初一关于我的梦想英语作文汇编两篇 作文怎么写【通用20篇】

Each people all have own dream, so I also have their own dreams. And some

of the dreams are hard to reach, some are very simple. My dream is to fulfill

their own responsibility, maintained a kind heart and cook, these are my dream

dreams.

Actually fulfill their duties and keep a good heart is not so easy to

accomplish, it needs to refrain from anywhere at any time, dont temper tantrum,

do their duty. In addition as a cook, you have to have a calm heart, because as

long as the dry dry floating, how can cook delicious? Alas! Dream is very

difficult to achieve! So I want to use any way to achieve your dream? First to

fulfill their responsibility must be very respectful to parents, teachers, we

also small friends want to have mercy heart, must be kind to everyone, to

serious about anything. Namely: "for the respect for the kind; for a person with

and; to is true". As for the current clinical chef is to craft a good, dont

often dry fast, but well done and so on. As long as do this way, I believe that

there must be a may achieve!

Dreams must depend on oneself, others cant help you, also may not have

spirit to help you. So all things must oneself to do, by himself. I hope my

dream will realize, I more hope you desire can be achieved.

My uncle has been in America for quite a few years. He used to live in Pudong. He wanted to come back to his homeland very much. Last summer he came to Shanghai and I took him to visit Pudong. He said the streets became wider and the buildings became higher. I told him, "Many people have moved into new and big flats. It is very convenient to go shopping here." He couldn＇t find his old house. He said, "What great changes!" He decided to stay and spend the rest of his life in Shanghai.

As a small girl, many teachers have asked me what do I want to be in

thefuture.My answer is always to be a teacher.It is my dream and I study so

hardto realize it.Being a teacher can pass the knowledge to others and guide

themto the right way.Thinking about the great contribution I would make,

everythingis worthy.

When the teacher needs to have abundant knowledge and enough patience, you also need to have a selfless love. Our teacher in charge teacher Chen has these. Whenever the students learning state is abnormal, she will talk with us in time. And during the summer and winter vacation or at ordinary times many times to come to visit, understand the students family situation, to communicate with their parents. To help students through individual learning situation.

Our teacher has enough knowledge. Every time we put forward a variety of problems, they can be easily answered. When we were puzzled, they very patient according to their own teaching experience, from our point of view, speaks bother to pass through.

My dream is to become a good teacher. To be a teacher because I think is happy. When you see my students leave school, on each post show of his own life; When saw them set up their own career success: when they have a harmonious family; When she saw her students in their respective field, pieces gain honor... It feels like to see their own orchard, fruit trees blossom, "plum full world" this is when the teacher happiness. This is the reason I determined to want to be a teacher.

In order to complete the dream, I want to be in a good learning at the same time, a lot of reading various books, increase his knowledge. And I want to participate all kinds of public welfare activities, and cultivate their patience and love. In order to this dream, I decided to start from now.

当老师需要具有丰富的学识和足够的耐心，还需要有无私的爱心。我们的班主任陈老师就拥有这些。每当同学们的学习状态出现异常，她会及时和我们谈心。并且在暑假和寒假期间或平时多次上门拜访，了解学生家庭情况，与家长沟通。帮助学生度过一个个学习难关。

我们的任课老师都具备足够的学识。每当我们提出各种各样的难题时，她们都能轻而易举的回答出来。当我们还是迷惑不解时，她们十分耐心的根据自己的教学经验，从我们的角度考虑，不厌其烦的讲通讲透为止。

我的梦想是当一名优秀的老师。因为我觉得当一名老师是幸福的。当看到自己的学生离开学校，在各个岗位上展现自己的人生;当看见他们成功的建立起自己的事业：当看见他们拥有和睦的家庭;当看见自己的学生在各自的赛场，获得一项项荣誉……这种感觉就像看见自家的果园里，一颗颗的果树开花结果，“桃李满天下”这就是当老师的幸福。这也是我立志想当老师的原因。

为了完成梦想，我要在好好学习的同时，大量的阅读各类书籍，增加自己的知识面。另外我要多多参加各类公益活动，培养自己的耐心和爱心。为了这个梦想，我决定从现在开始。

Freedom in my Dream

Freedom for many children is the coming day when they could improve myself in their own way to use my 24 hours. They can study language by watching film instead of working on boring grammar and multiple choices. Boys and girls can have enough time to do sports to keep health not going on a diet as a result of junk food and a lack of sports caused by too much homework.

Freedom is as simple as my playing piano all night without worrying about disturbing my 14-year-old neighbour who has to go to school the next day for my house is specially made.

It also could be freedom in my dream that one day, political democracy becomes true. Freedom in my life is the name of all kindness and happiness.

People have common desire under the sun. For mankind, freedom commonly means respect, love, blessing and dignity. For some people, freedom is that some day, he can give up his own interests to guarantee others’ rights. It is no wonder that so many people fought for freedom even didn’t hesitate to give up their lives when necessary .

I would like to be a freedom fighter for human rights some day in future.

[自由梦想_英语作文

im a student now and i study in no.2 middle school. i like study. i study

every day . i think its very interesting. in the future. i want to be a

reporter. i think its an exciting job. i like talking to people. i like going

to many different places. i like meeting lots of interesting people. but

sometimes its a little dangerous. i like exciting work.

In modern society, pressure is ubiquitous. As students, we have to endure

the pressure from examination, from homework and from our parents’

expectations.As workers, people are faced with the pressure from deadline, from

difficulties and from finance and so on. Here I would like to give some

suggestions about relieving pressure.

First of all, to confide to others is an efficient way for relieving

pressure. When we feel so anxious and worried that we cannot continue to work or

study, go to talk with our friends or family members and we will get some relief

and feel better. Second, to do some exercises is another way to relieve

pressure. If we are under pressure for a long time, doing some exercises can

make us refreshed and regain power to continue our task. Finally, another common

way for women to relieve pressure is to cry. The effect of crying is the similar

as the effect of confiding to others. After crying, we would find that we are

relaxed and then we have spirit to fight against difficulties again.

In a word, there are many ways to relieve our pressure. But the most

important point is that if we cannot solve the problem at once, we need to call

off our attention from the pressure we are faced with to other things. Only in

this way we would not be entangled with the pressure for a long time.

导语：每个人都有精彩的校园生活，下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的优秀英语作文，欢迎阅读与借鉴，谢谢!

Hi! I am a girl. I’m fourteen years old. I come from a small village of Guangxi. I am a student of Class 1, Grade 2. My School life is very interesting. Class begins at 7:45a.m. I have five classes in the morning. In the afternoon, I often have two or three classes. We learn Chinese, English, math, history, biology, geography, politics, physics and so on. I learn them with great interest. I like P.E. best. Because having sports is good for us and build us up. And we’ll have a sport meet this term, I want to take part in the long jump.

I have lunch at school at about a quarter to twelve, because my home is a little far from the school. After school, I often play basketball with my classmates on the playground. Sometimes, I go to the school library. In my spare time, I often practice speaking English with my good friends on the lawn. Because Beijing will host the 2008 Olympic, English is very important. Speaking English will help me to make more foreign friends.

My teachers and classmates are very friendly to me. I like my school life very much. What about your school life? Can you tell me?

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嗨!我是姑娘我十四岁。我来自广西的一个小村庄。我是一名1年级2班的学生。我的学校生活很有趣。在7:45a开始上课。我上午有五节课。在下午，我经常有2个或三个班。我们学语文、英语、数学、历史、生物学、地理、政治、物理等。我很感兴趣。我最喜欢体育运动。因为有运动对我们有好处，把我们建立起来。这学期我们将有一个运动会，我想参加跳远比赛。

我在学校吃午饭大约四分之一到十二，因为我的家离学校有一点远。放学后，我经常和我的同学们在操场上打篮球。有时，我去学校图书馆。在我的业余时间，我经常练习说英语和我的好朋友在草坪上。因为北京将举办2008届奥运会，英语是非常重要的。说英语将帮助我结交更多的外国朋友。

我的老师和同学对我很友好。我非常喜欢我的学校生活。你的学校生活怎么样?你能告诉我吗?

My heart dont know how many times have such idea: to become a the excellent special-class teacher like grandma. Because whenever teachers day comes, see many, many from all directions, all classmates. I will not envy: if I am also a good special-class teacher it would be great!

In order to realize my ideal, Ill be the first to study hard and make progress, strive for to go to a good school. In the classroom, I like hunger, such as thirst in the ocean of knowledge to learn all kinds of knowledge, in the library, carefully looking at a book and a book. Do your homework at home, conscientious, steady groundwork, feet on the ground.

Although in real life Im just an ordinary primary school students, but in the dream, I have is an excellent superfine teacher. I have a dream: on the first day I came into the classroom, the students neat bunch of sitting, there are a bunch of beautiful flowers on the podium, also wearing a red note above, red note that read: "teacher, you are welcome." At this point I am extremely touched. Then I was in the mood to tell everyone about the lesson again. Finished class, the students to analyze, analysis is done I then asked: "did you understand?" The students said the 332 both understand and did not understand. I affectionately said: "dont understand, it doesnt matter, the teacher tell you again, as long as you listen to will understand." Play games together with students in their spare time, go outside and play with my classmates on Sunday, in the vast blue sky at school to more and better knowledge.

Im sure I this ideal will come true.

我的心里不知有过多少次这样的想法：成为一名和外婆一样的优秀特级教师。因为每当教师节来临时看到许许多多来自四面八方，五湖四海的同学祝福。我就不由地羡慕起来：如果我也是一位优秀特级教师该有多好呀!

为了实现我的理想，我首先要好好学习，不断进步，争取考上好学校。在教室里，我如饥如渴般在知识的海洋里吸取各种知识，在图书馆里，仔仔细细地看着一本又一本的书。在家里，认认真真写作业，稳打基础，脚踏实地不断进步。

虽然在现实生活中我只是一名普通的小学生，但在梦里，我已是一位优秀的特级教师了。我梦想着：我第一天走进教室时，同学们端端正正的坐着，讲台上放着一束美丽的鲜花，上面还系着一张红纸条，红纸条上写着：“老师，欢迎您。”此时我感动万分。接着我便怀着激动的心情给大家讲了一遍课。讲完课后，给同学们分析起来，分析完了我便问：“大家有没有听懂?”同学们三三两两地说懂了和没懂。我又亲切地说：“没听懂，没关系，老师再给你们讲一遍，只要大家认真听一定会听懂的。”在课余时间和同学们一起做游戏，在星期天和同学们一起去郊外玩，在广阔的蓝天下学到更多更好的知识。

我相信我这个理想一定会实现。

My hobby is very broad. What to read, listen to music, I like it. But my favorite, favorite, that is - look at a map.

I love to see the map, it seems to have become a part of my life. Hanging on the wall of my house, and a map of China and a map of the world. Every day I looking at that is made up of dots, lines, symbols of the world, drunk I do not know return often, it is ecstasy than reading a book. Because I love to see the map, so I know many geographical knowledge, such as what is the biggest desert in the world, where is the capital city of Canada...... Even read the cousin of sun yat-sen university also kua I understand more!

I love the map simply love to mad. At ordinary times, I always keen to find a map to see. Some is a pile of waste paper to others, I always go up and see if it is a map. Even I also regularly to see when cleaning, result the classmates all day with strange eyes looked at me, I very bitter. But because of my efforts, my home there are now several zhang from real estate newspaper clippings on the map. On one occasion, I saw a piece of paper in the class, there is a map on it. A map! I was excited and cried. The students looked at me with strange eyes again: in order to map, even the life all dont you? Perhaps really well. I want to.

Map has brought us benefits, also brought me trouble. But anyway, maps, I love you graffiti.

我的爱好很广泛。什么看书啦，听音乐啦，我都喜欢。可是我最喜欢的，也就是最喜欢的，那就是-看地图。

我爱看地图，它似乎已成了我生命的一部分。在我家的墙上，挂着一幅中国地图和一幅世界地图。每天我都看着那由点、线、符号组成的世界，经常‘‘沉醉不知归路’’，简直比看书还入迷。正因为我爱看地图，所以我懂得许多地理知识，比如世界上最大的沙漠是什么啦，加拿大的首都在哪里啦……连读中山大学的表哥也夸我懂的多呢!

我爱地图简直爱到了发狂的程度。平时，我总是乐此不疲地寻找地图来看。一些在别人看来是一堆垃圾的废纸，我总是凑上去看看是不是地图。就连打扫卫生时我也习惯性地去看，结果同学们一整天都用怪怪的目光看着我，害得我好苦。不过正因为我的努力，我家现在已经有好几张从《房地产报》上剪下来的地图了。有一次，我在班里看到了一张报纸，上面有一幅地图。地图!当时我就激动得大叫起来。同学们又用怪怪的目光看着我：为了地图，你连命都不要了?或许真的这样吧。我想。

地图给我带来了好处，也给我带来了麻烦。但不管怎样说，地图，我爱你没商量。

Everyone should give his mother a present when his mother’s birthday is coming. It is 25th May Sunday. Today is Han Mei’s mother’s birthday. So she wanted to give her mother a special present. What present should she give? Maybe a bunch of flowers a birthday card are the best presents. A card is cheaper. But it is bad for trees. The more I buy cards, the more trees will be cut by people. So what another present should she give? Let me tell you this present.

It was five o’clock. It was time to surprise her mother. When Han Mei’s mother came home, Han Mei said Happy Birthday to her mother. Then she cleaned her mother’s feet. As you can see, her mother was very surprise.

Why do you think it was a good present?

[初一暑假英语作文：A Present For Mother’s Birthday

梦想是石，敲出星星之火；梦想是火，点燃熄灭的灯；梦想是灯，照亮夜行的路；梦想是路，引你走到黎明。——题记

从出生时的哇哇坠地，到进入小学的花花世界，再到现在，我都记不清我有过多少个梦想，随着时光的流逝，我与成人的距离也越来越近，我的梦想也在不断变换着。

曾经的梦想是当一名宇航员，这样就可以在火箭上观看美丽的地球，遥望星辉灿烂的太空。

曾经的梦想是当一名作家，将自己的大作发表在世界各地，让大家都为我为之赞叹，这是一件多光荣的事啊！

曾经的梦想是当一名科学家，虽然整天呆在家里做实验有点无聊，但是等到实验一成功，全世界都会知道我的大名。

曾经的梦想是当一位白衣天使，每天都可以为病人治病，可以救死扶伤，将病人从死亡的边缘拉回来，看着病人家属向我道谢，这多么有成就感呀！

曾经的梦想是当个旅游家，踏遍千山玩水，游走在世界的每一个角落，饱览世界的名胜古迹，山川江河。

曾经的梦想是当位教师，听着下面学生朗朗的读书声，看他们不断的成长，送走一届又一届的学生。

曾经的我梦见自己坐上一列火车，火车开走了，咔擦……咔擦……带我经过一个又一个人生的站点，呜呜……火车到站了，我也该下车了，我的童年不在了，我，开始了一个新的路程！

[曾经的梦想初一作文

Looking forward to the stars, looking forward to the moon, and finally to the new years day, I am happy! That kind of feeling, strange, like eating honey, is simply indescribable in language.

Early morning, my mother called me up, I rubbed my eyes: "what are you doing? So call me so early? " Mother said, "today is your grandfathers birthday, we have to go faster." I reluctantly dressed, washed and finished, and my mother pulled me around. I felt like I was running so fast for the first time in my life. My mother was still running, saying, "hurry up, hurry up, the car is leaving." Walking on the street, the streets are gray. Because the streets are deserted in the morning and no shop opens, they cant see that today is new years day. There is no doubt about the atmosphere of new years day.

In the country, a lot of fog, everywhere there is the sound of firecrackers, the way people are gathered together, talk about their home in the new years Day is to kill a few pigs, slaughter a few sheep, and buy what new things, everyone put on new clothes, filled with a smile. In the face, giving a feeling of children bursting with happiness, have also come out, with new toys, their families run around here and there, in the run between, to the club to candy, to Hezekiah to drink, no one to blame them, because this is after all new years Day!

However, I am not interested in this, because I still miss me >warm quilt!

On the morning of new years day, I opened my eyes with the sound of a firecracker. Open the calendar, open a new year, open a wonderful story. I l

My mother of medium height, white skin, not very beautiful but dignified and easy, her dress is just like people, not fashionable but very elegant. My mothers character is bad, often lose his temper. Strengths, weaknesses, you want to know? My mother is a man of ingenuity, will do a lot of exquisite handicrafts. Fengling is very good-looking, she will do what all have, in the shape of different colors, hung in the window, my home is very beautiful, especially under the wind chimes look gorgeous in that some of small ornament, whenever there is a wind blowing, they will send melodious bell, it sounds like the wings, can fly far away.

Do you know? My mother a bath just half an hour. Her do the housework is also very clean. 5 o clock in the morning get up to do breakfast for the family to eat, at 9 o clock in the morning will go to the market to buy food, come back and then do a housework. Cook a meal at 11 o clock. Wash his clothes, and 2 PM 3 PM to do the housework. Shes housework: sweeping, washing clothes, sweep the floor, washing the dishes, and so on household chores, few are also countless. The evening she often said: "oh ~ today the housework so much do I waist sour backache." Father and sister, I have no words to say. In fact, we want to help her, but we help her. She said: "go away, you do not clean."

You say my mother is very love clean and industrious again?

我的妈妈中等身材，皮肤白白的，不十分漂亮但端庄大方，她的穿衣打扮也跟人一样，不时髦但很高雅。妈妈的性格不好，常发脾气。优点很多，缺点也不少，你们想知道吗? 妈妈是个心灵手巧的人，会做许多精巧的手工艺品。她做的风铃很好看，什么形状的都有，颜色各异，挂在我家窗前，非常漂亮，特别是风铃下的有些小装饰好看极了，每当有风吹起的时候，它们就会发出悦耳的铃声，那声音像是长了翅膀，能飞得很远很远。

你知道吗?我妈妈一洗澡就半个钟头。她做家务也非常干净。早上5点起床做早餐给一家人吃，早上9点就去市场买菜，回来后就做一做家务。到了11点就做饭。下午2点洗衣服，3点做家务。她的家务范围是：扫地，洗衣服，拖地，洗碗，等等家务，数也数不清。晚上她常常说：“唉~今天家务好多做得我腰酸背痛。”爸爸和姐姐，我都没话可说。其实我们想帮她，不过我们一帮她。她就说：“走开走开，你们做得不干净。”

你说我的妈妈是不是很又爱干净和勤劳?

I always think there is not enough time. For example, I have just taken a three-day holiday. But when I look back, I just feel that it’s only one day. There goes a proverb, “Time is money”. Now I want to say, time is more precious than money, because when money is spent, we can earn some more again. However, when time is gone or lost, never will it return.

Time goes without being noticed. The time for our study and work is usually limited. So I think we must make full use of our time. But it’s a pity that I am always not aware of the importance of time until it’s too late.

So I think, I should get into the good habit of saving time because wasting time is equal to wasting one’s life. Do not put off what can be done today till tomorrow!

我总觉得时间不够。例如，我刚刚参加了为期3天的假期。但是当我回头看，我只是觉得这是唯一的一天。有句谚语说，“时间就是金钱”。现在我想说，时间比金钱更宝贵，因为当钱花掉的时候，我们可以再挣一些钱。然而，当时间流逝，它永远不会回来。

时间不被察觉。我们学习和工作的时间通常是有限的。所以我认为我们必须充分利用我们的时间。但遗憾的是，我总是不知道时间的重要性，直到一切都太迟了。

所以我想，我应该养成节约时间的好习惯，因为浪费时间等于浪费生命。不要把今天能完成的事拖到明天！

[初一英语简短作文

初一英语作文如何教好呢，老师们有何看法？下面一起去看看小编整理的初一英语作文教学方法吧！

写作是书面表达和传递信息的重要途径，培养学生初步的写作的能力，是初中英语教学的目的之一。但是长期以来，中学英语写作教学一直徘徊于不理想的状态，尤其是在农村中学来讲更是不堪入目。平素测验中，不少学生只能写出寥寥数语，而且文章中拼写错误和其他语病随处可见，学生英语作文的质量不尽如人意。即使在有些学校所谓的实验班级效果也不是怎么理想。尽管在平素的教学评价环节中，我们花费大量的时间用于批改学生的作文，但是学生一次又一次的反馈给我们的并不是我们预期所料的，甚至是差之千里。如何解决这一难题，成为现阶段我们英语教学工作者面前的“拦路虎”。本文就这一问题作一些粗浅分析，力求找出了中学英语写作教学的瓶颈所在，结合教学实践，探索性的作一些关于中学英语写作教学的交流——“读、改、写”的实践。

七年的初中英语教学下来，留给我无穷的思考与困惑：不管在什么样的测试中，只要谈到英语写作，很多学生都感到头痛？即使有部分学生能动笔写写，其中的语法错误也是随处可见，写作要点不明确，语句不通顺，语言、词汇档次低，语言不地道或是汉语式的英语写作，让人看后很是费解。即使给材料作文学生也感到无从下手，在他们看来：翻译又是个问题，或是上面所说的汉语式的直接翻译出来。导致这些问题的缘由何在？是平时的教学没有到位，存在写作教学走过场？重视不够？还是学生根本就不是学英语的那块料？困惑，苦思、冥想！多方寻缘由。究其原因，我认为英语写作教学效果不理想主要问题出在平素的教学环节上。长期以来，我们很多英语教学者都重复着同一种模式：教师布置写作内容——学生完成作文——教师批阅作文——作文发还给学生。缺乏对学生的有效地针对性的指导，像那种简单而粗暴的评价方式，从根本上起不到什么作用。久而久之，还会使学生厌恶英语作文写作，甚至产生“写作恐惧症”，进而影响整个英语学习及考试效果！现我就英语写作教学的几点感悟与大家一起共勉。

一、读中不忘写，在阅读中适时穿插写作教学。

“读中教”指的是写作与阅读联系挂钩。因为单靠指导学生掌握写作要领进行写作，在实际的教学工作中是完全不够的，而当我们教学一篇篇阅读理解文章，才正是学生们学习写作的好时机，阅读理解也是我们教学写作的最有效武器，毕竟好文章是写作最好的老师和范例，更是我们教写作的法宝。因此，在每次学习和欣赏一篇阅读理解文章的时候，尤其是文中含有经典语句时，我都给学生设定四个目标：第一，理解作者写作的用意，即作者在文章中阐明了什么观点和段落的安排及其如何阐述的。第二，弄清作者运用了什么样的写作方法。比如是说明、记叙还是论证，包括文章运用的时态、语态以及其他种种语法手段。第三，学习作者的一些用词来扩大词汇量，积累词汇，同时让学生学习短语的搭配并收集词汇和短语。第四，收集作者在文章中写出的佳句、妙句、绝句。为今后的写作奠定基础。几年的教学实践证明了这样的教学有其独具的特色与效果

因此，我认为：写作教学完全应该，而且必须与阅读理解相结合才能真正让学生领悟和掌握写作方法与写作技巧的要领，没有阅读哪里来的模仿和借鉴？所以“读中教”是我的第一步，之后，在感性的基础上，我再给学生讲解具体的写作方法，这一点是我接下来要做的第二步“写中教”。

二、写作中不失恰如其分的指导，适时地开展“写中教”。

所谓“写中教”，就是在学生学作时给予写作方法的指导，通常我从三个方面入手：首先，概括初级写作的文体特点。书面表达在文体上以记叙文、应用文（书信、日记、通知、说明书等）的形式为多见。然后，概括其形式特点。近年来，初级写作题型在形式上以看图说话和根据中英文提出写作两种类型出现频率最高，要求能根据图画所提供的情景和英汉提出的词语，建立联想，创造性地运用所学过的词汇和语法知识来进行表达，比如根据一副或多幅图画及提示语，写出语法正确的六至八句话，或者一篇字数在60－100字的短文，充分地运用自己所学的知识，完整、准确地表达所需求的意思，考查的重点是在领会图意和提示语的前提下能简单创造语言的能力。最后是概括题材特点。在题材上，初级英文写作的表达题所给的大部分内容是比较贴近孩子们生活的人物和事件，诸如饮食、运动、爱好、环境、交友、旅行、娱乐等等，考查的是生活知识和语言知识学与用综合能力。

根据以上文体、形式、题材特点，我要求学生在看图写话时，掌握好以下一个要领：

1、看图说话书面表达题要领

首先，认真审题，弄清画意，把握中心。一般来说，写作题所提供的几幅图画虽然是整个故事情节中的一个或数个重要的情景片段，但每幅图的主体内容一定是清清楚楚、脉络分明的，这一点务必要准确把握，只有具体、透彻的理解画意，方能抓住抓准表达的重点。紧扣暗示内容，分析表达重点，看图题若也有语言提示，那么首先要细审提示材料。若是英文提示语，那就更加重要了，因为提示词语不但能有助于理解画意，而且告知如何围绕这些重点词语组织材料，然后表达出图画内容。但应注意，无论哪种形式的看图写话均不会给出所有的词语，因此，必须紧扣画面暗示的内容，再结合提示语的补充，酌情填补一些关键词语。

其次，运用正确的表达方式和准确的写作方法。用正确的表达方式准确地写出图画所表现的内容，形成一句或一段切合画意又无语法错误的句子是关键。具体应注意以下几点：

（1）确定基本时态。动词是做谓语还是做非谓语？是否需要用第三人称单数？这些必须考虑清楚再动笔。要抓住提示语中提供的或自己设置的时间状语，或抓住第一画图反映出来的故事背景。

（2）注意词语的变化。如该用形容词还是副词？名词是否可数？前面是否需用冠词？词尾是否丢失s或者其他变化形式？特指的定冠词the是否要用或不用？这些在平时演练时，都需要“斤斤计较”，养成习惯。

（3）句型的选择。尽量用自己所学过的句型表达，能用简单句尽量用简单句。

（4）书写规范、准确。

（5）反复检查。要逐字逐句检查词语搭配和句子的结构，是主系表还是主谓宾，注意时态是否完整等等。

2、写中英文提示作文的提纲要领

在做没有图画只有中英文提示语的书面表达题时，对学生要求更高，写作的难度也更大了。这种题型对八年级（下）和九年级学生较多用。我指导学生运用以下六条要领：

（1）、审清题意。反复仔细阅读、推敲提示，分析出文章的重点，弄清文章的格式，确定写什么内容，以免离题；

（2）、概括简要的中文提示中的部分要点，此时切记不可逐句翻译，题前所给的英文提示词语最好全部用上，采用扩写的方式，根据所给材料进行适当的恰如其分的扩写，可以由词到句，再有句到段，最后到篇的“点及面”的写法。

（3）、将提示中的有关信息融入自己的语句中，尽力做到语言规范、准确，文字通顺。

（4）、在抓住重点，不偏离主题的前提下，合理想象，拓展思路；

（5）、用好介词和连词，使文章简练、纹理通顺，尽量使用自己有把握的句式来表达，避免使用不熟练的词、短语和句型；

（6）、最后，正确把握文中的时态和语态，仔细揣摩、合理灵活变化时态和语态。

三、在写作评价中适时地给与指导，积极开展“改中教”。

我的最后一步是走“错误路线”，即在批改学生习作中利用学生的“错误资源”进行写作教学。在批改学生的习作时，我把其中的错字、别字以及大量的令人啼笑皆非的病句收集起来，这些东西常常是学生们的通病，虽说使我苦恼，但经验告诉我，其实这也是一种资源，颇有利用价值，而且用好了还是一剂治病句的“良药”呢！与此同时，我们也要善于发现学生的优点，适时不忘鼓励教学的开展，从而激发学生的写作兴趣。对于写得有水平、有档次的习作可以范读，从而进一步的调动学生的写作热情。

对于大多数学生容易犯的错误，我把一些比较典型的病句展示在黑板上，然后让学生互相订正。许多时候学生在“欣赏”他们自己的劣作时都忍不住哄堂大笑，但笑过之后，错误也在轻松愉快的气氛中改正了，这样既活跃了写作课堂的气氛，又达到了让学生纠正错误的效果。除此之外，我让每个学生准备一个纠错本，将他们平时在练习、造句和作文中出现的病句摘录在册并认真纠正，以避免重复出错，使文章中的病句逐渐减少。

以下是我在学生习作中遇到的典型案例，原文如下：

Nowadaays,the environment gets more and more bad.because of the pollution.Although the  government take any measures  to carry  it , it isnt working well  in it.

There is only one earth.I think we should do something useful we can to protect the environment.sach as we can use both sides of each piece of paper and use cotton handkerchiefs,not the paper ones to protect soil .if we go to a short distance.we can walk or by bike.we can also plant more trees and grass to protect air.

If  we  all do that,we will have healthy and  happy.

从整体看，本文错误较多，汉语思维较严重.但总的来讲这篇作文的思路还是比较清晰的，

于是我和学生一道对该文进行了分析：

1、本文首先缺一个主题，从正文中我们不难看出本文是要求写作如何保护环境问题，作者应根据题目要求拟定题目，再进行写作！譬如：我们可以拟定为：HOW  TO  SAVE  OUR  MOTHER等。

2、该文的第一句就出现拉严重的语法错误，The environment gets more and more bad.变得越来越糟糕，应该是“worse  and  worse".在提出问题时，最好创设一定的语言情景，逐步导入,俗话说得好“好的开始就是成功了一半”。以本文为例，我们完全可以以这样导入：With  the  development of  economy  ,more and more factories have built .But there is more and more pollution coming.

3、该文的第二句中的take any measures to carry  it  。意思没有表达清楚，让人看了费解，其实作者可能是想说政府采取一些措施去阻止污染。而采取一些措施去制止污染应为：take  some  measures  to  keep pollution.然而效果不好应为:it  doesnt  work  well.

4、在第二自然段中有单词拼写错误及名词单复数误用的现象，比如“sach as ”应为"such as".

5、表意不清。"not the paper ones to protect soil"和we can also plant more trees and grass to protect air.都存在表意不清的现象。其应该表达为：第一句最好这样表达：not to use paper or use less paper to protect  trees and  because the trees  can  keep the earth from washing.第二句改写为we  can also plant more trees and grass to keep the air clean and fresh.

5、标点符号用得不够恰当，如If we go to a short distance.we can walk or by bike.在这里我们最好这样用要好一些：If we go to a short distance，we can walk or by bike.

6、在最后一段发起倡议时，最好使用感叹句型或祈使句型这样会显得更有力！文章会显得更深入.如;my dear friends, lets get together to protect "The Blue Sky"!等。

除了上述“九字法”英文写作教学模式，我们还应重视做足“平时功夫”以促进学生写作。所谓平时功夫，是指背诵名篇佳作；收集各种话题，布置学生在假期或周末练笔，提倡“一周一文"；传阅、张贴、展览学生优秀习作以资鼓励等。鼓励学生善于从平素的练习中总结经验、吸取教训，只要持之以恒，我们完全可以让越来越多的学生逐渐学会用第二语言来表达自己的思想，而且可以像用母语一样轻松自如。

结束语

路漫漫其修远兮。英语写作教学的探究征程远而富于变化，需要各位同仁在实际工作中不断探索。在英语写作教学中如何教学及讲评需要继续探索。但有一点鄙人是这样认为的：宽松、愉悦、不断获得鼓励的环境中，学生的思维才会变得活跃。所以教师要及时抓住学生稍纵即逝的新奇、独特的想法，给予赞扬，使学生的创造性思维得以发展。多给学生创造性思维活动的机会，鼓励学生勇于尝试，并在失败面前不气馁。在平素的写作教学实践中，教师应最大限度地创设和实施多种鼓励机制，充分调动全体学生动笔写作的积极性，这样才能促进学生的写作能力更快更好地实现，从而从整体上提高学生的英语语言应用能力。

My summer vacation of this year was very enjoyable。 i went to the countryside to spend my summer holidays。 it is very beautiful there。 there are green plants， clear rivers， lovely animals kind people。 i spent two weeks helping my grandfather do some farm work there。 i wrote down what happened in my diary every day。liuxue86.com

besides that， i helped the children in the neighbourhood with their lessons。 i helped them read english improve their spoken english。 their parents thanked me for this。

I have a dream, deeply rooted in my mind, that is when I grow up, I want to be a scientist, although I have no wisdom, no rigorous thinking, also does not have the accurate judgment, but I still wont give up work. Although this dream I very far away, but I still wont stop pursuing. Although in the process of realize the dream, there will be many setbacks and countless hardships, but Im still not discouraged. Because I believe that only through hell of polish, and to build to create the power of heaven, only through the blood fingers, to pop up to the swan song of time; Only through hardships and setbacks, to achieve your dreams!

Previously, whenever see scientists remarkable achievement, always feel envy and admiration. Is, they promoted the development of the society; Is, they make peoples living standards improve, But they, for the development of the motherland ushered in a brand new tomorrow!

So, I want to be a scientist, become a contribution to the country, to become the pillars of the country.

Had this dream, I will continue to be so hard, never give up, have the dream, is to grasp their own life course, will not be lost. Had this dream, like a lamp, light up my way forward, has been to the pinnacle of victory!

我有一个梦想，深深扎根于我的脑海中，那就是长大后，我要成为一个科学家，尽管我没有过人的才智，没有严密的思维，也没有准确的判断能力，但是我仍不会放弃努力。尽管这个梦想据我很遥远，但我仍不会停止追求。尽管在实现梦想的过程中，会有很多挫折和无数的磨难，但我仍不会灰心丧气。因为我相信，只有经历地狱般的磨练，才能练出创造天堂的力量，只有经过流过血的手指，才能弹出时间的绝唱;只有经历磨难和挫折，才能实现梦想!

以前，每当看到科学家们令人瞩目的成就时，总会感到羡慕和钦佩。是他们，推动了社会的发展;是他们，使人们的生活水平提高;更是他们，为祖国的发展迎来了一个崭新的明天!

因此，我想成为一个科学家，成为一个对国家有贡献的人，成为这个国家的栋梁。

有了这个梦想，我就会一直这样努力下去，永不放弃，有了这个梦想，就等于把握了自己的人生航向，不会在迷失方向。有了这个梦想，就好像一张明灯，照亮了我前进的道路，一直通往胜利的顶峰!

Everyone has his own ideal, I also have their own ideal, this ideal, like a destination, waiting for you to; This ideal, is a peak, waiting for you to climb.

Since the childhood I had many ideal, or naive or funny, more whimsical unrealistic, but every ideal is I at the beginning, the bottom of my heart the most sincere act, has been accompanied by I walk long or short for a long time. Now think of, also have a beautiful memory. Medicine with its own unique charm to attract me, it has a unique significance: the patient back from the disease, back from death. Ideal became doctors had never wavered in my heart, because I believe it wont leave me, painstakingly pursue it will let me bathed in the sunlight. Whenever see dad open prescriptions, whenever see out of dads clinic in the healing of patients, time always remind me: my ideal is far from me, there will be many obstacles on the road, step on the gas! Through these tough! Toward my ideal!

Ideal is a big dipper in the sky, to trek directions; Ideal is the beacon, light homing shore road! Ideal is fire, lit my ideal male-male fire!

每个人都有自己的理想，我也有自己的理想，这理想，就像是目的地，等待你前往;这理想，就是一座高峰，等待着你去攀登。

从小到大我有过很多理想，或幼稚或搞笑，多是异想天开不切实际的，但每个理想都是我当初，心底最真诚的驿动，都曾伴随我走过或长或短的一段悠悠岁月。如今想起，也不乏一场美丽回忆。医学以它自身的独特的魅力吸引着我，它有独特得意义：把病人从病魔手中抢回来，从死神手中抢回来。成为医生的理想在我心中不曾有过动摇，因为我相信它不会抛弃苦心追求的我，它会让我沐浴在阳光之中。每当看到爸爸开的处方单，每当看到从爸爸的诊所里走出来的全愈的病人，总是时刻的提醒我：我的理想离我还很远，路上会有许多坎坷，加大油门!就能冲过这些坎坷!奔向我的理想!

理想是天空中的北斗星，为迷航者指点方向;理想是灯塔，照亮归航者靠岸的路!理想是火种，点燃我的理想的雄雄大火!

there are a great many hobbies to choose from. some people enjoy collecting coins or stampes,

ohers choose to spend their time on sports or music.

I have many hobbies,but playing basketball is my favorite one.

At weekends, we always build a team to play basketball against anoher one in our neighbourhood.

The competitions brought us so much fun.

I think playing basketball is a good way to build up ones body and relax oneself.

But I will always remember that its unwise to spend too much time playing.

现在有很多爱好可供选择，一些人喜欢收集硬币或者邮票，其他人则喜欢把时间花费在音乐和运动方面.

我也有许多爱好，但是打篮球是我最喜欢的，

周末，我们会和邻居建立一个小组对打篮球，比赛带给我们很多的乐趣，

因此我认为打篮球是一个好的方式增强体质以及放松自己，但是我也认为花费太多时间打篮球也是不明智的.

When I go to school, my teachers teach me a lot of knowledge and show me

the way to explore the world. I admire my teachers so much, so I have made up my

mind to be a teacher when I grow up. It is always my dream. I must work hard to

realize my dream. From now on, I need to make the plan.