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+ 加入清单第一招:审题细心。审题好比驾驶员打方向,方向对了,哪怕开得慢点,也会顺利到目的地。如果审题不清,书面表达的成绩不知道会有多惨。学生真正开始写作 前,必须花相当一部分时间做写前阅读、思考等准备,包含以下四方面:1)审体裁。根据情景提示首先要弄清写何种体裁文章。2)审结构。明确开始部分、正文 部分和结尾部分,定好段落。3)审格式。如日记、便条、书信、通知的格式等。4)审内容。弄清什么必需写,哪些略写,尤其是图画式书面表达,要学会连贯 性,读懂图的意思。5)审人称和时态。弄清书面表达要求用何种人称,根据材料确定短文的基本时态。
第二招:衔接流畅。恰当使用逻辑词语,使各要点间连贯,行文通顺。比如表并列或递进: and, both…and, neither…nor, not only…but also;表选择:or, either…or; 表转折或让步:but, although, though, however, even though, in spite of, on the contrary; 表对比:like, unlike, while; 表举例:for example, such as, that’s to say; 表强调:in fact, of course, besides; 表时间顺序:when, after, before, as soon as, soon after; 表因果关系:because, since, as, for, for this reason,as a result; 表结论:in a word, to sum up. In summary, in conclusion, on the whole;
第三招:短语地道。如果能多用短语,则可回避书面表达中的中式英语,同时也能减少错误几率。尤其在考试时,如果使用短语,会使文章增加亮点。
第四招:句式丰富。一篇可读性强的文章,通常能较好体现学生对英语语言结构、词块、句式的运用。因此各类句式的多元呈现往往可以提升书面表达的成绩。初中 阶段英语写作常用的句式如下:There be…;the more…the more…;It’s adj for sb to do something;I think/believe/suppose…(宾从); It can’t be put into real experiment。(被动)等。尤其是复合句的适恰运用对提升文章的层次很有帮助。对大多数同学来说,仿写很重要,在教材和很多的阅读书籍中都蕴含着 丰富的好词佳句。
第五招:情感真实。同样的话题,有些文章没什么情感,冷冰冰;有些 文章很有温度,有真情实感。情感真实主要可通过如下方法实现:1)内容的呈现。比如:2012年的中考英语书面表达My dream,大部分的作文都还是停留在表面上。但这个例子:I want to be a good father because my daddy was always so busy when I was a little boy.He had no time with me and my mum…虽然文章的文采并不是很好,但很有真情实感,令读者有心动的感觉,也是好文章。2)副词的运用。在句子的某些位置,添加副词,可以使句子和文段更 有人性味,更有情感性。如:I really enjoy the beauty of the sea in the sun。加了一个really,就有味道了。
第六招:思维多元。从杭州近五年中考书 面表达命题情况看,书面表达话题虽多元,但在设题上基本为半开放形式,因此半控制部分学生需要涵盖题目所给信息并进行适当发挥,而半开放部分,则要求学生 根据话题内容、自己的生活阅历、个人思维层次结合自己的英语表述自己的个人看法。有些学生的英语水平比较好,但因为在思维上比较局限想不出比较有深度、宽 度和广度的观点,这也会在一定程度上约束书面表达的质量。
第七招:整理独到。进入八 年级以来,在平时写作、单元练习、期中期末考试中,考生已积累了一定量与教材同话题的自己写的英语小短文,建议在临考前的最后阶段把自己八年级以来写的不 同话题的文章进行修改,润色、整理、汇编成册,制作一本个性化私人定制的“书面表达秘籍”,以备中考前高效复习用,以不变应万变。
第八招:卷面美观。1)不做涂改。需要在平时的书面表达中养成简列提纲、打草稿,再誊抄到答题卡的习惯。2)及时补救。如果对答题卡上的书面表达有修改, 建议用斜线划掉相应部分。3)勤练规范。临考前一个月,以中考答题卡的行距和长度为参照,设计自己字的大小,字的间距,每行的字数,以看起来舒服为准。
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篇1:keephealthy中考英语作文
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+ 加入清单参考范文:
Each of us should stay healthy, which is the foundation of our activities. Here are some ways to stay healthy.
First, we should spend one to two hours a day in regular exercise; try to walk instead of ride. Second, we should eat some healthy foods such as vegetables, fruits and so on. They are able to help us maintain a healthy body. When we are in trouble, try to relax our mood, listen to the soft music. It also enables us to maintain a good health. Finally there is a good sleep can also assure us a healthy body. We should sleep seven to eight hours a day to maintain adequate sleep. If we can do follow these advice, I believe we can have a healthy body, a better life.
参考译文:
我们每个人都应该保持健康,这是我们活动的基础。这里有一些方法来保持健康。
首先,我们应该每天花一两个小时在经常锻炼;尽量步行而不是骑。第二,我们应该吃一些健康的食物比如蔬菜、水果等等。他们可以帮助我们保持健康的身体。当我们陷入困境,试图放松我们的心情,听轻柔的音乐。它还能使我们保持身体健康。最后有一个好的睡眠也能保证我们一个健康的身体。我们应该每天睡7到8小时,保持充足的睡眠。如果我们可以遵循这些建议,我相信我们可以有一个健康的身体,更好的生活。
篇2:2024中考英语作文热点:交通问题
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+ 加入清单越来越多汽车进入我们的家庭生活,改善了我们的生活,但同时也带来了很多问题,如塞车和车祸,给家庭和社会带来极大的危害。作为中学生,我们应该怎样做呢?
请写一篇有关交通安全的短文(80字左右)
内容包含:
(1)遵守交通规则,如走人行道/过斑马线。
(2)别在街道上或马路上玩耍和踢球。
(3)劝父母不能酒后驾车。
你可以适当增加内容,让短文通顺,过渡自然。
参考词汇:sidewalk 人行道、zebra-crossing 斑马线
注:第一段已给出,不计入总数
范文
With more and more cars coming into our families, we are happy that it has greatly improved our life. But unluckily, it has also brought many problems, such as heavy traffic and traffic accidents。
Traffic safety is everybodys business. We must obey the rules. For example, we must walk on walk side, when we cross zebra – crossing, stop and look right and left, then go across fast. Don’t play football on the road .we can tell our parents not to drink before they drive, not to run through red lights, not to talk and laugh while driving etc。
We can say cars are coming into our life, but only when everybody thinks traffic safety is everybodys business can we be safe driving on roads and walking on sidewalks。
随着越来越多的汽车进入我们的家庭,我们是快乐的,它大大提高了我们的生活。但不巧的是,它也带来了许多问题,如交通拥挤和交通事故。
交通安全是每个人的事。我们必须遵守规则。例如,我们必须走一边走,当我们穿过斑马——穿越,停下来看看左和右,然后快速穿过。不要在马路上踢足球。我们可以告诉我们的父母不开车前喝酒,不要闯红灯,开车时不说话和大笑等。
我们可以说汽车进入我们的生活,但是只有当所有人都认为交通安全是每个人的业务我们可以安全驾驶在道路和人行道上走。
篇3:中考英语关于香港回归几周年的作文
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+ 加入清单假若今天是香港回归5 周年纪念日,你观看了中央电视台的专题节目,看到了香港回归所发生的巨大变化。
根据下列要求写一篇英语日记,表达自己盼望祖国统一的心愿。
1. 香港、澳门和台湾自古以来就是中国的领土,由于历史的原因被分割。
2. 1997 年 7 月 1 日香港已经回归祖国, 1999 年 12 月 20 日澳门也回到了祖国的怀抱。香港和澳门的明天会更加美好。
3. 台湾是中国领土不可分割( integral )的一部分,中国人民,包括生活在台湾的绝大多数人都盼望台湾赶快回归祖国。
注:英语短文的标题已经给出,全文约 100 词。
How I Wish China Would Be United Sooner!
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How I Wish China Would Be United Sooner!
July 1st, 2002 Fine
Hong Kong and Macao are parts of China in history, but they were separated from the motherland for some political reasons. China has been getting richer and stronger since its opening to the outside world. On July 1, 1997, Hong Kong finally returned home. On December 20, 1999, Macao returned home, too. Great changes have taken place in both Hong Kong and Macao. It shows the development and great strength of our country.
Taiwan is an intergral part of China. The Chinese people as well as most of the people from Taiwan are looking forward to the day on which Taiwan will return home. We are sure that day will come sooner or later.
[中考英语关于香港回归几周年的作文
篇4:2024年6月中考英语作文预测:环境保护
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+ 加入清单Life, environmental pollution continuously affects our lives. Such as: polluted air, rivers and garbage pollution, etc., has seriously damaged our living environment.
Rivers are polluted, the creature will not be able to survive in the water, also cant use it to irrigate crops, the human will not eat fresh food. If same, groundwater contamination, people will drink less than clean water, humans will get sick, poisoning, and it may even die. So, no one should be put on the possible environmental pollution of waste into the river.
Air is a guarantee to the survival of all living creatures. If the air is polluted, all creatures will live in the "gas", disease and all kinds of disasters will be the humanitys greatest enemy. Last, mankind will perish. Visible, clean air is how important!
Garbage can be seen everywhere in our daily life, the visible human bad habits - littering behavior is really too serious. Random pile up garbage can cause great harm to the environment, such as: air pollution in a breeding ground for germs, sexually transmitted diseases, and river and so on.
The pollution was terrible! To prevent the pollution, we must care for the environment, protect the earth, to stop all the pollution of the environment.
生活中,环境污染不断地影响着我们的生活。比如:被污染的空气、河流和垃圾污染等等,已经严重地破坏了我们的生活环境。
河流被污染了,水中的生物将无法生存,也不能用它浇灌庄稼,人类将吃不到新鲜的食物。同样,地下水如果被污染,人们将喝不到洁净的水,人类将会生病、中毒,甚至可能会死亡。所以,任何人都不应该往河里投放有可能污染环境的废弃物。
空气是所有生物赖以生存的保证。如果空气被污染了,所有生物将会生活在“毒气室”一样的环境里,疾病和各种灾难将会是人类最大的敌人。日久天长,人类就会灭亡。可见,洁净的空气是多么重要啊!
垃圾在生活中随处可见,可见人类的坏习惯——乱丢垃圾的行为实在太严重了。随意堆放的垃圾会对环境造成很大的危害,例如:滋生病菌、传播疾病、污染空气以及河流等等。
这些污染真是可怕呀!要预防这些污染,我们一定要爱护环境,保护地球,制止一切污染环境的行为。
篇5:中考英语作文:网上交友500字
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+ 加入清单Should students make friends online? Some people say yes. Internet helps people make many friends. Chatting on line, students can express their feelings and opinions more freely, and even get help for their foreign language studies.
Others, however, think students should not. They say making friends online is a waste of time, which should be spent more meaningfully on study. Besides, some students get cheated online.
It is my opinion that students should place their study, health and safety before other things. As for friendship, we can readily find it in our classmates and other people around us.
篇6:2024中考满分英语作文:myfriend
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+ 加入清单I have a very good friend. His name is Philip. As far as Im concerned, hes very kind-hearted and generous. Once I was in high school, he treated me friendly and sincerely. When I was happy, he was also happy with me. When I was sad, he always comforted me. When I was defeated, he always encouraged me. When I stumbled, he always pulled me up. Although we quarreled at times, we were still in good relationships. We could know each other better after the argument. When my birthday came, he always sent me a special present.
我有一个很好的朋友。他的名字叫菲利普。我觉得他是非常善良和慷慨的。当我在高中的时候,他对我很友好、很真诚。我高兴的时候,他也和我一起开心。当我难过时,他总是安慰我。当我失败时,他总是鼓励我。当我迷茫时,他总是拉我一把。尽管有时候我们会吵架,我们关系仍然很好。争吵之后我们可以更好的了解对方。我生日的时候,他总是送我一份特别的礼物。
Hes very hard-working and intelligent. He always studied hard at school. Because of his hard work, he always did very well in exams. His oral English was better than mine. Most of the time, he was willing to chat with me in English. Owing to his help, I made a lot of progress in oral English.
他非常勤劳也很聪明。在学校他总是很努力学习。由于他的努力,他总是能在考试中取得好成绩。他的英语口语比我好。大多数时候他都愿意用英语和我聊天。由于他的帮助,我在英语口语方面取得了很大的进步。
篇7:关于中考英语提示性作文参考
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+ 加入清单提示性作文:就是给出一个标题或无标题,给出具体的内容,规定一定的字数,让考生写出作文。由于这类作文已经规定了文章的中心思想和主要内容,因此考生可以不再列出提纲,只要把注意力集中在如何正确、完整地用英文词句表达出中心思想和内容就可以了。
写好提示性作文应注意的事项
1、仔细审题,明确要求。对所给信息反复阅读,弄清这个题目要表达什么,然后对所给信息进行整理、组织,按照自己的写作思路使之条理化。
2、确保语言精炼。在写作过程中,考生应时刻提醒自己按照已给出的信息点去写,不必有太多的发挥。但也不必按照信息点去逐句翻译。用自己熟悉的短语、句型去体现要点。掌握好文章的长度,不要字数过多或过少。
例题分析
1.假设你叫李华,6月18日在报上看到一篇《救救老虎》的报道。想到近来看见有人在路边销售老虎骨头(bone)
等事,你感到担忧.请你给某报社编辑部写一封信。
要点如下:
1.老虎是国家保护动物,目前数量日趋减少;
2.写信原因是目睹到有人为赚钱,滥捕滥杀老虎;
3.森林的大量砍伐破坏了老虎的生存环境.呼吁严惩捕猎者(hunter),希望大家共同努力,创造一个人类和动物共同的幸福家园,不计入总词
注意:
1.书信应包括所有要点,但不要逐条翻译。
2.词数:80左右。(开头已给出数)
Deareditor,
Ive just read an article in a newspaper about saving tigers. It says that the number of tigers is becoming smaller in our country. Its terrible. I saw a few people sell bones of tigers by the roadside the other day.I also learned that some people killed tigers in order to make money.And too many trees have been cutdown. The places where tigers used to live were destroyed. Tigers are in danger of dying out.
Our government should punish the hunters.We should try our best to make our earth pleasant and peaceful,not only for human beings but also for animals.
Yours faithfully,
LiHua
篇8:2024中考关于志愿者英语作文
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+ 加入清单I would like to be a volunteer in my spare time. My reasons are as follows:
我想成为一名志愿者在业余时间。我的理由如下:
First of all, it is a good virtue to help others, even in modern society. We all need others’ help in case we get into trouble. Secondly, we are able to better ourselves by helping others because we gain valuable experience and build up our confidence while serving others. What’s more, volunteering makes us feel better about ourselves, thus making our life more enjoyable. More importantly, we can make the world a better place to live in by volunteering to improve it.
首先,帮助别人是一种美德,即使在现代社会。我们都需要别人帮助的情况下,我们有麻烦。其次,我们能够更好的完善自我帮助他人,因为我们获得了宝贵的经验,建立自信,而服务他人。更重要的是,志愿者使我们对自己感觉更好,从而使我们的生活更舒适。更重要的是,我们可以让世界变得更美好生活的志愿者来改善它。
In summary, volunteering can make a difference to our life, so I think it is very rewarding to be a volunteer.
总之,志愿工作可以使我们的生活差异,所以我认为这是非常值得去做志愿者。
篇9:预测2024中考英语作文:有志者事竟成
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+ 加入清单Zengzi once said: "people cant be hony, a long way to go. It means:" too large to be ambitious people, tasks is very important. And the long way. This suggests that the people with lofty ideals can achieve great things.
Chinas great writer pu song-ling said: "where there is a will, there is a way, cross the rubicon, 102 qin guan chu after all.
Chu overlord xiang yu has a lofty ambition, he led tens of thousands of troops in war millions of qin, qin will beat, pushed to the tyranny of the qin dynasty. Because when he was young, there is a big negative, so lead many Jiang Dongzi first, felling nothing, qing dynasty. Imagine if he doesnt have great ambition, how can have the spirit was very? Ge hong once said will, column and your fame. Mountaineering to hard and not end, will become the majestic mountains. Tell us aspiring thereof, will not be as difficult to yield, after a difficult. To meet them will be a success. Chinas famous litterateur, thinker, revolutionist, lu xun as to save the people of lofty ambition so he just from a medical article, starting from scratch, leng to save all the nations in the oil and water, become ten thousand people admire big literary giant.
So, ambitious people will do something great admiration for the nations. The great ambition is not?
There is a poet in the tang dynasty he doing nothing all day long, always fantasizing about not aspire to, dont work hard is known. Admittedly, this is impossible. It was the day dreaming! Spent her life in the end, he was useless.
So, aspiring people can succeed, the heart, is unlikely to succeed.
The eagle can fly, because he has the ambition of the skies; The sea can surge because he set the all-encompassing. Tall bamboo can roll, because he set down the ambition of everything.
Lets anger force set ambitious like an eagle flying high, Like the sea inclusive everything; On a roll like bamboo.
曾子曾经说过:“士不可以不弘毅,任重而道远。意思就是:“胸怀宽广的人不能不志向远大,任务十分重大。,而路途遥远。这就表明了有志之士可成大事也。
我国的大文学家蒲松龄说:“有志者,事竟成,破釜沉舟,百二秦关终归楚。
楚霸王项羽有着远大的志向,他曾带领几万人马于百万秦军决一死战,将秦军击败,推倒了秦王朝的暴政。正是因为他年轻时就有远大的报负,所以才带领众多的江东子第,伐无道,诛暴秦。试想一下,如果他没有远大的志向,怎么会有气吞山河的气概呢?葛洪曾经说过志坚者,功名之柱也。登山不以艰险而止,则必臻乎峻岭。告诉我们有志坚之人,不会像困难屈服,经过困难之后。迎接他们的将是成功。我国着名的文学家、思想家、革命家、鲁迅因为有拯救国人的远大的志向所以他才弃医从文,从零开始,愣是拯救万民于水火之中,成为万人敬仰的大文豪。
所以说,志向远大的人一定会成就大事,为万民所敬仰。那志向不远大的人又如何呢?
在唐朝时有一个诗人他整天无所事事,总幻想着不立志,不努力就远近闻名。诚然,这是不可能的。真是白日作梦啊。最终,他还是碌碌无为的度过了一生。
所以,胸怀大志的人定能成功,胸无大志,是不可能成功的。
雄鹰之所以能展翅高飞,是因为他立下了翱翔天空的大志;大海之所以能汹涌澎湃是因为他立下了包容万物的大志;高大的竹子之所以能势如破竹,是因为他立下俯视万物的大志。
让我们怒力吧立下大志像雄鹰一样展翅高飞;像大海一样包容万物;像竹子一样势如破竹。
篇10:中考写出英语高分作文有哪些技巧
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+ 加入清单英语写作是学生学习的一个盲点,缺乏对写作的专门训练和反思,老师的工作量大,造成作文讲评大多数时候只谈现象,因此学生学得也不具体、不深入,忽略写作技能的提高,甚至误认为只要句子结构正确,无单词拼写错误就应该得满分。同学们应该走出对英语写作认识上的误区。那么怎样才能写出一篇优秀作文,而在中考中获取高分呢?
一、写作决窍
总体把握,要点齐全;人称时态,逻辑清楚;
关键词汇,动词第一;组词成句,结构完整;
组句成文,连词增色;此路不通,绕道迂回;
字迹工整,留好印象;从句适量,高分有望。
1.认真审题。审题包括要点、格式、词数以及此篇文章要传递给读者什么样的信息,告诫读者什么(即写作目的)。
2.确定文体和时态。确定文体后,根据不同文体的特点和要求进行组织材料;同时确定出该篇文章的总时态与时态的变化。
3.写完要点,但不随意发挥。
4.先草稿,后抄写。
篇11:与父母相处中考英语作文
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+ 加入清单【预测题目】
假如你是Han Mei,下面是一封你的笔友Alice 给你发来的e-mail,请你根据e-mail 的内容给她写一封回信,与她交流看法,并帮她排忧解难。
提示词语:listen to,mother’s love,care about,communicate with,get along with,smile
写作要求:
语句通顺,书写工整;
可用所给提示词语,也可以适当发挥;
词数在60-80左右。
Dear Han Mei,
I’m afraid I’ve got a big problem recently. My mother talks too much to me. She always tells me," Be careful while crossing the street.”“Put on more clothes.”“Did you do a good job at school?” And so on. I’m annoyed(烦恼). What shall I do?
Alice
【参考范文】
Dear Alice,
As a teenager,I met the same problem as you. But now I can get along better with my mother. Here are some ideas for you.
Your mother talks much, because she cares about you. Maybe it’s not a good way, but it shows your mother’s love. So I think you should listen to her. If your opinions are different from your mother’s,you can communicate with her, and tell her what you are thinking about. If your mother doesn’t take your advice,just keep silent and give her a smile.
I hope what I say here can help you a lot.
Yours
Han Mei
【参考译文】
亲爱的爱丽丝,
作为一个少年,我遇到了和你一样的问题。但现在我可以更好地与我的母亲。这里有一些想法给你。
你妈妈说话多,因为她在乎你。也许这不是一个好方法,但它显示了你母亲的爱。所以我认为你应该听她的。如果你的意见和你母亲的不同,你可以和她交流,告诉她你在想什么。如果你的妈妈不接受你的建议,保持沉默,给她一个微笑。
我希望我在这里说的能帮到你很多。
你的好朋友,
韩梅
篇12:英语期中考试反思
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+ 加入清单这次英语期中考试我没有考好,没有达到期中考试前制定的目标。我知道父母和老师对于我有着很大的期望,可是我还是没有考好。对于这点我感到十分抱歉。但是既然犯了错误就要改正,所以,通过考试我也想了很多。我知道期中考是一面清澈的镜子,在它面前,我羞愧地低下了头。仔细看看试卷发现竟然错了很多不该错的地方。我的基础知识部分扣了很多分,主要是单词掌握不好。阅读题扣了8分,说明我的阅读量不够,我的阅读速度慢影响了做后面的题,思考的时间少了。老师狠狠地批评了我。我的这次英语作文只得了8分,这与我的词汇量不够,阅读积累不够有很大的关系,分析原因,主要是课前没有做好预习,课堂上没有积极的举手发言,课后不认真复习,把写作业当成一种完成任务。
于是,在期中考的时候,我得到了我应有的“报应”。 经过我的仔细反思,有这样的结果是我 在做作业时,囫囵吞枣,没有仔细审题,认真做题,这让我失去了一次特别好的自我提高的机会。我应该把写作业当成一个新的开始,而不是上一段学习的结束,每一次的作业都要当做一次小的考试。我要增加一些仿写和阅读的练习。在今后的学习中,我在课堂上要积极回答问题做好笔记,多记一些老师拓展的知识点,每天回家要复习一遍老师讲的内容,认真完成一篇阅读与完形填空,我有上进心想去学更多的英语知识,自己努力,超越自己,比别的同学更好。
篇13:高三英语高分的作文之词句篇亮点
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+ 加入清单书面表达评分标准“最高档”要求:“应用了较多的语法结构或词汇;语法结构或词汇方面有少许错误,但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致;有效地使用了语句间连接成分,使全文结构紧凑。”从历年书面表达高分文章来看,每篇文章都有“亮”点,即在用词、造句或段落安排上都有独到之处。要想获得高分就应在“正确”表达的基础上写出自己的特色,写出自己的“亮”点。
一、词汇选择——标新立异
在写作中“较高级词汇”的使用主要是指使用《大纲》上没有的词语、使用通过构词法变化来的新词、使用同(近)义词或反义词等来代替常见词语。
1)这栋房子在芳草街的一栋楼上。
A: The flat is in a building on Fangcao Street.
B: The flat situates in a building on Fangcao Street.
分析:is in是常见词语,而situates in则是《大纲》上没有的,属于高级词汇。
2)在周末我们做很多作业。
A: At weekends, we have a lot of homework to do.
B: At weekends, we have endless homework to do.
分析:B句在表达时没有使用过于直接的a lot of,而是使用了endless。endless就是由《大纲》词汇end加后缀-less变化来的。
3)洗澡间和厨房都很好。
A: The bathroom and the kitchen are good.
B. The bathroom and the kitchen are well-furnished.
在表达要点时,B句使用了well furnished,这比good语气强,也显得生动。
在造句时,“较高级词汇”如能运用贴切自然,哪怕整篇文章只用上一个,也会使你的作文显示出与众不同。
二、结构造句——与众不同
在造句时,既要使句子生动,又要使其简明扼要。
1、使用与人不同的表达方式,特别是提倡打破汉语句子结构的束缚而重组的句子更受欢迎。
1)唐山曾在二十世纪八十年代发生过一次大地震。
A: There was a strong earthquake in Tangshan in the 1980s.
B: A terrible earthquake hit/struck Tangshan in the 1980s.
大多数同学使用了there be结构,这是对的,但是B句却摒弃了常见句式。另辟蹊径而使用了“主语+谓语+宾语”结构,且使用了terrible,hit/strike这样的词汇,更是难
可贵的。
2)你八月十五日的来信我今天早晨收到了。
A:I received your letter which was written on August 15th this morning.(多数人使用的方式)
B: Your letter of August 15th reached/ got to me this morning.(与多数人使用的方式不同,简洁)
2.使用一些强势句式,如强调句、感叹句、倒装句等,增强语句的表现力。如:
3)阿福救了我妹妹。
A: Ah Fu saved my sister.(一般句式)
B: It was Ah Fu that saved my sister.(强调句式)
4)我们看到庄稼和蔬菜长势喜人很是高兴。
A: We were glad to see crops and vegetables growing well.(一般陈述句)
B: How glad we were to see crops and vegetables growing well.(感叹句)
3、句式多样,复杂得体。在写作中应避免使用相同长度的相同句型,而应注意句式的变化,如长短句结合,简单句、并列句与复合句共用,还可使用简化句等;一些较复杂的结构如独立主格,分词结构等也可使用。下面的表达中A句简单句多,而且多处使用there be结构,显得单调、乏味,而B句就有自己的特色(请同学们自己分析)。
5)这是一套25平方米的住房,住房里面有卧室、有洗澡间、有厨房;卧室里有床、沙发、桌子和椅子等。
A: Its a flat of 25 square metres. There is a bedroom in the flat. There is a bathroom and a kitchen in it, too. In the bedroom, there is a bed; there is a sofa, a desk and a chair as well.
B: Its a flat of 25 square metres, with a bedroom, a bathroom and a kitchen. In the bedroom there is a bed, a sofa, a desk and a chair.
三、布局谋篇——独具匠心
在写作中,我们可按时间、空间或其它逻辑顺序来安排各要点,同时为使主题突出,结构严谨,我们应注意学习和使用交代句以及段落的主题句等。在布局谋篇上,2002高考范文堪称典范。请看:
Opinions are pided on the question.
60% of the students are against the idea of entrance fees. They believe a public park should be free of charge. People need a place where they can rest and enjoy themselves. Charging entrance fees will no doubt keep some people away. What is more, it will become necessary to build gates and walls, which will do harm to the appearance of a city.
On the other hand, 40% think that fees should be charged because you need money to pay gardens and other workers, and to buy plants and young trees. They suggested, however, fees should be charged low.
1)该文使用Opinions are pided...作交代句,开门见山,随后两个段落均使用了主题句,使全文结构紧凑,表达严谨。
2)在表述要点时范文还对要点出场顺序作了调整,如“40%的同学认为应收门票,但不宜过高。”前部分作为主题句放在句首,而后部分另起一句放在句末:They suggested, however, fees should be charged low.这样就分清了轻重缓急,主题突出,条理清楚。
3)范文使用了and, what is more, however等连词,在段落之间使用了on the other hand(说明前后两个观点是相悖的),这些连接手段的运用加强了句子之间、段落之间的联系,使文章表达连贯,浑然一体。
4)范文在第二段为说明不收门票的“原因”时增加了Charging entrance fees will no doubt keep some people away.等细节,这也是解决句与句之间缺少连贯性的常见方法。
总之,要想使自己的文章有亮点,吸引读者,在考试中获得高分,就应在用词、造句、谋篇上下功夫,哪怕是有一处特长都是“亮”点,都是值得肯定的。
篇14:2024中考英语作文必备词汇
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+ 加入清单导语:中考时,英语作文是必考项,重要性不言而喻。它也是让大多数学生最头疼的事情。词汇是最重要的一部分。下面是yjbys作文网小编为您收集整理的资料,希望对您有所帮助。
above prep. 在 …… 上面
a. 上面的
ad. 在 …… 之上
abroad ad. 到(在)国外
absent a. 缺席, 不在
accent n. 口音,音调
accept vt. 接受
accident n. 事故,意外的事
ache vi.& n. 痛,疼痛
achieve vt. 达到,取得
across prep. 横过,穿过
act n. 法令,条例 v. (戏)表演,扮演(角色),演出(戏);行动,做事
action n. 行动
active a. 积极的,主动的
activity n. 活动
add vt. 添加,增加
address n. 地址
advantage n. 优点; 好处
advertisement n. 广告
advice n. 忠告,劝告,建议
advise vt. 忠告,劝告,建议
afford vt. 负担得起( …… 的费用);抽得出(时间);提供
afraid a. 害怕的;担心
after ad. 在后;后来 prep. 在 …… 之后;在 …… 后面 conj. 在 …… 以后
afternoon n. 下午,午后
again ad. 再一次;再,又
against prep. 对着,反对
age n. 年龄;时代
ago ad. 以前
agree v. 同意;应允
agreement n. 同意,一致;协定,协议
air n. 空气;大气
airline n. 航空公司;航空系统
airplane n. (美)飞机
airport n. 航空站,飞机场
alive a. 活着的,存在的
all ad. 全部地
a. 全(部);所有的;总;整
pron. 全部;全体人员
allow vt. 允许,准许
almost ad. 几乎,差不多
alone a. 单独的,孤独的
along ad. 向前;和 …… 一起;一同
prep. 沿着;顺着
aloud ad. 大声地
already ad. 已经
also ad. 也
although conj. 虽然,尽管
always ad. 总是;一直;永远
America * n. 美国;美洲
American a. 美国的;美国人的 n. 美国人
among prep. 在 …… 中间;在(三个以上)之间
amuse vt. (使人)快乐,逗乐
ancient a. 古代的,古老的
and conj. 和;又;而
angry a. 生气的,愤怒的
animal n. 动物
another a. 再一;另一;别的;不同的 pron. 另一个
answer n. 回答,答复;回信; 答案 v. 回答,答复;回信;(作出)答案
ant n. 蚂蚁
any pron. (无论)哪一个;哪些 任何的;(用于疑问句、否定句)一些;什么
anybody pron. 任何人,无论谁
anyone pron. 任何人,无论谁
anything pron. 什么事(物);任何事(物)
anyway ad. 不管怎样
anywhere ad. 任何地方
appear vi. 出现
apple n. 苹果
April n. 4 月
area n. 面积;地域,地方,区域;范围,领域
arm n. 臂 , 支架
army n. 军队
around ad. 在周围;在附近 prep. 在 …… 周围;大约
arrive vi. 到达;达到
article n. 文章; 东西;冠词
art n. 艺术,美术;技艺
asad.& conj. 像 …… 一样;如同;因为 prep. 作为,当做
Asia * n. 亚洲
Asian a. 亚洲的,亚洲人的 n. 亚洲人
ask v. 问,询问;请求,要求;邀请
asleep a. 睡着的,熟睡
at prep. 在(几点钟);在(某处)
Atlantic a. 大西洋的
attention n. 注意,关心
August n. 8 月
aunt n. 伯母;舅母;婶;姑;姨
Australia * n. 澳洲;澳大利亚
Australian a. 澳洲的,澳大利亚人的 n. 澳大利亚人
autumn n. 秋天,秋季
avoid v. 避免,躲开,逃避
awake (awoke, awo ken) v. 唤醒 醒着的
away ad. 离开;远离
篇15:以校园安全为话题的中考英语作文
全文共 1315 字
+ 加入清单导语:正如我们所知道的,安全是我们生活中最重要的东西。所以,我们应该尽力确保我们的安全。下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的优秀英语作文,欢迎阅读与借鉴,谢谢!
建设平安校园是我们每个人的责任与义务。作为一名学生,我们更应该珍惜自己的生命,更应该注意自己的人身安全。假如你是Li Hua,并担任校学生会主席,请你就安全问题,向全校学生发出倡议,写一封安全倡议书。
内容提示:(1)不带管制刀具到学校;(2)不私自下河洗澡;(3)不打架;(4)上学放学的途中应该注意安全;(5)遇紧急情况,立即报告警察或老师。
参考词汇:管制刀具:restricted knives or things;洗澡:have a bath;打架:fight;紧急情况:emergency;交通安全:pay attention to the traffic。
写作要求:(1)用词恰当,要点全面,层次清晰,书写规范。(2)可适当发挥,80词左右,开头、结尾已给出,不计入总词数。(3)严禁出现自己的真实姓名和学校等相关信息。
★ 范文
Dear students,
As we know, safety is the most important thing in our lives. So, we should try our best to make sure we are safe.
We mustn’t bring restricted knives or things to our school because these things may cause serious problems. Do not have a bath in rivers or ponds by ourselves without our parents’ permission. And, we should be friendly to others so fighting is strongly banned. Make sure that we should always pay attention to the traffic on our way to school or home. Furthermore, if we meet some emergency, we must call for help from the police or our teachers.
In a word, following these safeties rules above can make us live in peace.
Yours,
Li Hua
【汉语翻译】
亲爱的同学们,
正如我们所知道的,安全是我们生活中最重要的东西。所以,我们应该尽力确保我们的安全。
我们不能带限制的刀子或东西到我们的学校,因为这些东西可能会导致严重的问题。未经父母允许,不得在江河或池塘内洗澡。我们应该友好地对待别人,所以强烈禁止打架。在上学或回家的路上,一定要注意交通。此外,如果我们遇到紧急情况,我们必须向警察或我们的老师求助。
总之,这些安全规则可以使我们生活在和平。
你的好朋友,
李华
篇16:中考英语作文话题:网购
全文共 853 字
+ 加入清单导语:相信大家都有在网上购物过,下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的优秀英语作文,欢迎阅读与借鉴,谢谢!
Shopping online is quite popular in our daily life now. It is a new way of shopping. Many things are offered and wait for your choosing. Convenience is the most important advantage. You can buy anything as you like. You don’t have to queue with other shoppers. Meanwhile, it is often open for 24 hours a day.
However, there are many disadvantages about shopping online. You can’t actually see the real products. So you may be cheated easily. Also, many people will miss the best opportunity to get along well with their friends and share the joy of shopping.
In conclusion, we should make proper use of the internet shopping.
【参考译文】
网上购物在我们的日常生活中很受欢迎。这是一种新的购物方式。很多东西都提供了,等待你的选择。方便是最重要的优点。你可以随意买任何东西。你不必和其他购物者排队。同时,它通常每天开放24小时。
然而,网上购物有许多缺点。你真的看不到真正的产品。所以你可能很容易受骗。同时,许多人会错过与朋友相处的好机会,分享购物的乐趣。
总之,我们应该好好利用网络购物。
篇17:预测2024中考英语作文题目:我的梦想
全文共 2164 字
+ 加入清单Everyone has a dream, everyone dreams of each has its own characteristics.
My dream is to become a singer. Astronauts ya-ping wangs dream is when astronauts, soaring in the sky, after a test, 1 on 1 June 2013 live at 38 points, 5 ya-ping wang realized their dream. Dream is all the motivation, if did not have the power, then you will always be stepped in situ, power will let you constantly burning inner small universe, you want a perennial desire for a better life. Dream, can let you are not afraid of wind and rain, l fearless risk, keep moving forward.
Dancers Liao Zhi lost her legs in an earthquake, also lost daughter, hospitalized for 4 months, finally can was released from the hospital, but she must take prosthesis, thought it wont pain again, but she never thought with prosthesis is how much pain. Back to the home, want to go to the Wc, and calling to dad, mom, called for a long long time no one her. She remembered that mom and dad might not be home, so, she endured the pain with the prosthesis to the toilet. Just walked into a toilet and a load into the toilet, the hair is wet, look in the mirror before their mess, she decided to practice, have not yet learned to walk just learn to dance, in order to dream hard practice for six, seven years.
This reminds me of the dishes during the summer vacation, didnt stick to quit a few days. Will insist on a dream, the realization of the dream is not, make track for to dream on the road requires effort and sweat, and tears. In to abandon, do not give up. Vocabulary, dream, how beautiful dream, only constant efforts, constantly insist, to be courageous ya-ping wang, Liao Zhi insisted.
每个人都有一个梦想,每个人的梦想都各有特色。
我的梦想是当一名歌唱家。宇航员王亚平的梦想是当上宇航员,在天空中翱翔,经过一番的考验,就在2013年6月1住1日5时38分,王亚平实现了自己的梦想。梦想就是一切前进的动力,如果没有了动力,那你将永远的踏步走在原地,动力会让你不断的燃烧内心的小宇宙,激发你对美好生活向往生生不息的渴望。梦想,会让你不惧风雨l,无畏风险,不断前进。
舞蹈家廖智在一次地震中失去双腿,也失去了女儿,住了4个月的医院,总算可以出院了,但她必须带假肢,本以为不会再痛苦了,但她万万没有想到带假肢是有多么痛苦。回到了家,想上Wc,便叫爸爸,妈妈,叫了很长很长时间都没有人理她。她才想起爸爸妈妈可能不在家,于是,她忍着痛苦带着假肢走向了厕所。刚走进厕所便一头载进了马桶,头发也湿了,看着镜子前狼狈的自己,她便下定决心苦练,还没有学会走路就学会跳舞,为了梦想苦苦练习了六,七年。
这让我想起了在暑假里洗碗,没坚持几天就放弃了。有梦就要坚持,梦想的实现并非一朝一夕,追来梦想的道路上需要付出努力和汗水,甚至泪水。在抛弃,不放弃。梦想,是多么美好的词汇,梦想,只有不断的努力,不断地坚持,才能拥有王亚平的勇敢,廖智的坚持。
篇18:健康中考英语作文
全文共 898 字
+ 加入清单The desire for good health is universal. In our competitive society it is important to maintain good health.
On the one hand, people with good health can do work with full confidence and their progress in work in turn contributes to their health and happiness.
On the other hand, a sick person is usually not interested in everything around him and therefore he loses many opportunities to become successful.
There are many ways to keep it. First, those who are always on the go from morning till night should find time to relax because too much stress will affect their health. Second, enough time should be left for sleep because that will help one become rested and refreshed.
Finally, regular physical exercises benefit one‘s health a lot. So one should always keep in mind that a certain amount of exercise is not a waste of time.As for me, I like playing tennis in the morning. I also attach much
篇19:预测2024中考英语作文:代沟
全文共 1455 字
+ 加入清单The 21st century, the thought of the teenagers, we and our beloved one generation, will never be able to melt together, seems to have no why, I do not know why. Adults like to impose their ideas in a new generation of us, and we, must also accept the ideology of "unreasonable", if not accept, perhaps, in the eyes of an adult, our behavior is what is called a rebellious, not sensible, wings hard, but, you never know what we carry in our hearts, can only silently bear all this, buried our own thoughts, not move to the attraction.
We are the -- the future of The Times. We have our own dreams, we have our own in the future, we have our own life to live, all this, go to our own, you can never be with us life, the way back, but also to go on our own. Please let go of your generous hand, let us fly yourself.
Times are changing, the life also is changing. Different time, different people, have their own way. Dear, father, mother, we grow up, learn to walk, bumpy road ahead, lets face it alone, raising more than ten years, we wont forget, you also should have a rest.
二十一世纪,我们这些青少年的思想,与我们所敬爱的上一辈人,永远无法融在一起,似乎没有为什么,也不知道为什么。大人们喜欢把他们的思想强加在我们新一辈人的身上,而我们,也必须接受这种“无理”的思想,如若不接受,也许,在大人的眼睛里,我们的行为就是所谓的叛逆、不懂事、翅膀硬了,可是,你们永远不会知道我们心中所想的一切,只能默默地承受这一切,埋藏我们自己的思想,不动生色。
我们是这个时代的——未来。我们有自己的梦想,我们有自己的未来,我们有我们自己的生活要过,这一切,要我们自己去承担,你们永远不能陪伴我们一生,往后的路,还要靠我们自己去走。请你们放开你们那宽厚的手,让我们自己飞翔吧。
时代在变,生活也在变。不同的时代,不同的人,有自己的路。亲爱的——爸爸,妈妈,我们长大了,学会走路了,前面坎坷的路,让我们独自面对吧,十几年的养育之恩,我们不会忘记,你们也该休息休息了。
篇20:2024年中考英语看图作文写作要点
全文共 861 字
+ 加入清单看图作文是以图画或图表来提供目的、对象、时间、地点、内容等情景,要求作者借助图画,通过联想将一组画面的直观内容转换成传神达意的文字形式,用于反映图中所表现的思想内容。
从写作体裁上看,可说明介绍,可叙事记人、可写景状物,也可以发表议论。
1.仔细审题、弄清题目要求
看图作文主要考查考生的观察能力、分析能力、想象能力、创造能力和语言表达能力。
想写好看图作文,必须遵循以下步骤:
首先,必须通读试题中的每一个字,认真观察所给的每一幅图画,正确理解提示所提出的各种要求,从而明确作文的中心思想,判断文章的类型、特点,了解文章的重点内容,力求切中题意。
2.审好图,确定要素
认真观察图中的故事发生于何时?何地?图中的人物为何人?他们做了什么事情?结果如何?
3.考虑用恰当的词语、句型和时态
弄懂了图上的大意后,在内心构思一个基本的框架,考虑用什么样的句型、词语、时态来充分表达文章的内容,尽可能用你熟悉的词语或句型,力求语言准确、意思明了。
4.列出要点,组织语言
在认真审题、弄清题意的基础上,我们应逐个完整无误地把内容要点列出来,我们可以在每幅图画的旁边用简单的词语标出其所表达的要点,这样,既可以提醒自己不要漏写了要点,又能防止过分发挥。接着就可以将内容要点译成英文词语或句子,以便下一步组织语言,形成短文。要注意使用适当的连接词或过渡性语句,以使上下文更为连贯,过渡自然。
5.详细得当
对一些细节方面的内容,如果是文章必不可少的细节,在写作时不可将这些细节忽略;如果是可有可无的细节,则可视具体情况进行增删。因此,我们在审图时,一定要注意各图中的一些细节内容,看其是否影响文章的内容。
6.仔细检查、修改
文章写完后,应进行必要的检查、修改,力求全文内容表达准确、完整,并最大限度减少错误。
具体从如下做起:
(1)核对图中要点是否有遗漏;
(2)时态、语态是否正确;
(3)文章句、段、篇是否连贯;
(4)用词是否得当、词数是否符合要求;
(5)单词大小写、拼写、标点是否准确无误。
最后提醒大家:一篇好的作文不但要内容写得好,字迹也要美观、工整、漂亮。