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400中考英语阅卷老师揭秘满分作文是如何炼成的
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+ 加入清单中考英语作文难不难？其实不难，大部分同学都能得到12分以上，13、14分也是平常，但是要想得到15分甚至以上，就难上加难了。到底什么样的作文能得到16分以上？下面是经过和中考命题组和阅卷组老师的交流，对中考英语作文评分标准做出了更深的理解。
一、中考英语写作的概述
你对于在中考英语写作中拿高分有把握吗？实际考试中，许多学生却常常有“无话可说”的感觉。那要如何我们才能克服这种无话的状态，取得高分呢？
归根到底这是一个英语基本功——单词、短语和句型的问题。
英语作文的前提条件是掌握了一定量的词汇、语法及体裁、题材等方面的知识。学生如果想要在写作方面有本质上的提升，必须进行多次的写作练习。因此，必须合理地设置训练步骤，遵循从初级到高级，从简单到复杂的原则去练习，经过一段写作实践之后，写作水平一定会有大幅度的提高。
中考英语作文对考生的要求有四点：1、内容要完整。2、语句流畅。3、没有语法错误。4、书写规范。
二、中考英语写作的评分标准
1、老师拿到的标准
写作水平的高低和文章的好坏，分数是最直接的评分标准，也是考生们最关心的。但是多少考生真正透彻知道中考英语写作的评分标准？什么样的文章才是阅卷老师眼中的好文章？
评分标准：
(1)整篇作文满分20分，其中内容8分，语言8分，结构4分。
(2)内容贴切，句子流畅，用语准确，加整体印象分1分。
(3)不满60个词，少1——5个词扣0.5分，6——10个词扣1分。
(4)所有给出问题涉及的三项内容，每少一项扣3分。
(5)每个拼写，大小写，标点符号等错误扣0.5分；同一的拼写错误不重复扣分，扣分总和不超过2分。
(6)语法错误每项扣1分，同一错误不重复扣分，扣分总和不超过2分。
2、老师想看到的标准
语言(8分)：
词——固定搭配、高频重点词汇；
句——复杂句(各种从句)、特殊句型、正确的句子!
内容(8分)：(总、分)论点、论据支持句；简洁、切合主题的记叙内容。
结构(4分)：
语言结构——句子重点突出、内容清晰；
内容结构——论点、论据以及记叙之间的逻辑关系；
句数控制——对于相对内容的句数掌握；
亮点、出彩点——排比、拟人、谚语、成语、押韵等。
三、扣分
内容方面：要点缺失，可酌情扣分。比如中考作文“Iwanttodosomethingformyschool”，若没有写一件具体的事情，是要扣3分以上的；若写的事情太过于虚幻，没有实际内容，也会扣1-2分。
字数：少于60字的作文要酌情扣分。
中考英语作文要求60字以上，标点符号不算，少了就要扣分。
但是60字的作文能不能得高分？从我们拿到的实例作文来看，16分以上的作文，没有少于75字的，甚至少于80字的也少之又少。
当然，也极少有超过100字的，因为中考试卷的短线格一共80个，在格子下面大约还有2行的空间，可以加20字左右，再多阅卷人就很难看清了，也会影响卷面的美观。
所以，同学们如果想让作文得到高分，最好是让字数在75-100字之间。
语法和拼写错误：每个扣0.5，重复错误不计；
标点错误：每4个扣0.5。
四、加分
作文的组织结构分。就是根据学生使用复杂句型、单词和谚语、俗语的情况来加分。只要文章中有1个亮点，基本就可以争取到1分(3分的文采分是很难全部拿到的)。而这1分的亮点，是可以提前准备的。
“万金油”式的复杂句型，例如强调句型、only相关的倒装句等，只要同学们多操练几次，几乎是一定能用到作文当中，从而为自己争取到这1分。
其次就是卷面分。很多家长和同学，尤其是部分书法并不是十分整洁的同学，都会关心是否真的有“卷面分”的存在。虽然在阅卷标准里面并没有卷面分这一项，但是这个分数却真切地反映在了同学们的分数里面。
据阅卷老师的经验，在阅卷的时候并不是按这3个部分逐项打分的，而是在第一遍读完全文之后，心里已经形成了一个“印象分”，然后再细读第二、三遍，把印象分分配到各个打分部分。
因此，这个“印象分”就非常重要，而同学们的书法，也正是在这个环节，影响到了自己的分数。所以初三的考生，如果书法不好，一定要注意。
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Summer is the great season for all sports in the open air. It is the season for baseball which is often called the national sport because of its popularity. I usually watch television and read the newspaper reports about the baseball results of the newspaper reports about the baseball results of the little leagues.
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夏天是户外运动最好的季节。这是个打棒球季节，通常被国家体育称为受欢迎程度的季节。我通常看电视和读有关棒球比赛结果的报纸报道。
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2 Summer Camp 夏令营
July 20,20xx
I went to summer camp on vacation. On the first day, we went to a beautiful beach. It was a sunny and hot day, so we went swimming. The water was warm and we had great fun. Then the next day, we went to the mountains. There were many trees and I really enjoyed them. On the last day, we had a great party. We sang and danced happily. We didn’t want to leave the friends and the teachers. I hope I can go to summer camp again next year.
我去夏令营度假。第一天，我们去了美丽的海滩。这是一个阳光和炎热的一天，所以我们去游泳。水是温暖的，我们玩得很开心。然后第二天，我们去了山区。有许多树木，我非常喜欢他们。在最后一天，我们有一个盛大的派对。我们高兴地载歌载舞。我们不想离开朋友和老师。我希望明年我可以再次去夏令营。
3 Unforgettable summer vacation 难忘的暑假
I think this summer over a very meaningful day,in addition to the study of computers outside,also tried a new aerobic exercise -YOGA,I love this sport, so I learned an optimistic face life,but also to correct my bad shape,for my future learning and life will be very helpful,I love YOGA,with the hope more people will join me to try this new movement.
今年暑假过得非常有意义
我觉得今年暑假过的非常有意义，每天除了学习计算机以外还尝试了新的有氧运动-YOGA，我非常热爱这项运动，它让我学会了乐观的面对生活，还纠正了我的不良体形，对我今后的学习及生活都有很大的帮助，我爱YOGA，希望有更多的人和我一起尝试这项新的运动。初中英语作文难忘的暑假
4 visitng 参观
Ladies and gentlemen,
Welcome to Heyuan, now let me introduce our city — Heyuan to you. Heyuan is a city with a long history. It is in the northeast of Guangdong and 198 kilometres away from Guangzhou. It has a population of 3,240,000.
There are many places of interest in Heyuan, such as Sujiawei Wanlu Lake and so on. Wanlu Lake is a beautiful place. The water is clean and not polluted. There are all kinds of fish in it. You can go boating, go fishing and have a picnic there. It is really a good place to spend your holiday. Besides, you can go and visit Heyuan Museum. There you can see a lot of dinosaur egg fossils.
I hope you can enjoy yourselves in Heyuan.
Thank you.
女士们,先生们,
欢迎来到河源市,现在让我向你介绍我们的城市——河源市。河源市是一个有着悠久历史的城市。在广东的东北部,离广州198公里。它有3240000人口。
在河源市有许多名胜,如Sujiawei，万绿湖等等。万绿湖是一个美丽的地方。水是干净的,没有污染。有各种各样的鱼。你可以去划船,钓鱼,野餐。这真的是一个好地方可以度过你的假期。此外,你可以去参观河源市博物馆。在那里你可以看到很多恐龙蛋化石。
我希望你能在河源市玩得愉快。
谢谢你们！
5 My Summer Vacation 我的暑假
This is my summer vacation. I intend to finish the operation. Then, take a look at Chinas famous novel. Look at some day. Of course, also want to play with the computer, watch TV. Early every morning to get up and running to run, do other sports. But it is conducive to our body! But one thing should not be forgotten. must help parents do the housework! My holiday arrangements like? something good? give suggestions?
这就是我的暑假。我打算完成作业。然后，看中国的著名小说。看书看一些日子。当然，也要玩电脑，看电视。每天早上早早起床跑步，做其他运动。这有利于我们的身体！但有一件事不应该被忘记。必须帮助父母做家务！我的假期安排呢？好的东西？给点建议？
6 I enjoy the rain 我喜欢下雨
That was a morning in the early of June. I took a bus to my school in the suburb which was surrounded by rice paddies and ponds. The sky was gray with the gloomy clouds congregating gradually along the far eastern horizon. "There must be a heavy rain soon." I spoke to myself.
When I hurried into the classroom, the sky, gray before, was shrouded now by black clouds, darken to twilight, I felt quite stuffy, while it was quite calm, without wind. I saw the leaves of trees and grass static, which seem to await something tohappen. Several minutes later, I saw the lightening split the clouds and heard the thunders following. Suddenly, the curtain of rain fell and the wind blew. soon the grass flattened under the wind and the rain. With the rain forming like a fog, the sky became bright. I took several deep breathes. I felt comfortable.
The heavy rain lasted three hours and stopped when the class was over. The air was so fresh and the sky was so clear. I felt like a new man myself.
那是6月初的一天早上，我乘汽车去郊区的学校上课，学校四周是稻田和鱼塘。天空是灰色的，在遥远的东方地平线上有阴云在慢慢汇聚。我心想：“要下大雨了。”
当我匆忙走进教室时，原本灰色的天空已被黑云笼罩，像黄昏。我感到气闷，而周围一切都很静，没有任何声音，没有风。我看到树叶和草一动不动，像等着什么事情发生。几分钟之后，我看到闪电撕开云层，听到随之而来的雷声。突然，大雨倾盆，风也起了。草在风雨中倒伏。随着雨下成了雾状，天空开始放亮，我深吸了几口气，舒服多了。
大雨下了三个小时，下课的时间停了，空气那么新鲜，天气那么晴朗，我感觉像换了一个人似的。
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妈妈你给了我生命，从婴儿到老人，妈妈，你不得不更是舞会是E的一辈子的爱，现在我知道有没有其他的
爱情就像一个母亲。爱她的孩子，我知道，爱是如此完整的总有一天要离开。必须说再见，再见伤心的话，我＇将永远听到。再见最后一次我会抱着你靠近，总有一天你＇会说那句话，而我将会哭泣，它＇将打破我的心听到你说再见。
妈妈你给我爱，妈妈，所有我所需要的是保证你爱我，因为我知道有没有其他的爱，像一个母亲，你给的爱会永远活，你＇将总是有每次我跌倒，你拿我的弱点，你让我坚强，和我将永远爱你直到永远是。，当你需要我，我＇会永远在那里等你，我＇会有穿过寂寞的日子。你的翅膀，我的向导
破碎的飞行，和我的庇护通过肆虐的风暴，我会爱你直到永远。
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mr. chang is the kindest teacher that i have ever had.
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*二、nothing is + -er than to + v ;nothing is + more + 形容词 + than to + v
例句：nothing is more important than to receive education.
没有比接受教育更重要的事。
*三、…cannot emphasize the importance of …too much. (再怎么强调……的重要性也不为过。)例句：we cannot emphasize the importance of protecting our eyes too much.
我们再怎么强调保护眼睛的重要性也不为过。
*四、there is no denying that + s + v ...(不可否认的……) 例句：there is no denying that the qualities of our living have gone from bad to worse.
不可否认的，我们的生活品质已经每况愈下。
*五、it is universally acknowledged that + 句子…… (全世界都知道……)例句：it is universally acknowledged that trees are indispensable to us.
全世界都知道树木对我们是不可或缺的。
*六、there is no doubt that + 句子……(毫无疑问的……)
例句：there is no doubt that our educational system leaves something to be desired.
毫无疑问的我们的教育制度令人不满意。
七、an advantage of …is that + 句子 (……的优点是……)
例句：an advantage of using the solar energy is that it wont create (produce) any pollution.
使用太阳能的优点是它不会制造任何污染。
八、the reason why + 句子…… is that + 句子 (……的原因是……)
例句：the reason why we have to grow trees is that they can provide us with fresh air. 我们必须种树的原因是它们能供应我们新鲜的空气。
*九、so + 形容词 + be + 主词 + that + 句子…… (如此……以致于……) 例句：so precious is time that we cant afford to waste it. 时间是如此珍贵，我们经不起浪费它。
十、adj + as + subject(主词)+ be, s + v~ (虽然……)
例句：rich as our country is, the qualities of our living are by no means satisfactory. (by no means = in no way = on no account =at no time = in no case = in no sense = under no circumstances = not ...in the least 一点也不)
虽然我们的国家富有，我们的生活品质绝对令人不满意。
十一、the + -er + s + v, …the + -er + s + v…
the + more + adj + s + v, …the + more + adj + s + v …(愈……愈……)例句：the harder you work, the more progress you make.
你愈努力，你愈进步。
the more books we read, the more learned we become.
我们书读愈多，我们愈有学问。
十二、by +ving, …can…(借着...，..能够..) 例句：by taking exercise, we can always stay healthy.
借着做运动，我们能够始终保持健康。
*十三、…enable + object(受词)+ to + v (……使……能够……) 例句：listening to music enable us to feel relaxed.
听音乐使我们能够感觉轻松。
*十四、on no account can we + v…(我们绝对不能……) 例句：on no account can we ignore the value of knowledge.
我们绝对不能忽略知识的价值。
十五、it is time + s + 过去式 (该是……的时候了) 例句：it is time the authorities concerned took proper steps to solve the traffic problems.
该是有关当局采取适当的措施来解决交通问题的时候了。
十六、those who…(……的人……) 例句：those who violate traffic regulations should be punished.
违反交通规定的人应该受处罚。
*十七、there is no one but…(没有人不……) 例句：there is no one but longs to go to college.
没有人不渴望上大学。
*十八、be + forced/compelled/obliged + to + v (不得不……) 例句：since the examination is around the corner, i am compelled to give up doing sports.
既然考试迫在眉睫，我不得不放弃做运动。
*十九、it is conceivable that + 句子(可想而知的) it is obvious that + 句子 (明显的)
it is apparent that + 句子 (显然的) 例句： it is conceivable that knowledge plays an important role in our life.
可想而知，知识在我们的一生中扮演一个重要的角色。
二十、that is the reason why…(那就是……的原因) 例句：summer is sultry. that is the reason why i dont like it.
夏天很燠热。那就是我不喜欢它的原因。
篇13：我们周围的污染中考英语作文_初中英语作文1000字
全文共 913 字
+ 加入清单Pollution around us
In recent years our life is becoming better and better. But our environment is becoming worse and worse. Its very bad for our life. Now many people have air-conditioners and cars, they produce (give off ) waste gas. More and more trees are being cut down. There are so much sand on the earth (leaving only sand ) . We often see factories pour waste into rivers or lakes. Water in the river is quite dirty. We havent enough clean water to drink in cities. Now we are in danger. Its very necessary and important to protect the environment well. I think if everyone tries his best to protect the environment, the world will become much more beautiful , and our life will be better and better .
我们周围的污染
近年来我们的生活越来越好。但是，我们的环境越来越糟。它对我们的生活很糟糕。现在很多人都有空调和汽车，他们生产的（出）废气。越来越多的树被砍伐。有那么多的沙子在地球（只留下沙）。我们经常看到工厂把废水倒入河流或湖泊。河里的水很脏。我们没有足够的干净的水的城市。现在我们有危险。这是非常必要和重要的保护好环境。我想，如果每个人都尽自己最大的努力去保护环境，世界将变得更加美丽，我们的生活会越来越好。
篇14：中考优秀英语作文大全
全文共 536 字
+ 加入清单《我的暑假》
I love holidays,because during holidays ,I can do everything I like,and study something new.Now the summer holidays is coming,Im going to do something meaningful.
I like English,I spell words well,but I can not speak English very well.So I want to improve my English in the holiday.I will read English every moring,and then I think my English must be improved.
I will also learn to swim.I think it is very helpful.
There are too many things to do,I believe in myself can do them well!
My summer holiday must be a good one !
篇15：英语中考作文练习TalkingaboutHavingSports
全文共 803 字
+ 加入清单根据下面的提示，以Talking about Having Sports为题编写一段对话(字数：80--120)。
提示：
Susan每天下午参加体育活动。她喜欢游泳，每星期游泳一次。David在中学时代也常游泳，但现在没有时间，人也开始发胖了。Susan邀请David当天下午一起去游泳，并约定下午三点在游泳池见面。
Talking about Having Sports
David： Susan, you like sports, dont you?
Susan： Yes. I have sports every afternoon.
David： Do you often go swimming?
Susan： Yes, I go swimming once a week.
David： I used to swim at middle school, but I don t have time any more.
Susan： Thats too bad! Exercise is very important.
David： I know. I am getting fat, you see. Anyway, I dont want to be heavy.
Susan： Well, Im going to swim this afternoon. Do you want to go with me?
David： OK! I really need more exercises. When and where shall we meet?
Susan： How about three oclock, at the swimming-pool?
David： All right. Good-bye!
Susan： Good-bye!
篇16：中考英语作文万能开头汇总
全文共 519 字
+ 加入清单1.As far as …is concerned 就……而言
2.It goes without saying that… 不言而喻，…
3.It can be said with certainty that… 可以肯定地说……
4.As the proverb says， 正如谚语所说的，
5.It has to be noticed that… 它必须注意到，…
6.Its generally recognized that… 它普遍认为…
7.Its likely that … 这可能是因为…
8.Its hardly that… 这是很难的……
9.Its hardly too much to say that… 它几乎没有太多的说…
10.What calls for special attention is that…需要特别注意的是
11.Theres no denying the fact that…毫无疑问，无可否认
12.Nothing is more important than the fact that… 没有什么比这更重要的是…
13.whats far more important is that… 更重要的是…
篇17：2024中考英语作文：MyClassmate
全文共 1019 字
+ 加入清单导语：你有什么印象深刻的同学吗?他做了什么事呢?下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的相关英语作文，欢迎阅读与借鉴，谢谢!
请以My Classmate为标题写一篇记叙文
要求:1、主题明确。语言流畅。思路清晰。 2、字数在100字以内。
思路点拨
写记叙文要按照事物发展的客观规律叙述,所叙述的内容要交代清楚,条理清晰,重点突出,主次分明,详略得当。
这篇文章也是记叙文,主人公应该用第三人称,时态以一般过去时为主。本文以主人公为中心线索,以一、两件事件为重点内容去组织材料,反映主人公的形象特征。整个内容情节要合情合理,有真实感,叙述时可按事情发展的顺序进行,同时加以点评。
参考范文
My Classmate
Liu Kai is my classmate. He is a good student and always ready to help others.
One day on his way to school, he saw a little girl crossing the road. A car was coming towards her quickly and the girl was too frightened to move. The car nearly hit her. Just then LiuKai rushed up to her and caught her by the arm. The little girl was saved. She told him where she lived, and he took her home. When LiuKai hurried into the classroom, the teacher had already begun his lesson. He told the teacher why he was late. He was then praised for what he had done.
【参考译文】
我的同学
刘凯是我的同学。他是个好学生，总是乐于助人。
有一天，在上学的路上，他看见一个小女孩正在过马路。一辆汽车飞快地向她驶来，女孩吓得不敢动了。汽车差点撞到她。这时刘凯冲到她面前，抓住了她的胳膊。小女孩得救了。她告诉他她住在哪里，他带她回家。当刘凯i赶到教室时，老师已经开始上课了。他告诉老师他为什么迟到了。他被称赞为他所做的。
篇18：中考英语作文节约能源篇
全文共 1006 字
+ 加入清单导语：节约能源是每个公民的责任和义务，那么作为中学生，我们该如如何节能呢?下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的优秀英语作文，欢迎阅读与借鉴，谢谢!
提示：1.步行或骑自行车去上学;最好不坐公交车或私家车;
2. 使用节能灯，少开灯，离开时记住关灯。
3. 节约用水，注意随手关好水龙头
4. 节约用纸，随身携带手帕。
5. 要有回收利用废品的意识。
提示词：private car 私家车 energy-saving light 节能灯handkerchief 手帕
要求：1. 要包括以上所有要点，要做到行文流畅、脉络清晰
2. 词数为80-100.
It’s our duty to save energy. As middle school students, what should we do to save energy?Firstly, we can walk or ride a bike to school. We’d better not take the bus or the private car. Secondly, we should use energy--saving lights when you leave the room. Thirdly, we should save water. Don’t forget to turn off the water tap after using it. Fourthly, we also need to save paper. It’s a good idea to bring a handkerchief with us. Fifthly, we should learn to recycle waste things such as cans, paper and bottles.
In a word, we should try our best to save energy.
【参考译文】
节约能源是我们的职责。作为中学生，我们应该做些什么来节约能源?首先，我们可以步行或骑自行车上学。我们最好不要乘公共汽车或私家车。其次，我们应该使用节能灯当你离开房间。第三，我们应该节约用水。使用后别忘了关水龙头。第四，我们还需要节省纸张。带上手帕是个好主意。第五，我们应该学会回收废物，如易拉罐、纸张和瓶子。
总之，我们应该尽最大努力节约能源。
篇19：中考英语作文写作技巧
全文共 1257 字
+ 加入清单英语作文是最考察同学们英语功底的一类题型，也是在英语考试中所占分值很大的一类题型。所以在写英语作文的时候要掌握中考英语作文写作技巧才能够在中考的时候写出一篇优秀的英语作文。
初中英语作文分为四等。一等文：13-15分;二等文：9-12分;三等文：5-8分;四等文：0-4分。教给大家十个字，搞定初中英语写作，帮你拿到一等文。
要点+结构+逻辑+语法+亮点
要点：实际上中考英语写作就等于两个字，翻译!因为中考英语写作一般会给出几个要点，要求必须在文章中有所体现。文章写的再好，只要缺少要点就会扣分。所以要点，也就是文章的第二段内容，要做到全，围绕中心。
结构：中考最流行的结构就是三段式，深受各地区中考英语写作阅卷老师的喜爱。为什么尼?因为这种结构十分清晰。“观点——要点——总结”让人一目了然。三段式的第一段：简单明了，开门见山，不超过2句话，如，我们想表达小强很强壮，第一段直接说XQis extremely strong。观点明确，这一句足矣。
第二段：分2-3点说为什么他强壮。1. 每天吃10顿饭，He has ten mealseveryday!详举吃的是什么。2. 每天运动2小时，He does exercise 2 hours a day!详举做了什么运动。
第三段：经过第二段的论证，可以得出结论。但请注意，不能完全照抄第一段，要有升华。也可以提出希望和建议等。如，Howstrong and robust XQ is!I hope to be him one day!
逻辑：这里的逻辑实际指的就是逻辑词。最常用的就是表示递进的，转折的，总结的逻辑词等。递进：除了first，second，third，finally等还可以使用高级点的，如first of all(首先)，in addition，whatsmore，moreover(都是另外的意思)，in a word，all inall(表示总结的)。转折：but，yet，however等。真正有经验的阅卷老师会很注意这些逻辑连接词，因为这些词体现了这个文章的思路。
语法：其他几点都不是硬性的要求，不那样做不能说是错，只能说是不好，但是语法却是硬性的。如，单词的使用，时态等。
亮点：当我们将前八个字都做得很完美的时候也只能得到一个二等文的上。要想得到一等文，最后两个字，亮点至关重要。大家设想如果我们是阅卷老师。有两篇写人美丽的作文摆在我们面前，都是结构清晰的三段式，要点都很全，都用了一些逻辑词，都没有语法错误，但是A篇只用了beautiful，good-looking，B篇却用到了attractive，charming，catching等，我坚信正常人都会给B篇高分的。这些高级一点的词汇，词组，句型便是我们得到一等文的最有力的绝招。所以，以后写英语作文要养成一般词汇限量用的好习惯。
英语作文依靠的是同学们的语感和平时的积累，但是在面临中考的紧要关头，要想在短时间内提高英语写作水平不是一件容易的事情，这就需要同学们掌握中考英语作文写作技巧。
篇20：中考英语优秀作文：我的秘密梦想
全文共 713 字
+ 加入清单my secret dream
Everyone has his or her own secret dream. I wonder why I am gonna tell you my secret dream. No way! Heheh... I am gonna make up one secret dream for you. Any way, you will not copy everything I have written down. I am sure that you will get good ideas about writing it up.
When I was much younger, I had some secret dreams. One of mine was about becoming a super hero to save the world. Hehe. I hope it doesnt sound funny to you. Another secret dream of mine was about being the most handsome and intelligent man in the world.
Yeh, I know that sounds unrealistic. After all, that was a bubble dream only. I had a lot more secret dreams when I was a little boy. Some of them came true!