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How to Make Friends

It’s hard to makefriends if you stay alone all the time. It’s easier to

make friends whenyou have similar interests. Look at people in the eyes when you

talk to them. Don’t be afraid to show people whatyou are really good at. Talk

about the things you like and do best. Be a goodlistener. Let people talk about

themselves before talking about yourself. Be friendly to a lot of people. Try to

help your friends when they are in trouble because a friend in need is a

friendindeed. That way you’ll have a bigger group to choose from and havemore

chances to make friends.

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篇1:给英语老师的一封信英文带翻译

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Dear Miss Zhu,

亲爱的周老师

How time flies! It has been a few years since I left high school, but I still remember you in my heart, because you’re the best teacher in my mind. It’s not only because you taught me knowledge, but also you taught me how to study. I have really benefitted a lot from you. So I would like to express my great thanks to you, and share my life in college with you.

时间飞逝!我高中毕业已经几年了,但我仍然把你记在我的心里,因为你是我心目中最好的老师。这不仅是因为你教与我知识,而且你还教我如何学习。从你身上我真的获益匪浅。所以我想向你表达我的感谢,并与你分享我的大学生活。

Now I’m studying in Hunan First Normal College, which is Chairman Mao’s former school. I major in English, because I find it so fun and interesting. As far as I’m concerned, our English Department is the best department in our college. The teachers in our department are knowledgeable, experienced, and warm-hearted. And my classmates are nice, friendly and helpful. Thus, I have a good atmosphere to study. When I have difficulties in study, I always ask my teachers for help or discuss with my classmates. Through their help, I have made great progress in my English study.

我现在在湖南第一师范学校学习,这是主席之前呆过的学校。我的专业是英语,因为我觉得它很有趣。我觉得我们英语系是我校最好的学部。我们系的老师知识渊博,经验丰富,热心肠。我的同学们也很和蔼,友好,乐于助人。因此,我拥有一个很好的学习氛围。当我在学习上遇到困难时,我总是向我的老师寻求帮助或与同学讨论。在他们的帮助下,我在英语学习上取得了很大的进步。

College life is much different from high school life. In college, we should acquire knowledge as well as improve our integrated abilities. There are a lot of English classes for us to learn, such as Basic English, Oral English, Listening, Reading, Writing, Translation, Grammar, English Literature, and so on. I enjoy these classes very much. Except English, we have many other subjects to learn. Life seems so busy here but it’s so fruitful for me.

大学生活与高中生活有很大的不同。在大学,我们要获取知识也要提高我们的综合能力。我们要上很多的英语课,比如,基础英语,英语口语,听力阅读,写作,翻译,语法,英语文学等。我非常喜欢这些课。除英语外,我们还要学习很多其他科目。在这里生活是如此的忙碌,但这对我来说是如此丰硕的收获。

After class, I usually go to the English Corner. There I can practice my oral English by talking with foreigners or chatting with my schoolmates. Now, I’m able to communicate with foreigners well. Sometimes I also take part in some social activities. For instance, last weekend I attended an interesting play. As it was my first performance, I felt a little nervous at the beginning. But when I appeared on the stage, I made every audience laugh happily. I was so proud of myself at that moment, because this was my first achievement.

下课后,我经常去英语角。在那里我可以通过与外国人或我的同学聊天来练习我的英语口语。现在我可以很好的和外国人交流了。有时候我也可以参加一些社交活动。例如,上周我参加了一个有趣的表演。因为是我第一次表演,所以一开始的时候我觉得有点紧张。但当我出现在舞台上时,我让每一个观众都开心的笑了。在那一刻,我为我自己感到骄傲,因为这是我的第一个收获。

What about your present life? I hope to hear from you soon.

你目前生活怎么样呢?希望很快能收到你的回

At last, I hope everything goes well with you. Please give my best regards to your family.

最后,我希望你一切顺利。请代我向你的家人问好。

Sincerely yours,

Jason

詹森

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篇2:英文成语故事二:画蛇添足

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In the Warring States Period, a man in the state of Chu was offering a sacrifice(祭品) to his ancestors. After the ceremony, the man gave a beaker of wine to his servants.

The servants thought that there was not enought wine for all of them, and decided to each draw a picture of snake; the one who finished the picture first would get the wine.

One of them drew very rapidly. Seeing that the others were still busy drawing, he added feet to the snake.

At this moment, another man finished, snatched the beaker(烧杯,大口杯) and drank the wine, saying,"A snake doesnt have feet. How can you add feet to a snake?"

This idiom refers to ruining a venture by doing unnecessary and surplus things.

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篇3:写风景英文

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Gulangyu — A fairyland in the world

Gulangyu is a small island of Xiamen. It’s like a garden on the water. Cars and buses are not allowed to drive there, which makes the island so quiet that music played on the piano and violin can be heard.

Here the sky and the sea clearly meet on the horizon. When standing at the top of the Sunshine Rock, you can see much of the landscape of Xiamen, and when standing at its foot, you can gaze at the beautiful garden that surrounds it.

Gulangyu produces bananas, coconuts, sugar cane and so on. The people here, warm, simple and hardworking, are making every effort to make the island more beautiful and they hope to welcome more visitors in the future.

Such is Gulangyu, a beautiful and inviting island, where a warm welcome awaits.

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篇4:滑雪小学生英文

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Last weekend we and sister family to ski resort to play.

When we are armed to the teeth into the indoor ski field,feeling came to a world of ice and snow, into the moment Ifell heavily, my face covered with snow. Later my father taught me when I slip up forward was not easy to wrestling.Then I follow father method tried again, really better. Sisteror where not to go, uncle is more funny, slide to half fell on his back! Could have been playing for 4 hours, but only play for more than an hour, we were exhausted, and thenslipped not move. Although very tired, but I am very happy.

翻译:

上周末我们和姐姐一家人到滑雪场去玩。

当我们全副武装地走进这个室内滑雪场,感觉来到了一个冰雪世界,走进一会儿我就摔了一大跤,我的脸上粘满了雪。后来爸爸教我滑的时候身子要往前倾才不容易摔跤。然后我按照爸爸的方法重新试了一下,果然好多了。姐姐也好不到哪儿去,叔叔就更好笑了,滑到一半就摔了个四脚朝天呢!本来可以玩4个小时,可是只玩了一个多小时,我们都筋疲力尽了,再也滑不动了。虽然很累,但是我很开心。

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篇5:大学生英文自我介绍

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Hi everyone, glad to introduce myself. I graduated from Xx junior high school, my name is xxx, comes from a beautiful city named xx. I like making friend with others, playing computer and reading. I am proud of studying with everyone in the same class for the coming years. I am sure our common dreams will come true from now on. Thanks.

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篇6:知识是财富英文

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at present some people think that money is everything. they say that you can do everything if you have money. you can live in a beautiful house, keep a luxurious ear and have all sorts of delicious food.

i dont think so. indeed, money can buy a lot of things we need. but there are many, many wonderful things in the world that cannot be bough/; with money.

for example, knowledge cannot be bought with money. one cannot be rich in knowledge unless he studies hard. time cannot be bought with money, either. who can buy even a second with money?

there are still many other things that cannot be bought with money: health,life, happiness,friendship, love and so on. just think, if a person hasnt these things at all, is the money still useful?

now, do you think money is everything?

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篇7:晴天英文

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Hainan not have winer.In Hainanover here is very very hot!You can go to there in winter.Because the winter in HaiNan is warmer than most areas of China.Swimming in the sea playing on the beach or having meals outside are very good choices for travellers. But you must be good sunscreen preparations.There are usually 40 degrees Celsius .But before and after Septemberthere are usually 30 degrees Celsius.I like Hainan very much!

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篇8:雷锋精神的英文作文

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there are some voices claiming lei feng’s spirit has gone out of style in today’s society。 they reason that in commodity economy people should seek more practical things, such as fame, money and the comfortable life。 to them nothing is more important than those things, which is often regarded as the views of the present generation。

there are some other voices claiming that the spirit of lei feng still has an enormous echo in millions of chinese people。 the great soldier’s story has such a strong influence on people’s ideas, values and ways of life that in every field of society there arise countless “living lei fengs”, who follow the example of lei feng and serve the people heart and soul。

in my opinion, the spirit of lei feng will never be out of date。 instead, it has been brought forward。 today more and more “lei fengs” are coming forth from various circles among whom “xu hu” has already set a good example to the whole nation。 the spirit of lei feng---an unselfish spirit will always encourage us to go forward。

[雷锋精神英文作文

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篇9:圣诞礼物英文作文

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In my impression, I dont seem to have ever received a Christmas gift. But this year I have received several pieces of Christmas gifts, gifts received the moment, indescribably happy!

It happened on Christmas day, I came to the school with the joyful mood, suddenly found his pocket which turned out to have a lot of lessons for Christmas, I sat on the seat quickly put out gifts found above the names of many students, I am excited golden beans are falling out, everyone looked at me and said "Zhao Runze, dont cry. This is a token of our ah! Again, you have to go, we are not allowed to send you ah (in fact, forget to tell you, I actually have to transfer)! We dont have anything to send you. Its Christmas day, and well have to give me a Christmas gift. Haha, dont be sad, our school will always welcome you! " I didnt cry when I heard them.

The second day I was going, and when I went, everyone was sending me off, and some of my good classmates were crying. I dont think Im crying too. They cry and comfort me. I think this is the best Christmas gift!

Now, I am learning in the new school, the new school atmosphere and the new environment. My classmates are treating me very well. I hope to write this composition so that my former classmates can see it. I want to tell them, "I miss you!"

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篇10:在一封信的结尾英文

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Dear Mr. Seaton,

Thank you very much for taking me with you on that splendid outing to

London. It was the first time that I had seen the Tower or any of the other

famous sights. If Id gone alone, I couldnt have seen nearly as much, because I

wouldnt have known my way about.

The weather was splendid on that day, which I thought was rare. I still

remember some people told me that in Britain there was weather and no climate.

During the same day, it might snow in the morning, rain at noon, shine in the

afternoon and be windy before the night falls. So I think I was lucky.

I think the river trip was the best thing of all. London really came alive

for me as we saw it from the Thames during that wonderful journey down to

Greenwich. It was all tremendously exciting - a day that I shall never

forget.

Thank you for giving me such a great birthday treat.

Yours sincerely,

Linda Chen

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篇11:旅游的经历英文作文

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Travel is a very good means of broadening a person’s perspective. It makes you come into contact with different cultures meet people of different colors and go through peculiar rites and ceremonies. Travelling much you will not only enrich your knowledge and experiences but also be aware of the vastneof nature. Travel may also relieve person of boredom and gloom. Travel brings you enjoyment and attraction. It gives you a pleasant experience which will disperse your boredom and make you forget whatever annoys you. Travel broadens your mind and leaves you good memories. Later you may go over these memories and enjoy your past experiences thus keeping a fresh and sunny mind. The field’s his study nature was his book. Travelers can choose different modes of transportation which have advantages and disadvantages. Airplanes are the fastest but also the most expensive. Buses and trains are leexpensive but they soon make you feel cramped and uncomfortable. Ships provide you with comfort unleyou get seasick. Most people can afford traveling by bicycle which although slow can limber up your muscles and get you closer to nature.

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篇12:遇上碎片化的做作业方式作文800字

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写一篇好作文,必须一气呵成,中途只要思路被打断,就要再花百倍的功夫与时间,才可以跟上之前的思路,写作业何尝不是如此?但,在家里,我却遇上碎片化的写作业方式

记得平时在家时,总会不断地听到一阵阵清脆的喊声,要么,就是让我快点写作业;要么,就是出去吃点东西,就这样,我的思绪不由地飘走!

有一次,我正在家里写抄写作业,抄写的东西很多,很多。突然,接到妈妈的一个电话,她提醒我,今天下午一点钟要上学悦教育,文言文课程。什么!你怎么不早说,12点半就要走,现在已经12点钟了,还有很长的一段课文没背呢。没办法,我被迫扔下抄写本,快马加鞭地去找学悦书,可是呢,真是“屋漏偏逢连夜雨”,书找不到了,我翻了我的书桌的抽屉,没有;我踩在椅子上来回翻找书柜,没有;我又把箱子里的书全倒出来,还是没有。直到上了车,我还在做最后的挣扎,因为,我不想留下再背,到了目的地,我才勉强能坑坑洼洼地背出来,“臣本布衣……苟全……”,还好可以让同桌放低要求,我不会完蛋的,结果,老师这次没有让同桌两人互背,而是,残酷地默写,还好,我趁最后的时间里成功背出,默写也没多少问题,反而,出乎意料的是,我竟然默了95的高分,老师把我表扬了一番,不过,很惨的是,我还要再把需要抄写的词语再重新对一遍,从头对到尾,浪费了宝贵的半小时。

还有一次,我正在写每周一次的练笔,写着写着,(差不多写到了一半),我脑洞大开,眼看着马上就能收尾,无奈,外面又传来了大家每天都能听到的声音,“快点出来吃饭吧,你再不出来,面条就糊了!”唉!情况不妙,我再次被迫放下手中似乎触手可及的作文,乖乖地到餐桌旁去吃饭,当然,一桌丰盛的饭菜让我思绪不由地得飘走,至于你问我飘到了何处,我会不假思索地的告诉你:“我的思绪飘进了喷香的饭菜中!”不过,我又要再重新思考练笔高潮了,这又事倍功半了!

碎片化的做作业方式,迟早要付出更沉重的代价,希望大家能将作业一气呵成地完成,否则又会重覆前车之鉴,事半功倍了!

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篇13:不同方式的爱作文800字

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同学们,你们是不是觉得妈妈特烦,整天在你身边唠唠叨叨?是不是觉得妈妈很严厉,在你做错事时大声批评你?在我的记忆里,妈妈就是用这种特殊方式一直陪伴着我,那种特殊方式就是伟大的母爱。

妈妈的爱如皎洁的月亮,守护我到天明。记得有一个晚上我发热了,在单位加班的妈妈急匆匆地赶回家,还来不及进门,就急切问:“舒服点了吗?还难受吗?”她紧皱着眉头,焦急的一直看着我。我摇摇头,脆弱地说:“还难受”。妈妈一听,赶紧扶我上床睡下。接着她又马不停蹄的忙起来,给我倒了杯热水,紧接着用热毛巾给我擦身子。她一会儿给我量体温,一会儿用酒精给我擦试淋巴,一会儿倒水,一刻也没闲着。她的话匣子也打开了:叫你多穿点衣服,就是不穿;叫你多喝水,不喝;叫你经常锻炼,老偷懒;现在生病,难受了吧;不听老人言,吃亏在眼前……。妈妈担心我晚上热度上升,一直坐在床边,一会儿摸摸我的头,一会儿用热毛巾擦试我的身体,一整晚没合眼,就这样守护了一个晚上。感谢妈妈,感谢我的“守护神”。

妈妈的爱如辛勤的园丁,教育我成长。我的第一次英语考试成绩不理想,我伤心地回到了家。一到家,妈妈就微笑着迎上来,接过沉重的书包,看到我一声不响,就问:“怎么了?怎么不开心?”我的眼圈有些发红,低声说:“英语只考了7……。6……分”,说完我就大声哭开了。妈妈的神情一下子变的严肃起来,只见她眉头紧皱,用粗重的声音大声批评到:“你自己好好反省一下,倒底问题出在什么地方?”我低下头,不知如何是好。妈妈生气地拿出英语书,训斥道:“无论做什么事都要养成好习惯!”接下来的一段时间,妈妈每天陪着我,监督我读英语。对我英语的朗读要求也提高了:每个单词不但会读,还要会拼;每个句子都要读熟练;每天要在妈妈那里过关;时间从原来的每天朗读十五分钟增加到半个小时。我的学习习惯越来越好,英语成绩也渐渐地提高了。现在我终于明白了妈妈的良苦用心。感谢妈妈,感谢我的“好老师”。

淘气、不懂事的我在妈妈的唠唠叨叨中,在妈妈的严厉喝斥中慢慢长大,我们应该怀着一颗感恩的心去聆听完妈妈的唠叨,诚恳面对妈妈的严厉,感悟妈妈阳光般的心灵世界……

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篇14:我爱读书的英文

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People often say that gold and silver are the most valuable things in the world.But

I dont think so. In my opinion, to read books is more valuable than anything else.

The old saying “To open a book is always helpful” clearly tells us how good it is to read a book.

Books are our friends. They introduce us different kinds of knowledge. They lead us down the road to success.

Books are our teachers. They teach us troth, science, literature, and philosophy of life. Besides, they increase our knowledge, enlarge our experience,strengthen our character and do many other things which we can not do without them.

Books tell us what is good and what is evil. And only books can tell the good from the bad.

Therefore to read more books is the best policy for our young students.

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篇15:给妈妈道歉的一封信英文

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Dear Mother,

A letter apologizing to my mother

Hello!

Mom, I was wrong. Please forgive my daughter for her ignorance. The day

before yesterday, I was so angry with you for not bringing me an umbrella. Mom,

I was really angry with you. I thought you didnt care about me. Under such

circumstances, I am deaf to all your explanations. The next day, I deliberately

go to school in the rain, want to use this to anger you. Mother, at that time I

was how ignorant!

Today, in I open "the minor thought moral education" this book, reads "the

loving mother hand line, the wandering son body clothes. Before departure dense

seam, Italy fear delay return. Who made the heart-inch grass, reported in the

three Chunhui "this ancient poem, my heart can not calm for a long time.

I see what youve done for me. I am ill, and you take care of me day and

night; There are delicious things at home, you do not want to eat a bite, always

leave me to eat; You and dad are frugal and reluctant to spend a penny for

yourself, but they are willing to spend a lot of money for me, to meet my

various requirements as far as possible. At this moment, I remember what you

said to me: "Xiaojia, today my mother went to visit your grandmother. I came

home late and didnt bring you an umbrella. Would you forgive my mother? Mom,

until this time, I did not understand, the worlds most love me, love me is you

and dad. Youve put in more energy and effort than I can count. The hairs on

your head are tired of me. You are the best mom and dad in the world.

Mom, I was wrong. Please excuse my daughters indiscretion. In the future,

I will not make you angry again, I will study hard, try to learn to do

housework, do your best daughter. I wish you good health and happiness

forever!

Your daughter: Meng Xiaojia

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篇16:描写春节英文作文

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A suichu fireworks, energy-saving - signature

With the sound of familiar firecrackers in the ear, the taste of the year became thicker and thicker. The eyes see, the ears hear, the nose smells full of jubilation.

Spring Festival comes, we are very happy, all families have attached to the couplet, and the word "Fu", "Fu Fu" is the meaning of "blessing". With regard to the origin of "Spring Festival", there is a kind of legend that there was a kind of beast called "year" in ancient times of China. "Year", head long antennae, ferocious abnormality. Long years of deep seabed, each to a specific day (which is now the new years Eve) to climb the shore, devouring livestock harm human life. Therefore, every new years Eve, people help the aged and the young stockaded village fled to the mountains, to avoid "year" damage. One year on New Years Eve, the old man begged from the village. The villagers rush to a scene of panic, no one cares about him, only village as an old woman gave the old man some food, and urged him to speed up the mountain to avoid "year", the old man pulled up to the mustache smiled: "if her mother let me stay at home one night, I have to years away." The old woman continued to persuade the old man to laugh without saying.

So there must be fireworks in the Spring Festival

The fireworks in the sky diversiform dressed in brightly coloured, "fireworks into the sky", "bang" sound exploded, the sky suddenly become colorful, the faint powder is like colorful flower blooming. But the drama is not long. The fireworks are fading slowly from the sky until they disappear. Over there, a shock silver light caught my attention, and it sprayed and sprayed up. Falling back then jumped out of the silver, like pearls falling from the sky to tens of thousands of people, very beautiful feeling; snapping, snapping, the deafening sound of firecrackers is certain! The noisy sound is enough to add a lot of joy to the 2013.

There is a warm fire, burning, and intensified, the orange flames rolling up and down, as if calling what, like dancing in joy. People, things, China, the Spring Festival is becoming more and more intense, bringing 2013 new weather!

The Spring Festival rich in the rich years, the rich people.

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篇17:交通安全英文小学生

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Travel security, is not only related to his own life and safety, also respect others life to reflect, it is to build the harmonious societys important factors. Through the flow traffic, "loving the life, safe travel" eight words in my mind appears more prominent. Mention travel security, it is hard to let a person think of traffic safety. In daily life, traffic safety always around us. As long as you travel with traffic safety, and hit the idea. An absent-minded, when walking when crossing the street when a fluke, drive a violation, is only a little oversight, all these will make a life is transient.

Fly xuan wheels will mercilessly devoured the pedestrians life.

Ever seen a story:

"national every 6 minutes will have one person died of a wheel under". This is not true.

Bitter facts once again give us was a wake-up call: "civilized journey, civilization walk". Modern traffic developed although has brought people endless facilities, but also increased a lot of security lapses. Someone once said traffic accident for "modern social traffic war", traffic accidents like an invisible killer, lurking in the road waiting for illegal illegal person appear. Therefore, people should learn to protect themselves, make a civilized journey, civilization walk habit.

"Human life only have once," "the most precious is life", the blood tragedy told we must abide by traffic regulations, accomplish truly "loving the life, safe travel".

Safe travel, builds the good traffic running environment for the harmonious societys construction unconscious, and building a harmonious society and to the construction of traffic safety hold up a blue sky. This is a win-win wisdom. As an ordinary pupil, abide by traffic regulations, maintain traffic order is we should have the social morality. "Civilization walk, to construct harmonious", this requires each citizen starts from oneself, from small start, let "peace avenue" more unimpeded!

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篇18:关于寒假计划的英文作文

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Today if February 1st, and the winter holiday is coming soon. I am going to Beijing to spend my holiday.

Wea ll know there are many places of interest in the capital. I want to visit the Palace Museum, the Summer Palace, the Great Wall and the World Park. The Olympic Games will be held in Beijing in 2008. I want to see the great changes in Beijing. And Ill remember to est Beijing Roast Duck.

Ill stay here for half a month.

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篇19:致一封信英文小学

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21 June 2006

Dear Mary,

Thanks for your last letter. Im so glad that you have been able (at last! ) to arrange a holiday in Australia. As I fear I wont be able to meet you at the airport when you arrive, nor will I be able to be home until later in the afternoon, so here are some instructions and suggestions.

There is a bus from the airport to the city. It is much cheaper than a cab. Take the bus to the city and ask to get off at Town Hall railway station.

To get to my place in the eastern suburbs you have three options. You can either take a cab, a bus or the train. I suggest you take the train, since the airport bus will leave you right at the station. Get off at Cliff Station. From there you can either walk to my place (about ten minutes) or take a taxi. Probably you should take a taxi as you will have luggage.

When you arrive at my flat, ring the intercom for Flat 2. My friend Lillian will be at home and she will open the front door for you and let you into my flat.

Presumably you will be tired and want to sleep. But if you feel like some exercise after that long flight, you could stroll down to Cooper Park, which is only ten minutes away ? you can see it from the window.

Cheers and looking forward to seeing you.

Yours sincerely,

Annie

P.S. I will leave something for breakfast in the fridge. Help yourself to anything you want.

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篇20:中考作文构思5点创新方式_励志作文1500字

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独到的创新设计,能使由“赤橙黄绿青蓝紫”组成的彩绸在空中亮出美不胜收的舞姿。别具一格的表现形式,能使精心包装的中考作文充满灵气和魅力。总结2006年中考作文的形式创新技法,定会使我们的眼睛为之一亮。

一、答题式构思

2006的南京市中考作文要求以“对与错”为话题写一篇文章,有位考生自拟题目《自证对与错》,除首尾简约的环境描写外,文章主体部分由“已知”、“求证”、“证明”、“解答”这四部分组成,作者以这种求解几何证明题的形式表达自己对“罚抄500遍”的认识,文章的主题——罚抄的“对与错”和拒绝罚抄,“与老师斗智”的“对与错”,通过这一新颖别致的形式表现得轻松而幽默。

二、剧本式构思。

随着中考作文文体要求的放开,有的考生机智地运用剧本这一众多考生尚感陌生的体裁构思成文,体现出强烈的创新意识。南京市考生的剧本《错?对!》抓住初三学生爱好写作“究竟对还是错”构思剧情,具备独幕剧的各种要素,序幕交代背景,学生涵静和李老师这两个人物的对话个性鲜明,涵静的内心独白声情并茂,舞台场景的转换自然流畅,“不语,扯衣角”、“抬头”、“站起”、“向右走两步,灯光变白些”等舞台说明准确得当。剧本通过紧凑而集中的矛盾冲突,表现当代教育体制给人们带来的困惑和反思,取得了其他文体难以收到的表达效果。

三、谈心式构思。

这种构思的创意在于,全文以第二人称“你”展开,运用与读者对话、谈心的形式进行叙写,给读者一种近距离的亲近感。河北一考生拟题《发现你自己》,文中用“你”作呼告达42处,按照“发现你自己的人生坐标,发现你奋斗的动力”、“发现你自己,发现你的美丽,更发现你的瑕疵”、“发现你自己的兴趣,展示你个性的美丽”这三个层次描述“发现自己”的审美内涵,新颖别致的表达形式,一声声贴心的呼唤,激起读者的强烈共鸣。

四、变异式构思。

“循规蹈矩”、一一对应地照题目的要求构思,难免人云亦云、千篇一律。机智的考生善于从题目中寻找“变异”点,在题目允许的范围内展示思维的个性。2006年陕西省中考作文题的提示语中有一句是“优美动听的校园歌曲使人心旷神怡”,在备选的三个题目中有一题是“听____我真____”。不少考生在前一横线上填上具体的歌曲名,思维流向单一,雷同卷甚多。有位考生将“校园歌曲”作为变异点,说那“飘洒缠绵”的春雨是一首没有乐谱的“校园歌曲”,于是拟出“听雨,我真陶醉”这样的佳题,令人耳目一新。文中,作者说春雨“轻唱着挖空你的心思,道出你的惆怅,注释你的疑惑……使你觉得自己仿佛已变成一滴雨,一棵树,一棵草,一束花,一撮泥土”,“我成长中的错误会在这柔和的歌唱中变得美丽”,“太多心思……太多哀怨能在这春雨的浅吟中将它们逐一放飞”,由于作者通过变异式构思找到了适合自己抒发个性的切入口,所以能把听雨的陶醉说得入丝入扣,不同凡响。

五、反向式构思。

反弹琵琶,逆向思维,往往会别有洞天,使你的文章独辟蹊径,熠熠生辉。2006年湖南省益阳市的中考作文题是“以‘关心’为题,结合自己的切身感受”,写一篇有真情实感的文章。很多考生都跳不出“叙写‘关心’者之美德,抒发被‘关心’者之感激”这一类窠臼,总是从正面落笔,给人千人一面之感。有位考生别出心裁,由众人对一个百日小孩起名的关心,引出一位被人漠视、歧视的老人(即小孩的爷爷)的悲惨故事,家人对待小孩与老人的不同态度,对比鲜明,反映了很有社会意义的深刻主题。文章的构思以“反”为主,以“正”衬“反”,以“反”写“正”,以老人的不被“关心”呼唤全社会对老人的“关心”,这种构思赋予了题目“关心”以更深广的内容,给人思考,新人耳目。

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