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高三英语作文自我介绍【汇总20篇】

随着春天的到来,大地完全被绿化了,从仪表到心灵都焕然一新,整个春天都被绿色覆盖了。下面是关于高三英语作文自我介绍,欢迎阅读。

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初中英语作文介绍朋友的Myfriend

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I have a lot of friends but Amy is my best friend.He is a boy. Both of us are good at English, so we often have a chat in English in our spare time. After school, we often play football together on the playground. He runs so fast that I can not catch up with him. He is an excellent student. He not only gets good marks in all subjects but also is very kind and modest. He loves popular songs and also classical music.

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篇1:介绍同学的英语

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it was my first day at school. i walked into the building where i was going to live ,and looked at door after door for my name. at last i found it. in the room there was already a student making his bed.

after we said"hello"to each other, he continued his work, paying no attention to me."what a stuck-up fellow,"i thought. i examined the room. it was not different in the fittings and furnishings from any other room i had seen. but it had been thoroughly cleaned by my new roommate, no doubt.

i looked at him. he was thin, short, and dark. his hair was like a bundle of straw. his dirty clothes and tired look were clearly signs of a long journey . his clothes were made of cheap cloth. the coat was too short and the trousers were too loose. and he wore a pair of rubber shoes , which were very unfashionable. he did not look like a smart senior student at all . "a yokel ,"i concluded.

the second time he spoke ,his accent told me that he was from the south"shall i help you to get your luggage from the office?"he asked.

i did not refuse since i really needed help. he was quick in movement."a good guy ,"i said to myself,"i will make friends with him."i hurried and caught up with him.

[介绍同学英语作文

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篇2:介绍娱乐活动英语作文

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Nowadays, there are many kinds of activities for people entertaining in their leisure time, especially in holiday, such as climbing a mountain, having a picnic, holding a party and so on. However, these recreational activities have its advantages but also bring some harmful influences to people’s lives.

First, to some extent, these recreational activities enrich people’s lives. Those who take part in different activities will not be easy to feel lonely or boring in their leisure time and live wonderful lives instead. Second, taking part in some group activities is a good form to strengthen friendships. For example, many students will hold a union to collect their old classmates or friends in winter holiday so that they have a common time to communicate with each other. Last but not least, such activities like climbing a mountain provide a good chance to do exercise.

However, these recreational activities also bring some problems at the same time. For one thing, taking part in too many these activities will increase the burden of themselves or their families because it is inevitable to spend some money in holding these activities. For another, some recreational activities have potential harm for participants’ health, particularly staying up all night, drinking and smoking.

Therefore, in my opinion, we have to make a careful consideration before we take part in these recreational activities.

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篇3:英语比赛1分钟自我介绍

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I am a girl who loves life, is positive, optimistic and conscientious. In the study and life of high school, I not only learned a lot of knowledge, but also improved in all aspects. In the face of difficulties, I never go back, always start my mind, try to solve the problem and overcome the difficulties. And every solution to a problem, to overcome a difficulty, all of my confidence has been promoted. I believe that as long as there is enough confidence and double efforts, we will be able to overcome all kinds of difficulties and difficulties and lead to the other side of success. In the course of high school learning, I can take every course seriously, preview carefully, and review actively. When you have a problem, ask your classmates and consult your teacher. I will constantly improve the learning methods, find the most suitable learning methods, adjust the study plan, and arrange the time. I think of learning as a knowledge, to enrich my music, and to be full of interest in it.

I like music very much. I actively participate in chorus in school. In chorus team, we cooperate with each other, and compete for school, get excellent results, and win honor for school. And I am also very good at playing the guzheng, and I have won national awards. Through participating in the school choir, I deeply realized that doing anything requires not only enthusiasm, but also the spirit of conscientious and responsible and the spirit of cooperation with others. For individual competitions, it is necessary to take serious treatment, and more importantly, to practice more, so that it will not be unfamiliar.

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篇4:介绍中国茶的英语作文

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导语:中国是茶的故乡,中国人饮茶,据说始于神农时代,下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的优秀英语作文,欢迎阅读与借鉴,谢谢!

It is 4,000 years since the Chinese began to grow and drink tea.

There’re many kinds of tea in China, of which Longjing Tea is famous all over the world.

Tea is usually drunk in tea sets. A tea set is made up of a tea pot and some teacups, which are both made of china.

Most Chinese are fond of drinking tea. Tea is served not only at tea house and restaurants but also at home. People also drink tea during breaks at offices or factories.

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自从中国人开始种植和喝茶以来已经4000年了。

有很多种类的茶在中国,其中龙井茶是世界著名的。

茶通常在茶具中喝醉。一套茶具由一个茶壶和茶杯,都是中国制造的。

大多数中国人喜欢喝茶。茶不仅是在茶馆和餐馆,而且在家里。人们在办公室或工厂休息时喝茶。

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篇5:大学自我介绍英语作文

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I am Andrea. Perhaps the word "average" can best describe me. I am of average heigHt, average weight and of average complexion. I have a thin face, double-lid eyes and a pointed nose. My hair is black, short and straight. I have never worn my hair long.I look like both my mother and

my father, but I have inherited their best parts.

lam a teacher, and I like my job. I believe her or his students can sometimes teach a teacher. Actually I have learnt a lot from my own teaching experience and my students. One particularly good thing about being a teacher is that I am learning something new each day and thus making progress each day. This is wonderful. Of course the income is modest, but on the other hand, quite stable. I keep growing all the time. I find great rewards both monetarily and mentally.

I have many hobbies: reading books, raising pets, making dresses, etc. I like volleyball very much, but I cant play it very often, because it is a team sport. It is difficult to get enough people to play volleyball with me. Its a shame. I derive great pleasure out of my hobbies.

Generally speaking, I am open, honest and easy-going. I hate hypocrisy and injustice. Fairness is very important to me. I try to be fair in everything I do. I have great appreciation for physical and spiritual independence. I am a bit disorganized and impatient sometimes.

I dont have many friends, but I do have a few. I have both male and female friends. We do sports together, go shopping together; and we exchange our views and ideas and share happiness and sadness. Of course we help each other if necessary. I always consider myself a lucky person. I am lucky in my family, I am lucky in my career, I am lucky in my friendship, I am lucky in many things. In one word, I am lucky in life. I am really grateful for all these.

我叫安德里亚。也许“平凡”一词最能形容我。我中等身材,不胖也不瘦,不白也不黑。我有一张瘦削的脸,双眼皮,翘鼻子,我乌黑的头发又短又直,我从未留过长发。我长得既像妈妈又像爸爸,不过我继承了他们的优点。

我现在是一名教师,我热爱我的工作。我认为,一个老师有时也能从他(她)的学生那儿学到知识。事实上,从我的教书经历,从我的学生们那里,我学到了许多许多。 当老师特别好的一点就是每天我都在学习新的东西,并因此而每天取得进步。这真是棒极了。 当然,收入并不高。然而,换个角度看,收入却是相当稳定的。我一直都在不断进步成长,在金钱方面与精神方面我都得到丰厚的回报。

我的兴趣爱好广泛,比如:读书,养宠物,制作服装,等等。虽然我非常喜欢打排球,但是由于这是一项团队运动,我不能经常去打。要找到足够多的人同我一起打排球是很难的。真遗憾!兴趣爱好给我带来无穷的乐趣。

总的说来,我是一个外向、诚实而随和的人。我对任何虚伪和不公正都深恶痛绝。我极为珍视公平公正,对于所做的每一件事,我都尽力做到公平。我崇尚物质上和精神 .

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篇6:小学生英语自我介绍范例

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Dear teachers and students:

Good morning everyone!  Now, I`m very happy to make a speech here. My name is xue meng yao. I`m 11. I come from Class3 Grade 5  of Dai Yue Qu DaoLang No.2 Primary School. I`m an active girl. I like playing table tennis,  Because I think it`s very interesting. I like English best too. It`s fun. I like my English teacher ,She`s quiet and kind.

On theweend, I like reading books and listening to music in my room. I like the color is green and red. I have a happy family. My father is a teacher. My mother is a doctor . And I`m a good student. My dream is to be a teacher, because I want to help the children in the future.

Thank you very much!  Please remember me! Goodbye!

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篇7:高中英语作文介绍春节

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Today is the first day of the first month, everywhere brimming with a festive atmosphere! See families are decorated, door with Spring Festival couplets, balcony hanging red light, the relatives get together for the family reunion dinner, a toast toast blessing after the work is smooth, the study progress, family happiness! On the way, people dressed in festive costumes and dressed up to visit their friends and relatives, the Spring Festival composition 600 words. We are no exception! Mom and dad took me to visit my grandmas house. All in! Two uncle, two aunt, three uncle, three aunt, aunt, uncle, and cousin, cousin, even younger sister this "little" also come to join the fun! Adults sit on the sofa chatting, watching TV, and we children hand in hand to the room, playing "hide things" games.

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篇8:外企面试英语自我介绍

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Sir or madam,

Good morning. I am glad to be here for this interview. First let me introduce myself. My name is ***, **years old. I come from ******,the capital of *******Province. I graduated from the ******* department of *****University in **** ,****.In the past *** years I have been prepareing for the postgraduate examination while I have been teaching *****in NO.****middle School and I was a head-teacher of a class in junior grade two.Now all my hard work has got a result since I have a chance to be interview by you .

I am open-minded ,quick in thought and very fond of history.In my spare time,I have broad interests like many other youngers.I like reading books, especially those about *******.Frequently I exchange with other people by making comments in the forum on line.In addition ,during my college years,I was once a Net-bar technician.So, I have a comparative good command of network application.I am able to operate the computer well.I am skillful in searching for information in Internet.I am a football fan for years.Italian team is my favorite.Anyway,I feel great pity for our country’s team.

I always believe that one will easily lag behind unless he keeps on learning .Of course, if I am given a chance to work ****** in this famous corporation,I will stare no effort to master a good command of advance ******.

Thank you!

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篇9:介绍春节的优秀英语作文

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导语:春节是中国最重要的传统节日;你会跟外国朋友怎么介绍呢?下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的优秀英语作文,欢迎阅读与借鉴,谢谢!

Dear Mike,

How are you? Im really glad that you are interested in traditional Chinese festivals. There are many traditional festivals in China, such as Spring Festival, Mid-Autumn Day and so on. Id like to introduce the Spring Festival to you. Spring Festival is the most important traditional holiday in China. It usually lasts for 15 days。

Days before the festival, people clean their houses. They think cleaning sweeps any bad luck. They decorate their houses with paper cuts. On the eve of the festival, family members get together and have big meals. Then they watch the Spring Festival Gala on TV. At midnight, they set off fireworks to welcome the New Year. During the festival, kids get lucky money from old people. People visit their relatives and friends. They wish each a happy year and good luck. How happy we are。

Best wishes!

Yours,

Liu Wei

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亲爱的迈克,

你好吗?我真的很高兴你对中国传统节日感兴趣。中国有许多传统节日,如春节、中秋节等。我想向你介绍春节。春节是中国最重要的传统节日。通常持续15天。

节日前几天,人们打扫房屋。他们认为打扫扫除坏运气。他们用剪纸装饰房屋。在节日前夕,家庭成员聚在一起吃大餐。然后他们在电视上看春节联欢晚会。午夜,他们燃放烟花迎接新年。节日期间,孩子们从老人那里得到压岁钱。人们拜访他们的亲戚和朋友。祝每一年快乐,好运。我们是多么幸福。

最美好的祝福!

你的好朋友,

刘薇

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篇10:[英语自我介绍]

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My name is XXX dragons, Mistress (2) class of students, who lives in Funan side of Shuijingfang community.

I am very ordinary, in the whole school more than one thousand students are very inconspicuous. In grade two, my grades are 18 and 11 in the class.

But I also have different experiences with my classmates. I finished my freshman year course when I was four years old. In order to go to school earlier, I left Chengdu to study in Huanggang at the age of five. Back in Chengdu, I was less than six years old when I was in grade two. Maybe its dad who wants me to go to his study place later.

I like to shoot balls, jump rope, run, eat Kentucky Fried Chicken, Beijing roast duck, of course, my favorite is to read. My bookcase is full of Chinese and foreign famous books, and every book is covered with my stamp. Dad says there arent many people in my class who read so many books.

Friday was my lucky day. My English teacher gave me a little certificate of "learning English dolls" and an English book. I put him in a book with Chinese and mathematical rewards and pencils, and treasured them in my desk.

I never buy toys or snacks myself. Want to eat, want to play, want to see and parents say a word, buy or not buy by them to decide. I rarely play games on the computer, too.

My weakness is watching TV and playing games. Ill fix it later.

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篇11:简短英语自我介绍范文

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My name is thumer o, 8 years old this year. I live at 79 king street shop. My hometown is liu first, where the scenery is very beautiful. I was in the sea bo experiment elementary school, I read three class 2. Has good grades have been, every time take miyoshi students. My strengths are many, such as painting. Once, I drew a picture, and showed everyone. Everybody said I really like painting better than. I also love reading. Others lend me a book, I could see god. Friend called me, I also cant hear you. Therefore, they called me a nerd. This is me, a Renaissance man.

我叫刘彤,今年8岁了。我住在王铺街79号。我的家乡是刘佰先,那里景色十分美丽。我在海博试验小学读书,我读三2班。一直以来成绩都不错,每次都拿三好学生。我的长处很多,比如说画画。一次,我画了一张画,拿给大家看。大家都说我画得比真的还像。我也很爱看书。别人借我一本书,我看得出神。朋友叫我,我也听不见。因此,大家叫我书呆子。这就是我,一个多才多艺的人。

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篇12:高三寻物启事英语

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At 9:30 a.m. this Saturday, Mr. Perkin carelessly lost his suitcase when he went to Jin Ancestral Temple from Yingze Street by bus.

The suitcase is square, orange color and made of leather. On it there is a metal handle to which a label is tied. And Perkins name is written on the label. Inside the suitcase is a camera made in Japan, several rolls of film and two woolen jackets.

In the packet on the front cover puts a Chinese-English dictionary and two letters from U. S. A. In the back packet is a wallet with 1,000 dollars and a train ticket from Taiyuan to Beijing inside.

Will the finder contact with Mr. Perkin, please? His telephone number is 7075441. Many thanks to the finder from Mr. Perkin.

本星期六上午九点半,Perkin先生从迎泽乘公共汽车去晋祠时,不慎将手提箱丢失。

手提箱为方形、桔色、皮制。提箱上有一个系着标签的金属提手。标签上写着Perkin的名字。箱内有一日本相机,几卷胶卷和两件毛料上衣。

箱前的口袋里放着一本汉英词典和两封美国来信。箱后有一装有1000美元的钱包和一张从太原到北京的火车票。

请拾到者与Perkin先生联系,他的电话号码是7075441。Perkin先生将不胜感激。

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篇13:介绍自己的英语作文

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I am a 10 years old boy. Smart and handsome. I am proud of myself. Because

I can get perfect scores in Chinese, math and English. It is not good enough, I

am also proud of being an elder brother. That is a Friday evening, my baby

brother was crying all the time. My parents were both cooking for dinner.

I said to my mum; let me look after this little thing. My mum said, “are

you sure you can?” “Yes, believe me I can.” I answered. Then mum went to the

kitchen. I went towards my baby brother. “Oh baby, don’t cry. I will sing a song

for you…” I carried him and sing songs for him. After a while, he was asleep. I

was so tired. My parents were happy and praised me a good boy. This is my first

time to look after my baby brother and I feel proud of myself.

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篇14:英语作文介绍自己最喜欢的老师

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我的英语老师

My English teacher appears very beautiful and she looks about 40 years old.She has a son.

我的英语老师非常漂亮,大约四十岁。她有一个儿子。

Our English teacher is very strict with us,and sometimes,she is very friendly and kind to us.

我们的英语老师对我们非常严格,但有时候她又对我们很和蔼。

She is also humorous.On the April Fools Day,she said to us,"you are going to have a holiday this afternoon".Many students thought it true.Many students dare not talk,because she is very strict.We are afraid that we cannot pass the exam,because the teacher will criticise us if we dont pass.She doesnt give us too much homework,and she doesnt give us too much pressure.Sometimes,we like our Engllish teacher.

她还很幽默。在愚人节那天,她对我们说:“今天下午放假。”很多学生都以为是真的。很多学生不敢说话,因为她非常严格。我们害怕不能通过考试,因为那样老师会责备我们。老师从不给我们留很多家庭作业,但同时也不会给我们过多的娱乐时间。我爱我们的英语老师。

I like English,and I like my English teacher.

我爱英语,我爱我们的英语老师。

编辑点评:写人的小作文,我们经常会遇到,也要多练习,才能写出真情实感。

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篇15:高中面试自我介绍英语

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Good morning. It is my honour to come here for this interview.

First let me introduce myself to you. My name is Wendy. I am 17 years old, and was born in Jinan, Shandong Province. I was graduated from ** Middle School.

I am always studying hard, and I have achieved lots of fruitful results, including many certifications.

I am optimistic and open-minded. I have made a lots of good friends in my school.

In my spare time, I like reading and listening to the music. Sometimes, I also like to play basketball.

I hope I have the chance to enter the school. And I also believe that where there is a will, there is a way.

That is all. Thanks for your attention.

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篇16:三年级英语作文:自我介绍

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导语:相信大家经常做自我介绍了,下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的优秀英语作文,欢迎阅读与借鉴,谢谢!

Hello,my name is Thomas.I am nine.I am a boy.I like to run and swim.I don’t like to sing and dance. I like to eat chicken wing, l can make it.Every Sunday, I go to park with my father and my mother.I like to fly the kite. Blue sky is very nice.I like summer and winter. In summer, I can eat ice cream.I can swim.In winter,I can play with the snow.

Come on. Let’s be freinds.

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你好,我的名字是托马斯。今年九岁。我是一个男孩。我喜欢跑步和游泳。我不喜欢唱歌和跳舞。我喜欢吃鸡翅膀,我能做到。每个星期天,我和我的父亲和我的母亲去公园。我喜欢放风筝。蓝色的天空很漂亮。我喜欢夏季和冬季。在夏天,我可以吃冰淇淋。我可以游泳。在冬天,我可以玩雪。

来吧,让我们成为朋友。

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篇17:英语作文自我介绍

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I am a boy.My name is Sheng Qiyun.I am a pupil in Pingjiang school in Suzhong.I like play table tennis very much,and I like swimming,too.I go to school five days every week. My school is not far from my home,and it is a nice school.There are 3000 teachers and 7000 students in my school.There are 300 classes in my school.My English teacher is tall, my PE teacher is tall,too.I love them a lot.Welcome to my school.

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篇18:大学开学的自我介绍英语

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i am ****. usually a lot of my hobbies, such as skating, playing 356 didesmococcus feather, draw, watch extra-curricular book, watch tv and so on, so my life is very rich extra-curricular. ago is a more introverted person, i have very few words, only and i am very good friends to so many before, but after school at the time of my personality to change slowly, and not, as

previously like very few words, and students are also very harmonious relationship.

in fact, since childhood i dare not interested in english, so my english very poor, then let us hear english, introduce myself, i really do not know how to do, nervous for some time, so i think in the future of english class can have more understanding of english can have more interest in english. families are. usually a lot of my hobbies, such as skating, playing 356 didesmococcus feather, draw, watch extra-curricular book, watch tv and so on, so my life is very rich extra-curricular. ago is a more introverted person, i have very few words, only and i am very good friends to so many before, but

after school at the time of my personality to change slowly, and not, as previously like very few words, and students are also very harmonious relationship.

i think noting is difficult if you put your heart into it,so i can say will make my english be nice in future.

thank you!

[大学开学的自我介绍英语

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篇19:介绍熊猫的英语作文带翻译

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Chinese panda living in the south they are a bamboo for food eat slowly eat 12 hours a day every day to eat 15 kilograms of bamboo. Their numbers are fewer and fewer of the panda in the wild only just over 1600 have a small number of people living in the zoo.

They are a lovely precious animals we should pay more to protect.

熊猫生活在中国的南部,它们以竹子为食,吃的很慢,一天要吃12个小时,每天要吃15公斤的竹子。它们的数量越来越少,在野外的熊猫只有1600多只,还有少数生活在动物园。

它们是一种可爱的珍贵的动物,我们应多加保护。

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篇20:高三英语高分的作文之词句篇亮点

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书面表达评分标准“最高档”要求:“应用了较多的语法结构或词汇;语法结构或词汇方面有少许错误,但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致;有效地使用了语句间连接成分,使全文结构紧凑。”从历年书面表达高分文章来看,每篇文章都有“亮”点,即在用词、造句或段落安排上都有独到之处。要想获得高分就应在“正确”表达的基础上写出自己的特色,写出自己的“亮”点。

一、词汇选择——标新立异

在写作中“较高级词汇”的使用主要是指使用《大纲》上没有的词语、使用通过构词法变化来的新词、使用同(近)义词或反义词等来代替常见词语。

1)这栋房子在芳草街的一栋楼上。

A: The flat is in a building on Fangcao Street.

B: The flat situates in a building on Fangcao Street.

分析:is in是常见词语,而situates in则是《大纲》上没有的,属于高级词汇。

2)在周末我们做很多作业。

A: At weekends, we have a lot of homework to do.

B: At weekends, we have endless homework to do.

分析:B句在表达时没有使用过于直接的a lot of,而是使用了endless。endless就是由《大纲》词汇end加后缀-less变化来的。

3)洗澡间和厨房都很好。

A: The bathroom and the kitchen are good.

B. The bathroom and the kitchen are well-furnished.

在表达要点时,B句使用了well furnished,这比good语气强,也显得生动。

在造句时,“较高级词汇”如能运用贴切自然,哪怕整篇文章只用上一个,也会使你的作文显示出与众不同。

二、结构造句——与众不同

在造句时,既要使句子生动,又要使其简明扼要。

1、使用与人不同的表达方式,特别是提倡打破汉语句子结构的束缚而重组的句子更受欢迎。

1)唐山曾在二十世纪八十年代发生过一次大地震。

A: There was a strong earthquake in Tangshan in the 1980s.

B: A terrible earthquake hit/struck Tangshan in the 1980s.

大多数同学使用了there be结构,这是对的,但是B句却摒弃了常见句式。另辟蹊径而使用了“主语+谓语+宾语”结构,且使用了terrible,hit/strike这样的词汇,更是难

可贵的。

2)你八月十五日的来信我今天早晨收到了。

A:I received your letter which was written on August 15th this morning.(多数人使用的方式)

B: Your letter of August 15th reached/ got to me this morning.(与多数人使用的方式不同,简洁)

2.使用一些强势句式,如强调句、感叹句、倒装句等,增强语句的表现力。如:

3)阿福救了我妹妹。

A: Ah Fu saved my sister.(一般句式)

B: It was Ah Fu that saved my sister.(强调句式)

4)我们看到庄稼和蔬菜长势喜人很是高兴。

A: We were glad to see crops and vegetables growing well.(一般陈述句)

B: How glad we were to see crops and vegetables growing well.(感叹句)

3、句式多样,复杂得体。在写作中应避免使用相同长度的相同句型,而应注意句式的变化,如长短句结合,简单句、并列句与复合句共用,还可使用简化句等;一些较复杂的结构如独立主格,分词结构等也可使用。下面的表达中A句简单句多,而且多处使用there be结构,显得单调、乏味,而B句就有自己的特色(请同学们自己分析)。

5)这是一套25平方米的住房,住房里面有卧室、有洗澡间、有厨房;卧室里有床、沙发、桌子和椅子等。

A: Its a flat of 25 square metres. There is a bedroom in the flat. There is a bathroom and a kitchen in it, too. In the bedroom, there is a bed; there is a sofa, a desk and a chair as well.

B: Its a flat of 25 square metres, with a bedroom, a bathroom and a kitchen. In the bedroom there is a bed, a sofa, a desk and a chair.

三、布局谋篇——独具匠心

在写作中,我们可按时间、空间或其它逻辑顺序来安排各要点,同时为使主题突出,结构严谨,我们应注意学习和使用交代句以及段落的主题句等。在布局谋篇上,2002高考范文堪称典范。请看:

Opinions are pided on the question.

60% of the students are against the idea of entrance fees. They believe a public park should be free of charge. People need a place where they can rest and enjoy themselves. Charging entrance fees will no doubt keep some people away. What is more, it will become necessary to build gates and walls, which will do harm to the appearance of a city.

On the other hand, 40% think that fees should be charged because you need money to pay gardens and other workers, and to buy plants and young trees. They suggested, however, fees should be charged low.

1)该文使用Opinions are pided...作交代句,开门见山,随后两个段落均使用了主题句,使全文结构紧凑,表达严谨。

2)在表述要点时范文还对要点出场顺序作了调整,如“40%的同学认为应收门票,但不宜过高。”前部分作为主题句放在句首,而后部分另起一句放在句末:They suggested, however, fees should be charged low.这样就分清了轻重缓急,主题突出,条理清楚。

3)范文使用了and, what is more, however等连词,在段落之间使用了on the other hand(说明前后两个观点是相悖的),这些连接手段的运用加强了句子之间、段落之间的联系,使文章表达连贯,浑然一体。

4)范文在第二段为说明不收门票的“原因”时增加了Charging entrance fees will no doubt keep some people away.等细节,这也是解决句与句之间缺少连贯性的常见方法。

总之,要想使自己的文章有亮点,吸引读者,在考试中获得高分,就应在用词、造句、谋篇上下功夫,哪怕是有一处特长都是“亮”点,都是值得肯定的。

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