中考英语作文亮点短语【精选19篇】

There’s no doubt that my mother gives all her love to me. I do believe she is a great person who makes my life beautiful and meaningful.

She is an easygoing and kind woman with bright eyes and a lovely smile. Although she is often busy, I still feel that I am taken good care of by her. It’s a great pleasure to chat with her when I get into troubles. She always encourages me not to give up and tries to cheer me up by coming up with good solutions. In addition, I am fascinated by her cooking and writing.

With her love, I feel like a fish swimming happily in a beautiful sea. I’ll cherish her love forever.

[我的母亲英语中考作文

I still remember the Titanic, though its a big ship but it still sunk, so, in my opinion, the best ship is the friendship. Friendship is one of the most important things in everyones life.

我还记得泰坦尼克号，但它是一个大的船，但它仍然沉没，所以，在我看来，最好的船是友谊。友谊是每个人生活中最重要的东西。

When you’re down, friends lift you up. When you lose your way, friends guide you and cheer you on

当你失落时，朋友会让你振作起来。当你迷失方向时，朋友会引导你，鼓励你

everyone need friends because there are a lot of things that you cant deal with yourself, and the friend’s just make up for it.

每个人都需要朋友，因为有很多事情你不能处理自己的问题，和朋友只是弥补。

When you’re down, friends lift you up. When you lose your way, friends guide you and cheer you on

当你失落时，朋友会让你振作起来。当你迷失方向时，朋友会引导你，鼓励你

Friendship just likes the sun, it can make you fell warm though in the cold winter, friendship just likes the water in the desert, it can make you fell that in the world, there still has hope .in a word, the friendship is the same meaning as the greatness, selfness and devotion.

友谊就像太阳，它可以让你在寒冷的冬天温暖，友谊就像沙漠里的水，它可以让你爱上这个世界，还是有希望的。总之，友谊是伟大意义相同，无私和奉献。

To make friends ,adding a friend equals adding a way ,open your heart ,devote yourself ,let friendship make your world colorful 。

交朋友，增加一个朋友等于增加一个方法，打开你的心扉，奉献自己，让友谊使你的世界丰富多彩。

中考英语作文范文 我的朋友

标签： 范文 / 作文 / 英语

I have many friends. One of them is my classmate Ma Hua.He is a League member and one of the best students in my class.He is fond of English and good at it.

He often practises reading aloud. So he has a good pronunciation. He is always ready to help others. With his help I have made great progress. I have made up my mind to catch up with him and to join the League in the near future.

中考英语试卷写作的分数各个省市有所不同，一般在15-20分之间。下面从阅卷老师的角度分析一下中考英语作文的得分点和扣分点。

中考英语作文对考生的要求有四点：1、内容要完整。 2、语句流畅。3、没有语法错误。4、书写规范。能达到上述要求的作文，都会得到相应的高分。

一：先看一下扣分点：

1.内容方面：要点缺失，可酌情扣分。比如中考作文“I want to do something for my school”，若没有写一件具体的事情，是要扣3分以上的;若写的事情太过于虚幻，没有实际内容，也会扣1-2分。

2.字数：少于60字的作文要酌情扣分。

中考英语作文要求60字以上，标点符号不算，少了就要扣分。但是60字的作文能不能得高分?从我们拿到的实例作文来看，16分以上的作文，没有少于75字的，甚至少于80字的也少之又少。当然，也极少有超过100字的，因为中考试卷的短线格一共80个，在格子下面大约还有2行的空间，可以加20字左右，再多阅卷人就很难看清了，也会影响卷面的美观。所以，同学们如果想让作文得到高分，最好是让字数在75-100字之间。

3. 语法和拼写错误：每个扣0.5，重复错误不计;

4. 标点错误：每4个扣0.5.

二：加分点

除了这些扣分点，还有一些得分点：比如说作文的组织结构分，就是根据学生使用复杂句型、单词和谚语、俗语的情况来加分。

只要文章中有1个亮点，基本就可以争取到1分(3分的文采分是很难全部拿到的)。而这1分的亮点，是可以提前准备的。例如，有一些“万金油”式的复杂句型，例如强调句型、only相关的倒装句等，只要同学们多操练几次，几乎是一定能用到作文当中，从而为自己争取到这1分。

其次就是卷面分

很多家长和同学，尤其是部分书法并不是十分整洁的同学，都会关心是否真的有“卷面分”的存在。虽然在阅卷标准里面并没有卷面分这一项，但是这个分数却真切地反映在了同学们的分数里面。

据阅卷老师的经验，在阅卷的时候并不是按这3个部分逐项打分的，而是在第一遍读完全文之后，心里已经形成了一个“印象分”，然后再细读第二、三遍，把印象分分配到各个打分部分。因此，这个“印象分”就非常重要，而同学们的书法，也正是在这个环节，影响到了自己的分数。所以初三的考生，如果书法不好，一定要注意。所谓的书法并不需要写的很漂亮，符合3个简单的标准即可：没有斜体、没有连笔、涂改较少。

越来越多汽车进入我们的家庭生活，改善了我们的生活，但同时也带来了很多问题，如塞车和车祸，给家庭和社会带来极大的危害。作为中学生，我们应该怎样做呢?

请写一篇有关交通安全的短文(80字左右)

内容包含：

遵守交通规则，如走人行道/过斑马线。

别在街道上或马路上玩耍和踢球。

劝父母不能酒后驾车。

你可以适当增加内容，让短文通顺，过渡自然。

参考词汇：sidewalk 人行道 zebra-crossing 斑马线

注：第一段已给出，不计入总数

★ 参考范文

With more and more cars coming into our families, we are happy that it has greatly improved our life. But unluckily, it has also brought many problems, such as heavy traffic and traffic accidents.

Traffic safety is everybodys business. We must obey the rules. For example, we must walk on walk side, when we cross zebra – crossing, stop and look right and left, then go across fast. Don’t play football on the road .we can tell our parents not to drink before they drive, not to run through red lights, not to talk and laugh while driving etc.

We can say cars are coming into our life, but only when everybody thinks traffic safety is everybodys business can we be safe driving on roads and walking on sidewalks.

越来越多汽车进入我们的家庭生活，改善了我们的生活，但同时也带来了很多问题，如塞车和车祸，给家庭和社会带来极大的危害。作为中学生，我们应该怎样做呢?

请写一篇有关交通安全的短文(80字左右)

内容包含：

(1)遵守交通规则，如走人行道/过斑马线。

(2)别在街道上或马路上玩耍和踢球。

(3)劝父母不能酒后驾车。

你可以适当增加内容，让短文通顺，过渡自然。

参考词汇：sidewalk 人行道、zebra-crossing 斑马线

注：第一段已给出，不计入总数

范文

With more and more cars coming into our families, we are happy that it has greatly improved our life. But unluckily, it has also brought many problems, such as heavy traffic and traffic accidents。

Traffic safety is everybodys business. We must obey the rules. For example, we must walk on walk side, when we cross zebra – crossing, stop and look right and left, then go across fast. Don’t play football on the road .we can tell our parents not to drink before they drive, not to run through red lights, not to talk and laugh while driving etc。

We can say cars are coming into our life, but only when everybody thinks traffic safety is everybodys business can we be safe driving on roads and walking on sidewalks。

随着越来越多的汽车进入我们的家庭,我们是快乐的,它大大提高了我们的生活。但不巧的是,它也带来了许多问题,如交通拥挤和交通事故。

交通安全是每个人的事。我们必须遵守规则。例如,我们必须走一边走,当我们穿过斑马——穿越,停下来看看左和右,然后快速穿过。不要在马路上踢足球。我们可以告诉我们的父母不开车前喝酒,不要闯红灯,开车时不说话和大笑等。

我们可以说汽车进入我们的生活,但是只有当所有人都认为交通安全是每个人的业务我们可以安全驾驶在道路和人行道上走。

2009年英语短语集中联想记忆110条

1. put down 放下

shut down 把…关上

cut down 砍掉

come down 下来、落下

slow down 减缓、放慢

sit down 坐下

write down 写下

get down 下来,降落

2. after all 毕竟.终究

after that 于是.然后

day after day 日复一日地

one after another 相继.挨次

soon after 不久以后

the day after tomorrow 后天

3. come up with 找到、提出

catch up with 赶上

wake up 弄醒、醒来

send up 发射

open up 开设、开办

grow up 长大

pick up 拾起、捡起

hands up 举手

eat up 吃光

clean up 打扫干净

give up doing sth.=stop doing sth. 放弃做某事

4. arrive at/in + n. 到达

get to +n. 到达

reach + n. 到达

arrive / get +adv. 到达

5. get…back 退还,送回去.取回

give back 归还

come back 回来

at the back of 在…的后面

on the way (back)home 在回家路上

6. at least 至少

at breakfast 早餐时

at desk 在桌前

at once立刻,马上

at school 在上学

at the same time 同时

at work 在工作

be good at=do well in 擅长

laugh at 嘲笑

not…at all 一点也不

at first 起初

at night 在晚上

at noon 中午

at the age of // when sb. was…years old 在…岁时

at last / in the end / finally 最后、终于

at the beginning of the twenty-first century 在21世纪初

at the end of 在…终点、结尾

at the moment // now现在

at the foot of 在…脚下

at Christmas 在圣诞节

at any moment 任何时候

at times(sometimes) 有时,偶尔

at the doctor’s 在医务室be bad at不擅长

7. for example 例如

for ever 永远

be good for 对…有益

be bad for 对…有害

for long=for a long time 长期

for short 简称

be short for 是…的简称

TV is short for “television”

8. come true 实现

come down 下来

come from=be from 来自,出生于

come in/into 进入,进来

come on 赶快

come over 过来

come along 走吧,过来,快点

come and go 来来去去

come up 上来

come out 出来，(花)开，(照片)冲洗出来

9. even though=even if 即使、虽然、尽管

10. be pleased with 对…感到满意

be covered with 被…覆盖

be expected to do sth. 被期望做某事

be proud of 以…自豪

speak highly of 称赞

be afraid of 害怕

hear of 听说(hear from sb.收到某人的来信)

of course=certainly 当然可以

plenty of= a lot of 许多

11. by the way 顺便说

by oneself 单独,独自

by the end of 到…为至

by the time (引起时间状语从句)到…的时候

one by one 依次

by air / plane 乘飞机

by bus / train / car 乘公共汽车/火车/轿车

catch a bus 赶公交车

get on / off the bus上/下车

take a bus to…=go to …by bus乘车去

12. do / try one’s best 尽力

do one’s homework 做家庭作业

do (the/some) shopping 购物

do the cooking 烹饪

do some cleaning 打扫

do the / some washing 洗衣服

do sport 做运动

do with sb / sth. 处理

well done 干得好

13. early in the morning 一大早

in the early spring 初春

in my early days 我幼年时期

early bus 早班车

14. make a contribution to 贡献给、捐献

make a telephone call to sb. // ring sb. up // give sb. a call //

phone sb.给某人打电话

connect…to…把…与…连接起来

be close to 靠近(某地)

give birth to 生(孩子)

lose to sb 输给sb .

15. either…or… 或者…或者…

on either side of the street 街道任何一边

on each side of the street 街道每一边

on both sides of the street 街道两边

16. keep doing sth. 不停地做某事(表示状态继续)

keep on doing sth. 坚持做某事(表示动作反复进行)

practise doing sth. 练习做某事

enjoy doing sth. 喜欢做某事

finish doing sth. 做完某事

go on doing sth. 继续做某事(同一件事)

17. go on to do sth. 接着做某事(另一事)

go straight along 沿着…一直往前走

go down 下降

go for a walk 散步

go over 复习

go shopping 买东西

go to the cinema 去看电影

go well 进展顺利

go off to 动身前往

go out 外出

go to work 去上班

go up 上升

want a go 想试一试

18. think about 考虑

think of 认为、想起、考虑、想到

think over 仔细考虑

think out 想出

talk about 谈论

worry about 担心

How / What about…?…怎么样?

19. borrow…from … 从…借…

lend…to… 把…借给…

from door to door 挨家挨户

from time to time 时时

from now on 从今以后

from then on 从那以后

be different from 与…不同

learn…from… 向…学习

20. get dressed 穿衣

get into 进入

get / be lost 丢失

get off / on下/ 上车

get on well with sb. 与某人相处得好

get out of 从…出来

get ready for +n. 为…做准备

get ready to do sth. 准备做某事

get / go to sleep (fall asleep) 入睡

be asleep 睡着

get warm 变暧

get well 康复

get a chance 有机会、得到机会

21. look for 寻找

wait for 等候

look after=take care of 照看

look like 看起来像

look over 检查,复习

look out 小心,从里向外看

look the same 看起来一样

look up 向上看,查单词

look around 环视

look forward to 期望

look through 温习,检查

22. set off 出发、动身

put off 推迟

keep off 避开、不靠近…

drop off 放下(某物)

turn off 关

jump off 跳离

take off 脱(衣),(飞机)起飞

23. half a kilo 半千克

half an hour 半小时

in half 分成两半

half of the day 半天

24. do eye exercises 做眼保健操

do morning exercises 做早操 take (more) exercise (多)参加体育锻炼

an exercise book 练习本

25. take part in 参加

hand in 上交

in hospital 住院

in surprise 吃惊地

in the sun 在阳光下

in trouble 处于困境

in a minute / moment马上

26. leave for… 动身去某地

27. feed on 以…为主食

live on 继续活着

base on 以…为根据

carry on 坚持、继续下去

and so on 等等

on the other hand 另一方面

on foot 步行

28. be famous for 以..著名

be excited about +n./V-ing 对…感到兴奋

be interested in 对…感兴趣

be born 出生

be busy with sth.=be busy doing sth. 忙于…

be amazed at 对..感到惊讶

29. move away 移开

move to (搬)移到

30. search the Internet 上网

31. make sure 确信

make a dialogue 编对话

make a mistake 犯错误

by mistake 由于疏忽

make a noise 吵闹

make faces 做鬼脸

make friends (with) 和..交朋友

make room for 给..让地方

make tea 沏茶

make money 赚钱

make a decision 作出决定

32. used to do sth 过去常常做某事

be used to doing sth. 习惯于做某事

33. leave sth+介词短语 “把……忘记在某处”

34. forget to do sth. 忘记做某事

encourage sb. to do sth. 鼓励某人做某事

decide to do sth. 决定做某事

allow sb. to do sth. 允许某人做某事

35. hear sb. to do (doing)sth. 听见某人做某事

36. help sb. (to) do sth .//help sb. with sth. 帮助某人做某事

with one’s help 在某人的帮助下

with pleasure 乐意

37. the summer holiday(s) 暑假

the winter holiday(s) 寒假

38. step into 走进

pour into 倒入…

39. in the first 第一

for the first time 第一次

at first 起初

a firs t language 母语

first of all 首先

40. leave a message for sb. 给某人留条

give / take sb. a message 给某人捎口信

41. take photos / pictures 照像

take away 拿走

take out 取出

work out 算出

take care 当心

take medicine 服药

take one’s temperature 量体温

take one’s time 别着急

take a walk 散步

take place 发生

42. learn by oneself / teach oneself 自学

learn by heart 背熟

43. a year and a half (one and a half years ) 一年半

44. have a try 尝试,努力

try out 尝试、试验

find out / about 找出,查明

have a good / wonderful / great / time 玩得开心

have a (bad) cold (重)感冒

have a meeting / walk / watch 开会/散步/比赛

have sports 进行体育活动

have nothing / sth. to do with 与..无(有)关

have no idea 不知道

have (one’s) medicine 服药

45. offer sb sth. 给某人提供某物

46. win first prize 获一等奖

47. all over the world= around the world =throughout the world 全世界

48. all kinds of 各种各样的

49. neither… nor 既不…也不….

50. not only … but also … 不但…而且

both… and ……和…都

51. the more , the better 越多越好

52. all one’s life 一生

53. as soon as 一…就…

as soon as possible 尽可能早地、尽快

as well = too也

as much as 至多

as little as 至少

regard …as 把…当作…

as if 好像

54. no matter 无论…

55 ever since 从那以后,此后一直

56. so far 到目前为止

or so大约

57. another two hours (=two more hours ) 又(再) 2个小时

58. three times a week 一周三次

59. the number of… 的数量

a (large / good) number of / large numbers of / many 许多

60. less than少于 , less and less 越来越少

61. …is another way of saying… 什么是..的另一说法 Quick is another way of saying fast. Bike is short for bicycle.

62. not…until… 直到…才…

63. be like 像

feel like +n./V-ing 想要

like best 最喜欢 , would like to 想要

64. the 24 hour clock 24 小时制

65. wash away 冲走

run away 逃跑

take away 带走

66. before long 不久

long before / ago 很久以前

for long =for a long time 长期

no longer = not. .any longer 不再

67. more or less = about 或多或少,大约

more than = over 多于,超过

68. every year 每年

every four years 每隔四年

every other day 每隔一天

everyday English / life 日常英语/生活

69. next to 紧挨着

next door 隔壁,邻居

next year 明年

next time 下次

70. receive / get / have a letter from sb. = hear from sb 收到某人的来信

71. on show = on display 展览

72.be filled with / be full of 充满…

73. thank to =because of 由于

74. some day =one day (将来)某一天

all day 终日

day and night 日日夜夜

in a day or two 一两天内

in the old days 从前,旧社会

from day to day (day after day) 日复一日

the day before yesterday 前天

the day after tomorrow 后天

Tree Planting Day 植树节

Women’s Day 妇女节

75. keep / stop / prevent… (from) doing sth. 防止(阻止)…做某事

stop to do sth. 停下来去做某事

stop doing sth. 停止做某事

76. nice and +adj. = very +adj. 很,非常

77. a place (places) of interest 名胜

78. three quarters of the information on the Internet 因特网上四分之三的信息

two thirds of the books 三分之二的书

79. credit card 信用卡

80. the increasing population 增长着的人口

81. a path of travel 旅行路线

82. point at / to 指向

83. by sea = by ship 乘船

by the sea = on the sea 在海边

at sea在海上

84. set one’s mind to do sth. 一心想做某事

85. multiply…by… 乘以…

86. See you! 再见

You see. 你知道,你明白,你瞧

Let me see. 让我想想

see sb. off 给某人送行

see a / the doctor 看病

see sb . do / doing sth. 看见某人做某事

87. some…others 一些(人,物)…其他(人,物)

one…another 一个..另一个(三者或以上 )

one…the other 一个…另一个(总数二个)

88. be worn out 穿旧，磨坏

check out 核实，检查

write out 写出

take sth. out of 从…拿出/取出某物

89. in this way 用这种方法

in a few year’s time 几年以后

in space 在太空

in and out of class 在课内课外

in the last fifteen minutes 在最后十五分钟里

in the second half 在下半场

later in one’s life 在某人后半身

in the air 在空中

in the open air 在户外

90. give sb. an injection给某人打针 , get an injection打针

91. have been to 去过某地

have gone to 到某地去了

92. here + be+ 名词+ for+某人 ( Here is a letter for you. 这儿有你的一封信.)

93. be far behind +某人 (He is far behind others. 他落后于别人)

94. one of + adj. 最高级+复数名词

95. take +某物+with +某人 (You’d better take an umbrella with you. 你最好带上雨伞)

96. prefer to= like…better than 宁愿,更喜欢

prefer + V-ing (to do sth.) ( I prefer doing (to do) it myself .我喜欢自己做那件事).

Would / should 等情态动词 + prefer +不定式. (I would prefer to do it myself.我宁愿自己做那件事)

prefer +名词(v-ing) + to+名词 (v-ing) (I prefer learning English to playing football.我愿意学英语而不愿踢足球)

prefer +不定式(名词)+ rather than + 不带to的不定式, (I prefer to walk there rather than go by bus.我喜欢走着去那里,

而不愿乘车)

prefer + 名词(代词) to do sth. (We prefer her not to come.我们宁愿她不来)

97. 人+ spend +time (money) +(in) doing sth. (I spent over two hours (in) finishing my homework.我花了两个多小时完成家庭

作业.)

人 + spend + time (money) + on +名词, (He spent 1,000 on the TV set .他花了一千元买电视机)

人 + pay + money +for +sth. ( He paid ten yuan for the book .他花了10元钱买那本书.)

It + takes (will take, / took…) + sb. + time (money) + to do sth. (It’ll take you only ten minutes to get there by

bus.乘车去那里只花你10分钟)

物+ cost + (sb.) + money, (The dictionary cost me 20 yuan .我花20元钱买了那本词典)

98. do with + sb. / sth. (What have you done with the pork ? 那些肉你怎么处理了?)

99. mind + if 从句, (Do you mind if I open the window?我开窗你不反对吧?)

mind + V-ing, (Would you mind turning on the TV?打开电视你不反对吧?)

100. what…for? / why…? (What do you learn English for? = Why do you learn English?)

101. need + 名词 (v-ing), (The students need some help.学生们需要帮助.This pair of shoes needs mending.这双鞋需要修理)

102. “be used for+ 名词(v-ing),”被用来做.. (A writing brush is used for writing.)

“be used as+名词”, 被作为…使用 (English is used as the first language in none of these countries. )

“be used by+动作执行者”, 被…使用,

103. be made of 由…制造(This table is made of wood .这张课桌是木制的)

be made from由…制成 (This kind of paper is made from wood . 这种纸是用木材制成的)

be made in+地点, “某地制造”(These cars are made in Germany) be made by+人, “由谁制造的” (This kite is made by

Kate . )

104. more developed countries发达国家, less developed countries不发达国家, developing countries发展中国家

105. be worth + money (V-ing),值…钱.值得做…This car is worth more than two million yuan in China. This book is well

worth reading.这本书很值得一读.

106. the Summer Palace 颐和园

Tian’anmen Square 天安门广场

the Palace Museum 故宫

the Great Hall of the People 人民大会堂

the Temple of Heaven 天坛

the Great Green Wall 绿色长城

PLA 中国人民解放军

PRC 中华人民共和国

the Party 中国共产党

the League 共青团

Peking Opera 京剧

107. a digital camera 数字照相机

a doctor for animals = an animal doctor 动物医生

108. so + 形/副+that 从句 (The place is so cold that nothing can grow in winter .这地方太冷，冬天什么都不长)

so + many / few+ 复数名词 +that从句 (He has so many books that I don’t know which one to borrow. 他有那么多书,我不

知道借哪一本)

so + much / little+ 不可数名词+that从句 (She has so little money that she can’t buy anything .她钱太少,什么也买不

到.)

so+ 形容词 +a / an +单数名词 +that从句 (This is so good a book that all of us like reading it )

such +a / an+ 形容词+单数名词+ that从句 (This is such an interesting story that all of us like it)

such +形容词+复数名词+that从句. such +形容词+不可数名词+that从句 (It is such fine weather today that many children

are playing outside)

109. tell sb about sth.告诉某人关于某事 , tell sb+从句, tell sb. to do sth.让某人做某事

tell a lie说谎 , tell a story讲故事 , thank you for +n ./V-ing 谢谢你… too + adj. / adv. + to + v.太…而不能, too

much(修饰名词)太多,过分 , much too(修饰adj./adv.)太

110. hope / wish+不定式(或从句), wish sb. to do sth. What do you mean by…?= What does… mean?…是什么意思?

中考英语作文范文春节见闻

Things Happened in Spring Festival Today, I went shopping with my parents, grandparents, aunts, uncles, and cousins. It was a rare

occasion because we hardly only get together few times in a year as a big family. On the way to the shopping mall, we watched the lion dance. Overall, we had an unforgettable day.

Mamma you gave life to me，Turned a babysintosa man，And mamma all you had to of fer Was a prom is e of a lifetime of love,Now I know there is no other

love like a Mothers.Love for her child,I know that love so complete someday must leave.Must say goodbye,Goodbyes the saddest word,I＇ll ever hear.Goodbyes the last time I will hold you near,Someday you＇ll say that word and I will cry,It＇ll break my heart to hear you say Goodbye.

Mamma you gave love to me,And Mamma all I ever needed Was guarantee of you loving me,Cause I know there is no other love like a mother,the love you give will always live,You＇ll always be there every time I fall,You take my weakness and you make me strong,And I will always love you till forever comes.And when you need me,I＇ll be there for you always,I＇ll be there thru the lonely days.You are the wings that guide my

broken flight,and my shelter thru the raging storm,And I will love you till forever comes.

妈妈你给了我生命，从婴儿到老人，妈妈，你不得不更是舞会是E的一辈子的爱，现在我知道有没有其他的

爱情就像一个母亲。爱她的孩子，我知道，爱是如此完整的总有一天要离开。必须说再见，再见伤心的话，我＇将永远听到。再见最后一次我会抱着你靠近，总有一天你＇会说那句话，而我将会哭泣，它＇将打破我的心听到你说再见。

妈妈你给我爱，妈妈，所有我所需要的是保证你爱我，因为我知道有没有其他的爱，像一个母亲，你给的爱会永远活，你＇将总是有每次我跌倒，你拿我的弱点，你让我坚强，和我将永远爱你直到永远是。，当你需要我，我＇会永远在那里等你，我＇会有穿过寂寞的日子。你的翅膀，我的向导

破碎的飞行，和我的庇护通过肆虐的风暴，我会爱你直到永远。

[中考英语作文MY MOTHER’S LOVE

教给大家十个字，搞定初中英语写作，帮你拿到一等文。

问：“哪十字？”

“结构+要点+逻辑+语法+亮点！”

结构：中考最流行的结构就是三段式，深受各地区中考英语写作阅卷老师的喜爱。为什么尼？因为这种结构十分清晰。“观点——要点——总结”让人一目了然。三段式的第一段：简单明了，开门见山，不超过2句话，如，我们想表达小强很强壮，第一段直接说 XQ is extremely strong. 观点明确，这一句足矣。第二段：分2-3点说为什么他强壮。1. 每天吃10顿饭，He has ten meals everyday! 详举吃的是什么。2. 每天运动2小时，He does exercise 2 hours a day! 详举做了什么运动。第三段：经过第二段的论证，可以得出结论。但请注意，不能完全照抄第一段，要有升华。也可以提出希望和建议等。如，How strong and robust XQ is! I hope to be? him one day!

要点：实际上中考英语写作就等于两个字，翻译！因为中考英语写作一般会给出几个要点，要求必须在文章中有所体现。文章写的再好，只要缺少要点就会扣分。所以要点，也就是文章的第二段内容，要做到全，围绕中心。

逻辑：这里的逻辑实际指的就是逻辑词。最常用的就是表示递进的，转折的，总结的逻辑词等。递进：除了first, second, third, finally 等还可以使用高级点的，如first of all(首先)，in addition, whats more, moreover(都是另外的意思)，in a word, all in all（表示总结的）。转折：but, yet, however等。真正有经验的阅卷老师会很注意这些逻辑连接词，因为这些词体现了这个文章的思路。

语法：其他几点都不是硬性的要求，不那样做不能说是错，只能说是不好，但是语法却是硬性的。如，单词的使用，时态等。

亮点：当我们将前八个字都做得很完美的时候也只能得到一个二等文的上。要想得到一等文，最后两个字，亮点至关重要。大家设想如果我们是阅卷老师。有两篇写人美丽的作文摆在我们面前，都是结构清晰的三段式，要点都很全，都用了一些逻辑词，都没有语法错误，但是A篇只用了beautiful,good- looking,B篇却用到了attractive，charming，catching等，我坚信正常人都会给B篇高分的。这些高级一点的词汇，词组，句型便是我们得到一等文的最有力的绝招。所以，以后写英语作文要养成一般词汇限量用的好习惯。

只要把这十个字都搞定了，那么初中英语写作就一定能搞定！

目前，学生考试作弊现象严重，请围绕以下要点谈谈其中原因以及个人建议。

原因：

1.考试太滥

2.自身勤奋不够

3.把大量时间用在上网和玩游戏上

4.为了骗取家长和老师高兴

看法与建议：

1、作弊有害；

2、要做人诚实，学习发奋；

3、学校应减少考试。

要求：

1、字数80—100；

2、围绕要点可适当发挥；

3、文章开头已给出，不计入总字数。

At present, a number of middle school students have picked up a bad habit——cheating in examinations.

下面是语文迷网为大家带来了英语写作中的佳句，供大家参考选择。

1.Were often told that that...But is this really the case?

我们经常被告知......但事实真是这样吗?

2.People used to... However,things are quite different today.

过去，人们习惯......但今天的情况有很大不同。

3. Some people think that... Others believe that the opposite is true.

There is probaly some truth in both sides. But we must realize that...

一些人认为......另一些人持相反意见。也许双方的观点都有一定道理，但是我们必须认识到......

4.Recognizing a problem is the first step in finding a solution.

认识到问题是找到解决办法的第一步。

5.It is another new and bitter truth we must learn to face.

这是一个我们必须学会面对的痛苦的新情况。

6.In short, we must work hard to make the world a better place.

简而言之，为了把世界变成更美好的地方，我们必须勤奋工作。

7.Lost time is never found again.

岁月既往，一去不回、

8.Everybody should have a dream.

每个人都该有个梦想。

9. Hope for the best, but prepare for the worst.

抱最好的愿望，做最坏的打算。

10.Failure is the mother of success.

失败乃成功之母。

11.Lets look on the bright side .

让我们往好处想吧。

满分短语

1.打算做....../计划做......

intend /plan to do 打算做......

be going to do 打算做......

decide to do决定做......

determine to do决定做......

be determine to do 决定做......

make up ones mind to do 下定决心做......

2.想/希望......

want to do= would like to do想做......

hope to do希望做......

expect to do期待做......

wish to do 希望做......

consider doing 考虑做......

looking forward to doing盼望做......

dream of doing 梦想做......

cant help doing 情不自禁地做......

3.表示喜欢和感兴趣

like /love doing 喜欢做......

enjoy doing 喜欢做.......

be fond of doing 喜欢做......

be keen on+n/doing 喜欢做......

prefer to do A rather than B 宁愿做A也不愿做B

be interest in n/doing对......感兴趣

show/take interest in n/doing 对......产生兴趣

4.其他短语

keep on doing 坚持做......

keep/stop/prevent sb from doing 阻止某人做......

be busy (in) doing= be busy with +名词 忙于做......

spend time/money(in) doing =spend time/money on+名词 花费时间做......

have fun/have a good time/enjoy oneself doing 玩得开心

have trouble/have problem/ have difficulty (in) doing 或with +名词 做...有困难

满分句型

1.Its adj for sb to do 做...对某人来说是...

2. ...so...that ...如此...以至于...

...too...to do 太...而不能...

such...that...如此...以至于...

3.not...until...直到...才...

4. The reason why+句子 is that +句子...的原因是...

5.That is why+句子 那是...的原因

6. That is because+句子 那是因为...

7.It is said that+句子 据报道...

It is reported that+句子 据报道...

8.There is no doubt that+句子 毫无疑问...

9.It goes without saying that+句子 不言而喻/毫无疑问...

10. There is no need to do 没必要做...

11.There is no point in doing 做某事毫无意义

12. You had better (not) do ...最好(不)做

13.How about /What about doing...怎么样?

14. I think you should do我认为你应该...

15. I suggest that you (should) do 我建议你做...

16. If I were you, I would do...我要是你的话，我会做...

I have a lot of aspirations. but what i desire most is to have no examinations.

We are always told that examinations aim to check what we have learned. but i dont think so. examination is not the best way, especially in the primary school. examinations, composition examinations in particular, will bring students, teachers and parents a great deal of pressure. to cope with the examination, some students just remember the model essays by rote. it will do no good to the improvement of writing.

The students scores can be measured by their daily in-class study and by the completion of their everyday homework. if we do in this way, all the students and teachers will have a pleasant time every day.

翻译：

我有很多愿望，但我最渴望的就是不要考试。

我们总是被告知考试的目的是为了检测我们学到了什么，但是我不这么认为。考试不是最好的方式，特别是在小学。考试，特别是作文考试，会给学生、教师、学生家长带来很大的压力。为了应付作文考试，一些学生仅仅是死记硬背范文，这对提高学生的写作没有什么好处。

学生的成绩可以通过课内的日常学习和每天家庭作业的完成情况来衡量。如果我们用这种方法检查学习效果，所有的学生和教师每天都很快乐。

On the weekend, I don’t have class, I feel so happy. I always wake up in the morning at about eight o’clock, my mother ask me to have breakfast. After breakfast, I go to shopping with my mother, I buy a lot of the things I like, then I go to play with my friends, we play the game hind and seek. I am so happy in the weekend.

在星期天，我没有课，我觉得很开心。我总是在早上大概八点钟起床，我的妈妈叫我吃早餐。吃完早餐，我和妈妈去购物，我买了很多我喜欢的东西，然后我和朋友去玩，我们玩抓迷藏。周末我玩得很开心。

假设你是李华，David是你的美国网友。他对目前中国出现的雾霆天气很关注，来信向你询问此事。请你给他写封回信。主要内容如下：1.感谢他的关注。 2.简介雾霾 (smog) 天气给人们的身体、生活带来的危害。3.谈谈你的感想。注意：可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯流畅;开头与结尾已写好，不计人总词数; 词数：120左右Dear David，

Im glad to receive your letter. _______________________________________

Yours，

Li Hua

【参考范文】：

Dear David,

Im glad to receive your letter. I have learned from your letter that you are concerned about the smog which frequently appears in some areas of China. Thank you for your concern. Im also very worried about such terrible weather because it has brought much inconvenience or rather harm to peoples health such as traffic jam, road accidents, bad coughs, throat hurts and ever lung cancers and so on.

As everybody knows, a good environment comes from good protection. So we should do what we can to make a difference. Try to drive less and choose air-friendly products. Only when everyone has the environmental awareness can we have cleaner air.

Hoping to hear from you soon and share your good ideas.

My English Study

How time flies! My three-year middle school life will be over soon。 Looking

back， I have many memories of my English study。

When I entered the middle school， I had so many difficulties with my

English。 I was not able to understand the teacher in class， and I couldn’t

master the words and phrases。 For a time I wanted to give it up。 Later， with the

help of the teacher and my classmates， I listened to the teacher carefully in

class， kept on reading English every day and spoke as much as possible。 Step by

step I made great progress in English。

In a word， only when you develop interest in studying English can you learn

it well。

1. 不用说…… It goes without saying that = It is obvious that …

例：不用说早睡早起是值得的。It goes without saying that it pays to keep early hours.

2. 在各种……之中，…… Among various kinds of …， … /= Of all the …， …

例：在各种运动中我尤其喜欢慢跑。Among various kinds of sports, I like jogging in particular.

3. 就我的看法……;我认为……In my opinion, …= To my mind, …= As far as I am concerned, …

例：In my opinion, playing video games not only takes much time but is also harmful to health. 就我的看法打电动玩具既花费时间也有害健康。

4. 随着人口的增加…… With the increase/growth of the population, …

随着科技的进步…… With the advance of science and technology, …

例：With the rapid development of Taiwans economy, a lot of social problems have come to pass. 随着台湾经济的快速发展许多社会问题产生了。

5. ……是必要的 It is necessary (for sb.) to do / that … ……

是重要的 It is important(for sb.) to do / that … ……

是适当的 It is proper (for sb.) to do / that … ……

是紧急的 It is urgent (for sb.) to do / that …

例：It is proper for us to keep the public places clean.

It is proper that we (should)keep the public places clean. 我们应当保持公共场所清洁。

6. 花费 spend … on sth. / doing sth. …

例：我们不应该在我们不感兴趣的事情上花太多的时间。 We shouldnt spend too much time on something we arent interested in.

7. how 引导的感叹句

例：那至少可以证明你很诚实。At least it will prove how honest you are. 8. 状语从句

A)如果你不……，你就会…… If you dont …， youll …

例：If you dont keep working hard, youll lose the chance. 如果你不坚持努力工作，你就会失去这次机会。

B) 如此 ……，以至于…… so … that …

例：At that moment, I was so upset that I wanted to give up. 当时，我非常伤心，最后都想放弃了。

9. 宾语从句：我认为，…… / 我认为……不 I think / I dont think that …

我想知道是否…… I wonder whether …

例：He doesnt think I should stop him joining the club.他认为我不应该阻止他参加这个俱乐部。

10. Since + 主语+ 过去式， 主语 + 现在完成式。

例：Since he went to senior high school, he has worked very hard.自从他上高中，他就一直很用功。

一、纵观近年各地中考英语写作题，题材一般是写人、写事、写物、写景、日记、书信、通知、便条等文体。一般来说，不同的写作题材，它的人物，时间，写作的重点也是不尽相同的。下面结合一些常见的题型介绍一下写作的注意事项以及写作技巧。

1、以图表提供情景的作文要以“读”为主，首先要读懂图表中的数据、时间、编码、序号以及相互间的变化关系，对所给的信息加以分析、推断、筛选、概括、去粗取精；在写作时目的要明确，要注意内容的准确性和严肃性，尤其是图表中的数据、时间等不得有误。

2、以图画提供情景的作文应以“看”为主，通过细心观察图中的人物、景物、文字、环境、数字等，弄清写作的意图，通过分析思考把握逻辑联系，找出主题并借助所给的文字，把图中的信息转化成文章，但要注意，文章不能停留在图画的浅表，而要表达出提供情景的意图和内涵。

3、以提纲提供情景的作文。这种形式本身的要点已经很明确，重点也很突出，只要把各个提纲加以发挥，注意遣词造句的灵活性和语法规则的正确性，就不会造成审题不清而偏离主题，但要注意，文章必须覆盖所提供的各个提纲的要点。

4、以书信格式提供情景的作文。首先要了解书信的格式，英文书信格式与中文有所不同，(1)、一般在信纸的右上角写上写信人的地址和日期，地址应按从小到大的顺序排列；(2)、左边顶格写上收信人的姓名；(3)、正文部分；(4)、祝愿的话；(5)、写信人签名。信的内容一定要按所给的要求写，不要漏写。

二、各地的评分标准略有差异，但是都包括以下几个方面：整体印象、语言表达、词数规定等几方面内容。我们在写作中要尽量避免扣分，争取有加分点。当然用英文写作不同于用母语那样得心应手，常常会受到生词、语法、惯用法的限制，只要同学们平时注意两种语言的异同性，抓住写作要点，也可妙笔生花。

1、为了保证文章层次分明、条理清楚，要把时间固定下来，如：记叙一件事要用过去时；写经常发生的事或对人物的描写，要用一般现在时。整个文章中的人称要一致，首尾呼应，不要随意改动，以免造成误解。

2、不要为了追求“一鸣惊人”而去找一些生冷的词汇，对这些一知半解的词你不会用，不知道如何搭配，结果可能适得其反，使文章显的生硬、不协调，甚至错误百出，所以要使用有把握的词，避免不必要的失分。比如说发生了一起意外事件，我们通常用“have an accident”来表示，不要错误的使用“have an incident”。

3、注意不同语言的表达习惯，也是写好英语作文的重要环节，如“我的理想是做一名歌手”，很多同学写成“My ambition is to do/make a singer，”“to do”表示“做”或者“干”，“to make”表示“制作”，而“做一名歌手”则表示“成为一名歌手”应该用“be/become a singer”；又如“看书、看报”应用“read a book/newspaper”，而不是“see a book/newspaper”。因此，平时应该注意不同语言的表达习惯，切忌望文生义或一味生搬硬套。

4、有些同学因怕出错而只写短句或简单句，写出的文章过于幼稚、空洞乏味。要使文章有血有肉就要把平时学的知识用进去，如：定语从句、宾语从句、非谓语动词和比较等句型，关键时用上一、二个，就能使文章不同凡响，更有文采，特别是对关联词的使用，如“so that”、“not…but”“not only。。。but also”等，会使你的文章逻辑结构紧密、层次鲜明、条理清楚，更能显示出你的英文功底，但要做到这些并非一日之功，要靠平时的不断训练和积累。

5、最简单的增分点就是认真的书写。工整漂亮的书写会给评卷老师留下美好的第一印象，在扣分时自然会“手下留情”，而且很多地区都在写作上有1分的书写分。只要平时多下点功夫，得到这一分并不难。

三、最后将中考写作的基本步骤和技巧归纳为以下几个环节：

1、细心审题细读题目中每一项提示或观察所给的每一幅画，明确文章的中心思想，弄清题意，确定写作体裁，掌握所要表达的要点做到心中有数，避免随心所欲，文不对题。

2、理顺要点在所给提示或图上标出要点，然后按事件先后的顺序或各要点之间的内在联系排序，分出层次。如果是看图作文，则要按图构思，这样做既可避免要点遗漏，又可使表达内容条理清楚。

3、构成框架将理顺的要点或每幅图画的含义加以连贯，构成写作的整体框架，进一步定人称、定时态语态、定顺序、定段落、定开头结尾。基本框架构成后，写作就有了把握。4、组织句子用自己最熟悉的短语或句型将理顺的要点逐句表达出来，多用简单句，用有把握的复合句。要扬长避短，避难就易。若遇到表达障碍，可换一种说法，将一句变成两、三句，只求达意。

5、串句成篇将写好的句子连贯地组织起来，注意上下句的逻辑关系，适当采用递进、让步、转折、因果等关联词语，使短文浑然一体，层次分明，过渡自然。6、检查修改文章草成后，默读1～2遍，检查修改，尤其要注意人称、大小写、拼写、习惯用语、格式有无错误，要点有无遗漏，文句有无语病，词数是否恰当，行文是否连贯。

[适用话题]“财富”“我有一个梦”“慈善”“奉献”等。

Money Everything?(金钱就是一切吗?)

At present some people think that money is everything. They say that you can do everything if you have money. You can live in a beautiful house, keep a luxurious ear and have all sorts of delicious food.

I dont think so. Indeed, money can buy a lot of things we need. But there are many, many wonderful things in the world that cannot be bough/; with money.

For example, knowledge cannot be bought with money. One cannot be rich in knowledge unless he studies hard. Time cannot be bought with money, either. Who can buy even a second with money?

There are still many other things that cannot be bought with money: health,life, happiness,friendship, love and so on. Just think, if a person hasnt these things at all, is the money still useful?

Now, do you think money is everything?

金钱就是一切吗?

近来，有些人认为钱就是一切，他们说，要是有了钱，你就可以做任何事情，你可以住舒适的房子，坐豪华的轿车，吃可口的饭菜，

我不这么认为。的确，钱可以买到我们需要的许多东西，但是，世界上还有许多美丽的东西用钱是买不到的。

例如，知识是买不来的，一个人要想获得丰富的知识，只有通过艰苦的学习。时间用钱也是

英语写作要拿高分其实并不是很难，只要掌握了一定的词量以及写作方法就有可以能拿到高分。下面是语文迷为大家整理的英语写作高分秘诀，希望对你有帮助。

一、中考英语写作的概述

你对于在中考英语写作中拿高分有把握吗?实际考试中，许多学生却常常有“无话可说”的感觉。那要如何我们才能克服这种无话的状态，取得高分呢?

归根到底这是一个英语基本功——单词、短语和句型的问题。

英语作文的前提条件是掌握了一定量的词汇、语法及体裁、题材等方面的知识。学生如果想要在写作方面有本质上的提升，必须进行多次的写作练习。因此，必须合理地设置训练步骤，遵循从初级到高级，从简单到复杂的原则去练习，经过一段写作实践之后，写作水平一定会有大幅度的提高。

中考英语作文对考生的要求有四点：1、内容要完整。2、语句流畅。3、没有语法错误。4、书写规范。

二、中考英语写作的评分标准

1、老师拿到的标准

写作水平的高低和文章的好坏，分数是最直接的评分标准，也是考生们最关心的。但是多少考生真正透彻知道中考英语写作的评分标准?什么样的文章才是阅卷老师眼中的好文章?

评分标准：

(1)整篇作文满分20分，其中内容8分，语言8分，结构4分。

(2)内容贴切，句子流畅，用语准确，加整体印象分1分。

(3)不满60个词，少1——5个词扣0.5分，6——10个词扣1分。

(4)所有给出问题涉及的三项内容，每少一项扣3分。

(5)每个拼写，大小写，标点符号等错误扣0.5分;同一的拼写错误不重复扣分，扣分总和不超过2分。

(6)语法错误每项扣1分，同一错误不重复扣分，扣分总和不超过2分。

2、老师想看到的标准

语言(8分)：

词——固定搭配、高频重点词汇;

句——复杂句(各种从句)、特殊句型、正确的句子!

内容(8分)：(总、分)论点、论据支持句;简洁、切合主题的记叙内容。

结构(4分)：

语言结构——句子重点突出、内容清晰;

内容结构——论点、论据以及记叙之间的逻辑关系;

句数控制——对于相对内容的句数掌握;

亮点、出彩点——排比、拟人、谚语、成语、押韵等。

三、扣分

内容方面：要点缺失，可酌情扣分。比如中考作文“Iwanttodosomethingformyschool”，若没有写一件具体的事情，是要扣3分以上的;若写的事情太过于虚幻，没有实际内容，也会扣1-2分。

字数：少于60字的作文要酌情扣分。

中考英语作文要求60字以上，标点符号不算，少了就要扣分。

但是60字的作文能不能得高分?从我们拿到的实例作文来看，16分以上的作文，没有少于75字的，甚至少于80字的也少之又少。

当然，也极少有超过100字的，因为中考试卷的短线格一共80个，在格子下面大约还有2行的空间，可以加20字左右，再多阅卷人就很难看清了，也会影响卷面的美观。

所以，同学们如果想让作文得到高分，最好是让字数在75-100字之间。

语法和拼写错误：每个扣0.5，重复错误不计;

标点错误：每4个扣0.5。

四、加分

作文的组织结构分。就是根据学生使用复杂句型、单词和谚语、俗语的情况来加分。只要文章中有1个亮点，基本就可以争取到1分(3分的文采分是很难全部拿到的)。而这1分的亮点，是可以提前准备的。

“万金油”式的复杂句型，例如强调句型、only相关的倒装句等，只要同学们多操练几次，几乎是一定能用到作文当中，从而为自己争取到这1分。

其次就是卷面分。很多家长(微博)和同学，尤其是部分书法并不是十分整洁的同学，都会关心是否真的有“卷面分”的存在。虽然在阅卷标准里面并没有卷面分这一项，但是这个分数却真切地反映在了同学们的分数里面。

据阅卷老师的经验，在阅卷的时候并不是按这3个部分逐项打分的，而是在第一遍读完全文之后，心里已经形成了一个“印象分”，然后再细读第二、三遍，把印象分分配到各个打分部分。

因此，这个“印象分”就非常重要，而同学们的书法，也正是在这个环节，影响到了自己的分数。所以初三的考生，如果书法不好，一定要注意。