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400中考英语作文:创建文明城市
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为配合我市开展“创建文明城市(build a civilized city)”活动，学校举办以How to Behave Well?为主题的英语征文比赛。现在请你根据所给提示内容，用英语写一篇80词左右参赛短文。
提示：1.衣着整洁;2.保持环境卫生;
3.待人有礼，乐于助人; 4.遵守交通规则; 5…….
要求：1.文章必须包括所给提示中1～4项内容，可展开思路，适当发挥;
2.文中不能出现考生的真实姓名、校名等。
In order to build a civilized city, we students should try our best to behave well in the activities.
It’s a good habit to keep our clothes clean and tidy. Our city should be kept clean every day. Don’t throw litter or spit about. It’s good manners to say “Thank you” and “Please”, and so on. We should never say dirty words. Be friendly to others and always ready to help the people in need. For example, when we are on a bus, we should give our seats to the old and the women with babies. We should also obey traffic rules. When the traffic lights are red, we should stop. And we’d better not talk or laugh loudly in public.
If everyone behaves well , our city will be more beautiful and more attractive.
【参考译文】
为了建设文明城市，我们学生应该尽力在活动中表现良好。
保持衣服干净整齐是一个好习惯。我们的城市应该每天保持清洁。不要乱扔垃圾或随地吐痰。说“谢谢”和“请”是礼貌的，等等。我们不应该说脏话。对别人友好，随时准备帮助需要帮助的人。例如，当我们在公共汽车上时，我们应该给老人和有婴儿的妇女让座。我们也应该遵守交通规则。当交通灯是红色的时候，我们应该停下来。我们最好不要在公共场合大声说话或大笑。
如果每个人都表现良好，我们的城市将会更美丽更迷人。
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篇1：2024中考英语作文素材：家乡的清晨
全文共 859 字
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My hometown is a beautiful place, it is in the countryside, because it is far away from the city, so the environment is very natural. The water is very clean, I can even see the fish and the mountain has many green trees. But I like the morning best, because the air is very fresh and there are voices from nature. The frogs and other animals always are calling in the morning, I like listening to their voices, they sound like the songs for me. What’s more, the fog makes the country look like the wonderland, I will never know who will come to me until it is close to me, I like this mysterious feeling.
我的家乡是个美丽的地方，它在乡村，由于它远离城市，因此那里的环境很自然。水很清澈，我几乎能看到鱼，山上有很多绿油油的树。但是我最喜欢早上的时候，因为空气很清新，还有很多来自大自然的声音。青蛙和其它动物总是在早上叫，我喜欢听到他们的声音，听起来像在为我歌唱。而且，雾气让整个乡村看起来像仙境一样，我永远都不知道谁向我走来直到它走进我，我喜欢这样神秘的感觉。
篇2：2024年中考作文指导：开篇见亮点作文得高分
全文共 738 字
+ 加入清单我们在写作文的时候，做好在开篇的时候就写出自己的亮点，下面是小编整理的开篇见亮点作文得高分，欢迎阅读。
作文在中考语文科目中所占比重相当大。尽管今年中考作文的分数比往年少了10分，但仍占到了50分之多，因此，格外受考生关注。朝阳区教研中心语文教研室主任李满园说，中考作文要想得高分，考生就要抓住得分点，开篇要见亮点。
每个考生手里都有《考试说明》。有些考生觉得它没有多大用处，其实它是考试和复习的重要依据。考生要认真阅读第6页对于写作的要求，按要求备考。《考试说明》中对考生写作共提出了四点要求，一是根据题意和要求写作，中心明确、思想健康、条理清楚地表达自己的思想，力求有创意的表达;二是能根据表达的中心选择恰当的表达方式，合理安排内容的顺序和详略;三是写记叙文做到内容具体，写简单的说明文做到明白清楚，写简单的议论文做到有条有理有据，根据生活需要写日常生活应用文;四是正确使用标点符号。
那么，考生该如何备考呢?李老师说，实际上，作文不用准备太多篇，内容以“我”为圆心，即以自己的生活为半径，思想、情感为画笔，画一个圆，考生准备的作文范围应在这个圆里，就足以应对中考了。
李老师说，考场作文首先要能抓住评卷老师的眼球，这就要求作文有一个精彩的开头，文章的开篇就要显示出自己驾驭语言的能力，要新颖、别致。文章开头一定要尽快切入主题，要体现出考生的文采。如要写一个助人为乐的人物，考生就可以这样开头：生活中有美丽的风景，助人为乐、认真负责的他，构成了我眼中最和谐美丽的一道风景。这个开头就直奔主题，让评卷老师自然而然地知道这篇作文要表达的主题是什么。此外，作文里面还要有一股真情流露，以情感人，有新颖的构思，有与文体相符的得体语言，同时结尾要自然、耐人寻味，最后还要有一个整洁的卷面。
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篇3：中考英语满分作文:给大卫的一封信
全文共 243 字
+ 加入清单【作文题目】
XI. 书面表达(共1小题;满分20分)
假定你是王伟,你的英国笔友David来信问及你们学校在署假期间对学生的.要求。请你根据以下要点给他回一封电子邮件。
●家庭安全：小心用火用电,外出时关好门窗;
●游泳安全：不独自去游泳，不去河、湖游泳;
●交通安全: 过马路要当心，不在马路上玩耍。
提示词：electricity(n. 电)
注意：1.词数80-100;
2.请不耍逐句翻译，可适当发挥;
3.文中不能出现真实的校名和人名;
4. 邮件的开头和结尾以为你写好，不计入总词数。
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篇4：2024中考英语作文写作高分秘诀
全文共 1570 字
+ 加入清单中考英语考试中“书面表达”往往是最后一项，怎么样在那么短的时间内尽可能的拿到高分呢?
一、中考英语写作的概述
你对于在中考英语写作中拿高分有把握吗?实际考试中，许多学生却常常有“无话可说”的感觉。那要如何我们才能克服这种无话的状态，取得高分呢?
归根到底这是一个英语基本功——单词、短语和句型的问题。
英语作文的前提条件是掌握了一定量的词汇、语法及体裁、题材等方面的知识。学生如果想要在写作方面有本质上的提升，必须进行多次的写作练习。因此，必须合理地设置训练步骤，遵循从初级到高级，从简单到复杂的原则去练习，经过一段写作实践之后，写作水平一定会有大幅度的提高。
中考英语作文对考生的要求有四点：1、内容要完整。2、语句流畅。3、没有语法错误。4、书写规范。
二、中考英语写作的评分标准
1、老师拿到的标准
写作水平的高低和文章的好坏，分数是最直接的评分标准，也是考生们最关心的。但是多少考生真正透彻知道中考英语写作的评分标准?什么样的文章才是阅卷老师眼中的好文章?
评分标准：
(1)整篇作文满分20分，其中内容8分，语言8分，结构4分。
(2)内容贴切，句子流畅，用语准确，加整体印象分1分。
(3)不满60个词，少1——5个词扣0.5分，6——10个词扣1分。
(4)所有给出问题涉及的三项内容，每少一项扣3分。
(5)每个拼写，大小写，标点符号等错误扣0.5分;同一的拼写错误不重复扣分，扣分总和不超过2分。
(6)语法错误每项扣1分，同一错误不重复扣分，扣分总和不超过2分。
2、老师想看到的标准
语言(8分)：
词——固定搭配、高频重点词汇;
句——复杂句(各种从句)、特殊句型、正确的句子!
内容(8分)：(总、分)论点、论据支持句;简洁、切合主题的记叙内容。
结构(4分)：
语言结构——句子重点突出、内容清晰;
内容结构——论点、论据以及记叙之间的逻辑关系;
句数控制——对于相对内容的句数掌握;
亮点、出彩点——排比、拟人、谚语、成语、押韵等。
三、扣分
内容方面：要点缺失，可酌情扣分。比如中考作文“Iwanttodosomethingformyschool”，若没有写一件具体的事情，是要扣3分以上的;若写的事情太过于虚幻，没有实际内容，也会扣1-2分。
字数：少于60字的作文要酌情扣分。
中考英语作文要求60字以上，标点符号不算，少了就要扣分。
但是60字的作文能不能得高分?从我们拿到的实例作文来看，16分以上的作文，没有少于75字的，甚至少于80字的也少之又少。
当然，也极少有超过100字的，因为中考试卷的短线格一共80个，在格子下面大约还有2行的空间，可以加20字左右，再多阅卷人就很难看清了，也会影响卷面的美观。
所以，同学们如果想让作文得到高分，最好是让字数在75-100字之间。
语法和拼写错误：每个扣0.5，重复错误不计;
标点错误：每4个扣0.5。
四、加分
作文的组织结构分。就是根据学生使用复杂句型、单词和谚语、俗语的情况来加分。只要文章中有1个亮点，基本就可以争取到1分(3分的文采分是很难全部拿到的)。而这1分的亮点，是可以提前准备的。
“万金油”式的复杂句型，例如强调句型、only相关的倒装句等，只要同学们多操练几次，几乎是一定能用到作文当中，从而为自己争取到这1分。
其次就是卷面分。很多家长(微博)和同学，尤其是部分书法并不是十分整洁的同学，都会关心是否真的有“卷面分”的存在。虽然在阅卷标准里面并没有卷面分这一项，但是这个分数却真切地反映在了同学们的分数里面。
据阅卷老师的经验，在阅卷的时候并不是按这3个部分逐项打分的，而是在第一遍读完全文之后，心里已经形成了一个“印象分”，然后再细读第二、三遍，把印象分分配到各个打分部分。
因此，这个“印象分”就非常重要，而同学们的书法，也正是在这个环节，影响到了自己的分数。所以初三的考生，如果书法不好，一定要注意。
篇5：食品安全中考英语作文
全文共 1363 字
+ 加入清单Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a letter to a publishing house on food safety. You should write at least 120 words according to the outline given below in Chinese:
A Letter to a Publishing House on Food Safety
June 15th, 2006
Dear Sir or Madam,
Thank you for taking time to read this letter. As the problem of food safety has been becoming worse and worse nowadays, I am obliged to write to you.
Several days ago, one of my classmates came back from supermarket with a large bag of food. Because of having found a new style of tinned?ish in the
food store, she was very glad. Several other roommates were invited to enjoy the mouth?atering chicken. Unfortunately, after finishing the food, all of my three friends had stomachaches and vomited, their faces having become paler and paler. Due to sensitivity to that kind of tinned food, I escaped that suffer. At that time, my mind went blank. I dialed the emergency number with my trembling hand, therefore they were quickly sent to hospital. The doctor said they were lucky to be out of danger because they did not eat too much of that rotten fish and were hospitalized on time.
This is the matter that happened around me which made me realize the seriousness of the food safety problem. I sincerely hope that the whole society could attach much importance to this issue.
Thanks!
Yours,
Julie
篇6：中考英语作文话题：网购
全文共 853 字
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Shopping online is quite popular in our daily life now. It is a new way of shopping. Many things are offered and wait for your choosing. Convenience is the most important advantage. You can buy anything as you like. You don’t have to queue with other shoppers. Meanwhile, it is often open for 24 hours a day.
However, there are many disadvantages about shopping online. You can’t actually see the real products. So you may be cheated easily. Also, many people will miss the best opportunity to get along well with their friends and share the joy of shopping.
In conclusion, we should make proper use of the internet shopping.
【参考译文】
网上购物在我们的日常生活中很受欢迎。这是一种新的购物方式。很多东西都提供了，等待你的选择。方便是最重要的优点。你可以随意买任何东西。你不必和其他购物者排队。同时，它通常每天开放24小时。
然而，网上购物有许多缺点。你真的看不到真正的产品。所以你可能很容易受骗。同时，许多人会错过与朋友相处的好机会，分享购物的乐趣。
总之，我们应该好好利用网络购物。
篇7：中考英语作文必背话题模版：饮食安全
全文共 621 字
+ 加入清单饮食安全是个不变的话题，YJBYS为大家准备的这篇范文绝对值得大家收藏，请继续关注我们英语作文栏目。
假如你是一所国际学校校办英文杂志的学生编辑.你看了下面这封信后，也想写一篇关于该信的读后感，内容要点包括：你对此事件的看法;解释你的理由并提出你的建议;向受害者表达尽快康复的祝愿.
Today, I received the readers letter. I was shocked at it.Personally speaking, I think we should pay more attention to the food safety.The government must make some necessary laws. Whats more, some businessmenshouldnt be only interested in making money. They must care about peopleshealth. Wed better not eat anything in dirty places though some food isdelicious, because eating unhealthy food does harm to our health.
Finally, I hope the family in the accident will getbetter soon.
篇8：2024年中考英语作文预测：光盘行动
全文共 1089 字
+ 加入清单近日，多家饭店启动"光盘行动，从我做起"活动，鼓励顾客"减少舌尖上的浪费"。同时，餐后晒空盘在网络上也悄然流行，不少人以身为"光盘族"骄傲。作为一名中学生，请你以"How to build an economized society"为题向《2l世纪报》投稿，号召大家在日常生活中勤俭节约，共同建设"节约型社会"。
要点包括： 1。不浪费粮食 2。日常生活中的节水、节电等 3。呼吁和号召
注意：1。词数：100左右。短文标题、开头已为你写好，但不计入总数; 2。内容可适当发挥，注意行文连贯。
参考词汇：光盘行动 "clear your plate" campaign
Our government is aiming to build an "economized society"。 I think it is every citizens duty to work hard to achieve this goal。
Firstly, we know that many restaurants have joined the "clear your plate" campaign against wasting food。 We students should do the same in our daily life especially when having dinner with our friends and relatives。 It is a good virtue for us to do so。 Secondly, make sure that the lights and all the other electric facilities are turned off when we finish our work and leave the room。 Also it is important to form the habit of turning off the tap after it is used。 Saving energy isalso saving ourselves。
In a word,if we pay much attention to our everyday behavior and take actions to reduce waste, we can make contributions to an economized society.Lets work together from now on!
篇9：中考英语作文：网上购物
全文共 1621 字
+ 加入清单中考英语作文：Shopping on the Internet
With the development of the Internet and the popularization of computers, shopping on the Internet has become a commonplace in our life. Here consumers can buy almost everything they need.
Shopping on the Internet has a lot of advantages, of which the most important is perhaps its convenience. People dont have to waste a lot of their energy and precious time to go from one shop to another to choose the commodities they like. This is especially desirable to the old, the sick and the busy people who cannot go to the shops in person. The goods come in all shapes, sizes and colors on the Internet. All they need to do is to sit in front of their computers and click the mouses. The commodities they order will be delivered to them promptly.
However, shopping on the Internet also has its disadvantages. The first disadvantage is that the consumers cant see the goods or try them on personally. Sometimes, the real goods may not be the same as what they have seen on the computer. The second disadvantage is that some shops on the Internet are not registered. They will never deliver anything to you after they get the money from you. Once cheated, you will find that you have nowhere to go to complain.
中考英语作文：网上购物
随着互联网的发展和电脑的普及，网上购物已成为我们生活中司空见惯的事情了。消费者在这里几乎可以买到所有他们需要的东西。
网上购物有很多优点，其中最重要的也许是它的方便。人们不必浪费了很多精力和宝贵的时间去从一个商店到另一个选择，他们喜欢的商品。这是可取的是老人，病人和忙碌的人们谁不能亲自去商店。商品的形状，大小和颜色在互联网上。所有他们需要做的是坐在电脑前，点击鼠标。他们的商品订单将交付给他们及时。
但是，网上购物也有其缺点。第一个不利因素是，消费者不能看到商品或亲自试穿他们。有时候，真正的货物不同他们所看到的电脑上得。第二个缺点是，一些商店在互联网上没有登记。一旦骗了，你会发现，你已经无处可去抱怨。
中考英语作文带翻译：网上购物(Shopping on the Internet)，以供各位同学们呢参考，在学习英语作文的时候，也多注意网上购物的利弊!
篇10：中考英语作文常用谚语集锦
全文共 3320 字
+ 加入清单谚语是广泛流传于民间的言简意赅的短语，多数反映了劳动人民的生活实践经验，而且一般都是经过口头传下来的。它多是口语形式的通俗易懂的短句或韵语。下面是语文迷小编精心整理的英语考试中常用的谚语，希望你喜欢。
1.Asking costs nothing 问人不费分文。
2.Ask me no questions and I will tell you no lies你不问我，我就不会说谎话。
3.The tongue is boneless but it breaks bones 舌无骨却折断骨。
4.A good name is easier lost than won名誉失之易，而得之难。
5. Every coin has two sides 每个硬币都有两面，比喻事物的两面性。
6. The winter is coming and the spring is not far 冬天已经临近了,春天还会远吗?
7. Failure is the mother of success 失败是成功之母。
8. Practice makes perfect 熟能生巧。
9.Every profession produces its own best行行出状元。
10.Today must borrow nothing of tomorrow 今日事今日毕。
11.Constant dropping wears the stone 滴水穿石。
12.Experience is the mother of wisdom经验是智慧之母。
13.Actions speak louder than words 行动比语言更响亮。
14.From small beginnings comes great things 伟大始于渺小。
15.Money spent on the brain is never spent in vain 智力投资绝不会白花。
16.Wisdom in the mind is better than money in the hand脑中有知识，胜过手中有金钱。
17.The voice of one man is the voice of no one 一个人的声音没有力量。
18.A great ship asks for deep waters大船要走深水。
19.While there is life, there is hope有生命便有希望/留得青山在，哪怕没柴烧
20.Two heads are better than one 一人不及二人智;三个臭皮匠，胜个过一个诸葛亮。
21.Wise men learn by other mens mistakes; fools by their own聪明人从别人的错误中学得教训;笨人则自己付出代价。他山之石可以攻玉。
22.Good company on the road is the shortest cut 行路有良伴就是捷径。
23.It takes all sorts to make a world 世界是由各种不同的人所组成的。
24.If a thing is worth doing it is worth worth doing well如果事情值得做，就值得好好做。
25.Nothing great was ever achieved without enthusiasm无热情成就不了伟业。
26.Great works are performed not by strength but by perseverance没有恒心只有力量是完不成伟业。
27.It is never too late to learn 活到老，学到老。
28.It is never too late to mend 亡羊补牢，犹时未晚。
29.The secret of success is constancy of purpose成功的秘诀在于持之于恒。
30.Misfortunes never come alone/single祸不单行。
31.Misfortunes come on wings and depart on foot遭祸容易脱祸难。
32.Misfortunes tell us what fortune is不经灾难不知福。
33.To an optimist every change is a change for the better对于乐观者总是越变越好。
34.Truth never fears investigation事实从来不怕调查。
35.A good medicine tasks bitter良药苦口。
36.Great minds think alike 英雄所见略同。
37.Storms make trees take deeper roots风暴使树木深深扎根。
38.Live and let live 自己生活也让别人生活。
39.Better late than never 迟做总比不做好;晚来总比不来强。
40.A bold attempt is half success勇敢的尝试是成功的一半。
41.All things are difficult before they are easy 凡事必先难后易。
42.What we acquire without sweat we give away without regret得之不费力，弃之不可惜。
43.Nothing is impossible to a willing heart只要有一颗意志坚强的心，没事不成。
44.Work makes the workman勤工出巧匠。
45.Constant dropping wears the stone 滴水穿石。
46.He that can have patience, can have what he will唯坚韧者始能遂其志。
47.Self-distrust is the cause of most of our failures我们绝大多数的失败都是因为缺乏自信之故。
48.The talent of success is nothing more than doing well whatever you do without a thought of time成功之路没它，唯全力投入工作，而不稍存沽名钓誉之心。
49.To read without reflecting is like eating without digesting读书不思考，犹如吃饭不消化。
50.The important thing in life is to have a great aim, and the determination to attain it人生之要事在于确立伟大的目标与实现这目标的决心。
51.One of these days is none of these days有这么一天就是没有这么一天。/吾生待明日，万事成蹉跎。
52.Every horse thinks its own pack heaviest每匹马都认为自己所负的背包最重。
53.Nothing down, nothing up 无下则无上。/不经历风雨，怎么见彩虹?
54.A good book is your best friend 好书如挚友。
55. Actions speak louder than words 事实胜于雄辩。
56. A fall into a pit, a gain in your wit 吃一堑，长一智。
57. A good beginning is half done 良好的开端是成功的一半。
58. Dont put off till tomorrow what should be done today 今日事，今日毕。
59. Time and tide wait for no man 时不我待。
篇11：英语期中考试反思500字
全文共 655 字
+ 加入清单这次期中考试，学生英语成绩很不理想，两极分化十分明显，部分语法知识的掌握不够牢固，尤其是个别题 反复做过几次也没能把握好，阅读理解能力和书面表达能力比较弱。具体有以下几点：
1.部分学生的基础知识不够扎实，学生遗忘知识快，过去滚瓜烂熟的东西一段时间不用就忘了。
2.学生的应变能力有待提高，不能正确写出单词的正确形式。
3.理解能力不强，阅读理解失分较多，不能理解通篇大意。
4.不能熟练运用学过的句型。
造成这种结果的原因是多方面的，但最重要的有下面几方面：
1.对学生要求不够严格;部分学生偷懒。
2.没能充分调动学生的积极性;提高课堂教学效率。
3. 典型题讲解不够，训练不到位。
4.平时检查督促力度不够。
在今后的教学中，
1、继续抓好双基知识的训练，打牢基本功。
2、引导学生梳理知识，掌握语法规则，逐步引导学生灵活运用英语知识的能力。
3、培养学生上课时的听课习惯，要求学生全神贯注，要和老师同步思考出现的问题。
4、讲课时，尽量使用简明、准确、形象、生动的语言，坚持用英语教学，让学生用英语来想英语。
5、在平时要通过阅读，培养学生阅读多种文体的能力，如何从文章中获取信息的能力和运用英语解决实际问题的能力。在训练中要注意方法的多样化和灵活性，同时，启发他们学会运用多种不同的方法来表达同样的思想，逐步培养良好的英语语感。
6、设计全面、高校的课外作业，并进一步培养学生良好的书写习惯，做到整洁、规范，正确地书写;每周写一篇作文。
7、在教学过程中， 还需加大学习力度，积极研究探索教学方法并及时改变，就一定能提高整体英语水平。
篇12：中考英语作文：十大常见错误分析
全文共 1998 字
+ 加入清单俗话说千里之行始于足下。英语书面表达能力的形成不是一日之功，必须从平时的课堂学习一点一滴抓起，持之以恒。
一篇优秀的英语作文在内容和语言两方面应是一个统一体，任何一方面的欠缺都会直接影响到作文的质量。然而，很多考生在写作中或者由于粗心大意，或者由于基本功不扎实而经常出现名词不变复数、第三人称单数不加s，前后不一致，以及时态语态、句子完整性等方面的错误。
1. 审题不清
如2004年中考作文要求写一项最喜欢的课外活动，有些考生将作文的主题定位为我最喜欢的活动，偏离了一项、课外活动这一主题。依据作文的评分原则，若文章内容不切题，则不管语言如何规范、用词如何准确，都会被判为零分。
2.拼写错误
拼写是考生应该具备的最起码的基本功，但在考生的作文中却经常能发现很多拼写错误。有拼写错误的作文肯定会被酌情扣分，而且有大量拼写错误存在的作文不仅体现出语言基本功差，同时也直接影响内容的表达，通常会降低作文的档次。
3.名词单复数问题
误 my father and my mother is all teacher.
正 my father and my mother are both teachers.
4.缺少动词
在汉语中没有动词的句子是允许的，但英语中每个完整的句子都必须有动词来构成，如：我累了。这个句子没有动词作谓语，而用形容词，但英语形容词不能作谓语，一定要写成：im tired.
误 i happy i can come to beijing zoo.
正 i am happy i can come to beijing zoo.
误 the apples cheap. ill take some.
正 the apples are cheap. ill take some.
5.缺少介词、冠词等
还有一些考生因为没有熟练掌握介词或者冠词的用法，不了解中英文语言习惯的不同，也会出现明显的错误，造成丢分现象。
误 because heavy rain we cant hold the sports meeting.
正 because of the heavy rain we cant hold the sports meeting.
6.代词的误用
英语中代词的形式很多，包括主格、宾格、物主代词、反身代词等。而汉语中没有主格和宾格、形容词性物主代词和名次性物主代词之分；此外汉语中很多时候不用物主代词，而英语中物主代词是不可省略的，代词的误用是考生最容易发生的错误。
误 i mother and i went to the shop to buy a present for i father.
正 my mother and i went to the shop to buy a present for my father.
7.句子不完整
有的考生因为对句子结构认识模糊，所以出现只写半句的现象，这也是造成失分的原因之一。
误 many students have a hard time passing all the tests to get into college. for example, my friend in high school.
(这段文章的第二句话没有动词，他不能独立构成一个句子。这是一个非常常见的错误，修改的方法是将两个句子连接起来。)
正 many students have a hard time passing all the tests to get into college, for example, my friend in high school.
8.前后不一致
所谓不一致，包括数的不一致、时态不一致及代词不一致、主谓不一致等.
例1. when one have knowledge, he can do what he want to do.
(人一旦有了知识，他就能想干什么就干什么.)
剖析：one是单数第三人称，因而本句的have应改为has ;同理，want应改为wants。本句是典型的主谓不一致.
改为 when one has knowledge , he can do what he wants (to do)
9.时态、人称和数的搭配错误
汉语动词无时态、人称和数的变化，而对英语来说，这些都至关重要。例：
误 when i get to the station the train leave.
正 when i got to the station the train had left.
10.综合性错误
综合性错误是指单词的大小写和标点符号的错误等，以及形容词和副词的混淆、连词的误用等等。这些都是靠考生平时知识的积累，所以考生应该从平时练习出发，每天坚持写英语日记，多读适合自己英语水平的原版著作，提高自己的英语素养。
[中考英语作文：十大常见错误分析
篇13：2024年中考英语作文模板：减肥问题
全文共 836 字
+ 加入清单假设你是《21世纪中学生英语报》“heart to heart”专栏的编辑.下面是你收到的一位中学生的来信.请你根据他来信的内容写一封回信.针对他的问题。
Dear Xiaowei,
Weight problem is quite common among teenagers everywhere. So Idon’t think you have much to worry about. Here are my suggestions. Eating lateat night is OK, but you should to eat more fruit and vegetables, which are goodfor you. Also, when you are free, you’d better do more exercise. Running isgreat. You don’t like running alone, but what about running with your friends?Or you can do some team sports like basketball. I’m sure your friends will bewilling to help you lose weight. I hope you have as much success in losingweight as you have had in your studies. “Believe myself, and I will win.” It’sreally important for us when we meet difficulties. Don’t lose heart; I’m sureyou will succeed one day.
Good luck.
Editor
篇14：2024中考英语作文我的家庭
全文共 664 字
+ 加入清单This is my family.They are my mother,my father and me.My father is a teacher.He works in a school.He is of medium height and of medium build.He has shortstraight black hair.He looks young.Now he is reading books.
这是我的家庭。他们是我的母亲，我的父亲和我。我的爸爸是一位老师。他在一所学校工作。他中等身高，中等身材。他很高留着短而直的黑头发。他看起来很年轻。现在他正在看书。
My mother is a reporter.She works in a TV station.She is of medium height and a little thin.She has long curly black hair.She is very beautiful.Now she is watching TV.I am a student.I am tall and thin.I have long straight black hair.I am doing my homework,now.
我的母亲是一位记者。她在电视台工作。她中等身材，有点瘦。她有一头长长的黑发。她很漂亮。她现在正在看电视。我是一个学生。我又高又瘦。我有长而直的黑头发。我做我的家庭作业现在。
This is my family.
这是我的家人。
篇15：中考英语作文的亮点句型
全文共 2922 字
+ 加入清单想让你的作文更上一个台阶吗？想让阅卷老师们耳目一新、眼前一亮吗？快来学习今天这几个亮点句型吧，让你的作文脱颖而出，让你的中考取得一个更好的分数！
一、~~~the + ~ est + 名词 +（that）+ 主词 + have ever + seen (known/heard/had/read, etc) ~~~ the most+ 形容词 + 名词 +（that）+ 主词 + have ever + seen（known/heard/had/read, etc）
Helen is the most beautiful girl that I have ever seen.
海伦是我所看过最美丽的女孩。
Mr. Chang is the kindest teacher that I have ever had.
张老师是我曾经遇到最仁慈的教师。
Yao Ming is the tallest basketball player that I have ever seen.
姚明是我所见过的最高的篮球运动员
Liu Xiang is the most hardworking sportsman that I have ever seen.
刘翔是我所见过的最勤奋的运动员。
二、Nothing is + ~~~ er than to + V Nothing is + more + 形容词 + than to + V
Nothing is more important than to receive education.
没有比接受教育更重要的事。
Nothing is more important than to potect our environment.
没有什么比环保更重要的事。
Nothing is more important than to gain knowledge.
没有什么比学习知识更重要的事。
三、~~~ cannot emphasize the importance of ~~~ too much.（再怎么强调...的重要性也不为过。）
We cannot emphasize the importance of protecting our eyes too much.
我们再怎么强调保护眼睛的重要性也不为过。
We cannot emphasize the importance of education.
我们再怎么强调教育的重要性也不为过。
四、There is no denying that + S + V ...（不可否认的……）
There is no denying that the qualities of our living have gone from bad to worse.
不可否认的，我们的生活品质已经每况愈下。
There is no denying that Lin Zhiling is the most charming actress I have ever seen.
不可否认，林志玲是我所见过的最有魅力的女演员。
五、It is universally acknowledged that + 句子~~ （全世界都知道……）
It is universally acknowledged that trees are indispensable to us.
全世界都知道树木对我们是不可或缺的。
六、There is no doubt that + 句子~~ （毫无疑问的……）
There is no doubt that our educational system leaves something to be desired.
毫无疑问的我们的教育制度令人不满意。
七、An advantage of ~~~ is that + 句子（……的优点是……）
An advantage of using the solar energy is that it wont create(produce) any pollution.
使用太阳能的优点是它不会制造任何污染。
An advantage of taking exercises is that it can make us keep healthy.
锻炼身体的优点是它可以让我们保持健康。
八、The reason why + 句子 ~~~ is that + 句子（……的原因是……）
The reason why we have to grow trees is that they can provide us with fresh air.
我们必须种树的原因是它们能供应我们新鲜的空气。
九、So + 形容词 + be + 主词 + that + 句子（如此……以致于……）
So precious is time that we cant afford to waste it.
时间是如此珍贵，它经不起我们浪费。
So beautiful is Xi Shi that we all like her.
西施是如此美丽，以致于我们都喜欢她。
十、Adj + as + Subject（主词）+ be, S + V~~~ （虽然……）
Rich as our country is, the qualities of our living are by no means satisfactory.
{by no means = in no way = on no account 一点也不}
虽然我们的国家富有，我们的生活品质绝对令人不满意。
十一、The + ~er + S + V, ~~~ the + ~er + S + V ~~~
The + more + Adj + S + V, ~~~ the + more + Adj + S + V~~~（愈……愈……）
The harder you work, the more progress you make.
你愈努力，你愈进步。
The more books we read, the more learned we become.
我们书读愈多，我们愈有学问。
十二、By +Ving, ~~ can ~~ （借着……，……能够……）
By taking exercise, we can always stay healthy.
借着做运动，我们能够始终保持健康。
By reading, we can broaden our horizon.
通过阅读，我们可以扩大视野。
十三、~~~ enable + Object（受词）+ to + V （……使……能够……）
Listening to music enable us to feel relaxed.
听音乐使我们能够感觉轻松。
Travelling enable our life to be enriched,
旅行能丰富人们的生活。
Watching movies enable our horizon to be broadened.
看电影能开阔视野。
篇16：中考英语作文万能开头汇总
全文共 519 字
+ 加入清单1.As far as …is concerned 就……而言
2.It goes without saying that… 不言而喻，…
3.It can be said with certainty that… 可以肯定地说……
4.As the proverb says， 正如谚语所说的，
5.It has to be noticed that… 它必须注意到，…
6.Its generally recognized that… 它普遍认为…
7.Its likely that … 这可能是因为…
8.Its hardly that… 这是很难的……
9.Its hardly too much to say that… 它几乎没有太多的说…
10.What calls for special attention is that…需要特别注意的是
11.Theres no denying the fact that…毫无疑问，无可否认
12.Nothing is more important than the fact that… 没有什么比这更重要的是…
13.whats far more important is that… 更重要的是…
篇17：中考英语作文素材：知识和经验
全文共 1992 字
+ 加入清单写作题目 Knowledge or Experience
Directions： You are allowed 40 minutes to write an essay no less than 150 words on the following topic.
1.some emphasize book knowledge
2.others stress practical experience
3.which one is more important? Give your reasons to illustrate your opinion.
范文：
Which is more important in life， knowledge from the books you read， or personal experience you gain in reality? The answer may vary from person to person. The young， educated may emphasize the former， and the old may stress the later. But in my opinion， they are of the same importance.
Experience is priceless. How to become an efficient secretary? How to prepare for your first child to come into the world? There is so much experience we need in careers， in life and even in academic studies. It helps one deal with the problems with ease and confidence. Especially activities and to accumulate experience of different kinds is more crucial.
Experience， however， is limited in terms of time and space. For one thing， it is impossible for anyone to experience all the important events and meet all the famous people. For another， as the speed with which skills are obsolete and new problems crop up is unprecedented because of the fast development of society， experience is far less adequate. Depending too much on it only leads to narrow-mindedness and prejudice.
One way to compensate for it is to read books. Books of various kinds can bring us almost unlimited additional experience. From books you can not only trace back to the wisdom of our antecedents， but keep up with the latest developments of science and technology. To be sure， its secondhand experience. But it is the ideal supplement to our own limited experience. Few of us can travel around the world， or live long beyond one hundred years， but all of us can live many lives by reading books.
Both book knowledge and personal experience are essential. While experience makes one more resourceful， book knowledge makes one more learned.
篇18：2024中考英语中外好句好段摘抄大全
全文共 6786 字
+ 加入清单1、A contented mind is the greatest blessing a man can enjoy in this world.
知足是人生在世最大的幸事。
——Joseph Addison(美国作家艾迪生)
2、If you would know the value of money, go and try to borrow some.
要想知道钱的价值，就想办法去借钱试试。
——Benjamin Franklin(美国总统富兰克林)
3、If you wish to succeed, you should use persistence as your good friend,
experience as your reference, prudence as your brother and hope as your sentry.
如果你希望成功，当以恒心为良友，以经验为参谋，以谨慎为兄弟，以希望为哨兵。
——Thomas Edison(美国发明家爱迪生)
4、Health is certainly more valuable than money,
because it is by health that money is procured.
健康当然比金钱更为重要，因为我们所赖以获得金钱的就是健康。
——Samuel Johnson(英国作家约翰逊)
5、That man is the richest whose pleasure are the cheapest.
能处处寻求快乐的人才是最富有的人。
——Henry David Thoreau(美国作家梭罗)
6、Sometimes one pays most for the things one gets for nothing.
有时候一个人为不花钱得到的东西付出的代价最高。
——Albert Einstein(美国科学家爱因斯坦)
7、Will, work and wait are the pyramidal cornerstones for success.
意志、工作和等待是成功的金字塔的基石。
——Louis Pasteur(法国化学家巴斯勒)
8、All the splendor in the world is not worth a good friend.
人世间所有的荣华富贵不如一个好朋友。
——Voltaire(法国思想家伏尔泰)
9、There is a great different between exposure of
the mind and that of the body.
表露思想和展露身体之间存在极大的不同。
——William Hazlitt(英国批评家散文家哈滋里特)
10、To travel hopefully is a better thing than to arrive,
and the true success is to labor.
怀着希望去旅行比抵达目的地更愉快;而真正的成功在于工作。
——Robert Louis Stevenson(英国作家史蒂文森)
11、The greater a man is, the more distasteful is praise and flattery to him.
一个人越伟大，对表扬和奉承就越反感。
——John Burroughs(美国博物学家巴勒斯)
12、I might say that success is won by three things:
first, effort; second, more effort; third, still more effort.
可以说成功要靠三件事才能赢得：努力，努力，再努力。
——Thomas Hardy(英国诗人小说家哈代)
13、Success often depends upon knowing how long it will take to succeed.
成功常常取决于知道需要多久才能成功。
——Charles Montesquieu(法国思想家孟德斯鸠)
14、Only those who have the patience to do simple things
perfectly ever acquire the skill to do difficult things easily.
只有有耐心圆满完成简单工作的人，才能够轻而易举的完成困难的事。
——Friedrich Schiller(德国剧作家诗人席勒)
15、You have to believe in yourself. Thats the secret of success.
你必须相信自己，这是成功的关键。
——Charles Chaplin(美国演员卓别林)
16、A man can succeed at almost anything for which
he has unlimited enthusiasm.
无论何事，只要对它有无限的热情你就能取得成功。
——C. M. Schwab(美国实业家施瓦布)
17、The man who has made up his mind to win will never say “impossible”.
凡是决心取得胜利的人是从来不说“不可能的”。
——Bonapart Napoleon(法国皇帝拿破仑)
18、Progress is the activity of today and the assurance of tomorrow.
进步是今天的活动，明天的保证。
——Emerson(美国思想家爱默生)
20、Our destiny offers not the cup of despair,
but the chalice of opportunity.
命运给予我们的不是失望之酒，而是机会之杯。
——Richard Nixon(美国总统尼克松)
21、Miracles sometimes occur, but one has to work terribly for them.
奇迹有时候是会发生的，但是你得为之拼命的努力。
——C. Weizmann(爱尔兰总统魏茨曼)
22、It never will rain roses.
When we want to have more roses we must plant trees.
天上不会掉下玫瑰来，如果想要更多的玫瑰，必须自己种植。
——G. Eliot(英国小说家艾略特)
23、If you have great talents, industry will improve them;
if you have but moderate abilities, industry will supply their deficiency.
如果你很有天赋，勤勉会使其更加完善;如果你能力一般，勤勉会补足其缺陷。
——Joshuas Reynolds(美国散文家雷诺兹)
24、Great works are performed not by strength , but by perseverance.
完成伟大的事业不在于体力，而在于坚韧不拔的毅力。
——Samuel Johnson(英国作家和评论家约翰逊)
25、Genius only means hard-working all ones life.
天才只意味着终身不懈的努力。
——Mendeleyev(俄国化学家门捷列耶夫)
26、Few things are impossible in themselves; and it is often for want of will ,
rather than of means, that man fails to succeed.
事情很少又根本做不成的;其所以做不成，与其说是条件不够，不如说是由于决心不够。
——(La Racheforcauld(法国作家罗切福考尔德)
27、Dare and the world always yields.
If it beats you sometimes, dare it again and again and it will succumb.
大胆挑战，世界总会让步。如果有时候你被它打败了，不断地挑战，它总会屈服地。
——W.M Thackeray(英国小说家萨克雷)
28、All that you do, do with your might; t
hings done by halves are never done right.
做一切事情都应尽力而为，半途而废永远不行。
——R.H. Stoddard(美国诗人斯托达德)
29、A man can fail many times,
but he isnt a failure until he begins to blame somebody else.
一个人可以失败多次，但是只要他没有开始责怪旁人，他还不是一个失败者。
——J.Burroughs(美国博物学家巴勒斯)
30、You can tell the ideals of a nation by its advertisements.
从一个国家的广告可以看出这个国家的理想。
——Norman Douglas(英国作家道格拉斯)
31、The only limit to our realization of tomorrow will be our doubts of today.
实现明天理想的唯一障碍是今天的疑虑。
——Franklin Roosevelt(美国总统罗斯福)
32、The man with a new idea is a crank until the idea succeeds.
具有新想法的人在其想法实现之前是个怪人。
——Mark Twain(美国作家马克?吐温)
33、The important thing in life is to have a great aim,
and the determination to attain it.
人生重要的事情是确定一个伟大的目标，并决心实现它。
——Johann Wolfgang von Goethe(德国诗人、剧作家歌德)
34、Most of the trouble in the world is caused by people wanting to be important.
人世间的大多数烦恼都是由那些想成为重要人物的人惹出来的。
——George Eliot(英国小说家艾略特)
35、If you doubt yourself,
then indeed you stand on shaky ground.
如果你怀疑自己，那么你的立足点确实不稳固了。
——Ibsen(挪威剧作家易卜生)
36、Ideal is the beacon. Without ideal,
there is no secure direction; without direction ,there is no life.
理想是指路明灯。没有理想，就没有坚定的方向;
没有方向，就没有生活。 ——Leo Tolstory(俄国作家托尔斯泰)
37、Ideal are like the stars ——- we never reach them ,
but like mariners , we chart our course by them.
理想犹如天上的星星，我们犹如水手，虽不能达到天上，
但是我们的航程可凭借它指引。
——Carl Schurz(美国政治家舒尔茨)
38、Have an aim in life, or your energies will all be wasted.
人生应该树立目标，否则你的精神会白白浪费。
——R. Peters(美国法学家彼得斯)
39、Dont part with yourxxxs, When they are gone you may still exist,
but you have ceased to live.
不要放弃你的幻想。当幻想没有了以后，你还可以生存，但是你虽生犹死。
——Mark Twain(马克 吐温)
40、Do not, for one repulse,
give up the purpose that you resolved to effect.
不要只因一次失败，就放弃你原来决心想要达到的目的。
——Willian Shakespeare(莎士比亚)
41、Between the ideal and the reality,
Between the motion and the act, Fall the shadow.
理想与现实之间，动机与行为之间，总有一道阴影。
——Thomas Stearns Eliot(T.S.爱略特)
42、A man is not old as long as he is seeking something.
A man is not old until regrets take the place of dreams.
只要有一个人还有所追求，他就没有老。直到后悔取代了梦想，一个人才算老。
——J. Barrymore(巴里穆尔)
43、Change as change is mere flux and lapse; it insults intelligence. Genuinely to know is to grasp a permanent end that realises itself through changes.
如果仅仅就变化论变化，则只是变动不羁，倏忽即逝;这是低能的表现，真正了解变化在于把握住在变化中完成自身的永恒目标。
——John Dewey 约翰·杜威
44、Change is the law of life. And those who look only to the past or the present are certain to miss the future.
变化是生活的法则。只盯着过去或眼前的人注定失去未来。
——John F.Kennedy 约翰·弗·肯尼迪
45、Genius is formed in quiet, character in the stream of human life.
天才悄无声息地诞生，性情却在生命之河里逐渐形成。
——Goethe 歌德
46、With a character both proud and timid, one never amounts to anything.
一个人既自傲又胆怯，将永远一事无成。
——Joseph Roux 约瑟夫·鲁
47、If there is anything that we wish to change the child, we should first examine it and see whether it is not something that could better be changed in ourselves.
假如我们想让孩子在某个方面有所改变，我们应首先检验一下，看看我们自己是否最好在这一方面变一变。
——Jung 荣格
48、The finest inheritance you can give to a child is to allow it to make its own way, completely on its own feet.
你能留给孩子的最好财产莫过于允许他完全独立自主地摸索自己的道路。
——Isadora Duncan 伊莎多拉·邓肯
49、Mans highest merit always is, as much as possible, to rule external circumstances and as little as possible to let himself be ruled by them.
人最大的优点是尽可能多地驾驭外部环境，尽可能少地让环境约束自己。
——Goethe 歌德
50、Dont wait for ideal circumstances, they will never come, nor for the best opportunities.
不要等候最好的条件或者最佳时机，它们永远不会降临。
——Janet Erskine Stuart 珍尼特·厄斯金·斯图亚特
篇19：英语中考作文：诚信
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+ 加入清单请你以 “To Be an Honest Man”为题，用英语写一篇80词左右的短文。
内容包括：1.说说你对诚实的认识。2.谈谈你做过或听过的不诚实的事例以及带来的危害。3.倡议同学们做个诚实的人。
提示词：traditional virtue（传统美德）, wolves（狼）, tell lies（撒谎）
To Be an Honest Man
As we know, honesty is one of the Chinese traditional virtues, so I think it is necessary for everyone to be an honest man.
I have heard of the story “Wolves are coming”. The little boy lost all his sheep at last because he told lies to the villagers twice. From the story, I know that if someone is not honest, he or she will lost good friends.
Remember that honesty is invaluable. Each of us should try to be an honest man not only in our study but also in our daily life from now on.
篇20：2024年中考英语作文热点话题预测：旅游介绍
全文共 1295 字
+ 加入清单请你阅读你的加拿大网友tommy的e-mail，根据e-mail的内容，给他写一封回信.
dear li lei,
i havent heard from you for a long time. im glad to tell you that ill visit beijing this summer vacation. it is said that beijing is a great city with a long history and more changes have taken place since the 2008 olympic games. i would like to know something about beijing, such as places of interest, the environment, traffic and people there.
im looking forward to hearing from you soon.
yours,
tommy
★ 范文
dear tommy,
im glad to know you will come to beijing.
beijing, the capital of china, is one of the largest cities in the world. there are many places of interest, such as the summer palace, the forbidden city and the great wall. all of them are beautiful and well-known to the world. great changes have taken place in beijing since we successfully held the 2008 0lympic games.
now, people pay more attention to the environment. more trees and flowers have been planted. for the traffic, it is very convenient for people to travel around beijing, because several new subway lines have been built. if you come to beijing, you will find people here are very friendly and helpful. whats more, a lot of people can speak english. beijing is really an attractive city with a long history.
im looking forward to hearing from you soon.
yours,
li lei