、完形填空和阅读理解：难度适中，但是得分率一般，主要原因是学生理解文章不透彻，阅读能力差造成的。

3、词语运用：此题是各大题中得分最低的一个题，主要原因是学生对词的用法掌握不好，一些固定词组记不清。

4、书面表达：该题对于学生来说是比较容易的一题，它是对学生整体知识的一个考察，但两极分化最为严重。

三、学生分析

存在问题：

1、优等生对基础知识掌握较好，但是还有一部分学生对语言的运用能力较差，对比较碎的知识点没有能够很好地掌握。

2、中等生的基础知识掌握不够牢固，并且做题比较粗心。

四、具体改进措施

1、钻研新教材，夯实英语基础。练习中很多学生“一看就会，一做就错”，这种现象比较普遍，失误原因是对于常见用语掌握的熟练程度还不够。其根本原因就在于基础不牢，只有扎扎实实从基础做起，才能最终达到“一看就会，一做就对”。

2、加强英语课外阅读。英语知识的获得与能力的提高是在不断的听、说、读、写的训练过程中逐步形成的，而教材和课堂所能提供的训练还是比较有限的，因此，要加强理解语篇的能力训练，增强英语语感。

3、规范训练，改进学习方法。要善于分析学生，找出学生的薄弱环节，合理安排好教材知识梳理、专项训练和应试技巧指导。

在今后的教学中应注意开阔学生视野，多渠道、大容量地给学生提供具有时代感的英语信息，加强语言运用能力的培养，少讲解，多给学生实际运用语言的机会，在用中学英语。

今年的春还不曾来到，窗外的阳光却如此明媚。天气总是这般，是春非春。没了冬日的严寒，有的只是无尽的柔和。看着电脑屏幕上密密麻麻的字，一时出了神，不禁轻轻一笑，想到今儿下午姐姐将带我们几个小孩出去采草莓，不由得心生欢喜。

看着车窗外不断更新的景色，心中满怀期待。轻笑一声，不说话，静静的，一切都如此动人。

不过几分钟，就瞅见一排排白色大帐篷，车子便停下了。姐姐抱着精力旺盛的朗朗（姐姐的儿子）下了车，她笑着说：“这里的草莓好不好呀？”那儿的草莓园主也算得上老实。“不错的！不过，并不大。而且里头有水。”姐姐招呼我们下来，又望了望里头娇嫩的草莓。又摇了摇头，又回到了车上。又瞅见一处，那儿的园主不让进，说是棚子里热火朝天，不安全。若是出人命了，他们也担待不起。只得悻悻地走了。坐在车上，万般失望，本以为这次游玩定会泡了汤。又一个草莓园，姐姐又去询问主人，主人也表示同意。我们欣奋极了。但主人说小孩不让进。因为上次有几个小孩来摘，弄坏了好多草莓，亏死了。

姐姐再三向主人保证，终于，我们历尽波折进了园子。

对于是新手的我，摘草莓着实是个技术活。姐姐再三叮嘱要看好了再摘。我小心翼翼地蹲下来，生怕伤到这一个个可爱的草莓精灵。这些草莓精灵仿佛在呼唤我“来摘我呀！看我多诱人啊！”冲着一个彤红的草莓仔细观察，正面彤红诱人，反面却不知是何样只得歪过头看看。终于决定，轻捏叶萼，顺势轻轻一拉，一个可爱的草莓便被我采下。园主说不能带藤，不然会伤了草莓的表皮，容易出水。采了许久，头上也渗出细密的汗珠。这篮中的草莓却也不曾满半篮。这时，姐姐已摘满脸一篮。那新鲜可口的草莓好生诱人。在瞅瞅嘟嘟（姐姐的女儿）的草莓，不禁一阵幸灾乐祸。轻笑一声，故作镇定，又开始埋头摘草莓。

后来，姐姐在等不下去，便帮嘟嘟一同采。不一会儿，她们已满一篮。那一个个诱人的草莓，有种一口一个的冲动。

因为我的不足一篮，便于妹妹的凑成一篮。

付过钱，便迫不及待地品尝起来。甜丝丝的却又不过分，好吃！

[采草莓游记_初一作文600字

Bus: This is the most common transporting means, because its so cheap and

efficient. You can go to other cities by bus, but its very slow in rush hours.

And sometimes its dangerous to take the bus, because the traffic accidents may

happen at any time on high ways.

Train: Its suitable for the long trip. Not only it is fast and convenient,

but also its so economical. Most people can afford it. Whats more, its more

pleasant than taking any other means of transportation. You can walk around and

open the windows on the train. Besides, you can have a rest when you feel tired.

And then youll get to your destination the next day.

Plane: Air travel is very fast and enjoyable. It seems that our world is a

small place to live in, but its too expensive for many people.

Ship: Even though ship voyage is slow, its still exciting, for one can

enjoy the beautiful scenery on the sea and feel the soft sea wind.

Subway: It can be easily seen in big cities like Beijing and Shanghai. Its

so comfortable, convenient and always on time. You can take it to every part of

the city. As its built underground, you neednt care about the traffic jams.

Now it becomes more and more popular.

初一英语作文如何教好呢，老师们有何看法？下面一起去看看小编整理的初一英语作文教学方法吧！

写作是书面表达和传递信息的重要途径，培养学生初步的写作的能力，是初中英语教学的目的之一。但是长期以来，中学英语写作教学一直徘徊于不理想的状态，尤其是在农村中学来讲更是不堪入目。平素测验中，不少学生只能写出寥寥数语，而且文章中拼写错误和其他语病随处可见，学生英语作文的质量不尽如人意。即使在有些学校所谓的实验班级效果也不是怎么理想。尽管在平素的教学评价环节中，我们花费大量的时间用于批改学生的作文，但是学生一次又一次的反馈给我们的并不是我们预期所料的，甚至是差之千里。如何解决这一难题，成为现阶段我们英语教学工作者面前的“拦路虎”。本文就这一问题作一些粗浅分析，力求找出了中学英语写作教学的瓶颈所在，结合教学实践，探索性的作一些关于中学英语写作教学的交流——“读、改、写”的实践。

七年的初中英语教学下来，留给我无穷的思考与困惑：不管在什么样的测试中，只要谈到英语写作，很多学生都感到头痛？即使有部分学生能动笔写写，其中的语法错误也是随处可见，写作要点不明确，语句不通顺，语言、词汇档次低，语言不地道或是汉语式的英语写作，让人看后很是费解。即使给材料作文学生也感到无从下手，在他们看来：翻译又是个问题，或是上面所说的汉语式的直接翻译出来。导致这些问题的缘由何在？是平时的教学没有到位，存在写作教学走过场？重视不够？还是学生根本就不是学英语的那块料？困惑，苦思、冥想！多方寻缘由。究其原因，我认为英语写作教学效果不理想主要问题出在平素的教学环节上。长期以来，我们很多英语教学者都重复着同一种模式：教师布置写作内容——学生完成作文——教师批阅作文——作文发还给学生。缺乏对学生的有效地针对性的指导，像那种简单而粗暴的评价方式，从根本上起不到什么作用。久而久之，还会使学生厌恶英语作文写作，甚至产生“写作恐惧症”，进而影响整个英语学习及考试效果！现我就英语写作教学的几点感悟与大家一起共勉。

一、读中不忘写，在阅读中适时穿插写作教学。

“读中教”指的是写作与阅读联系挂钩。因为单靠指导学生掌握写作要领进行写作，在实际的教学工作中是完全不够的，而当我们教学一篇篇阅读理解文章，才正是学生们学习写作的好时机，阅读理解也是我们教学写作的最有效武器，毕竟好文章是写作最好的老师和范例，更是我们教写作的法宝。因此，在每次学习和欣赏一篇阅读理解文章的时候，尤其是文中含有经典语句时，我都给学生设定四个目标：第一，理解作者写作的用意，即作者在文章中阐明了什么观点和段落的安排及其如何阐述的。第二，弄清作者运用了什么样的写作方法。比如是说明、记叙还是论证，包括文章运用的时态、语态以及其他种种语法手段。第三，学习作者的一些用词来扩大词汇量，积累词汇，同时让学生学习短语的搭配并收集词汇和短语。第四，收集作者在文章中写出的佳句、妙句、绝句。为今后的写作奠定基础。几年的教学实践证明了这样的教学有其独具的特色与效果

因此，我认为：写作教学完全应该，而且必须与阅读理解相结合才能真正让学生领悟和掌握写作方法与写作技巧的要领，没有阅读哪里来的模仿和借鉴？所以“读中教”是我的第一步，之后，在感性的基础上，我再给学生讲解具体的写作方法，这一点是我接下来要做的第二步“写中教”。

二、写作中不失恰如其分的指导，适时地开展“写中教”。

所谓“写中教”，就是在学生学作时给予写作方法的指导，通常我从三个方面入手：首先，概括初级写作的文体特点。书面表达在文体上以记叙文、应用文（书信、日记、通知、说明书等）的形式为多见。然后，概括其形式特点。近年来，初级写作题型在形式上以看图说话和根据中英文提出写作两种类型出现频率最高，要求能根据图画所提供的情景和英汉提出的词语，建立联想，创造性地运用所学过的词汇和语法知识来进行表达，比如根据一副或多幅图画及提示语，写出语法正确的六至八句话，或者一篇字数在60－100字的短文，充分地运用自己所学的知识，完整、准确地表达所需求的意思，考查的重点是在领会图意和提示语的前提下能简单创造语言的能力。最后是概括题材特点。在题材上，初级英文写作的表达题所给的大部分内容是比较贴近孩子们生活的人物和事件，诸如饮食、运动、爱好、环境、交友、旅行、娱乐等等，考查的是生活知识和语言知识学与用综合能力。

根据以上文体、形式、题材特点，我要求学生在看图写话时，掌握好以下一个要领：

1、看图说话书面表达题要领

首先，认真审题，弄清画意，把握中心。一般来说，写作题所提供的几幅图画虽然是整个故事情节中的一个或数个重要的情景片段，但每幅图的主体内容一定是清清楚楚、脉络分明的，这一点务必要准确把握，只有具体、透彻的理解画意，方能抓住抓准表达的重点。紧扣暗示内容，分析表达重点，看图题若也有语言提示，那么首先要细审提示材料。若是英文提示语，那就更加重要了，因为提示词语不但能有助于理解画意，而且告知如何围绕这些重点词语组织材料，然后表达出图画内容。但应注意，无论哪种形式的看图写话均不会给出所有的词语，因此，必须紧扣画面暗示的内容，再结合提示语的补充，酌情填补一些关键词语。

其次，运用正确的表达方式和准确的写作方法。用正确的表达方式准确地写出图画所表现的内容，形成一句或一段切合画意又无语法错误的句子是关键。具体应注意以下几点：

（1）确定基本时态。动词是做谓语还是做非谓语？是否需要用第三人称单数？这些必须考虑清楚再动笔。要抓住提示语中提供的或自己设置的时间状语，或抓住第一画图反映出来的故事背景。

（2）注意词语的变化。如该用形容词还是副词？名词是否可数？前面是否需用冠词？词尾是否丢失s或者其他变化形式？特指的定冠词the是否要用或不用？这些在平时演练时，都需要“斤斤计较”，养成习惯。

（3）句型的选择。尽量用自己所学过的句型表达，能用简单句尽量用简单句。

（4）书写规范、准确。

（5）反复检查。要逐字逐句检查词语搭配和句子的结构，是主系表还是主谓宾，注意时态是否完整等等。

2、写中英文提示作文的提纲要领

在做没有图画只有中英文提示语的书面表达题时，对学生要求更高，写作的难度也更大了。这种题型对八年级（下）和九年级学生较多用。我指导学生运用以下六条要领：

（1）、审清题意。反复仔细阅读、推敲提示，分析出文章的重点，弄清文章的格式，确定写什么内容，以免离题；

（2）、概括简要的中文提示中的部分要点，此时切记不可逐句翻译，题前所给的英文提示词语最好全部用上，采用扩写的方式，根据所给材料进行适当的恰如其分的扩写，可以由词到句，再有句到段，最后到篇的“点及面”的写法。

（3）、将提示中的有关信息融入自己的语句中，尽力做到语言规范、准确，文字通顺。

（4）、在抓住重点，不偏离主题的前提下，合理想象，拓展思路；

（5）、用好介词和连词，使文章简练、纹理通顺，尽量使用自己有把握的句式来表达，避免使用不熟练的词、短语和句型；

（6）、最后，正确把握文中的时态和语态，仔细揣摩、合理灵活变化时态和语态。

三、在写作评价中适时地给与指导，积极开展“改中教”。

我的最后一步是走“错误路线”，即在批改学生习作中利用学生的“错误资源”进行写作教学。在批改学生的习作时，我把其中的错字、别字以及大量的令人啼笑皆非的病句收集起来，这些东西常常是学生们的通病，虽说使我苦恼，但经验告诉我，其实这也是一种资源，颇有利用价值，而且用好了还是一剂治病句的“良药”呢！与此同时，我们也要善于发现学生的优点，适时不忘鼓励教学的开展，从而激发学生的写作兴趣。对于写得有水平、有档次的习作可以范读，从而进一步的调动学生的写作热情。

对于大多数学生容易犯的错误，我把一些比较典型的病句展示在黑板上，然后让学生互相订正。许多时候学生在“欣赏”他们自己的劣作时都忍不住哄堂大笑，但笑过之后，错误也在轻松愉快的气氛中改正了，这样既活跃了写作课堂的气氛，又达到了让学生纠正错误的效果。除此之外，我让每个学生准备一个纠错本，将他们平时在练习、造句和作文中出现的病句摘录在册并认真纠正，以避免重复出错，使文章中的病句逐渐减少。

以下是我在学生习作中遇到的典型案例，原文如下：

Nowadaays,the environment gets more and more bad.because of the pollution.Although the  government take any measures  to carry  it , it isnt working well  in it.

There is only one earth.I think we should do something useful we can to protect the environment.sach as we can use both sides of each piece of paper and use cotton handkerchiefs,not the paper ones to protect soil .if we go to a short distance.we can walk or by bike.we can also plant more trees and grass to protect air.

If  we  all do that,we will have healthy and  happy.

从整体看，本文错误较多，汉语思维较严重.但总的来讲这篇作文的思路还是比较清晰的，

于是我和学生一道对该文进行了分析：

1、本文首先缺一个主题，从正文中我们不难看出本文是要求写作如何保护环境问题，作者应根据题目要求拟定题目，再进行写作！譬如：我们可以拟定为：HOW  TO  SAVE  OUR  MOTHER等。

2、该文的第一句就出现拉严重的语法错误，The environment gets more and more bad.变得越来越糟糕，应该是“worse  and  worse".在提出问题时，最好创设一定的语言情景，逐步导入,俗话说得好“好的开始就是成功了一半”。以本文为例，我们完全可以以这样导入：With  the  development of  economy  ,more and more factories have built .But there is more and more pollution coming.

3、该文的第二句中的take any measures to carry  it  。意思没有表达清楚，让人看了费解，其实作者可能是想说政府采取一些措施去阻止污染。而采取一些措施去制止污染应为：take  some  measures  to  keep pollution.然而效果不好应为:it  doesnt  work  well.

4、在第二自然段中有单词拼写错误及名词单复数误用的现象，比如“sach as ”应为"such as".

5、表意不清。"not the paper ones to protect soil"和we can also plant more trees and grass to protect air.都存在表意不清的现象。其应该表达为：第一句最好这样表达：not to use paper or use less paper to protect  trees and  because the trees  can  keep the earth from washing.第二句改写为we  can also plant more trees and grass to keep the air clean and fresh.

5、标点符号用得不够恰当，如If we go to a short distance.we can walk or by bike.在这里我们最好这样用要好一些：If we go to a short distance，we can walk or by bike.

6、在最后一段发起倡议时，最好使用感叹句型或祈使句型这样会显得更有力！文章会显得更深入.如;my dear friends, lets get together to protect "The Blue Sky"!等。

除了上述“九字法”英文写作教学模式，我们还应重视做足“平时功夫”以促进学生写作。所谓平时功夫，是指背诵名篇佳作；收集各种话题，布置学生在假期或周末练笔，提倡“一周一文"；传阅、张贴、展览学生优秀习作以资鼓励等。鼓励学生善于从平素的练习中总结经验、吸取教训，只要持之以恒，我们完全可以让越来越多的学生逐渐学会用第二语言来表达自己的思想，而且可以像用母语一样轻松自如。

结束语

路漫漫其修远兮。英语写作教学的探究征程远而富于变化，需要各位同仁在实际工作中不断探索。在英语写作教学中如何教学及讲评需要继续探索。但有一点鄙人是这样认为的：宽松、愉悦、不断获得鼓励的环境中，学生的思维才会变得活跃。所以教师要及时抓住学生稍纵即逝的新奇、独特的想法，给予赞扬，使学生的创造性思维得以发展。多给学生创造性思维活动的机会，鼓励学生勇于尝试，并在失败面前不气馁。在平素的写作教学实践中，教师应最大限度地创设和实施多种鼓励机制，充分调动全体学生动笔写作的积极性，这样才能促进学生的写作能力更快更好地实现，从而从整体上提高学生的英语语言应用能力。

Great changes have taken place in China. Many new buildings have been built in cities, towns and villages.

The more cars we have, the more crowed the roads are. So the roads become wider and wider. Many overpasseshave been built in big cities. Chinese people’s life is much better than ever before. We have Tv sets, washing machines, fridges, even computers, cars etc.

We’ll study harder and make our countrry stronger and more beautiful.

My   Friend

Hello!What’s your favourite friend Yu Ling is my favourite friend. She is a beautiful girl. She smiles friendly. I think it’s her smile that makes her beauty. We live in the same city, so that we always stay together, no matter going to classroom or having dinners. She likes salad and beef for lunch. She likes chicken and rice for dinner.I love my friend. We have healthy food. .Yu Ling likes sharing interesting things with others. Such as, she likes telling us her funny stories of her childhood . She always tells me that I should be more extroverted and learn to talk to others. Under the influence of her, I communicate with others more frequently and I find that it feels so great. I am so grateful that I can have such a good friend.  你好！你最好的朋友是谁？玉陵是我最喜欢的朋友。她是一个漂亮的女孩。她微笑着很友好。 我认为这是她的微笑使她的美丽。我们住在同一个城市，所以我们总是在一起，无论去教室或吃饭的时候。她午餐喜欢吃沙拉和牛肉。她晚餐喜欢吃鸡肉和米饭。我喜欢我的朋友。我们吃健康的食物。玉陵喜欢和别人分享有趣的东西。例如，她喜欢告诉我们她的有趣的故事，她的童年。 她总是告诉我，我应该更外向，学会和别人说话。影响下的她，我和别人交流越来越频繁，我觉得她总是告诉我，我应该更外向，学会和别人说话。在她的影响下，我和别人交流越来越频繁，我觉得真是太棒了。我真的很感激我能有这样的一个好朋友。

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