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英语作文游记初一推荐20篇

这丹桂飘香,金秋收获的季节里,我们又迎来了新的一学期。下面是小编整理的新学期作文,欢迎大家参考!

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初一英语作文MyHappiestDay

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初一英语作文 My Happiest Day

I am 13 years old now. Yesterday was my birthday. My parents had a birthday party. I invited some friends to the party.

In the morning my mother got up early and began to cook. My father helped her with cooking. They were so busy that they had no time io talk with me.

When all my friends arrived, my mother brought delicious food and a big birthday cake. My father gave me new clothes and some books as presents. I was moved to tears. My friends sang birthday songs for me and gave me some presents. I had a wonderful birthday.

[初一英语作文 My Happiest Day

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篇1:初一英语作文MikesTestPaper

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根据所给的四幅图画,以“Mikes Test Paper”为题,按顺序写一篇不少于80字的短文。内容必须符合题意。

迈克英语学得不好。昨天,参加了英语考试。他又没考及格。他不敢告诉他妈妈他得了低分。在他回家的路上,天下起了大雨。于是他有了个主意。为什么不把卷子当伞用呢?他就把卷子顶在头上开始往家跑。当他到家时,卷子全湿了,几乎被雨淋成了碎片。当他妈妈问他分数时,迈克尴尬地笑了笑,把试卷递给妈妈看。

Mike is bad at English. Yesterday, he had an English test. He failed again. He dared not tell his mother the low marks. On his way home, it rained heavily. So he got a good idea. Why not take the paper as an umbrella? He just put the paper on his head and began to run home. When he arrived home, the paper was all wet and almost torn to pieces by the rain. When his mother asked about the marks, Mike showed the paper to his mother with an embarrassed smile.

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篇2:初一下册英语作文大全

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im a student now and i study in no.2 middle school. i like study. i study

every day . i think its very interesting. in the future. i want to be a

reporter. i think its an exciting job. i like talking to people. i like going

to many different places. i like meeting lots of interesting people. but

sometimes its a little dangerous. i like exciting work.

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篇3:我的假期初一英语Myholiday

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National Day is coming.I am going to Beijing with my mother and father.I want to do something interesting. I am going to the Great Wall.Well I  am also going to Tiananmen Square. After that I am visiting to the Palace Museum.Its a good vacation. I cant wait.

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篇4:初一关于环境的英语作文最新

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Last weekend, my family and I went to a beautiful xixi wetland.

Although there is beautiful scenery let us ecstasy, but we also saw a shocking scene.

That day, I took familys hand off the small wave rolled ship. I carefully step, on the wave rolled the ship, and also rickety at the beginning, but after sit tight, boat slowly calm down, rocking boat rowing OARS, calm water suddenly rolled up ripples. But the ship opened to open water, water quality is very bad, I saw the water no longer sparkling, but cloudy oil floating on the surface, packing box and plastic and other trash littering, originally clear water becomes cloudy. So muddy water at this moment, I think that must be a box of oil flow into the water, so will only be so dirty!

On the way back, I said to himself: "if everyone care for the environment, protecting the rivers, that every environment clean and beautiful, every river bottom!"

Lets do it together five water to rule the propagandist and executor, let us take good care of the environment, protect our home together.

上个周末,我和我的家人一同前往美丽的西溪湿地游玩。

虽然那里的优美风景让我们入迷,但是我们也看到了令人震惊的一幕。

那天,我拉着家人的手走了那小巧的摇撸船。我小心翼翼地迈出一步,踏上了摇撸船,一开始还摇摇晃晃的,但坐稳后,船便慢慢地平静下来,摇船者划着桨,平静的水面顿时卷起波纹。可是船一开到开阔的水面,水质则非常糟糕,只见水面不再波光粼粼,而是浑浊的油污漂浮在水面,包装盒和塑料袋等其他垃圾随地可见,原本清澈的水变得浑浊不堪。这时的我想,水这么浑,一定是包装盒的油污流进了水中,所以才会这么脏吧!

在回去的路上,我自言自语地说:“如果所有人都爱护环境,保护河流,那每一处环境都会干净、美丽,每一条河流都会清澈见底!"

让我们一起做五水共治的宣传者和执行者,让我们一起爱护环境,共同守护我们的家园。

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篇5:西游记读后感500字初一作文

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《西游记》是我国四大古典名著之一,它是我最喜欢的一本书。

这本书主要讲了唐僧师徒四人坚持不懈,团结一致,经过九九八十一难,终于取得真经的故事。

在这本书中我最喜欢的人物是孙悟空,他嫉恶如仇,不畏艰险,持之以恒,书中有一个故事是《三借芭蕉扇》,讲得是唐僧师徒四人在路经火焰山时因天气炎热,得知芭蕉扇可以熄灭火焰山的火焰,于是孙悟空就去问铁扇公主去借芭蕉扇,铁扇公主却怎么也不借给他,但他并没有放弃,而是一次又一次地去借芭蕉扇,经过他的努力,他终于拿到了芭蕉扇。孙悟空坚持不懈,跟着唐僧经过九九八十一难,遇到种种困难,但他却从来没有抱怨过。在生活中总会遇到种种困难,而有人却不能像孙悟空一样坚持到底,我也和他一样,拥有着坚持不懈的精神。

记得那是一个夏天,爸爸带着我们去爬山。我站在山脚望着山顶,自信极了,飞奔向山顶。可没过多久,我的脚像被灌了铅似得迈不开步伐。3分钟过去了,我彻底没力气了,我准备放弃。就在这时,我的脑子里浮现出了孙悟空,我想:孙悟空与他师父遇到了那么多的灾难、困境都没有放弃,而我就因为这么一点点困难就要退缩。不,我要和孙悟空他们一样坚持不懈,勇往直前!凭着这个信念,我终于爬上了山顶。

《西游记》这本书告诉我们在遇到时,我们不能放弃,要用自己的力量去完成。在生活中,我们也要向他们一样坚持不懈,勇往直前,而不是轻言放弃,如果这样还有什么事做不成呢?

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篇6:初一游记作文600字:游赤城山

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一个秋天的早晨,我们在班主任王老师的带领下,怀着无 比兴奋的心情去爬赤城

“好高啊!”一到赤城山,有的同学惊叫起来。因为从学 校到赤城山,我们已经步行了四公里,一些同学早已累得气喘吁 吁了,再加上要爬到山顶,有的同学害怕了。

”出发!”王老师下了“命令”,我们就马上往上爬。两 旁的树好像欢迎我们来接受“挑战”爬到半山腰,许多同学已经 上气不接下气。有的同学把手放在地上,像小狗一样往上爬;有 的同学为了节省力气,手扶栏杆,一步一步艰难地往上“走”; 还有的一屁股坐在石阶上,大口大口地喝饮料,嘴里还喊着:

“累死我啦!”而我这个小胖子呢,喘着粗气,落在了后面,有 时真不想走了。这是,曹帅同学喊:“是男人就应该默默得面队 一切困难!”王老师也鼓励我:“加油,坚持就是胜利。”我 想,我也是个小男孩,不能让别人瞧不起。我咬着牙,继续往上 爬。

终于到了山顶,有的同学手舞足蹈。我站在山峰看风景。

一阵凉风吹来,好爽!往上看,天格外得蓝;往下望,田野.房 子.始丰溪......匣一幅巨大的彩画铺展在眼前。我在书上看 到:“无限风光在顶峰”。这还是真的呀!

下山时,我本来还以为下山比上山省力呢!哪知道,每走 一步就像走在有钉子的地方,脚又痛又痒,我心里叫苦连天。

花了四多个小时,我们才回到了校园。这一次爬山后,我 虽然全身酸痛,浑身发软,但我进一步明白了一个道理:世上无 难事,只要肯登攀。

[初一游记作文600字:游赤城山

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篇7:初一英语新年作文

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The Spring Festival, every family, bursting with happiness decorated, our family is no exception.

On the thirty day of the year, I came to grandmas home with my mom and dad. Morning, the street is always a "crash" huge crowds of people, and the "bite" sound. I asked my sister strangely, "what are these people doing, sister?" My sister smiled, but did not speak, so I put all his strength into the crowd, there is a pair of men are dragon dance. The dragons aunt and uncle are dressed in white clothes and red pants, they catch the dragon, the Dragon stretching from Voldemort swinging, gongs and drums accompanied by the sound of the dragon. They are praying for peace for people through every street and lane. At this time, we followed the team to the river. They were around the big boat by the river, praying for prosperity. The end of the dragon, we listened to the distant sound of gongs and drums, gazed at the dim figure.

In the evening, our family sat on a stool, eating a reunion meal. After dinner, we stood on the balcony upstairs and looked at the downstairs fireworks. The first one is the flower basket. The flower basket is made up of six circular holes. The flower basket first sprayed sparks, then suddenly flew up to the sky and burst into many colorful sparks. So it sprayed six times. It seemed to be blessing for people. Sister feel good, could not wait to pick up the Butterfly King, the elder sister quickly ignited in their hands, "flutter" sound of fireworks, to a light butterfly, dancing in the sky, the last "bang", divided into many a spark in the sky slowly and gently. Float to the ground. I took a bowl, hold in the hand, "bang", "bang", ten guns, resounded through the night sky symbolizes our joy and happiness.

The sky was getting dark. Our family went to the room to watch the Spring Festival Gala, say and laugh, how happy the Spring Festival is!

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篇8:初一年级英语作文:My enthusiastic students

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Liu Kai is my classmate. He is a good student and always ready to help others.

One day on his way to school,he saw a little girl crossing the road. A car was coming towards her quickly and the girl was too frightened to move. The car nearly hit her. Just then LiuKai rushed up to her and caught her by the arm. The little girl was saved. She told him where she lived,and he took her home. When LiuKai hurried into the classroom,the teacher had already begun his lesson. He told the teacher why he was late. He was then praised for what he had done.

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篇9:暑假游记初一作文

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这天我们假日小队活动。我们和刘嘉骐他们两个假日小队一起去了西天目山游玩,听说那里是个好地方。

从杭州出发,开了一个小时的车,我们来到了西天目山脚。山很高,我们决定从山顶往下走,这样容易些。吃过午饭我们坐中巴车上山到山顶,一路上一段有雨,一段没雨,山上的雨可真奇怪。路上还有些坑洞,是因为前几天的“海葵”台风来时的大雨把路面上的一些泥土给冲了。到了山顶,我们几个男的走在前面,出发去寻找传说的大树王。我们走了一会儿,看见了一个小池塘,池塘里的水清澈见底,我们都下去玩水了,水很冰。我们在这玩了一下,就继续出发去找大树王。一路上,我,邵英杰,史一坤三个人带头,甩开了大部队。我们边跑边谈,山路崎岖不平,史一坤还把脚扭了一下,幸好没大碍。我们就继续往前走,一路上大树参天,景色很美。看见很多大树的树枝都长在东边,西边的却没有,很是奇观。我们很快找到了大树王,可惜大树王已经死了。我们等了一会,大部队终于来了。

往前走了一段路,我们又看见了还有新大树王,一去看,好高好高的!比老大树王还高!粗细就不大看得清楚了(因为是远看,没走近)。我们几个又跑前面,走了好长时间,来到一个休息点,我们刚好累了,也可以等大部队。突然,看见几个字:下山还要走1。5小时。大部队没来,不久我们又出发了,才走了45分钟就到山脚了,我们等了半天大部队才来。

我们大家走了近三个小时终于爬完这绚丽陡峭的天目山,在西天目山上流下了我们假日小队快乐的身影。

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篇10:有关交流英语初一

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Recently, I was so shocked by the news that a young boy died of violence

after his parents sent him to a private school. The slogan of the private school

was to help parents correct kids bad behaviors. A lot of parents choose to send

their kids here after they giving up educating their kids. The public blamed the

parents for not educating their children in the right way. There is no doubt

that the root of kids problems come from family. Many parents always force the

children to do what they want and ignore the kids feelings, so they will go

against the elders thoughts. Finally, the parents lose temper. The elder should

show respect to the kids. Communication can solve the problem. When the children

receive love and understanding from parents, they will be nice persons.

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篇11:艺术家的游记英语作文

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An artist went to a beautiful part of the country and stayed with a famer.

Every day he went out drawing from morning to evening when the sun went down, Every day he went out drawing from morning to evening when the sun went down. When it was time for him to leave, he wanted to pay the famer. But the famer said, no, I don’t want any money, but give me one of your pictures, what is money. In a week the money will all be spent, but the picture will still be here.

The artist was very pleased and thanked the famer for saying such kind things about his pictures.

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篇12:初一年级英语作文friendship

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When I was a child,Friendshipis a box of watercolors, graffiti with tender hands out the smiling faces of the innocent colorful, inadvertently wet the paste, oh, its ok to draw a better, more real. Childhood friendship is like a warm fire, are unscrupulous argue, is each other in anger pursed lips, plunder the parcel together sweet popcorn... Friendship is a big candied fruit, whenever taste, are gay. Thats childhood friendship, is one of the crown, naive for jewelry, do tassel romance - so beautiful so pure. This is only the blue sky belongs to the childhood friendship, friendship forever.

Grow up, friendship is a piece of transparent glass, light the lonely heart failure. Broken, is hard to together, can only hide in a corner crying silently, quietly wake up... Where fall where it on their own strong to climb up, thats our footprints of growing up.

小时候,友谊是一盒水彩笔,用稚嫩的手涂鸦出一张张五彩缤纷天真无邪的笑脸,一不小心湿了糊了,哦,没关系再画一张更好更真切的。儿时的友谊像一团热烈的火,是肆无忌惮的争辩,是互相赌气撅起的嘴,是共同哄抢的那一大包甜甜的爆米花……友谊是个大大的蜜饯,无论何时尝起,都是美滋滋的。那是童年时的友谊,是一项皇冠,天真为珠宝,烂漫做流苏——那么美丽那么纯真。这是只属于童年那片蔚蓝色天空的友谊——友谊地久天长。

长大了,友谊是一块透明的玻璃,照亮着失败落寞的心。打破了,就很难再拼凑起来,只能躲在一个角落默默地哭泣,默默地醒悟……在哪里跌倒的就在哪里靠自己坚强地爬起来,那是我们成长的足迹。

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篇13:初一英语作文教学

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初一英语作文如何教好呢,老师们有何看法?下面一起去看看小编整理的初一英语作文教学方法吧!

写作是书面表达和传递信息的重要途径,培养学生初步的写作的能力,是初中英语教学的目的之一。但是长期以来,中学英语写作教学一直徘徊于不理想的状态,尤其是在农村中学来讲更是不堪入目。平素测验中,不少学生只能写出寥寥数语,而且文章中拼写错误和其他语病随处可见,学生英语作文的质量不尽如人意。即使在有些学校所谓的实验班级效果也不是怎么理想。尽管在平素的教学评价环节中,我们花费大量的时间用于批改学生的作文,但是学生一次又一次的反馈给我们的并不是我们预期所料的,甚至是差之千里。如何解决这一难题,成为现阶段我们英语教学工作者面前的“拦路虎”。本文就这一问题作一些粗浅分析,力求找出了中学英语写作教学的瓶颈所在,结合教学实践,探索性的作一些关于中学英语写作教学的交流——“读、改、写”的实践。

七年的初中英语教学下来,留给我无穷的思考与困惑:不管在什么样的测试中,只要谈到英语写作,很多学生都感到头痛?即使有部分学生能动笔写写,其中的语法错误也是随处可见,写作要点不明确,语句不通顺,语言、词汇档次低,语言不地道或是汉语式的英语写作,让人看后很是费解。即使给材料作文学生也感到无从下手,在他们看来:翻译又是个问题,或是上面所说的汉语式的直接翻译出来。导致这些问题的缘由何在?是平时的教学没有到位,存在写作教学走过场?重视不够?还是学生根本就不是学英语的那块料?困惑,苦思、冥想!多方寻缘由。究其原因,我认为英语写作教学效果不理想主要问题出在平素的教学环节上。长期以来,我们很多英语教学者都重复着同一种模式:教师布置写作内容——学生完成作文——教师批阅作文——作文发还给学生。缺乏对学生的有效地针对性的指导,像那种简单而粗暴的评价方式,从根本上起不到什么作用。久而久之,还会使学生厌恶英语作文写作,甚至产生“写作恐惧症”,进而影响整个英语学习及考试效果!现我就英语写作教学的几点感悟与大家一起共勉。

一、读中不忘写,在阅读中适时穿插写作教学。

“读中教”指的是写作与阅读联系挂钩。因为单靠指导学生掌握写作要领进行写作,在实际的教学工作中是完全不够的,而当我们教学一篇篇阅读理解文章,才正是学生们学习写作的好时机,阅读理解也是我们教学写作的最有效武器,毕竟好文章是写作最好的老师和范例,更是我们教写作的法宝。因此,在每次学习和欣赏一篇阅读理解文章的时候,尤其是文中含有经典语句时,我都给学生设定四个目标:第一,理解作者写作的用意,即作者在文章中阐明了什么观点和段落的安排及其如何阐述的。第二,弄清作者运用了什么样的写作方法。比如是说明、记叙还是论证,包括文章运用的时态、语态以及其他种种语法手段。第三,学习作者的一些用词来扩大词汇量,积累词汇,同时让学生学习短语的搭配并收集词汇和短语。第四,收集作者在文章中写出的佳句、妙句、绝句。为今后的写作奠定基础。几年的教学实践证明了这样的教学有其独具的特色与效果

因此,我认为:写作教学完全应该,而且必须与阅读理解相结合才能真正让学生领悟和掌握写作方法与写作技巧的要领,没有阅读哪里来的模仿和借鉴?所以“读中教”是我的第一步,之后,在感性的基础上,我再给学生讲解具体的写作方法,这一点是我接下来要做的第二步“写中教”。

二、写作中不失恰如其分的指导,适时地开展“写中教”。

所谓“写中教”,就是在学生学作时给予写作方法的指导,通常我从三个方面入手:首先,概括初级写作的文体特点。书面表达在文体上以记叙文、应用文(书信、日记、通知、说明书等)的形式为多见。然后,概括其形式特点。近年来,初级写作题型在形式上以看图说话和根据中英文提出写作两种类型出现频率最高,要求能根据图画所提供的情景和英汉提出的词语,建立联想,创造性地运用所学过的词汇和语法知识来进行表达,比如根据一副或多幅图画及提示语,写出语法正确的六至八句话,或者一篇字数在60-100字的短文,充分地运用自己所学的知识,完整、准确地表达所需求的意思,考查的重点是在领会图意和提示语的前提下能简单创造语言的能力。最后是概括题材特点。在题材上,初级英文写作的表达题所给的大部分内容是比较贴近孩子们生活的人物和事件,诸如饮食、运动、爱好、环境、交友、旅行、娱乐等等,考查的是生活知识和语言知识学与用综合能力。

根据以上文体、形式、题材特点,我要求学生在看图写话时,掌握好以下一个要领:

1、看图说话书面表达题要领

首先,认真审题,弄清画意,把握中心。一般来说,写作题所提供的几幅图画虽然是整个故事情节中的一个或数个重要的情景片段,但每幅图的主体内容一定是清清楚楚、脉络分明的,这一点务必要准确把握,只有具体、透彻的理解画意,方能抓住抓准表达的重点。紧扣暗示内容,分析表达重点,看图题若也有语言提示,那么首先要细审提示材料。若是英文提示语,那就更加重要了,因为提示词语不但能有助于理解画意,而且告知如何围绕这些重点词语组织材料,然后表达出图画内容。但应注意,无论哪种形式的看图写话均不会给出所有的词语,因此,必须紧扣画面暗示的内容,再结合提示语的补充,酌情填补一些关键词语。

其次,运用正确的表达方式和准确的写作方法。用正确的表达方式准确地写出图画所表现的内容,形成一句或一段切合画意又无语法错误的句子是关键。具体应注意以下几点:

(1)确定基本时态。动词是做谓语还是做非谓语?是否需要用第三人称单数?这些必须考虑清楚再动笔。要抓住提示语中提供的或自己设置的时间状语,或抓住第一画图反映出来的故事背景。

(2)注意词语的变化。如该用形容词还是副词?名词是否可数?前面是否需用冠词?词尾是否丢失s或者其他变化形式?特指的定冠词the是否要用或不用?这些在平时演练时,都需要“斤斤计较”,养成习惯。

(3)句型的选择。尽量用自己所学过的句型表达,能用简单句尽量用简单句。

(4)书写规范、准确。

(5)反复检查。要逐字逐句检查词语搭配和句子的结构,是主系表还是主谓宾,注意时态是否完整等等。

2、写中英文提示作文的提纲要领

在做没有图画只有中英文提示语的书面表达题时,对学生要求更高,写作的难度也更大了。这种题型对八年级(下)和九年级学生较多用。我指导学生运用以下六条要领:

(1)、审清题意。反复仔细阅读、推敲提示,分析出文章的重点,弄清文章的格式,确定写什么内容,以免离题;

(2)、概括简要的中文提示中的部分要点,此时切记不可逐句翻译,题前所给的英文提示词语最好全部用上,采用扩写的方式,根据所给材料进行适当的恰如其分的扩写,可以由词到句,再有句到段,最后到篇的“点及面”的写法。

(3)、将提示中的有关信息融入自己的语句中,尽力做到语言规范、准确,文字通顺。

(4)、在抓住重点,不偏离主题的前提下,合理想象,拓展思路;

(5)、用好介词和连词,使文章简练、纹理通顺,尽量使用自己有把握的句式来表达,避免使用不熟练的词、短语和句型;

(6)、最后,正确把握文中的时态和语态,仔细揣摩、合理灵活变化时态和语态。

三、在写作评价中适时地给与指导,积极开展“改中教”。

我的最后一步是走“错误路线”,即在批改学生习作中利用学生的“错误资源”进行写作教学。在批改学生的习作时,我把其中的错字、别字以及大量的令人啼笑皆非的病句收集起来,这些东西常常是学生们的通病,虽说使我苦恼,但经验告诉我,其实这也是一种资源,颇有利用价值,而且用好了还是一剂治病句的“良药”呢!与此同时,我们也要善于发现学生的优点,适时不忘鼓励教学的开展,从而激发学生的写作兴趣。对于写得有水平、有档次的习作可以范读,从而进一步的调动学生的写作热情。

对于大多数学生容易犯的错误,我把一些比较典型的病句展示在黑板上,然后让学生互相订正。许多时候学生在“欣赏”他们自己的劣作时都忍不住哄堂大笑,但笑过之后,错误也在轻松愉快的气氛中改正了,这样既活跃了写作课堂的气氛,又达到了让学生纠正错误的效果。除此之外,我让每个学生准备一个纠错本,将他们平时在练习、造句和作文中出现的病句摘录在册并认真纠正,以避免重复出错,使文章中的病句逐渐减少。

以下是我在学生习作中遇到的典型案例,原文如下:

Nowadaays,the environment gets more and more bad.because of the pollution.Although the  government take any measures  to carry  it , it isnt working well  in it.

There is only one earth.I think we should do something useful we can to protect the environment.sach as we can use both sides of each piece of paper and use cotton handkerchiefs,not the paper ones to protect soil .if we go to a short distance.we can walk or by bike.we can also plant more trees and grass to protect air.

If  we  all do that,we will have healthy and  happy.

从整体看,本文错误较多,汉语思维较严重.但总的来讲这篇作文的思路还是比较清晰的,

于是我和学生一道对该文进行了分析:

1、本文首先缺一个主题,从正文中我们不难看出本文是要求写作如何保护环境问题,作者应根据题目要求拟定题目,再进行写作!譬如:我们可以拟定为:HOW  TO  SAVE  OUR  MOTHER等。

2、该文的第一句就出现拉严重的语法错误,The environment gets more and more bad.变得越来越糟糕,应该是“worse  and  worse".在提出问题时,最好创设一定的语言情景,逐步导入,俗话说得好“好的开始就是成功了一半”。以本文为例,我们完全可以以这样导入:With  the  development of  economy  ,more and more factories have built .But there is more and more pollution coming.

3、该文的第二句中的take any measures to carry  it  。意思没有表达清楚,让人看了费解,其实作者可能是想说政府采取一些措施去阻止污染。而采取一些措施去制止污染应为:take  some  measures  to  keep pollution.然而效果不好应为:it  doesnt  work  well.

4、在第二自然段中有单词拼写错误及名词单复数误用的现象,比如“sach as ”应为"such as".

5、表意不清。"not the paper ones to protect soil"和we can also plant more trees and grass to protect air.都存在表意不清的现象。其应该表达为:第一句最好这样表达:not to use paper or use less paper to protect  trees and  because the trees  can  keep the earth from washing.第二句改写为we  can also plant more trees and grass to keep the air clean and fresh.

5、标点符号用得不够恰当,如If we go to a short distance.we can walk or by bike.在这里我们最好这样用要好一些:If we go to a short distance,we can walk or by bike.

6、在最后一段发起倡议时,最好使用感叹句型或祈使句型这样会显得更有力!文章会显得更深入.如;my dear friends, lets get together to protect "The Blue Sky"!等。

除了上述“九字法”英文写作教学模式,我们还应重视做足“平时功夫”以促进学生写作。所谓平时功夫,是指背诵名篇佳作;收集各种话题,布置学生在假期或周末练笔,提倡“一周一文";传阅、张贴、展览学生优秀习作以资鼓励等。鼓励学生善于从平素的练习中总结经验、吸取教训,只要持之以恒,我们完全可以让越来越多的学生逐渐学会用第二语言来表达自己的思想,而且可以像用母语一样轻松自如。

结束语

路漫漫其修远兮。英语写作教学的探究征程远而富于变化,需要各位同仁在实际工作中不断探索。在英语写作教学中如何教学及讲评需要继续探索。但有一点鄙人是这样认为的:宽松、愉悦、不断获得鼓励的环境中,学生的思维才会变得活跃。所以教师要及时抓住学生稍纵即逝的新奇、独特的想法,给予赞扬,使学生的创造性思维得以发展。多给学生创造性思维活动的机会,鼓励学生勇于尝试,并在失败面前不气馁。在平素的写作教学实践中,教师应最大限度地创设和实施多种鼓励机制,充分调动全体学生动笔写作的积极性,这样才能促进学生的写作能力更快更好地实现,从而从整体上提高学生的英语语言应用能力。

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篇14:初一年级英语作文:Spring Festival

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Far and away the most important holiday in China is Spring Festival, also known as the Chinese New Year. To the Chinese people it is as important as Christmas to people in the West. the dates for this annual celebration are determined by the lunar calendar rather than the GREgorian calendar, so the timing of the holiday varies from late January to early February.

To the ordinary Chinese, the festival actually begins on the eve of the lunar New Years Day and ends on the fifth day of the first month of the lunar calendar. But the 15th of the first month, which normally is called the Lantern Festival, means the official end of the Spring Festival in many parts of the country.

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篇15:初一学生英语日记

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What Am I Going to Do in the Summer Holiday

The new summer holiday is coming. As we know, summer is a beautiful season. During the coming summer holiday, I am going to study English. Then I am going to borrow some science books from

the library and discuss problems with my classmates, I’ll help my parents do some housework in my house, and I’ll water the flowers and trees our garden. I am going to play basketball, volleyball and

badminton with my neighbours in the afternoon. At the same time, if my father has time, he’ll teach me to swim. I’ll have fun.

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篇16:2024初一英语作文:生活中的另一面

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If I had my life to live over...I would have talked less and listened more.

I would have invited friends over to dinner even if the carpet was strained and the sofa faded.

I would have taken the time to listen to my grandfather ramble about his youth.

I would never have insisted the car windows be rolled up onasummer day because my hair had just been teased and sprayed.

I would have burned the pink candle sculpted like a rose before it melted in storage.

I would have sat on the lawn with my children and not worried about grass stains.

I would have cried and laughed less while watching television-and more while watching life.

I would have gone to bed when I was sick instead of pretendingtheearth would go into a holding patter if I were not there fortheday.

I would never have bought anything just because it was practical,would not show soil or was guaranteed to last a lifetime.

There would have been more I love yous ... more Im sorrys...but mostly, given another shots at life, I would seize every minute... look at it and really see it...live it...and never give it back.

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篇17:初一英语作文介绍好朋友

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Today’s story is about Mary ,a girl from the US.She’s now studying in China,Beijing.Tomorrow is the Spring Festival. Now ,Mary is staying in China.One years ago,last Spring Festival ,Mary was 11 years old, very little girl. Now, she’s a 12- year- old- girl.Just 1 year,she learns many thing in China.Gradually,she loves China.

Now, she is living in her aunt home.At 9:00 a.m. in Beijing ,Mary make a phone call to her family. When they talk on the phone ,they are so happy .We a

ll know Mary’s mother misses Mary long time. Mary misses her family long time,too. And she was happy to live in China.But talking with family is more important than everything. What a warm story!

From this story, we know noting is important than family. No place like home!

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篇18:初一英语月考反思作文

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第一次七年级英语月考试卷充分体现了新课改的精神,切实有效地考察了所学知识内容。下面对试卷试题进行具体分析:

一、试卷题型情况

1、注重对基础知识、基本技能的考察,题型新颖、覆盖面大,涉及到了所学的全部内容,促进学生有效学习。

2、注重从实际中选取素材,考察了学生的分析和处理问题能力。

3、试卷对学生探究能力是一个重点考察,增强了学生的探究分析能力。

二、试卷结构分析

试卷充分体现了新课标课改精神,注重了对学生基础知识和综合能力的考察,因此对学生的细心程度要求很高。

1、听力部分:试题难度不大,因此学生在该部分的得分率较高,但是学生的两极分化严重,高分很高,甚至满分,而低分则太低。

2、完形填空和阅读理解:难度适中,但是得分率一般,主要原因是学生理解文章不透彻,阅读能力差造成的。

3、词语运用:此题是各大题中得分最低的一个题,主要原因是学生对词的用法掌握不好,一些固定词组记不清。

4、书面表达:该题对于学生来说是比较容易的一题,它是对学生整体知识的一个考察,但两极分化最为严重。

三、学生分析

存在问题:

1、优等生对基础知识掌握较好,但是还有一部分学生对语言的运用能力较差,对比较碎的知识点没有能够很好地掌握。

2、中等生的基础知识掌握不够牢固,并且做题比较粗心。

四、具体改进措施

1、钻研新教材,夯实英语基础。练习中很多学生“一看就会,一做就错”,这种现象比较普遍,失误原因是对于常见用语掌握的熟练程度还不够。其根本原因就在于基础不牢,只有扎扎实实从基础做起,才能最终达到“一看就会,一做就对”。

2、加强英语课外阅读。英语知识的获得与能力的提高是在不断的听、说、读、写的训练过程中逐步形成的,而教材和课堂所能提供的训练还是比较有限的,因此,要加强理解语篇的能力训练,增强英语语感。

3、规范训练,改进学习方法。要善于分析学生,找出学生的薄弱环节,合理安排好教材知识梳理、专项训练和应试技巧指导。

在今后的教学中应注意开阔学生视野,多渠道、大容量地给学生提供具有时代感的英语信息,加强语言运用能力的培养,少讲解,多给学生实际运用语言的机会,在用中学英语。

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篇19:初一英语新年作文

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New year, New Year! I have long been looking forward to the new year. New years old people come to us with joy, and our faces have opened flowers.

For the new year, everyone took out the already prepared fireworks, rushed out to the door, and ignited the lead. Ah, how beautiful! The sky suddenly opened a brilliant flower, the sky was dyed extraordinarily dazzling. Streets and lanes have already become the world of children.

After the new year, I went to my grandparents home early and sent a good word: "wish you, happy Spring Festival!" The blessing suddenly >warm you and me. At night I also send a text message to my teacher, which says: I wish you good health and all the best. Your student: Lu Yao. And write back to the teacher: Thank you, I wish you a happy new year, learning progress! When I read the mind tianzizi.

In the new year, I got one thousand yuan more in my wallet. I really want to spend one hundred yuan on my wallet, but I think of grandma again, "Daddy is not easy to earn money, and money must be spent in the most needed place." I hold back.

I have been a year old again. I grew up, increased weight, increased a lot of knowledge, and should be more knowledge-based.

Ah, new year old man, thank you for this joy. In this year, I will certainly make you happy. Believe me! Come on for me!

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篇20:新初一的英语自我介绍

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My name is XXX.And Im 13 years old.My hobbies are singing,dancing and

drawing pictures.And Im a sanguine person.My favourite stars are Shu Chang and JJ Lam.I like playing computer game and reading classic

in the rest.Im studying at Xiao Shi Zhong Xin school.

My name is Liu yang. I`m a thirteen-year-old boy. I`m a student of Class Four, Grade Seven in the No.3 middle school from Luo yang . My study is well. I`m tall and strong.

I`m a diligent boy. I study hard at all my lessons. My dream is to be a knowledgeable man. I know it`s very hard. The way is very long. But I will try my best to do it well. And I belive myself. I have many hobies. They are reading, running, swimming, playing, basketball, climbing and playing table tennis. Everyday I all need some time to reading. On Saturdays I play basketball or play table tennis with my friends.

In my free time, sometimes I help my mother with housework or do what I want to do. I have a colorful life!

[新初一英语自我介绍

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