中考英语作文亮点短语【通用20篇】

一、审题要清

看到考题后，先不要急于动笔，要仔细看清题目要求的内容。在自己的头脑中构思出一个框架或画面，确定短文的中心思想，不要匆匆下笔，看懂题意，根据提供的资料和信息来审题。审题要审格式、体裁、人物关系、故事情节、主体时态、活动时间、地点等。

二、要点明确

要点是给分的一个重要因素。为了防止写作过程中遗漏要点，同学们要充分发挥自己的观察力，把情景中给出的各个要点逐一罗列出。

三、列出提纲

为写作做好准备。根据文章要点短文的中心思想将主要句型、关键词语记下，形成提纲。

四、写顺全文

写短文时要做到五个方面：

1.避免使用汉语式英语，尽量使用自己熟悉的句型。

2.多用简单句型，记事、写人一般都不需要复杂的句型。可适当多使用陈述句、一般疑问句、祈使句和感叹句。不用或少用非谓语或独立主格结构等较复杂的句型。

3.注意语法、句法知识的灵活运用。语态、时态要准确无误;主谓语要一致，主语的人称和数要和谓语一致;注意冠词用法，例如：It takes Tom half an hour to go to school by bus.中的an不能写成a;注意拼写，例如：fourteen，forty，ninth等不要写成forteen，fourty，nineth等;注意标点符号和大小写。

4.描写人物时，要生动具体，可以选择使用下列词汇，例如：外形：tall，short，fat，thin，strong，weak，pretty等;颜色：red,yel-low，blue，white，green，brown，black等;心情：glad，happy，sad，excited，anxious，interest-ed等;情感：love，like，hate，feel，laugh，cry，smile，shout等。

5.上下文要连贯。同学们应把写好的句子，根据故事情节，事情发生的先后次序(时间或空间)，使用一些表示并列、递进等过渡词进行加工整理，使文章连贯、自然、流畅。同学们应注意下面过渡的用法：并列关系：and,as well as,or…;转折关系：but,yet,how-ever…;时间关系：when,while,after,before,then,after that…;因果关系：so，there-fore，asaresult…;目的：in order to，in order that，so as to,so that…;列举：for example ,such as…;总结性：in general,in all,in a word,generally speaking…

五、没有病句

中考作文时，由于时间紧、内容多，同学们出错在所难免。因此，改错这一环节必不可少。中考作文评卷是根据要点、语言准确性、上下文的连贯性来给分，根据错误多少来扣分。因此中考时花几分钟时间用来检查错误显得尤为重要。检查错误应从以下几个方面入手：(1)看字数是否达到要求，看有无遗漏要点。

(2)看文体格式是否正确规范。

(3)看有无语法或用词上的错误。

(4)看单词拼写、字母大小写是否有错，标点符号有无遗漏或用错等等。

(5)注意时态、语态、人称是否上下文一致。

六、先打草稿

考试中，书面表达应做到先打草稿，写完后多读几遍，检查是否有误，然后再抄到试卷上，注意字迹要工整，不涂、不画、不勾不抹，避免不必要的扣分。

一、解决方法题型

要求考生列举出解决问题的多种途径

1. 问题现状

2. 怎样解决(解决方案的优缺点)

In recent days, we have to face the problem-----A, which is becoming more and more serious. First, ------------(说明A的现状).

Second, ---------------(举例进一步说明现状)( 这两个变换的词要记住)

Confronted with _ A, we should take a serious of effective measure

s to cope with the situation.(我们应该采取措施认真对待)

For one thing, ------(解决方法一).

For another -------(解决方法二).

Finally, ------(解决方法三).( 这三个变换的词要记住)

Personally, I believe that ---(我的解决方法). In a word , I’m confident that a bright future is a waiting us because------(带来的好处).

二、说明利弊题型

这种题型往往要求先说明一下现状，再对比事物本身的利弊，有时也会单从一个角度(利或弊)出发，最后往往要求考生表

明自己的态度(或对事物前景提出预测)

1. 说明事物现状

2. 事物本身的优缺点(或一方面)

3. 你对现状(或前景)的看法

Nowadays many people prefer A(事物) because it has a signific ant role in our daily life. Generally, its advantages can be seen as

follows.(它很好)

First ------(A的优点之一). Besides -------(A的优点之二).

But every coin has two sides.(事物都有两面性).

The negative aspects are also apparent. On the one hand,------(A的第一个缺点).The other hand,---------(A的第二个缺点).

In a word (总之), I believe that the positive aspects overweigh the

negative ones. Therefore, I would like to ---------------(我的看法).

So we should take it reasonably and do it according to the circum

stances we are in. Only by this way, it will be better(对前景的测).

三、议论文的框架

不同观点列举型( 选择型 :你会选A还是B，说说理由)

There is a widespread concern over the issue that __作文题目_____. But it is well known that the opinion is different from person to person. A majority of people think (大多数人认为)that _ 观点一________.

There are 2 factors as follows: firstly, ___原因一_______.

Secondly , ___原因二_____.

however,People differ in their opinions on this matter.Some people thin

k that ___观点二_______. On the one hand， ___原因一___ __

__. On the other hand, ____原因二_____.

Therefore, there is no doubt that ___观点二______.

As far as I am concerned, I firmly support the view that __观点一或二______.It is not only because ________, but also because ____(不仅因为。。还因为。。). The more _harder______, the more __better____.(越努力越好)

四、图表作文的框架

As is shown/indicated/illustrated by the figure inthetable (graph/picture/pie/chart), ___作文题目的议题_____ has been on rise/ decrease (goes up/increases/drops/decreases),significantly/dramatically steadily rising/decreasing from______to ______ . From the sharp/mared decline/ rise in the chart, it goes without saying that(说明) ________.

There are at least two good reasons accounting for ______. On the one hand,________. On the other hand,_______ is due to the fact that ________.In addition, ________ is responsible for _______. Maybe there are some other reasons.

But it is generally believed that the above mentioned reasons are commonlyconvincing.

As far as I am concerned,I hold the point of view that _______. I am sure my

opinion is both sound and well-grounded.(我的理由合情合理)

五、说明原因型

(一件事情或事物产生影响的原因)

Currently, A has been the order of the day .This does demonstrate the theory --- nothing is more valuable than A .It is clear that ( 1 ). if you ( 2 ), as a result ,your dreams will come true . On the contrary(相反), if you ( 3).Failure will be following with you .It turns out that(总结的话) .

No one can deny another fact (没有人会否认事实)that ( 4) .You dont have to lookvery far to find out the truth 。 We all know (5) .It will have a profound influence upon ( 6) For me ,I think (总结全文：题目中观点——某个原因很重要 ).

导语：如今微信已成为我们生活中的一部分，尤其受到年轻人的欢迎。下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的英语作文，欢迎阅读与借鉴，谢谢!

1.如今微信已成为我们生活中的一部分，尤其受到年轻人的欢迎。其优点如下：1.可以非常迅速地与朋友进行文字、表情等交流;2.可以与朋友分享图片、音乐、视频等;3.不仅能发送语音讯息，而且可以直接通话;4.使用时不受时间地点限制;5.使用时免费。

词数为80左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Nowadays, WeChat has been a part of our life. It is becoming more and more popular with young people because of the following advantages. First, we can communicate with our friends by sending words and expressions very quickly. Second, we can share pictures, music and videos with them. Third, we can not only send voice messages to them but also speak to them directly. Besides, we can use it in any time. Last but not least, we use it for free and can save money. In my view, although WeChat has improved our lives, it should be used properly. We shouldn’t lose ourselves in it.

Zengzi once said: "people cant be hony, a long way to go. It means:" too large to be ambitious people, tasks is very important. And the long way. This suggests that the people with lofty ideals can achieve great things.

Chinas great writer pu song-ling said: "where there is a will, there is a way, cross the rubicon, 102 qin guan chu after all.

Chu overlord xiang yu has a lofty ambition, he led tens of thousands of troops in war millions of qin, qin will beat, pushed to the tyranny of the qin dynasty. Because when he was young, there is a big negative, so lead many Jiang Dongzi first, felling nothing, qing dynasty. Imagine if he doesnt have great ambition, how can have the spirit was very? Ge hong once said will, column and your fame. Mountaineering to hard and not end, will become the majestic mountains. Tell us aspiring thereof, will not be as difficult to yield, after a difficult. To meet them will be a success. Chinas famous litterateur, thinker, revolutionist, lu xun as to save the people of lofty ambition so he just from a medical article, starting from scratch, leng to save all the nations in the oil and water, become ten thousand people admire big literary giant.

So, ambitious people will do something great admiration for the nations. The great ambition is not?

There is a poet in the tang dynasty he doing nothing all day long, always fantasizing about not aspire to, dont work hard is known. Admittedly, this is impossible. It was the day dreaming! Spent her life in the end, he was useless.

So, aspiring people can succeed, the heart, is unlikely to succeed.

The eagle can fly, because he has the ambition of the skies; The sea can surge because he set the all-encompassing. Tall bamboo can roll, because he set down the ambition of everything.

Lets anger force set ambitious like an eagle flying high, Like the sea inclusive everything; On a roll like bamboo.

曾子曾经说过：“士不可以不弘毅，任重而道远。意思就是：“胸怀宽广的人不能不志向远大，任务十分重大。，而路途遥远。这就表明了有志之士可成大事也。

我国的大文学家蒲松龄说：“有志者，事竟成，破釜沉舟，百二秦关终归楚。

楚霸王项羽有着远大的志向，他曾带领几万人马于百万秦军决一死战，将秦军击败，推倒了秦王朝的暴政。正是因为他年轻时就有远大的报负，所以才带领众多的江东子第，伐无道，诛暴秦。试想一下，如果他没有远大的志向，怎么会有气吞山河的气概呢?葛洪曾经说过志坚者，功名之柱也。登山不以艰险而止，则必臻乎峻岭。告诉我们有志坚之人，不会像困难屈服，经过困难之后。迎接他们的将是成功。我国着名的文学家、思想家、革命家、鲁迅因为有拯救国人的远大的志向所以他才弃医从文，从零开始，愣是拯救万民于水火之中，成为万人敬仰的大文豪。

所以说，志向远大的人一定会成就大事，为万民所敬仰。那志向不远大的人又如何呢?

在唐朝时有一个诗人他整天无所事事，总幻想着不立志，不努力就远近闻名。诚然，这是不可能的。真是白日作梦啊。最终，他还是碌碌无为的度过了一生。

所以，胸怀大志的人定能成功，胸无大志，是不可能成功的。

雄鹰之所以能展翅高飞，是因为他立下了翱翔天空的大志;大海之所以能汹涌澎湃是因为他立下了包容万物的大志;高大的竹子之所以能势如破竹，是因为他立下俯视万物的大志。

让我们怒力吧立下大志像雄鹰一样展翅高飞;像大海一样包容万物;像竹子一样势如破竹。

春节习俗与计划，如何过2009年的春节，假如你是LINGLING给外国朋友JHON发一份电子邮件。

The spring Festival

Dear Jhon :

The Spring Festival is the most important festival in China. It is on January 1st according to the Chinese lunar calendar(中国的农历). It’s China’s New Year’s Day. So usually a month before the festival people begin to buy food clothes and decorations(装饰) for houses.

About a week before the festival housewives are busy preparing the new year dinner. And they will do a lot of washing and cleaning in the houses. People who are far away on business are hurrying to return home for the new year’s family reunion（团聚）.

On New Year Eve each family will gather tighter eating talking and watching TV for almost the whole night. And there will be some interesting programmes on TV. The children are the happiest of all because they can get presents from parents or grandparents.

On Lunar New Year’s Day after getting up people will eat dumplings. When they meet their neighbours or friends they’ll say: “Happy New Year!”

I am ready to spend with together my family on the Spring Festival I’am going to see my grandparents and friengs . I ’m going to Diseyland in HONGKONG with my parents I will revise lessinos do exercise every day help the old and children .Wellcom to China. Waiting for your e -mail.

Yours

Lingling

英语写作是学生学习的一个盲点，缺乏对写作的专门训练和反思，老师的工作量大，造成作文讲评大多数时候只谈现象，因此学生学得也不具体、不深入，忽略写作技能的提高，甚至误认为只要句子结构正确，无单词拼写错误就应该得满分。同学们应该走出对英语写作认识上的误区。那么怎样才能写出一篇优秀作文，而在中考中获取高分呢？

一、写作决窍

总体把握，要点齐全；人称时态，逻辑清楚；

关键词汇，动词第一；组词成句，结构完整；

组句成文，连词增色；此路不通，绕道迂回；

字迹工整，留好印象；从句适量，高分有望。

1.认真审题。审题包括要点、格式、词数以及此篇文章要传递给读者什么样的信息，告诫读者什么(即写作目的)。

2.确定文体和时态。确定文体后，根据不同文体的特点和要求进行组织材料；同时确定出该篇文章的总时态与时态的变化。

3.写完要点，但不随意发挥。

4.先草稿，后抄写。

Dear editor，

Im writing to tell you something about the problem of food safety.

“The food is what matters to the people, the food by An Weixian”, the humanity grows, the economy soars, the social progress, the time cannot leave food, cannot leave the security, hygienic, nutrition food.“How can like this? How should we manage?”The general populations were asking unceasingly “we must eat safe food” the general populations to request unceasingly, populaces call, stimulates to movement us to ponder, moves.

Food enterprise, the conscience enterprise”, food production management enterprise is qualified, the high quality food producer, is the person who has rendered meritorious service, also is the inferior harmful food manufacturer, and possibly becomes the criminal, therefore said, food produces the operator is the food security first owner, decides food quality the key aspect both is the technology, also is not the management and the equipment, the key lies in food production in the human key to manage the owner and jobholders professional personal integrity and the moral standard.

The dead pork production meat product, the use industry paraffin wax manufacture hot pot bed charge, the use sodium hydroxide soaks floods sends the product, dont they know these things harmfully? Also non-, how lets us listen to the production protein content only is 2% powdered milk production business owner when hears the long-term oral administration powdered milk causes the big end of baby death is says, “, this kind of powdered milk cannot eat continuously, we always do not eat in any case, we all arrive the supermarket to buy several dozens Yuan tin of import powdered milk to eat”。

This accident made me realize the seriousness of the food safety problem. I sincerely hope that the whole society pay much more attention to food safety.

[中考英语写给主编关于食品安全问题的一封信作文

小明做了一个梦。他梦见自己为北京奥运会做一名志愿者：他努力帮助来自世界各国的外国朋友……在交谈中，小明让外国朋友更多地了解北京。外国朋友感谢小明，并认为小明的英语非常好。小明很高兴，他甜蜜地笑了……

请你根据设定的梦境并加以想象，写一段 80 词左右的短文。开始语和结束语均已给出（不计入总词数）。

内容要求：

（ 1 ）帮助外国朋友；（ 2 ）与外国朋友交谈；（ 3 ）感谢小明；（ 4 ）小明很高兴。

词汇参考： try （ do ） one＇s best ， find （ that ）， heavy （ lost ）， carry （ show ， take ）， taxi （ car ， bike ）， on the way ， talk with （ about ）

Xiao Ming had a dream （梦） last night . In the dream ， he volunteered to serve （志愿列队） the Beijing Olympics .

Xiao Ming had a dream last night . In the dream ， he volunteered to serve the Beijing Olym pics . He tried his best to help the foreign friends from different countries . When he found a foreign friend worried in the street ， he went up to him and asked him what was the matter . The foreigner told Xiao Ming he was Jack ， and he forgot the way to the Sun Hotel . Then Xiao Ming stopped a taxi and took him to the Sun Hotel . Xiao Ming talked with Jack on the way and made Jack know more about Beijing . Jack thanked Xiao Ming very much and thought Xiao Ming＇s English was very good . Xiao Ming was very happy . He smiled and smiled ， then he woke up .

①在此结构中，there是引导词，在句中不能充当任何成分，也不必翻译出来。句中的主语是某人或某物，谓语动词be要与主语的数保持一致。例如：There is a man at the door. 门口有一个人。

当主语是由两个或者两者以上的名词充当时，谓语动词be要跟它邻近的那个名词的数一致（就近一致）。例如：There are two dogs and a cat under the table.桌下有两只狗和一只猫。 比较： There is a cat and two dogs under the table.

②There be句型中的be不能用have来代替，但可以用lie(位于，躺)，stand(矗立)，exist(生存)，live(生活)等词来替换。例如：There stand a lot of tall buildings on both sides of the street. 街道两旁矗立着许多高楼。

There lies lake in front of our school. 我们学校前面有一个湖。

Once there lived a king here. 这儿曾经有一个国王。

There is going to be a sports meeting next week. 下周准备开一个运动会。

与there be 类似的结构： there seem(s)/happen(s) to be…

There seems to be one mistake in spelling. 似乎有一处拼写错误。

There happened to be a ruler here. 这儿碰巧有把尺子。

There seemed to be a lot of people there. 那儿似乎有很多人。

[中考英语作文热点句型

1. 接触各种思想/经历：be exposed to new ideas/experiences/problems

2. 人们认为：it is generally/widely believed/held/agreed that

3. 许多问题：a host/ number of problem

4. 引起人们注意：claim call/attract general/public/world attention to sth.

5. 意识到：there is a growing awareness(知道)/realization of/that，awaken sb. To the fact/danger

6. 适应新的形势/变化：adapt/adjust/accommodate(使适应) oneself to new environment/ change

7. 越来越：be increasingly +adj.，be on the rise，a growing number of

8. 接触社会：come into frequent/close contact with the world/society

9. 获得成功：achieve/accomplish success

10. 提出观点/建议：advance/put forward/come up with the arguments/ideas/suggestions

11. 作出努力：make tremendous(极大的)/persistent(持久稳固的)/sustained(持续不变的) effort to do sth.，take great pains to do(with work/study)

12. 影响学习：interfere with studies/work

13. 产生影响：have/exert a profound(深刻的) influence on life/personality，have a dramatic/ undesirable(令人不快的) effect on

14. 较好地驾驭生活：be a better pilot of one’s life

15. 剥夺机会/权力：deprive oneself of the chance/right/opportunity

16. 取代：substitute(替代) for/take the place of the old way

17. 采取措施：take effective steps/measures to

18. 控制我们的环境：take/gain increasing control over our own environment

19. 躲避危险/挑战：shy(躲避)/run away from the dangers/challenge

20. 满足要求：meet/satisfy/accommodate the demand of

21. 补偿损失：compensate for / make up for the loss/damage

22. 解释某现象：account for / explain the phenomenon

23. 对……很好的了解：have a better understanding/appreciation of，have a new perspective(观点) on，provide/gain an insight into

24. 把某因素考虑进去：take sth. into account(consideration)，give much thought to

25. 品位人生/自由青春：savor the life/freedom/youth

26. 培养对……的信心：develop/foster one’s interest/confidence in

27. 经历变化/困难/艰险：undergo/experience great changes/hardships/experience

28. 表现出自信心等： project one’s confidence/feeling/image

29. 生活充满不公正的地方：life is full of minor irritation/injustice

30. 追求学习/职业：pursue one’s academic(理论的) interest/professional career

31. 学习知识/技术：pursue/acquire knowledge/technology/skill

32. 被看作学习的……榜样：be held up as a good example

33. 交流经验/知识：share experience/ideas/problems/knowledge

34. 发挥/起到重要作用：play an (important/active/great)role/part

35. 逃学/缺课：skip school/a class/a meeting/a lecture

36. 知识/经验丰富：rich in knowledge/experience

37. 确立/追求目标：set/pursue a goal/higher standard

38. 到达目标：achieve/accomplish/stain the goal/aim/object

39. 克服困难：overcome obstacles/difficulty

40. 面临危险/困难：be confronted/faced with/in the face of danger/difficulty

41. 阻碍了成功：stand in the way of success，be an obstacle(障碍)/barrier to success/ growth

42. 阻碍了发展：hamper/impede/stunt the development of

43. 持传统的看法：hold conventional wisdom

44. 发表看法：voice/express one’s opinion

45. 持相反/合理的观点：take the opposite/fresh view

46. 揭穿某种一贯的说法：shatter the myth of

47. 求得帮助：enlist one’s support/help

48. 建立在大量的学习/实践上：build on tremendous amount of study/practice

49. 把成功/错误归咎于：attribute/own the success/failure to

50. 对……重要：be indispensable/important/vital to

导语：节约能源是每个公民的责任和义务，那么作为中学生，我们该如如何节能呢?下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的优秀英语作文，欢迎阅读与借鉴，谢谢!

提示：1.步行或骑自行车去上学;最好不坐公交车或私家车;

2. 使用节能灯，少开灯，离开时记住关灯。

3. 节约用水，注意随手关好水龙头

4. 节约用纸，随身携带手帕。

5. 要有回收利用废品的意识。

提示词：private car 私家车 energy-saving light 节能灯handkerchief 手帕

要求：1. 要包括以上所有要点，要做到行文流畅、脉络清晰

2. 词数为80-100.

It’s our duty to save energy. As middle school students, what should we do to save energy?Firstly, we can walk or ride a bike to school. We’d better not take the bus or the private car. Secondly, we should use energy--saving lights when you leave the room. Thirdly, we should save water. Don’t forget to turn off the water tap after using it. Fourthly, we also need to save paper. It’s a good idea to bring a handkerchief with us. Fifthly, we should learn to recycle waste things such as cans, paper and bottles.

In a word, we should try our best to save energy.

【参考译文】

节约能源是我们的职责。作为中学生，我们应该做些什么来节约能源?首先，我们可以步行或骑自行车上学。我们最好不要乘公共汽车或私家车。其次，我们应该使用节能灯当你离开房间。第三，我们应该节约用水。使用后别忘了关水龙头。第四，我们还需要节省纸张。带上手帕是个好主意。第五，我们应该学会回收废物，如易拉罐、纸张和瓶子。

总之，我们应该尽最大努力节约能源。

1)结构2)内容要点 3)语言(词组搭配、句型、句式变化、过渡词)看结构和内容要点定分数档，看语言给成绩。这是中考英语阅卷的潜规则。 三段四步法——中考英语满分杀手锏 知己知彼，方能百战不殆，既然中考阅卷流程和内部标准已经明朗化，相对的策略也就顺利成章的形成了。现在和大家分享，笔者教学和阅卷过程中总结创立的写作满分秘诀。

1 “三段”(三个段落)——针对的阅卷老师先看文章结构和内容要点，让阅卷老师不得不给你定位一类文。 中高考情景是作文，无论是那种文体，都可以用三段法来表示。这个方法的起源是来自美国的“高考”SAT考试，(SAT是美国或它国学生想要申请美国大学必须参加的考试，故被叫过美国的高考)。 我们管这样的文章叫做HamburgerWriting(汉堡写作)

顾名思义，就是无论是记叙文、还是议论文、或者08年中考以及09一模西城的夹叙夹议文章，都可以通用。简单解释如下：

Since i was an innocent child, i had the idea to be a doctor in the future. I always see the people died in the TV, i feels

frustrated about it. therefore, a dream to be a doctor came into my mind. I want to be the person who can save people＇s life just like God Jesus

家对我意义重大。「不管家是多么简陃，家是世界上最好的地方。」我珍视家庭温暖，并且认为家是世界上最光辉的地方之一。

每当我在日常生活中遭遇到困难、失败甚至挫折时，家就是我寻求庇护之所。在家中，我亲爱的父母和兄弟姊妹会安慰我a、鼓励我。而有了他们的关心与鼓舞，我将恢复自信，并能鼓能我的所有的力量和勇气，来面对严酷的生活现实。对我而言，家永远是一种喜悦，我总是可以在其中找到爱、了解、关怀与帮助。

home means a lot to me. “be it ever so humble, there is no place like home.” i appreciate the warmth of my home, and regard it as one of the brightest and dearest spots on earth.

it is the place where i can take refuge whenever i meet with difficulties, failures and even frustrations in my daily life. at home, my dear parents and brothers and sisters will comfort me and cheer me up. and with their concern and encouragement, i will regain my self-confidence and muster up all my strength and courage to face the stern realities of life. to me, home is forever a joy where i can always find love, understanding, care and help.

[中考英语作文家永恒的喜悦

中考英语作文：Shopping on the Internet

With the development of the Internet and the popularization of computers, shopping on the Internet has become a commonplace in our life. Here consumers can buy almost everything they need.

Shopping on the Internet has a lot of advantages, of which the most important is perhaps its convenience. People dont have to waste a lot of their energy and precious time to go from one shop to another to choose the commodities they like. This is especially desirable to the old, the sick and the busy people who cannot go to the shops in person. The goods come in all shapes, sizes and colors on the Internet. All they need to do is to sit in front of their computers and click the mouses. The commodities they order will be delivered to them promptly.

However, shopping on the Internet also has its disadvantages. The first disadvantage is that the consumers cant see the goods or try them on personally. Sometimes, the real goods may not be the same as what they have seen on the computer. The second disadvantage is that some shops on the Internet are not registered. They will never deliver anything to you after they get the money from you. Once cheated, you will find that you have nowhere to go to complain.

中考英语作文：网上购物

随着互联网的发展和电脑的普及，网上购物已成为我们生活中司空见惯的事情了。消费者在这里几乎可以买到所有他们需要的东西。

网上购物有很多优点，其中最重要的也许是它的方便。人们不必浪费了很多精力和宝贵的时间去从一个商店到另一个选择，他们喜欢的商品。这是可取的是老人，病人和忙碌的人们谁不能亲自去商店。商品的形状，大小和颜色在互联网上。所有他们需要做的是坐在电脑前，点击鼠标。他们的商品订单将交付给他们及时。

但是，网上购物也有其缺点。第一个不利因素是，消费者不能看到商品或亲自试穿他们。有时候，真正的货物不同他们所看到的电脑上得。第二个缺点是，一些商店在互联网上没有登记。一旦骗了，你会发现，你已经无处可去抱怨。

中考英语作文带翻译：网上购物(Shopping on the Internet)，以供各位同学们呢参考，在学习英语作文的时候，也多注意网上购物的利弊!

Nowadays, there is often a lack of understanding between parents and children. Children always complain that their parents are out of date, while parents can’t approve of what their children say and do. Thus, a big generation gap is formed.

如今，往往是缺乏了解父母与子女之间。孩子们总是抱怨他们的父母都是过时的，而父母并不赞同他们的孩子说的和做的。因此，形成一个大的代沟。

The gap remains wide for many reasons. Children want to be free to choose their own friends, select their own classes in school, plan their own future, earn and spend their own money, and generally run their own life in a more independent way than many parents allow. Also, young children wish to be understood by their parents, but most parents don’t quite understand their children. They regard it as their responsibility to teach their offspring traditional beliefs. They want them to be obedient and do well in school. Therefore, misunderstanding often arise from parents’ tendency to interfere in children’s daily activities.

产生代沟的原因有很多。孩子们想要自由的选择自己的朋友，选择在学校自己的班级，规划自己的未来，自己挣钱自己花，和一般运行自己的更独立的生活方式比父母允许的。同时，年轻的孩子们希望能够得到父母的，但大多数父母不太了解他们的孩子。他们认为这是他们教他们的后代的传统信仰的责任。他们想让他们听话，在学校做得很好。因此，误解往往从父母倾向于干涉孩子的日常活动。

In my opinion, most problems between parents and children could be solved by joint efforts of both sides to enhance mutual understanding.

在我看来，父母和子女间的代沟问题可以通过双方的共同努力，增进相互理解的解决。

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08年浙江义乌中考英语作文范文：义乌作为一个国际商贸名城，吸引了越来越多的国内外游客来旅游购物。因此，建设一个绿色，文明的义乌显得尤为重要。请你以为题，写一篇短文。

参考词汇：environment duty,rubbish,plstic,pollution,plant

要求：（1）语句通顺，语意连贯，书写认真 （1）词数809左右。文章开头已给出，不计入词数

（3）可适当发挥（文中不能出现真实的人名和姓名）

As we know,Yiwu is an international city.________________________________________________________

参考中考英语作文范文：

How to build a greener city

As we know,Yiwu is an international city. It attracts more and more people to come and do business.So its our duty to build a beautiful green city. As students,we shouldnt throw rubbish anywhere on the ground or use too many plastic bags. Ask the factories not to put waste water into the river and wed better not go to school by car so that we can reduce the air pollution. Whats more, we should plant more trees and flowers to make our city greener. Lets work hard for our city tohave a good environment.

如何建立一个更绿色的城市我们知道，义乌是一个国际城市。它吸引更多的人来这里做生意。所以建立一个美丽的绿色城市，我们的责任。作为学生，我们不应该把垃圾扔在地上的任何地方或使用太多的塑料袋。要求工厂不要把废水排入河中，我们最好不要坐汽车去学校，我们可以减少空气污染。更重要的是，我们应该种更多的树和花来绿化我们的城市。让我们努力工作，为我们的城市有一个良好的环境。

下面是语文迷网为大家整理提供的中考英语作文高分指导，希望对你有帮助。

一、了解高分作文的特点

要想作文获得高分，必须了解高分作文具有的特点，才有助于我们朝之而努力。高分作文一般具有以下特点：

1、书写工整，书面整洁，很少有涂改痕迹。

2、分段合理。全文分段一般不止一个自然段，让阅卷老师很容易就能找到作文所要求写的要点和重要句子。

3、要点齐全，不缺要点。

4、首尾呼应，自然成一体。

5、使用了大量的高级词汇和句型。阅卷老师一看就知道这个同学的功底非不一般，自然就给打高分了。

6、开头言简意赅，不啰嗦，不偏题，迅速引入主题。

7、段与段之间，自然过渡。有合适的连接词。

8、句与句之间，有恰当的连接词，使之自然成一体。

9、全文中同一个意思，基本没有重复使用某一个词、短语或者句型等，说明这个同学的词汇量不同寻常。老师自然就对该作文有好感了。

10、能够恰当使用谚语、格言等给文章添彩。

二、勤积累，巧准备

要想作文得高分，除了了解以上的特点外，还要在平时的学习中注意一下方面：

1、牢记课标词汇是基础

一篇作文多数是由积极词汇写出来的，这些词汇主要来源于课标。因此，牢记课标词汇是写好作文的基础。

2、掌握课标词汇和短语的用法

要想作文不扣分或者少扣分，有个要求是作文的语病少。怎么能够减少语病呢?这就要求我们在平时的学习过程中反复通过练习，掌握课标词汇和短语等的用法。例如，对于assoonas、stopsomebodyfromdoingsomething、other、another等的用法很多学生就经常出错。

3、高度重视同一个意思的多种表达方式

高分作文有个特点是：让老师发现你拥有丰富的词汇量，你的水平高人一筹。这由何而来?靠我们在平时学习过程中，逐步积累起来的。比如：今年的中考作文，谈的就是帮助他人的问题。同一个意思“帮助”，假如你就用一个动词“help”，岂不显得你词汇贫乏?假如你在作文中不断地变换方式，用help、givesomebodyahand、giveahandtosomebody、beinneedof等以表达“帮助”同一个意思，岂不更好呢?

像这样的例子很多，比如：大家都觉得很简单又很基础的“表示姓名的方式”就有：MynameisJim.I’mJim.I’mcalled/namedJim.I’maboycalled/named/withthenameofJim.等等。

表达年龄的方式有：Sheis12.Sheis12yearsold.Sheisaged12.Sheisagirlof12(yearsold)。Sheisagirlaged12.等等。

很显然，使用高级一点的更好。

4、加强练习，积累经验

学习语言最好的方法是运用，作文也不例外。我们要想作文得高分，必须经常练习，才能提高水平。

5、充分利用作文范文

很多资料书上都有作文范文。诚然，他们有很多值得借鉴的地方。

我们怎么利用它们呢?首先，我们先不要看文章，自己先思考一下：假如你来写，你会怎么去写，会用到哪些词或者句子等。然后去比较，勾出其中的好词佳句，并且把它摘录在专门的作文册子上。供写作时选用。

另外，背一些范文也是很有必要的。

6、背诵一些谚语和警句

作文中如果出现恰当的谚语和警句，会有锦上添花的效果。

三、精心审题，沉着写初稿

很多同学看到作文后，下笔就写。这是不对的。一则很容易写偏题、写出病句，涂改后书面又不整洁，影响得分。

其实，会写作文的同学都知道，审题非常的重要，可以防止很多毛病，提高得分。那么我们审题要做些什么呢?

审题主要要做一下事情：

1、审人称、时态、体裁等

审题时，要求我们要弄清楚这篇文章主要使用的人称是第几人称，什么时态、什么体裁。这些问题解决后至少不会犯很严重的错误：全文皆错。例如，如果一篇文章，本来应该一般过去时，你的每句话却用了一般现在时态。你想想，那还能得高分吗?

2、明确必须表达的要点

高分作文有个特点是要点齐全。如果漏掉一个要点，则要扣分。因此我们必须认真细读其要求，把必须表达的要点勾出来。保证不漏掉任何一个要点。

3、罗列出可能会用到的短语、句型，确定好使用哪个?

4、确定好如何分段

就是要确定好，将哪些要点放在一个自然段里面，首段、尾段打算写哪些?

四、耐心修改，提炼句子

很多同学写完作文后就感觉大事已毕，高兴地放下笔就了事了。其实，这时候，不妨从以下方面去修改，相信会让你受益匪浅的。

1、巧妙选择使用高级词汇、短语、句型等

当我们掌握了一定量的同意表达法之后，在写作时有时不会让你都运用到的。这时为了展示你与众不同的能力，你务必要选择高级的。例如，就以今年中考的英语作文为例，它就要求写“帮助老人的感受”。至于“老人”的表达法，有oldpeople和theold。使用后者的同学自然能力比前者强。同样的道理，作文中的“病人”的表达法有sickpeople，patients，thesick，你认为使用哪个更能显示你的高水平呢?当然是thesick了。

2、巧妙使用低级表达法代替自己的难点

我们写作时难免会遇到一些难以用英语表达的东西。怎么办呢?换为最简单的表达法吧。例如：我市今年中考作文题，就要求学生表达一个意思：帮助同学，可以增进友谊。很多学生翻译不来“增进”，面对这样的问题怎么办呢?怎么不换个说法呢?你看，Ifwehelpourclassmateswiththeirstudyandotherthings，wecanmakeourfriendshiplonger。不就达到目的了吗?

3、大胆改变句型，使之生辉

例如，我们将一些句子改为感叹句，复合句、强调句、反意疑问句、将句子改得更能显示你的高水平和能力。何乐而不为呢?

4、高度关注句与句、段与段之间的衔接问题。务必做到过渡自然，衔接紧凑。

5、适当引用个别谚语或警句，来提高作文档次。

五、一丝不苟抄誊作文

一篇好的作文，经过审题、修改之后，务必要一丝不苟地抄誊在答题卷上，再认真地仔细检查一遍，那才是大公告成了。

The 21st century, the thought of the teenagers, we and our beloved one generation, will never be able to melt together, seems to have no why, I do not know why. Adults like to impose their ideas in a new generation of us, and we, must also accept the ideology of "unreasonable", if not accept, perhaps, in the eyes of an adult, our behavior is what is called a rebellious, not sensible, wings hard, but, you never know what we carry in our hearts, can only silently bear all this, buried our own thoughts, not move to the attraction.

We are the -- the future of The Times. We have our own dreams, we have our own in the future, we have our own life to live, all this, go to our own, you can never be with us life, the way back, but also to go on our own. Please let go of your generous hand, let us fly yourself.

Times are changing, the life also is changing. Different time, different people, have their own way. Dear, father, mother, we grow up, learn to walk, bumpy road ahead, lets face it alone, raising more than ten years, we wont forget, you also should have a rest.

二十一世纪，我们这些青少年的思想，与我们所敬爱的上一辈人，永远无法融在一起，似乎没有为什么，也不知道为什么。大人们喜欢把他们的思想强加在我们新一辈人的身上，而我们，也必须接受这种“无理”的思想，如若不接受，也许，在大人的眼睛里，我们的行为就是所谓的叛逆、不懂事、翅膀硬了，可是，你们永远不会知道我们心中所想的一切，只能默默地承受这一切，埋藏我们自己的思想，不动生色。

我们是这个时代的——未来。我们有自己的梦想，我们有自己的未来，我们有我们自己的生活要过，这一切，要我们自己去承担，你们永远不能陪伴我们一生，往后的路，还要靠我们自己去走。请你们放开你们那宽厚的手，让我们自己飞翔吧。

时代在变，生活也在变。不同的时代，不同的人，有自己的路。亲爱的——爸爸，妈妈，我们长大了，学会走路了，前面坎坷的路，让我们独自面对吧，十几年的养育之恩，我们不会忘记，你们也该休息休息了。

如果让你创建一个节日，你会创建怎样一个节日，为什么要创建它，时间是什么时候，在那天要做些什么，在什么地方，哪些人......

If I am able to create a holiday, it would be the "Food and Fun Day". Think about it, with all the school homework and exams; it would be really nice to take a break from all the studies and just relax. Also I think everyone would enjoy the great food and lots of fun. Its just like a big party where everyone is invited. I would like the "Food and Fun Day" be set during the middle of the school year, where everyone can relax from their studies for a day. On that day, everyone will bring food and drinks to school and share what they brought with friends, students, and teachers. There will also be games and winners gets great prizes. Think about it, how great it would be to have a holiday like that!