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介绍假期的英语作文带翻译精选20篇

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一个美好的假期优秀英语作文

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【篇一】A Great Holiday

I have a great holiday in the last three days. When I go to school, my greatest wish is getting up late. But every morning, I am woken up by my mother. In holiday, my wish comes true. In this holiday, my parents took me to the zoo and we had a big dinner outside. The dishes were very delicious. Besides, there was no homework these days, so I could play with my friends and didn’t have to worry about the unfinished homework. For me, the best holiday is having a good rest and having fun. I got both in this holiday, so it is a great holiday.

【篇二】A Great Holiday

Last summer holiday,I went to visit a zoo in a near city.I had a great time there because I saw many kinds of animals there like giraffes、tigers、elephants and etc.I take many photos there and play with animals and feed them.How wonderful my vacation was!

【篇三】A Great Holiday

In every year the end of June,it is the beginning of my precious summer holiday.Last summer,I had a great holiday.Firstly,I spent only a week to finish all my summer homework.Then I have still almost two months to do anything I wanted.Actually,I really did what I wanted to do in last summer.I traveled to Beijing with my best friend for 2 weeks.We were so happy and the trip was just perfect.In the rest of my holiday,I did not do anything even related to study.Everything is all about games.However,I will not have a chance to spend my summer holiday like the last one.There is much more homework that I have to use probably three quarters of my holiday to finish it.If there is not so much homework,I might have my ideal summer holiday in this year.My ideal holiday is that go to the beaches in México with my family.For about a whole month we can completely relax in the beautiful beach.In the morning,after the delicious México style breakfast,we can walk along the beach while enjoy the beautiful morning sunshine.In the afternoon,we can have the freshest seafood for lunch.After lunch,take a nap in the sunshade would be the best thing to do.At dusk,there is the most gorgeous sunset on the sea...I love the beach,I love summer holiday.

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篇1:介绍家乡南昌英语

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My hometown Nan Chang City is in Jiangxi , this is a beautiful , civilized city. There is a lot of places of historic interest, for instance , rope Jin Ta county, prances, king cabinet , all sorts of flowers in Nanchang continent , child pavilion , uprising memorial hall August First, ... Limpid eyes the public square fountain has attracted many visitors , the fountain high and low alternatively with music like naughty child in dancing. Have arrived at evening , the whole city colourfully decorated lantern Gao Zhao , is very beautiful! Take a look on that my hometown is what beautiful , what beautiful! I love my hometown Nanchang!

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篇2:我的假期英语

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it was a long holiday. i went to hong kong with my parents on may 1st. we went by train. we got to hong kong in the afternoon. we had a rest. on the 2nd, we went to disney”s land. on the 3rd, we went to a restaurant. we ate good food. it was yummy. on the 4th, i did my homework and read a book. on the 5th, we went to a zoo. we saw many animals. on the 6th, we went shopping. i bought many clothes. they were nice. i bought some gifts for my friends, too. on the 7th, we got back to dongguan by bus. in the afternoon, we relaxed and prepared to go back to work or school.

i was very excited on labour holiday. but i was tired, too.

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篇3:英语日记带翻译

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As time goes by,it is the most meaningful day in the year---Spring

festival. Everyone is looking forward to it and the families are busy preparing

for it besides me.

I got up early in the morning ,and then I went to the shop with my parents

to do some shopping. After going back home,I cleaned the house,doing some

housework.Everything is ready,I am waiting for you ---Spring festival.

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时光荏苒,又到了一年中最有意义的时刻——共度春节。每个人都盼望着,期待着,家家户户都在忙碌地准备着,当然也少不了我!

一早,我就起床了,接着和爸爸妈妈一起去了趟超市,采购一番。待购物后,我们开心的回了家,回家后,我帮家里打扫了屋子,做了一些力所能及的家务活。一切准备就绪,现在我整期盼着春节的来临!)

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篇4:封信英语翻译

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Everybody has a daily schedule. We do the same things almost every day. My

day is probaly like yours.

每个人都有日程安排。每天,我们总是做着相同的事情。我的一天就有可能像你们一样。

Heres my daily routine. I get up at 6:30 every morning. I take my time

waking up,but then I wash up quickly. I brush my teeth,comb my hair and put on

school uniform. I pack my bag for school and I leave. I never miss breakfast,so

I either eat at home or eat on the way to school. But I always eat hurry. After

school,I go to a cram school like all my friends. I study and finish my homework

for the day. Finally,I go home and I take a break. I have dinner with my

family,watch a little TV. I am usually in bed by 9:30.

这个就是我的日常安排,每天早上6点30起床。我花了一些时间起床,然后很快地洗漱完毕。我刷牙、梳头发以及穿上校服。我整理好书包后离开(家)。我从来不会不吃早餐,所以我可以在家或在去学校的路上吃早餐。但我总是吃得很匆忙。放学后,我就像我的朋友那样去补习学校(学习)。我学习并完成了当天的作业。最后,我回家并休息了会儿。我与家人一起吃晚饭,看一会儿电视。我常常在9点半的时候上床睡觉。

This is my routine from Monnday to Friday. However,the weekends are

different. I can wake up late. Then. I can do whatever I like. I believe my

routine is typical. It is probably a lot like yours.

这就是我从周一到周五的例行日程。可是,周末(安排)就不一样了。我可以很晚起床。然后我可以做任何我喜欢的事。我相我的日程是很典型的。这就可能与你们的日程非常相似。

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篇5:英语日记大全带翻译

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Today, I did housework for grandmother。 She is not very healthy and I decide to do housework for her more frequently。 And she will feel happy and bee better。 Suddenly, an idea hit me that it’s terrible to grow old becuase you have to worry about both your health and others’ opinions。 Once again, I make a decision to be a good girl。翻译:这天,我帮忙了奶奶做家务。奶奶的身体不好。我以后要常帮她做事。这样她就会高兴身体也会好一些。突然觉得,人老了真不好。不但身体不会好,而且一不留意就会惹得大家厌恶。我又做了一个决定,以后必须要做个乖孩子。

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篇6:英语日记带翻译

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Everyone has a hobby, some people like swimming, some people like playing

video games. Fishing is my fathers favorite hobby. He goes fishing every Sunday

morning, and goes home in the afternoon.My hobby is playing piano. I started

playing piano from five years old. I like to play it after school. I have a

plan, I want to play a birthday song for my mother, because next monday is her

birthday. I think she will like my present very much.

每个人都有爱好,有些人喜欢游泳,有些人喜欢玩电子游戏。我父亲最喜欢的爱好是钓鱼,他每个星期天的早晨都会去钓鱼,下午才回家。我的爱好是弹钢琴。我从5岁就开始弹了。我喜欢在放学后弹。我有一个计划,我想在给我妈妈弹一首生日歌,因为下周一就是她的生日。我想她会非常喜欢我的礼物的。

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篇7:短篇英语日记带翻译

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In the morning, it is very fine! Then I climb the mountain with family, the

air on the mountain is very fresh, the flowers plants and trees on the mountain

all seem extremely beautiful. In the afternoon, I go to friends home to play,

the friend entertains me warmly, show me a lot of books of his , has listened to

his CD for me , then also ask me to eat a sumptuous dinner. Coming back home in

the evening, family and I sat and watched TV together, we are returning and

eating the fruit while chatting, the whole family is happy and harmonious!

早上,天气非常好!于是我和家人一起去登山,山上的空气非常清新,花草树木在山上都显得格外美丽。在下午,我去了朋友家玩,朋友热情地招待我,给我看了他的很多书,给我听了他的CD,然后还请我吃了一顿丰盛的晚餐。晚上回到家,我与家人坐在一起看电视,我们还一边聊天一边吃着水果,全家其乐融融。

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篇8:我的假期英语词五:MyHoliday

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My holiday is very interesting!

I get up at 7 oclock. After wash and have breakfast , I do my homework at 8 oclock.And then , I do some play .

I have lunch at 12 oclock.Then I do homework again .After that , I play computer games or watch TV . I have supper at 7 oclock . And I play game again . I go to bed at 9 oclock.

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篇9:难忘的假期英语作文

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I am always busy with my lessons. What I have to do everyday is nothing but study.

Luckily, last summer my family went to my uncles farm.We enjoyed a really interesting holiday. During the holiday, I didnt have to get up early, nor did I need to finish many exercises. I rode the horse in the fields. I milked the cows on the farm.

To my great joy, my uncle invited me to go fishing. Life on the farm is quite different from that at school. I want to go back to spend my summer holiday again.

[难忘假期英语作文

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篇10:大一英语口语考试自我介绍

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Hello, everyone! Im Feng Biyu, a girl of 19 years old. As you can see, I am very glad to get along with all of you and I hope we’ll have a good time in our subsequent study.

My hometown is in SiHong, Northern JiangSu Province, a beautiful place with a lot of clear rivers and lakes. When boating on HongZe Lake, I always feel free and relaxed. It is really a wonderful  place to enjoy your life.

I graduated from SiHong Middle School. It was set up in 1949 and now it  is more than 60 years old.

I have a lot of friends in my middle school. We love each other. Time goes by, but our friendship will never go away. They cheer me up, make me happy and do some help when I meet with difficulties.

Thats all, thank you!

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篇11:英语日记大全带翻译

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What a fine day today !I’m very happy in this fine day 。 Beaucse today I don’t have to do my homework and I can play with my good friends 。There is lots of snow now ,so we make a sonw man 。That’s really intersting 。We play with snow to about 6:30 。Of couse I must go home now。 What a fan day !翻译:多么好的天气阿!在这样的好天气里我十分高兴,因为这天我不用写作业,并且能够和朋友们出去玩。那里此刻有很多雪,所以我们堆了一个雪人。那真的很搞笑。我们玩雪,一向到晚上6:30。当然此刻我务必回家了。 多么搞笑的一天啊!

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篇12:英语作文:介绍我的学校

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My name is ZhangYanYu. Im in Grade Seven. I like to go to school. Now,I want to tell you something about our class.

Our classroom is very beautiful. There is a blackboard on the front well. There is a teachers desk in front of the blackboard. There are two boxes of chalk and an eraser on the desk. There are many nice maps on the wall. There are some beautiful flowers on the sill. Our classroom is very nice and clean. There are two tall trees behind our classroom.We ofter play games wiht teacher under trees. There is a small garden on front of our classroom.Its nice .There is small river not far from our school ,in front of the garden. We often swim in it in summer.I like our class.I like our school.

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篇13:用英语做两分钟自我介绍

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Good morning !

It is really my honor to have this opportunity for an interview, I hope I can make a good performance today. Im confident that I can succeed.Now I will introduce myself briefly.I am 26 years old,born in shandong province .(General Introduction)

I was graduated from Qingdao university. my major is electronic.and I got my bachelor degree after my graduation in the year of 2015. During university, I spent most of my time on study so that I have passed CET4/6 .and acquired basic knowledge of my major.(Education background) I think Im a good team player and Im a person of great honesty to others. Also I am able to work under great pressure.

Thats all. Thank you for giving me the chance.

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篇14:我的假期英语词

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This winter vacation I was enjoy myself very much .Although I have a lot of homework to do but I always play basketball with my friends after finished my homework .I was happy in spring festival because my mother took me to many interested places and I saw many things which I never seen before .I also visited my grandparents and went to the park to see some beautiful flowers .

This winter vacation I really happy.

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篇15:封信英语翻译

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Someone said “we are reading the first verse of the first chapter of a

book, whose pages are infinite”. I don’t know who wrote these words, but I’ve

always liked them as a reminder that the future can be anything we want it to

be. We are all in the position of the farmers. If we plant a good seed ,we reap

a good harvest. If we plant nothing at all, we harvest nothing at all.

一些人说“我们正在读一本无穷的书中的第一章的第一节。”我不知道谁写了这些话,但是我一直很喜欢它,因为它提醒了我,我们能够创造我们想要的未来。我们都是农夫。如果我们播下好的种子,我们将会丰收。如果我们的种子很差,有很多草籽,收割的将是无用的庄稼。如果我们什么也不播种,什么收获也没有。

We are young. “How to spend the youth?” It is a meaningful question. To

answer it, first I have to ask “what do you understand by the word youth?” Youth

is not a time of life, it’s a state of mind. It’s not a matter of rosy cheeks,

red lips or supple knees. It’s the matter of the will. It’s the freshness of the

deep spring of life.

我们是年轻的。“怎样度过青春?”这是个有意义的问题。为了去回答它,我首先要问“从‘青春’这个词中你能理解到什么?”青春不是人生的一个时期,而是精神的一种状态。青春不是桃面、丹唇、柔膝,而是深沉的意志,。青春是生命的深泉在涌流。

A poet said “To see a world in a grain of sand, and a heaven in a wild

flower, hold infinity in the palm of your hand, and eternity in an hour. Several

days ago, I had a chance to listen to a lecture. I learnt a lot there. I’d like

to share it with all of you. Let’s show our right palms. We can see three lines

that show how our love.career and life is. I have a short line of life. What

about yours? I wondered whether we could see our future in this way. Well, let’s

make a fist. Where is our future? Where is our love, career, and life? Tell

me.Yeah, it is in our hands. It is held in ourselves.

一位诗人说“从一粒沙看世界,从一朵花看天堂,把无限放在你的手掌,永恒在一刹那里收藏”。几天前,我有了一个听讲座的机会,从中我学到了很多东西。现在,我想把这些与大家共享。让我们伸出右手,我们可以看到手掌中的展示我们的爱,事业和生活的三条线。我在生活方面这条线很短,那你们的呢?我想知道我们是否可以用这种办法去看我们的未来。好的,让我们一起握拳。我们的未来在哪儿?我们的爱、事业和生活在哪儿?告诉我!是的,它们就在我们的手中。它们被我们自己掌握着。

We all want the future to be better than the past. But the future can go

better itself. Don’t cry because it is over, smile because it happened. From the

past, we’ve learnt that the life is tough, but we are tougher. We’ve learnt that

we can’t choose how we feel, but we can choose what about it. Failure doesn’t

mean you don’t have it, it does mean you should do it in a different way.

Failure doesn’t mean you should give up, it does mean you must try harder.

我们所有人都希望未来能比过去更美好,但是未来能自己变得更好。不要因为结束而哭泣,微笑吧,为你的曾经拥有。从过去来看,生活是艰苦的,但我们是更坚强。我们知道我们不能选择感觉,但是我们能选择和它相关的东西。失败并不意味着你不拥有成功,它只意味着你应该用另一种方式去做这件事。失败并不意味着你应该放弃,只意味着你应该更加努力。

As what I said at the beginning, “we are reading the first verse of the

first chapter of a book, whose pages are infinite”. The past has gone. Nothing

we do will change it. But the future is in front of us. Believe that what we

give to the world, the world will give to us. And from today on, let’s be the

owners of ourselves, and speak out “We are the world, we are the future.”

正如我在前面所说的“我们正在读一本无穷的书中的第一章的第一节。”过去的已经过去,无论我们无力改变,但是未来却在我们前方。相“我们给了世界什么,世界也将给我们”。并且从今天起,让我们一起做我们自己的主人,一起大声说出“世界是我们的,未来是我们的。”

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篇16:简短英语自我介绍范文

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I am Xu Chenxi, a lively and cheerful boy, round head, a head of black hair, bright eyes, nose greatly, and a mouth not to how to talk.

I like playing badminton, skating, playing chess... But my favourite is playing badminton, every time and children played sweating like a pig, very happy.

I do my homework and disadvantages, careless, and sometimes not directly see the direct writing program.

This is me, I want to break the shortcomings in this term, do a good student.

我是许晨曦,一个活泼开朗的小男孩,圆圆的脑袋,一头乌黑的短发,明亮的眼睛,大大鼻子,还有一张不怎么会说话的嘴巴。

我喜欢打羽毛球,溜冰、下棋……但我最喜欢的是打羽毛球,每次和小朋友打得汗流浃背,痛快极了。

我也有缺点,做作业马虎,有时不直接看节目就直接写下去。

这就是我,我想在这个学期改掉这个缺点,做一个好学生。

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篇17:假期干了什么英语作文

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My vacation

As the winter vacation is drawing near, I have a plan about my vacation. Im going to do what I want to do. Im going to study harder in order to get good grades in the following term. After finishing all my homework, Im going to enjoy myself in the sea of knowledge. Reading must be a good idea. Im going to keep fit at the same time. Ill get up eary in the morning everyday and play sports. I really love sports. Besides that, Eating a balanced diet is also good for my health. Im going to help my mom and dad with the housework as well in the vacation.Ill learn to cook. As for travelling, Im planning to go to Hainan. But whether going there or not will be decided on the weather.During the vacation,Im going to visit my friends,I really miss them. So you seeThe Winter Holiday I like the winter holiday very much. Though its very short,I can enjoy the Spring Festival. I can watch cartoon every day. I neednt go to school frepuently. Sometimes I can go to play with my friend outside.

With the festival ing,

I can play all the time. I can play video game with my brother. I am good at playing PC game. So I often beats my brother. Then more and more relative came to my home. We had dinner together. Its so lively that Iam very happy. But I still have to do my homework. During the holiday,I learned a lot. I love the winter holiday.

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篇18:自我介绍英语作文600字

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Hello everyone! My name is Amy, this year twelve years old, I am from Xiaoshan District of Hangzhou City, Zhejiang Province, the first primary school, is the sixth grade students.

You see, I am slim, so I round face, the nose is not high but it is the most important, because I protect their eyes, so my face is not a small pair of glasses.

I am warm and generous hospitality and a love of helping others, remember that in an emergency evacuation drill, we are reading poetry, suddenly broadcast rang, the students rush out of the classroom, in the course of my run, the students saw his feet twisted, he left behind. The other students, have run to the playground, to see this scene, I quickly ran back to the past, to help him up, I helped him, we went to the playground, and afterwards, the teacher praised me for the disciplinary board, not only that, but also let the students to learn from me do you know? At that time my heart.

I am good at skateboarding, write a soft brush, and speak English, my English is not good, in an English exam I ranked second last time, I felt very unhappy, I encourage myself to Study hard to win glory for the class, then, although I did not get the first, but I am not discouraged, I have tried my best.

I also have a very great dream. When a pilot is flying, he can fly his own airplane one day and fly freely in the blue sky. What an exciting and happy thing it is!

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篇19:介绍自己的英语作文

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My name is _X , 12 years old this year, I in shandong province boxing

lakeside town village "bian village elementary school reading, I ah, the little

girl is a warm and cheerful confident sunshine, normally its not a hobby, but in

the evening, I began to see some documents, which is not the eyes.

I have some advantages, also some disadvantages. Ill tell you about my

strengths! Advantage 1: I am very popular among the students, why? Because I

often classmates laugh ah. Advantage 2: I like reading very much. Advantages 3:

I finished writing homework at home, I which also dont go, just as documents in

bed, someone ask me to play, I go out to play occasionally. Good, the advantages

are had said. The talk about weakness! Disadvantages 1: Im lazy, mom told me to

do what I dont do it. Defect 2: one to play with my legs hurt. Drawbacks 3:

every examination should not be in the wrong is wrong, every time I got 90

points, never take an examination of 100 minutes... When I play, like crazy, no

wonder every time I was hurt when I come back! Once my classmate - mud LuYing

cried, I asked what happened to her, she dont say, I just want to have an idea,

as a result, she laughed. I can comfort people, also can get people cry.

I am a warm and cheerful, sunshine confident girls.

我叫_X,今年12岁了,我在山东省博兴县湖滨镇寨卞村小学五年级读书,我呀,是一个热情开朗阳光自信的小女生,平时没什么爱好,不过一到了晚上,我就开始看一些作文书,导致现在眼睛不好。

我有些优点,也有些缺点。我先给你说说我的优点吧!优点1:我很受同学们的喜爱,为什呢?是因为我经常都同学笑呀。优点2:我非常喜欢看书。优点3:我在家里写完了作业,我哪也不去,就在床上看作文书,别人找我玩,我偶尔出去玩一下。好了,优点都说完了。该说说缺点了!缺点1:我很懒,妈妈叫我做什么我都不去做。缺点2:一去玩我就腿摔伤。缺点3:每次考试不该错的却错,害得我每次都考90多分,从不考100分……我玩的时候像疯了一样,怪不得我每一次回来的时候都有伤啊!有一次我的同学—泥鲁莹哭了,我问她怎么了,她不说,我就想了一个办法,结果她哈哈大笑。我能安慰人,也能把别人惹哭了。

我是一个热情开朗,阳光自信的小女生。

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篇20:我的父亲英语作文及翻译

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My Father

There is always a brilliant image living in my heart. That is my dear father. Seen through the eyes of many other people, father seems to be a very ordinary person. But he is quite extraordinary in my eyes, I have never lost my wonder at his good-personalities such as diligence, devotion, care, optimism ever since my childhood.Being a farmer, father works very hard in the fields all the year round. He works from dawn till dusk every day and even till midnight when it is the harvest season. He seldom enjoys leisure with other farmers even if the farm work is not much. He chooses to live a busy life with reluctance to stop for a while.

Father devotes all himself to our family. As we are poor, he always tries his best to support our family and afford the tuitions for my brother and me. For the whole family, for brother and me, he never stops working laboriously in the fields throughout the year. Now he has got a wrinkled face and white hair because of excessive hard work, looking much older and weaker than any other person of his age. In spite of all this, father never complains to us. It is his full devotion that were living a better life now. It is his full devotion that both my brother and I are able to study at college.Father shows much care to us children and my mother as well. Whenever there is any delicious food on the table, he just leaves it to us while he takes the simple one himself. If my brother and I fall ill, he will not hesitate a moment to get some medicine for us or take us to see the doctor. My mother suffers a bad disease. Father looks after her very carefully. He never lets mother do any heavy work both at home and in the field. Mother appreciates him m much that she often praises him as a model husband before others.

Father is a person full of optimism. He never complains about our poor life. He is never frustrated by trouble. He often tells us that everything will be all right if we have enough confidence in life. Due to his optimism, we are all confident to face our life and work.

We all think that father is not in the least an ordinary man. He plays an extraordinary role in my family. We cant have anything without him. Now Im pursuing further studies at college far away from father. I miss him very much. And I often see him in my dreams. His great image is deeply carved in my mind.

父亲的光辉形象永远是一种生活在我的心里吧.”那是我亲爱的爸爸.在许多其他人的眼中,父亲似乎是一个很普通的人.但在我的眼里他很特别,自从我的童年他在我眼中一直都是勤奋、敬业、保健、乐观.

作为一个农民,父亲在田里工作很努力.收获的季节,他每天从早到晚工作,直到午夜时.他很少像其他的农民享受休闲,即使在农场工作不多的时候.他选择一个繁忙的生活不情愿停下来。

父亲为了我们这个家奉献了他的全部.当我们贫穷时,他总是尽自己最大的努力来支持我们的家庭和支付我哥哥和我的学费.为整个家庭,为哥哥和我,他总是不停地在地里工作一整年.现在他因为过度辛勤工作已经有了一个满是皱纹的脸和白色毛发,岁,比任何其他与他相同的年龄的人.虽有这一切的事,父亲从不抱怨.这是他的全部奉献,我们正处在一个更好的生活.这是他的全部奉献,我的兄弟和我都能在大学读书。

父亲十分关心我们,和我母亲一样.每当有什么好吃的食物放在桌子上,他只是让我们吃自己吃少点.如果我和我兄弟生病,他会毫不犹豫地让拿些药给我们或带我们去看医生.我的母亲受严重的疾病.父亲照料得很认真.他从不让妈妈在家里和田间做什么繁重的工作.感谢他的母亲,她经常在别人面前称赞他为模范丈夫。

父亲是一个十分乐观的人.他从不抱怨我们贫穷的生活.他从未灰心丧气.他经常告诉我们,一切都会好起来的,如果我们有足够的信心.由于他的乐观,我们都是自信的面对我们的生活和工作。我们都认为,父亲是不平凡的人.他在我的家庭中具有非常重要的作用.我们能不能有什么东西.现在我继续进修大学远离的父亲.我怀念他.我经常看到他在我的梦.他的伟大的形象深深刻在我的脑海里.

评语: 本文作者以朴实的语言充满感情地刻画了父亲的不平凡的形象,分别从四个不同的角度描述了父亲的勤劳、奉献、关爱和乐观。内容真实感人,行文简洁流畅,结构清晰,组织有条有理,首尾呼应,给读者以强烈的感染力。 作者用词简洁精确,并能很好地尝试一些新学的词汇及表达,使简洁的行。文更为生动。作者没有运用太多复杂的句式,但能适当运用介词短语、分词结构、强调及重复的手法,恰到好处 地突出了行文句式的变化,使文章更耐读。

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